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moonlightleaf
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moonlightleaf
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年8月9日 at 13:28:42

Artist: Halozy
Title: Secret Sister Complex
Source: Touhou
Tags: U.N. Owen was her? Remilia Ritsuka Sumijun
BPM: 153
Filesize: 9143kb
Play Time: 05:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Flandre Scarlet (4.17 stars, 1311 notes)
Download: Halozy - Secret Sister Complex
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#1 App
Are you ready ? Are you a loli ?
送分图诶~
download with Hard & Normal diff →http://puu.sh/8oaeo
download with Hard & Normal diff → http://puu.sh/brpqm.osz <- reup2014/9/9
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-rank : captin1 Scorpiour
some players's testplay, click
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https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1555410
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1573808
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1573915
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1573982 ← DT
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1575565
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1589364 ←OvO
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1589401 ←OvO
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Last edited by moonlightleaf , edited 64 times in total.
-Neipezi
2,266 posts
Joined October 2011
-Neipezi
hihi

[Normal]
- slider tick rate -1?
- AR -1? too fast

[Hard]
00:26:238 (5) - NC add?
00:37:023 - clap add
00:37:415 - finish add
00:38:591 - clap add
00:39:376 - ^
01:38:984 - ^
01:39:768 (1) - ^
03:22:513 (1) - ^
04:40:552 (1) - finish add

[Flandre Scarlet]
01:02:513 (1,2,3,4,5) - (2)(3) to whistle add, (3) to clap add
01:13:689 (1) - ctrl + g?
01:52:513 (5) - NC add
02:16:238 (4,1) - NC change
02:21:337 (1) - clap add
03:19:866 - circle add
03:23:493 (4) - NC add
03:35:062 (4) - clap add
04:29:572 (1) - change to the slide arrow 2?
box
04:31:533 (6) - 1/3 stream change
04:35:585 - circle add
04:40:552 (1) - finish add to the head
05:04:278 (1) - 05:04:180 - here is start point?

good lucky'w'/
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to -Neipezi

[Normal]

- slider tick rate -1? --- i will consider~ no change now

[Flandre Scarlet]

03:23:493 (4) - NC add ----maybe to tell player the next note?

others all fix

thanks for modding ^^/
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Hey, M4M :P
[Hard]
00:23:101 (1,2) - Sounds off, because the head of 00:23:297 (2) - doesn't hit an important beat nor vocals. In cases like this, it isn't necessary for you to put an object on 00:23:297 just for the sake of having it on the big downbeat, - yet it hits nothing. So it sounds really off in the end.
In addition to that, the slider also skips the vocals saying the "cret" in secret, which is heard at 00:23:493.
Try swapping these notes. With the slider now starting at 00:23:101, it will follow smoothly on the vocals "se", and it's tail will hit the finishing word"cret" in secret. And the note now at 00:23:689 will simply hit the "se"
in the next lyric secret.

00:39:572 (4,5) - Nazi suggestion (sorry!) please fix blanket here.

00:46:042 (2) - Consider adding a finish on the tail at 00:46:827 so it hits that loud cymbal crash heard in the music.And it gives a nice strong start to the next stanza.

00:47:023 (3) - NC

01:05:454 (6,1) - Fix blanket here please.

01:11:140 (6) - Sounds weird here, I recommend you follow the strong beats of the music at this part. Try adding a note at 01:11:337 and 01:11:533.

01:37:023 (3) - Should be NC instead of 01:36:827 (1) - since it's the first object to appear in the new rhythmic cycle (marked by the large white tick mark).

01:41:533 (2,3) - Please fix blanket.

01:52:513 (3,4) - Consider swapping these objects timing points. That way, with the slider at 01:52:513, it will follow smoothly on the vocals long hold on the "mu" in musunda.

01:53:886 (6) - Compared to the vocals strong and loud emphasis on the "i-to wa" this object sounds pretty weak. Consider replacing it with 3 separate hit circles.

02:04:474 (2) - Sounds more like a filler here, because it's covering to much of the strong vocals and beats heard. Consider using this rhythm here:


02:09:572 (4) - Same issue as above.


02:17:023 (3) - Consider adding a finish on the tail at 00:46:827 so it hits that loud cymbal crash heard in the music.And it gives a nice strong start to the next stanza.

02:24:082 (1) - Add finish on the head for the cymbal crash heard here.
02:36:631 (1) - ^
02:42:905 (1) - ^

02:36:042 (6) - NC, like what you did at 00:52:513 (1) -

02:39:180 (4,5) - Ahem, please fix blanket here as well:


02:49:376 (2) - NC

02:55:454 (3) - Add finish on the head for the cymbal crash heard here.

02:59:964 - 03:01:729 Try this rhythm?


03:03:493 - NC

03:08:003 (1) - Add finish on the head for the cymbal crash heard here.

03:23:690 (5) - Again, another slider that's being used as a filler because it does not go with vocals nor the beats of the music.
Consider making this rhythm for 03:23:493 - 03:25:258:


03:31:141 (7) - ?


03:33:886 (4) - Add finish on the tail for the cymbal crash heard here.

03:35:454 - 03:37:807 same suggestion as 02:04:474 (2) -

03:45:259 (6,1) - Consider using this rhythm here:
The slider on 03:45:454 really helps with the vocals long hold on the "ma".

03:55:063 (1) - Add finish on the head for the cymbal crash heard here.
04:01:337 (3) - ^ And should be NC instead of 04:01:141 (1) - .
04:07:612 (1) - ^

04:07:023 (6) - NC, like what you did at 00:52:513 (1) -

04:13:199 - Has a loud beat here, so consider adding a note here.

04:41:533 - 04:43:297?


04:45:062 (1,2) - Swap timing spots, same reason as 00:23:101 (1,2) -
04:54:278 (5,1) - ^ In this case, you want to go with the beats, since there is no vocals here.

04:45:847 (3,4) - Fix the blanket.

04:55:062 (3) - Consider turning it into a 1/2 slider with a reverse. that way, it can hit the important techno beat hard at 04:55:258.

04:58:592 (3) - Add finish on the tail for the cymbal crash heard here.

05:04:180 (1) - No finish hit sound here? O.o

05:07:023 - 05:08:787 ?


05:14:474 (6,7) - Fix blanket please.
05:31:336 (3,4) - ^
05:36:827 (5,1) - ^

05:38:591 (1) - Add finish on the head for the cymbal crash heard here.
05:44:866 (3) - ^
05:51:141 (1) - ^

Whew, really long map :?
Good luck!
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
泥马这么长还没2kd
[General]
总体音效声音偏低
感觉主歌部分还是缺音效?
[Normal]
00:38:199 (2,3,4) - 保持ds一致 你打开aimod check一下好像还有几个把fix了
00:08:395 (2,3) - 像这样感觉算是没有blanket好 明显中间比两边离下一个note更近 fix一下
00:15:454 - 这里音量30%感觉根本听不到finish声.-.
01:17:807 (8,2) - 感觉AR4的N里这样还是不好看.-.
01:37:023 (1,2,3,4) - N里不建议这样弄antijump.-.
03:08:003 (1,2,3,4) - ^
05:18:199 (1,2) - 搞一下blanket
05:26:042 (4,5) - 滑条尾向上些blanket
[Hard]
00:05:062 (2,3) - 还是blanket问题 你可以拿缩圈来check
00:12:317 (1,2,3) - 可以试试这样
美丽

