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Wakeshima Kanon - signal (TV-size)

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-Nya-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 21 December 2014 at 07:14:10 AM

Artist: Wakeshima Kanon
Title: signal (TV-size)
Source: ストライク・ザ・ブラッド
Tags: ending two HootOwlStar SutoBura Sutoraiku za Buraddo strike the blood Naoki "naotyu-" Chiba
BPM: 79.6
Filesize: 5950kb
Play Time: 01:40
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.09 stars, 70 notes)
  2. Hard (2.1 stars, 159 notes)
  3. HOS' Insane (2.84 stars, 188 notes)
  4. Normal (1.69 stars, 122 notes)
Download: Wakeshima Kanon - signal (TV-size)
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Easy~ (Done)
Normal~ (Done)
Hard~ (Done)
HOS' Insane~ HootOwlStar~ (Done)

Thanks for the Insane GD, HootOwlStar!

MP3: Izumiko
Metadata: gokugohan12468
Timing: OniJAM

Bubbled: CDFA
Ranked: IamKwaN

Thanks to all these modders. You guys are awesome~
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truonant
Hello M4M~ from my Mod Queue

Turn off countdown on Hard difficulty
Could use more hit sounds. You can try adding some hit sounds on: 00:25:227 (5) - , 00:28:227 (3) – , 00:31:227 (5) and etc. And some more custom hitsounds for the piano
You don’t need the Strike the Blood ED 2 in the title. Just use Signal
Within the source, capitalize the ‘B’ in ‘Strike the blood’


00:06:352 (1) – move to 00:06:290 – and reduce by 1 reverse
00:06:727 (1) – end on 00:08:165
00:09:138 – is this timing point needed?
00:12:477 (3) – could be blanketed better - http://puu.sh/ak1SE/bba3bf5467.jpg
00:18:477 (3) – try stacking slider tail on 00:16:227 (2,3,4)
00:23:352 (2) – try stacking slider head on slider head of 00:21:477 (5) –
00:36:477 (3) – could be blanketed better on 00:35:727 (1) –
00:41:352 (2) – could be blanketed better on 00:40:227 (1,2,3) –
00:44:351 (2) – perhaps stack on 00:41:352 (2) – & blanket on 00:46:226 (3) –
00:50:726 (3) – move left a bit to: x:72 y:80 for better blanket
01:04:976 (1) – the hitsound here is really loud. Consider lowering the volume & could be blanketed better - http://puu.sh/ak2A3/1a5e854dcb.jpg
01:09:476 (5) – copy this slider: 01:08:726 (4) – and ctrl+h
01:11:726 (2) – blanket on 01:10:976 (1) –
01:14:726 (2) - blanket - http://puu.sh/ak2PB/9e909b3685.jpg
01:15:476 (3,4) – move up so that slider head of 01:16:226 (4) – stacks on slider tail of 01:14:726 (2) –
01:16:976 (1) – really loud hitsound. Reduce volume
01:17:726 (2) - could be blanketed better. Make head and tail align horizontally - http://puu.sh/ak2YN/75eeec3231.jpg
01:17:726 (2) – However this reverse slider doesn’t seem to fit with the music. Try this: http://puu.sh/ak38i/3413394f41.jpg


00:20:728 (4) – could be blanketed better
00:24:478 (2) – this slider doesn’t seem to fit the music. Try just using a 1/1 slider: http://puu.sh/ak3DR/578e491d7b.jpg
00:27:103 – add a circle here
00:33:478 (5) – same as 00:24:478 (2)
00:33:478 (5,1) – avoid this unessessary overlap. It can be confusing for new players and it doesn’t look good
00:42:478 (3,4) – could be blanketed better - http://puu.sh/ak3U2/33d9cb8556.jpg
00:58:978 (1) - could be blanketed better - http://puu.sh/ak457/645e33ac62.jpg
00:58:978 (1) loud hitsound, lower volume
01:01:978 (1) – ctrl + h on 00:58:978 (1)
01:07:978 (4) – better blanket - http://puu.sh/ak4hl/75ad210573.jpg
01:09:290 (5) – doesn’t match music. Try this: http://puu.sh/ak4mY/4f8f60c56a.jpg
01:12:478 (3) - doesn’t match music. Try a 1/1 slider
01:15:478 (3) - ^
01:21:478 (5) - ^ same as 01:09:290 (5)
01:24:478 (3) - ^ try: http://puu.sh/ak4E0/054782eade.jpg
01:24:478 (3) - better blanket - http://puu.sh/ak4zI/85d7872cc8.jpg

Good luck with your map!~
micchi_chi
Hi~ Passing by ^^
Random mod :3

[General]
  1. I think you should add normal difficulty for diff spread :)
  2. The "Strike the Blood ED 2" on title is unnecessary, remove it, and add "TV Size" maybe
  3. "strike the blood" and "signal" is unnecessary on tags because its already mentioned on title and source
  4. I think the preview point should be here 01:04:603 So the word "Kami-Sama" would not be cut off

[Easy]
  1. 00:19:228 (3,4) - Mirror these sliders perfectly, and maybe you can add a little modification so it would blanket perfectly with 00:22:228 (5) -
  2. 00:33:478 (5,1) - These sliders are overlapped poorly, it looks ugly imo :/ maybe change it a little? http://puu.sh/akxHc/a87f812c4c.jpg
  3. 00:52:978 (1) - this slider looks weird :/ modificate it a little maybe? http://puu.sh/akxNT/0c3e2a595b.jpg and then mirror this slider 00:54:478 (2) -
  4. 00:58:228 (4,1) - Blanket this perfectly and mirror this 01:01:978 (1) -

[Hard]
  1. 00:06:352 (1) - Check AiMod, object end is not snapped, add one more repeat and move the spinner backward so it start on red line http://puu.sh/aky5j/c89551f60f.jpg
  2. 00:40:227 (1,2,3,2) - Blanket this?
  3. 00:50:726 (3,4) - mirror these sliders maybe?
  4. 01:07:413 (4,5,1) - this part looks confusing :/ change it to 1/4 repeat slider maybe? http://puu.sh/akyeX/d490f29bd0.jpg or just spread the circles like this http://puu.sh/akyhI/de4be451e5.jpg
  5. 01:16:976 (1,2) - Blanket this perfectly
  6. 01:31:975 (1) - maybe this should be moved like this http://puu.sh/akyoK/c58a6fd4fb.jpg to make it to a straight line
  7. 01:34:225 (1) - Remove NC here

Well, pretty short mod eh :3 nice map but I think the offset somehow wrong :/
Maybe you will need two inherited timing points, one for the first piano part so that the notes (especially on easy) won't start on the blue line, and the second one on the start of the vocal
I can't seem to find the right offset, maybe you should consult to some experienced mapper
Improve your note placement, blanket, NC, mirroring, etc
Topic Starter
-Nya-
Thanks for your mod, truonant.
I'll apply your mod as soon as I can.
Topic Starter
-Nya-
Thank you so much, hanyuu!
I'll make the necessary changes as soon as I can.
Topic Starter
-Nya-

truonant wrote:

Hello M4M~ from my Mod Queue

Turn off countdown on Hard difficulty Fixed
Could use more hit sounds. You can try adding some hit sounds on: 00:25:227 (5) - , 00:28:227 (3) – , 00:31:227 (5) and etc. And some more custom hitsounds for the piano Added more hitsounds
You don’t need the Strike the Blood ED 2 in the title. Just use Signal Removed 'Strike the Blood ED 2' and added 'TV Size'.
Within the source, capitalize the ‘B’ in ‘Strike the blood’ Fixed


00:06:352 (1) – move to 00:06:290 – and reduce by 1 reverse Fixed
00:06:727 (1) – end on 00:08:165 Fixed
00:09:138 – is this timing point needed? Removed the timing point
00:12:477 (3) – could be blanketed better - http://puu.sh/ak1SE/bba3bf5467.jpg Tried to blanket the slider better, but don't notice much of a difference then before.
00:18:477 (3) – try stacking slider tail on 00:16:227 (2,3,4) Ok
00:23:352 (2) – try stacking slider head on slider head of 00:21:477 (5) – Ok
00:36:477 (3) – could be blanketed better on 00:35:727 (1) – Tried to blanket it better
00:41:352 (2) – could be blanketed better on 00:40:227 (1,2,3) – Tried to blanket it better, but I don't see much of a difference
00:44:351 (2) – perhaps stack on 00:41:352 (2) – & blanket on 00:46:226 (3) – Stacked and blanketed
00:50:726 (3) – move left a bit to: x:72 y:80 for better blanket Fixed
01:04:976 (1) – the hitsound here is really loud. Consider lowering the volume & could be blanketed better - http://puu.sh/ak2A3/1a5e854dcb.jpg Lowered the volume and tried to blanket better
01:09:476 (5) – copy this slider: 01:08:726 (4) – and ctrl+h Fixed
01:11:726 (2) – blanket on 01:10:976 (1) – Blanketed and changed some other things as well
01:14:726 (2) - blanket - http://puu.sh/ak2PB/9e909b3685.jpg Changed it a bit differently
01:15:476 (3,4) – move up so that slider head of 01:16:226 (4) – stacks on slider tail of 01:14:726 (2) – Made other changes
01:16:976 (1) – really loud hitsound. Reduce volume Fixed
01:17:726 (2) - could be blanketed better. Make head and tail align horizontally - http://puu.sh/ak2YN/75eeec3231.jpg Fixed
01:17:726 (2) – However this reverse slider doesn’t seem to fit with the music. Try this: http://puu.sh/ak38i/3413394f41.jpg Yes, I like it; changed.


