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RatedNC17

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-01-03T03:00:31+00:00

Trust wrote:
From my queue~

Here are some suggestions,
feel free to use any.

Red: Unrankable or extremely questionable
Blue: Strongly recommended change
Black: Simple suggestion

[Easy]
00:31:001 (5,6) - Swap the positions of these two like you see below as it makes more sense with the music: ok
SPOILER
00:38:356 (3,4,5) - Replace this with a reversing 1/2 slider. The issue with stacking notes on Easy difficulties is that beginner players generally perceive stacks as needing to be hit in immediate succession, and that is definitely not the case since each note is spaced 1/2 in time. In most cases, stacks are generally avoided in Easy for this reason. Alright
[Normal]
There are spacing inconsistencies that occur occasionally throughout this difficulty. I decided not to point them out because of how frequently they occur so please have a look through to see where they are and correct them to a consistent distance. Distance is the same throughout the diff

00:04:410 (3) - Not sure what this slider is emphasizing in the music. I suggest you replace this with a note on 00:04:268 and a 1/2 slider on the blue tick that follows after that just like you did for 00:08:795 (3,4) since it sounds identical: alright
SPOILER
00:38:922 (4) - NC to stay consistent with your NC patterns. alright
00:41:185 (1) - Why did you decide to use a spinner here when you mapped it out on Easy? Consider removing this spinner and mapping out this section. ok
00:47:974 (4) - NC to shorten this combo, it's quite long alright

Not bad at all, just check for those spacing issues and fix them accordingly and this'll be on its way to becoming a great Normal diff!
[Hard]
I'm on the fence about the use of CS5 on this difficulty but i'm assuming if it's something you haven't changed yet then I suppose you intend to keep it. However CS4 feels much more appropriate for a Hard in my opinion and it would also bridge the gap in the CS spread of your mapset (Normal is CS3 and Hard is CS5?), but I guess it's just a preference.

00:27:041 (1,2,3,4,1) - The quick movement is very unpredictable for a first play-through since it uses greater spacing than what you did for 00:17:847 (3,4,5,6,7) and therefore appears as if the notes at first glance all have 1/1 time inbetween them. I highly recommend you do something like this: changed
SPOILER
00:31:850 (3) - Move this slider to the left a bit so you can avoid the slight touching with 00:32:698 (2). actually moved up 1 grid since 2 was a 1 grid higher than 3
00:40:336 (2,1) - The overlap between these two doesn't look that great and can be easily avoided. You can turn off grid snap and move 00:41:185 (1) so the tail stacks perfectly on 00:40:336 (2) and then properly adjust 00:40:902 (4,5). It should look something like this: alright
SPOILER
00:41:185 (1,2,3) - Holy cow, the spacing between these three sliders is enormous and also very inconsistent. I suggest you tone down the distance a bit or at least make the jumps equal in distance. hmmm... i'll consider this
00:44:580 (4) - This note would look better if it was centered perfectly, just shift it right a few grids. fixed
00:45:145 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same suggestion as 00:27:041 (1,2,3,4,1). changed
00:58:441 (4,5,6) - The spacing on this stack is a bit inconsistent, make sure they are spaced equally. fixed

Not much else I have to say. Pretty nice for your first Hard, keep it up!
[DragonSparta's Insane]
I suppose CS5 is acceptable as this is an Insane difficulty but just note that even casual Insane players might have a difficult time enjoying this. Please consider CS4. It allows for much more comfortable gameplay. (especially with this spacing)

Furthermore, I just don't agree with the difficulty settings for this diff in general because you've created such a huge gap in skill requirement to be able to pass this after clearing Hard. With the exception of OD (which is the same as Hard by the way) you should consider toning some of them down. Try these settings, they played a lot better for me:
AR8 (-1)
HP7 (-1)
OD7 (+1) - only increase this if you change to CS4

00:09:502 (1,2,3,4) - This feels very under-mapped for an insane. You should change these circles to 1/2 sliders to properly emphasize the vocal holds.
00:11:765 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This entire combo feels very awkward to play after what you decided to bring out in the music from the previous combo. It was rather unexpected to start playing along to sounds in the BGM when that "hooo" vocal sound is still so prominent. I strongly recommend you consider mapping this combo to play to the vocal or another option would be to map the previous combo to play along to the BGM.
00:12:331 (2,3,4,5) - From a testplay I can tell you that the jumps here feel very uncomfortable and seem unnecessarily large. Try something like this so the circles fall more in-line with the sliders:
SPOILER
00:15:584 (1) - The use of a note here is overmap since there is no sound to back it up. It also sounds, and plays a lot better without it so I would remove it.
00:20:817 (1) - You need to raise the volume here because this object is currently inaudible and therefore unrankable. I would raise it up to at least 25%.
00:21:383 (2) - ^ as this one is barely audible.
00:28:172 (3) - The overlap with 00:28:738 (5) looks quite strange and unecessary, consider moving this slider down to avoid the overlap.
00:31:425 (8) - The blanket here isn't very clean.
00:39:771 (6,7,8) - How come these sliders are all curved differently? Maybe curve them all the same, it would look nicer.
00:44:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is extremely difficult to read for a player of any skill level even with the very insignificant spacing difference to distinguish the time between each note. I can assure you that any BAT these days would not approve of this.
00:44:297 (2,4) - These two notes are overmapped due to there being no sounds in the BGM to justify the use of them. I strongly suggest you remove them.
00:51:935 (7) - This slider didn't feel that great for me. I think it would be a good idea if you removed the reverse and used a 1/2 slider here to properly emphasize the downbeat and brief vocal hold. This means you should delete 00:52:783 (1) to accommodate for the 1/2. Here is an example of what I mean:
SPOILER

