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Silent Siren - stella* [Taiko|Osu]

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Topic Starter
captin1
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, May 24, 2014 at 1:41:45 PM

Artist: Silent Siren
Title: stella*
Tags: start raose climbb65588 kanpakyin
BPM: 158
Filesize: 4285kb
Play Time: 02:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Climbb & KPY's Taiko Oni (4.94 stars, 673 notes)
  2. Easy (1.94 stars, 122 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 434 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (4.87 stars, 526 notes)
  5. Normal (4.31 stars, 230 notes)
  6. Raose's Hard (4.94 stars, 337 notes)
Download: Silent Siren - stella*
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hard: Raose
Taiko: climbb65588 & kanpakyin
full version: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ARO8Zr7smPU
Trust
haha first
Raose
actually i was the first to testplay ok
Topic Starter
captin1
actually no the first to testplay was broccoly before the map was even submitted
Raose
first testplay after submitted D:!
-AbaY-
nice beatmap :)
Topic Starter
captin1
hey thanks!
Kibbleru
mmk m4m! :D
from your queue

[Insane]
  1. 00:06:550 (5,6) - for this you could just copy paste one of the sliders and rotate it by 120, it just makes the pattern neater
  2. 00:03:511 (3,4) - ^
  3. 00:10:537 (5,6) - ^ (theres gunna be alot of these b prepared lol)
  4. 00:21:929 (1,2) - ^
  5. 01:17:182 (3,4) - ^
  6. 01:41:296 (2,3) - ^
  7. 00:09:018 (4) - flows better from previous note if you ctrl g
  8. 01:30:284 (1) - ^
  9. 00:15:094 (2,4) - space out a bit more, looks a bit too cramped for an insane
  10. 00:21:549 (5,5) - perhaps try stacking
  11. 00:48:322 (3,2) - ^
  12. 01:00:284 (2,4) - ^ i don't think this overlap here looks too good lol
  13. 00:47:562 (7,1) - ^ although these probably don't really matter it just makes it seem neater
  14. 00:31:708 (2) - overmapped i think
  15. 00:33:322 (4,1) - ehh this overlap isnt too pretty
  16. 00:56:866 (1,2) - you should just copy one of the sliders and ctrl ghj
[Raose's Hard]
  1. 00:19:460 (3) - center this a bit more between (1) and (2)
  2. 00:39:776 (4,4) - stack better
  3. 00:50:979 (2,2) - ^
  4. 01:01:612 - there's a strong sound here that you're not mapping out :( to fix that,
    01:01:232 (3,1) - you should make rhythm more consistent with 00:58:194 (1) -
  5. 01:08:257 (3,1) - they touch, space out
  6. 01:17:182 (2) - make this curve more like this
  7. 01:46:232 (5,6) - make parallel :o? idk just looks better to me
  8. 02:03:511 (1,4) - overlap makes this part look kinda messy, and possibly hard to read
  9. 02:10:536 (1,2,3,4) - might be too difficult for hard. not sure tho, it's a matter of opinion
[Normal]
  1. 01:26:106 (5) - flows better if you made it parallel with (6)
  2. 01:31:422 (3,4) - this bit may be too hard, consider using a slider instead
  3. 01:37:688 (4,5) - ehh this overlap isnt that pretty ._. and might make it hard to read
[Easy]
  1. 00:14:333 (1,3) - don't overlap?
  2. 01:09:776 (2,3) - ctrl g these and use that rhythm instead, i feel like it makes more sense if the slider is mapping that guitar or w/e
Great mapset! gl for ranking
tollox
Here from your m4m queue

Fun map!
You're clearly a better modder so take advice with a grain of salt


Easy
00:03:511 (2) - Sounds better to me if you start it on the white tick, the strong beat on the white feels like it's missing
00:06:549 (2) - ^
00:18:700 (2) - ^
00:56:865 (1,2) - Perhaps a note between these?
01:27:245 (1,2) - ^
01:35:599 (3,1) - ^

Normal
00:26:485 (1) - Sounds better like this http://puu.sh/8fdRo.jpg
00:29:523 (1) - Same thing here
00:28:954 (5,1) - Also consider placing a note between these two, sounds pretty nice
01:01:042 (2) - Possibly http://puu.sh/8felP.jpg (or with a repeat on that slider)
01:29:713 (5,6) - These stacked notes are both on the "by" part of baby, possibly a tiny overmap for normal

Roase's Hard
00:30:663 (3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - This part feels clumsy to me. Not sure how it could be made better, replacing 4 and 5 with a slider and unstacking the blue 1?
00:43:004 (4,1) - All other diffs have a spinner here. Not necessary to add one (especially since different mapper), but it would make them feel more like a whole, and a spinner does fit here.
01:00:663 (2,3,1) - Maybe this instead http://puu.sh/8fgnW.jpg
01:36:359 (1,2) - This overlap isn't very pretty and you don't really have any other overlaps
01:41:295 (2) - Curving it more around the 3 would look nicer


Insane
Couple of unsnapped sliders, check aimod
00:02:942 (2,3) - Doesn't look very balanced. Perhaps wrap the 2 more around the 3?
00:35:600 (1,2,3,4) - How about this? http://puu.sh/8fhE5.jpg or some other remap to music
02:07:878 (6) - Replace this by a mini-stream?
Raose

Kibbleru wrote:

[Raose's Hard]
  1. 00:19:460 (3) - center this a bit more between (1) and (2) oops nice
  2. 00:39:776 (4,4) - stack better wasn't trying to but ok
  3. 00:50:979 (2,2) - ^ eh wasn't trying to, and it would sorta mess up the pattern & spacing D: sorry
  4. 01:01:612 - there's a strong sound here that you're not mapping out :( to fix that,
    01:01:232 (3,1) - you should make rhythm more consistent with 00:58:194 (1) - changed to 2 1/2 sliders
  5. 01:08:257 (3,1) - they touch, space out ok
  6. 01:17:182 (2) - make this curve more like this what happened to your slider LOL changed
  7. 01:46:232 (5,6) - make parallel :o? idk just looks better to me i wanted a circular flow to lead into (1)
  8. 02:03:511 (1,4) - overlap makes this part look kinda messy, and possibly hard to read yea but idk how to change it D:
  9. 02:10:536 (1,2,3,4) - might be too difficult for hard. not sure tho, it's a matter of opinion the jumps aren't too big, and it's a pretty cool way to end the map imo

tollox wrote:

Roase's Hard
00:30:663 (3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - This part feels clumsy to me. Not sure how it could be made better, replacing 4 and 5 with a slider and unstacking the blue 1? hmmm not sure exactly what you mean by clumsy D: maybe plain? I kinda like 4 and 5 as circles because they better emphasize the drums, but i'll consider
00:43:004 (4,1) - All other diffs have a spinner here. Not necessary to add one (especially since different mapper), but it would make them feel more like a whole, and a spinner does fit here. ok
01:00:663 (2,3,1) - Maybe this instead http://puu.sh/8fgnW.jpg changed the rhythm a bit from previous mod, and i like it better than this rhythm, sorry ;w; i see how this rhythm makes sense though
01:36:359 (1,2) - This overlap isn't very pretty and you don't really have any other overlaps are you sure i don't have any other overlaps? :( i think the overlap is fine personally, will change if more people say so
01:41:295 (2) - Curving it more around the 3 would look nicer alright
ty ty for mod

today i ate chicken
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 80226
Countdown: 0
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[Metadata]
Title:Stella
TitleUnicode:Stella
Artist:Silent Siren
ArtistUnicode:Silent Siren
Creator:captin1
Version:Raose's Hard
Source:
Tags:start
BeatmapID:400610
BeatmapSetID:163253

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Topic Starter
captin1
"Kibbleru"
mmk m4m! :D
from your queue

[Insane]
  1. 00:06:550 (5,6) - for this you could just copy paste one of the sliders and rotate it by 120, it just makes the pattern neater
  2. 00:03:511 (3,4) - ^
  3. 00:10:537 (5,6) - ^ (theres gunna be alot of these b prepared lol)
  4. 00:21:929 (1,2) - ^
  5. 01:17:182 (3,4) - ^
  6. 01:41:296 (2,3) - ^ so I understand why you suggest these, but I generally do all my sliders in a particular way, so plain 120 degree rotations isn't always exactly what I'm looking for. I could do other numbers of course to get it how I wanted, but they're all quite similar in shape already so there's really no need
  7. 00:09:018 (4) - flows better from previous note if you ctrl g nice
  8. 01:30:284 (1) - ^ eh not on this one, the path to the note after is weird
  9. 00:15:094 (2,4) - space out a bit more, looks a bit too cramped for an insane
  10. 00:21:549 (5,5) - perhaps try stacking not noticeable at all in game and probably changes my placement more than I want it to, so no thanks to these
  11. 00:48:322 (3,2) - ^
  12. 01:00:284 (2,4) - ^ i don't think this overlap here looks too good lol I like it owo
  13. 00:47:562 (7,1) - ^ although these probably don't really matter it just makes it seem neater
  14. 00:31:708 (2) - overmapped i think :P shhh
  15. 00:33:322 (4,1) - ehh this overlap isnt too pretty ;w;
  16. 00:56:866 (1,2) - you should just copy one of the sliders and ctrl ghj again i'm very particular about the direction of my sliders and this doesn't give me enough control over it
[Normal]
  1. 01:26:106 (5) - flows better if you made it parallel with (6)
  2. 01:31:422 (3,4) - this bit may be too hard, consider using a slider instead I think it's fine, it's not the first time i've used two 1/2 circles and I'd really like a click on 4
  3. 01:37:688 (4,5) - ehh this overlap isnt that pretty ._. and might make it hard to read I think it's alright for now, but i'll consider
[Easy]
  1. 00:14:333 (1,3) - don't overlap?
  2. 01:09:776 (2,3) - ctrl g these and use that rhythm instead, i feel like it makes more sense if the slider is mapping that guitar or w/e
Great mapset! gl for ranking

tollox wrote:

Here from your m4m queue

Fun map!
You're clearly a better modder so take advice with a grain of salt


Easy
00:03:511 (2) - Sounds better to me if you start it on the white tick, the strong beat on the white feels like it's missing
00:06:549 (2) - ^
00:18:700 (2) - ^ I see what you mean, but since in this section the downbeat doesn't really have any more emphasis than the other beats, i'll go with mapping the guitar
00:56:865 (1,2) - Perhaps a note between these?
01:27:245 (1,2) - ^
01:35:599 (3,1) - ^ I wanted to capture the halftime feel that the drum goes into with the space here

Normal
00:26:485 (1) - Sounds better like this http://puu.sh/8fdRo.jpg I like my current rhythm, sorry
00:29:523 (1) - Same thing here
00:28:954 (5,1) - Also consider placing a note between these two, sounds pretty nice hmm I think that might be too much
01:01:042 (2) - Possibly http://puu.sh/8felP.jpg (or with a repeat on that slider) I'm following the vocal with my current rhythm, so I'll keep it
01:29:713 (5,6) - These stacked notes are both on the "by" part of baby, possibly a tiny overmap for normal the first is on the vocal yes, but the second is with the snare hit

Insane
Couple of unsnapped sliders, check aimod
00:02:942 (2,3) - Doesn't look very balanced. Perhaps wrap the 2 more around the 3?
00:35:600 (1,2,3,4) - How about this? http://puu.sh/8fhE5.jpg or some other remap to music eh, mine fits fine
02:07:878 (6) - Replace this by a mini-stream? no thanks, i'll keep the hanging feel from the guitar note
Thanks!
I hope your chicken was good rose
hue
Yuuki Aoi_old
Came from your M4M Queue! Sorry if the mod's bad, i'm new when it comes to modding! Hope to be better!

Easy
01:43:004 (2) - flip it upside down? to make the flow better
02:08:257 (3) - add soft whistle to the head and drum-hitwhistle to the tail. I think it works wonderfully.

