-RIKKA- wrote:

Hi, from M4M.

Easy

・00:35:532 (5) - like this ?



・00:40:058 (5,6,7,8,1) - ^
・Kiai time end 00:59:860 to 00:59:294
・AR & HD -1

Normal

・CS +1
・AR & OD 4 or 5
・00:04:556 (3,4) - like this?



・00:09:082 (4) - ^
・00:13:608 (3,4) - ^
・00:45:574 (4,1) - Please repeat it.
・Kiai time end 00:59:860 to 00:59:294

Hard

・CS +1
・HD 6 or 7
・00:27:045 (1,2,3,4,1) - spacing too far?
・00:45:150 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
・Kiai time end 00:59:860 to 00:59:294
・I recommend that you add various kinds to slider.

good luck

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello o3o Random mod

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[Easy]
00:25:348 (4) - NC
00:35:532 (5) - Add a finish on the tail, to match the cymbal crash heard in the music. Double click on the tail on the timeline like this:
Once it's highlighted in red you can add the finish.
00:40:058 (5) - Make the default normal hitsound on the reverse end as well,to continue the hitsound pattern.

The spacing looks pretty clean
[Normal]
Circle size -2, they're wayy to small for a standard player to hit in a Normal diff :S
00:27:045 (5) - Add another reverse, so it ends at 00:27:611 instead with a finish hitsound.
00:29:874 (5) - NC
00:34:400 (4) - ^
00:38:926 (4) - ^
00:45:715 (1) - Add a finish on the head.
00:46:281 - 00:47:696 Try this rhythm?


Rhythm here is a bit to complicated, since so many objects are only being placed 1/2 beats apart.

[Hard]
Circle size -1 or 2.
00:04:273 (3,4,5,1,2,2) - Really confusing overlap, please re-map this part.
00:09:365 (5,6,1,2) - Move more apart.
00:13:325 (3,4,2,2) - Another bad overlap, please re-map as well.
00:18:558 (5) - NC
00:29:874 (7) - ^
00:34:400 (7) - ^
00:38:926 (7) - ^
00:47:978 (6) - ^
00:52:505 (6) - ^
00:56:465 (6) - ^
This diff still needs a lot of work Especially on the flow.

Hope this helps~! ^^

All applied and thanks for the help

[ Zzz ] wrote:

HI~ RatedNC17

t/142356 My m4m modding queue request !!

[ General ]

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Your mp3 File = 128kbps> 192kbps
There is a need to change.

BG = 800x450 > ( 800x600 or 1024x768 or 1366x768 ) There is a need to change.

[ Easy ]

Slower bpm = ar - 1

00:04:414 (4) - Not good Shape

00:07:809 (2) - ^ ( Same as above )

00:16:861 (2) - ^

00:17:993 (3) - No Nc

00:18:276 (2) - Difficulty Balance To Removal

00:27:045 (4) -

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More Good Bits To Change

00:45:150 (4) -

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^ ( Same as above )

[ Normal ]

Slower bpm = ar - 1

00:10:496 (6) - it should be changed

00:17:993 (3) -

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More Good

00:37:795 (2) - Not good Shape

00:38:926 (1) - ^ ( Same as above )

00:55:899 (2) - ^

00:57:031 (3) - ^

[ Hard ]

HP + 1 OD - 1

00:03:283 (1,2) - Not good.

00:07:809 (1,2) - ^ ( Same as above )

silverboxer wrote:

from my modding queue

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General

Re-sized background: http://puu.sh/5bFEk.jpg
Use different slider shapes than just straight paths. Here's the topic for awesome sliders: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/37194

Easy

AR +1
All of your difficulties should be the same length. Try to map the beginning of the song for Easy.
Try to make the notes flow better instead of using 90 degree angles.
00:23:650 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - try to replace some circles with sliders, or make a better pattern than two rows of circles
00:46:847 (2) - overlap with 00:45:150 (4)
00:47:696 (3) - - move to 00:47:978
00:54:768 (1,2,3,4) - replace some sliders with circles, or make different slider shapes. Just needs to be more interesting to play.

Normal

OD -1
Replace some circles with sliders. You have too many objects, and not enough spacing. Change distance snap to 1.2x
00:07:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too hard for Normal. Try something like this: http://puu.sh/5bGBQ.jpg
00:12:335 (1,2,3,4) - Too many objects, not enough spacing.
00:17:993 (4) - Normal players cannot read this slider, especially under a circle
00:27:045 (5) - change to a 1/4 slider that repeats only once
00:40:058 (2) - separate into two sliders instead of one repeating slider
00:45:150 (1) - Normal players can't read this
00:47:413 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - lots of notes for Normal... maybe take some notes out and extend some sliders? It might look easier after you change the distance snap.

Hard

HP -1
Watch the distance snap from 00:01:020 - 00:17:851. It doesn't stay at 0.8x most of the time
Nothing else to say except use a better variety of slider shapes and don't use so many 90 degree patterns.

Awesome help! Thanks

Xanandra wrote:

Hello, from m4m, sorry for taking so long

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[General]

The was that the mp3 file ends and the map is pretty bad, if you did the cut by yourself, you should consider reediting it more properly, so it wont end so abruptly. actually thats how the song was cut from the artist since the mp3 is used in a trailer.

Also, youre not supposed to be using the "Short Ver." thing in your title anymore because of this: t/89198 And as far as I know, the title doesnt have this name originally. alright then

When you map, you should consider using lvl 4 grid, or just disable grid snap if youre pro enough. This is because it causes some slight DS bug, Ill tell them to you per each diff just to show you, this is more a suggestion for your future maps. noted


[Hard]

00:18:558 - Add circle here, and start spinner 1/4 later? no
00:27:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is an example of what I was telling you about using grid size lvl4, notice hoe (1) and (2) and different DS compared to other objects, so yeah, fix it. ok
00:28:177 (7) - Flip horizontally this slider, so it will look like this: http://puu.sh/5qUdG ok
00:45:150 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same as 00:27:045 (1,2,3,4,5) ok
00:53:636 (3,4) - Slider should start at 00:53:636 and then you should move the circle to 00:54:485 - Fix hitsounds as well, obviously. ok

[Normal]

00:46:281 - Missing hitsound? THX for spotting that
00:49:110 (3,4) - Same suggestion as in the hard diff in 00:53:636 (3,4) ok
00:53:636 (3,4) - Same as above ok
00:54:768 - Take out clap? ok

[Easy]

The whole first part before the break makes no sense at all to me, I suggest you to totally remap it. If you want suggestion as to where to put the beats, just say so, and when I have time, Ill give it to you.