NC the new 1/2 slider if you follow this.
00:52:783 (1,2,3) - There's nothing easily identifiable in the music to justify the use of an anti-jump here. Because there isn't a 1/1 gap in time between the notes, all this serves as is a readability gimmick for the sake of difficulty to which most likely will cause people to combo break. Unstack these notes.
00:54:481 (1) - Remove NC to fit your patterning
00:54:764 (2) - NC as it's nice to get in on the downbeat
00:57:027 (1) - Move this a grid right to get this to be perfectly centered.

This map has the potential to be a great insane and has some very fun elements to it but at the same time it could definitely use some work. In any case, good job and I hope this helps.

Yeah, sorry for not that much on the easier diffs. I started with Insane and got kinda sleepy. (also i prefer to mod insanes) Please let me know in-game or through PM if you have any questions about any of the suggestions!
Best of luck~

Wow! Amazing mod thanks so much

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-01-03T03:07:30+00:00

SPOILER

Mystima wrote:
Hi from my modding queue

Normal: 00:16:857 (1,2,3) - between the second hit of the first slider and the first hit in the other slider --> change the sounds of those marked to (drum finish) and increase volume there to 50 (adds more impact) i added the volume up to 50 but kept hit sounds the same

00:26:899 (5) - in this combo, change the first to (drum finish) and the last note to (nomal finish) + extend it by 1/4 (blue to white), there is a drum fill beat sound that's left out

00:36:659 (1) - change to (normal finish) sounds better imo but not necessary changed

00:45:004 (1) - same changes here as the 00:26:899 (5) - add volume up to 50 but kept sounds the same

00:54:764 (1) - same changes here as the 00:36:659 (1) - (nomal finish) changed

00:58:724 (5) - same changes here as the 00:36:659 (1) - (nomal finish) but the last hit in the slider ok

Easy: (imo) change the (soft finishes) to (normal finishes) as before

Hard: (imo) change the (soft finishes) to (normal finishes) as before

General: catchy and well made

Thanks for hitsound suggestion

Last edited by RatedNC17 2014-01-12T05:51:49+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

- Miomio Chii -

440 posts

Joined October 2012

- Miomio Chii - 2014-01-04T04:00:22+00:00

Hi, here is my mod. From Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[-General-]
Ok.
[Easy]

00:07:805 (2,3,4) - i think the (3,4) can right some grids that to let it like a equilateral triangle.
00:25:343 (5) - i think this slider need kick too and you can NC here.
00:32:133 (6) - NC start here is better because the shape and both nc are set to the big white line except some special part.

[Normal]

00:03:278 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm i know its follow the music but (4) is white line not blue line so you might change this. maybe you can change (3,4) for a slider and bla bla bla... (?)
00:07:805 (1,2,3,4) - same problem as ^
00:12:331 (2,3,4) - this too ^

[Hard]

CS+1? now seldom to use this size for hard. o_O
00:16:433 (3,1) - i think use kick is better because its heavy not like the hit-hat

[DragonSparta's Insane]

well i think not have any problem in this diff, its really hard and not bad.

End of this mod,
Hope it could help you !
Good luck to rank this map !

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-01-04T05:59:59+00:00

Hey, M4M.

[General]

Tags:
Remove: v already in the source | Grand Theft Auto already in the source |
Add: Five shows it right on the game cover
Dragon Sparta should be one word. join them together.

Turn off "Widescreen Support" and "Letterbox on Breaks" for all the diffs as well since they aren't needed. (You don't have a SB, and you have a video)

[Easy]

00:01:015 (1,2,3) - some more distance snap issues. Select all of these and drag it so the (2) stacks on the upcoming (4) | for more variety. Move the (2) afterwards to around x256 y320 to create something like this | http://puu.sh/68GpB.jpg |
00:09:502 (3,4) - Distance Snap.. These would be best at (3) x204 y284, and then stack (4) on (3) then horizontally flip it. (You'll have to adjust the other notes later on as well.. but before doing all that, read my next mod suggestion.
00:10:068 (4) - to 00:16:857 (2) - how about mapping more of this section. You can actually just follow the vocals since you already have it kind of started thanks to 00:09:502 (3) - Like for example.. 00:11:199 (1) - and 00:15:725 (1) - could be a 1/2 reverse slider. You could drag 00:13:462 (3) - back 1/1 to catch them properly etc. When looking at your Normal diff, there is kind of a gap in difficulty for this. So why not map a little extra here?
00:15:725 (1,2,3) - This mostly applies to (2,3)'s positioning, and depends if you decided to use the last mod or not. Why not try something like this for a bit better flow? Having that one spot as a fallback note eventually starts to make your map not look very appealing. | http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1223594
00:23:080 (1,2,3,4,5) - compared to the rest of your map. This looks pretty ugly. how about re-positioning all of these notes? | Right now they also have varying distances from each other (0.74 to 0.78) so you could make them a bit even, An example if you wanted to keep your map in the same style | http://puu.sh/68EAm.jpg |
00:31:001 (5) - Clap/Whistle should be on the end of the slider, not the beginning.
00:31:001 (5,6) - Try moving (5) to x276 y308 and (6) to x328 y216 | This will let (6) stack on the much earlier placed (2) and let's all the notes between this connect visually.
00:32:133 (6,1,2,3) - If you did the previous, try this as well. | http://puu.sh/68F9J.jpg | Basically let adjust these into a square, and place the upcoming (4) where (6) is.| After that, just reposition the upcoming notes as well so they're distance snapped.
00:46:277 (1,2,3) - Try stacking the (2) on the previous note at 00:44:580 (6) - | After that adjust (1) so it's evenly spaced between (7) and (2).. Finally move the (3) and any other notes you feel needed to be adjusted to distance snap. | http://puu.sh/68FuF.jpg
00:49:106 (4,1,2) - Just because of how you have this set up, it seems like you trap the poor (2) without any breathing room. How about giving (4,1) a bit of a curve so the (2) will have more room to move around in? | http://puu.sh/68FJX.jpg