00:20:728 (4) – could be blanketed better Tried to blanket better, but I don't see much change
00:24:478 (2) – this slider doesn’t seem to fit the music. Try just using a 1/1 slider: http://puu.sh/ak3DR/578e491d7b.jpg Changed
00:27:103 – add a circle here No, I think it will then be too hard
00:33:478 (5) – same as 00:24:478 (2) Fixed
00:33:478 (5,1) – avoid this unessessary overlap. It can be confusing for new players and it doesn’t look good No overlapping
00:42:478 (3,4) – could be blanketed better - http://puu.sh/ak3U2/33d9cb8556.jpg I think it's better blanketed now
00:58:978 (1) - could be blanketed better - http://puu.sh/ak457/645e33ac62.jpg Had a bit of trouble with that, but I think it looks better now
00:58:978 (1) loud hitsound, lower volume Lowered the volume
01:01:978 (1) – ctrl + h on 00:58:978 (1) Fixed it. Looks much better now
01:07:978 (4) – better blanket - http://puu.sh/ak4hl/75ad210573.jpg I want the slider to compliment this slider: 01:06:478. Didn't make a change.
01:09:290 (5) – doesn’t match music. Try this: http://puu.sh/ak4mY/4f8f60c56a.jpg Changed it
01:12:478 (3) - doesn’t match music. Try a 1/1 slider Changed
01:15:478 (3) - ^ Changed
01:21:478 (5) - ^ same as 01:09:290 (5) Changed
01:24:478 (3) - ^ try: http://puu.sh/ak4E0/054782eade.jpg Changed
01:24:478 (3) - better blanket - http://puu.sh/ak4zI/85d7872cc8.jpg Did something else

Good luck with your map!~ Thanks! :)
Wow, I made alot of changes.
Thanks for the mod. :D
Topic Starter
-Nya-

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hi~ Passing by ^^
Random mod :3

[General]
  1. I think you should add normal difficulty for diff spread :) Will definitely consider it; I might ask someone else for a GD.
  2. The "Strike the Blood ED 2" on title is unnecessary, remove it, and add "TV Size" maybe Changed
  3. "strike the blood" and "signal" is unnecessary on tags because its already mentioned on title and source Removed them
  4. I think the preview point should be here 01:04:603 So the word "Kami-Sama" would not be cut off Fixed. (Thanks for that)

[Easy]
  1. 00:19:228 (3,4) - Mirror these sliders perfectly, and maybe you can add a little modification so it would blanket perfectly with 00:22:228 (5) - I'm satisfied with how it is now, but I did try to make the blanket better
  2. 00:33:478 (5,1) - These sliders are overlapped poorly, it looks ugly imo :/ maybe change it a little? http://puu.sh/akxHc/a87f812c4c.jpg I changed it differently by also changing one of the slider's shape
  3. 00:52:978 (1) - this slider looks weird :/ modificate it a little maybe? http://puu.sh/akxNT/0c3e2a595b.jpg and then mirror this slider 00:54:478 (2) - Changed it and also mirrored it; it looks much better now
  4. 00:58:228 (4,1) - Blanket this perfectly and mirror this 01:01:978 (1) - I tried my best to blanket and mirror them properly

[Hard]
  1. 00:06:352 (1) - Check AiMod, object end is not snapped, add one more repeat and move the spinner backward so it start on red line http://puu.sh/aky5j/c89551f60f.jpg Fixed
  2. 00:40:227 (1,2,3,2) - Blanket this? Tried to blanket it as best I can
  3. 00:50:726 (3,4) - mirror these sliders maybe? I like how it is now
  4. 01:07:413 (4,5,1) - this part looks confusing :/ change it to 1/4 repeat slider maybe? http://puu.sh/akyeX/d490f29bd0.jpg or just spread the circles like this http://puu.sh/akyhI/de4be451e5.jpg I spreaded the circles (Thanks for that advice)
  5. 01:16:976 (1,2) - Blanket this perfectly I did something else there
  6. 01:31:975 (1) - maybe this should be moved like this http://puu.sh/akyoK/c58a6fd4fb.jpg to make it to a straight line Fixed
  7. 01:34:225 (1) - Remove NC here Fixed

Well, pretty short mod eh :3 nice map thanx :) but I think the offset somehow wrong :/
Maybe you will need two inherited timing points, one for the first piano part so that the notes (especially on easy) won't start on the blue line, and the second one on the start of the vocal
I can't seem to find the right offset, maybe you should consult to some experienced mapper I'll wait and see what other modders suggest; so I'll keep the same offset for now.
Improve your note placement, blanket, NC, mirroring, etc Did as much improving as I can.
Thanks so much for the mod, hanyuu!
I really appreciate it. :D
Rad-
Hey there!

General:
- Your video has too large dimensions, by rule it must not exceed 1280x720, and it still has sound, which is increasing the file size. Also since its smaller than the song, drag the slider video offset maximum to the right, as it would fit at the spot it should i think.
- Your background also should have either a 4:3 (1024x768) or a 16:9 (1366x768) dimension.
- Offset is 483
- I noticed how Easy and Hard have the same slider velocity, not that important, but just wanted to point that out, and how the spacing wasnt very consistent to that, as you used 0,8x spacing on easy for example.
- 01:40:230 - Add a low volume inherited point here

Easy
- 00:08:545 (1) - Make the spinner end at 00:10:983 and add a whistle to it, then drag 00:10:983 (1) - slider to 00:11:733 , take out its reverse arrow and use ''reverse selection'' on it so it starts at the end.
- 00:16:233 (1) - I reccomend here instead of using drum hitsounds, change to soft and add whistle on the end of this slider.
- 00:27:483 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:34:983 (6) - NC
- 00:35:358 (1) - Remove NC
- 01:18:483 (3,4) - Use only one slider point on these so that they will look nicer, redo them if you have to as long as they look more round.

Hard
- No idea why you did this in the first place, but delete all the repeating inherited points at the same spot. And delete all the ones that go to 80% volume as the volume of those whistle are suddenly too loud, and change those that are too low volume, as you can barely hear them, and i am talking about the ones in the kiai time as well, keep it all at the same volume so it gives the player a good feedback when clicking.

- 00:06:295 (1) - Make it only repeat once, and drag it to 00:06:389
- 00:40:982 (1) - Add a Finish
- 00:43:981 (4,1) - Instead of doing this the same way as before, why not switch the objects on the timeline?
- 01:01:231 - Place a circle here to fill the empty space
- 01:07:793 (1) - Remove NC and add NC here 01:07:981 (7)
- 01:31:230 (1) - Remove NC

Hope it helps ^^
Jaltzu
So, I happened to have time now... Here we go, double m4m!
I'll be nitpicking about stacking and blanketing, so please don't get too irritated because of that. :D
Maybe add a normal diff? Totally optional, ofc.

EASY
00:06:665 (4) - NC?
00:10:978 (1,2,3) - Double blanket?
00:20:728 (4,5) - Fix blanket
00:40:603 - Add a circle
00:41:728 (2,3) - ↑↑
00:58:978 (1,2,1) - Fix this as a double blanket? (It's still good as it is now. Just a personal preference.)
01:07:978 (4,5) - Fix blanket.
01:09:478 (5) - Replace with a 1/2 tic long reverse slider.
01:11:728 (2,3) - Fix blanket
01:12:478 (3,1) - ↑↑
01:18:478 (3) - Reverse slider again?
01:21:478 (5) - Move 1/2 tic backwards ( to last red tic) and add a circle to 01:22:228
01:34:228 - Add a circle

Hard
AR6
Kiai isn't snapped. (Check AiMod...)
00:06:290 (1) - Consider moving this a bit closer to play screen center, so it would flow better to the next spinner.
00:11:727 (2,3) - Fix blanket
00:17:540 - Add a circle
00:21:477 (5) - Try stacking with one of 00:19:602 (1,2) - circles, or don't overlap at all. (If you change this, remember to check that 00:22:602 (1) - is still stacked)
00:24:102 (3,4) - Suggestion: replace with a circle at 00:24:102 and a slider 00:24:289 - 00:24:852.
00:36:289 - Add a circle
00:38:352 (3,4) - Fix blanket (slider slightly too curved)
00:40:602 (3,2) - Maybe make these a proper blanket too?
00:44:351 (2,3) - ↑↑
00:51:476 (4) - Replace with 3 circles OR short reverse slider.
00:57:851 (1,2) - Maybe stack with 00:55:601 (6)?
01:06:663 - Music suggests there should be a note here.
01:09:663 - ↑↑
01:12:663 - ↑↑
01:10:976 (1,2) - Fix blanket
01:11:726 (2,3) - ↑↑
01:18:101 (3,4) - Stack properly with 01:16:976 (1) - tail
01:21:288 - Add a circle
01:24:288 - ↑↑
01:25:975 (2) - Replace with a reverse slider.
01:27:850 (6,1) - Blanket?
01:31:225 (1) - No NC

- H i N a -
Hi M4M~

Easy


00:27:478 (1) - delete 00:28:978 (2) and do like this for better sound
00:28:228 - If you follow my suggestion you can add whistle here
00:48:478 (2,3) - i think do like this is better
00:49:228 - If you follow my suggestion you can add whistle here
01:01:228 (2) - add whistle ?
01:04:978 - 01:28:228 - turn down volume to 35-40%
01:34:978 (1) - do like this for better sound


Hard

00:34:602 (4) - I think this slider is not beautiful, try this ?
00:57:851 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it's too hard try to make it easier ?
01:29:350 (1) - add whistle in the end slider ?
01:31:975 (1) - ^
01:34:975 (1) - ^


I hope it help you

Good Luck :D
Topic Starter
-Nya-

Rad- wrote:

Hey there!

General:
- Your video has too large dimensions, by rule it must not exceed 1280x720, and it still has sound, which is increasing the file size. Also since its smaller than the song, drag the slider video offset maximum to the right, as it would fit at the spot it should i think. I'm searching for a better video
- Your background also should have either a 4:3 (1024x768) or a 16:9 (1366x768) dimension. Will replace the background
- Offset is 483 Fixed
- I noticed how Easy and Hard have the same slider velocity, not that important, but just wanted to point that out, and how the spacing wasnt very consistent to that, as you used 0,8x spacing on easy for example.
- 01:40:230 - Add a low volume inherited point here Fixed

Easy
- 00:08:545 (1) - Make the spinner end at 00:10:983 and add a whistle to it, then drag 00:10:983 (1) - slider to 00:11:733 , take out its reverse arrow and use ''reverse selection'' on it so it starts at the end. Fixed;I did apply a hitsound but not a whistle though (I don't really like the whistle sound)
- 00:16:233 (1) - I reccomend here instead of using drum hitsounds, change to soft and add whistle on the end of this slider. Changed
- 00:27:483 (1) - Remove NC Ok
- 00:34:983 (6) - NC Ok
- 00:35:358 (1) - Remove NC Ok
- 01:18:483 (3,4) - Use only one slider point on these so that they will look nicer, redo them if you have to as long as they look more round. I like how they are now

Hard
- No idea why you did this in the first place, but delete all the repeating inherited points at the same spot. And delete all the ones that go to 80% volume as the volume of those whistle are suddenly too loud, and change those that are too low volume, as you can barely hear them, and i am talking about the ones in the kiai time as well, keep it all at the same volume so it gives the player a good feedback when clicking. Deleted the repeating points; I think my hitsounds are okay now

- 00:06:295 (1) - Make it only repeat once, and drag it to 00:06:389 Yeah, I like this; done
- 00:40:982 (1) - Add a Finish Added
- 00:43:981 (4,1) - Instead of doing this the same way as before, why not switch the objects on the timeline? I think I'm gonna keep it as it is now
- 01:01:231 - Place a circle here to fill the empty space Fixed
- 01:07:793 (1) - Remove NC and add NC here 01:07:981 (7) Fixed
- 01:31:230 (1) - Remove NC Fixed

Hope it helps ^^ It did. Thank you very much! :)
Thanks for the mod! :D
Topic Starter
-Nya-

Jaltzu wrote:

So, I happened to have time now... Here we go, double m4m!
I'll be nitpicking about stacking and blanketing, so please don't get too irritated because of that. :D
Maybe add a normal diff? Totally optional, ofc.

