1. Hard (4.3 stars, 199 notes)
2. Normal (2.97 stars, 140 notes)
3. Shooting Star (4.87 stars, 248 notes)

inverness wrote:

Before we continue farther:

Offset -25 (75) 100 feels too late
SV 1.8/2.0 on Hard (I'm going to use 1.6 on my Normal)
DS 1.0 on Hard, you should not set DS lower than 0.8 and higher than 1.2 or the movement flow will be broken (unmatched the SV speed)

Origami_Munchkin wrote:

inverness wrote:

Before we continue farther:

Offset -25 (75) 100 feels too late
SV 1.8/2.0 on Hard (I'm going to use 1.6 on my Normal)
DS 1.0 on Hard, you should not set DS lower than 0.8 and higher than 1.2 or the movement flow will be broken (unmatched the SV speed)

Offset - I can fix this
My SV changes throughout the song. It starts off with a slower velocity and speeds up as the song reaches higher intensity. Is the 1.8/2.0 SV for the beginning of the song or for a different part.
Because the SV changes throughout the song, I changed the DS to keep the blanketed notes effect through the entire song. If the DS increases too much the blankets are not possible. Thoughts on this?

Origami_Munchkin wrote:

inverness wrote:

Offset - I can fix this
My SV changes throughout the song. It starts off with a slower velocity and speeds up as the song reaches higher intensity. Is the 1.8/2.0 SV for the beginning of the song or for a different part.
Because the SV changes throughout the song, I changed the DS to keep the blanketed notes effect through the entire song. If the DS increases too much the blankets are not possible. Thoughts on this?

Ahh... I see about SV changes.
But about the blankets, I see you're utilizing low DS for blankets. Hmm.. I don't recommend this. I'd better use correct and smooth DS instead of low DS even with blankets. You know, when mapping the important thing is flow first, visual second, hitsounds third. DS affects flow more than you think.

Edit: 1000 posts oyeah!

Origami_Munchkin wrote:

Quick question, would it be okay to have the DS on hard change as long as it doesn't go below 0.7 or above 1.2? For example, one part of the song would be 0.8 and another would be 1.1.

Autumn wrote:

Hi
Mod from my queue

[General]
Volume set to 60%-80% Fixed
Nice mapflow and rhythm. I just have nothing to mod. Thank you
The flashing SB is pretty distracting, use less flash effect. Add lyric if you like Fixed the flash and I'm not going to add lyrics

[Normal]
00:07:653 (3,4) - Adjust: Adjusted accordingly

SPOILER

01:42:548 (3) - Move to 01:42:390 and add a note at 01:42:706 Changed this section slightly to fixed the problem in a different way

SPOILER

01:43:653 (6) - NC Not relevant after previous change

[Hard]
00:44:285 (10) - NC Added the new combo

[Insane]
Resnap all the notes. some of them are not on the lines. Resnapped all of the notes and went through to make sure they were all aligned correctly
No hitsounds.. That's not good Used the hitsounds you gave as a guidline
Usually you can use 2,4 clap(add clap on the red line) and add finish on the start or end of each section.

I added hitsounds for you, see if you like:
http://puu.sh/20gcA

neonat wrote:

Just some suggestions and my thoughts.

Normal

00:07:653 (3) - NC (it's quite identical to 00:17:759 (1), which is a new combo) Added NC


Hard

00:10:180 (8) - new combo Added NC
00:12:706 (1) - remove NC Removed NC
00:15:232 (5) - NC Added NC
00:17:759 (1) - remove NC Removed NC
00:20:285 (4) - NC Added NC
01:21:232 - maybe add a note here? Added the note. After looking over it I realized that another note would help the flow.


Insane

The sliders that start on the blue line sound slightly weird, they are usually on the white, and for your song, usually when the clap (Just stating what I felt when playing the map) Just at the Kiai time at 00:55:653. The 2nd Kiai time feels smoother and more comfortable. Left some of the sliders on the blue lines where there is a beat. I changed the first kiai section slightly to make it smoother and similar to the second kiai section.

Entreal wrote:

Hello! I hope this can be of use to you

Normal
01:37:969 - Maybe change this circle to a slider? I agree. I think the slider would be better.

Hard
00:16:811 - Circle? There is not a clear beat here so I am going to leave it as just a slider.
01:28:811 - ^ I'm also going to leave this how it is. At beat 5 and 6 there are distinct drum beats while a 01:28:811 there is just a snare noise.

Insane
00:32:285 - This slider's end is not snapped. Good catch. Fixed.
00:58:811 - Circle? I'm going to leave this one as it is for now. I don't find anything wrong with it but if it comes up again I will change it.
01:05:443 - This slider's end is not snapped. Good catch. Fixed
01:05:705 - Inherited Point is not snapped, intentional?This is intentional so that the next beat will start a kiai time and shoot stars while not turning the previous kiai time off too soon.
01:50:443 - This slider's end is not snapped. Good catch. Fixed
01:51:178 - Same as 01:05:705, intentional? Same as above.

