1. Futsuu (1.68 stars, 86 notes)
2. Kantan (1.11 stars, 53 notes)
3. Muzukashii (2.31 stars, 155 notes)
4. Oni (3.24 stars, 227 notes)

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Surono wrote:

s.it map, me/ playing with stand up.

>General
Spreading to far?, idk I bad on spreading to thinking Spreading between Futsuu <--> Muzukashii is bad (Again)

>Oni
* 00:03:334 - Please rest section, delete
* 00:04:298 (28,30) - how about delete this?
* 00:06:012 (37,39,40) - ^
* 00:06:334 - eee.... why too long, you can consider this it fine for me
* 00:11:477 (65,66) - move to 00:12:334 - to here? if you accept on previous suggestion, bcus its consistent pattern nope
* 00:13:405 - until 00:15:334 - here just 1/2 pattern, why not make 1/4 too like u did on previous part?
* 00:23:905 - 00:25:620 - 00:27:334 (146,147) - wanna delete this to gib rest?
* 00:32:798 - delete?
* 00:33:655 (185,191) - to-long.. welp
* 00:36:012 - I think don is enough.. kat to over with emphasize, 00:36:120 - stronk emphasize just here
* 00:36:334 - from here make d kkd? :v then 00:37:084 - delete this
* 00:38:155 - wanna delete? like previous part 00:34:727 - ( but you can cosindering this for make 1/4 pattern )
* 00:39:227 - too akward, 00:39:120 - from here make x x xxxxx x x? ( 00:39:655 - just move to here :v )
* 00:41:048 - don? contrasting for 00:40:834 (225,227) - emphasize
nice Inn- it's oni please :V
Fix Almost of them lazy to reply

>Muzukashii
* 00:01:191 (7,14) - ey..
* 00:09:655 - put kat, for balance with Oni?
* 00:16:727 - no, move to 00:17:477 - here?
* 00:27:762 (108,109) - don
* 00:28:191 (111,113) - choose 1 for delete
and try to consider spreading from Oni diff okay all fixed

>Futsuu
* 00:09:977 - put kat?
* 00:28:834 - feels weird if this empty
nice diff, but maybe you can more filling notes on non-kiai cuz spread like kantan (?) lol


>Kantan
rest looks nice for me, I think should make consistent on coloring pattern if have same parts.. for easir to play for newbie

Hope Helpful, yeah harsh for newbie.. espesially Oni like inn_ XD

Muzukashii

Oni

Jason X wrote:

Hi, from Queue
d
k
D
K

Muzukashii

00:09:977 (39) - K okay

Oni

00:09:977 (58) - K okay
00:25:834 - add d no please i need break here

Thats all i want to say, good luck

Delta1015 wrote:

bank78952 wrote:
1st o/
NM req
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/427740 it's 42 sec map :3
Thanks in advance


Hello! First of all, excellent job beatmapping this one. There's not too much of anything that I see wrong with it.

Kantan: I thought it was perfect.

Futsuu: 00:33:120 - I would add a don here. okay

Muzukashii: 00:17:262 - This portion of the song has a bunch of eighth beats, but no sixteenth beats. I would maybe add a kat at 00:21:441 just to spruce it up a bit. huh no i'll keep 1/2 in that part

On the Oni beatmap: 00:01:620 (11) - I personally would change this to kkddk because I fiind kkkdk a bit awkward. no no it's fine for me

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The three changes I recommended were optional, I just thought they might improve the maps a little. Again, this map was particularly hard to mod because there wasn't really anything wrong with it. Great job, I think you're on your way to being ranked!
Best of luck! -Delta1015

Prophecy wrote:

From Prophecy's Taiko Modding Queue v2
Mod Number : 5 / 500

[General]
a little bit can't here the hitsound well, maybe 50%?
kiai 60%?

