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Volta

1,622 posts

Joined March 2014

Volta 2016-04-13T10:38:53+00:00

kasih kodenya dulu aja biar diupdate ._.

Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-04-13T10:41:09+00:00

udah ._.

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-04-13T12:45:25+00:00

Volta wrote:
kasih kodenya dulu aja biar diupdate ._.

Professor Gila wrote:
udah ._.

oke, bentar.. `L_`

edit:
Updated Lidah & Momo diff
sebisa mungkin buat check combo & hitsound, terutama buat lidahapi.

irc modding,. Gan
janjian waktulah, simpel to do

ursa

1,302 posts

Joined April 2010

ursa 2016-04-15T11:34:55+00:00

Random Mod , moga2 bisa bermanfaat

Volt's Rain
Comment : Seluruh partnya udah bagus & gak ada major issue dari segi pattern klo menurut gwa , cman gwa
notice beberapa part aja yang perlu di atur dikit dari posisi distance biar flow jumpnya seimbang.

00:18:531 (5) - Slider ini bisa di geser dikit ke kiri (x=320) biar nanti tenakan dash di pattern selanjutnya bisa lebih optimal
00:25:364 (4) - slider ini bisa di ubah ke short jump sih ,mengingat nada pianonya lumayan naik di sini
00:28:031 (5) - ^ same
01:07:531 (2) - slidernya bisa di geser ke kiri (x=240) biar tekanan Hdash di sini gak terlalu tinggi
01:13:531 (1,2,3) - posisi jumpnya pas mulai dari 01:13:031 (5) - rada kerasa minimum jumpnya. rekomendasi gwa , coba pake posisi seperti ini > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4934664 biar jarak jumpnya lumayan

Momot's Platter
Comment : Overall beat udah bagus, cman gwa liat pattern awal rada kurang distancenya (pas gwa testrun di edit bagian awal rada gampang di catch tampa pake dash)

00:30:697 (5) - slidernya mungkin bisa di geser ke (x=256) biar bisa nambah jump di
01:01:864 (1,2,3) - beat ini 01:02:197 (2) - bisa di geser ke kanan biar ada jarak dikit
01:36:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - karena ini di bagian akhir, mending di naikin dikit jaraknya , biar gak di bilang serupa ama pattern sebelumnya ([00:19:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - )[/list]

Prof Gila's Salad
Comment : Overall pattern rada kurang balance gitu & perlu di improve/nerf dikit, bagian yang gwa mention di bawah ini mungkin bisa membantu banget buat ngebalance patternya

00:08:864 (2,3,4) - posisi 00:09:197 (4) - buat dash jump di awal2 sih rada gak fit . mendingan pake dash jump di bagian kiai aja
00:26:531 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - pattern ini kayaknya masih bisa di improve > (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4934827 variasi versi gw )
00:29:531 (6,1,2,3,4) - ini juga, soalnya patternya rada numpuk ke kiri https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4934832
00:32:864 (1,2,3) - posisi ini sih punya potensi buat dash jump, > rekomendasi gw https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4934837
00:35:531 (3,4,5) - ^ same
00:42:197 (4,5,6) - sebisa mungkin hindari posisi stacking antar beat dari 00:41:364 (3) - , biar patternya gak terasa bosan
01:02:864 (1,2,3,4) - ^ same
01:08:864 (1,2,3,4) - beat ini bisa di improve jadi jump. rekomendasi gw > osu.ppy.sh/ss/4934866
01:11:864 (5,6,7,1) - *beat ini juga > (sebisa mungkin hindari stacking sama posisi )

Cup
Comment: Overall udah bagus Cupnya , btw sorry gwa gak bisa nemu issue ataupun distance problem. tapi gwa rasa udah pas patternya

Overall Cuman itu dari segi pattern , goodluck

Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-04-15T13:13:37+00:00

ursa wrote:
Prof Gila's Salad
Comment : Overall pattern rada kurang balance gitu & perlu di improve/nerf dikit, bagian yang gwa mention di bawah ini mungkin bisa membantu banget buat ngebalance patternya
00:08:864 (2,3,4) - posisi 00:09:197 (4) - buat dash jump di awal2 sih rada gak fit . mendingan pake dash jump di bagian kiai aja | yea yea
00:26:531 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - pattern ini kayaknya masih bisa di improve > (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4934827 variasi versi gw ) | mungkin kalau aku coba bikin sedikit beda ._.
00:29:531 (6,1,2,3,4) - ini juga, soalnya patternya rada numpuk ke kiri https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4934832 | mungkin kalau aku coba bikin sedikit beda ._.
00:32:864 (1,2,3) - posisi ini sih punya potensi buat dash jump, > rekomendasi gw https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4934837 | oke
00:35:531 (3,4,5) - ^ same | walau sebenarnya itu udah dibuat untuk ngejump, apa boleh buat ._.
00:42:197 (4,5,6) - sebisa mungkin hindari posisi stacking antar beat dari 00:41:364 (3) - , biar patternya gak terasa bosan | oke ._.
01:02:864 (1,2,3,4) - ^ same | ^ same
01:08:864 (1,2,3,4) - beat ini bisa di improve jadi jump. rekomendasi gw > osu.ppy.sh/ss/4934866 | oke (bukan ke rekomendasinya) ._.
01:11:864 (5,6,7,1) - *beat ini juga > (sebisa mungkin hindari stacking sama posisi ) | oke ._.

horeeeeee ursa mulai ngemod

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Momota

270 posts

Joined February 2014

Momota 2016-04-16T05:00:49+00:00

ursa wrote:
Random Mod , moga2 bisa bermanfaat

Momot's Platter
Comment : Overall beat udah bagus, cman gwa liat pattern awal rada kurang distancenya (pas gwa testrun di edit bagian awal rada gampang di catch tampa pake dash)
00:30:697 (5) - slidernya mungkin bisa di geser ke (x=256) biar bisa nambah jump di applied dan slider nomor 4 juga ikut digeser supaya pattern nya sama saat nada ini
01:01:864 (1,2,3) - beat ini 01:02:197 (2) - bisa di geser ke kanan biar ada jarak dikit applied, 1 digeser ke kiri menghindari pattern yang berulang
01:36:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - karena ini di bagian akhir, mending di naikin dikit jaraknya , biar gak di bilang serupa ama pattern sebelumnya ([00:19:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - )[/list]
applied

Overall Cuman itu dari segi pattern , goodluck

thanks 4 mod ursa!

tik tok

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Surono

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Topic Starter

Surono 2016-04-16T06:37:40+00:00

Wat de truk inet ccd

Sorry double post

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Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-04-16T06:39:20+00:00

Wwoaa Ursa., dem cetebes desu des (>L_< )

Waiting Volta, jangan lupa mod lanjutan buat lidahapi klau ada yg kurang lagi dari sugesti pak ursa

Volta

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Joined March 2014

Volta 2016-04-18T12:25:00+00:00

ursa wrote:
Random Mod , moga2 bisa bermanfaat
Volt's Rain
Comment : Seluruh partnya udah bagus & gak ada major issue dari segi pattern klo menurut gwa , cman gwa
notice beberapa part aja yang perlu di atur dikit dari posisi distance biar flow jumpnya seimbang.
00:18:531 (5) - Slider ini bisa di geser dikit ke kiri (x=320) biar nanti tenakan dash di pattern selanjutnya bisa lebih optimal fixed
00:25:364 (4) - slider ini bisa di ubah ke short jump sih ,mengingat nada pianonya lumayan naik di sini hmm. pengen konsisten ajah
00:28:031 (5) - ^ same ^
01:07:531 (2) - slidernya bisa di geser ke kiri (x=240) biar tekanan Hdash di sini gak terlalu tinggi fixed
01:13:531 (1,2,3) - posisi jumpnya pas mulai dari 01:13:031 (5) - rada kerasa minimum jumpnya. rekomendasi gwa , coba pake posisi seperti ini > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4934664 biar jarak jumpnya lumayan ok

Overall Cuman itu dari segi pattern , goodluck

thx ursa!

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Surono

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Surono 2016-04-18T16:22:07+00:00

cecete bru nngols.

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k, now

ples BN wer ar u.. I was breathink IRL

Annadine

490 posts

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Annadine 2016-04-23T15:53:16+00:00

Om sur ada bintang jatuh dari gue 🌠🌠🌠

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

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Surono 2016-04-24T13:16:05+00:00

ya ampun diralat bintangnya wekekekek. beri satu ada bintang 3
wah kurang fokus ibaratnya *ada 1 bintang diliat 3, beli AQU-

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BN ples come here ;U

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

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autofanboy 2016-05-02T10:01:14+00:00

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General]

AIMod

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Cup]

It looks great! Keep it up!

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Prof. Gila's Salad]

Gameplay

00:10:197 (1,2) - In my opinion the distance here can be enlarged to accommodate a dash. The one currently is still catchable without dashing, so it is better for you to add a dash here to urge players to dash.
00:32:864 (1,2,3) - The pattern is fine, what I wish to point is, the dash should be at 00:32:864 (1,2) - instead of 00:33:197 (2,3) - since (2) is the prominent note here, matching the rhythm with a strong clap, so as to emphasize (2) a dash should be placed to it instead of (3).
00:35:531 (3,4,5) - Same case as above.
00:38:197 (1,2,3) - This time, please reduce the distance of (2,3) with the same reason as above-listed. It is highly recommended to do so because the dash is going to cover both (2) and (3) so it will be very timed for a Salad.
00:40:864 (2,3) - You may add dash between them if you did the same like 00:32:864 (1,2,3) -
00:42:864 (6,1) - Honestly I think there should be a dash in between the notes as (1) is with Finish and so it is indicated to be a strong note. (1) also begins the new stanza so it is better to do so.
00:53:864 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This part can be easier in my opinion, players are not supposed to dash that much in Salad, but right here the dash density is very high (players will dash every 2 notes) so I think it will be much better if you reduce the dash density to dash per 4 notes, i.e You add dash at 00:56:197 (4,1) - and 00:58:864 (4,1) - for a better rhythm.
00:59:531 (2,3) - Maybe you want to add a dash here to emphasize the Finish at (3)?
01:07:531 (1,2) - The distance here can be smaller, it is very easy to miss too after catching 01:06:864 (1,2,3,1) - because there was a dash at 01:07:031 (2,3) - and people usually don't see this massive jump coming.
01:09:531 (3,4) - I think you can add a dash here.
01:10:197 (1,2,3,4) - This is changed to become a lot harder than the previous one at 01:07:531 (1,2) - because players may dash between (1,2) and (3,4). What about shortening their distances?
01:14:864 (5,6) - Add a dash if you did at 01:09:531 (3,4) - .
01:20:197 (7,8) - ^
01:32:198 (2,3) - I suggest adding a dash here, it just played out nice in my opinion.

[

Momot's Platter]

Gameplay

00:19:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is fine but the distances at (4,5) and (8,9) can be smaller, it is easy to miss if players are not having their dashes on time, in fact Platter is still not a difficulty ready for such timed jumps, so be more lenient wouldn't be punished. You can increase the curvature of the stream if you reduced the suggested distances to compensate for the difficulty.
00:32:531 (3,4) - Reduce the distance between them as what you did at 00:35:197 (3,4) - and 00:37:863 (3,4) - . The one now can be difficult because consecutive dashes are required.
00:40:531 (3,4) - ^. You may move 00:40:864 (4,5,6) - whole thing to the left.
00:52:864 (5,6,7) - This will be difficult because most of the players may dash at (6,7) too. This will result in consecutive dashes, which can be hard for them. Also the dash at (5,6) will force players to the left edge so it will be hard to catch the later-on fruits. In order to fix this, move (7) closer to the left would help.
01:06:531 (1,2,3,4) - Reduce their distances in overall, the one now is timed as both (1,2), (3,4) and (2,3) are full of dashes, this means players will usually hold dash to catch all the fruits here. You can try this if you wish to: * screenshot
01:07:031 (4,1) - Add a HDash between them won't hurt, I think. It is also suitable to do so because it begins the Kiai Time (which is the climax of the song).
01:14:197 (6,7,1,2,3) - This is very strange when during gameplay, mainly due to the uneven distances of 01:14:531 (7,1) - and 01:14:697 (1,2,3) - . I would suggest remapping this pattern.
01:36:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as 00:19:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - .

[

Volt's Rain]

Seems good!

I see improvements on this mapset, keep up the great work.
The difficulties need some minor tweaks at this point, however please check the New Combos in all difficulties, I have found various problems about them. I will recheck later if possible.

Good luck!

AFB

Volta

1,622 posts

Joined March 2014

Volta 2016-05-02T16:55:18+00:00

yay!