00:56:465 (3) - Missing hitsound? thx for spotting that
00:58:728 - Missing hitsound?thx for spotting that

K4zuya K wrote:

hi :3
here's my first mod so i'm sorry if i make some mistakes ok No problem

Easy

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00:17:993 (3,4) - why don't you make it into one slider? it's too hard for easy ok
00:40:058 (5,1) - try to blanket it properly alright

Normal

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00:10:496 (6,1) - where's DC? (distant snap) fixed
00:18:558 (1) - move the end of spin to 00:23:085 ok
00:36:663 (1) - move this to x:176 y:40

fixed

Hard

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00:33:834 (6) - please make this into curve, it's not good to have this kind of slider alright
00:47:978 (1) - Ctrl + H and blanket properly no
00:52:505 (1) - ^ ok

ok, that's all from me
good luck with your map,hope this will be ranked soon (love the song and vid )

Rakuen wrote:

Hi~

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M4M from your queue!
My map: CLIFF EGDE feat. Nakamura Maiko - Endless Tears

[General]
Ok.
You need a better background pic since your "Source" isn't come from GTA, tho I dont have any suggested BGs that was meant to be in the tags

[Easy]
Overall: Squared, no flow or lesser, could build more flow and increase note density
Suggest to decrease SV for "Easy" diff and increase the DS to 1.0x or something, if you have time i'll keep it
00:06:677 (1) - Use DS (Distance Snap) and remain 0.8x for the whole song if possible ok
00:16:861 (2,3) - ^
00:23:085 (1) - I prefer the first circle after break is around or near center of the screen no
00:23:085 (1,2,3,4) - Could move this set to a little bit right and make 00:24:216 (3) - on the center, that looks better ok
00:27:045 (4) - Bounces doesn't suit Easy diff, becoz it's designed for newbies and they can't guess how many it hits
00:45:150 (4) - ^
00:49:393 (4) - This note is out of beat or anything in the song, suggest to remove and put a circle 00:49:676 -
00:54:768 (1) - Constant DS is important for Easy and Normal mapping standard for now
00:56:465 (3) - ^ Use 0.8x and remain if possible

[Normal]
Overall: Squared, Ok flow
Use Tiny grid size (by pressing G and change) to arrange the note neatly ok
00:02:151 (1) - Remove NC ok
00:01:020 (1,2,1,2) - I personally suggest these notes change into sliders since Blue Ticks are kinda hard to aim ok
00:05:546 (1,2,1,2) - ^ applies ok
00:14:598 (1,2,1,2) - ^ ok
00:17:851 - You missed a hit and suddenly jumped to drum > 00:17:993 (3) thx for spotting that
00:17:993 (3) - Suggest not to put bounces before spinner i'll keep it
00:27:045 (5) - Maybe change to 1 slider without any reverse i'll keep it
00:29:308 (3) - Do not change your DS suddenly, it makes players hard to read
^ For this kind of style you can use it in Hard / Insane diff for clear notes stacks
00:37:795 (2,3,1) - Suggest to change this pattern if you have anymore idea
00:50:242 (1,2) - Make it slider no
00:53:636 (3,4,5) - Change to 2 sliders no
00:55:899 (2) - Bad flow, try Ctrl+J

[Hard]
00:09:365 (5,6,1,2,3) - This is kinda out of mapping area still fully shows in test play
00:29:874 (1) - Remove slider whistle no
00:34:400 (1) - ^ no
00:27:611 (5) - NC (New combo) ok

That's all, hope it helps.

Thx for the the mod

1. bpm: 106 Offset: 1012 that was what i found
2. a suggestion, you can tilt a bit straight slider like this one
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   to make your map more variation, or a little curve like this
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3. raise volume on kiai time 10%

1. from AiMod, fix that
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2. please use 1/4 beat snap divisior rather than 1/8
3. 00:47:985 (3) - ctrl+h then ctrl+g and then move this coordinate x:136 y:128, looks better don't they
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4. 00:51:945 (3) - ctrl+> then move to x:172 y:72

1. 00:33:834 (2,3) - the distance so close since you have 1.2 DS in this diff
2. 00:47:978 (1) - the shape not looks good, maybe you can copy paste this one 00:49:393 (4) -
3. 00:55:899 (2,3,4) - that one was a jump and prety far for a normal diff, i sugest you not put any jumps in normal diff

1. this diff must have Distance Spacing more than 1.2 (curently 0.8 same as easy diff), because in normal diff your DS is 1.2 so logically in hard diff you should have more than 1.2 or you can lower the DS on normal diff
2. 00:17:851 (3,4,5,6,7) - i think you can spread it out like this one 00:27:045 (1,2,3,4) -
3. 00:31:854 (3,1,2,3,4) - bad overlap imo
4. 00:52:505 (1,2,3) - this flow one looks ok

Jekate wrote:

hello M4M~

[General]

1. bpm: 106 Offset: 1012 that was what i found thx
2. a suggestion, you can tilt a bit straight slider like this one
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   to make your map more variation, or a little curve like this
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3. raise volume on kiai time 10%

ok

[Easy]

1. from AiMod, fix that
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   ok
2. please use 1/4 beat snap divisior rather than 1/8 ok
3. 00:47:985 (3) - ctrl+h then ctrl+g and then move this coordinate x:136 y:128, looks better don't they
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   yep
4. 00:51:945 (3) - ctrl+> then move to x:172 y:72

ok

[Normal]

1. 00:33:834 (2,3) - the distance so close since you have 1.2 DS in this diff ok
2. 00:47:978 (1) - the shape not looks good, maybe you can copy paste this one 00:49:393 (4) - ok
3. 00:55:899 (2,3,4) - that one was a jump and prety far for a normal diff, i sugest you not put any jumps in normal diff

fixed

[Hard]

1. this diff must have Distance Spacing more than 1.2 (curently 0.8 same as easy diff), because in normal diff your DS is 1.2 so logically in hard diff you should have more than 1.2 or you can lower the DS on normal diff
2. 00:17:851 (3,4,5,6,7) - i think you can spread it out like this one 00:27:045 (1,2,3,4) - no
3. 00:31:854 (3,1,2,3,4) - bad overlap imo
4. 00:52:505 (1,2,3) - this flow one looks ok

that's all
be optimistic on your map and keep improving~

my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/134296

thanks

DragonSparta wrote:

M4M4M4M4M4M4M!

Hi~

General
Overall, spacing is probably the problem in the maps~
Just a tweak would do.

Easy
00:07:804 (2,3,4) - I would recommend :

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ok (pokemon ftw)
00:24:807 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing not equal, feels uncomfortable... (yes, im that kind of guy) fixed
00:28:181 (1,2,3) - Spacing changes fixed
Recommend 1.05x spacing distance

Normal
00:03:983 (2) - Jumps. Not recommended for Normal difficulty fixed
00:39:313 (3,4.1) - Spread these notes abit further
00:52:238 (5) - Two grids up (Level 4)

Hard
0 0:28:181 - end of 1st kiai time - Notes become easier. Recommend a bit of jumps for fun
And other spacing problems derp~ will fix those

I would say its not bad for ur first few beatmaps~
Keep on getting feedback from more people.
These are just recommendations~
Not "I WANT CHA TO CHANGE ALL OF IT" type
The addition sounds make great noises!
Derp

agentdark1706 wrote:

my mod probably no very useful

[general]
hard and normal have unsnaped kiai ... here some images to prove it

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will fix

and that was all ....( as i said useless)every little bit helps

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

Hello~
From M4M

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[General]
some rythem is strange..
I think you have to recheck your offset.

[Easy]
00:04:408 (4,1) - Unity DS
00:25:351 (1) - Delete NC ok
00:43:464 (1) - ^ ok
00:46:861 (2,3) - Unity DS

[Normal]
00:03:276 (1,2) - Too Hard for Normal diff player fixed

[Sleepwalking]
00:04:832 (6) - Try to change Note (Follow the music)
00:21:955 (1) - Delete NC

Good Luck

Thank you

AnthonyEcon wrote:

M4M queue

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Normal
00:15:162 (2) - Move 2 ticks right (to white) no
00:16:153 (2) - Move 2 ticks right (to white) no

Sleepwalking
00:11:766 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Doesn't follow the music very well. I think it would be much better like this:
Before:

After:

Obviously, make sure to rearrange the notes.

