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Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to Regou

all fix

感谢mod :)
BeatofIke
For a long map like this, the drain rate is too high! >.<
I would reduce the drain rate to 7.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to BeatofIke

OK ~ HP change to 7

thanks for your mod :)
CrazyrabbitKGE
00:37:807 (4,5) - need hitsounds here
00:40:944 (2,4) - ^
01:07:611 (3) - too down
01:09:572 (4) - no hitsound?
01:53:689 (5) - I just feel like placing this at the center of that triangle (2,3,4).
01:56:434 (4) - looks a bit off. try x 112 y 68.
03:58:199 (1,2) - I can barely hear the hitsounds.
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

CrazyrabbitKGE wrote:

00:37:807 (4,5) - need hitsounds here ---fix
00:40:944 (2,4) - ^---fix
01:07:611 (3) - too down---fix
01:09:572 (4) - no hitsound?---fix
01:53:689 (5) - I just feel like placing this at the center of that triangle (2,3,4).---it seems in center of 234,just my opinion
01:56:434 (4) - looks a bit off. try x 112 y 68.---fix
03:58:199 (1,2) - I can barely hear the hitsounds.---remove the hitsound
thanks for modding ^^/
Mei
Hihihi

[Flandre Scarlet]
  1. 00:01:337 (1,2,3) - 这里构成了个钝角三角形,虽然不是不能打但是我建议可以把1放在x364 y192这里,flow更加平滑一点
  2. 00:08:395 (2) - 这里可能需要一个nc。因为上一个滑条到2,和2下面一个note3之间的距离看起来是差不多的但是节奏差了1/2,这样把他们分在一组nc里面可能会误导读图
  3. 00:09:572 (6,7,8) - 感觉这样好些(至少是个三角),你之前的那个排列就我来说间距感觉太随意了忽大忽小
  4. 00:15:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里考虑用1.1ds规范一下?
  5. 00:18:591 (1,2) - 这个overlap可以避免
  6. 00:30:552 (6) - 叠在00:29:376 (4) - 的头上感觉好打写
  7. 00:47:807 (5,6,7) - 重叠了一点不太好看,试试这样
  8. 01:57:415 (1,2,3) - 这里用ds调整一下比较好?
  9. 01:59:964 (8) - 右移一格
  10. 02:03:101 (11,1,2,3) - 这里我感觉是个连续的串
  11. 02:05:062 (6) - 去掉finish
  12. 02:06:238 (1,2,3) - 这里也是用ds调整一下
  13. 02:09:180 (2,3,4) - ctrl+g会好打些,而且应该比较符合你之前摆放的方式(锯齿姓的跳
  14. 02:12:709 (2,4) - 有点overlap(不过没什么大碍可以无视= =
  15. 02:52:905 (4) - ctrl+g?
  16. 03:02:121 (1,2,3) - 调一下ds
  17. 03:10:748 (7) - 从这里开始间距突然变小了是不是需要加个nd
  18. 03:37:415 (2) - 漏了clap
  19. 03:54:082 (4,5) - ctrl+g 会好些,否则这个忽大忽小的ds会很怪,顺便我感觉后面没有必要nc啊
  20. 04:40:552 (1,2) - 这个也最好不要这样叠,要么完全叠好要么干脆分开这样
  21. 04:47:611 (5) - ctrl+g
  22. 04:58:003 (1) - 这个是想和前面叠么= = 没叠好
  23. 05:13:690 (5,6,7) - 6如果没有blanket的话还是用ds把这三个物件调整一下吧
  24. 05:15:062 (3,4) - 4用3的反转来比较好看
没了> < 加油
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to Mei

00:09:572 (6,7,8) - 这个没改

其他fix

感谢mod :)
Luvdic
Hello, a very short mod post, at least is better than nothing ;)

03:01:238 - Add note, streams actually starts at 03:01:140 -
04:34:278 (4) - Break this into two slider with 1 repeat and a note at final, like this: http://puu.sh/a7FqL/0d48ff3b7c.jpg
04:35:716 (7) - NC here is better imo.
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Xanandra wrote:

Hello, a very short mod post, at least is better than nothing ;) ---thank you very much