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-02T22:16:33+00:00

yay! [2]

finally this time, okey I will checking the NC, Preview Conflict Issue and Update

edit:
fixed Momota and lidahapi preview time, I checkd the NC and I think is fine since not over 10+ combo? lol

lidah api sama momota di check lagi combonya kepanjangan ga? di update dulu jgn lupa :U

Updated

Momota

270 posts

Joined February 2014

Momota 2016-05-03T05:35:15+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
Recheck as requested.

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[ General]

AIMod
There are audio preview time conflicts. Please check carefully.

[ Momot's Platter]

Gameplay
00:19:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is fine but the distances at (4,5) and (8,9) can be smaller, it is easy to miss if players are not having their dashes on time, in fact Platter is still not a difficulty ready for such timed jumps, so be more lenient wouldn't be punished. You can increase the curvature of the stream if you reduced the suggested distances to compensate for the difficulty.fixed jump between 4,5 and 8,9
00:32:531 (3,4) - Reduce the distance between them as what you did at 00:35:197 (3,4) - and 00:37:863 (3,4) - . The one now can be difficult because consecutive dashes are required. fixed for consecutive
00:40:531 (3,4) - ^. You may move 00:40:864 (4,5,6) - whole thing to the left. fixed, i'll try pattern like 00:35:531 -
00:52:864 (5,6,7) - This will be difficult because most of the players may dash at (6,7) too. This will result in consecutive dashes, which can be hard for them. Also the dash at (5,6) will force players to the left edge so it will be hard to catch the later-on fruits. In order to fix this, move (7) closer to the left would help. applied, ctrl+g 7 make pattern like before
01:06:531 (1,2,3,4) - Reduce their distances in overall, the one now is timed as both (1,2), (3,4) and (2,3) are full of dashes, this means players will usually hold dash to catch all the fruits here. You can try this if you wish to: * screenshot applied
01:07:031 (4,1) - Add a HDash between them won't hurt, I think. It is also suitable to do so because it begins the Kiai Time (which is the climax of the song). i'll try add dash, i think this platter need more h-dash
01:14:197 (6,7,1,2,3) - This is very strange when during gameplay, mainly due to the uneven distances of 01:14:531 (7,1) - and 01:14:697 (1,2,3) - . I would suggest remapping this pattern. remapped
01:36:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as 00:19:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - .applied

I see improvements on this mapset, keep up the great work.
The difficulties need some minor tweaks at this point, however please check the New Combos in all difficulties, I have found various problems about them. I will recheck later if possible.

Good luck!

AFB

thanks 4 mod afb

dem my mouse click broken, it must be pressed hard

rengked

osu file format v14

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Title:Kohaku no Yume
TitleUnicode:虚白ノ夢
Artist:Kanawo
ArtistUnicode:カナヲ
Creator:Surono
Version:Momot's Platter
Source:虚白ノ夢
Tags:teriyaki tomato blank dream usui mishiro momota professor gila volta
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Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-05-03T09:37:01+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
[ Prof. Gila's Salad]

Gameplay
00:10:197 (1,2) - In my opinion the distance here can be enlarged to accommodate a dash. The one currently is still catchable without dashing, so it is better for you to add a dash here to urge players to dash. | by dragging 00:10:197 (1) should be enough
00:32:864 (1,2,3) - The pattern is fine, what I wish to point is, the dash should be at 00:32:864 (1,2) - instead of 00:33:197 (2,3) - since (2) is the prominent note here, matching the rhythm with a strong clap, so as to emphasize (2) a dash should be placed to it instead of (3). | perhaps i prefer let them be, just to make a sound feedback afterwards instead of beforehand
00:35:531 (3,4,5) - Same case as above. | ^
00:38:197 (1,2,3) - This time, please reduce the distance of (2,3) with the same reason as above-listed. It is highly recommended to do so because the dash is going to cover both (2) and (3) so it will be very timed for a Salad. | perhaps? so !ye
00:40:864 (2,3) - You may add dash between them if you did the same like 00:32:864 (1,2,3) -
00:42:864 (6,1) - Honestly I think there should be a dash in between the notes as (1) is with Finish and so it is indicated to be a strong note. (1) also begins the new stanza so it is better to do so. | Remember, i only make patterns dash with sound feedback afterwards instead of beforehand, especially clap sounds meh i haven't tell anyone this in advance
00:53:864 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This part can be easier in my opinion, players are not supposed to dash that much in Salad, but right here the dash density is very high (players will dash every 2 notes) so I think it will be much better if you reduce the dash density to dash per 4 notes, i.e You add dash at 00:56:197 (4,1) - and 00:58:864 (4,1) - for a better rhythm. | alright ._.
00:59:531 (2,3) - Maybe you want to add a dash here to emphasize the Finish at (3)? | alright ._.
01:07:531 (1,2) - The distance here can be smaller, it is very easy to miss too after catching 01:06:864 (1,2,3,1) - because there was a dash at 01:07:031 (2,3) - and people usually don't see this massive jump coming. | a bit perhaps?
01:09:531 (3,4) - I think you can add a dash here. | dunno, i don't think if i have to
01:10:197 (1,2,3,4) - This is changed to become a lot harder than the previous one at 01:07:531 (1,2) - because players may dash between (1,2) and (3,4). What about shortening their distances? | mmmmm hmmmm ._.
01:14:864 (5,6) - Add a dash if you did at 01:09:531 (3,4) - . | nope
01:20:197 (7,8) - ^ | nope
01:32:198 (2,3) - I suggest adding a dash here, it just played out nice in my opinion.

well, that's all ._.

apa bener ini abis ini dapat ikon buah?

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Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-03T10:01:08+00:00

Nishizumi wrote:
kalo duaduanya diikon, mode apaan yang ngebubble coeg

Updated

Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-05-03T12:27:00+00:00

ah mana lupa lagi buat nitip map ksatria batang hitamnya

Ansane

36 posts

Joined June 2014

Ansane 2016-05-06T09:01:13+00:00

mod

Futsuu
00:25:031 (41) - add d
01:18:531 (2) - change to k

Muzukashii
01:24:865 (203) - change to d
01:25:865 (206) - change to d
01:26:197 (207) - add d

Oni
00:09:197 (24) - change to d
00:19:697 (59) - change to k
01:37:426 (55) - ^same

thanks

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-06T09:55:03+00:00

Ansane wrote:
mod
Futsuu
00:25:031 (41) - add d
01:18:531 (2) - change to k
sip buat point yg ditunjuk, ada yg gw atur atur

Muzukashii
01:24:865 (203) - change to d nope, nada tinggi ini
01:25:865 (206) - change to d ^
01:26:197 (207) - add d rip.....

Oni
00:09:197 (24) - change to d masih dalam satu suara yg similar, jadi ga begitu ngeh buat di teken pake don
00:19:697 (59) - change to k 00:19:531 - udah ada penekanan disini, kalau disitu sih ga perlu bagi gw
01:37:426 (55) - ^same same above with reason

thanks

ur welcome

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,591 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2016-05-06T15:01:09+00:00

Recheck time!

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[

General]

Nice!

[

Cup]

New Combos
* Basically the difficulty has no issues for the distances and such, but new combos because most of them are not applied to emphasize the sudden pauses of the song.

00:03:197 (5,1,2,3) - In my opinion this part should be in same combo, just like what you did for 00:00:531 (1,2,3,4) - .
00:05:864 (4,5) - ^
00:11:197 (5,1,2,3) - In same combo please. Firstly, 00:10:531 (4) - is with a prominent drum sound and it indicates the stanza change at this point, hence it means the next note is going to start a new combo. And secondly, 00:13:864 (4) - is sounding the same as 00:11:197 (5) - in the rhythm so this show that it is going to be another combo start.
00:13:864 (4,5,1,2,3) - ^
00:16:531 (4,5,1) - ^, it is also not suggested to leave a note with only single combo like 00:18:531 (1) - , it is redundant.
00:24:531 (3) - Why not add NC to this like 00:21:864 (1) - , the rhythm is the same so the beat here should be the same.
00:27:197 (5) - ^, and remove NC at 00:28:864 (1,2) - .
00:29:864 (3) - Add NC with the same reason above.
00:35:197 (4) - Add NC, consistent with 00:32:531 (1) - .
00:40:531 (5) - ^
00:42:197 (1,2,3) - Remove NC at (1). Add NC at 00:43:197 (3) - instead.
00:43:864 (4,1,2,3) - These 4 circles should be in same combo, considering the rhythm beats in the audio.
00:46:864 (4) - So you can apply NC to this note as it leaves a pause between 00:45:864 (3,4) - .
00:52:197 (5,1) - You may do the same as above for consistency, or vice versa, i.e add NC at 00:47:197 (5) - . Both will work while I will go for the former one, since 1 combo is not really matter.
00:54:531 (2) - NC like 00:49:197 (1) - .
01:07:197 (4) - Add NC? This begins a new stanza and it is a fairly prominent sound. In fact 01:07:197 (4,5,1,2) - should be in same combo.
01:09:864 (3,4,5,1) - In same combo.
01:12:531 (2,3,4,5,1) - ^. Remember to add NC at 01:15:197 (2) - .
01:20:531 (5,1,2,3) - In same combo.
01:25:864 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - ^, as the first note is sounding strong and it gives a strong rhythmic feeling.
01:28:531 (5,1,2,3) - Same combo.
01:31:198 (4,5,1,2,3) - ^
01:33:864 (4,5,1) - ^, also leaving 1 single combo thing so better avoid it.

[

Prof. Gila's Salad]

New Combos

00:06:364 (4) - Add NC here instead of 00:07:531 (1) - and 00:10:197 (1) - .
00:11:197 (3) - Add NC here as 00:10:531 (2) - is a prominent drum beat and it is better to be emphasized with a new combo.
00:15:197 (3,4,1,2) - These 4 circles should be in same combo, considering that the rhythm here is similar and you NC every 2 white tick like 00:11:197 00:12:531 (1,2,3,4) - .
00:18:197 (2) - Add NC here instead of 00:17:197 (1) - .
00:37:531 (7) - This should begin another combo and remove the one at 00:38:197 (1) - to fit the rhythm.

Gameplay
00:10:197 (1,2) - The jump here is a bit big, I would suggest moving (2) to x:392.

[

Momot's Platter]

New Combos

00:40:531 (3) - Add NC here instead of 00:39:531 (1) - to follow the rhythm like how you group combo as 00:34:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - together with (7,8).
00:42:197 (1) - You may remove NC of this with the same reason above.
01:09:864 (4) - Add NC here like what you did at 01:12:531 (1) - .
01:16:864 (8,9,1,2) - Same as above, so NC at (2) and remove the one at (1).
01:20:531 (4) - ^, add NC.
01:28:864 (5) - Better start a new combo here as it is already coming to the closing, and it is different from the Kiai Time as I hear.

[

Volt's Rain]

New Combos

00:19:197 (2) - Add NC here instead of 00:18:864 (1) - to match at the beat if you hear closely, this is the place where 1/2 stream stuff can be noticed.
01:09:864 (5) - Add NC, to fit the Finish sounds. They fit well in my opinion.
01:12:531 (4) - ^
01:15:197 (2) - Add NC here instead of 01:14:697 (1) - .
01:17:864 (5) - Add NC.
01:20:531 (4) - ^
01:23:197 (5) - ^
01:36:864 (2) - Add NC instead of 01:36:489 (1) - , similar to 00:19:197 (2) - 's case.

Basically large improvements can be seen, it only needs some fine-tuning and it is ready to go.
Call me again after fixing.

Good luck!

AFB

Surono

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Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-06T16:03:42+00:00

............ all diff fixed by me esspesially Gameplay salad fixed.
my pipol is dem spooky evil.. I cry, poke u afb!! thx for confuse me, I nub about combo cuz i am tacos xd

Updated

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Volta

1,622 posts

Joined March 2014

Volta 2016-05-06T16:04:06+00:00

blah.
me tacos too

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Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-05-06T16:04:36+00:00

edit: i just didn't notice for that ._.

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-06T16:06:04+00:00

hei faker, u dont need reply.

edit:
nice

bener2 bakal dapet ikon buah, trus itu NUKLERRRRRRRR (:

EIDT:
dah ah bobok, bauk badan gw. mau mandi trus jajan kek botjah h3eh3eh3eh. my life a bit bruken hehe~

Momota

270 posts

Joined February 2014

Momota 2016-05-06T16:24:23+00:00

chicken upright

thanks afb for fixed new combos
i think so , new combo platter less fit, but I am confused about where laying new combo, thanks afb

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autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,591 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2016-05-07T03:21:12+00:00

: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5026971/

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Bubbled!

The CtB difficulties are much improved and I think it deserves a bubble.
Good luck!

Surono

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Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-07T04:37:49+00:00

╭( )و

thank you very much, afb ;^)

MBomb

MBomb 2016-05-07T12:48:10+00:00

First mod since I got my laptop back, let's do this.