Really isn't much else to say. Some of the positioning is a bit strange. I like the hitsounds using a combo of both the soft whistle and normal hit, as well as the timings of the soft finishes. Also as sheela said. Some of the sliders and circle placements are a bit boring because you make them too straight. I really didn't mod much in this part, but it'd be nice if you could add some life into the notes a bit.

[Normal]

AIBat v3.1 wrote:
Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: Just scroll to the part you need to snap to and click "use current time" in the timing setup panel where you want them placed. This is so you get the right sound on the right note as setting some of these later will cause the note to not use the timing it's supposed to.
00:17:851 - snap to 00:17:847 -
00:22:999 - snap to 00:22:939 -
00:27:032 - snap to 00:27:041 -

Much like CDFA wrote, the beginning can be a bit challenging/confusing especially when the vocals start. Generally at 00:09:502 - is where it starts to become hard to follow due to how overpowering those vocals are. Not asking to change, just dropping my opinion. You seem to have a structure built for this diffiiculty anyways. Maybe try using more sliders so it isn't as difficult.

00:08:512 (2,3,4,5,6) - stuff like this can feel rather bland to look at. Why not try something more like you did at 00:03:278 (1,2,3,4) - with the notes going in a bit of a curve? (5) for example is the big issue. The idea to using reverse sliders is to create a curved motion instead of having it directly straight. It'll require a bit of remapping, but something like this | http://puu.sh/68IE5.jpg | looks visually and plays 100x better.
00:13:887 (5,1,2) - the way this is set up is a bit strange as well. how about using (4,5) to help turn the player around.. Not exactly like this, but something similar to create a much better flow | http://puu.sh/68IP2.jpg
00:24:212 (2,3) - again, this is pretty lifeless. I might be a little picky when it comes to this stuff, but it could easily look better even if you did something like this | http://puu.sh/68J2D.jpg
00:25:343 (3,5) - how about an NC on one of these | (3) to be consisent with everything else coming up, or (5) to be consistent a bit with how you did 00:45:145 (1) -
00:26:475 (4,5,1) - (4,1) could probably be stacked, and you could probably shoot the tail end of (5) off to the right so players get a better sense of direction.
00:34:113 (3,1) - This could be blanketed better. Try moving the middle node to x432 y252 and the tail end to about x388 y200
00:36:376 (3) - x220 y112? | Better flow this way.
00:45:145 (1) - Like the other one, you could probably send the tail end off to the right so it ends sending you to the left. (maybe nudge this over to the right a bit more as well so it's a tiny bit further away from the center.
00:47:691 (3,1) - blanket the (1) around the (3) so it gives more room for 00:48:823 (2,3) - to be placed. | http://puu.sh/68JG8.jpg | General idea, try to blanket it a bit better than I did.
00:55:895 (2,3) - Only really suggesting this because you break distance snapping here. Maybe try something like this? | http://puu.sh/68KdQ.jpg | Keeping your original slider shapes.. They could probably be reworked though.
00:58:158 (4) - change this into a 1/2 slider | http://puu.sh/68Kj4.jpg | catches the vocals much better

Diff isn't that bad. Just seems like the placements of the notes could be a bit better, and maybe finding some way to make the beginning less awkward to play. Other then that, good stuff.

[Hard]

AIBat v3.1 wrote:
Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: Again, resnap these so notes get properly played instead of missed sometimes with the right hitsound/volume adjustments.
00:18:541 - snap to 00:18:554 -
00:27:032 - snap to 00:27:041 -
00:45:150 - snap to 00:45:145 -

