1. Easy (1.09 stars, 70 notes)
2. Hard (2.1 stars, 159 notes)
3. HOS' Insane (2.84 stars, 188 notes)
4. Normal (1.69 stars, 122 notes)

truonant wrote:

Hello M4M~ from my Mod Queue

Turn off countdown on Hard difficulty Fixed
Could use more hit sounds. You can try adding some hit sounds on: 00:25:227 (5) - , 00:28:227 (3) – , 00:31:227 (5) and etc. And some more custom hitsounds for the piano Added more hitsounds
You don’t need the Strike the Blood ED 2 in the title. Just use Signal Removed 'Strike the Blood ED 2' and added 'TV Size'.
Within the source, capitalize the ‘B’ in ‘Strike the blood’ Fixed


00:06:352 (1) – move to 00:06:290 – and reduce by 1 reverse Fixed
00:06:727 (1) – end on 00:08:165 Fixed
00:09:138 – is this timing point needed? Removed the timing point
00:12:477 (3) – could be blanketed better - http://puu.sh/ak1SE/bba3bf5467.jpg Tried to blanket the slider better, but don't notice much of a difference then before.
00:18:477 (3) – try stacking slider tail on 00:16:227 (2,3,4) Ok
00:23:352 (2) – try stacking slider head on slider head of 00:21:477 (5) – Ok
00:36:477 (3) – could be blanketed better on 00:35:727 (1) – Tried to blanket it better
00:41:352 (2) – could be blanketed better on 00:40:227 (1,2,3) – Tried to blanket it better, but I don't see much of a difference
00:44:351 (2) – perhaps stack on 00:41:352 (2) – & blanket on 00:46:226 (3) – Stacked and blanketed
00:50:726 (3) – move left a bit to: x:72 y:80 for better blanket Fixed
01:04:976 (1) – the hitsound here is really loud. Consider lowering the volume & could be blanketed better - http://puu.sh/ak2A3/1a5e854dcb.jpg Lowered the volume and tried to blanket better
01:09:476 (5) – copy this slider: 01:08:726 (4) – and ctrl+h Fixed
01:11:726 (2) – blanket on 01:10:976 (1) – Blanketed and changed some other things as well
01:14:726 (2) - blanket - http://puu.sh/ak2PB/9e909b3685.jpg Changed it a bit differently
01:15:476 (3,4) – move up so that slider head of 01:16:226 (4) – stacks on slider tail of 01:14:726 (2) – Made other changes
01:16:976 (1) – really loud hitsound. Reduce volume Fixed
01:17:726 (2) - could be blanketed better. Make head and tail align horizontally - http://puu.sh/ak2YN/75eeec3231.jpg Fixed
01:17:726 (2) – However this reverse slider doesn’t seem to fit with the music. Try this: http://puu.sh/ak38i/3413394f41.jpg Yes, I like it; changed.


00:20:728 (4) – could be blanketed better Tried to blanket better, but I don't see much change
00:24:478 (2) – this slider doesn’t seem to fit the music. Try just using a 1/1 slider: http://puu.sh/ak3DR/578e491d7b.jpg Changed
00:27:103 – add a circle here No, I think it will then be too hard
00:33:478 (5) – same as 00:24:478 (2) Fixed
00:33:478 (5,1) – avoid this unessessary overlap. It can be confusing for new players and it doesn’t look good No overlapping
00:42:478 (3,4) – could be blanketed better - http://puu.sh/ak3U2/33d9cb8556.jpg I think it's better blanketed now
00:58:978 (1) - could be blanketed better - http://puu.sh/ak457/645e33ac62.jpg Had a bit of trouble with that, but I think it looks better now
00:58:978 (1) loud hitsound, lower volume Lowered the volume
01:01:978 (1) – ctrl + h on 00:58:978 (1) Fixed it. Looks much better now
01:07:978 (4) – better blanket - http://puu.sh/ak4hl/75ad210573.jpg I want the slider to compliment this slider: 01:06:478. Didn't make a change.
01:09:290 (5) – doesn’t match music. Try this: http://puu.sh/ak4mY/4f8f60c56a.jpg Changed it
01:12:478 (3) - doesn’t match music. Try a 1/1 slider Changed
01:15:478 (3) - ^ Changed
01:21:478 (5) - ^ same as 01:09:290 (5) Changed
01:24:478 (3) - ^ try: http://puu.sh/ak4E0/054782eade.jpg Changed
01:24:478 (3) - better blanket - http://puu.sh/ak4zI/85d7872cc8.jpg Did something else

Good luck with your map!~ Thanks!

Wow, I made alot of changes.
Thanks for the mod.

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hi~ Passing by ^^
Random mod :3

[General]

1. I think you should add normal difficulty for diff spread Will definitely consider it; I might ask someone else for a GD.
2. The "Strike the Blood ED 2" on title is unnecessary, remove it, and add "TV Size" maybe Changed
3. "strike the blood" and "signal" is unnecessary on tags because its already mentioned on title and source Removed them
4. I think the preview point should be here 01:04:603 So the word "Kami-Sama" would not be cut off Fixed. (Thanks for that)

[Easy]

1. 00:19:228 (3,4) - Mirror these sliders perfectly, and maybe you can add a little modification so it would blanket perfectly with 00:22:228 (5) - I'm satisfied with how it is now, but I did try to make the blanket better
2. 00:33:478 (5,1) - These sliders are overlapped poorly, it looks ugly imo :/ maybe change it a little? http://puu.sh/akxHc/a87f812c4c.jpg I changed it differently by also changing one of the slider's shape
3. 00:52:978 (1) - this slider looks weird :/ modificate it a little maybe? http://puu.sh/akxNT/0c3e2a595b.jpg and then mirror this slider 00:54:478 (2) - Changed it and also mirrored it; it looks much better now
4. 00:58:228 (4,1) - Blanket this perfectly and mirror this 01:01:978 (1) - I tried my best to blanket and mirror them properly

[Hard]

1. 00:06:352 (1) - Check AiMod, object end is not snapped, add one more repeat and move the spinner backward so it start on red line http://puu.sh/aky5j/c89551f60f.jpg Fixed
2. 00:40:227 (1,2,3,2) - Blanket this? Tried to blanket it as best I can
3. 00:50:726 (3,4) - mirror these sliders maybe? I like how it is now
4. 01:07:413 (4,5,1) - this part looks confusing :/ change it to 1/4 repeat slider maybe? http://puu.sh/akyeX/d490f29bd0.jpg or just spread the circles like this http://puu.sh/akyhI/de4be451e5.jpg I spreaded the circles (Thanks for that advice)
5. 01:16:976 (1,2) - Blanket this perfectly I did something else there
6. 01:31:975 (1) - maybe this should be moved like this http://puu.sh/akyoK/c58a6fd4fb.jpg to make it to a straight line Fixed
7. 01:34:225 (1) - Remove NC here Fixed

Well, pretty short mod eh :3 nice map thanx but I think the offset somehow wrong :/
Maybe you will need two inherited timing points, one for the first piano part so that the notes (especially on easy) won't start on the blue line, and the second one on the start of the vocal
I can't seem to find the right offset, maybe you should consult to some experienced mapper I'll wait and see what other modders suggest; so I'll keep the same offset for now.
Improve your note placement, blanket, NC, mirroring, etc Did as much improving as I can.

Thanks so much for the mod, hanyuu!
I really appreciate it.

Rad- wrote:

Hey there!

General:
- Your video has too large dimensions, by rule it must not exceed 1280x720, and it still has sound, which is increasing the file size. Also since its smaller than the song, drag the slider video offset maximum to the right, as it would fit at the spot it should i think. I'm searching for a better video
- Your background also should have either a 4:3 (1024x768) or a 16:9 (1366x768) dimension. Will replace the background
- Offset is 483 Fixed
- I noticed how Easy and Hard have the same slider velocity, not that important, but just wanted to point that out, and how the spacing wasnt very consistent to that, as you used 0,8x spacing on easy for example.
- 01:40:230 - Add a low volume inherited point here Fixed

Easy

- 00:08:545 (1) - Make the spinner end at 00:10:983 and add a whistle to it, then drag 00:10:983 (1) - slider to 00:11:733 , take out its reverse arrow and use ''reverse selection'' on it so it starts at the end. Fixed;I did apply a hitsound but not a whistle though (I don't really like the whistle sound)
- 00:16:233 (1) - I reccomend here instead of using drum hitsounds, change to soft and add whistle on the end of this slider. Changed
- 00:27:483 (1) - Remove NC Ok
- 00:34:983 (6) - NC Ok
- 00:35:358 (1) - Remove NC Ok
- 01:18:483 (3,4) - Use only one slider point on these so that they will look nicer, redo them if you have to as long as they look more round. I like how they are now

Hard

- No idea why you did this in the first place, but delete all the repeating inherited points at the same spot. And delete all the ones that go to 80% volume as the volume of those whistle are suddenly too loud, and change those that are too low volume, as you can barely hear them, and i am talking about the ones in the kiai time as well, keep it all at the same volume so it gives the player a good feedback when clicking. Deleted the repeating points; I think my hitsounds are okay now

- 00:06:295 (1) - Make it only repeat once, and drag it to 00:06:389 Yeah, I like this; done
- 00:40:982 (1) - Add a Finish Added
- 00:43:981 (4,1) - Instead of doing this the same way as before, why not switch the objects on the timeline? I think I'm gonna keep it as it is now
- 01:01:231 - Place a circle here to fill the empty space Fixed
- 01:07:793 (1) - Remove NC and add NC here 01:07:981 (7) Fixed
- 01:31:230 (1) - Remove NC Fixed

Hope it helps ^^ It did. Thank you very much!

Thanks for the mod!

Jaltzu wrote:

So, I happened to have time now... Here we go, double m4m!
I'll be nitpicking about stacking and blanketing, so please don't get too irritated because of that.
Maybe add a normal diff? Totally optional, ofc.

EASY

00:06:665 (4) - NC? Ok
00:10:978 (1,2,3) - Double blanket? Ok
00:20:728 (4,5) - Fix blanket I don't really see anything wrong with it.
00:40:603 - Add a circle No
00:41:728 (2,3) - ↑↑ Fixed
00:58:978 (1,2,1) - Fix this as a double blanket? (It's still good as it is now. Just a personal preference.) I'm gonna keep it as it is now
01:07:978 (4,5) - Fix blanket. I again don't really see what's wrong with it
01:09:478 (5) - Replace with a 1/2 tic long reverse slider. No change
01:11:728 (2,3) - Fix blanket Don't see anything wrong with it
01:12:478 (3,1) - ↑↑ Fixed
01:18:478 (3) - Reverse slider again? No change
01:21:478 (5) - Move 1/2 tic backwards ( to last red tic) and add a circle to 01:22:228 No, sorry. I like what I've done better
01:34:228 - Add a circle Added

Hard

AR6
Kiai isn't snapped. (Check AiMod...) Fixed
00:06:290 (1) - Consider moving this a bit closer to play screen center, so it would flow better to the next spinner. Moved it a bit closer
00:11:727 (2,3) - Fix blanket Moved it a little bit
00:17:540 - Add a circle Added
00:21:477 (5) - Try stacking with one of 00:19:602 (1,2) - circles, or don't overlap at all. (If you change this, remember to check that 00:22:602 (1) - is still stacked) Fixed
00:24:102 (3,4) - Suggestion: replace with a circle at 00:24:102 and a slider 00:24:289 - 00:24:852. No, I'm gonna keep it as it is now
00:36:289 - Add a circle No
00:38:352 (3,4) - Fix blanket (slider slightly too curved) Curved it less
00:40:602 (3,2) - Maybe make these a proper blanket too? I don't see anything wrong
00:44:351 (2,3) - ↑↑
00:51:476 (4) - Replace with 3 circles OR short reverse slider. No change
00:57:851 (1,2) - Maybe stack with 00:55:601 (6)? Fixed
01:06:663 - Music suggests there should be a note here. No change
01:09:663 - ↑↑
01:12:663 - ↑↑
01:10:976 (1,2) - Fix blanket Tried to fix it a bit
01:11:726 (2,3) - ↑↑
01:18:101 (3,4) - Stack properly with 01:16:976 (1) - tail I tried to stack it better, but for some reason it doesn't really want to
01:21:288 - Add a circle Added
01:24:288 - ↑↑
01:25:975 (2) - Replace with a reverse slider. No change
01:27:850 (6,1) - Blanket? Not much change but did try to improve it a bit
01:31:225 (1) - No NC Fixed

M4M

M4M request:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/194173
Thanks!

Thanks for the mod!

- H i N a - wrote:

Hi M4M~

Easy

00:27:478 (1) - delete 00:28:978 (2) and do like this for better sound Ok

SPOILER

00:28:228 - If you follow my suggestion you can add whistle here Done
00:48:478 (2,3) - i think do like this is better Ok

SPOILER

00:49:228 - If you follow my suggestion you can add whistle here Done
01:01:228 (2) - add whistle ? Done
01:04:978 - 01:28:228 - turn down volume to 35-40% Turned it down to 35%
01:34:978 (1) - do like this for better sound Done

SPOILER

Hard

00:34:602 (4) - I think this slider is not beautiful, try this ? Changed it a bit

SPOILER

00:57:851 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it's too hard try to make it easier ? Made it easier
01:29:350 (1) - add whistle in the end slider ? Done
01:31:975 (1) - ^ Done
01:34:975 (1) - ^ Done


I hope it help you It definitely helped me. Thank you so much!

Good Luck Thanx!

