-SoraGami- wrote:

hi leah~
i will just take a look and will point out some suggestions

Column Format:
4K = |1|2|3|4|

[Normal]

- you might want to follow the pitch here 00:01:933 (1933|1,2308|2,2683|1) it can add some feels since the song is slow, try moving it to 3,2,4 and then from here 00:04:933 (4933|3,5308|2,5683|1,5683|3) you can move it to 3,4,13 and then the last 00:06:433 (6433|0) you can move it to 2 to sort out balance

- 00:25:558 (25558|2,25933|2) - i think there's no sound that can represent it to jack, try moving 00:25:933 (25933|2,26308|0) to 1,2

- this LN 00:34:558 (34558|3) should technically end at 00:35:120 and the doubles should be in the blue line also since you follow mainly the piano synth like the one you did here 00:23:120 im suggesting like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6122917

- 00:40:558 (40558|3) - move to 3, i think it will be good if you jack it with 00:40:183 (40183|2) since they are same sound which can make the feels more deeper

- 00:46:183 (46183|0) - move to 2 to jack it with 00:46:558 (46558|1) like the reason i said above

- 00:53:308 (53308|2,53683|1) - ctrl + h, to vary the patterns between 00:53:308 and 00:54:058 and i think it will be good if you jack it with 00:54:058 (54058|2)

- 00:50:308 - try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6122984 to vary also the doubles

- 01:02:495 - add note here, it will be good for the flow and there is a sound, rearrange the next note so it will not result to a jack

- 01:05:495 - ^

- 01:07:183 - add note, kick sound and it will be good for some emphasis for the patterns

- 01:10:183 - add also

- 01:11:495 - ^

- 01:14:683 (74683|1) - move to 3, it feels off if you pair it with 01:14:308 (74308|1,74308|3)

- 01:14:683 (74683|2) - add also, you can move the LN cuz of the column limit, something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6123153

- 01:17:683 (77683|1) and 01:19:558 (79558|1) dont have the same pitch so maybe you can move it to another column this one 01:19:558 so you can properly add note here 01:20:495 and also there has a cymbals here 01:20:683 so it should be triple, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6123180

- 01:23:495 - add note, and also you might want to move this LN 01:23:683 (83683|0) to other column because it has different pitch with 01:22:558 (82558|0)

really nice diff =w=)b

nice song
Goodluck hope this helps~

eyes wrote:

Hello!

Short mod

[Easy]
00:01:933 (1933|1,2308|2) - ctrl+H no,thx
00:06:433 (6433|0,6808|2) - ^
00:49:370 (49370|2) - delete fixed
01:23:683 (83683|1) - ln ends here - 01:23:683 (83683|1) fixed
[Normal]
00:43:558 (43558|3) - ln ends here - 00:45:808 fixed
00:49:464 - http://puu.sh/rfvUz/d7332e7fdd.jpg no,thx
00:55:933 - 00:56:308 - 00:56:683 - 00:57:058 - 00:57:433 - 00:57:808 - 00:58:183 - +1 note no,thx
01:15:995 - add note fixed
01:16:370 - ^ fixed
01:19:933 - ^ fixed
01:21:058 - ^ fixed
01:21:995 - ^ fixed
01:22:370 - ^ fixed
01:22:933 - ^ fixed

Good Luck!

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hello Leah, mod

[Easy]

00:02:683 - add note to 4, here a loud sound
00:05:683 - add note to 1, same reason
00:16:558 - add note to 2 ^
00:19:558 - add note to 3 ^
00:22:558 - add note to 3 ^
00:46:933 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6125424 this pattern will be more pleasant to play
01:03:245 (63245|2) - move to 4, continue previous pattern 01:02:120 (62120|2,62683|2) -
01:04:183 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6125457
01:15:245 (75245|2) - move to 4 and 01:15:433 (75433|1) - move to 3

[Normal]

00:22:558 (22558|2) - move to 4
00:30:058 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6125475 more in keeping with the rhythm
00:55:558 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6125499 it looks more interesting
01:02:308 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6125508 and 01:04:558 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6125514
01:12:245 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6125534
01:15:058 (75058|2) - move to 1, 01:15:245 (75245|1) - move to 4 and 01:15:433 (75433|3) - move to 3
01:18:433 (78433|3,78808|3,79183|3,79558|3) - um no, 01:18:808 (78808|3) - move to 3

Very good map , i hope that soon it will get qualify, because map does not contain more errors !