03:01:238 - Add note, streams actually starts at 03:01:140 - ---fix
04:34:278 (4) - Break this into two slider with 1 repeat and a note at final, like this: http://puu.sh/a7FqL/0d48ff3b7c.jpg ---fix
04:35:716 (7) - NC here is better imo. ---for ↑ , so fix
thanks for modding :)
Asagi
Hello :3
in-game request

[General]
  1. Add "Remilia" on the tags, because she is on the BG

[Flandre Scarlet]
  1. 00:07:611 (1) - why NCing this? Cant see any reason why NCing this, remove NC
  2. 00:09:572 (5,6) - since this two 00:08:984 (4,7) - sliders are symmetrical, try to put this on the center like this to make it more symmetrically arranged
  3. 00:27:415 (3,4) - try to make the spacing same as this 00:27:218 (2,3) -
  4. 00:53:101 (1) - the anti jump here is kinda awkward to play and the rhythm too, its like, something is missing,try it like this, the rhythm makes more sense
  5. 00:58:395 (7) - try to make this a repeat slider? like you did here 00:46:042 (9) - 01:10:944 (7) - to make it more consistent on other parts
  6. 01:49:572 (10) - how bout remove this and replace with a spinner instead? it really fits, you should try it
  7. 02:28:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - straight stream doesnt look good here, try to make a little curve stream pattern like this
  8. 02:47:415 (6) - dis flow break lol, try to ctrl+G this, no need to put unreasonable jump
  9. 04:38:297 - how bout add spinner here?
  10. 04:57:807 - the gap here is kinda awkward to play, specially its a long white tick, how bout follow the guitar rhythm on that part? like this
  11. 04:59:376 (3) - remove the repeat on this slider, then add 1/2 slider 04:59:768 - here instead
I saw many inconsistent NC, maybe the other modders will point it out
Good diff...but needs more mod imo

Good Luck :3
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

-Asagi wrote:

Hello :3
in-game request

[General]
  1. Add "Remilia" on the tags, because she is on the BG--fix

[Flandre Scarlet]
  1. 00:07:611 (1) - why NCing this? Cant see any reason why NCing this, remove NC--fix
  2. 00:09:572 (5,6) - since this two 00:08:984 (4,7) - sliders are symmetrical, try to put this on the center like this to make it more symmetrically arranged--good idea
  3. 00:27:415 (3,4) - try to make the spacing same as this 00:27:218 (2,3) - --fix
  4. 00:53:101 (1) - the anti jump here is kinda awkward to play and the rhythm too, its like, something is missing,try it like this, the rhythm makes more sense--good idea
  5. 00:58:395 (7) - try to make this a repeat slider? like you did here 00:46:042 (9) - 01:10:944 (7) - to make it more consistent on other parts
  6. 01:49:572 (10) - how bout remove this and replace with a spinner instead? it really fits, you should try it--try
  7. 02:28:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - straight stream doesnt look good here, try to make a little curve stream pattern like this--very nice!
  8. 02:47:415 (6) - dis flow break lol, try to ctrl+G this, no need to put unreasonable jump--fix
  9. 04:38:297 - how bout add spinner here?--try
  10. 04:57:807 - the gap here is kinda awkward to play, specially its a long white tick, how bout follow the guitar rhythm on that part? like this
  11. 04:59:376 (3) - remove the repeat on this slider, then add 1/2 slider 04:59:768 - here instead--fix
I saw many inconsistent NC, maybe the other modders will point it out
Good diff...but needs more mod imo

Good Luck :3
thank you~ :)
Myxo


Shister...Shister...
Secret secret shister...