Nice diff, can't spot anything else, though I think the 3/2 space between objects are kind of difficult for beginner players to playout but since they're kind of.. consistent, maybe it'll work out :D.

Normal
00:12:245 (3) - and 00:13:004 (4) - change it to be like this? http://puu.sh/8fOyN.png
00:24:397 (3) - Curve it so it faces to 00:25:156 (4) - ? to make the flow better.
00:46:992 (3) - drop it down a little? it almost touches the HP Bar!
00:49:270 (4) - add soft hitwhistle in the head?
01:13:194 (3) - ^ and tail
01:48:700 (4) - add soft whistle in the head?

Raose's Hard
00:13:954 (4) - make it a triple repeating slider? u don't have to though.
00:38:257 (4) - make this a blanket?

Insane
01:18:701 (4) - NC
01:19:271 (7) - NC swap with 01:19:461 (1) -
01:20:219 (1) - to 01:20:980 (5) - add default soft-hitwhistle? (optional)
01:22:119 (4) - add soft-hitwhistle?
01:27:246 (1) - remove soft-hitwhistle in tail?
01:43:954 add spinner until 01:45:093 ?

It's really hard to mod insanes for me because it's a matter of mapping style. There's not really much to fix here either.

Good Luck with ranking this! :D
OblivioN
hi,from your m4m queue :3
[Normal]
00:15:093 (2) - blanket with 00:14:333 (1) -
I think the diff is hard for newbie……consider about decreasing difficulty
[Hard]
00:13:954 (4) - sounds uncomfortable……

good diff!

[Insane]
00:03:511 (3) - ctrl+g
00:43:195 (1) - I think spin should be ended at00:44:333 or it's hard to hit 00:44:713 at time :(
02:11:107 (7) - end at02:11:295 will be sounds fine:3
Raose

Yuuki Aoi wrote:

Raose's Hard
00:13:954 (4) - make it a triple repeating slider? u don't have to though. trying to emphasize the stronger sounding beats
00:38:257 (4) - make this a blanket? ok

OblivioN wrote:

[Hard]
00:13:954 (4) - sounds uncomfortable…… think it sounds ok D:
the chicken was good ty
osu file format v12

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394,365,83068,2,0,P|356:352|324:328,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,173,83447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
401,154,83637,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,244,83827,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,232,84017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,116,84207,5,0,0:0:0:0:
332,116,84587,1,8,0:0:0:0:
266,64,84776,2,0,P|181:53|108:77,1,160
44,120,85346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
105,275,85536,6,0,P|190:286|263:262,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,187,86106,2,0,P|248:183|212:198,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,322,86485,2,0,P|334:289|337:250,1,80
259,263,86865,1,8,0:0:0:0:
233,339,87055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,332,87245,5,0,0:0:0:0:
397,332,87625,2,0,L|471:269,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,204,88004,2,0,P|391:130|411:54,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
470,109,88574,6,0,P|388:134|310:104,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,55,89144,1,8,0:0:0:0:
186,83,89333,2,0,P|156:161|172:261,1,160
186,312,89903,1,8,0:0:0:0:
261,337,90093,1,0,0:0:0:0:
391,198,90283,6,0,P|303:165|235:179,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,205,90852,2,0,L|91:246,1,80
30,291,91232,2,0,P|71:323|103:325,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,252,91612,6,0,P|233:160|166:119,1,160
107,144,92182,2,0,P|103:107|125:68,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,51,92561,2,0,L|285:50,1,80
352,84,92941,1,8,0:3:0:0:
286,129,93131,1,2,0:0:0:0:
342,5,93321,6,0,P|417:39|421:122,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,171,93890,2,0,P|301:196|221:189,1,160
151,148,94460,1,8,0:0:0:0:
87,197,94650,6,0,P|45:273|92:339,1,160
198,279,95219,2,0,P|161:265|122:267,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,361,95599,2,0,P|258:339|275:311,1,80
268,236,95979,1,8,0:0:0:0:
234,163,96169,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,279,96359,6,0,P|278:315|345:263,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,210,96928,2,0,L|413:376,1,160
476,319,97498,1,8,0:0:0:0:
450,169,97688,6,0,P|374:118|305:152,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,196,98257,1,8,0:0:0:0:
337,216,98447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
407,51,98637,2,0,P|311:54|257:90,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,224,99207,6,0,P|115:258|43:228,1,160
33,148,99776,2,0,L|32:58,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,96,100156,1,8,0:0:0:0:
177,134,100346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,176,100536,1,8,0:0:0:0:
107,96,100726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,218,100916,6,0,P|213:245|222:283,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,354,101295,2,0,P|116:315|143:287,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,279,101675,2,0,P|266:348|188:353,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,283,102245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
373,249,102435,5,12,0:3:0:0:
373,249,102625,1,12,0:3:0:0:
139,249,103004,1,12,0:3:0:0:
254,137,103384,1,12,0:3:0:0:
297,69,103574,1,12,0:3:0:0:
215,69,103764,1,12,0:3:0:0:
215,69,105473,5,8,0:0:0:0:
134,181,105663,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,169,105852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,85,106042,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,169,106232,2,0,L|294:185,3,40,8|0|0|0,0:3|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,179,106612,2,0,L|362:172,3,40,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,159,106992,6,0,P|429:86|395:8,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,4,107561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,23,107751,2,0,P|237:89|249:116,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,223,108131,2,0,P|307:187|303:148,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,173,108511,6,0,L|228:177,1,80
303,148,108890,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,98,109080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,223,109270,2,0,P|310:255|365:285,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,140,109650,2,0,P|386:165|373:203,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,357,110030,6,8,P|465:288|452:211,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,140,110599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
418,140,110789,2,0,L|334:146,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
223,78,111169,2,0,L|303:73,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,225,111549,6,0,P|330:257|274:268,1,80
160,229,111928,2,0,P|195:197|251:186,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,298,112308,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,315,112498,1,8,0:3:0:0:
84,258,112688,1,8,0:0:0:0:
93,178,112878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
209,118,113068,6,0,P|224:177|210:221,2,80,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,118,113827,1,8,0:0:0:0:
301,248,114207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,248,114397,6,0,P|310:155|296:90,1,160
296,90,115156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,43,115346,2,0,P|390:57|447:57,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,50,115726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
403,206,116106,6,0,P|379:259|368:298,2,80,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,206,116865,1,8,0:0:0:0:
473,349,117245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
393,357,117435,6,0,P|310:334|294:263,1,160
292,269,118194,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,288,118384,2,0,L|326:338,3,40,8|8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,342,118764,2,0,L|260:342,3,40,8|8|0|0,0:3|0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,336,119144,6,0,P|161:312|98:247,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
114,170,119713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
186,137,119903,2,0,P|231:150|262:181,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,251,120283,2,0,P|214:238|183:207,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,202,120663,6,0,L|414:200,1,80
484,195,121042,1,8,0:0:0:0:
437,129,121232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,202,121422,2,0,P|337:258|361:291,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,206,121802,2,0,P|443:168|437:129,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,276,122182,6,0,P|428:315|504:287,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
507,217,122751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
501,137,122941,2,0,L|487:41,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,33,123321,1,8,0:0:0:0:
334,125,123511,6,0,B|272:138|228:104|228:104|176:143,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
134,191,124080,2,0,P|166:213|217:204,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,188,124460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,134,124650,1,8,0:3:0:0:
205,210,124840,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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282,188,125599,2,0,P|291:244|328:273,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,291,125979,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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355,338,126549,6,0,L|274:342,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,273,126928,2,0,L|239:270,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,341,127308,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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87,187,127878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,36,128257,6,0,P|98:23|44:43,1,80
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336,201,130346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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284,258,130726,1,8,0:0:0:0:
419,219,130916,1,8,0:0:0:0:
319,122,131106,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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99,176,136961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
captin1