This map seems pretty dang clean, Kudosu to you! Good Luck!

Irreversible wrote:

Hi from my queue
Sorry that it took so long, but school, y'know? =D No problem. There are other things more important than osu!
Nevermind though, let's go~

[Normal]

What kind of DS did you use? 1.1 or 1? It says 1, but.. when i test it it's kinda 1.3, i'm confused. Because it's pretty important to use DS in Normal! In this diff I changed the DS at different points of the song (whenever I change SV) so the notes would be the same distance throughout the song. I felt that on this diff I could pull off changing the DS where on the others it affected the flow too much.

00:06:390 (2) - Why don't you put this circle as same as 00:08:917 (2) - ? Changed.
00:44:285 (4) - This can be confusing, since it's normal, i don't suggest this - i dunno if it's unrankable though. If this had been easy I would not have changed the SV. But since it is normal I thought that it would be nice. Also look at the first DS comment.
01:23:917 (6) - NC maybe? I think this new combo would be good.
01:28:496 (5,7) - I don't like how they touch each other. I suggest make a nicer bow at Slider 5. How would this be? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/625294
01:34:022 (5) - NC Made new combo.

Note: Whoa, this diff is really great made, i really liked the combination of sliders/circles you used - but in my opinion too confusing for a normal. I suggest using less stacking (It's up to you, only a suggestion). Also, i would recommend adding some hitsounds, such as whistles, i think they would fit well~ I have some claps and a few finishes in here. They just happen to fall on beats where there are already some claps. I try not to use whistles in songs this smooth and peaceful because it disrupts the mood of the song. This is my favorite difficulty for this song so I think I am going to leave it mostly how it is.

[Hard]

00:37:969 (5) - I recommend NC here, since 1) it fits the background msuic 2) the combo doesn't get that high. Added the NC.
00:43:811 (8) - It's up to you, but i would add a circle here. ~ I am going to leave this how it is because there is not a definate beat here.
01:23:443 (9) - NC Added the NC.
01:43:653 (9) - NC Added the NC.
01:54:706 (6) - I would use 3 circles here, instead of a slider I never thought of that. Good find.
01:55:338 (9) - and a normal slider here. I guess that the repeater messes with the flow of the song. Fixed.

Note: I'm sorry, but I'm not really able to find something very bad here! So i only wrote some new combos, i'm sorry about that q.q~ No problem. If you can't find anything bad than I am very happy!

[Insane]

00:05:759 (2,3,4) - Make this look like a nicer bow. I did a complete makeover of the beginning of this diff. From 00:00:000 to 00:29:759.
00:37:022 (4,5,6) - ^ Fixed.
00:44:285 (5) - This slider looks a bit odd to me. Just wondering why this one looks odd. It is just a very wide arc.
In this first part, I liked hwo you placed the beat .. but i recommend to make a bit more repeating, beacuse for me it seems a bit random ^^;
00:51:864 (4) - Make this 1 tick longer (that it ends on the blue one) I'm not going to change this because at the point 00:52:180 there is a piano note which creates a good slider cutoff point.
00:56:601 (4) - 1 tick shorter I've tried it both ways and I'm not sure which one I like better. I will think about it a while before I decide.

00:58:180 (1) - Let me recommend a beat from here on: I tried this and I feel that it misses too many of the louder beats and uses more of the softer beats. I think I will leave this how it is.

SPOILER

00:58:180 (1) - A slider until here 00:58:338 -
00:58:496 - nothing
00:58:653 - Slider until 00:58:811 -
00:58:969 - nothing
00:59:127 (3) - circle
00:59:285 (4) - circle
00:59:443 (5) - circle
00:59:601 - circle
00:59:759 - nothing
00:59:917 - circle
01:00:075 - circle
01:00:232 - nothing

another beat suggestion: (Circle 1 starts at 01:03:390 (1) - )
http://puu.sh/26GNR
10 ends at 01:05:127 (10) - This rhythm I tried to make similar to the other kiai time because I liked it a lot.

You could follow this rythm, it's up to you :3

01:27:232 (5) - 1 tick shorter What if I did something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626513
01:27:706 (6) - add a circle

Btw: You can use the same rythm as in the other kiai time for the second one.

Well.. that's it! Great mod! I really appretiate your help.
If you wanna change the rythm in your insane, and you're stuck because you don't get it, feel free to pm me in game, or write me a message

Good luck~
I love the skin btw! Thanks! I'm still not sure if I like the 50 or the X being grey but I don't know what color to use. I also wish that I could make the 300 be the same color at the beat behind it.

uscobra wrote:

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Dat 100x1

LunarSakuya wrote:

Hi =v=

General
Preview Time for Normal is currently 55496. Please change it to 55363 like the other diffs Fixed.

