petit milady - Seishun wa Tabemono desu · forum

yShadowXOP_

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-09-01T15:31:04+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 1 de abril de 2018 at 14:42:33

Artist: petit milady
Title: Seishun wa Tabemono desu
Source: パンでPeace!
Tags: 悠木碧竹達彩奈 yuuki aoi taketatsu ayana プチミレディ opening CALENDAR GIRL short pan de peace _MasterTSP ShogunMoon Ataraxia Marianna
BPM: 185
Filesize: 1825kb
Play Time: 00:33
Difficulties Available:

Ataraxia's Easy (1,4 stars, 33 notes)
Bread Paradise (4,62 stars, 121 notes)
Hard (2,81 stars, 87 notes)
Light Insane (3,95 stars, 108 notes)
Marianna's Insane (4,6 stars, 142 notes)
Shaxter's Advanced (2,39 stars, 72 notes)
Shunao's Normal (2,19 stars, 76 notes)

Download: petit milady - Seishun wa Tabemono desu
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------

Mapset

Bread Paradise - me

Marianna's Insane - Marianna

Light Insane - me

Hard - me

Shaxter's Advanced - ShadowX and_MasterTSP

Shunao's Normal - Shunao

Ataraxia's Easy - Ataraxia

Thank you _MasterTSP for loop in the music <3

Last edited by yShadowXOP_ 2018-04-01T17:42:43+00:00, edited 202 times in total.

victorfernando

292 posts

Joined October 2016

victorfernando 2017-09-02T14:59:32+00:00

oi vou moddar em BR mesmo

Que's Easy

Distance snap it's to big for easy , use 1.0 instead 1.2
Re-align the map with the setting I mentioned ^
00:02:459 ctrl+g ?
00:07:648 do this slider better
00:08:945 ^
00:26:945 spinner ends here

Hard

00:04:080 (1) (2) stack ?
00:06:756 talvez assim
00:21:513 bota o slider reverse até no tick azul tem um som aqui
(minha opnião) 00:22:405 você pode tentar botar um blanket aqui
00:23:216 ^

e so mais uma coisa no light insane podia ser blanket aqui 00:14:459

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-09-02T15:11:42+00:00

victorfernando wrote:
oi vou moddar em BR mesmo

Hard
00:04:080 (1) (2) stack ?
00:06:756 talvez assim
00:21:513 bota o slider reverse até no tick azul tem um som aqui
(minha opnião) 00:22:405 você pode tentar botar um blanket aqui
00:23:216 ^

e so mais uma coisa no light insane podia ser blanket aqui 00:14:459

All Fixed Thanks For Modding

UniqueBlock11

195 posts

Joined August 2014

UniqueBlock11 2017-09-02T15:28:37+00:00

victorfernando wrote:
oi vou moddar em BR mesmo

Que's Easy
Distance snap it's to big for easy , use 1.0 instead 1.2 i wanted a slow slider velocity and 1.2x keeps the notes close and also prevents notes from overlapping each other.
Re-align the map with the setting I mentioned ^
00:02:459 ctrl+g ?
00:07:648 do this slider better
00:08:945 ^
00:26:945 spinner ends here

fixed everything else ^

Code

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Source:
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-Master-

152 posts

Joined October 2015

-Master- 2017-09-02T17:04:53+00:00

General:

One small thing that is driving me crazy is the lowercase song title, PLEASE:

"Petit Milady - Seishun wa tabemmono desu"

Easy:

In a nutshell, the map has a lot of blank spaces, yes, this is an easy difficulty, but a little bit of slider management here and there would make the map a lot more enjoyable to play.
Another thing to say is that, on top of the Blank spaces, there is inconsistency. This is unacceptable for Newbie-Oriented diffs, this confuses the crap out of them.

Example of inconsistency:

00:01:162 (1,2,3) - There are parts with no blank spaces
00:02:459 (3,1) - Blank Space
00:06:351 (1,2,1) - Parts that fill the 1/1 BSD Completely
00:08:945 (1,2) - Blank Space
00:10:242 (2,3,1) - Full 1/1

And basicly the rest of the map is filled with blank spaces.

What I Recommend you to do:

- Set the BSD to 1/1
- With the BSD set to 1/1, start using more beats to make the map sound/play better. (Still, there are some not so important beats that you should ignore, this is still an Easy diff after all)
- Easy difficulties need to be completely consistent (and boring), that means, the map must stay almost aways following the same note Rhythm. Don't be afraid to do this, actually, just do this.

- And finally remap. Or maybe not, the map aesthetic and distancing is good, just the note rhythm and consistency that is bad, you could just re-arrange some sliderd for the new notes, or if you want to remap, the music is only 30 seconds, so it wouldn't be such big hassle lol.

Note: Easy difficulties are NOT actually Boring for new players, they actually find this difficult, and when then finally pass it, they fill with hapiness, then start to move on to Normals, Hards, etc.
Easy difficulties are an essential thing to newcomers, and should not be despised, even if it's boring.

P.S: I'm not saying that anyone does this, I'm just stating that Low star difficulties are an essential thing both for the map and community!

Arow

111 posts

Joined April 2014

Arow 2017-09-02T20:38:45+00:00

Easy

00:07:648 (2) - move slider back to red tick and maybe put circle after it

00:10:242 (2) - slider to white tick, circle 1 beat earlier

00:12:837 (2) - back to red tick
00:15:432 (2) - back to red tick, put circle at 00:16:405 (3) - . I'd make this slider normal instead of reverse.
00:17:702 - circle here or

or

00:19:324 (1) - 1 tick longer and change shape
00:20:459 (2) - back to red tick
00:21:107 (3) - there should be a slider
00:23:053 (1) - back to red tick
00:24:513 (1) - move start to 00:25:810 - and map empty space

Good luck!

UniqueBlock11

195 posts

Joined August 2014

UniqueBlock11 2017-09-02T21:24:45+00:00

_MasterTSP wrote:
Easy:

In a nutshell, the map has a lot of blank spaces, yes, this is an easy difficulty, but a little bit of slider management here and there would make the map a lot more enjoyable to play.
Another thing to say is that, on top of the Blank spaces, there is inconsistency. This is unacceptable for Newbie-Oriented diffs, this confuses the crap out of them.

Example of inconsistency:

00:01:162 (1,2,3) - There are parts with no blank spaces
00:02:459 (3,1) - Blank Space
00:06:351 (1,2,1) - Parts that fill the 1/1 BSD Completely
00:08:945 (1,2) - Blank Space
00:10:242 (2,3,1) - Full 1/1

And basicly the rest of the map is filled with blank spaces.

What I Recommend you to do:

- Set the BSD to 1/1
- With the BSD set to 1/1, start using more beats to make the map sound/play better. (Still, there are some not so important beats that you should ignore, this is still an Easy diff after all)
- Easy difficulties need to be completely consistent (and boring), that means, the map must stay almost aways following the same note Rhythm. Don't be afraid to do this, actually, just do this.

- And finally remap. Or maybe not, the map aesthetic and distancing is good, just the note rhythm and consistency that is bad, you could just re-arrange some sliderd for the new notes, or if you want to remap, the music is only 30 seconds, so it wouldn't be such big hassle lol.

Note: Easy difficulties are NOT actually Boring for new players, they actually find this difficult, and when then finally pass it, they fill with hapiness, then start to move on to Normals, Hards, etc.
Easy difficulties are an essential thing to newcomers, and should not be despised, even if it's boring.

P.S: I'm not saying that anyone does this, I'm just stating that Low star difficulties are an essential thing both for the map and community!

i generally reworked some parts that you mentioned above, and i only placed spaces where i believed they should exist, such as at 00:19:324 (1,2,3) where the music seems to "pause" slightly.

x Arow wrote:
Easy

00:07:648 (2) - move slider back to red tick and maybe put circle after it

00:10:242 (2) - slider to white tick, circle 1 beat earlier reworked this rhythm with the mod above

00:12:837 (2) - back to red tick
00:15:432 (2) - back to red tick, put circle at 00:16:405 (3) - . I'd make this slider normal instead of reverse. merged some changes with the mod above
00:17:702 - circle here or
or
00:19:324 (1) - 1 tick longer and change shape
00:20:459 (2) - back to red tick
00:21:107 (3) - there should be a slider
00:23:053 (1) - back to red tick
00:24:513 (1) - move start to 00:25:810 - and map empty space was reworked with mod above

Good luck!

unmentioned = fixed

-Master-

152 posts

Joined October 2015

-Master- 2017-09-03T03:20:20+00:00

Well, because people complain about ANYTHING, I made a new extended MP3 file. With a longer drain time (27 > 33) (Yes, there were complaints about 3 seconds being under the 30s M.)

Because there is now an inaudible joint, I'll time the multiple non-inherit sections that need to be done to make the timing "perfect".

So I need for you to hold on until I finish setting up everything.

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-09-03T18:24:38+00:00

_MasterTSP wrote:
Well, because people complain about ANYTHING, I made a new extended MP3 file. With a longer drain time (27 > 33) (Yes, there were complaints about 3 seconds being under the 30s M.)

Because there is now an inaudible joint, I'll time the multiple non-inherit sections that need to be done to make the timing "perfect".

So I need for you to hold on until I finish setting up everything.

Thanks Maxter Senpai <3

Kyoshiro

193 posts

Joined February 2015

Kyoshiro 2017-09-04T00:20:55+00:00

GD Request

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Last edited by Kyoshiro 2017-09-06T00:58:29+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Cursed Gothic

76 posts

Joined August 2016

Cursed Gothic 2017-09-04T10:40:22+00:00

GD REQUEST - ADVANCED

Status: Mapping - 32%

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-Master-

152 posts

Joined October 2015

-Master- 2017-09-06T00:44:32+00:00

rnak wen

Ali-

63 posts

Joined December 2015

Ali- 2017-09-08T20:29:06+00:00

from my mod q, ill do my best

[Bread Paradise]

00:10:371 (1) - this spacing here is very counter-intuitive, most emphasized sound in the jump but least spacing
00:08:750 (4) - if this circle were more to the right the jump would look a lot better imo
00:16:858 (1,2) - maybe a blanket on the slider end would be better, but it looks rankable as is, no biggie
00:26:912 (1,4) - consider overlapping these two?
00:31:128 (1) - flow is suddenly changed with this slider. having it pointed horizontally would be a lot more smooth

[KyoYushiro's Insane]

00:31:128 (1) - if there were anyway to move this pattern up a tad, itd look a lot nice going from the previous. perhaps just a rotation would do?
00:14:263 (1,2,3,4,5) - same issue here, the follow points go straight into the head by the slider body isnt consistent with that, like it is 00:15:885 (3) - here for example
00:18:966 (4) - very difficult to read. you could hint at a big gap in rhythm with an NC, so players can pay attention to the hitcircle
00:24:804 - undermapped a quiet drum hit here
00:27:074 (8,9,1) - flow into the slider from the triple is off, always use the same angle (hint: its easier if the triple is less spaced)
00:32:101 (5,6) - i feel like these two notes are very emphasized and deserve a flow change. like this?

