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bank78952

snowball112 wrote:

Heya, random mod

Oni
00:42:762 - k? would be nice for emphasis on clap in the music and better contrast to 00:42:977.

The first Patterns until 00:03:120 just feel really weird to play I think... The main thing is the kkkdk here which looks a bit out of place, you have no other pattern like this in your map. I suggest that you:
  1. Change 00:01:084 to d. feels nicer to play imo. You don't have anything special in the music where the triplet is, so 3x d should be fine.
  2. Change 00:01:620 (11,12,13,14,15) to ddkkd. The slightly higher piano sound starts at 00:01:834, so I think it would be good if you use k from here for better emphasis. Starting this pattern with k sounds too strong for this part.
  3. Change 00:02:262 to k for instrument emphasis would be good here.
  4. I think the last pattern 00:02:477 (17,18,19,20,21) would play much better if there was a k on 00:02:905 because there is a clap in the music. Either ctrl+g 00:02:798 (20,21) so you have ddkdk OR ctrl+g and delete the note at 00:02:798 so you have ddk k. Second option is maybe better to keep the patterns here easier. all fixed

Muzukashii
I think k would sound nice at 00:33:977 for the emphasis of the clap in the music.

Maybe change 00:39:548 (144,145,146,147) to d kkk? I think it sounds better for the pattern of 00:39:120 (142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149) if you have only 2x k at the beginning and not 3x. nope that still fine for me

00:42:334 (156,157) ctrl+g? It would sound nice to have k on the last note here for emphasis on the clap in the music. Maybe even add another k at 00:42:762, I don't think this would be too hard and would be nice to end the song with kkD to follow claps and emphasis on the last finisher. nope that still fine for me

Good luck
short reply thanks for random mod :D
Aloda
Hello :)

Kantan
00:20:691 - Add a k here

00:36:977 - Add a d here

00:40:405 - Add a d here

00:40:834 (45,46) - d k -> k d

Oni
00:01:727 (12) - Remove this note (maybe 00:02:584 (17) too). This is the softest section of the song, but it's just about the most intense part in your map. Removing these makes this section more relaxed while still following the beat.

00:24:977 (129,130,131) - kkd -> kdk This fits the rhythm better

00:27:762 (148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158) - k d ddk d kdkkd -> k ddd k ddk kkd This sounds a little better to me, but what you had was fine also

Your Futsuu and Muzukashii are good as they are :D Good luck getting ranked!
Topic Starter
bank78952

Aloda wrote:

Hello :)

Kantan
00:20:691 - Add a k here fix

00:36:977 - Add a d here k is better

00:40:405 - Add a d here fix

00:40:834 (45,46) - d k -> k d no i follow vocal not change

Oni
00:01:727 (12) - Remove this note (maybe 00:02:584 (17) too). This is the softest section of the song, but it's just about the most intense part in your map. Removing these makes this section more relaxed while still following the beat. fine, fixed

00:24:977 (129,130,131) - kkd -> kdk This fits the rhythm better nope kkd are still fine for me

00:27:762 (148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158) - k d ddk d kdkkd -> k ddd k ddk kkd This sounds a little better to me, but what you had was fine also nope

Your Futsuu and Muzukashii are good as they are :D Good luck getting ranked!
Thanks
Senritsu
Hi from queue
Sorry for late qwq

[Kantan]
  1. 00:04:834 add d here, for balancing the spread with futsuu. Futsuu has 3/2 placed here, yet kantan has 2/1, which makes kantan has long break compared to Futsuu. Only my presumption though.
  2. 00:05:262 (7) - move to 00:05:691 - so the pattern will be same with 00:12:548 (14,15) - etc or just add another note there which is my wild suggestion lol
  3. 00:17:262 (21) - finish?
    => if you apply this, also apply it on futsuu
  4. 00:21:120 (25) - i suggest removing this, then add d at 00:20:262 - , for rising vocal. Removing the note might makes 00:21:548 (26) - stronger, so the difference between that and the next note (which resembles the higher vocal pitch) may be emphasized more than the current pattern.
  5. 00:40:834 (48) - try to move to 00:39:977 because the vocal is merrier there lol
  6. 00:24:977 - add k and 00:26:691 - d for the spread with futsuu. futsuu is really crowded there