Normal
- Try adding some whistles or another hitsound in the first half before the kiai. Sounds a bit empty atm. Added some. Could you check it to see if it is better.

00:10:653 (4,5) - Bring these two a little higher so (5) doesn't touch the tail of (3) Fixed.
00:35:443 (5) - NC, new stanza Added NC.
00:52:496 (6) - Curving downwards may be a nicer looking transition~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/627015 Changed this. It really does help the transition.
00:57:075 (4) - Start this slider on the white tick behind it http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/627018, i understand you put this here for vocals, but the emphasis from the bg music and even the SB kinda dominates Fixed this problem.
01:15:864 (1) - End the spinner at 01:18:390, felt nicer when playing; also lower the volume of the spinner Changed.
01:20:917 (1) - Finish on head Added Finish

Hard
00:44:285 (1) - Clap on head Added clap.
01:15:864 (1) - Same as Normal; and add a breaktime after this spinner Fixed
01:20:917 (1) - this part would really be nice with hitsounds to emphasize the drums ;D maybe a custom clap like http://puu.sh/27kIS? same with Normal and Insane I have no idea how to use custom hitsounds and I've browsed a bit but haven't found a straight answer or tutorial. If you think it should be added I will need a bit of help.
01:50:285 (9) - Clap on end Added.
01:52:022 - Add note and stack it on the head of (2) I don't understand why a note should be added here. There is almost no beat occuring here.
01:55:022 (8) - Clap Added.

Insane
00:53:127 (1) - Lower the volume Lowered to 40%.
00:55:653 (1) - Finish on head would be stronger Changed to finish.
00:56:601 (4) - Clap on end Added.
01:01:969 (8) - i suggest extend this to the blue tick if you're focusing on vocals http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/627106 I'm going to leave this how it is because I don't want the sliders that close together. I would rather leave that for notes.
01:04:496 (6) - Clap Fixed.
01:15:864 (1) - again, lower volume, extend to white, and add break Changed and fixed.
01:29:917 (5) - Stack this on the head of (6) instead, it was awkward to stream with this at first Stacked this on 6 and did the same at 01:31:653 (2)

i really enjoyed this~ it was very sweet Good luck!! Thanks so much!

Thanks for the mod and all of the help. It helps me so much!

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi! Mod request from my queue.

Normal

I think you should decrease the Star Rating until 2,5/3

00:25:338 (1,2) - The slider starts on a blue tick and it's a bit odd, replace this with a repeat slider. If you don't want to fix, curve the slider a bit more in order to blanket it a bit better I decided to leave this how it is and make the blanket better. There are many other sliders in this diff that start on a blue tick.
00:36:390 (2) - I can hear a beat on the white tick, you should maybe replace this slider with a repeat slider Think this would be a good change instead of the repeat? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/631154

01:08:917 (5,2) - They are not perfectly stacked, please fix Nice catch. Fixed.
01:10:496 (1) - Please don't stack this under the slider, it's unreadable for newbie players, moving it to 328|0 would be a better choice Fixed.
01:36:074 (1,2) - Please improve this blanket by curving (2) better Made the blanket better.
01:55:653 (6,1,2,3) - You have a slider that starts on the blue tick, try this rhythm!

If you don't want to fix move (2,3) in the center I went with this option and centered the slider and note.

Hard

00:12:706 (4,5) - The (5) is so sudden... You should turn this pattern into an unique slider Changed to one long slider.
00:15:232 (1,2) - Here you should delete (2) because it doesn't fit imo... Extended the slider.
00:16:180 (3) - End this in 00:16:811 Actually it sounds bad Extended the slider.
00:27:864 (6) - Add a NC Added NC.
00:32:917 (6) - Add a NC Added NC.
00:38:759 (3) - Delete this note Deleted this note though I might add it back if I end up not liking it.
01:13:969 (2,3,4) - They are not perfectly stacked, please fix Stacked the notes.
01:30:074 - Add a note here and make a stream with (8,9,10) Removed the note at 01:29:917 and added a note at 01:30:074.
01:42:390 (5,6) - Just no :< Make an unique slider with these Removed beat 4 and changed the pattern slightly to fit the change.

Insane

00:06:075 (4,5) - Delete 5 and end 4 in 00:06:706 Changed this one and the beginning pattern slightly to accommodate.

00:11:127 (4,5) - The same. Delete 5 and end 4 1/2 later Did not change this one though. I felt that it could be left the way it is.

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I can't find other mistakes. Your map is very good. I hate Owl City but I'll give you a star Thanks! Sorry you had to mod a song you didn't like though.

