iYiyo wrote:

Hi! Saw you here

The BPM is 135 & the offset is 2100

Nice SB. Good luck

wajinshu wrote:

Normal modes
NM
I'm not really into modding but I'll try

Easy

00:59:655 - here comes the music-_- ОК
01:02:544 get one repeat and extendОК
01:14:988 reduce 01:47:433 - move - 01:47:655 reduceОК

Normal

here put the circle 01:00:322 ОК
01:10:988 do what would've been repulsed 01:11:433 and then put the circle 01:12:099Hm why?

ohyeahitsjustme wrote:

Isnt offset 343?
Normal.
1. You have problems with spacing. Try to use Distance Snap Согласен
2.
00:01:211 (2,3) - this 00:11:433 (1,3) - this
00:14:544 (7,1) - this
00:18:544 (1,2) - this
00:24:322 (1,2) - this
etc..
This doesnt look OK. Try to make the sliders more similar to each other.Ну что то в этом есть

3. People dont like such long Kiai modes. Make a break here: 01:14:988 (1) Что нибудь придумаю
I could mode it better, if u will make smth with the map
P.S. And about the SB. I guess that leaf strunk`color shouldnt change. Dont u think so?
Good luck. Здесь тоже что нибудь придумаю

TheMefisto wrote:

Hi~
Some mod for you

General

Много лишних зеленых линий, лучше убрать Окей

^ Тут вторая зеленая линия ничего не меняет -> не нужнаОкей

^ Тут ты один раз меняешь громкость на 50% (01:41:655 - вот здесь), а следующие зеленые линии ничего не делают -> не нужныОкей

Easy

00:47:877 - По-моему, если поставить здесь ноту, то звучать будет лучшеОкей
00:50:544 (5) - Очень неаккуратная форма слайдера, сделай лучше такой, напримерОкей
01:00:322 (2,3) - Слишком высокий ДС между ними, в изи и нормале должен быть фиксированным -> уменьши до 1 (Можешь чекнуть AiMod, там все эти моменты указаны)Окей
01:19:877 - И здесь ноту лучше поставитьОкей
01:48:766 (1,2) - Слайдеры выглядят не лучшим образом (Попробуй 01:50:988 (2) - выгнуть в другую сторону)Окей

Normal

То же самое, исправь косяки с ДС, которые показывает AiModОкей
00:19:433 (2,3) - Очень неприятный оверлап, попробуй развернуть 00:20:544 (3) - этот слайдерОкей
00:45:655 (1,2,3) - Этот момент странно звучит, попробуй переделать его, например, такОкей
Сложность в целом выглядит не очень опрятно, имеет смысл делать слайдеры более похожими друг на друга. Ну и бланкеты немного разнообразили бы карту, при этом улучшая флоу
Окей я попробую исправить это

Good luck with map!

levesterz wrote:

I am very bad at modding but since you pm me for one here goes . this are mostly suggestion so yeah here goes. just a note here i am bad at explaining thing too.

SPOILER

easy
00:49:210 (6) - etend the repeat slider to 00:50:099? and start the nc at 00:50:544?
sorry i cant see any problem other than this.

normal
-no prblem her either XD-

casey`s hard
General: well I strongly suggest to use the 1/4 snap advisor >< cause most of the note are kinda off.

00:08:544 - remove slider and place a note at 00:08:766? ( cause when i paly it i tend to following the piano part and considering you are mapping the piano part from ther start)
00:19:877- 00:21:210 - extend the first slider to 00:20:321 ? its kinda soft sound to place a note here and place a note at 00:20:655 ohh and remove the slider at 00:20:321
00:21:210 -00:21:877 - well the combo 5 here.....hmmm i can hear any note i suggest removing the slider and place a note at 00:21:877?
00:23:877 - well remove the note ?(well i did not hear any sound here )
00:25:655 - remove slider and place note at 00:25:877( well there no sound at 00:25:655 )
00:26:321 - move the note to 00:26:433
00:26:544 - move the note to 00:26:544
00:26:766 - move the note to 00:26:877 ?
so sorry i have to stop here cause the next part is all i suggesting moving note and such . so yeah move it some note to follow the rythm ><

I will come and check again for the hard map again cause now is mostly off beat ><.
forum pm me again once you thing is ready if you want.
i wish you good luck ^^.
( dont kudosu this post. )

Jana Marie wrote:

Hi There Again! Another mod for Casey's Hard

Casey's Hard
General : I found out that you have a separated hitsound try renaming the soft-hitclap10 -> soft-hitclap and the other don't need to put number's [unless you have many hitsounds
OD : 6 AR: 7.5
Change the slider velocity higher
Remove all the inherited timing point that only uses the hitsounds (you can ignore this if you want) except the kiai time
00:02:100 (1,1) - I dont prefer a spinner for this
00:06:544 -00:06:988 - Make that time a slider
00:10:099 - 00:10:544 - Same ^
00:11:655 (2) - it should be x:116 y:76 [this x and y is located at the right upper area of the edting mode]
00:13:877 (3,4) - - make this on the upper part of the previous slider
00:22:988 (3) - x:304 y:40
00:24:099 (2,3,4,5) - Make this jumps or separate it
00:27:655 (2,3) - Make this a slider
00:28:544 (6,1) - Same ^
00:35:655 (2) - dont overlap with the previous slider
00:36:766 (1,2,3,4,5) - It doesnt look good Maybe use a DS for this
00:44:322 (2) - put it on the upper of the slider
00:48:321 (5) - kinda weird slider change it
01:01:211 (1,2,3,4) - separate this 4 slider's from each other
01:08:322 (3) - x:224 y:224
01:09:433 (2) - Reverse this curve
01:11:877 (1,2,3) - Make this jumps
01:29:655 (1,2,3,4) - SAME ^
01:38:099 (1) - Remove this maintain the long break
01:40:322 (1,2,3) - Jumps again
01:49:210 (2) - place the slider on that time
01:52:322 (1,2) - Slider
I can make a GD for you [maybe hard or insane] when you fixed the hitsound (or maybe i'll just adjust the inherited timing points
That's all hope my mod helped you

Abraxos wrote:

Random mod from #modreq (Maybe not that random but yeah)

Take note that this mod is specifically from Insane.

This song I absolutely love in deemo, so I'll galdly mod it :3

General

1. BPM and Offset : ( ✓ )
2. Aimod : ( ✓ )
3. Kiai : ( ✓ )
4. Metadata : ( ✓ )
5. Hitsound : ( ✓ )
6. Video : ( ✓ ) That SB though

