Silent Siren - stella* [Taiko|Osu] · forum

captin1

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Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

captin1 2014-04-06T04:18:06+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, May 24, 2014 at 1:41:45 PM

Artist: Silent Siren
Title: stella*
Tags: start raose climbb65588 kanpakyin
BPM: 158
Filesize: 4285kb
Play Time: 02:16
Difficulties Available:

Climbb & KPY's Taiko Oni (4.94 stars, 673 notes)
Easy (1.94 stars, 122 notes)
Insane (5 stars, 434 notes)
Muzukashii (4.87 stars, 526 notes)
Normal (4.31 stars, 230 notes)
Raose's Hard (4.94 stars, 337 notes)

Download: Silent Siren - stella*
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hard: Raose
Taiko: climbb65588 & kanpakyin
full version: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ARO8Zr7smPU

Last edited by captin1 2014-05-24T18:42:25+00:00, edited 23 times in total.

Trust

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Joined March 2012

Trust 2014-04-06T06:21:42+00:00

haha first

Raose

698 posts

Joined July 2012

Raose 2014-04-06T06:36:33+00:00

actually i was the first to testplay ok

captin1

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captin1 2014-04-06T06:37:12+00:00

actually no the first to testplay was broccoly before the map was even submitted

Raose

698 posts

Joined July 2012

Raose 2014-04-06T06:57:06+00:00

first testplay after submitted D:!

-AbaY-

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Joined January 2013

-AbaY- 2014-04-07T04:54:32+00:00

nice beatmap

captin1

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captin1 2014-04-07T04:58:27+00:00

hey thanks!

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-04-19T20:05:48+00:00

mmk m4m!

from your queue

[Insane]

00:06:550 (5,6) - for this you could just copy paste one of the sliders and rotate it by 120, it just makes the pattern neater
00:03:511 (3,4) - ^
00:10:537 (5,6) - ^ (theres gunna be alot of these b prepared lol)
00:21:929 (1,2) - ^
01:17:182 (3,4) - ^
01:41:296 (2,3) - ^
00:09:018 (4) - flows better from previous note if you ctrl g
01:30:284 (1) - ^
00:15:094 (2,4) - space out a bit more, looks a bit too cramped for an insane
00:21:549 (5,5) - perhaps try stacking
00:48:322 (3,2) - ^
01:00:284 (2,4) - ^ i don't think this overlap here looks too good lol
00:47:562 (7,1) - ^ although these probably don't really matter it just makes it seem neater
00:31:708 (2) - overmapped i think
00:33:322 (4,1) - ehh this overlap isnt too pretty
00:56:866 (1,2) - you should just copy one of the sliders and ctrl ghj

[Raose's Hard]

00:19:460 (3) - center this a bit more between (1) and (2)
SPOILER
00:39:776 (4,4) - stack better
00:50:979 (2,2) - ^
01:01:612 - there's a strong sound here that you're not mapping out to fix that,
01:01:232 (3,1) - you should make rhythm more consistent with 00:58:194 (1) -
01:08:257 (3,1) - they touch, space out
01:17:182 (2) - make this curve more like this
SPOILER
01:46:232 (5,6) - make parallel ? idk just looks better to me
SPOILER
02:03:511 (1,4) - overlap makes this part look kinda messy, and possibly hard to read
02:10:536 (1,2,3,4) - might be too difficult for hard. not sure tho, it's a matter of opinion

[Normal]

01:26:106 (5) - flows better if you made it parallel with (6)
SPOILER
01:31:422 (3,4) - this bit may be too hard, consider using a slider instead
01:37:688 (4,5) - ehh this overlap isnt that pretty ._. and might make it hard to read

[Easy]

00:14:333 (1,3) - don't overlap?
01:09:776 (2,3) - ctrl g these and use that rhythm instead, i feel like it makes more sense if the slider is mapping that guitar or w/e

Great mapset! gl for ranking

tollox

31 posts

Joined March 2013

tollox 2014-04-19T20:09:35+00:00

Here from your m4m queue

Fun map!
You're clearly a better modder so take advice with a grain of salt

Easy

00:03:511 (2) - Sounds better to me if you start it on the white tick, the strong beat on the white feels like it's missing
00:06:549 (2) - ^
00:18:700 (2) - ^
00:56:865 (1,2) - Perhaps a note between these?
01:27:245 (1,2) - ^
01:35:599 (3,1) - ^

Normal

00:26:485 (1) - Sounds better like this http://puu.sh/8fdRo.jpg
00:29:523 (1) - Same thing here
00:28:954 (5,1) - Also consider placing a note between these two, sounds pretty nice
01:01:042 (2) - Possibly http://puu.sh/8felP.jpg (or with a repeat on that slider)
01:29:713 (5,6) - These stacked notes are both on the "by" part of baby, possibly a tiny overmap for normal

Roase's Hard

00:30:663 (3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - This part feels clumsy to me. Not sure how it could be made better, replacing 4 and 5 with a slider and unstacking the blue 1?
00:43:004 (4,1) - All other diffs have a spinner here. Not necessary to add one (especially since different mapper), but it would make them feel more like a whole, and a spinner does fit here.
01:00:663 (2,3,1) - Maybe this instead http://puu.sh/8fgnW.jpg
01:36:359 (1,2) - This overlap isn't very pretty and you don't really have any other overlaps
01:41:295 (2) - Curving it more around the 3 would look nicer

Insane

Couple of unsnapped sliders, check aimod
00:02:942 (2,3) - Doesn't look very balanced. Perhaps wrap the 2 more around the 3?
00:35:600 (1,2,3,4) - How about this? http://puu.sh/8fhE5.jpg or some other remap to music
02:07:878 (6) - Replace this by a mini-stream?

Raose

698 posts

Joined July 2012

Raose 2014-04-19T23:59:35+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
[Raose's Hard]
00:19:460 (3) - center this a bit more between (1) and (2) oops nice
SPOILER
00:39:776 (4,4) - stack better wasn't trying to but ok
00:50:979 (2,2) - ^ eh wasn't trying to, and it would sorta mess up the pattern & spacing D: sorry
01:01:612 - there's a strong sound here that you're not mapping out to fix that,
01:01:232 (3,1) - you should make rhythm more consistent with 00:58:194 (1) - changed to 2 1/2 sliders
01:08:257 (3,1) - they touch, space out ok
01:17:182 (2) - make this curve more like this what happened to your slider LOL changed
SPOILER
01:46:232 (5,6) - make parallel ? idk just looks better to me i wanted a circular flow to lead into (1)
SPOILER
02:03:511 (1,4) - overlap makes this part look kinda messy, and possibly hard to read yea but idk how to change it D:
02:10:536 (1,2,3,4) - might be too difficult for hard. not sure tho, it's a matter of opinion the jumps aren't too big, and it's a pretty cool way to end the map imo

tollox wrote:
Roase's Hard
00:30:663 (3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - This part feels clumsy to me. Not sure how it could be made better, replacing 4 and 5 with a slider and unstacking the blue 1? hmmm not sure exactly what you mean by clumsy D: maybe plain? I kinda like 4 and 5 as circles because they better emphasize the drums, but i'll consider
00:43:004 (4,1) - All other diffs have a spinner here. Not necessary to add one (especially since different mapper), but it would make them feel more like a whole, and a spinner does fit here. ok
01:00:663 (2,3,1) - Maybe this instead http://puu.sh/8fgnW.jpg changed the rhythm a bit from previous mod, and i like it better than this rhythm, sorry ;w; i see how this rhythm makes sense though
01:36:359 (1,2) - This overlap isn't very pretty and you don't really have any other overlaps are you sure i don't have any other overlaps? i think the overlap is fine personally, will change if more people say so
01:41:295 (2) - Curving it more around the 3 would look nicer alright

ty ty for mod

today i ate chicken

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 80226
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Stella
TitleUnicode:Stella
Artist:Silent Siren
ArtistUnicode:Silent Siren
Creator:captin1
Version:Raose's Hard
Source:
Tags:start
BeatmapID:400610
BeatmapSetID:163253