Good luck Leah !

Vampir wrote:

IRC Mod

2016-09-19 17:39 - [ L e a h ] -: can u mod my beatmap?
2016-09-19 17:39 Vampir: 네
2016-09-19 17:40 Vampir: yes
2016-09-19 17:40 Vampir: 4k?
2016-09-19 17:40 - [ L e a h ] -: yes
2016-09-19 17:40 Vampir: map plz
2016-09-19 17:40 - [ L e a h ] -: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1082345 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.)]
2016-09-19 17:41 Vampir: now check?
2016-09-19 17:41 - [ L e a h ] -: up to u
2016-09-19 17:41 - [ L e a h ] -: -w-
2016-09-19 17:44 Vampir: i will give you 10 minutes later.
2016-09-19 17:44 - [ L e a h ] -: okay
2016-09-19 17:56 Vampir: ok
2016-09-19 17:56 Vampir: im ready
2016-09-19 17:56 Vampir: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1082345 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.) [Easy]]
2016-09-19 17:57 Vampir: I've got to speak in advance.
2016-09-19 17:58 Vampir: hey?
2016-09-19 17:58 - [ L e a h ] -: oh
2016-09-19 17:58 - [ L e a h ] -: sorry
2016-09-19 17:58 Vampir: I am not good at English. I'm using a translator since I'm Korean.
2016-09-19 17:58 - [ L e a h ] -: owo ok
2016-09-19 17:58 Vampir: Please understand me.
2016-09-19 17:58 - [ L e a h ] -: will u pm mod?
2016-09-19 17:58 Vampir: IRC
2016-09-19 17:59 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
2016-09-19 17:59 Vampir: im only IRC :D
2016-09-19 17:59 Vampir: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1082345 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.) [Easy]]
2016-09-19 17:59 - [ L e a h ] -: ok lets start
2016-09-19 17:59 Vampir: 00:01:933 (1933|1,2308|2) -  Ctrl + H
2016-09-19 18:00 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
2016-09-19 18:00 Vampir: 00:09:433 (9433|2,9808|1,10183|0,10370|2,10558|1) - 
2016-09-19 18:00 Vampir: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6130403
2016-09-19 18:00 Vampir: How about this?
2016-09-19 18:00 Vampir: I personally like.
2016-09-19 18:01 - [ L e a h ] -: hmm...
2016-09-19 18:01 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
2016-09-19 18:01 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
2016-09-19 18:03 Vampir: Be perfect
2016-09-19 18:03 Vampir: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1083211 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.) [Normal]]
2016-09-19 18:03 Vampir: Next
2016-09-19 18:03 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
2016-09-19 18:04 Vampir: 00:07:933 (7933|1,8308|0,8683|1) -  https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6130408
2016-09-19 18:04 Vampir: Was also really like this one here.
2016-09-19 18:04 - [ L e a h ] -: oh
2016-09-19 18:04 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
2016-09-19 18:06 Vampir: 01:21:245 (81245|3,81433|1) -  This note is vocal sound?
2016-09-19 18:06 - [ L e a h ] -: uh...no
2016-09-19 18:07 Vampir: OK :D My mistake.
2016-09-19 18:07 - [ L e a h ] -: xD
2016-09-19 18:08 Vampir: 01:25:558 (85558|3,85558|0) -  I don't know this part. 
2016-09-19 18:08 Vampir: I don't know, there seems to be a mistake.
2016-09-19 18:08 Vampir: May be my imagination.
2016-09-19 18:08 - [ L e a h ] -: bass sound
2016-09-19 18:09 Vampir: :D
2016-09-19 18:09 Vampir: My mod request is end
2016-09-19 18:09 - [ L e a h ] -: okay thx :D

Good luck!!