[Kantan]

00:05:864 (6,7) - This sounds better as kd instead, because of the really high pitch on 6, followed by the lower pitch on 7.
00:19:531 (20) - Personally I'd prefer this removed because I don't really like the idea of 1/2 in a kantan, but you've mentioned before that you want to leave this in, just bringing it up anyway just in case.
00:32:197 (32) - Same as above.
00:39:864 (41) - Having this as a d wouldn't be too bad, and it could help to emphasise the next note.
01:07:197 (1) - Maybe make this a D instead, I think it could sound nice considering how strong this note is compared to previous section.
01:37:239 (20) - Remove this note if you removed the 1/2s previously.

[Futsuu]

00:05:864 (9) - Same as previously, this sounds a lot better as a k in my opinion. (On all other diffs, as well).

ok sorry my taiko modding is pretty bad

[General]

BPM is pretty low, so maybe a better AR/OD spread would be AR5.5,6.5,7.5,8.5

[Cup]

00:02:197 (2,3,4,1) - I'd prefer the distance to 2 to be a bit bigger. You can do this whilst still keeping the same feel you have now for the rest of the pattern by moving 2 to x:256, and then 3 to x:160 and 4 to x:320.
00:05:864 (1) - This note is quite strong, I feel you could increase the movement distance to it slightly. Try x:224.
00:13:864 (1,2) - 1 is definitely stronger than 4 was, so a higher distance to it makes more sense. Try x:384 on this section.
00:32:531 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This section is pretty repetitive movement wise, which makes it quite boring, even for a cup player. Try moving 00:35:197 (1) - to x:160, 00:37:197 (3) - to x:384, 00:37:864 (1) - to x:192, and then 00:39:531 (2,3) - to x:96. Keeps a similar feel to the map, whilst making it not feel so repetitive.
00:51:197 (4) - I feel this one can be emphasised more for the stronger pitch here, try x:224.
01:09:864 (1) - x:352, this note is definitely could use more emphasis, for the finish and strong sounds here.
01:15:197 (1) - This one could work nicely on x:256, for the same reasons as above.

[Salad]

00:15:197 (1,2,3,4) - A bit more distance to the 1 here would be nice for some more emphasis on the strong high pitch note, try something like 1 on x:384, 2 on x:280, and 3 on x:176. This also makes the distance more of a curve, especially to 4 which is slightly weaker than 2 and 3, so I think it's a nice effect

00:19:197 (1) - Could be nice to have a dash to this for the strong finish sound here as well as the piano's sudden change in pitch. Ctrl+H and moving it to x:64 is nice.
00:33:364 (3) - Really not sure about strong movements to this note, the note isn't really strong enough to imply having a dash here in my opinion. Something like Ctrl+g and then moving to x:312 feels better.
00:36:031 (5) - Same as above, something like x:304.
00:38:697 (5) - Again, this sound really isn't strong enough for a dash, I'd suggest something like x:200.
00:40:531 (1,2) - A dash to 1 could work nicely for the strong piano note here, as well as better emphasis on the change of pitch. I'd try moving 1 to x:32, and then Ctrl+H 2 and move it to x:184.
00:50:531 (7) - This one feels a bit far out and difficult to catch how it is now, I'd reduce distance a tiny bit, maybe do x:216.
00:56:531 (1) - Dash doesn't really fit here, you didn't have it in the previous section like this so I'm not sure why you have one here. Just try x:256.
01:00:197 (3) - Maybe move this to x:96? I feel it deserves a dash as the sound is quite strong, and it compliments the finish nicely.
01:01:864 (5) - Feels a bit too weak of a distance to this right now, try something like x:208 to keep movement going.
01:03:697 (3,4) - This section feels a bit odd to me as it is now, I'd try moving 3 a bit closer in, like x:408, and then increasing distance to 4, like x:152, to make the dashing movement more obvious to a salad player.
01:04:531 (1) - I think it'd be better to map this out instead of having a spinner, this isn't a spinner in any other difficulty.
01:09:531 (3) - 4 is definitely stronger than 3 here, so I think it'd be nice to have the dash to 4 instead, by moving this note to x:320, and then 4 to x:88.
01:18:364 (3) - This one feels a bit too far out, making the play uncomfortable. Try x:352, instead.
01:20:531 (8) - Again, a dash to this would be nice to more strongly emphasise this note. Try x:464, I feel it flows nicely and works well.
01:21:031 (2) - Distancing to this is slightly uncomfortable, would feel better to move it to x:304.
01:23:197 (1,2,3) - More distance to 1 would be nice, and then also a dash to 3 would be very fitting for the strong sound on it, as well as the strong pitch. Try 1 at x:408, 2 at x:280, and 3 at x:16.
01:26:864 (2) - Add slightly more distance to make dash more obvious, try x:136.
01:32:531 (3,4,5) - Again, I feel as though a dash to this would be nice for the sudden pitch change, maybe try 3 on x:56, 4 on x:184, and 5 on x:312.
01:36:114 (4) - I understand reducing movement here, but I think it's better to still have a tiny bit, even if it's not much. Try moving this to x:240.

[Platter]

00:07:531 (5) - Maybe distance to this is a tad bit strong considering that this note is quite weak, and whilst the timeline difference helps a little, the movement is still quite strong. Try x:128.
00:15:197 - I think this piano note is really too strong to avoid, and would even recommend adding a dash to a circle added here, to better emphasise the strong pitch on it.
00:19:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I feel you should at least have a dash to this, the pitch change is very strong and probably should be emphasised better. Try moving this whole section to x:432.
00:58:531 (8) - Antiflow movement to this feels quite strong right now, I'm not really a fan of how strong it is, try reducing it slightly to like x:288.
01:04:031 (9) - Stronger distance, maybe x:288, would be nice to make a dash here more prominent, as this note is quite strong. After doing this, Ctrl+G on 01:04:531 (1,2) - could also play nicer.
01:13:197 (3) - Distance to this right now is too hard of a dash for an average platter player, try reducing it to something more comfortable like x:320.
01:14:531 (7) - Again, this one's a bit strong too, especially for antiflow movement. Try reducing to x:400.
01:23:197 (5) - Distance to this is far too strong for a platter player, most would have a lot of difficulty hitting this. Try x:448 instead, a lot better to play.
01:24:197 (2) - This note is quite strong, a nice antiflow dash could work nicely with it. Try x:48.
01:25:864 (5,6,7) - Hmm, I feel as though the movements here could be made a little more clean, and a HDash to 7 for that strong finish sound would work well. Try 5 on x:400, 6 on x:96, and 7 on x:496.
01:32:531 (1,2,3,4) - Dash to 1 could be nice for the strong change in piano pitch here. Try ctrl+Hing this section and moving it to x:64.

[Rain]

00:05:864 (3,4) - I feel like this HDash is a bit too strong right now, as the antiflow afterwards can be a bit hard to hit. I'd move this section to x:128, to reduce the HDash's strength but still keep it.
00:13:864 (2,3) - A HDash to this feels a bit weird, because the note isn't a clap like your other HDashes, and the note isn't really strong compared to others around it so I think best thing to do is Ctrl+H this and move it to x:320, makes nice movement and gets rid of this HDash. After this, move 4 to x:112 and 5 to x:288 to get the HDash to 4 back.
00:14:864 (5) - I'm not really sure about this being a repeat slider, I'd prefer it to be a circle followed by a 1/2 slider, because the note on the current repeat is quite a strong piano note which a dash would work nicely to.
00:47:197 (5) - Movement to this is a tiny bit too strong in my opinion, making the flow to this quite awkward. I'd reduce distances so that this note is on x:304, that feels a lot better in my opinion.
00:52:530 (5) - Same as above, x:200 would work better.
01:03:197 (3) - Normal, non-dashing movement to this would fit better with the music in my opinion, try x:412 instead.
01:05:531 (3) - ^, x:472, and then move 01:05:864 (4) - to x:80 to keep the HDash.
01:23:864 (3,4) - Moving this a bit more to the left, say x:408 for example, would feel a bit more comfortable movement, and make the antiflow movement to hyper feel better to play in my opinion.
01:25:197 (2,3,4,5) - HDash to 5 would work nicely. A good way to do this without ruining current flow is to move 2 to x:192, 3 to x:300, 4 to x:408, and 5 to x:16.
01:26:531 (7,8) - Hmm, dash to 7 being so strong and then followed by strong antiflow movement plays a bit too difficult for a rain in my opinion. Try moving 7 to x:88, and then, to keep the HDash, move 8 to x:480.
01:31:198 (2,3) - Again, 2 doesn't really feel strong enough to a HDash for me, seeing as you're mainly using claps for HDashes in this section, and this note isn't too strong for the piano either. Try 2 to x:316, and then Ctrl+g 3 and move it to x:492.
01:34:614 (3) - I think you meant for this to be a HDash, to follow similar HDash patterns earlier. Move this to x:364 to add one.

Really nice rain diff overall, honestly, I love this.

Alright, finished. Call me back.

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Moeruattack

763 posts

Joined June 2014

Moeruattack 2016-05-07T13:38:40+00:00

Good luck, I think its getting better flow than before back then

Kookiesu for u

Surono

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Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-07T14:00:05+00:00

oh God, its dream.... wehh how,

btw. terima kasih kk Muru for cookieEZ >L_<

edit:
fuq men forget to edit

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Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-07T15:35:59+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
First mod since I got my laptop back, let's do this. Man.. thx for come here, for tacos too? xd

[Kantan]

00:05:864 (6,7) - This sounds better as kd instead, because of the really high pitch on 6, followed by the lower pitch on 7. since this for newguys. I keep this. I think this fine cuz sound contrasting well
00:19:531 (20) - Personally I'd prefer this removed because I don't really like the idea of 1/2 in a kantan, but you've mentioned before that you want to leave this in, just bringing it up anyway just in case. hmm? but its slow bpm so well, why not to make 1/2? lol
00:32:197 (32) - Same as above. ^
00:39:864 (41) - Having this as a d wouldn't be too bad, and it could help to emphasise the next note. Good cath! the beat :^)
01:07:197 (1) - Maybe make this a D instead, I think it could sound nice considering how strong this note is compared to previous section. I keep this sound cymbal, but on last with stronk istrument is Finsiher. if me applied this to be finisher, I should make it consist to similar sound with finisher lol
01:37:239 (20) - Remove this note if you removed the 1/2s previously. ^

[Futsuu]

00:05:864 (9) - Same as previously, this sounds a lot better as a k in my opinion. (On all other diffs, as well). ahh no.. I likes monotone pattern B) cuz is simpel lel

ok sorry my taiko modding is pretty bad nope, this good. with nice explain as taco playerz B^)

[General]

BPM is pretty low, so maybe a better AR/OD spread would be AR5.5,6.5,7.5,8.5 O Right, Rain fast dem with 9 `L_`

[Cup]

00:02:197 (2,3,4,1) - I'd prefer the distance to 2 to be a bit bigger. You can do this whilst still keeping the same feel you have now for the rest of the pattern by moving 2 to x:256, and then 3 to x:160 and 4 to x:320. loooll this suggestion before is from afb, but if you think is better as neat patterns cuz sound not stronk like 00:05:531 - this oke I agree to back my own :^)
00:05:864 (1) - This note is quite strong, I feel you could increase the movement distance to it slightly. Try x:224. yes right
00:13:864 (1,2) - 1 is definitely stronger than 4 was, so a higher distance to it makes more sense. Try x:384 on this section. true de flow
00:32:531 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This section is pretty repetitive movement wise, which makes it quite boring, even for a cup player. Try moving 00:35:197 (1) - to x:160, 00:37:197 (3) - to x:384, 00:37:864 (1) - to x:192, and then 00:39:531 (2,3) - to x:96. Keeps a similar feel to the map, whilst making it not feel so repetitive. wow.. now it looks good...
00:51:197 (4) - I feel this one can be emphasised more for the stronger pitch here, try x:224. yes move bit there
01:09:864 (1) - x:352, this note is definitely could use more emphasis, for the finish and strong sounds here. yes.. strong :v
01:15:197 (1) - This one could work nicely on x:256, for the same reasons as above. :V

[Salad]

TBC wew edit: the mapper is true crazy like his new Username!!1!!

w41t

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Momota

270 posts

Joined February 2014

Momota 2016-05-08T19:32:48+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
First mod since I got my laptop back, let's do this.

