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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on June 7, 2015 at 7:34:11 PM

Artist: sana
Title: Kokuhaku Yokou Renshuu
Tags: honeyworks milan- confession rehearsal 好きなひと。 Suki na Hito. shito
BPM: 185
Filesize: 6411kb
Play Time: 02:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.51 stars, 140 notes)
  2. Expert (5.13 stars, 626 notes)
  3. Hard (3 stars, 411 notes)
  4. Milan-'s Insane (4.27 stars, 516 notes)
  5. Normal (2.15 stars, 245 notes)
Download: sana - Kokuhaku Yokou Renshuu
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pineaple
Tux_Yo
Nigerian scammer confirmed!?
Topic Starter
ac8129464363

Tux_Yo wrote:

Nigerian scammer confirmed!?
YA
Milan-
i think i messed up some parts but yolo

http://puu.sh/h4kai/4f47ccfd28.rar
Depths
from my queue

hard

02:11:389 (9) - this looks like a circle to me, stack the head with the tail instead

02:17:876 (4) - ctl+g, adds more emphasis to the vocal between here and the next slider

Milian-'s Insane

00:27:931 (3) - ctl+g

00:29:228 (7) - ^

00:40:904 (4) - make sure that the tail is stacked with the head of 00:39:607 (4) -

Expert

00:14:147 (5) - you could blanket this

00:15:607 (1,2,3) - make a better blanket here

01:07:985 (1) - stack the head on 01:06:364 (2,3,4) -

02:06:200 (4,5,6) - rotate the slider the other direction, this flows better imo

really nice set, good luck with ranking
Topic Starter
ac8129464363

Its Depths wrote:

from my queue

hard

02:11:389 (9) - this looks like a circle to me, stack the head with the tail instead fixed differently

02:17:876 (4) - ctl+g, adds more emphasis to the vocal between here and the next slider ok

Expert

00:14:147 (5) - you could blanket this structure is more important here

00:15:607 (1,2,3) - make a better blanket here ok

01:07:985 (1) - stack the head on 01:06:364 (2,3,4) - no need for random antijump

02:06:200 (4,5,6) - rotate the slider the other direction, this flows better imo jump is too large

really nice set, good luck with ranking
thanks o/
DahplA
Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

General
  1. Using pure white as a combo colour is unrankable. Whoops, apologies this is just my skin.
  2. Try and have at least 3 different combo colours.
  3. Since there is a GD, you have to add their name to the tags. On the topic of tags, try and add some.
Expert
  1. 00:05:796 (7,1) - I think you should reposition the slider here so it flows more curved, rather than just straight up.
  2. 00:12:201 (3) - Stack
  3. 01:40:579 Why is there a timing point here (not sure if it's for all maps or just this diff)
  4. 02:01:335 (1) - I would put this as the blanket of 02:00:038 (1) - because you've made such a good space for it, it would be a waste not to put the slider there.
  5. 02:11:714 (1) - Ctrl+G?
Milan-'s Insane
  1. 01:19:822 (2) - Stack properly
  2. 01:31:498 (2) - ^
  3. 01:33:444 (2) - ^
  4. 01:37:336 (2) - ^
  5. 02:10:578 (2) - ^
  6. 02:18:200 (5) - ^
Hard
  1. 00:01:337 (1,2,3) - Maybe use a different pattern? I can easily recognize this from another diff.
  2. 01:43:173 (1) - I would space this out the same as previous circles
Topic Starter
ac8129464363

DahplA wrote:

General
  1. Since there is a GD, you have to add their name to the tags. On the topic of tags, try and add some. ok
Expert
  1. 01:40:579 Why is there a timing point here (not sure if it's for all maps or just this diff) time signature
well all of that was irrelevant because I remapped, sorry :p

Hard
  1. 01:43:173 (1) - I would space this out the same as previous circles why? there's different time between them
thanks
Akari-
first mod woooo

[General]

Add "好きなひと。 suki na hito." to tags (album name)