Thanks for the mod

• 
  [in general]

1. nice song
2. Hmm...offset is so weird, map with Reasonable offset is hard to rank.you should have two time points i guess... or some other better choices.
   [easy]
3. 00:30:483 (2,3,4) - maybe it is a little hard to read for the beginners;
4. 00:40:983 (1,2) - avoid the stack in easy diff;
5. 00:55:983 (3,4) - ^
   [hard]
6. 00:00:670 (1) - you missed a lot of rhythms here . drag slider with the piano voices is not a wise choice i guess;
   maybe.. change this part like...
7. 00:06:295 (1) - you didn't follow the rhythm well. remove it, only spinner here.
8. 00:24:107 (3) - only copy and past? ctrl+H ctrl+G then put it in its place.
9. 00:38:732 (4,5) - ^
10. 00:25:607 (1,2,3,4) - stack them is better.
11. 00:32:357 (1,2,3) - better?
12. 00:41:356 (2) - is same as 00:44:356 (2) - ,,hmm..maybe you should have other patterns to make this part more varieties.
13. 01:04:981 (1,3) - symmetric pattern?but not in one horizontal line;
14. 01:08:731 (3,4) - ^
15. 01:19:981 (1,2) - ^ btw,,plz copy and past ,,then do some fix with your ctrl;
16. 01:34:980 (1) - ugly slider :\

pandorawindy wrote:

hi at your m4m request, i come here give you some suggestions just me.

• 
  [in general]

1. nice song Thanks
2. Hmm...offset is so weird, map with Reasonable offset is hard to rank.you should have two time points i guess... or some other better choices. Ugh, I hate Offset. I never get it right. Gonna keep it as it is for now.
   [easy]
3. 00:30:483 (2,3,4) - maybe it is a little hard to read for the beginners Made it easier (Moved the slider)
4. 00:40:983 (1,2) - avoid the stack in easy diff Fixed
5. 00:55:983 (3,4) - ^ Fixed
   [hard]
6. 00:00:670 (1) - you missed a lot of rhythms here . drag slider with the piano voices is not a wise choice i guess Changed it as you suggested
   maybe.. change this part like...
7. 00:06:295 (1) - you didn't follow the rhythm well. remove it, only spinner here. Wow! Yeah, that sounds bad. Changed it to a spinner
8. 00:24:107 (3) - only copy and past? ctrl+H ctrl+G then put it in its place. Fixed
9. 00:38:732 (4,5) - ^ Changed
10. 00:25:607 (1,2,3,4) - stack them is better. No, I like more how it is now
11. 00:32:357 (1,2,3) - better? Changed
12. 00:41:356 (2) - is same as 00:44:356 (2) - ,,hmm..maybe you should have other patterns to make this part more varieties. Changed this slider: 00:44:356
13. 01:04:981 (1,3) - symmetric pattern?but not in one horizontal line Changed it, but I copy and pasted to make both sliders identical
14. 01:08:731 (3,4) - ^ Made a very small change
15. 01:19:981 (1,2) - ^ btw,,plz copy and past ,,then do some fix with your ctrl Fixed
16. 01:34:980 (1) - ugly slider :\ Straightened the slider

good luck with you ! Thanks

Thanks so much for the mod!

1. 00:12:482 (3) - blanket better
2. 00:43:231 (3) - don't overmap，just one circle on 00:43:231 is enough
3. 01:29:355 (2) - cancel NC

1. 00:20:733 (4) - blanket
2. 00:25:983 (3) - move this away，don't overlap with 00:24:483 (2) -
3. 01:12:483 (3) - blanket
4. 01:31:983 (1) - change to end at 01:32:733,then 01:33:108 add a circle

sheela901 wrote:

Hey.

General

1. It needs a normal difficulty in order to rank the map. Ok, I'll make sure to get a Normal diff.
2. In the Ranking Criteria, you can't alter the title (TV Size, Short Ver.) unless it's official. In the ending video, there's no (TV size) in the title, so you should remove it. http://puu.sh/aEpuQ/9c5ec6babc.jpg Removed
3. The title is "signal", with no "s" in capital. Removed capital
4. In the artist, it should be 分島花音. The artist is used for the original name. Romanised is use for the English of the artist, which is Kanon Wakeshimi. Fixed
5. The "anime" in the tags is no need, since it'll mark when it's rank. Example: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/167252 Removed "anime"
6. The file size of the video is too big. Replace the video by this one: http://puu.sh/aErAp/b7e566313d.avi Thanks so much for the video; your video added
7. In your .osu files, when you see "Video,3000,"Strike The Blood ED 2 [Full HD].avi", replace 3000 by 10983, since the video should start here. Fixed
8. 00:00:670 - The timing point should be here and remove the previous two green points. Fixed
9. 00:10:982 - Add a timing point here. Added
10. The preview point isn't snap. It is snapped?

Easy

1. 00:11:733 (1,2) - Make a better blanket: Tried to improve the blanket
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:13:233 (2,3) - ^ Tried to improve it as well
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:16:233 (1) - Stack it with the previous and move the last point to x:433 y:55. After, move 00:17:733 (1) to x:425 y:259 and move 00:18:483 (2) to x:313 y:251. I did stack it and I moved the two hitcircles
4. 00:19:233 (3,4) - Make a symmetric pattern: Ok
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:25:983 (3) - The flow to the previous isn't good and it's overlapped by the previous slider. Try this pattern: Ok
   
   SPOILER

   
   After, move 00:29:733 (1) to x:184 y:224, 00:30:483 (2) to x:280 y:281, 00:31:233 (3) to x:366 y:209, and 00:31:983 (4) to x:438 y:123, and a blanket with 00:31:233 (3) . Also, remove the repeat, and end the slider at 00:32:733 ; blue ticks aren't use in easy difficulties. Also, you need to do something with 00:33:483 (5) . Maybe copy and paste 00:31:983 (4) , rotate it by 45°, and move it to x:438 y:123. It makes the pattern better. And be careful with 00:34:983 (1,2,3) . I moved the hitcircles, blanketed, removed the repeat and made that slider longer.
6. 00:29:733 (1) - Remove the new combo, and add it to 00:30:483 (2) Ok
7. 00:37:983 (5) - Add a new combo. Ok
8. 00:40:983 (1) - If the circle is moved to x:390 y:108, the flow is better to the previous slider. Still, you have to do something about 00:41:733 (2,3) . You can move 00:41:733 (2) to x:288 y:59, 00:42:483 (3) Ctrl + G and move it to x:189 y:31, and 00:44:733 (4) to x:180 y:142. Be careful with the distance for 00:46:983 (1) . Fixed
9. 00:50:733 (3,4) - Make a blanket. Blanket should be better. Ok
10. 00:58:233 (4,1) - Make a better blanket; for the slider, move the first point (the one on the head) to x:196 y:287, the second to x:261 y:217, and last to x:182 y:76. Struggled with this but tried to improve it still
11. 01:01:233 (2) - Move this to x:156 y:184. Moved
12. 01:01:983 (1) - Copy and paste 00:58:983 (1) , Ctrl + J, Ctrl + H, Ctrl + G, and move it to x:115 y:80. I copy and pasted but moved it to another spot
13. 01:11:733 (2,3) - Make a better blanket. Use the approach circle of the circle to help. I hope my blanket looks better now
14. 01:34:983 (1) - Loosen the curve and make a blanket with 01:34:233 (2) . Ok

Hard

1. 00:12:482 (3) - Move the last point to x:268 y:375 to perfect the blanket pattern. I tried to perfect the blanket
2. 00:16:982 (1,3) - Loosen the curve; too much is ugly. Loosened the curve a bit
3. 00:23:357 (2) - Ctrl + J for a better flow. Ok
4. 00:40:607 (3,2) - Try perfecting the blanket. Did my best to perfect it
5. 00:58:981 (1) - Move this to x:70 y:165. The distance was too small. Moved the slider
6. 01:11:731 (2,3) - Loosen the curves. Fixed
7. 01:13:981 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
8. 01:25:230 (1) - Loosen the curve in order to move up the curve, since it was outside of the grid map. Did something else

Well, that's all. Any questions can be ask via PM or in-game. Good Luck on ranking this map. Thanks!

Thank you for the mod! It really helped me.

Sellenite wrote:

Hi！m4m

[Hard]

1. 00:12:482 (3) - blanket better Fixed
2. 00:43:231 (3) - don't overmap，just one circle on 00:43:231 is enough I'm gonna keep it as it is for now. If someone else also complains then I'll consider changing it
3. 01:29:355 (2) - cancel NC Ok

[Easy]

1. 00:20:733 (4) - blanket Ok
2. 00:25:983 (3) - move this away，don't overlap with 00:24:483 (2) - Fixed
3. 01:12:483 (3) - blanket Ok
4. 01:31:983 (1) - change to end at 01:32:733,then 01:33:108 add a circle Ok

nothing serious，but perhaps hard is lack of hitsound I'm not so good with hitsounds and I don't like it if there is too many hitsounds.
good luck Thanks!

Thanks alot for the mod!

No_Gu wrote:

M4M from my queueu

sry for the delay

there should be a diff gap.make another normal diff or rename your easy to normal.I personally suggest making a normal
this is such a beautiful song I'm working on the Normal,why not add a silent sliderslide? Will think about it
change offset to -1017 to change the downbeat.and after this,change your NC I'm gonna keep the offset as it is now

[Easy]
00:00:670 (1,3) - add whislte for both head and end Added
00:06:670 (1,2) - add whistle Added
00:22:983 (1,2,3) - 2,3 are overlapped .and these notes aren't good imo.try sth like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1893585 orz but you need to chang the notes after these if you changed this Did something else
00:40:983 (1) - add a green line with 30% volume Ok
00:58:983 (1) - 1~2 grids down Don't really understand that, but I did improve that section, because it sucked, but it hopefully looks much better now
add more whistle please I don't like too many hitsounds, but I'll see what I can do
not very good but ok I made alot of changes and improvements to this diff, so hopefully it's better now

[Hard]
in fact no need to use ds.but if you want,it's still ok.and I personally suggest 2.0x or more to let 1/4 notes not overlapped.that will make your map look neater
00:41:356 (2) - don't fit the song imo I'm gonna keep it like it is for now
00:55:231 (5,6) - maybe I did change something there
00:58:981 (1) - make this far from 00:58:606 (4) - .it looks like 1/4 from 00:58:606 (4) - Moved it a bit farther away as you had suggested
hmmm still.not very good Worked on this diff alot
I think it's better to have a remap with slider speed and with the ds which won't overlap 1/4 notes. I changed the slider speed and applied less DS to avoid overlapping; the diff looks better now.
but if you don't want,it's still ok.
still.add more whistle Same as Easy; don't really like too much hitsounds.

Thanks for the mod!

HootOwlStar wrote:

Hihi from my modding queue
Well, I'm here for mod
Mostly my mods are suggestions, so you can always ignore them
And, ignore my English, I know it's poor

General

AiMod wrote:

Uninherited timing points conflict with Hard diff. Oops, I thought it was the green timing points. Fixed.

So fix please~ Uninherited points (red timing points) should be the same in each diff

Easy

00:00:670 (1,2,3) - Place 00:00:670 (1) at x:176 y:96, followed by 00:02:920 (2,3) placing at x:336 y:292 Ok
00:06:670 (1,2) - I think they should both placed at the centre of the grid, that is at x:256 y:192 Good idea
00:16:232 (1) - No NC Ok
00:20:732 (4) - Suggest making the slider from a clone of 00:19:232 (3) Yeah, I guess it will then look better
00:25:982 (3) - Move point x:64 y:256 to x:68 y:232 Ok
00:34:982 (1,2,3) - Pattern is not nice for me, try something like this Nice suggestion. Changed

Note

If you try to follow my mod of 00:34:982 (1,2,3) without changing the notes afterwards, then follow these steps:
1. Move 00:34:982 (1) to x:40 y:244
2. Move slider to x:92 y:228, and add a point at x:152 y:184. The point of the other end of slider should be at x:180 y:112
3. Move 00:36:482 (3) to x:228 y:104
That's all lol Thanks for the note; it really helped

00:42:482 (3) - Move point x:57 y:59 to x:52 y:68 seems better Ok
01:06:482 (3,4) - Try to avoid this pattern on your next beatmap set Ok, thanks for the suggestion. I'll remember that next time
01:31:982 (1) - No NC Ok

Normal

00:16:232 (5,6,7) - Suggest making them a reverse slider occupying 3 small ticks Changed it to a reverse slider
00:34:982 (7) - NC Ok
00:35:357 (1) - No NC Ok
01:16:607 - Add a circle Ok
01:24:857 - ^ Ok

I only found these that should be fixed in this diff
I really can't mod Hard so that's all of my mod~ No prob

I'm sorry if the mod format is not nice because this is the 1st time I'm trying it
Anyway, love this song so much
So regret just listen Japanese songs recently
Hope your mapset gets ranked soon and GL Thanks!

ohad1881 wrote:

easy
00:52:982- the red dot in the slider is not recommended in easy and normal maps.1,2 If other modders complain about it as well, then I'll consider changing it.
00:20:732- this could be prettier if it will be the same as 3 Changed
00:25:982-the red dot in the slider is not recommended in easy and normal maps. ^
normal
01:01:982 - u can do something better in there... Yeah, changed it so it looks better
01:09:107- the X of 2 is 496 and the X of 3 is 492, fix it. Thanks for spotting that. Fixed
hard
00:15:106- better if it will be in the same distance with 4,5 Ok
00:23:356 - the Y of 2 is 292 and the Y of 3 is 296. fix it. Thanks again. Fixed
00:51:480 not in the same distance like 3,4 Fixed
01:21:292- not int he same distance Fixed

Thanks for the mod! Will mod your map as well as soon as I can

A i k a wrote:

from your M4M Queue!