[Kantan]
00:03:548 (5) - D maybe i'll add :3

[Futsuu]
00:09:762 - add k okay
00:24:120 (44) - D maybe i'll add :3
00:25:834 (47) - D maybe i'll add :3
00:27:548 (49) - D/K maybe i'll add :3
00:35:691 - add d okay
00:41:691 - ^ okay

[Muzu]
Nerf something please, the gap between Futsuu is little bit large
00:00:977 (6) - del fix
00:02:262 (11) - del ^
00:09:548 (34,35,36) - no please, kdk is unacceptable for Muzu change to kkk

Nice Mapset!!!!!

Jason X wrote:

Hi, from Queue
d
k
D
K

Muzukashii

00:09:977 (39) - K

Oni

00:09:977 (58) - K
00:25:834 - add d

Thats all i want to say, good luck

Doyak wrote:

Idk if you even read my queue's rule a bit lol im sorry XDDDD

anyway, I'm returning your mod here

[General]
* Use .jpg BG instead? It can save a lot of file size. PNG are fine please XD
* Idk if this needs for Taiko too, but maybe use Audiolead in 1500ms? it not need for taiko but anyways if you wanna do please do it for me lolz //runs :v
* I would prefer OD 2 3 4 5 spread, as the song is slow and very soft, so it's pretty hard to hit properly within that small hit windows. +1 for TV size

[Kantan]
* 00:20:691 - Skipping this feel a bit empty, how about http://puu.sh/nPJXI/0e531eb9c0.jpg ? nope i think i shoud add break here
* If you accept that one, 00:23:262 (28,29) - for these two, http://puu.sh/nPJZl/277e766346.jpg would be consistent. ^
* 00:37:405 - add k? Feels too empty for a kiai. okay

[Futsuu]
* 00:23:691 - Add k, this 2/1 chain feels too long and boring. okay
* 00:26:691 (48,49,50,51,52,53) - omg too many k's in a row. I suggest changing 00:27:548 (49) - into a d blame rhythm and my ears not change
* The kiai feels a bit boring. In contrast of the first part 00:00:548 (2,3) - 00:09:548 (19,20,21) - 00:11:691 (24,25) - these 1/2s and some red tick beats, the kiai has only 1/1s and simple rhythms. Hope you would add something more interesting on kiai. I would make like http://puu.sh/nPKln/99a035744b.jpg this hard for the kiai. anyways 1/2 are fine for futsuu but it not too much i'll not change

[Muzukashii]
* 00:24:120 - 00:25:834 - Even though you're following the vocals, missing these downbeats which have strong drum sounds feels awkward for me. break and i nerf that part :3
* 00:21:977 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89) - http://puu.sh/nPKF6/ab13c20ae5.jpg like this? i change some part but not all
* 00:33:012 - add k? like 00:36:441 - fix
* 00:39:870 - add d fix
* 00:41:262 (152) - Change to d? The tone goes down follow vocals XDDDDDDD
* 00:41:262 (152,153,154,155,156) - Maybe too boring end for a Muzu. Oni has even many 1/4s there, so how about http://puu.sh/nPKPm/3c721afddf.jpg i change but dkk d k kkd

[Oni]
* 00:05:905 (36,37) - d and k? The tone goes down and up again
* 00:12:977 (74) - k and 00:13:405 (75,76) - dk
* 00:25:834 - Again, leaving this strong drum beat feels too empty. I think there is even another syllable? Not sure about that though. Anyway adding a d wouldn't hurt the map I think. Also would be good if you add 00:24:120 - 00:25:834 - 00:27:548 - finish on them. it's little break and i won't add note here

rest looks fine for me, good luck!

Doyak wrote:

Oh of course pngs are fine, but jpg doesn't lower the quality much, so it's almost free-reducing filesize, so why not change it? It's easy to convert.

mintong89 wrote:

Mod request from my queue, so here we go!