Nice job on the map!

Thx for the help

BeatofIke wrote:

Timing Request!

The BPM for this song is 106.05 and the Offset is 450.
Hope this helps and Good luck with your map!

1. Some tag conflict.
2. A maximum volume in Insane is 60, while the other is 40. Consider make it equal.

1. 00:25:343 (5,6,7) - Distant Spacing. Of course I know that it's easy if we're an experienced player. But for beginner player, it's a tough one.
2. 00:33:830 (3) - Vertical flip? (http://puu.sh/6129T.jpg)

1. 00:31:001 (2) - Horizontal flip? (http://puu.sh/612gp.jpg)
2. 00:38:922 (1) - Symmetry. (http://puu.sh/612mt.jpg)

1. HP-1: if you keep it at 8. Then most of player will fail if they don't get all 300.
2. 00:27:041 (1,2,3,4,5) - A 'too-sudden' volume up. It jumps from 25 to 60 too quickly.
3. 00:57:027 (1) - Hilarious! LOL

1. This difficulty has plain patterns. Try to make curve patterns.

1. I think you should redo this difficulty. There's a lot of notes that don't have the same distance. Look at it, analyze thing that you can change.

1. You can improve a little bit more.

sheela901 wrote:

Hi. From mii-KK-sheela Newbie Modding/GD Team :3
Thanks for the mod.

[Easy]
00:01:015 (1,2,3) - This pattern is kind of plain. Move them by following the coordinations down:

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00:01:015 (1) - x:56 y:336 ok
00:02:147 (2) - x:264 y:304 ok
00:03:278 (3) - x:456 y:228 ok

00:06:673 (1) - Move it to x:60 y:260 ok
00:09:502 (3) - It's too close to 00:07:805 (2) . Move it to x:268 y:296, and 00:10:068 (4) to x:360 y:248. i'd rather keep it the way it is
00:16:857 (2) - Make a curve slider by placing the first point to x:256 y:244, second to x:380 y:232, and last to x:388 y:216. and move 00:17:988 (3) to x:312 y:156, to make a blanket combo.
00:13:462 (3) - Make a curve slider by putting the first point (little square) to x:256 y:224, second to x:340 y:200, and last to x:376 y:160.
00:23:080 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make a random pattern. Coordinations are down:

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00:23:080 (1) - x:492 y:184
00:23:645 (2) - x:464 y:88
00:24:211 (3) - x:380 y:40
00:24:777 (4) - x:312 y:116
00:25:343 (5) - x:248 y:192
00:25:909 (6) - x:196 y:108
00:26:474 (7) - x:96 y:120 moved

00:29:304 (3) - Move the second point to x:476 y:200, and last to x:500 y:164. i'd rather keep it
00:31:001 (5) - Move it to x:284 y:344. ok
00:31:567 (6) - Make it less curvy. fixed
00:33:830 (3) - Move the last point to x:400 y:60. ok
00:46:843 (2) - Make a curve slider by placing the first point to x:308 y:188, second to x:244 y:192, and last to x:172 y:168. ok
00:51:935 (3) - Move the second point to x:196 y:60, and last to x:168 y:32. fixed

1. This difficulty has plain patterns. Try to make curve patterns.

[Normal]
00:01:015 (1,2,1) - This pattern isn't acceptable for normal difficulty.
00:03:986 (2,3) - Don't use 1/4 notes in a normal difficulty. ok
00:05:541 (1,2,1) - This pattern isn't acceptable for normal difficulty.
00:13:038 (3,4) - Don't use 1/4 notes in a normal difficulty. ok
00:29:304 (3,4,1) - You use a different distance snap for this. Make all the same distance snap. fixed
00:32:133 (1) - Move the last point to x:216 y:188. i'd rather keep it like that
00:50:520 (2) - It have a different distance snap.fixed
00:52:218 (5) - ^ fixed
00:58:158 (4) - Too close to 00:57:027 (3) . moved 3 and 4

1. I think you should redo this difficulty. There's a lot of notes that don't have the same distance. Look at it, analyze thing that you can change.

[Insane]
i think you meant hard since some of notes timing aren't in insane
00:27:041 (1,2,3,4,5) - Coordinations are down:

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00:27:041 (1) - x:320 y:188
00:27:182 (2) - x:320 y:160
00:27:324 (3) - x:336 y:132
00:27:465 (4) - x:364 y:120 i'd rather keep them the way they are

00:32:981 (3) - Move it to x:288 y:240. moved
00:45:145 (1,2,3,4) - Coordinations are down:

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00:45:145 (1) - x:196 y:248
00:45:287 (2) - x:160 y:276
00:45:428 (3) - x:116 y:288
00:45:570 (4) - x:76 y:276 i'd rather keep them they way they are

1. You can improve a little bit more.

Good Luck on ranking this map.

Winek wrote:

From My modding queue!

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Easy
00:25:343 (5) - Maybe New combo? i'd rather keep it
00:32:698 (1,2) - Just to avoid repetition, why not transform it to slider? alright
00:38:356 (3) - Avoid repetition again; Transform it to 3 stacked up circles alright
00:44:014 (5) - Maybe new combo? i'd rather keep it

Normal
00:07:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - For this part; and other too, you shouldn't be using blue tick; it may be confusing;
00:32:133 (1) - Tiz note is a bit far from the previous, no? distant snap is same
00:48:823 (5) - Prehaps New combo? no

Hard
Suggest you to use 1/4 Beat snap Divisor, since you're not using 1/8.
CS shoulda be 4 i think its fine
From the start to 00:18:554 (1), you could like, connect some notes to form one combo such as, 00:01:015 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4)
00:17:847 (3,4,5,6,7) - Spreading those notes, prehaps? alright
00:58:441 (4,5) - Try to stack these notes, and some other ressembling to it, maybe? i'd rather keep it
Also try to make combo up to 6-9.

Insane
First, where the hell is kiai?
After, you're making combo may too small
00:24:212 (2,3,4,5,6) and 00:27:041 (1,2,3,4,5) Swtich them place, please.
00:52:783 (1,2,3) - Maybe spread?

That's about all, don't forget to ask someone else, i can't be sure of what i said.

Thank You

CDFA wrote:

Mod4modding, woo woo woo

Anyways

Overall:
You can remove video game from the tags, as that will be added to the genre if and when this map gets ranked.

Insane:
00:04:834 (6) - Why does this go on the yellow tick?
00:12:048 (1) - This seems random because the change in hitsounds follow nothing in the music. Reserve things like this for when the music increases or decreases
00:23:080 (1) - Remove NC or remove NC on the previous note
00:38:073 (5) - Move this to avoid overlap

Hard:
00:38:922 (1) - Make this a curved slider, to match up the style of your previous sliders changed
00:58:724 (6) - Add finish at the end of the slider added

Normal:
00:03:986 (2,3,4) - For a normal mode, this may be hard to tap, since the beats are on offbeat 16th notes. Try something like this http://puu.sh/63hvQ.jpg
00:08:512 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same issue with the above. Generally, in normal diffs, you want to avoid blue ticks unless they are absolutely neccesary to the song and are the dominant thing heard, and even then, use them sparsely and hide them in sliders if possible. if you need to start something on a blue tick for lower diffs, it's best to start it with a slider, as they have more leniancy than regular notes, allowing the developing players to have more success. i'll find a way to change that
00:47:974 (4) - Add normal hitsound at the end of the slider added
00:55:895 (2,3) - I'd suggest a different shape for these, make it more U shaped rather than J shaped.
00:58:724 (5) - Add finish at end of slider added

Easy:
00:01:015 (1,2,3) - Adjust these so it makes a more coherent patten. http://puu.sh/63hEl.jpg (Placement in the timeline is adjusted to make this easier to see.) ajusted
00:58:158 (5) - Add finish at end of slider added

This actually is a pretty decent mapset, especially for someone who is starting. Good work. Hope to see this go places sometime.