EasyReduce AR, it's quite high for Easy. I'd suggest 2-3. It is 3
This should be fixed, both of them. Fixed
00:02:920 (2,3) - Overlap is confusing for beginners, suggesting to put circle somewhere else where it doesn't overlap. Ok
00:06:670 (1) - This circle here doesn't make much sense to the rhythm and is hard to know when to hit unless you watch closely on the approach circle, and beginners are not that good yet. Changed it to a short reversed slider
00:15:857 (4,1) - Overlap here as well. No change
00:30:482 (1,2,3) - Maybe not very necessary right there but it's still best to avoid overlap since your AR is quite high for an Easy. No change
00:34:982 (1,2,3) - Feels a bit too fast comparing to other parts while not being in Kiai. Made a change; removed last hitcircle and made slider longer
01:04:232 - You can add circle here to make rhythm flow. Added a circle
01:25:607 (4) - Feels wierd to have it there, quite confusing rhythm there even for me, consider removing it. Removed

NormalThis should be fixed as well. Fixed
00:52:982 (1,2) - Ending slider on blue polarity and then start circle at red/white is confusing, maybe make another slider that ends at red/white polarity instead? I ended it at white polarity
01:16:607 - Can add a circle here, make rhythm flow. Ok

HardFirst off, this issue which is universal to all your maps, they should have same Uninherited points(the red ones). Fixed all of them
00:02:919 (2,3) - I have a feeling that the distance between these are quite confusing because they are too close. Moved the hitcircle a bit away from the slider
00:12:482 (3,4,5,1) - Confusing distances here, they are nor linear or has equal distance between. I think it's okay now
00:33:481 (2,3) - Too close, I would have thought that I had to hit 00:34:607 (3) much earlier than I should have. Fixed
00:41:356 (2,3) - A bit too close here too. Fixed
00:57:856 (3,4) - I'm pretty sure more than 70% of the players who plays this map for the first time will miss the last reverse on the reverse slider, maybe make like this instead?(how to put it is up to you) Ok
01:31:605 (6,1) - Slightly too close, move it away abit, otherwise confusing. Ok

Thanks for the mod!

Modem wrote:

Hi! From M4M request!!! Here's my mod for youe beatmap

Easy

Change the slider tick rate into two. The slider tick rate's sound will follow the rhytm for the song Good idea; changed
00:02:920 (2) Don't use stack there, because this difficulty is for the beginner. Move it away to x: 256 y:200 I unstacked it, but I moved it to a different spot
00:06:670 (1) Don't add a single not there. Because the piano song is so complicated to follow by just a single note. I prefer a small slider from 00:06:295 ~ 00:06:482 and reversed it once Ok
00:36:482 (3) This flow is a bit hard. How about remove this note and make the slider end at 00:36:482 ? Ok
01:17:732 (2) Move it away from 01:16:982 (1). It will make the flow easier to read Ok; made a sort of triangle pattern

Normal

Change the slider tick rate into two Ok
00:37:232 (5) Move it to x: 188 y: 320 Ok
00:52:982 (1) Make the slider end at 00:53:572 so it will fit the music Fixed
01:03:857 Add a note and whistle there Ok
01:04:232 Add a note Ok
01:04:607 Add a note Added
00:33:482 Make the same slider like 01:31:232 (1) and flip it vertically No, I think the wavy slider fits the music more
01:36:857 There's a piano sound there, so add a note at x: 432 y: 68 I did add a note,but placed it somewhere else.

Hard

Change the slider tick rate into two Ok
00:00:670 (1) Whistle there Ok
00:01:420 (3) Whistle there Ok
00:01:795 (4) Whistle there Ok
00:02:920 (2) Whistle there Ok
00:03:670 (3) Whistle there Ok
00:04:420 (5) Whistle there Ok
00:14:544 Add a note No change
00:14:732 (6) Move it to x: 192 y: 240 Ok
00:16:232 (2, 3, 4) NC and change the volume into 40% Changed
00:19:607 (1, 2, 3) Move it closer from each other No change
00:29:732 (2) Move it closer to 00:28:982 (1) No change; I want jumps
01:07:419 (4, 5, 6) Move it closer from each other No
01:30:107 (3) Whistle there Ok
01:31:419 (5) Whistle there Ok

Hope it will help you and Good luck! (^ w ^) Thanks!

Thank you so much for mod!

OscaR CUBE wrote:
General
I think your mapset has a bit-too-loud hitsound.. I think it's fine. And there were previous complaints that my hitsounds are too soft. So I'm gonna keep it as it is for now. Will wait to see what other modders have to say

Hard
00:06:295 - add three - 1/8 stream here??i mean

image

No change; I don't think it'll work
00:24:107 (3) - flip it vertically and move it somewhere to fit the DS.. Yeah I like it; changed
00:28:982 (1) - delete the red-point at the slider. make it curve, i mean.. XD beacuse i think curve fits slow song like this.. Ok. Fixed
00:31:044 (4) - fix the distance.. Yeah, I don't even know why I did that
00:46:232 (3,4,5) - why don't stack this like 00:40:232 (1,2,3) - ?? I want to mix it up a bit, so that it's not the same patterns over and over.
00:57:857 (3) - Ctrl + G ?? Ok
01:04:419 (5,6) - stack this with (4)'s end?? Ok
01:07:982 (1,2,3) - how about something like this? No, I like mine better.

image

01:13:419 (4,5) - same with 01:04:419 (5,6) - No change; I want to try different patterns
01:13:982 (1,2,3) - how about Ok; changed

image

01:27:482 (4,5,6) - about the 'stack' thing.. No change
01:30:107 (3) - move to x : 256, y : 292 ? Good idea, that would make the flow better; fixed
01:31:232 (4,5,6) - stack.. No change; I also want to try and prevent boredness when playing that pattern
01:33:107 (2) - make this at the same position as 01:31:607 (6) - ?? Good idea; stacked

Normal
00:01:795 (3) - i think u should make it longer until the red tick, since this is normal diff. It sounds a bit weird to me if I do that. I'll consider changing it if other modders also complain about it. No change
00:30:107 (1) - why don't make this blanket with previous cicrle?? I want to use different slider shapes; no change
00:31:607 (3) - ^ ^
00:40:982 (1,2,3) - make it like this? Ok, I like it; changed

image

00:58:607 (1) - move this to x : 236, y : 116 ?? after that, u must move the rest too.. Changed
01:09:482 (3) - i think u want to re-make the shape.. No change

Easy
00:06:295 (1) - i think this sounds a bit weird.. how about 1/8 slider?? or just insert break there?? I inserted a break
00:18:482 (2) - how about move this to x : 316, y : 284 ?? Ok
00:25:982 (3) - delete the red-point, same reason as before.. :3 Fixed
00:42:482 (3) - move this a bit up ?? like x : 196, y : 36
00:52:982 (1,2) - red-point.. No change
01:05:732 (2,3) - blanket.. No, I want the head of the slider to be in-line with the previous hitcircles.
01:07:982 (4,5) - ^ I tried to improve the blanket
01:15:482 (3) - move this to x: 344, y : 132 Ok; fixed

I think that's all..
Sorry if my mods don't help you so much.. It did help me, thanks!

Thanks for the mod!!

Yuthuil wrote:

Hi from m4m

General:
Maybe add a silent slider sound. I'll think about it
Easy:

I think that slider velocity 1.10 fits this difficulty better than 1.40. I'm okay with how it is now; no change

AR two to one? Changed it to two

00:11:732 (1,2) - Blanket properly. Tried to improve the blanket
00:13:232 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:37:982 (1,2) - this looks extremely unappealing, try this ---> http://puu.sh/b8DiT/88446ffe9b.jpg Ok; fixed
00:46:982 (1,2) - the rhythm here fees weird. Changed it, so hopefully it's not that weird anymore
00:50:732 (3,4) - blanket properly. Did something else
00:52:982 (1,2) - Tidy up, make symmetrical. Changed alot of things here
00:58:232 (4,1) - blanket properly. I think it looks okay . . .
01:04:982 (1,2) - I think you should map the vocals here, it fits better imo. No change
01:11:732 (2,3) - blanket properly. Tried to improve it
01:25:982 (1) - this spinner kinda feels forced and doesn't allow me to enjoy the map as much as I'd like to, so I think you should map the instruments here. No change; I don't think it's forced. It fits with the vocal.
01:28:982 (1,2) - rhythm feels weird I don't think the rhythm is weird . . .
01:34:232 (5,1) - blanket properly. Ok
01:28:982 I think you should make the hitsound volume much lower here. Yeah, lowered the volume

Overall: The map has a lot of blanketing errors which ruin the map.

Normal:

HP drain rate, three or four Changed to 4, AR, four to three Changed to 4, OD three or two Changed it to a 2. SV should be 1.40 I think. No change

00:01:420 (2,3) - blanketing error. Ok
00:18:107 (2,3) - D: please blanket properly Ok, no prob
00:21:482 (4) - slider tail end at x196 y288 I ended it at Y:284, so that the slider is still blanketing the previous hitcircle properly
00:24:107 (3,4) - blanket properly.
00:30:107 (1) - how to say, it's kind of like old mapping style, which can't be ranked. so tidy up please Oh, I didn't know that; changed to normal slider
00:37:982 (1) - fix like this ----> http://puu.sh/b8E2x/4d754bfab2.jpg I suck at making sliders like that, so I changed it into a wavy slider
00:50:732 the beat here shouldn't be ignored imo No change; I want to keep it a long slider like that one
00:54:107 (2,3) - please blanket properly. Ok; made some other changes too
01:01:982 (2) - symmetry please I hope it looks better now
01:14:357 (2) - ctrl+g? the flow is better like that. Ok; changed
01:19:982 (1,3) - tidy up, symmetry pls Ok; tried to tidy it up
01:22:607 (5,1) - blanket, like this ---> http://puu.sh/b8EfW/880942b1ce.jpg Blanketed

Overall: The blanketing and rhythm need some work

Hard:

At least AR 6. Ok

00:04:795 (6) - tidy up...perhaps try this ----> http://puu.sh/b8ErM/48e770e2e5.jpg Changed
00:28:607 (4,1) - stack with 1's tail properly. I can't stack it more properly than this
01:19:982 (1,3) - clone 3 of one. Ok

Overall: Okay rhythm, but it really need tidying up, I stopped pointing the neatness issues out since there are way too many. Yes, I now see how many tidy errors there are. I tried to tidy up every problem I saw.

Thanks so much for your mod!

TheDizzeY wrote:

Rakutenshi mod que~
[Hard]
01:24:482 (3) - Clap to the end I did put in clapsounds
01:24:482 (3) - ^
01:24:482 (3) - Clap to the beginning
01:23:732 (2) - Clap Ok
01:28:232 (1) - Finish to the end Ok
[Normal]
00:02:545 (1) - Red thick
00:02:545 (1) - http://puu.sh/bfqDU/c1139a2012.Followed your suggestion

Thanks for the mod!

Jere-Chan wrote:

おはよう ございます! (good morning) I found this mapset on my modding que ^_^
so maybe lets get started

Easy:
nothing to mod cause its already very good Thanks!

Normal:
00:01:795 (3) - make it from this to this Ok; fixed
00:05:170 (3) - this shouldnt be here. Delete that cause it doesnt feel right if its there You're right; removed

Hard:
00:04:420 (5) - move it from to Sure, fixed

Thanks for the mod!

Z3R0Xx wrote:

Hey uh doing M4M from your queue! (this one: t/239444)

Boxes with '^' above them just refer to the mod above.

Please note that these are just suggestions. You don't need to follow them if you don't like it.

[General]

It seems your map lacks a few of hit sounds. Try tossing some claps on every 2nd & 4th beat in a measure.[Hard] I took your advice and added claps where necessary

00:28:607 (4,1) - Stack these better Tried to improve the stack
00:31:044 (4) - This note is a bit to close to (3). Select both (4) & (5) and move them both away according to your DS. That day your blanket wont be ruined. Did something else
00:33:482 (2) - I would actually curve this slider in a but more that way it flows better to the next note. Ok; curved it more

[Normal]

For Kiai time, since there really aren't very many hit sounds it doesn't sound as great as it should. So ill just point a few out where claps should be. You'll notice a pattern going on so try to implement this into all of your other difficulties as well. (I've already stated what you should do in the general section)

01:05:732 (3) - Clap Ok
01:06:482 (5) - ^ on the slider tail Ok
01:07:982 (1) - ^ Ok
etc...

01:33:107 (4) - I honestly don't think this note should be here but instead it should be here 01:34:232 . I think this sounds much more fitting Good idea; fixed

^

[Easy]

00:19:232 (3,4) - Why not make these 2 slider the same? Ctrl-C, Ctrl-V, Ctrl-J Ok; changed

Well that's about all I could find, sorry if it isn't much. Great map and hope it gets ranked in the future! Thanks!

Thank you for the mod!

kakifly wrote:

m4m :3

General

- i'm not sure if the anime uses the romanized source or not but heres the japanese version if you want to change the source ストライク・ザ・ブラッド Added
- please add these to the tags [ SutoBura, Sutoraiku za Buraddo ] Added
- add in a blank slider slide ? http://puu.sh/biDQI/39f1ca96cf.wav Okay cool; Thanks!

