1. Futsuu (1.68 stars, 86 notes)
2. Kantan (1.11 stars, 53 notes)
3. Muzukashii (2.31 stars, 155 notes)
4. Oni (3.24 stars, 227 notes)

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Surono wrote:

s.it map, me/ playing with stand up.

>General
Spreading to far?, idk I bad on spreading to thinking Spreading between Futsuu <--> Muzukashii is bad (Again)

>Oni
* 00:03:334 - Please rest section, delete
* 00:04:298 (28,30) - how about delete this?
* 00:06:012 (37,39,40) - ^
* 00:06:334 - eee.... why too long, you can consider this it fine for me
* 00:11:477 (65,66) - move to 00:12:334 - to here? if you accept on previous suggestion, bcus its consistent pattern nope
* 00:13:405 - until 00:15:334 - here just 1/2 pattern, why not make 1/4 too like u did on previous part?
* 00:23:905 - 00:25:620 - 00:27:334 (146,147) - wanna delete this to gib rest?
* 00:32:798 - delete?
* 00:33:655 (185,191) - to-long.. welp
* 00:36:012 - I think don is enough.. kat to over with emphasize, 00:36:120 - stronk emphasize just here
* 00:36:334 - from here make d kkd? :v then 00:37:084 - delete this
* 00:38:155 - wanna delete? like previous part 00:34:727 - ( but you can cosindering this for make 1/4 pattern )
* 00:39:227 - too akward, 00:39:120 - from here make x x xxxxx x x? ( 00:39:655 - just move to here :v )
* 00:41:048 - don? contrasting for 00:40:834 (225,227) - emphasize
nice Inn- it's oni please :V
Fix Almost of them lazy to reply

>Muzukashii
* 00:01:191 (7,14) - ey..
* 00:09:655 - put kat, for balance with Oni?
* 00:16:727 - no, move to 00:17:477 - here?
* 00:27:762 (108,109) - don
* 00:28:191 (111,113) - choose 1 for delete
and try to consider spreading from Oni diff okay all fixed

>Futsuu
* 00:09:977 - put kat?
* 00:28:834 - feels weird if this empty
nice diff, but maybe you can more filling notes on non-kiai cuz spread like kantan (?) lol


>Kantan
rest looks nice for me, I think should make consistent on coloring pattern if have same parts.. for easir to play for newbie

Hope Helpful, yeah harsh for newbie.. espesially Oni like inn_ XD

Muzukashii

Oni

Jason X wrote:

Hi, from Queue
d
k
D
K

Muzukashii

00:09:977 (39) - K okay

Oni

00:09:977 (58) - K okay
00:25:834 - add d no please i need break here

Thats all i want to say, good luck

Delta1015 wrote:

bank78952 wrote:
1st o/
NM req
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/427740 it's 42 sec map :3
Thanks in advance


Hello! First of all, excellent job beatmapping this one. There's not too much of anything that I see wrong with it.

Kantan: I thought it was perfect.

Futsuu: 00:33:120 - I would add a don here. okay

Muzukashii: 00:17:262 - This portion of the song has a bunch of eighth beats, but no sixteenth beats. I would maybe add a kat at 00:21:441 just to spruce it up a bit. huh no i'll keep 1/2 in that part

On the Oni beatmap: 00:01:620 (11) - I personally would change this to kkddk because I fiind kkkdk a bit awkward. no no it's fine for me

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The three changes I recommended were optional, I just thought they might improve the maps a little. Again, this map was particularly hard to mod because there wasn't really anything wrong with it. Great job, I think you're on your way to being ranked!
Best of luck! -Delta1015

Prophecy wrote:

From Prophecy's Taiko Modding Queue v2
Mod Number : 5 / 500

[General]
a little bit can't here the hitsound well, maybe 50%?
kiai 60%?

[Kantan]
00:03:548 (5) - D maybe i'll add :3

[Futsuu]
00:09:762 - add k okay
00:24:120 (44) - D maybe i'll add :3
00:25:834 (47) - D maybe i'll add :3
00:27:548 (49) - D/K maybe i'll add :3
00:35:691 - add d okay
00:41:691 - ^ okay

[Muzu]
Nerf something please, the gap between Futsuu is little bit large
00:00:977 (6) - del fix
00:02:262 (11) - del ^
00:09:548 (34,35,36) - no please, kdk is unacceptable for Muzu change to kkk

Nice Mapset!!!!!