[Oni]

00:03:120 (22) - I'd prefer change this to d because at here there's no like high pitch sound or drum clap anyway. okay
00:03:548 (23) - K here? to represent first stanza of vocal start and drum cymbal. okay
00:04:834 (29) - k to follow 2-4 stanza clap. huh no :3
00:06:762 (39,40,41) - Since you have kkd at before too, so how about change these to ddk for variety? umm... kkd still fine for me XD
00:10:405 (59) - D here for represent drum cymbal. okay
00:17:262 (91) - K, the reason is same as above. okay
00:20:262 (107) - k? the vocal tone at here is higher than 00:20:048 (106) - this. okay
00:22:191 (116,117,118) - ddk? yeah you've too much kkd so for variety. yeah i used too much but all are fine for me XDD
00:24:120 (126) - D for drum cymbal. fix
00:25:834 - Add a big note? The drum cymbal is quite loud at here imo. idk i should add but anyways let me think again XDD
00:27:334 - I think it would be better to add a note, because generally the note pattern is too short and the flow would better if you add it!kkk are fine? fix
00:37:191 - => 00:37:620 - Hmm I think kdkkd is better, the tone at 00:37:191 (193) - here is just same as 00:36:977 (192) - here. fix
Also how about add a spinner instead of note at the end? im not sure i should add? XD

[Muzukashii]

00:03:548 (14) - D for drum cymbal. fix
00:04:620 (17) - Move this note to 00:04:405 - here and change to k to follow vocal? fix
00:06:120 (23) - k? the vocal tone at here is quite high. nope d are fine for me
00:12:977 (47) - Same as above. nope d are fine for me
00:17:262 (63) - K for drum cymbal. fix
00:20:048 - add a note to follow vocal? okay
00:22:834 (83,84,85) - Change these to k d k? for variety since you have k k d at before. okay
Same, add spinner at end might be more fit to song.

[Futsuu]

00:03:548 (8) - D for drum cymbal. fix
00:08:477 (17,18) - It seems an unexpected rhythm change(1/1 to 2/4) and I think it's not friendly to Futsuu player, so how about shift 1/2 after it? XD that's my fault anyways fix

[Kantan]

00:03:548 (5) - D for drum cymbal.
00:10:405 (13) - ^ ... all fixed lolz

It's a solid mapset!
Good luck!

Backfire wrote:

General
Fine mapset overall. Good luck! Nothing really general to say.

Kantan
00:24:120 - Maybe kat here. You go d d k d, but if it's k d k d, it's a little more symmetrical to the flow.
00:42:977 - I think the sound is a little bit like a clap to me, but this is mostly just suggestion, it's fine how it is.

Futsuu
00:42:977 - Same as other diffs

Muzu
00:01:405 - 00:02:048 - This sort of feels unnecessary, this little section.
00:42:977 - Same as other diffs

Oni
00:25:834 - Definitely needs to be a note here, feels empty without.
00:42:977 - Same as other diffs

1. You choose to not to follow the vocals at 00:04:834 (10,11) but at 00:11:691 (24,25) you do? imo this doesn't feel right at all in a Futsuu. If you choose to fix one I'd say deleting 00:05:262 (11) and addding a k at 00:05:048 would be much nicer

1. 00:02:048 (10) - Consider removing because of the instruments? There's nothing in the music that suggests this d. I also think that 00:01:405 (6,7,8,9) these notes alone would make this section sound better with the 2/1 wait going into 00:02:691 (11,12,13)
2. 00:13:405 (48,49) - Ctrl +G . For the reason that it'll be consistent with 00:06:548 (24,25) (Same parts in the song). It also matches the tone of the vocals
3. 00:11:691 (42,43) - Change 42 to k. Sounds a lot better just like at 00:04:834 (18,19) -
4. 00:06:120 (23) - Heres a suggestion, change this to k since the vocals go higher here and the notes is alone

1. 00:03:548 Through 00:09:977 has a lot of 1/4 notes which seems fine. The problem is 00:10:405 through 00:17:262 has a lot less in comparison, even though the section is nearly the same as the previous one if not more intense. You may want to balance that out.