Easy

- i suggest you keep the OD and AR a bit more balanced so lower the OD a bit Ok
- 00:00:670 (1,2,3) - i think this follows the music a bit better; Changed

SPOILER

- 00:08:170 (1) - remove this and start the spinner there; a random circle is a bit hard for easy IMO, remember to length the spinner by 1/4 if you do Ok
- 00:15:857 (4,5) - avoid stacking in easy Okay, removed the stack
- 00:27:482 (4) - blanket is just a bit off. recheck please xD Tried to improve it a bit
- 00:34:982 (1,2) - just follow the instrumentals here and try to keep a consistent beat; so.. it should look something like this Okay; fixed

SPOILER

- 00:37:982 (1,2) - recheck blanket Tried to improve it
- 00:49:232 (2) - at this point there is a bit too much repeat sliders imo I didn't even realize it. Made less repeat sliders at that point
- 01:05:732 (2,3) - blanket Ok
- 01:31:982 (3,4,5) - i suggest doing the same thing as 01:28:982 (1,2) - since the beat on 5 isnt very strong for a circle Ok
- 01:37:982 (1) - end spinner on red tick ( 01:39:857 ) Ok; fixed

Normal

- Please do cs 3.5 and lower OD & HP by 1 No change, I don't like a decimal and I don't want it to be that Easy
- 00:00:670 (1,2) - please avoid 1/4 spacings in normal Ok; removed the hitcircle and lengthened the slider
- 00:03:670 (1) - move to x304 y192 so the overlap is more organized (make adjustments to 00:04:795 (2) - if you do this) Ok; fixed
- 00:19:607 (1) - the repeat starts on a strong beat; i highly suggest you change this part so either a circle or slider starts at 00:19:982 Nah, I don't think it's such a big issue, but I will see what others modders say
- 00:22:607 (1) - same here; ^ 00:22:982 is important ^
- 00:24:107 (3) - remove; i dont think you should random map the vocals here Ok; removed
- 00:39:482 (3) - add whislte on tail Ok; added
- 01:03:857 (3,4,1) - remove; i dont think mapping this part is necessary Ok; removed
- 01:37:982 (1) - same as easy Fixed

Hard

- you're missing a beat at 00:02:545 It doesn't sound right if I add a beat there
- 00:05:543 - make these into a 1/2 slider they are not strong enough to be mapped as circles imo Ok; fixed
- 00:16:794 put something here; either a circle or get a 1/4 repeat slider No, I don't really think it fits in with the music
- 00:28:607 (4) - stack better; move to x211 x236 Thank you so much for telling me where to place it; been struggling with that for ages. Fixed
- 01:01:982 (2,3,4,5,6) - imo no need to map here No change
- 01:37:982 (1) - same as easy Fixed
thats all~ good luck with your beatmap ! Thanks

Thank you so much for the mod, kakifly!

FlobuFlobs wrote:

I can't really mod normal/hards but i will try, i feel guilty xD


highly recommended
Suggestion
Normal stuff

[General]00:11:010 - this offset here is = 11010, you can hear how it goes off on the end I'm not sure what to dosource: ストライク・ザ・ブラッド and move Strike the Blood to the tags FixedKeep the breaks in all diffs the same, remove them and disable letterbox during breaks or add them in hard and insane and fix in normal or easy the break time There are no breaks in any of the diffswould change the obeject colour to some softer one Changed the colours; thanks, I love them

Combo1 : 159,223,223
Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 159,159,223
Combo4 : 191,64,191

This one is just my own opinion so you can ignore it, i would change the BG to something more unique
the actual one looks like the first googled pic lol Okay, I changed the BG

[Hard]00:00:670 (1) - why does this slider end with red corner lol, how did you even do that LOL, 00:00:670 (1) - curve this a bit more to the following cirlces Okay; curved

SPOILER

[/color]00:04:795 (6,7,8) - remove then and add 00:04:420 (5) - here a slider, theres absolute nothing in the song there and you shouldnt overmapp a hard Okay00:04:420 (5) - heres again nothing, a circle here 01:10:607 - and a slider from 01:10:794 - to 01:11:357 - would fit better Okay00:23:357 (2) - 00:24:107 (3) - dont curve them so much >-<, make it more like 00:26:357 (4) - its way better 01:18:107 (2,3) - if you tried to blank it, its too low lol I lowered this 01:16:982 (1) - It's now blanketed better00:44:357 (2) - just for the look, make it a bit curvy? [/color]

SPOILER

[Normal]You have to keep the same DS at a normal / easy otherwise its unrankable as far as i know 00:31:232 (2,3) - move them a bit lower, it looks better [/color]

SPOILER

00:33:857 (5,6) - let the slider point to the next circles direction, flows better Okay; I did change something there00:52:232 (6) - this slider on the red tick plays strange, remove repeat and move it to the white tick should fix it Already fixed00:54:107 (2,3) - like above Fixed00:22:607 (1) - this slider feels miss placed, a normal curved slider would play better, 00:37:982 (1) - here its nice Okay, I changed it to a normal curved slider01:21:857 (4) - this one breaks the flow, 01:21:107 (3) - this one should point at 01:21:857 (4) - Okay, I placed 01:21:857 (4) - next to 01:21:107 (3) - 01:25:982 (5) - the curves are way to much lol No change; I like those curves01:27:107 (6) - curve this abit? you are doing a curve with the circles so why not together with the slider? Okay; curved

ive tried but i just cant mod easy diff xD and before i mod it wrong i let it out That's okay

Thanks for the mod!

fm4a93au04 wrote:

Hello , from my queue .

fm4a93au04's standard modding queue

Let’s start .

My mod

[Easy]

00:02:920 (2) – Remove W ( whistle ) . Kept the whistle

00:03:670 (3) – Remove W at end . Removed that whistle

00:00:670 (1,2,3) – Maybe try this ? I already changed it to something else



Or :



… I just want it be a symmytry =..= . In order to take this picture ( to let 1,2,3 appeare in one scane ) , I do this :



Original :



00:08:357 (1) – Later it 1/2 beat ( it will start at 00:08:545 . ) , end at the same place ( 00:10:982 . ) . I also did something else here

00:11:732 (1) – Add W at head . Blenket better , like : Added the whistle,but did something else with the hitcircle



00:13:232 (2) – W . Added

00:13:982 (3) – Add a 10% ~ 25% vol. F ( finish ) at end ( I use 25% ) . Okay, added a 25% vol finish



I think it’s not bad =..= . Just need to change back to 50% vol. at 00:15:294 .

00:15:857 (4) – Add D-F . With this :



You can use D ( Drum ) – C ( Clap ) , W , F without adding a inheriting line ( green line ) . I think I'll rather use the green lines; it just feels easier for me

00:16:232 (5) – Head D-C , reverse arrow ( 00:16:607 ) D-F , end F . Followed your suggestion and also lowered that vol to 20%

00:34:982 (1,2) – Why here suddenly chasing vocal sound ? I think beginner can’t accept it …… and it is strange for me too . I suggest you follow BG sound here , not vocal ( suggetion is always suggestion , so you can ignore me for sure =ㄦ= ) . Oh, I fixed that already

00:39:482 (2) – Make red point on tick ? like : A few modders have told me to avoid that red tick in Easy, so no change



Since there is a piano sound on the tick . End D-C . No change, cuz I don't know how to do that

00:44:732 (4) – Remove W at reverse . Removed

00:46:982 (1) – Try this ? I did something else there



Just for a reference .

00:51:482 (3) – Add W at head . Remove W at end . Okay

00:52:982 (1) – Add F at head . Okay

00:58:982 (1) – Add F or N-F at head . Added finish

01:01:982 (1,2) –Delete 1 and 2 , add a note with N-H at 01:01:982 . , and 01:02:357 ~ 01:04:232 spinner . I think it’s better … Okay, good idea

… I think N-C not very fit this song so … I’ll recommand you some sound at the end .

01:31:982 (3) – Remove W at head . Okay

01:33:107 (4) – Remove W . Okay

01:36:857 (3) – Remove W at head and end . Okay

[Normal]

00:00:670 (1) – Remove W at head . Okay

00:01:420 (2) – W . Changed this, just a bit differently

00:03:295 – Add a note ? Or make a reverse slider . Okay, also made a few extra changesA example :



If you add reverse , then 00:02:920 – W .

00:03:670 (5) – Remove W at head , add W at end . Okay

00:04:795 (6) – Remove W . okay

00:15:107 (4) – Why not this ?Okay, good idea



00:15:107 (4) – Head add F 25% ( or 30% ) . Added

00:16:232 (5) – Add D-C at head , D-F at reverse and end . Okay, followed your suggestion

00:16:982 (1) – Head F . Add why 70% vol. ? It's too loud I think . Lowered it to 50%



00:22:607 (1,2) – I prefer it ( do a overlap on 2’s head ) No change, I don't want a overlap there



00:40:232 (4) – D-C . Okay

00:46:982 (1,2,3) – Why not this ? I like it, changed



00:49:982 (5) - : I'm gonna keep it as it is now



00:54:107 (2,3) – I prefer to : Did change it to something like that



01:01:982 (2,3) – Similar as Easy . Try to compose it in your style I'm okay with it now

<- He is a lazy man ~ =ㄦ= .

[Hard] Will decide at a later stage what I'm going to change in this diff

About sound suggestion , just copy E / N to H . Since sound change can apply at all diff .

So , I focus on rhythm and compose here .

00:00:670 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – Why not add a x0.5 slider speed to make a beginning ?



I make a beginning for you , just copy the code to your map . Remenber open a new diff name as “ my lab ” , “ modding area “ … or something . You can feel it once before you map it . But , composing is in random , just feeling the clicking and mouse movement … If you like it , then try to map it in your style .

Obj ( object ) :

348,264,670,5,0,0:0:0:0:
348,264,1045,2,0,L|375:222,1,50,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,252,1795,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,252,2732,5,0,0:0:0:0:
148,252,2920,2,0,L|120:288,2,25,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,88,3670,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,248,4045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,248,4420,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,4795,1,4,0:0:0:0:

Timing Points :

670,750,4,2,0,30,1,0
670,-200,4,2,0,30,0,0
3857,-200,4,2,0,15,0,0
4232,-200,4,2,0,10,0,0
4607,-200,4,2,0,5,0,0

00:10:982 – Here I’ll make a x0.75 for you . Same , just a reference ~ If you like then compose in your style ~

Obj :

132,232,10982,6,0,P|83:148|112:100,1,150.000005722046,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,152,12482,2,0,P|429:236|400:284,1,150.000005722046,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,275,13982,5,4,0:0:0:0:
276,224,14357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,340,14732,1,0,1:0:0:0:
372,160,15107,2,0,P|340:120|288:108,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
192,240,16232,5,8,0:3:0:0:
192,240,16419,1,4,0:3:0:0:
192,240,16607,1,4,0:3:0:0:
172,356,16982,6,0,P|132:340|88:296,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,228,17544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,152,17732,2,0,P|125:125|185:109,1,100

Time points :

10982,750,4,2,0,50,1,0
10982,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,20,0,0
11732,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
13794,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,20,0,0
14169,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
14544,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,20,0,0
15107,-200,4,2,0,30,0,0
16232,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
16232,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
16977,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0

That is a lot of things can be improve before it be ranked .

About the sound … I will found it out and give you link with PM . You can use S-H , and N-H for clap in refrain .

When you do that above , you can call me for mod … if you like my mod =ㄦ= .

And I will gain kds at twice ~~~ ( PUNCH )

Maybe you can remap it other day . Why ? This my map for a reference .

Before remap :

Perfume - MY COLOR

After remap :


Perfume - MY COLOR( Short Ver. )

… So , you can see the difference between them … ( I’m not call you to mod my map , I just want to tell you the benefits of remapping … )

Something you are very familiar at once , when you do it twice ( remap) , that will be very fast ~ isn’t it ?

All right ~ That’s all what I want to say .

Good luck to your map ~ Thanks![/color]

Thanks so much for your mod and sound advice.

Magnavox wrote:

Not sure if im the only one who noticed but the mp3's volume is very low in comparison to other beatmaps my attempt at a fix is here not sure if the fix is 100% correct but it should help.

As for the actual mapping, i don't really have anything constructive to add.

Good luck on the map.

Thanks for the mp3!

Pururut wrote:

hi o/ from MQ

[General]
untick Widescreen Support you don't have any SB Done
the mp3's volume too low maybe you should change mp3 I already changed it, it's louder now
Hard and Insane need improve I did changes on my Hard

[Easy]
you should keep constant DS for a Easy diff. I fixed the DS error; the DS is now constant
00:11:010 unsnap inherited point Unsnapped
00:25:982 (3) - improve blanket Tried to improve it
00:42:482 (3) - this slider are too close Health-bar in the low difficulty which is not allowed Fixed
01:01:232 (2) - stack with 00:58:232 (4) - ? DS doesn't allow it

[Normal]
00:11:010 unsnap inherited point Unsnapped
00:15:107 (4) - improve blanket Okay
00:18:482 (3) - ^ ^
01:06:482 (4) - ^ ^
01:22:982 (1) - ^ ^
01:15:857 (4,5,6) - i recommend 6 stack with 01:16:982 (1) - sure keep constant DS No change
01:25:982 (5) - NC Fixed

[Hard]
hmmm maybe 80BPM's single tap is too hard in Hard diff.
such as
00:01:232 (2,3) - Made changes
00:19:607 (1,2,3) - I don't think it's too hard
00:46:232 (3,4,5) - ^
00:49:044 (3,4,5,1) - ^
00:54:482 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^
01:07:419 (4,5,6) - ^
01:10:607 (5,1) - ^
01:13:419 (4,5) - ^
01:20:544 (2,3,4) - ^
01:27:482 (4,5,6) - ^
01:31:232 (4,5,6) - ^
Rhythm is fine but you should careful consideration about this problem.that's all The hitcircles is not too hard. If they weren't there, I think this Hard diff would have then been too easy

poor mod It still helped me
good luck o/ Thanks!
prpr

Thank you for the mod!