00:05:541 (1,2,1,2) - not too much of a big deal, but how about swapping the positions of these? (1,2)
00:06:673 (1,2) - to make it more symmetrical, move these down (with both selected) to x256 y324 (of it you applied the last mod, do this to the other notes. You can easily just duplicate and then do a vertical flip as well. Whatever is easier.
00:07:805 (1,2) - Move these right a bit so you get a good flow with... (next mod)
00:08:795 (3,4) - In addition to above. Try moving these to the left a bit.. the overall image I have in mind is something like this | http://puu.sh/68PsN.jpg
00:13:887 (5) - how about stacking this under (3)'s tail? | Right now you have kind of an awkward gap that is exactly x2 the default distance snap, which actually gives off the illusion you are supposed to hit it later than normal, even if you are trying to follow the music.
00:14:594 (1,2,1,2) - Put these slightly further apart? | Try about the same distance as where 00:13:321 (4) - is. | http://puu.sh/68POP.jpg
00:16:433 (3) - if you did the above. you could probably center this circle for better symmetry
00:26:475 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - If you don't like this idea, then at least make sure to use the next mod. Check the image first to see if you like it or not| Why do you have 2.00x SV for this part? Not really necessary since you don't use any sliders. I would remove it. | anyways, back on topic. How about something like this? | http://puu.sh/68QLu.jpg | Put the first (4) at x256 y84 | Stack (1) on top of it, and then using 0.8 distance snap (at 0.5x SV) hold shift with both distance snap and grid snap on, and drag each stream note to the right of it. This forces the correct gap between each note (give or take 0.01 error which is nothing) | After all that, do the same for (1) (You'll have to swap this to 0.4 distance snap) and try to bend it something like I have if you want | And finally drag the last couple sliders in place at 0.8 DS... Hopefully you didn't get too lost. If you did, then try to replicate the picture if you like it.
00:27:041 (1,2,3,4,1) - If you didn't use the previous. Then do this | At distance snap 0.4 shift+click and drag each note (2,3,4) to the right to keep the lengths consistent. and then do the same for (1) but at 0.8 DS. | http://puu.sh/68RdS.jpg | Ends up balanced.
00:29:728 (6) - Hold shift with Distance Snap (DS) and Grid Snap (GS) on and try to move this note to the left. It'll place itself exactly 0.80 apart from (5,1)
00:36:376 (4,5,1) - Use 0.8 DS for these please.
00:38:922 (1) - how about making a better blanket or slider that compliments your circles? | http://puu.sh/68RG6.jpg | 2nd node: x316 y260 | 3rd node: (Add a red one here) x252 y256 | 4th node: x184 y256
00:41:044 (5) - closest I could get this to even was x480 y288 (Did you know you can click the top right part here: http://puu.sh/68RSU.jpg | and move notes manually this way?)
00:45:145 (1,2,3,4,1) - Again, you can try something like my suggestion earlier or force a DS of 0.4 on each of these notes by holding shift. and using 0.8 on the second (1)
00:50:096 (6) - More nazi stuffs | x19 y287 | Use the coordinate window again to make movement easy.
00:54:764 (1) - What's with this clap? Doesn't really fit with the song.
00:58:441 (4,5,6) - Try to make this 0.80 again instead of 0.85 | Maybe try something like this? http://puu.sh/68Suh.jpg | All I did was hold down shift (with DS/GS on) and moved the notes this way.

Actually a pretty nice hard difficulty. good job on this one

[DragonSparta's Insane]

