1. Halvanhelev (6,94 stars, 1296 notes)

Nitsches wrote:

~Remapping for better jumps in work~

1. You need a preview point, set it somewhere before the chorus like 01:13:689 - .

1. You know, you might as well use a custom name for this difficulty, not deluge. I can't really think of an idea, but you know, something related to the VN or the series itself.
2. The dashes in this difficulty are mostly bit disoriented, as the disoriented dashes are not landing on any of the strong beats nor loud instruments. Try to make dashes and H-Dashes around those, as making dashes on weaker or softer notes doesn't really make sense as it doesn't represent anything on the song.
3. 00:08:945 (3) - While the snare does justify the use of a H-Dash, the section itself isn't that intense; therefore any strong beats or loud instruments excluding cymbals should be made as a regular dash instead of a H-Dash to reflect that. There are lots of these before 00:19:549 - , check them.
4. 00:15:642 (3,4,5,6,1) - Here as well, the increasing of distance is really overdone. As the section isn't that strong enough, and as the electric guitar's pitch is actually decreasing, it is really weird to have a increasing distance, which leads to a H-Dash, which is certainly overdone. Similar like above, you can use regular dashes, but instead try to replace (3,4) with a single 1/2 slider, as well as (5,6), so that the dashes in this part isn't overdone.
5. 00:19:549 (1,5,6,1) - Remove all hitsounds in this stream and hear the song at 50% playback rate, you will hear the snares are actually landing on 00:19:549 (1,6) - only, not 00:19:898 (5,1) - these. And since the hit-normal is already enough to emphasize the bass kick, you would want to remove all whistles on this stream, remove the claps on 00:19:898 (5,1) - , then add a clap at (6) to correctly emphasize the snares.
6. 00:20:666 (1,1,1) - NC spam on the second (1) and the third (1) is definitely not needed.
7. 00:23:177 (2,3,4) - Circles with only small movements to a same direction is usually boring, especially when it is emphasizing the same thing like the other parts. In this case it will be 00:22:061 (2,3) - these and several others, they had movement between them, but these just has a 'monotonous' movement.
8. 00:26:107 (5) - Since this has the same electric guitar like all other red beats, you would want to NC here for consistency, and also add a finish for consistency as well.
9. 00:29:317 (4,1) - Be a little bit consistent with your dashes. While all same others had dashes, this doesn't have any dashes, which certainly does feel really weird. On top of that, this has the same electric guitar as well with the others; not making a jump here will not correctly emphasize on that.
10. 01:10:898 (1,2) - Be careful when making dashes like this, as the players can't drop-off from the movement they had in (1) to (2) halfway, the dash here will be a H-Dash out of the blue and it will not go along with the other parts.
11. 01:44:386 (2) - Also be careful when the slider goes off-grid. Although it is totally fine as the game will 'push' the droplets inside the playfield, but that may not give you the intended movement.
12. 02:48:991 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stream, or some of the streams between 02:48:014 - 04:19:549 - these 2 timestamps are not really justified. As the electric guitar doesn't land on 02:49:061 (2,4,6) - these notes(they are only following a faint sound which is also weird because the other streams are following the prominent electric guitar), it doesn't highlight the use of those notes being there, as doing this is only overmapping the instruments. Try to check over the streams in this part, they can certainly be improved.
13. 04:57:503 - to 05:05:317 - Man it feels like I am modding a standard difficulty lol
    [b]Asides that, some of the patterns in this part rely on the y-axis(up and down), which doesn't matter in CtB, where the distances only matter with the x-axis(let and right just like the catcher). The only thing that the y-axis does is that it reduces the distances in terms of left and right, which reduces distances with certain notes like 05:04:479 (2,3) - , where in this pattern, from (2) to (3) I don't need to move the catcher at all, and that doesn't represent the song that well.
14. Well basically the issues are recurring in this difficulty, you could go over the difficulty again and check for those inconsistencies.

Nitsches wrote:

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

1. You need a preview point, set it somewhere before the chorus like 01:13:689 - .
   Didn't really understand that, can you PM me for more explications please ? Thanks ^^
   
   In the editor, under the timing tab, there will be a option called 'Set Current Position as Preview Point'. This is the position where the music will play out in the menu. You can place the preview point on the timestamp that I've given you, as that is the beginning of the stanza of the chorus.
   
2. 00:20:666 (1,1,1) - NC spam on the second (1) and the third (1) is definitely not needed.
   Didn't really know, timing is by CherryBlossom, i didn't touch anythings on, but changed "Simpleset ->Normal to default"
   
   NC = new combos. You don't need to spam NCs here without a solid reason, and it doesn't really represent anything in the song.
   
3. 00:26:107 (5) - Since this has the same electric guitar like all other red beats, you would want to NC here for consistency, and also add a finish for consistency as well.
   Huuuuu, what ? ;_;
   
   Well again, NC = new combos. Since missing out on a NC here makes the whole combo inconsistent with others, you would want to add it in here.

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1. 00:08:386 (1) - make this slider 180 degree horizontal because it will connect well with the next two hitcircles.
2. 00:08:805 (2,3) - make it closer to previous slider by move this notes to x:304.
3. 00:11:735 (1,2) - Move this notes to x: 408.
4. 00:10:340 (4) - make it closer to previous hitcirle.
5. 00:12:293 (3,4,5) - Make like *this are more better.
6. 00:13:968 (1,2,3,4) - Make like *this are more better.
7. 00:15:363 (2) - hard to catch. Maybe you can make it closer to previous slider.
8. 00:15:642 (3,4,5,6,1) - Make like *this are more better.
9. 00:18:154 (5) - make this slider 180 horizontal.
10. 00:20:666 (1) - too far close to the right a little bit.
11. 00:21:224 (2) - make this reverse slider horizontal a little bit maybe 45 degree.
12. 00:21:642 (1) - too far close to the right a little bit.
13. 00:22:759 (1) - make this slider 45 degree horizontal & closer to previous hitcircle.
14. 00:23:177 (6,7) - Move this notes to x: 160.
15. 00:23:875 (1) - move to the left a little bit.
16. 00:25:828 (3,4) - make this closer to each other.
17. 00:30:154 (3) - make this reverse slider 180 degree horizontal to the left.
18. 00:37:968 (1,2,1,2,1) - make like 00:15:642 (3,4,5,6,1) - this.
19. 00:47:177 (6) - too far make it closer to the right.
20. 00:53:456 (1) - too far from previous slider make it closer, hard to catch with this kind of jump.
21. 00:56:386 (1) - same like above.
22. 00:57:503 (1) - same like above.
23. 01:02:945 (4,1) - make this closer to previous hitcircle because it too sudden and easy to miss.
24. I will end here, I hope you can apply it on next part regarding jumps & suitable hyperdashes. Example like above.

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1. 00:20:386 (5,1) - try to reduce the distance between 5 and 1. seems that the hyper to 5 makes it harder to reach back to 1.
2. 00:48:014 (3) - try rotating this 90 degree clockwise and move it to x: 312, and then move 00:48:852 (1) - to x:160 to retain the previous distance
3. 00:53:875 (2,3) - make a dash (or a hyperdash) between these two sliders (my suggestion is ctrl+g 00:54:154 (3) - and move it to x: 496)
   you can reduce the distance between 00:53:456 (1,2) - but i dont think that's necessary for now.
4. 00:57:921 (2,3) - ctrl+h this and move them to x:352. seems the previous pattern is kinda boring to me q_q
5. 01:01:689 (3) - ctrl+g this and move to the right a bit by one or two grids
6. 01:02:805 (3,4) - the hyperdash to 4 isnt that good since the hyperdash should start at 4... move 01:02:945 (4) - to x:8 or find a better way to make a hyperdash from 01:02:945 (4) - to 01:03:084 (1) - without damaging the 3 to 4 hyperdash and the hyperdashes afterwards. it's up to you to decide
7. 01:09:782 (1) - try ctrl+h and move the slider to x:448
8. 01:28:619 (1) - how about moving this to the right (x:472) or to the left (x:40) to create a sweet hyperdash before the spinner?
9. 01:57:782 (1) - ctrl+g and move this to the left a bit (probably by 2 or 3 grids)
10. 02:00:014 (1) - ctrl+g
11. 02:00:433 (2) - make it like this and move it to x:416. after that, move 02:00:852 (3) - to either x:360 or x:472
12. 02:02:247 (1,2,3) - ctrl+h them
13. 02:10:061 (1) - ctrl+g
14. 02:52:340 (1) - x:360
15. 03:59:875 (2) - ctrl+g and move to x:24
16. 04:00:572 (1) - ctrl+h
17. 04:03:921 (1) - ctrl+h
18. 04:04:759 (3,1) - for this one, move 04:04:759 (3) - to x:216. after that, ctrl+h this 04:05:038 (1) - and move it to x:24
19. 04:06:154 (1,2) - first, ctrl+g this 04:06:154 (1) - . and then, ctrl+g this 04:06:572 (2) - and move the slider to x:440
20. 04:21:503 (4) - move to x:16
21. 04:28:200 (6,7) - move them to x:504
22. 04:29:596 (1,2) - ctrl+h
23. 04:31:131 (2) - ctrl+h and move to x:296
24. 04:32:666 (3) - x:64
25. 04:33:363 (2,3,4) - ctrl+h and move to x:272
26. 04:35:596 (2) - ctrl+g and move to x:264
27. 04:37:410 (1) - ctrl+h and move to x:112
28. 04:39:642 (1) - ctrl+h
29. 04:40:759 (1) - ^
30. 04:47:457 (1,2,3) - vertical notes aren't that good for this part. it should be emphasized more. for example, 04:47:596 (2) - to x:416 and 04:47:736 (3) - to x:144
31. 05:11:875 (1) - move to x:456
32. 05:15:084 (4,5) - ctrl+h and move to x:104
33. 05:16:479 (1) - move to x:360
34. 05:19:689 (1) - x:64
35. 05:20:805 (1) - this note should be either left side or right side to create a hyperdash from 05:20:666 (4) -
36. 05:23:038 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ctrl+h them.