• you should change that singular character on tags like "2", make it "two".

• 00:15:857 (5,6,1,2) - make triangle
  00:29:732 (5,1) - swap new combo
  00:55:982 (3,1) - stack, slider tail
  00:58:232 (4,2) - ^, notes
  01:31:982 (3) - add new combo
  01:33:107 (4,1) - make blanket each other

• 00:00:670 (1,2) - make blanket, just my opinion
  00:10:982 (1,2,3) - make sliders blanker the circle?
  00:27:857 (1) - remove new combo and add it on 00:29:357 (3) -
  00:30:107 (1) - ^, remove and add on 00:32:732 (4) - , check distance snap also.
  00:34:982 (1,2) - make better blanket
  01:07:982 (1,3) - parallel?
  01:37:232 (1) - remove new combo

• 00:02:732 (1) - remove new combo and add on 00:04:045 (3) -
  00:15:107 (1) - remove new combo
  00:19:607 (1) - same like 00:02:732 (1) - remove and add on 00:19:982 (3) -
  00:22:607 (1,2) - ^
  00:23:357 (2,3) - almost like jump, make it short distance snap
  00:25:607 (1,2,3) - same like 00:19:607 (1) -
  00:32:357 (6,1) - swap new combo
  00:37:607 (1,2) - ^
  00:55:794 (1,2) - ^
  01:01:607 (1,2) - ^
  01:06:107 (2,3) - same like 00:23:357 (2,3) -
  01:10:794 (1) - short his slider as 1/2 slider and move it to 01:10:982 (1) - add note on this place

StarForYou wrote:

Hi From M4M desu

[General]
-Offset of 2 red lines also wrong :O Fixed! Thanks for that
First red line offset: 646
Second red line offset: 10993
I can't analysis the offset very accurate but I think these offset will be better maybe
-Not suggest use any 'Normal Hitsound' in this map Removed all the normal hitsounds. I think it sounds way better now

[Easy]
-Maybe HP->2 Okay. Changed
-00:24:482 (2,3) - Blanket more I use the approach circle of the previous note to determine the blanket, so no change
-00:39:482 (2) - Blanket I think I just blanketed it a different way, but I'm okay with how it is already; no change. Did improve my blanket a bit though
-00:58:982 (1) - why not this: Okay, I like it; changed

-01:18:482 (3,4) - Look not good Ok. Changed them to normal curved sliders
-01:33:107 (4) - Look not good :/ Try: Okay. Tried to make it look better


[Normal]
-I think CS3 is better in normal Ok, changed it
-00:15:107 (4) - Blanket more if you want Okay. Improved the blanket
-00:45:482 (3,4) - Blanket Blanketed better
-00:57:482 (3) - Cancel the last anchor Fixed
-01:07:982 (1,3) - Hum...look not good and a bit of weird Yeah. Changed it. Looks better now
-01:21:857 (4) - I think not match with 01:21:107 (3) - I don't want them to match
-01:22:607 (5,1) - Blanket Tried to improve the blanket a bit

[Hard]
-Slider Tick Rate -> 1 Noooo, I like it.
-00:01:795 (2,1,2) - The distance doesn't make sense! Fixed it
-00:32:732 (1,2) - Blanket Okay. Blanketed
-00:46:232 (3,4,5) - hum...the distance between 3 note is too far Okay. Fixed them all

That's all
Good Luck!! Thanks!

Thank you for the mod!

VeeLaHee104 wrote:

hello! sorry for big delay, i have school ;w;

[General]

• you should change that singular character on tags like "2", make it "two".

Fixed

[Easy]

• 00:15:857 (5,6,1,2) - make triangle I don't know how to make a triangle here . . .so no change
  00:29:732 (5,1) - swap new combo Okay
  00:55:982 (3,1) - stack, slider tail I want to avoid stacking in an Easy diff
  00:58:232 (4,2) - ^, notes Did something else there
  01:31:982 (3) - add new combo Okay
  01:33:107 (4,1) - make blanket each other

I changed things here already
[Normal]

• 00:00:670 (1,2) - make blanket, just my opinion I improved the blanket
  00:10:982 (1,2,3) - make sliders blanker the circle? Followed your suggestion
  00:27:857 (1) - remove new combo and add it on 00:29:357 (3) - No change
  00:30:107 (1) - ^, remove and add on 00:32:732 (4) - , check distance snap also. No combo change; the distance snap is fine
  00:34:982 (1,2) - make better blanket Not going to blanket it anymore
  01:07:982 (1,3) - parallel? Did something else that make the two sliders symmetric
  01:37:232 (1) - remove new combo

Mmmm . . . no change yet. Will see if other modders also complain
[Hard]

• 00:02:732 (1) - remove new combo and add on 00:04:045 (3) - Okay
  00:15:107 (1) - remove new combo Removed
  00:19:607 (1) - same like 00:02:732 (1) - remove and add on 00:19:982 (3) - Okay
  00:22:607 (1,2) - ^ Okay
  00:23:357 (2,3) - almost like jump, make it short distance snap I want jumps in my Hard diff, so no change
  00:25:607 (1,2,3) - same like 00:19:607 (1) - Okay; changed
  00:32:357 (6,1) - swap new combo Okay
  00:37:607 (1,2) - ^ ^
  00:55:794 (1,2) - ^ ^
  01:01:607 (1,2) - ^ ^
  01:06:107 (2,3) - same like 00:23:357 (2,3) - No change, want some jumps
  01:10:794 (1) - short his slider as 1/2 slider and move it to 01:10:982 (1) - add note on this place

I like how it is now

nice song! have my star and good luck ^^ I don't see your star . . . Maybe it's just me?

Thanks for the mod! Especially the new combos.

ZZHBOY wrote:

m4m from my queue :3

notice the words with color

General]

two things you should fix

1. offset -10 is correct imo, have a try I'm gonna keep the timing I have now. Seems okay to me
2. make Insane diff's setting of Preview Time and Uninherited time poings be same with other diffsWaiting for HootOwlStar to update
3. seems something wrong with your skin http://puu.sh/byNAa/4ee6b75e40.jpg I will wait and see what other modders say before removing it
   i hope you can find some suitable sound effects to make this map better

I'm not an expert when it comes to hitsounds, but I think my hitsounds are okay

Easy

1. 00:06:458 (1) - first we should talk about this spinner.if you want to make this map go to rank, you should fix one thing here: to the lowest diff, the note after a spinner should make the interval between them >3 beats to ensure new players can play well here Removed the spinner and placed a slider there instead
2. 00:37:993 (1) - you should remove the new combo here to make the nc setting more consistent.you can find you set a new combo every 7-8 beats but here not Okay; fixed
3. 00:48:493 (2,3) - improve blanket here Okay
4. 01:02:368 (1) - 01:25:993 (1) - same as before

Also changed to a slider

Normal

1. 00:15:118 (4,1) - avoid unnecessary overlap in low diff will make here looks nicer It doesn't look that bad to me. Will wait to see what other modders say
2. 00:22:618 (1) - you can break up this slider into a circle + a 1/2 slider to follow the drum sound here 00:22:993 - Okay; done
3. 00:19:618 (1) - ^ also should set notes at long white lines as possible because these place always have strong beat Done; fixed
4. 00:34:243 (6,1) - stack in low diff will make it harder for new players to read the map, should reduce using of it imo I'm gonna keep it as it is for now. If someone else also complains, I'll fix it (I just think stacking in Normal is okay, but in Easy it has to be prevented)
5. 00:36:493 - why ds changed suddenly from here? it's not good to use more than one ds in low diff, and it's better for you to adjust the ds of the whole diff be same .-.

I don't think I changed the distance snap

Hard

1. 00:06:271 - 01:17:368 - useless time sections, remove them I used them to change the volume, and for other things as well. Is it very important that they have to be removed?
2. sv 2.0 maybe too high? Insane just used 1.6 sv, you can keep this sv now and waiting for more mods and see if this is ok Okay, will wait for more mods
3. 00:28:243 (3) - move to 75丨199 to create a parallelogram with 00:27:493 (1,2,4) - to make here looks nicer Thanks for that; fixed
4. 00:47:368 (2) - maybe you can use a carved slider here.a straight slider looks weird here Okay, followed your suggestion
5. 01:23:743 (2) - it's not good to make a large difference of ds between previous and next note

Made changes there

that's all.
nice song, good luck Thank you!

Thanks for the mod!

1. Check your skin again, one of your hitcircle .jpg's is not properly set. This is unrankable in the current state.
2. I feel your hitsounds can be improvable in general, maybe LKs' hitsound library can help you out. Sadly, I'm not a real HS modder, so I can't really help you out with this. ;-;

1. 00:06:458 - Pretty sure this is unrankable due to inaudible clickable object. Move it up to 20%.
   It also might be better to put this on the white tick instead of the blue one for easier rhythm.
2. 00:51:493 (4) - Is this whistle HS accidental? If not, i still recommend to put it out since it doesn't work well (drums start 1/4 beat later).
3. 01:33:118 (2,1) - Trifle: It would look better if you these sliders would be on the same horizontal line
4. Otherwise, pretty solid easy map.

1. You should check some blankets again, the following still look unpolished (i know ppl usually don't care about that,but better aesthetics never hurt):
   00:10:993 (1,2,3) - , 00:45:493 (3,4) - (if ever intended), 01:12:868 (4,1) - , 01:18:118 (2,3) -
2. 00:19:618 (1,2) - NC at 2, not on 1. I feel like NCing after every new measure is more reasonable at this and the following sections: 00:22:618 (1,2) - , 00:58:618 (1,2) -
3. 00:49:993 (5) - I recommend to set the red anchor on the middle/2nd slider tick to support the vocal better. Also add a curve to the 1st half for a smoother slider, fits much better here imo: http://puu.sh/bEl26/067667d9c3.jpg
4. 00:55:618 (4,1,2,3) - I feel the 90° angles don't really fit comfortably with the music. Round it up a bit for a better flow: http://puu.sh/bElnG/1603dedbe3.jpg .
   Also check the DS again, it's a bit irregular at this part.
5. 00:58:618 (1,2,3,4) - Check this Pattern again, it's not symmetrical yet because of the sliders.
6. 01:12:868 (4,1,2,3) - Four offbeat sliders in a row...feels unnatural to play :/ You can keep it if you want, but i'd suggest switching to a more natural rhythm by making the blue sliders start on white ticks: http://puu.sh/bEnC3/6452b540ea.jpg
7. 01:21:118 (3) - 1. That offbeat slider >.> I mean you can keep it, but I'd generally avoid it and go like: http://puu.sh/bElJG/bed0781c55.jpg
   2. 01:21:118 (3,4) - it looks pretty ugly if you change from anchored slider to curved slider here, so only use one type of slider here please.
   Small notice: Not sure if this was caused by the usage of grid snap or intended, but your DS is fluctuating between 1.1x and 1.2xDS. Please try to be consist with your DS here, I'm not sure about the severity of this issue tho >.>

1. 00:01:771 (2,3,4,5,1) - Looks a bit plain to me as it's not much harder then the pattern in normal diff. I'm sure you can use a bit more complex rhythm here: http://puu.sh/bEox0/b3dc7f4b75.jpg
   I also recommend to increase the SV up a bit (by 0.1-0.25) as it feels pretty sloppy to play imo.
2. 00:23:368 (1,2) - The vocal doesn't really justify that jump here (there isn't really a jump in her voice, and i can't find another reasonable musical indicator).
   Use equal DS between these 00:22:618 (4,1,2,3) - objects (1.3x DS), or at least tone down the jump a bit.
3. 00:26:368 (2,1,2,3,4) - This flows a bit awkward from 2->1->2 due to the flow 'break between these. What I expected here would be something like an oval-like pattern to support the singer's voice without alternating flow too much: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2048246
   Up to you, just my opinion that this has better synergy with the music.
4. 00:46:993 (1) - Position at 216,340 for perfect stack
5. 00:49:618 (5) - This should just be a circle, there is no drum beat at the point where it ends.
6. 00:58:618 (3) - Position at 221,55 to avoid the flow break.
7. 01:07:805 (6) - Delete this circle, it feels redundantly placed just to keep the rhythm going on.
8. 01:10:618 (5,1) - DS is a bit high here, players will think this is a 1/2 beat. Lower it down to 1.5x and blanket, and it should be fine: http://puu.sh/bEqLo/2175edd4d9.jpg
9. Trifle: 01:15:493 (4,5) - This is not symmetrical
10. 01:25:243 (1,2,3) - Looks like it was randomly placed, even the DS aren't equal here. Here's how to make it equal DS with nice linear flow & symmetry:
    01:25:243 (1) - Position of the three anchors: 475, 302 | 447, 250 | 391, 218 (I put down Grid snap for that, it's the best way to make it as accurate as possible)
    01:25:243 (1) - Position of the three anchors: 304, 177 | 252, 165 | 184, 193
    01:26:743 (1) - Just copypaste and Ctrl+h the first slider 01:25:243 (1) -
11. 01:28:243 (1) - Split this into a slider and a circle as the is a clear distinct sound at 01:28:993 - .
12. 01:30:118 (4) - Preference: The big gap after this makes me feel a bit uncomfortable, I suggest making a slider to 01:30:868 - (the next red tick)to keep the flow constant
13. 01:33:118 (2) - Preference: Same as above.