DragonSparta wrote:

Derp~
Saw the comments, I increased the jumping a bit.
Edit
Umm.. just change the diff 'sall

Trust wrote:

From my queue~

Here are some suggestions,
feel free to use any.

Red: Unrankable or extremely questionable
Blue: Strongly recommended change
Black: Simple suggestion

[Easy]
00:31:001 (5,6) - Swap the positions of these two like you see below as it makes more sense with the music: ok

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00:38:356 (3,4,5) - Replace this with a reversing 1/2 slider. The issue with stacking notes on Easy difficulties is that beginner players generally perceive stacks as needing to be hit in immediate succession, and that is definitely not the case since each note is spaced 1/2 in time. In most cases, stacks are generally avoided in Easy for this reason. Alright
[Normal]
There are spacing inconsistencies that occur occasionally throughout this difficulty. I decided not to point them out because of how frequently they occur so please have a look through to see where they are and correct them to a consistent distance. Distance is the same throughout the diff

00:04:410 (3) - Not sure what this slider is emphasizing in the music. I suggest you replace this with a note on 00:04:268 and a 1/2 slider on the blue tick that follows after that just like you did for 00:08:795 (3,4) since it sounds identical: alright

SPOILER

00:38:922 (4) - NC to stay consistent with your NC patterns. alright
00:41:185 (1) - Why did you decide to use a spinner here when you mapped it out on Easy? Consider removing this spinner and mapping out this section. ok
00:47:974 (4) - NC to shorten this combo, it's quite long alright

Not bad at all, just check for those spacing issues and fix them accordingly and this'll be on its way to becoming a great Normal diff!
[Hard]
I'm on the fence about the use of CS5 on this difficulty but i'm assuming if it's something you haven't changed yet then I suppose you intend to keep it. However CS4 feels much more appropriate for a Hard in my opinion and it would also bridge the gap in the CS spread of your mapset (Normal is CS3 and Hard is CS5?), but I guess it's just a preference.

00:27:041 (1,2,3,4,1) - The quick movement is very unpredictable for a first play-through since it uses greater spacing than what you did for 00:17:847 (3,4,5,6,7) and therefore appears as if the notes at first glance all have 1/1 time inbetween them. I highly recommend you do something like this: changed

SPOILER

00:31:850 (3) - Move this slider to the left a bit so you can avoid the slight touching with 00:32:698 (2). actually moved up 1 grid since 2 was a 1 grid higher than 3
00:40:336 (2,1) - The overlap between these two doesn't look that great and can be easily avoided. You can turn off grid snap and move 00:41:185 (1) so the tail stacks perfectly on 00:40:336 (2) and then properly adjust 00:40:902 (4,5). It should look something like this: alright

SPOILER

00:41:185 (1,2,3) - Holy cow, the spacing between these three sliders is enormous and also very inconsistent. I suggest you tone down the distance a bit or at least make the jumps equal in distance. hmmm... i'll consider this
00:44:580 (4) - This note would look better if it was centered perfectly, just shift it right a few grids. fixed
00:45:145 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same suggestion as 00:27:041 (1,2,3,4,1). changed
00:58:441 (4,5,6) - The spacing on this stack is a bit inconsistent, make sure they are spaced equally. fixed

Not much else I have to say. Pretty nice for your first Hard, keep it up!
[DragonSparta's Insane]
I suppose CS5 is acceptable as this is an Insane difficulty but just note that even casual Insane players might have a difficult time enjoying this. Please consider CS4. It allows for much more comfortable gameplay. (especially with this spacing)

Furthermore, I just don't agree with the difficulty settings for this diff in general because you've created such a huge gap in skill requirement to be able to pass this after clearing Hard. With the exception of OD (which is the same as Hard by the way) you should consider toning some of them down. Try these settings, they played a lot better for me:
AR8 (-1)
HP7 (-1)
OD7 (+1) - only increase this if you change to CS4

00:09:502 (1,2,3,4) - This feels very under-mapped for an insane. You should change these circles to 1/2 sliders to properly emphasize the vocal holds.
00:11:765 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This entire combo feels very awkward to play after what you decided to bring out in the music from the previous combo. It was rather unexpected to start playing along to sounds in the BGM when that "hooo" vocal sound is still so prominent. I strongly recommend you consider mapping this combo to play to the vocal or another option would be to map the previous combo to play along to the BGM.
00:12:331 (2,3,4,5) - From a testplay I can tell you that the jumps here feel very uncomfortable and seem unnecessarily large. Try something like this so the circles fall more in-line with the sliders:

SPOILER

00:15:584 (1) - The use of a note here is overmap since there is no sound to back it up. It also sounds, and plays a lot better without it so I would remove it.
00:20:817 (1) - You need to raise the volume here because this object is currently inaudible and therefore unrankable. I would raise it up to at least 25%.
00:21:383 (2) - ^ as this one is barely audible.
00:28:172 (3) - The overlap with 00:28:738 (5) looks quite strange and unecessary, consider moving this slider down to avoid the overlap.
00:31:425 (8) - The blanket here isn't very clean.
00:39:771 (6,7,8) - How come these sliders are all curved differently? Maybe curve them all the same, it would look nicer.
00:44:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is extremely difficult to read for a player of any skill level even with the very insignificant spacing difference to distinguish the time between each note. I can assure you that any BAT these days would not approve of this.
00:44:297 (2,4) - These two notes are overmapped due to there being no sounds in the BGM to justify the use of them. I strongly suggest you remove them.
00:51:935 (7) - This slider didn't feel that great for me. I think it would be a good idea if you removed the reverse and used a 1/2 slider here to properly emphasize the downbeat and brief vocal hold. This means you should delete 00:52:783 (1) to accommodate for the 1/2. Here is an example of what I mean:

SPOILER

NC the new 1/2 slider if you follow this.

00:52:783 (1,2,3) - There's nothing easily identifiable in the music to justify the use of an anti-jump here. Because there isn't a 1/1 gap in time between the notes, all this serves as is a readability gimmick for the sake of difficulty to which most likely will cause people to combo break. Unstack these notes.
00:54:481 (1) - Remove NC to fit your patterning
00:54:764 (2) - NC as it's nice to get in on the downbeat
00:57:027 (1) - Move this a grid right to get this to be perfectly centered.

This map has the potential to be a great insane and has some very fun elements to it but at the same time it could definitely use some work. In any case, good job and I hope this helps.

Yeah, sorry for not that much on the easier diffs. I started with Insane and got kinda sleepy. (also i prefer to mod insanes) Please let me know in-game or through PM if you have any questions about any of the suggestions!
Best of luck~

Wow! Amazing mod thanks so much

1. 00:07:805 (2,3,4) - i think the (3,4) can right some grids that to let it like a equilateral triangle.
2. 00:25:343 (5) - i think this slider need kick too and you can NC here.
3. 00:32:133 (6) - NC start here is better because the shape and both nc are set to the big white line except some special part.