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captin1

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captin1 2014-04-20T02:50:22+00:00

"Kibbleru"

mmk m4m!

from your queue

[Insane]

00:06:550 (5,6) - for this you could just copy paste one of the sliders and rotate it by 120, it just makes the pattern neater
00:03:511 (3,4) - ^
00:10:537 (5,6) - ^ (theres gunna be alot of these b prepared lol)
00:21:929 (1,2) - ^
01:17:182 (3,4) - ^
01:41:296 (2,3) - ^ so I understand why you suggest these, but I generally do all my sliders in a particular way, so plain 120 degree rotations isn't always exactly what I'm looking for. I could do other numbers of course to get it how I wanted, but they're all quite similar in shape already so there's really no need
00:09:018 (4) - flows better from previous note if you ctrl g nice
01:30:284 (1) - ^ eh not on this one, the path to the note after is weird
00:15:094 (2,4) - space out a bit more, looks a bit too cramped for an insane
00:21:549 (5,5) - perhaps try stacking not noticeable at all in game and probably changes my placement more than I want it to, so no thanks to these
00:48:322 (3,2) - ^
01:00:284 (2,4) - ^ i don't think this overlap here looks too good lol I like it owo
00:47:562 (7,1) - ^ although these probably don't really matter it just makes it seem neater
00:31:708 (2) - overmapped i think :P shhh
00:33:322 (4,1) - ehh this overlap isnt too pretty ;w;
00:56:866 (1,2) - you should just copy one of the sliders and ctrl ghj again i'm very particular about the direction of my sliders and this doesn't give me enough control over it

[Normal]

01:26:106 (5) - flows better if you made it parallel with (6)
SPOILER
01:31:422 (3,4) - this bit may be too hard, consider using a slider instead I think it's fine, it's not the first time i've used two 1/2 circles and I'd really like a click on 4
01:37:688 (4,5) - ehh this overlap isnt that pretty ._. and might make it hard to read I think it's alright for now, but i'll consider

[Easy]

00:14:333 (1,3) - don't overlap?
01:09:776 (2,3) - ctrl g these and use that rhythm instead, i feel like it makes more sense if the slider is mapping that guitar or w/e

Great mapset! gl for ranking

tollox wrote:
Here from your m4m queue

Fun map!
You're clearly a better modder so take advice with a grain of salt

Easy
00:03:511 (2) - Sounds better to me if you start it on the white tick, the strong beat on the white feels like it's missing
00:06:549 (2) - ^
00:18:700 (2) - ^ I see what you mean, but since in this section the downbeat doesn't really have any more emphasis than the other beats, i'll go with mapping the guitar
00:56:865 (1,2) - Perhaps a note between these?
01:27:245 (1,2) - ^
01:35:599 (3,1) - ^ I wanted to capture the halftime feel that the drum goes into with the space here

Normal
00:26:485 (1) - Sounds better like this http://puu.sh/8fdRo.jpg I like my current rhythm, sorry
00:29:523 (1) - Same thing here
00:28:954 (5,1) - Also consider placing a note between these two, sounds pretty nice hmm I think that might be too much
01:01:042 (2) - Possibly http://puu.sh/8felP.jpg (or with a repeat on that slider) I'm following the vocal with my current rhythm, so I'll keep it
01:29:713 (5,6) - These stacked notes are both on the "by" part of baby, possibly a tiny overmap for normal the first is on the vocal yes, but the second is with the snare hit

Insane
Couple of unsnapped sliders, check aimod
00:02:942 (2,3) - Doesn't look very balanced. Perhaps wrap the 2 more around the 3?
00:35:600 (1,2,3,4) - How about this? http://puu.sh/8fhE5.jpg or some other remap to music eh, mine fits fine
02:07:878 (6) - Replace this by a mini-stream? no thanks, i'll keep the hanging feel from the guitar note

Thanks!
I hope your chicken was good rose
hue

Yuuki Aoi_old

Yuuki Aoi_old 2014-04-20T05:31:49+00:00

Came from your M4M Queue! Sorry if the mod's bad, i'm new when it comes to modding! Hope to be better!

Easy

01:43:004 (2) - flip it upside down? to make the flow better
02:08:257 (3) - add soft whistle to the head and drum-hitwhistle to the tail. I think it works wonderfully.

Nice diff, can't spot anything else, though I think the 3/2 space between objects are kind of difficult for beginner players to playout but since they're kind of.. consistent, maybe it'll work out

.

Normal

00:12:245 (3) - and 00:13:004 (4) - change it to be like this? http://puu.sh/8fOyN.png
00:24:397 (3) - Curve it so it faces to 00:25:156 (4) - ? to make the flow better.
00:46:992 (3) - drop it down a little? it almost touches the HP Bar!
00:49:270 (4) - add soft hitwhistle in the head?
01:13:194 (3) - ^ and tail
01:48:700 (4) - add soft whistle in the head?

Raose's Hard

00:13:954 (4) - make it a triple repeating slider? u don't have to though.
00:38:257 (4) - make this a blanket?

Insane

01:18:701 (4) - NC
01:19:271 (7) - NC swap with 01:19:461 (1) -
01:20:219 (1) - to 01:20:980 (5) - add default soft-hitwhistle? (optional)
01:22:119 (4) - add soft-hitwhistle?
01:27:246 (1) - remove soft-hitwhistle in tail?
01:43:954 add spinner until 01:45:093 ?

It's really hard to mod insanes for me because it's a matter of mapping style. There's not really much to fix here either.

Good Luck with ranking this!

OblivioN

OblivioN 2014-04-20T11:16:27+00:00

hi，from your m4m queue :3
[Normal]
00:15:093 (2) - blanket with 00:14:333 (1) -
I think the diff is hard for newbie……consider about decreasing difficulty
[Hard]
00:13:954 (4) - sounds uncomfortable……

good diff！

[Insane]
00:03:511 (3) - ctrl+g
00:43:195 (1) - I think spin should be ended at00:44:333 or it's hard to hit 00:44:713 at time

02:11:107 (7) - end at02:11:295 will be sounds fine:3

Raose

698 posts

Joined July 2012

Raose 2014-04-21T01:37:21+00:00

Yuuki Aoi wrote:
Raose's Hard
00:13:954 (4) - make it a triple repeating slider? u don't have to though. trying to emphasize the stronger sounding beats
00:38:257 (4) - make this a blanket? ok

OblivioN wrote:
[Hard]
00:13:954 (4) - sounds uncomfortable…… think it sounds ok D:

the chicken was good ty

osu file format v12

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401,154,83637,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,244,83827,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,232,84017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,116,84207,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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44,120,85346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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428,357,110030,6,8,P|465:288|452:211,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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captin1

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captin1 2014-04-23T05:16:12+00:00

Yuuki Aoi wrote:
Came from your M4M Queue! Sorry if the mod's bad, i'm new when it comes to modding! Hope to be better!

Easy
01:43:004 (2) - flip it upside down? to make the flow better I like the way it is now, fits with the kiai ending
02:08:257 (3) - add soft whistle to the head and drum-hitwhistle to the tail. I think it works wonderfully.

Nice diff, can't spot anything else, though I think the 3/2 space between objects are kind of difficult for beginner players to playout but since they're kind of.. consistent, maybe it'll work out .

Normal
00:12:245 (3) - and 00:13:004 (4) - change it to be like this? http://puu.sh/8fOyN.png
00:24:397 (3) - Curve it so it faces to 00:25:156 (4) - ? to make the flow better. I like the angled pattern
00:46:992 (3) - drop it down a little? it almost touches the HP Bar! key word is almost
00:49:270 (4) - add soft hitwhistle in the head?
01:13:194 (3) - ^ and tail just head will be fine
01:48:700 (4) - add soft whistle in the head?