Yuuki Aoi wrote:

Came from your M4M Queue! Sorry if the mod's bad, i'm new when it comes to modding! Hope to be better!

Easy
01:43:004 (2) - flip it upside down? to make the flow better I like the way it is now, fits with the kiai ending
02:08:257 (3) - add soft whistle to the head and drum-hitwhistle to the tail. I think it works wonderfully.

Nice diff, can't spot anything else, though I think the 3/2 space between objects are kind of difficult for beginner players to playout but since they're kind of.. consistent, maybe it'll work out :D.

Normal
00:12:245 (3) - and 00:13:004 (4) - change it to be like this? http://puu.sh/8fOyN.png
00:24:397 (3) - Curve it so it faces to 00:25:156 (4) - ? to make the flow better. I like the angled pattern
00:46:992 (3) - drop it down a little? it almost touches the HP Bar! key word is almost ;)
00:49:270 (4) - add soft hitwhistle in the head?
01:13:194 (3) - ^ and tail just head will be fine
01:48:700 (4) - add soft whistle in the head?

Insane
01:18:701 (4) - NC
01:19:271 (7) - NC swap with 01:19:461 (1) -
01:20:219 (1) - to 01:20:980 (5) - add default soft-hitwhistle? (optional) nah, I like this being soft
01:22:119 (4) - add soft-hitwhistle?
01:27:246 (1) - remove soft-hitwhistle in tail?
01:43:954 add spinner until 01:45:093 ? I like the short break, fits the song well

It's really hard to mod insanes for me because it's a matter of mapping style. There's not really much to fix here either.

Good Luck with ranking this! :D
"OblivioN"
hi,from your m4m queue :3
[Normal]
00:15:093 (2) - blanket with 00:14:333 (1) - not really necessary
I think the diff is hard for newbie……consider about decreasing difficulty it's fine, this map isn't for beginners, that's what easy is for

[Insane]
00:03:511 (3) - ctrl+g flows well but it puts the jump in the wrong place so no thanks
00:43:195 (1) - I think spin should be ended at00:44:333 or it's hard to hit 00:44:713 at time :(
02:11:107 (7) - end at02:11:295 will be sounds fine:3 made the slider repeat instead

thanks!

i had chicken today too
Ozato Fumika
I love you for mapping standard of this song.

Have my babies I mean stars
Topic Starter
captin1
omg o.o thank you so much!
Chewin
General

  1. odd bg dimensions, try to get it in 4:3 pls
  2. Combo3 colour is inconsistent between difficult, I would make it consistent (at least between E/N/I because mapped by you)
  3. Inconsistency in kiai times by 1ms. Please check it carefully and snap them properly
Easy

  1. 00:02:182 (1) - It could sound nazi but it isn't. I would move the second slider's point some grid left because actually I think it's tail is placed too much on the right and it flows bad considering where you have placed the next slider 00:03:511 (2). I mean, placing it in this other way would help the flow much better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548044
  2. 00:31:802 (2) - I think that clap is missing on this slider's head
  3. 00:38:637 (1,2) - Well.. to be consistent with previous slider you should add a whistle on (1)'s repeat like you did for the previous 00:32:561 (1,2,1,2)'s tails, and add a whistle on 00:40:916 (2) as well
  4. 00:50:409 - I'd really add a circle with clap hitsound here if I was you. This part looks so empty without that strong clap sound and don't using it just makes the clap on 00:50:789 (1)'s tail sound very loud and bad. Really consider to add it, it's very needed
  5. 01:05:979 (1) - Add finish here, it sounds really cool
  6. 01:08:257 (3) - You forgot clap on this slider's head
  7. 01:28:004 (2) - Clap on the tail again
Normal

  1. 00:31:612 (4) - Add clap on repeat to fill the drum in the music
  2. 02:05:219 (1) - I'd give you same suggestion I wrote above for 00:02:182 (1) in the normal. Move this slider's tail on the right more, it helps the flow very much
  3. 02:10:916 (5,6) - What about to replace these two circles with a slider? I mean: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548075
Hard