[Futsuu]
  1. I have no problem on Futsuu except the fact that you don't add any 1/2 on kiai despite the normal parts having complex patterns. I guess try adding some there?
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:12:977 (44) - k for vocal
  2. 00:15:762 (54) - change to d for vocal too
  3. 00:33:120 (118) - k, no kkd allowed on muzukashii, except it has sufficient break
  4. 00:41:905 (154) - can be removed to emphasize the vocal after
[Oni]
  1. 00:14:798 (78) - can be removed, the vocal has been emphasized 00:14:262 (74,75,76) - , so giving break here won't hurt?
  2. 00:27:762 (146,147) - swap for better flow and following the vocal better
  3. 00:38:155 (200) - move to 00:38:048, then change 00:38:691 (204) - to k follows the vocal better imo
That's all i think, good luck~
Topic Starter
bank78952

Senritsu wrote:

Hi from queue
Sorry for late qwq baka! :3

[Kantan]
  1. 00:04:834 add d here, for balancing the spread with futsuu. Futsuu has 3/2 placed here, yet kantan has 2/1, which makes kantan has long break compared to Futsuu. Only my presumption though. fix
  2. 00:05:262 (7) - move to 00:05:691 - so the pattern will be same with 00:12:548 (14,15) - etc or just add another note there which is my wild suggestion lol i choose move lel
  3. 00:17:262 (21) - finish? okie
    => if you apply this, also apply it on futsuu i'll XD
  4. 00:21:120 (25) - i suggest removing this, then add d at 00:20:262 - , for rising vocal. Removing the note might makes 00:21:548 (26) - stronger, so the difference between that and the next note (which resembles the higher vocal pitch) may be emphasized more than the current pattern. okay
  5. 00:40:834 (48) - try to move to 00:39:977 because the vocal is merrier there lol nah i keep this not change
  6. 00:24:977 - add k and 00:26:691 - d for the spread with futsuu. futsuu is really crowded there fix


[Futsuu]
  1. I have no problem on Futsuu except the fact that you don't add any 1/2 on kiai despite the normal parts having complex patterns. I guess try adding some there? okay i'll (but idk ddk kkd in 1/2 are allow orz //kill myself XD)
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:12:977 (44) - k for vocal
  2. 00:15:762 (54) - change to d for vocal too
  3. 00:33:120 (118) - k, no kkd allowed on muzukashii, except it has sufficient break
  4. 00:41:905 (154) - can be removed to emphasize the vocal after all fixed
[Oni]
  1. 00:14:798 (78) - can be removed, the vocal has been emphasized 00:14:262 (74,75,76) - , so giving break here won't hurt? nah not change i want to hurt finger
  2. 00:27:762 (146,147) - swap for better flow and following the vocal better
  3. 00:38:155 (200) - move to 00:38:048, then change 00:38:691 (204) - to k follows the vocal better imo only change to k in 00:38:691 -
That's all i think, good luck~
Thanks :3
Stefan
yo.

[Oni]
00:00:120 (1,2,3,4,5) - On personal view it feels odd to start with a stream, you may want to remove (2) if other agree with that.
00:27:762 (146) - Since you held the previous combo pattern pretty short you could do this too here by removing this note.
00:33:334 (170,171,172,173,174) - Instead of kkddk try ddkkd, I believe it plays smoother and it sounds better if you listen to the music. Not that kkddk is bad here but imo ddkkd works better for me.

Very solid Oni Difficulty.

[Muzukashii]
00:15:977 (55,56) - switch? There's nothing much to say except that d k d fits better here than d d k, music-wise.
00:17:477 (59) - personally, I'd prefer to leave 00:17:262 (58) - alone and not to be connected with 00:17:691 (60) - , a standing alone finisher sounds for the most time better for a "new" part of a song.
00:22:405 (78) - Personal preference would be to move the note on 00:22:620 - to emphasize the vocals on 00:21:977 (76,77) - better.
00:26:798 (94,95) - The triplet doesn't contribute much here and doesn't bring the effect you want to aim by using them. I would remove these two notes to achieve a better emphasis with 00:26:691 (93,96,97) - on the vocals.
00:37:405 (136,137,138) - What about removing (137) and swap the hitsounds of (136,138)? It sounds better according to the music.
00:39:334 (143) - d maaaaaybe?
00:42:334 (155,156) - A switch might sounds better here, idk. Just my feeling.

The Muzukashii Difficulty looks also pretty good, not exactly how I'd go to the song but definitely acceptable and well-done in general.