EASY
00:06:665 (4) - NC? Ok
00:10:978 (1,2,3) - Double blanket? Ok
00:20:728 (4,5) - Fix blanket I don't really see anything wrong with it.
00:40:603 - Add a circle No
00:41:728 (2,3) - ↑↑ Fixed
00:58:978 (1,2,1) - Fix this as a double blanket? (It's still good as it is now. Just a personal preference.) I'm gonna keep it as it is now
01:07:978 (4,5) - Fix blanket. I again don't really see what's wrong with it
01:09:478 (5) - Replace with a 1/2 tic long reverse slider. No change
01:11:728 (2,3) - Fix blanket Don't see anything wrong with it :P
01:12:478 (3,1) - ↑↑ Fixed
01:18:478 (3) - Reverse slider again? No change
01:21:478 (5) - Move 1/2 tic backwards ( to last red tic) and add a circle to 01:22:228 No, sorry. I like what I've done better
01:34:228 - Add a circle Added

Hard
AR6
Kiai isn't snapped. (Check AiMod...) Fixed
00:06:290 (1) - Consider moving this a bit closer to play screen center, so it would flow better to the next spinner. Moved it a bit closer
00:11:727 (2,3) - Fix blanket Moved it a little bit
00:17:540 - Add a circle Added
00:21:477 (5) - Try stacking with one of 00:19:602 (1,2) - circles, or don't overlap at all. (If you change this, remember to check that 00:22:602 (1) - is still stacked) Fixed
00:24:102 (3,4) - Suggestion: replace with a circle at 00:24:102 and a slider 00:24:289 - 00:24:852. No, I'm gonna keep it as it is now
00:36:289 - Add a circle No
00:38:352 (3,4) - Fix blanket (slider slightly too curved) Curved it less
00:40:602 (3,2) - Maybe make these a proper blanket too? I don't see anything wrong
00:44:351 (2,3) - ↑↑
00:51:476 (4) - Replace with 3 circles OR short reverse slider. No change
00:57:851 (1,2) - Maybe stack with 00:55:601 (6)? Fixed
01:06:663 - Music suggests there should be a note here. No change
01:09:663 - ↑↑
01:12:663 - ↑↑
01:10:976 (1,2) - Fix blanket Tried to fix it a bit
01:11:726 (2,3) - ↑↑
01:18:101 (3,4) - Stack properly with 01:16:976 (1) - tail I tried to stack it better, but for some reason it doesn't really want to
01:21:288 - Add a circle Added
01:24:288 - ↑↑
01:25:975 (2) - Replace with a reverse slider. No change
01:27:850 (6,1) - Blanket? Not much change but did try to improve it a bit
01:31:225 (1) - No NC Fixed

Thanks for the mod! :D
Topic Starter
-Nya-
Supporter! :)
Topic Starter
-Nya-

- H i N a - wrote:

Hi M4M~

Easy


00:27:478 (1) - delete 00:28:978 (2) and do like this for better sound Ok
00:28:228 - If you follow my suggestion you can add whistle here Done
00:48:478 (2,3) - i think do like this is better Ok
00:49:228 - If you follow my suggestion you can add whistle here Done
01:01:228 (2) - add whistle ? Done
01:04:978 - 01:28:228 - turn down volume to 35-40% Turned it down to 35%
01:34:978 (1) - do like this for better sound Done


Hard

00:34:602 (4) - I think this slider is not beautiful, try this ? Changed it a bit
00:57:851 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it's too hard try to make it easier ? Made it easier
01:29:350 (1) - add whistle in the end slider ? Done
01:31:975 (1) - ^ Done
01:34:975 (1) - ^ Done


I hope it help you It definitely helped me. Thank you so much!

Good Luck :D Thanx!
Thanks for the mod :D
pandorawindy
hi at your m4m request, i come here give you some suggestions just me.

  • [in general]
  1. nice song :)
  2. Hmm...offset is so weird, map with Reasonable offset is hard to rank.you should have two time points i guess... or some other better choices.
    [easy]
  3. 00:30:483 (2,3,4) - maybe it is a little hard to read for the beginners;
  4. 00:40:983 (1,2) - avoid the stack in easy diff;
  5. 00:55:983 (3,4) - ^
    [hard]
  6. 00:00:670 (1) - you missed a lot of rhythms here . drag slider with the piano voices is not a wise choice i guess;
    maybe.. change this part like...
  7. 00:06:295 (1) - you didn't follow the rhythm well. remove it, only spinner here.
  8. 00:24:107 (3) - only copy and past? ctrl+H ctrl+G then put it in its place.
  9. 00:38:732 (4,5) - ^
  10. 00:25:607 (1,2,3,4) - stack them is better.
  11. 00:32:357 (1,2,3) - better?
  12. 00:41:356 (2) - is same as 00:44:356 (2) - ,,hmm..maybe you should have other patterns to make this part more varieties.
  13. 01:04:981 (1,3) - symmetric pattern?but not in one horizontal line;
  14. 01:08:731 (3,4) - ^
  15. 01:19:981 (1,2) - ^ btw,,plz copy and past ,,then do some fix with your ctrl;
  16. 01:34:980 (1) - ugly slider :\
good luck with you !
Topic Starter
-Nya-

pandorawindy wrote:

hi at your m4m request, i come here give you some suggestions just me.

  • [in general]
  1. nice song :) Thanks :)
  2. Hmm...offset is so weird, map with Reasonable offset is hard to rank.you should have two time points i guess... or some other better choices. Ugh, I hate Offset. I never get it right. Gonna keep it as it is for now.
    [easy]
  3. 00:30:483 (2,3,4) - maybe it is a little hard to read for the beginners Made it easier (Moved the slider)
  4. 00:40:983 (1,2) - avoid the stack in easy diff Fixed
  5. 00:55:983 (3,4) - ^ Fixed
    [hard]
  6. 00:00:670 (1) - you missed a lot of rhythms here . drag slider with the piano voices is not a wise choice i guess Changed it as you suggested
    maybe.. change this part like...
  7. 00:06:295 (1) - you didn't follow the rhythm well. remove it, only spinner here. Wow! Yeah, that sounds bad. Changed it to a spinner
  8. 00:24:107 (3) - only copy and past? ctrl+H ctrl+G then put it in its place. Fixed
  9. 00:38:732 (4,5) - ^ Changed
  10. 00:25:607 (1,2,3,4) - stack them is better. No, I like more how it is now
  11. 00:32:357 (1,2,3) - better? Changed
  12. 00:41:356 (2) - is same as 00:44:356 (2) - ,,hmm..maybe you should have other patterns to make this part more varieties. Changed this slider: 00:44:356
  13. 01:04:981 (1,3) - symmetric pattern?but not in one horizontal line Changed it, but I copy and pasted to make both sliders identical
  14. 01:08:731 (3,4) - ^ Made a very small change
  15. 01:19:981 (1,2) - ^ btw,,plz copy and past ,,then do some fix with your ctrl Fixed
  16. 01:34:980 (1) - ugly slider :\ Straightened the slider
good luck with you ! Thanks
Thanks so much for the mod! :D
sheela
Hey.

General

  1. It needs a normal difficulty in order to rank the map.
  2. In the Ranking Criteria, you can't alter the title (TV Size, Short Ver.) unless it's official. In the ending video, there's no (TV size) in the title, so you should remove it. http://puu.sh/aEpuQ/9c5ec6babc.jpg
  3. The title is "signal", with no "s" in capital.
  4. In the artist, it should be 分島花音. The artist is used for the original name. Romanised is use for the English of the artist, which is Kanon Wakeshimi.
  5. The "anime" in the tags is no need, since it'll mark when it's rank. Example: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/167252
  6. The file size of the video is too big. Replace the video by this one: http://puu.sh/aErAp/b7e566313d.avi
  7. In your .osu files, when you see "Video,3000,"Strike The Blood ED 2 [Full HD].avi", replace 3000 by 10983, since the video should start here.
  8. 00:00:670 - The timing point should be here and remove the previous two green points.
  9. 00:10:982 - Add a timing point here.
  10. The preview point isn't snap.

Easy

  1. 00:11:733 (1,2) - Make a better blanket:
  2. 00:13:233 (2,3) - ^
  3. 00:16:233 (1) - Stack it with the previous and move the last point to x:433 y:55. After, move 00:17:733 (1) to x:425 y:259 and move 00:18:483 (2) to x:313 y:251.
  4. 00:19:233 (3,4) - Make a symmetric pattern:
  5. 00:25:983 (3) - The flow to the previous isn't good and it's overlapped by the previous slider. Try this pattern:
    After, move 00:29:733 (1) to x:184 y:224, 00:30:483 (2) to x:280 y:281, 00:31:233 (3) to x:366 y:209, and 00:31:983 (4) to x:438 y:123, and a blanket with 00:31:233 (3) . Also, remove the repeat, and end the slider at 00:32:733 ; blue ticks aren't use in easy difficulties. Also, you need to do something with 00:33:483 (5) . Maybe copy and paste 00:31:983 (4) , rotate it by 45°, and move it to x:438 y:123. It makes the pattern better. And be careful with 00:34:983 (1,2,3) .
  6. 00:29:733 (1) - Remove the new combo, and add it to 00:30:483 (2) .
  7. 00:37:983 (5) - Add a new combo.
  8. 00:40:983 (1) - If the circle is moved to x:390 y:108, the flow is better to the previous slider. Still, you have to do something about 00:41:733 (2,3) . You can move 00:41:733 (2) to x:288 y:59, 00:42:483 (3) Ctrl + G and move it to x:189 y:31, and 00:44:733 (4) to x:180 y:142. Be careful with the distance for 00:46:983 (1) .
  9. 00:50:733 (3,4) - Make a blanket. Blanket should be better.
  10. 00:58:233 (4,1) - Make a better blanket; for the slider, move the first point (the one on the head) to x:196 y:287, the second to x:261 y:217, and last to x:182 y:76.
  11. 01:01:233 (2) - Move this to x:156 y:184.
  12. 01:01:983 (1) - Copy and paste 00:58:983 (1) , Ctrl + J, Ctrl + H, Ctrl + G, and move it to x:115 y:80.
  13. 01:11:733 (2,3) - Make a better blanket. Use the approach circle of the circle to help.
  14. 01:34:983 (1) - Loosen the curve and make a blanket with 01:34:233 (2) .