TylorTheDJ wrote:

02:28:014 remove kiai Nope, but i'll decal it to 02:28:898 (1) - for finish
02:48:642 add inherited point, soft for the audio - 02:48:782 inherited point to return normal for audio, these sound weird without this mod Done
02:53:875 and 02:53:875 remove these beats, dont belong ????????????
02:57:572 move to x:126 No, i'll not change streaming part
02:57:642 move to x:181 -^
02:57:712 move to x:244 -^
02:57:782 move to x:302 -^
03:09:695 to 03:09:921 stream isnt timed well plus doesnt belongIt belong to the music, that part is on 1/6 timing
03:13:689 make this slider diagonal or sideways, ctb upstraigt makes it harder Sure, that seems better
That is all i could find past 50% :/

Well, i thinks you tried your best for 3 month player, so i'll give you a kudosu for this to help you to go ahead on this game

1. 01:05:038 (5,6) - 2.12x distance (from the last note) is pretty uncomfortable, I noticed you use it a lot so be careful.
2. 01:21:224 (2,3,4) - With this, I find myself having to hold down dash, from the (2,3) to the end of (4) takes me from one end of the screen to the next which is kinda annoying to do.
3. 01:47:456 (4) - Any reason for a hyper to here? The vocal is strong enough for a strong hyper here imo, maybe weaken or remove the hyper?
4. 02:28:759 (4) - 3.21x distance for a hyper is pretty strong, and found a lot throughout the map I feel. Maybe weaken the hyper, my suggestion is x:192.
5. 02:29:247 (1) - This slider ends on the 1/4 tick when the drum sounds at the 1/1 tick.
6. 03:14:619 (1) - I noticed this was on the 1/6 tick. But possibly remove the normal hitsound? It really throws me off. And possibly decreasing the volume throughout the guitar solo.
7. 04:48:014 (1,2,1) - These are on fairly weak vocals. perhaps remove the hypers?
8. 03:00:572 (2) - Really strong hyper, I understand it's a difficult part of the song but the transition here is uncomfortable to play and there is not significantly strong sound. It's also right against the wall which correct me if I'm wrong is unrankable because it causes the catcher to be more difficult to control. (Unsure about this point but I do still suggest you weaken the hyper and possibly make the slider at 03:00:712 (3) - not so sharp)
9. 03:01:270 (1) - 4.82x distance is kinda insane at this point. There is a strong guitar however so I suggest just weakening the hyper.
10. 03:05:875 (1) - The stream that starts here is 3.99x distancing, again consider reducing.
    Ok well I'm skimming over any more distance stuff from now. Do revise the distancing though as some of it unnecessarily difficult imo
11. 03:23:735 (1) - Maybe tilt this a little so it's not such a strong slider?
12. 03:25:410 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Not really a good suggestion but these patterns don't really go with the music well...
13. 03:58:131 (2,3) - Here, the (2) ends on a 1/4 tick when the drum is at the 1/2 tick. So the transition to (3) here is awkward.

- Magic Girl - wrote:

Alright here we go let's get this over with.

M4M is here \o / I won't be thoroughly intensely modding this but I'll try my best. I'm also modding this in editor which gives me lag so some points might be worhtless. That not a problem, a mod is always (or maybe) a good one !

[Halvanhelev]

1. 01:05:038 (5,6) - 2.12x distance (from the last note) is pretty uncomfortable, I noticed you use it a lot so be careful. Ok thanks, that should not be a pixel jump here, i do ctrl+g on 01:05:038 (5,6) - and changed 01:05:317 (1) - to keep the flow
2. 01:21:224 (2,3,4) - With this, I find myself having to hold down dash, from the (2,3) to the end of (4) takes me from one end of the screen to the next which is kinda annoying to do. Should i make a Hdash here ?I that case, i just do ctrl+g on 01:21:224 (2,3) -
3. 01:47:456 (4) - Any reason for a hyper to here? The vocal is strong enough for a strong hyper here imo, maybe weaken or remove the hyper? Well, was thinking that should be good, but peoples don't really like it. So i moved notes 01:46:340 (2) - to 01:47:456 (4) - to making that enjoyable to play
4. 02:28:759 (4) - 3.21x distance for a hyper is pretty strong, and found a lot throughout the map I feel. Maybe weaken the hyper, my suggestion is x:192. Right, i thinks you missed the note, that (1) not (4). Changed but moved (1) to x:168 to make a back-to-back Hdash
5. 02:29:247 (1) - This slider ends on the 1/4 tick when the drum sounds at the 1/1 tick.My bad, i thinks it was changed, reduced slider by 2 ticks
6. 03:14:619 (1) - I noticed this was on the 1/6 tick. But possibly remove the normal hitsound? It really throws me off. And possibly decreasing the volume throughout the guitar solo. Adjusted slider to 1/4 tick.I don't want to decrease more the volume of solo guitar, that make me feeling so good to play that in ! You didn't feel anything with that ?
7. 04:48:014 (1,2,1) - These are on fairly weak vocals. perhaps remove the hypers? That right, I think changed them but never found any good pattern, finally found one *^*
8. 03:00:572 (2) - Really strong hyper, I understand it's a difficult part of the song but the transition here is uncomfortable to play and there is not significantly strong sound. It's also right against the wall which correct me if I'm wrong is unrankable because it causes the catcher to be more difficult to control. (Unsure about this point but I do still suggest you weaken the hyper and possibly make the slider at 03:00:712 (3) - not so sharp) I'll ask for that if that can be rankable or not, if that don't i'll reduce the HDash at (2) and (3)
9. 03:01:270 (1) - 4.82x distance is kinda insane at this point. There is a strong guitar however so I suggest just weakening the hyper. Sure, changed slider
10. 03:05:875 (1) - The stream that starts here is 3.99x distancing, again consider reducing. Urg, took me a bit to found solution about that, finally decide to change some stream direction, and that thinks that not bad at all !
    Ok well I'm skimming over any more distance stuff from now. Do revise the distancing though as some of it unnecessarily difficult imo
11. 03:23:735 (1) - Maybe tilt this a little so it's not such a strong slider? Yup, fixed
12. 03:25:410 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Not really a good suggestion but these patterns don't really go with the music well... It does, and the music do exactly those pattern: 1 long & 4 little, three times
13. 03:58:131 (2,3) - Here, the (2) ends on a 1/4 tick when the drum is at the 1/2 tick. So the transition to (3) here is awkward.HA ! I KNOWED IT ! Always thinking that slider was weird, but never found how >_>" thanks

Guess I'll end the mod here. Sorry for the constant back and forth times in the mod. General issue is distancing though so be careful about that.
No problem, was good one. I modded a bit by myself with that mod, thanks !