1. I strongly recommend you go through the whole diff and check the DS between these oval patterns like at 00:00:670 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:01:795 (5,6,7,8,9) - .
   Look into the DS between every circle (editor mode, top-right below the position for the object) and try to keep the distance between previous and next object as low as possible since some of these DS changes are actually noticeable by players, decreasing this maps quality(see the 2nd example from above).
   Using the highest grid level or putting off GS at all (and DS on ofc) helps a lot here.
2. 00:04:795 (2) - It might be better to make this slider go to the next red tick as it complements better too the piano sound holding here.
3. 00:06:576 - There should actually be a circle here as well if you're following the piano already. Start the slider on the white tick.
4. 00:08:263 (1) - It would be much better if you decrease the length of the spinner or put it out for a small break here. There needs to be a clear gap between the intro and what follows after 00:10:982 -
5. 00:11:732 (5,6,7,8,9) - That's too edgy here, make a smoother flow: http://puu.sh/bEtKw/2f6b2e3df7.jpg
6. 00:17:732 (3,4,5) - Are you sure you used DS here? This is clearly not even spaced.
7. 00:55:607 (7,1,2) - These jumps feel too high-spaced for this kind of song. Please nerf the distances
8. 00:56:732 (4,5,6,7) - Same here. Also, where you trying to blanket here?
9. 01:01:982 (1) - Please don't be lazy and map this out, the spinner feels misplaced here, especially since it ends exactly where the kiai time starts (which you should map as well).
10. 01:07:419 (6) - Same as in Hard, this feels just additional and thus redundant at this place.
11. This map needs more cleanup than the other ones. Fixing the DS issues should be the main priority now, I still think it needs more refinement in flow and pattern structure. Anyway, good job so far.

paseli wrote:

From my modding queue~ Sry for the late reply >.<

Trifle: Just small things you might want to consider. Blanket's are trifle for me as well.
Preference: Just my humble opinion on stuff.
Written in bold: Fix this up as soon as possible.

[General]

1. Check your skin again, one of your hitcircle .jpg's is not properly set. This is unrankable in the current state. Removed a few things here, but it's fixed now
2. I feel your hitsounds can be improvable in general, maybe LKs' hitsound library can help you out. Sadly, I'm not a real HS modder, so I can't really help you out with this. ;-; I may check it out later, but I think I'm okay with my hitsounds

[Easy]

1. 00:06:458 - Pretty sure this is unrankable due to inaudible clickable object. Move it up to 20%. Increased the volume by 20% and moved it to the white tick (Thanks for noticing that; sounds way better on the white tick)
   It also might be better to put this on the white tick instead of the blue one for easier rhythm.
2. 00:51:493 (4) - Is this whistle HS accidental? If not, i still recommend to put it out since it doesn't work well (drums start 1/4 beat later). Removed the whistle; that was my mistake
3. 01:33:118 (2,1) - Trifle: It would look better if you these sliders would be on the same horizontal line Fixed
4. Otherwise, pretty solid easy map. Thanks!

[Normal]

1. You should check some blankets again, the following still look unpolished (i know ppl usually don't care about that,but better aesthetics never hurt):
   00:10:993 (1,2,3) - , 00:45:493 (3,4) - (if ever intended), 01:12:868 (4,1) - , 01:18:118 (2,3) - Fixed most of the blankets
2. 00:19:618 (1,2) - NC at 2, not on 1. I feel like NCing after every new measure is more reasonable at this and the following sections: 00:22:618 (1,2) - , 00:58:618 (1,2) - Fixed that NC issues
3. 00:49:993 (5) - I recommend to set the red anchor on the middle/2nd slider tick to support the vocal better. Also add a curve to the 1st half for a smoother slider, fits much better here imo: http://puu.sh/bEl26/067667d9c3.jpg Followed your suggestion and tried to make it look like the picture
4. 00:55:618 (4,1,2,3) - I feel the 90° angles don't really fit comfortably with the music. Round it up a bit for a better flow: http://puu.sh/bElnG/1603dedbe3.jpg . Followed your suggestion and fixed the DS
   Also check the DS again, it's a bit irregular at this part.
5. 00:58:618 (1,2,3,4) - Check this Pattern again, it's not symmetrical yet because of the sliders. I think it looks fine . . .
6. 01:12:868 (4,1,2,3) - Four offbeat sliders in a row...feels unnatural to play :/ You can keep it if you want, but i'd suggest switching to a more natural rhythm by making the blue sliders start on white ticks: http://puu.sh/bEnC3/6452b540ea.jpg Followed your suggestion
7. 01:21:118 (3) - 1. That offbeat slider >.> I mean you can keep it, but I'd generally avoid it and go like: http://puu.sh/bElJG/bed0781c55.jpg Also followed your suggestion here
   2. 01:21:118 (3,4) - it looks pretty ugly if you change from anchored slider to curved slider here, so only use one type of slider here please. I changed it
   Small notice: Not sure if this was caused by the usage of grid snap or intended, but your DS is fluctuating between 1.1x and 1.2xDS. Please try to be consist with your DS here, I'm not sure about the severity of this issue tho >.> Changed DS to a constant 1.2X

[Hard]

1. 00:01:771 (2,3,4,5,1) - Looks a bit plain to me as it's not much harder then the pattern in normal diff. I'm sure you can use a bit more complex rhythm here: http://puu.sh/bEox0/b3dc7f4b75.jpg Followed your suggestion and changed SV to 0.65
   I also recommend to increase the SV up a bit (by 0.1-0.25) as it feels pretty sloppy to play imo.
2. 00:23:368 (1,2) - The vocal doesn't really justify that jump here (there isn't really a jump in her voice, and i can't find another reasonable musical indicator). Fixed this and made alot of changes regarding the DS in this diff
   Use equal DS between these 00:22:618 (4,1,2,3) - objects (1.3x DS), or at least tone down the jump a bit.
3. 00:26:368 (2,1,2,3,4) - This flows a bit awkward from 2->1->2 due to the flow 'break between these. What I expected here would be something like an oval-like pattern to support the singer's voice without alternating flow too much: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2048246
   Up to you, just my opinion that this has better synergy with the music. Sorry, keeping my pattern
4. 00:46:993 (1) - Position at 216,340 for perfect stack I'm not going to stack there anymore
5. 00:49:618 (5) - This should just be a circle, there is no drum beat at the point where it ends. Okay
6. 00:58:618 (3) - Position at 221,55 to avoid the flow break. Placed the hitcircle on the head of this slider:00:57:868 (2) -
7. 01:07:805 (6) - Delete this circle, it feels redundantly placed just to keep the rhythm going on. Okay
8. 01:10:618 (5,1) - DS is a bit high here, players will think this is a 1/2 beat. Lower it down to 1.5x and blanket, and it should be fine: http://puu.sh/bEqLo/2175edd4d9.jpg Realized this was a problem beforehand, so I already did something else
9. Trifle: 01:15:493 (4,5) - This is not symmetrical Okay; it is now
10. 01:25:243 (1,2,3) - Looks like it was randomly placed, even the DS aren't equal here. Here's how to make it equal DS with nice linear flow & symmetry:
    01:25:243 (1) - Position of the three anchors: 475, 302 | 447, 250 | 391, 218 (I put down Grid snap for that, it's the best way to make it as accurate as possible) I did DS it now, but not changing the positions of the sliders. Will wait and see what other modders say.
    01:25:243 (1) - Position of the three anchors: 304, 177 | 252, 165 | 184, 193
    01:26:743 (1) - Just copypaste and Ctrl+h the first slider 01:25:243 (1) - Followed your suggestion here
11. 01:28:243 (1) - Split this into a slider and a circle as the is a clear distinct sound at 01:28:993 - . Okay, followed your suggestion
12. 01:30:118 (4) - Preference: The big gap after this makes me feel a bit uncomfortable, I suggest making a slider to 01:30:868 - (the next red tick)to keep the flow constant Okay; good idea
13. 01:33:118 (2) - Preference: Same as above.Okay

Nice song, except that...interesting dissonance at around 01:03:857 - of the song. >.>
Maps are decent - not too much interesting stuff for me though I'm still a newbie at mapping(except for the nice skin of course :3) -.
Get 1-2 good mods after this, then you may ask for BAT request. Good luck! Thank you!

P.S. If you want, give my mod a very short review so I can improve them: Out of 5 points, how many would you give my mod? Definitely 5. You helped me so much. Thanks! Thanks! \o/
(also veela seems to have forgotten to give you star xD) She gave me one now

Thanks so much for your mod!

Rakuen wrote:

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen's Modding Queue (NM/M4M)

[General]
:3

[Offset and Timing]
The offset of the song between HOS’s Insane and other diffs are different, please make sure they have the same offset.
Also the preview time and note snaps after you change the offset Waiting for HootOwlStar to update

[Easy]
Distance snap: For Easy you’re required a consistent distance snap with DS function in order to make it rankable. Avoid swapping between 0.8x and 0.7x DS, make sure you stick with one of them. Use DS function in order to prevent inconsistency DS like 0.86 DS or 0.77 DS. Used a constant DS of 0.8X
00:04:771 – Add whistle here as you did for 00:01:771 – Ok
00:06:458 (1) – Please make this spinner starts at 00:06:646 - , ignoring a few piano sounds because it’s offed for a little, have to use 1/8 if you want to keep this I placed a slider there now but it started where you had suggested it should
00:15:868 (5) – NC here cuz the rhythm changes, and keep the combo below (5) Ok
00:18:493 (2) – Try to move this circle away from 00:15:868 (5,6) - , it’s too crowded in that area imo Well, you can't really see it's crowded after a while and I think I already moved the circle a bit, so it's not that crowded anymore
00:20:743 (4) – Make it same shape with 00:19:243 (3) – by copy paste and rotate, to let it looks neater I did use the copy and paste option here
00:41:743 (2) – Avoid stacking with 00:39:493 (5) - , doesn’t look good here after lighting of 00:40:243 – . The flow is forced to bend to another direction too I don't think that's such a big issue

Image

00:52:993 (1) – Snap to 0.8x DS I fixed all the DS problems
01:02:743 (2) – NC to signify rhythm change Ok
01:04:993 (1) – I don’t think a jump, even a small one could rank Removed the jump
01:05:743 (2) – Avoid stacking with 01:02:743 (2) – as mentioned before at 00:41:743 (2) – It wasn't my intention to stack them
01:06:493 (3,4) – For these patterns they could have a big possible symmetry at the middle line of the mapping area I'm okay with how it is now
01:28:993 (1) – Short reverse barely appeared in the song, try not to use a new or harder pattern for ending. But seems fine, can keep it if you want Yeah, I'm keeping it

[Normal]
Distance snap: For Normal diffs it’s better to keep consistency in DS if you want it ranked. 00:00:646 (1,2,3,4,1,2) – Try to make all of them 1.2x DS if possible Fixed the DS. It's a constant DS of 1.2X now
00:00:646 (1,2) – Make them have the same shape and rotate/reflect to make it looks neater. If not, you’ll see something when you compare them (pic). Blanket the tail of 00:00:646 (1) – on 00:01:771 (2) – if you agree: I'm keeping my pattern

Image

00:03:646 (1,2) – Blanket is slightly off, try to fix it: Ok

Image

00:06:458 (1) – Please make this spinner starts at 00:06:646 - , ignoring a few piano sounds because it’s offed for a little, have to use 1/8 if you want to keep this Ok
00:12:868 (2) – If you want to follow the violin, this is kinda extra, suggest to remove it I placed it there to make the Normal a bit harder, so I'm keeping it
00:16:993 (1) – Make sure it stacks perfectly with 00:15:118 (4) – or unstack it, it looks a bit awkward there: I tried to improve the stack

Image

00:19:993 (2) – NC should be at here instead of 00:19:618 (1) – for constant combos Fixed
00:22:993 (2) – NC should be at here instead of 00:22:618 (1) - ^ ^
00:24:493 (4) – I don’t see anything that you need to lower the note dense. If you want to, start at 00:22:993 – No change, looks fine to me
00:26:368 (5) – NC here and remove for 00:27:868 (1) - , most of the maps are combo to follow the beat Ok
00:29:368 (3) – NC here instead of 00:30:118 (1) – Ok
00:31:993 – Shouldn’t skip the beat here, try to put a hittable note there and make it NC there Followed your suggestion
00:37:243 (5) – Please take a note here that your DS is changing from 1.2 > 1.1, remain the same for all the notes afterwards too. Check it yourself, I don’t want to mention it one by one I already fixed all the DS issues
00:46:993 (1,2,3) – There is no flow between them because the back of 00:46:993 (1) – is facing the back of 00:48:493 (3) - , kinda humped with 00:48:118 (2) – as well. Same shape is not seen, and as mentioned they could be a good symmetry pattern seems it’s kinda approaching middle line I really like this pattern better, so I'm keeping it
00:49:993 (5) – Not sure why there’s a sudden long slider, which doesn’t go well imo cuz you skipped a strong vocal at 00:50:743 – which is “め” in “慰めて” Keeping the slider. I just don't want to follow the same pattern over and over and I think the slider fits in there
01:01:618 (1) – As mentioned, mostly combos are followed by beat instead of lyrics. Put NC at 01:01:993 (2) – instead Fixed
01:03:868 – Suggest to map the part at here, it looks so blank after you put 01:01:993 (2) - . Either you make it a break, a spinner or a reverse of 01:01:993 (2) – there. I don't think it's necessary to put anything there. It is a normal after all
01:37:243 (1) – Remove NC for here, not really needed Ok