[Futsuu]
00:01:834 (5) - the transistion is kinda odd here, you may want to move the note on 00:02:048 - ?
00:42:120 (81) - k sounds cooler imo, what do you think?

At first I thought the jump is somewhat big since Futsuu feels by far emptier than Muzukashii but if I compare them both in real time it's fine, dense- and rhythm-wise it's an acceptable difficulty increase from futsuu > muzukashii. Nice job.

[Kantan]
00:24:977 (31) - You may want to add a break here and remove the note. A little break wouldn't hurt at all and help newer players to take a short break.
00:37:405 (46) - I felt more like you should play k k k on 00:36:120 - 00:36:977 - . Means that you should move the note on 00:36:548 - .

This Kantan Difficulty is surprisingly good and well-designed.
Topic Starter
bank78952

Stefan wrote:

yo.

[Oni]
00:00:120 (1,2,3,4,5) - On personal view it feels odd to start with a stream, you may want to remove (2) if other agree with that. im fine at this part not change
00:27:762 (146) - Since you held the previous combo pattern pretty short you could do this too here by removing this note. fix
00:33:334 (170,171,172,173,174) - Instead of kkddk try ddkkd, I believe it plays smoother and it sounds better if you listen to the music. Not that kkddk is bad here but imo ddkkd works better for me. fix

Very solid Oni Difficulty.

[Muzukashii]
00:15:977 (55,56) - switch? There's nothing much to say except that d k d fits better here than d d k, music-wise. fix
00:17:477 (59) - personally, I'd prefer to leave 00:17:262 (58) - alone and not to be connected with 00:17:691 (60) - , a standing alone finisher sounds for the most time better for a "new" part of a song. okay
00:22:405 (78) - Personal preference would be to move the note on 00:22:620 - to emphasize the vocals on 00:21:977 (76,77) - better. okay
00:26:798 (94,95) - The triplet doesn't contribute much here and doesn't bring the effect you want to aim by using them. I would remove these two notes to achieve a better emphasis with 00:26:691 (93,96,97) - on the vocals. okay
00:37:405 (136,137,138) - What about removing (137) and swap the hitsounds of (136,138)? It sounds better according to the music. umm... no not change
00:39:334 (143) - d maaaaaybe? k is still fine :)
00:42:334 (155,156) - A switch might sounds better here, idk. Just my feeling. ddk still fine for me not change...maybe

The Muzukashii Difficulty looks also pretty good, not exactly how I'd go to the song but definitely acceptable and well-done in general.

[Futsuu]
00:01:834 (5) - the transistion is kinda odd here, you may want to move the note on 00:02:048 - ?
00:42:120 (81) - k sounds cooler imo, what do you think? all fix

At first I thought the jump is somewhat big since Futsuu feels by far emptier than Muzukashii but if I compare them both in real time it's fine, dense- and rhythm-wise it's an acceptable difficulty increase from futsuu > muzukashii. Nice job.

[Kantan]
00:24:977 (31) - You may want to add a break here and remove the note. A little break wouldn't hurt at all and help newer players to take a short break. fix
00:37:405 (46) - I felt more like you should play k k k on 00:36:120 - 00:36:977 - . Means that you should move the note on 00:36:548 - . fix

This Kantan Difficulty is surprisingly good and well-designed.
Thanks bubble please :3
KamizonoShinobu
Hi, from my modding queue
General
Ok, but offset is a bit weird for me(maybe I am too sensitive to BPM?)

Kantan
Really hard to mod Kantan tbh, non-kiai part is fine for me
00:32:691 (38,40) - Ctrl + G , pitch from high to low ( or k k d or k d k are fine for me)
00:36:548 (44) - d, low pitch
00:39:977 - add a note here? follow the patterns in 00:30:977 (36,37,38,39,40) to increase consistency

Futsuu
00:18:977 (37) - move 1/2 earlier, the SE starts at 1/2 earlier (in addition, swap 00:18:548 (36,37) as the pitch is from low to high)
00:22:405 (44) - ^
00:32:691 (62,63) - make it 1/2 kkk? Follows vocal
00:36:120 (69,70) - ^ , for consistency if accepted
00:39:548 (76,77) - 1/2 ddd? ^^
00:40:834 & 00:41:048 add notes here? ^^^