Kyuare wrote:

Halvanhelev

Général

1. Je te conseille d'utiliser une couleur sombre somme un rouge pourpre ou un violet pour les fruits. Sa marche

Gameplay

1. 00:00:712 (1,1,1) - Ces 3 spinners doivent s'arrêter au tic rouge, les arrêter au tic bleu colle pas du tout avec la musique je trouve. On m'avais de laisser 2 ticks pour bien les voir mais comme tu le dis sa fais bizzard un peu ^^
2. 00:08:386 (1,2) - Tu mets un spacing énorme alors qu'il n'y a aucun strong beat, fais attention a que tout tes jumps soient justifiés, c'est la base. Pour la, je pense que tu à moitié tort / raison, car on peux entendre un bon beat sur 00:08:945 (3) - mais comme tu le dis pas sur (1) et (2). J'ai donc changer la position du pattern pour faire en sorte que (2) fasse un Hyper vers (3). Si c'est pas bon dis le moi IG
   Pour régler ce problème je te propose de déplacer 00:08:805 (2,3) - vers la gauche, environ x:256
3. 00:09:782 (2,3,4) - Centre ces 3 objets en déplacant 00:10:340 (4) - vers x:448, ça rendra la structure plus propre et moins shitmissable Fixé
4. 00:13:968 (1,2) - Enorme spacing, et encore injustifié selon moi, Ctrl + G 00:14:247 (2) - plese. Fixé
5. 00:19:549 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Ce stream ne colle vraiment pas avec la musique, voici ma suggestion: Hmpf j'voulais le garder mais bon, j'avoue que le tien reste vachement plus jouable
   
   
6. 00:22:340 (3,4) - Cancer spacing, rapproche beaucoup 00:22:619 (4) - vers la droite, déplace aussi 00:22:759 (1) - pour garder un HyperDash. Fais!
7. 00:23:177 (2,3) - Cancer spacing encore, déplace 00:23:456 (3) - vers x:120 pour faciliter la transition. Fixé, j'ai aussi bougé 00:23:735 (4) - vers x:48
8. 00:46:898 (5,6) - lol, pourquoi 00:47:177 (6) - est aussi loin ? déplace le vers x:144 pour faire une symétrie avec 00:46:898 (5) - J'voulais que ça suivent les paroles et que sa fasse genre petit moyen grand jump mais bon ^^"
9. 00:54:712 (4) - Courbe le vers la gauche, un slider droit ici est pas très conseillé. Fixé
10. 01:01:968 (1,2) - Réduit la distance, ou augmente la jusqu'à l'hyperdash please, c'est juste trop shitmissable sinon J'ai réduit la distance pour garder le même pattern que les autres sliders
11. 01:03:084 (1,2) - Pareil Au contraire, celui la passe mieux si on garde le Dash enfoncé, contrairement aux autres ou c'est très dur. Pour moi celui la reste correct
12. 01:43:270 (1,2) - Courbe plus ces 2 sliders, ça permet d'améliorer le flow, je t'ai fait un exemple en images si tu veux: Fais !
    
    
13. 01:51:642 (2) - Ce slider est juste trop éloigné, déplace le vers la droite, vers x:168 C'est fais exprès, je souhaites avoir deux HDash ici, mais comme le dis j'ai réduit un peu la distance de (2) et (3) pour éviter le pixel jump
14. 02:00:433 (2) - Ce slider est aussi trop éloigné, rapproche le vers la gauche cette fois-ci, vers x:184 Fixé
15. 02:00:852 (3) - ...'^' Il est juste trop loin, rapproche le vers x:400 '^' Ouki
16. 02:11:596 (2) - Trop loin, déplace le vers x:40 Fixé
17. 02:17:735 (1,2,3) - Ce pattern est pas assez exploité, voici une suggestion en images que je te conseille d'appliquer: Carrément ! Sa rend beaucoup mieux
    
    
18. 03:09:689 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Pourquoi tu met du 1/6 burst ici ? D'accord la guitare fait un son assez puissant mais le 1/6 ne colle pas du tout avec, place plutôt un stream 1/4 ou un slider. Fixé
19. 03:14:038 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - C'est très mal placé, déja il n'y a pas d'hyperdash séparant les 2 patterns, ce qui rend ça très facilement shitmissable, mais en plus la courbe rend le flow très mauvais, et c'est moche. Commence déja par les éloigner pour créer un hyperdash, et trouve un meilleur design pour ces courbes, je t'ai fait un exemple: Bas beaucoup de gens se sont plaint ici mais je vais quand même suivre tes conseils
    
    
    L'idée du mouvement reste néanmoins bien pensé.
20. 03:14:596 (1) - Ce slider ne suit juste pas la timeline, il doit commencer sur le tic rouge juste après. D'accord, mais je fais quoi pour 03:14:945 (2) - car il me semble assez bizzard si on le bouge pas ? Voir unrankable
21. 03:14:945 (2,3) - Ici c'est pas un jump injustifié mais un jump a justifier, augmente la distance en déplacant 03:15:084 (3) - vers la droite, genre x:256.
    Ensuite Ctrl+H 03:15:363 (4) - et déplace 03:15:642 (5) - vers x:288 pour que le flow ne soit pas cassé, en plus ça rend super bien. Tout changé comme que ta dis
22. 03:38:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - La forme de cette courbe est juste bizarre...t'as un écart vers 03:38:317 (4,5) - qui rend le gameplay destabilisant, rend cette courbe plus fluide et propre comme tu l'as fait pour 03:38:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Merci je trouvais pas comment le changer ^^
23. 03:38:526 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Je vois l'idée, mais ça colle juste pas avec la musique, je te conseille de faire quelque chose comme ça: Fais !
    
    
24. 03:40:479 (1,2) - Crée un hyperdash entre ces 2 sliders, ça colle 100x mieux avec la musique, surtout qu'on est dans un moment badass là. Fais, j'ai juste déplacer (1) d'une case a gauche lol. Badassitude ~~
25. 03:43:549 (4,5,6,7) - Ce stream part trop loin, n'hésite pas a changer de direction quand ça s'approche trop du mur, déplace 03:43:759 (7) - vers x:376 et 03:43:828 (1) - vers x:304, déplace ensuite 03:44:107 (2) - vers x:328 en le mettant horizontal pointé vers la droite, ça permettra un meilleur flow, et c'est beaucoup plus fun. Tout fixé comme que ta dis (again lol)
26. 03:55:200 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Jamais vu un stream aussi cancer de ma vie, désolé pour ces mots assez violents mais placer des antiflow a chaque triplets horizontaux j'appelle pas ça un pattern fun, c'est très sale de mettre ça surtout vers la fin d'une marathon. Efface cette partie et crée un autre pattern, plus fluide et fun, je t'aide avec quelques idées: Après avoir regarder tes patterns, j'en ait essayer quelque-uns et je pense en avoir trouver un qui est presque parfais
    
    
    
27. 04:17:317 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - L'idée est bonne, allonge juste les streams pour rendre ça plus amusant et pour qu'ils collent mieux avec la musique, un exemple en images: Fais exactement comme tu l'as montrer sur l'image
    
    
28. 04:19:549 (1,2) - Pixel jump troll juste après le solo guitare.. réduit la distance please. Je pense que tu t'es trompé, ici c'est un HDash dude :3
29. 05:13:410 (2,3,4) - C'est propre, j'aime ça, par contre 05:13:968 (4) - est juste trop loin, déplace le vers x:400 Fixé
30. 05:30:712 (4) - Pourquoi tu finis par un burst 1/8 ? Tu veux peut être représenter le bruit d'air en fond mais il est pas assez fort pour être représenté par un burst 1/8. Je pense qu'un simple slider 1/2 vertical fera l'affaire. ça marche, j'aimais bien le fais de finir par un petit stream mais bon ^^'

Avis personnel

Depuis la première fois, je trouve que la map a vachement changé, les patterns font plus CtB. Le problème c'est qu'il reste toujours trop d'erreur de placements, avec des spacings parfois abusés, des jumps injustifiés qui sont très présents, je trouve que la musique n'est pas assez exploitée, les streams dans le solo guitare sont parfois trop clichés comme 03:05:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - et d'autres sont quasi-injouables comme 03:55:200 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
La principale raison de toutes ces erreurs est que tu peux pas les fixer toi même, parce que tu n'as pas encore le niveau pour jouer des overdoses.
C'est pour ça que je te conseille vraiment de mapper des platters/rains pour commencer a t'améliorer niveau structure et créativité, et ensuite continuer a mapper des overdoses que tu pourras corriger toi même.
Je sais que mes mots peuvent être vexants mais je n'ai pas envie d'être hypocrite et je préfère que tu progresses <3
J'ai bien tout compris tout ça, mais je souhaites vraiment rester sur les maps overdose/deluge marathon, j'aime vraiment ça, sentir la musique a 200% dans la beatmap que l'on joue, contrairement aux rain/platter/salad/cup. Et je pense pouvoir m'améliorer petit à petit avec tout les conseils de la communauté CTB ainsi que toi

Bon courage !
Merci pour ce mod enrichissant Kyuare-senpaï !!

Kurokami wrote:

Hi.

[asd] asd ? wut?

