Hi from my queue
Sorry that it took so long, but school, y'know? =D
Nevermind though, let's go~
[Normal]
What kind of DS did you use? 1.1 or 1? It says 1, but.. when i test it it's kinda 1.3, i'm confused. Because it's pretty important to use DS in Normal!
00:06:390 (2) - Why don't you put this circle as same as 00:08:917 (2) - ?
00:44:285 (4) - This can be confusing, since it's normal, i don't suggest this - i dunno if it's unrankable though.
01:23:917 (6) - NC maybe?
01:28:496 (5,7) - I don't like how they touch each other. I suggest make a nicer bow at Slider 5.
01:34:022 (5) - NC
Note: Whoa, this diff is really great made, i really liked the combination of sliders/circles you used - but in my opinion too confusing for a normal. I suggest using less stacking (It's up to you, only a suggestion). Also, i would recommend adding some hitsounds, such as whistles, i think they would fit well~
[Hard]
00:37:969 (5) - I recommend NC here, since 1) it fits the background msuic 2) the combo doesn't get that high.
00:43:811 (8) - It's up to you, but i would add a circle here. ~
01:23:443 (9) - NC
01:43:653 (9) - NC
01:54:706 (6) - I would use 3 circles here, instead of a slider
01:55:338 (9) - and a normal slider here.
Note: I'm sorry, but I'm not really able to find something very bad here! So i only wrote some new combos, i'm sorry about that q.q~
[Insane]
00:05:759 (2,3,4) - Make this look like a nicer bow.
00:37:022 (4,5,6) - ^
00:44:285 (5) - This slider looks a bit odd to me.
In this first part, I liked hwo you placed the beat .. but i recommend to make a bit more repeating, beacuse for me it seems a bit random ^^;
00:51:864 (4) - Make this 1 tick longer (that it ends on the blue one)
00:56:601 (4) - 1 tick shorter
00:58:180 (1) - Let me recommend a beat from here on:
SPOILER00:58:180 (1) - A slider until here 00:58:338 -
00:58:496 - nothing
00:58:653 - Slider until 00:58:811 -
00:58:969 - nothing
00:59:127 (3) - circle
00:59:285 (4) - circle
00:59:443 (5) - circle
00:59:601 - circle
00:59:759 - nothing
00:59:917 - circle
01:00:075 - circle
01:00:232 - nothing
another beat suggestion: (Circle 1 starts at 01:03:390 (1) - )
http://puu.sh/26GNR 10 ends at 01:05:127 (10) -
You could follow this rythm, it's up to you :3
01:27:232 (5) - 1 tick shorter
01:27:706 (6) - add a circle
Btw: You can use the same rythm as in the other kiai time for the second one.
Well.. that's it!
If you wanna change the rythm in your insane, and you're stuck because you don't get it, feel free to pm me in game, or write me a message
Good luck~
I love the skin btw!