Insane
01:18:701 (4) - NC
01:19:271 (7) - NC swap with 01:19:461 (1) -
01:20:219 (1) - to 01:20:980 (5) - add default soft-hitwhistle? (optional) nah, I like this being soft
01:22:119 (4) - add soft-hitwhistle?
01:27:246 (1) - remove soft-hitwhistle in tail?
01:43:954 add spinner until 01:45:093 ? I like the short break, fits the song well

It's really hard to mod insanes for me because it's a matter of mapping style. There's not really much to fix here either.

Good Luck with ranking this!

"OblivioN"

hi，from your m4m queue :3
[Normal]
00:15:093 (2) - blanket with 00:14:333 (1) - not really necessary
I think the diff is hard for newbie……consider about decreasing difficulty it's fine, this map isn't for beginners, that's what easy is for

[Insane]
00:03:511 (3) - ctrl+g flows well but it puts the jump in the wrong place so no thanks
00:43:195 (1) - I think spin should be ended at00:44:333 or it's hard to hit 00:44:713 at time

02:11:107 (7) - end at02:11:295 will be sounds fine:3 made the slider repeat instead

thanks!

i had chicken today too

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DeletedUser_3044645 2014-04-23T05:27:46+00:00

I love you for mapping standard of this song.

Have my babies I mean stars

captin1

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captin1 2014-04-23T05:53:51+00:00

omg o.o thank you so much!

Chewin

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Chewin 2014-04-26T10:34:12+00:00

General

odd bg dimensions, try to get it in 4:3 pls
Combo3 colour is inconsistent between difficult, I would make it consistent (at least between E/N/I because mapped by you)
Inconsistency in kiai times by 1ms. Please check it carefully and snap them properly

Easy

00:02:182 (1) - It could sound nazi but it isn't. I would move the second slider's point some grid left because actually I think it's tail is placed too much on the right and it flows bad considering where you have placed the next slider 00:03:511 (2). I mean, placing it in this other way would help the flow much better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548044
00:31:802 (2) - I think that clap is missing on this slider's head
00:38:637 (1,2) - Well.. to be consistent with previous slider you should add a whistle on (1)'s repeat like you did for the previous 00:32:561 (1,2,1,2)'s tails, and add a whistle on 00:40:916 (2) as well
00:50:409 - I'd really add a circle with clap hitsound here if I was you. This part looks so empty without that strong clap sound and don't using it just makes the clap on 00:50:789 (1)'s tail sound very loud and bad. Really consider to add it, it's very needed
01:05:979 (1) - Add finish here, it sounds really cool
01:08:257 (3) - You forgot clap on this slider's head
01:28:004 (2) - Clap on the tail again

Normal

00:31:612 (4) - Add clap on repeat to fill the drum in the music
02:05:219 (1) - I'd give you same suggestion I wrote above for 00:02:182 (1) in the normal. Move this slider's tail on the right more, it helps the flow very much
02:10:916 (5,6) - What about to replace these two circles with a slider? I mean: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548075

Hard

I'd say HP and OD -1

00:49:840 (2,3,4,1) - I don't like how this part plays. What about to make something like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548102 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548107

SPOILER

408,168,49840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,80,50030,2,0,P|408:36|448:16,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,168,50599,2,0,P|364:188|316:176,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,116,50979,6,0,P|188:100|112:116,1,160
44,72,51549,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,152,51738,2,0,P|7:190|20:241,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:02:941 (1) - Finish on the head? I think it sounds cool
01:05:219 - This missing tick really confuses player, trust me. I know you are trying to follow the vocal sound here but you used custom claps in the previous low part (and next) as well. So, you really need to add a circle with a clap hitsound to emphasize that drum in the music. Actually it's pretty confusing.
01:23:827 (5,6,1,2) - There is something wrong here. The 01:24:017 (6) should be placed where there is actually the 01:24:207 (1). You could switch them and move the 01:24:587 (2) on 01:24:776 (3)'s head (that's the correct version): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548122
01:27:245 (1) - Finish? It sounds nicely together with previous one on 01:25:536 (1)'s head

Insane

00:14:334 (1) - Finish on the head
00:16:042 (4,5,6) - What about this? It flows much better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548131
01:05:789 (10) - I'd remove this circle
01:19:840 (5) - This slider shouldn't be placed here considering that it's 1/1 from 01:19:461 (2) on the timeline. But we can easily fix this just adding two circles on 01:19:650 and 01:19:745 to make a triple on the actual (3)'s head
01:33:322 (1) - The sliderball is slowed too much due to the slider's shape. Sorry but new rules say that this kind of slider is not rankable. Remove those two red point to fix that and try to get a different shape.
02:05:220 (1) - Finish on the head

I think this mapset still needs more work, especially on the Hard and Insane diff. That's it for now, good luck dude :3

captin1

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captin1 2014-04-26T10:53:38+00:00

Chewin wrote:
General

odd bg dimensions, try to get it in 4:3 pls The bg is actually currently in 16:9, just not the max dimensions for it, I'll see what I can do though
Combo3 colour is inconsistent between difficult, I would make it consistent (at least between E/N/I because mapped by you) oops, I had changed it in the insane but forgot to copy it over
Inconsistency in kiai times by 1ms. Please check it carefully and snap them properly D: green lines why
Easy

00:02:182 (1) - It could sound nazi but it isn't. I would move the second slider's point some grid left because actually I think it's tail is placed too much on the right and it flows bad considering where you have placed the next slider 00:03:511 (2). I mean, placing it in this other way would help the flow much better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548044 fixed
00:31:802 (2) - I think that clap is missing on this slider's head fixed
00:38:637 (1,2) - Well.. to be consistent with previous slider you should add a whistle on (1)'s repeat like you did for the previous 00:32:561 (1,2,1,2)'s tails, and add a whistle on 00:40:916 (2) as well added on the repeat but I think I'll leave 2 without it
00:50:409 - I'd really add a circle with clap hitsound here if I was you. This part looks so empty without that strong clap sound and don't using it just makes the clap on 00:50:789 (1)'s tail sound very loud and bad. Really consider to add it, it's very needed yep!
01:05:979 (1) - Add finish here, it sounds really cool nice!
01:08:257 (3) - You forgot clap on this slider's head fixed
01:28:004 (2) - Clap on the tail again fixed
Normal

00:31:612 (4) - Add clap on repeat to fill the drum in the music
02:05:219 (1) - I'd give you same suggestion I wrote above for 00:02:182 (1) in the normal. Move this slider's tail on the right more, it helps the flow very much
02:10:916 (5,6) - What about to replace these two circles with a slider? I mean: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548075
all fixed here

Insane

00:14:334 (1) - Finish on the head fixed
00:16:042 (4,5,6) - What about this? It flows much better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548131 yeah!
01:05:789 (10) - I'd remove this circle I'd like to keep this for the bass drum note, so adjusted so 9 isn't stacked anymore
01:19:840 (5) - This slider shouldn't be placed here considering that it's 1/1 from 01:19:461 (2) on the timeline. But we can easily fix this just adding two circles on 01:19:650 and 01:19:745 to make a triple on the actual (3)'s head woah awesome
01:33:322 (1) - The sliderball is slowed too much due to the slider's shape. Sorry but new rules say that this kind of slider is not rankable. Remove those two red point to fix that and try to get a different shape. ;w; rip slider, spaced out the red points so it doesn't slow down
02:05:220 (1) - Finish on the head Fixed
I think this mapset still needs more work, especially on the Hard and Insane diff. That's it for now, good luck dude :3

thank you so much!