Muzukashii
HP 6 , avoid muzu newbies lost significant HP from missing
00:03:548 (14,15,16,17) - Weird, prefer dk kd as it fits the music more.
00:05:262 (20) - delete or move to 00:05:905 . If move, change 00:06:120 (23) - to k.
00:10:620 - add note here? Vocal sound is heard here
00:14:905 - ^
this fits the song more
^
00:28:834 (98,99,100,101) - _ kkk d -> ddk k d

Oni
HP 7 , Oni should have higher HP than muzu
00:16:620 (85,86) - delete, don't see a point placing these notes here. Does not follow SE or vocal
00:18:548 (97) - change to d, relatively low pitch among 00:18:120 (95,96,97,98)
00:18:977 move 1/2 later,
00:22:191 (114,115,116) - ddk, low to high pitch
try this pattern, fits the music better.

Overall Good map, but the mapping style is a bit different to me so I can't ensure my modding quality. GL on ranking this map!
Topic Starter
bank78952

Chocola_2287 wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue
General
Ok, but offset is a bit weird for me(maybe I am too sensitive to BPM?)

Kantan
Really hard to mod Kantan tbh, non-kiai part is fine for me
00:32:691 (38,40) - Ctrl + G , pitch from high to low ( or k k d or k d k are fine for me)
00:36:548 (44) - d, low pitch
00:39:977 - add a note here? follow the patterns in 00:30:977 (36,37,38,39,40) to increase consistency

Futsuu
00:18:977 (37) - move 1/2 earlier, the SE starts at 1/2 earlier (in addition, swap 00:18:548 (36,37) as the pitch is from low to high)
00:22:405 (44) - ^
00:32:691 (62,63) - make it 1/2 kkk? Follows vocal
00:36:120 (69,70) - ^ , for consistency if accepted
00:39:548 (76,77) - 1/2 ddd? ^^
00:40:834 & 00:41:048 add notes here? ^^^

Muzukashii
HP 6 , avoid muzu newbies lost significant HP from missing
00:03:548 (14,15,16,17) - Weird, prefer dk kd as it fits the music more.
00:05:262 (20) - delete or move to 00:05:905 . If move, change 00:06:120 (23) - to k.
00:10:620 - add note here? Vocal sound is heard here
00:14:905 - ^
this fits the song more
^
00:28:834 (98,99,100,101) - _ kkk d -> ddk k d

Oni
HP 7 , Oni should have higher HP than muzu same reason with Muzu
00:16:620 (85,86) - delete, don't see a point placing these notes here. Does not follow SE or vocal nope
00:18:548 (97) - change to d, relatively low pitch among 00:18:120 (95,96,97,98) ok fix
00:18:977 move 1/2 later, no it sfill fine not change
00:22:191 (114,115,116) - ddk, low to high pitch im follow vocal not change
try this pattern, fits the music better. im current pattern still fine :v

Overall Good map, but the mapping style is a bit different to me so I can't ensure my modding quality. GL on ranking this map!
im not reply muzu coz i have bluescreen while i write reply anyways Thanks :3
Charlotte
Hi from my queues

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is big don note
  4. K is big kat note
[ General]


  • SliderMultiplier:1.39999990463257→1.40
[ Muzukashii]


  • 00:02:691 (11,12,13) - hmm...I thnik this ddk is little strange.so 00:02:477 - add don & 00:02:691 - change to kat.You can try it.

    00:09:334 - add don & 00:09:548 - add kat.I prefer this rhythm.

    00:12:334 (42,43,44,45) - kdkd.Vocal is low pitch.

    00:13:405 (46,47) - swap.because,00:13:620 - High pitch.

    00:14:048 (48,49,50,51) - dkkd? Follow the vocal.

    00:15:120 (52,53) - swap.because,00:15:334 - High pitch.

    00:16:834 - Change to don.For emphasized to next 00:17:262 -

    00:18:120 (60,61) - swap? It works better to vocal smoother.

    00:19:620 - You can remove. 00:19:620 - I hear sound vocal.but,This 1/2 break is make to good flow.

    00:21:548 - k

    00:23:048 - move to 00:23:477 - & 00:24:120 - remove. Good 1/2 break time & Follow the vocal.

    00:28:405 - k.high pitch.

    00:32:262 (108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115) - k-d-k-ddd-d-k.You can try it.I think good pattern.

    00:37:405 - Change to don. 00:37:620 - move to 00:38:048 - & 00:37:834 - Change to kat.Good 1/2 break time & Follow the vocal.