-SoraGami- wrote:

HS mod

19:18 - [ L e a h ] -: hi sora 0/
19:18 -SoraGami-: Hi~
19:19 - [ L e a h ] -: can u do hitsound mod?
19:19 -SoraGami-: right now?
19:19 - [ L e a h ] -: yes
19:19 - [ L e a h ] -: or up to u
19:19 -SoraGami-: umm.. oke
19:20 -SoraGami-: can you give me again your map
19:20 -SoraGami-: i'll redl
19:20 *- [ L e a h ] - is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1082345 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.)]
19:22 -SoraGami-: i will just look for hitsound consistency
19:22 -SoraGami-: ok 
19:22 *-SoraGami- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1082345 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.) [Easy]]
19:22 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
19:24 -SoraGami-: you can look at normal diff as reference
19:24 -SoraGami-: i suggest make the volume a bit more louder
19:24 -SoraGami-: around 50?
19:25 - [ L e a h ] -: hmm...
19:25 -SoraGami-: it's up to you
19:25 -SoraGami-: but it is too soft
19:25 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
19:25 -SoraGami-: 00:01:558 (1558|3) - W
19:26 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
19:26 -SoraGami-: 00:07:558 (7558|2) - W
19:26 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
19:27 -SoraGami-: 00:40:183 (40183|2) - W
19:28 -SoraGami-: 00:39:808 (39808|0,39808|1) - here i think it is okay if C is only one
19:29 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
19:29 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
19:30 -SoraGami-: 00:42:808 - same
19:30 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
19:31 -SoraGami-: 00:45:808 - same
19:31 -SoraGami-: 00:46:183 (46183|1) - W
19:31 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
19:31 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
19:32 -SoraGami-: 00:48:808 (48808|0) - W
19:34 -SoraGami-: 00:49:558 (49558|3,49558|0) - make it 1 each for F and C
19:34 - [ L e a h ] -: 00:48:808 (48808|0) -
19:34 - [ L e a h ] -: delete clap?
19:34 - [ L e a h ] -: or not?
19:34 -SoraGami-: w8
19:34 -SoraGami-: it should be W
19:34 -SoraGami-: not C
19:35 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
19:35 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
19:35 -SoraGami-: 00:49:558 (49558|0,49558|3) - W and F
19:35 -SoraGami-: but make 1 each
19:35 - [ L e a h ] -: okay
19:36 - [ L e a h ] -: what else?
19:36 -SoraGami-: 00:51:808 - remove 1 C
19:36 -SoraGami-: 00:53:308 - 1 C
19:37 -SoraGami-: 00:55:558 (55558|0) - W
19:38 - [ L e a h ] -: how about 00:55:933 (55933|3,56308|0,56683|2,57058|0,57433|2,57808|1,58183|2) - ?
19:38 - [ L e a h ] -: should add W?
19:38 -SoraGami-: yes
19:38 - [ L e a h ] -: ok fixed
19:38 -SoraGami-: 00:58:558 (58558|0,58558|1,58745|3,58745|2,59683|3,59683|2,59870|1,59870|0) - 1 C each
19:39 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
19:39 - [ L e a h ] -: 01:00:808 (60808|1,61183|2) -
19:39 -SoraGami-: 01:00:808 (60808|1,61183|2) - W
19:39 - [ L e a h ] -: check this pls
19:40 -SoraGami-: yah
19:40 - [ L e a h ] -: ok fixed
19:41 -SoraGami-: 01:01:558 (61558|0) - W not C
19:41 -SoraGami-: but remain the F
19:41 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
19:42 -SoraGami-: 01:02:683 (62683|2) - same
19:42 -SoraGami-: 01:05:683 (65683|0) - same