00:20:748 (6) - 可以delete因为这里没音
00:28:003 (1,2) - 这里太丑修改一下
00:39:572 (4,5) - 修一下blanket
00:47:023 (3) - 可以删 正好突出前后的重音
01:36:042 (3,4,5,6) - 这一带则呢没音效.-.
01:40:160 (3,4,2,3) - blanket
01:59:964 (6,7) - ^
02:22:317 (5,1) - ^
03:05:846 (4) - 好丑 不如
这样
03:38:004 (3,4,5) - 还是建议统一间距
[Insane]
00:07:023 (1) - 感觉没必要而且影响打击感
02:43:591 - 跟vocal就不应该漏这里
02:45:258 (5) - 跟vocal的话感觉delete这个好些
02:47:219 (3,4) - 节奏上对调试试
02:49:866 - 后面跟了vocal的话这里也可以跟上啊
I挺清爽的 射 8-)
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to ZZHBOY

泥马这么长还没2kd ---2333333

[Normal]

00:12:317 (1,2,3) - 可以试试这样 ----好丑= =

[Insane]

02:45:258 (5) - 跟vocal的话感觉delete这个好些 --- 不了 有音= =

I挺清爽的 射 ---2333 攒的1KD又还我了 :)

感谢mod ^^/
holyKoT
15 posts
Joined April 2014
holyKoT
Hi! M4M pls normal diff https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/202622
Normal
1) 00:02:513 (2,3) - Maybe curve them a bit? Looks a bit strange comparing to other sliders.
2) 00:10:356 (3,4) - Change curve of that slider for more flowy pattern?
3) 00:23:689 (2,3,1) - Kinda confusing, change slider placement so his end with arrow will be futher to left?
4) 01:02:513 (1) - Make this slider curvier? Iit will connect better with previous slider and following hit circle. (Example)
5) 01:42:513 (4) - Rotate it a bit to the right? Looks strange, this feels better. Makes it looking like 02:13:101 (1,2,3).
6) 03:04:866 (1,2,3) - ^
7) 04:59:768 (1,2,3,4) - Seems like distance between them is different.
8) 05:45:650 (2) - Maybe change slider to something like this? Makes it more like other patterns.

I would argue for changing slider tick rate too. It doesn't make any difference except for weird looking spam of slider ticks and another 600 combo.
Hard
1) 01:29:180 (3) - start -> x:100 y:184
end -> x:80 y:320
2) 01:52:709 (4) - center -> x:312 y:244
end -> x:248 y:264
3) 02:00:160 (7) - center -> x:264 y:116
end -> x:328 y:136
4) 02:04:474 (2,3) - here could be a better placement
5) 02:14:670 (1) - maybe make this blanket with an end of previous slider
6) 02:17:023 (3) - end -> x:284 y:276
7) 03:35:454 (2,3) - same as 4)
8) 05:00:552 (3) - center -> x:80 y:272
end -> x:76 y:332
9) 05:52:709 (1) - center -> x:180 y:88
end -> x:200 y:144
10) 05:53:886 (5) - same problem as above
Fia
Fia
我记得drainingtime要到6min才能app 至少5min47有点悬吧
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

PinkHeart wrote:

我记得drainingtime要到6min才能app 至少5min47有点悬吧

前俩天新规则 5分钟即可 APP 233
WinglessAsura
29 posts
Joined April 2014
WinglessAsura
Here's my mod ! :)

Flandre Scarlet


  • (1). 00:40:356 add an object here.
    (2). 00:50:944 would be better if change to long slider instead of repeating slider.
    (3). 02:20:944 change to repeating slider.
    (4). 02:50:356 change the slider to normal object to follow the song rhytm
    (5). 02:56:827 change the slider to normal object.
General

(1). the hitsound, would be better if there's more sound from hitsound instead just silently following the song rhytm.
(2). at some point i find that you not following the song rhytm, there's should be no beat in the song but you put your beat there (do you understand ?)
(3). jumps!! i think your map worth some object jump, coz judging from the diff its above normal


well, thats my mod :)
i didnt mod much coz i think ur map is close to complete, i only mod something that i feel "less".
good job and good luck !!! :) :D
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
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Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to h0lyK0T

all fix . update in this you can see the download with Hard and Normal diff
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to WinglessAsura

(1). 00:40:356 add an object here. --ok
(2). 00:50:944 would be better if change to long slider instead of repeating slider. ---i think the repeat is better
(3). 02:20:944 change to repeating slider. --ok
(4). 02:50:356 change the slider to normal object to follow the song rhytm --ok
(5). 02:56:827 change the slider to normal object. --ok

General -- i will consider

thanks for modding ^^/
Sellenite
1,092 posts
Joined September 2013
Sellenite
NM，不用还
音效完全是取决于我的感觉，所以都只是建议

[Flandre Scarlet]
00:32:611 (8) - 删
00:33:297 (3) - 尾巴加clap
00:38:787 (6) - 头加clap，尾取消clap
00:39:768 (4) - 头加clap
00:52:709 (7) - clap和finish一起加
00:58:395 (7) - 尾巴clap
00:58:984 (8) - 加clap
00:59:768 (5) - 头加clap
01:03:689 whistle和clap一起加
01:08:984 (3) - 加whistle
01:09:180 (4) - 头whistle和clap一起加
01:14:670 折返处加whistle
01:19:964 (1,2) - 都加whistle
01:31:729 (4) - 头加whistle
01:33:003 (3) - 尾巴whistle
01:33:493 (5) - 加whistle
01:35:258 头加whistle
01:35:552 折返加clap
01:35:846 加clap
01:36:042 (3) - 改成一个加clap的单点放在01:36:140，现在你的滑条红线放了clap，但重音却是蓝线，仔细听一下
01:51:140 (1) - 头加finish，尾加clap
02:15:454 (3) - 删去whistle

后面又很多部分与上面重复的了，如果觉得好的话就把相同的节奏按照上面的改一下吧
的确不错的，排版和节奏都不错，感觉再修多几次可以问app了

hope it help you！
good luck~
Crystal
Former osu!catch Champion: 2018
1,123 posts
Joined June 2012
Crystal
E N怎么删了;w;
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Sellenite wrote:

NM，不用还
音效完全是取决于我的感觉，所以都只是建议 ---萌得不行（

[Flandre Scarlet]

00:32:611 (8) - 删 ---删了好奇怪

01:36:042 (3) - 改成一个加clap的单点放在01:36:140，现在你的滑条红线放了clap，但重音却是蓝线，仔细听一下 ---改了折返

后面又很多部分与上面重复的了，如果觉得好的话就把相同的节奏按照上面的改一下吧 ---不会音效 后面我弄了一些= =感觉要坑
的确不错的，排版和节奏都不错，感觉再修多几次可以问app了 ---论图易作 bat难求

hope it help you！
good luck~
感谢mod ^^/

[_Crystal] wrote:

E N怎么删了;w; ---因为3diff好难rank 还是弄App吧 虽然NH 我自己觉得还可以= =（但愿
EmingK
341 posts
Joined October 2012
EmingK
送一芬
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
m4m~