Static Noise Bird wrote:

[General]
00:55:653 (1) - This loud clap/finish is startling, decrease volume please. Decreased the volume from 80 to 70.
01:41:127 (1) - ^ Decreased the volume from 80 to 70.
Between the two kiais, add some hitsounds in those section. They seem too empty now in all diffs. Added some hitsounds in this section and it does sound better.

[Normal]
Make this diff easier or make another Easy diff, the spread is unrankable now. I'll see what I can do about this.

00:22:811 (1) - This would look better 1 or 2 squares lower, it's too close to previous now. Moved this lower and adjusted the next note to support the change.
00:36:390 (2) - Clap missing from the end. Added clap.
00:51:075 (3) - Blanket could be better. I fixed this blanket.
00:56:917 (4) - Clap missing. Added clap.

[Hard]
00:13:969 (5) - Endpoint to x:140 y:220 for better blanket. Never noticed this. Nice catch. Fixed.
01:14:601 (4) - Clap missing. Added clap.
01:47:443 (4) - ^ Added clap.

[Insane]
00:05:127 (1,4) - Why are these claps here? Unfitting and ruining consistency. I have no idea why those claps were there. I don't even remember putting them in. Removed.
This diff has quite messy hitsounds so I don't know if I missed others, but: I ususally don't play with hitsounds but I turned them on and went through the whole difficulty and changed a few of the hitsounds.
01:57:548 (5) - Missing clap. Added clap.

Quite cool map, good luck for ranking. Thanks so much. I am working on changing up the skin a bit. I decided that if I was going to change half of it I might as well change the whole thing.

Joon wrote:

hi

Joon's Hit sound modding I went back through everything and fixed some other hitsound issues I found that were not covered in the mod.

[Normal]
00:16:180 (5) - end notes add clap Added clap.
00:19:022 (3) - start notes remove clap and end notes add clap Switched clap.
00:23:759 (2) - end notes add clap Added clap.
00:25:338 (1) - add finish [Normal] + volume 50% Added the finish with the softer volume.
00:28:338 (2) - add whistle Added all of the whistles.
00:29:759 (4) - ^
00:32:285 (7) - ^
00:37:338 (4) - ^
00:39:864 (4) - ^
00:42:390 (3) - ^
00:55:653 (1) - add finish Added finish.
01:41:127 (1) - start notes add finish Added finish.
01:50:601 (7) - ^ Added finish.

[Hard]
Put a whistle as Normal. Added all of the whistles.
00:55:653 (1) - add finish Added finish.
01:41:127 (1) - ^ Added finish.
01:50:285 (9) - End notes add finish Added finish.

[Insane]
Put a whistle as Normal. Added all whistles.
01:00:233 (10) - remove clap Removed clap.
01:02:601 (9) - start notes remove clap Removed clap.
01:03:864 (4) - remove clap Removed clap.
01:10:180 (7) - ^ Removed clap.
01:12:706 (8) - start notes remove clap Removed clap
01:41:127 (1) - start notes add finish Added finish.
01:45:548 (9) - remove clap Removed clap.
01:46:653 (3) - end notes remove clap Removed clap.
01:49:338 (4) - remove clap Removed clap.
01:55:653 (7) - ^ Removed clap.
This difficulty is the one that I made the most changes to both through the mod and through my own efforts.

good luck Thanks!

selova wrote:

hi,, from lova que~ mod~~
take it what you want


normal
(opinion) too much SV change in normal is not good, please make a little better... I'm going to keep the changes in SV.
make star rating below 3.00, for rankable mapset you can save by deleting combo cicrle, or reducing OD/HP drain Got the ranking down to 2.95.

00:26:917 (4) - whistle on (4) head Added whistle.
00:28:338 (2,3) - del whistle and add whistle on (3) head I liked the whistle where it was.
00:29:759 (4) - del whistle Deleted whistle.
00:37:022 (3,4) - swap whistle I liked the whistle where it was.
00:39:548 (3) - add whistle on slider end Added whistle.
00:39:864 (4,5) - swap whistle I liked the whistle where it was.
00:47:443 (4,5) - you can del (5) and make (4) slider end slider at 00:49:653 to following vocal Fixed.
00:52:180 (5,6,7) - del this note and (7) slider and make (6) slider end at 00:55:022, same reason above, it's better Fixed.
01:22:180 (3) - delete note I'm going to leave this note to help the flow of the map.

hard

00:13:338 (3,4) - del (4) and end slider at this time, i't better rythm Changed this and moved notes around slightly to help the flow.
00:43:022 (7) - NC Added NC.
00:44:285 - remove NC Removed NC.

insane

good, maybe you need a good nazi modder I'll try to find one.

good luck on rank Thanks!