Insane

Open for free candy

1. 00:04:321 (1) - Filp and invert this slider so that it can blanket 00:04:988 (2) like so. Originally the slider overlaps were a bit unsightly, but with the blanket it looks better IMO. Of course, please fix the flow for 00:05:433 (3,4) accordingly if you choose to fix this.
2. 00:07:433 (1,2) - I assumed that the past 3 sliders were following the hold piano note, so why is this part 2 notes? They could be a slider if you ask me, it follows the gist that the 3 sliders gives.
3. 00:19:877 (2) - This is an interesting way to put these kinds of hump sliders. I thought this was how they made it? Of course, your method works fine too.
4. 00:22:988 (5) - You want this to be a blanket of 00:22:544 (4)? It'll look like this. Also, please adjust 00:22:099 (3) to be exactly perpendicular to the timeline. After all, 00:22:544 (4) is perpendicular to the timeline too.
5. Move 00:24:988 (3) - to (384,160), 00:25:433 (4) - to (460,56) and 00:25:877 (5) - to (316,60). Result should be this. It follows the flow of the sliders better like this IMO. \
6. 00:28:321 (1) - Isn't exactly stacked on top of 00:27:655 (3). Apologies if this is a bit Nazi, but I'm really particular about the aesthetics of any map. ;-;
7. 00:28:988 (4) - Move the end of the slider to (356,188) and 00:28:766 (3) to somewhere around (276,324). After that, 00:29:433 (5) can go to (400,148) so it kinda makes a complete flow.
8. After ^^^, stack 00:29:877 (1) on top of the head of 00:29:433 (5) and move the other notes as necessary. Remember, these are suggestions, and you most definitely can reject them. It's purely based on opinion, and I'm giving mine in this case
9. Blanket 00:30:544 (4) --- 00:30:321 (3)
10. 00:31:210 (1) - If you did fix the above, then move this slider to stack over 00:30:321 (3)
11. Then move 00:31:655 (2) - to (180,200) and it should be looking like this at the end.
12. 00:32:544 (3) - This slider starts at 00:32:321 (3) if you intend on following the long pull of the double bass (Which I strongly encourage you to)
13. 00:34:321 (5) - My suggestion for this part; The timeline and notes should look like this IMO. Note that note 7 in this case stacks over the head of 00:32:544 (4).
14. If you did the above, then stacking should be in order for 00:36:321 (11).
15. Applies if or if you didn't make the above change: 00:36:766 (12) - Blanket this over the end of 00:36:321 (11) and move 00:37:210 (13) accordingly.
16. 00:40:988 (1,2,3,4) - These succession of sliders can make a very nice flow like this.Note that all the sliders are congruent to each other, just rotated slightly.
17. 00:42:766 (1,2,3,4) - Make this shape a proper parallelogram by utilising the DS snap.
18. 00:43:655 (1) - Blanket properly for 00:43:433 (4)
19. 00:44:544 (3) - Slider ends are usually supposed to end on soft or silent ad-lib beats, so I'd rather you have this slider removed and have a note placed at 00:44:766 (4) so the player can "play" the sound.
20. 00:44:988 (1) - Flip horizontally and vertically to complement the flow that 00:44:988 (2,3) is suggesting
21. 00:46:988 (1,2) - In my experience (However short it may be) I kinda found out that players don't really appreciate 90 degrees sliders so much. So maybe have something like this?
22. 00:47:877 (3) - It's up to you whether you want to follow the last two slider shapes, but I encourage you to do so here.
23. 00:48:544 (1) - Slider starts at 00:48:321 (4), following the long violin pull in the BG
24. 00:50:544 (3) - I can see that this isn't exactly congruent to 00:50:099 (2,4,5). It bothers me a little.
25. 00:52:321 (2) Onwards - I edited this part a lot so it might be a bit hard to see, but here goes.
    Reference point of 00:52:321 (2) -1st Frame; RP of 00:53:210 (4) -2nd Frame; RP of 00:54:099 (7)3rd Frame; RP of 00:55:433 (13) - 4th Frame.
26. Reason for change above^: I felt that the piano sounds were being undermined by the slider ends, and that notes were the best option to accentuate those sounds. So I changed the sliders to notes here.
27. Independent of change above ^: 00:55:655 (14,1) - Blanket properly ples
28. 00:58:988 (1) - Edit this slider as such so that the 01:00:321 (2) can fit in nicely like so.
29. 01:01:210 (4) - Slider not really evenly spaced out from the rest.
30. 01:07:433 (1,2,3) - It gets a bit boring here, esp. when this is the chorus. Why not have more notes/sliders in this part?
31. 01:10:099 (1) - It's not a good idea to try to make a look here when you have too little time to work with. I'd rather use the tactic that you did for 00:19:877 (2).
32. 01:13:210 (1) - Weird slider shape. Replace with simple curve/ elbow slider.
33. From 01:13:210 (1) to 01:16:321 (3) - It's really slow here, with only two notes. Try spicing it up with some notes and/or sliders.
34. 01:16:321 (3,4) - Not perfectly parallel to each other
35. Move 01:19:655 (2) to (368,136) so the flow is smoother.
36. As with ^, fix 01:20:321 (3) accordingly
37. 01:21:433 (3) - Should be a curve slider, as with 01:21:877 (4) and all the other patterns you've made.
38. 01:29:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part is weird. The middle notes don't follow anything, and it's very awkward for you to break away from the 1/2 beats to 1/4 beats so suddenly. I'd rather you have a pattern in this part that follows the piano 1/2 beat.
39. 01:33:210 (1,2,3,4,5) - This can be a star like this. Note that note 3 is underneath 01:32:988 (5).
40. 01:39:877 (1) - Evenly space it out from 01:39:210 (3,4)
41. 01:41:210 (4) - This is another weird slider shape. It's awkward to have so many anchor points esp. when your slider seems just about straight.
42. 01:52:655 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This part is off of the music. The stream doesn't follow anything obvious, and it neglects the piano sound in the BG. I'd suggest something like this. Take note that note 7 stacks on top of 01:54:988 (1)
43. As spinners can be led in with a held note, I'd suggest you put a note at 01:55:988 (2) and have the spinner start at 01:56:099 (1) and end at 02:02:544 (1) so the player can play the last violin sound AND the spinner too.