    00:39:120 (139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146) - d-k-d-kkk-d-k.You can try it.vocal is high pitch.so kkk is good~

    00:42:334 - change to don & 00:42:548 - change to kat. & 00:42:762 - add kat.Follow the vocal + For spread.
[ Oni]


  • 00:02:262 - Change to kat.00:02:584 - add don.00:02:798 (19,20) - swap.00:03:120 - Change to kat.I think more goog pattern.

    00:08:262 (47,48) - swap.because,00:08:477 - High pitch

    00:14:048 - Change to don.For emphasized to next 00:14:262 -

    00:23:262 - Change to kat.Follow the vocal.

    00:25:620 - Change to kat.I think still high pitch.

    00:26:691 (139,140,141,142,143,144) - I prefer kdddk d.You can try it.

    00:36:977 - Change to don.Vocal is low pitch.
Muzu+Oni only.Good luck :)
Topic Starter
bank78952

Charlotte wrote:

Hi from my queues

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is big don note
  4. K is big kat note
[ General]


  • SliderMultiplier:1.39999990463257→1.40
[ Muzukashii]


  • 00:02:691 (11,12,13) - hmm...I thnik this ddk is little strange.so 00:02:477 - add don & 00:02:691 - change to kat.You can try it. ok

    00:09:334 - add don & 00:09:548 - add kat.I prefer this rhythm. fix

    00:12:334 (42,43,44,45) - kdkd.Vocal is low pitch. dkkd is better

    00:13:405 (46,47) - swap.because,00:13:620 - High pitch. i follow vocal XD

    00:14:048 (48,49,50,51) - dkkd? Follow the vocal. kkdd are still fine

    00:15:120 (52,53) - swap.because,00:15:334 - High pitch. ok

    00:16:834 - Change to don.For emphasized to next 00:17:262 - ok

    00:18:120 (60,61) - swap? It works better to vocal smoother. no :3

    00:19:620 - You can remove. 00:19:620 - I hear sound vocal.but,This 1/2 break is make to good flow. ok

    00:21:548 - k d still fine

    00:23:048 - move to 00:23:477 - & 00:24:120 - remove. Good 1/2 break time & Follow the vocal. ok

    00:28:405 - k.high pitch. d still fine

    00:32:262 (108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115) - k-d-k-ddd-d-k.You can try it.I think good pattern. no

    00:37:405 - Change to don. 00:37:620 - move to 00:38:048 - & 00:37:834 - Change to kat.Good 1/2 break time & Follow the vocal. ok

    00:39:120 (139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146) - d-k-d-kkk-d-k.You can try it.vocal is high pitch.so kkk is good~ no

    00:42:334 - change to don & 00:42:548 - change to kat. & 00:42:762 - add kat.Follow the vocal + For spread. ok
[ Oni]


  • 00:02:262 - Change to kat.00:02:584 - add don.00:02:798 (19,20) - swap.00:03:120 - Change to kat.I think more goog pattern. k only 00:02:262 -

    00:08:262 (47,48) - swap.because,00:08:477 - High pitch no im follow vocal

    00:14:048 - Change to don.For emphasized to next 00:14:262 - ^

    00:23:262 - Change to kat.Follow the vocal. d are still fine

    00:25:620 - Change to kat.I think still high pitch. no :3

    00:26:691 (139,140,141,142,143,144) - I prefer kdddk d.You can try it. kkdkd are still fine

    00:36:977 - Change to don.Vocal is low pitch. no :3
Muzu+Oni only.Good luck :)
Thanks
davidminh0111
Hello from my modding queue:
[Oni]
00:23:905: Add d
00:36:012: Remove circle here, it has a good struture of the music

[Muzukashii]
00:14:905: Add d
00:15:120: Change to d
00:17:048: Add d

I would recommend you to join my discord server about Taiko mapping: https://discord.gg/cScTD
Topic Starter
bank78952

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hello from my modding queue:
[Oni]
00:23:905: Add d okay but k is better
00:36:012: Remove circle here, it has a good struture of the music keep it is better more than remove :P

[Muzukashii]
00:14:905: Add d for break i won't add note here
00:15:120: Change to d k is feel good more than d
00:17:048: Add d nope for little break (?)