Raose

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Raose 2014-04-26T22:38:54+00:00

Chewin wrote:
Hard
I'd say HP and OD -1 ok
00:49:840 (2,3,4,1) - I don't like how this part plays. What about to make something like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548102 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548107 good idea ty! didn't follow code exactly
SPOILER
408,168,49840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,80,50030,2,0,P|408:36|448:16,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,168,50599,2,0,P|364:188|316:176,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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01:02:941 (1) - Finish on the head? I think it sounds cool nice
01:05:219 - This missing tick really confuses player, trust me. I know you are trying to follow the vocal sound here but you used custom claps in the previous low part (and next) as well. So, you really need to add a circle with a clap hitsound to emphasize that drum in the music. Actually it's pretty confusing. added~
01:23:827 (5,6,1,2) - There is something wrong here. The 01:24:017 (6) should be placed where there is actually the 01:24:207 (1). You could switch them and move the 01:24:587 (2) on 01:24:776 (3)'s head (that's the correct version): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548122 nice
01:27:245 (1) - Finish? It sounds nicely together with previous one on 01:25:536 (1)'s head suuuure why not

i want ramen

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Creator:captin1
Version:Raose's Hard
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waxman

467 posts

Joined February 2012

waxman 2014-04-27T03:00:10+00:00

[Insane]

TAKE A BREAK

♥Secret♥

I confirmed this offset is fine.

01:30:663 (2) - WOULD YOU LIKE SOME CHEESE?

bad image

01:43:004 (3) - do you like this one? x:393 y:135.
02:16:202 - remove red line. you can use SD 1/16 and increase timeline zone, then place at 02:16:208. There is a difference only 6ms. (High recommended)

[Raose's Hard]
00:08:068 (5) - It's strange a bit for me. move to x:144 y:120
00:19:460 (3,4) - There is no issue. But this spacing should be shorter.
00:36:169 (2,3) - miss spacing? This spacing is strange a bit, isn't it? 00:36:359 (3,4) move to x:104 y:88.
00:36:169 (2,3) - move to x:448 y:176
01:04:270 (3,4,5) - too far?
01:19:460 (4) - NC. because you took distance at 01:19:270 (3,4). Otherwise, 01:19:460 (4,5) move to x:256 y:248.
01:46:232 (5,6) - move to x:266 y:179.
01:57:435 (1) - remove NC
01:58:194 (2) - NC

PEROPERO Raose

WHAT A NICE MAP GUYS.
GOGO RANKED.

Raose

698 posts

Joined July 2012

Raose 2014-04-27T07:14:43+00:00

waxman wrote:
[Raose's Hard]
00:08:068 (5) - It's strange a bit for me. move to x:144 y:120 ok~
00:19:460 (3,4) - There is no issue. But this spacing should be shorter. i wanted a small jump there ;w;
00:36:169 (2,3) - miss spacing? This spacing is strange a bit, isn't it? 00:36:359 (3,4) move to x:104 y:88. hmm those coordinates look ab it weird since they overlap the previous sliders D: yea the spacing is strange, but i wanted some small jumps there ;w; don't know how to make spacing more even and still have the pattern be pretty
00:36:169 (2,3) - move to x:448 y:176 that would be really far LOL D:
01:04:270 (3,4,5) - too far? changed
01:19:460 (4) - NC. because you took distance at 01:19:270 (3,4). Otherwise, 01:19:460 (4,5) move to x:256 y:248. suure NC, why not
01:46:232 (5,6) - move to x:266 y:179. i kinda wnated the stream to be stacked on 01:45:852 (3) though doesn't seem too confusing to play
01:57:435 (1) - remove NC ah, i'm NCing by every large white tick mostly
01:58:194 (2) - NC ^

PEROPERO Raose PEROPERO WAXMAN

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captin1

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2,607 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

captin1 2014-04-29T04:05:17+00:00

waxman wrote:
[Insane]

TAKE A BREAK
♥Secret♥
I confirmed this offset is fine. pro waxman XD

01:30:663 (2) - WOULD YOU LIKE SOME CHEESE? I WOULD LIKE SOME CHEESE THANK YOU didn't use this placement but reduced the distance a bit
bad image

01:43:004 (3) - do you like this one? x:393 y:135. cool idea but I like mine
02:16:202 - remove red line. you can use SD 1/16 and increase timeline zone, then place at 02:16:208. There is a difference only 6ms. (High recommended) I think the 6ms is important, especially for HR mod

WHAT A NICE MAP GUYS.
GOGO RANKED.

thanks!

dammit rose now i can't just select all

Trust

1,245 posts

Joined March 2012

Trust 2014-05-03T08:12:32+00:00

can't think of anything witty
[General]

Widescreen Support is enabled in all difficulties except Insane. Make sure it's toggled consistently.
Still have inconsistent kiai times from 1ms delayed green lines in Raose's Hard ;;
Just an idea, I think you could liven up the hitsounding for the section between 00:32:561 and 00:44:713 by using S:C1 whistles with 55~60% vol. on the second and fourth ticks of each measure.

[Easy]

00:49:270 (3) - You can move the the node at x:376 y:172 to the right a couple grids to give this slider a more defined shape.
01:24:207 (1) - Feels rather late to be introducing a 3/2 slider, beginners may instinctively release too early. How about shortening this by 1/2 as you've already familiarized them with 3/2 gaps,it would play more intuitively.
01:56:106 (3) - NC here fits with your pattern as we've already passed through two measures.
02:08:257 (3) - Same as above.

[Normal]

01:58:194 (4) - Whistle on the head to fit with how you've been following the sound here?

Whoa so good.
[Raose's Hard]

00:08:068 (5) - You can move this to x:152 y:120 for a cleaner triangle formation with 00:07:308 (3,4,5).
00:13:954 (4) - How about just making this a 1/4 reverse slider and using a drum-clap on the end of it? It feels awkward to release a slider on such a powerful drum sound and mapping this red tick makes sense with how you follow the rhythm for this section.
00:17:751 (3) - Spacing is a little bit off in this pattern. Move this slider to x:78 y:235 for a cleaner triangle shape.
00:20:130 - Unneeded and unsnapped green line here. Might as well remove it.
00:43:194 (1) - Considering reducing the volume of this spinner as captin did. The loud spin isn't very fitting here.
01:34:650 (1,2) - Making a looser blanket between these two to match 01:35:219 (2,3) would make this pattern a lot prettier.
01:45:473 (1,2,3,4) - How about trying a jump pattern like this or something similar to reflect the crescendo in the drum hits? I feel that a smaller jump distance between 01:45:473 (1,2) would lead more comfortably into this part.
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Mmmmm very nice!
[Insane]

00:38:448 (5,6) - These whistles sounds a bit strange, the one on the blue in particular. Maybe just remove them for consistency with 00:41:486 (6,7,1)?
00:50:505 (4) - I didn't really like how this played and don't really feel that the music warrants a note here. Consider deleting it and making a distanced jump between 00:50:030 (3,5) I feel plays better and fits more with how you've patterned things.
01:45:474 (1,2,3,4) - Pretty much the same suggestion that I gave Raose, a gradual spacing increase between these would fit very nicely with the crescendo effect and lead into this part more comfortably.
01:47:372 (2) - Remove this finish? I don't think it's accentuating anything nor do you use one here for Easy and Normal.
02:10:347 (3) - You could add a whistle here, it would follow the same sound as heard on the heads of 02:09:588 (1,2).
02:16:391 (2) - I gotta say this part really did feel empty. Consider shortening this by 1/2 and adding a circle so you can catch the guitar sound on like Raose did which was very naicu.

I really enjoy this map so I don't have much to say, my apologies.

Yay so lovely~
Good luck!

captin1

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Topic Starter

captin1 2014-05-03T08:33:08+00:00

"Trust"

can't think of anything witty *insert trust pun here*
[General]

Widescreen Support is enabled in all difficulties except Insane. Make sure it's toggled consistently.
Still have inconsistent kiai times from 1ms delayed green lines in Raose's Hard ;;
Just an idea, I think you could liven up the hitsounding for the section between 00:32:561 and 00:44:713 by using S:C1 whistles with 55~60% vol. on the second and fourth ticks of each measure. hmmm I think it's alright, there's plenty of whistles as is

[Easy]

00:49:270 (3) - You can move the the node at x:376 y:172 to the right a couple grids to give this slider a more defined shape.
01:24:207 (1) - Feels rather late to be introducing a 3/2 slider, beginners may instinctively release too early. How about shortening this by 1/2 as you've already familiarized them with 3/2 gaps,it would play more intuitively.
01:56:106 (3) - NC here fits with your pattern as we've already passed through two measures.
02:08:257 (3) - Same as above.