Flandre Scarlet

  1. 00:15:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 建议加一堆finish
  2. 00:31:533 (5) - 外圈没包好
  3. 00:33:886 (5) - ^
  4. 01:12:611 - 这里是1/4拍啊, 这里开始slider比较好吧..
  5. 01:14:376 - ^
  6. 01:20:454 - ^
  7. 01:22:905 (3) - 往右放一格233
  8. 01:37:023 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - 这里我觉得可以先减小sv/间距, 然后逐渐增大。
  9. 01:51:925 (3,1) - 外圈没包好
  10. 02:10:944 (2,3,4) - 往右边压3格
  11. 02:16:238 (4) - 这new combo放的...
  12. 02:34:082 (2) - x:156 y:320 比较好看 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1560421
  13. 02:36:238 (2) - 放到前一组(2)那个位置我觉得比较舒服..
  14. 02:46:631 (2) - 这个摆的不好, 建议重摆
  15. 03:27:023 (8) - ^
  16. 03:29:180 (3,5) - 外圈没包好
  17. 03:41:925 (2) - ^
  18. 03:46:042 (2) - ^ 这个我觉得从外向里比较好, 你看看
  19. 04:03:297 (2,3) - 换个顺序, 这间距太近了
  20. 04:31:533 (6) - 这个也是三分吧
  21. 04:47:415 (4) - 往下3格
  22. 05:46:238 (1) - 外圈没包好
试图成绩: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1560497
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

m4m~


Flandre Scarlet

  1. 01:12:611 - 这里是1/4拍啊, 这里开始slider比较好吧.. ---暂不改 要是还有人提再说
  2. 01:14:376 - ^ ^
  3. 01:20:454 - ^^
试图成绩: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1560497 ----这成绩= = 我不会玩I的都1000x额 还是HD
其他都fix

感谢mod ^^/
sjoy
1,032 posts
Joined April 2012
sjoy
[Flandre Scarlet]
我真心觉得AR8 OD7 比较好善良图没必要AR9的
还有的音量少于25%非滑条尾和转圈尾是不允许的
00:08:199 (2) - 感觉可以删了
00:18:101 (5) - 建议S-WHIS S-FIN太吵
00:24:866 (1) - whis
00:24:866 (1) - ^
00:29:376 (4) - ^
00:31:140 这段就下 24CLAP 好 多余的不用下 比如00:32:709 (9) - 没必要下CLAP
00:37:219 (1) - 变成3连+1/2滑条
00:37:807 (2,3) - 合并
00:40:944 (2) - 取消FIN
00:49:180 (5) - whis
01:02:513 (1,2,3,4,5) - 要摆也摆正五角阿
01:17:611 (1) - Whist 代替 FIN
01:18:395 (1) - Whistler 在头而不是尾巴。。WHIS加在重音的地方
01:35:258 (2) - 改成1/1+单点
01:43:493 (5,1,2,3,4) - 。请摆正
01:57:415 (1) - fin
02:00:160 (9) - 滑条太浪费了 建议跟VOCAL
02:07:415 (4,5) - 重音错了 建议这样 http://puu.sh/8uqXX.jpg
02:09:964 (1) - fin
02:13:886 (4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/8ur3D.jpg
02:46:042 (1) - Whistler
03:11:140 (1) - ^
03:11:925 (3) - ^ 这种地方都能加不说其他了
03:22:121 (1) - fin
03:27:219 (9) - 感觉挺扭的，90°转弯
03:31:140 (1) - 滑条太浪费了 建议跟VOCAL
03:34:670 (4) - fin
03:45:454 (1) - fin
04:04:082 (6) - http://puu.sh/8uriM.jpg
04:35:846 (1,2,3) - 没什么意义的话，拉到红线上
05:16:435 (1) - whis
05:21:337 (1) - ^
05:24:474 (1) - fin
05:25:846 (1) - whis
05:27:611 (1) - ^
05:28:984 (7) - fin
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

sjoy wrote:

[Flandre Scarlet]
我真心觉得AR8 OD7 比较好善良图没必要AR9的---好
还有的音量少于25%非滑条尾和转圈尾是不允许的---好
01:35:258 (2) - 改成1/1+单点---不改
其他fix

感谢mod ^^/
hoshisorakiseki
300 posts
Joined January 2012
hoshisorakiseki
打完mod一个
replay-->http://puu.sh/8us4C.osr
00:02:121 (3) - 头部+w
00:04:866 (3,5) - +w
00:06:042 (1,2,3) - 这三个音比较重，却用了更小的音量。+f吧
00:09:964 (9) - +f
00:21:533 + 00:22:317 + 00:22:905 - 感觉漏音
00:31:140 (3) - +c
00:34:866 - 漏音
00:37:219 (1) - 尾部+c
00:38:199 (4) - 头部+f+c
00:39:180 (1,3) - +c
00:45:650 (5) - +w
00:52:513 (6) - +f
01:02:513 (1,2,3,4,5) - 有些强迫症会对这个抓狂
01:17:709 (2) - 删掉
01:48:787 (5) - 开25%的话，会发现鼓点在蓝线上
02:16:238 (1,5) - +w
02:22:513 (1,2,1,3) - +f，是slider就头部+f
02:24:474 (5) - 头尾+f
02:37:709 (6) - 鼓点又在slider中间出现
03:47:219 (1,5) - +w
03:53:493 (1,5) - +c
04:26:435 (1,2,3,4,5,3,4,5) + 04:32:709 (7,1,2,3) - 改成三连打或者1/3 slider
04:35:846 (1,2,3) - 这些还是属于1/3节奏吧，修改方法参考上面
04:40:552 - 04:52:709 -->hitsound呢
04:48:787 + 04:49:572 - 漏音
05:23:101 + 05:23:493 - 漏音
05:30:748 (1,5) - +w
05:37:023 (1,2,1) - +f，是slider就头部+f
05:49:572 (1,5) - +c

感觉就像个音效mod，加油
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to hoshisorakiseki

全部fix

感谢mod ^^/
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
m4m ： http://osu.ppy.sh/s/111386

[Flandre Scarlet]

斯卡雷特这个姓氏可以去掉，感觉diff名字有点长

一开始的whistle你好像是根据音高来下了，虽然这这个whislte偏向乐音但它还是属于噪音的所以我建议你按音重写而不是音高

0.6的减速线在00:01:337 - 也加一根，00:03:101 - 这个1.0换成0.6，因为太鼓

00:10:356 - 这个finish太过强烈了，我建议你换用音叉一类的东西，而且我认为这个位置不需要特别强调

如果要使用normal-hitnormal可以用左上角的sampleset，平时是w，e，r来下whistle，finish，clap的，shift+w，e，r就可以更换soft，normal，drum组

00:37:415 (3,4,5) - 我认为你在滥用finish……连同后面很多地方，这个东西平时就是在开头，中段，结尾用用的，还有偶尔些变奏

我看了下你副歌的音效……额……首先我不建议你为了跟人声跳过长白线的鼓点，而且我建议你现在的clap名字换成finish或者直接用sampleset来改，把它下在1.3，再找个clap下在2.4，大概像这样↓↓↓，另外注意它们的颜色，数字和它们在时间轴上上的位置
cobe
osu file format v12

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[Metadata]
Title:Secret Sister Complex
TitleUnicode:Secret Sister Complex
Artist:Halozy
ArtistUnicode:Halozy
Creator:moonlightleaf
Version:xxd
Source:Touhou
Tags:U.N. Owen was her?
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额，如果忙的话m4m就算了……
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
M4M from my queue