[Hard]

01:07:336 (1) + 02:10:578 (1) - the lack of NC here seems consistent (last line of chorus) but i think NCs might fit here
02:11:957 (2) - all of your other slider 1/4 slider transitions have the 1/4 in between, so it was hard to read the stack. recommend something like this: http://puu.sh/hbQfY/729d1b249e.jpg

[Milan-'s Insane]

HP -0.5 or -1, OD -0.5 or -1? Seems weird to have the exact same difficulty settings in the light insane and the insane.
00:44:958 (3) - this can be a blanket

[Expert]

00:49:336 (1) - This slider touches the hit error bar, which is unrankable IIRC.
00:50:147 (4) - same
01:05:228 (2) - position at (132, 300) for better blanket?
01:30:363 (2) - I get that you tried mapping this and 01:36:201 (2) - similarly because they sound similar, but the first has an extra beat that's very audible, so I recommend one of these: http://puu.sh/hbQpG/354ebe34a7.jpg http://puu.sh/hbQsK/d7c9dda9dc.jpg

nice map :)
annika69
Hello! Sorry for late mod :?
[Easy]
00:03:931 (1) - Fix blanket
00:12:039 (2) - Same^^
00:13:336 (4) - Same^^
00:18:201 (2,3) - Make them blanket like so http://puu.sh/hck7a/c503224273.jpg
00:36:364 (1) - Change the slider?? Maybe make it a curve or something like that
00:54:526 (2) - Fix blanket, like, make the space between it and 00:53:228 (1) a little larger ?? ?
02:00:038 (2) - Change the slider?? Like a curve, or atleast fix it please

[Normal]
00:23:066 (5) - Move to X:452 Y:284
00:35:553 (2) - Fix it to make it curve a little better, like http://puu.sh/hctf3/9b3323d178.jpg
00:55:174 (4) - Make it even with 00:54:526 (3) (Copy 3, ctrl g and place)
00:57:769 - Add note?
01:49:660 (1) - Change the slider like http://puu.sh/hctKR/c277756cbf.jpg

[Hard]
01:40:903 (1,1,1,1,1) - Personally I think that it would look neater if they went in like a straight line rather than up and down like that??
Topic Starter
ac8129464363

Akari- wrote:

first mod woooo

[General]

Add "好きなひと。 suki na hito." to tags (album name)

[Hard]

01:07:336 (1) + 02:10:578 (1) - the lack of NC here seems consistent (last line of chorus) but i think NCs might fit here sure
02:11:957 (2) - all of your other slider 1/4 slider transitions have the 1/4 in between, so it was hard to read the stack. recommend something like this: http://puu.sh/hbQfY/729d1b249e.jpg suggestion looks bleh and I want a stack for the effect of being forced there, so I raised sv and changed stuff

[Expert]

00:49:336 (1) - This slider touches the hit error bar, which is unrankable IIRC. afaik it's not and I don't want to break the pattern
00:50:147 (4) - same same
01:05:228 (2) - position at (132, 300) for better blanket? k
01:30:363 (2) - I get that you tried mapping this and 01:36:201 (2) - similarly because they sound similar, but the first has an extra beat that's very audible, so I recommend one of these: http://puu.sh/hbQpG/354ebe34a7.jpg http://puu.sh/hbQsK/d7c9dda9dc.jpg I'm mapping to the snare drum, that would make the rhythm unintuitive

nice map :) same
thanks o/

annika69 wrote:

Hello! Sorry for late mod :?
[Easy]
00:03:931 (1) - Fix blanket looked fine but adjusted a bit anyways?
00:12:039 (2) - Same^^ kay
00:13:336 (4) - Same^^ nobody will notice but sure
00:18:201 (2,3) - Make them blanket like so http://puu.sh/hck7a/c503224273.jpg no thanks
00:36:364 (1) - Change the slider?? Maybe make it a curve or something like that why D:
00:54:526 (2) - Fix blanket, like, make the space between it and 00:53:228 (1) a little larger ?? ? ok
02:00:038 (2) - Change the slider?? Like a curve, or atleast fix it please wtf why do you want me to delete my sliders