1. 00:03:278 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm i know its follow the music but (4) is white line not blue line so you might change this. maybe you can change (3,4) for a slider and bla bla bla... (?)
2. 00:07:805 (1,2,3,4) - same problem as ^
3. 00:12:331 (2,3,4) - this too ^

1. CS+1? now seldom to use this size for hard. o_O
2. 00:16:433 (3,1) - i think use kick is better because its heavy not like the hit-hat

1. well i think not have any problem in this diff, its really hard and not bad.

1. 00:01:015 (1,2,3) - some more distance snap issues. Select all of these and drag it so the (2) stacks on the upcoming (4) | for more variety. Move the (2) afterwards to around x256 y320 to create something like this | http://puu.sh/68GpB.jpg |
2. 00:09:502 (3,4) - Distance Snap.. These would be best at (3) x204 y284, and then stack (4) on (3) then horizontally flip it. (You'll have to adjust the other notes later on as well.. but before doing all that, read my next mod suggestion.
3. 00:10:068 (4) - to 00:16:857 (2) - how about mapping more of this section. You can actually just follow the vocals since you already have it kind of started thanks to 00:09:502 (3) - Like for example.. 00:11:199 (1) - and 00:15:725 (1) - could be a 1/2 reverse slider. You could drag 00:13:462 (3) - back 1/1 to catch them properly etc. When looking at your Normal diff, there is kind of a gap in difficulty for this. So why not map a little extra here?
4. 00:15:725 (1,2,3) - This mostly applies to (2,3)'s positioning, and depends if you decided to use the last mod or not. Why not try something like this for a bit better flow? Having that one spot as a fallback note eventually starts to make your map not look very appealing. | http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1223594
5. 00:23:080 (1,2,3,4,5) - compared to the rest of your map. This looks pretty ugly. how about re-positioning all of these notes? | Right now they also have varying distances from each other (0.74 to 0.78) so you could make them a bit even, An example if you wanted to keep your map in the same style | http://puu.sh/68EAm.jpg |
6. 00:31:001 (5) - Clap/Whistle should be on the end of the slider, not the beginning.
7. 00:31:001 (5,6) - Try moving (5) to x276 y308 and (6) to x328 y216 | This will let (6) stack on the much earlier placed (2) and let's all the notes between this connect visually.
8. 00:32:133 (6,1,2,3) - If you did the previous, try this as well. | http://puu.sh/68F9J.jpg | Basically let adjust these into a square, and place the upcoming (4) where (6) is.| After that, just reposition the upcoming notes as well so they're distance snapped.
9. 00:46:277 (1,2,3) - Try stacking the (2) on the previous note at 00:44:580 (6) - | After that adjust (1) so it's evenly spaced between (7) and (2).. Finally move the (3) and any other notes you feel needed to be adjusted to distance snap. | http://puu.sh/68FuF.jpg
10. 00:49:106 (4,1,2) - Just because of how you have this set up, it seems like you trap the poor (2) without any breathing room. How about giving (4,1) a bit of a curve so the (2) will have more room to move around in? | http://puu.sh/68FJX.jpg

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: Just scroll to the part you need to snap to and click "use current time" in the timing setup panel where you want them placed. This is so you get the right sound on the right note as setting some of these later will cause the note to not use the timing it's supposed to.
00:17:851 - snap to 00:17:847 -
00:22:999 - snap to 00:22:939 -
00:27:032 - snap to 00:27:041 -

1. 00:08:512 (2,3,4,5,6) - stuff like this can feel rather bland to look at. Why not try something more like you did at 00:03:278 (1,2,3,4) - with the notes going in a bit of a curve? (5) for example is the big issue. The idea to using reverse sliders is to create a curved motion instead of having it directly straight. It'll require a bit of remapping, but something like this | http://puu.sh/68IE5.jpg | looks visually and plays 100x better.
2. 00:13:887 (5,1,2) - the way this is set up is a bit strange as well. how about using (4,5) to help turn the player around.. Not exactly like this, but something similar to create a much better flow | http://puu.sh/68IP2.jpg
3. 00:24:212 (2,3) - again, this is pretty lifeless. I might be a little picky when it comes to this stuff, but it could easily look better even if you did something like this | http://puu.sh/68J2D.jpg
4. 00:25:343 (3,5) - how about an NC on one of these | (3) to be consisent with everything else coming up, or (5) to be consistent a bit with how you did 00:45:145 (1) -
5. 00:26:475 (4,5,1) - (4,1) could probably be stacked, and you could probably shoot the tail end of (5) off to the right so players get a better sense of direction.
6. 00:34:113 (3,1) - This could be blanketed better. Try moving the middle node to x432 y252 and the tail end to about x388 y200
7. 00:36:376 (3) - x220 y112? | Better flow this way.
8. 00:45:145 (1) - Like the other one, you could probably send the tail end off to the right so it ends sending you to the left. (maybe nudge this over to the right a bit more as well so it's a tiny bit further away from the center.
9. 00:47:691 (3,1) - blanket the (1) around the (3) so it gives more room for 00:48:823 (2,3) - to be placed. | http://puu.sh/68JG8.jpg | General idea, try to blanket it a bit better than I did.
10. 00:55:895 (2,3) - Only really suggesting this because you break distance snapping here. Maybe try something like this? | http://puu.sh/68KdQ.jpg | Keeping your original slider shapes.. They could probably be reworked though.
11. 00:58:158 (4) - change this into a 1/2 slider | http://puu.sh/68Kj4.jpg | catches the vocals much better

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: Again, resnap these so notes get properly played instead of missed sometimes with the right hitsound/volume adjustments.
00:18:541 - snap to 00:18:554 -
00:27:032 - snap to 00:27:041 -
00:45:150 - snap to 00:45:145 -

