22:23 *Exa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/733380 Oli Chang - Chicken Techno [Easy]]
22:23 Rocket_FaW: xD
22:24 Exa: sec lemme redl
22:25 Exa: dope song
22:25 Exa: 00:17:656 (1,2) - I am pretty sure this slider won't be played as intended
22:25 Rocket_FaW: i do little changed like volume ect xd
22:25 Exa: most players will leave early at about 2/3 to go to the next note
22:26 Exa: and because this is easy, it's like changing the spacing of the objects
22:26 Exa: which is something you must never do in easy diffs
22:26 Rocket_FaW: ok changing
22:27 Exa: wait don't change anything now
22:27 Exa: just do /savelog and change them after
22:27 Exa: or check the post I'll make
22:27 Exa: 00:19:460 (3,4) - I 00:20:813 (4) - Moving this to 268,268 makes a perfect blanket
22:28 Exa: 00:21:265 (1) - You do that a lot, I don't get why you curve your sliders that much
22:28 Exa: you make the flow feel forceful with the sharp edge and also you can't properly blanket
22:29 Exa: 00:20:813 (4,1) - That's a blanket that would be good if we were 3 years in the past
22:29 Exa: please give me feedblack so I know you are there >.< like "ok, yup"
22:30 Rocket_FaW: yes yes xdd
22:30 Exa: so I suggest that you curve your sliders less so you can blanket
22:30 Exa: 00:26:227 (3,3) - Why not stack
22:31 Exa: 00:29:385 (4) - And move this at 119,205
22:31 Exa: this provides you with change of flow and also perfectly inside the body of 00:26:227 (3) -
22:32 Exa: 00:29:836 - You can and should add a not here
22:32 Rocket_FaW: ok
22:32 Exa: you want to leave time AFTER the slider, not before
22:32 Exa: 00:33:445 (2,3) - This blanket could be much better
22:32 Exa: 00:35:249 (4,1) - See what I ment with the overly curved sliders
22:33 Exa: In case you don't change the sliders, you could at least make fake blankets by equalizing the spacing of the note from the slider's head and tail
22:34 Rocket_FaW: ok
22:34 Exa: [http://puu.sh/mzp8a/70bc19baf1.jpg this] to [http://puu.sh/mzpeq/753aff4edc.jpg this]
22:34 Exa: Also make sure you are aesthetically consistent
22:35 Exa: 00:35:701 (1,2) - This slider is not the same as 00:36:603 (2,3) - this
22:35 Rocket_FaW: i understand
22:35 Exa: 00:37:505 (3,3) - And rhythmicaly consistent, use the same onbject for this sound
22:36 Exa: 00:53:295 (5,1) - Another blanket that could be better if you curved less
22:36 Exa: I won't point out overly curved sliders, just recheck all of them and make sure they blanket well
22:36 Rocket_FaW: haha ok xd
22:37 Exa: 00:55:550 (2) - Without even checking properly I can tell this is not a symmetric slider
22:37 Exa: Watch [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qfmeKRsz3TA this] video to learn how to make symmetric sliders
22:37 Rocket_FaW: mnn
22:38 Rocket_FaW: thanks
22:38 Exa: 01:03:671 (5,1) - Well curved but not a perfect blanket
22:38 Exa: Also recked all your actual blankets and make them perfect
22:39 Rocket_FaW: ok T.T
22:39 Exa: 01:10:437 - There is a beat here, don't skip it!
22:39 Exa: You could add a 1/1 slider and remove 01:10:889 (4) - this
22:39 Exa: seems like a much better rhythm
22:40 Exa: you have a huge break but I don't see how you could fill it in so it's ok
22:41 Exa: 01:35:136 (1,2) - Another pattern that will not be played as intended
22:41 Rocket_FaW: mnn
22:41 Rocket_FaW: that break happen in all diffs
22:41 Exa: 01:35:136 (1) - People will go until the first reverse point but then leave after the middle to go to 2
22:41 Exa: yeah the break is ok
22:42 Exa: 01:37:843 (4) - This slider looks like it grew a cancer tumor and then fell and broke it's leg
22:42 Rocket_FaW: yes haha
22:42 Exa: Watch the video and make it nicely symmetrical
22:42 Rocket_FaW: omg xD
22:42 Exa: wait I remembered something
22:43 Exa: [https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/208596 Here] is a post that could help you make better sliders\
22:43 Exa: 01:42:749 - And there is another beat here, don't skip it!