---
two good maps, the kyoyushiro's diff is very innovative, i like it

gl with the rank <3

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-09-08T23:36:37+00:00

Ali- wrote:
from my mod q, ill do my best

[Bread Paradise]

00:10:371 (1) - this spacing here is very counter-intuitive, most emphasized sound in the jump but least spacing Ok
00:08:750 (4) - if this circle were more to the right the jump would look a lot better imo Fixed
00:16:858 (1,2) - maybe a blanket on the slider end would be better, but it looks rankable as is, no biggie i'll leave it as it is
00:26:912 (1,4) - consider overlapping these two? Ok
00:31:128 (1) - flow is suddenly changed with this slider. having it pointed horizontally would be a lot more smooth Fixed

gl with the rank <3 Thanks For Modding

Rossi

690 posts

Joined January 2015

Rossi 2017-09-09T09:05:30+00:00

Hi~! ^^

From Team Frontline Modding Queue

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
General :

offset I find is -14
00:06:480 - delete new Timing Point
did the kiai end is right?

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[maki's Normal]
00:01:934 (2,3) - this change to slider?
00:07:128 (2,3) - ^
00:17:831 (3,4) - ^
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[Shaxter's Advanced]
00:20:425 (3,1) - too far
00:26:750 (3) - this slider change the end at 00:27:074 -
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[Hard]
00:06:313 (4,1) - too far
00:11:182 (4,5,1) - same^ this is too far. some player will get combo break maybe xD
00:13:777 (3) - head reverse slider not good put at red line.
00:17:993 (1,2,4) - ^
00:26:912 (4,1) - too far
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

~~why the bg so cute xD lol~~
Nice map good luck~!

Last edited by Rossi 2017-09-09T09:07:32+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

coke bottle

271 posts

Joined May 2017

coke bottle 2017-09-09T09:06:24+00:00

hihi M4M reply coming through!!

[*Que's Easy]00:03:556 (3) - too close to 00:02:421 (2) -

[*KyoYushiro's Insane]00:33:398 (1) - Don't put this right after a spinner cause there's not enough time for players to react to it. I think this is unrankable.

[*Hard]00:18:804 (3) - Delete this maybe cause there's no sound on it?

BTW, idk about the kiai endung time tbh. i felt like it should have lasted till 00:32:263 -

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-09-09T12:56:20+00:00

Franklin_DeJavu wrote:
Hi~! ^^

From Team Frontline Modding Queue

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
did the kiai end is right? okay, it was changed.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[Shaxter's Advanced]
00:20:425 (3,1) - too far
00:26:750 (3) - this slider change the end at 00:27:074 - Fixed
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[Hard]
00:06:313 (4,1) - too far Fixed
00:11:182 (4,5,1) - same^ this is too far. some player will get combo break maybe xD ^
00:13:777 (3) - head reverse slider not good put at red line. ^
00:17:993 (1,2,4) - ^ ^
00:26:912 (4,1) - too far ^
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

~~why the bg so cute xD lol~~
Nice map good luck~!

Thanks For Modding

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-09-09T12:59:11+00:00

Reynolduh wrote:
hihi M4M reply coming through!!

[*Hard]00:18:804 (3) - Delete this maybe cause there's no sound on it? Ok

BTW, idk about the kiai endung time tbh. i felt like it should have lasted till 00:32:263 - Fixed

Thanks For Modding

makisokk

928 posts

Joined August 2013

makisokk 2017-09-09T13:15:16+00:00

@Franklin_DeJavu
I will not change this, because it sounds better notes

Nelliel

874 posts

Joined September 2015

Nelliel 2017-09-14T23:06:56+00:00

Que's Easy

Maybe increase Distance Spacing to 1.3 instead

00:03:556 (3) - should be ds
00:05:177 (1) - point this slider towards the circle
00:06:150 (2,1) - i'd be nice if this was blanketed
00:12:642 (2) - circle here?
00:12:804 (2) - move this 00:12:966 (2) - here
00:16:534 (4,1) - blanket that better
00:20:425 (2,3) - ^
00:29:831 (1) - map this part
00:32:425 (1) - spinner here to 00:33:723 (1) -

imo i think this diff should just get remapped it's extremely messy

maki's Normal

00:01:934 (2) - 1/4 slider kick?
00:02:421 (3) - circle
00:07:128 (2,3,4,5) - ^^
00:23:344 (4) - end this slider here 00:23:669 (5) -
00:23:831 (5) - move slider here
00:24:317 (6) - circle
00:27:236 (1) - blanket this on slider end of 00:25:777 (4) -
00:29:831 (1) - map this spinner
00:32:425 (1) - spinner here

Shaxter's Advanced

make curve slider be the same across the map so it looks nice
00:02:907 (2) - ctrl+g
00:03:231 (3) - ^
00:03:556 (4) - ^
00:19:452 (2) - rotate this it doesn't look nice when its parallel to 00:18:966 (1) - maybe by like 45
00:21:236 (1) - terra bad curve slider
00:26:750 (3) - ^
00:30:317 (2) - ctrl+h
00:31:128 (1) - make it nicer

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-09-15T00:35:49+00:00

WhozChaos wrote:
Shaxter's Advanced
make curve slider be the same across the map so it looks nice
00:02:907 (2) - ctrl+g Nop,will break the flow
00:03:231 (3) - ^ ^
00:03:556 (4) - ^ ^
00:26:750 (3) - ^ Ok
00:30:317 (2) - ctrl+h ^
00:31:128 (1) - make it nicer ^

Thanks for modding

Last edited by yShadowXOP_ 2017-09-15T00:41:16+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

-Master-

152 posts

Joined October 2015

-Master- 2017-09-15T00:40:52+00:00

WhozChaos wrote:
Shaxter's Advanced
00:19:452 (2) - rotate this it doesn't look nice when its parallel to 00:18:966 (1) - maybe by like 45 - IMO that would look kinda bad, but I reworked it
00:21:236 (1) - terra bad curve slider - Added Blanket

makisokk

928 posts

Joined August 2013

makisokk 2017-09-15T22:19:18+00:00

WhozChaos wrote:
maki's Normal
00:01:934 (2) - 1/4 slider kick? I think not, better not worth it
00:02:421 (3) - circle Here comes a long sound, better slider
00:07:128 (2,3,4,5) - ^^ ^
00:23:344 (4) - end this slider here 00:23:669 (5) - Remap this part
00:23:831 (5) - move slider here
00:24:317 (6) - circle hmm, not need
00:27:236 (1) - blanket this on slider end of 00:25:777 (4) - I did not initially make it, and I do not see the point
00:29:831 (1) - map this spinner
00:32:425 (1) - spinner here oki

Thanks for the mod

ss

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Peter

800 posts

Joined June 2016

Peter 2017-09-16T13:03:12+00:00

General

Change combo colours to match background

Easy

00:03:556 (3) - blanket looks off would make 00:02:421 (2) less sharp
00:06:480 (1) - would move this like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9102025
00:24:317 (4,1) - why you re placing these object here there already were circles here it looks so boring

Normal

00:27:236 (1) - make blanket with 00:25:777 (4) -

advanced

00:03:880 (1) - too close to previous would make this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9102094
00:17:669 (5) - place this somewhere else
00:31:128 (1) - same as before

hard

00:28:209 (3) - looks off to previous
00:31:615 (2) - ^

Light insane

00:12:155 (2) - looks off to previous slider
00:20:750 (1) - looks off to this 00:20:101 (3) -

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-09-16T14:13:31+00:00

PeterEU wrote:
advanced
00:03:880 (1) - too close to previous would make this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9102094 Ok
00:31:128 (1) - same as before Ok

hard
00:28:209 (3) - looks off to previous Ok
00:31:615 (2) - ^ Ok

Light insane
00:12:155 (2) - looks off to previous slider Hm, No
00:20:750 (1) - looks off to this 00:20:101 (3) - ^

Thanks For Modding

makisokk

928 posts

Joined August 2013

makisokk 2017-09-16T14:58:43+00:00

@PeterEU
did not initially make it, and I do not see the point
Thanks for mod

-Master-

152 posts

Joined October 2015

-Master- 2017-09-17T00:31:22+00:00

PeterEU wrote:
advanced
00:17:669 (5) - place this somewhere else - Rearranged a bunch of notes to fix this.

Thanks.

Botan

212 posts

Joined May 2017

Botan 2017-09-17T22:45:02+00:00

Use custom colors

Pan ParadiseChange the difficulty name to Pan Paradise.

I suggest reducing the spacing in the entire section before the pre-kiai jumps 00:09:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7)
Lower SV is nice to reflect the relative calmness in this section but the spacing is pretty much the same as the kiai. Would be nice if we could create a distinction between the two.
It would make 00:09:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7) stand out a lot more too if we go from small spacing to gradually bigger kiai spacing.

00:02:421 (1) - This is one ugly looking slider (not symmetrical) Fix it.
00:07:615 (1) - Same as ^
00:14:588 (2,3) - CTRL + G these, that way we'll click on both vocal hits.
00:23:344 (1) - Same as ^
00:28:534 (1) - Same as ^
For the most part I am okay with the objects used in the kiai but I would maybe reduce the spacing during the calmer parts in the kiai for the same reasons above. Audibly there are moments where the song's intensity dies down a bit only to then spike up again but the equal large spacing for the entire kiai doesn't emphasize that as well as it could. Map is a bit messy though.

Maxter's Insane00:02:258 (3,4) - Doesn't flow well. Slider would play a lot better if it was above the 3. I'd like to see the slider be placed further away to match the intensity/spacing of 00:02:096 (2,3) but the biggest issue here I believe is that it's placed below the 3.
00:03:069 (1,2,3,4,5) - Reduce spacing, bit ridiculous here for non-kiai.
00:03:718 (5,6) - Same as ^ Consider placing the sliderhead somewhere like https://imgur.com/a/Gd57t (obviously don't keep the shape)
00:17:831 - Add circle.
00:18:966 (1) - Stack this under the previous circle. Can be misleading as it has same spacing as 1/2 rhythm like previous pattern.
For the kiai... maybe try reworking the pattern so we click something on downbeats instead of having sliderends on them? Same general thoughts as I mentioned in in the top diff mod. Map looks a bit messy as well.

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-09-17T23:54:19+00:00

Botan wrote:

Use custom colors
Pan ParadiseChange the difficulty name to Pan Paradise.
I suggest reducing the spacing in the entire section before the pre-kiai jumps 00:09:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7) Ok
Lower SV is nice to reflect the relative calmness in this section but the spacing is pretty much the same as the kiai. Would be nice if we could create a distinction between the two.
It would make 00:09:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7) stand out a lot more too if we go from small spacing to gradually bigger kiai spacing.
00:02:421 (1) - This is one ugly looking slider (not symmetrical) Fix it. Fixed
00:07:615 (1) - Same as ^ ^
00:14:588 (2,3) - CTRL + G these, that way we'll click on both vocal hits. ^
00:23:344 (1) - Same as ^ ^
00:28:534 (1) - Same as ^ ^
For the most part I am okay with the objects used in the kiai but I would maybe reduce the spacing during the calmer parts in the kiai for the same reasons above. Audibly there are moments where the song's intensity dies down a bit only to then spike up again but the equal large spacing for the entire kiai doesn't emphasize that as well as it could. Map is a bit messy though.

