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ac8129464363
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on June 7, 2015 at 7:34:11 PM

Artist: sana
Title: Kokuhaku Yokou Renshuu
Tags: honeyworks milan- confession rehearsal 好きなひと。 Suki na Hito. shito
BPM: 185
Filesize: 6411kb
Play Time: 02:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.51 stars, 140 notes)
  2. Expert (5.13 stars, 626 notes)
  3. Hard (3 stars, 411 notes)
  4. Milan-'s Insane (4.27 stars, 516 notes)
  5. Normal (2.15 stars, 245 notes)
Download: sana - Kokuhaku Yokou Renshuu
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Tux_Yo
3 posts
Joined October 2013
Tux_Yo
Nigerian scammer confirmed!?
ac8129464363
1,560 posts
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Topic Starter
ac8129464363

Tux_Yo wrote:

Nigerian scammer confirmed!?
YA
Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Milan-
i think i messed up some parts but yolo

http://puu.sh/h4kai/4f47ccfd28.rar
Depths
681 posts
Joined January 2014
Depths
from my queue

hard

02:11:389 (9) - this looks like a circle to me, stack the head with the tail instead

02:17:876 (4) - ctl+g, adds more emphasis to the vocal between here and the next slider

Milian-'s Insane

00:27:931 (3) - ctl+g

00:29:228 (7) - ^

00:40:904 (4) - make sure that the tail is stacked with the head of 00:39:607 (4) -

Expert

00:14:147 (5) - you could blanket this

00:15:607 (1,2,3) - make a better blanket here

01:07:985 (1) - stack the head on 01:06:364 (2,3,4) -

02:06:200 (4,5,6) - rotate the slider the other direction, this flows better imo

really nice set, good luck with ranking
ac8129464363
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Its Depths wrote:

from my queue

hard

02:11:389 (9) - this looks like a circle to me, stack the head with the tail instead fixed differently

02:17:876 (4) - ctl+g, adds more emphasis to the vocal between here and the next slider ok

Expert

00:14:147 (5) - you could blanket this structure is more important here

00:15:607 (1,2,3) - make a better blanket here ok

01:07:985 (1) - stack the head on 01:06:364 (2,3,4) - no need for random antijump

02:06:200 (4,5,6) - rotate the slider the other direction, this flows better imo jump is too large

really nice set, good luck with ranking
thanks o/
DahplA
1,099 posts
Joined March 2014
DahplA
Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

General
  1. Using pure white as a combo colour is unrankable. Whoops, apologies this is just my skin.
  2. Try and have at least 3 different combo colours.
  3. Since there is a GD, you have to add their name to the tags. On the topic of tags, try and add some.
Expert
  1. 00:05:796 (7,1) - I think you should reposition the slider here so it flows more curved, rather than just straight up.
  2. 00:12:201 (3) - Stack
  3. 01:40:579 Why is there a timing point here (not sure if it's for all maps or just this diff)
  4. 02:01:335 (1) - I would put this as the blanket of 02:00:038 (1) - because you've made such a good space for it, it would be a waste not to put the slider there.
  5. 02:11:714 (1) - Ctrl+G?
Milan-'s Insane
  1. 01:19:822 (2) - Stack properly
  2. 01:31:498 (2) - ^
  3. 01:33:444 (2) - ^
  4. 01:37:336 (2) - ^
  5. 02:10:578 (2) - ^
  6. 02:18:200 (5) - ^
Hard
  1. 00:01:337 (1,2,3) - Maybe use a different pattern? I can easily recognize this from another diff.
  2. 01:43:173 (1) - I would space this out the same as previous circles
ac8129464363
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ac8129464363

DahplA wrote:

General
  1. Since there is a GD, you have to add their name to the tags. On the topic of tags, try and add some. ok
Expert
  1. 01:40:579 Why is there a timing point here (not sure if it's for all maps or just this diff) time signature
well all of that was irrelevant because I remapped, sorry :p

Hard
  1. 01:43:173 (1) - I would space this out the same as previous circles why? there's different time between them
thanks
Akari-
211 posts
Joined May 2010
Akari-
first mod woooo

[General]

Add "好きなひと。 suki na hito." to tags (album name)

[Hard]

01:07:336 (1) + 02:10:578 (1) - the lack of NC here seems consistent (last line of chorus) but i think NCs might fit here
02:11:957 (2) - all of your other slider 1/4 slider transitions have the 1/4 in between, so it was hard to read the stack. recommend something like this: http://puu.sh/hbQfY/729d1b249e.jpg

[Milan-'s Insane]