Hard

  1. 00:12:482 (3) - Move the last point to x:268 y:375 to perfect the blanket pattern.
  2. 00:16:982 (1,3) - Loosen the curve; too much is ugly.
  3. 00:23:357 (2) - Ctrl + J for a better flow.
  4. 00:40:607 (3,2) - Try perfecting the blanket.
  5. 00:58:981 (1) - Move this to x:70 y:165. The distance was too small.
  6. 01:11:731 (2,3) - Loosen the curves.
  7. 01:13:981 (1,2) - ^
  8. 01:25:230 (1) - Loosen the curve in order to move up the curve, since it was outside of the grid map.
Well, that's all. Any questions can be ask via PM or in-game. Good Luck on ranking this map.
Sellenite
Hi!m4m

[Hard]
  1. 00:12:482 (3) - blanket better
  2. 00:43:231 (3) - don't overmap,just one circle on 00:43:231 is enough
  3. 01:29:355 (2) - cancel NC
[Easy]
  1. 00:20:733 (4) - blanket
  2. 00:25:983 (3) - move this away,don't overlap with 00:24:483 (2) -
  3. 01:12:483 (3) - blanket
  4. 01:31:983 (1) - change to end at 01:32:733,then 01:33:108 add a circle
nothing serious,but perhaps hard is lack of hitsound
good luck
Topic Starter
-Nya-

sheela901 wrote:

Hey.

General

  1. It needs a normal difficulty in order to rank the map. Ok, I'll make sure to get a Normal diff.
  2. In the Ranking Criteria, you can't alter the title (TV Size, Short Ver.) unless it's official. In the ending video, there's no (TV size) in the title, so you should remove it. http://puu.sh/aEpuQ/9c5ec6babc.jpg Removed
  3. The title is "signal", with no "s" in capital. Removed capital
  4. In the artist, it should be 分島花音. The artist is used for the original name. Romanised is use for the English of the artist, which is Kanon Wakeshimi. Fixed
  5. The "anime" in the tags is no need, since it'll mark when it's rank. Example: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/167252 Removed "anime"
  6. The file size of the video is too big. Replace the video by this one: http://puu.sh/aErAp/b7e566313d.avi Thanks so much for the video; your video added
  7. In your .osu files, when you see "Video,3000,"Strike The Blood ED 2 [Full HD].avi", replace 3000 by 10983, since the video should start here. Fixed
  8. 00:00:670 - The timing point should be here and remove the previous two green points. Fixed
  9. 00:10:982 - Add a timing point here. Added
  10. The preview point isn't snap. It is snapped?

Easy

  1. 00:11:733 (1,2) - Make a better blanket: Tried to improve the blanket
  2. 00:13:233 (2,3) - ^ Tried to improve it as well
  3. 00:16:233 (1) - Stack it with the previous and move the last point to x:433 y:55. After, move 00:17:733 (1) to x:425 y:259 and move 00:18:483 (2) to x:313 y:251. I did stack it and I moved the two hitcircles
  4. 00:19:233 (3,4) - Make a symmetric pattern: Ok
  5. 00:25:983 (3) - The flow to the previous isn't good and it's overlapped by the previous slider. Try this pattern: Ok
    After, move 00:29:733 (1) to x:184 y:224, 00:30:483 (2) to x:280 y:281, 00:31:233 (3) to x:366 y:209, and 00:31:983 (4) to x:438 y:123, and a blanket with 00:31:233 (3) . Also, remove the repeat, and end the slider at 00:32:733 ; blue ticks aren't use in easy difficulties. Also, you need to do something with 00:33:483 (5) . Maybe copy and paste 00:31:983 (4) , rotate it by 45°, and move it to x:438 y:123. It makes the pattern better. And be careful with 00:34:983 (1,2,3) . I moved the hitcircles, blanketed, removed the repeat and made that slider longer.
  6. 00:29:733 (1) - Remove the new combo, and add it to 00:30:483 (2) Ok
  7. 00:37:983 (5) - Add a new combo. Ok
  8. 00:40:983 (1) - If the circle is moved to x:390 y:108, the flow is better to the previous slider. Still, you have to do something about 00:41:733 (2,3) . You can move 00:41:733 (2) to x:288 y:59, 00:42:483 (3) Ctrl + G and move it to x:189 y:31, and 00:44:733 (4) to x:180 y:142. Be careful with the distance for 00:46:983 (1) . Fixed
  9. 00:50:733 (3,4) - Make a blanket. Blanket should be better. Ok
  10. 00:58:233 (4,1) - Make a better blanket; for the slider, move the first point (the one on the head) to x:196 y:287, the second to x:261 y:217, and last to x:182 y:76. Struggled with this but tried to improve it still
  11. 01:01:233 (2) - Move this to x:156 y:184. Moved
  12. 01:01:983 (1) - Copy and paste 00:58:983 (1) , Ctrl + J, Ctrl + H, Ctrl + G, and move it to x:115 y:80. I copy and pasted but moved it to another spot
  13. 01:11:733 (2,3) - Make a better blanket. Use the approach circle of the circle to help. I hope my blanket looks better now
  14. 01:34:983 (1) - Loosen the curve and make a blanket with 01:34:233 (2) . Ok

Hard

  1. 00:12:482 (3) - Move the last point to x:268 y:375 to perfect the blanket pattern. I tried to perfect the blanket
  2. 00:16:982 (1,3) - Loosen the curve; too much is ugly. Loosened the curve a bit
  3. 00:23:357 (2) - Ctrl + J for a better flow. Ok
  4. 00:40:607 (3,2) - Try perfecting the blanket. Did my best to perfect it
  5. 00:58:981 (1) - Move this to x:70 y:165. The distance was too small. Moved the slider
  6. 01:11:731 (2,3) - Loosen the curves. Fixed
  7. 01:13:981 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
  8. 01:25:230 (1) - Loosen the curve in order to move up the curve, since it was outside of the grid map. Did something else
Well, that's all. Any questions can be ask via PM or in-game. Good Luck on ranking this map. Thanks!
Thank you for the mod! It really helped me. :D
Topic Starter
-Nya-

Sellenite wrote:

Hi!m4m

[Hard]
  1. 00:12:482 (3) - blanket better Fixed
  2. 00:43:231 (3) - don't overmap,just one circle on 00:43:231 is enough I'm gonna keep it as it is for now. If someone else also complains then I'll consider changing it
  3. 01:29:355 (2) - cancel NC Ok
[Easy]
  1. 00:20:733 (4) - blanket Ok
  2. 00:25:983 (3) - move this away,don't overlap with 00:24:483 (2) - Fixed
  3. 01:12:483 (3) - blanket Ok
  4. 01:31:983 (1) - change to end at 01:32:733,then 01:33:108 add a circle Ok
nothing serious,but perhaps hard is lack of hitsound I'm not so good with hitsounds and I don't like it if there is too many hitsounds.
good luck Thanks!
Thanks alot for the mod! :D
No_Gu
M4M from my queueu

sry for the delay

there should be a diff gap.make another normal diff or rename your easy to normal.I personally suggest making a normal
this is such a beautiful song,why not add a silent sliderslide?
change offset to -1017 to change the downbeat.and after this,change your NC

[Easy]
00:00:670 (1,3) - add whislte for both head and end
00:06:670 (1,2) - add whistle
00:22:983 (1,2,3) - 2,3 are overlapped .and these notes aren't good imo.try sth like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1893585 orz but you need to chang the notes after these if you changed this
00:40:983 (1) - add a green line with 30% volume
00:58:983 (1) - 1~2 grids down
add more whistle please
not very good but ok

[Hard]
in fact no need to use ds.but if you want,it's still ok.and I personally suggest 2.0x or more to let 1/4 notes not overlapped.that will make your map look neater
00:41:356 (2) - don't fit the song imo
00:55:231 (5,6) - maybe
00:58:981 (1) - make this far from 00:58:606 (4) - .it looks like 1/4 from 00:58:606 (4) -
hmmm still.not very good
I think it's better to have a remap with slider speed and with the ds which won't overlap 1/4 notes.
but if you don't want,it's still ok.
still.add more whistle
Topic Starter
-Nya-
Don't mod here anymore please.
My map's location has changed.
It's here now: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/199493

Thanks! :D


IGNORE!
Problem fixed :D
Topic Starter
-Nya-

No_Gu wrote:

M4M from my queueu

sry for the delay

there should be a diff gap.make another normal diff or rename your easy to normal.I personally suggest making a normal
this is such a beautiful song I'm working on the Normal,why not add a silent sliderslide? Will think about it
change offset to -1017 to change the downbeat.and after this,change your NC I'm gonna keep the offset as it is now

[Easy]
00:00:670 (1,3) - add whislte for both head and end Added
00:06:670 (1,2) - add whistle Added
00:22:983 (1,2,3) - 2,3 are overlapped .and these notes aren't good imo.try sth like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1893585 orz but you need to chang the notes after these if you changed this Did something else
00:40:983 (1) - add a green line with 30% volume Ok
00:58:983 (1) - 1~2 grids down Don't really understand that, but I did improve that section, because it sucked, but it hopefully looks much better now
add more whistle please I don't like too many hitsounds, but I'll see what I can do
not very good but ok I made alot of changes and improvements to this diff, so hopefully it's better now

[Hard]
in fact no need to use ds.but if you want,it's still ok.and I personally suggest 2.0x or more to let 1/4 notes not overlapped.that will make your map look neater
00:41:356 (2) - don't fit the song imo I'm gonna keep it like it is for now
00:55:231 (5,6) - maybe I did change something there
00:58:981 (1) - make this far from 00:58:606 (4) - .it looks like 1/4 from 00:58:606 (4) - Moved it a bit farther away as you had suggested
hmmm still.not very good Worked on this diff alot
I think it's better to have a remap with slider speed and with the ds which won't overlap 1/4 notes. I changed the slider speed and applied less DS to avoid overlapping; the diff looks better now.
but if you don't want,it's still ok.
still.add more whistle Same as Easy; don't really like too much hitsounds.
Thanks for the mod! :D
HootOwlStar
Hihi from my modding queue :D
Well, I'm here for mod
Mostly my mods are suggestions, so you can always ignore them
And, ignore my English, I know it's poor

General

AiMod wrote:

Uninherited timing points conflict with Hard diff.
So fix please~ Uninherited points (red timing points) should be the same in each diff

Easy

00:00:670 (1,2,3) - Place 00:00:670 (1) at x:176 y:96, followed by 00:02:920 (2,3) placing at x:336 y:292
00:06:670 (1,2) - I think they should both placed at the centre of the grid, that is at x:256 y:192
00:16:232 (1) - No NC
00:20:732 (4) - Suggest making the slider from a clone of 00:19:232 (3)
00:25:982 (3) - Move point x:64 y:256 to x:68 y:232
00:34:982 (1,2,3) - Pattern is not nice for me, try something like this
Note
If you try to follow my mod of 00:34:982 (1,2,3) without changing the notes afterwards, then follow these steps:
1. Move 00:34:982 (1) to x:40 y:244
2. Move slider to x:92 y:228, and add a point at x:152 y:184. The point of the other end of slider should be at x:180 y:112
3. Move 00:36:482 (3) to x:228 y:104
That's all lol
00:42:482 (3) - Move point x:57 y:59 to x:52 y:68 seems better
01:06:482 (3,4) - Try to avoid this pattern on your next beatmap set
01:31:982 (1) - No NC

Normal

00:16:232 (5,6,7) - Suggest making them a reverse slider occupying 3 small ticks
00:34:982 (7) - NC
00:35:357 (1) - No NC
01:16:607 - Add a circle
01:24:857 - ^
I only found these that should be fixed in this diff
I really can't mod Hard so that's all of my mod~

I'm sorry if the mod format is not nice because this is the 1st time I'm trying it
Anyway, love this song so much
So regret just listen Japanese songs recently
Hope your mapset gets ranked soon and GL :D
Shushan
easy
00:52:982- the red dot in the slider is not recommended in easy and normal maps.1,2
00:20:732- this could be prettier if it will be the same as 3
00:25:982-the red dot in the slider is not recommended in easy and normal maps.
normal
01:01:982 - u can do something better in there...
01:09:107- the X of 2 is 496 and the X of 3 is 492, fix it.
hard
00:15:106- better if it will be in the same distance with 4,5
00:23:356 - the Y of 2 is 292 and the Y of 3 is 296. fix it.
00:51:480 not in the same distance like 3,4
01:21:292- not int he same distance
Moeri_old_1
from your M4M Queue!