Thanks For Modding

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2017-09-19T13:51:00+00:00

Easy

00:27:236 (1,2,3,4) - I think you'd follow a lot more of the vocals by having these as 2 3/2 reverse sliders https://i.imgur.com/b94PzYI.png
00:29:831 (1) - it would fit the song more to end this at 00:33:561 or 00:33:398 . Or you could you use the same ending as top diff

top diff

00:18:317 (2,3) - delete clap
00:18:479 (3) - add whistle
00:25:452 (4,1) - the spacing between these objects is quite low. This is such an emphatic part of the song and the low spacing doesn't do it justice
00:32:263 (7) - An NC would give a bit more hp before the spinner; which would be nice

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yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-09-19T22:36:26+00:00

Kisses wrote:
top diff
00:18:317 (2,3) - delete clap
00:18:479 (3) - add whistle
00:25:452 (4,1) - the spacing between these objects is quite low. This is such an emphatic part of the song and the low spacing doesn't do it justice
00:32:263 (7) - An NC would give a bit more hp before the spinner; which would be nice
All Fixed, Thanks for Modding
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Ataraxia

673 posts

Joined February 2014

Ataraxia 2017-09-20T23:11:55+00:00

Kisses wrote:
Easy
00:27:236 (1,2,3,4) - I think you'd follow a lot more of the vocals by having these as 2 3/2 reverse sliders https://i.imgur.com/b94PzYI.png
00:29:831 (1) - it would fit the song more to end this at 00:33:561 or 00:33:398 . Or you could you use the same ending as top diff
w

all applied, thank u

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Venix

Global Moderator

1,937 posts

Joined February 2015

Venix 2017-09-22T13:53:14+00:00

last diff.

00:02:421 (1,2) - I think you should use less spacing here just because it's almost as big as 00:01:934 (2,1) - this one. Sound is the same with 00:01:286 (1,2) - this so i prefer use here similar spacing.
00:03:231 (3) - This one should be less spaced from previous slider because of reason above
00:10:209 (7,1) - This spacing should be bigger, if u have used high spacing 00:09:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - here, you should use higher spacing 00:10:209 (7,1) - here because sound is more important in music
00:18:317 (2,3,4) - back'n'forth pattern doesn't work well here cuz sound 00:18:642 (4) - here is stronger than previous ones

Also I think kiai should be a bit shorter cuz actually it's 3/4 of song

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-09-22T23:25:12+00:00

Venix wrote:
last diff.
00:02:421 (1,2) - I think you should use less spacing here just because it's almost as big as 00:01:934 (2,1) - this one. Sound is the same with 00:01:286 (1,2) - this so i prefer use here similar spacing.
00:03:231 (3) - This one should be less spaced from previous slider because of reason above
00:10:209 (7,1) - This spacing should be bigger, if u have used high spacing 00:09:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - here, you should use higher spacing 00:10:209 (7,1) - here because sound is more important in music
00:18:317 (2,3,4) - back'n'forth pattern doesn't work well here cuz sound 00:18:642 (4) - here is stronger than previous ones
Also I think kiai should be a bit shorter cuz actually it's 3/4 of song

All Fixed Thanks For Modding

kwk

572 posts

Joined May 2010

kwk 2017-09-25T00:40:41+00:00

q
~
top diff seems ok
[Maxter's Insane]
00:06:480 (1) - extend this out the red tick? the current beat here 00:06:966 (2) - isnt that important imo and doing this way will give you more contrast for 00:07:128 (3,4) - since that contains the melody
00:10:696 (1,2) - why is the spacing here suddenly so low lol, im guessing it was like this before? better to have it like this http://puu.sh/xI7zC/77b547af6b.png.
00:11:669 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - hmm im having a bit of trouble figuring out what your following, are you prioritising the vocals? To me it just looks like your filling in beats but they dont actually represent anything. If you want to follow the vocals more closely whiile respecting the background something like this would be good imo http://puu.sh/xI7ND/e08e310e03.png
00:15:074 (4,1,2) - main problem here is 00:15:398 - is rather stressed, but its not clickable but this 00:15:723 - has no backing but its clickable?
try this out http://puu.sh/xI7QQ/6019e0c3ec.png similar thing happens here 00:16:696 (1,2) - where 2 is clickable but 00:16:858 - isnt. i'll stop mentioning the rhythm things cause it happens throughout your map but i suggest you go over your rhythming,maybe have a look at the top diff for ideas
00:17:831 - on the otherhand why isnt this clickable when theres a drum hit lol

[light insane]
00:19:777 (2,3) - swap rhythm around fits vocals better since atm 3 doesnt really represent anything
00:25:452 (4,1) - feels like it should be spaced more since 00:25:128 (3,4) - has more spacing for some reason
00:26:912 (4) - i know theres a beat on the last tick but i think its better for playability if you only had 1 repeat, since the jump to the next note is quite far
00:27:561 (2,3) - maybe stack this onto the slider head? dont think you should be forcing the blanket since the flow isnt very good
~

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-09-25T13:55:59+00:00

kwk wrote:
q
~
top diff seems ok
[light insane]
00:19:777 (2,3) - swap rhythm around fits vocals better since atm 3 doesnt really represent anything
00:25:452 (4,1) - feels like it should be spaced more since 00:25:128 (3,4) - has more spacing for some reason
00:26:912 (4) - i know theres a beat on the last tick but i think its better for playability if you only had 1 repeat, since the jump to the next note is quite far
00:27:561 (2,3) - maybe stack this onto the slider head? dont think you should be forcing the blanket since the flow isnt very good
~

All Fixed, Thanks For Modding

DeletedUser_10209520

DeletedUser_10209520 2017-09-25T17:29:31+00:00

Hello!

From my queue.

(wew, that's a lot of diffs)

Hard

00:01:286 (1,2) - Angling the slider slightly more towards the reverse slider's head would make for better flow.
00:06:480 (1,2) - ^

Maxster's Insane

00:02:421 (4,1) - Jump feels too far for the small increase in song intensity.
00:03:880 (6) - Angle this slider so that you start by heading towards the previous note instead of downwards for better flow.

Looks good other than that!

GL, HF!

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-09-25T22:30:23+00:00

SuperCSGO wrote:
Hello!

From my queue.

(wew, that's a lot of diffs)

Hard
00:01:286 (1,2) - Angling the slider slightly more towards the reverse slider's head would make for better flow.
00:06:480 (1,2) - ^
All Fixed

Looks good other than that!

GL, HF!

Thanks For Modding

-Master-

152 posts

Joined October 2015

-Master- 2017-09-26T00:20:42+00:00

kwk wrote:
q
~
top diff seems ok
[Maxter's Insane]
00:06:480 (1) - extend this out the red tick? the current beat here 00:06:966 (2) - isnt that important imo and doing this way will give you more contrast for 00:07:128 (3,4) - since that contains the melody
Applied, Sounds better.

00:10:696 (1,2) - why is the spacing here suddenly so low lol, im guessing it was like this before? better to have it like this http://puu.sh/xI7zC/77b547af6b.png.
Actually it was distanced like this, but because my diff was surpassing the last diff, Shadow tweaked some distances.

00:11:669 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - hmm im having a bit of trouble figuring out what your following, are you prioritising the vocals? To me it just looks like your filling in beats but they dont actually represent anything. If you want to follow the vocals more closely whiile respecting the background something like this would be good imo http://puu.sh/xI7ND/e08e310e03.png
Hm, yeah, I can see your point and I actually agree with it, some tweaks are necessary. I was following the background while respecting vocals like ya said, but it ended up looking like a complete clusterfuck w/o meaning, I made some tweaks.

00:15:074 (4,1,2) - main problem here is 00:15:398 - is rather stressed, but its not clickable but this 00:15:723 - has no backing but its clickable?
I made it like this to respect the vocal line too, it gets it's "clickability" from the vocal line, wich gives strength to the weak beat, but the reverse right there I'll make some changes, it really needs improvement.

try this out http://puu.sh/xI7QQ/6019e0c3ec.png similar thing happens here 00:16:696 (1,2) - where 2 is clickable but 00:16:858 - isnt. i'll stop mentioning the rhythm things cause it happens throughout your map but i suggest you go over your rhythming,maybe have a look at the top diff for ideas
00:17:831 - on the otherhand why isnt this clickable when theres a drum hit lol
HAHAHA I actually remember this, I was extremely angry with the offset not matching up correctly, the circle only matches the beat when like this https://puu.sh/xIUZu/06505ef7c4.png, so I just let it like this, I agree, this empty space gives me the shivers too xD

~

THENQ YUU

Mr Business

219 posts

Joined November 2016

Mr Business 2017-09-26T03:04:59+00:00

From my queue

I'll Nm your map since I dont have a full set yet.

Maki's Normal
.Increase the OD by a bit, maybe 3.8 to 4
•00:05:177 (2) - Pull back to make 4 ticks long and add beats at the two red ticks left over.
Shaxter's Advanced
Spacing feels too weird on:
• 00:05:988 (3,4) - and maybe the slider before them
• 00:10:371 (1,2,3,1) -
• 00:19:452 (2) -
• 00:07:128 (2) - And some others that im iffy about.
• 00:30:804 (3,1) - Can be blanketed better.
• 00:11:020 (3) - I can't hear a sound on the sliderend worth emphasizing, pull it back two ticks.

Hard
• 00:06:313 (4) - Increase spacing.
• 00:07:128 (2) - Same here.
• 00:11:182 (4,5) - 1/4 jump is a bad idea in what a borderline 2 star map, and lone 1/4 sliders are even harder, remap this bit.
• 00:26:912 (4) - The extra tick is unexpected and will throw players off course, pulling it back a tick won't hurt.
• 00:28:209 (3,1,2) - Blanket better.

Light Insane

• 00:05:988 (3,4) - Stack these to make them easier to read (actually do this for every time i mentioned this same exact spot prior)

Maxter's Insane

• 00:01:286 (1) - Pulll back Two ticks and add a circle where the slidertail ended, it makes the emphasis more impactful. Maybe mute the sliderend as well.
• 00:06:313 (8,1) - Extremely ugly, place on the grid in the middle and one down from the top.
• 00:14:750 (2,3,4) - The anti jump into comaratively large vertical jump down the screen is very uncomfortable, move 3 three and a half spaces to the right and 1 up one the grid.
• 00:29:831 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - and 00:32:101 (4,5) - The ending of the map is typically where you add the more difficult patterns, the big jump sections low spacing makes it feel like no challenge whatsoever, increasing spacing on both of these will make it's difficulty reflect the intensity of the song and the pp gains typically made at the ending. 00:30:155 (3) - and 00:30:966 (1) - also should be symmetrical to the jump pattern.

Bread Paradise Looks fine from a quick skim over.

Most of these are pretty good apart from the Shaxter diff's spacing being a nightmare for a new player to read. Good luck on shooting towards rank!

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-09-27T14:42:06+00:00

YelloJello wrote:
From my queue I'll Nm your map since I dont have a full set yet.