00:03:420 (2) - First node: x200 y292 | Middle node: x256 y272 | Last node: x312 y292 | Just makes it a slightly better blanket from what you currently have.
00:10:068 (3,4) - Raise the volume a bit for these.. They're too quiet.
00:13:604 (7) - I actually can't hear anything from this note. I'm almost thinking if you moved this 1/2 ahead it would play much better. More of an opinion though.. You'd have to rework some positioning if you do this I guess.
00:18:625 (1) - I'm actually curious as to why you started this 1/8 later than where expected to be. The vocals actually start fading in at 00:18:554 - as well as the extra drum sound is played here too.
00:30:011 (3) - This feels much more comfortable to play at 00:29:890 - having a triplet here instead of in its original place.
00:32:416 (1) - how about placing this at x244 y40 | More of a triangle feeling and it doesn't feel like such a big gap between (9,1)
00:40:902 (10) - nazi. x242 y180 to even the distance here as well.
00:48:823 (2) - Much like how you have the pattern at 00:45:994 (1,2,3) - Why not stack the (2) on the (4) here as well?
00:34:962 (1,2,3) - It would be kinda cool if you could make (3) similar to (1,2) as well. I'm really only saying this because the (3) looks really out of place, almost curved too much.
00:57:027 (1) - So about this cool looking V. First off, it has a part which makes it freeze in place for a milisecond due to how you placed it like this: http://puu.sh/68TaD.jpg | This is generally frowned upon, even though minor, and would be much better if it was just removed. Infact, I recreated the slider to be close to the same as you had it before, and improved on its symmetry etc.| http://puu.sh/68T5s.jpg | This is all you really need to do. If you want, the code is below.
```
344,116,57027,6,0,B|312:116|312:116|256:244|256:244|200:116|200:116|164:116,2,345.000013160706,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```

Anyways, not much to say about this one. Good symmetry. Insane diffs really aren't what I specialize in so I can't really give too many suggestions for them. Hopefully something helps.

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Good luck RatedNC17, and thanks for the mod earlier.. Still have to get through it

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-01-04T07:00:20+00:00

SPOILER

- Miomio Chii - wrote:
Hi, here is my mod. From Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[-General-]
Ok.
[Easy]
00:07:805 (2,3,4) - i think the (3,4) can right some grids that to let it like a equilateral triangle. moved them
00:25:343 (5) - i think this slider need kick too and you can NC here. Alright
00:32:133 (6) - NC start here is better because the shape and both nc are set to the big white line except some special part.
alright

[Normal]
00:03:278 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm i know its follow the music but (4) is white line not blue line so you might change this. maybe you can change (3,4) for a slider and bla bla bla... (?) didn't change
00:07:805 (1,2,3,4) - same problem as ^ ^
00:12:331 (2,3,4) - this too ^
^

[Hard]
CS+1? now seldom to use this size for hard. o_O i'd rather keep it
00:16:433 (3,1) - i think use kick is better because its heavy not like the hit-hat

[DragonSparta's Insane]
well i think not have any problem in this diff, its really hard and not bad.
End of this mod,
Hope it could help you !
Good luck to rank this map !

Thanks

Last edited by RatedNC17 2014-01-12T05:51:24+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-01-04T08:36:07+00:00

SPOILER

Lanturn wrote:
Hey, M4M.

[General]

Tags:
Remove: v already in the source | Grand Theft Auto already in the source |
Add: Five shows it right on the game cover
Dragon Sparta should be one word. join them together.

Turn off "Widescreen Support" and "Letterbox on Breaks" for all the diffs as well since they aren't needed. (You don't have a SB, and you have a video)

[Easy]
00:01:015 (1,2,3) - some more distance snap issues. Select all of these and drag it so the (2) stacks on the upcoming (4) | for more variety. Move the (2) afterwards to around x256 y320 to create something like this | http://puu.sh/68GpB.jpg | nice!
00:09:502 (3,4) - Distance Snap.. These would be best at (3) x204 y284, and then stack (4) on (3) then horizontally flip it. (You'll have to adjust the other notes later on as well.. but before doing all that, read my next mod suggestion. Alright
00:10:068 (4) - to 00:16:857 (2) - how about mapping more of this section. You can actually just follow the vocals since you already have it kind of started thanks to 00:09:502 (3) - Like for example.. 00:11:199 (1) - and 00:15:725 (1) - could be a 1/2 reverse slider. You could drag 00:13:462 (3) - back 1/1 to catch them properly etc. When looking at your Normal diff, there is kind of a gap in difficulty for this. So why not map a little extra here? i'll map more here
00:15:725 (1,2,3) - This mostly applies to (2,3)'s positioning, and depends if you decided to use the last mod or not. Why not try something like this for a bit better flow? Having that one spot as a fallback note eventually starts to make your map not look very appealing. | http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1223594
00:23:080 (1,2,3,4,5) - compared to the rest of your map. This looks pretty ugly. how about re-positioning all of these notes? | Right now they also have varying distances from each other (0.74 to 0.78) so you could make them a bit even, An example if you wanted to keep your map in the same style | http://puu.sh/68EAm.jpg |
00:31:001 (5) - Clap/Whistle should be on the end of the slider, not the beginning. fixed
00:31:001 (5,6) - Try moving (5) to x276 y308 and (6) to x328 y216 | This will let (6) stack on the much earlier placed (2) and let's all the notes between this connect visually. alright
00:32:133 (6,1,2,3) - If you did the previous, try this as well. | http://puu.sh/68F9J.jpg | Basically let adjust these into a square, and place the upcoming (4) where (6) is.| After that, just reposition the upcoming notes as well so they're distance snapped. alright
00:46:277 (1,2,3) - Try stacking the (2) on the previous note at 00:44:580 (6) - | After that adjust (1) so it's evenly spaced between (7) and (2).. Finally move the (3) and any other notes you feel needed to be adjusted to distance snap. | http://puu.sh/68FuF.jpg ok