Jason X wrote:

Hi, from Queue
d
k
D
K

Muzukashii

00:09:977 (39) - K

Oni

00:09:977 (58) - K
00:25:834 - add d

Thats all i want to say, good luck

Doyak wrote:

Idk if you even read my queue's rule a bit lol im sorry XDDDD

anyway, I'm returning your mod here

[General]
* Use .jpg BG instead? It can save a lot of file size. PNG are fine please XD
* Idk if this needs for Taiko too, but maybe use Audiolead in 1500ms? it not need for taiko but anyways if you wanna do please do it for me lolz //runs :v
* I would prefer OD 2 3 4 5 spread, as the song is slow and very soft, so it's pretty hard to hit properly within that small hit windows. +1 for TV size

[Kantan]
* 00:20:691 - Skipping this feel a bit empty, how about http://puu.sh/nPJXI/0e531eb9c0.jpg ? nope i think i shoud add break here
* If you accept that one, 00:23:262 (28,29) - for these two, http://puu.sh/nPJZl/277e766346.jpg would be consistent. ^
* 00:37:405 - add k? Feels too empty for a kiai. okay

[Futsuu]
* 00:23:691 - Add k, this 2/1 chain feels too long and boring. okay
* 00:26:691 (48,49,50,51,52,53) - omg too many k's in a row. I suggest changing 00:27:548 (49) - into a d blame rhythm and my ears not change
* The kiai feels a bit boring. In contrast of the first part 00:00:548 (2,3) - 00:09:548 (19,20,21) - 00:11:691 (24,25) - these 1/2s and some red tick beats, the kiai has only 1/1s and simple rhythms. Hope you would add something more interesting on kiai. I would make like http://puu.sh/nPKln/99a035744b.jpg this hard for the kiai. anyways 1/2 are fine for futsuu but it not too much i'll not change

[Muzukashii]
* 00:24:120 - 00:25:834 - Even though you're following the vocals, missing these downbeats which have strong drum sounds feels awkward for me. break and i nerf that part :3
* 00:21:977 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89) - http://puu.sh/nPKF6/ab13c20ae5.jpg like this? i change some part but not all
* 00:33:012 - add k? like 00:36:441 - fix
* 00:39:870 - add d fix
* 00:41:262 (152) - Change to d? The tone goes down follow vocals XDDDDDDD
* 00:41:262 (152,153,154,155,156) - Maybe too boring end for a Muzu. Oni has even many 1/4s there, so how about http://puu.sh/nPKPm/3c721afddf.jpg i change but dkk d k kkd

[Oni]
* 00:05:905 (36,37) - d and k? The tone goes down and up again
* 00:12:977 (74) - k and 00:13:405 (75,76) - dk
* 00:25:834 - Again, leaving this strong drum beat feels too empty. I think there is even another syllable? Not sure about that though. Anyway adding a d wouldn't hurt the map I think. Also would be good if you add 00:24:120 - 00:25:834 - 00:27:548 - finish on them. it's little break and i won't add note here

rest looks fine for me, good luck!

Doyak wrote:

Oh of course pngs are fine, but jpg doesn't lower the quality much, so it's almost free-reducing filesize, so why not change it? It's easy to convert.

mintong89 wrote:

Mod request from my queue, so here we go!

[Oni]

00:03:120 (22) - I'd prefer change this to d because at here there's no like high pitch sound or drum clap anyway. okay
00:03:548 (23) - K here? to represent first stanza of vocal start and drum cymbal. okay
00:04:834 (29) - k to follow 2-4 stanza clap. huh no :3
00:06:762 (39,40,41) - Since you have kkd at before too, so how about change these to ddk for variety? umm... kkd still fine for me XD
00:10:405 (59) - D here for represent drum cymbal. okay
00:17:262 (91) - K, the reason is same as above. okay
00:20:262 (107) - k? the vocal tone at here is higher than 00:20:048 (106) - this. okay
00:22:191 (116,117,118) - ddk? yeah you've too much kkd so for variety. yeah i used too much but all are fine for me XDD
00:24:120 (126) - D for drum cymbal. fix
00:25:834 - Add a big note? The drum cymbal is quite loud at here imo. idk i should add but anyways let me think again XDD
00:27:334 - I think it would be better to add a note, because generally the note pattern is too short and the flow would better if you add it!kkk are fine? fix
00:37:191 - => 00:37:620 - Hmm I think kdkkd is better, the tone at 00:37:191 (193) - here is just same as 00:36:977 (192) - here. fix
Also how about add a spinner instead of note at the end? im not sure i should add? XD

[Muzukashii]

00:03:548 (14) - D for drum cymbal. fix
00:04:620 (17) - Move this note to 00:04:405 - here and change to k to follow vocal? fix
00:06:120 (23) - k? the vocal tone at here is quite high. nope d are fine for me
00:12:977 (47) - Same as above. nope d are fine for me
00:17:262 (63) - K for drum cymbal. fix
00:20:048 - add a note to follow vocal? okay
00:22:834 (83,84,85) - Change these to k d k? for variety since you have k k d at before. okay
Same, add spinner at end might be more fit to song.