[Scarlet]
00:03:493 (6) - 1grid right
00:05:258 (5,6,7,8,9) - 其实我觉得这样太直的flow不是那么舒服。。
00:06:042 (1,2,3,4) - 我觉得这里应该把前面1/2补上然后把4后面那个1/2空出来吧。。
00:09:964 (8) - 没必要finish吧。。
00:16:238 (5,6,7) - 前后弄起来这个真的不好抓。。换slider吧 要不摆大点
00:18:591 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我觉得这些下的有点莫名啊。。感觉没跟上啥。。又看了下一个原因是你whistle下的不太对导致听起来怪怪的。。然后把3换成3/4然后删掉4的话跟的更好些
00:25:846 (2,3) - 不如在00:25:944加一个。。
00:28:003 (1) - 这边有点空啊 repeat加个whistle
00:46:042 这段开始音量有点小。。 而且这段没跳起来啊 一点都不好玩
01:27:023 (3,1,2) - 这段不如用一个slider旋转2次120好
01:36:435 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 弄好看点呗。。
01:43:689 (6,10) - clap，顺带调调NC
02:23:493 (2) - 等距吧
02:46:042 (1,2) - 别overlap
02:54:866 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - 有点看不下去。。
03:13:297 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 用那个建多边形的工具重新弄下呗。。
04:48:787 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 加点whistle

。。。怎么说呢 个人看法吧，整张图倒是没有什么unrankable这类的大问题。。但是小毛病挺多的。
整张图大部分都很挤。。根本跳不起来，其实挺没意思的。
然后这首歌3/4挺多的。但是挺多你都没抓 听起来怪怪的
最后就是排版问题。。看起来挺乱的
其实主要问题还是感觉跳不起来 不过这也是个人看法罢了。。。说多了别生气
mintong89
3,698 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
六分钟简直夫妻

[Flandre Scarlet]

00:09:572 (6,7) - 这两个circle试试放在 00:08:984 (5,8) - 这两个的中间吧...看起来很扭曲
00:18:591 (1,2) - 有更好的排发吗? 这个感觉太单调了...或许曲slider会比较好?
00:26:238 (1) - CTRL+H?
00:31:925 (6) - 移开点比较好吧...差点Stack住00:31:337 (4) - 这个的感觉了
00:33:886 (5) - 这个有点随便的感觉, 这样比较好?
SPOILER
00:55:454 (7) - 这个的尾部blanket在00:55:062 (6) - 吧...
01:01:336 (3,5) - 这两个(各自)CTRL+G吧? 看起来也挺好玩的
01:14:474 (3) - 移上点吧...太挤了
01:18:199 (7,1) - blanket?
01:31:729 (4,5,1) - 真心觉得太挤了...放开点吧 反正是insane也不必要那么简单吧
01:40:552 (2,3) - blanket? (2尾blanket 3)
01:43:689 (5) - 新段就NC吧? 然后去掉 01:44:474 (1) -
01:51:925 (3) - 太弯了...
01:52:513 (1) - 我觉得CTRL+G flow还比较好, 就算是简单了
01:54:670 (2) - ^
02:00:552 (10) - NC吧...太长了 (去掉02:01:140 (1) - )
02:03:493 (1,2) - 我好像听到1/6...
02:55:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感觉做这样好懒啊...跟vocal吧?
03:33:886 - 有vocal不可忽略啊
03:44:278 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 做个比较好的star吧
03:48:787 (1,3) - blanket?

首先就是NC没处理好...乱七八糟的, 然后就是感觉图整个好挤好弱...反正是app可以放大点吧. 最后就是感觉好单调...一直1/2什么的...加上3/4也不错?
反正我觉得需要加强...

加油.
OblivioN
OblivioN
[Flandre Scarlet]
00:33:297 (3,4,5) - 虽然blanket但是不好看……试试这样
click me
00:35:454 (2,1) - 尽量不要overlap……
00:37:219 (1,2,3) - 黑子说这种重叠不好……
00:37:807 (4,6) - 其实可以blanket
00:38:199-为什么这么多音效……
00:38:199 (5,7) - 不好看……try this
click me
00:40:160 (5,2) - 尝试不要overlap……
00:41:533 (2,4) - 4的尾巴没有和2的尾巴叠好
00:52:709 (7) - finish没必要……
00:54:278-漏音……建议00:52:709 (3) - 从这里开始
01:12:121 (2,4) - 不要overlap……
01:23:886-加个note
01:26:238 (1,2,3) - 调整一下blanket
01:37:611 (6,2) - 2的尾巴可以和6重叠……或者完全不要重叠……
02:03:689 (3,4,5) - 不好看……
02:04:474 (5,6) - 这里也没有包好……
02:15:454可以用slider
02:19:180 (1,2,3) - 红线为啥clap……
02:46:631 (3,7) - overlap or not
03:16:631 (3) - ctrl+g
03:19:964-不要clap……
03:29:180 (3,6) - 尾部可以重叠
04:01:336 (3,5) - 没叠好
04:08:984-删掉whistle
04:46:042 (4) - 为什么这个是歪的哩……
05:01:337 (3,4) - blanket~
05:09:768 (5,6,7) - 不要和05:09:180 (3) - 重叠……

GL~
FlobuFlobs
614 posts
Joined June 2011
FlobuFlobs
Random mod

  1. 00:26:238 (1) - Turn him for a better look? (Alt+H)
    SPOILER
  2. 00:31:337 (4) - to X=103, Y=187 ? for the same spacing between 00:31:533 (5) - and 00:31:925 (6) -
    SPOILER
  3. 00:39:572 (3) - move to X=234, Y=87? ^
    SPOILER
  4. 00:32:513 (8) - blank with 00:31:925 (6) - ?
  5. 00:57:023 (3) - move to X=288, Y=147 ? cuz 00:57:611 (7) -
  6. 00:32:317 (7) - move to X=184, Y=65 and blanke here?
  7. 01:01:140 (2) - move to X=231, Y=246 to fix the stack here with 00:59:768 (5) -
  8. 01:02:121 (5) - move to X=266, Y=76 ^ ?
  9. 01:05:454 (5,1) - fix blanket
  10. 01:23:493 (1,2) - dont space here
  11. 01:24:866 (4,6) - fix blanket
  12. 01:26:238 (1,3) - ^
  13. 01:27:023 (3,1) - ^
  14. 01:37:807 (1,2,3,4) - how about constant the same spacing?
    SPOILER
  15. 01:43:493 - add note here?
  16. 01:44:278 - ^
  17. 01:51:729 (2,3) - fix blanket or the slider lol
  18. 01:53:689 (5) - move to X=246, Y=265, to fix the spacing between 01:53:101 (2,3,4) -
    SPOILER
  19. 01:53:886 (6) - move to X=372, Y=290 cuz the spacing between 01:53:297 (3,4) - ?
    SPOILER
  20. 01:58:003 (2) - move to X=245, Y=236 ?
    SPOILER
  21. 01:58:591 (4) - Alt+G?
  22. 02:03:101 (9) - 02:03:493 (1,2,3) - increase spacing here?
  23. 02:09:670 (6) - fix this circle in the streamfix the stream xD
  24. 02:15:454 (1,1) - increase spacing?
  25. 02:22:513 (1,2,1) - fix blanket
  26. 02:23:689 (3) - move to X=298, Y=242 for a better look?
  27. 02:54:866 (1,2,3) - lower the spacing here to emphasize
  28. 02:56:238 (3) - move it a bit away to avoid stack with 02:56:827 (5) -
  29. 02:57:513 - 02:57:709 - notes here?
  30. 02:58:591 (1,2) - blanket here?
  31. 03:02:905 (5,6) - ^
  32. 03:28:984 (2,3,4,5) - fix blanket
  33. 03:30:944 (8,1) - ^
  34. 03:34:278 (1,2,3,4) - curve this stream a bit for a better look?
  35. 03:51:140 (3) - move to X=214, Y=187 ? it was a bit off from 03:50:356 (6,7,1,2) -
  36. 03:51:336 (4,5,6) - move to x=222 y=48 ? away from 03:50:944 (2) - lol
  37. 03:50:944 (2) - Alt+G, 03:54:082 (4,1) -, 03:54:278 (5,1) - Alt+G ?
  38. 04:02:317 (6,7,8,1) - fix blanket
  39. 04:02:905 (1,3) - avoid stack
  40. 04:03:297 (2,3,4,5,6) - increase the spacing a bit
  41. 04:03:689 (4,1) - avoid stack
  42. 04:10:356 (5) - ^
  43. 04:12:807 (6,7) - seems a bit off
  44. 04:30:356 (3,4,5) - avoid stack
  45. 04:35:846 (1,3) - avoid stack or fix the blanket here
  46. 04:49:964 (1) - just Alt+C this here 04:51:336 - and Alt+H?
  47. 04:56:631 (2,3) - fix blanket
  48. 05:07:807 (2,4) - Alt+G?
  49. 05:18:003 (1,2,3) - this triple seems wierd
  50. 05:28:396 (4,5,6) - ^
  51. 05:46:238 (1,2) - fix blanket
  52. 05:48:003 (1,2) - ^
  53. Move 05:50:552 - away from 05:50:160 -
    SPOILER