Shaxter's Advanced
Spacing feels too weird on:
• 00:05:988 (3,4) - and maybe the slider before them OK
• 00:10:371 (1,2,3,1) - ?
• 00:19:452 (2) - ^?
• 00:07:128 (2) - And some others that im iffy about. Ok
• 00:30:804 (3,1) - Can be blanketed better. ^
• 00:11:020 (3) - I can't hear a sound on the sliderend worth emphasizing, pull it back two ticks. l'll think about it

Hard
• 00:06:313 (4) - Increase spacing. Fixed
• 00:07:128 (2) - Same here. ^
• 00:11:182 (4,5) - 1/4 jump is a bad idea in what a borderline 2 star map, and lone 1/4 sliders are even harder, remap this bit. ^
• 00:26:912 (4) - The extra tick is unexpected and will throw players off course, pulling it back a tick won't hurt.^
• 00:28:209 (3,1,2) - Blanket better.^

Light Insane

• 00:05:988 (3,4) - Stack these to make them easier to read (actually do this for every time i mentioned this same exact spot prior) Ok

Thanks For Modding

DeletedUser_423548

DeletedUser_423548 2017-09-29T15:17:31+00:00

M4M
General

00:01:286 - 00:09:074 - The whistle here sounds very strange
It is a good feeling to try using the default soft whistle according to the sound of the bell of the song

Ataraxia's Easy

00:02:421 - Add finish
00:03:069 - remove whistle
It does not match the song. Sounds very strange
00:03:394 (3) - Additions Drum finish?
00:06:480 (1) - 00:08:101 (2) - 2/1 slider is better
00:01:286 (1,2) - I think it's the same rhythm
00:18:642 - You should pick up the loud noise here
00:29:831 (1) - This spinner is very long
00:32:263 - So far you should pick up the sound properly

Shogun's Normal

00:08:263 (5,6) - I think this rhythm is difficult for beginners
00:08:263 - 00:08:588 - 1/1 slider 00:08:750 - Add circle is better
00:09:561 (2) - The rhythm is very strange
00:09:561 - Put a circle here, 1/2 slider is good
00:11:669 - 00:32:263 - Your rhythm is very strange
1. Have you picked up the song rhythm?
2. Have you picked up the sound according to the vocal?
However, your rhythm is not consistent because 1 and 2 are mixed
The consistency of the rhythm is very important as the beginner plays Normal
00:32:425 (1) - I think the end of the spinner is here 00:33:561 -

Shaxter's Advanced

Advanced is a diff to fill the difference when there is a big difference in Hard's Normal
I do not think there is a big difference in this mapset. I think this diff is the most dangerous in each difficulty level
This diff is not uniform in distance. I think that it is better to check the distances of other Advanced objects.

Hard

00:11:182 (4,1) - This distance is not very good in Hard
00:18:317 (2,3,4) - Because the distance seems to be the same, there is a possibility of causing misunderstanding
00:26:344 - There is no sound here
00:27:723 (2,2,3) - Why is the rhythm different?

Light Insane

00:08:588 (3,4,1) - Because the distance seems to be the same, there is a possibility of causing misunderstanding
00:08:588 (3,4) - It might be better to bring it closer
00:11:182 (1) - Remove NC
Just like Hard
00:12:804 (1) - Why is the difference between hard and rhythm?
I think hard rhythm is good
00:25:452 (4) - Ctrl+G is better?
00:26:344 - Hard some
00:30:966 (2,1) - It would be better to increase the distance to express a big sound
00:31:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - It is almost the same place as Hard and it has the same rhythm so please change it slightly. lol

In English it can not be explained in great detail so there may be places I do not understand

Good luck!

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-09-29T23:16:34+00:00

Yasaija 714 wrote:
M4M

Shogun's Normal
00:08:263 (5,6) - I think this rhythm is difficult for beginners
00:08:263 - 00:08:588 - 1/1 slider 00:08:750 - Add circle is better
00:09:561 (2) - The rhythm is very strange
00:09:561 - Put a circle here, 1/2 slider is good
00:11:669 - 00:32:263 - Your rhythm is very strange i follow drums in the background
1. Have you picked up the song rhythm?
2. Have you picked up the sound according to the vocal?
However, your rhythm is not consistent because 1 and 2 are mixed
The consistency of the rhythm is very important as the beginner plays Normal
00:32:425 (1) - I think the end of the spinner is here 00:33:561 -
In English it can not be explained in great detail so there may be places I do not understand
Good luck!

No reply mean fixed~

Thanks for modding!~

ummm

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Version:Shogun's Normal
Source:パンでPeace!
Tags:悠木碧 竹達彩奈 yuuki aoi taketatsu ayana プチミレディ opening CALENDAR GIRL short pan de peace _MasterTSP ShogunMoon Ataraxia
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yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-09-30T01:12:02+00:00

Yasaija 714 wrote:
M4M
General

Hard
00:11:182 (4,1) - This distance is not very good in Hard
00:18:317 (2,3,4) - Because the distance seems to be the same, there is a possibility of causing misunderstanding
00:26:344 - There is no sound here
00:27:723 (2,2,3) - Why is the rhythm different?
Light Insane
00:08:588 (3,4,1) - Because the distance seems to be the same, there is a possibility of causing misunderstanding
00:08:588 (3,4) - It might be better to bring it closer
00:11:182 (1) - Remove NC
Just like Hard
00:12:804 (1) - Why is the difference between hard and rhythm?
I think hard rhythm is good
00:25:452 (4) - Ctrl+G is better?
00:26:344 - Hard some
00:30:966 (2,1) - It would be better to increase the distance to express a big sound
00:31:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - It is almost the same place as Hard and it has the same rhythm so please change it slightly. lol
In English it can not be explained in great detail so there may be places I do not understand XD
Good luck!Thanks and All Fixed

Thanks For Modding

Mithia

620 posts

Joined February 2017

Mithia 2017-09-30T02:06:38+00:00

Hi Hi Hi!!, Here from My Modding queue

Light Insane

00:01:934 (2) - Ctrl + G?

I do not think there is a need for Kudosu
this is perfect for me GL!!!

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-10-01T12:46:53+00:00

OsuDans wrote:
Hi Hi Hi!!, Here from My Modding queue
Light Insane
00:01:934 (2) - Ctrl + G? Nop :/
I do not think there is a need for Kudosu
this is perfect for me GL!!!

Thanks For Modding

Ataraxia

673 posts

Joined February 2014

Ataraxia 2017-10-01T13:58:21+00:00

Yasaija 714 wrote:
M4M

Ataraxia's Easy
00:02:421 - Add finish Sure
00:03:069 - remove whistle Think not, because the hitsound match with the music
It does not match the song. Sounds very strange maybe its a drum toon, but its not necessary to use other hitsound if the whistle do that perfectly
00:03:394 (3) - Additions Drum finish? yes its cool
00:06:480 (1) - 00:08:101 (2) - 2/1 slider is better but the tonality is different, if i use the same patten, its not gonna fit correctly just because the "bell(?)" sound has great than 00:01:286 (1,2) -
00:01:286 (1,2) - I think it's the same rhythm eh... ^
00:18:642 - You should pick up the loud noise here i don't understand so much, but i want to follow the drum anyway, if i need to follow vocal, i think the map just could be bad to play because its 1/2 pattens need, since easy need the maximum of 1/1 possible
00:29:831 (1) - This spinner is very long the long the better to a novice play follow and don't miss xD
00:32:263 - So far you should pick up the sound properly Not necessary, the spinner Finishing match with the final moment of the music

thanks for mod

minha normal tava um lixo msm xD

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Dustinati

88 posts

Joined June 2016

Dustinati 2017-10-07T21:49:28+00:00

Nice

easy

This is the only diff that doesn't have the Kiai section, please add

HARD

00:26:588 (3,4) - add the blue ticks??

LIGHT insane

00:18:317 (2,3) - why not spread out more for more emphasize since LOUd noise
00:26:588 (3,4) - add blue ticks???????????????????????????????????

maxter's insane

00:02:421 (4) - Does not go with circle 3, improper flow
00:03:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Improper flow of jumps, would be better if slider 6 at least flowed right with circle 5
00:07:290 (3) - Bit awkward, and would also be better if removed reverse arrow, and replaced it with a circle
00:13:777 (5) - Move it in a better place that it flows better with circle 4
00:16:696 (1) - Delete, replace with a circle then slider which deletes 00:17:020 (2)
00:17:344 (4) - Ctrl + J then move it down to the circle
00:22:534 (5,6,1) - Uncomfortable and awkward
00:31:128 (2) - Rotate 180 & Ctrl + G

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-10-07T23:32:57+00:00

Dustinati wrote:
Nice

easy
This is the only diff that doesn't have the Kiai section, please add Ok

HARD
00:26:588 (3,4) - add the blue ticks?? Nop

LIGHT insane
00:18:317 (2,3) - why not spread out more for more emphasize since LOUd noise Ok
00:26:588 (3,4) - add blue ticks??????????????????????????????????? Nop

Thanks For Modding

Baeguetteman

11 posts

Joined September 2016

Baeguetteman 2017-10-08T02:20:39+00:00

Mod

Bread Paradise
00:03:231 (3,4,5,6)- Stack (3) and (5) at the location of (3) because both represent the bells while (4) and (6) represent drums. It will increase the difficulty a little bit though. What you do with (6) is your stuff, but it could get the same DS as it is from (3) to (4). Something like THIS or maybe something like THIS. It would look and represent the music better.
00:10:209 (7,2)- Stack (7) on the end of the slider (2). It's an overlap.
00:19:452 (1)- This slider doesnt end on a note. I would use a 1/2 slider instead of a 3/4 slider. Especially because it is the only 3/4 slider you used in this map.
00:23:344 (1,3)- Stack (3) on the end of the slider (1) to prevent the overlap.
That's it for this difficulty. Good job! Well designed.♥

Marianna's Insane
00:08:101 - Add a note on (2). That would represent the music better and it keeps the flow.
00:10:696 - same goes for here. Add a note on the following slider-start to keep the flow.
00:21:885 (1,2,1)- Nope. Anti flow feels bad here. I would do something like THIS.
That's it. Also nice designed.♥

Maxter's Insane
00:16:696 (1,2)- I would use a circle and then a slider instead. Represents the music better.
00:25:777 (6)- Use a 1/1 slider instead of a 1/2 reverse slider. The reverse point has no note on it.
That's it. In my opinion to many reverse sliders, but that is okay.

Light Insane
I wouldn't change anything.♥

Hard
00:31:128 (1,5)- Place (5) on the end of the slider (1) to prevent overlap again.

Gj.♥

Shaxter's Advanced
00:06:313 (4,1)- Stack (1) on (4) and then move the following sliders at 00:07:165 to prevent overlap & constant DS.
00:16:534 (3,4)- They are placed to close to each other.
The map in general needs a refresh. The design, timing and the DS is to confusing for a 2.4* map.

Shogun's Normal
I would think of remapping this too.