[Platter]

00:07:531 (5) - Maybe distance to this is a tad bit strong considering that this note is quite weak, and whilst the timeline difference helps a little, the movement is still quite strong. Try x:128. moved, i think so, the jump too much distance
00:15:197 - I think this piano note is really too strong to avoid, and would even recommend adding a dash to a circle added here, to better emphasise the strong pitch on it. yess, like this section 01:32:531 - i follow piano note, fixed and make pattern like 01:32:531 (1,2,3,4) -
00:19:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I feel you should at least have a dash to this, the pitch change is very strong and probably should be emphasised better. Try moving this whole section to x:432. applied, finish hitsound on 1 for jump
00:58:531 (8) - Antiflow movement to this feels quite strong right now, I'm not really a fan of how strong it is, try reducing it slightly to like x:288.applied
01:04:031 (9) - Stronger distance, maybe x:288, would be nice to make a dash here more prominent, as this note is quite strong. After doing this, Ctrl+G on 01:04:531 (1,2) - could also play nicer. yes fixed all, dash 8,9 9,1 look good now
01:13:197 (3) - Distance to this right now is too hard of a dash for an average platter player, try reducing it to something more comfortable like x:320. applied, I guess this is an easy dash lol: V and right, i want this diff playable for average player
01:14:531 (7) - Again, this one's a bit strong too, especially for antiflow movement. Try reducing to x:400. yess, reduced
01:23:197 (5) - Distance to this is far too strong for a platter player, most would have a lot of difficulty hitting this. Try x:448 instead, a lot better to play. okee reduced
01:24:197 (2) - This note is quite strong, a nice antiflow dash could work nicely with it. Try x:48. okk applied
01:25:864 (5,6,7) - Hmm, I feel as though the movements here could be made a little more clean, and a HDash to 7 for that strong finish sound would work well. Try 5 on x:400, 6 on x:96, and 7 on x:496. yesss nicee h dash on 6,7 then hdash on next pattern in 2,3
01:32:531 (1,2,3,4) - Dash to 1 could be nice for the strong change in piano pitch here. Try ctrl+Hing this section and moving it to x:64. its ok with distance to 1 ? ok ill try it bcaus slow part on next pattren, i think its okye but i can't add distance this on 00:15:197 - maybi too hard

[Rain]

TBC

how i english

ok thanks 4 mod magic bom

dem i serch the not gut mod, there is nothing

this is diff

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Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-05-09T08:41:42+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
[Salad]

00:15:197 (1,2,3,4) - A bit more distance to the 1 here would be nice for some more emphasis on the strong high pitch note, try something like 1 on x:384, 2 on x:280, and 3 on x:176. This also makes the distance more of a curve, especially to 4 which is slightly weaker than 2 and 3, so I think it's a nice effect | Curve patterns you said?
00:19:197 (1) - Could be nice to have a dash to this for the strong finish sound here as well as the piano's sudden change in pitch. Ctrl+H and moving it to x:64 is nice. | you said this to do dash just before the finish sound is heard, so i better let it be (i don't wanna change it
00:33:364 (3) - Really not sure about strong movements to this note, the note isn't really strong enough to imply having a dash here in my opinion. Something like Ctrl+g and then moving to x:312 feels better. | did you hear what sound 00:33:197 (2) - is? it's a clap sound, the same case as above, but clap sound so let it be
00:36:031 (5) - Same as above, something like x:304. | same case as above ._.
00:38:697 (5) - Again, this sound really isn't strong enough for a dash, I'd suggest something like x:200. | again, same case as above ._.
00:40:531 (1,2) - A dash to 1 could work nicely for the strong piano note here, as well as better emphasis on the change of pitch. I'd try moving 1 to x:32, and then Ctrl+H 2 and move it to x:184. | mmm hmmmmmm but modified 2 a bit
00:50:531 (7) - This one feels a bit far out and difficult to catch how it is now, I'd reduce distance a tiny bit, maybe do x:216. | :>
00:56:531 (1) - Dash doesn't really fit here, you didn't have it in the previous section like this so I'm not sure why you have one here. Just try x:256. | x:200 should be enough
01:00:197 (3) - Maybe move this to x:96? I feel it deserves a dash as the sound is quite strong, and it compliments the finish nicely. | nope ._.
01:01:864 (5) - Feels a bit too weak of a distance to this right now, try something like x:208 to keep movement going. | x:184
01:03:697 (3,4) - This section feels a bit odd to me as it is now, I'd try moving 3 a bit closer in, like x:408, and then increasing distance to 4, like x:152, to make the dashing movement more obvious to a salad player. | https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5113217
01:04:531 (1) - I think it'd be better to map this out instead of having a spinner, this isn't a spinner in any other difficulty. | why is it so wrong to have a spinner here >:c
01:09:531 (3) - 4 is definitely stronger than 3 here, so I think it'd be nice to have the dash to 4 instead, by moving this note to x:320, and then 4 to x:88. | nonononononnononononononno
01:18:364 (3) - This one feels a bit too far out, making the play uncomfortable. Try x:352, instead. | nonononononnononononononno

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
01:20:531 (8) - Again, a dash to this would be nice to more strongly emphasise this note. Try x:464, I feel it flows nicely and works well.
01:21:031 (2) - Distancing to this is slightly uncomfortable, would feel better to move it to x:304.
01:23:197 (1,2,3) - More distance to 1 would be nice, and then also a dash to 3 would be very fitting for the strong sound on it, as well as the strong pitch. Try 1 at x:408, 2 at x:280, and 3 at x:16.
01:26:864 (2) - Add slightly more distance to make dash more obvious, try x:136.
01:32:531 (3,4,5) - Again, I feel as though a dash to this would be nice for the sudden pitch change, maybe try 3 on x:56, 4 on x:184, and 5 on x:312.
01:36:114 (4) - I understand reducing movement here, but I think it's better to still have a tiny bit, even if it's not much. Try moving this to x:240.

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Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-09T08:55:11+00:00

hey! wtf why you place thats spooky img for response the mod? freak and rude, dude `L_`

ayomikasa

180 posts

Joined August 2014

ayomikasa 2016-05-09T09:08:29+00:00

wkwkwkwkwkw lidahapi,itu lagi ngapain sims nya?

Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-05-09T09:18:26+00:00

Ayomi wrote:
wkwkwkwkwkw lidahapi,itu lagi ngapain sims nya?

kebangun gara gara stereo dinyalain di ruangan itu

Volta

1,622 posts

Joined March 2014

Volta 2016-05-09T11:58:31+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
First mod since I got my laptop back, let's do this.

[Rain]

00:05:864 (3,4) - I feel like this HDash is a bit too strong right now, as the antiflow afterwards can be a bit hard to hit. I'd move this section to x:128, to reduce the HDash's strength but still keep it.
00:13:864 (2,3) - A HDash to this feels a bit weird, because the note isn't a clap like your other HDashes, and the note isn't really strong compared to others around it so I think best thing to do is Ctrl+H this and move it to x:320, makes nice movement and gets rid of this HDash. After this, move 4 to x:112 and 5 to x:288 to get the HDash to 4 back. //keep to make the left-right movement more natural. besides, the piano sound is strong enough imo
00:14:864 (5) - I'm not really sure about this being a repeat slider, I'd prefer it to be a circle followed by a 1/2 slider, because the note on the current repeat is quite a strong piano note which a dash would work nicely to.//i'd prefer to make it same repeat slider as 00:12:197 (4) - but more horizontal to get more distance
00:47:197 (5) - Movement to this is a tiny bit too strong in my opinion, making the flow to this quite awkward. I'd reduce distances so that this note is on x:304, that feels a lot better in my opinion.
00:52:530 (5) - Same as above, x:200 would work better.
01:03:197 (3) - Normal, non-dashing movement to this would fit better with the music in my opinion, try x:412 instead.
01:05:531 (3) - ^, x:472, and then move 01:05:864 (4) - to x:80 to keep the HDash.
01:23:864 (3,4) - Moving this a bit more to the left, say x:408 for example, would feel a bit more comfortable movement, and make the antiflow movement to hyper feel better to play in my opinion.
01:25:197 (2,3,4,5) - HDash to 5 would work nicely. A good way to do this without ruining current flow is to move 2 to x:192, 3 to x:300, 4 to x:408, and 5 to x:16.
01:26:531 (7,8) - Hmm, dash to 7 being so strong and then followed by strong antiflow movement plays a bit too difficult for a rain in my opinion. Try moving 7 to x:88, and then, to keep the HDash, move 8 to x:480.
01:31:198 (2,3) - Again, 2 doesn't really feel strong enough to a HDash for me, seeing as you're mainly using claps for HDashes in this section, and this note isn't too strong for the piano either. Try 2 to x:316, and then Ctrl+g 3 and move it to x:492. //retained for same reason as before
01:34:614 (3) - I think you meant for this to be a HDash, to follow similar HDash patterns earlier. Move this to x:364 to add one.

Really nice rain diff overall, honestly, I love this. fixed all except with comment. really lovely mod <3

Alright, finished. Call me back.

dream come true?

osu file format v14

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Title:Kohaku no Yume
TitleUnicode:虚白ノ夢
Artist:Kanawo
ArtistUnicode:カナヲ
Creator:Surono
Version:Volt's Rain
Source:虚白ノ夢
Tags:teriyaki tomato blank dream usui mishiro momota professor gila volta
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also, i checked again the taiko diffs. i think no one has mentioned this, but consider adding green line at 01:33:864 - with 1.13x velocity to adjust scroll speed when the bpm changes.
optionally can also add these green lines to make smooth slow down and makes player aware that bpm is changing:

01:34:239 - 1.11x
01:34:426 - 1.10x
01:34:614 - 1.09x
01:34:989 - 1.07x
01:35:364 - 1.05x
01:35:739 - 1.03x
01:36:114 - 1.01x
01:36:301 - 1.00x

Go Go Qualify!

Surono

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Surono 2016-05-09T13:42:51+00:00

wtf the green lines, ngeri om coba lu klik satu2 trus di psang. ada yg error sama red linesnya :U ga usah, ccd style sv map chata mengecedede
and I bit arranged the spread of tacos

okey...
Updated

MBomb

MBomb 2016-05-09T16:10:08+00:00

kk discussed something with Surono in pm about the cup

The first difficulty of 4 good CtB mappers got qualified, today.

Qualified <3

PatZar

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PatZar 2016-05-09T16:10:43+00:00

tar juga ke dq lagi

Surono

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Surono 2016-05-09T16:11:24+00:00

PatZar wrote:
tar juga ke dq lagi

gara2 apa? :^)

your think this taco ?? :V

ok my tacos is shiit really. tank me

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Kagari

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Kagari 2016-05-09T16:12:42+00:00

wow!!!

congratz kalian semua

Surono

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Surono 2016-05-09T16:13:05+00:00

Kagari wrote:
wow!!!

congratz kalian semua

ayy Makasih!!!!!!! XDDDDDDDDDDD

ty MBom for your 108 star of destiny after Sheela ( had thats number too.. soo this a fate *-* )

thx gaem Suikoden and idk... wiki or blah

wtf happen (⚆ ͜ʖ⚆)

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Charlotte

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Charlotte 2016-05-09T16:13:13+00:00

Congratz

Momota

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Momota 2016-05-09T16:13:19+00:00

finally boyzzzzzz haypu desu
webos dediceted

Skylish

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Skylish 2016-05-09T16:21:29+00:00

It is happening!!!!!!!

Gratz, dem Surono!!!!!

MBomb

MBomb 2016-05-09T16:26:46+00:00

Oh just remembered btw, there's 496 ranked difficulties for ctb right now, so if this doesn't get dqed it has the 500th ranked ctb diff xddd

Surono

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Surono 2016-05-09T16:33:19+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
Oh just remembered btw, there's 496 ranked difficulties for ctb right now, so if this doesn't get dqed it has the 500th ranked ctb diff xddd

really? dem... fruit sweet, btw glad to see your laptop back after louunngggg taimmm xd *wtf care 'bout laptop, not the human lol

and thx charlotte, dem Momota. and Yeah Skylish this happeninggg xd

JBHyperion

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JBHyperion 2016-05-09T17:50:58+00:00

Saw this was qualified after not knowing anything about it and decided to check it out - I have a few points I wanted to ask about before this gets a full rank.