  1. I'd say HP and OD -1
  2. 00:49:840 (2,3,4,1) - I don't like how this part plays. What about to make something like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548102 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548107
    SPOILER
    408,168,49840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    384,80,50030,2,0,P|408:36|448:16,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    408,168,50599,2,0,P|364:188|316:176,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    276,116,50979,6,0,P|188:100|112:116,1,160
    44,72,51549,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    8,152,51738,2,0,P|7:190|20:241,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 01:02:941 (1) - Finish on the head? I think it sounds cool
  4. 01:05:219 - This missing tick really confuses player, trust me. I know you are trying to follow the vocal sound here but you used custom claps in the previous low part (and next) as well. So, you really need to add a circle with a clap hitsound to emphasize that drum in the music. Actually it's pretty confusing.
  5. 01:23:827 (5,6,1,2) - There is something wrong here. The 01:24:017 (6) should be placed where there is actually the 01:24:207 (1). You could switch them and move the 01:24:587 (2) on 01:24:776 (3)'s head (that's the correct version): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548122
  6. 01:27:245 (1) - Finish? It sounds nicely together with previous one on 01:25:536 (1)'s head
Insane

  1. 00:14:334 (1) - Finish on the head
  2. 00:16:042 (4,5,6) - What about this? It flows much better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548131
  3. 01:05:789 (10) - I'd remove this circle
  4. 01:19:840 (5) - This slider shouldn't be placed here considering that it's 1/1 from 01:19:461 (2) on the timeline. But we can easily fix this just adding two circles on 01:19:650 and 01:19:745 to make a triple on the actual (3)'s head
  5. 01:33:322 (1) - The sliderball is slowed too much due to the slider's shape. Sorry but new rules say that this kind of slider is not rankable. Remove those two red point to fix that and try to get a different shape.
  6. 02:05:220 (1) - Finish on the head
I think this mapset still needs more work, especially on the Hard and Insane diff. That's it for now, good luck dude :3
Topic Starter
captin1

Chewin wrote:

General

  1. odd bg dimensions, try to get it in 4:3 pls The bg is actually currently in 16:9, just not the max dimensions for it, I'll see what I can do though
  2. Combo3 colour is inconsistent between difficult, I would make it consistent (at least between E/N/I because mapped by you) oops, I had changed it in the insane but forgot to copy it over
  3. Inconsistency in kiai times by 1ms. Please check it carefully and snap them properly D: green lines why
Easy

  1. 00:02:182 (1) - It could sound nazi but it isn't. I would move the second slider's point some grid left because actually I think it's tail is placed too much on the right and it flows bad considering where you have placed the next slider 00:03:511 (2). I mean, placing it in this other way would help the flow much better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548044 fixed
  2. 00:31:802 (2) - I think that clap is missing on this slider's head fixed
  3. 00:38:637 (1,2) - Well.. to be consistent with previous slider you should add a whistle on (1)'s repeat like you did for the previous 00:32:561 (1,2,1,2)'s tails, and add a whistle on 00:40:916 (2) as well added on the repeat but I think I'll leave 2 without it
  4. 00:50:409 - I'd really add a circle with clap hitsound here if I was you. This part looks so empty without that strong clap sound and don't using it just makes the clap on 00:50:789 (1)'s tail sound very loud and bad. Really consider to add it, it's very needed yep!
  5. 01:05:979 (1) - Add finish here, it sounds really cool nice!
  6. 01:08:257 (3) - You forgot clap on this slider's head fixed
  7. 01:28:004 (2) - Clap on the tail again fixed
Normal

  1. 00:31:612 (4) - Add clap on repeat to fill the drum in the music
  2. 02:05:219 (1) - I'd give you same suggestion I wrote above for 00:02:182 (1) in the normal. Move this slider's tail on the right more, it helps the flow very much
  3. 02:10:916 (5,6) - What about to replace these two circles with a slider? I mean: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548075
all fixed here

Insane

  1. 00:14:334 (1) - Finish on the head fixed
  2. 00:16:042 (4,5,6) - What about this? It flows much better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548131 yeah!
  3. 01:05:789 (10) - I'd remove this circle I'd like to keep this for the bass drum note, so adjusted so 9 isn't stacked anymore
  4. 01:19:840 (5) - This slider shouldn't be placed here considering that it's 1/1 from 01:19:461 (2) on the timeline. But we can easily fix this just adding two circles on 01:19:650 and 01:19:745 to make a triple on the actual (3)'s head woah awesome
  5. 01:33:322 (1) - The sliderball is slowed too much due to the slider's shape. Sorry but new rules say that this kind of slider is not rankable. Remove those two red point to fix that and try to get a different shape. ;w; rip slider, spaced out the red points so it doesn't slow down
  6. 02:05:220 (1) - Finish on the head Fixed
I think this mapset still needs more work, especially on the Hard and Insane diff. That's it for now, good luck dude :3
thank you so much!
Raose

Chewin wrote:

Hard

  1. I'd say HP and OD -1 ok
  2. 00:49:840 (2,3,4,1) - I don't like how this part plays. What about to make something like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548102 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548107 good idea ty! didn't follow code exactly
    SPOILER
    408,168,49840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    384,80,50030,2,0,P|408:36|448:16,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    408,168,50599,2,0,P|364:188|316:176,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    276,116,50979,6,0,P|188:100|112:116,1,160
    44,72,51549,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    8,152,51738,2,0,P|7:190|20:241,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 01:02:941 (1) - Finish on the head? I think it sounds cool nice
  4. 01:05:219 - This missing tick really confuses player, trust me. I know you are trying to follow the vocal sound here but you used custom claps in the previous low part (and next) as well. So, you really need to add a circle with a clap hitsound to emphasize that drum in the music. Actually it's pretty confusing. added~
  5. 01:23:827 (5,6,1,2) - There is something wrong here. The 01:24:017 (6) should be placed where there is actually the 01:24:207 (1). You could switch them and move the 01:24:587 (2) on 01:24:776 (3)'s head (that's the correct version): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548122 nice
  6. 01:27:245 (1) - Finish? It sounds nicely together with previous one on 01:25:536 (1)'s head suuuure why not
i want ramen
osu file format v12

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waxman
[Insane]

TAKE A BREAK
I confirmed this offset is fine.