Skyhmer wrote:

NM from queue
Kantan was solid

Futsuu

1. You choose to not to follow the vocals at 00:04:834 (10,11) but at 00:11:691 (24,25) you do? imo this doesn't feel right at all in a Futsuu. If you choose to fix one I'd say deleting 00:05:262 (11) and addding a k at 00:05:048 would be much nicer okay

Muzukashii

1. 00:02:048 (10) - Consider removing because of the instruments? There's nothing in the music that suggests this d. I also think that 00:01:405 (6,7,8,9) these notes alone would make this section sound better with the 2/1 wait going into 00:02:691 (11,12,13) still not fix like bf's mod
2. 00:13:405 (48,49) - Ctrl +G . For the reason that it'll be consistent with 00:06:548 (24,25) (Same parts in the song). It also matches the tone of the vocals "dk" are fine for me
3. 00:11:691 (42,43) - Change 42 to k. Sounds a lot better just like at 00:04:834 (18,19) - d are better
4. 00:06:120 (23) - Heres a suggestion, change this to k since the vocals go higher here and the notes is alone idk but d are fine for me (again) not change

Oni
I don't think I can really give a mod to a Oni with this note density, but there is one thing I noticed

1. 00:03:548 Through 00:09:977 has a lot of 1/4 notes which seems fine. The problem is 00:10:405 through 00:17:262 has a lot less in comparison, even though the section is nearly the same as the previous one if not more intense. You may want to balance that out. i've remove 2/4 note in 00:10:727 - hope it's fine

Its small but its a 0:40 map, hopefully this helped a bit
Good Luck!

5urface wrote:

M4M for t/434477/start=0

General
Well, this might have been mentioned before but getting such a short map ranked is challenging. You might want to consider looping the song to increase its length not less or equal more than 0:30 sec are fine

Kantan
00:06:548 (8,9,10) I would invert this pattern to a d k d. While the beat is monotone here it would follow the vocals better.
00:41:691 Add a d. The Kiai patterns do not change compared to the patterns outside of Kiai time, it feels just a little too empty, even for a Kantan. all fixed

Futsuu
00:06:977 (15,16,17) Invert to k d k plays a bit better and vollows the vocals more fix
00:30:120 (54) D nope i follow rhythm
00:36:120 (64) k okay

Muzukashii
00:36:762 d nope i follow vocal and k are fine for me

Oni
00:26:155 add a d to bring this more in line with 00:24:334 (126,127,128) - ok got it fixed

Short but sweet, good luck with your map =)

guro wrote:

M4M train chooing through

After your map has been so thorougly modded already, I hope I can still find something, wow.

[Futsuu]

00:09:548 (20,21,22) - Maybe change that one to dkk. That part sounds like there is a change of pitch from rather low to high. However, it's pretty optional. ok change

I am really sorry for this extremely short "mod", but there really wasn't much left. Your map is really well done and very well modded already. However, I will shoot you a kudosu (as soon as I can ) as some kind of compensation for my rather short mod. Good luck!

nyanmi-1828 wrote:

hi~ From my Queue~

Kantan

00:32:691 - add d

Muzukashii

00:42:762 - Delete No sound here

all fixed

Good luck~

1. I think all HP can go up by 1. The song is simple and short.
2. BG should be 1366x768.

1. 00:08:905 (51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - I think this sounds nice with 'k d ddk k K', because simple patterns are nice for quiet parts!
2. 00:13:834 - Add d? And then add k at 00:14:370 and d at 00:14:798? Since this part is the same as 00:10:405, I think you should map the same.
3. 00:20:477 (108,109,110) - ddk? Since you already have kkd
4. 00:22:620 (119,120,121,122,123) - d k ddd? I think it works nice.
5. 00:27:334 (146,147,148) - k K? It's great to add emphasis with big notes, you don't need 1/4!
6. 00:38:048 (203,204,205,206) - dk ddk? More like 00:31:298 (163,164,165,166,167) - .