Easy
Reduce AR, it's quite high for Easy. I'd suggest 2-3.
This should be fixed, both of them.
00:02:920 (2,3) - Overlap is confusing for beginners, suggesting to put circle somewhere else where it doesn't overlap.
00:06:670 (1) - This circle here doesn't make much sense to the rhythm and is hard to know when to hit unless you watch closely on the approach circle, and beginners are not that good yet.
00:15:857 (4,1) - Overlap here as well.
00:30:482 (1,2,3) - Maybe not very necessary right there but it's still best to avoid overlap since your AR is quite high for an Easy.
00:34:982 (1,2,3) - Feels a bit too fast comparing to other parts while not being in Kiai.
01:04:232 - You can add circle here to make rhythm flow.
01:25:607 (4) - Feels wierd to have it there, quite confusing rhythm there even for me, consider removing it.

Normal
This should be fixed as well.
00:52:982 (1,2) - Ending slider on blue polarity and then start circle at red/white is confusing, maybe make another slider that ends at red/white polarity instead?
01:16:607 - Can add a circle here, make rhythm flow.

Hard
First off, this issue which is universal to all your maps, they should have same Uninherited points(the red ones).
00:02:919 (2,3) - I have a feeling that the distance between these are quite confusing because they are too close.
00:12:482 (3,4,5,1) - Confusing distances here, they are nor linear or has equal distance between.
00:33:481 (2,3) - Too close, I would have thought that I had to hit 00:34:607 (3) much earlier than I should have.
00:41:356 (2,3) - A bit too close here too.
00:57:856 (3,4) - I'm pretty sure more than 70% of the players who plays this map for the first time will miss the last reverse on the reverse slider, maybe make like this instead?(how to put it is up to you)
01:31:605 (6,1) - Slightly too close, move it away abit, otherwise confusing.
Topic Starter
-Nya-

HootOwlStar wrote:

Hihi from my modding queue :D
Well, I'm here for mod
Mostly my mods are suggestions, so you can always ignore them
And, ignore my English, I know it's poor

General

AiMod wrote:

Uninherited timing points conflict with Hard diff. Oops, I thought it was the green timing points. Fixed.
So fix please~ Uninherited points (red timing points) should be the same in each diff

Easy

00:00:670 (1,2,3) - Place 00:00:670 (1) at x:176 y:96, followed by 00:02:920 (2,3) placing at x:336 y:292 Ok
00:06:670 (1,2) - I think they should both placed at the centre of the grid, that is at x:256 y:192 Good idea
00:16:232 (1) - No NC Ok
00:20:732 (4) - Suggest making the slider from a clone of 00:19:232 (3) Yeah, I guess it will then look better
00:25:982 (3) - Move point x:64 y:256 to x:68 y:232 Ok
00:34:982 (1,2,3) - Pattern is not nice for me, try something like this Nice suggestion. Changed
Note
If you try to follow my mod of 00:34:982 (1,2,3) without changing the notes afterwards, then follow these steps:
1. Move 00:34:982 (1) to x:40 y:244
2. Move slider to x:92 y:228, and add a point at x:152 y:184. The point of the other end of slider should be at x:180 y:112
3. Move 00:36:482 (3) to x:228 y:104
That's all lol Thanks for the note; it really helped :D
00:42:482 (3) - Move point x:57 y:59 to x:52 y:68 seems better Ok
01:06:482 (3,4) - Try to avoid this pattern on your next beatmap set Ok, thanks for the suggestion. I'll remember that next time
01:31:982 (1) - No NC Ok

Normal

00:16:232 (5,6,7) - Suggest making them a reverse slider occupying 3 small ticks Changed it to a reverse slider
00:34:982 (7) - NC Ok
00:35:357 (1) - No NC Ok
01:16:607 - Add a circle Ok
01:24:857 - ^ Ok
I only found these that should be fixed in this diff
I really can't mod Hard so that's all of my mod~ No prob

I'm sorry if the mod format is not nice because this is the 1st time I'm trying it
Anyway, love this song so much
So regret just listen Japanese songs recently
Hope your mapset gets ranked soon and GL :D Thanks! :)
Thank you for the mod!
Topic Starter
-Nya-

ohad1881 wrote:

easy
00:52:982- the red dot in the slider is not recommended in easy and normal maps.1,2 If other modders complain about it as well, then I'll consider changing it.
00:20:732- this could be prettier if it will be the same as 3 Changed
00:25:982-the red dot in the slider is not recommended in easy and normal maps. ^
normal
01:01:982 - u can do something better in there... Yeah, changed it so it looks better
01:09:107- the X of 2 is 496 and the X of 3 is 492, fix it. Thanks for spotting that. Fixed
hard
00:15:106- better if it will be in the same distance with 4,5 Ok
00:23:356 - the Y of 2 is 292 and the Y of 3 is 296. fix it. Thanks again. Fixed
00:51:480 not in the same distance like 3,4 Fixed
01:21:292- not int he same distance Fixed
Thanks for the mod! :D Will mod your map as well as soon as I can
Modem
Hi! From M4M request!!! Here's my mod for youe beatmap :)

Easy

Change the slider tick rate into two. The slider tick rate's sound will follow the rhytm for the song
00:02:920 (2) Don't use stack there, because this difficulty is for the beginner. Move it away to x: 256 y:200
00:06:670 (1) Don't add a single not there. Because the piano song is so complicated to follow by just a single note. I prefer a small slider from 00:06:295 ~ 00:06:482 and reversed it once
00:36:482 (3) This flow is a bit hard. How about remove this note and make the slider end at 00:36:482 ?
01:17:732 (2) Move it away from 01:16:982 (1). It will make the flow easier to read

Normal

Change the slider tick rate into two
00:37:232 (5) Move it to x: 188 y: 320
00:52:982 (1) Make the slider end at 00:53:572 so it will fit the music
01:03:857 Add a note and whistle there
01:04:232 Add a note
01:04:607 Add a note
00:33:482 Make the same slider like 01:31:232 (1) and flip it vertically
01:36:857 There's a piano sound there, so add a note at x: 432 y: 68

Hard

Change the slider tick rate into two
00:00:670 (1) Whistle there
00:01:420 (3) Whistle there
00:01:795 (4) Whistle there
00:02:920 (2) Whistle there
00:03:670 (3) Whistle there
00:04:420 (5) Whistle there
00:14:544 Add a note
00:14:732 (6) Move it to x: 192 y: 240
00:16:232 (2, 3, 4) NC and change the volume into 40%
00:19:607 (1, 2, 3) Move it closer from each other
00:29:732 (2) Move it closer to 00:28:982 (1)
01:07:419 (4, 5, 6) Move it closer from each other
01:30:107 (3) Whistle there
01:31:419 (5) Whistle there

Hope it will help you and Good luck! (^ w ^)
Topic Starter
-Nya-
Awesome Insane GD, HootOwlStar!
Thanks so much! :D
Topic Starter
-Nya-

A i k a wrote:

from your M4M Queue!

Easy
Reduce AR, it's quite high for Easy. I'd suggest 2-3. It is 3
This should be fixed, both of them. Fixed
00:02:920 (2,3) - Overlap is confusing for beginners, suggesting to put circle somewhere else where it doesn't overlap. Ok
00:06:670 (1) - This circle here doesn't make much sense to the rhythm and is hard to know when to hit unless you watch closely on the approach circle, and beginners are not that good yet. Changed it to a short reversed slider
00:15:857 (4,1) - Overlap here as well. No change
00:30:482 (1,2,3) - Maybe not very necessary right there but it's still best to avoid overlap since your AR is quite high for an Easy. No change
00:34:982 (1,2,3) - Feels a bit too fast comparing to other parts while not being in Kiai. Made a change; removed last hitcircle and made slider longer
01:04:232 - You can add circle here to make rhythm flow. Added a circle
01:25:607 (4) - Feels wierd to have it there, quite confusing rhythm there even for me, consider removing it. Removed

Normal
This should be fixed as well. Fixed
00:52:982 (1,2) - Ending slider on blue polarity and then start circle at red/white is confusing, maybe make another slider that ends at red/white polarity instead? I ended it at white polarity
01:16:607 - Can add a circle here, make rhythm flow. Ok

Hard
First off, this issue which is universal to all your maps, they should have same Uninherited points(the red ones). Fixed all of them
00:02:919 (2,3) - I have a feeling that the distance between these are quite confusing because they are too close. Moved the hitcircle a bit away from the slider
00:12:482 (3,4,5,1) - Confusing distances here, they are nor linear or has equal distance between. I think it's okay now
00:33:481 (2,3) - Too close, I would have thought that I had to hit 00:34:607 (3) much earlier than I should have. Fixed
00:41:356 (2,3) - A bit too close here too. Fixed
00:57:856 (3,4) - I'm pretty sure more than 70% of the players who plays this map for the first time will miss the last reverse on the reverse slider, maybe make like this instead?(how to put it is up to you) Ok
01:31:605 (6,1) - Slightly too close, move it away abit, otherwise confusing. Ok
Thanks for the mod! :D
Topic Starter
-Nya-

Modem wrote:

Hi! From M4M request!!! Here's my mod for youe beatmap :)

Easy

Change the slider tick rate into two. The slider tick rate's sound will follow the rhytm for the song Good idea; changed
00:02:920 (2) Don't use stack there, because this difficulty is for the beginner. Move it away to x: 256 y:200 I unstacked it, but I moved it to a different spot
00:06:670 (1) Don't add a single not there. Because the piano song is so complicated to follow by just a single note. I prefer a small slider from 00:06:295 ~ 00:06:482 and reversed it once Ok
00:36:482 (3) This flow is a bit hard. How about remove this note and make the slider end at 00:36:482 ? Ok
01:17:732 (2) Move it away from 01:16:982 (1). It will make the flow easier to read Ok; made a sort of triangle pattern

Normal

Change the slider tick rate into two Ok
00:37:232 (5) Move it to x: 188 y: 320 Ok
00:52:982 (1) Make the slider end at 00:53:572 so it will fit the music Fixed
01:03:857 Add a note and whistle there Ok
01:04:232 Add a note Ok
01:04:607 Add a note Added
00:33:482 Make the same slider like 01:31:232 (1) and flip it vertically No, I think the wavy slider fits the music more
01:36:857 There's a piano sound there, so add a note at x: 432 y: 68 I did add a note,but placed it somewhere else.