    something like this?
  54. 05:53:690 (5,6,1) - fix the line
Well good luck with the map <3
moonlightleaf
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Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
ok， all fix~ :)

thanks for modding~ :)
Regou
1,927 posts
Joined July 2010
Regou
好
[Insane]
怎麼那麼善良啊,hp8,9感覺不錯玩
00:16:238 (5,6,7) - 我靠 怎麼那麼善良啊
我是感覺這裡下了finish感覺可以更加強烈啊,弄跳吧
00:17:807 (4,5) - 這個也是,而且用sldier差評啊
00:22:513 (5) - remove NC
00:23:689 (1) - ^
00:28:003 (1,4) - 不對稱簡直不科學;w;;;;;;;
00:30:356 (5,6) - too easy
00:35:062 (1) - remove clap?
00:37:807 (4,5) - remove finish?
00:38:199 (5) - remove clap
00:40:944 (2) - 頭加clap
00:41:337 (1) - remove nc
00:42:121 (3) - NC
00:42:121 (3,4,5,6) - 這裡感覺不太順啊,可以再考慮下排法
01:08:787 (2,3,4) - 臥槽這spacing 玩著貌似蛋疼
01:07:219 (7) - NC
01:08:003 (1) - Remove NC
01:08:787 (2) - NC
01:16:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感覺不是正六角形,可以弄弄看?
01:27:415 (4,1) - not perfectly blanketed
01:27:611 (1,2) - ^
01:43:493 (5,1,2,3,4) - 不是星形啊,弄下?
02:00:552 (10) - NC
02:01:140 (1) - Remove NC
02:01:925 (6,7,8) - Spacing改大一點?Vocal都唱的那麼用力了QWQ
02:15:454 (1) - 感覺這個位置的kiai可以下點功夫了
這裡先關掉kiai
02:17:807 (1) - 這個位置爆1/4 kiai然後關掉kiai
02:36:042 (1,2) - 這個感覺打起來不太順QWQ
02:39:180 (5,6,7) - spacing不平均注意下~~
03:24:670 (4) - missing clap
03:27:807 (1,2,3) - spacing
03:30:356 (6) - missing clap
03:30:748 (7) - remove clap? NC
03:31:140 (1) - remove NC
03:31:729 (3) - NC
之後kiai噴星星的部份就同上了
04:35:650 (5,6,1) - oh shit
我靠啊這個好坑

先寫到這裡了 我給點評語
我感覺節奏下得不錯啊,挺合適的
不過那個排列還是比較新人風啦~可以繼續加油><
moonlightleaf
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moonlightleaf
to Regou

all fix

感谢mod :)
BeatofIke
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Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
For a long map like this, the drain rate is too high! >.<
I would reduce the drain rate to 7.

Good luck!
moonlightleaf
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Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to BeatofIke

OK ~ HP change to 7

thanks for your mod :)
CrazyrabbitKGE
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CrazyrabbitKGE
00:37:807 (4,5) - need hitsounds here
00:40:944 (2,4) - ^
01:07:611 (3) - too down
01:09:572 (4) - no hitsound?
01:53:689 (5) - I just feel like placing this at the center of that triangle (2,3,4).
01:56:434 (4) - looks a bit off. try x 112 y 68.
03:58:199 (1,2) - I can barely hear the hitsounds.
moonlightleaf
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Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

CrazyrabbitKGE wrote:

00:37:807 (4,5) - need hitsounds here ---fix
00:40:944 (2,4) - ^---fix
01:07:611 (3) - too down---fix
01:09:572 (4) - no hitsound?---fix
01:53:689 (5) - I just feel like placing this at the center of that triangle (2,3,4).---it seems in center of 234,just my opinion
01:56:434 (4) - looks a bit off. try x 112 y 68.---fix
03:58:199 (1,2) - I can barely hear the hitsounds.---remove the hitsound
thanks for modding ^^/
Mei
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Joined March 2012
Mei
Hihihi

[Flandre Scarlet]
  1. 00:01:337 (1,2,3) - 这里构成了个钝角三角形，虽然不是不能打但是我建议可以把1放在x364 y192这里，flow更加平滑一点
  2. 00:08:395 (2) - 这里可能需要一个nc。因为上一个滑条到2，和2下面一个note3之间的距离看起来是差不多的但是节奏差了1/2，这样把他们分在一组nc里面可能会误导读图
  3. 00:09:572 (6,7,8) - 感觉这样好些(至少是个三角），你之前的那个排列就我来说间距感觉太随意了忽大忽小
    Picture
  4. 00:15:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里考虑用1.1ds规范一下?
  5. 00:18:591 (1,2) - 这个overlap可以避免
    Picture
  6. 00:30:552 (6) - 叠在00:29:376 (4) - 的头上感觉好打写
  7. 00:47:807 (5,6,7) - 重叠了一点不太好看，试试这样
    Picture
  8. 01:57:415 (1,2,3) - 这里用ds调整一下比较好？
  9. 01:59:964 (8) - 右移一格
  10. 02:03:101 (11,1,2,3) - 这里我感觉是个连续的串
  11. 02:05:062 (6) - 去掉finish
  12. 02:06:238 (1,2,3) - 这里也是用ds调整一下
  13. 02:09:180 (2,3,4) - ctrl+g会好打些，而且应该比较符合你之前摆放的方式（锯齿姓的跳
  14. 02:12:709 (2,4) - 有点overlap（不过没什么大碍可以无视= =
  15. 02:52:905 (4) - ctrl+g？
  16. 03:02:121 (1,2,3) - 调一下ds
  17. 03:10:748 (7) - 从这里开始间距突然变小了是不是需要加个nd
  18. 03:37:415 (2) - 漏了clap
  19. 03:54:082 (4,5) - ctrl+g 会好些，否则这个忽大忽小的ds会很怪，顺便我感觉后面没有必要nc啊
  20. 04:40:552 (1,2) - 这个也最好不要这样叠，要么完全叠好要么干脆分开这样
  21. 04:47:611 (5) - ctrl+g
  22. 04:58:003 (1) - 这个是想和前面叠么= = 没叠好
  23. 05:13:690 (5,6,7) - 6如果没有blanket的话还是用ds把这三个物件调整一下吧
  24. 05:15:062 (3,4) - 4用3的反转来比较好看
    Picture
没了> < 加油
moonlightleaf
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moonlightleaf
to Mei