HP -0.5 or -1, OD -0.5 or -1? Seems weird to have the exact same difficulty settings in the light insane and the insane.
00:44:958 (3) - this can be a blanket

[Expert]

00:49:336 (1) - This slider touches the hit error bar, which is unrankable IIRC.
00:50:147 (4) - same
01:05:228 (2) - position at (132, 300) for better blanket?
01:30:363 (2) - I get that you tried mapping this and 01:36:201 (2) - similarly because they sound similar, but the first has an extra beat that's very audible, so I recommend one of these: http://puu.sh/hbQpG/354ebe34a7.jpg http://puu.sh/hbQsK/d7c9dda9dc.jpg

nice map :)
annika69
184 posts
Joined October 2014
annika69
Hello! Sorry for late mod :?
[Easy]
00:03:931 (1) - Fix blanket
00:12:039 (2) - Same^^
00:13:336 (4) - Same^^
00:18:201 (2,3) - Make them blanket like so http://puu.sh/hck7a/c503224273.jpg
00:36:364 (1) - Change the slider?? Maybe make it a curve or something like that
00:54:526 (2) - Fix blanket, like, make the space between it and 00:53:228 (1) a little larger ?? ?
02:00:038 (2) - Change the slider?? Like a curve, or atleast fix it please

[Normal]
00:23:066 (5) - Move to X:452 Y:284
00:35:553 (2) - Fix it to make it curve a little better, like http://puu.sh/hctf3/9b3323d178.jpg
00:55:174 (4) - Make it even with 00:54:526 (3) (Copy 3, ctrl g and place)
00:57:769 - Add note?
01:49:660 (1) - Change the slider like http://puu.sh/hctKR/c277756cbf.jpg

[Hard]
01:40:903 (1,1,1,1,1) - Personally I think that it would look neater if they went in like a straight line rather than up and down like that??
ac8129464363
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Akari- wrote:

first mod woooo

[General]

Add "好きなひと。 suki na hito." to tags (album name)

[Hard]

01:07:336 (1) + 02:10:578 (1) - the lack of NC here seems consistent (last line of chorus) but i think NCs might fit here sure
02:11:957 (2) - all of your other slider 1/4 slider transitions have the 1/4 in between, so it was hard to read the stack. recommend something like this: http://puu.sh/hbQfY/729d1b249e.jpg suggestion looks bleh and I want a stack for the effect of being forced there, so I raised sv and changed stuff

[Expert]

00:49:336 (1) - This slider touches the hit error bar, which is unrankable IIRC. afaik it's not and I don't want to break the pattern
00:50:147 (4) - same same
01:05:228 (2) - position at (132, 300) for better blanket? k
01:30:363 (2) - I get that you tried mapping this and 01:36:201 (2) - similarly because they sound similar, but the first has an extra beat that's very audible, so I recommend one of these: http://puu.sh/hbQpG/354ebe34a7.jpg http://puu.sh/hbQsK/d7c9dda9dc.jpg I'm mapping to the snare drum, that would make the rhythm unintuitive

nice map :) same
thanks o/

annika69 wrote:

Hello! Sorry for late mod :?
[Easy]
00:03:931 (1) - Fix blanket looked fine but adjusted a bit anyways?
00:12:039 (2) - Same^^ kay
00:13:336 (4) - Same^^ nobody will notice but sure
00:18:201 (2,3) - Make them blanket like so http://puu.sh/hck7a/c503224273.jpg no thanks
00:36:364 (1) - Change the slider?? Maybe make it a curve or something like that why D:
00:54:526 (2) - Fix blanket, like, make the space between it and 00:53:228 (1) a little larger ?? ? ok
02:00:038 (2) - Change the slider?? Like a curve, or atleast fix it please wtf why do you want me to delete my sliders

[Normal]
00:23:066 (5) - Move to X:452 Y:284 intended
00:35:553 (2) - Fix it to make it curve a little better, like http://puu.sh/hctf3/9b3323d178.jpg did a thing
00:55:174 (4) - Make it even with 00:54:526 (3) (Copy 3, ctrl g and place) intended
00:57:769 - Add note? that would require ds and thus putting it all the way across the screen
01:49:660 (1) - Change the slider like http://puu.sh/hctKR/c277756cbf.jpg why o.o

[Hard]
01:40:903 (1,1,1,1,1) - Personally I think that it would look neater if they went in like a straight line rather than up and down like that?? does it need to look neat? I think this looks nicer and fits the song better :p
thanks for mod
Anxient
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Anxient
General:

no custom combo colors? I recommend colors following the BG.
English name: Confession Rehearsal? http://vocaloid.wikia.com/wiki/%E5%91%8A%E7%99%BD%E4%BA%88%E8%A1%8C%E7%B7%B4%E7%BF%92_(Kokuhaku_Yokou_Renshuu) <--source