[Hard]
Distance snap: It’s not necessary for a Hard to have DS, but if you do, make sure they don’t keep changing to different DS which will make your map looks unbalanced when playing. I used a constant DS of 1.3X
00:06:458 (1) – Please make this spinner starts at 00:06:646 - , ignoring a few piano sounds because it’s offed for a little, have to use 1/8 if you want to keep this Okay, followed your suggestion
00:10:993 – The SV here is a bit too fast after 00:04:771 (1) - , would make players shock in the slow part of the song. Could try something like 0.75 SV I made the SV in the first part of the song faster instead, so I'm keeping the SV of the rest of the map the same
00:15:118 (6) – Try not to put a big jump here, no point imo, nothing fast or strong is indicated. At least make the tail of 00:15:118 (6) – likely 1.4x snapped if you insist to keep I snapped the slider, so there isn't a jump there anymore
00:18:493 (4) – I know it’s not really needed to DS for Hard songs, but for slow part it’s better to, instead of random jumps It's snapped now
00:20:368 (2) – Seems you followed vocal of 00:19:618 (5,6,1) - , why not for 00:20:555 – and 00:21:305 - , they are quite close to each other. And as mentioned in previous diffs you could make 00:20:368 (2,3) – a good symmetry / mirror pattern on the middle line, don’t use jumps tho I'm not sure what I have to do, so I'm keeping it as it is for now
00:24:118 (2) – 2.58x jump is not really needed here, as mentioned make it safe if you really want this to rank Removed the jump
00:28:993 (1,2) – Try to make this DS same with 00:30:493 (3,4,5) - , they’re just beside each other and they look so different No change, I'm not really sure what's wrong here
00:34:993 – If you can hear a strong beat here, try to make it a hit instead of a reverse Followed your suggestion
00:35:743 (1) – As mentioned, slow parts, usually we make it more of a snapped part in Hard It is snapped now
00:41:368 (2) – The slider here is completely off the music, constant beats are at 00:41:743 - , 00:42:493 – and dragging vocal is at 00:42:680 – Made changes there (Realized that slider is crappy)
00:44:368 (2) - ^ This one is a bit off as well, don’t suggest to reverse on a red slider tick ^
00:43:243 (3) – Don’t overmap and overhitsound here, if you delete the note you can only here a drum hit at 00:43:243 – which 00:43:430 – and 00:43:618 – are completely empty Okay, I just placed a hitcircle where you had suggested
00:46:243 (3,4,5) - ^ Applies Okay, followed your suggestion
00:47:743 – Prefer just to follow the beats. If you want to follow the vocal make sure you map more cuz it’s a Hard diff, you don’t want to skip them on purpose No changes, I'm gonna keep the slider
00:49:243 (4,5) – Overmapped as mentioned previously Okay, I just placed a normal slider here 00:49:243 -
00:54:493 (3,4,5,6) - ^ , the strong beat is only at 00:54:493 - , the drum is at 00:55:243 - and vocal is at 00:55:805 (7) - , so just keep them and remove the rest Made alot of changes here
00:58:993 – Please do not slow this down, remain the SV. It should be more of an acceleration but I don’t suggest cuz it’s a soft song Ok not slowed down anymore
01:03:493 (3) – Offed, follow the vocal separately at 01:03:305 - , 01:03:680 – and 01:03:868 – Made alot of changes here
01:04:430 (4) – I wonder what’s this doing here, nothing is sounded in the song I removed that
01:06:680 – If you like three hits, you should put something here to stick with the bg cover No change
01:07:430 (4) – Remove this, it’s just too extra Okay, I removed it
01:08:555 (2) - ^ Feel no point to put anything here even you feeling to link 01:07:993 (1) – and 01:08:743 (3) - . And the next 01:09:493 (4) – you don’t even follow vocal, jump back to beat, so it’s kinda not making sense Made alot of changes here too
01:10:618 (5,1) – This one is hard to read, make sure you have closer distance like 01:07:618 (5,6,1) – Already fixed this
01:12:680 – Not sure why you miss the three hits here in purpose and then overmap other parts, suggest to put something here I did something else there
01:13:430 (4) – Remove, sounds extra. Sometimes mapping doesn’t just mean patterns and patterns, stick to the music Okay, removed it
01:15:493 (4,5) – Overmapped Okay, I just placed a normal curved slider there
01:25:243 (1,2,3) – Make them snapped equally, looks like a pattern Fixed
01:25:243 (1) – Try not to NC this just because of the pattern, remember, it’s a beat combo Ok, fixed the NC
01:29:368 (2) – NC at here instead of 01:28:243 (1) – Ok
01:30:868 – Piano sounded here and 01:31:055 -, might don’t wanna miss this I don't hear piano sounds there . . .
01:37:055 – Piano sounded here too I hear it here, so I made changes here

Avoid random jumps and overmapping such as extra triplets I did remove a few of them but I just put many triplets there because I really like them

[Comments]
A few steps to rank, just need more mods and experience in mapping I know, I'm still learning, but I am improving as well
Keep up~ Thanks

Thank you for the mod!

Aerous wrote:

M4M Request from your queue

Hard :

00:23:386 SUGGESTION : http://puu.sh/bK7YG/ac085228ec.jpg No change; I like my pattern more

01:24:493 (3,4) why not make these a repeat slider like : 01:22:993 I don't want there to be too many short repetitive sliders

Anyway I really like this song and hope you can get this ranked Thanks!

Heres my map : t/239840 Will start modding now

Thanks for taking a look at my map

gokugohan12468 wrote:

From my modding queues:

Nice Diff, so perfect~ Thanks!
Tittle is correct: signal change to ----> signal (TV-size) Okay, spelled TV Size like this though
http://vgmdb.net/album/45403 (Disc 1 no 30) No, I'm keeping my song
and Add in tags: Naoki "naotyu-" Chiba Okay, thanks!

NO KDS~ and Good Luck~

Thanks so much!

-Nya- wrote:

gokugohan12468 wrote:

From my modding queues:

Nice Diff, so perfect~ Thanks!
Tittle is correct: signal change to ----> signal (TV-size) Okay, spelled TV Size like this though
http://vgmdb.net/album/45403 (Disc 1 no 30) No, I'm keeping my song
and Add in tags: Naoki "naotyu-" Chiba Okay, thanks!

NO KDS~ and Good Luck~

Thanks so much!

gokugohan12468 wrote:

I don't understand??? In VGMdb, tittle is correct (TV-size) not (TV Size), understand?

• 00:06:646 (1) - consider adding whistle at slider's tail
  00:58:993 (1) - fix the blanket. it only need minor adjustment http://puu.sh/bYC3K/5be88f5a46.jpg

• 00:06:646 (1) - add whistle
  00:24:118 - it feels kinda weird having no notes there when the previous pattern is quite dense 00:19:993 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so i suggest to add a circle here
  00:34:243 (4,1) - idk this stack doesn't really fit the song. i'd rather move 00:34:993 (1) - to 440|52
  00:40:993 (1) - finish at slider's head?
  00:49:993 (5) - only suggestion. make the red square point right in the middle http://puu.sh/bYCGK/15830d8f7e.jpg
  00:57:493 (3) - whistle at slider's tail
  01:33:118 (4) - whistle at slider's head, same hitsound pattern with 01:28:993 (1,2) -

• 00:03:646 (5,1) - switch nc
  00:16:993 (1) - finish at slider's head
  01:10:618 (5,1) - rhythm is quite awkward here, since you followed the drum in the previous pattern 01:07:993 (1,2,3,4) - . i suggest this rhythm http://puu.sh/bYD70/4a79f313ae.jpg
  01:37:055 (3,4,5,6) - why don't you use 1.0x ds like 01:31:243 (3,4,5) - ? if i were you, i would make a jump pattern out of it http://puu.sh/bYDdK/dcb20f89d3.jpg

• first of all, i suggest to change your default ds in this diff from 1.7x to 1.8x. the current ds makes aligned circles (like 00:01:045 (2,3,4,6,7,8,9) - ) touch each other and it's slightly not tidy. just sayin'. and if you use 1.8x it makes the diff slightly more challenging with better overall appearance
  
  00:06:388 (3,4,5) - only suggestion. to make the flow better http://puu.sh/bYDzp/087a896a9d.jpg
  00:27:482 (5) - nc?
  
  i really feel that you should increase the sv during kiai time >< makes the diff more enjoyable to play
  
  01:07:794 (2,5) - i'm aware that you're following the vocal, but it doesn't feel right when i play it. it fits the rhythm more if you to start these slider's at the first downbeat, so i suggest this rhythm http://puu.sh/bYEhX/95d416d935.jpg
  01:13:794 (1) - also rhythm suggestion. you should start it at the downbeat, even though you're following the vocal http://puu.sh/bYEpc/2a6997b692.jpg
  01:16:982 (2) - add finish at slider's head? to accent the song
  01:19:794 (1) - this one should also start at the downbeat here 01:19:982 - . if you follow, add a circle at 01:19:794 -

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

*le placeholder* really late, sorry ;_____; got really busy last week. i will mod it tomorrow. sorry for the inconvenience

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

*le placeholder* really late, sorry ;_____; got really busy last week. i will mod it tomorrow. sorry for the inconvenience

edit : mods

there are some metadata conflict with Insane diff, please check AiMod I know. Fixed them

[Easy]

• 00:06:646 (1) - consider adding whistle at slider's tail Added
  00:58:993 (1) - fix the blanket. it only need minor adjustment http://puu.sh/bYC3K/5be88f5a46.jpg Tried my best to fix the blanket

[Normal]

• 00:06:646 (1) - add whistle Added
  00:24:118 - it feels kinda weird having no notes there when the previous pattern is quite dense 00:19:993 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so i suggest to add a circle here Yeah, added the note
  00:34:243 (4,1) - idk this stack doesn't really fit the song. i'd rather move 00:34:993 (1) - to 440|52 Okay, good suggestion
  00:40:993 (1) - finish at slider's head? Ok
  00:49:993 (5) - only suggestion. make the red square point right in the middle http://puu.sh/bYCGK/15830d8f7e.jpg Ok, I guess it's in the middle now
  00:57:493 (3) - whistle at slider's tail Ok
  01:33:118 (4) - whistle at slider's head, same hitsound pattern with 01:28:993 (1,2) - Thanks, added

[Hard]

• 00:03:646 (5,1) - switch nc Ok, fixed
  00:16:993 (1) - finish at slider's head Thanks, added
  01:10:618 (5,1) - rhythm is quite awkward here, since you followed the drum in the previous pattern 01:07:993 (1,2,3,4) - . i suggest this rhythm http://puu.sh/bYD70/4a79f313ae.jpg Yeah, good idea. Followed your suggestion
  01:37:055 (3,4,5,6) - why don't you use 1.0x ds like 01:31:243 (3,4,5) - ? if i were you, i would make a jump pattern out of it http://puu.sh/bYDdK/dcb20f89d3.jpg No, sorry. I like my pattern more

hope it helps :3 It really did. Thank you!
goodluck~ Thanks!

Thanks so much for the mod!

neonat wrote:

General

As AlpacaCokelat has stated, HOS' Insane has metadata inconsistencies I know. Fixed

First object starts at 00:00:646 - you need more time before the first object of the map to be rankable, a minimum of 2000ms. Add 1500 to AudioLeadIn for all difficulties in their .osu in Notepad Okay. Changed all the diffs' audioleadins to 1500

Easy

00:37:993 (1,2) - blanket them? I improved the blanket a bit
00:48:493 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:49:993 (3,4) - ^ ^
01:02:743 (1) - can you move this further up, the flow from 00:58:993 (1) is really weird seeing how much lower the start of this slider is. Something like this would play better: I'm keeping my pattern. I want it to be lower, so the next notes play better

SPOILER

01:04:993 (1,2,3) - this moves back in the direction of the slider, which feels weird, movement and flow should be moving in other directions imo No change. I understand what you mean, but I don't think it's such a big issue
01:25:993 (1,1) - not really sure about the current criteria QATs look at, but I suspect 2 beats between the spinner and the next object might be too short for them, and that means you might have to remove 01:28:993 (1) to have 4 beats worth of rest Okay. Removed the slider, lengthened the spinner.

Normal

00:02:896 (3,4,1) - I believe putting more of a curve in this pattern would make flow better: Ok, followed your suggestion

SPOILER

00:40:993 (1) - a finish (maybe Normal hitsound but lower volume) at the start of the slider would be nice I already added a different finish there that I like
00:57:493 (3) - you left out the whistle on the end of the slider, following the pattern of whistles you have used since the vocals started Fixed

Hard

00:03:646 (5) - NC here and not at 00:04:771 (1) Fixed
00:06:646 (1) - maybe start at 00:06:458 - right now the spinner starts after the piano comes in No, alot of previous modders told me that the spinner must rather start there and I agree
00:16:993 (1) - finish at the start of the slider, it's suited for it Added
00:40:243 (1,2,3) - add drum clap on these circles Ok, good idea
01:24:493 (3) - remove the clap, sounds out of place in the hitsound pattern, also because the peak of the vocals is at 01:25:243 which hasn't come yet, so clap isn't needed yet Ok
01:29:368 (1,2) - whistles on the start of these sliders since you used whistles on 01:34:993 (1,2) Did add whistles and made other changes


Good Luck Thanks!

Thanks for the mod!