Are you Leady?
Are your Leady? <3



  • General
  1. When I downloaded the mapset, it came with a osb-file. This is useless, since you don't have a storyboard. I asked some modders and they said it could be a bug that happens sometimes (when the mapper doesn't upload the file but osu creates it when downloading the mapset). Anyways, you should check your beatmap's folder and remove the file if it's there!
  2. I think you are missing a gap in the tags, between her? and Remilia.
  3. Your rhythm is quite good, but sometimes it's questionable. First of all, try not to ignore the stanza. That means, don't use sliders that end on the big white line! For example 00:32:513 (8). It is because the drums in this song are very consistent and dominant, so the big white line is always emphasized really much by the drums. It sounds strange if those beats are not clickable (when the slider ends on those). Go through your map and fix all of these rhythm issues on your own, since there are quite a few!
  4. This point is a bit of personal opinion, but you should try to make your map a bit more tidy when it comes to placement! You have a mapping style where you don't use much spacing, so you have to be careful that the map doesn't look random. Therefore, it's important that you use clearer patterns sometimes. For example, this 00:06:042 (1,2,3) could be a perfect triangle, because at the moment 00:06:435 (2) looks like it is placed randomly. Same here 00:17:807 (4,5,6). My advice would to be check your map for objects like this and try to include it in any sort of pattern! That could be triangles / squares / pentagons, stacking notes, equal distance snap for a jump pattern or other things like that. You will be surprised how good it will fit your style :)
  5. Your hitsounding is rather inconsistent. This applies for the hitsounding itself but also (more importantly) for the volume settings: You are making some sounds or even complete sections very, very silent, while it doesn't even make sense. An example is this 00:18:101 or the section starting at 00:45:258. The song is too long to point every out, so you'll have to fix it yourself. Simply follow these steps:
    1. First of all, delete all your sections so that you only keep the ones which change sampleset, slider velocity or kiai, but not the ones that change volume.
    2. Set the volume for all sections you have kept to the same value, I'd recommend you 50%.
    3. Then, go through the song while listening to your hitsounding: If you notice anything that should be louder or less loud than the 50%, change this section / note.
    4. Everytime you change something, check the whole song if there is the same section or a similiar one anywhere else, and apply the same settings for this one.
  6. The hitsounding itself is also inconsistent. Of course, the song is too long to point out everything, so you may follow these steps to improve your hitsounding:
    1. Listen to a section of your map.
    2. Analyze the hitsound pattern you chose for this section, for example: Where did you place claps? Where did you place whistles? Where did you place finishes? How many whistles did you place? ...
    3. Check your section for mistakes / inconsistencys in this pattern. Of course the hitsounding shouldn't be the same all the time, but there are some things that sound strange in your map, that you might spot by using this method. For example, you are missing many claps. Also, sometimes you placed multiple claps in a row 02:19:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6), which sounds rather weird to be honest, since there is nothing in the music that would imply this. Another example would be this 00:23:101 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7), where you didn't use a whistle for many objects in a row, although you've been using many whistles in this section otherwise.


  • Specific
  1. 00:21:729 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Here, the spacing definitely looks weird. Try to make it equal? The spacing changes don't make sense with the music, from what I can tell.
  2. 00:29:376 (4,5,6,1) - At the moment, the jump from (4) to (5) feels strange, because you have to slow-down again afterwards for the transition from (5) to (6). Also, the antijump from (6) to (1) doesn't play very good. A simple solution would be to stack (5) on 00:29:180 (3) and place (6) where (5) was originally, to create this pattern: http://puu.sh/acqm2/5d2d22d9ff.jpg
  3. 01:21:140 (6,1) - (1) is a very emphasized beat by both drums and vocals, so a jump between (6) and (1) would play much better than an antijump. For example: http://puu.sh/acqzu/65b30b1d23.jpg
  4. 05:03:493 (6) - Move this object a bit more downwards, to impove the transition between 05:03:101 (4,5,6). At the moment, it feels weird that you have to move to the right after (5). http://puu.sh/acr1S/ac0867097c.jpg
  5. There are more specific issues, but it's very hard for me to point them out at the moment, since the things I mentioned in General aren't fixed yet. If you fixed some of these, and you want a recheck, you can ask me ingame! I will help you to improve your flow and rhythm then :) Same applies if you have any question regarding this mod yet- Just ask ingame!