I am retarded, I left out the last screenshot. It's there now :3

Overall

1. I absolutely love the song, and still do!
2. I only saw the Insane diff, but I'm pretty sure it's a nice map!
3. I hope you have success and cakes in your quest for mapping, and all the best for rank!
4. If you have any question/queries about the mod, please feel free to PM me in the forums or in game!

fizzn1 wrote:

Suggested GD in PM by me.
Rabpit - Rainy Memory (shmiklak) [fizzn1's Normal].osu

fizzn1 wrote:

UPDATE: I did derped on my GD diff and setted AR 9.
So please change ar to 8 and rename diff into fizzn1's hard

• Аимод в порядке, в тайминге проблем не чувствую, вроде хорошо все.
  fizzn1's Hard, я думаю, стоит переименовать в fizzn1's Advanced. Мапсет тогда будет симпотнее выглядеть, да и не тянет эта дифа на хард

• Это у нас самая простая дифа в мапсете, нужно учитывать, что она для совсем новичков сделана, а некоторые моменты в этой дифе читаются не так хорошо, как следовало бы. Вот смотри:
  00:04:321 (1) - Разбей вот так, звучание не меняется, а читается на порядок проще
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:10:099 (2,3,4) - лучше избежать тройных стаков на таких уровнях сложности. Разбей, как в аналогичном моменте
  00:36:322 (4,5,6) вот тут и далее
  00:49:210 (7) - нет, ну это вообще жутко для изика. Убери эти реверсы, сделай простой слайдер аналогичной длинны на шкале времени, но без реверсов, повторюсь
  Ну и пара косметических изменений
  01:48:766 (1,2) - эта вот штука выглядит не очень. Хочешь сделать красиво - сделай как-нибудь вот так
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:00:766 (2,3) - эта штука выглядит не очень красиво. Может передвинуть как-то так? (Дальше тоже переставить в соответствии с дистанс снепом)
  
  SPOILER

  

• 00:25:210 (2,3) - Нет-нет-нет-нет-нет-нет-нет. Стак убирай, это не хард, это вторая по сложности дифа в сете. К тому же это единичный момент, лучше убрать
  01:14:988 (1,2) - такс, что тут у нас? Лучше поменять на вот такое
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:16:321 (3,4,5,6) - тут нахлесты какие-то сомнительные. До этого момента таких явных не было. Я бы посоветовал флоу поменять
  01:45:210 (4,5,6,7,8) - вот чем-то мне этот момент не нравится. Не знаю, что с ним можно сделать, но он мне просто не нравится

ZinaMarina wrote:

Привет!
Мод, как и обещал. Извини, что долго


General

• Аимод в порядке, в тайминге проблем не чувствую, вроде хорошо все.
  fizzn1's Hard, я думаю, стоит переименовать в fizzn1's Advanced. Мапсет тогда будет симпотнее выглядеть, да и не тянет эта дифа на хард Ладненько

Изи

• Это у нас самая простая дифа в мапсете, нужно учитывать, что она для совсем новичков сделана, а некоторые моменты в этой дифе читаются не так хорошо, как следовало бы. Вот смотри:
  00:04:321 (1) - Разбей вот так, звучание не меняется, а читается на порядок проще Ладненько
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:10:099 (2,3,4) - лучше избежать тройных стаков на таких уровнях сложности. Разбей, как в аналогичном моменте
  00:36:322 (4,5,6) вот тут и далееЛадненько
  00:49:210 (7) - нет, ну это вообще жутко для изика. Убери эти реверсы, сделай простой слайдер аналогичной длинны на шкале времени, но без реверсов, повторюсьЛадненько
  Ну и пара косметических изменений
  01:48:766 (1,2) - эта вот штука выглядит не очень. Хочешь сделать красиво - сделай как-нибудь вот так Ладненько
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:00:766 (2,3) - эта штука выглядит не очень красиво. Может передвинуть как-то так? (Дальше тоже переставить в соответствии с дистанс снепом)Ладненько
  
  SPOILER

  

Нормуль

• 00:25:210 (2,3) - Нет-нет-нет-нет-нет-нет-нет. Стак убирай, это не хард, это вторая по сложности дифа в сете. К тому же это единичный момент, лучше убратьЛадненько
  01:14:988 (1,2) - такс, что тут у нас? Лучше поменять на вот такое Ладненько
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:16:321 (3,4,5,6) - тут нахлесты какие-то сомнительные. До этого момента таких явных не было. Я бы посоветовал флоу поменятьЛадненько
  01:45:210 (4,5,6,7,8) - вот чем-то мне этот момент не нравится. Не знаю, что с ним можно сделать, но он мне просто не нравится Ну чё нить придумаю

Casey's Hard безумно крут, Инсейн не смотрел. Будет время, на оставшиеся сложности мод сделаю, пока так
Надеюсь увидеть этот битмап ранкнутам, удачи. Хочется верить, что хоть как-то помог

KASUM1 wrote:

Hello~! As requested from my queue

[General]