00:47:456 (1,2) - I know I said that you can keep this Hyper here but its weird to play actually. This one is after a weak sound from the music which is not suited for this kind of jumps. If I investigate the song at this point further (2) is still part of the first part of the vocal which is not requires such a strong movement at all. Something similar would be better: http://kurokami.s-ul.eu/Z96AYXpj However if you accept this, you need to change 00:48:852 (1,2,3) - a bit as well: http://kurokami.s-ul.eu/U9eAzwmJ Well, afterthought i'll take a bit of the first one, but keeping the (3) (i mean, how it's actually made) and keep your pattern for the second one
01:05:317 (1) - I would like to see something different shape here. Getting that tick is rather difficult at the moment. Fixed a bit for better ticking (lol)
02:06:433 (3,4) - This Hyper follows nothing to be honest. If somewhere then it should be between (4,1) where there is a much stronger instrument. Ajusted 02:06:433 (3,4) - for making HDash between (4,1) as you said, and modified a bit the slider (1)
03:00:293 (1,2) - There is no need for this Hyper here but you can use a simple jump instead. Its better to only highlight strong beat with Hypers. Fixed, moved (2) a bit on the left and Ctrl+g (1)
03:14:666 (1,2,3) - What?! Just use the same rhythm here as later at 03:16:898 (1) - Sure, I didn't know what to do for this one, thanks ^^"
03:35:735 (6,1) - Why there is no Hyper here though the beat is strong? Fixed by moving 03:35:666 (5,6) - (5) moved a bit on the left and (6) on ctrl+g
03:37:061 (5,1) - Same here, the instrument changes so it would be nice to highlight it with something. Fixed with HDash on (5,1)
03:39:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The sudden direction change at this part makes it really hard to play which should be avoided even if this is the hardest difficulty. It would be better if the second part of this combo could have the same pattern as the first. Well, you right. But after testing many and many position with the 1st pattern, i can't found anyone who could fit well with it so i just changed the current pattern, tell me if that good or not
03:50:386 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,1) - Not really fun to play. Actually there is nothing eyecatching in these streams. You should try to make patterns which requires more movement instead of just standing on either left or right. There is no need to have jumps in it but a stream where you need to move more will always gives more fun. Tried something new (maybe?) tell me again if it's wrong or not
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Well this map made quite a progress since the last time I saw. Though I think its still early to give an icon but its close. I hope so !

koliron wrote:

Hi, im here to give some suggestions, is not like a normal mod because i have not enough time huehue but anyway i will do it n.n

Halvanhelev

1. About combocolours, i'd suggest to make them more interesting, 100% black and 100% looks bad, try to do them more like purple/red as the background, here is an example (you could put it in the .osu)
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 255,43,43
   Combo2 : 175,85,255
   Combo3 : 130,0,0
   Combo4 : 107,0,130

   Added all colors
2. 00:00:573 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Huh, this is not recommendable, players could be in the wall when they see the next circles and miss it easily, i'd suggest to just remove these spinners, also to not keep this obvious inconsistency with 00:07:410 - I don't see any difficulties about that, all player can just replay it ( that a waste of ~5s ? ) And added spinner at 00:07:410 (1) - to keep consistency for 00:07:270 (1) -
3. 00:15:642 (3,4,5,6,1) - You used many patterns like this, this one have 2 things which i want to explain:
   1. The movement in 00:15:782 (4,5,6) - , this is weird when you play it, because is like you will catch (5) with the edge of the ryuuta, even if is not that case, i mean is for aesthetics
   2. Is better to use hyperdash only to strong sounds, not in, 00:16:061 (6) - in my opinion this note is not strong enough for this, if you want to keep an hyper could be to 00:15:921 - and 00:16:200 - , here is a pattern example
   So thats my suggestion here, there are some patterns like this, keep some of them would be fine but in my opinion you could change them, btw why didnt you map 00:16:340 - this section? 00:17:317 - this note has enough potential to add a strong hyper, and that would be pretty appreciable ingame \:D/
   Well, i will not change those pattern because i thinks it fit well to the part. I want a "slow" starting before the real map start. For the 2 strong beats here: 00:16:200 (1,1) - i can explain: just like the 1st one is for a "close" and the 2nd one a "open" for the map (tell me if you didn't understand that ;-;)
4. 00:24:572 - Why didnt you add a note here? the rhythm sounds weird without it in my opinion, in overdose sometimes you could remove some notes for the flow or something like that, but this note wouldnt change how it plays I just follow the guitar here.
5. 00:25:968 (4,1) - Movements like this could kill many players, is like you need stop in 00:26:107 - and walk it until 00:26:247 - , then dash again, thats not comfortable :/ try to do it like 00:25:410 (2) - , thats much better, same in 02:19:549 (3) - Sure, changed those 2 sliders.
6. 00:49:689 (1,2) - Try to avoid movements like this, where you need stop and then a strong dash, if oyu want to keep this, i'd suggest to make a hyper to (2) Just changed the slider, i'll not add a dash on (2). I keep my pattern.
7. 01:22:968 (5) - This note is overmapped, do not forget that you cant add a note if there is not a sound Fixed
8. 01:28:828 (1) - This spinner would fit better in 01:29:875 - as the end of this kiai It was, but i thinks that bugged. I just changed it back
9. 01:41:456 (2,3,4) - I understand why you used this rhythm here, but i noticed the sound in 01:41:596 - which have not a note o.o i htink you could make an interesting pattern with this After trying some pattern, i thinks the rythm will fit, but not the map. I prefer keep mine :3
10. 01:48:293 (3,4,5) - Wow this pattern is a bit hard D: try to put (4) some grids to the left, btw i think the hyper in 01:49:131 (1,2,3) - would be better to (3) following that strong sound I thinks you missed the pattern because i can't see it when i click the hyperlink
11. 02:22:619 (2,3,4) - I feel like they could have hypers, the drum and vocal is pretty strong here, same in 02:26:945 (2,3) - I'm okay with the 1st because i follow vocals and i want to keep the pattern of 02:23:177 (4) -
12. 03:05:875 - Oh well, this sections needs work, the guitar i strong, yes, but that dont means you can make a stream ): i have a nice idea for this, you could make long sliders and finish them following the drum, that would feels much better, the current pattern is overmapped and is pretty obvious ingame ljfdjkl if you need help for this you can catch me when im online and i could help you n.n Sure i'll do because i don't see what you want to mean, IRL mod should be good for this
13. 03:14:038 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Mh this feels a bit weird for this ^ reason ^, here is a better way to follow the guitar (btw probably without an hyper in 03:14:596 - to (1) ) I keep the pattern and fixed the hyper at (4) to (1)
14. 03:34:340 (3,1) - Why no movement here? even a hyper could fit with that sound, movements like this feels weird because you need stop the dash when there are a lot of movements in an intense section like this Fixed
15. 03:37:828 - Oh bad lcuk ): this section is overmapped as well, you could map it in 1/2, the only 1/4 note which you could keep is 03:38:735 - 1/2 ?? Really ???? I need more explain for this, i really don't understand why, that totally broke ALL the stream for the guitar, there's still only little sh*t jump on this section in 1/2. I keep it for the moment and i want you to explain it please Btw i re-arranged it.
16. 03:53:247 (1,1) - Sliders like these could be really hard, specially when there is a hyper, because you could miss some notes if you jump incorrectly, i'd suggest to make them more vertical Fixed
17. 04:11:735 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here is another example of the movement which i suggested in the beginning I'll not change this pattern D:
18. 04:40:479 (3,1) - aaa so close, in my opinion these could have more distance, the vocal is enoguh strong for it Huhuhu, fixed
19. 05:04:759 (3,4) - I think would be better fi you replace these sldier with a long slider to follow better the vocal I thinks it's good like i did
20. 05:23:456 (2,3) - aaa so close again x.x why not ctrl+g 05:23:875 (3,4) - ? that plays better Sure, i placed then close to make HDash on (4)

Good luck

Ascendance wrote:

Alright I'm here. Basically, I don't feel the diff is quite ready yet. I'm going to point out a few instances of where some issues can be found, and hopefully more modders, as well as yourself, can adjust the problems you see further in this map along the same lines.