00:49:106 (4,1,2) - Just because of how you have this set up, it seems like you trap the poor (2) without any breathing room. How about giving (4,1) a bit of a curve so the (2) will have more room to move around in? | http://puu.sh/68FJX.jpg
changed

Really isn't much else to say. Some of the positioning is a bit strange. I like the hitsounds using a combo of both the soft whistle and normal hit, as well as the timings of the soft finishes. Also as sheela said. Some of the sliders and circle placements are a bit boring because you make them too straight. I really didn't mod much in this part, but it'd be nice if you could add some life into the notes a bit.

[Normal]
AIBat v3.1 wrote:
Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: Just scroll to the part you need to snap to and click "use current time" in the timing setup panel where you want them placed. This is so you get the right sound on the right note as setting some of these later will cause the note to not use the timing it's supposed to.
00:17:851 - snap to 00:17:847 -
00:22:999 - snap to 00:22:939 -
00:27:032 - snap to 00:27:041 -
Much like CDFA wrote, the beginning can be a bit challenging/confusing especially when the vocals start. Generally at 00:09:502 - is where it starts to become hard to follow due to how overpowering those vocals are. Not asking to change, just dropping my opinion. You seem to have a structure built for this diffiiculty anyways. Maybe try using more sliders so it isn't as difficult.

00:08:512 (2,3,4,5,6) - stuff like this can feel rather bland to look at. Why not try something more like you did at 00:03:278 (1,2,3,4) - with the notes going in a bit of a curve? (5) for example is the big issue. The idea to using reverse sliders is to create a curved motion instead of having it directly straight. It'll require a bit of remapping, but something like this | http://puu.sh/68IE5.jpg | looks visually and plays 100x better alright.
00:13:887 (5,1,2) - the way this is set up is a bit strange as well. how about using (4,5) to help turn the player around.. Not exactly like this, but something similar to create a much better flow | http://puu.sh/68IP2.jpg alright
00:24:212 (2,3) - again, this is pretty lifeless. I might be a little picky when it comes to this stuff, but it could easily look better even if you did something like this | http://puu.sh/68J2D.jpg changed
00:25:343 (3,5) - how about an NC on one of these | (3) to be consisent with everything else coming up, or (5) to be consistent a bit with how you did 00:45:145 (1) - alright
00:26:475 (4,5,1) - (4,1) could probably be stacked, and you could probably shoot the tail end of (5) off to the right so players get a better sense of direction. alright
00:34:113 (3,1) - This could be blanketed better. Try moving the middle node to x432 y252 and the tail end to about x388 y200 fixed
00:36:376 (3) - x220 y112? | Better flow this way. ok
00:45:145 (1) - Like the other one, you could probably send the tail end off to the right so it ends sending you to the left. (maybe nudge this over to the right a bit more as well so it's a tiny bit further away from the center. nudged
00:47:691 (3,1) - blanket the (1) around the (3) so it gives more room for 00:48:823 (2,3) - to be placed. | http://puu.sh/68JG8.jpg | General idea, try to blanket it a bit better than I did. hmmmm.. alright
00:55:895 (2,3) - Only really suggesting this because you break distance snapping here. Maybe try something like this? | http://puu.sh/68KdQ.jpg | Keeping your original slider shapes.. They could probably be reworked though. alright
00:58:158 (4) - change this into a 1/2 slider | http://puu.sh/68Kj4.jpg | catches the vocals much better
fixed

Diff isn't that bad. Just seems like the placements of the notes could be a bit better, and maybe finding some way to make the beginning less awkward to play. Other then that, good stuff.

[Hard]
AIBat v3.1 wrote:
Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: Again, resnap these so notes get properly played instead of missed sometimes with the right hitsound/volume adjustments.
00:18:541 - snap to 00:18:554 -
00:27:032 - snap to 00:27:041 -
00:45:150 - snap to 00:45:145 -
00:05:541 (1,2,1,2) - not too much of a big deal, but how about swapping the positions of these? (1,2) i'd rather keep it like it is
00:06:673 (1,2) - to make it more symmetrical, move these down (with both selected) to x256 y324 (of it you applied the last mod, do this to the other notes. You can easily just duplicate and then do a vertical flip as well. Whatever is easier. didn't follow last mod
00:07:805 (1,2) - Move these right a bit so you get a good flow with... (next mod) moved one grid to right
00:08:795 (3,4) - In addition to above. Try moving these to the left a bit.. the overall image I have in mind is something like this | http://puu.sh/68PsN.jpg moved
00:13:887 (5) - how about stacking this under (3)'s tail? | Right now you have kind of an awkward gap that is exactly x2 the default distance snap, which actually gives off the illusion you are supposed to hit it later than normal, even if you are trying to follow the music. moved
00:14:594 (1,2,1,2) - Put these slightly further apart? | Try about the same distance as where 00:13:321 (4) - is. | http://puu.sh/68POP.jpg moved a bit further
00:16:433 (3) - if you did the above. you could probably center this circle for better symmetry moved
00:26:475 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - If you don't like this idea, then at least make sure to use the next mod. Check the image first to see if you like it or not| Why do you have 2.00x SV for this part? Not really necessary since you don't use any sliders. I would remove it. | anyways, back on topic. How about something like this? | http://puu.sh/68QLu.jpg | Put the first (4) at x256 y84 | Stack (1) on top of it, and then using 0.8 distance snap (at 0.5x SV) hold shift with both distance snap and grid snap on, and drag each stream note to the right of it. This forces the correct gap between each note (give or take 0.01 error which is nothing) | After all that, do the same for (1) (You'll have to swap this to 0.4 distance snap) and try to bend it something like I have if you want | And finally drag the last couple sliders in place at 0.8 DS... Hopefully you didn't get too lost. If you did, then try to replicate the picture if you like it. Looks nice