Hard

Change the slider tick rate into two Ok
00:00:670 (1) Whistle there Ok
00:01:420 (3) Whistle there Ok
00:01:795 (4) Whistle there Ok
00:02:920 (2) Whistle there Ok
00:03:670 (3) Whistle there Ok
00:04:420 (5) Whistle there Ok
00:14:544 Add a note No change
00:14:732 (6) Move it to x: 192 y: 240 Ok
00:16:232 (2, 3, 4) NC and change the volume into 40% Changed
00:19:607 (1, 2, 3) Move it closer from each other No change
00:29:732 (2) Move it closer to 00:28:982 (1) No change; I want jumps
01:07:419 (4, 5, 6) Move it closer from each other No
01:30:107 (3) Whistle there Ok
01:31:419 (5) Whistle there Ok

Hope it will help you and Good luck! (^ w ^) Thanks!
Thank you so much for mod! :D
Topic Starter
-Nya-
UPDATED
OscaR CUBE
hey.. :)
m4m from your queue.. :D

General

I think your mapset has a bit-too-loud hitsound.. :D


HOS's Insane

I can't mod insane diff, but i have some suggestions.. :o
00:06:388 (4,5,6) - how about stack this?
00:11:732 (5) - move this slider's head to somewhere like x : 384, y : 248 to follow the previous circle?
00:22:607 (1) - move this a bit down to make flow with next slider??
00:39:482 (5) - move the slider head to x : 144, y : 332 ??
00:49:607 (1) - move this a bit up? like x : 164, y : 204 ??
00:54:294 (5) - move to x : 396, y : 180 ?? and
00:55:232 (6) - make this blanket with (5) ?
00:59:919 (3,4) - what's wrong with the stack?? :D

Hard

00:06:295 - add three - 1/8 stream here??i mean 00:24:107 (3) - flip it vertically and move it somewhere to fit the DS.. :D
00:28:982 (1) - delete the red-point at the slider. make it curve, i mean.. XD beacuse i think curve fits slow song like this..
00:31:044 (4) - fix the distance..
00:46:232 (3,4,5) - why don't stack this like 00:40:232 (1,2,3) - ??
00:57:857 (3) - Ctrl + G ??
01:04:419 (5,6) - stack this with (4)'s end??
01:07:982 (1,2,3) - how about something like this? 01:13:419 (4,5) - same with 01:04:419 (5,6) -
01:13:982 (1,2,3) - how about 01:27:482 (4,5,6) - about the 'stack' thing..
01:30:107 (3) - move to x : 256, y : 292 ?
01:31:232 (4,5,6) - stack..
01:33:107 (2) - make this at the same position as 01:31:607 (6) - ??

Normal

00:01:795 (3) - i think u should make it longer until the red tick, since this is normal diff. :?
00:30:107 (1) - why don't make this blanket with previous cicrle??
00:31:607 (3) - ^
00:40:982 (1,2,3) - make it like this? 00:58:607 (1) - move this to x : 236, y : 116 ?? after that, u must move the rest too.. :D
01:09:482 (3) - i think u want to re-make the shape.. :?

Easy

00:06:295 (1) - i think this sounds a bit weird.. :? how about 1/8 slider?? or just insert break there?? :o
00:18:482 (2) - how about move this to x : 316, y : 284 ??
00:25:982 (3) - delete the red-point, same reason as before.. :3
00:42:482 (3) - move this a bit up ?? like x : 196, y : 36
00:52:982 (1,2) - red-point.. :?
01:05:732 (2,3) - blanket..
01:07:982 (4,5) - ^
01:15:482 (3) - move this to x: 344, y : 132

I think that's all.. :)
Sorry if my mods don't help you so much.. :D :D
HootOwlStar
OscaR CUBE's Mod

OscaR CUBE wrote:

hey.. :)
m4m from your queue.. :D

HOS's Insane

I can't mod insane diff, but i have some suggestions.. :o
00:06:388 (4,5,6) - how about stack this? I did this for purpose but I will change it if there are more mods about this.
00:11:732 (5) - move this slider's head to somewhere like x : 384, y : 248 to follow the previous circle? Fixed.
00:22:607 (1) - move this a bit down to make flow with next slider?? Rethink before remap.
00:39:482 (5) - move the slider head to x : 144, y : 332 ?? Fixed.
00:49:607 (1) - move this a bit up? like x : 164, y : 204 ?? No for this.
00:54:294 (5) - move to x : 396, y : 180 ?? and
00:55:232 (6) - make this blanket with (5) ? Still think about it.
00:59:919 (3,4) - what's wrong with the stack?? :D Oops... Didn't figure it out previously. Fixed.

I think that's all.. :)
Sorry if my mods don't help you so much.. :D :D
Thank you for mod.

My Update
Topic Starter
-Nya-
OscaR CUBE wrote:
General

I think your mapset has a bit-too-loud hitsound.. :D I think it's fine. And there were previous complaints that my hitsounds are too soft. So I'm gonna keep it as it is for now. Will wait to see what other modders have to say

Hard

00:06:295 - add three - 1/8 stream here??i mean No change; I don't think it'll work
00:24:107 (3) - flip it vertically and move it somewhere to fit the DS.. :D Yeah I like it; changed
00:28:982 (1) - delete the red-point at the slider. make it curve, i mean.. XD beacuse i think curve fits slow song like this.. Ok. Fixed
00:31:044 (4) - fix the distance.. Yeah, I don't even know why I did that :P
00:46:232 (3,4,5) - why don't stack this like 00:40:232 (1,2,3) - ?? I want to mix it up a bit, so that it's not the same patterns over and over.
00:57:857 (3) - Ctrl + G ?? Ok
01:04:419 (5,6) - stack this with (4)'s end?? Ok
01:07:982 (1,2,3) - how about something like this? No, I like mine better. 01:13:419 (4,5) - same with 01:04:419 (5,6) - No change; I want to try different patterns
01:13:982 (1,2,3) - how about Ok; changed 01:27:482 (4,5,6) - about the 'stack' thing.. No change
01:30:107 (3) - move to x : 256, y : 292 ? Good idea, that would make the flow better; fixed
01:31:232 (4,5,6) - stack.. No change; I also want to try and prevent boredness when playing that pattern
01:33:107 (2) - make this at the same position as 01:31:607 (6) - ?? Good idea; stacked

Normal

00:01:795 (3) - i think u should make it longer until the red tick, since this is normal diff. :? It sounds a bit weird to me if I do that. I'll consider changing it if other modders also complain about it. No change
00:30:107 (1) - why don't make this blanket with previous cicrle?? I want to use different slider shapes; no change
00:31:607 (3) - ^ ^
00:40:982 (1,2,3) - make it like this? Ok, I like it; changed 00:58:607 (1) - move this to x : 236, y : 116 ?? after that, u must move the rest too.. :D Changed
01:09:482 (3) - i think u want to re-make the shape.. :? No change

Easy

00:06:295 (1) - i think this sounds a bit weird.. :? how about 1/8 slider?? or just insert break there?? :o I inserted a break
00:18:482 (2) - how about move this to x : 316, y : 284 ?? Ok
00:25:982 (3) - delete the red-point, same reason as before.. :3 Fixed
00:42:482 (3) - move this a bit up ?? like x : 196, y : 36
00:52:982 (1,2) - red-point.. :? No change
01:05:732 (2,3) - blanket.. No, I want the head of the slider to be in-line with the previous hitcircles.
01:07:982 (4,5) - ^ I tried to improve the blanket
01:15:482 (3) - move this to x: 344, y : 132 Ok; fixed

I think that's all.. :)
Sorry if my mods don't help you so much.. :D :D It did help me, thanks!
Thanks for the mod!! :D
Topic Starter
-Nya-
UPDATED
Yuthuil
Hi from m4m

General:
Maybe add a silent slider sound.
Easy:

I think that slider velocity 1.10 fits this difficulty better than 1.40.
AR two to one?

00:11:732 (1,2) - Blanket properly.
00:13:232 (2,3) - ^
00:37:982 (1,2) - this looks extremely unappealing, try this ---> http://puu.sh/b8DiT/88446ffe9b.jpg
00:46:982 (1,2) - the rhythm here fees weird.
00:50:732 (3,4) - blanket properly.
00:52:982 (1,2) - Tidy up, make symmetrical.
00:58:232 (4,1) - blanket properly.
01:04:982 (1,2) - I think you should map the vocals here, it fits better imo.
01:11:732 (2,3) - blanket properly.
01:25:982 (1) - this spinner kinda feels forced and doesn't allow me to enjoy the map as much as I'd like to, so I think you should map the instruments here.
01:28:982 (1,2) - rhythm feels weird
01:34:232 (5,1) - blanket properly.
01:28:982 I think you should make the hitsound volume much lower here.

Overall: The map has a lot of blanketing errors which ruin the map.

Normal:

HP drain rate, three or four, AR, four to three, OD three or two. SV should be 1.40 I think.

00:01:420 (2,3) - blanketing error.
00:18:107 (2,3) - D: please blanket properly
00:21:482 (4) - slider tail end at x196 y288
00:24:107 (3,4) - blanket properly.
00:30:107 (1) - how to say, it's kind of like old mapping style, which can't be ranked. so tidy up please :D
00:37:982 (1) - fix like this ----> http://puu.sh/b8E2x/4d754bfab2.jpg
00:50:732 the beat here shouldn't be ignored imo
00:54:107 (2,3) - please blanket properly.
01:01:982 (2) - symmetry please :D
01:14:357 (2) - ctrl+g? the flow is better like that.
01:19:982 (1,3) - tidy up, symmetry pls
01:22:607 (5,1) - blanket, like this ---> http://puu.sh/b8EfW/880942b1ce.jpg

Overall: The blanketing and rhythm need some work :D

Hard:

At least AR 6.