[General]

Tags

1. Ok~

Metadata

1. Fine to me

Spread/Other

1. I'd consider dropping AR to 9.3 but it's not that importantAlready done.

Hitsounds

1. You have a hitsound, normal-hitfinish3.wav, which has over 5ms of delay, making it unrankable. Be sure to cut the delay off or find someone to help you do so.
2. You also have an unused hitsound file, normal-hitclap2.wav, which is unrankable. Remove it from your folder if you don't plan on using it. All fixed ( thanks irl friend ! )

[ Overdose]

Halvanhelev

1. Your rhythm starting at 00:08:386 - is really inconsistent, for example you emphasized this sound at 00:14:107 - before, but seems like now you've decided to leave it completely empty, etc. I don't really know what you want to point out ... i'll ask you later for that
2. 00:10:898 (2,3) - Pretty strong wiggle into antiflow here, try to reduce the distance Fixed
3. 00:15:642 (3,4,5) - Really high distance here, especially between 4,5 if you exit 3 a bit late. Reducing it a bit should help. Fixed :3
4. 00:22:619 (4) - A few grid to the left here should help for a more consistent distance after the slider Done
5. 00:25:131 (1,2) - This rhythm is flipped from before??? Why not ctrl+g these then rearrange the pattern so you maintain your consistency. Fixed pattern
6. 00:29:596 (1,2) - and 00:30:572 (1,2) - both have stacked notes on slider ends, which I'm not a big fan of. Try moving the (2)'s both to the right by a bit to improve that pattern. Sure, changed pattern ^^
7. 00:34:479 (2,3) - Same aspect here, you're breaking flow since the notes are stacked which is cutting off movement. Hum, sure ^^ changed them
8. 01:25:828 (2,3) - Really high distance here, borderline pixeljump, either reduce by a lot or force a hyperdash. Hu.. Changed by a hyper
9. 02:26:247 (4,5) - This kind of pattern forces a sort of stop-dash which can be a bit confusing, especially in the kiai. I'd use one of the more horizontal movements you've been doing before to remedy this. Changed, i thinks that do a better flow now
10. 02:30:433 - You should really map something here. Even if it's an overdose, a slow part won't kill you to map :V Yep, that should be a option, but i don't like that. Even it's an overdose, i want that break. For what you'll ask ? Because the rest of the map is really intense, and i don't want a marathon with only a break at the end only. I thinks the break here should be here
11. 02:49:200 (2,3) - this is a really harsh jump especially since it's a right facing repeat slider, forcing a sharp antiflow wiggle. Potentially, you could make 02:48:991 (1,2) - into 1 curve perhaps? Hmm, after testing you're right. I changed thoses sliders into 6 hit streams.
12. 02:56:945 - There's not much wrong with the streams, but they're pretty much all left right. You should really try to do some direction changes and alter the flow a bit, since it could be quite boring just going left right at a really intense section. Hu... I'm not really good with streams part, so i'll take any suggestion of pattern i could insert here !!
13. 03:36:433 (2,3,4,5) - Really harsh distances that basically force dashing, as well as 03:37:061 (5) - not having an actual supported sound in my opinion. Lowering the distance here and deleting that unnecessary note should be better here. Fixed, and deleted (5)
14. From 03:38:107 (1) - to 03:39:851 (6) - , you should really rework the streams. Not only are they inconsistent (some having 5 some having 3) but they're really bad to play due to the awkward angles that they're at (03:39:224 (4,5,6,7) - example). Changed a bit, but as i said earlier, i'm open too all suggestion of stream-pattern
15. 03:49:410 (1,2,3) - Awkward flow here, vertical slider forces a stop and then makes the flow between 03:49:689 (2,3) - really weird (lower the distance between them)! I'd suggest making (2) a more horizontal slider somehow and going from there.
16. Basically, past this point, the same issues tend to repeat themselves. There's distances that are quite close to becoming pixeldashes, stacked notes or sliders that interrupt flow, or stream patterns that are repetitive or lackluster pattern-wise. In short, I'd like to see some more mods before I come back and do a more detailed mod on this, considering there's a lot of issues that will keep people, including me, from bubbling this map.I'll watch out for that, and push this map to the first bubble ! Thanks

The map isn't bad though. Theoretically, it could be okay, it just needs a lot of fixes that I'm not prepared to write about, since they would be repeated constantly throughout the map. The beginning of the map has similar issues that I had pointed out already previously or later, so just because I modded the beginning, doesnt mean you should skip over checking it yourself entirely.

Hopefully this helped a bit, if you have some more questions, let me know. Sure mate !

Hibari wrote:

sweet ARMS - Installation

Halvanhelev

Les suggestions

00:38:387 (7,1) - peut être légèrement réduire la distance du jump, en gardant l'hyper Done, j'ai nerf un peu les jumps en passant
02:48:852 (4) - spacing beaucoup trop méchant Un ptit Hdash est partis ici o/
00:31:131 (3,4) - réduire la distance entre le 3 et le 4, quelque chose comme sa passe bien https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5269219 En effet, mais je trouve ça un peu stagnant donc j'ai ctrl+g 00:31:410 (5) -
02:22:619 (2) - le grain dans l'autre sens serais mieux comme ceci https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5269316 Done
02:59:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - le stream est deformé et cette déformation est pas vraiment agréable a toi de voir si tu veut le fix, bonne idée de l'avoir place contre le mur de l'ecran Fixé, je pense avoir trouver un truc pas mal
03:41:596 (1,2) - Tu peut créer un pattern plus homogène et qui demande plus de mouvement ici exemple : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5269402 Sa marche pour moi, modifié
03:49:689 (2) - spacing beaucoup trop mechant J'aime être méchant *MOUAHAHA* j'ai juste décaler de 2 carreaux à droite
03:57:293 (1,1) - l'hyper est beaucoup trop proche du slider-retour se qui le rend pas du tout agréable et rend facilement shitmissable le slider-retour J'ai enlever le dash du slider
04:02:247 (3) - spacing injustifié et méchant vois si tu veut le décalé légèrement vers la gauche pour créer un hyper comme ceci : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5269470 J'ai suivis ta proposition ( pervers. )
04:06:572 (2,3,4) - peut être rapproche un peu tout sa des un des autres comme ceci https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5269498, le pattern est un peu trop horizontal je trouve Sa me vas
04:47:596 (2,3,1) - se fruit 04:47:736 (3) - rend le retour sur le 04:48:014 (1) - vraiment méchant, je te conseille de réduire la distance qui sépare le 2 du 3 ( sans supprimer l'hyper dans se cas) ou du 3 au 1 J'ai modifié un peu le pattern pour donner un hyper a 04:47:178 (7) - ainsi je décale 04:47:457 (1,2) - et je garde l'hyper du (2) sur le (3) qui vas beaucoup mieux pour le 04:48:014 (1) - qui suis juste aprés

La map a BEAUCOUP progresser depuis le debut, c'est sur le bon chemin ! Don't give up !!! Merci pour ce mod improvisé Hiba-senpaï ! I'll not give up !

murutattack wrote:

#modreqs on request

sweet ARMS - Installation
Halvanhelev

+AR 9.3 seems slow for that BPM and its Deluge diff .AR9.4 seems fits for it but its seems that its your decision I guess. Hmm someone tell me also that, changed !

00:24:433 (3) - Prefer if you slang this slider into more like this so make it more towards sound base, move the first point slider to x:408 y:112 and end point to x:240 y:240, refer to this image : here Done

00:42:293 (2) - Add more distance on this note like other similar soundings. Move to x:128 seems ok too. Done

00:52:479 (3) - I like if this one is CTRL+H and then move it to x:32, just to make flow movement between 00:52:340 (2) and this. Done

01:00:572 (3) - Kinda a bit hard when try catching (4) while h-dashing the (2), try move this one to x:152. Done

01:30:433 (2) - A bit too straight slider in here, try set the end slider point to x:384 y:128 to make some pattern here. Done

01:57:084 (2) - Try move the end point slider to x:256 y:64 if you like this pattern Done

02:05:456 (3) - I don`t know about this notes but that I prefer if you move the 02:05:456 (3) to x:272 instead, means to ready for the next Combo and stance of the sounding. No i want to make a "follow dash" what that mean you stay on dash after this one to catch the incoming slider

02:28:898 (1,1) - About this, try this out. Move the spinner on 02:29:177 and ends on 02:30:014. Add notes on 02:30:154. And lastly add Spinner on 02:30:293 and ends to 02:34:619. Because I think you can try do this like the previous spinner like you did in here : 00:02:805 (1,1). Sound really great ! Never thinks about this pattern here !