1. 00:02:798 - add d? Since Oni has 3 5plets.
2. 00:07:191 (26,27,28,29) - k ddd k? Oni has a ddkkd, I think it's a good idea to have 1/4 in Muzu.
   But if you did 00:08:905 in Oni, delete00:09:334 (33,34,35,36) - for a break.
3. 00:14:584 (53) - I think even if you do 00:13:834 in Oni, I think you should still delete this note.
4. 00:16:620 (61) - Delete for a small break.
5. 00:27:762 (102,103,104) - kkk, since kkd is not recommended in Muzukashii (especially here).
6. 00:28:941 - add k? Since Oni is still hard.
7. 00:32:905 (119,120,121) - kkk?
8. 00:36:120 (133,134,135,136,137,138) - k ddd d k? I know Oni has kkd, but ddd works nice to change all the times you use kkk.
9. 00:39:977 (150) - d? I know kkd and ddk seem easy, but when spread is this wide it's better to use simple triplets.
10. 00:41:691 (156,157,158) - d d k d k? It seems to easy, since Oni has a lot of notes.

1. 00:02:691 - Add d? d d is better for spread.
2. 00:08:262 - Add d? And then delete 00:09:120 (19,20,21) - if you changed this part in Muzukashii.
3. 00:18:548 - Add k? You can use more notes here.
4. 00:21:977 - Add d? Can also be good here for spread.
5. 00:25:834 (49,50,51,52,53) - You need more notes here. Spread is bad because Muzukashii has 1/4. How about k d k d k k k?
6. 00:30:977 (58,59,60,61,62) - K k d d k k d , then delete 00:33:977 (63) - ?
7. 00:34:405 (64,65,66,67,68) - d d k d k k k, then delete 00:37:405 (69) - ? This is much better for spread.
8. 00:37:834 (70,71,72,73,74) - d d k k k d k?

1. 00:01:405 (2,3) - d k? It's nicer since you already use k d right after.
2. 00:05:262 (7,8,9,10) - k _ k _ k _ _ _ d? The rhythm is much better.
   00:06:977 (9,10,11,12) - Then make this part like that ^!
3. 00:41:691 (48) - Delete? To make easier than Futsuu.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[General]

1. I think all HP can go up by 1. The song is simple and short. okay
2. BG should be 1366x768. will fix or find new bg

[Oni]

1. 00:08:905 (51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - I think this sounds nice with 'k d ddk k K', because simple patterns are nice for quiet parts! Fix
2. 00:13:834 - Add d? And then add k at 00:14:370 and d at 00:14:798? Since this part is the same as 00:10:405, I think you should map the same. fix except 00:14:370 -
3. 00:20:477 (108,109,110) - ddk? Since you already have kkd
4. 00:22:620 (119,120,121,122,123) - d k ddd? I think it works nice.
5. 00:27:334 (146,147,148) - k K? It's great to add emphasis with big notes, you don't need 1/4!
6. 00:38:048 (203,204,205,206) - dk ddk? More like 00:31:298 (163,164,165,166,167) - . All fix

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:02:798 - add d? Since Oni has 3 5plets.
2. 00:07:191 (26,27,28,29) - k ddd k? Oni has a ddkkd, I think it's a good idea to have 1/4 in Muzu.
   But if you did 00:08:905 in Oni, delete00:09:334 (33,34,35,36) - for a break.
3. 00:14:584 (53) - I think even if you do 00:13:834 in Oni, I think you should still delete this note.
4. 00:16:620 (61) - Delete for a small break.
5. 00:27:762 (102,103,104) - kkk, since kkd is not recommended in Muzukashii (especially here).
6. 00:28:941 - add k? Since Oni is still hard.
7. 00:32:905 (119,120,121) - kkk?
8. 00:36:120 (133,134,135,136,137,138) - k ddd d k? I know Oni has kkd, but ddd works nice to change all the times you use kkk.
9. 00:39:977 (150) - d? I know kkd and ddk seem easy, but when spread is this wide it's better to use simple triplets.
10. 00:41:691 (156,157,158) - d d k d k? It seems to easy, since Oni has a lot of notes. all fix

[Futsuu]