[Normal]
00:23:066 (5) - Move to X:452 Y:284 intended
00:35:553 (2) - Fix it to make it curve a little better, like http://puu.sh/hctf3/9b3323d178.jpg did a thing
00:55:174 (4) - Make it even with 00:54:526 (3) (Copy 3, ctrl g and place) intended
00:57:769 - Add note? that would require ds and thus putting it all the way across the screen
01:49:660 (1) - Change the slider like http://puu.sh/hctKR/c277756cbf.jpg why o.o

[Hard]
01:40:903 (1,1,1,1,1) - Personally I think that it would look neater if they went in like a straight line rather than up and down like that?? does it need to look neat? I think this looks nicer and fits the song better :p
thanks for mod
Anxient
General:

no custom combo colors? I recommend colors following the BG.
English name: Confession Rehearsal? http://vocaloid.wikia.com/wiki/%E5%91%8A%E7%99%BD%E4%BA%88%E8%A1%8C%E7%B7%B4%E7%BF%92_(Kokuhaku_Yokou_Renshuu) <--source


Milan-'s Insane

00:03:769 (9) - begin NC here
00:17:228 (1) - this sliders look kinda boring dontcha think? Why not make it curve a bit to the left? http://puu.sh/hdojq/a94aa55128.jpg
00:25:255 (4) - I think itll be better to put this between sliderend 3 and hitcircle 5. looks kinda confusing
00:44:634 (2,3) - for these, either make them both smooth sliders or sharp sliders?
00:46:093 (3,5) - try to blanket?
01:06:201 (1,2,3) - make like this? less confusing http://puu.sh/hdowK/01085378e9.jpg
01:33:444 (2) - fix this http://puu.sh/hdoAJ/99a49ca358.jpg into http://puu.sh/hdoBw/5b520e41ee.jpg
02:05:065 (1) - ctrl+g for circular flow
02:37:660 - try adding a very quiet timing point for this point

Expert

no custom diffname? Confession for diffname
00:52:580 (9) - I recommend a NC
00:52:904 (1) - continue combo if follow above mod
01:38:795 (1) - start spinner on blue. you know where to end it.
01:50:633 (9) - NC for feeling?
02:31:822 (1) - why NC?

good luck~
>w<
Deppyforce
Hi ~ From My Queue Yo
Sorry For Late Mod I'm Busy

Easy
  1. 00:23:391 (3) - Turn This To 1 Reverse Slider
  2. 00:33:445 (2) - Put This In The Middle Of 1 And 3
  3. 00:36:364 (1) - I Think Push The 3rd White Dot To The Left Will Look Better
  4. 00:39:931 (4) - Middle Of 3 And 1
  5. 00:56:472 (2) - Change To Just 1 Circle Will More Fit To Easy
  6. 01:13:985 (1,2,3,4) - Change One Of These To Only 1 Circle
  7. 01:40:903 (1) - Move This To 01:40:579 - End At 01:41:227 -
  8. 01:44:470 (3) - Move 3rd White Dot A Bit To Left To Make It Smoother
  9. Just A Quick Tip If You're Not Doing : Map In Beat Snap Divisor 1/2 Next Time

Normal
  1. AR 5.5 Is Enough For Normal Mate
  2. 00:17:228 (1) - If I'm Mapping This I'll Ctrl+G This And Revert Back To Normal Slider And At Note At 00:17:877 - Instead
  3. 01:09:120 (1) - Remove New Combo
  4. 01:44:470 (3) - Revert One Arrow And Add Circle Instead
  5. The Map Is Nicely Made :D