[Normal]

01:58:194 (4) - Whistle on the head to fit with how you've been following the sound here?

Whoa so good. all done in these two!

[Insane]

00:38:448 (5,6) - These whistles sounds a bit strange, the one on the blue in particular. Maybe just remove them for consistency with 00:41:486 (6,7,1)?
00:50:505 (4) - I didn't really like how this played and don't really feel that the music warrants a note here. Consider deleting it and making a distanced jump between 00:50:030 (3,5) I feel plays better and fits more with how you've patterned things. worked this out another way, removing the repeat and making it a full 5 note stream
01:45:474 (1,2,3,4) - Pretty much the same suggestion that I gave Raose, a gradual spacing increase between these would fit very nicely with the crescendo effect and lead into this part more comfortably. lazy to change placements so I did a ctrl+g to mix up the jump a bit
01:47:372 (2) - Remove this finish? I don't think it's accentuating anything nor do you use one here for Easy and Normal.
02:10:347 (3) - You could add a whistle here, it would follow the same sound as heard on the heads of 02:09:588 (1,2).
02:16:391 (2) - I gotta say this part really did feel empty. Consider shortening this by 1/2 and adding a circle so you can catch the guitar sound on like Raose did which was very naicu.

I really enjoy this map so I don't have much to say, my apologies.

Yay so lovely~
Good luck!

thanks ily trust

Natsu

8,076 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-05-04T00:06:22+00:00

Hi~ from my Queue

General:

Resize your BG <:
SPOILER
Kiai end is unsnapped by 1 ms should be 01:43:765

Insane:

00:02:182 add whistle or finish? is a bit similar to 00:03:511
00:04:651 (6,1) - blanket <:
00:06:550 missing whistle? since you have one in 00:03:511 - is the same sound in the music <:
00:14:239 nothing in the music here, remove this circle? since there is just a triplet 00:13:954 -, 00:14:050 -, 00:14:144
00:32:562 (1,2) - a single 1/1 slider will fit better the vocals and music in this part IMO, like you did in 00:34:080
00:43:194 (1) - mmm I'll feel better if you start the spinner in 00:43:384 with the vocals and yeah map this beat properly 00:43:194-, like:
SPOILER
00:50:409 (4,5,6,7) - this stream doesn't fit the music IMO, maybe:
SPOILER
01:18:322 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - this is nice o:
01:42:435 (1,2,3) -use a more noticeable spacing <:, to keep better the difference gaps in the time line, since the spacing is almost the same visually talking
01:44:523 why no spinner like in 00:43:194
01:46:233 (5,6) - this will be easily confused with 1/2 jumps <:, some NC or reduce the spacing can help

Raose's Hard:

00:02:182 add whistle or finish?
00:06:928 (2,4) - nazi, stack it properly D:!
00:11:106 add a circle, since this part sound empty and not consistent with others similars parts like 00:10:346
00:13:954 you need to add another repeat in this slider, the triplet is very prominent to be ignored
00:17:371 (1,2,3) - this triangle can be better
00:25:726 (3,4,5,6) - mmm a bit confused pattern for a hard, but maybe is ok
00:35:599 (1,2,3) - mmm use the same spacing between them, actually doesn't play comfortable
00:43:194 same as Insane, I just feel the spinner fit better with the vocals starting in 00:43:384
00:53:447 (4,3) - If you are aiming to stack them, try to do it better it doesn't look nice :/
01:32:561 (3,4,5) - maybe some 1/4 repeats slider? to fit the prominents drums in the music? like you did in 01:46:232 (5,6) -
01:37:688 (1,4) - blanket pls Raose moe D:!

Normal:

00:02:182 same as Insane, some hitsound will be nice here ♥
00:04:650 I really don't like this rhythm, since the slider is ending in a strong beat <:, what about:
SPOILER

or
00:13:574 (5,6) - I feel a slider will represent the music at this point, something like this:
SPOILER
00:16:802 (6) - same as 00:04:650
00:43:194 same as the others diffs
01:30:852 (2,3,4) - is the first time you used this kind of patterns, personally I feel it a bit hard for a normal diff, use a slider instead of 01:31:422 (3,4) - or remove 01:31:422 - ?

Easy:

00:02:182 same as Insane
00:43:194 same as the other diffs
cool

Nice mapset and song ♥ take care baka ♥

Last edited by Natsu 2014-05-05T05:27:59+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

captin1

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Topic Starter

captin1 2014-05-04T02:10:07+00:00

"Natsu"

Hi~ from my Queue

General:

Resize your BG <: idk where you found this lol, source image from pixiv was smaller than this
SPOILER
Kiai end is unsnapped by 1 ms should be 01:43:765 green lines can eat my shit

Insane:

00:02:182 add whistle or finish? is a bit similar to 00:03:511
00:04:651 (6,1) - blanket <:
00:06:550 missing whistle? since you have one in 00:03:511 - is the same sound in the music <: whistle is there baka
00:14:239 nothing in the music here, remove this circle? since there is just a triplet 00:13:954 -, 00:14:050 -, 00:14:144
00:32:562 (1,2) - a single 1/1 slider will fit better the vocals and music in this part IMO, like you did in 00:34:080
00:43:194 (1) - mmm I'll feel better if you start the spinner in 00:43:384 with the vocals and yeah map this beat properly 00:43:194-, like: fixed spinner but kept note before as is
SPOILER
00:50:409 (4,5,6,7) - this stream doesn't fit the music IMO, maybe: will consider, but keeping for now
SPOILER
01:18:322 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - this is nice o: :>
01:42:435 (1,2,3) -use a more noticeable spacing <:, to keep better the difference gaps in the time line, since the spacing is almost the same visually talking
01:44:523 why no spinner like in 00:43:194 too short of a time, plus i like the empty space
01:46:233 (5,6) - this will be easily confused with 1/2 jumps <:, some NC or reduce the spacing can help

Normal:

00:02:182 same as Insane, some hitsound will be nice here ♥
00:04:650 I really don't like this rhythm, since the slider is ending in a strong beat <:, what about: i like this slider :>
SPOILER

or
00:13:574 (5,6) - I feel a slider will represent the music at this point, something like this: hm no thanks, the two circles map the guitar and the drum here so i think it's fine
SPOILER
00:16:802 (6) - same as 00:04:650 :>
00:43:194 same as the others diffs
01:30:852 (2,3,4) - is the first time you used this kind of patterns, personally I feel it a bit hard for a normal diff, use a slider instead of 01:31:422 (3,4) - or remove 01:31:422 - ?

Easy:

00:02:182 same as Insane
00:43:194 same as the other diffs
cool

Nice mapset and song ♥

nom

Raose

698 posts

Joined July 2012

Raose 2014-05-04T02:38:03+00:00

i trust you

Trust wrote:
[Raose's Hard]
00:08:068 (5) - You can move this to x:152 y:120 for a cleaner triangle formation with 00:07:308 (3,4,5). kay
00:13:954 (4) - How about just making this a 1/4 reverse slider and using a drum-clap on the end of it? It feels awkward to release a slider on such a powerful drum sound and mapping this red tick makes sense with how you follow the rhythm for this section. alright
00:17:751 (3) - Spacing is a little bit off in this pattern. Move this slider to x:78 y:235 for a cleaner triangle shape. ok
00:20:130 - Unneeded and unsnapped green line here. Might as well remove it. ok
00:43:194 (1) - Considering reducing the volume of this spinner as captin did. The loud spin isn't very fitting here. ok
01:34:650 (1,2) - Making a looser blanket between these two to match 01:35:219 (2,3) would make this pattern a lot prettier. ok
01:45:473 (1,2,3,4) - How about trying a jump pattern like this or something similar to reflect the crescendo in the drum hits? I feel that a smaller jump distance between 01:45:473 (1,2) would lead more comfortably into this part. made it a regular star instead [box=Example]
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ni hao