19:43 - [ L e a h ] -: 01:05:683 (65683|0,67558|1,68683|1,71683|2,73558|0,74683|1,76558|2,77683|1,80683|1,83683|2) -
19:43 - [ L e a h ] -: same all?
19:43 -SoraGami-: yes
19:43 -SoraGami-: 01:06:808 - remove 1 C
19:44 - [ L e a h ] -: how about 01:05:683 (65683|0,67558|1,68683|1,71683|2,73558|0,74683|1,76558|2,77683|1,80683|1,83683|2) -
19:44 - [ L e a h ] -: wait...
19:44 - [ L e a h ] -: 01:10:558 (70558|3,70558|2,79558|0,79558|2,82558|1,82558|2) -
19:44 - [ L e a h ] -: this
19:45 -SoraGami-: W and F
19:45 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
19:45 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
19:46 -SoraGami-: 01:12:245 (72245|3) - W
19:47 -SoraGami-: 01:17:120 (77120|1) - W
19:48 -SoraGami-: 01:18:245 (78245|1,78433|0) - W
19:48 - [ L e a h ] -: check this pls 01:25:558 -
19:48 -SoraGami-: 01:19:558 (79558|2) - W
19:49 -SoraGami-: it's fine i think
19:49 -SoraGami-: yah no hs
19:49 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed already
19:49 -SoraGami-: 01:23:683 (83683|2) - this too?
19:49 -SoraGami-: W F
19:50 - [ L e a h ] -: yah
19:50 -SoraGami-: update it
19:50 -SoraGami-: ill check it 1 more to be sure
19:51 - [ L e a h ] -: only easy?
19:51 -SoraGami-: normal later
19:51 -SoraGami-: done updating?
19:52 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
19:52 - [ L e a h ] -: updated
19:52 - [ L e a h ] -: yes
19:52 - [ L e a h ] -: i ll have a dinner
19:52 - [ L e a h ] -: i ll come back in 10 minutes
19:52 -SoraGami-: okay
19:52 -SoraGami-: ill eat too
19:57 -SoraGami-: 00:54:808 - remove 1 C
19:57 -SoraGami-: 01:07:558 (67558|3) - remove C
19:59 -SoraGami-: 01:13:558 (73558|0) - WF
20:00 -SoraGami-: 01:10:183 (70183|1) - W
20:05 -SoraGami-: ok that's all from easy
20:06 -SoraGami-: just pm me anytime after you eat
20:06 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
20:06 - [ L e a h ] -: okay
20:07 - [ L e a h ] -: i eat already
20:07 - [ L e a h ] -: -w-
20:07 -SoraGami-: wow so fast xD
20:07 - [ L e a h ] -: lel
20:08 -SoraGami-: do the same in normal
20:08 -SoraGami-: just copy the hs
20:08 - [ L e a h ] -: how?
20:09 -SoraGami-: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6131017
20:09 -SoraGami-: do the same on the other diff
20:09 - [ L e a h ] -: owo ok
20:09 -SoraGami-: pm me after you're done
20:10 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
20:16 - [ L e a h ] -: updated
20:16 -SoraGami-: ok w8
20:17 -SoraGami-: adjust the volume on normal
20:18 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
20:18 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
20:18 - [ L e a h ] -: what else?
20:18 -SoraGami-: w8 im rechecking
20:20 -SoraGami-: 01:10:183 (70183|1) - W
20:21 - [ L e a h ] -: 01:11:683 (71683|3) -
20:21 -SoraGami-: 01:11:683 (71683|3) - F
20:21 - [ L e a h ] -: owo i forgot
20:21 -SoraGami-: lol
20:21 -SoraGami-: 01:12:245 (72245|3) - 
20:21 -SoraGami-: W
20:22 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
20:22 -SoraGami-: 01:17:120 (77120|2) - W
20:22 - [ L e a h ] -: updated
20:22 - [ L e a h ] -: update all
20:23 -SoraGami-: 01:19:183 (79183|2) - this too?
20:23 -SoraGami-: oke we're done
20:23 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
20:23 -SoraGami-: should i post it?
20:24 - [ L e a h ] -: fine