00:04:795 (6) - tidy up...perhaps try this ----> http://puu.sh/b8ErM/48e770e2e5.jpg
00:28:607 (4,1) - stack with 1's tail properly.
01:19:982 (1,3) - clone 3 of one.

Overall: Okay rhythm, but it really need tidying up, I stopped pointing the neatness issues out since there are way too many.

Insane:

AR 7?

00:24:482 (5) - make symmetrical
00:32:357 (4) - tidy up
01:28:982 (1,2,3,4,5) - It looks like a circle XD expand to make it more star like maybe
Topic Starter
-Nya-

Yuthuil wrote:

Hi from m4m

General:
Maybe add a silent slider sound. I'll think about it
Easy:

I think that slider velocity 1.10 fits this difficulty better than 1.40. I'm okay with how it is now; no change
AR two to one? Changed it to two

00:11:732 (1,2) - Blanket properly. Tried to improve the blanket
00:13:232 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:37:982 (1,2) - this looks extremely unappealing, try this ---> http://puu.sh/b8DiT/88446ffe9b.jpg Ok; fixed
00:46:982 (1,2) - the rhythm here fees weird. Changed it, so hopefully it's not that weird anymore
00:50:732 (3,4) - blanket properly. Did something else
00:52:982 (1,2) - Tidy up, make symmetrical. Changed alot of things here
00:58:232 (4,1) - blanket properly. I think it looks okay . . .
01:04:982 (1,2) - I think you should map the vocals here, it fits better imo. No change
01:11:732 (2,3) - blanket properly. Tried to improve it
01:25:982 (1) - this spinner kinda feels forced and doesn't allow me to enjoy the map as much as I'd like to, so I think you should map the instruments here. No change; I don't think it's forced. It fits with the vocal.
01:28:982 (1,2) - rhythm feels weird I don't think the rhythm is weird . . .
01:34:232 (5,1) - blanket properly. Ok
01:28:982 I think you should make the hitsound volume much lower here. Yeah, lowered the volume

Overall: The map has a lot of blanketing errors which ruin the map.

Normal:

HP drain rate, three or four Changed to 4, AR, four to three Changed to 4, OD three or two Changed it to a 2. SV should be 1.40 I think. No change

00:01:420 (2,3) - blanketing error. Ok
00:18:107 (2,3) - D: please blanket properly Ok, no prob
00:21:482 (4) - slider tail end at x196 y288 I ended it at Y:284, so that the slider is still blanketing the previous hitcircle properly
00:24:107 (3,4) - blanket properly.
00:30:107 (1) - how to say, it's kind of like old mapping style, which can't be ranked. so tidy up please :D Oh, I didn't know that; changed to normal slider
00:37:982 (1) - fix like this ----> http://puu.sh/b8E2x/4d754bfab2.jpg I suck at making sliders like that, so I changed it into a wavy slider
00:50:732 the beat here shouldn't be ignored imo No change; I want to keep it a long slider like that one
00:54:107 (2,3) - please blanket properly. Ok; made some other changes too
01:01:982 (2) - symmetry please :D I hope it looks better now
01:14:357 (2) - ctrl+g? the flow is better like that. Ok; changed
01:19:982 (1,3) - tidy up, symmetry pls Ok; tried to tidy it up
01:22:607 (5,1) - blanket, like this ---> http://puu.sh/b8EfW/880942b1ce.jpg Blanketed

Overall: The blanketing and rhythm need some work :D

Hard:

At least AR 6. Ok

00:04:795 (6) - tidy up...perhaps try this ----> http://puu.sh/b8ErM/48e770e2e5.jpg Changed
00:28:607 (4,1) - stack with 1's tail properly. I can't stack it more properly than this
01:19:982 (1,3) - clone 3 of one. Ok

Overall: Okay rhythm, but it really need tidying up, I stopped pointing the neatness issues out since there are way too many. Yes, I now see how many tidy errors there are. I tried to tidy up every problem I saw.
Thanks so much for your mod! :D
Topic Starter
-Nya-
UPDATED
DizzeY
Rakutenshi mod que~
[HOS's Insane]
00:04:607 (2) - Remove,but it's a preference
00:10:982 (1,2,3,4) - Move them closer so the SV wouldn't be a big surprise
01:07:232 (5) - Clap
01:09:294 (5) - Clapp
01:13:232 (8) - Clap
01:18:294 (4) - Clup
01:22:982 (3) - Clap
01:24:482 (3) - ^
00:59:919 (3,4) - Blanket
[Hard]
01:24:482 (3) - Clap to the end
01:24:482 (3) - ^
01:24:482 (3) - Clap to the beginning
01:23:732 (2) - Clap
01:28:232 (1) - Finish to the end
[Normal]
00:02:545 (1) - Red thick
00:02:545 (1) - http://puu.sh/bfqDU/c1139a2012.jpg
Topic Starter
-Nya-

TheDizzeY wrote:

Rakutenshi mod que~
[Hard]
01:24:482 (3) - Clap to the end I did put in clapsounds
01:24:482 (3) - ^
01:24:482 (3) - Clap to the beginning
01:23:732 (2) - Clap Ok
01:28:232 (1) - Finish to the end Ok
[Normal]
00:02:545 (1) - Red thick
00:02:545 (1) - http://puu.sh/bfqDU/c1139a2012.Followed your suggestion
Thanks for the mod! :D
Jere-Chan
おはよう ございます! (good morning) I found this mapset on my modding que ^_^
so maybe lets get started
(cringe af)

Easy:
nothing to mod cause its already very good

Normal:
00:01:795 (3) - make it from this to this
00:05:170 (3) - this shouldnt be here. Delete that cause it doesnt feel right if its there

Hard:
00:04:420 (5) - move it from to

HOS's Insane:
nothing to mod :p gj!
Topic Starter
-Nya-

Jere-Chan wrote:

おはよう ございます! (good morning) I found this mapset on my modding que ^_^
so maybe lets get started

Easy:
nothing to mod cause its already very good Thanks! :)

Normal:
00:01:795 (3) - make it from this to this Ok; fixed
00:05:170 (3) - this shouldnt be here. Delete that cause it doesnt feel right if its there You're right; removed

Hard:
00:04:420 (5) - move it from to Sure, fixed
Thanks for the mod! :D
[ Nyx ]
Hey uh doing M4M from your queue! (this one: t/239444)

Boxes with '^' above them just refer to the mod above.

Please note that these are just suggestions. You don't need to follow them if you don't like it.

[General]

It seems your map lacks a few of hit sounds. Try tossing some claps on every 2nd & 4th beat in a measure.

[ HOS's Insane]

00:56:919 (5) - Why not try this formation? Of course, you're welcome to spread it out more if you so wish.
00:59:919 (3) - Like this maybe? IMO I think this looks a lot better than where it was before.
01:15:294 (5) - Instead of straight why not curved like this. This flows nicely towards the next note as well.
01:16:607 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - This formation is kind of iffy, I sort of cut the flows in the middle. Try this.
Please note that I didn't move the notes around much in terms of rotation and all the jazz, so you may to fiddle around around with this a bit. Also fix the notes that come after so that is flow better.

[Hard]

00:28:607 (4,1) - Stack these better
00:31:044 (4) - This note is a bit to close to (3). Select both (4) & (5) and move them both away according to your DS. That day your blanket wont be ruined.
00:33:482 (2) - I would actually curve this slider in a but more that way it flows better to the next note.

[Normal]

For Kiai time, since there really aren't very many hit sounds it doesn't sound as great as it should. So ill just point a few out where claps should be. You'll notice a pattern going on so try to implement this into all of your other difficulties as well. (I've already stated what you should do in the general section)

01:05:732 (3) - Clap
01:06:482 (5) - ^ on the slider tail
01:07:982 (1) - ^
etc...

01:33:107 (4) - I honestly don't think this note should be here but instead it should be here 01:34:232 . I think this sounds much more fitting

[Easy]

00:19:232 (3,4) - Why not make these 2 slider the same? Ctrl-C, Ctrl-V, Ctrl-J

Well that's about all I could find, sorry if it isn't much. Great map and hope it gets ranked in the future!
Topic Starter
-Nya-

Z3R0Xx wrote:

Hey uh doing M4M from your queue! (this one: t/239444)

Boxes with '^' above them just refer to the mod above.

Please note that these are just suggestions. You don't need to follow them if you don't like it.

[General]

It seems your map lacks a few of hit sounds. Try tossing some claps on every 2nd & 4th beat in a measure.[Hard] I took your advice and added claps where necessary

00:28:607 (4,1) - Stack these better Tried to improve the stack
00:31:044 (4) - This note is a bit to close to (3). Select both (4) & (5) and move them both away according to your DS. That day your blanket wont be ruined. Did something else
00:33:482 (2) - I would actually curve this slider in a but more that way it flows better to the next note. Ok; curved it more

[Normal]

For Kiai time, since there really aren't very many hit sounds it doesn't sound as great as it should. So ill just point a few out where claps should be. You'll notice a pattern going on so try to implement this into all of your other difficulties as well. (I've already stated what you should do in the general section)

01:05:732 (3) - Clap Ok
01:06:482 (5) - ^ on the slider tail Ok
01:07:982 (1) - ^ Ok
etc...

01:33:107 (4) - I honestly don't think this note should be here but instead it should be here 01:34:232 . I think this sounds much more fitting Good idea; fixed

[Easy]

00:19:232 (3,4) - Why not make these 2 slider the same? Ctrl-C, Ctrl-V, Ctrl-J Ok; changed

Well that's about all I could find, sorry if it isn't much. Great map and hope it gets ranked in the future! Thanks! :)
Thank you for the mod! :D
Topic Starter
-Nya-
UPDATED
kakifly
m4m :3

General

- i'm not sure if the anime uses the romanized source or not but heres the japanese version if you want to change the source ストライク・ザ・ブラッド
- please add these to the tags [ SutoBura, Sutoraiku za Buraddo ]
- add in a blank slider slide ? http://puu.sh/biDQI/39f1ca96cf.wav

Easy

- i suggest you keep the OD and AR a bit more balanced so lower the OD a bit
- 00:00:670 (1,2,3) - i think this follows the music a bit better; - 00:08:170 (1) - remove this and start the spinner there; a random circle is a bit hard for easy IMO, remember to length the spinner by 1/4 if you do
- 00:15:857 (4,5) - avoid stacking in easy
- 00:27:482 (4) - blanket is just a bit off. recheck please xD
- 00:34:982 (1,2) - just follow the instrumentals here and try to keep a consistent beat; so.. it should look something like this - 00:37:982 (1,2) - recheck blanket
- 00:49:232 (2) - at this point there is a bit too much repeat sliders imo
- 01:05:732 (2,3) - blanket
- 01:31:982 (3,4,5) - i suggest doing the same thing as 01:28:982 (1,2) - since the beat on 5 isnt very strong for a circle
- 01:37:982 (1) - end spinner on red tick ( 01:39:857 )