Nothing To Mod In Hard And Insane Waw

  1. Quick Suggestion : Milan's Insane Will Sound Better (Remove that - at the end)
I Cant Mod Expert Diff

Hope My Mod Can help at least A bit xD
Euny

(finally i'm comming)hello deetz :) your request!came from my queue


  • General
  1. change bg ratio size 16:9 or 4:3
  • Easy
  1. 00:26:634 - remove this timing point. seems to useless.
  2. 01:08:796 (1,4) - you can avoid this overlap.
  3. 02:07:822 (2) - how about makes more curvy for fitting 02:06:524 (1,1) - this stuffs?
  • Hard
  1. 00:42:201 (3) - place it on x49 y326 or wherever, lets makes more better ds with 00:41:228 (5,1) - them
  2. 00:44:147 (1,2) - nahhhhh xD ugly sliders~! lets makes more pretty
  3. 01:13:985 (1) - add finish at this front.
  • Expert
  1. expert? like a Beatmania IIDX. xD.. i love diff's name. but how about changing to just 'Extra'? i think its better.
  2. 00:54:850 (2) - rotate this slider with -8 degrees and place it on 196y80 for better place?
  3. 01:06:364 (2,1) - make perfect stack looks better imo.
  4. 01:13:985 (1) - i heard cymbals sound. well, finish should be add for this head ;)
  5. 01:48:038 (5) - move it on x400y216 for better place.
  6. 01:59:876 (4) - i recommend place that on x202y63.
  7. 02:10:903 (4) - NC cause there is sv changing.
that's it :)
hope this is helpful... ;)
Milan-

Its Depths wrote:

Milian-'s Insane

00:27:931 (3) - ctl+g i like mine more

00:29:228 (7) - ^ it'd have no meaning

00:40:904 (4) - make sure that the tail is stacked with the head of 00:39:607 (4) - you cant see this ingame

DahplA wrote:

Milan-'s Insane
  1. 01:19:822 (2) - Stack properly all of these arent necessary, cuz it's just the editor moving them 1 osu-pixel, which is nothing important.
  2. 01:31:498 (2) - ^
  3. 01:33:444 (2) - ^
  4. 01:37:336 (2) - ^
  5. 02:10:578 (2) - ^
  6. 02:18:200 (5) - ^

Akari- wrote:

[Milan-'s Insane]

HP -0.5 or -1, OD -0.5 or -1? Seems weird to have the exact same difficulty settings in the light insane and the insane. deetz can change these as he finds the best :p
00:44:958 (3) - this can be a blanket it's fine already

Anxient wrote:

Milan-'s Insane

00:03:769 (9) - begin NC here that'd break my constancy
00:17:228 (1) - this sliders look kinda boring dontcha think? Why not make it curve a bit to the left? http://puu.sh/hdojq/a94aa55128.jpg i like mine more
00:25:255 (4) - I think itll be better to put this between sliderend 3 and hitcircle 5. looks kinda confusing it's not confusing at all
00:44:634 (2,3) - for these, either make them both smooth sliders or sharp sliders? it's fine
00:46:093 (3,5) - try to blanket? it's fine already
01:06:201 (1,2,3) - make like this? less confusing http://puu.sh/hdowK/01085378e9.jpg ^
01:33:444 (2) - fix this http://puu.sh/hdoAJ/99a49ca358.jpg into http://puu.sh/hdoBw/5b520e41ee.jpg 1 pixel wont change anything
02:05:065 (1) - ctrl+g for circular flow i like mine more
02:37:660 - try adding a very quiet timing point for this point uh maybe, but you can still hear the guitar till this point
mai
Topic Starter
ac8129464363

Anxient wrote:

General:

no custom combo colors? I recommend colors following the BG. will think about it
English name: Confession Rehearsal? http://vocaloid.wikia.com/wiki/%E5%91%8A%E7%99%BD%E4%BA%88%E8%A1%8C%E7%B7%B4%E7%BF%92_(Kokuhaku_Yokou_Renshuu) <--source correct, and it's already in tags lol