no kds~

juankristal wrote:

As you requested by ingame chat.

Normal

00:01:558 (1558|0,1558|3,2683|0,2683|3) - This chords are in different pitches, I recommend to use different patterns for those. Maybe changing the second one to [13]

00:05:683 (5683|0) - If you did that maybe moving this one 1 spot to the right works better for pitch.

00:14:683 (14683|0,17683|2,20683|1) - I mean, I am not too sure about the other ones but I think this ones should be 1/1s, its not a big deal and it plays fine already but maybe it will add a bit more of the calm that the song is asking for.

00:39:058 (39058|2) - Should be in column 4 as it follows the same pitch of 00:37:558 (37558|3,38308|3) - in the piano

01:09:620 - I think you are missing a note here, 01:06:058 (66058|1,66245|3,66433|2,66620|1) - the same you did here.
01:12:058 - 01:12:620 - It is the same as mentioned previously. I would also suggest to add a note in here 01:12:995 - to make it a better transition in my opinion.

01:13:558 (73558|2) - There is no need to have both hitsounds in the same note, try to avoid that

01:15:620 - It seems like you are overall missing all of this ones, maybe it is just better to remove this one 01:06:620 (66620|1) - instead but I think it would be better if you just add in the ones I mentioned and in the ones that are following here.

That sounds about it, sorry if it is a bit too short/rushed but the map is quite fine already in my opinion. Good luck!

WolfyArmato- wrote:

hoi hoi \0/
let me leave my suggestions here
** NO KDS **

[Normal]
00:51:433 - http://puu.sh/riDD2/0467d21d1c.png แบบนี้ไหม เพราะที่ผ่านมาไม่มี jacks แบบนี้ มันจะดูแปลกๆนะ
00:53:308 - http://puu.sh/riDHw/be96a621e1.png เหตุผลเดียวกับ ^^
01:07:933 (67933|3) - ไป 3 มั้ยเพราะ 01:07:558 (67558|3,67938|3,68308|3,68683|3) - มัน jacks กันเยอะเกินแล้วห้องนี้ช่อง 3 มันดูว่างเกิน
01:09:058 - http://puu.sh/riDRP/3c64a16932.png แบบนี้มั้ย ตรงนี้จะได้ไม่ jacks 01:09:433 (69433|1,69808|1,70183|1,70558|1)
01:10:933 - http://puu.sh/riDY0/3be5c40ffd.PNG งี้มั้ย

[Easy]
00:42:433 (42433|1) - ลบออก เสียงไม่ได้ดังอะไร

LINE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wat!!!

nowsmart wrote:

|1|2|3|4|

[Normal]
00:22:558 (22558|3) - ย้ายไป 3 (เสียงเดียวกับ 00:23:683 (23683|2) - )
00:23:120 (23120|1) - ลบ
01:12:808 (72808|3,72808|2,72995|1,73183|3,73183|0,73370|1) - ใส่โน้ต 1/8 ได้ ลองแบบนี้ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6143693

แค่นี้แหละ ไม่รู้จะมอดไรละ 555

no kudos

Suzuko-P wrote:

From pm requested
Column 1|2|3|4

Normal

00:37:183 - เปลี่ยนเป็นLN ช่อง2ถึง 00:37:558 ดีกว่านะ เพราะเสียงเบสมันขึ้นพอดี เป็นโน้ตเดียวๆมันก็แปลกๆ fixed
00:59:120 (59120|0,59120|1,59308|2,59308|3,60245|3,60245|2,60433|1,60433|0) - เปลี่ยนเป็นโน้ตเดี่ยวเถอะ มันมีแต่เสียงกลองทอมเฉยๆอ่ะ fixed
01:00:058 ถึง 01:01:558 - มีเสียงfilterอยู่(เสียงลม)น่าจะทำLNซัก1ช่อง nope
01:03:808 (63808|0,64183|1) - เปลี่ยนเป็นLN จะได้เข้ากับเสียงเบสด้วย nope
01:06:808 (66808|2,67183|1) -^ nope
01:09:808 (69808|0,70183|2) - ^ nope
01:15:808 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6175952nope
01:18:433 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6175957 fixed

ปล.เพลงทำง่วงมาก zzz lol

Draftnell wrote:

here ~

[Easy]
00:31:183 - try this >>> http://puu.sh/rnjgz/c6914a074e.jpg fixed
01:03:245 (63245|3) - i didn't hear a drum in here...so delete ( if i was right lol ) you're wrong xD