There's 2 .osb files, delete one of them



[Easy]
00:22:099 (1,2) - ctrl+g better rhythm
00:28:322 (1,2) - I can't hear any rhythm delete these 2 sliders and NC this 00:30:544 (3) -
00:12:766 (2,3) - spacing error
00:18:544 (3,4) - ^
00:45:655 (2,3) - ^
00:57:210 (3,4) - ^
01:05:211 (1,2) - ^
01:09:211 (2,3) - ^
01:46:988 (2,3) - ^
00:04:321 (1) - remove NC
00:05:655 (2) - add NC
00:10:988 (4,1) - switch NC
00:19:877 (4) - NC
00:22:099 (1) - remove NC
00:23:433 (2) - NC here
00:30:544 (3) - ^
00:34:099 (2) - ^
00:48:321 (6) - ^
00:50:544 (1) - remove NC
00:51:877 (4) - NC
00:56:988 - missing note
01:08:321 (1) - remove NC
01:09:655 (3) - NC
01:23:877 (2) - ^
01:25:655 (3) - ^
01:48:766 (1,2) - overlap
00:23:433 (2,1) - The spin should be atleast 2 beats far from the circle (unrankable issue)

[Normal]
00:00:322 (1,2,3) - same shape please
00:19:433 (2,3) - ctrl+g
00:20:765 (3) - If you did this ^ make this slider long to 00:21:433 -
00:24:099 (1) - move this to 00:24:099 - and add a circle here 00:24:766 -
00:40:766 (7,1) - same as easy
00:58:988 (1) - this slider should end here 00:59:655 -
01:06:544 (4) - move this to 01:06:766 -
01:08:321 (1,2) - bad flow
01:47:655 (6,7) - fix blanket

please check your aimod for spacing errors




There's alot problems

Just follow what I said in easy and normal and apply it to all diffs

Good luck

Lily Bread wrote:

hi,m4m from #modreqs.

[Easy]
check AImod.many DS issues here.
easy diff should obay DS forever.

how to have a AI DS check

OD3 is too high.change OD to 2.

00:36:322 (4,5,6) - they should go to right ,not left ,because - 00:34:099 (2) - will overlap them a little.
01:04:321 - i suggest this:

pic

because - 01:06:766 (2) - is at a 1/2,and - 01:06:099 - is a down beat.

[Normal]
change OD to 3 or 4.

same as easy diff,normal diff should obay DS forever.check AImod.

since you have an advanced diff,i suggest you use CS3 in Normal diff.(only a suggest.if you change,you will have a lot of work to do.)

00:21:877 (1) - delete it.
00:52:766 (1,2,3) - they don't follow any music.one way is:

pic

(picture's time is - 00:53:433 -)

01:05:655 - i suggest this:

pic

different between long slider and short slider

01:10:988 - ^
01:46:544 - ^

[fizzn1's Advanced]
00:03:433 (3,4) - bad overlap here.move 4 away.
00:36:321 (4,5) - they don't follow any music.i suggest you follow the piano here.
there are many objects that don't follow any music.i don't know which should i point out.i suggest you use 75% speed to listen to the music ,that can help you fit the music well.


[Casey's Hard]
00:24:988 - i suggest this:

pic

at a hard diff,short sliders and single circle at 1/2 is quite OK,but in many places you didn't follow any music here.i suggest you use 75% speed to listen to the music ,that can help you fit the music well.

[casey's Insane]
change AR to 8 or 8.5 ,OD to 7.


my available map:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/336810
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/348089
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/356863

choose one you like to mod.^^

mcwc2307 wrote:

Hi i think your map is ready for ranking, except that im not a beatmap nominator. But i hope your map gets ranked
Here's a star!

mcwc2307 wrote:

I also made a video on youtube on this map! Hope it gets more popular from it!

Link : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B0FYIZM ... e=youtu.be

LittlePigRMX wrote:

Gonna give this a star, looks perfect so far.

fizzn1 wrote:

Given 4 stars. Just because of my friendship with shmiklak.

envy111x wrote:

Casey's Hard:

 Сделайте AR7, нынешний слишком трудный для такого хардика. Размер кружков - 4. Это же хардос, а не экстра, зачем 4,5?