Expert

no custom diffname? Confession for diffname
00:52:580 (9) - I recommend a NC y
00:52:904 (1) - continue combo if follow above mod ^
01:38:795 (1) - start spinner on blue. you know where to end it. i don't like it, feels too sudden
01:50:633 (9) - NC for feeling? wat
02:31:822 (1) - why NC? ok

good luck~
>w<
thanck

will continue later i think

edit:

DeppyDf wrote:

Hi ~ From My Queue Yo
Sorry For Late Mod I'm Busy Same

Easy
  1. 00:23:391 (3) - Turn This To 1 Reverse Slider Doesn't Fit The Density Of This Diff
  2. 00:33:445 (2) - Put This In The Middle Of 1 And 3 What
  3. 00:36:364 (1) - I Think Push The 3rd White Dot To The Left Will Look Better No Thanks
  4. 00:39:931 (4) - Middle Of 3 And 1 What
  5. 00:56:472 (2) - Change To Just 1 Circle Will More Fit To Easy Its Easier To Read Like This
  6. 01:13:985 (1,2,3,4) - Change One Of These To Only 1 Circle What Why
  7. 01:40:903 (1) - Move This To 01:40:579 - End At 01:41:227 - Why?
  8. 01:44:470 (3) - Move 3rd White Dot A Bit To Left To Make It Smoother Ok
  9. Just A Quick Tip If You're Not Doing : Map In Beat Snap Divisor 1/2 Next Time Doesn't Matter At All

Normal
  1. AR 5.5 Is Enough For Normal Mate Sure Why Not
  2. 00:17:228 (1) - If I'm Mapping This I'll Ctrl+G This And Revert Back To Normal Slider And At Note At 00:17:877 - Instead But You're Not
  3. 01:09:120 (1) - Remove New Combo Removed The Other One
  4. 01:44:470 (3) - Revert One Arrow And Add Circle Instead It's The Same Sound So No Thanks
  5. The Map Is Nicely Made :D Thank You :D