[Normal]
in here 00:49:370 - just my opinion...this part i hear guitar 1/8 and it is a pity that not in the content, so if you agree my sugesti...just follow >> http://puu.sh/rnjKi/3e8376b7eb.jpg but if you didn't agree, just skip this lol :v fixed
01:01:370 (61370|2) - follow drum ? but it's nothing :v so delete :p i was not follow drum sound

GL ~

Verniy_Chan wrote:

owo owo

IRC

16:20 - [ L e a h ] -: hi verniy 0/
16:21 *- [ L e a h ] - is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1083211 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.)]
16:21 - [ L e a h ] -: mod pls
16:22 Verniy_Chan: ok, i'll do IRC mod
16:24 - [ L e a h ] -: okay
16:29 *Verniy_Chan is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1082345 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.)]
16:29 - [ L e a h ] -: pls wait for a minute
16:29 *Verniy_Chan is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1082345 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.) [Easy]]
16:31 Verniy_Chan: before mod your diff, please turn off widescreen support
16:31 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
16:31 Verniy_Chan: there's no SB in your map
16:31 Verniy_Chan: each diff
16:32 Verniy_Chan: are you ready?
16:32 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
16:32 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
16:32 - [ L e a h ] -: yes~~~~~~~
16:32 Verniy_Chan: wait.. i'll check your meta
16:33 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
16:34 Verniy_Chan: seem fine
16:36 Verniy_Chan: 00:47:683 (47683|3,47683|2) - there's a lot pattern like this
16:37 Verniy_Chan: 00:46:933 (46933|1) - move |1|
16:37 Verniy_Chan: 00:47:308 (47308|0) - move to 3
16:37 Verniy_Chan: 00:47:683 (47683|2) - move to 1
16:38 Verniy_Chan: to creative your pattern
16:38 - [ L e a h ] -: owo
16:38 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
16:39 Verniy_Chan: 00:56:495 (56495|1,56683|2) - Ctrl+G
16:39 Verniy_Chan: the reason same as above, don't forget check HS
16:40 Verniy_Chan: 01:01:558 (61558|0) - overlap HS
16:40 Verniy_Chan: move F to 01:01:558 (61558|3) - 
16:40 - [ L e a h ] -: oh
16:41 Verniy_Chan: 01:02:683 (62683|2) - same ^
16:41 - [ L e a h ] -: 01:05:683 (65683|0,65683|1) - this too?
16:41 Verniy_Chan: 01:05:683 (65683|0) - ^
16:41 Verniy_Chan: yes
16:41 Verniy_Chan: let me explain
16:42 Verniy_Chan: is okay to put HS like this if there only 1 note
16:42 Verniy_Chan: if 2, just move 1 HS to other note
16:42 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
16:43 Verniy_Chan: 01:07:558 (67558|1) - here too
16:43 Verniy_Chan: 01:08:683 (68683|1) - 
16:43 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed all
16:43 Verniy_Chan: owo
16:43 - [ L e a h ] -: :3
16:44 - [ L e a h ] -: next?
16:45 Verniy_Chan: wait.. i will deep check to kiai section
16:47 Verniy_Chan: really hard to find any problem, lel
16:48 - [ L e a h ] -: -w-
16:48 Verniy_Chan: it already great
16:48 Verniy_Chan: owo
16:48 - [ L e a h ] -: OwO
16:48 Verniy_Chan: next diff
16:48 *Verniy_Chan is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1083211 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.) [Normal]]
16:49 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
16:54 Verniy_Chan: 00:52:933 - missing note in here
16:54 Verniy_Chan: lel.. too long  to found it
16:54 Verniy_Chan: 00:54:433 - here too
16:55 Verniy_Chan: since you already mapped it on easy diff
16:57 - [ L e a h ] -: owo
16:57 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
16:57 Verniy_Chan: 01:00:808 (60808|0,60808|3,60995|1,60995|2,61183|3,61183|0) - there's no need to use W each note, just 1 note enough
16:57 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
16:58 Verniy_Chan: 01:01:183 - i don't think it fit as 2 note
16:58 Verniy_Chan: the pitch is really low than 01:00:808 (60808|3,60808|0,60995|2,60995|1) - 
16:58 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
16:58 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
16:58 Verniy_Chan: fixed?
16:59 Verniy_Chan: i mean, remove 1 note
16:59 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed = removed
16:59 Verniy_Chan: just 1 note remove..
17:00 Verniy_Chan: there still bass sound
17:00 - [ L e a h ] -: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6183888
17:00 Verniy_Chan: 01:03:620 (63620|1) - ghost note
17:00 - [ L e a h ] -: like this?
17:01 Verniy_Chan: nice
17:01 Verniy_Chan: i don't hear anything
17:01 - [ L e a h ] -: deleted
17:02 Verniy_Chan: 01:06:433 (66433|2,66808|2,67183|2) - avoid this anchor
17:02 Verniy_Chan: 01:07:183 (67183|1,67183|2) - move to left 1x
17:02 - [ L e a h ] -: oh
17:02 Verniy_Chan: or 01:06:808 (66808|2,67183|1) - move to left
17:03 - [ L e a h ] -: 01:07:183 (67183|1) - this too?
17:04 Verniy_Chan: i mean there's 3 note in 1 row
17:04 Verniy_Chan: decrease 2 note in 1 row
17:04 - [ L e a h ] -: oh
17:05 - [ L e a h ] -: this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6183903
17:05 Verniy_Chan: good
17:06 Verniy_Chan: 01:09:058 (69058|0) - ghost note + inconsistent with 01:03:058 - 
17:06 Verniy_Chan: 01:13:183 (73183|2) - add W
17:07 Verniy_Chan: 01:13:933 - you can add note in here
17:07 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
17:08 Verniy_Chan: 01:19:558 (79558|3) - overlap HS
17:08 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
17:11 Verniy_Chan: done
17:12 Verniy_Chan: so far this map already good
17:12 - [ L e a h ] -: owo
17:12 - [ L e a h ] -: thx :D
17:12 Verniy_Chan: you're welcome
17:12 Verniy_Chan: good luck for rank >w<)b