22:43 Exa: o
22:44 Exa: do the same as I told you on the other missing beat
22:44 Rocket_FaW: wow good post
22:45 Rocket_FaW: ok
22:45 *Exa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/733379 ANIMAL FEELINGS - Chicken Techno [Normal]]
22:47 Exa: again the curved sliders thingy
22:47 Exa: 00:20:813 (3,4) - Why not make it a 1/2 slider instead?
22:47 Exa: Since you had no 1/2 notes in a row in the easy, this might be too hard
22:48 Exa: especially in the beginning
22:48 Exa: 00:24:422 (3,4) - Same goes for these
22:48 Exa: 00:29:836 - And just like in easy, don't skip
22:48 Rocket_FaW: ok
22:49 Exa: 00:34:798 (3,4,2,3) - For consistency you will have to change these 2 accordingly
22:51 Exa: 00:41:565 (3,4,5) - Now this is a bit weird
22:51 Exa: 00:42:016 - You always make the player tap here
22:51 Exa: 00:38:407 (2) - Like for example
22:52 Exa: 00:41:565 (3,4,5) - But in this case you don't make him tap
22:52 Exa: This is incosistent and should be changed accordingly
22:52 Exa: Kee00:46:979 (2,3) - Make sure you have perfect blankets
22:52 Exa: "Kee" wuy
22:52 Exa: wut
22:52 Exa: fingers pls
22:53 Exa: 00:49:686 (3,1) - Just check all your blankets in this diff as well
22:53 Exa: 00:49:686 (3,2) - These should be stacked if the blankets with 00:50:588 (1) - were good enough
22:53 Rocket_FaW: ok, hard mode fix all blankets too xd
22:53 Exa: XD
22:53 Exa: 00:53:746 (1) - And your wiggly sliders
22:54 Rocket_FaW: other slider with cancer i know xd
22:54 Exa: XD
22:54 Exa: 01:01:415 (2) - now this is even more weird
22:54 Rocket_FaW: i need to learm more about blankets
22:54 Exa: Yeah just use the links I sent you
22:54 Exa: 01:01:415 (2) - So
22:55 Exa: This is not only weird because of the shape
22:55 Rocket_FaW: yes thanks
22:55 Exa: but also because of the skin
22:55 Exa: First things first, curving small sliders THAT much makes them feel forceful and they will never be played as intended
22:56 Exa: nobody would actualy follow the sliderball across the curve, but instead they would just go forward
22:56 Exa: So it's not played as intended
22:56 Exa: Secondly, the sliderball.png or whatever it's called does not take up all of the slider's body
22:56 Exa: the egg is in the middle of the slider and does not touch the sides
22:57 Exa: This might propose problems since it doesn't make the sliderpath clear for the player
22:57 Rocket_FaW: that is bad? :c
22:57 Rocket_FaW: aww
22:57 Exa: 01:01:415 (2) - For example here I expected to see the egg making a bigger curve
22:57 Exa: But it seems like it makes a smaller one
22:57 Exa: Don't you think?