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

Hi, here is my mod ! From Queues.
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
- proposal -
Tags "Ocean Eyes" delete. Source is have.
[/color]
-Normal-
um, would you change the sliderwhistle a little quite? like no sound. Removed the sliderwhistle sound.

If this difficulty is the easiest of the map,
Try not to stack the notes together. I'll see what I can do about the stacked notes. I am very satisfied with this diff so I might not change them.
My replay

-finish-
-Hard-
okay. YAY! ^_^
My replay

-finish-
-Insane-
Audio :
01:04:811 (7) - add whistle Added whistle at all of these places.
01:05:127 (8) - ^
01:05:443 (9) - ^
01:50:601 (8) - ^
01:50:917 (9) - ^
01:23:917 (2) - add clap Added clap.

My replay

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
End of this mod.
Good song!
Good luck to you! ♥ [/color] I really like how you put your replays in here so that I can see somebody else play the maps besides me. It really helps. Thanks so much for your help and time!

Origami_Munchkin wrote:

I really like how you put your replays in here so that I can see somebody else play the maps besides me. It really helps. Thanks so much for your help and time!

CDFA wrote:

I remember that you asked me for a re-mod on one of your maps and I never actually got to it because I was really disorganized.

Sorry about that. No problem.

Overall:
Beginning Section: Bring the hitsounds WAY down. Right now it looks like overmapping when the song is subtle. Make the drumline prominent so the mapping here makes sense. Hitsounds brought down. I cut the hitsound volume in half.
Maybe invest in a silent slider-slide? (Or the quietest ranking criteria will allow) That's odd. I put in a silent slider-slide. Did you have the most updated version of the map? I'll double check this anyways.

Insane:
Overall, the map seems overmapped in terms of notes. However, I really like the streams you have in here, as well as the spacing and shaping and patterns. What I'd do to make them seem more natural is to do some creative hitsounding on them (ie. 01:13:496 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You could probably put a fun whistle pattern on that). Otherwise, it looks like overmapping instead of creatively placed nice-looking streams. I'll see what I can do to make this more creative.
Tick Rate 2? Test this out and I like it. Tick rate now at 2.
00:44:285 (5) - This plays a bit awkwardly, especially since the music is still going at a consistent beat (If the background music had stopped, this might have been ok, but since it's still going, it's odd) Slightly changed this part to match the music more.
00:46:496 (2,3,4,5) - It might be better to map this more to the vocals. I like this part how it is so I won't change it.
00:53:127 (1) - Add whistle to the end of this OR Fade out to 5% volume Added a whistle.
00:55:653 (1) - Remove clap. If you want more power, add a normal hitsound to this. Removed the clap.
01:15:864 (1) - Add whistle Added whistle.

Hard: Made all of these changes.
Tick Rate 2.
00:44:285 (4) - Same as Insane
00:55:653 (1) - Remove clap
01:05:759 (1) - ^
01:15:864 (1) - Same as insane
01:41:127 (1) - Remove clap
01:51:232 (1) - Remove clap

Normal:
Just a general statement, starting notes on blue ticks for your easiest diff generally is a bad thing. It's harder for lower leveled players to really be able to hit those with ease. I know that I shouldn't but I liked this difficulty so much when I made it that it's been hard to make the other ones. I am part way done making an easy diff but I'm not sure if I'm going to use it or not.
00:55:653 (1) - Remove clap Removed the clap on these three spots and on one other spot that you missed.
01:05:759 (1) - ^
01:51:232 (1) - ^

Very nice job. Thanks! ^_^

gameon123321 wrote:

Hi!

Just thinking, I feel that the pace of Hard and Insane is a bit slow.

Hard feels like relaxing, not hard.

(Sorry for the vagueness, but this is my first time helping to edit a map.)

1. The preview time is inconsistent. If you want to get this ranked, fix this.
   
   Inconsistency in PreviewTime

   - [Hard] : 55653
   - [Insane] : 55653
   - [Normal] : 55496
2. Tags have to be the same in every difficulty. Remove Ocean Eyes from the tags since it's already in the source.
   
   Inconsistency in Tags

   - [Hard] : Ocean Eyes Adam Young
   - [Insane] : Ocean Eyes Adam Young
   - [Normal] : Adam Young Ambient

Example

Slider Example

Deni wrote:

General

bold : should fix
italic : suggestion
red: unrankable, have to fix

Random Hitsound Mod ! (＾∇＾)

1. The preview time is inconsistent. If you want to get this ranked, fix this. Fixed this.
   
   Inconsistency in PreviewTime

   - [Hard] : 55653
   - [Insane] : 55653
   - [Normal] : 55496
2. Tags have to be the same in every difficulty. Remove Ocean Eyes from the tags since it's already in the source. Fixed this.
   