Prof. Gila's Salad

My main issue with this diff is how dash is used. Outside of the kiai there are only a handful of dashes and these are nearly all borderline 1/4 jumps which are very challenging to read and annoying to play. There are plenty of good spots to add easy 1/2 dash that were ignored, such as 00:18:864 (3,1) - 00:39:531 (6,7) - 00:40:197 (8,1) - 00:42:864 (6,1) - and so on. Without these, the diff essentially feels like a Cup with a handful of annoying 1/4 dashes thrown in (see below)

00:03:697 (2,3) - Spacing is very close to requiring dash, could confuse new players as they are unsure whether to dash or not. I'd increase this distance a little (if dash is intended)
00:10:197 (1,2) - For a diff that's intended to introduce dashing, it's very strange that the first dash is a very sharp 1/4 spacing. This will be seriously unexpected for players of this difficulty - Making (1) a circle instead of 1/4 slider to create a 1/2 dash would be best in this situation, but if you must keep the 1/4 dash, (1) should probably be vertical and the overall spacing much less, something like 3.5x instead of the 5.1x you have currently, as demonstrated at 00:40:864 (2,3)
00:31:531 (5,1) - As above, slanted 1/4 sliders leading into dash is highly likely to confuse new players, and this spacing is even more sharp than the first one
00:32:864 (1,2,3) - Why dash to (3) when the strong drum sound is on (2)? You repeat this throughout such as 00:35:864 (4,5) - 00:38:197 (3,4) - presumably for following the piano pitch, but it's so hard to follow when the drum sounds are that much more prominent
00:58:864 (4,1,2,3) - This is much better as it uses more comfortable but still interesting 1/2 dash patterns, why didn't you do this more often earlier in the song? ):
01:09:197 (2,3,4) - Why is the dash to (3) when the strong sound with cymbal is on the next note (4)? Leaves this feeling very underemphasized and awkward to play.
01:12:030 (6,7,1) - For the strong cymbal sound, 1/2 dash to the slider (1) would be both more appropriate for the difficulty and fitting to the rhythm
01:14:864 (5,6) - Again, where's the dash for the strong cymbal sound here? There's so much emphasis lost here by mapping this as a normal movement like the surrounding weaker sounds
01:17:531 (5,1) - ^ etc. (there are quite a few of these...)

Additionally in

momot's Platter

00:30:697 (5,6,7) - Minor, but the slight angle on (6) and the lack of spacing between (5,6) creates an awkward flow-stop for me that makes it very easy to dash too early and miss (6)'s tail. I'd prefer if there was a bit more spacing here and (6) was made vertical
00:43:197 (9,1) - Shouldn't NC be on (9) for the downbeat and strong cymbal sound?
Only two hypers in the whole kiai hmm? 01:12:031 (3,1) - 01:20:197 (3,1) - make good candidates for the stronger, high-pitched piano sound, I wouldn't ignore these

Cup and Rain are both very nice, but Salad could really use some further polishing imo.

MBomb

MBomb 2016-05-09T17:55:51+00:00

Call me back when I'm needed.

My bad, I did have a few issues about the salad myself but I thought they were probably just more of a style difference, but I agree with a lot of what JBH said.

Surono

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Surono 2016-05-09T17:59:26+00:00

YEAH THIS Wath happen, Ludahapi sialan!! >:C p/5113290 ~~fuq yu behaviour I will delete u~~ jk lol :\

gini dah orang pake sok2an ngerasa diffnya ga bermaslah :U udah diberi sugesti yang lojis di bales pake EGO :V ccd bener :\/

Momota

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Momota 2016-05-09T18:51:05+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Saw this was qualified after not knowing anything about it and decided to check it out - I have a few points I wanted to ask about before this gets a full rank.

Additionally in momot's Platter
00:30:697 (5,6,7) - Minor, but the slight angle on (6) and the lack of spacing between (5,6) creates an awkward flow-stop for me that makes it very easy to dash too early and miss (6)'s tail. I'd prefer if there was a bit more spacing here and (6) was made vertical applied, the ryuuta must move little on slider
00:43:197 (9,1) - Shouldn't NC be on (9) for the downbeat and strong cymbal sound? applied, and repair nc before this pattern, there is just 2 note nc ;w;
Only two hypers in the whole kiai hmm? 01:12:031 (3,1) - 01:20:197 (3,1) - make good candidates for the stronger, high-pitched piano sound, I wouldn't ignore these i think the hard part is like this pattern 01:15:531 - if i add hdash on 01:12:031 (3,1) - 01:20:197 (3,1) i must add dash on this 01:22:864 (4,5) - 01:09:531(3,1) - and look too much hdash i think, so i keep small dash on that part for now maybe
Cup and Rain are both very nice, but Salad could really use some further polishing imo.

thanks 4 mod btw JBH, i dont know nc allowed only one note ;w;

gogoo rankd agensto

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Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2016-05-09T18:53:02+00:00

The addressed issues are valid. You might look for more feedback at least to improve the Salad difficulty and probably get more checks for the rest.

Good luck!

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-09T19:07:42+00:00

Thank you, Deif!

Updated platter and call the salad mapper

Last edited by Surono 2016-05-09T21:47:41+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Yaminoma

498 posts

Joined October 2014

Yaminoma 2016-05-09T20:31:58+00:00

jej

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-05-09T20:34:06+00:00

Welp let's take a look here. Overall I was pretty disappointed about the response I got to the last mod I made on the salad, which consisted of responses that were inadequate or rejections without any information as to WHY they were rejected. Hopefully, the DQ made you realize that the difficulty isn't good right now, and that things will really need to be fixed. Most specifically, the dashes.

[

Prof. Gila's Salad]

General

00:03:197 (3,1,2) - Not a big fan of this stack here, the catcher should really be moving constantly, and this is a good place to start. Ctrl+g'ing 00:03:531 (1,2,3,4) - would make for a dash addition and some added movement, which is needed here, in my opinion.
00:05:864 (3) - You could really add a dash to here. The note is really high and could use some more movement besides a walking distance.
00:11:197 (1,1) - I don't know why these have such strong notes on slider ends. You'd be much better off making these 1/2 sliders with a circle on where the slider USED to end. That way, the note becomes more emphasized, rather than just another object in a slider. You could also make dashes to them, also.
00:13:531 (4,1) - Adding some distance (or a dash) between here would be nice due to the heavier piano layer which is added on this note for more emphasis.
00:15:531 (2,3,4) - This is a really weird decline, I think making them evenly spaced would help the pattern look a little cleaner in my opinion. Also, maybe some added distance at 00:15:531 (2,3) - to compliment the finisher could be nice.
00:17:197 (3) - Same fix as before with a 1/2 slider and a note. You're really missing a strong beat on these red ticks by having these long sliders, and by switching these patterns a bit, you can help the rhythm out with more close interpretation.
00:19:864 (2) - Tilting this to the right and forcing a dash to 00:20:531 (3) - would be a great way to set up the next section of music here, rather than make the whole distance walkable.
00:24:531 (3,4) - These distances are really quite close, which makes the difficulty feel a bit squished. Try adding a dash between 00:24:364 (2,3) - and moving 00:24:864 (4) - more to the right, making it horizontal so it plays better out of the previous dash pattern.
00:25:364 (5,6) - A dash to 6 could be nice too, since the piano is REALLY strong here!
00:27:197 (3,1,2,3) - This whole pattern is cramped on the right grid, you should really add some spacing here to make the difficulty less restricting, and allowing the catcher to move a bit more, rather than making it sharp and choppy.
00:32:864 (1,2,3) - The pattern is really wrong, since you have the dash going to 00:33:364 (3) - when the strong note is at 00:33:197 (2) - . I'd suggest moving (2) to the right alongside (3) and rework the distances to that the dash is kept, but the pattern is more comfortable.
00:35:531 (3,4,5) - Same here, really. It also doesn't help that 00:34:864 (1,2,3) - are so close to each other. I'd suggest reworking the entire pattern here to ensure there is more constant movement and good flow, by taking the suggestion I did earlier about the strong note being alongside the slider after the dash.
00:37:864 (2,3,4) - Why are these stacked? (3,4) should be farther away from 2 due to their stronger notation in the music, if anything. Move these away and give some distance here, it feels too close.
00:50:864 (8,1) - Really strong note on 1, adding a dash would be really recommended here
00:52:531 (5) - NC this for the new line, and add some distance between this and the previous note.
Additionally, adding some dash between 00:52:864 (6,7,8) - would be really good since the notes pick up emphasis here and it could be nice leading up to the kiai.
00:53:864 (1,3,1,3) - All these 1/1 sliders should be changed to match the emphasis of the song, as stated above. I think there's room for improvement in these patterns as well, with them being a bit too cramped.
01:00:864 (4) - ctrl+h'ing this works REALLY well here, since it gives room for the catcher to move, and creates a nice jump.
JBHyperion pointed out a lot of stuff in the kiai so I'll let this be for now. Please take your time to reconsider this difficulty and don't be stubborn when accepting stuff. If you're going to deny anything, please give a REASON to why you're denying it, and make it a good reason. I don't want to come back here after another Qualify and write the same stuff.

gl here

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-09T21:40:12+00:00

furr of shiid

gw cuma kasian kalau gw balikin ni kata2

nothing on here, dont kill spirit the mapper...

Volta

1,622 posts

Joined March 2014

Volta 2016-05-09T23:22:50+00:00

ditinggal tidur udah sempet qualify dan dq o_o
they're not killing the mapper's spirit. they just want to improve the diff. i was also discouraged by the salad mapper's responses. stop being stubborn and try to accept mods.

trus sur mungkin lu nya aja yang gak bisa masang sv di tacos wokwokw. boleh kok garis merah sama ijo numpuk asal volumenya sama. keliatan bagus padahal kalo masang 1.13x

MBomb

MBomb 2016-05-10T00:05:45+00:00

Also I did ask ascendance to post on thread, so if anyone should be blamed for his post, it's me.

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,591 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2016-05-10T00:13:57+00:00

If you need some help, feel free to call me too

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,885 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-05-10T00:34:14+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
Also I did ask ascendance to post on thread, so if anyone should be blamed for his post, it's me.

Why would anyone "blame" someone who is trying to help improve the map? No-one is trying to derail the thread or spite the mappers... Quite the opposite in fact.

As long as the suggestions continue to help improve and polish the map, more mods and more time in Pending is a GOOD THING.

Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-05-10T01:05:13+00:00

Oh wow i just couldn't see what happened yesterday dem ma inet got dc'd suddenly again

yea fine i apologize for every modders around here, especially i refused the mod for "no reason". I'm just learning here just to get the experience, especially how 2 accept the mod, but it wouldn't be wise to accept them all so, gimme some time for that

If i could get online again, i fix them but tell me where to start ._.

Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-05-10T01:08:30+00:00

(Intended to double post)

Remember my traits on my userpage how i behave) ._.

Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-05-10T01:09:26+00:00

(Intended to double post)

Remember my traits on my userpage how i behave) ._.

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-05-10T03:25:39+00:00

Hey there. I should apologize for being a bit rude with my words, I think maybe they came across too mean. I really would love too see this set improved, it's really a nice song. I don't intend on crushing mapper spirits ^^

If you want me to take another look before requalifying, have a nominator poke me and I'll see what I can do.

Good luck to everyone here

PatZar

3,079 posts

Joined March 2013

PatZar 2016-05-10T06:45:21+00:00

WAKWAKKAWKWAKWAKKAWKAWK :v

Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-05-10T11:13:15+00:00

but still, i may respond mods "inappropriately" due to my traits ._.

JBHyperion wrote:
Prof. Gila's Salad

My main issue with this diff is how dash is used. Outside of the kiai there are only a handful of dashes and these are nearly all borderline 1/4 jumps which are very challenging to read and annoying to play. There are plenty of good spots to add easy 1/2 dash that were ignored, such as 00:18:864 (3,1) - 00:39:531 (6,7) - 00:40:197 (8,1) - 00:42:864 (6,1) - and so on. Without these, the diff essentially feels like a Cup with a handful of annoying 1/4 dashes thrown in (see below)
00:03:697 (2,3) - Spacing is very close to requiring dash, could confuse new players as they are unsure whether to dash or not. I'd increase this distance a little (if dash is intended) | yea yea
00:10:197 (1,2) - For a diff that's intended to introduce dashing, it's very strange that the first dash is a very sharp 1/4 spacing. This will be seriously unexpected for players of this difficulty - Making (1) a circle instead of 1/4 slider to create a 1/2 dash would be best in this situation, but if you must keep the 1/4 dash, (1) should probably be vertical and the overall spacing much less, something like 3.5x instead of the 5.1x you have currently, as demonstrated at 00:40:864 (2,3) | 3.2x?
00:31:531 (5,1) - As above, slanted 1/4 sliders leading into dash is highly likely to confuse new players, and this spacing is even more sharp than the first one | making them close
00:32:864 (1,2,3) - Why dash to (3) when the strong drum sound is on (2)? You repeat this throughout such as 00:35:864 (4,5) - 00:38:197 (3,4) - presumably for following the piano pitch, but it's so hard to follow when the drum sounds are that much more prominent | in case to get the feedback to dash after hearing the drum sound, i prefer make them dash (hope this part isn't an awkward part)
00:58:864 (4,1,2,3) - This is much better as it uses more comfortable but still interesting 1/2 dash patterns, why didn't you do this more often earlier in the song? ): | i don't think about it (i just mapped the song whatsoever)
01:09:197 (2,3,4) - Why is the dash to (3) when the strong sound with cymbal is on the next note (4)? Leaves this feeling very underemphasized and awkward to play. | distance 01:09:197 (2) is rearranged, overall, i rearranged the distances a bit
01:12:030 (6,7,1) - For the strong cymbal sound, 1/2 dash to the slider (1) would be both more appropriate for the difficulty and fitting to the rhythm | yeah fixed
01:14:864 (5,6) - Again, where's the dash for the strong cymbal sound here? There's so much emphasis lost here by mapping this as a normal movement like the surrounding weaker sounds | i don't mean for that part to make a dash here
01:17:531 (5,1) - ^ etc. (there are quite a few of these...) | same case as above