Natsu wrote:
Raose's Hard:

00:02:182 add whistle or finish? sorry it sounds a bit odd to me D:
00:06:928 (2,4) - nazi, stack it properly D:! ok
00:11:106 add a circle, since this part sound empty and not consistent with others similars parts like 00:10:346 ok
00:13:954 you need to add another repeat in this slider, the triplet is very prominent to be ignored ok
00:17:371 (1,2,3) - this triangle can be better ok
00:25:726 (3,4,5,6) - mmm a bit confused pattern for a hard, but maybe is ok imo it feels more comfortable to play compared to a square, everyone hates squares
00:35:599 (1,2,3) - mmm use the same spacing between them, actually doesn't play comfortable changed pattern
00:43:194 same as Insane, I just feel the spinner fit better with the vocals starting in 00:43:384 ok
00:53:447 (4,3) - If you are aiming to stack them, try to do it better it doesn't look nice :/ wasn't trying to but stacked
01:32:561 (3,4,5) - maybe some 1/4 repeats slider? to fit the prominents drums in the music? like you did in 01:46:232 (5,6) - ok
01:37:688 (1,4) - blanket pls Raose moe D:! fixed

just bought animal crossing

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dkun

osu! Alumni

4,486 posts

Joined August 2009

dkun 2014-05-05T06:05:04+00:00

I assume you've gotten what Rose has told you about her difficulty. Please let me know when you've updated!

kanpakyin

Global Moderator

4,233 posts

Joined June 2010

kanpakyin 2014-05-05T06:06:23+00:00

please wait for us，the diffs will be done soon！

Raose

698 posts

Joined July 2012

Raose 2014-05-05T06:10:20+00:00

lol update with my green lines resnapped

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Konei

2,959 posts

Joined March 2012

Konei 2014-05-05T17:50:00+00:00

Modding because this song is awesome, so hey!

[Insane]

00:04:278 (5) - Don't you think this was better if it was curved? You could try to blanket 6 with it aswell.
00:12:063 (3) - Same for this one, also I really feel as if the transition would be much better like this.
example
00:13:582 (3) - A really weird and huge jump all of a sudden here, also because this is a circle and harder to catch, since the song isn't really prominent here I guess reducing the spacing might be a lot better.
00:15:101 (2) - Increase the spacing here? This is played like a jump due to previous patterns for me so a higher spacing would feel better.
00:22:316 (2) - Move this down a bit to blanket 1 and have a cooler transition? Helps a lot in my opinion.
00:26:493 (1,2) - Having the repeat and the stack here plays a bit odd, I'd rather remove the repeat and start an 1/1 Slider which ends on 2's position here, just have a try.
00:29:531 (1,2) - Same here.
00:31:714 (2) - There's no 1/4 in the music, in fact I like the rhythm here much better without this note since the bass and snare drum are more emphasized like that.
00:37:886 (4) - Move this up a tinyyy bit to improve the blanket?
00:46:904 (4) - Same as for 00:31:714 (2) - , there's no 1/4 in the music and adding this note destroys the effect of bass and snare drum.
00:49:278 (1,2) - Stack those two with the previous circles 7 and 3? Looks cleaner.
00:50:416 (4,5,6,7) - This circle stream is really overmapped, listening to the music closely just doesn't give anything to back this up, therefore I'd say just remove the notes 5 and 7 and maybe replace.
00:55:639 (3) - This triple doesn't sound too bad, but I'd better remove it tho to keep the prominent sounds of bass and snare drum.
00:58:392 (6) - I'd rather make a smooth shape to the other direction, also to improve transition to the next note.
Example
01:07:506 (5) - I find shapes like this one prettier when you use some more wavepoints, see if you agree. ~
Example
01:12:822 (3) - This doesn't look that clean, would be cool if you bended it so that it was stacked on both parts.
Example
01:20:227 (1,2,3,4,5) - You could add default whistles to the whole pattern - or just the red ticks - to emphasize those vocals. Currently it plays akward since it's so dull and quiet.
01:24:215 (1) - Finish? Sounds as if the downbeat would need it.
01:27:253 (1) - Finish sounds needed at the start to reset the rhythm. Also it'll be consistent with 01:39:405 - .
01:29:340 (3,4,5) - Those three flow a bit weird and are strange to follow. Also 3 and 2 look a bit weird together because the distance they have is so close considering 1 and 2. Try something like below? Or maybe just redesign the pattern - this was just an idea of mine.
01:36:366 (1) - Same with the finish as on the previous part.
01:40:923 (1) - Might add one here aswell.
01:46:620 (3) - I find this 1/4 jump far too drastical, why not stack it on the place it at the middle of the square or something?
Example
01:48:329 (1) - This looks really akward to me, having the downbeat - the prominent beat - on a Slider's repeat. I would really recommend to split this up and make it a circle and an 1/2 Slider or something.
01:53:076 (1) - Same suggestion as previous ones.
01:56:114 (1) - Yea, you know.
02:07:886 (6) - Again, I wouldn't recommend you to end a Slider at the downbeat, there's so much power and emphasis you lose by doing this.

[Roase's Hard]

00:23:452 (1) - I guess you can improve the blanket with 3 like a loooot.
00:24:971 (1,2,3) - Move those up to get a better triangle, looks odd with 1 so close to the previous 2.
00:50:604 (4) - I don't think it's good to end a Slider on a strong beat since you don't click the end. Spliting this up to 2 circles wouldn't hurt, or just use one circle and start a Slider on the downbeat.
01:06:743 (3) - Improve the blanket? ;__; I know you can do better ones. xD
01:07:503 (1) - This angle looks so weird, I was wondering why it was like that and I think either a smooth curve or a straight Slider would do better.
Example
01:15:098 (1) - Using ctrl + J makes this Slider flow much smoother in my opinion.
01:22:503 (1) - I find this jump too huge and trolling for a Hard. xD I'd rather use some smaller ones but this one err, ctrl + G plus some redesign?
01:24:212 (1) - Use a finish here? Fits the following really well.
01:28:579 (1) - Same here on the start?
01:30:288 (1) - Firstly, I'd reduce the distance even if it's only a bit. And then add a finish to the start for previous reason.
01:36:364 (1) - Finish here again.
01:38:642 (4,1) - Use finishes on the heads aswell? It sounds really empty without them.
01:51:554 (1) - Reduce the spacing? This jump seems too hard considering KIAI just passed.
01:56:111 (1) - Remove the wave point? Current shape just looks a bit weird.
02:08:642 (2) - Replace this by a circle or something? The end doesn't have any sound and you didn't map it on previous parts either.

[Normal]

00:04:657 (6) - Move this a bit up so it won't touch the other circle.
00:31:619 (4) - Make this the same angle as 2? Current one looks weird.
00:48:897 (3,4) - Transition here is weird, how about moving this more to the right to create a more smooth movement?
01:07:125 (3) - Weird transition again, you could pull the Slider a bit so it compliments 4's start more.
01:21:745 (2,3) - 3 looks placed in an unclean way, pull 2 a bit down and stack 3 with the previous note.
01:45:480 (1) - Stack this perfectly on the previous 1? I don't see any reason not to do so.

[Easy]

Tick Rate 1 is enough for me here, 2 sounds too noisy since there are no realy prominent background sounds or anything.
01:27:252 (1) - Try a finish here, it fits the strong background and fits the previous one.
01:31:619 (2) - Looks somewhat weird placed, try to place it closer to 1's end for a better transition?
02:05:226 (1) - Missing a finish at the start.
Nice difficulty!

That's about it, good luck!