I would recommend you to join my discord server about Taiko mapping: https://discord.gg/cScTD sorry im afk user on discord (?)
Ozu
( ´ ▽ ` )ノツ hi~
nm from my queue~


[ General ]

d = don
k = kat
D = Big don
K = Bog kat

00:00:120 ~ 00:03:120 - Volume down. quiet and calm part.



[ Kantan ]

00:08:691 (12) - move at 00:08:477 (12). sound is listened at 00:08:477.

00:15:548 (19) - ^



[ Futsuu ]

00:08:691 (20) - move to 00:08:477. there isn't any sound and drum kick sound(sounds like Doom!) is at 00:08:477 and 00:08:905.

00:08:905 - add d. same reason.



[ Muzukashii ]

00:30:548 (106,107) - k D ?

00:37:834 (135,136,137,138,139) - have offbeat vocal sound, so how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7945686

00:41:262 (150) - d. melody is going down and drum plays kick in here.

00:42:762 (155) - delete. seems little worried to play Big note just after stream.



[ Oni ]

00:30:548 (158,159) - k D ?



That's all.
pretty nice mapset xD
Good luck~
Topic Starter
bank78952

404 AccNotFound wrote:

( ´ ▽ ` )ノツ hi~
nm from my queue~


[ General ]

d = don
k = kat
D = Big don
K = Bog kat

00:00:120 ~ 00:03:120 - Volume down. quiet and calm part. okay



[ Kantan ]

00:08:691 (12) - move at 00:08:477 (12). sound is listened at 00:08:477. idk why but still not fix (maybe..)

00:15:548 (19) - ^ ^



[ Futsuu ]

00:08:691 (20) - move to 00:08:477. there isn't any sound and drum kick sound(sounds like Doom!) is at 00:08:477 and 00:08:905.

00:08:905 - add d. same reason. i move 00:08:691 (20) - to 00:08:905 - for better



[ Muzukashii ]

00:30:548 (106,107) - k D ? i follow vocals not fix

00:37:834 (135,136,137,138,139) - have offbeat vocal sound, so how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7945686 it fine but... i won't add any ddk kkd in muzukashii

00:41:262 (150) - d. melody is going down and drum plays kick in here. vocal again... not fix

00:42:762 (155) - delete. seems little worried to play Big note just after stream. fix



[ Oni ]

00:30:548 (158,159) - k D ? i follow vocals not fix



That's all.
pretty nice mapset xD
Good luck~
Thanks o/
toara_fict
ya. M4M reqs in-game
[ General]
  1. Okay.
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[ Kantan]
  1. Fine.
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[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:26:262 (51) - delete ?

  2. 00:29:262 (56) - change d if you follow drum sound

  3. 00:33:334 - add k here ? ( follow Vocal )

  4. 00:34:834 (67) - or 00:35:691 (69) or - 00:36:548 (71) - delete ?

  5. 00:40:191 - add d here ? ( some 00:33:334 - ^ )
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[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:33:334 (117) - change k ? ( follow vocal & 00:33:334 (117,118,119,120) - arrangement with pattern )

  2. 00:39:334 (141) - change d ? ( Oni put d & arrangement with pattern )
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[ Oni]
  1. 00:08:905 (49,50) - swap note. ( 00:08:477 (48,49) - some sounds. )

  2. 00:14:370 (75) - move 00:14:584 - ? ( 00:14:584 - follow back sounds. )

  3. 00:17:584 (91,92) - swap. ( follow bass drum 00:17:691 - sound. )

  4. 00:19:405 (100) - 00:21:977 (113) - change d :3 ( same ^ )

  5. 00:27:334 (145) - change d ( 00:27:548 (146) - want to make it stand out )
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Cool mapset & cute song :3
I hope ranked :3

Good Luck !!! 8-)
Topic Starter
bank78952

toara_fict wrote:

ya. M4M reqs in-game
[ General]
  1. Okay.
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[ Kantan]
  1. Fine.
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:26:262 (51) - delete ? nope still have vocal in this part

  2. 00:29:262 (56) - change d if you follow drum sound fix,to follow drum sound and keep same in muzu

  3. 00:33:334 - add k here ? ( follow Vocal ) okay

  4. 00:34:834 (67) - or 00:35:691 (69) or - 00:36:548 (71) - delete ? delete only 00:36:548 (71) -

  5. 00:40:191 - add d here ? ( some 00:33:334 - ^ ) okay
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:33:334 (117) - change k ? ( follow vocal & 00:33:334 (117,118,119,120) - arrangement with pattern )