[Futsuu]

00:03:548 (8) - D for drum cymbal. fix
00:08:477 (17,18) - It seems an unexpected rhythm change(1/1 to 2/4) and I think it's not friendly to Futsuu player, so how about shift 1/2 after it? XD that's my fault anyways fix

[Kantan]

00:03:548 (5) - D for drum cymbal.
00:10:405 (13) - ^ ... all fixed lolz

It's a solid mapset!
Good luck!

Backfire wrote:

General
Fine mapset overall. Good luck! Nothing really general to say.

Kantan
00:24:120 - Maybe kat here. You go d d k d, but if it's k d k d, it's a little more symmetrical to the flow.
00:42:977 - I think the sound is a little bit like a clap to me, but this is mostly just suggestion, it's fine how it is.

Futsuu
00:42:977 - Same as other diffs

Muzu
00:01:405 - 00:02:048 - This sort of feels unnecessary, this little section.
00:42:977 - Same as other diffs

Oni
00:25:834 - Definitely needs to be a note here, feels empty without.
00:42:977 - Same as other diffs

1. You choose to not to follow the vocals at 00:04:834 (10,11) but at 00:11:691 (24,25) you do? imo this doesn't feel right at all in a Futsuu. If you choose to fix one I'd say deleting 00:05:262 (11) and addding a k at 00:05:048 would be much nicer

1. 00:02:048 (10) - Consider removing because of the instruments? There's nothing in the music that suggests this d. I also think that 00:01:405 (6,7,8,9) these notes alone would make this section sound better with the 2/1 wait going into 00:02:691 (11,12,13)
2. 00:13:405 (48,49) - Ctrl +G . For the reason that it'll be consistent with 00:06:548 (24,25) (Same parts in the song). It also matches the tone of the vocals
3. 00:11:691 (42,43) - Change 42 to k. Sounds a lot better just like at 00:04:834 (18,19) -
4. 00:06:120 (23) - Heres a suggestion, change this to k since the vocals go higher here and the notes is alone

1. 00:03:548 Through 00:09:977 has a lot of 1/4 notes which seems fine. The problem is 00:10:405 through 00:17:262 has a lot less in comparison, even though the section is nearly the same as the previous one if not more intense. You may want to balance that out.

Skyhmer wrote:

NM from queue
Kantan was solid

Futsuu

1. You choose to not to follow the vocals at 00:04:834 (10,11) but at 00:11:691 (24,25) you do? imo this doesn't feel right at all in a Futsuu. If you choose to fix one I'd say deleting 00:05:262 (11) and addding a k at 00:05:048 would be much nicer okay

Muzukashii

1. 00:02:048 (10) - Consider removing because of the instruments? There's nothing in the music that suggests this d. I also think that 00:01:405 (6,7,8,9) these notes alone would make this section sound better with the 2/1 wait going into 00:02:691 (11,12,13) still not fix like bf's mod
2. 00:13:405 (48,49) - Ctrl +G . For the reason that it'll be consistent with 00:06:548 (24,25) (Same parts in the song). It also matches the tone of the vocals "dk" are fine for me
3. 00:11:691 (42,43) - Change 42 to k. Sounds a lot better just like at 00:04:834 (18,19) - d are better
4. 00:06:120 (23) - Heres a suggestion, change this to k since the vocals go higher here and the notes is alone idk but d are fine for me (again) not change

Oni
I don't think I can really give a mod to a Oni with this note density, but there is one thing I noticed

1. 00:03:548 Through 00:09:977 has a lot of 1/4 notes which seems fine. The problem is 00:10:405 through 00:17:262 has a lot less in comparison, even though the section is nearly the same as the previous one if not more intense. You may want to balance that out. i've remove 2/4 note in 00:10:727 - hope it's fine

Its small but its a 0:40 map, hopefully this helped a bit
Good Luck!