Raose

698 posts

Joined July 2012

Raose 2014-05-05T21:35:39+00:00

Konei wrote:
[Roase's Hard]

00:23:452 (1) - I guess you can improve the blanket with 3 like a loooot. ok
00:24:971 (1,2,3) - Move those up to get a better triangle, looks odd with 1 so close to the previous 2. ok
00:50:604 (4) - I don't think it's good to end a Slider on a strong beat since you don't click the end. Spliting this up to 2 circles wouldn't hurt, or just use one circle and start a Slider on the downbeat. ok
01:06:743 (3) - Improve the blanket? ;__; I know you can do better ones. xD grrrr ok
01:07:503 (1) - This angle looks so weird, I was wondering why it was like that and I think either a smooth curve or a straight Slider would do better. ok
Example

01:15:098 (1) - Using ctrl + J makes this Slider flow much smoother in my opinion. ok
01:22:503 (1) - I find this jump too huge and trolling for a Hard. xD I'd rather use some smaller ones but this one err, ctrl + G plus some redesign? changed pattern
01:24:212 (1) - Use a finish here? Fits the following really well. sure
01:28:579 (1) - Same here on the start? ok
01:30:288 (1) - Firstly, I'd reduce the distance even if it's only a bit. And then add a finish to the start for previous reason. ok
01:36:364 (1) - Finish here again. ok
01:38:642 (4,1) - Use finishes on the heads aswell? It sounds really empty without them. err idk, the sliders start on red ticks, it sounds a bit odd for me to place finishes there
01:51:554 (1) - Reduce the spacing? This jump seems too hard considering KIAI just passed. ok
01:56:111 (1) - Remove the wave point? Current shape just looks a bit weird. i kinda like it though ;w;
02:08:642 (2) - Replace this by a circle or something? The end doesn't have any sound and you didn't map it on previous parts either. kinda feels empty with just a circle D; and it fits the background music imo even if the end doesn't really have a sound

ty for mod konei!!

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captin1

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2,607 posts

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Topic Starter

captin1 2014-05-07T04:05:59+00:00

"Konei"

Modding because this song is awesome, so hey! hey!

[Insane]

00:04:278 (5) - Don't you think this was better if it was curved? You could try to blanket 6 with it aswell. I'd like to keep it, from the change in flow direction that happens before and after this slider I feel making it straight helps that out
00:12:063 (3) - Same for this one, also I really feel as if the transition would be much better like this. this one is straight for the 00:12:063 (3,4,1) - pattern
00:13:582 (3) - A really weird and huge jump all of a sudden here, also because this is a circle and harder to catch, since the song isn't really prominent here I guess reducing the spacing might be a lot better. I would like to keep this spacing, since the guitar hits its highest pitch at this point, however I did adjust the placement a bit so the jump to 4 is a bit less drastic
00:15:101 (2) - Increase the spacing here? This is played like a jump due to previous patterns for me so a higher spacing would feel better. did this by moving 1 instead
00:22:316 (2) - Move this down a bit to blanket 1 and have a cooler transition? Helps a lot in my opinion. your blanket is off in this screenshot ww
00:26:493 (1,2) - Having the repeat and the stack here plays a bit odd, I'd rather remove the repeat and start an 1/1 Slider which ends on 2's position here, just have a try. this plays exactly how i would like it to, with the stop motion and the slider repeat with the guitar
00:29:531 (1,2) - Same here.
00:31:714 (2) - There's no 1/4 in the music, in fact I like the rhythm here much better without this note since the bass and snare drum are more emphasized like that. hm alright
00:37:886 (4) - Move this up a tinyyy bit to improve the blanket? I found moving it left did this better actually heh
00:46:904 (4) - Same as for 00:31:714 (2) - , there's no 1/4 in the music and adding this note destroys the effect of bass and snare drum. This one I would like to keep for the more driving rhythm it gives this section
00:49:278 (1,2) - Stack those two with the previous circles 7 and 3? Looks cleaner. won't be at all visible in play though, really no need to
00:50:416 (4,5,6,7) - This circle stream is really overmapped, listening to the music closely just doesn't give anything to back this up, therefore I'd say just remove the notes 5 and 7 and maybe replace. I did listen to the music closely and I hear clear 1/4 in the hihat, so I'll keep this
00:55:639 (3) - This triple doesn't sound too bad, but I'd better remove it tho to keep the prominent sounds of bass and snare drum. same as before, to give this a bit more driving of a rhythm
00:58:392 (6) - I'd rather make a smooth shape to the other direction, also to improve transition to the next note. Don't really see how this improves the transition to the next note since it's a 1/1 gap anyways, there's plenty of time for the flow to reset
01:07:506 (5) - I find shapes like this one prettier when you use some more wavepoints, see if you agree. ~ don't think adding more points is necessary I was able to do a better curve without them :3
01:12:822 (3) - This doesn't look that clean, would be cool if you bended it so that it was stacked on both parts. again, really not visible in play
01:20:227 (1,2,3,4,5) - You could add default whistles to the whole pattern - or just the red ticks - to emphasize those vocals. Currently it plays akward since it's so dull and quiet.
01:24:215 (1) - Finish? Sounds as if the downbeat would need it.
01:27:253 (1) - Finish sounds needed at the start to reset the rhythm. Also it'll be consistent with 01:39:405 - . neither of these done because there's no cymbal sound in the music
01:29:340 (3,4,5) - Those three flow a bit weird and are strange to follow. Also 3 and 2 look a bit weird together because the distance they have is so close considering 1 and 2. Try something like below? Or maybe just redesign the pattern - this was just an idea of mine. moved to to seperate them, but 4&5 are fine imo
01:36:366 (1) - Same with the finish as on the previous part.
01:40:923 (1) - Might add one here aswell. same as before
01:46:620 (3) - I find this 1/4 jump far too drastical, why not stack it on the place it at the middle of the square or something? plays totally fine for me since it's a slider, not much different than being a 1/2 jump
01:48:329 (1) - This looks really akward to me, having the downbeat - the prominent beat - on a Slider's repeat. I would really recommend to split this up and make it a circle and an 1/2 Slider or something. but in this certain spot there is no prominent beat on the downbeat, there's the guitar repeating a note and no drum sounds
01:53:076 (1) - Same suggestion as previous ones. same answer too
01:56:114 (1) - Yea, you know. :>
02:07:886 (6) - Again, I wouldn't recommend you to end a Slider at the downbeat, there's so much power and emphasis you lose by doing this. while this one does make sense, I'd like to keep since I really like the suspension feel for the guitar note that this 1/1 slider gives

[Normal]
All done here!

00:04:657 (6) - Move this a bit up so it won't touch the other circle.
00:31:619 (4) - Make this the same angle as 2? Current one looks weird.
00:48:897 (3,4) - Transition here is weird, how about moving this more to the right to create a more smooth movement?
01:07:125 (3) - Weird transition again, you could pull the Slider a bit so it compliments 4's start more.
01:21:745 (2,3) - 3 looks placed in an unclean way, pull 2 a bit down and stack 3 with the previous note.
01:45:480 (1) - Stack this perfectly on the previous 1? I don't see any reason not to do so.

[Easy]

Tick Rate 1 is enough for me here, 2 sounds too noisy since there are no realy prominent background sounds or anything. I have tick rate 2 because sliders that start on red ticks and 3/2 sliders in easy sound really odd with tick rate 1
01:27:252 (1) - Try a finish here, it fits the strong background and fits the previous one. hmm no thanks, don't hear it in the music
01:31:619 (2) - Looks somewhat weird placed, try to place it closer to 1's end for a better transition?
02:05:226 (1) - Missing a finish at the start. these two done
Nice difficulty! thanks!

That's about it, good luck!

Thanks so much for the mod! Refused a lot but really made me think through all of my placements and their reasons for being there.

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2014-05-12T08:55:01+00:00

http://puu.sh/8Jbad

Done!

captin1

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captin1 2014-05-12T09:02:30+00:00

awesome, uploaded!

(aimod is picking up a few unsnapped notes btw)

KanaRin

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KanaRin 2014-05-14T16:19:57+00:00

Requested by Climbb and KPY.
Nice map.
Just few suggestions here.