  2. 00:39:334 (141) - change d ? ( Oni put d & arrangement with pattern ) all fix
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[ Oni]
  1. 00:08:905 (49,50) - swap note. ( 00:08:477 (48,49) - some sounds. ) no it's still fine

  2. 00:14:370 (75) - move 00:14:584 - ? ( 00:14:584 - follow back sounds. ) fix *i didn't notice about this lol*

  3. 00:17:584 (91,92) - swap. ( follow bass drum 00:17:691 - sound. ) fix

  4. 00:19:405 (100) - 00:21:977 (113) - change d :3 ( same ^ ) still fine not fix

  5. 00:27:334 (145) - change d ( 00:27:548 (146) - want to make it stand out )fix
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Cool mapset & cute song :3
I hope ranked :3

Good Luck !!! 8-)
どうもありがとう :3
Snowy Heat
hi there!
random mod because song is cute and sweet

[General]

Mostly solid and really great mapset.

[Kantan]

00:32:691 (38,40) - it's strange that these notes don't follow the vocals like 00:30:977 (36,37) do or 00:34:405 (41,42,43,44,45) follow the vocal pitch too. ctrl+g these notes, imo it's better. At least try it, you can always leave it as it was.

[Futsuu]

00:21:548 (42,43) - it's better to ctrl+g these too to make them match vocal pitch better since 00:21:977 (43) has a bit more increased pitch than 00:21:548 (42) does. Also it will provide a better consistency with Kantan.
00:26:262 (51) - it's a bit excessive imo, maybe try to delete it; you've also skipped this in muzukashii i guess so for overall consistency it would be great. Also kind of overmapping that part it strange, not all of the sounds should be mapped in any of diffs, especially lower ones.
00:27:120 (53) - d since the pitch is decreasing?

[Muzukashii]

00:14:691 (54) - k for increasing pitch here? d seems to be a bit not enough to express this sound imo.
00:21:548 (76) - same for this too.

[Oni]

00:13:405 (71,72) - i think that these sound a bit better if ctrl+g them. It's just a comment but have this in mind.
00:27:012 (143) - actually this note is not that high-pitched to make it k (checked on 50% playback rate). But this 00:27:120 (144) is so ctrl+g these notes to make a better pitch matching there.

good luck, also let me give this a star~
Topic Starter
bank78952

Hitsu wrote:

hi there!
random mod because song is cute and sweet

[General]

Mostly solid and really great mapset.

[Kantan]

00:32:691 (38,40) - it's strange that these notes don't follow the vocals like 00:30:977 (36,37) do or 00:34:405 (41,42,43,44,45) follow the vocal pitch too. ctrl+g these notes, imo it's better. At least try it, you can always leave it as it was. still fine for me not fix

[Futsuu]

00:21:548 (42,43) - it's better to ctrl+g these too to make them match vocal pitch better since 00:21:977 (43) has a bit more increased pitch than 00:21:548 (42) does. Also it will provide a better consistency with Kantan. fix
00:26:262 (51) - it's a bit excessive imo, maybe try to delete it; you've also skipped this in muzukashii i guess so for overall consistency it would be great. Also kind of overmapping that part it strange, not all of the sounds should be mapped in any of diffs, especially lower ones. it still fine for me lolz
00:27:120 (53) - d since the pitch is decreasing? because i not apply in 00:26:262 (51) - i'll also not apply this part too

[Muzukashii]

00:14:691 (54) - k for increasing pitch here? d seems to be a bit not enough to express this sound imo. follow vocals here lol
00:21:548 (76) - same for this too. ^

[Oni]

00:13:405 (71,72) - i think that these sound a bit better if ctrl+g them. It's just a comment but have this in mind. kd still fine and it's still suit vocals
00:27:012 (143) - actually this note is not that high-pitched to make it k (checked on 50% playback rate). But this 00:27:120 (144) is so ctrl+g these notes to make a better pitch matching there. but 00:27:120 (144) - d is better not fix
good luck, also let me give this a star~
Thanks
Tyistiana
ถึงจะทายสีผิดเราก็จะมาดูให้ แมพคนไทยกันเอง ถถถถถถ
เพลงเพราะดี ฟังแล้วลื่นหู =w=