Hope My Mod Can help at least A bit xD
Mio_chan
Black mods are suggestions only

Blue mods are recommended to fix, or places need to pay attention tp

Red mods are unrankable

Green mods are comments only.
[General]
[Expert]
00:04:255 (2,3) – I think (3) can be farther from (2)
00:05:553 (6) – curvature on another side?_? i.e.00:06:850 (2,3) – the flow is not good here, suggestion: 00:08:958 (5) – the overlapping does not look nice here, but I think it is still okay, consider avoiding the overlap?
00:49:336 (1) – why NC 0.0?
01:16:904 (3,4,5,6) – confusing to read, as (4),(5) is 1/4 apart but (3) (4) is 1/2 apart.
01:18:201 (1) – why ends at there ?_?look pretty bad with the tick
01:26:309 (1) – delete NC, I think it is not necessary
01:57:443 (5) – NC, you put NC here on the first verses
02:10:903 (4) – NC due to SV change
02:22:092 (1) – remove NC
The following NC is due to consistency with intro, fix it or fix intro instead
02:28:416 (5) – NC
02:31:011 (4) - NC
02:31:822 (7,1) –NC on(7) instead of (1)
02:33:606 (5) –NC
[Milan’s Insane]
I suggest a lower AR because it is much easier than expert but both diff have same diff setting(let’s say 8.4, I try with 8 and its fine) BTW I do the mod with AR 9
I think this diff is not insane at all 0,0 except on a few occasional jump, other then that it is just like a hard.
00:25:336 (5,6,7,8) – this jump does not play quite well because your map is not jumpy, but the spacing is more than twice as normal, I will use 1.65x instead, 2.2 at most but not 2.5
00:52:904 (7) – stack under (6)?
01:24:525 (5,6,7) – I will use this instead01:28:579 (6,7) – Ctrl + G?
02:22:092 (1) – Remove NC
02:37:497 (1) – use a circle instead and remove NC if do so?
[Hard]
I suggest AR should be lower than 8, AR7 works better than 8 for me
00:16:742 (9) – plays very well I think XD Although I think NC is better, it should be okay without NC
00:24:688 (1) – remove NC
01:18:201 (1) – why ends at there ?_?look pretty bad with the tick
02:22:092 (1) - remove NC
02:27:281 (5) – NC
02:33:606 (5) – NC
02:36:200 (4) – NC
[Normal]
AR - 1
I suggest he following new combo because I think it is better to put NC for each two bar
00:18:201 (1) – remove NC
00:19:499 (5) – NC
00:20:796 (1) – Remove NC
00:22:093 (3) – NC
00:23:391 (1) – remove NC
00:31:823 (5) – this kind of short repeating sliders maybe too tricky for normal
00:46:742 (1) – remove NC
01:02:958 (1) –remove NC? Or you do that on purpose?
01:18:201 (1) – the tick looks bad ~_~ end on white line?
Why you not map the 3/4 part 0.0 I think it should be mapped as you map it on harder diff.
If you decide not to map that part, remove the green lines inside the break.
01:40:903 (1) – this slider is too close to the spinner end, it appears in the middle of spinner and newbies may not be able to handle this
01:49:660 (1) – remove NC?
02:05:876 (1) - remove NC? Or you do that on purpose?
02:19:497 (1,2,3,4) –I prefer unstacking this
02:22:092 (1) –remove NC
Okay, delete the following green line
00:01:337 – 00:17:228 - 00:27:282 – 00:31:174 – 00:32:472 – 00:37:661 – 00:55:823 – 00:58:093 – 01:07:895- 01:19:174 - 01:43:173 - 01:58:741 – 02:00:038 – 02:10:903 02:12:038 - 02:20:795 -
[Easy]
AR – 1 OD – 1
In this diff there is a lot of place where the first and third beat is blank, while the second and forth beat are filled. This is okay but next time you map another easy I suggest avoid this because newbies may not be able to play second and forth beat correctly
00:03:931 (1) – remove NC
00:20:796 (3,4) – make the slider curve so that they don’t overlap
00:58:418 (1,2) – this pattern does not match the song change (2) to something consisting 1/1?If you do so, remember to change all the similar patterns
Consider mapping the 3/4 part
And the green line issue, delete high-lighted lines, the green line inside the break is not high-lighted because If you map that part you may need it.

Goodluck~ :)
VINXIS
Nathan
WWWWWWHHHHHHHHHH
Topic Starter
ac8129464363
no reply = fix

Euny wrote:


(finally i'm comming)hello deetz :) your request!came from my queue


  • General
  1. change bg ratio size 16:9 or 4:3 doing a thing
    :(
  • Easy
  1. 00:26:634 - remove this timing point. seems to useless.
  2. 01:08:796 (1,4) - you can avoid this overlap. the object is long gone by the time it's visible
  3. 02:07:822 (2) - how about makes more curvy for fitting 02:06:524 (1,1) - this stuffs?
  • Hard
  1. 00:42:201 (3) - place it on x49 y326 or wherever, lets makes more better ds with 00:41:228 (5,1) - them
  2. 00:44:147 (1,2) - nahhhhh xD ugly sliders~! lets makes more pretty
  3. 01:13:985 (1) - add finish at this front.
  • Expert
  1. expert? like a Beatmania IIDX. xD.. i love diff's name. but how about changing to just 'Extra'? i think its better. extra is laaaaame
  2. 00:54:850 (2) - rotate this slider with -8 degrees and place it on 196y80 for better place?
  3. 01:06:364 (2,1) - make perfect stack looks better imo. not possible o.o
  4. 01:13:985 (1) - i heard cymbals sound. well, finish should be add for this head ;)
  5. 01:48:038 (5) - move it on x400y216 for better place.
  6. 01:59:876 (4) - i recommend place that on x202y63. nah i like the overlap, and this jump is more natural
  7. 02:10:903 (4) - NC cause there is sv changing.
that's it :)
hope this is helpful... ;)
thanks :D

although your mod had no quote button for some reason @_@
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