Casey's Insane:

 00:02:988 (2) - 00:03:877 (4) - Тяжело читать паттерн, вот так вот примерно стоит сделать http://puu.sh/kE1TR/e2ea7c5f53.jpg

 00:04:988 (2) - Начало слайдера совсем немного приопустить, конец поднять и полевее

 00:05:433 (3) - 00:05:655 (4) - Нужно больше спейсинга на этих двух нотах

 00:06:544 (6) - Чуть выше

 00:06:988 (1) - 00:07:877 (3) - Вот так будет гораздо приятнее играть http://puu.sh/kE2h4/1ff77384f7.jpg

 00:16:766 (3) - 00:17:877 (1) - Неровный паттерн вообще. Стоит переделать

 00:26:988 (1) - Пусть начинается прямо в той самой точке, где конец прошлого слайдера

 00:28:321 (1) - 00:29:433 (5) - http://puu.sh/kE2zo/f465e9c847.jpg

 00:48:321 (1) - Думаю и так понятно. Покрасивее, плиз

 00:49:877 (2) - Стоит добавить тут ноту. Без неё крайне трудно читать

 00:52:766 (3) - 00:53:210 (4) - http://puu.sh/kE2HY/7f19d70361.jpg

 00:53:655 (1) - 00:54:766 (6) - Звезда неровная :/

 01:00:766 (3) - Хитсаунд либо не к месту, либо следующие два такие же сделайте

 01:04:766 (2) - 01:05:210 (3) - http://puu.sh/kE2UI/4739bc8cd2.jpg

 01:08:321 (3) - Тут лучше два обычных кружка, перебор слайдеров у вас

 Дальше всё отлично

DominikWW wrote:

hi,
I am a very beginner at modding. Maybe my suggestions are not very useful but I've tried my best

I think Easy and Normal are fine so the suggestions are my opinion. If you like them you can change it.

Easy

• 
  without 1/2 tacts:

1. 00:35:433 (3) - change it into a 1 tacts slider - In my opinion you should not use 1/2 tacts at Easy. I think like this it fits better at Easy.
2. 01:00:766 (2) (3) - delete (2) and (3) and place a 1 tact slider at 01:00:766 and at 01:01:655 - the same reason like above ^^
3. 01:14:099 (4) - delete it and place a circle at 01:14:544 - ^^
4. 01:47:655 (3) - delete it and place a 1 tact slider - ^^
5. 01:47:655 (3) - ^the same here - ^^
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6. 01:43:877 (3) - delete it and place a 1 tact slider + an arrow (= 2 tacts) - I think like this it fits a bit better

Normal

1. 01:01:655 - place a 1/2 tact slider + an arrow (= 1 tact) - I like it more but without it is also ok
2. 00:20:544 (3) - change the hitsound: mark whistle - I think it sounds better
3. the same at: 00:24:099 (1) (2) (4) , 00:38:544 (2) , 00:39:433 (1) (3) , 00:49:877 (5) , 01:06:988 (5) , 01:12:321 (4)
4. 01:47:655 (6) , 01:50:544 (2) (4) - change the hitsound: use your custom clap here
5. 01:54:099 - add a timing point and change the volume of the audio to 30%
6. 01:54:988 - ^use here 20%

At Advanced I think you should change something( I like Easy and Normal much more than this one)

fizzn1's Advanced

1. 00:36:321 (4) (5) (6) - delete them and place 3x 1/2 tact slider, something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3789098
2. 00:38:099 (1) (2) (3) - delete them and place a 2 tacts slider at 00:37:655 ( start new combo). Place circles at 00:39:210 , 00:39:433 at the same position and also at 00:40:099 , 00:40:321 at the same position
3. 00:41:210 (1) - delete the circle and mark the whole combo at this time and move them 1/2 tact back. Place circles at 00:40:988 ( start here a new combo) and at 00:44:544. Now delete (2) (3) (4) of the new combo and place a 1/2 tact slider+ 2 arrows ( = 1 1/2 tacts ) at 00:41:210 and also at 00:42:099
4. 01:11:433 (4) (5) - delete them and place at this time a 1/2 tact slider + 2 arrows( = 1 1/2 tacts)
5. 01:38:988 (4) - delete it and place a 2 tacts slider at this time and place a circle at 01:40:321. Something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3789285

I've enjoyed listen to this song. I hope it will be ranked soon

1. GOOD SB!!!
2. add tag 'piano'
3. not need tag 'Instrumental' it's genre. if you will rank, not need this tag.
4. piano part, try add whistle hitsound! more good imo.
5. 00:00:322 - preview point? I think.

1. 00:05:655 (2) - 1grid down (x:164) so, (1,2) Parallel seems better.
2. 00:27:877 (1) - it's unrankable issue 'because easy diff'. spinner end and this note between haven't 1000ms. so, delete this.
3. 00:37:655 (1) - not spinner better? so, ^ problem.
4. 01:26:544 (3) - add finish slider end!
5. 01:41:655 (1) - add finish slider end!