TREAK TREAKKAN PAKE EFEK DISTORSI SAMPE MAMPUS

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Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-10T13:01:30+00:00

edit:

thanks lidahapi for your consciousness

23:54 Surono: ohh
23:54 Surono: oke..
23:54 Surono: jadi itu sebenarnya lu off>
23:55 Professor Gila: tadi
23:55 Professor Gila: billing di warnet udah tinggal dikit lagi
23:56 Professor Gila: dan gak bakal sempat buat on lagi
23:56 Surono: oh oke
23:56 Surono: yang satu ini gw maafin, dan btw udah reply ascendance?
23:56 Surono: mumpung dia Online si Mbom
23:57 Professor Gila: buset
23:57 Surono: gw cuma punya waktu 15-30menit untuk online
23:57 Surono: oh blum bales kamu? baru nongol?
23:58 Professor Gila: gak bakal sempat ane yakin
23:58 Professor Gila: coba besok dah kalau bisa
23:58 Surono: ya
23:58 Surono: bisa untuk edit kata2mu di post untuk reply JBH?
23:58 Professor Gila: yang si jbh udah ane reply itu
23:58 Surono: emotnya kurangin tolong, biar dia ga annoy
23:58 Professor Gila: jujur saja sur, mending ada 1 orang yang ngepost reply buat 1 diff
23:58 Surono: dia itu tua umur
23:58 Professor Gila: lah ini, ada 2 mod baut 1 diff?
23:59 Surono: kalau tau kelakuan kamu, ntar jadi drama
23:59 Professor Gila: ntar bisa "konflik"
23:59 Surono: 2 mod untuk 1 diff karna itu improvisasi
23:59 Surono: ya ga lah
23:59 Surono: kamu kan udah bales si JBH, kalau ada point yang bentrok. kamu jelasin kalau itu udah ada dari mod si JBH
23:59 Surono: dan klarifikasi mana yg bener bagus
23:59 Surono: dan itu juga mod ascendance berasal dari permintaan MBomb kan?
00:00 Professor Gila: entahlah
00:00 Surono: ? udah edit postmu? aku ga banyak waktu
00:00 Surono: aku cuma pengen savelog chat ini dan edit kata2 kasarku di post
00:01 Professor Gila: ane juga gak bakal mungkin buat reply sekarang
00:01 Surono: cuma hapus emot2 nya itu
00:01 Professor Gila: udah tengah malam gini
00:01 Professor Gila: kalau buru buru ya kayak tadi lagi
00:01 Professor Gila: malahan
00:01 Professor Gila: mau?
00:01 Surono: cuma hapus emot di Postmu
00:01 Surono: Emotikonnya
00:02 Surono: udah? mau savelog ini..
00:02 Professor Gila: ada di osu
00:02 Surono: dan kata2mu yg kaya mmmmmmmmm, ganti kata oke
00:02 Professor Gila: "log private messages"
00:02 Professor Gila: jadi gak usah ribet main /savelog
00:02 Professor Gila: *terus terusan
00:03 Surono: please? kamu memperhatikan kata2ku ga?
00:03 Surono: aku cuma tanya, "udah blom edit postmu?"
00:05 Professor Gila: TUH UDIN
00:05 Professor Gila: eh sorry caps
00:05 Surono: wew
00:05 Surono: :U
00:06 Professor Gila: sinis sur, minta snickers nya :V
00:06 Surono: :UUUUUUUU bang sads.
00:06 Surono: wew, trek trekan skarang. okelah gw update

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Ansane

36 posts

Joined June 2014

Ansane 2016-05-10T17:03:30+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
Also I did ask ascendance to post on thread, so if anyone should be blamed for his post, it's me.

the truth has been spoken, surono appreciate it.. btw it's ok!

I just want to say : "jangan pernah mengecewakan orang yang telah memberikan kesempatan untuk numpang diff loh.."
*FLYYYYYYYYY

Momota

270 posts

Joined February 2014

Momota 2016-05-10T17:30:08+00:00

btw buat prof.g
minta maap jangan lupa ke ascendance, dia marah itu dgn respon mu di mod yang sebelumnya prof.g, kata terakhir dia di mod nya jleb bener itu
style map mu boleh aja dipake, tapi kan ini konteks nya ranked, dimain banyak orang gitu,
kalo masalah respon ke mod, kalo memang ada mod yang buat pattern atau isi map mu lebih baek, ga ada salahnya ngerubah style mu sedikit, mod mereka ga akan ngerubah isi dengan fatal kok, juga misal menolak mod, usahakan jawabnya berisi, jangan cuma no terus udah, pasti dong ada 'inilah kenapa aku mempertahankan pattern ini maka akan kujelaskan mengapa mod mu kutolak untuk saat ini' ga salah kok apply mod kalo memang itu buat jadi lebih baik, tetap ini diff tetap punyamu, bukan punya yang ngemod atau apalah, juga sebelum dq ada mod dari mb kan ? nah disitu kan gw sih melihatnya itu final mod, dimana titik titik yg dibilang mbom itu titik fatal yg harus dibetulkan, kalo ngga terancan dq, menurut gw ya pribadi. juga mod dari bn itu gak sembarangan, pasti isi mod tsb juga berguna, wong namanya bn masuknya aja udah ada testnya.
jadi mod ascendace itu kamu urus juga, dia udah bilang, mod jbh fokus di kiai part, maka ascendance mengurus yang sebelumnya
masih bisa digunakan kok mod nya
terakhir, jangan lupa untuk melihat contoh diff diff lain yang ranked,
komen diff mu sih salad mu masih rasa cup, tapi ada jump jump fatal/kejauhan malah mirip platter ya ga banyak tapi jadinya gak konsisten gitu
lalu jangan karna ini kamu harus mengapply semua mod, misal ada yang mod kurang pas tolak aja, tapi jelaskan mengapa kamu menolak mod itu, supaya yg mod tadi tau.
wes ngono wae

Kagari

751 posts

Joined October 2013

Kagari 2016-05-10T17:40:36+00:00

Momota wrote:
btw buat prof.g
minta maap jangan lupa ke ascendance, dia marah itu dgn respon mu di mod yang sebelumnya prof.g, kata terakhir dia di mod nya jleb bener itu
style map mu boleh aja dipake, tapi kan ini konteks nya ranked, dimain banyak orang gitu,
kalo masalah respon ke mod, kalo memang ada mod yang buat pattern atau isi map mu lebih baek, ga ada salahnya ngerubah style mu sedikit, mod mereka ga akan ngerubah isi dengan fatal kok, juga misal menolak mod, usahakan jawabnya berisi, jangan cuma no terus udah, pasti dong ada 'inilah kenapa aku mempertahankan pattern ini maka akan kujelaskan mengapa mod mu kutolak untuk saat ini' ga salah kok apply mod kalo memang itu buat jadi lebih baik, tetap ini diff tetap punyamu, bukan punya yang ngemod atau apalah, juga sebelum dq ada mod dari mb kan ? nah disitu kan gw sih melihatnya itu final mod, dimana titik titik yg dibilang mbom itu titik fatal yg harus dibetulkan, kalo ngga terancan dq, menurut gw ya pribadi. juga mod dari bn itu gak sembarangan, pasti isi mod tsb juga berguna, wong namanya bn masuknya aja udah ada testnya.
jadi mod ascendace itu kamu urus juga, dia udah bilang, mod jbh fokus di kiai part, maka ascendance mengurus yang sebelumnya
masih bisa digunakan kok mod nya
terakhir, jangan lupa untuk melihat contoh diff diff lain yang ranked,
komen diff mu sih salad mu masih rasa cup, tapi ada jump jump fatal/kejauhan malah mirip platter ya ga banyak tapi jadinya gak konsisten gitu
lalu jangan karna ini kamu harus mengapply semua mod, misal ada yang mod kurang pas tolak aja, tapi jelaskan mengapa kamu menolak mod itu, supaya yg mod tadi tau.
wes ngono wae

i completely agree with this statement... great advice

Volta

1,622 posts

Joined March 2014

Volta 2016-05-10T18:19:03+00:00

gw sempet memantau dan ngeliat kegundahan lw sebelum diedit, tp gw menahan diri untuk gak membales karena lagi ngerjain skripsi dan gak mau konsentrasi buyar sampe target hari ini tercapai. maaf kalo di post sebelumnya gw terdengar angkuh ato apa tapi sesungguhnya tidak ada maksud seperti itu, gw hanya mencari apa yang mungkin bisa diperbaiki tapi belum diungkapkan oleh orang lain, dan kalo emang gak sesuai dengan selera ditolak juga gapapa. pas gw coba pasang saran gw gak ada error apa pun dengan garis merahnya jadi gw agak bingung dengan hal tersebut. dengan segenap hati gw juga ingin mapset ini cepet kelar dan drama cepet selesai.

oke itu aja, semoga bisa dimengerti. gw gak akan post apa-apa lagi kecuali ada mod di diff gw. nite.

Absolute Zero

Featured Artist

595 posts

Joined August 2014

Absolute Zero 2016-05-10T22:23:35+00:00

Road to requalification
[Prof. Gila's Salad]
00:11:197 (1) - This slider feels a bit strange because you suddenly stop following the melody. Make this a 1/2 slider + hitcircle instead because there's such a strong melody that you've followed before and it's a little awkward to leave out a strong note.
00:13:864 (1) - ^
00:17:197 (3) - ^
00:38:697 (5,6) - Strangely low movement from (5,6). I would suggest moving (6,7,8) further away because of the long distance gap. Here, it would be fine to make a dash.
00:40:864 (2) - I would suggest making this a 1/4 slider and a hitcircle instead, if you want to follow both the melody and the higher piano.
00:43:197 (1,2,1,2) - AAAA by making these 1/1 sliders you miss so many beats in the melody! Please make these hitcircles 1/2 apart?
00:49:531 (4) - NC?
00:51:864 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - (Am unsure if others would agree with this comment) I would make this timeline like this instead to follow the melody closer.

Ticker is around 00:52:697

00:53:864 (1) - Again, you're missing key notes here in the melody. Make this two hitcircles?
00:55:197 (3) - ^
00:56:531 (1) - To keep consistency with the music before, I would suggest making this two hitcircles spaced 1/2 apart.
01:07:197 (3,1) - Strangely low movement between these two? The music picks up but there is literally no reason for the catcher to move. Move (1) further left?
01:08:031 (2,1) - Spacing is again low here, this time for the long gap between the notes.
01:08:864 (1,2) - Make (2) go further to the left, or at least a group between them.
01:09:864 (4,1,2) - Distance is way too low! Increase distance please.
01:14:197 (3,4,5) - These notes aren't in the melody you were following before. Please change the rhythms to match the notes.
01:31:198 (1) - Strange inconsistency with the 1/2 beat you have following the melody. Would suggest making these 3 hitcircles 1/2 length from each other.

Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-05-11T05:41:26+00:00

what '^'

now there's some mod from AZ, but now i wanna reply ascendance's '^'

Ascendance wrote:
00:03:197 (3,1,2) - Not a big fan of this stack here, the catcher should really be moving constantly, and this is a good place to start. Ctrl+g'ing 00:03:531 (1,2,3,4) - would make for a dash addition and some added movement, which is needed here, in my opinion. | are you going to make lots of movement for this salad diff?
00:05:864 (3) - You could really add a dash to here. The note is really high and could use some more movement besides a walking distance. | perhaps?
00:11:197 (1,1) - I don't know why these have such strong notes on slider ends. You'd be much better off making these 1/2 sliders with a circle on where the slider USED to end. That way, the note becomes more emphasized, rather than just another object in a slider. You could also make dashes to them, also. | uh i don't think so somehow
00:13:531 (4,1) - Adding some distance (or a dash) between here would be nice due to the heavier piano layer which is added on this note for more emphasis. | yeah yeah
00:15:531 (2,3,4) - This is a really weird decline, I think making them evenly spaced would help the pattern look a little cleaner in my opinion. Also, maybe some added distance at 00:15:531 (2,3) - to compliment the finisher could be nice. | when i replied MBomb's part (if i'm not mistaken), i rearranged the distance there
00:17:197 (3) - Same fix as before with a 1/2 slider and a note. You're really missing a strong beat on these red ticks by having these long sliders, and by switching these patterns a bit, you can help the rhythm out with more close interpretation. | uh no, i shouldn't fix that, since having slider there should be fine
00:19:864 (2) - Tilting this to the right and forcing a dash to 00:20:531 (3) - would be a great way to set up the next section of music here, rather than make the whole distance walkable. | perhaps? also i re arrange the distance for 2
00:24:531 (3,4) - These distances are really quite close, which makes the difficulty feel a bit squished. Try adding a dash between 00:24:364 (2,3) - and moving 00:24:864 (4) - more to the right, making it horizontal so it plays better out of the previous dash pattern. | i only make 00:24:364 (2) to dash
00:25:364 (5,6) - A dash to 6 could be nice too, since the piano is REALLY strong here! | perhaps?
00:27:197 (3,1,2,3) - This whole pattern is cramped on the right grid, you should really add some spacing here to make the difficulty less restricting, and allowing the catcher to move a bit more, rather than making it sharp and choppy. | i shouldn't make too much movement for this salad diff
00:32:864 (1,2,3) - The pattern is really wrong, since you have the dash going to 00:33:364 (3) - when the strong note is at 00:33:197 (2) - . I'd suggest moving (2) to the right alongside (3) and rework the distances to that the dash is kept, but the pattern is more comfortable. | making a dash from 00:33:197 (2) is fine, just in case getting the sound feedback afterwards to dash
00:35:531 (3,4,5) - Same here, really. It also doesn't help that 00:34:864 (1,2,3) - are so close to each other. I'd suggest reworking the entire pattern here to ensure there is more constant movement and good flow, by taking the suggestion I did earlier about the strong note being alongside the slider after the dash. | same case as above
00:37:864 (2,3,4) - Why are these stacked? (3,4) should be farther away from 2 due to their stronger notation in the music, if anything. Move these away and give some distance here, it feels too close. | why you want to make slider 3 to dash while 00:38:531 (4) is enough to make a dash?
00:50:864 (8,1) - Really strong note on 1, adding a dash would be really recommended here | this would be look like make things a bit harder (just like how HR in ctb works)
00:52:531 (5) - NC this for the new line, and add some distance between this and the previous note. | uh no
Additionally, adding some dash between 00:52:864 (6,7,8) - would be really good since the notes pick up emphasis here and it could be nice leading up to the kiai. | i think so
00:53:864 (1,3,1,3) - All these 1/1 sliders should be changed to match the emphasis of the song, as stated above. I think there's room for improvement in these patterns as well, with them being a bit too cramped. | i only re arranged the distance there, hope it wouldn't be too awkward
01:00:864 (4) - ctrl+h'ing this works REALLY well here, since it gives room for the catcher to move, and creates a nice jump. | yes and make it a bit closer to 01:01:864 (5) -
JBHyperion pointed out a lot of stuff in the kiai so I'll let this be for now. Please take your time to reconsider this difficulty and don't be stubborn when accepting stuff. If you're going to deny anything, please give a REASON to why you're denying it, and make it a good reason. I don't want to come back here after another Qualify and write the same stuff.

done :3 now gimme a break!

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gonna call surono to stop mod my diff here >:c

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-11T09:14:55+00:00

Professor Gila wrote:
gonna call surono to stop mod my diff here >:c

wh

Wohh??? not me, theyre wanted to mod cuz your diff needs improvements. Idk what happen with you or you just trying like have right thinking? or what?

Oke lidah, udah ngebaca statmentnya si momota? oke gw ngerti lu berusaha buat Inovasi diff itu, salad dengan rasa comfortable.. tapi udah liat bagian2 yg menurut momota fatal itu? klau udah fix ya oke. tapi kalau modder dateng kesini jangan salahkan ke aku ya, karena mungkin ini datang karena ada agrumen kamu yg masih menyelekit di modder sebelumnya. dan kenapa mreka memanggil modder lain untuk ngertiin kamu jadi tetep yang aku bilangin, liat postnya si Momota buat kesadaran kamu. gw dulu sebagai mapper juga awal awal dapet mod ya masih respon mengiya iya, tapi lama kelamaan setelah gw ngerasa ngemap gw bener ya gw kadang brani menolak tapi entah kadang gw bakal brubah pikiran karna sadar itu memang bener. jadi terserah kamu kalau kuat ya kuatin, tapi jangan sampe buat mereka geram karna kelakuanmu. FOKUS Modnya bukan cara dia berbicara kalau kamu ga kuat, itu sebabnya kamu kadang cendorong menolak karna masih membawa EGO dari pada LOGIKA. buang dulu rasa ngedrama lu ye? pikirin diff lu dulu

dan Volta, gw maaf juga.. gw ga ngarep lu ngebaca baper ampas gw xd gw tau lu ga bermaksud gitu, kata2 lu emang biasa2 aja dan terkesan cuma bercanda dan ingetin.. yah biasa2 aja gw rasa, cuma pas itu gw lagi naik aja.. gw ga masalhin lu tapi orang di atas ini btw lol makanya lu ikut2an kebawa pake kata2 ampas gw, ya gitulah reaksi gw liat kondisi post2 di page sebelumnya itu.

ok,. lidah comeon hurry up, I want breathing for nothing `L_` ( lu coba bales tu mod dari AZ trus post lagi, gw ga bakal update karna gw sibuk. itu final mod buat lu)

not update yet, waiting lidah respon to AZ mod

Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-05-11T09:24:15+00:00

RESERVED FOR AZ'S

Absolute Zero wrote:
Road to requalification
[Prof. Gila's Salad]
00:11:197 (1) - This slider feels a bit strange because you suddenly stop following the melody. Make this a 1/2 slider + hitcircle instead because there's such a strong melody that you've followed before and it's a little awkward to leave out a strong note. | how about make slider tick ratio into 2? honestly i don't like this
00:13:864 (1) - ^ | ^
00:17:197 (3) - ^ | ^
00:38:697 (5,6) - Strangely low movement from (5,6). I would suggest moving (6,7,8) further away because of the long distance gap. Here, it would be fine to make a dash. | no no, i don't want to spam some more movements, actually
00:40:864 (2) - I would suggest making this a 1/4 slider and a hitcircle instead, if you want to follow both the melody and the higher piano. | thanks, but i prefer to keep it
00:43:197 (1,2,1,2) - AAAA by making these 1/1 sliders you miss so many beats in the melody! Please make these hitcircles 1/2 apart? | i just add some objects without remove them whut's AAAA
00:49:531 (4) - NC? | no
00:51:864 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - (Am unsure if others would agree with this comment) I would make this timeline like this instead to follow the melody closer.
Ticker is around 00:52:697
^ no
00:53:864 (1) - Again, you're missing key notes here in the melody. Make this two hitcircles? | isn't the droplet have representated so? (by making slider tick ratio 2)
00:55:197 (3) - ^ | ^
00:56:531 (1) - To keep consistency with the music before, I would suggest making this two hitcircles spaced 1/2 apart. | ^
01:07:197 (3,1) - Strangely low movement between these two? The music picks up but there is literally no reason for the catcher to move. Move (1) further left? | a bit
01:08:031 (2,1) - Spacing is again low here, this time for the long gap between the notes. | just move 01:08:864 (1) a bit to the right
01:08:864 (1,2) - Make (2) go further to the left, or at least a group between them. | only 01:09:197 (2) to the left a bit
01:09:864 (4,1,2) - Distance is way too low! Increase distance please. | a bit
01:14:197 (3,4,5) - These notes aren't in the melody you were following before. Please change the rhythms to match the notes. | i don't get the point, so no
01:31:198 (1) - Strange inconsistency with the 1/2 beat you have following the melody. Would suggest making these 3 hitcircles 1/2 length from each other. | again, the droplet have representated them by making slider tick ratio 2

~~damn it, i just reply the mod on my laptop, and the file is not after replying ascendance's :C~~ aaaahhhh, done!

:c :c :c :c :c

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Last edited by Professor Gila 2016-05-12T09:18:20+00:00, edited 5 times in total.

Lirai

1,516 posts

Joined December 2013

Lirai 2016-05-11T14:49:49+00:00

Mak sunari dont be sad pls

come join t♂ my party here wwww

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-11T14:52:37+00:00

[s]Momota[/s] DE-CADE wrote:
adohhh Ghalerrrrrr., .

edit:
oh no.. I saw bad sign.. wtf lidah

he just say forget to copy latest mod from ascendance and just reply AZ mod from his old diff??? wtf Lucky I scolding him to put previous post from ascendance mod and adjusting on AZ mod.. wtf man...

oke last...

Updated

ursa

1,302 posts

Joined April 2010

ursa 2016-05-12T16:42:49+00:00

Keep in mind modder spend their time to help the mapper to improve his/her diff, & at least give a proper reason when you accept/decline a mod.

anyway goodluck for the requalify

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-12T16:51:07+00:00

Mak Sunari ga kuat.........

Mak Sunari pengen nerbangin layangan biar kena pesawat, terus ntar ~~pesawatnya~~ layangannya jatuh deh

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Arlecchino 2016-05-14T03:52:59+00:00

PatZar wrote:
tar juga ke dq lagi

^ dukun confirmed

mz sur yang sabar, ttp semangat ya
GL~

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-14T04:20:54+00:00

Ada apa dgn si mapper salad dan ada apa dgn si BN/Modder?

Wew I regret nothink, i laik just breathink °

Hunter Howl

335 posts

Joined July 2013

Hunter Howl 2016-05-14T04:34:00+00:00

kena dq gara-gara salad yak?

padahal gw pengen nyoba main dengan DT :'(

Raediaufar

879 posts

Joined November 2014

Raediaufar 2016-05-14T07:36:47+00:00

Gue gatau ni map sempet quali yha, good luck and have stars

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-15T11:17:48+00:00

Thanks for support, guys!

Please tell me what happen, where are you BNs.. I afraid to summoning the BNs in-game or Forum ;w;

Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-05-15T14:39:39+00:00

nitip diff salad dari ane (abis edit, terpaksa ane edit beberapa bagian dan diusahain ilangin jump 1/4 nya)

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Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-16T12:49:33+00:00

Updated

edit:
oke, wh8 neks??????? ;L_;

snowball112

363 posts

Joined February 2013

snowball112 2016-05-17T21:58:00+00:00

Heya, random mod

Salad

The dashes in the beginning between objects like 00:01:031 (3,4) feel far too strong. I suggest you bring the whole thing of 00:00:531 (1,2,3) further to the right.
Similar issue with 00:03:697 (2,3) as ^
I think using a slider at 00:04:864 sounds pretty weird. This is because there are guitar sounds starting at 00:01:531 or 00:02:531 which would justify the use of sliders more, and you map a slider right between those, which doesn't make much sense imo. If you really want a slider in this part, I'd suggest you use one from 00:01:531 to 00:02:197 instead for the drawn-out sound in the music and emphasize stuff like 00:02:531 with single circles for more consistency here.
00:04:864 similar issue to ^
I think you should replace the slider starting at 00:10:197 with a single circle and have a nicely spaced 1/2 dash between 00:10:197 and 00:10:531.
00:31:531 ^
You have similar issues to the above later in the song as well, just going to take 00:21:864 (1,2,3) as an example. This choice of objects feels really off because there are longer sounds in the music starting from 00:22:864 for example, which is where your slider ends. A slider starting from such a point would sound much better. Also, for emphasis on the music something like the slider starting at 00:22:197 would sound better if you use single circles instead.
The slider starting at 00:53:864 just feels weird because you have the end mapped to a strong beat in the music, how about changing this to a 1/2 slider + circle on 00:54:531?
00:55:197 ^

Just to sum up some stuff when you apply my mod and recheck your diff:

You have a bunch of sliders landing on strong beats where circles would be more appropriate.
Emphasis through objects feels off, and this is reflected in the jumps, eg. why is there a jump between 00:34:531 (5,1) when there is a stronger sounding beat that would justify a jump between 00:34:197 (4,5) instead or to the note on 00:35:197. Maybe try a 1/2 slider from 00:34:531 and have a jump between 00:34:864 and 00:35:197 if you want to put emphasis on the piano.

The above two issues reoccur throughout your map, please use the above examples for reference.

Platter

Kind of similar stuff as in salad due to some weird object choices in my opinion.

00:00:864 (2,3) is a strange choice of object use. Maybe try replacing the second slider with two single circles, you have a stronger piano sound on 00:01:531.
00:04:031 (6) ^
00:04:864 (1,2) just feels weird because there is a long note between the two sliders, why not use circle - slider - circle instead? Much nicer for emphasis imo.
The pattern 00:12:197 (5,6) doesn't make much sense. You have a long sound in the music from 00:12:197 to 00:12:864 and a strong beat on 00:13:197. It would sound much better if you map the slider to the long sound and have a single note for the strong beat.
Jumps like that of 00:11:864 (4,5) feel weird because the dash happens after the stronger beat. How about making the jump between 00:11:698 (3,4) instead and using a slider from 00:12:197 to 00:12:864? Makes more sense with the instrument sounds imo.
Sliders like 00:43:531 (1,2,3,4) feel off because you have sliderends mapped to the stronger sounds or end sliders when long notes begin, for example at 00:44:531.