   Inconsistency in Tags

   - [Hard] : Ocean Eyes Adam Young
   - [Insane] : Ocean Eyes Adam Young
   - [Normal] : Adam Young Ambient

I think a silent soft-sliderslide would fit better to this mapset. I can provide you one if you want. For some reason it doesn't like to upload but I have one in there. Found a different file, hopefully this fixes it.

Normal

00:05:127 - An inherited point with 50% Volume fits better to this part. Made this change.

Edit, found something new in Normal: 00:55:653 - Shouldn't this be 70% Volume like in Hard and Insane? Would fit better imo. Nice catch. Fixed.

01:15:548 (8) - This finish doesn't fit at all to the song, it's way too loud. Either remove it or use an inherited point with less volume. Changed the volumes on all sections and made them consistent for each diff.
Here's a little hitsound suggestion for the following part: I took all of the suggestions about adding/removing hitsounds.

01:22:496 (4) - Add a whistle here
01:24:706 (2) - Replace the finish at the end of this slider with a whistle, fits much better imo.
01:27:548 (3) - Add whistle to the "head" of the slider
01:32:601 (3) - Whistle at the slider head
01:34:811 (2) - Same as 01:24:706 (2)
01:39:548 (5) - A whistle at the end of this slider fits pretty good imo.

01:23:917 (1,2) - You can try to create a blanket, like I did here: (Example in Box) Made my blanket a better.

Example

02:01:338 - I would set the volume of this inherited point to 5%, sounds better. I chose 20% instead for all diffs.

Hard

The hitsounds are way too quiet in this difficulty. Why don't you just use the same hitsound volume as you did in Normal? // (now it's fine since you fixed it ) Yup. Fixed.

00:35:127 (6,7) - Delete these 2 circles since there's nothing at this position in the song.Deleted.

.. Sorry not finished yet, will mod this later! > Now! Yay!

00:05:127 - From here to 00:25:022 - you could really add some more hitsounds, Added all of these hitsound changes.

00:06:074 (2) - Add whistle to slider head
00:08:127 (6) - Whistle to slider end
00:11:127 (2) - Add whistle to slider head
00:13:653 (6) - Add whistle here
00:16:180 (2) - Again whistle to slider head like at 00:06:074 (2) -
00:18:232 (5) - Add whistle to slider end
00:23:759 (4) - Whistle here!

00:55:653 - From here the song is getting a lot louder but the hitsounds are still a bit silent. 80% Volume is better. If you fix this, apply this in every difficulty. Fixed this in all diffs.
01:15:548 (7) - Same as I mentioned at 01:15:548 (8) - in Normal. Fixed.
01:41:127 - Same as 00:55:653 - Fixed.

I guess you can add some whistles to the part, I gave you examples in Normal, in Hard and Insane too! Fixed all!

Insane

You can add some more hitsounds to the beginning like I mentioned in Hard. Fixed all of the changes you suggested.

00:06:074 (4) - Add whistle to slider head
00:08:601 (4) - Add whistle
00:11:127 (4) - Whistle at slider head
00:13:653 (3) - Add whistle to slider head
00:15:706 (2) - Whistle to slider end
00:21:232 (2) - Whistle here!
00:23:443 (3) - Add a whistle to the slider end

00:48:075 (7) - If you curve this slider a bit more, it will fit a lot better imo. (Example in Box) Fixed.

Slider Example

From 00:45:548 - to 00:52:811 - there is no hitsound. It sounds pretty empty. My suggestion: Added all of these changes.

00:45:548 (1) - Add a whistle to the slider head
00:46:811 (3) - Add a whistle to this circle
00:48:075 (7) - Add whistle to slider head
00:50:601 (2) - Whistle to slider head
00:51:864 (4) - Add whistle to slider head
00:55:022 - Remove whistle from this spinner and add inherited point with 5% Volume at the end of this spinner. Added.

01:15:548 (10) - Same as in Hard and Normal Fixed.

01:18:390 - This whistle is too loud. Add an inherited point with 40% Volume. Fixed.

Good mapset overall, have a ~ :-) Thanks so much!

That's it! I hope this hitsound mod was helpful. If you have any question contact me ingame or via forum PM! This mod was very helpful. Thanks so much for your time and the star!

1. No, anything that is not from series/game should have the Source field empty. Put Ocean Eyes on tags instead. I know this is a silly rule, but sadly we have to oblige it :/
2. 00:05:127 - 00:25:180 - It'll create more hitsound improvisation if you remove the claps here and just use whistle/normal. Besides, this part is so quiet that clap just don't fits here o.o
3. 00:45:548 - 00:55:022 - Lower volume to 20~30%? It's very quiet here so...
4. 01:58:811 - 02:01:338 - Map this part completely and add spinner on 02:01:338 - 02:03:864. The part feels empty with just a spinner and this new spinner fits imo.
5. Tons of imperfect blankets lol.