1. 00:05:541 (1,2,1,2) - not too much of a big deal, but how about swapping the positions of these? (1,2)
2. 00:06:673 (1,2) - to make it more symmetrical, move these down (with both selected) to x256 y324 (of it you applied the last mod, do this to the other notes. You can easily just duplicate and then do a vertical flip as well. Whatever is easier.
3. 00:07:805 (1,2) - Move these right a bit so you get a good flow with... (next mod)
4. 00:08:795 (3,4) - In addition to above. Try moving these to the left a bit.. the overall image I have in mind is something like this | http://puu.sh/68PsN.jpg
5. 00:13:887 (5) - how about stacking this under (3)'s tail? | Right now you have kind of an awkward gap that is exactly x2 the default distance snap, which actually gives off the illusion you are supposed to hit it later than normal, even if you are trying to follow the music.
6. 00:14:594 (1,2,1,2) - Put these slightly further apart? | Try about the same distance as where 00:13:321 (4) - is. | http://puu.sh/68POP.jpg
7. 00:16:433 (3) - if you did the above. you could probably center this circle for better symmetry
8. 00:26:475 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - If you don't like this idea, then at least make sure to use the next mod. Check the image first to see if you like it or not| Why do you have 2.00x SV for this part? Not really necessary since you don't use any sliders. I would remove it. | anyways, back on topic. How about something like this? | http://puu.sh/68QLu.jpg | Put the first (4) at x256 y84 | Stack (1) on top of it, and then using 0.8 distance snap (at 0.5x SV) hold shift with both distance snap and grid snap on, and drag each stream note to the right of it. This forces the correct gap between each note (give or take 0.01 error which is nothing) | After all that, do the same for (1) (You'll have to swap this to 0.4 distance snap) and try to bend it something like I have if you want | And finally drag the last couple sliders in place at 0.8 DS... Hopefully you didn't get too lost. If you did, then try to replicate the picture if you like it.
9. 00:27:041 (1,2,3,4,1) - If you didn't use the previous. Then do this | At distance snap 0.4 shift+click and drag each note (2,3,4) to the right to keep the lengths consistent. and then do the same for (1) but at 0.8 DS. | http://puu.sh/68RdS.jpg | Ends up balanced.
10. 00:29:728 (6) - Hold shift with Distance Snap (DS) and Grid Snap (GS) on and try to move this note to the left. It'll place itself exactly 0.80 apart from (5,1)
11. 00:36:376 (4,5,1) - Use 0.8 DS for these please.
12. 00:38:922 (1) - how about making a better blanket or slider that compliments your circles? | http://puu.sh/68RG6.jpg | 2nd node: x316 y260 | 3rd node: (Add a red one here) x252 y256 | 4th node: x184 y256
13. 00:41:044 (5) - closest I could get this to even was x480 y288 (Did you know you can click the top right part here: http://puu.sh/68RSU.jpg | and move notes manually this way?)
14. 00:45:145 (1,2,3,4,1) - Again, you can try something like my suggestion earlier or force a DS of 0.4 on each of these notes by holding shift. and using 0.8 on the second (1)
15. 00:50:096 (6) - More nazi stuffs | x19 y287 | Use the coordinate window again to make movement easy.
16. 00:54:764 (1) - What's with this clap? Doesn't really fit with the song.
17. 00:58:441 (4,5,6) - Try to make this 0.80 again instead of 0.85 | Maybe try something like this? http://puu.sh/68Suh.jpg | All I did was hold down shift (with DS/GS on) and moved the notes this way.

1. 00:03:420 (2) - First node: x200 y292 | Middle node: x256 y272 | Last node: x312 y292 | Just makes it a slightly better blanket from what you currently have.
2. 00:10:068 (3,4) - Raise the volume a bit for these.. They're too quiet.
3. 00:13:604 (7) - I actually can't hear anything from this note. I'm almost thinking if you moved this 1/2 ahead it would play much better. More of an opinion though.. You'd have to rework some positioning if you do this I guess.
4. 00:18:625 (1) - I'm actually curious as to why you started this 1/8 later than where expected to be. The vocals actually start fading in at 00:18:554 - as well as the extra drum sound is played here too.
5. 00:30:011 (3) - This feels much more comfortable to play at 00:29:890 - having a triplet here instead of in its original place.
6. 00:32:416 (1) - how about placing this at x244 y40 | More of a triangle feeling and it doesn't feel like such a big gap between (9,1)
7. 00:40:902 (10) - nazi. x242 y180 to even the distance here as well.
8. 00:48:823 (2) - Much like how you have the pattern at 00:45:994 (1,2,3) - Why not stack the (2) on the (4) here as well?
9. 00:34:962 (1,2,3) - It would be kinda cool if you could make (3) similar to (1,2) as well. I'm really only saying this because the (3) looks really out of place, almost curved too much.
10. 00:57:027 (1) - So about this cool looking V. First off, it has a part which makes it freeze in place for a milisecond due to how you placed it like this: http://puu.sh/68TaD.jpg | This is generally frowned upon, even though minor, and would be much better if it was just removed. Infact, I recreated the slider to be close to the same as you had it before, and improved on its symmetry etc.| http://puu.sh/68T5s.jpg | This is all you really need to do. If you want, the code is below.
    

    344,116,57027,6,0,B|312:116|312:116|256:244|256:244|200:116|200:116|164:116,2,345.000013160706,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

deejaydray wrote:

Hello, from my queue :3

EASY:

00:09:502 (1) - no NC here, but you should put NC at 00:10:068 (2) i'll keep it since vocals start here
00:12:896 (1) - ^same, but you should put NC at 00:12:331 (4) ^
00:14:594 (4) - NC here ok
00:15:725 (1) - no NC here, but you should put NC at 00:16:857 (2) I put it at 4 actually
00:53:632 (5) - I think this slider is too much in bottom, you should put it somewhere else, more on top moved it

NORMAL:

00:08:795 (3,4,5) - just a suggestion, but I would replace these circles with a single circle at 00:08:936 i think i'll keep it this way
Nothing else wrong here o.o

HARD:

00:54:339 - add a circle here i'll consider or put somewhere else
Again, everything else is good ^^

DragonSparta's INSANE:

First of all, what's with the KIAI time in this difficulty? o.o For example, at 00:36:659 the duration is very very short, you can barely see "KIAI time" in left-top corner. I don't know if this is just for me, but you should put the same KIAI time as the other difficulties
00:04:834 (6) - I would end this slider at 00:05:117
00:36:376 (7) - you should find a better place to put this circle, not the same place as 00:36:093 (6)

That's all Nice song! :] Good luck with your map ^^

No_Gu wrote:

M4M from my queue

[General]
why not add a silent slider body? they can't really be heard either way. maybe i'll add it

[Easy]
00:23:080 (1,2,3,4,1) - make a star? i'll consider
totally ok

[Normal]
00:09:078 (4,5) - I don't suggest 1/4 in nromal diff changed to slider for easier hit
00:45:711 - notes from here become really harder than the previous ones.that's unbalanced ill fix this
00:55:895 (2,3) - make them a better shape? i think they're fine

[Hard]
00:38:922 (1) - forgot whislte in repeat thanks. somehow missed that
it will be nicer if you put some jump.but it's ok if you do nothing

[Insane]
00:01:015 - finishs from here sound really noisy
00:20:817 (1,2,1,1) - why so many NCs here?
00:47:974 (1) - ctrl+g
00:54:764 (1) - ^

xVirtualNinjax wrote:

I didn't get GTA V ;_; I is sad boy. I've never even finished a GTA game, yet I have every single one but GTA V and GTA Chinatown Stories or wutever (the one on the PSP that wasn't that good) D:>

Anyways, mod time!



[General]

A 4th combo color may be helpful. i based the combo colors from the characters personality color. I don't think it would with only being 3 of them :/


[Easy]

SPOILER

Difficulty: I feel it's a bit too easy with the low HP Drain and OD, so I'd probably bump those up by 1 to level 4. i'll consider

00:17:988 (5) - I would change it to this i think its fine


Link if image doesn't pop up (am I the only one who still uses imgur, not puush?) http://imgur.com/0hsdqRv

00:43:448 (4) - This is too much of a surprise for beginners for when it goes back to the same spot as number 2. I would move it somewhere else more fitting that doesn't surprise the new players when they play this map. i think i'll keep it since it does appear for quite a while

[Normal]

SPOILER

00:04:410 (4) - I would change it to this alright

Link if image doesn't show: http://imgur.com/IJnfVzN

00:09:078 (4) - I would move it one tick back. ok

00:29:587 (3) - Would remove this circle and make the NC slider be longer so that it starts where the circle is but still ends at 00:30:435 i think it's fine

Good luck on getting ranked!