Ataraxia's Easy
Totally fine.♥

Marianna

1,429 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2017-10-08T15:02:00+00:00

@SST SnowTiger Sorry nothing fixed, thanks for modding~

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-10-08T19:13:14+00:00

SST SnowTiger wrote:
Shogun's Normal
I would think of remapping this too. huh

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-10-08T20:21:11+00:00

fixed something, in-game with SST SnowTiger

tryrf

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TitleUnicode:青春は食べ物です
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ArtistUnicode:Petit Milady
Creator:yShadowXOP_
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Source:パンでPeace!
Tags:悠木碧 竹達彩奈 yuuki aoi taketatsu ayana プチミレディ opening CALENDAR GIRL short pan de peace _MasterTSP ShogunMoon Ataraxia Marianna
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152,367,11344,1,0,0:0:0:0:
62,322,11669,6,0,L|70:216,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,161,12317,2,0,L|148:102,1,50,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,63,12642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,67,12966,2,0,L|328:61,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,62,13290,1,8,0:0:0:0:
363,62,13452,2,0,P|383:108|368:165,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,198,13939,1,8,0:0:0:0:
254,236,14263,6,0,L|261:356,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,365,14912,2,0,P|380:362|420:365,1,50,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
450,371,15236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
501,284,15561,2,0,L|496:217,1,50,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
487,185,15885,1,8,0:0:0:0:
487,185,16047,2,0,P|443:161|385:171,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,193,16534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,247,16858,6,0,L|157:239,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,167,17507,2,0,L|34:173,1,50,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,210,17831,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,210,17993,2,0,P|-6:257|12:319,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,341,18479,1,8,0:0:0:0:
33,341,18642,2,0,L|153:328,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,325,19128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,301,19452,6,0,P|268:253|293:201,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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192,109,20425,1,8,0:0:0:0:
253,29,20750,2,0,P|304:23|354:52,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,86,21236,2,0,L|484:81,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
506,117,21723,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,206,22047,6,0,L|468:322,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,354,22534,2,0,P|402:338|348:356,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,373,23020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
215,366,23344,2,0,L|152:363,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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115,355,23831,2,0,P|100:308|123:252,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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378,238,31615,1,2,0:0:0:0:
378,238,31777,2,0,P|394:284|374:347,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,366,32263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,32425,12,0,33561,0:0:0:0:

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-10-08T22:04:44+00:00

SST SnowTiger wrote:
Bread Paradise
00:03:231 (3,4,5,6)- Stack (3) and (5) at the location of (3) because both represent the bells while (4) and (6) represent drums. It will increase the difficulty a little bit though. What you do with (6) is your stuff, but it could get the same DS as it is from (3) to (4). Something like THIS or maybe something like THIS. It would look and represent the music better.
00:10:209 (7,2)- Stack (7) on the end of the slider (2). It's an overlap.
00:19:452 (1)- This slider doesnt end on a note. I would use a 1/2 slider instead of a 3/4 slider. Especially because it is the only 3/4 slider you used in this map.
00:23:344 (1,3)- Stack (3) on the end of the slider (1) to prevent the overlap.
That's it for this difficulty. Good job! Well designed.♥

Light Insane
I wouldn't change anything.♥

Hard
00:31:128 (1,5)- Place (5) on the end of the slider (1) to prevent overlap again.
Gj.♥

All Fixed Thanks For Modding

Brajaan313

21 posts

Joined January 2016

Brajaan313 2017-11-03T21:34:32+00:00

M4M

[Bread Paradise]

00:03:231 (3,4,5,6) - this spacing change is not needed because the music doesn't have that much of a change there

00:05:988 (3) - maybe a bit closer to green slider? because after slider (2) is the same spacing as (3) to (4)

00:09:885 (5,6,7) - wouldn't a inverted triangle fit more here?

00:12:155 (3,4) - it goes into different directions which makes flow not work here a bit unless it is intentional then it's fine

00:26:912 (1,2,3,4,1) - maybe a slight curve would be more aesthetical?

[Marianna's Insane]

00:02:421 (1) - this slider ends on red tick where the music has a strong sound on white tick. maybe change it?

00:03:231 - add a circle

00:08:263 (2) - move this circle to 00:08:101 because there is a strong sound for single circle

00:27:479 (1) - no hitsound on end of slider?

[Maxter's Insane]

00:08:101 (1,2,3) - too high spacing for a 4.5 star insane in my opinion

00:14:912 (3) - closer to slider?

00:15:561 (1) - same^ (because of the music flow. they are right on the next tick)

[Light Insane]

Nothing wrong as for me.

And here i end my mod because i am not good in modding or mapping low diffs. Hope this will be usefull!

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-11-03T21:54:07+00:00

Brajaan313 wrote:
M4M

[Bread Paradise]

00:03:231 (3,4,5,6) - this spacing change is not needed because the music doesn't have that much of a change there yes, the music picks up more "intensity" in that part so I made those jumps

00:05:988 (3) - maybe a bit closer to green slider? because after slider (2) is the same spacing as (3) to (4) OK?

00:09:885 (5,6,7) - wouldn't a inverted triangle fit more here? Fix

00:12:155 (3,4) - it goes into different directions which makes flow not work here a bit unless it is intentional then it's fine Intentional

00:26:912 (1,2,3,4,1) - maybe a slight curve would be more aesthetical?Ok

Thanks For Modding!

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

-Aerith- 2017-11-08T22:51:21+00:00

NM FROM MY QUEUE ~

Ataraxia's Easy

-00:13:615 you forgot to add whistle in here lol
-00:18:804 add whistle

Shaxter's Advanced

-00:16:858 fix this blanket pls ~
-00:20:101 same

Yup Looks Good to me , GOOD LUCK ~~

Chanyah

1,845 posts

Joined November 2014

Chanyah 2017-11-09T06:47:06+00:00

From my queue ~ Giving a short mod - Note - This is me being picky and somewhat of a nazi atm

General

In bread paradise I do not see a reason for such 7 hp tbh --> lower it down to 6 or 6.5 at least seems more reasonable imo (Although I don't pay much attention to 30s maps)
Ok Also in Maxter Insane is also 7 hp and whilst Marianna's Insane is 6.2 - For the sake of consistency if you are not going to change above - at least change Maxter Insane to hp 6
Maxter Insane od be better off as just 8
Turn off Widescreen support on all difficulties

Bread Paradise

00:21:236 (2) - pretty minor but I feel it it better if you curve the slider end a bit more toward the right

Light Insane

00:02:421 (1) - just being a bit picky but can this be less curve at the top - not too much but it just look a bit weird as is but no need to change if you don't wish to.

Maxter's Insane

In general, I feel it should be polish some more all around and some patterns needs some more work before consider ready for rank since it feel sorta of random (this is just me rabbling - the map looks pretty ok for the most part tbh so please don't take above personal)

00:01:286 (1) - this would look better imo if bring the head of the slider up some more
00:02:096 (2,3,4) - ok this is a bit weird --> I feel to say that you giving emphasis on (3) and I don't hear any strong beat (like the bell or the drum) whilst (2) you gave little emphasis and so onto 4 - You are giving more emphasis to the weak beat in the background here which doesn't truly describe what are you following here - like here 00:03:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - although I don't like the pattern design much - I do see more clearly what you are following than what you are before this
00:06:313 (8) - (Nazi) can you please move this up a little so wouldn't being touching the slider XD
00:16:696 (1) - eh not sure what you are trying to emphasis here - the vocals and the finish is much stronger on the white tick here 00:16:858 - (which is also a good starting place for a nc) but you have not make this clickable which I really felt it should be more than what is now - others time you didn't ignore the fact that the vocals or finish needed to be emphasize like here for an example 00:14:263 (1) - so I don't see how this could be any different as it just inconsistent to me

I suppose it isn't that short

I really need to go to bed - If ya see any points that I failed to explain good or grammar mistakes, please forgive

GL on ya map

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-11-09T19:17:24+00:00

-Aerith- wrote:
NM FROM MY QUEUE ~

Ataraxia's Easy
-00:13:615 you forgot to add whistle in here lol Ok
-00:18:804 add whistle OK

Yup Looks Good to me , GOOD LUCK ~~

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-11-09T19:18:25+00:00

Hailie wrote:
From my queue ~ Giving a short mod - Note - This is me being picky and somewhat of a nazi atm

General
In bread paradise I do not see a reason for such 7 hp tbh --> lower it down to 6 or 6.5 at least seems more reasonable imo (Although I don't pay much attention to 30s maps) Ok
Ok Also in Maxter Insane is also 7 hp and whilst Marianna's Insane is 6.2 - For the sake of consistency if you are not going to change above - at least change Maxter Insane to hp 6
Maxter Insane od be better off as just 8
Turn off Widescreen support on all difficulties
Bread Paradise
00:21:236 (2) - pretty minor but I feel it it better if you curve the slider end a bit more toward the right Ok
Light Insane
00:02:421 (1) - just being a bit picky but can this be less curve at the top - not too much but it just look a bit weird as is but no need to change if you don't wish to. Ok
GL on ya map Thanks For Modding

Pozy

160 posts

Joined March 2016

Pozy 2017-11-13T08:47:10+00:00

[Ataraxia's Easy - Light Insane]
all good

[Maxter's Insane]
there are many kicksliders which are kinda gnarly, maybe make them more direct to the prev note? (idk if you understand :s)

[Marianna's Insane]
00:02:421 (1,2,3,4) - reshape this slider a little better than i did Xd and do as following: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9531432
00:08:101 (2) - add a circle here like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9531436
00:10:696 (3,1) - maybe add a circle here and stack it over the slider?

[Bread Paradise]

00:01:934 (2) - delete slider and replace it with a tiangle like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9531417
00:07:128 (2) - same here like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9531419

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-11-13T14:11:53+00:00

Pozy wrote:
[Bread Paradise]

00:01:934 (2) - delete slider and replace it with a tiangle like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9531417 i think it's best to reverse slider
00:07:128 (2) - same here like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9531419^ same

Thanks For Modding

Marianna

1,429 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2017-11-13T14:47:19+00:00

Brajaan313 wrote:
[Marianna's Insane]

00:02:421 (1) - this slider ends on red tick where the music has a strong sound on white tick. maybe change it? for me its fine

00:03:231 - add a circle why?

00:08:263 (2) - move this circle to 00:08:101 because there is a strong sound for single circle i'm not following this sound

00:27:479 (1) - no hitsound on end of slider? nope

Pozy wrote:
[Marianna's Insane]
00:02:421 (1,2,3,4) - reshape this slider a little better than i did Xd and do as following: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9531432 no lol
00:08:101 (2) - add a circle here like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9531436 this looks bad
00:10:696 (3,1) - maybe add a circle here and stack it over the slider? ?

