Hi, M4M from my queue.
[General]
The difficulty spread between Futsuu and Muzukashii is a bit great imo, consider reducing it by raising the difficulty of Futsuu slightly.
[Kantan]
As this is a Kantan, try to reduce slider velocity to 1.2 for beginners ?
00:20:286 (7) - remove finish ? The music is quiet there.
00:23:786 (12) - add finish ? The music is noticeably loud compared to 00:20:286 (7) -
00:48:286 (18) - add finish ? A stressed sound occurs here. Also, 2 finishes in a row could make the pattern consistent to 00:39:786 (6,7) and 00:31:786 (23,24) -
00:50:286 (20) - change to k ? It could fit the vocal better.
00:52:286 (22) - ^
00:56:286 (28) - add finish ? It could emphasize the vocal.
01:00:286 (32) - k can match the vocal, as it has the same pitch as 01:02:286 (35) - which you used K there.
01:12:286 (11) - It seems that you have missed finish here, as 01:28:286 (33) - also has finish.
01:18:786 (19) - k. It could follow the snare better. And you also used k at 01:08:786 (4) -
01:36:286 (2) - add finish and 01:40:286 (7) - remove finish ? The reason is similar to 00:20:286 (7) and 00:23:786 (12)
[Futsuu]
00:23:786 (13) - add finish as suggested in Kantan ? You did it at 00:32:286 (30) -
00:47:786 (23,24) - K K, to make it consistent to 00:31:786 (29,30) -
00:56:286 (38) - same as Kantan.
01:00:286 (42) - ^
01:19:036 (30) - k ? This could follow the high-pitched vocal better.
01:35:036 (1) - ^
01:43:786 (13) - K, similar to 00:31:786 (29,30) -
[Muzukashii]
00:36:286 (1) - remove finish ? A bit loud imo.
00:42:036 (4) - k here ? According to your pattern, you used k in most of the red lines like 00:40:536 (19) - 00:38:536 (11) and 00:38:036 (9)
00:46:536 (20) - k would follow the snare drum better.
00:50:536 (35,36) - swap notes ? To make it the same as 00:48:286 (27,28,29) - which flows in a way better.
00:54:036 (46) - k to follow the vocal ?
01:00:286 (62) - k would be better. (refer to Kantan)
01:03:286 (72) - k ? The pitch of the vocal keeps increasing starting from 01:02:786 (70) -
01:11:036 (9) - k ? Similar to 00:42:036 (4)
01:19:661 (11,12) - either remove 01:19:661 (11) - or remove finish of 01:19:786 (12) - It is not advised to use finish in 1/4 most of the time.
01:27:036 (9) - same as 01:11:036 (9)
01:35:661 (11,12) - same as 01:19:661 (11,12) -
01:36:286 (13) - add finish ? To make it consistent to 01:44:286 (21) -
[Oni]
00:04:286 (17) - remove finish ? I think it is a bit over-emphasized.
00:08:286 (34) - ^
00:12:286 (1) - ^
00:15:036 (13) - k for the high-pitched vocal ?
00:27:661 - add d, as the sound is identical to 00:27:536 (60) -
00:29:536 (69,70,71) - kdk would be better, regarding the cymbal and the snare.
00:41:786 (28) - k for both the vocal and the snare ?
00:47:661 (24,25) - either remove 24 or remove finish of 25. It is not advised to use finish in 1/4 most of the time.
01:01:786 (21) - add finish for the loud cymbal ?
01:03:286 (26) - K ? similar as Muzu
01:12:911 (18) - move to 01:12:661 - ?
01:15:411 - add k and 01:15:661 - add d ?
01:18:786 (2,3) - k k to follow the vocal better ?
01:19:661 (6,7) - similar to 00:47:661 (24,25) -
01:28:911 (18) - move to 01:28:661 - ?
01:31:411 - add k and 01:31:661 - add d ?
01:34:786 (2,3) - same as 01:18:786 (2,3)
01:35:661 (6,7) - similar to 00:47:661 (24,25) -
Good luck~