02:59:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 02:59:805 (1) Kinda overkills the stream flows, but moving to x:176 makes anti-climatic :c, try select all of this 02:59:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6), move to x:160. Then move the (1) to x:127, (2) to x:40, (3) to x:8, (4) to x:18 (5) to x:80 and (6) to x:152. Makes a curved stream pattern. It will turn like this. Seems a bit easy but okay

03:33:224 (3) - Ctrl+H and move to x:448, patterns way a bit forceful in here. huuuu, okay done

03:53:247 (1,1) - A bit way too straight and easy to miss in this section. Make this one 03:53:247 (1) move the the end slider point to x:344 y:144 and 03:53:526 (1) move the end point to x:192 y:232 I like the curved style on this one: 03:53:526 (1) - so i'll it a bit

03:57:572 (1,2,1) - In this section, pattern like (2) to catch the next (1) and after that catching the 03:58:131 (1) is too hard to catch. Try move (2) to x:168 while make the 03:57:572 (1,1) - a bit more like ^ here. I just totally reworked this pattern, and changed those by bullet rain, seems pretty good here

03:58:131 (1) - This slider more better if it started in 03:58:200 (1) instead since there`s drum in this section, 03:58:131 doesn`t. I make this slider before the drum of 03:58:619 (2) - because you can hear a mini-solo-guitar before the drum, and this slider is here for that. 03:58:759 (3) - This one is for the second drum and this one 03:59:177 (4) - to "restart" the solo

04:19:549 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I just thinking, this is better if its mapped into Spinner instead of Notes and sliders because I think players need a "Break" after clearing hard pattern on previous kiai. If wanna apply this one, add notes on 04:19:549, then put Spinners on 04:19:689 and ends on 04:23:177. And don`t count the break on 04:48:572 for this one. I don't really know what you want to do but i don't really like the idea, i thinks player need to continue after kiai because THAT the hard part, and stop directly after the kiai seems too sudden for me. I'll not change those part

04:48:572 - I think better map this one but using 2/1 slider instead on 04:48:572 till 04:51:363. Other use 1/2 notes instead. No need H-Dash in this section since there`s no upbeat in songs. As i said earlier, i'll not change this part because that the last pause players can have before the "finish" and i don't like what you said

04:58:061 (3) - Move to x:136 instead since no upbeat in the song. Done

05:00:154 (2) - Move to x:312 to fix anti-flow pattern. Done

05:09:921 (2) - Patterns might be flow out well if move to x:96. Done

05:30:712 (4) - This slider ends better in 05:30:921 instead. And making straight lines kinda weird. Try this one instead but use notes. Hu... Other people told me the slider is a better finish than a stream, i'll speak with someone about that and maybe change it ^^

Overall Its ok, just need a bit more mod about this map through, streams are really controversial one but then again,
Good luck with ranking Thanks for helping !

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Ok I'm the worst friend :'( sorry for long delay and hope to help you bro Ho god dude ! I should wait more for a mod like that ! THAT TOO LONG o_o how many hours did you take omg ? GOOD JOB

Halvanhelev

1. 00:08:945 (3,4) - the distance between such notes should be increased a bit, I know that 0.10x more is ridiculousness but feels amazing at testing, so to avoid changes on the next part I suggest to move 00:08:386 (1,2,3) - to x:112. Done
2. 00:14:247 (2,3) - is there a reason to add a huge jump here? ohh wait... I'll change my question, is there a reason to add hyperdash here? following your previous patterns I'll say: no, take a look at 00:09:782 (2,3) - 00:11:875 (2,3) -, well I'll give you some suggestions to fix it, keep in mind that I'm trying to keep your distances:
   1.- 00:14:247 (2) - hold Ctrl+G and move to x:280 to contrast the strong beat on 00:13:968 (1) -
   2.- 00:14:666 (3) - move to x:304 to avoid unnecessary big jumps.
   3.- 00:14:805 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - as I said before, I'm doing my best to keep your patterns so, move to x:424 Well, why not, added all
3. 00:14:805 (4,1) - Idk if you followed my previous advice but I feel that this kind of distances without hyperdash could be a bit uncomfortable, I know that this kind of jumps are fun on overdoses/deluge but I'm a hundred percent certain that 00:15:084 - and 00:15:363 - have the same strength, I recommend you to add a hyperdash here, one more time Idk if you followed my previous advice but you can fix it moving 00:15:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - to the left. Well idk why you say that, because you just told me to move the pattern to x:424 and here you said to back to the left, the fuck dude xD ?
4. 00:17:317 (1,2) - too straight imo, would be better if you do something mirrored with 00:17:735 (3,4) -, but the screen space doesn't help... keep in mind, this is only a mini suggestion, consider if you want, is irrelevant at ranking. Yep, i'll choose to trust you here, added the "mirror pattern"
5. 00:20:386 (1,1) - Did you miss a hyperdash here? 1. Is the beginning of a new section 2. Strong sound 3.Cymbal sound emphazising wih finish hitsound. Do you need more reasons to add a hyperdash? would be better if you do, hopefully you have a hyperdash at 00:21:224 (3,1) - and is irrelevant if you add more distance or not cuz is a really strong sound, so you should move 00:20:666 (1,2,3) - to x:160 to fix it. Fixed.
6. 00:23:735 (4,1) - wow nobody cares about the distance but the movement is very very uncomfortable, also you are breaking your consistency with previous patterns, I recommend you to follow the song properly and change 00:23:875 (1) - into a slider like 00:22:759 (1) -, in this case I strongly recommend you to copy 00:22:759 (1) - with Ctrl+c and paste at 00:23:875 - with Ctrl+v, then when you are done, select such new slider and press Ctrl+Shift+R, Search "Origin" and check "Selection Centre", in the small white box write -90 or try to find -90 moving the bar to the left, that's should be all, hope you like my short cuts :3 Yay ! I like how you maked that for still getting my pattern :3
7. 00:29:317 (4) - try to make it more straight to catch a better movements with 00:28:759 (2,3) -, my suggestion: select 00:29:317 (4) - and find the point on the end of the slider, move such point to x:400 Done
8. 00:31:689 (1) - don't break your consistency on structure, follow this kind of sounds with long sliders as were doing with 00:25:131 (1) - 00:26:107 (1) - 00:27:224 (1) - 00:28:340 (1) - etc, etc. Also there is a strong sound, why you skipped the hyperdash? My bad, didn't notice that
9. 00:34:061 (1) - one more time the movement here is unnecessary, I recommend you to change it into 1 slider, you can copy 00:33:363 (3) - and press Ctrl+H Fixed
10. 00:35:456 (2) - add curve or something, this slider is too boring, also I don't recommend you a suddenly stop. Changed before i saw that, lmao.
11. 01:13:131 (1,2,3) - why not something like 00:38:247 (6,7,1) -, feels better if you increase the distance between each note gradually to make it more interesting, keep your previous patterns. Sure, seems funny '^'
12. 01:15:084 (4,1) - Did you miss a hyperdash here? is not the same strength as 01:16:200 (4,1) - ? I can give you more examples if you don't trust in me: 01:17:456 - 01:18:014 - 01:19:270 - 01:20:805 - etc etc. Yep i miss it like others one >< changed pattern a bit to make a hdash on 01:15:084 (4,1) - as you said :3
13. 01:28:200 (3,4,5) - there is no sense if 01:28:200 (3,4) - have more distance than 01:28:479 (4,5) - when the strongest sound is on 01:28:619 -, try to reduce the distance between (3,4) and increases at (4,5), as I said before, try to keep your previous patterns to make this map cleanner, increasing the distance gradually like 00:37:968 (4,5,6,7,1) - feels much better. Understand, fixed
14. 01:54:433 (1,2) - the current hyperdash doesn't follow the song properly, the main reason is cuz 01:54:991 - is more strong than 01:54:852 -, so hyperdash should be between 01:54:852 (2,3) -, I'll give you my suggestions to fix this part:
    1.- 01:54:991 (3) - press Ctrl+H to make something mirrored with 01:54:433 (1) -
    2.- 01:54:433 (1) - move to x:320 to find the enough space to add a hyperdash between 01:54:852 (2,3) -
    3.- 01:54:852 (2) - move to x:388 to keep consistency with your previous patterns about distance.
    4.- 01:55:410 (4) - should be mirrored with 01:54:852 (2) -, so try to move to x:112 All added :3
    5.- 01:55:689 (1,2) - they look too closer, in this case feels better with hyperdash, Don't you think that 01:55:689 (1) - might looks nicer at x:288? Sure
15. 02:05:456 (3,1) - I feel that you forgot the hyperdash between such notes, don't you? anyways, there is a quick way to fix it, 02:05:317 (2,3) - change into 1 slider as you were doing with 02:04:479 (1,2,1) -, copy 02:04:759 (2) - with ctrl+c, remove 02:05:456 (3) - and paste with ctrl+v at the same position of 02:05:317 (2) -, also don't forget to add clap to the end of the slider, I'm paying attention to everything to push it forward. Well, i saw you try to make something really cool but i don't like it, i made this pattern because i thinks i fit good here, i explain: HDash is on 02:05:317 (2,3) - because you can hear strong beat from the music / 02:05:596 (1) - Don't act like a "finisher" but more lie than a "re-starter" because 02:05:596 (1,2) - follow the vocals and not the beat
16. 02:23:177 (4) - I didn't see this kind of pattern before, is breaking your consistency, furthermore isn't at all necessary, change into 1 note. I don't thinks news pattern getting from nowhere isn't really bad, i asked Kuro for that and it's okay with the ranking criteria and fit good with the music here.
17. 02:29:177 (1) - should start at 02:29:038 - as you did on 01:28:619 (5,1) -, also it should finish at 02:29:875 -, so moving the current spinner to 02:29:038 - will fix it. Fixed
18. 02:59:456 (4,1) - reduce the distance, the jump isn't necessary here, 02:59:526 (1,2,3,4) - move to x:456 to fix it. Fixed
19. from 03:05:875 - mmm now I understand why all modders say that streams are really controversial, I want to point out some unnecessarily hyperdashes, when I saw this part, I was trying to understand such hyperdashes, I know that this diff it's supposed to be overdose/deluge but it doesn't mean overemphasize everywhere, also you are adding hyperdashes on blue ticks, it means, you are not following the song properly, so it'll be a strong reason of DQ.
    1.- first of all at 03:06:293 (7,1) - I can't hear a strong sound or something similar, you should remove the current hyperdash/jump, so 03:06:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - move to x:352.
    2.- 03:06:782 (1,1) - this part is a bit confusing and some modders doesn't detect it for the velocity of such stream, but I recommend you to change 03:06:782 (1) - into notes because the hyperdash is between 03:06:782 - and 03:06:852 -, so as I said before change into 1 note at 03:06:782 - then add a note at 03:06:852 - (x:32).
    3.- 03:07:270 (6,1) - doesn't need hyperdash too, Idk if you decided to follow my previous advice, if you did, select 03:06:852 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - and press Ctrl+Shift+R, Search "Origin" and check "Selection Centre", in the small white box write -15 or try to find -15 moving the bar to the left, then move the whole stream to x:32, then 03:07:340 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - move to x:208
    4.- 03:07:897 (8,1) - one more time, you choose the wrong place to add a hyperdash, high guitar pitch is on 03:08:107 -, I recommend you to move 03:07:968 (1) - to x:48, 03:08:038 (2) - to x:96, then 03:08:107 (3,4,5,6,7) - press Ctrl+H and move to x:270.
    I'm trying to work with your patterns, but if you can make beautiful streams with nice curves, please try to improve it.
    Well, i followed your recommendations but i like the dash between stream cuz of length that should maybe be boring, so i just reduced distance to make a simple dash with some good curves ( i thinks '^' ) and finally make the whole part better ( i thinks '^' ) tell me if something is wrong or something like that :3
20. 03:22:340 (4,1) - don't you feel that a hyperdash here will follow the song better? 03:22:619 - and 03:23:038 - have similar sounds. Fixed
21. 03:27:503 (2) - I rather something mirrored with 03:27:084 (1) - for two reasons, first of all 03:27:503 (2) - sounds/plays/looks better as a slider, second reason is cause 03:27:084 - and 03:27:503 - are too similar, so you can add a hyperdash between 03:27:084 (1,2) -. Done o/
22. 03:29:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I have a doubt with such pattern:
    1.- 03:29:666 (5) - there isn't a sound, I can't hear something relevant.
    2.- Idk if you want to remove 03:29:666 (5) - as I told you before, but 03:29:735 (6) - deserve a hyperdash with the previous note cause is a strong sound.
    3.- for structure and consistency with previous patterns, will be better if 03:29:666 (5) - is moved to 03:29:386 -
    I gave you my reasons of my doubt, now my suggestion is the following: As I said before, 03:29:666 (5) - should be moved to 03:29:386 - (x:88), then 03:29:456 (3,4,5) - should be moved to x:144. Done o/
23. 03:36:991 (4,1) - I don't understand what are you trying to follow here, 03:36:991 - strong sound, also you emphasized with finish hitsound, why not hyperdash between 03:36:852 (3,4) -? furthermore 03:36:991 (4,1) - should be changed into 1 slider. I'll leave the position to you. I'll take notes of what you said and try to make something cool
24. 03:42:572 (6,7,1) - one more time 03:42:642 (7) - isn't at all necessary, also 03:42:712 (1) - deserve a hyperdash with previous note, there is a strong sound here. Fixed
25. from 03:50:386 - to 03:53:177 - I don't know when you add hyperdashes and when not, it's very confusing, I can say only one thing to you as an advice, the first note of every stream should start on white or red tick, not blue, it doesn't follow the song and looks messy, I'll leave it to you as a homework :3 You bastard ! Ok it took me 1h to found new patterns and fix the problem with blue ticks ~ Let me have your impressions about this new one :3
26. 03:54:991 (5) - change into 1 note, I'll give you my reason, from 03:55:200 - your stream is off, you have the same problem as I said on my previous point, so if you change the current slider into one note, you should move 03:55:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - to 03:55:131 - (1 tick back), don't forget to finish 03:58:061 (1) - at 03:58:479 -, one more time, I'm trying to work with your patterns, but if you can inprove some parts, please do it, for example, (I imagine that you apply my advice) I like 03:57:503 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - but 03:57:922 (1,2,1) -, this movement is a bit weird, so 03:57:503 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - could be moved to the left, around x:328 looks fine, then 03:58:061 (1) - press Ctrl+H and move it around x:376, also if you can make a normal curve like 03:40:898 (2) - will be more than good. All fixed !
27. 04:05:038 (1,2) - wrong position of hyperdash, would be better if you add hyperdash between 04:04:759 (3,1) -, so reduce the distance between 04:05:038 (1,2) - and increase between 04:04:759 (3,1) - Nah i wouldn't because i follow the "boum" here 04:04:759 (3) - / exemple of: 04:03:921 (1) - / 04:05:177 (2) - / 04:05:875 (7) -
28. 04:58:340 (4,1) - what do you think about a adding a hyperdash here? take 04:59:456 (4,1) - as a reference cause I can hear the same sound between 04:59:735 - and 04:58:619 - Seems good, added
29. 05:01:828 (8,1) - 05:04:061 (4,1) - same as above, consistency please. Sorry sorry, fixed !
30. 05:16:340 (6,1) - you were following this kind of sounds with hyperdash, why skipped this one? examples: 05:06:154 (2,1) - 05:07:270 (4,1) - 05:08:386 (4,1) - 05:10:619 (5,1) - 05:11:735 (4,1) - 05:12:852 (6,1) - 05:13:968 (4,1) - 05:17:317 (4,1) - etc etc etc... Fixed