Milan-'s Insane

00:03:769 (9) - begin NC here
00:17:228 (1) - this sliders look kinda boring dontcha think? Why not make it curve a bit to the left? http://puu.sh/hdojq/a94aa55128.jpg
00:25:255 (4) - I think itll be better to put this between sliderend 3 and hitcircle 5. looks kinda confusing
00:44:634 (2,3) - for these, either make them both smooth sliders or sharp sliders?
00:46:093 (3,5) - try to blanket?
01:06:201 (1,2,3) - make like this? less confusing http://puu.sh/hdowK/01085378e9.jpg
01:33:444 (2) - fix this http://puu.sh/hdoAJ/99a49ca358.jpg into http://puu.sh/hdoBw/5b520e41ee.jpg
02:05:065 (1) - ctrl+g for circular flow
02:37:660 - try adding a very quiet timing point for this point

Expert

no custom diffname? Confession for diffname
00:52:580 (9) - I recommend a NC
00:52:904 (1) - continue combo if follow above mod
01:38:795 (1) - start spinner on blue. you know where to end it.
01:50:633 (9) - NC for feeling?
02:31:822 (1) - why NC?

good luck~
>w<
Deppyforce
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Joined November 2014
Deppyforce
Hi ~ From My Queue Yo
Sorry For Late Mod I'm Busy

Easy
  1. 00:23:391 (3) - Turn This To 1 Reverse Slider
  2. 00:33:445 (2) - Put This In The Middle Of 1 And 3
  3. 00:36:364 (1) - I Think Push The 3rd White Dot To The Left Will Look Better
  4. 00:39:931 (4) - Middle Of 3 And 1
  5. 00:56:472 (2) - Change To Just 1 Circle Will More Fit To Easy
  6. 01:13:985 (1,2,3,4) - Change One Of These To Only 1 Circle
  7. 01:40:903 (1) - Move This To 01:40:579 - End At 01:41:227 -
  8. 01:44:470 (3) - Move 3rd White Dot A Bit To Left To Make It Smoother
  9. Just A Quick Tip If You're Not Doing : Map In Beat Snap Divisor 1/2 Next Time

Normal
  1. AR 5.5 Is Enough For Normal Mate
  2. 00:17:228 (1) - If I'm Mapping This I'll Ctrl+G This And Revert Back To Normal Slider And At Note At 00:17:877 - Instead
  3. 01:09:120 (1) - Remove New Combo
  4. 01:44:470 (3) - Revert One Arrow And Add Circle Instead
  5. The Map Is Nicely Made :D

Nothing To Mod In Hard And Insane Waw

  1. Quick Suggestion : Milan's Insane Will Sound Better (Remove that - at the end)
I Cant Mod Expert Diff

Hope My Mod Can help at least A bit xD
Euny
2,274 posts
Joined January 2014
Euny

(finally i'm comming)hello deetz :) your request!♥came from my queue


  • General
  1. change bg ratio size 16:9 or 4:3
  • Easy
  1. 00:26:634 - remove this timing point. seems to useless.
  2. 01:08:796 (1,4) - you can avoid this overlap.
  3. 02:07:822 (2) - how about makes more curvy for fitting 02:06:524 (1,1) - this stuffs?
    SPOILER
  • Hard
  1. 00:42:201 (3) - place it on x49 y326 or wherever, lets makes more better ds with 00:41:228 (5,1) - them
    SPOILER
  2. 00:44:147 (1,2) - nahhhhh xD ugly sliders~! lets makes more pretty♥
    SPOILER
  3. 01:13:985 (1) - add finish at this front.
  • Expert
  1. expert? like a Beatmania IIDX. xD.. i love diff's name. but how about changing to just 'Extra'? i think its better.
  2. 00:54:850 (2) - rotate this slider with -8 degrees and place it on 196y80 for better place?
    SPOILER
  3. 01:06:364 (2,1) - make perfect stack looks better imo.
  4. 01:13:985 (1) - i heard cymbals sound. well,♥ finish should be add for this head ;)
  5. 01:48:038 (5) - move it on x400y216 for better place.
  6. 01:59:876 (4) - i recommend place that on x202y63.
  7. 02:10:903 (4) - NC cause there is sv changing.
that's it :)
hope this is helpful... ;)
Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Milan-

Its Depths wrote:

Milian-'s Insane

00:27:931 (3) - ctl+g i like mine more

00:29:228 (7) - ^ it'd have no meaning

00:40:904 (4) - make sure that the tail is stacked with the head of 00:39:607 (4) - you cant see this ingame

DahplA wrote:

Milan-'s Insane
  1. 01:19:822 (2) - Stack properly all of these arent necessary, cuz it's just the editor moving them 1 osu-pixel, which is nothing important.
  2. 01:31:498 (2) - ^
  3. 01:33:444 (2) - ^
  4. 01:37:336 (2) - ^
  5. 02:10:578 (2) - ^
  6. 02:18:200 (5) - ^

Akari- wrote:

[Milan-'s Insane]

HP -0.5 or -1, OD -0.5 or -1? Seems weird to have the exact same difficulty settings in the light insane and the insane. deetz can change these as he finds the best :p
00:44:958 (3) - this can be a blanket it's fine already

Anxient wrote:

Milan-'s Insane

00:03:769 (9) - begin NC here that'd break my constancy
00:17:228 (1) - this sliders look kinda boring dontcha think? Why not make it curve a bit to the left? http://puu.sh/hdojq/a94aa55128.jpg i like mine more
00:25:255 (4) - I think itll be better to put this between sliderend 3 and hitcircle 5. looks kinda confusing it's not confusing at all
00:44:634 (2,3) - for these, either make them both smooth sliders or sharp sliders? it's fine
00:46:093 (3,5) - try to blanket? it's fine already
01:06:201 (1,2,3) - make like this? less confusing http://puu.sh/hdowK/01085378e9.jpg ^
01:33:444 (2) - fix this http://puu.sh/hdoAJ/99a49ca358.jpg into http://puu.sh/hdoBw/5b520e41ee.jpg 1 pixel wont change anything
02:05:065 (1) - ctrl+g for circular flow i like mine more
02:37:660 - try adding a very quiet timing point for this point uh maybe, but you can still hear the guitar till this point
mai
ac8129464363
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ac8129464363

Anxient wrote:

General:

no custom combo colors? I recommend colors following the BG. will think about it
English name: Confession Rehearsal? http://vocaloid.wikia.com/wiki/%E5%91%8A%E7%99%BD%E4%BA%88%E8%A1%8C%E7%B7%B4%E7%BF%92_(Kokuhaku_Yokou_Renshuu) <--source correct, and it's already in tags lol

Expert

no custom diffname? Confession for diffname
00:52:580 (9) - I recommend a NC y
00:52:904 (1) - continue combo if follow above mod ^
01:38:795 (1) - start spinner on blue. you know where to end it. i don't like it, feels too sudden
01:50:633 (9) - NC for feeling? wat
02:31:822 (1) - why NC? ok

good luck~
>w<
thanck

will continue later i think

edit:

DeppyDf wrote:

Hi ~ From My Queue Yo
Sorry For Late Mod I'm Busy Same

Easy
  1. 00:23:391 (3) - Turn This To 1 Reverse Slider Doesn't Fit The Density Of This Diff
  2. 00:33:445 (2) - Put This In The Middle Of 1 And 3 What
  3. 00:36:364 (1) - I Think Push The 3rd White Dot To The Left Will Look Better No Thanks
  4. 00:39:931 (4) - Middle Of 3 And 1 What
  5. 00:56:472 (2) - Change To Just 1 Circle Will More Fit To Easy Its Easier To Read Like This
  6. 01:13:985 (1,2,3,4) - Change One Of These To Only 1 Circle What Why
  7. 01:40:903 (1) - Move This To 01:40:579 - End At 01:41:227 - Why?
  8. 01:44:470 (3) - Move 3rd White Dot A Bit To Left To Make It Smoother Ok
  9. Just A Quick Tip If You're Not Doing : Map In Beat Snap Divisor 1/2 Next Time Doesn't Matter At All

Normal
  1. AR 5.5 Is Enough For Normal Mate Sure Why Not
  2. 00:17:228 (1) - If I'm Mapping This I'll Ctrl+G This And Revert Back To Normal Slider And At Note At 00:17:877 - Instead But You're Not
  3. 01:09:120 (1) - Remove New Combo Removed The Other One
  4. 01:44:470 (3) - Revert One Arrow And Add Circle Instead It's The Same Sound So No Thanks
  5. The Map Is Nicely Made :D Thank You :D


Hope My Mod Can help at least A bit xD
Last edited by ac8129464363 , edited 1 time in total.
Mio_chan
172 posts
Joined July 2010
Mio_chan
Black mods are suggestions only