Thanks for modding~

Nekoraw

99 posts

Joined March 2014

Nekoraw 2017-11-14T16:00:47+00:00

m4m dos brodi
meu mapa: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/679698

Ataraxia's Easy
- 00:06:475 (1) - o final desse slider não tá snappado, e só consegui corrigir mudando no bloco de notas, em hitobjects (colocar a linha em azul como 32,154,6480 https://puu.sh/ylSH3/3adc09ea6d.png tava 32,154,6475, 5ms errado)
- o snapping não tá 100% certo no mapa https://puu.sh/ylSMD/a0f153d55a.png (já que todos os easy tem que ter distance snap iguais)

Shogun's Normal
- i think there is a lot of overlaps in this diff and it will be hard to new players do read this, i would at least change the stack leniency to get easier to read

Shaxter's Advanced
Para o Shadow:
- 00:31:777 (2) - eu removeria o whistle daqui porque esse não importa quantas vezes eu tente ouvir a música, não consigo entender qual ritmo ele tá seguindo, ou então deletar o slider e fazer um círculo em 00:31:939

Hard
- 00:11:020 (3,4) - o flow entre esses dois objects ta meio estranho, eu daria um ctrl+g no 00:11:182 (4) - e moveria um pouco para cima https://puu.sh/ylTAC/2e405da357.png

Light Insane
- eu achei estranho começar os jumps e vir dois sliders 00:09:723 (4,5) - quebrando um pouco o flow do mapa, eu transformaria os sliders em círculos, não muito separados, mas pelo menos de uma maneira que seja agradável de mirar e acertar eles
- 00:22:047 (1) - eu colocaria ele um pouco mais pra baixo, pra evitar missread
- 00:26:588 (3) - acho que foi de propósito mas ficou meio estranho esse slider 00:26:588 (3) - não ter whistle e esse ter 00:26:912 (4) - , btw eu aumentaria o reverse do 00:26:588 (3) - em 1 tick

Maxter's Insane
- 00:03:556 (4,5) - trocar o 4 e o 5 de lugar daria um flow mais confortável na hora de mirar o slider em 00:03:880 (6) -
- 00:09:561 (3) - esse 3 atrás do slider vai dar um bocado de missread
- 00:20:263 (4) - ctrl+g nesse slider vai melhorar o sentido do flow
- o mesmo nesse slider 00:23:182 (2) -
- 00:30:966 (1) - eu colocaria um whistle aqui pra dar um feedback sonoro, porque teoricamente esse circulo não segue nada na musica

Marianna's Insane
- 00:10:371 (1,2) - acho que clap pra representar o final do jump nesses dois círculos seria melhor do que o finish
- 00:24:804 (2,3,4) - clap nesses círculos daria uma ênfase melhor no triple
- 00:29:993 (2,3,2,3) - ok eu daria overlap nesses circulos pra evitar missread nisso

Bread Paradise
- 00:31:128 (1) - acho que mover o tail desse slider um pouco pra esquerda seria mais daora de jogar https://puu.sh/ylUmr/e86a608f56.png

esse mapset é bem completo na minha opnião, jaja vira mapa de farm kek

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-11-14T23:10:41+00:00

Nekoraw wrote:
m4m dos brodi
meu mapa: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/679698

Shaxter's Advanced
Para o Shadow:
- 00:31:777 (2) - eu removeria o whistle daqui porque esse não importa quantas vezes eu tente ouvir a música, não consigo entender qual ritmo ele tá seguindo, ou então deletar o slider e fazer um círculo em 00:31:939 Vou pensar sobre isto

Hard
- 00:11:020 (3,4) - o flow entre esses dois objects ta meio estranho, eu daria um ctrl+g no 00:11:182 (4) - e moveria um pouco para cima https://puu.sh/ylTAC/2e405da357.png Ok

Light Insane
- eu achei estranho começar os jumps e vir dois sliders 00:09:723 (4,5) - quebrando um pouco o flow do mapa, eu transformaria os sliders em círculos, não muito separados, mas pelo menos de uma maneira que seja agradável de mirar e acertar eles OK, irei colocar jumps
- 00:22:047 (1) - eu colocaria ele um pouco mais pra baixo, pra evitar missread Ok
- 00:26:588 (3) - acho que foi de propósito mas ficou meio estranho esse slider 00:26:588 (3) - não ter whistle e esse ter 00:26:912 (4) - , btw eu aumentaria o reverse do 00:26:588 (3) - em 1 tick Ok

Bread Paradise
- 00:31:128 (1) - acho que mover o tail desse slider um pouco pra esquerda seria mais daora de jogar https://puu.sh/ylUmr/e86a608f56.png Eu acho que não, ficaria estranho na jogabilidade :<

esse mapset é bem completo na minha opnião, jaja vira mapa de farm kek XD

Obrigado pelo mod

EMachine03

49 posts

Joined December 2015

EMachine03 2017-11-20T23:21:53+00:00

From #modreqs

(Warning: I haven't modded a beatmap in about a year, so if this mod sucks please don't get mad at me)
Normal:
00:03:069 (4,5,6) - Comment: I understand that these notes are being matched up to the drums, but the drums are barely audible in the song. I actually had to retry this part a few times to get the rhythms down. You can keep these notes like this, but I would recommend matching them up to the chimes, especially considering that this is a normal difficulty. You don't have to follow this one, it's just something I felt while playtesting.
00:12:642 (3) - Add a clap here.
00:15:236 (3) - ^
00:26:263 (5,6) - Add claps to both sliders to fit previous hitsound style.
Overall, pretty solid difficulty. Good work.
Advanced:
00:17:020 - Comment: I feel like there's a hit circle missing here.
00:22:047 - Comment: I sort of feel like the map's general "speed", for lack of a better term, increases quite a bit here. When playtesting, I found myself getting behind on this part and not being able to adjust to the increase of the slider's speed. I might just be insane though. I am primarily referring to 00:22:534 (3,4,5,1,2) - .
Over all, this is a pretty solid mapset. I hope to see this ranked. Thanks.

IggyLp

5 posts

Joined January 2016

IggyLp 2017-11-21T14:24:29+00:00

Some Suggestions:

Easy: 00:02:421 the Slider should be one Tick longer
00:03:394 this circle must be replaced one tick further

Shaxter's Advanced: 00:05:988 The 3 has to be further from the 4
00:17:182 The 4 Slider should be further away from the 3 slider
00:21:236 This 1 Slider could be nearer to the previous 3 slider

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-11-23T21:57:38+00:00

Nekoraw wrote:
m4m dos brodi

Shogun's Normal
- i think there is a lot of overlaps in this diff and it will be hard to new players do read this, i would at least change the stack leniency to get easier to read :v

EMachine03 wrote:
From #modreqs
(Warning: I haven't modded a beatmap in about a year, so if this mod sucks please don't get mad at me)
Normal:
00:03:069 (4,5,6) - Comment: I understand that these notes are being matched up to the drums, but the drums are barely audible in the song. I actually had to retry this part a few times to get the rhythms down. You can keep these notes like this, but I would recommend matching them up to the chimes, especially considering that this is a normal difficulty. You don't have to follow this one, it's just something I felt while playtesting.
00:12:642 (3) - Add a clap here.
00:15:236 (3) - ^
00:26:263 (5,6) - Add claps to both sliders to fit previous hitsound style.
Overall, pretty solid difficulty. Good work.

Over all, this is a pretty solid mapset. I hope to see this ranked. Thanks.

No reply mean fixed~

Thanks for modding!

l

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 10534
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.4

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Title:Seishun Wa Tabemono Desu
TitleUnicode:青春は食べ物です
Artist:Petit Milady
ArtistUnicode:Petit Milady
Creator:yShadowXOP_
Version:Shogun's Normal
Source:パンでPeace!
Tags:悠木碧 竹達彩奈 yuuki aoi taketatsu ayana プチミレディ opening CALENDAR GIRL short pan de peace _MasterTSP ShogunMoon Ataraxia Marianna
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OnlyEasyPP

13 posts

Joined September 2016

OnlyEasyPP 2017-11-26T19:39:54+00:00

Hello! from #Modreqs.
Bread Paradise
00:22:047 (1,2) - It's uncomfortable going from that slider to the next one , I would recommend using ctrl + h on that part.

The entire Mapset looks good , good luck

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-11-30T12:03:08+00:00

-Only Camellia- wrote:
Hello! from #Modreqs.
Bread Paradise
00:22:047 (1,2) - It's uncomfortable going from that slider to the next one , I would recommend using ctrl + h on that part. ok,I left this part with a more comfortable movement

The entire Mapset looks good , good luck Thanks For Modding

Murmur twins

73 posts

Joined December 2015

Murmur twins 2017-12-03T10:09:17+00:00

Hi~ From my queue

Unrankable issues will be marked in red fonts

Easy

00:06:475 (1) - Unsnapped slider tail
00:22:047 (1,2) - Check blanket here

Normal

00:14:912 (2,3) - This may be a bit confusing for new players I think

Hard

00:06:313 (4) - Prefer overlap with 00:06:480 (1) at the slider start
00:15:561 (1,2) - Check blanket here

Light Insane

Seems fine for me!

Maxter

00:15:398 (5) - nc?
00:16:696 (1) - Here, may be better if replaced with a note and two 1/2 sliders after that, seems more natural

Also nc part from 00:16:696 (1) is a bit weird for me idk why

Marianna

Seems fine for me!

Bread Paradise

Seems fine for me!

Very nice mapset! GL~

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-12-03T17:49:29+00:00

siwu320 wrote:
Hi~ From my queue

Hard
00:06:313 (4) - Prefer overlap with 00:06:480 (1) at the slider start
00:15:561 (1,2) - Check blanket here

All Fixed, Thanks for Modding

-Master-

152 posts

Joined October 2015

-Master- 2017-12-03T17:49:53+00:00

siwu320 wrote:
Hi~ From my queue

Unrankable issues will be marked in red fonts
Maxter
00:15:398 (5) - nc? - Alraro!
00:16:696 (1) - Here, may be better if replaced with a note and two 1/2 sliders after that, seems more natural - Alraro!
Also nc part from 00:16:696 (1) is a bit weird for me idk why - I kept this, but I found a NC before this one that was plain unnecessary, so thank you :>

Very nice mapset! GL~

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-12-03T17:52:45+00:00

siwu320 wrote:
Hi~ From my queue

Unrankable issues will be marked in red fonts

Normal
00:14:912 (2,3) - This may be a bit confusing for new players I think i don't think so, it's work well :v

Very nice mapset! GL~

Thanks for modding!

A1caida

199 posts

Joined May 2016

A1caida 2017-12-04T11:55:54+00:00

Short maps
Like this
perfect
My Queue m4m

Bread Paradise

00:03:231 (3,4) - this sounds like 00:03:556 (5,6) - and why you place different them?
00:06:480 (1) - it can be a little confusing because of sudden sv changing
00:13:452 (3) - it is not level with 00:12:804 (1) - (a little bit)

Marianna's Insane

00:29:993 (2,3) - mapped like 1/4
00:30:479 (2,3) - ^^^ (ds plz)

Maxter's Insane

00:02:258 (3) - a little bit far like 00:02:096 (2) -
00:17:182 (3,4,5) - ds plz
put this 00:20:263 (4) - or these 00:19:939 (2,3) - into "holes" 00:20:588 (5) -

Light Insane

00:06:480 (1) - it can be a little confusing because of sudden sv changing
00:27:236 (1) - too far from 00:26:912 (4) - I think

Short mod :C
Good luck!