Well, of course it's not a bad map! It is fun to play, especially because the song is so great!
There are still many issues with rhythm and placement, but especially with consistency. Consistency is probably the hardest part when mapping a marathon, since it's very long, but I'm sure you'll get it fixed if you try!
Good luck :3
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to Desperate-kun

osb-file , when you click update the map , it will auto creat! whatever you delete it before or not

tags , i do not know what should add in her? and Remilia.

for others i change here (i am bad in mapping , sorry ~ :(


thank you for your mod :)
Myxo
I meant that you are missing the GAP between the words, see:
BeatofIke
Testplay mod!

[General]
  1. Good map overall, but the combo colors are a bit hard to see due to both transparency and the light colors. Try making the colors a little darker by decreasing the Luminosity (Lum) by like 20-40 units so the colors are easier to see during gameplay.
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to Desperate-kun

oh,thank you for you explain,fix

to BeatofIke

thank you for modding ~ color -20, :) lol
BeatofIke
Let's give it a try!
Bubbled #1
Sellenite
yeah
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
ohoh ! thank you~~~ :)
jonathanlfj
lets see

[General]
add "Ritsuka Sumijun" to tags, she is the singer for this song
you need approachcircle.png and reversearrow.png to complete the hitcircle skin set, you can just grab it from the template skin if not planning to make custom ones

[Flan]
00:13:101 (1) - no need for NC here, this patter follows a continuous fade in the music
00:49:180 (5) - placing this here would flow better: 00:52:513 (6) - NC for musical emphasis
01:44:082 (4,5) - try ctrl+g on this, makes the patter more coherent
02:03:101 (11,12,1,2) - this is a bit hard to play, especially because the way you NCed it makes it more confusing to read. I would change these all to circles
02:15:454 (1) - you dont have to use the NC here since 02:15:062 (1,2) already hints at a tempo change (you could decrease their spacing as well to show the slow down)
02:27:611 (2) - clap on start
02:57:415 (2,3,4,5,6) - not sure why you put a stream here, there is no 1/4 in the music... remove 02:57:513 (3) and rearrange this pattern would do
03:00:944 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this looks a bit messy, you might want to give it more curve or just make it straight
03:32:905 (5,6,7,8) - a constant spacing or non-linear pattern would flow better here, i.e. 03:48:787 (1) - give it more curve so the blanket on 03:49:572 (3) looks more proper
03:54:474 (6,7) - more emphasis on this? if you do that dont forget NC
03:57:611 (4,5,6) - move this here: 04:02:513 (8) - clap on start
04:29:441 (8) - this part should be in 1/4: 04:35:748 (1) - ^
04:37:415 (6) - snap the end to 04:38:069, this one is 1/3
04:53:886 (5) - move a bit right for better blanket
05:04:082 (7) - one grid right to align with 05:03:493 (6)
05:15:454 (4) - clap start
05:23:297 (2) - ^
05:24:474 (1) - clap end
05:28:591 (5) - ^
05:32:317 (1) - check your claps from here to the end, somewhat inconsistent
05:35:454 (1) - ctrl+g flows better imo

gonna have to pop this for the incorrect snaps in the 1/3 section, let me know after you fix it
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

jonathanlfj wrote:

lets see

[General]
add "Ritsuka Sumijun" to tags, she is the singer for this song
you need approachcircle.png and reversearrow.png to complete the hitcircle skin set, you can just grab it from the template skin if not planning to make custom ones

[Flan]
00:13:101 (1) - no need for NC here, this patter follows a continuous fade in the music
00:49:180 (5) - placing this here would flow better: 00:52:513 (6) - NC for musical emphasis
01:44:082 (4,5) - try ctrl+g on this, makes the patter more coherent
02:03:101 (11,12,1,2) - this is a bit hard to play, especially because the way you NCed it makes it more confusing to read. I would change these all to circles
02:15:454 (1) - you dont have to use the NC here since 02:15:062 (1,2) already hints at a tempo change (you could decrease their spacing as well to show the slow down)
02:27:611 (2) - clap on start
02:57:415 (2,3,4,5,6) - not sure why you put a stream here, there is no 1/4 in the music... remove 02:57:513 (3) and rearrange this pattern would do
03:00:944 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this looks a bit messy, you might want to give it more curve or just make it straight
03:32:905 (5,6,7,8) - a constant spacing or non-linear pattern would flow better here, i.e. 03:48:787 (1) - give it more curve so the blanket on 03:49:572 (3) looks more proper
03:54:474 (6,7) - more emphasis on this? if you do that dont forget NC
03:57:611 (4,5,6) - move this here: 04:02:513 (8) - clap on start
04:29:441 (8) - this part should be in 1/4: 04:35:748 (1) - ^
04:37:415 (6) - snap the end to 04:38:069, this one is 1/3
04:53:886 (5) - move a bit right for better blanket
05:04:082 (7) - one grid right to align with 05:03:493 (6)
05:15:454 (4) - clap start
05:23:297 (2) - ^
05:24:474 (1) - clap end
05:28:591 (5) - ^
05:32:317 (1) - check your claps from here to the end, somewhat inconsistent
05:35:454 (1) - ctrl+g flows better imo