00:09:572 (6,7,8) - 这个没改

其他fix

感谢mod :)
Luvdic
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Joined July 2009
Luvdic
Hello, a very short mod post, at least is better than nothing ;)

03:01:238 - Add note, streams actually starts at 03:01:140 -
04:34:278 (4) - Break this into two slider with 1 repeat and a note at final, like this: http://puu.sh/a7FqL/0d48ff3b7c.jpg
04:35:716 (7) - NC here is better imo.
moonlightleaf
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moonlightleaf

Xanandra wrote:

Hello, a very short mod post, at least is better than nothing ;) ---thank you very much

03:01:238 - Add note, streams actually starts at 03:01:140 - ---fix
04:34:278 (4) - Break this into two slider with 1 repeat and a note at final, like this: http://puu.sh/a7FqL/0d48ff3b7c.jpg ---fix
04:35:716 (7) - NC here is better imo. ---for ↑ , so fix
thanks for modding :)
Asagi
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Joined March 2013
Asagi
Hello :3
in-game request

[General]
  1. Add "Remilia" on the tags, because she is on the BG

[Flandre Scarlet]
  1. 00:07:611 (1) - why NCing this? Cant see any reason why NCing this, remove NC
  2. 00:09:572 (5,6) - since this two 00:08:984 (4,7) - sliders are symmetrical, try to put this on the center like this to make it more symmetrically arranged
  3. 00:27:415 (3,4) - try to make the spacing same as this 00:27:218 (2,3) -
  4. 00:53:101 (1) - the anti jump here is kinda awkward to play and the rhythm too, its like, something is missing,try it like this, the rhythm makes more sense
  5. 00:58:395 (7) - try to make this a repeat slider? like you did here 00:46:042 (9) - 01:10:944 (7) - to make it more consistent on other parts
  6. 01:49:572 (10) - how bout remove this and replace with a spinner instead? it really fits, you should try it
  7. 02:28:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - straight stream doesnt look good here, try to make a little curve stream pattern like this
  8. 02:47:415 (6) - dis flow break lol, try to ctrl+G this, no need to put unreasonable jump
  9. 04:38:297 - how bout add spinner here?
  10. 04:57:807 - the gap here is kinda awkward to play, specially its a long white tick, how bout follow the guitar rhythm on that part? like this
  11. 04:59:376 (3) - remove the repeat on this slider, then add 1/2 slider 04:59:768 - here instead
I saw many inconsistent NC, maybe the other modders will point it out
Good diff...but needs more mod imo

Good Luck :3
moonlightleaf
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Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

-Asagi wrote:

Hello :3
in-game request

[General]
  1. Add "Remilia" on the tags, because she is on the BG--fix

[Flandre Scarlet]
  1. 00:07:611 (1) - why NCing this? Cant see any reason why NCing this, remove NC--fix
  2. 00:09:572 (5,6) - since this two 00:08:984 (4,7) - sliders are symmetrical, try to put this on the center like this to make it more symmetrically arranged--good idea
  3. 00:27:415 (3,4) - try to make the spacing same as this 00:27:218 (2,3) - --fix
  4. 00:53:101 (1) - the anti jump here is kinda awkward to play and the rhythm too, its like, something is missing,try it like this, the rhythm makes more sense--good idea
  5. 00:58:395 (7) - try to make this a repeat slider? like you did here 00:46:042 (9) - 01:10:944 (7) - to make it more consistent on other parts
  6. 01:49:572 (10) - how bout remove this and replace with a spinner instead? it really fits, you should try it--try
  7. 02:28:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - straight stream doesnt look good here, try to make a little curve stream pattern like this--very nice!
  8. 02:47:415 (6) - dis flow break lol, try to ctrl+G this, no need to put unreasonable jump--fix
  9. 04:38:297 - how bout add spinner here?--try
  10. 04:57:807 - the gap here is kinda awkward to play, specially its a long white tick, how bout follow the guitar rhythm on that part? like this
  11. 04:59:376 (3) - remove the repeat on this slider, then add 1/2 slider 04:59:768 - here instead--fix
I saw many inconsistent NC, maybe the other modders will point it out
Good diff...but needs more mod imo

Good Luck :3
thank you~ :)
Myxo
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Myxo


Shister...Shister...
Secret secret shister...

Are you Leady?
Are your Leady? <3



  • General
  1. When I downloaded the mapset, it came with a osb-file. This is useless, since you don't have a storyboard. I asked some modders and they said it could be a bug that happens sometimes (when the mapper doesn't upload the file but osu creates it when downloading the mapset). Anyways, you should check your beatmap's folder and remove the file if it's there!
  2. I think you are missing a gap in the tags, between her? and Remilia.
  3. Your rhythm is quite good, but sometimes it's questionable. First of all, try not to ignore the stanza. That means, don't use sliders that end on the big white line! For example 00:32:513 (8). It is because the drums in this song are very consistent and dominant, so the big white line is always emphasized really much by the drums. It sounds strange if those beats are not clickable (when the slider ends on those). Go through your map and fix all of these rhythm issues on your own, since there are quite a few!
  4. This point is a bit of personal opinion, but you should try to make your map a bit more tidy when it comes to placement! You have a mapping style where you don't use much spacing, so you have to be careful that the map doesn't look random. Therefore, it's important that you use clearer patterns sometimes. For example, this 00:06:042 (1,2,3) could be a perfect triangle, because at the moment 00:06:435 (2) looks like it is placed randomly. Same here 00:17:807 (4,5,6). My advice would to be check your map for objects like this and try to include it in any sort of pattern! That could be triangles / squares / pentagons, stacking notes, equal distance snap for a jump pattern or other things like that. You will be surprised how good it will fit your style :)
  5. Your hitsounding is rather inconsistent. This applies for the hitsounding itself but also (more importantly) for the volume settings: You are making some sounds or even complete sections very, very silent, while it doesn't even make sense. An example is this 00:18:101 or the section starting at 00:45:258. The song is too long to point every out, so you'll have to fix it yourself. Simply follow these steps:
    1. First of all, delete all your sections so that you only keep the ones which change sampleset, slider velocity or kiai, but not the ones that change volume.
    2. Set the volume for all sections you have kept to the same value, I'd recommend you 50%.
    3. Then, go through the song while listening to your hitsounding: If you notice anything that should be louder or less loud than the 50%, change this section / note.
    4. Everytime you change something, check the whole song if there is the same section or a similiar one anywhere else, and apply the same settings for this one.
  6. The hitsounding itself is also inconsistent. Of course, the song is too long to point out everything, so you may follow these steps to improve your hitsounding:
    1. Listen to a section of your map.
    2. Analyze the hitsound pattern you chose for this section, for example: Where did you place claps? Where did you place whistles? Where did you place finishes? How many whistles did you place? ...
    3. Check your section for mistakes / inconsistencys in this pattern. Of course the hitsounding shouldn't be the same all the time, but there are some things that sound strange in your map, that you might spot by using this method. For example, you are missing many claps. Also, sometimes you placed multiple claps in a row 02:19:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6), which sounds rather weird to be honest, since there is nothing in the music that would imply this. Another example would be this 00:23:101 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7), where you didn't use a whistle for many objects in a row, although you've been using many whistles in this section otherwise.