Last edited by A1caida 2017-12-05T12:10:16+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Hollow Delta

793 posts

Joined March 2015

Hollow Delta 2017-12-05T05:02:35+00:00

m4m from my queue

Bread Paradise

00:07:615 (1) - Compare this to 00:02:421 (1) - spacing seems surprisingly large yet the song as kept the same intensity. ctrl+g 1 because I think it would make it more consistent.
00:09:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think having all of these claps at the same volume doesn't fit the slowly rising intensity. I suggest placing green lines at 00:09:398 - 00:09:723 - 00:10:047 - 40, 55, 70 volume respectively.
00:11:669 (1,2) - To me this looks like a bit difficult to play. The stream and 1 was following a clockwise direction, but it switches to counter-clockwise on 2 which is the weaker sound compared to 1. When you switch the direction of your circular flow on weak sounds it feels unnatural, so that's why I think it would play better if the pattern was arranged in a way that incorporates circular motion. https://puu.sh/yzC9q/6d5b1d79a6.jpg
00:14:263 (1,2) - Similar to above, I feel like the direction of flow should switch on stronger sounds to better compliment the music.
00:19:939 (3,4) - I think this rhythm doesn't fit here because there isn't 2 distinct sounds that could be represented by 2 clicks. I think a 3/4 slider fits better as the sound here you could map is the vocal. https://puu.sh/yzCxE/fd758288c9.png

Marianna's Insane

00:08:263 (2,3) - I think you should map the bell here as that is louder than the subtle beats mapped with 2-3. You mapped it at 00:08:750 (4) - so I think it would be more consistent and readable if it was mapped in the first point.
00:10:858 (1) - Because you used the same NC pattern for this note as done with the 1/2 rhythm at 00:09:723 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - this 2/1 gap might be misread as 1/2 distance. I think if you want to contrast this better you can create an antijump by stacking the notes like https://puu.sh/yzCYK/e10eb1c0fd.jpg in the pic I applied a .5x sv to the slider because I thought it fit the rising vibe and flowwed into the stream better.
00:22:047 - From here to 00:25:696 - You use a perfectly vertical / horizontal structure. There's actually a misalignment at 00:22:534 (3) - but the rest of the notes included in this time frame were perfectly horizontal or vertical, which I think is odd because the song hasn't changed much and we're used to looking at the diff from a certain angle. Rotating this section slightly I think would make these patterns look better and fit with the rest of the map.

Maxter's Insane

My general concerns with this diff are how it's patterns look. You incorporated linear and circular patterns which is great, but the way they fit together visually is important as well because you want clear patterns that can be read easily. If you'll let me point out some examples;

00:02:096 (2,3,4) - From 1-00:12:317 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 4 your direction is counter-clockwise. 4 is a comparably strong note so it makes sense why you would switch the direction of that flow here. I think the problem is you went from circular to linear flow on 3-4 so it makes the pattern look random. I think if you arranged the slider in a way where you incorporate both linear and circular flow at the same time the map can play much better and will look more organized. https://puu.sh/yzDyg/ba6571bcfc.jpg
00:12:317 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Here there is no circular motion. The way you go back and forth with the patterns on the strong beats at 00:12:804 (1,3) - makes sense, but then at 00:13:777 (5) - it doesn't switch directions. While the last note is playable, it is unexpected because you mapped it differently at 1 and 3. For this pattern I suggest rotating 5 so it switches direction on the strong beats so you establish a pattern to compliment the rhythm.
00:15:398 (5,6,7,8) - 5 goes up, but 6 is below. This contradicts the expected location of 6 because naturally players follow a circular and linear pattern. 7-8 the patterns play against what they imply. What I mean is 7 is counter-clockwise while 8 is clockwise. They cancel each other out, so it makes this pattern difficult to play. This is where you would want to incorporate circular and linear flow because if some parts play harder over others but they share the same intensity then the map plays inconsistently. That's why it's important to take into consideration how certain patterns play over others so you can guarantee consistency.

Bottom line is you need to have consistency, or similarity in the way your patterns play so as to compliment the music. I highly suggest going through and checking to make sure your patterns follow a consistent pattern so as they don't break a player's expectation.

Light Insane

00:26:588 (3,4) - Considering how the distance from 2-3 looks similar to the distance of 4-5 yet they're on different snappings makes me think this would be difficult to read. 00:26:588 (3,4) - I suggest to either extend 3 to 3 reverses or shorten 4 to 2 reverses for consistency.

Shaxter's Advanced

00:16:534 (3) - I think having the slider end on a sound stronger than the one it starts on would play unnaturally as it takes more effort to click than to release, so I think it would make sense to compliment the song with that in mind.

Ataraxia's Easy

00:18:155 (2) - I think this is a snapping error. It sounds more accurate at 00:18:317 (2) - if you want to contrast the 3/2 difference in the timeline you can stack the note under 1 and stack 00:19:452 (1) - under the previous note. If you decide to fix the snapping this way boost the stack leniency up to 8 so the notes don't perfectly overlap. Criteria doesn't like perfect overlaps hgwouls;sghn
unsnapped object at 00:06:475 (1) - in Ataraxia's Easy. Rest of diffs look good.

Rest of diffs look great. gl!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?time_cont ... 3fqaaeTSfU Metadata. You had it correct, just show this to bn when set is ready.

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Asuka_- 2017-12-05T15:06:59+00:00

hey. let's go
check meta and topdiff only.

top diff

00:03:231 (3,4,5,6) - seems overdone for such a calm part in the map.
replace some circles to slider better.

00:13:777 - whistle

00:16:047 (2,3) - super quetionable rhythm.
why you didnt map vocal on 00:16:047 (2,3) - only. (you follow vocal mainly whole the map)
if you follow vocal, try this https://i.gyazo.com/6d2b02f4b6fa5692e8a ... ff2e45.png

00:17:993 (1,5) - looks bad. you should perfectly stack or make pallarel

00:19:452 (1) - why you use 3/4 rhythm only here? lol

00:21:236 (2,3,4,5) - same as 00:16:047 (2,3) -
i think 00:21:723 - should be clickable whether vocal follow or drum follow
try this https://i.gyazo.com/808786a0cf10f29624f ... 0c5a6e.png

00:24:155 (3) - whistle

00:29:669 (4,5,1) - whistle

rest looks fine.

general

Artist should be "petit milady"
Title shuould be "Seishun wa Tabemono desu"

refs:
http://www.petitmilady.com/
http://www.petitmilady.com/disco/disco30.html
https://www.youtube.com/watch?time_cont ... 3fqaaeTSfU (from Bubblun's post)

[]
good luck!

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-12-05T17:20:10+00:00

-Alcaida wrote:
Short maps
Like this
perfect
My Queue m4m

Bread Paradise
00:03:231 (3,4) - this sounds like 00:03:556 (5,6) - and why you place different them? i tidied :3
00:06:480 (1) - it can be a little confusing because of sudden sv changing Hmm, I don't think so
00:13:452 (3) - it is not level with 00:12:804 (1) - (a little bit) hm

Light Insane
00:06:480 (1) - it can be a little confusing because of sudden sv changing Hmm, I don't think so
00:27:236 (1) - too far from 00:26:912 (4) - I think I think not
Short mod :C
Good luck!

Thanks For Modding

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-12-05T21:17:27+00:00

Bubblun wrote:
m4m from my queue

Bread Paradise

00:07:615 (1) - Compare this to 00:02:421 (1) - spacing seems surprisingly large yet the song as kept the same intensity. ctrl+g 1 because I think it would make it more consistent.
00:09:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think having all of these claps at the same volume doesn't fit the slowly rising intensity. I suggest placing green lines at 00:09:398 - 00:09:723 - 00:10:047 - 40, 55, 70 volume respectively.
00:11:669 (1,2) - To me this looks like a bit difficult to play. The stream and 1 was following a clockwise direction, but it switches to counter-clockwise on 2 which is the weaker sound compared to 1. When you switch the direction of your circular flow on weak sounds it feels unnatural, so that's why I think it would play better if the pattern was arranged in a way that incorporates circular motion. https://puu.sh/yzC9q/6d5b1d79a6.jpg
00:14:263 (1,2) - Similar to above, I feel like the direction of flow should switch on stronger sounds to better compliment the music.
00:19:939 (3,4) - I think this rhythm doesn't fit here because there isn't 2 distinct sounds that could be represented by 2 clicks. I think a 3/4 slider fits better as the sound here you could map is the vocal. https://puu.sh/yzCxE/fd758288c9.png

Light Insane

00:26:588 (3,4) - Considering how the distance from 2-3 looks similar to the distance of 4-5 yet they're on different snappings makes me think this would be difficult to read. 00:26:588 (3,4) - I suggest to either extend 3 to 3 reverses or shorten 4 to 2 reverses for consistency.
Rest of diffs look great. gl!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?time_cont ... 3fqaaeTSfU Metadata. You had it correct, just show this to bn when set is ready.

All Fixed, Thanks For Modding

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-12-05T21:20:07+00:00

Asuka_- wrote:
hey. let's go
check meta and topdiff only.

top diff

00:03:231 (3,4,5,6) - seems overdone for such a calm part in the map.
replace some circles to slider better.

00:13:777 - whistle

00:16:047 (2,3) - super quetionable rhythm.
why you didnt map vocal on 00:16:047 (2,3) - only. (you follow vocal mainly whole the map)
if you follow vocal, try this https://i.gyazo.com/6d2b02f4b6fa5692e8a ... ff2e45.png

00:17:993 (1,5) - looks bad. you should perfectly stack or make pallarel

00:19:452 (1) - why you use 3/4 rhythm only here? lol

00:21:236 (2,3,4,5) - same as 00:16:047 (2,3) -
i think 00:21:723 - should be clickable whether vocal follow or drum follow
try this https://i.gyazo.com/808786a0cf10f29624f ... 0c5a6e.png

00:24:155 (3) - whistle

00:29:669 (4,5,1) - whistle

rest looks fine.

general

Artist should be "petit milady"
Title shuould be "Seishun wa Tabemono desu"

refs:
http://www.petitmilady.com/
http://www.petitmilady.com/disco/disco30.html
https://www.youtube.com/watch?time_cont ... 3fqaaeTSfU (from Bubblun's post)

[]
good luck!

All Fixed, Thanks for Modding

Marianna

1,429 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2017-12-07T07:33:45+00:00

Bubblun wrote:
m4m from my queue

Marianna's Insane

00:08:263 (2,3) - I think you should map the bell here as that is louder than the subtle beats mapped with 2-3. You mapped it at 00:08:750 (4) - so I think it would be more consistent and readable if it was mapped in the first point. I'm not following the Bells in either of the two sequences
00:10:858 (1) - Because you used the same NC pattern for this note as done with the 1/2 rhythm at 00:09:723 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - this 2/1 gap might be misread as 1/2 distance. I think if you want to contrast this better you can create an antijump by stacking the notes like https://puu.sh/yzCYK/e10eb1c0fd.jpg in the pic I applied a .5x sv to the slider because I thought it fit the rising vibe and flowwed into the stream better. The NC here 00:09:074 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - is because of the jumps and here 00:10:858 (1,1) - is because of the sudden change of pace
00:22:047 - From here to 00:25:696 - You use a perfectly vertical / horizontal structure. There's actually a misalignment at 00:22:534 (3) - but the rest of the notes included in this time frame were perfectly horizontal or vertical, which I think is odd because the song hasn't changed much and we're used to looking at the diff from a certain angle. Rotating this section slightly I think would make these patterns look better and fit with the rest of the map. I'm not going to change the entire map structure by not making symmetric sliders in certain areas

Thanks for modding~

Hollow Delta

793 posts

Joined March 2015

Hollow Delta 2017-12-07T15:32:59+00:00

yo, I'd like to clarify some things as I don't completely understand your responses.