-Sh1n1- wrote:

and where is my kudosu? my last mod were 5 months ago ;w;

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my Modding Queue

[Halvanhelev]

1. 00:07:410 (1) - I think this spinner is should delete for catch the start note it too easy. Was thinking about it all the time, deleted.
2. 00:12:852 (4) - Move the curve of this slider to right. Done, added HDash
3. 00:23:875 (1) - Same as ^ Fixed
4. 01:35:735 (2) - How about change this slider to horizontal (start-left,end-right). Nope, i thinks it's good
5. 01:39:921 (3) - ctrl+g and move it to left a bit, I suggestion x:360. Sure, great idea
6. 03:20:945 (3) - How about move return of this slider to right ? Nope, but i changed the pattern direction
7. 03:51:084 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think on this stream notes is should change. Change that to same 03:50:804 (1,2,3,4) - ? Hmm, changed but keep that in mind (self note)

[Hitsound]

W = Whistle
F = Finish
C = Clap

1. 00:11:735 (1) - Add W + F
2. 00:11:875 (2) - Delete F
3. 00:19:549 (1) - Add C
4. 00:19:898 (6) - Delete C
5. 00:19:968 (1) - Add C
6. 00:20:386 (1) - Add C (Start slider)
7. 00:25:131 (1) - Delete C and Add F (Start slider) and Add C (End slider)
8. 00:25:828 (3) - Delete C
9. 00:25:968 (4) - Add C
10. 00:26:107 (1) - Add F (Start slider)
11. 00:31:410 (5) - Add C (End slider)
12. 00:34:061 (1) - Add F (Start slider)
13. 00:35:456 (2) - Add C (Start slider)
14. 01:14:805 (3) - Delete C (Start slider)
15. 01:15:084 (4) - Add C (Start slider)
16. 01:21:921 (5) - Add F
17. 01:22:061 (1) - Delete F (Start slider)
18. 02:06:433 (3) - Add C
19. 02:06:572 (4) - Delete C
20. 02:26:666 (1) - Add F (Start slider) Delete C (End slider)
21. 02:53:875 (2) - Add C
22. 02:54:293 (6) - Delete C
23. 02:54:433 (7) - Add C
24. 02:57:224 (2) - Add C
25. 02:57:782 (4) - Add C
26. 02:58:340 (4) - Add C
27. 02:58:899 (4) - Add C
28. 02:59:456 (4) - Add C
29. 03:00:014 (3) - Add C
30. 03:02:107 (3) - Add C (End slider)
31. 03:06:154 (5,6,7,4,5) - Add C
32. 03:14:526 (4) - Add C
33. 03:15:084 (2) - Add C (Start)
34. 03:15:642 (4) - Add C
35. 03:16:200 (1) - Add C (Start)
36. 03:16:619 (3) - Add C (End)
37. 03:25:689 (3,3,2) - Add C
38. 03:30:154 (7) - Add C
39. 03:38:526 (7,2,3) - Add C
40. 03:40:200 (8) - Add C (Start)
41. 03:44:107 (2) - Add C
42. 03:44:666 (6) - Add C
43. 03:50:805 (1,1,1,1,1) - Add C
44. 03:53:596 - Add C
45. 03:55:270 (3,5,1,3) - Add C
46. 03:57:502 (1) - Add C
47. 03:58:061 (1) - Add C (Start)
48. 04:00:293 (3) - Add C
49. 04:01:410 (4) - Add C
50. 04:02:526 (4) - Add C
51. 04:03:642 (3) - Add C
52. 04:05:177 (2) - Add C (End)
53. 04:05:875 (7) - Add C
54. 04:07:549 (2,5) - Add C
55. 04:07:828 (4) - Delete C (start)
56. 05:16:200 (5) - Add C
57. 05:17:317 (4) - Add C (Start)
58. 05:17:875 (3) - Add C
59. 05:26:805 (2) - Add C
    All hit sounding added and fixed, so much @_@ !!! Hope players will enjoy them :3