5urface wrote:

M4M for t/434477/start=0

General
Well, this might have been mentioned before but getting such a short map ranked is challenging. You might want to consider looping the song to increase its length not less or equal more than 0:30 sec are fine

Kantan
00:06:548 (8,9,10) I would invert this pattern to a d k d. While the beat is monotone here it would follow the vocals better.
00:41:691 Add a d. The Kiai patterns do not change compared to the patterns outside of Kiai time, it feels just a little too empty, even for a Kantan. all fixed

Futsuu
00:06:977 (15,16,17) Invert to k d k plays a bit better and vollows the vocals more fix
00:30:120 (54) D nope i follow rhythm
00:36:120 (64) k okay

Muzukashii
00:36:762 d nope i follow vocal and k are fine for me

Oni
00:26:155 add a d to bring this more in line with 00:24:334 (126,127,128) - ok got it fixed

Short but sweet, good luck with your map =)

guro wrote:

M4M train chooing through

After your map has been so thorougly modded already, I hope I can still find something, wow.

[Futsuu]

00:09:548 (20,21,22) - Maybe change that one to dkk. That part sounds like there is a change of pitch from rather low to high. However, it's pretty optional. ok change

I am really sorry for this extremely short "mod", but there really wasn't much left. Your map is really well done and very well modded already. However, I will shoot you a kudosu (as soon as I can ) as some kind of compensation for my rather short mod. Good luck!

nyanmi-1828 wrote:

hi~ From my Queue~

Kantan

00:32:691 - add d

Muzukashii

00:42:762 - Delete No sound here

all fixed

Good luck~

1. I think all HP can go up by 1. The song is simple and short.
2. BG should be 1366x768.

1. 00:08:905 (51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - I think this sounds nice with 'k d ddk k K', because simple patterns are nice for quiet parts!
2. 00:13:834 - Add d? And then add k at 00:14:370 and d at 00:14:798? Since this part is the same as 00:10:405, I think you should map the same.
3. 00:20:477 (108,109,110) - ddk? Since you already have kkd
4. 00:22:620 (119,120,121,122,123) - d k ddd? I think it works nice.
5. 00:27:334 (146,147,148) - k K? It's great to add emphasis with big notes, you don't need 1/4!
6. 00:38:048 (203,204,205,206) - dk ddk? More like 00:31:298 (163,164,165,166,167) - .

1. 00:02:798 - add d? Since Oni has 3 5plets.
2. 00:07:191 (26,27,28,29) - k ddd k? Oni has a ddkkd, I think it's a good idea to have 1/4 in Muzu.
   But if you did 00:08:905 in Oni, delete00:09:334 (33,34,35,36) - for a break.
3. 00:14:584 (53) - I think even if you do 00:13:834 in Oni, I think you should still delete this note.
4. 00:16:620 (61) - Delete for a small break.
5. 00:27:762 (102,103,104) - kkk, since kkd is not recommended in Muzukashii (especially here).
6. 00:28:941 - add k? Since Oni is still hard.
7. 00:32:905 (119,120,121) - kkk?
8. 00:36:120 (133,134,135,136,137,138) - k ddd d k? I know Oni has kkd, but ddd works nice to change all the times you use kkk.
9. 00:39:977 (150) - d? I know kkd and ddk seem easy, but when spread is this wide it's better to use simple triplets.
10. 00:41:691 (156,157,158) - d d k d k? It seems to easy, since Oni has a lot of notes.

1. 00:02:691 - Add d? d d is better for spread.
2. 00:08:262 - Add d? And then delete 00:09:120 (19,20,21) - if you changed this part in Muzukashii.
3. 00:18:548 - Add k? You can use more notes here.
4. 00:21:977 - Add d? Can also be good here for spread.
5. 00:25:834 (49,50,51,52,53) - You need more notes here. Spread is bad because Muzukashii has 1/4. How about k d k d k k k?
6. 00:30:977 (58,59,60,61,62) - K k d d k k d , then delete 00:33:977 (63) - ?
7. 00:34:405 (64,65,66,67,68) - d d k d k k k, then delete 00:37:405 (69) - ? This is much better for spread.
8. 00:37:834 (70,71,72,73,74) - d d k k k d k?

1. 00:01:405 (2,3) - d k? It's nicer since you already use k d right after.
2. 00:05:262 (7,8,9,10) - k _ k _ k _ _ _ d? The rhythm is much better.
   00:06:977 (9,10,11,12) - Then make this part like that ^!
3. 00:41:691 (48) - Delete? To make easier than Futsuu.