22:57 Exa: It might just be me, but you should as a QAT member (not BN cause they might not know) about that
22:58 Rocket_FaW: ok
22:58 Rocket_FaW: and i will change the background who is not related with chicken techno xd
22:59 Exa: XD alright
22:59 Exa: 01:03:896 - It's weird that you did not use a note here
22:59 Exa: Where there is a chichen sqeek
22:59 Exa: 01:02:543 (1) - But used a note here where there is not
23:00 Exa: Got disconnected for a sec so [http://puu.sh/mzr7q/c56fc3df17.jpg here] is what I wrote in case you didn't get it
23:00 Rocket_FaW: ok
23:00 Exa: 01:08:182 (1,2,3) - This is a huge difficultyu spike because it's 3 notes in a row, something you haven't done before
23:00 Exa: It's better to go 1/2 slider + note
23:00 Exa: 01:10:889 (5,6,7) - Same goes for this
23:01 Exa: 01:10:437 - And don't skip that! It's really prominent
23:01 Rocket_FaW: ok ok :cc
23:01 Rocket_FaW: i know xD
23:01 Rocket_FaW: thats happen in all diffs too xd
23:02 Exa: 01:32:880 (4,1,2,3,4) - Give the player some time to breathe, using constant 1/2 rhythm is probably too hard
23:02 Exa: 01:38:294 (4,5,1) - You know
23:02 Rocket_FaW: i know
23:02 Exa: 01:39:647 (3,1) - *Insert aesthetical consistency* use the same slider if possible
23:02 Exa: 01:41:903 (2,3,4) - a
23:02 *Exa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/733378 ANIMAL FEELINGS - Chicken Techno [Hard]]
23:03 Exa: Gimme 2 minutes
23:03 Rocket_FaW: on dont worry
23:03 Rocket_FaW: ok
23:11 *Exa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/733378 ANIMAL FEELINGS - Chicken Techno [Hard]]
23:11 Exa: 00:20:588 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Wow this is too hardcore
23:11 Exa: I would expect that to be in insane but in hard it's simply not good
23:12 Exa: Since there were not 1/4 rhythms on hard, using a huge ass stream on insane is too hard
23:12 Exa: 1/4 rhythms on normal*
23:12 Exa: 00:23:069 (1) - Better-making
23:13 Exa: 00:24:197 (4) - What BSD did you even use to make this
23:13 Exa: Anyhow, keeping the cursor steady for that long when there is a changing sound is not a nice thing
23:13 Rocket_FaW: bsd?
23:13 Exa: beat snap divisor
23:14 Exa: try using a reverse slider insteasd
23:14 Rocket_FaW: ahh
23:14 Rocket_FaW: xd
23:14 Rocket_FaW: ok
23:14 Exa: 00:24:197 - or even better use a note here
23:14 Exa: 00:24:422 - And a 1/1 rev slider here
23:14 Exa: 00:26:227 (5,6,7,8,1) - That is "ok" but it still might be too hard
23:15 Exa: 00:26:227 (5,6,7,8,1) - You could easily blanket here
23:15 Exa: 00:33:671 (5,1,2) - If you made the curve a bit larger
23:15 Exa: 00:36:603 (3,5) - Stack
23:16 Exa: 00:39:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - Just avoid streams for now XD
23:16 Rocket_FaW: xD
23:16 Exa: 00:42:016 (3,4,5,6) - You use a reverse slider before for this
23:16 Exa: 00:38:407 (4) -
23:16 Exa: Use one here as well so it's consistent
23:16 Exa: 00:42:919 (1,2,3) - Just.. remove these
23:17 Exa: they don't follow something
23:17 Exa: and they are simply weird XD
23:17 Exa: mapping the squeek sounds of a chicken
23:17 Rocket_FaW: dont like too xd
23:17 Exa: Honestly I never expected to say that
23:17 Exa: 00:49:234 (4,5,6,7,8) - A
23:17 Exa: 00:53:069 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - A
23:17 Rocket_FaW: xdd
23:17 Exa: A = Remove if it's not clear XD
23:17 Rocket_FaW: ok ok xD
23:18 Exa: 00:55:325 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Why are you being so hardcure
23:18 Rocket_FaW: A general for hard mode xd
23:18 Exa: Hardcore
23:18 Exa: In general this diff is too easy to be considered hard
23:18 Rocket_FaW: my last hard mode was so much easy
23:18 Rocket_FaW: that s the reason xd
23:19 Rocket_FaW: to be considered insane
23:19 Exa: using 1.6 SV with with 1 DS seems perfect for hard
23:19 Exa: Yeah but you need a difficulty that's less easy than insane and harder than hard
23:19 Exa: or else there will be spread issues
23:20 Exa: I hate repearing myself so just check the rest of the difficulty for the same mistakes
23:20 Rocket_FaW: i will change the diff to advance xDD
23:20 Exa: hardcore 1/4 streams
23:20 Exa: bad blankets
23:20 Exa: asymmetrical sliders
23:20 Exa: incosistent rhtyhm/aesthetics
23:21 Exa: flow-wise the map is ok
23:21 Exa: since you use steady DS it couldn't be bad
23:21 Exa: use 17653 for offset btw
23:21 Exa: that's -3
23:22 Rocket_FaW: ok xD