1. 00:02:691 - Add d? d d is better for spread.
2. 00:08:262 - Add d? And then delete 00:09:120 (19,20,21) - if you changed this part in Muzukashii.
3. 00:18:548 - Add k? You can use more notes here.
4. 00:21:977 - Add d? Can also be good here for spread.
5. 00:25:834 (49,50,51,52,53) - You need more notes here. Spread is bad because Muzukashii has 1/4. How about k d k d k k k?
6. 00:30:977 (58,59,60,61,62) - K k d d k k d , then delete 00:33:977 (63) - ?
7. 00:34:405 (64,65,66,67,68) - d d k d k k k, then delete 00:37:405 (69) - ? This is much better for spread.
8. 00:37:834 (70,71,72,73,74) - d d k k k d k? all fix

[Kantan]

1. 00:01:405 (2,3) - d k? It's nicer since you already use k d right after.
2. 00:05:262 (7,8,9,10) - k _ k _ k _ _ _ d? The rhythm is much better.
   00:06:977 (9,10,11,12) - Then make this part like that ^!
3. 00:41:691 (48) - Delete? To make easier than Futsuu. all fix

Apply this, and then get some more mods. I'll re-check some day.

Kisses wrote:

hi m4m

[Kantan]
00:08:691 (11) - move to 00:08:477
00:15:548 (18) - move to 00:15:334 not change all

[futsuu]
00:08:691 (20) - I suggest moving this to 00:08:477 as this beat is much stronger and is also part of the rhythm. 00:15:334 (32) - You have the red tick mapped here so, all the more reason to do so.
00:08:905 - If you do the above adding a d here would play nicely
00:26:262 (52) - delete?
00:39:548 (77) - d fix only this

[muzu]
00:04:834 (18,19,20,21,22,23) - I think you should map this similar to here 00:11:691 (40) . maybe this? http://puu.sh/oqKGw/ca674802d9.jpg . dk kkdd is better than this but anyways i'll keep this suggestion
00:42:334 (156,157) - ctrl + g fix

[Oni]
00:03:120 (22) - k? d are still fine
00:23:905 - adding a d here flows well imo k is better but i'll not add until next mod :3

I hope this mod was useful to you at all, GL :3

snowball112 wrote:

Heya, random mod

Oni

00:42:762 - k? would be nice for emphasis on clap in the music and better contrast to 00:42:977.

The first Patterns until 00:03:120 just feel really weird to play I think... The main thing is the kkkdk here which looks a bit out of place, you have no other pattern like this in your map. I suggest that you:

1. Change 00:01:084 to d. feels nicer to play imo. You don't have anything special in the music where the triplet is, so 3x d should be fine.
2. Change 00:01:620 (11,12,13,14,15) to ddkkd. The slightly higher piano sound starts at 00:01:834, so I think it would be good if you use k from here for better emphasis. Starting this pattern with k sounds too strong for this part.
3. Change 00:02:262 to k for instrument emphasis would be good here.
4. I think the last pattern 00:02:477 (17,18,19,20,21) would play much better if there was a k on 00:02:905 because there is a clap in the music. Either ctrl+g 00:02:798 (20,21) so you have ddkdk OR ctrl+g and delete the note at 00:02:798 so you have ddk k. Second option is maybe better to keep the patterns here easier. all fixed

Muzukashii

I think k would sound nice at 00:33:977 for the emphasis of the clap in the music.

Maybe change 00:39:548 (144,145,146,147) to d kkk? I think it sounds better for the pattern of 00:39:120 (142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149) if you have only 2x k at the beginning and not 3x. nope that still fine for me

00:42:334 (156,157) ctrl+g? It would sound nice to have k on the last note here for emphasis on the clap in the music. Maybe even add another k at 00:42:762, I don't think this would be too hard and would be nice to end the song with kkD to follow claps and emphasis on the last finisher. nope that still fine for me

Good luck

Aloda wrote:

Hello

Kantan

00:20:691 - Add a k here fix

00:36:977 - Add a d here k is better

00:40:405 - Add a d here fix

00:40:834 (45,46) - d k -> k d no i follow vocal not change

Oni

00:01:727 (12) - Remove this note (maybe 00:02:584 (17) too). This is the softest section of the song, but it's just about the most intense part in your map. Removing these makes this section more relaxed while still following the beat. fine, fixed

00:24:977 (129,130,131) - kkd -> kdk This fits the rhythm better nope kkd are still fine for me

00:27:762 (148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158) - k d ddk d kdkkd -> k ddd k ddk kkd This sounds a little better to me, but what you had was fine also nope

Your Futsuu and Muzukashii are good as they are Good luck getting ranked!