1. 00:56:917 (4,5,6) - Blanket seems imperfect.
2. On kiai, how about adding whistle sound on redticks (but not on all of them)? Only normal and clap seems too empty imo.
3. 01:00:390 (1,2) - maybe like this? http://puu.sh/2oJUz
4. 01:09:864 (6) - not a pretty blanket o.o
5. 01:32:601 (3,4) - fix blanket o.o
6. 01:35:443 (3) - Seems that you've missed a clap here
7. 01:39:548 (5,6) - Switch the clap from the note to the slider end and vice versa?
8. 01:41:127 (1,2) - I don't think this fits the pattern aesthetics, how about http://puu.sh/2oK1z (parallel)
9. Again, more whistles should work here too, in this second kiai.

1. 00:29:127 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/2oKir looks better imo :3
2. 00:26:917 (5) - Add one repeat? Feels better o.o
3. 00:38:917 (3,4,5) - Kinda broking pattern consistency. Try to use this pattern 00:36:232 (2,3) -
4. 01:12:075 (6,1) - Not a good blanket D:
5. 01:13:653 (1,2) - Unstack? Because after this slider you also have stacked note but within different time measure (1/4) while this on is 1/2
6. 01:38:917 (7) - NC?
7. 01:53:127 (4,5) - maybe like this: http://puu.sh/2oKrS :3

1. Please don't name it Insane for such ambiental/relaxing song :3 Maybe something like "Shooting Star" or w/e?
2. Why CS3 O.O please use at least CS5 or CS4
3. 00:44:285 (5) - clap?
4. 01:00:864 (3) - delete this and 01:00:706 (2,4) - combine into one slider?
5. 01:03:864 (4) - delete and move next slider to here?
6. 01:08:285 (1) - copypaste from 01:07:653 (6) - ?

inverness wrote:

Finally I can get into this.

Random mod ( ´ ・ω ・`)

Guide

Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

General

1. No, anything that is not from series/game should have the Source field empty. Put Ocean Eyes on tags instead. I know this is a silly rule, but sadly we have to oblige it :/ Fixed.
2. 00:05:127 - 00:25:180 - It'll create more hitsound improvisation if you remove the claps here and just use whistle/normal. Besides, this part is so quiet that clap just don't fits here o.o I tried this without the claps and with normal sounds and I didn't like either of them so I think I will leave this the same.
3. 00:45:548 - 00:55:022 - Lower volume to 20~30%? It's very quiet here so... Lowered the volume to 30%.
4. 01:58:811 - 02:01:338 - Map this part completely and add spinner on 02:01:338 - 02:03:864. The part feels empty with just a spinner and this new spinner fits imo. I always felt that this spinner was nice where it is. When I originally mapped this, I had it mapped out but I felt as though it was dragging on.
5. Tons of imperfect blankets lol.

Normal

1. 00:56:917 (4,5,6) - Blanket seems imperfect. 4 was not supposed to blanket 5 and 6. I liked what it looked like only partially blanketed.
2. On kiai, how about adding whistle sound on redticks (but not on all of them)? Only normal and clap seems too empty imo. I'm not good with hitsounds, and when I try adding whistles to this part I can't find any place that plays off of the song.
3. 01:00:390 (1,2) - maybe like this? http://puu.sh/2oJUz Changed this.
4. 01:09:864 (6) - not a pretty blanket o.o Fixed.
5. 01:32:601 (3,4) - fix blanket o.o Fixed.
6. 01:35:443 (3) - Seems that you've missed a clap here Nice catch!
7. 01:39:548 (5,6) - Switch the clap from the note to the slider end and vice versa? Changed.
8. 01:41:127 (1,2) - I don't think this fits the pattern aesthetics, how about http://puu.sh/2oK1z (parallel) Made parallel. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/675596
9. Again, more whistles should work here too, in this second kiai.Same as fist kiai section.

Hard

1. 00:29:127 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/2oKir looks better imo :3 This mapping isn't really my style. So I just made the semi-blanket look better.
2. 00:26:917 (5) - Add one repeat? Feels better o.o Added.
3. 00:38:917 (3,4,5) - Kinda broking pattern consistency. Try to use this pattern 00:36:232 (2,3) - Fixed.
4. 01:12:075 (6,1) - Not a good blanket D: Fixed.
5. 01:13:653 (1,2) - Unstack? Because after this slider you also have stacked note but within different time measure (1/4) while this on is 1/2 Fixed.
6. 01:38:917 (7) - NC? Sure. Why not.
7. 01:53:127 (4,5) - maybe like this: http://puu.sh/2oKrS :3 Fixed.