solid map
good luck for rank >w<)b

ajeemaniz wrote:

why so fast lol

concerns

00:17:683 (17683|2) - should be stopped at 00:18:808 -
00:09:901 (9901|1,9995|2,10089|3,10183|0,10276|1,10370|3,10464|2) - 01:12:901 (72901|2,72995|0,73089|1,73183|2,73276|3,73370|0,73464|1) - and long 1/4 chain in Normal diff (1/8 80 bpm = 1/4 160bpm), in this case i feel its kinda 'hard' for 'Normal' tier level..
01:25:370 (85370|3,85417|2,85464|1,85511|0) - holy flying furball 1/16 for normal...

as this map is quiet clean (and short, modded well, etc etc), i wish you got the point of an appropriate difficulty spread, where a Normal should satisfy a 'Normal'-tier player level.. 1/8 might be fine, but 1/16 is too fast for your normal diff.. spikey

QAT can make an exception, though! if the map goes ranked that means i could map long 1/4 and 1/8 streams in the other Normal diffs i map where the bpm are deemed as slow (70-110 bpm)

good luck! and im sry i didn't mod it when it was pending, i had many jobs @_@

SanadaYukimura wrote:

Would like offer some pattern which I think is better also can avoid the long 1/4 stair
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00:09:808 - If you notice, 00:10:183 - 00:10:370 - the piano which appear here are lot more noticeable than the 1/4. By what I mean, delete 00:10:276 - and 00:10:464 - so you can focus on the piano
01:25:370 - tbh I dont think this 1/16 can be a serious problem (single 4321 stair is easy) but the double LN thats after can be very hard to play, what I mean is the jack here 01:25:417 (85417|2,85558|2) - . Just delete the LN thats on the 3 col is good enough I think.