Blue mods are recommended to fix, or places need to pay attention tp

Red mods are unrankable

Green mods are comments only.
[General]
[Expert]
00:04:255 (2,3) – I think (3) can be farther from (2)
00:05:553 (6) – curvature on another side?_? i.e.
SPOILER
00:06:850 (2,3) – the flow is not good here, suggestion:
SPOILER
00:08:958 (5) – the overlapping does not look nice here, but I think it is still okay, consider avoiding the overlap?
00:49:336 (1) – why NC 0.0?
01:16:904 (3,4,5,6) – confusing to read, as (4),(5) is 1/4 apart but (3) (4) is 1/2 apart.
01:18:201 (1) – why ends at there ?_?look pretty bad with the tick
01:26:309 (1) – delete NC, I think it is not necessary
01:57:443 (5) – NC, you put NC here on the first verses
02:10:903 (4) – NC due to SV change
02:22:092 (1) – remove NC
The following NC is due to consistency with intro, fix it or fix intro instead
02:28:416 (5) – NC
02:31:011 (4) - NC
02:31:822 (7,1) –NC on(7) instead of (1)
02:33:606 (5) –NC
[Milan’s Insane]
I suggest a lower AR because it is much easier than expert but both diff have same diff setting(let’s say 8.4, I try with 8 and its fine) BTW I do the mod with AR 9
I think this diff is not insane at all 0,0 except on a few occasional jump, other then that it is just like a hard.
00:25:336 (5,6,7,8) – this jump does not play quite well because your map is not jumpy, but the spacing is more than twice as normal, I will use 1.65x instead, 2.2 at most but not 2.5
00:52:904 (7) – stack under (6)?
01:24:525 (5,6,7) – I will use this instead
SPOILER
01:28:579 (6,7) – Ctrl + G?
02:22:092 (1) – Remove NC
02:37:497 (1) – use a circle instead and remove NC if do so?
[Hard]
I suggest AR should be lower than 8, AR7 works better than 8 for me
00:16:742 (9) – plays very well I think XD Although I think NC is better, it should be okay without NC
00:24:688 (1) – remove NC
01:18:201 (1) – why ends at there ?_?look pretty bad with the tick
02:22:092 (1) - remove NC
02:27:281 (5) – NC
02:33:606 (5) – NC
02:36:200 (4) – NC
[Normal]
AR - 1
I suggest he following new combo because I think it is better to put NC for each two bar
00:18:201 (1) – remove NC
00:19:499 (5) – NC
00:20:796 (1) – Remove NC
00:22:093 (3) – NC
00:23:391 (1) – remove NC
00:31:823 (5) – this kind of short repeating sliders maybe too tricky for normal
00:46:742 (1) – remove NC
01:02:958 (1) –remove NC? Or you do that on purpose?
01:18:201 (1) – the tick looks bad ~_~ end on white line?
Why you not map the 3/4 part 0.0 I think it should be mapped as you map it on harder diff.
If you decide not to map that part, remove the green lines inside the break.
01:40:903 (1) – this slider is too close to the spinner end, it appears in the middle of spinner and newbies may not be able to handle this
01:49:660 (1) – remove NC?
02:05:876 (1) - remove NC? Or you do that on purpose?
02:19:497 (1,2,3,4) –I prefer unstacking this
02:22:092 (1) –remove NC
Okay, delete the following green line
00:01:337 – 00:17:228 - 00:27:282 – 00:31:174 – 00:32:472 – 00:37:661 – 00:55:823 – 00:58:093 – 01:07:895- 01:19:174 - 01:43:173 - 01:58:741 – 02:00:038 – 02:10:903 02:12:038 - 02:20:795 -
[Easy]
AR – 1 OD – 1
In this diff there is a lot of place where the first and third beat is blank, while the second and forth beat are filled. This is okay but next time you map another easy I suggest avoid this because newbies may not be able to play second and forth beat correctly
00:03:931 (1) – remove NC
00:20:796 (3,4) – make the slider curve so that they don’t overlap
00:58:418 (1,2) – this pattern does not match the song change (2) to something consisting 1/1?If you do so, remember to change all the similar patterns
Consider mapping the 3/4 part
And the green line issue, delete high-lighted lines, the green line inside the break is not high-lighted because If you map that part you may need it.
SPOILER




Goodluck~ :)
VINXIS
Featured Artist
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VINXIS
Nathan
Beatmap Nominator
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Nathan
WWWWWWHHHHHHHHHH
ac8129464363
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Topic Starter
ac8129464363
no reply = fix

Euny wrote:


(finally i'm comming)hello deetz :) your request!♥came from my queue


  • General
  1. change bg ratio size 16:9 or 4:3 doing a thing
    :(
  • Easy
  1. 00:26:634 - remove this timing point. seems to useless.
  2. 01:08:796 (1,4) - you can avoid this overlap. the object is long gone by the time it's visible
  3. 02:07:822 (2) - how about makes more curvy for fitting 02:06:524 (1,1) - this stuffs?
    SPOILER
  • Hard
  1. 00:42:201 (3) - place it on x49 y326 or wherever, lets makes more better ds with 00:41:228 (5,1) - them
    SPOILER
  2. 00:44:147 (1,2) - nahhhhh xD ugly sliders~! lets makes more pretty♥
  3. 01:13:985 (1) - add finish at this front.
  • Expert
  1. expert? like a Beatmania IIDX. xD.. i love diff's name. but how about changing to just 'Extra'? i think its better. extra is laaaaame
  2. 00:54:850 (2) - rotate this slider with -8 degrees and place it on 196y80 for better place?
  3. 01:06:364 (2,1) - make perfect stack looks better imo. not possible o.o
  4. 01:13:985 (1) - i heard cymbals sound. well,♥ finish should be add for this head ;)
  5. 01:48:038 (5) - move it on x400y216 for better place.
  6. 01:59:876 (4) - i recommend place that on x202y63. nah i like the overlap, and this jump is more natural
  7. 02:10:903 (4) - NC cause there is sv changing.
that's it :)
hope this is helpful... ;)
thanks :D

although your mod had no quote button for some reason @_@
ac8129464363
1,560 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
ac8129464363
no reply = fix

Mio_chan wrote:

Black mods are suggestions only

Blue mods are recommended to fix, or places need to pay attention tp

Red mods are unrankable

Green mods are comments only.
[General]
[Expert]
00:04:255 (2,3) – I think (3) can be farther from (2) why
00:05:553 (6) – curvature on another side?_? i.e. my aesthetic choice
00:06:850 (2,3) – the flow is not good here, suggestion: its on purpose
00:08:958 (5) – the overlapping does not look nice here, but I think it is still okay, consider avoiding the overlap?
00:49:336 (1) – why NC 0.0?
01:16:904 (3,4,5,6) – confusing to read, as (4),(5) is 1/4 apart but (3) (4) is 1/2 apart. you can see the extra note
01:18:201 (1) – why ends at there ?_?look pretty bad with the tick ???????????????????????????????????????????
01:26:309 (1) – delete NC, I think it is not necessary spacing change
01:57:443 (5) – NC, you put NC here on the first verses
02:10:903 (4) – NC due to SV change
02:22:092 (1) – remove NC no
The following NC is due to consistency with intro, fix it or fix intro instead
02:28:416 (5) – NC
02:31:011 (4) - NC
02:31:822 (7,1) –NC on(7) instead of (1)
02:33:606 (5) –NC
[Hard]
I suggest AR should be lower than 8, AR7 works better than 8 for me
00:16:742 (9) – plays very well I think XD Although I think NC is better, it should be okay without NC
00:24:688 (1) – remove NC no
01:18:201 (1) – why ends at there ?_?look pretty bad with the tick dude wat
02:22:092 (1) - remove NC no
02:27:281 (5) – NC
02:33:606 (5) – NC
02:36:200 (4) – NC
[Normal]
AR - 1
I suggest he following new combo because I think it is better to put NC for each two bar but that is my scheme and the nc's are fine so I didn't fix them
00:31:823 (5) – this kind of short repeating sliders maybe too tricky for normal
01:02:958 (1) –remove NC? Or you do that on purpose? purpose
01:18:201 (1) – the tick looks bad ~_~ end on white line?
Why you not map the 3/4 part 0.0 I think it should be mapped as you map it on harder diff. no :D
If you decide not to map that part, remove the green lines inside the break.
01:40:903 (1) – this slider is too close to the spinner end, it appears in the middle of spinner and newbies may not be able to handle this
02:05:876 (1) - remove NC? Or you do that on purpose? purpose
02:19:497 (1,2,3,4) –I prefer unstacking this
Okay, delete the following green line they don't matter as long as there's no overlapping lines
[Easy]
AR – 1 OD – 1
In this diff there is a lot of place where the first and third beat is blank, while the second and forth beat are filled. This is okay but next time you map another easy I suggest avoid this because newbies may not be able to play second and forth beat correctly ?
00:03:931 (1) – remove NC scheme
00:20:796 (3,4) – make the slider curve so that they don’t overlap
00:58:418 (1,2) – this pattern does not match the song change (2) to something consisting 1/1?If you do so, remember to change all the similar patterns all the claps on that polarity so I have to map that polarity somehow
Consider mapping the 3/4 part no :D
And the green line issue, delete high-lighted lines, the green line inside the break is not high-lighted because If you map that part you may need it. don't matter