Leorda wrote:

Hi, sorry for delay

[General]
* There's some inconsistency of Title, Unicode Title, Tags, Audio preview and Uninherited timing points. Please check all and makes sure it's consistent between all diff I know. Fixed the errors

[Easy]
01:28:993 (1) - This would be blend the spinner because they both have a same color of blue. Consider to change to another color by clicking the left arrow beside new combo button No need. I made changes there, so the slider takes a longer time after the spinner

[Normal]
00:06:646 (1) - This spinner is bit short for normal diff. Mind to extend it? Ok, the spinner starts here now: 00:04:958 -
00:49:993 (5) - Why not use wave slider than this slider with anchor on it? No, I want to be a bit more creative with my sliders

[Hard]
00:04:771 (1) - Remove new combo? I don't think this would be a NC unless if you have are reason I removed the NC. NC starts here now: 00:03:646 (1) -
00:34:618 (4,5) - This pattern feels like there's a repeating slider in this slider. Consider to remove (5) and add 1 repeating slider for (4)? That is what I did in the past, but previous modders told me to change it to a circle because it's sort of a strong vocal point
01:37:055 (3,4,5,6) - How about use the distance spacing 1.31x? This feels like having a 1/4 streams I like this pattern, so I'm keeping it for now
Good luck~ Thanks!

Thanks so much for the mod!

[ Setsuna ] wrote:

Super Late mod lol~
It would be nice if you could reply to my mod line by line

*=My Opinion
**=Should Fix
***=Unrankable

General

** Get a new BG, not a very good resolution, I found one for you: I changed my BG, but to something totally different
1.bp.blogspot.com/-ZqV_Yo-7k_c/Uv3l3gEmuBI/AAAAAAAAEBM/Vzqb0RjNSRQ/s1921/strike-the-blood-anime-wallpaper-1920x1440.jpg

Easy

*00:06:646 (1) - As weird this might seem, I think this would be better starting on the blue tick before it, but still end at the same place. No, sorry, but I think it sounds better if I keep it like it is.
**00:22:993 (1) - Reverse doesn't seem to fit here. Okay, I changed it to a normal curved slider without the repeat

Not much problems with this diff

Normal

**Insert a break time between 00:04:958 (1) and 00:10:993 (1), the drain will hurt the player Ok, followed your suggestion
*00:13:243 (3,4) - Blanket the end of 3 to the curve of 4. I tried my best to blanket there
*00:16:243 (5) - Move second anchor to x:20 y:388 Followed your suggestion
*00:24:118 (3,4) - Blanket 3 to 4. Ok, blanketed them
*00:29:743 (2,3) - Blanket 2 to 3. Improved the blanket
*00:49:993 (5) - Make this slider just a normal curvy slider just like 00:37:993 (1). Followed your suggestion

Hard

**Recommended to making this map generally harder, as it's 2 stars ATM. I made the AR and OD a bit harder
**Insert a break time between 00:06:646 (1) and 00:10:993 (1). No, I think I'm going to keep the spinner
*00:27:493 (1) - No NC needed. Yeah, removed the NC
*00:49:243 (4) - Seems out of place, but it might be just me. No change, it sounds fine to me

sorry for the super late mod ;w; No problem

Thanks for the mod!

Mystyk wrote:

Hey! Your requested mod, sorry for the wait and that it's not finished yet, I wanted to mod it today but something came up and now I have to go somewhere, so hopefully you'll get ther rest of the mod tomorrow (and at least you don't let it grave ) also I haven't forgotten about this it's just that I have been busy with assignment (but it's done now fortunately) so here is the first half of the mod

[Easy]
00:39:493 (2,2) - this overlap looks ugly and try not to make it confusing, just a little change would be fine - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2184874 (00:35:743 (2) - this was rotated a little then the other objects were replaced) Ok. I removed the overlap, but I did it in a different way
00:55:993 (3,1,1,2) - not a nice pattern and flow isn't that good either because you go backwards (01:02:743 (1,1,2) - ) so to avoid overlaps and confusing patterns try to rearrange the objects a bit - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2184926 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2184943 Followed your suggestion

[Normal]
00:58:993 (1) - why not add a finish to the beginning of the slider? sounds like there is a small finish in the music too and the music gets stronger so it would fit Ok, good idea. Added the finish
00:31:243 (4,1) - very small thing but while playing it was a bit disturbing that these are closer a little than (4,5) and it also looks crowded so you could consider fixing this - http://puu.sh/cyQQP/f42ac20d0e.jpg Okay, followed your picture suggestion
01:22:993 (1) - same ^ add finish to the beginning because the music is loud and add normal clap to the end because of your clap pattern (you missed to use it here) Added the finish and thanks for pointing out the missed clap. Fixed
01:27:118 (2) - you could emphasize the end of the slider with something (maybe soft whistle) since the beat is strong here Ok added the soft-whistle

to be continued..also since both Easy and Normal are very nice there isn't much to say

Thanks so much for your mod so far. I really appreciate it.

1. Use this 16:9 background image instead. http://puu.sh/cA2Ec.jpg
2. Missing video in Insane, remember to add the same video offset as other diffs.
3. You miss a file, "cursormiddle.png", to fulfill the requirement of using the cursor set as mentioned in the ranking criteria. https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Skinning
4. What is the source of your title, especially the (TV-size) part? Also, shouldn't the artist be Wakeshima Kanon? Surname should come first iirc according to the ranking criteria.
5. I am quite sure the current timing is inaccurate, maybe you can try this:
   

   646,754.716981132075,4,2,0,0,1,0
   6400,743.034055727554,4,2,0,0,1,0
   6573,750,4,2,0,0,1,0
   6634,764.331210191083,4,2,0,0,1,0
   10993,750.140651372132,4,2,0,0,1,0

   If you are not sure about my timing, feel free to ask other team members for confirmation.

[ Setsuna ] wrote:

Super Late mod lol~
It would be nice if you could reply to my mod line by line

*=My Opinion
**=Should Fix
***=Unrankable

General

** Get a new BG, not a very good resolution, I found one for you:
1.bp.blogspot.com/-ZqV_Yo-7k_c/Uv3l3gEmuBI/AAAAAAAAEBM/Vzqb0RjNSRQ/s1921/strike-the-blood-anime-wallpaper-1920x1440.jpg

Easy

*00:06:646 (1) - As weird this might seem, I think this would be better starting on the blue tick before it, but still end at the same place.
**00:22:993 (1) - Reverse doesn't seem to fit here.

Not much problems with this diff

Normal

**Insert a break time between 00:04:958 (1) and 00:10:993 (1), the drain will hurt the player
*00:13:243 (3,4) - Blanket the end of 3 to the curve of 4.
*00:16:243 (5) - Move second anchor to x:20 y:388
*00:24:118 (3,4) - Blanket 3 to 4.
*00:29:743 (2,3) - Blanket 2 to 3.
*00:49:993 (5) - Make this slider just a normal curvy slider just like 00:37:993 (1).

Hard

**Recommended to making this map generally harder, as it's 2 stars ATM.
**Insert a break time between 00:06:646 (1) and 00:10:993 (1).
*00:27:493 (1) - No NC needed.
*00:49:243 (4) - Seems out of place, but it might be just me.

HOS's Insane

*01:33:118 (5,6,7) - Change this to one slider
Wow, not that much problems, DT-able.

sorry for the super late mod ;w;

1. You better add silent sliderslides for all default hitsounds as the murmur is quite clear and noisy.
2. 01:40:259 - End all diffs here.

1. OD and HP7 please, it's an Insane, not a Hard.
2. Quite a number of whistles are missing in the prelude for the high pitch piano, 00:01:400 - 00:02:910 - 00:03:664 - 00:04:419 - 00:06:400 -
3. 00:08:162 - Raise the volume of this whistle by about 20% as the piano here is heavier than those before.
4. 00:08:258 (1) - End this on a white tick if there's no solid ending place of the beat, for example, 00:10:455 .
5. 00:13:993 (1) - Rotate this to avoid the misleading placement with 00:15:118 (2) . Players may get confused to hit 00:15:118 (2) right after (1) if they cram together http://puu.sh/cGjGr.jpg Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2211589
6. 00:15:118 (2) - Shorten this to 00:15:868 to follow the string.
7. Hmm... You are following the distance snap to map, rite? But I saw overlapping between objects as you're using the grid snap, for example, 00:19:619 (6,1) - 01:34:258 (9,10) - . To even the distance snap accurately and for the sake of aesthetic, you better rearrange them by disabling the grid snap as it only hinders positions of objects.
8. 00:21:494 (4) - Same reason as 00:13:993 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2211613
9. 00:25:995 (1,2) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2211662
10. 00:27:496 (2,4) - Whistles for emphasizing vocals and assorting with the anti-jump technique?
11. 00:35:935 (3) - Delete this to follow vocals strict?
12. 00:42:873 (3) - Missing this weighty drum sounds uncomfortable and the clap pattern is kinda ruined. Change to something which can capture the drum please.
13. 00:45:311 (3,4) - If you're following vocal,something like this sounds more reasonable: http://puu.sh/cGmLJ.jpg
14. 00:50:750 - Whistle for piano.
15. Kiai lacks a huge bunch of hitsounds, soft-samples already fit quite well, you may use normal-hitnormal as clap on 2nd and 4th white tick for the snare. Also, clap on places where u hear similar drums, like 6th blue tick and 01:16:442 - Revise the hitsounds in the kiai and a rearrangement is highly appreciated.
16. 01:29:007 - 40% sounds more comfortable imo as I gonna suggest you adding more whistles for pianos.
17. 01:29:757 (3) - Whistle. Same for 01:32:758 (4) - 01:35:758 (3) -
18. 01:38:009 - The music doesn't fade out here, so keep the volume constant or lower it a bit, say 30%. Add several green lines with descending volumes and finally 5% at the end of the spinner.

1. OD6 please, it shouldn't be higher than Insane.
2. 00:00:646 - Whistle. Also whistles at these: 00:01:400 - 00:02:910 - 00:03:664 - 00:04:419 -
3. 00:06:573 (1) - Unsnapped end. Extend it to 00:08:162 .
4. 00:14:368 (4,1) - Why not swapping NC? Same for 00:35:372 (5,1) -
5. 00:16:243 - Higher volume. 45% is fine.
6. 00:40:248 (1,2,3) - Same volume and hitsounds with 00:16:243 (1,2,3) - ?
7. 00:43:249 (4) - Normal-hitnormal? http://puu.sh/cGGrD.jpg Same for 00:46:249 (4) - 00:49:250 -
8. 00:50:000 - Whistle. Same for 00:50:750 - 00:51:500 -
9. 00:52:250 - Reduce volume. Same for 00:57:876 .
10. 00:58:626 (6) - Move this green line 00:59:002 to here.
11. 00:55:251 - Normal-hitnormal. Simply use this when you hear an obvious drum at the four white tick. Check them yourself, I don't manage to mention them one by one.
12. 00:55:813 (5) - Remove hitsound on this circle, if you are not familiar with hitsounding, following the drum to add hitsounds would be a basic technique.
13. 01:02:752 (2,3,4) - I don't know if you're following instruments or vocals, anyway I would like to suggest you a better rhythm: http://puu.sh/cGu9t.jpg
14. 01:05:003 - You need drum and normal silent sliderslide as I can hear the noises clearly.
15. 01:16:442 - 01:16:630 - Fill the gap here please as the drums are strong and the distance is quite misleading now.
16. 01:14:567 (2) - Move this circle to 01:15:317 - for the snare?
17. 01:18:318 (3,4,5,6) - Switch off hitsounds and listen carefully to the drum, this rhythm would fit much better: http://puu.sh/cGuv0.jpg
18. 01:20:568 (2) - Delete this circle, I guess there's no drum?
19. 01:26:007 - Finish and also NC. Remove the NC on 01:27:507 (1) correspondingly.
20. 01:28:069 - Circle for drum.
21. 01:29:007 (5,1) - Swap NC.
22. 01:29:757 - Whistle. Same for 01:31:258 (3) - 01:32:758 - 01:33:133 - 01:35:758 - 01:37:259 (4) -
23. Your hitsounds are very hollow, you may need some custom hitsounds for different types of drums like 00:19:994 - 00:22:245 - 00:23:745 - Some more mods on hitsounds are highly appreciated.

1. Reduce both OD and HP to 3 as there're stacks (e.g. 00:37:247 (5,1) - ) and some tricky placements (e.g. 00:34:247 (4,1) - ) in this diff.
2. 00:05:174 - Map this break with a spinner and end it at 00:08:162 - please. Try to make everything consistent throughout all diffs. Remove the break just like Hard.
3. 00:15:118 (4,5,1) - Don't you think their way of overlapping is ugly? Try this or any other placements to avoid the issue. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2212320
4. 00:40:248 (4) - Why not drum clap? In fact, I expect a slider here for the drums and hitsounds.
5. 00:43:249 - Normal-hitnormal fits better than whistle as I mentioned in Hard. And same for all these: 00:46:249 - 00:49:250 - 00:52:250 - 00:55:251 - 00:58:251 - 01:01:252 -
6. 01:02:002 (1) - The slider ends in the middle of the guitar where I found it inappropriate, shorten it to 01:03:127 - where the guitar starts and make a reverse maybe? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2212360
7. 01:13:629 (1) - Remove the NC and NC on 01:14:004 (2) - instead.
8. 01:29:007 - Whistle. Same applies on 01:29:757 - Anyway, follow what I have said in Hard, it's tiring to jot down everything here.

1. 00:06:634 - Whistle?
2. Too lazy to mod hitsounds, just follow what I have said in N and H.