gonna have to pop this for the incorrect snaps in the 1/3 section, let me know after you fix it
all fix , add approachcircle.png and reversearrow.png ( custom ) , if them can be used in this map ...

gonna have to pop this for the incorrect snaps in the 1/3 section --- i don't understand this , sorry .... :?

thank you for modding :)
jonathanlfj
its ok it was just a statement saying why i popped it, it looks good now so have the bubble back!

Bubble #1
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

jonathanlfj wrote:

its ok it was just a statement saying why i popped it, it looks good now so have the bubble back!

Bubble #1
thank you :)
Trust
[General]
  1. The skin file approachcircle.png is still missing and needs to be included to complete your Hit circle set.
[Flandre Scarlet]
  1. 00:18:101 (5) - This doesn't need such low volume for a significant beat. Try 45~50% instead.
  2. 00:33:886 (6) - 1/1 repeat sliders like these are uninteresting to play if they aren't following vocals especially on an Insane level of difficulty as they cover a lot of background music that can potentially be mapped out. It would feel better to break this up into a rhythm like in the image below to allow players to click along with the strong downbeat and finish on 00:34:278. Having a 1/2 rhythm here would also be consistent with 00:40:552 (1,2).


    If you implement this make sure to correct the comboing as follows:
    SPOILER
    00:34:278 - New Combo
    00:35:062 (1) - Remove New Combo
    00:35:846 (3) - New Combo
    00:36:238 (1) - Remove New Combo
  3. 00:37:219 (1) - Clap sounds unfitting, I would remove it.
  4. 00:39:180 (1,2,3,4) - The four consecutive claps is a bit noisy an deviates from your general hitsound pattern. Try removing the claps on (1) and (3).
  5. 00:48:003 (7) - Missed a clap on the head.
  6. 00:52:513 (1) - I noticed this is the only time in the map you use a finish for this part. It's pretty fitting so consider either adding it to all similar parts or removing it here for consistency. In fact whistles seem even more fitting if you decide to add a hitsound for this you could try whistles instead.
  7. 00:54:670 (7) - You can NC here as this combo goes really long.
  8. 00:58:395 (7) - Did you mean to have a finish on the tail instead of a clap?
  9. 01:05:160 (3) - Is this note really necessary? I'm not hearing any sound here and 01:05:062 (2,4) are the accented hits so it would be better to remove the note make a jump between these two for consistency with all patterns like 00:52:513 (1,2).
  10. 01:53:886 (6) - I would break this into a slider and circle to follow the vocal nicely and allow players to click with the strong downbeat.
  11. 02:24:180 (2) - This note isn't covering anything, listening to the background music it should just be a circle and a triplet so I would just remove this and create some space between 02:24:082 (1,3).
  12. 02:39:376 (7) - A 1/1 repeat slider isn't very interesting to play for all the reasons as mentioned earlier. Try a rhythm identical to the suggestion for 00:33:886 (6) - and make sure to NC on 02:40:748 (3) and remove at 02:40:356 (1).
  13. 03:38:689 (2,4) - Well these don't sound like they're mapped to anything, a stream doesn't fit here in my opinion. Just using a 1/2 slider on 03:38:591 feels like the ideal rhythm at this part.
  14. 04:12:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Inconsistent stream spacing. Try to keep exactly at 0.5x to make it neater.
  15. 05:19:376 (6) - Swap whistle for a clap. Also NC here as you break of that slider pattern and this combo is a bit long.
  16. 05:35:454 (1,3) - Try and make a clean blanket with these two.
  17. 05:39:670 (6) - Give this equal spacing between 05:39:572 (5,7).
  18. 05:47:415 (5,6,7) - Well this looks a bit strange, especially in gameplay it threw me off a little. Maybe you could use a more normal placement for this triple?
  19. 05:48:984 (3) - An unfitting clap. Remove it here, sounds better to add it on the tail of 05:48:592 (2).
  20. 05:56:435 (7) - Same as 00:58:395 (7).
That's all for now. Your rhythms seem alright, I do think hitsounds could be more consistent.