1. 00:26:988 (1) - too close spacing!
2. 00:45:655 (1) - not need NC imo
3. 00:51:433 (2) - add finish slider end!
4. 00:55:433 (4) - overlaps (6). so, slider reverse point more up better.
5. 01:48:099 (7) - add finish slider end.
6. 01:54:099 (1) - add finish.

1. creative slider! good.
2. 00:35:897 (3) - move (4) head? so, bit close spacing now.
3. 00:07:877 (3) - add clap slider end?

1. 00:48:099 (4) - bit up. so, (2) overlaps.
2. 01:43:099 - why breaktime ? try map!

1. 00:51:877 (1) - add finish!

P o M u T a wrote:

hi~

[General]

1. GOOD SB!!!
2. add tag 'piano'
3. not need tag 'Instrumental' it's genre. if you will rank, not need this tag.
4. piano part, try add whistle hitsound! more good imo.
5. 00:00:322 - preview point? I think.

[Easy]

1. 00:05:655 (2) - 1grid down (x:164) so, (1,2) Parallel seems better.
2. 00:27:877 (1) - it's unrankable issue 'because easy diff'. spinner end and this note between haven't 1000ms. so, delete this.
3. 00:37:655 (1) - not spinner better? so, ^ problem.
4. 01:26:544 (3) - add finish slider end!
5. 01:41:655 (1) - add finish slider end!

[Normal]

1. 00:26:988 (1) - too close spacing!
2. 00:45:655 (1) - not need NC imo
3. 00:51:433 (2) - add finish slider end!
4. 00:55:433 (4) - overlaps (6). so, slider reverse point more up better.
5. 01:48:099 (7) - add finish slider end.
6. 01:54:099 (1) - add finish.

[fizzn1's Advanced]

1. creative slider! good.
2. 00:35:897 (3) - move (4) head? so, bit close spacing now.
3. 00:07:877 (3) - add clap slider end?

[Casey's Hard]

1. 00:48:099 (4) - bit up. so, (2) overlaps.
2. 01:43:099 - why breaktime ? try map!

[Casey's Insane]

1. 00:51:877 (1) - add finish!

good luck

Ster wrote:

small mod~

[Timing]
this map has multiple timing:
BPM=135, Offset=342
BPM=130, Offset=114,119
BPM=122.5, Offset=115,042
maybe use 01:40:321 as timing point? I think it is the same one used in Deemo.

[Easy]
00:07:877 (1) - make it like this?

image

http://puu.sh/kOtvy/15962cd488.png

00:37:655 (1,2,3) - this looks better imo (just rotate the slider 120 and 240 degrees for first and second slider, respectively)

image

http://puu.sh/kOtx7/7839f97c21.png

01:48:766 (1) - move the last point a bit to the left for a better blanket

[Normal]
00:30:099 (2) - move to x:128 y:224
01:10:988 (2) - move last point a bit down (about 2 small grids)

that's all i can mod xd

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Shmiklak

The overall mapset is pretty good. I liked the song but you should consider these suggest to avoid unrankable issues:

1. Multiple .osb Files: There should only be one .osb file in a folder (this folder has 2).
2. Unnecessary kiai times: I found really unreasonable to place a 1 second kiai that goes from 00:58:988 to here 00:59:433. It would make more sense if the only kiai be this one 01:41:655 to 01:48:766
3. Check Display epilepsy warning on all diffs: as long as when players start the song the leave appears so suddenly.
4. Improper name to Insane difficulty: As long as the insane is a collab, you should name it different. The most common example is "Collab Insane" but you can mix your usernames to name it too. What about Caseylak's Insane or Shmikasey's Insane.
5. Add these info into tags as you don't have any:
   l Deemo: as long as this song was featured by it. Supported by this website.
   l Rayark selection Vol. 1: because this is the album where the song was taken.

Easy

The main problem that resides in this difficulty is the current DS. The distance among the notes isn't enough and make overlap objects over this easy difficulty which make and unrankable issue. I highly suggest to increse the DS to 1.2x and re-place all the objects.