Sieg wrote:

Hello

General:
you should remove audio from your video file
you missed tag "five" on Insane diff thanks somehow forgot that

DragonSparta's Insane:
OD+1, 6 is way to low for Insane
00:13:037 (5) - unsnapped
00:13:745 - add note here
00:20:817 (1) - screen jumps, please, that is not fun at all, consider to reduce
00:23:080 (1) - no nc here
00:28:172 (3) - and so on... that SV if really frustrating to play. orz, consider to lower this at least to 1.3
00:28:172 (3) - flow, why not make this think like http://puu.sh/6ytkl.jpg
t/86329&start=0 - great flow guide, read it
00:28:738 (5) - ^
00:49:106 (4,6) - ^
nothing more, but you definitely need to adjust SV and fix flow in some parts

Hard:
00:31:850 (3,2) - space them http://puu.sh/6ytCI.jpg moved a bit
00:38:922 (1) - maybe something like http://puu.sh/6ytUC.jpg nice
360,320,38922,6,0,B|364:276|332:240|288:240|264:252|264:252|224:236,2,170,2|2|2,0:0|1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
cute diff, number of straight sliders a bit high tho

Normal:
00:55:895 (2,3) - put a red dot on such sliders http://puu.sh/6yu5n.jpg alright
well made

Easy:
fine

Good Luck!

1. ~

1. ~

1. None.

Rotte wrote:

[Easy]

1. ~

• Rhythm

1. 00:03:278 (3) - Move to 288|188 . alright

• Sound Effect

1. ~

[Normal]

1. ~

• Rhythm

1. 00:10:916 (2,4) - I don't hear any beat in this music. removed it
2. 00:11:199 (3,5) - Stack is not well. i think i'll keep it
3. 00:14:594 (1,2) - Blanket is not well. fixed
4. 00:16:857 (5,6) - Blanket it alright

• Sound Effect

1. 00:17:988 (7) - d-clap i'll keep the finishes
   00:18:130 - d-clap ^
   00:18:271 - d-clap ^
   00:18:413 - d-clap ^
   
2. 00:45:145 (1) - d-clap ^
   00:45:287 - d-clap ^
   00:45:428 - d-clap ^
   00:45:570 - d-clap ^
   00:45:711 - s-finish

[Hard]

1. None.

• Rhythm

1. 00:32:698 (2) - 376|170 alright
   00:31:850 (3,2) - not beautiful
   00:45:428 (3,4,1) - DS. fixed

• Sound Effect

1. 00:36:376 (4,5,1) - Try to use d-clap to add note 4 and 5 and 1 use s-finish. i'll keep it the way it is

No Problem

[Insane]

1. ~

• Rhythm

1. That's ok.

• Sound Effect

1. ok~

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Good Luck.

AWW YEAH NIGGA. LET'S MOD THIS SHIT!
[Easy]
00:13:462 -Move. okay

Example

00:28:172 -Clap.
00:30:435 -^
00:32:133 -^
00:33:264 -^
00:34:962 -^
00:37:225 -^
00:39:488 -^
sorry bit i didn't add any of these i think they sound fine the way they are

I'm so busy, so I couldn't mod alot, sorry~ >.<''

GL! I <3 your map. c:

1. about your green combo colour... think about to change it in something like:
   
   

   Combo3 : 0,176,0

1. 00:17:423 (4,5) - imo this pattern is to hard for an easy try to use just one slider or a reverse one
2. 00:27:041 (3) - try something like this for this slider:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:31:001 (5) - try something like:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. try to change the shape to this sliders for a better flow like in the other 2 examples,i speak about this sliders: 00:33:830 (4) - ; 00:45:145 (7) -
5. 00:41:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too much circles here add a slider

1. just one thing: look again all your spacing

1. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
   00:18:541 - snap to 00:18:554
   00:27:032 - snap to 00:27:041
   00:45:150 - snap to 00:45:145

1. 00:21:949 (1,1) - no need to nc here
2. 00:59:290 (6) - cmon so borring slider at the end? whyyyy try to use a curved slider imo would be more funny

sksmwkd125 wrote:

Hi !

[Easy]

00:02:147 (2) - Not parallel. fixed

00:17:423 (4,5) - This batch is recommended. alright
↓

Here

[Normal]

00:13:745 (6) - Clap remove. ok

00:15:725 (3) - ^ i'd rather keep it

[Hard]

CS - 1

00:09:926 (1,2,3) - this rhythm. i'd rather keep it
↓

Here

00:13:887 (5) - 00:14:028 - Go here. alright

[Insane]

CS - 1 , OD+1

Overall, the beat.

GL ~

Lally wrote:

hi o3oo here is your m4m

[General]

1. about your green combo colour... think about to change it in something like: ok
   
   

   Combo3 : 0,176,0

[Easy]

1. 00:17:423 (4,5) - imo this pattern is to hard for an easy try to use just one slider or a reverse one i'd rather keep it
2. 00:27:041 (3) - try something like this for this slider: alright
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:31:001 (5) - try something like: alright
   
   SPOILER

   
4. try to change the shape to this sliders for a better flow like in the other 2 examples,i speak about this sliders: 00:33:830 (4) - ; 00:45:145 (7) -
5. 00:41:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too much circles here add a slider i'd rather keep it

[Normal]

1. just one thing: look again all your spacing

[Hard]

1. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
   00:18:541 - snap to 00:18:554
   00:27:032 - snap to 00:27:041
   00:45:150 - snap to 00:45:145
   fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:21:949 (1,1) - no need to nc here
2. 00:59:290 (6) - cmon so borring slider at the end? whyyyy try to use a curved slider imo would be more funny

1. 00:17:457 (4,5) - Why do such complicated rhythm for the easiest diff? I'd prefer if you used a slider here anyways. http://puu.sh/6GNUj.jpg
2. 00:23:114 (1,2,3,4) - Try to form a square here, at its current status it really doesn't form any nice pattern and overall can be seen as random placement. try something like this : http://puu.sh/6GO0b.jpg rather than your current placement.
3. 00:25:377 (1) - It would be better if you could place the slider like this : http://puu.sh/6GO4j.jpg as well as the other notes, I feel it flows much better here than what your using right now.
4. 00:33:864 (4,5) - Erm, can you move both notes down? and make sure this note here : 00:34:996 (5) - is at the same place as 00:32:732 (2) - I want to help you improve your arrangement and placement.
5. 00:40:087 (5) - Can you make this blanket better the next note? something like this : http://puu.sh/6GOdJ.jpg would work really great for here.
6. 00:44:048 (5) - You need to move this down more so notes 00:43:482 (4,5,6) - form a perfect straight line here.
7. 00:50:271 (1) - Just make this a straight slider, there's no need for the curved midpoint here.
8. 00:51:969 (3) - Why don't you make this blanket the previous note? like this : http://puu.sh/6GOlE.jpg would work great these three notes 00:50:271 (1,2,3) - should look like this : http://puu.sh/6GOpj.jpg
9. 00:54:798 (1,2,3,4,5) - Okay this whole pattern can be changed to look better : I prefer you do this http://puu.sh/6GOtF.jpg and http://puu.sh/6GOuj.jpg

1. 00:07:839 (1) - Don't make it curve, it's totally not needed here, the straight slider will still get the flow you wanted here.
2. 00:14:628 (1) - You can make this blanket better, to something like this : http://puu.sh/6GOE8.jpg works wonders.
3. 00:37:824 (2,3,1) - I haven't seen these two sliders be used as often lol but okay, looks fine anyway but they are pretty much old-style mapping sliders XD its fine if you want to keep them
4. 00:48:857 (2,3,4,5) - The rhythm here can be simplified into this rhythm and pattern, you'll probably like it but here : http://puu.sh/6GOQq.jpg should try that instead of this more difficult rhythm.
5. 00:53:383 (2,3,4,5) - ^ try this : http://puu.sh/6GOUQ.jpg