General

How about OD 5?
Volume of hitsound is a bit too low now, how about 70%?
both diffs: some notes aren't snapped

Oni

00:22:885 (2) - As we can hear the bass drum is here, it's better to do don.
00:26:872 (1,2) - No finisher to support here, I will suggest you to remove finish.
00:30:290 (1) - ^ same reason, yeah i know it doesn't much matter, but finish here sounds useless.
00:47:948 (18) - k d d d sounds like a don spam, better to delete this note.
01:18:897 - missed a don here.

Muzukashii

Remember to resnap the notes.
01:09:024 (48) - finish
01:17:758 (84) - kat, as we can hear snare-drum here.
01:21:556 (2) - sounds very odd, I will suggest a pattern for it. k d ddk d d OR k d ddk d d
02:10:733 (103) - don here, bass drum clearly.
02:11:113 (105) - kat here, snare-drum.

That's it.

climbb65588

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climbb65588 2014-05-21T03:02:16+00:00

Sorry for fixing the diff late. Fixed the mod from KanaRin.

http://puu.sh/8UIei.rar

Kagami Yuki

272 posts

Joined January 2012

Kagami Yuki 2014-05-21T15:55:31+00:00

mod as you requested.

[General]

All seems fine.

[Climbb & KPY's Taiko Oni]

01:19:277 (53,54,55,56) - 55 and 56 feel harder than 53 and 54.so I recommend you change them to kk KK.
01:21:651 (3) - remove this one
01:23:170 (14) - move this one to 01:23:359 (15) -
01:33:138 (8,9) - k?
01:34:277 (15) - d?
01:37:315 (34) - ^
01:46:334 (85) - ^
01:46:619 (88) - remove this finisher and add finisher at 01:46:999 (1) -

[Muzukashii]

fine.

Good luck~

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2014-05-21T21:13:53+00:00

- Kagami Yuki - wrote:
mod as you requested.

[General]
All seems fine.
[Climbb & KPY's Taiko Oni]
01:19:277 (53,54,55,56) - 55 and 56 feel harder than 53 and 54.so I recommend you change them to kk KK.
01:21:651 (3) - remove this one //kkkkd sounds a better effect than k kkd here.
01:23:170 (14) - move this one to 01:23:359 (15) - //no change here...as kkk fits the music better
01:33:138 (8,9) - k?
01:34:277 (15) - d? //I put kat here for the pitch.
01:37:315 (34) - ^
01:46:334 (85) - ^ //kat fits the drum better.
01:46:619 (88) - remove this finisher and add finisher at 01:46:999 (1) -
[Muzukashii]
fine.
Good luck~

Diff here.

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Silent Siren.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 80226
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 20409,32561,44713,56865,69017,81169,93321,106992,119144
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:stella*
TitleUnicode:stella☆
Artist:Silent Siren
ArtistUnicode:Silent Siren
Creator:captin1
Version:Climbb & KPY's Taiko Oni
Source:
Tags:start raose climbb65588 kanpakyin
BeatmapID:421153
BeatmapSetID:163253

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:6
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Background Colour Transformations
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KanaRin

1,886 posts

Joined April 2010

KanaRin 2014-05-22T14:19:46+00:00

Rechecked.

Taiko'd

dkun

osu! Alumni

4,486 posts

Joined August 2009

dkun 2014-05-22T23:55:44+00:00

Went through a brief re-check and fixed (some) snapping issues in the Hard. (good use of AIBAT keeps the BATs away!)

Looks good to me!

captin1

osu! Alumni

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Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

captin1 2014-05-22T23:56:20+00:00

thanks both of you!

Raose

698 posts

Joined July 2012

Raose 2014-05-22T23:57:45+00:00

-_____- idk how the unsnapping happened

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,466 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2014-05-23T12:14:08+00:00

\o/

Asphyxia

Beatmap Nominator

2,001 posts

Joined June 2012

Asphyxia 2014-05-24T11:57:51+00:00

Kiss me, kiss me baby!

[Insane]

00:04:278 (5) - I think something like this could work really well here, fitting with your current pattern http://puu.sh/8Z0o6.jpg
00:43:201 - Because here's a sound that isn't really nice to ignore, you could turn 00:43:012 (5) - into a 1/2 slider, would work really well! http://puu.sh/8Z0xA.jpg
00:58:012 (4,5,6) - The sudden spacing drop from somewhat jumpy to this feels forced to play, you could make some rearrangements in order to this to play better? Feels more consistent with 01:01:050 (4,5,6) - then too! Here's a pattern; http://puu.sh/8Z0GC.jpg
01:31:620 (1) - This slider could be moved to x:264 y:64 in order to make the overlap with 01:30:860 (3) - more stylish.
01:46:240 (1,2) - Way too far away from each other, the part isn't even that intense to space them out like that imo. http://puu.sh/8Z0RU.jpg That's just an example that could work here, feel free to do it your way but I honestly want to see that spacing drop even a bit.

[Raose's Hard]

00:09:024 (3,4,1) - You could make these blankets perfect and after that curve 00:09:783 (1) - so it blankets the head of 4, would make a cool pattern. http://puu.sh/8Z12g.jpg
00:43:011 (4) - Same suggestion here, if captin1 agrees to turn this note to a 1/2 slider, you probably should too.
00:52:695 (2,3,4) - Blanketsssssss
01:07:505 (1) - Move this slider a bit down to prevent the overlap with 01:06:745 (3) - ?
01:36:935 (2) - Doesn't look that nice due to the small overlap, either move this somewhere that the overlap is gone or curve it like this; http://puu.sh/8Z1eV.jpg

[Normal]

02:16:202 - Since you're using 1/2, adding a note here wouldn't really make it harder, feels kinda empty without it.

[Easy]

00:04:277 (3,1) - DS error

Call me back~

captin1

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Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

captin1 2014-05-24T16:32:01+00:00

Asphyxia wrote:
Kiss me, kiss me baby!

[Insane]
00:04:278 (5) - I think something like this could work really well here, fitting with your current pattern http://puu.sh/8Z0o6.jpg
00:43:201 - Because here's a sound that isn't really nice to ignore, you could turn 00:43:012 (5) - into a 1/2 slider, would work really well! http://puu.sh/8Z0xA.jpg
00:58:012 (4,5,6) - The sudden spacing drop from somewhat jumpy to this feels forced to play, you could make some rearrangements in order to this to play better? Feels more consistent with 01:01:050 (4,5,6) - then too! Here's a pattern; http://puu.sh/8Z0GC.jpg went with something else to avoid a full rearrange
01:31:620 (1) - This slider could be moved to x:264 y:64 in order to make the overlap with 01:30:860 (3) - more stylish.
01:46:240 (1,2) - Way too far away from each other, the part isn't even that intense to space them out like that imo. http://puu.sh/8Z0RU.jpg That's just an example that could work here, feel free to do it your way but I honestly want to see that spacing drop even a bit. maybe it's just me but i've never found this hard to play ha. Doing your pattern would cause some readability problems with seeing that 2 is a 1/4 slider, especially on AR8, so moved 1 up a bit instead
[Normal]
02:16:202 - Since you're using 1/2, adding a note here wouldn't really make it harder, feels kinda empty without it.
[Easy]
00:04:277 (3,1) - DS error
Call me back~

yay, will update when rose fixes

Raose

698 posts

Joined July 2012

Raose 2014-05-24T18:39:46+00:00

Asphyxia wrote:
[Raose's Hard]
00:09:024 (3,4,1) - You could make these blankets perfect and after that curve 00:09:783 (1) - so it blankets the head of 4, would make a cool pattern. http://puu.sh/8Z12g.jpg fixed the blankets but kept (1) as is, since it would flow to the next pattern better
00:43:011 (4) - Same suggestion here, if captin1 agrees to turn this note to a 1/2 slider, you probably should too. ok
00:52:695 (2,3,4) - Blanketsssssss fixeddddd
01:07:505 (1) - Move this slider a bit down to prevent the overlap with 01:06:745 (3) - ? oops
01:36:935 (2) - Doesn't look that nice due to the small overlap, either move this somewhere that the overlap is gone or curve it like this; http://puu.sh/8Z1eV.jpg okk

ty for mod!

yaaaaay

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