Let me know if you have any questions about the mod. Poke me when this is applied.
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Trust wrote:

[General]
  1. The skin file approachcircle.png is still missing and needs to be included to complete your Hit circle set. ---redl will be have
[Flandre Scarlet]
  1. 00:18:101 (5) - This doesn't need such low volume for a significant beat. Try 45~50% instead.---45%~
  2. 00:33:886 (6) - 1/1 repeat sliders like these are uninteresting to play if they aren't following vocals especially on an Insane level of difficulty as they cover a lot of background music that can potentially be mapped out. It would feel better to break this up into a rhythm like in the image below to allow players to click along with the strong downbeat and finish on 00:34:278. Having a 1/2 rhythm here would also be consistent with 00:40:552 (1,2).---fix,


    If you implement this make sure to correct the comboing as follows:
    SPOILER
    00:34:278 - New Combo
    00:35:062 (1) - Remove New Combo
    00:35:846 (3) - New Combo
    00:36:238 (1) - Remove New Combo
  3. 00:37:219 (1) - Clap sounds unfitting, I would remove it.---fix,
  4. 00:39:180 (1,2,3,4) - The four consecutive claps is a bit noisy an deviates from your general hitsound pattern. Try removing the claps on (1) and (3).---fix,
  5. 00:48:003 (7) - Missed a clap on the head.---fix,
  6. 00:52:513 (1) - I noticed this is the only time in the map you use a finish for this part. It's pretty fitting so consider either adding it to all similar parts or removing it here for consistency. In fact whistles seem even more fitting if you decide to add a hitsound for this you could try whistles instead.---ok , i remove this
  7. 00:54:670 (7) - You can NC here as this combo goes really long.---fix,
  8. 00:58:395 (7) - Did you mean to have a finish on the tail instead of a clap?---fix,
  9. 01:05:160 (3) - Is this note really necessary? I'm not hearing any sound here and 01:05:062 (2,4) are the accented hits so it would be better to remove the note make a jump between these two for consistency with all patterns like 00:52:513 (1,2).---fix, make a jump like before
  10. 01:53:886 (6) - I would break this into a slider and circle to follow the vocal nicely and allow players to click with the strong downbeat.---fix,
  11. 02:24:180 (2) - This note isn't covering anything, listening to the background music it should just be a circle and a triplet so I would just remove this and create some space between 02:24:082 (1,3).---fix,
  12. 02:39:376 (7) - A 1/1 repeat slider isn't very interesting to play for all the reasons as mentioned earlier. Try a rhythm identical to the suggestion for 00:33:886 (6) - and make sure to NC on 02:40:748 (3) and remove at 02:40:356 (1).---fix,
  13. 03:38:689 (2,4) - Well these don't sound like they're mapped to anything, a stream doesn't fit here in my opinion. Just using a 1/2 slider on 03:38:591 feels like the ideal rhythm at this part.---fix , make a part , if you don't think it well ,tell me
  14. 04:12:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Inconsistent stream spacing. Try to keep exactly at 0.5x to make it neater.---fix,
  15. 05:19:376 (6) - Swap whistle for a clap. Also NC here as you break of that slider pattern and this combo is a bit long---fix,
  16. 05:35:454 (1,3) - Try and make a clean blanket with these two.---fix,
  17. 05:39:670 (6) - Give this equal spacing between 05:39:572 (5,7).---fix,
  18. 05:47:415 (5,6,7) - Well this looks a bit strange, especially in gameplay it threw me off a little. Maybe you could use a more normal placement for this triple?---fix,
  19. 05:48:984 (3) - An unfitting clap. Remove it here, sounds better to add it on the tail of 05:48:592 (2).---fix,
  20. 05:56:435 (7) - Same as 00:58:395 (7).---fix,
That's all for now. Your rhythms seem alright, I do think hitsounds could be more consistent.