Good luck Fucking with Hitsound Thanks mate ~

Kurokami wrote:

Eh

[halvandnisgbru]

00:08:386 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Here I suggest you to rethink both your patterns and the timeline. Your timeline tries to follow the music but that barely works. Basically the whole part can be mapped as 1/2. Your patterns are bad because this part contains a very intense intro but your patterns lack movement. You shouldn't place hypers everywhere but some jump would be nice at higher pitched sounds. Okay, i just barely changed pattern from that, but i really want to keep the timeline
00:19:549 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - At this part its good to use hyperdashes but it would be nice if those are after the music. Now you have dashes between (4,5) in both combo put it represents nothing from the music. It would be better if you could put more movement to (1,2,3) and only put Hypers at both (6,1). After speak with you, i'll stay on actual pattern
00:22:340 (3,4) - Its good to have these as slider+note pair but sounds much better as a triple curcle.This and the next few one with the same sounds. Donce
00:38:526 (1) - I'm not really sure if the best choice here is a single note as the vocal goes on. I would say end a slider at 00:38:945 Alright, seems better
00:42:991 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why this part has different timeline than the previous? Idk, but i just followed vocals as before, but differently, like that's the really start of the music of something else,but i want to keep it anyway
00:48:014 (3) - Please do not end sliders on big white tick (main beat). Its very weird to hear and play it. Okay, changed it. Removed reverse arrow and added 3 CURCLES
00:50:107 (2) - Slider please. Added
00:52:479 (3) - Again a slider+circle pair would be better. Fixed
01:00:852 (1,2) - Okay, same sound should have the same distance as well. Currently you are using at least 3 different one. This is a very bad way to represent something from the song. Fixed at ~1.80x to make consistency with 01:56:666 (1,2) -
01:04:759 (4,5,6,1) - You are making a high star map but you left something as strong as these untouched? Please, you can have a chained Hyper between at least 3 if not 4 notes.
01:05:317 (1,2) - Same rhythm starts again and you again used different distances. Already fixed before you wrote it :3
01:13:689 - Are you sure you don't want to map this part? It would be nice to have emphasize at the start of the kiai. :c Okay, okay, okay. i'll do it. And i did it like 30s later i wrote that, rofl.
01:14:666 (2,3) - This distance is too short for a Hyper although it would be nice to have one. I found the way for. Added
01:14:805 (3,4) - The distance here although too high for a comfortable jump. Please shorten it around 1.7x if possible. I prefer to have an HDash here
01:16:200 (3,4) - Again high distance. There's already an HDash on that, ooooor i didn't know what you mean
01:17:456 (1,2,3) - If you want to emphasize this part more I suggest you to make (1) 1/2 then put a circle to 01:17:735. Do not forget to make some Hyper chain with these 3(4) note to follow the vocal. Done, added dash on 01:17:456 (1,3,4,6) -
01:18:852 (2,3) - I personally think a Hyper would be nice here too. Sure, done
01:21:503 (4,5,1) - There shouldn't be a Hyper between (4,5) but (5,1) must contain one. Fixed
01:30:433 (2,3,4) - You again started to mix your timeline although the music is the same. This shouldn't cause too much problem on its own but the patterns are also have too much difference. Fixed consistency
01:49:131 (1,2) - I would say, two 1/2 slider would be better. Don't like it
02:20:666 (4,5) - This Hyper follows nothing. The sound which might be Hypered is at the white tick 1/2 later where the slider ends. Fixed
02:21:084 (1,2) - I wonder what this Hyper represents. There is nothing to be followed with it.Idk, that fit well with the music unless there's nothing to fit at
02:22:200 (1,2) - Again something which follows nothing. -^
02:23:177 (4) - I don't get this 1/2 at all. In terms of rhythm this kiai is the same as the first so it should use the same timeline as well. Fixed

And still so on. Rest said in-game. Sure

[ K a e d e ] wrote:

Halvanhelev

01:13:828 (2) - Move to X88 Fixed
01:13:968 (3) - Move to X312 Fixed
01:14:107 (4) - Move to X144 Fixed
01:14:247 (1) - Move X408 Fixed
01:14:666 (2) - Same :V X280 Fixed
01:14:805 (3) - And same all time :V X120 Fixed
01:17:735 (2) - X352 Fixed
01:17:875 (3) - X160 Fixed
02:13:968 (1) - X104 Fixed
02:14:247 (2) - X408 Fixed
02:14:945 (2) - X56 Fixed
02:15:084 (3) - X288 Fixed
02:46:200 (2) - X320 Fixed
02:47:038 (2) - X312 I don't change that
02:47:177 (3) - X192 Same -^
02:47:317 (4) - X64 Same -^
02:47:456 (5) - X256 Same -^
02:47:596 (6) - X384 Same -^
02:47:735 (7) - X384 Same -^
02:47:875 (8) - X256 Same -^
02:48:014 (1) - X360 Same -^
02:48:293 (2) - X296 Fixed
02:56:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Insane, so insane ;w; Nerf a little
03:05:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Same here :___:
Nerf a bit stream part, need testplays for it pls xd
05:05:875 - Start last Kiai, maybe can be more harder than all Fixed
05:05:875 (1) - X136 Fixed
05:06:154 (2) - X376 Fixed
05:06:433 (1) - End in Y328, move to Y232 Fixed
05:06:991 (3) - X208 Fixed
05:07:270 (4) - X112 Fixed
05:08:107 (3) - X408 Fixed
05:08:386 (4) - X104 Fixed
05:09:084 (2) - X168 Fixed
05:09:921 (2) - X368 Fixed
05:10:061 (3) - X224 Fixed
05:10:200 (4) - Ctrl + G and X416 Fixed

Calibus wrote:

Mod from Blergh's modding queue

[Halvanhelev]

Blergh is blergh
Blergh is blergh

02:24:991 (2) - Blergh note blergh a bit blergh blerghed, like blergh after the blergh, would blergh it someblergh blergh.
I'm blergh with blergh, more blerghs seems blerghing blergh
02:30:293 (1,1) - Blergh too much blergh or blergh your spinner blergh is.
Nah, blerghs are blergh and blergh, i blergh blergh you can blergh blergh that, dude.
04:34:479 (2) - Blergh don't see blergh reason blergh blergh a repeat blergh at blergh instead of a blergh blergh like the blergh blerghfore.
I don't blergh why blergh, but i blergh i blergh blergh it blergh "It's blergh a blergh'ning for blergh 04:37:410 (1,2) -
04:48:572 (1) - Would blergh this a blergh to blergh that blergh switch in blergh as it doesn't blergh any blergh because it is blergh before a blergh.
I don't blergh any blerghs with blergh
Blergh like this -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/blergh

Blergh for blergh ! Like i blergh, a blergh is a blergh and I'll blergh all blergh of blergh.

[Halvanhelev]
(Actual mod)
This colour is for things that seem a bit risky for ranking the map
This colour is for personal preference

02:24:991 (2) - This note seems a bit dull placed, like right after the slider, would move it somewhere else, maybe to space.
I'm okay with that, more space seems actually better
02:30:293 (1,1) - Maybe too much banana's or whatever your spinner skin is.
Nah, bananas are cool and yummy, i don't believe you can actually thinks that, dude.
04:34:479 (2) - I don't see any reason to pick a repeat slider at that point instead of a normal slider like the ones before.
I don't know why too, but i thinks i can describe it like "It's like a beginning for 04:37:410 (1,2) -
04:48:572 (1) - Would make this a hyper to match that strong switch in the voice as it doesn't create any trouble because it is just before a break.
I don't see any problem with that
Something like this -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6240735

Thanks for mod ! Like i said, a mod is a mod and I'll take all of them.