1. Really old style mapping XDD let's see what I find
2. 00:31:318 (2) - This slider would work better if you turned it into 3 circles, it's rather more comfortable to play something difficult after here anyways. like this http://puu.sh/6GQ0y.jpg
3. 00:47:584 - Add a note here owo? it feels like you do triples alot in kiai and I think a triplet here would be good
4. 00:54:373 - ^ Same as above, a note here wouldn't hurt

1. 00:13:921 (8) - Uhhh can you make this note stack with 00:14:062 (9) - ? It feels little unnecessary (meaning to add some spice and so it shouldn't have any movement)
2. 00:28:206 (3,4,5) - These notes don't look perfectly symmetrical maybe try to make them a little bit more like that? you've done really good at keeping everything nice and symmetrical the whole map anyways so why stop here?
3. 00:38:107 (5) - Maybe don't make this slider touch the previous slider? it looks rather messy in your part especially in the placement point of view, that being said can you try to do this? http://puu.sh/6GQxJ.jpg that would be better.

1. You can make the jumps much more big really.
2. 00:03:312 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to aim for a more difficult pattern, which can be something like this : http://puu.sh/6GQLs.jpg Which seems to be more matching with this difficulty (bigger spacing) but also better pattern here.
3. 00:07:839 (1,2) - Move this down more, it feels way too close to the next note >.> Something like this : http://puu.sh/6GQQR.jpg I recommend you do both in order for consistency.
4. 00:09:677 (1) - More bigger spacing again please, it'll make it feel more like the hardest diff : http://puu.sh/6GQW9.jpg
5. 00:13:355 (3,4,5) - Try this : http://puu.sh/6GQZp.jpg as said before countless times.
6. 00:27:075 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing here is really harsh, I can see a better pattern here with still the same jump and coolness but less harsh, probably like this : http://puu.sh/6GR7G.jpg
7. 00:45:179 (1,2,3,4) - Form a simple square pattern for the same reason as above, it's a little harsh for this diff D: like this : http://puu.sh/6GRcz.jpg
8. 00:47:442 (1,2,3,4) - More stuff like this orz, anyways try this? http://puu.sh/6GRhQ.jpg

Tari wrote:

[Extra]

1. You can make the jumps much more big really.
2. 00:03:312 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to aim for a more difficult pattern, which can be something like this : http://puu.sh/6GQLs.jpg Which seems to be more matching with this difficulty (bigger spacing) but also better pattern here. This section is so calm, doesn't need bigger jumps.
3. 00:07:839 (1,2) - Move this down more, it feels way too close to the next note >.> Something like this : http://puu.sh/6GQQR.jpg I recommend you do both in order for consistency. same
4. 00:09:677 (1) - More bigger spacing again please, it'll make it feel more like the hardest diff : http://puu.sh/6GQW9.jpg same
5. 00:13:355 (3,4,5) - Try this : http://puu.sh/6GQZp.jpg as said before countless times. same
6. 00:27:075 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing here is really harsh, I can see a better pattern here with still the same jump and coolness but less harsh, probably like this : http://puu.sh/6GR7G.jpg Even symmetry is ugly and not natural to me, the jumps are fine since it's the craziest part of the song and Extra diff
7. 00:45:179 (1,2,3,4) - Form a simple square pattern for the same reason as above, it's a little harsh for this diff D: like this : http://puu.sh/6GRcz.jpg Perfect square jump doesn't flow with this map
8. 00:47:442 (1,2,3,4) - More stuff like this orz, anyways try this? http://puu.sh/6GRhQ.jpg this jump is fine too I think.

ikari_kyon wrote:

[Silver]

Just the same about AR, BPM just does not fit plays like a 212 bpm map and it's extra diff, ar9 is fine I think.

1. 00:18:588 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Try this, make the first pair of sliders near and increase the distance on the next 2 and on last 2 make a ridicously long jump, with slowdown it would feel cool dont want to move the first sets of sliders for this.
2. 00:45:462 (3,4) - maybe ctrl+g this, so the square will be easier to follow, and the distance that you will get with 00:45:745 (1) - will make the speed up of the song even nicer ok changed this up a bit

Cool jumps bro

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312,40,54515,2,0,P|290:9|258:-9,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,36,54798,6,0,L|156:108,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,172,55080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,284,55222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,332,55363,2,0,P|248:304|320:316,1,150.000005722046,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,360,55788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,248,55929,6,0,P|456:212|482:186,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
450,38,56212,2,0,P|438:73|412:100,1,75.0000028610231,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,84,56495,5,4,0:0:0:0:
212,152,56636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,140,56778,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,96,56919,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,180,57061,6,0,P|32:256|84:300,1,150.000005722046,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,252,57485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,328,57626,2,0,L|344:312,1,75.0000028610231,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
505,228,57909,2,0,L|432:244,1,75.0000028610231
308,268,58192,6,0,P|281:294|269:329,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,140,58475,2,0,P|358:166|393:178,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,116,58758,2,0,P|230:89|242:54,1,75.0000028610231,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,244,59041,2,0,P|153:217|118:205,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59324,5,4,0:0:0:0:

No Dap wrote:

Hi~ mod from modding Q

[Easy]
HP-1 OD-1 i think they're low enough

[Normal]
I highly suggest you reduce distance snap and rearrange them. (0.8 seems fine to me)
A normal diff usually looks like this

SPOILER

00:11:233 (3,5) - Don't hide notes behind arrows, it's hard to play and looks bad

[Hard]
CS-1 i like the way it is
00:08:829 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - Very confusing for hard diff i'll keep for difficulty reasons

SPOILER

00:15:759 (1,2,3) - really hard to tell with your spacing i moved them a bit

SPOILER

00:23:114 (1,2,3) - this is too hard for hard diff same as the first suggestion (especially with cs 5, if you aren't going to change)
00:32:450 (1,2,3,4,5) - this seems a bit lame, use sliders! mmmm... probably eon't consider since when i added sliders it made that whole section play awkwardly
00:35:278 (2,3) - you can definitely blanket blanketed
00:41:219 (1,2,3) - again, very hard jump same as first suggestion
00:48:008 (1,2) - blanket? alright

[DragonSparta's Insane]
Spacing is really high, which leads too bad difficulty spread.
It is really well made, though. You just need to have something easier than 'this' and harder than 'Hard'
00:04:868 (6,1) - really hard jump


Hope my mod helped! yep

baraatje123 wrote:

Hello, good map, and good song
A few things, PLEASE lower the CS on Hard/Insane, CS 5 is way too high, I had to use EZ to even get a chance a clearing it. i'll ask a BAT about this before changing since a few have suggested but for now no change
But, here are the testplays

Easy

Normal

Hard

Please, CS 3-4

Insane

Please, CS 4

Extra

Good map, but those jumps are so freaking hard/impossible

If you want the .osr files, PM me, Mediafire is acting weird

Oh, on a side note, I recently beat your score in This map, NND - U.N. Owen wa Kanojo nanoka? (Nico Mega Mix)
Good map, and Good Lcuk!