Good luck

Edit:
Some addition on this part 01:12:808 - . From here 01:12:808 - to 01:13:183 - . Its hard to tell what the snap are, its more like there isn't a discernible snap for this part.
And 01:13:183 - 01:13:370 - Its evry easy to hear the snare drum here. My suggestion img. To keep 01:12:808 - this part empty so the player can be ready for the next [14] [23] [14] which I think i can be a challenge for a Normal diff

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

a little help from me

aaa

2016-10-08 14:59 - [ L e a h ] -: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/508929
2016-10-08 14:59 - [ L e a h ] -: aww
2016-10-08 14:59 - [ L e a h ] -: DQ already
2016-10-08 14:59 - [ L e a h ] -: T T
2016-10-08 14:59 [ A v a l o n ]: did it's qualified ?
2016-10-08 14:59 [ A v a l o n ]: oh dqed
2016-10-08 14:59 [ A v a l o n ]: see ?
2016-10-08 14:59 [ A v a l o n ]: that's too fast
2016-10-08 15:00 [ A v a l o n ]: you need to consider many things before qualify it again
2016-10-08 15:00 [ A v a l o n ]: wait a little
2016-10-08 15:02 - [ L e a h ] -: o_o
2016-10-08 15:02 [ A v a l o n ]: what is the main dq problem ?
2016-10-08 15:03 - [ L e a h ] -: pattern
2016-10-08 15:03 - [ L e a h ] -: 1/8 and 1/16 pattern
2016-10-08 15:03 [ A v a l o n ]: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1083211 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.) [Normal]]
2016-10-08 15:03 [ A v a l o n ]: where ?
2016-10-08 15:04 - [ L e a h ] -: now i deleted
2016-10-08 15:04 [ A v a l o n ]: oh i see
2016-10-08 15:05 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:55:933 - 00:56:308 - 00:56:683 - etc
2016-10-08 15:06 [ A v a l o n ]: you can add a single note for drum impact
2016-10-08 15:06 [ A v a l o n ]: to make it more different with easy diff
2016-10-08 15:06 - [ L e a h ] -: thats not too hard?
2016-10-08 15:07 [ A v a l o n ]: try it first
2016-10-08 15:07 [ A v a l o n ]: and look at SR
2016-10-08 15:07 [ A v a l o n ]: wait
2016-10-08 15:07 [ A v a l o n ]: i'll try it
2016-10-08 15:08 [ A v a l o n ]: 2 stars now
2016-10-08 15:08 [ A v a l o n ]: safe
2016-10-08 15:08 [ A v a l o n ]: also
2016-10-08 15:08 - [ L e a h ] -: oh
2016-10-08 15:08 [ A v a l o n ]: i still doubt with this part 01:25:370 - 
2016-10-08 15:09 [ A v a l o n ]: it can be acceptable for N icon diff or not
2016-10-08 15:09 [ A v a l o n ]: better to change them with LN (imo)
2016-10-08 15:09 - [ L e a h ] -: uh...no
2016-10-08 15:09 - [ L e a h ] -: i dont think i can place 1/16
2016-10-08 15:10 [ A v a l o n ]: can't
2016-10-08 15:10 [ A v a l o n ]: Normal is still Normal diff
2016-10-08 15:10 [ A v a l o n ]: people in this level can't hit well 1/16 for sure
2016-10-08 15:10 - [ L e a h ] -: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6271963
2016-10-08 15:10 - [ L e a h ] -: this?
2016-10-08 15:11 [ A v a l o n ]: yea maybe better
2016-10-08 15:11 [ A v a l o n ]: don't forget add a note here 01:25:558 - 
2016-10-08 15:12 [ A v a l o n ]: for closing impact
2016-10-08 15:12 - [ L e a h ] -: okay added
2016-10-08 15:12 [ A v a l o n ]: update it
2016-10-08 15:12 [ A v a l o n ]: i can rebubble now
2016-10-08 15:13 - [ L e a h ] -: updated

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

really fine for now . . . re-bubbled
pls consider more before you decide to speedrank

Draftnell wrote:

At least check....its really safe for get ranked !!

Gratss leahh ^^