1. 00:07:877 (1) This slider looks really creepy imo. Try yo make something more symmetric. Like this.
2. 00:19:877 (4) Set NC over this object to have consistency with the Nc'ing pattern you manage in this section. Consider doing the same here 00:36:322 (4) and here 00:49:210 (7)
3. 00:41:655 (1) The way you set this object with NC breaks the consistency so consider removing the NC on this object. Consider doing the same over this object 00:50:544 (1)
4. In this section 00:50:544 until here 00:58:988 it would have played nicer you combined the combo colors to yellow and orange to match with the current bg.
5. 01:02:544 (4) This slider should be extended to here 01:03:877 and the reverse should go in the red tick as long as this part is the same as this one 00:58:988 (1) It should follow like this.
6. 01:07:433 (2) Replace this spinner into two circles that go over the red and white tick. 01:07:877 This white big tick is a strong beat and shouldn't be set as a downbeat.
7. 01:08:322 (1) Remove NC here because this (1) slider breaks the NC'ing pattern you managed over this section. Consider doing the same with this object 01:23:877 (1)
8. 01:47:655 (3) Remove the reverse of this slider as long as there's no beat to emphasize over the red tick.
9. 01:54:099 (1) Place this object here x=236|y=44 to make an intuitive flow with the previous slider.

Normal

This difficulty plays well but there are some inconsistencies with the Distance Snap of some objects. Also there are some random NC sliders that might confuse players as long as they use the same combo colors.

1. Some examples of them are these ones 00:20:544 (3,1) - 00:02:988 (4,1) - 00:23:433 (3,1) - 00:39:433 (1,2) - etc
2. 00:22:321 (2) The same shape for this slider looks very monotonous and doesn't flow good. It would make more sense if it were like this.
3. 00:26:988 (1) The reverse of this slider doesn't play good as long as there's no beat to emphasize here 00:27:433 So consider remove it.
4. 00:41:211 (1,1) Unrankable issue here. You must give at least, 2 white ticks of difference between a spinner and a note.
5. 01:03:211 (8) This slider is missing of claps. As same as this one 01:06:099 (4)
6. 01:50:988 (3,4) Try to avoid this kind of notable overlaps among notes as long as it looks untidy.

fizzn1's Advanced

This difficulty has some problems that make it really hard to play:

1. AR 7 is too high for this difficulty that looks more like a Normal. AR6 would have made more sense here.
2. 00:11:433 (5) Slider shape like this might confuse players as long as the BPM is bit low. Try something less curvy itself like this. Do the same with the same kind of slider shapes.
3. 00:12:766 (2) The same resides over this. If players aren't aware of this slider wave, they might get problems of reading them and it will lead to get a sliderbreak. Try something more intuitive and flow like this. Consider doing something similar with this one 00:17:210 (4)
4. 00:23:433 (1) This 1/1 slider doesn't play good and make and awkward rhythm, it would make sense if you place a circle 00:24:321 to keep the flow.
5. 00:31:433 (2,3) This kinds of overlaps might confuse players as long as you're breaking the DS here. Try to keep DS consistent in this diff to make better flows and patterns.
6. 00:38:766 (2) Two reverses in a slider is a lot. Consider making something more perceptive.

1. 00:41:655 (2) - This is a blanket?If it is,it isn't hold it completely.
2. 01:05:433 - After here,a little noise.
3. 01:23:877 (4) - Its shape is a little strange.You could fix it.
4. 01:26:544 (6) - ∧
5. 01:45:211 (4) - and 01:45:877 (1) - could change each other.
6. Between 01:46:988 - and 01:47:655 - could make a slider,and set a circle in 01:48:099 -

1. 00:01:210 (2) - blanket
2. 00:13:655 (4,5,6) - In normal nearly have 3 hits like this three.
3. 00:25:877 - In normal there nearly have stack like this.
4. 00:38:988 (3,4,1) - 3 hits.
5. 01:00:766 (3,4,5) - ∧
6. 01:08:321 (1) - Too close to 01:07:433 (5) -
7. 01:24:766 (2,3) - round it into 01:24:766 (2) - is vertical.
8. 01:54:099 (1) - Make it not in the slider.

1. 00:39:433 (3) - A little close to 00:39:877 (4) -

1. 00:17:433 (5) - Move it near to x:420,y:284
2. 00:17:655 (6) - Move it near to x:344,y:248
3. 00:18:544 (1,2,3,4) - Beats are strange.In 00:19:433 - should add a note.
   There are some strange beats in this diff.You could check them.
4. 00:19:211 (4) - blanket
5. 00:21:433 (4) - ∧
6. 00:25:877 (8) - Add NC.
7. 00:26:988 (1) - Remove NC.
   About NC and blanket,there are some wrong.You could check them.

1. 00:04:321 (1) - Distance is wrong.You could move it to stack with 00:03:877 (4) - .
2. 00:06:099 (5) - Could more close to 00:05:655 (4) - .
3. 00:31:210 (1,2,3) - Beats are wrong.Change their order into (3,1,2)
   Check the beats is important.