Let me know if you have any questions about the mod. Poke me when this is applied.
thank you :)
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
Trust (run away

QAQ
Trust
Sorry about that! Rechecked in irc, log is below. Cleaned up some patterns and sorted out the issue with the missing skin file.

SPOILER
22:57 Trust: hi sorry for lateness! im checking now
22:58 Trust: and to answer your question from forum pm, it will be bubble #2
22:58 moonlightleaf: oh oh! thank you for your recheck
22:59 Trust: just need to ask, i did a redl and still dont see the approachcircle.png file :(
22:59 moonlightleaf: i redl
22:59 moonlightleaf: i have it with it , why?
23:00 moonlightleaf: let me redl again
23:04 Trust: ok I have some suggestions
23:04 Trust: whenever you're ready
23:05 moonlightleaf: spinner-approachcircle
23:05 moonlightleaf: is this ?
23:06 Trust: nope, it's exactly approachcircle.png
23:07 moonlightleaf: not " spinner-approachcircle.png " , just the " approachcircle.png " right ?
23:07 Trust: yes, jonathan mentioned this too in his mod
23:11 moonlightleaf: oh, it is my mistake ,spinner-approachcircle.png will delete , right?
23:11 moonlightleaf: for this computer has not photoshop , so i decide to use the osu's approachcircle.png
23:11 Trust: yes
23:12 moonlightleaf: so delete the spinner-approachcircle or not ?
23:13 Trust: yes delete that
23:13 Trust: use osu's approachcircle.png
23:14 moonlightleaf: oh ,let me redl again ,sorry for waitting
23:14 Trust: np
23:14 Trust: all good
23:16 moonlightleaf: it have , plz redl , sorry ;_;
23:18 Trust: there we go! good
23:18 moonlightleaf: >w<
23:19 Trust: ok ready for suggestions?
23:21 moonlightleaf: yep
23:22 Trust: 02:39:376 (7,1,2) - i think this was an accident, cause so many finishes x.x
23:23 Trust: so remove on tail of (7), tail of (1), and (2)
23:23 moonlightleaf: remove 7 1 2 ? 3finishes?
23:24 Trust: yeah it's too muhc
23:24 Trust: much*
23:25 Trust: only finish should be on 02:39:768 -
23:26 moonlightleaf: ok fix, remove 7tail and 2 , keep 1 on head
23:27 Trust: dont forget tail of 02:39:768 (1) -
23:27 Trust: ~
23:27 moonlightleaf: oh~
23:27 moonlightleaf: fix,remove it
23:28 Trust: hmm did you make a new pattern here? 02:54:866 (1,2,3) -
23:28 Trust: or was this here before
23:29 moonlightleaf: this part i have not remake
23:29 moonlightleaf: remap*
23:29 Trust: oh ok i thought this was different from last time, nevermind then~
23:30 Trust: 03:37:807 (4) - NC here to follow previous kiai, and vocal emphasis
23:32 moonlightleaf: 03:37:219 (1,2,3) - it does not mater if here is 123 then next nc 03:37:807 (1) - ?
23:33 Trust: it should be fine, is actually consistent with 02:06:238 (1,2,3,1) -
23:33 moonlightleaf: ok,fix
23:33 Trust: 05:20:748 (1,2,3,1) - here too :>
23:34 moonlightleaf: 0.0
23:35 Trust: 03:38:591 (5,6,7) - rhythm you made here could follow the music better imo, try like this: http://puu.sh/aHZws/f1e4dac9b6.png
23:39 moonlightleaf: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1899386 how about this
23:39 moonlightleaf: 8 is down for 6
23:39 moonlightleaf: from*
23:40 Trust: 1 sec let me try it
23:40 moonlightleaf: 68 copy from 34
23:42 Trust: hmm the jump to (7) feels too big
23:42 Trust: and don't forget to put a note on 03:39:964 -
23:43 Trust: here gimme a sec ill give my idea
23:45 Trust: try like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1899395
23:45 moonlightleaf: how about 7 rotate in center 37°
23:46 moonlightleaf: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1899396
23:47 Trust: but then theres very little space between (6) and (7) ;w;
23:47 moonlightleaf: selection centre 37
23:49 moonlightleaf: 03:38:984 (6) - x: 256 y:108 7 rotate 43°
23:53 Trust: one sec, imma send you a code
23:53 Trust: i'm having a hard time following this
23:56 Trust: ok check your forum pm, i sent a code you can try, i think it works good
23:58 Trust: last suggestion, 04:32:709 (7,1) - swap nc
23:59 moonlightleaf: yep, good pattern
23:59 Trust: :D
00:00 moonlightleaf: 04:32:709 (7) - i think 6 -> 7 to tell player that next will be put there
00:01 Trust: well there are two whole measures seperating those parts
00:01 Trust: it's unnecessary imo
00:01 moonlightleaf: hm..
00:02 moonlightleaf: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1899422
00:02 moonlightleaf: this
00:03 Trust: yeah. well it's up to you
00:03 moonlightleaf: but i want to keep 7 ,it is ok ?
00:04 Trust: yep
00:04 moonlightleaf: i know that 6 next will put there because i am the creater
00:05 Trust: ok i think that's all
00:06 moonlightleaf: >w<
00:06 Trust: you can go ahead and update
00:07 moonlightleaf: waitting ><
00:09 moonlightleaf: ok, thank you ~ updated~
00:11 moonlightleaf: hard~ cost your much time for sorry ...
00:12 Trust: kk 1 moment checking the skin files
00:12 Trust: to make sure everything is good
00:12 moonlightleaf: www
Bubble #2