00:27:041 (1,2,3,4,1) - If you didn't use the previous. Then do this | At distance snap 0.4 shift+click and drag each note (2,3,4) to the right to keep the lengths consistent. and then do the same for (1) but at 0.8 DS. | http://puu.sh/68RdS.jpg | Ends up balanced.
00:29:728 (6) - Hold shift with Distance Snap (DS) and Grid Snap (GS) on and try to move this note to the left. It'll place itself exactly 0.80 apart from (5,1) alright
00:36:376 (4,5,1) - Use 0.8 DS for these please. ok
00:38:922 (1) - how about making a better blanket or slider that compliments your circles? | http://puu.sh/68RG6.jpg | 2nd node: x316 y260 | 3rd node: (Add a red one here) x252 y256 | 4th node: x184 y256 actually only followed slider suggestion
00:41:044 (5) - closest I could get this to even was x480 y288 (Did you know you can click the top right part here: http://puu.sh/68RSU.jpg | and move notes manually this way?) i'd rather keep it the way it is
00:45:145 (1,2,3,4,1) - Again, you can try something like my suggestion earlier or force a DS of 0.4 on each of these notes by holding shift. and using 0.8 on the second (1) move 1,2,3,4 like before but thats it...
00:50:096 (6) - More nazi stuffs | x19 y287 | Use the coordinate window again to make movement easy. alright
00:54:764 (1) - What's with this clap? Doesn't really fit with the song. removed
00:58:441 (4,5,6) - Try to make this 0.80 again instead of 0.85 | Maybe try something like this? http://puu.sh/68Suh.jpg | All I did was hold down shift (with DS/GS on) and moved the notes this way.
alright

Actually a pretty nice hard difficulty. good job on this one

[DragonSparta's Insane]
00:03:420 (2) - First node: x200 y292 | Middle node: x256 y272 | Last node: x312 y292 | Just makes it a slightly better blanket from what you currently have.
00:10:068 (3,4) - Raise the volume a bit for these.. They're too quiet.
00:13:604 (7) - I actually can't hear anything from this note. I'm almost thinking if you moved this 1/2 ahead it would play much better. More of an opinion though.. You'd have to rework some positioning if you do this I guess.
00:18:625 (1) - I'm actually curious as to why you started this 1/8 later than where expected to be. The vocals actually start fading in at 00:18:554 - as well as the extra drum sound is played here too.
00:30:011 (3) - This feels much more comfortable to play at 00:29:890 - having a triplet here instead of in its original place.
00:32:416 (1) - how about placing this at x244 y40 | More of a triangle feeling and it doesn't feel like such a big gap between (9,1)
00:40:902 (10) - nazi. x242 y180 to even the distance here as well.
00:48:823 (2) - Much like how you have the pattern at 00:45:994 (1,2,3) - Why not stack the (2) on the (4) here as well?
00:34:962 (1,2,3) - It would be kinda cool if you could make (3) similar to (1,2) as well. I'm really only saying this because the (3) looks really out of place, almost curved too much.
00:57:027 (1) - So about this cool looking V. First off, it has a part which makes it freeze in place for a milisecond due to how you placed it like this: http://puu.sh/68TaD.jpg | This is generally frowned upon, even though minor, and would be much better if it was just removed. Infact, I recreated the slider to be close to the same as you had it before, and improved on its symmetry etc.| http://puu.sh/68T5s.jpg | This is all you really need to do. If you want, the code is below.
344,116,57027,6,0,B|312:116|312:116|256:244|256:244|200:116|200:116|164:116,2,345.000013160706,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Anyways, not much to say about this one. Good symmetry. Insane diffs really aren't what I specialize in so I can't really give too many suggestions for them. Hopefully something helps.

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Good luck RatedNC17, and thanks for the mod earlier.. Still have to get through it

awesome mod. great help

Last edited by RatedNC17 2014-01-12T05:52:33+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2014-01-06T14:59:43+00:00

Hey, from my queue!

[Insane]
00:30:294 - Rather add a note here or at 00:30:435 (5) - change the flow of the slider with the previous circles, it just felt like there was no 2/4 beat distance and you made a great jump, and this is why I missed on my initial play, but it is not the case

00:51:227 - Add a note here just like you did at 00:33:971 (6), I suggest at X:256 Y:200
Overall great diff!

[Hard]
00:16:433 (3) - The placement of this circle feels really weird, try to make a triangle with the next note or make it look better somehow

[Normal]
Seems good!

[Easy]
You can add some notes in the beginning, DS is not used there for some reason and the map doesn't seem fit sometimes, try to rework this part, everything else is good IMO

Good luck, great music there

Teara

osu! Alumni

814 posts

Joined June 2009

Teara 2014-01-06T21:46:32+00:00

[Easy]

Ok, I feel the start of the song is lacking a lot and it a feels a bit plain. So I'm going to help you remap it to some extent. Feel free to ignore or adjust to these changes.
First, delete everything from the start to first spinner 00:18:554- (keep the spinner)

00:01:015 - Here you want to make two short sliders, white tick to white tick, and then on 00:03:278 - make a repeatable slider as shown in picture. You want a whistle on the start of the first two sliders and on the repeat slider, the start and end.

00:04:976 - you want to place a Hit-circle here
00:05:541 - Slider here to next white tick (00:06:107 -) Whistle on the start
00:06:673 - Slider here to next white tick (00:07:239 -) Whistle on the start of the slider

Here is a screenshot for reference

00:07:805 - Repeatable slider here (first repeat at 00:08:370- and end on 00:08:936 -) Whistle on the start of the slider and the end.
00:09:502 - Hit-circle here with clap (also new combo)
00:10:068 - Hit-circle here, no hitsounds
00:10:633 - Hit-circle here with a clap

Here is a screenshot for reference

00:11:199 - repeatable slider here (first repeat at 00:11:482 - and last repeat at 00:11:765-) Clap on start and end of slider.
00:12:331 - Hit-circle here with a Clap
00:12:896 - Short slider here end it at 00:13:179 -
00:13:462 - repeatable short slider here (first repeat at 00:13:745- and end on 00:14:028-) Clap on start and end

Here is a screenshot for reference