  • Specific
  1. 00:21:729 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Here, the spacing definitely looks weird. Try to make it equal? The spacing changes don't make sense with the music, from what I can tell.
  2. 00:29:376 (4,5,6,1) - At the moment, the jump from (4) to (5) feels strange, because you have to slow-down again afterwards for the transition from (5) to (6). Also, the antijump from (6) to (1) doesn't play very good. A simple solution would be to stack (5) on 00:29:180 (3) and place (6) where (5) was originally, to create this pattern: http://puu.sh/acqm2/5d2d22d9ff.jpg
  3. 01:21:140 (6,1) - (1) is a very emphasized beat by both drums and vocals, so a jump between (6) and (1) would play much better than an antijump. For example: http://puu.sh/acqzu/65b30b1d23.jpg
  4. 05:03:493 (6) - Move this object a bit more downwards, to impove the transition between 05:03:101 (4,5,6). At the moment, it feels weird that you have to move to the right after (5). http://puu.sh/acr1S/ac0867097c.jpg
  5. There are more specific issues, but it's very hard for me to point them out at the moment, since the things I mentioned in General aren't fixed yet. If you fixed some of these, and you want a recheck, you can ask me ingame! I will help you to improve your flow and rhythm then :) Same applies if you have any question regarding this mod yet- Just ask ingame!

Well, of course it's not a bad map! It is fun to play, especially because the song is so great!
There are still many issues with rhythm and placement, but especially with consistency. Consistency is probably the hardest part when mapping a marathon, since it's very long, but I'm sure you'll get it fixed if you try!
Good luck :3
moonlightleaf
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Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to Desperate-kun

osb-file , when you click update the map , it will auto creat! whatever you delete it before or not

tags , i do not know what should add in her? and Remilia.

for others i change here (i am bad in mapping , sorry ~ :(

SPOILER
SPOILER
SPOILER
SPOILER
SPOILER

thank you for your mod :)
Myxo
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2012
Myxo
I meant that you are missing the GAP between the words, see:
BeatofIke
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Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Testplay mod!

[General]
  1. Good map overall, but the combo colors are a bit hard to see due to both transparency and the light colors. Try making the colors a little darker by decreasing the Luminosity (Lum) by like 20-40 units so the colors are easier to see during gameplay.
moonlightleaf
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moonlightleaf
to Desperate-kun

oh,thank you for you explain,fix

to BeatofIke

thank you for modding ~ color -20, :) lol
BeatofIke
4,172 posts
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BeatofIke
Let's give it a try!
Bubbled #1
Sellenite
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Joined September 2013
Sellenite
yeah
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
ohoh ! thank you~~~ :)
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
jonathanlfj
lets see

[General]
add "Ritsuka Sumijun" to tags, she is the singer for this song
you need approachcircle.png and reversearrow.png to complete the hitcircle skin set, you can just grab it from the template skin if not planning to make custom ones

[Flan]
00:13:101 (1) - no need for NC here, this patter follows a continuous fade in the music
00:49:180 (5) - placing this here would flow better:
SPOILER
00:52:513 (6) - NC for musical emphasis
01:44:082 (4,5) - try ctrl+g on this, makes the patter more coherent
02:03:101 (11,12,1,2) - this is a bit hard to play, especially because the way you NCed it makes it more confusing to read. I would change these all to circles
02:15:454 (1) - you dont have to use the NC here since 02:15:062 (1,2) already hints at a tempo change (you could decrease their spacing as well to show the slow down)
02:27:611 (2) - clap on start
02:57:415 (2,3,4,5,6) - not sure why you put a stream here, there is no 1/4 in the music... remove 02:57:513 (3) and rearrange this pattern would do
03:00:944 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this looks a bit messy, you might want to give it more curve or just make it straight
03:32:905 (5,6,7,8) - a constant spacing or non-linear pattern would flow better here, i.e.
SPOILER
03:48:787 (1) - give it more curve so the blanket on 03:49:572 (3) looks more proper
03:54:474 (6,7) - more emphasis on this? if you do that dont forget NC
03:57:611 (4,5,6) - move this here:
SPOILER
04:02:513 (8) - clap on start
04:29:441 (8) - this part should be in 1/4:
SPOILER
04:35:748 (1) - ^
04:37:415 (6) - snap the end to 04:38:069, this one is 1/3
04:53:886 (5) - move a bit right for better blanket
05:04:082 (7) - one grid right to align with 05:03:493 (6)
05:15:454 (4) - clap start
05:23:297 (2) - ^
05:24:474 (1) - clap end
05:28:591 (5) - ^
05:32:317 (1) - check your claps from here to the end, somewhat inconsistent
05:35:454 (1) - ctrl+g flows better imo

gonna have to pop this for the incorrect snaps in the 1/3 section, let me know after you fix it
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
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Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

jonathanlfj wrote:

lets see

[General]
add "Ritsuka Sumijun" to tags, she is the singer for this song
you need approachcircle.png and reversearrow.png to complete the hitcircle skin set, you can just grab it from the template skin if not planning to make custom ones

[Flan]
00:13:101 (1) - no need for NC here, this patter follows a continuous fade in the music
00:49:180 (5) - placing this here would flow better:
SPOILER
00:52:513 (6) - NC for musical emphasis
01:44:082 (4,5) - try ctrl+g on this, makes the patter more coherent
02:03:101 (11,12,1,2) - this is a bit hard to play, especially because the way you NCed it makes it more confusing to read. I would change these all to circles
02:15:454 (1) - you dont have to use the NC here since 02:15:062 (1,2) already hints at a tempo change (you could decrease their spacing as well to show the slow down)
02:27:611 (2) - clap on start
02:57:415 (2,3,4,5,6) - not sure why you put a stream here, there is no 1/4 in the music... remove 02:57:513 (3) and rearrange this pattern would do
03:00:944 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this looks a bit messy, you might want to give it more curve or just make it straight
03:32:905 (5,6,7,8) - a constant spacing or non-linear pattern would flow better here, i.e.
SPOILER
03:48:787 (1) - give it more curve so the blanket on 03:49:572 (3) looks more proper
03:54:474 (6,7) - more emphasis on this? if you do that dont forget NC
03:57:611 (4,5,6) - move this here:
SPOILER
04:02:513 (8) - clap on start
04:29:441 (8) - this part should be in 1/4:
SPOILER
04:35:748 (1) - ^
04:37:415 (6) - snap the end to 04:38:069, this one is 1/3
04:53:886 (5) - move a bit right for better blanket
05:04:082 (7) - one grid right to align with 05:03:493 (6)
05:15:454 (4) - clap start
05:23:297 (2) - ^
05:24:474 (1) - clap end
05:28:591 (5) - ^
05:32:317 (1) - check your claps from here to the end, somewhat inconsistent
05:35:454 (1) - ctrl+g flows better imo

gonna have to pop this for the incorrect snaps in the 1/3 section, let me know after you fix it
all fix , add approachcircle.png and reversearrow.png ( custom ) , if them can be used in this map ...

gonna have to pop this for the incorrect snaps in the 1/3 section --- i don't understand this , sorry .... :?

thank you for modding :)
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
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jonathanlfj
its ok it was just a statement saying why i popped it, it looks good now so have the bubble back!