Good luck!
captin1
[Flandre Scarlet]
  1. Tick Rate 2 might fit better here :?
  2. 00:15:454 (1,2,3) - and 00:17:023 (1) - I think it would be better if you switched these two, starting the triplet after a pause in the music like this will be frustrating to hit accurately
  3. 00:18:101 (5,6) - why do these have soft samples? it would sound more consistent if they were kept normal
  4. 01:36:827 (1,2,3) - might want to move this to x416 y104 so that the spacing looks equal after the automatic stacking
  5. 01:55:650 (8) - similar reason to above, move this a bit left
  6. 02:55:258 (3) - this would fit the music much better snapped to 1/8
  7. 03:59:572 (7) - move a bit right for better spacing?
  8. 05:06:435 (3,5) - clap should be on 5, not 3
  9. 05:09:768 (5,6,7) - try x140 y152 for similar reasons as before
  10. 05:17:219 (3) - ctrl+g here might flow better
let me know
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

captin1 wrote:

[Flandre Scarlet]
  1. Tick Rate 2 might fit better here :? --fix
  2. 00:15:454 (1,2,3) - and 00:17:023 (1) - I think it would be better if you switched these two, starting the triplet after a pause in the music like this will be frustrating to hit accurately--fix
  3. 00:18:101 (5,6) - why do these have soft samples? it would sound more consistent if they were kept normal--fix
  4. 01:36:827 (1,2,3) - might want to move this to x416 y104 so that the spacing looks equal after the automatic stacking---x412 y86 , 1.0x 1.62x
  5. 01:55:650 (8) - similar reason to above, move this a bit left--fix
  6. 02:55:258 (3) - this would fit the music much better snapped to 1/8
  7. 03:59:572 (7) - move a bit right for better spacing?--fix
  8. 05:06:435 (3,5) - clap should be on 5, not 3--fix
  9. 05:09:768 (5,6,7) - try x140 y152 for similar reasons as before ---x136 y152 , 1.24x
  10. 05:17:219 (3) - ctrl+g here might flow better--fix
let me know
thank you :)
captin1
alright, looks good

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Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
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