Normal

- Please do cs 3.5 and lower OD & HP by 1
- 00:00:670 (1,2) - please avoid 1/4 spacings in normal
- 00:03:670 (1) - move to x304 y192 so the overlap is more organized (make adjustments to 00:04:795 (2) - if you do this)
- 00:19:607 (1) - the repeat starts on a strong beat; i highly suggest you change this part so either a circle or slider starts at 00:19:982
- 00:22:607 (1) - same here; ^ 00:22:982 is important
- 00:24:107 (3) - remove; i dont think you should random map the vocals here
- 00:39:482 (3) - add whislte on tail
- 01:03:857 (3,4,1) - remove; i dont think mapping this part is necessary
- 01:37:982 (1) - same as easy

Hard

- you're missing a beat at 00:02:545
- 00:05:543 - make these into a 1/2 slider they are not strong enough to be mapped as circles imo
- 00:16:794 put something here; either a circle or get a 1/4 repeat slider
- 00:28:607 (4) - stack better; move to x211 x236
- 01:01:982 (2,3,4,5,6) - imo no need to map here
- 01:37:982 (1) - same as easy

HOS's Insane

- 00:10:982 (1,2,3,4) - is a bit overmapped; if you listen to the music there is only one note.. i just suggest a slider like this; you can make it a jump if you want - clap is a bit loud imo lower hitsounds a bit
- 00:35:919 (2,3,4,5,6) - again a bit overmapped; have a note every thing you hear the piano; make it a jum[ if you want
- 01:01:982 (1) - end this spinner somewhere else 01:04:982 is a very important beat and a note should most definitely start on it
- 01:05:732 (1,2,3) - i dont really get what these are following
- 01:14:732 (2,3,4) - fix spacing


thats all~ good luck with your beatmap !
FlobuFlobs
I can't really mod normal/hards but i will try, i feel guilty xD


highly recommended
Suggestion
Normal stuff


[General]
00:11:010 - this offset here is = 11010, you can hear how it goes off on the endsource: ストライク・ザ・ブラッド and move Strike the Blood to the tagsKeep the breaks in all diffs the same, remove them and disable letterbox during breaks or add them in hard and insane and fix in normal or easy the break timewould change the obeject colour to some softer one
Combo1 : 159,223,223
Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 159,159,223
Combo4 : 191,64,191
This one is just my own opinion so you can ignore it, i would change the BG to something more unique
the actual one looks like the first googled pic lol

[HoS's Insane]
get your NC's clean lol, it feels random placed00:00:857 - heres nothing, so let 00:00:670 (1) - end on 00:01:045 - , same goes for 00:01:795 (5) - make it one tick longer00:10:982 - Change volume to 30% here cuz its a slow n quiet partalso increase spacing a bit starting at 00:10:982 since there are starting more instruments00:10:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make the placement a bit smoother, it look like they have ugly corner in their pattern xD
00:16:982 - from here on again a tiny spacing increase but not too much because here are starting vocals00:20:544 (3) - ctrl+g this one to emphasize 00:21:107 (4) - a bit better? would also move 00:21:107 (4) - to x:340, y:168 to avoid overlapping00:25:982 (3) - dont follow here the lyric with the repeat because you are getting the first vocal but you ignoring the following vocals, better follow the piano here and repeat at 00:26:732 - , <- it also emphasize 00:27:857 (4,5,6) - nice00:43:794 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is almost unreadable00:46:982 (2) - like above00:52:888 - heres nothing, also it makes no sense to go high bpm at the slow song xD01:15:294 (5) - 01:16:982 (2,4) - 01:19:794 (1,3) - dont curve these slider so much

[Hard]
00:00:670 (1) - why does this slider end with red corner lol, how did you even do that LOL, 00:00:670 (1) - curve this a bit more to the following cirlces
00:04:795 (6,7,8) - remove then and add 00:04:420 (5) - here a slider, theres absolute nothing in the song there and you shouldnt overmapp a hard00:04:420 (5) - heres again nothing, a circle here 01:10:607 - and a slider from 01:10:794 - to 01:11:357 - would fit better00:23:357 (2) - 00:24:107 (3) - dont curve them so much >-<, make it more like 00:26:357 (4) - its way better01:18:107 (2,3) - if you tried to blank it, its too low lol00:44:357 (2) -

[Normal]
You have to keep the same DS at a normal / easy otherwise its unrankable as far as i know00:31:232 (2,3) - 00:33:857 (5,6) - let the slider point to the next circles direction, flows better00:52:232 (6) - this slider on the red tick plays strange, remove repeat and move it to the white tick should fix it00:54:107 (2,3) - like above00:22:607 (1) - this slider feels miss placed, a normal curved slider would play better, 00:37:982 (1) - here its nice01:21:857 (4) - this one breaks the flow, 01:21:107 (3) - this one should point at 01:21:857 (4) - 01:25:982 (5) - the curves are way to much lol01:27:107 (6) - curve this abit? you are doing a curve with the circles so why not together with the slider?


ive tried but i just cant mod easy diff xD and before i mod it wrong i let it out
fm4a93au04
Hello , from my queue .

fm4a93au04's standard modding queue

Let’s start .

My mod
[Easy]

00:02:920 (2) – Remove W ( whistle ) .

00:03:670 (3) – Remove W at end .

00:00:670 (1,2,3) – Maybe try this ?



Or :



… I just want it be a symmytry =..= . In order to take this picture ( to let 1,2,3 appeare in one scane ) , I do this :



Original :



00:08:357 (1) – Later it 1/2 beat ( it will start at 00:08:545 . ) , end at the same place ( 00:10:982 . ) .

00:11:732 (1) – Add W at head . Blenket better , like :



00:13:232 (2) – W .

00:13:982 (3) – Add a 10% ~ 25% vol. F ( finish ) at end ( I use 25% ) .



I think it’s not bad =..= . Just need to change back to 50% vol. at 00:15:294 .

00:15:857 (4) – Add D-F . With this :



You can use D ( Drum ) – C ( Clap ) , W , F without adding a inheriting line ( green line ) .

00:16:232 (5) – Head D-C , reverse arrow ( 00:16:607 ) D-F , end F .

00:34:982 (1,2) – Why here suddenly chasing vocal sound ? I think beginner can’t accept it …… and it is strange for me too . I suggest you follow BG sound here , not vocal ( suggetion is always suggestion , so you can ignore me for sure =ㄦ= ) .

00:39:482 (2) – Make red point on tick ? like :



Since there is a piano sound on the tick . End D-C .

00:44:732 (4) – Remove W at reverse .

00:46:982 (1) – Try this ?



Just for a reference .

00:51:482 (3) – Add W at head . Remove W at end .

00:52:982 (1) – Add F at head .

00:58:982 (1) – Add F or N-F at head .

01:01:982 (1,2) –Delete 1 and 2 , add a note with N-H at 01:01:982 . , and 01:02:357 ~ 01:04:232 spinner . I think it’s better …

… I think N-C not very fit this song so … I’ll recommand you some sound at the end .

01:31:982 (3) – Remove W at head .

01:33:107 (4) – Remove W .

01:36:857 (3) – Remove W at head and end .

[Normal]

00:00:670 (1) – Remove W at head .

00:01:420 (2) – W .

00:03:295 – Add a note ? Or make a reverse slider . A example :



If you add reverse , then 00:02:920 – W .

00:03:670 (5) – Remove W at head , add W at end .

00:04:795 (6) – Remove W .

00:15:107 (4) – Why not this ?



00:15:107 (4) – Head add F 25% ( or 30% ) .

00:16:232 (5) – Add D-C at head , D-F at reverse and end .

00:16:982 (1) – Head F . Add why 70% vol. ? It's too loud I think .



00:22:607 (1,2) – I prefer it ( do a overlap on 2’s head )



00:40:232 (4) – D-C .

00:46:982 (1,2,3) – Why not this ?



00:49:982 (5) - :



00:54:107 (2,3) – I prefer to :



01:01:982 (2,3) – Similar as Easy . Try to compose it in your style

<- He is a lazy man ~ =ㄦ= .

[Hard]

About sound suggestion , just copy E / N to H . Since sound change can apply at all diff .

So , I focus on rhythm and compose here .

00:00:670 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – Why not add a x0.5 slider speed to make a beginning ?



I make a beginning for you , just copy the code to your map . Remenber open a new diff name as “ my lab ” , “ modding area “ … or something . You can feel it once before you map it . But , composing is in random , just feeling the clicking and mouse movement … If you like it , then try to map it in your style .

Obj ( object ) :

348,264,670,5,0,0:0:0:0:
348,264,1045,2,0,L|375:222,1,50,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,252,1795,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,252,2732,5,0,0:0:0:0:
148,252,2920,2,0,L|120:288,2,25,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,88,3670,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,248,4045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,248,4420,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,4795,1,4,0:0:0:0:

Timing Points :

670,750,4,2,0,30,1,0
670,-200,4,2,0,30,0,0
3857,-200,4,2,0,15,0,0
4232,-200,4,2,0,10,0,0
4607,-200,4,2,0,5,0,0

00:10:982 – Here I’ll make a x0.75 for you . Same , just a reference ~ If you like then compose in your style ~

Obj :

132,232,10982,6,0,P|83:148|112:100,1,150.000005722046,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,152,12482,2,0,P|429:236|400:284,1,150.000005722046,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,275,13982,5,4,0:0:0:0:
276,224,14357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,340,14732,1,0,1:0:0:0:
372,160,15107,2,0,P|340:120|288:108,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
192,240,16232,5,8,0:3:0:0:
192,240,16419,1,4,0:3:0:0:
192,240,16607,1,4,0:3:0:0:
172,356,16982,6,0,P|132:340|88:296,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,228,17544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,152,17732,2,0,P|125:125|185:109,1,100

Time points :

10982,750,4,2,0,50,1,0
10982,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,20,0,0
11732,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
13794,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,20,0,0
14169,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
14544,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,20,0,0
15107,-200,4,2,0,30,0,0
16232,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
16232,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
16977,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0

That is a lot of things can be improve before it be ranked .

About the sound … I will found it out and give you link with PM . You can use S-H , and N-H for clap in refrain .

When you do that above , you can call me for mod … if you like my mod =ㄦ= .

And I will gain kds at twice ~~~ ( PUNCH )

Maybe you can remap it other day . Why ? This my map for a reference .

Before remap :

Perfume - MY COLOR

After remap :


Perfume - MY COLOR( Short Ver. )

… So , you can see the difference between them … ( I’m not call you to mod my map , I just want to tell you the benefits of remapping … )

Something you are very familiar at once , when you do it twice ( remap) , that will be very fast ~ isn’t it ?

All right ~ That’s all what I want to say .

Good luck to your map ~
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