01:30:663 (2) - WOULD YOU LIKE SOME CHEESE? :D

01:43:004 (3) - do you like this one? x:393 y:135.
02:16:202 - remove red line. you can use SD 1/16 and increase timeline zone, then place at 02:16:208. There is a difference only 6ms. (High recommended)

[Raose's Hard]
00:08:068 (5) - It's strange a bit for me. move to x:144 y:120
00:19:460 (3,4) - There is no issue. But this spacing should be shorter.
00:36:169 (2,3) - miss spacing? This spacing is strange a bit, isn't it? 00:36:359 (3,4) move to x:104 y:88.
00:36:169 (2,3) - move to x:448 y:176
01:04:270 (3,4,5) - too far?
01:19:460 (4) - NC. because you took distance at 01:19:270 (3,4). Otherwise, 01:19:460 (4,5) move to x:256 y:248.
01:46:232 (5,6) - move to x:266 y:179.
01:57:435 (1) - remove NC
01:58:194 (2) - NC

PEROPERO Raose :D

WHAT A NICE MAP GUYS.
GOGO RANKED.
Raose

waxman wrote:

[Raose's Hard]
00:08:068 (5) - It's strange a bit for me. move to x:144 y:120 ok~
00:19:460 (3,4) - There is no issue. But this spacing should be shorter. i wanted a small jump there ;w;
00:36:169 (2,3) - miss spacing? This spacing is strange a bit, isn't it? 00:36:359 (3,4) move to x:104 y:88. hmm those coordinates look ab it weird since they overlap the previous sliders D: yea the spacing is strange, but i wanted some small jumps there ;w; don't know how to make spacing more even and still have the pattern be pretty
00:36:169 (2,3) - move to x:448 y:176 that would be really far LOL D:
01:04:270 (3,4,5) - too far? changed
01:19:460 (4) - NC. because you took distance at 01:19:270 (3,4). Otherwise, 01:19:460 (4,5) move to x:256 y:248. suure NC, why not
01:46:232 (5,6) - move to x:266 y:179. i kinda wnated the stream to be stacked on 01:45:852 (3) though :( doesn't seem too confusing to play
01:57:435 (1) - remove NC ah, i'm NCing by every large white tick mostly
01:58:194 (2) - NC ^

PEROPERO Raose :D PEROPERO WAXMAN
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Topic Starter
captin1

waxman wrote:

[Insane]

TAKE A BREAK
I confirmed this offset is fine. pro waxman XD

01:30:663 (2) - WOULD YOU LIKE SOME CHEESE? :D I WOULD LIKE SOME CHEESE THANK YOU didn't use this placement but reduced the distance a bit

01:43:004 (3) - do you like this one? x:393 y:135. cool idea but I like mine
02:16:202 - remove red line. you can use SD 1/16 and increase timeline zone, then place at 02:16:208. There is a difference only 6ms. (High recommended) I think the 6ms is important, especially for HR mod

WHAT A NICE MAP GUYS.
GOGO RANKED.
thanks!

dammit rose now i can't just select all
Trust
can't think of anything witty
[General]
  1. Widescreen Support is enabled in all difficulties except Insane. Make sure it's toggled consistently.
  2. Still have inconsistent kiai times from 1ms delayed green lines in Raose's Hard ;;
  3. Just an idea, I think you could liven up the hitsounding for the section between 00:32:561 and 00:44:713 by using S:C1 whistles with 55~60% vol. on the second and fourth ticks of each measure.
[Easy]
  1. 00:49:270 (3) - You can move the the node at x:376 y:172 to the right a couple grids to give this slider a more defined shape.
  2. 01:24:207 (1) - Feels rather late to be introducing a 3/2 slider, beginners may instinctively release too early. How about shortening this by 1/2 as you've already familiarized them with 3/2 gaps,it would play more intuitively.
  3. 01:56:106 (3) - NC here fits with your pattern as we've already passed through two measures.
  4. 02:08:257 (3) - Same as above.
[Normal]
  1. 01:58:194 (4) - Whistle on the head to fit with how you've been following the sound here?
Whoa so good.
[Raose's Hard]
  1. 00:08:068 (5) - You can move this to x:152 y:120 for a cleaner triangle formation with 00:07:308 (3,4,5).
  2. 00:13:954 (4) - How about just making this a 1/4 reverse slider and using a drum-clap on the end of it? It feels awkward to release a slider on such a powerful drum sound and mapping this red tick makes sense with how you follow the rhythm for this section.
  3. 00:17:751 (3) - Spacing is a little bit off in this pattern. Move this slider to x:78 y:235 for a cleaner triangle shape.
  4. 00:20:130 - Unneeded and unsnapped green line here. Might as well remove it.
  5. 00:43:194 (1) - Considering reducing the volume of this spinner as captin did. The loud spin isn't very fitting here.
  6. 01:34:650 (1,2) - Making a looser blanket between these two to match 01:35:219 (2,3) would make this pattern a lot prettier.
  7. 01:45:473 (1,2,3,4) - How about trying a jump pattern like this or something similar to reflect the crescendo in the drum hits? I feel that a smaller jump distance between 01:45:473 (1,2) would lead more comfortably into this part.
    Example
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    206,92,106042,1,8,0:0:0:0:
Mmmmm very nice!
[Insane]
  1. 00:38:448 (5,6) - These whistles sounds a bit strange, the one on the blue in particular. Maybe just remove them for consistency with 00:41:486 (6,7,1)?
  2. 00:50:505 (4) - I didn't really like how this played and don't really feel that the music warrants a note here. Consider deleting it and making a distanced jump between 00:50:030 (3,5) I feel plays better and fits more with how you've patterned things.
  3. 01:45:474 (1,2,3,4) - Pretty much the same suggestion that I gave Raose, a gradual spacing increase between these would fit very nicely with the crescendo effect and lead into this part more comfortably.
  4. 01:47:372 (2) - Remove this finish? I don't think it's accentuating anything nor do you use one here for Easy and Normal.
  5. 02:10:347 (3) - You could add a whistle here, it would follow the same sound as heard on the heads of 02:09:588 (1,2).
  6. 02:16:391 (2) - I gotta say this part really did feel empty. Consider shortening this by 1/2 and adding a circle so you can catch the guitar sound on like Raose did which was very naicu.