For the first point

I'm not following the Bells in either of the two sequences

I pointed this out because the layers you mapped were a mixture of the bells and drums (00:07:128 (3,1) - point of reference) so ignoring the bell at 00:08:101 - and only focusing on those drums was unpredictable.

My second point, I get why you NCed the notes this way. I think you misunderstood what I was trying to say. My point was when you use an NC pattern of 1,2,1,2,1,2 and then add 1 at 00:10:858 (1) - as if you were still mapping 1/2 rhythm, it could be misleading to play.

My final point, I think you misunderstood me here as well. I'm not asking you to change the entire map structure. I'm also not asking you to avoid symmetry. My issue here is when your structure is mapped on a tilted axis, but have one section on a perfectly straight axis looks out of place. I'm not suggesting to redo it, I'm suggesting rotate it slightly so it fits with the rest of the structure. The patterns would still remain the same.

Marianna

1,429 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2017-12-08T04:16:47+00:00

Bubblun wrote:
yo, I'd like to clarify some things as I don't completely understand your responses.

For the first point
I'm not following the Bells in either of the two sequences
I pointed this out because the layers you mapped were a mixture of the bells and drums (00:07:128 (3,1) - point of reference) so ignoring the bell at 00:08:101 - and only focusing on those drums was unpredictable.

My second point, I get why you NCed the notes this way. I think you misunderstood what I was trying to say. My point was when you use an NC pattern of 1,2,1,2,1,2 and then add 1 at 00:10:858 (1) - as if you were still mapping 1/2 rhythm, it could be misleading to play.

My final point, I think you misunderstood me here as well. I'm not asking you to change the entire map structure. I'm also not asking you to avoid symmetry. My issue here is when your structure is mapped on a tilted axis, but have one section on a perfectly straight axis looks out of place. I'm not suggesting to redo it, I'm suggesting rotate it slightly so it fits with the rest of the structure. The patterns would still remain the same.

fine y'll not give up, so i changed, but i'll not change all the map just because of this last think thanks

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_IxApplePie_

246 posts

Joined November 2013

_IxApplePie_ 2017-12-08T15:51:47+00:00

From NM queueee

Marianna's Insane
- 00:20:750 (1) - i'm pretty sure you can emphasis this more like you did with 00:12:804 (1) ,00:14:263 (1) , and so on.

Maxter's Insane
- 00:17:506 (4) - is this a trap? if not, don't confuse players lol

Light Insane
- 00:10:371 (1) - pretty sure you can emphasis this more cause it has more "power"(strong beat) than 00:10:210 (7)
- 00:18:479 (3) - you can give this a sharper angle to 00:18:642 (4) to have better flow + more emphasis on 00:18:642 (4)
*sry, could only find some faults in emphasizing

Shogun's Norm
- 00:08:263 (4) - instead of slider, put a circle at 00:08:425 since the slider does not follow the bell(?) bgm

Ataraxia's Easy
- ctrl + shift + a, you got a unsnapped note. ( 00:06:475 (1) ) and i'm pretty sure you need to fix some distance snap...(not sure whether you could fix them or not)

don't give me kudos if these ain't helpful!!
goodluck!

yShadowXOP_

542 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

yShadowXOP_ 2017-12-09T00:03:32+00:00

_IxApplePie_ wrote:
From NM queueee

Light Insane
- 00:10:371 (1) - pretty sure you can emphasis this more cause it has more "power"(strong beat) than 00:10:210 (7) Ok
- 00:18:479 (3) - you can give this a sharper angle to 00:18:642 (4) to have better flow + more emphasis on 00:18:642 (4)
*sry, could only find some faults in emphasizing I will try XD

don't give me kudos if these ain't helpful!!
goodluck!

Thanks For Modding

Ataraxia

673 posts

Joined February 2014

Ataraxia 2017-12-10T21:00:14+00:00

hmmm looks like i have a lot of mod to reply, sorry for all and the mapper for that

FOR THE MOTHER OF GOD WHY THAT NOT SNAPPED LOL

okye the slider whas snapped now

@IggyLp

Easy: 00:02:421 the Slider should be one Tick longer
00:03:394 this circle must be replaced one tick further

to be since, i don't understand nothing about that lol, why put one/futher tick ? i see now its fine what i have made and is fine, i don't see why switch snap instances (sorry if i see rude to you, i just don't understand the "why" of all...)

@siwu320

blanket is fine

@Bubblun

00:18:155 (2) - I think this is a snapping error. It sounds more accurate at 00:18:317 (2) - if you want to contrast the 3/2 difference in the timeline you can stack the note under 1 and stack 00:19:452 (1) - under the previous note. If you decide to fix the snapping this way boost the stack leniency up to 8 so the notes don't perfectly overlap. Criteria doesn't like perfect overlaps hgwouls;sghn

Since its a easy diff, i really don't want to "emphasss" nothing, i see u resolution in a good way to make a good map, but i wanted to do a simple thing, transform 00:18:155 (2) - in a repeat, now, its just a simple representation, with no circles, but sliders, i think now its fine to make a good flow with no need of circles emphas

unsnapped object at 00:06:475 (1) - in Ataraxia's Easy . Rest of diffs look good.

Thank you for all, if don't feel good for some of the modders, i open for a recheck

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CucumberCuc

1,316 posts

Joined January 2016

CucumberCuc 2017-12-11T12:03:19+00:00

Hi :3

Ataraxia's Easy
00:06:480 (1,2,3) - hey, distance?

00:16:858 (1,2) - do better flow
00:21:398 (4,1) - a bit far

Shogun's normal
00:14:263 (1,2) - make distance better >//<

Shaxter's Advanced
The main difference of this complexity is the use of people's nicknames on the BG and it's a bit strange that this is where it is used, although I do not know if such a moment affects the ranking
00:06:313 (4,1) - strange flow
00:09:074 (1) - move a bit left?
00:17:182 (4) - it's rly strange placement, maybe do are close with next slider and make better flow with 00:16:534 (3) - ?
00:21:236 (1,2) - interesting NC pick, but it's not understand why Shadow use the same color if Master use him, maybe remake NC?
00:24:317 (3) move a bit left and make slightly far from next slider?

Maxter's Insane
00:14:750 (2,3,4) - it's slightly look is strange flow especially the slider, maybe think about change?
00:17:182 (3,4,5) - strange see this low distance when u need in all Kiai time do far objects
00:31:047 - put circle?
00:31:534 - ^
00:31:128 (2,3) - flow can be better

Marianna's Insane
00:02:907 - i think it's not good when u miss sound here

other things and diffs looks good

Ataraxia

673 posts

Joined February 2014

Ataraxia 2017-12-11T15:23:48+00:00

CucumberCuc wrote:
Hi :3 ...

Ataraxia's Easy
00:06:480 (1,2,3) - hey, distance? Hmmm... fixed ?
00:16:858 (1,2) - do better flow Hm... what patten here you don't like ? where the problem ?, if you just put "do better flow" i never gonna understand what bad the flow are here, i don't want to be rude, I have analyzed your post in general, u have more than 2 years of mapping activities and you don't explain nothing about your mod, please, if you gonna mod a map, at least try to explain something

00:21:398 (4,1) - a bit far is about the DS, if that. fixed...

Please, you NEED to explain all things in your mod, don't do a LAZY modding like that for the mother of god

other things and diffs looks good

DS fix

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CucumberCuc

1,316 posts

Joined January 2016

CucumberCuc 2017-12-11T15:38:58+00:00

Ataraxia wrote:
CucumberCuc wrote:
Hi :3 ...

Ataraxia's Easy
00:06:480 (1,2,3) - hey, distance? Hmmm... fixed ? look on this: http://prntscr.com/hm1aq2, http://prntscr.com/hm1bdp; on Easy difficulty maximum distance between objects is 0.03x
00:16:858 (1,2) - do better flow Hm... what patten here you don't like ? where the problem ?, if you just put "do better flow" i never gonna understand what bad the flow are here, i don't want to be rude, I have analyzed your post in general, u have more than 2 years of mapping activities and you don't explain nothing about your mod, please, if you gonna mod a map, at least try to explain something well, u have this moment https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9741743 and it's not good, fix to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9741775 and it's be look better

00:21:398 (4,1) - a bit far is about the DS, if that. fixed...

Please, you NEED to explain all things in your mod, don't do a LAZY modding like that for the mother of god

other things and diffs looks good

UPD1: 00:13:615 (4) - i think be better if u do 1.21x distance
00:14:263 (1,2) - it's a bit far, like i say above - on Easy diff maximum distance 0.03x
00:21:398 (4) - 1.2x?

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-12-11T18:02:52+00:00

_IxApplePie_ wrote:
From NM queueee

Shogun's Norm
- 00:08:263 (4) - instead of slider, put a circle at 00:08:425 since the slider does not follow the bell(?) bgm

don't give me kudos if these ain't helpful!!
goodluck!

CucumberCuc wrote:
Hi :3

Shogun's normal
00:14:263 (1,2) - make distance better >//<

other things and diffs looks good

All fixed!

Thanks for modding!!

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Alexsander

1,081 posts

Joined November 2016

Alexsander 2017-12-11T21:43:39+00:00

[Easy]

00:25:777 (3) - Melhora esse slider está muito feio do jeito que ele foi colocado, vc poderia diminui a curva dele mais ou menos assim
Ex:
00:24:642 (1) - você poderia colocar o ponto vemelho desse slider mais pro lado do slider head pois melhor visualmente
Ex:

[Normal]

00:01:286 (1,2) - Avoid this overlap costs nothing (same thing happens in(00:06:480 (1,2) - )
ex:
00:12:317 (2,3) - This was inconsistent I think I should have a reverse in 00:12:155 - the vocal and hitmo will become much more consistent.
00:17:344 - As before, I think there must be a reverse, but it's your choice.

[Advanced]

00:07:128 (2) - esse reverse ficou estranho, você poderia colocar 3 circulos ai ficaria melhor e mais agradável em jogo.

[Hard]

00:08:588 (3,4) - Coloca um slider 1/2 pois está interferindo 00:09:398 (2,3) - já que a musica da uma parada e esse 2 circle atrapalham já que os 2 próximos estão aumentando, dificil de explicar mas espero que entenda =/

[Light Insane]

00:15:398 (5) - Creio que se diminuir o DS para deixar melhor visualmente não tem problema mas é de sua escolha
ex:

[Maxter's Insane]

00:03:556 (4,5) - muito distante, a relação de aumento no DS foi uma diferença muito grande em comparação a esta 00:03:231 (2,3) - você poderia deixar em 2.9x de DS e o som mais forte(00:03:880 (1) - ) do jeito que está.
00:14:263 (1) - Essa curva toda não ficou legal reconsidere diminuir um pouco, é sua escolha
00:16:371 (8) - Não entendi esse DS alto pois o vocal forte está em 00:15:398 (5,7) -
00:23:182 (2) - DS poderia ser maior para ressaltar esse vocal acredito que seria interessante

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