Insane

1. Please don't name it Insane for such ambiental/relaxing song :3 Maybe something like "Shooting Star" or w/e? I like that! Changed to Shooting Star.
2. Why CS3 O.O please use at least CS5 or CS4 CS? Not familiar with this.
3. 00:44:285 (5) - clap? I have this clap there because I felt like it fits with the rest of the map and the music.
4. 01:00:864 (3) - delete this and 01:00:706 (2,4) - combine into one slider? Changed.
5. 01:03:864 (4) - delete and move next slider to here? Changed.
6. 01:08:285 (1) - copypaste from 01:07:653 (6) - ? This actually was copied and pasted from 01:07:653. I just rotated it slightly.

Hmmm... If I try to use my point of view on mapping, there's probably a lot more to fix here, but personally your style is already good. I just tried to point out objective things (not subjective) here and I hope it could help ^^ But after this, you still need more mods (maybe 5~6) especially from XATs so this map could improve better :3 Thanks for all of the advice! I really appreciate it.

And I love your effort. I have something here and more stars for you. Thanks for the stars! I also look forward to the storyboard that you have!
(╯ ´ ・ω ・`)╯ 彡 ☆

Loki-san wrote:

hi, From my modding queue
Normal~
00:20:285 (4) - Add clap in the end of slider Added clap. Not sure how I missed this one.
00:41:443 (2,3) - Change, slider is before, afterward is circle I feel that the way it is now fits the flow of the song much better.
01:01:653 (3) - The end in 01:01:653 (3) - Made a few tweaks on this part.
01:06:706 (2) - that,too Made a few tweaks on this part.
Hard
00:17:759 (4) - New combo (NC) Added new combo.
01:31:022 (1,2,3) - can you change so: I mapped this song less to the beat and more to the other notes so I am going to leave it how it is.
01:50:285 (9) - Ugly form I don't know of a better way of mapping it. It is shaped how I would like it so I'm going to leave it as is.
Shooting star: As I said, I don't mod Isane That's alright.

This is nice map! Good ranked Thanks so much.

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi :3 Ilove Owl City, so I come to have a look
Some simple suggestions

Insane I completely redid this difficulty because I didn't like how it had turned out. I think it is much better now.
HP7 OD7 Changed
00:15:706 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - maybe don't flow in the same direction (clockwise or anti)for too long
00:46:811 (3,6) - delete them in order tomake the rhythm slow
01:15:864 (1) - the volume when you spin the spinner is too loud
01:40:496 (9) - maybe remove finish
01:58:811 - add a note here and start the spinner afterwards Still leaving the spinner where it is.

Hard
00:07:338 (4) - remove maybe. Make the slow part and the intense part more different would be nice as I suppose Removed.
00:25:022 (5) - ^ Removed.
00:31:653 (3) - clap? Added clap.
00:33:864 (3) - whistle? I didn't like the double whistle so I left this one out.
00:46:811 (3) - remove? Removed.
01:07:180 (3) - don't ovelap this. I mistaken it as there are 1/2 beat in between, not 1/4 Fixed.
01:11:443 (3) - ^ and many other similar ones I changed a few and left a few.

actually I think your map already don't have many mistake or error. But it's not fun to play, just playable or hmm, rankable
So you may have to think more by yourself, about how to make it interesting, not how to make it correct Good to know that there aren't many mistakes. I really like the Normal and Hard diffs but I didn't like the Insane one as much so I did it over. Hopefully it is more fun to play now.
Good luck Thanks!

Origami_Munchkin wrote:

Finally got around to this.

Zero__wind wrote:

actually I think your map already don't have many mistake or error. But it's not fun to play, just playable or hmm, rankable
So you may have to think more by yourself, about how to make it interesting, not how to make it correct Good to know that there aren't many mistakes. I really like the Normal and Hard diffs but I didn't like the Insane one as much so I did it over. Hopefully it is more fun to play now.
Good luck Thanks!

Zero__wind wrote:

Yeah it's certainly better Hooray
Insane
00:21:711 (5) - weird rhythm, better make it like this Fixed.
00:55:027 - move the green lin to 00:53:132 - you know that you ignored the volume while spinning. And also, better don't use 5% ever, 10% is low enough, because I'm really not sure if 5% is still rankable according to the new ranking rules Moved this and changed it to 15%.
compare 01:06:711 (3,4) - and 01:14:922 (9,10) - and you know what I wanna say? Try to make your map more intuitive. I know it's readable even for not-so-pro players, but it just does no good. If the overlapped note after the slider only has a 1/4-beat gap in between, you'd better move the note out a bit (not totally overlapped). So I prefer 01:14:922 (9,10) - but don't feel good about 01:06:711 (3,4) - Went through and fixed all of the ones that I felt needed it.
01:39:869 (3) - a slider speed-up would be really interesting and fit here, it's just a suggestion though I'm going to leave this part the same.

Thanks for checking over this again!