[ Overall]
โดยภาพรวม ผมว่าไม่มีปัญหาครับ งั้นผมมาชี้จุดที่ไม่สอดคล้องหลักๆดีกว่า :3

  1. 00:03:548 ทุกดิฟเป็น D หมดยกเว้น Oni ที่เป็น K
  2. 00:10:405 ทุกดิฟใช้ finisher หมดยกเว้น Muzukashii
  3. 00:16:834 - 00:17:262 Kantan กับ Muzukashii เป็น d K แต่ Futsuu เป็น k D. ทั้งๆที่ 3 ดิฟนี้ตรงนี้ตามเนื้อร้อง 'zutto' ทั้งนั้น
  4. 00:28:405 - มีโน้ตตรงนี้ ยกเว้น Futsuu. เข้าใจว่าตามเสียงกลองตรงนี้นะครับ แต่มันจะทำให้ท่อนนี้ว่างเกินเมื่อเทียบกับ Kantan ครับ
[ Futsuu]
00:36:548 - 00:36:762 - เพิ่มโน้ตตรงนี้หน่อยก็ดี เพราะว่าเนื้อร้องตรงนี้มันรัวกว่าตรง 00:34:405 (66,67,68,69,70) ชัดเจนอยู่. อีกอย่าง ถ้าเพิ่มตรงนี้จะเป็นการสร้างความสอดคล้องให้กับตรง 00:33:120 (63,64,65) ด้วย. (ป.ล. ตรง Kantan ก็มีโน้ตตรง 00:36:548 นะเออ)

ไม่มีอะไรจะแนะนำมากครับ ส่วนตัวมองว่าแมพโอเคแล้วจริงๆ
ถ้ามันไม่ได้ช่วยอะไรเลยก็ไม่ต้องให้ kudosu ก็ได้ ยิ่งมอดกากๆอยู่ 555 ;w;
นอกประเด็น : ขอบคุณที่แนะนำรุ่นคีย์บอร์ดให้ครับ ไว้จะลองไปดูถ้ามาเงินพอ uwu
โชคดีครับ :D
Topic Starter
bank78952

Tyistiana wrote:

ถึงจะทายสีผิดเราก็จะมาดูให้ แมพคนไทยกันเอง ถถถถถถ ถถถถถ
เพลงเพราะดี ฟังแล้วลื่นหู =w=

[ Overall]
โดยภาพรวม ผมว่าไม่มีปัญหาครับ งั้นผมมาชี้จุดที่ไม่สอดคล้องหลักๆดีกว่า :3

  1. 00:03:548 ทุกดิฟเป็น D หมดยกเว้น Oni ที่เป็น K
  2. 00:10:405 ทุกดิฟใช้ finisher หมดยกเว้น Muzukashii
  3. 00:16:834 - 00:17:262 Kantan กับ Muzukashii เป็น d K แต่ Futsuu เป็น k D. ทั้งๆที่ 3 ดิฟนี้ตรงนี้ตามเนื้อร้อง 'zutto' ทั้งนั้น
  4. 00:28:405 - มีโน้ตตรงนี้ ยกเว้น Futsuu. เข้าใจว่าตามเสียงกลองตรงนี้นะครับ แต่มันจะทำให้ท่อนนี้ว่างเกินเมื่อเทียบกับ Kantan ครับ


[ Futsuu]
00:36:548 - 00:36:762 - เพิ่มโน้ตตรงนี้หน่อยก็ดี เพราะว่าเนื้อร้องตรงนี้มันรัวกว่าตรง 00:34:405 (66,67,68,69,70) ชัดเจนอยู่. อีกอย่าง ถ้าเพิ่มตรงนี้จะเป็นการสร้างความสอดคล้องให้กับตรง 00:33:120 (63,64,65) ด้วย. (ป.ล. ตรง Kantan ก็มีโน้ตตรง 00:36:548 นะเออ)

ไม่มีอะไรจะแนะนำมากครับ ส่วนตัวมองว่าแมพโอเคแล้วจริงๆ
ถ้ามันไม่ได้ช่วยอะไรเลยก็ไม่ต้องให้ kudosu ก็ได้ ยิ่งมอดกากๆอยู่ 555 ;w;
นอกประเด็น : ขอบคุณที่แนะนำรุ่นคีย์บอร์ดให้ครับ ไว้จะลองไปดูถ้ามาเงินพอ uwu รอผู้รู้อีกทีย์
โชคดีครับ :D


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