Goodluck~ :)
thanks for mod :d
Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Milan-

Mio_chan wrote:

[Milan’s Insane]
I suggest a lower AR because it is much easier than expert but both diff have same diff setting(let’s say 8.4, I try with 8 and its fine) BTW I do the mod with AR 9 i have a lot of patterns that would pretty much suck with lower AR, also that both diffs have the same settings isnt a problem at all
I think this diff is not insane at all 0,0 except on a few occasional jump, other then that it is just like a hard. You can map insanes on different ways too
00:25:336 (5,6,7,8) – this jump does not play quite well because your map is not jumpy, but the spacing is more than twice as normal, I will use 1.65x instead, 2.2 at most but not 2.5 i tried to make something more cooler to play now xD
00:52:904 (7) – stack under (6)? it's fine
01:24:525 (5,6,7) – I will use this instead
SPOILER
I'd rather use mine here
01:28:579 (6,7) – Ctrl + G? i dont see problem here
02:22:092 (1) – Remove NC it's ok
02:37:497 (1) – use a circle instead and remove NC if do so? slider is fine to me, to cover the full guitar string thing, something something
thankyou!
also did a wub wub slider where you said deetz. hope it's fine now >< otherwise just kill me

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Ringating
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Ringating
from my queue:

the only way I could think of extending this image to 1366x768 (without just having a bunch of white space) was by adding reflections. So I did that.
image
may not be the best option for a bg, but upscaling an image this small is even worse so...
no kds
ac8129464363
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Topic Starter
ac8129464363
upd@ted

using whitespace for now because the reflection looks really unattractive to me due to her head lol
Ringating
717 posts
Joined August 2013
Ringating
not sure if this works but lol
Iceskulls
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Joined February 2012
Iceskulls
from my q

[general]
  1. there is slightese delay in drum-hitnormal11 and soft-hitwhistle14 that can be optimized a bit , use this drum-hitnormal11,soft-hitwhistle14
  2. uncheck widescreen support , you don't have sb
[easy]
  1. 00:20:472 - clap ? ( apply to other diffs too if you make change )
  2. 01:18:201 (2) - I think the slider end snap to nothing wrong but still I'm aware that if you make slider like this like in others it would be confusing for beginner so I'd just use only one circle here 01:18:201 -
    SPOILER
  3. 02:06:524 (1) - I think placing like this will make flow here 02:05:876 (4,1,2) - nice imo
    SPOILER
[normal]
  1. 00:41:228 (4,5) - I feel like flow here can be better by move (5) to around x176 y148 and also would make the flow consistent with 00:40:418 (2,3,4) -
  2. 00:48:039 (1,2,3) - I guess if you align these straight it would make flow slightly better here , try move (2) to x312 y276
  3. 01:44:470 (3) - I think this reverse slider is a bit confusing for normal
  4. 02:19:822 - clap?
  5. 02:20:470 - clap?
[hard]
  1. 00:40:742 (3,4) - jumps here feel a bit weird somehow I think (4) might not be emphasized enough to make jumps in hard diff , consider ctrl+g (4) and make spacing consistent
  2. 01:19:174 - I think it ok to increase spacing a bit in this slow part since some notes overlap side by side like that sound kinda hard to play or read for hard playere imo
[milan-]
  1. 00:12:201 (3) - this nearly touch hp bar , move down a little
    SPOILER
  2. 00:20:958 (2,3) - for some reason I feel like this should be jumps like this 00:21:607 (2,3) - somehow
  3. 00:23:877 (2,3) - swap place of these two notes would make flow here 00:23:391 (1,2,3,4,5) - nice imo
    SPOILER
  4. 00:26:472 (3,4) - transition kinda feel derp here somehow make (3) curvy a bit would make transition here better
    SPOILER
    [img]puu.sh/hw2da/b4fcb925f3.png[/img]
  5. 00:33:769 (5) - this nearly touch hp bar , move down a little
  6. 00:46:093 (3) -
    SPOILER
  7. 01:49:011 (3) - ctrl+g this and it would make flow here 01:48:362 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - nice imo
[expert]
  1. 00:07:012 (3) - ctrl+g this and it would make flow here 00:06:850 (2,3,4,1) - nice imo
  2. 00:58:093 (1,1) - make the curve equal for aesthetic ? (how to explain this lololol)
    SPOILER
  3. 01:04:418 (5,6) - for some reason I think spacing here should be similiar to 01:04:093 (3,4) - so the flow here 01:04:093 (3,4,5,6,1) - would flow better imo
  4. 01:56:145 - increase hitsound volume here a bit ? sound nearly inaudible here imo
good luck :)
ac8129464363
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Topic Starter
ac8129464363