    I really enjoy this map so I don't have much to say, my apologies.
Yay so lovely~
Good luck!
Topic Starter
captin1
"Trust"
can't think of anything witty *insert trust pun here*
[General]
  1. Widescreen Support is enabled in all difficulties except Insane. Make sure it's toggled consistently.
  2. Still have inconsistent kiai times from 1ms delayed green lines in Raose's Hard ;;
  3. Just an idea, I think you could liven up the hitsounding for the section between 00:32:561 and 00:44:713 by using S:C1 whistles with 55~60% vol. on the second and fourth ticks of each measure. hmmm I think it's alright, there's plenty of whistles as is
[Easy]
  1. 00:49:270 (3) - You can move the the node at x:376 y:172 to the right a couple grids to give this slider a more defined shape.
  2. 01:24:207 (1) - Feels rather late to be introducing a 3/2 slider, beginners may instinctively release too early. How about shortening this by 1/2 as you've already familiarized them with 3/2 gaps,it would play more intuitively.
  3. 01:56:106 (3) - NC here fits with your pattern as we've already passed through two measures.
  4. 02:08:257 (3) - Same as above.
[Normal]
  1. 01:58:194 (4) - Whistle on the head to fit with how you've been following the sound here?
Whoa so good. all done in these two!

[Insane]
  1. 00:38:448 (5,6) - These whistles sounds a bit strange, the one on the blue in particular. Maybe just remove them for consistency with 00:41:486 (6,7,1)?
  2. 00:50:505 (4) - I didn't really like how this played and don't really feel that the music warrants a note here. Consider deleting it and making a distanced jump between 00:50:030 (3,5) I feel plays better and fits more with how you've patterned things. worked this out another way, removing the repeat and making it a full 5 note stream
  3. 01:45:474 (1,2,3,4) - Pretty much the same suggestion that I gave Raose, a gradual spacing increase between these would fit very nicely with the crescendo effect and lead into this part more comfortably. lazy to change placements so I did a ctrl+g to mix up the jump a bit
  4. 01:47:372 (2) - Remove this finish? I don't think it's accentuating anything nor do you use one here for Easy and Normal.
  5. 02:10:347 (3) - You could add a whistle here, it would follow the same sound as heard on the heads of 02:09:588 (1,2).
  6. 02:16:391 (2) - I gotta say this part really did feel empty. Consider shortening this by 1/2 and adding a circle so you can catch the guitar sound on like Raose did which was very naicu.

    I really enjoy this map so I don't have much to say, my apologies.
Yay so lovely~
Good luck!

thanks ily trust
Natsu
Hi~ from my Queue

General:

  1. Resize your BG <:
  2. Kiai end is unsnapped by 1 ms should be 01:43:765
Insane:

  1. 00:02:182 add whistle or finish? is a bit similar to 00:03:511
  2. 00:04:651 (6,1) - blanket <:
  3. 00:06:550 missing whistle? since you have one in 00:03:511 - is the same sound in the music <:
  4. 00:14:239 nothing in the music here, remove this circle? since there is just a triplet 00:13:954 -, 00:14:050 -, 00:14:144
  5. 00:32:562 (1,2) - a single 1/1 slider will fit better the vocals and music in this part IMO, like you did in 00:34:080
  6. 00:43:194 (1) - mmm I'll feel better if you start the spinner in 00:43:384 with the vocals and yeah map this beat properly 00:43:194-, like:
  7. 00:50:409 (4,5,6,7) - this stream doesn't fit the music IMO, maybe:
  8. 01:18:322 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - this is nice o:
  9. 01:42:435 (1,2,3) -use a more noticeable spacing <:, to keep better the difference gaps in the time line, since the spacing is almost the same visually talking
  10. 01:44:523 why no spinner like in 00:43:194
  11. 01:46:233 (5,6) - this will be easily confused with 1/2 jumps <:, some NC or reduce the spacing can help
Raose's Hard:

  1. 00:02:182 add whistle or finish?
  2. 00:06:928 (2,4) - nazi, stack it properly D:!
  3. 00:11:106 add a circle, since this part sound empty and not consistent with others similars parts like 00:10:346
  4. 00:13:954 you need to add another repeat in this slider, the triplet is very prominent to be ignored
  5. 00:17:371 (1,2,3) - this triangle can be better
  6. 00:25:726 (3,4,5,6) - mmm a bit confused pattern for a hard, but maybe is ok :P
  7. 00:35:599 (1,2,3) - mmm use the same spacing between them, actually doesn't play comfortable
  8. 00:43:194 same as Insane, I just feel the spinner fit better with the vocals starting in 00:43:384
  9. 00:53:447 (4,3) - If you are aiming to stack them, try to do it better it doesn't look nice :/
  10. 01:32:561 (3,4,5) - maybe some 1/4 repeats slider? to fit the prominents drums in the music? like you did in 01:46:232 (5,6) -
  11. 01:37:688 (1,4) - blanket pls Raose moe D:!
Normal:

  1. 00:02:182 same as Insane, some hitsound will be nice here ♥
  2. 00:04:650 I really don't like this rhythm, since the slider is ending in a strong beat <:, what about:
  3. 00:13:574 (5,6) - I feel a slider will represent the music at this point, something like this:
  4. 00:16:802 (6) - same as 00:04:650
  5. 00:43:194 same as the others diffs
  6. 01:30:852 (2,3,4) - is the first time you used this kind of patterns, personally I feel it a bit hard for a normal diff, use a slider instead of 01:31:422 (3,4) - or remove 01:31:422 - ?
Easy:

  1. 00:02:182 same as Insane
  2. 00:43:194 same as the other diffs
  3. cool
Nice mapset and song ♥ take care baka ♥
Topic Starter
captin1
"Natsu"
Hi~ from my Queue

General:

  1. Resize your BG <: idk where you found this lol, source image from pixiv was smaller than this
  2. Kiai end is unsnapped by 1 ms should be 01:43:765 green lines can eat my shit
Insane:

  1. 00:02:182 add whistle or finish? is a bit similar to 00:03:511
  2. 00:04:651 (6,1) - blanket <:
  3. 00:06:550 missing whistle? since you have one in 00:03:511 - is the same sound in the music <: whistle is there baka
  4. 00:14:239 nothing in the music here, remove this circle? since there is just a triplet 00:13:954 -, 00:14:050 -, 00:14:144
  5. 00:32:562 (1,2) - a single 1/1 slider will fit better the vocals and music in this part IMO, like you did in 00:34:080
  6. 00:43:194 (1) - mmm I'll feel better if you start the spinner in 00:43:384 with the vocals and yeah map this beat properly 00:43:194-, like: fixed spinner but kept note before as is
  7. 00:50:409 (4,5,6,7) - this stream doesn't fit the music IMO, maybe: will consider, but keeping for now
  8. 01:18:322 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - this is nice o: :>
  9. 01:42:435 (1,2,3) -use a more noticeable spacing <:, to keep better the difference gaps in the time line, since the spacing is almost the same visually talking
  10. 01:44:523 why no spinner like in 00:43:194 too short of a time, plus i like the empty space
  11. 01:46:233 (5,6) - this will be easily confused with 1/2 jumps <:, some NC or reduce the spacing can help
Normal:

  1. 00:02:182 same as Insane, some hitsound will be nice here ♥
  2. 00:04:650 I really don't like this rhythm, since the slider is ending in a strong beat <:, what about: i like this slider :>
  3. 00:13:574 (5,6) - I feel a slider will represent the music at this point, something like this: hm no thanks, the two circles map the guitar and the drum here so i think it's fine
  4. 00:16:802 (6) - same as 00:04:650 :>
  5. 00:43:194 same as the others diffs
  6. 01:30:852 (2,3,4) - is the first time you used this kind of patterns, personally I feel it a bit hard for a normal diff, use a slider instead of 01:31:422 (3,4) - or remove 01:31:422 - ?
Easy:

  1. 00:02:182 same as Insane
  2. 00:43:194 same as the other diffs
  3. cool
Nice mapset and song ♥

nom
Raose
i trust you

Trust wrote:

[Raose's Hard]
  1. 00:08:068 (5) - You can move this to x:152 y:120 for a cleaner triangle formation with 00:07:308 (3,4,5). kay
  2. 00:13:954 (4) - How about just making this a 1/4 reverse slider and using a drum-clap on the end of it? It feels awkward to release a slider on such a powerful drum sound and mapping this red tick makes sense with how you follow the rhythm for this section. alright
  3. 00:17:751 (3) - Spacing is a little bit off in this pattern. Move this slider to x:78 y:235 for a cleaner triangle shape. ok
  4. 00:20:130 - Unneeded and unsnapped green line here. Might as well remove it. ok
  5. 00:43:194 (1) - Considering reducing the volume of this spinner as captin did. The loud spin isn't very fitting here. ok
  6. 01:34:650 (1,2) - Making a looser blanket between these two to match 01:35:219 (2,3) would make this pattern a lot prettier. ok
  7. 01:45:473 (1,2,3,4) - How about trying a jump pattern like this or something similar to reflect the crescendo in the drum hits? I feel that a smaller jump distance between 01:45:473 (1,2) would lead more comfortably into this part. made it a regular star instead [box=Example]
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ni hao

Natsu wrote:

Raose's Hard:

  1. 00:02:182 add whistle or finish? sorry it sounds a bit odd to me D:
  2. 00:06:928 (2,4) - nazi, stack it properly D:! ok
  3. 00:11:106 add a circle, since this part sound empty and not consistent with others similars parts like 00:10:346 ok
  4. 00:13:954 you need to add another repeat in this slider, the triplet is very prominent to be ignored ok
  5. 00:17:371 (1,2,3) - this triangle can be better ok
  6. 00:25:726 (3,4,5,6) - mmm a bit confused pattern for a hard, but maybe is ok :P imo it feels more comfortable to play compared to a square, everyone hates squares
  7. 00:35:599 (1,2,3) - mmm use the same spacing between them, actually doesn't play comfortable changed pattern
  8. 00:43:194 same as Insane, I just feel the spinner fit better with the vocals starting in 00:43:384 ok
  9. 00:53:447 (4,3) - If you are aiming to stack them, try to do it better it doesn't look nice :/ wasn't trying to but stacked
  10. 01:32:561 (3,4,5) - maybe some 1/4 repeats slider? to fit the prominents drums in the music? like you did in 01:46:232 (5,6) - ok
  11. 01:37:688 (1,4) - blanket pls Raose moe D:! fixed

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dkun
I assume you've gotten what Rose has told you about her difficulty. Please let me know when you've updated!
kanpakyin
please wait for us,the diffs will be done soon!
Raose
lol update with my green lines resnapped

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301,248,114207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,248,114397,6,0,P|310:155|296:90,1,160
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359,43,115346,2,0,P|390:57|447:57,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,50,115726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
403,206,116106,6,0,P|379:259|368:298,2,80,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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432,206,121802,2,0,P|443:168|437:129,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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507,217,122751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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412,33,123321,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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205,210,124840,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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282,188,125599,2,0,P|291:244|328:273,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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275,341,127308,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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319,122,130536,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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419,219,130916,1,8,0:0:0:0:
319,122,131106,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,116,136202,5,8,0:0:0:0:
344,116,136391,2,0,B|294:130|294:130|238:125|238:125|185:142,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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