1. 00:04:834 add d here, for balancing the spread with futsuu. Futsuu has 3/2 placed here, yet kantan has 2/1, which makes kantan has long break compared to Futsuu. Only my presumption though.
2. 00:05:262 (7) - move to 00:05:691 - so the pattern will be same with 00:12:548 (14,15) - etc or just add another note there which is my wild suggestion lol
3. 00:17:262 (21) - finish?
   => if you apply this, also apply it on futsuu
4. 00:21:120 (25) - i suggest removing this, then add d at 00:20:262 - , for rising vocal. Removing the note might makes 00:21:548 (26) - stronger, so the difference between that and the next note (which resembles the higher vocal pitch) may be emphasized more than the current pattern.
5. 00:40:834 (48) - try to move to 00:39:977 because the vocal is merrier there lol
6. 00:24:977 - add k and 00:26:691 - d for the spread with futsuu. futsuu is really crowded there

1. I have no problem on Futsuu except the fact that you don't add any 1/2 on kiai despite the normal parts having complex patterns. I guess try adding some there?

1. 00:12:977 (44) - k for vocal
2. 00:15:762 (54) - change to d for vocal too
3. 00:33:120 (118) - k, no kkd allowed on muzukashii, except it has sufficient break
4. 00:41:905 (154) - can be removed to emphasize the vocal after

1. 00:14:798 (78) - can be removed, the vocal has been emphasized 00:14:262 (74,75,76) - , so giving break here won't hurt?
2. 00:27:762 (146,147) - swap for better flow and following the vocal better
3. 00:38:155 (200) - move to 00:38:048, then change 00:38:691 (204) - to k follows the vocal better imo

Senritsu wrote:

Hi from queue
Sorry for late qwq baka! :3

[Kantan]

1. 00:04:834 add d here, for balancing the spread with futsuu. Futsuu has 3/2 placed here, yet kantan has 2/1, which makes kantan has long break compared to Futsuu. Only my presumption though. fix
2. 00:05:262 (7) - move to 00:05:691 - so the pattern will be same with 00:12:548 (14,15) - etc or just add another note there which is my wild suggestion lol i choose move lel
3. 00:17:262 (21) - finish? okie
   => if you apply this, also apply it on futsuu i'll XD
4. 00:21:120 (25) - i suggest removing this, then add d at 00:20:262 - , for rising vocal. Removing the note might makes 00:21:548 (26) - stronger, so the difference between that and the next note (which resembles the higher vocal pitch) may be emphasized more than the current pattern. okay
5. 00:40:834 (48) - try to move to 00:39:977 because the vocal is merrier there lol nah i keep this not change
6. 00:24:977 - add k and 00:26:691 - d for the spread with futsuu. futsuu is really crowded there fix

[Futsuu]

1. I have no problem on Futsuu except the fact that you don't add any 1/2 on kiai despite the normal parts having complex patterns. I guess try adding some there? okay i'll (but idk ddk kkd in 1/2 are allow orz //kill myself XD)

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:12:977 (44) - k for vocal
2. 00:15:762 (54) - change to d for vocal too
3. 00:33:120 (118) - k, no kkd allowed on muzukashii, except it has sufficient break
4. 00:41:905 (154) - can be removed to emphasize the vocal after all fixed

[Oni]

1. 00:14:798 (78) - can be removed, the vocal has been emphasized 00:14:262 (74,75,76) - , so giving break here won't hurt? nah not change i want to hurt finger
2. 00:27:762 (146,147) - swap for better flow and following the vocal better
3. 00:38:155 (200) - move to 00:38:048, then change 00:38:691 (204) - to k follows the vocal better imo only change to k in 00:38:691 -

That's all i think, good luck~