CelsiusLK wrote:

from my q

[general]
  1. there is slightese delay in drum-hitnormal11 and soft-hitwhistle14 that can be optimized a bit , use this drum-hitnormal11,soft-hitwhistle14
  2. uncheck widescreen support , you don't have sb
[easy]
  1. 00:20:472 - clap ? ( apply to other diffs too if you make change ) ya
  2. 01:18:201 (2) - I think the slider end snap to nothing wrong but still I'm aware that if you make slider like this like in others it would be confusing for beginner so I'd just use only one circle here 01:18:201 - ya
  3. 02:06:524 (1) - I think placing like this will make flow here 02:05:876 (4,1,2) - nice imo that is pretty nice imo but it looks very far offscreen lol
[normal]
  1. 00:41:228 (4,5) - I feel like flow here can be better by move (5) to around x176 y148 and also would make the flow consistent with 00:40:418 (2,3,4) - ya
  2. 00:48:039 (1,2,3) - I guess if you align these straight it would make flow slightly better here , try move (2) to x312 y276 ya
  3. 01:44:470 (3) - I think this reverse slider is a bit confusing for normal ya
  4. 02:19:822 - clap? ya
  5. 02:20:470 - clap? ya
[hard]
  1. 00:40:742 (3,4) - jumps here feel a bit weird somehow I think (4) might not be emphasized enough to make jumps in hard diff , consider ctrl+g (4) and make spacing consistent ya
  2. 01:19:174 - I think it ok to increase spacing a bit in this slow part since some notes overlap side by side like that sound kinda hard to play or read for hard playere imo will consider but i think it's okay as is
[expert]
  1. 00:07:012 (3) - ctrl+g this and it would make flow here 00:06:850 (2,3,4,1) - nice imo I get what you mean but antiflow is intended here lol
  2. 00:58:093 (1,1) - make the curve equal for aesthetic ? (how to explain this lololol) YA
  3. 01:04:418 (5,6) - for some reason I think spacing here should be similiar to 01:04:093 (3,4) - so the flow here 01:04:093 (3,4,5,6,1) - would flow better imo ya
  4. 01:56:145 - increase hitsound volume here a bit ? sound nearly inaudible here imo ya
good luck :)
thanks for the mod, it was pretty nice imo
hehe
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hehe
hi

  • General
  1. toggles and stuff


  2. Expert
  3. 00:16:742 (1,1) - stack or overlap, feels gooder
  4. 00:20:796 (1,2) - slider give more emphasis on 3cuz this feels like a 'burst' in intensity on 3. http://i.imgur.com/6nGYmHF.png
  5. 00:40:904 (4,5) - spacing feels low
  6. 00:41:877 (2,3) - ^
  7. 00:43:499 (3,4) - move these 1/2 tick earlier? following vocals
  8. 00:46:742 (1) - i think milan's stream sounds better
  9. 00:52:580 (9) - NC here instead?
  10. 01:06:526 (4,1) - le stack
  11. 01:26:309 (1) - why nc remove
  12. 01:28:255 (1) - here 2
  13. 01:30:363 (2) - 01:36:201 (2) - y didnt u clap the end
  14. 01:32:146 (1) - yuck nc
  15. 01:35:065 (1) - ghskr
  16. 01:48:687 (2,4) - this doesn't really accompany the music well, nothing sounds different where it would need a different change in cursor movement xd
  17. 01:53:065 (5,7) - 01:53:876 (2,3) - 01:54:524 (5) - ur missing claps
  18. 01:55:497 (1,2,1) - follow the previous nc
  19. 01:59:876 (4,1) - dat small overlap tho
  20. 02:07:660 (1,2) - why the low ass spacing at least make it >1.0ds so it makes sense

    Milan's Insane
  21. 00:25:336 (5,1) - can u stack? noob
  22. 00:46:093 (3) - too high, touch hp bar

    make your hard easier (simplify the rhythm, mostly. its harder than milan's at some parts)
ac8129464363
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Topic Starter
ac8129464363
uhhh lost the mod reply for some reason, I applied a lot of stuff and didn't apply some other stuff, you can just ask me if you want to know about anything specific. working on the hard now.

edit: done, i hope
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