Bubble #1
moonlightleaf
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Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

jonathanlfj wrote:

its ok it was just a statement saying why i popped it, it looks good now so have the bubble back!

Bubble #1
thank you :)
Trust
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Joined March 2012
Trust
[General]
  1. The skin file approachcircle.png is still missing and needs to be included to complete your Hit circle set.
[Flandre Scarlet]
  1. 00:18:101 (5) - This doesn't need such low volume for a significant beat. Try 45~50% instead.
  2. 00:33:886 (6) - 1/1 repeat sliders like these are uninteresting to play if they aren't following vocals especially on an Insane level of difficulty as they cover a lot of background music that can potentially be mapped out. It would feel better to break this up into a rhythm like in the image below to allow players to click along with the strong downbeat and finish on 00:34:278. Having a 1/2 rhythm here would also be consistent with 00:40:552 (1,2).


    If you implement this make sure to correct the comboing as follows:
    SPOILER
    00:34:278 - New Combo
    00:35:062 (1) - Remove New Combo
    00:35:846 (3) - New Combo
    00:36:238 (1) - Remove New Combo
  3. 00:37:219 (1) - Clap sounds unfitting, I would remove it.
  4. 00:39:180 (1,2,3,4) - The four consecutive claps is a bit noisy an deviates from your general hitsound pattern. Try removing the claps on (1) and (3).
  5. 00:48:003 (7) - Missed a clap on the head.
  6. 00:52:513 (1) - I noticed this is the only time in the map you use a finish for this part. It's pretty fitting so consider either adding it to all similar parts or removing it here for consistency. In fact whistles seem even more fitting if you decide to add a hitsound for this you could try whistles instead.
  7. 00:54:670 (7) - You can NC here as this combo goes really long.
  8. 00:58:395 (7) - Did you mean to have a finish on the tail instead of a clap?
  9. 01:05:160 (3) - Is this note really necessary? I'm not hearing any sound here and 01:05:062 (2,4) are the accented hits so it would be better to remove the note make a jump between these two for consistency with all patterns like 00:52:513 (1,2).
  10. 01:53:886 (6) - I would break this into a slider and circle to follow the vocal nicely and allow players to click with the strong downbeat.
  11. 02:24:180 (2) - This note isn't covering anything, listening to the background music it should just be a circle and a triplet so I would just remove this and create some space between 02:24:082 (1,3).
  12. 02:39:376 (7) - A 1/1 repeat slider isn't very interesting to play for all the reasons as mentioned earlier. Try a rhythm identical to the suggestion for 00:33:886 (6) - and make sure to NC on 02:40:748 (3) and remove at 02:40:356 (1).
  13. 03:38:689 (2,4) - Well these don't sound like they're mapped to anything, a stream doesn't fit here in my opinion. Just using a 1/2 slider on 03:38:591 feels like the ideal rhythm at this part.
  14. 04:12:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Inconsistent stream spacing. Try to keep exactly at 0.5x to make it neater.
  15. 05:19:376 (6) - Swap whistle for a clap. Also NC here as you break of that slider pattern and this combo is a bit long.
  16. 05:35:454 (1,3) - Try and make a clean blanket with these two.
  17. 05:39:670 (6) - Give this equal spacing between 05:39:572 (5,7).
  18. 05:47:415 (5,6,7) - Well this looks a bit strange, especially in gameplay it threw me off a little. Maybe you could use a more normal placement for this triple?
  19. 05:48:984 (3) - An unfitting clap. Remove it here, sounds better to add it on the tail of 05:48:592 (2).
  20. 05:56:435 (7) - Same as 00:58:395 (7).
That's all for now. Your rhythms seem alright, I do think hitsounds could be more consistent.

Let me know if you have any questions about the mod. Poke me when this is applied.
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Trust wrote:

[General]
  1. The skin file approachcircle.png is still missing and needs to be included to complete your Hit circle set. ---redl will be have
[Flandre Scarlet]
  1. 00:18:101 (5) - This doesn't need such low volume for a significant beat. Try 45~50% instead.---45%~
  2. 00:33:886 (6) - 1/1 repeat sliders like these are uninteresting to play if they aren't following vocals especially on an Insane level of difficulty as they cover a lot of background music that can potentially be mapped out. It would feel better to break this up into a rhythm like in the image below to allow players to click along with the strong downbeat and finish on 00:34:278. Having a 1/2 rhythm here would also be consistent with 00:40:552 (1,2).---fix,


    If you implement this make sure to correct the comboing as follows:
    SPOILER
    00:34:278 - New Combo
    00:35:062 (1) - Remove New Combo
    00:35:846 (3) - New Combo
    00:36:238 (1) - Remove New Combo
  3. 00:37:219 (1) - Clap sounds unfitting, I would remove it.---fix,
  4. 00:39:180 (1,2,3,4) - The four consecutive claps is a bit noisy an deviates from your general hitsound pattern. Try removing the claps on (1) and (3).---fix,
  5. 00:48:003 (7) - Missed a clap on the head.---fix,
  6. 00:52:513 (1) - I noticed this is the only time in the map you use a finish for this part. It's pretty fitting so consider either adding it to all similar parts or removing it here for consistency. In fact whistles seem even more fitting if you decide to add a hitsound for this you could try whistles instead.---ok , i remove this
  7. 00:54:670 (7) - You can NC here as this combo goes really long.---fix,
  8. 00:58:395 (7) - Did you mean to have a finish on the tail instead of a clap?---fix,
  9. 01:05:160 (3) - Is this note really necessary? I'm not hearing any sound here and 01:05:062 (2,4) are the accented hits so it would be better to remove the note make a jump between these two for consistency with all patterns like 00:52:513 (1,2).---fix, make a jump like before
  10. 01:53:886 (6) - I would break this into a slider and circle to follow the vocal nicely and allow players to click with the strong downbeat.---fix,
  11. 02:24:180 (2) - This note isn't covering anything, listening to the background music it should just be a circle and a triplet so I would just remove this and create some space between 02:24:082 (1,3).---fix,
  12. 02:39:376 (7) - A 1/1 repeat slider isn't very interesting to play for all the reasons as mentioned earlier. Try a rhythm identical to the suggestion for 00:33:886 (6) - and make sure to NC on 02:40:748 (3) and remove at 02:40:356 (1).---fix,
  13. 03:38:689 (2,4) - Well these don't sound like they're mapped to anything, a stream doesn't fit here in my opinion. Just using a 1/2 slider on 03:38:591 feels like the ideal rhythm at this part.---fix , make a part , if you don't think it well ,tell me
  14. 04:12:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Inconsistent stream spacing. Try to keep exactly at 0.5x to make it neater.---fix,
  15. 05:19:376 (6) - Swap whistle for a clap. Also NC here as you break of that slider pattern and this combo is a bit long---fix,
  16. 05:35:454 (1,3) - Try and make a clean blanket with these two.---fix,
  17. 05:39:670 (6) - Give this equal spacing between 05:39:572 (5,7).---fix,
  18. 05:47:415 (5,6,7) - Well this looks a bit strange, especially in gameplay it threw me off a little. Maybe you could use a more normal placement for this triple?---fix,
  19. 05:48:984 (3) - An unfitting clap. Remove it here, sounds better to add it on the tail of 05:48:592 (2).---fix,
  20. 05:56:435 (7) - Same as 00:58:395 (7).---fix,
That's all for now. Your rhythms seem alright, I do think hitsounds could be more consistent.

Let me know if you have any questions about the mod. Poke me when this is applied.
thank you :)
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