Similar stuff to the above examples later in the diff as well, mainly strong beats on sliderends.

Rain

Is the finish on the entire sliders of 00:22:197 (2,3) intended? Following ones only have start or end hitsounded. Edit: I meant whistle, whoops.

Also, consider changing sliders like the one at 00:22:697 to two single circles, stronger sound on the sliderend, also having a slider here kind of conflicts with the long sound starting at 00:22:864. Good stuff otherwise.

Good luck

Edit 2:

Surono wrote:
D:
btw, ty for random1!!!1!! no tacos mod? ayy

Not much to say, but if you want some more suggestions, sure.
Kantan:

00:53:197 - k, better contrast to following note and transition to next part where you map k to the drum beat eg. in the pattern of 00:55:197 (53,54,55).
Remove 01:06:531, nicer emphasis for the finish and better transition to next part. This note here just feels weird because the pitch is different to 01:07:197, but spacing and colour suggest same sounds, which is not the case.

Futsuu:

00:32:197 (46,47) - ctrl+g? Would be nice to have k on the strong piano sound like at 00:35:197.
00:22:864 Maybe d for contrast to 00:25:531?
00:28:197 maybe k, contrast to 00:30:864.

Muzukashii:

01:09:865 (161,162,163,164) - k d kk? Might be better for instrument emphasis, but stacking 3 1/2 k might be too much, maybe try around with this to see which you prefer.
01:20:531 (191,192,193,194) - ^
01:15:698 (178,179,180) k dd? Would fit the instrument nicely because sounds on this doublet are lower than the others.

Last edited by snowball112 2016-05-18T12:49:52+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Volta

1,622 posts

Joined March 2014

Volta 2016-05-18T04:05:19+00:00

snowball112 wrote:
Heya, random mod

Rain
Is the finish on the entire sliders of 00:22:197 (2,3) intended? Following ones only have start or end hitsounded. hm? no finish at all in those sliders. and only the end or the start are hitsounded like the following notes

Also, consider changing sliders like the one at 00:22:697 to two single circles, stronger sound on the sliderend, also having a slider here kind of conflicts with the long sound starting at 00:22:864. Good stuff otherwise. i prefer to have consistency with previous slider since the sound is similar. intended to make the long sound empty to make player fail if missed previous pattern too much

Good luck

thank you!

Momota

270 posts

Joined February 2014

Momota 2016-05-18T10:44:41+00:00

snowball112 wrote:
Heya, random mod
[box=Platter]Kind of similar stuff as in salad due to some weird object choices in my opinion.
00:00:864 (2,3) is a strange choice of object use. Maybe try replacing the second slider with two single circles, you have a stronger piano sound on 00:01:531. not strong enough i think, i make this pattern like 00:21:864
00:04:031 (6) ^ ^
00:04:864 (1,2) just feels weird because there is a long note between the two sliders, why not use circle - slider - circle instead? Much nicer for emphasis imo. applied
The pattern 00:12:197 (5,6) doesn't make much sense. You have a long sound in the music from 00:12:197 to 00:12:864 and a strong beat on 00:13:197. It would sound much better if you map the slider to the long sound and have a single note for the strong beat. i'll try ctrl+g 6
Jumps like that of 00:11:864 (4,5) feel weird because the dash happens after the stronger beat. How about making the jump between 00:11:698 (3,4) instead and using a slider from 00:12:197 to 00:12:864? Makes more sense with the instrument sounds imo. i think enough dash when stronger beat, i wanna put dash on long sound/music during the breaks, i dont know what the name lol, and that a small jump without press dash
Sliders like 00:43:531 (1,2,3,4) feel off because you have sliderends mapped to the stronger sounds or end sliders when long notes begin, for example at 00:44:531. ^

Good luck

thanks for mod snowball

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Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-18T11:29:32+00:00

snowball112 wrote:
[Rain]
Is the finish on the entire sliders of 00:22:197 (2,3) intended? Following ones only have start or end hitsounded. Edit: I meant whistle, whoops.

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Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-05-18T15:38:39+00:00

snowball112 wrote:
Salad
The dashes in the beginning between objects like 00:01:031 (3,4) feel far too strong. I suggest you bring the whole thing of 00:00:531 (1,2,3) further to the right. | a bit for sure let them be.....
Similar issue with 00:03:697 (2,3) as ^ | moving 00:03:531 (1,2) to the right a bit let them be.....
I think using a slider at 00:04:864 sounds pretty weird. This is because there are guitar sounds starting at 00:01:531 or 00:02:531 which would justify the use of sliders more, and you map a slider right between those, which doesn't make much sense imo. If you really want a slider in this part, I'd suggest you use one from 00:01:531 to 00:02:197 instead for the drawn-out sound in the music and emphasize stuff like 00:02:531 with single circles for more consistency here. | pretty far, but i let the gap there since that still follow the xylophone tones instead of bass
00:04:864 similar issue to ^ | ^
I think you should replace the slider starting at 00:10:197 with a single circle and have a nicely spaced 1/2 dash between 00:10:197 and 00:10:531. | i prefer move 00:10:531 (2) close to end of slider 1
00:31:531 ^ | i prefer this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5183550
You have similar issues to the above later in the song as well, just going to take 00:21:864 (1,2,3) as an example. This choice of objects feels really off because there are longer sounds in the music starting from 00:22:864 for example, which is where your slider ends. A slider starting from such a point would sound much better. Also, for emphasis on the music something like the slider starting at 00:22:197 would sound better if you use single circles instead. | but there are 2 piano sound from 00:22:197 and 00:22:697
The slider starting at 00:53:864 just feels weird because you have the end mapped to a strong beat in the music, how about changing this to a 1/2 slider + circle on 00:54:531? | but it wouldn't be wrong if there's a tick on 1/2 part since i use slidertick ratio into 2 i hate slidertick 2
00:55:197 ^ | ^
Just to sum up some stuff when you apply my mod and recheck your diff:
You have a bunch of sliders landing on strong beats where circles would be more appropriate. | i highly prefer sliders to 2 circles
Emphasis through objects feels off, and this is reflected in the jumps, eg. why is there a jump between 00:34:531 (5,1) when there is a stronger sounding beat that would justify a jump between 00:34:197 (4,5) instead or to the note on 00:35:197. Maybe try a 1/2 slider from 00:34:531 and have a jump between 00:34:864 and 00:35:197 if you want to put emphasis on the piano. | just 1/2 slider from 00:34:864 to 00:35:197
The above two issues reoccur throughout your map, please use the above examples for reference.

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Surono

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Surono 2016-05-18T19:34:57+00:00

snowball112 wrote:
Edit 2:
Surono wrote:
D:
btw, ty for random1!!!1!! no tacos mod? ayy
Not much to say, but if you want some more suggestions, sure.
Kantan:
00:53:197 - k, better contrast to following note and transition to next part where you map k to the drum beat eg. in the pattern of 00:55:197 (53,54,55). O
Remove 01:06:531, nicer emphasis for the finish and better transition to next part. This note here just feels weird because the pitch is different to 01:07:197, but spacing and colour suggest same sounds, which is not the case. O
Futsuu:
00:32:197 (46,47) - ctrl+g? Would be nice to have k on the strong piano sound like at 00:35:197.
00:22:864 Maybe d for contrast to 00:25:531?
00:28:197 maybe k, contrast to 00:30:864. but these makes monotone
Muzukashii:
01:09:865 (161,162,163,164) - k d kk? Might be better for instrument emphasis, but stacking 3 1/2 k might be too much, maybe try around with this to see which you prefer.
01:20:531 (191,192,193,194) - ^
01:15:698 (178,179,180) k dd? Would fit the instrument nicely because sounds on this doublet are lower than the others. thats all will broken the contrast color on left patterns

wuhu, ty for tacos flavour.

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@lidahapi : kok lama-lama stars diff mu makin turun?

Professor Gila

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Professor Gila 2016-05-19T09:36:58+00:00

Surono: hanya karena ane nerima berbagai mod (bukan yang ditolak), starnya emang turun, dan rata rata mod yang ane terima itu buat ngegampangin diff saladnya (ternyata)

Equim

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Equim 2016-06-01T19:38:48+00:00

wake up wake up ^^

Surono

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Surono 2016-06-02T16:00:20+00:00

Equim wrote:
wake up wake up ^^

ye ikr, I just waiting till now... w h e n

someone plss, whats wrong with this dem.. okek madness LIDAHSAPI, kill him

Sc4v4ng3r

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Sc4v4ng3r 2016-06-05T14:38:26+00:00

Checking on the Salad difficulty as Suruno requested me.
Please give elaborate reasons to why you decline a suggestion if you need to, we as modders won't understand your intention if you decline them without reason.

[Prof. Gila's Salad]

00:01:364 (4,5) - I'm just wondering why's this dash's distance farther than those in the kiai(like 01:07:531 (1,2) - ), when the kiai's piano is much more higher pitched, and having more stress on them over these. Since their strength differs by a lot, I would strongly recommend you to reduce their distance. Besides, since this is the beginning of the map, beginners to dashes might get thrown off by this far distance.
00:03:197 (3,1) - NC should be swapped here as (3) contains a stronger note of piano than (1), so that it can denote the downbeat.
00:04:031 (3,4) - These as well, when compared to 01:10:197 (1,2,3,4) - , their strength differs a lot, so I would make these notes be closer to 00:03:531 (1,2) - .
00:12:197 (2,1) - While the distance itself isn't too far on paper, due to the stop-motion on (2), the movement towards (1) might get a little bit harder as it requires the catcher to stop in place then dash towards the next note - as Salad is only an introduction to dashes, stopping the flow might result in these kinds of rough transition. Actually most of the dashes before the kiai feels far due to this, so taking these as examples, please at least make the dashes before the kiai easier by making them follow the flow, not stopping it.
00:20:531 (3) - I don't quite understand the dash here; the piano's sound is not specially stronger over (1) or (2), yet this only having a dash is just overemphasizing this note. Therefore I believe (3) should be brought closer to (2), so that the piano's sound is correctly emphasized.
00:34:864 (1) - Since you're following the main melody as piano, skipping over the sound at 00:35:031 - doesn't follow the consistency that you were having, and even more so because all the piano's sounds were emphasized in this section. At least make this into a 1/4 repeated slider to emphasize on that piano sound to follow consistency.
00:51:197 (1) - Currently the dash can be caught without dashing, so I suggest you to move this note further away.
00:52:531 (5) - But since you had a dash on (1) to emphasize on that high pitched piano, this note should be haivng a dash as well, to emphasize on the high pitched piano sound. Emphasizing on strong sounds should be done consistently to avoid any confusion between players.
01:07:531 (1,2) - Like I'd mentioned earlier on 00:01:364 (4,5) - and 00:04:031 (3,4) - , these are all on the chorus of the song - where the instruments are at the highest pitch/strength. To reflect better on this, I belive those previous distances you had before the kiai should be instead used here(and similar others like 01:10:197 (1,2,3,4) - , 01:15:531 (1,2) - , 01:18:197 (2,3,4) - , etc.). Make sure to go over every similar rhythm and apply this.
01:11:864 (5,6,7) - Personal opinion but these should be more horizontal like 01:22:531 (4,5,6) - these are, as the piano sounds landing on those notes are all similar in strength.
01:14:364 - Again, you are missing out on quite a loud sound of piano on this tick, especially when in the whole kiai you've been following piano as your main rhythm. Try to add an object here to follow consistency, so that(again) there will be no confusion.
01:14:697 - 01:15:031 - Yeaaaaa basically this point's gonna have the same reason like the above point, for consistency, try to add objects onto these ticks.
01:17:864 (1,2,3) - I'm not too sure why did you decide to go for a vertical pattern on these, when there's a piano sound clearly heard on (2). Even on the first part of the chorus you at least made a small movement(at 01:07:197 (3) - ). To promote more movement on those clearly heard piano sounds, at least try to move (2) away from (1) so that a movement is required to catch them both.
01:25:864 (6) - The dash here doesn't feel too strong when it's the pinnacle of the chorus - in fact it isn't even a dash when it should be, to reflect on the high pitched piano. I strongly suggest you to move (6) farther away, by moving 01:24:864 (4) - more towards the left, then moving (5) to the left as well, until (6) reaches the triggering distance for normal dashes.
01:26:864 (2) - Again, looks like this is an intended dash - and right now it is a walkable dash. Make the distance between the previous note and this note farther.

Overall the weaker emphasis on the kiai than before the kiai caught my attention the most - in fact this might be questionnable to DQs.
GL!

Surono

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Surono 2016-06-06T04:36:38+00:00

Oke this time....... dem, Suruno sounds cute `L_`

nggggghhhh, calling the dem mapper of stale salad

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