00:14:594 - Hit-circle here with a clap.
00:15:160 - Hit-circle here, no hitsounds.
00:15:725 - Repeatable short slider here (first repeat at 00:16:008 - and end on 00:16:291) Clap on start and end
00:16:857 - Hit-circle here with a clap

Here is a screenshot for reference

00:17:423 - Short slider here, end it at 00:17:706 - (clap on start)
00:17:988 - Short slider here, end it at 00:18:271 - (finish on start and end)

Here is a screenshot for reference

00:41:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part feels very linear (and has a 2008 feel to it), maybe revisit it and try some sort of circle shape?

[Normal]

00:09:643 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2) - This part just plays weird and sounds wrong. Since vocals is normally more dominate then the instruments. Remap the whole part to fit the vocals please. =)

The rest of the map looks good =)

00:54:764 (1) - remove the clap on the start here. It doesn't fit IMO =)

[Hard]

00:09:360 (5,6,1,2,3) - This part also feels weird, but I guess it can stay. Vocals are still more dominate then the instruments here. But its not badly mapped.

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-01-08T00:32:07+00:00

SPOILER

Avishay wrote:
Hey, from my queue!

[Insane]
00:30:294 - Rather add a note here or at 00:30:435 (5) - change the flow of the slider with the previous circles, it just felt like there was no 2/4 beat distance and you made a great jump, and this is why I missed on my initial play, but it is not the case
00:51:227 - Add a note here just like you did at 00:33:971 (6), I suggest at X:256 Y:200
Overall great diff!

[Hard]
00:16:433 (3) - The placement of this circle feels really weird, try to make a triangle with the next note or make it look better somehow Alright

[Normal]
Seems good! :D

[Easy]
You can add some notes in the beginning, DS is not used there for some reason and the map doesn't seem fit sometimes, try to rework this part, everything else is good IMO Fixed thanks to BAT response

Good luck, great music there

Thanks for the mod Avi

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-01-08T00:43:44+00:00

SPOILER

Teara wrote:
[Easy]

Ok, I feel the start of the song is lacking a lot and it a feels a bit plain. So I'm going to help you remap it to some extent. Feel free to ignore or adjust to these changes.
First, delete everything from the start to first spinner 00:18:554- (keep the spinner)

00:01:015 - Here you want to make two short sliders, white tick to white tick, and then on 00:03:278 - make a repeatable slider as shown in picture. You want a whistle on the start of the first two sliders and on the repeat slider, the start and end.

00:04:976 - you want to place a Hit-circle here
00:05:541 - Slider here to next white tick (00:06:107 -) Whistle on the start
00:06:673 - Slider here to next white tick (00:07:239 -) Whistle on the start of the slider

Here is a screenshot for reference

00:07:805 - Repeatable slider here (first repeat at 00:08:370- and end on 00:08:936 -) Whistle on the start of the slider and the end.
00:09:502 - Hit-circle here with clap (also new combo)
00:10:068 - Hit-circle here, no hitsounds
00:10:633 - Hit-circle here with a clap

Here is a screenshot for reference

00:11:199 - repeatable slider here (first repeat at 00:11:482 - and last repeat at 00:11:765-) Clap on start and end of slider.
00:12:331 - Hit-circle here with a Clap
00:12:896 - Short slider here end it at 00:13:179 -
00:13:462 - repeatable short slider here (first repeat at 00:13:745- and end on 00:14:028-) Clap on start and end

Here is a screenshot for reference

00:14:594 - Hit-circle here with a clap.
00:15:160 - Hit-circle here, no hitsounds.
00:15:725 - Repeatable short slider here (first repeat at 00:16:008 - and end on 00:16:291) Clap on start and end
00:16:857 - Hit-circle here with a clap

Here is a screenshot for reference

00:17:423 - Short slider here, end it at 00:17:706 - (clap on start)
00:17:988 - Short slider here, end it at 00:18:271 - (finish on start and end)

Here is a screenshot for reference

00:41:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part feels very linear (and has a 2008 feel to it), maybe revisit it and try some sort of circle shape? all of this applied and looks really great Thanks!

[Normal]

00:09:643 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2) - This part just plays weird and sounds wrong. Since vocals is normally more dominate then the instruments. Remap the whole part to fit the vocals please. =) Re-mapped

The rest of the map looks good =)

00:54:764 (1) - remove the clap on the start here. It doesn't fit IMO =) Ok

[Hard]

00:09:360 (5,6,1,2,3) - This part also feels weird, but I guess it can stay. Vocals are still more dominate then the instruments here. But its not badly mapped.

Thanks so much for the mapping help. Really helpful

Last edited by RatedNC17 2014-01-12T05:53:23+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

deejaydray

166 posts

Joined October 2013

deejaydray 2014-01-10T11:38:45+00:00

Hello, from my queue :3

EASY:

00:09:502 (1) - no NC here, but you should put NC at 00:10:068 (2)
00:12:896 (1) - ^same, but you should put NC at 00:12:331 (4)
00:14:594 (4) - NC here
00:15:725 (1) - no NC here, but you should put NC at 00:16:857 (2)
00:53:632 (5) - I think this slider is too much in bottom, you should put it somewhere else, more on top

NORMAL:

00:08:795 (3,4,5) - just a suggestion, but I would replace these circles with a single circle at 00:08:936
Nothing else wrong here o.o

HARD:

00:54:339 - add a circle here
Again, everything else is good ^^

DragonSparta's INSANE:

First of all, what's with the KIAI time in this difficulty? o.o For example, at 00:36:659 the duration is very very short, you can barely see "KIAI time" in left-top corner. I don't know if this is just for me, but you should put the same KIAI time as the other difficulties
00:04:834 (6) - I would end this slider at 00:05:117
00:36:376 (7) - you should find a better place to put this circle, not the same place as 00:36:093 (6)

That's all

Nice song! :] Good luck with your map ^^

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-01-10T13:26:08+00:00

deejaydray wrote:
Hello, from my queue :3

EASY:

00:09:502 (1) - no NC here, but you should put NC at 00:10:068 (2) i'll keep it since vocals start here
00:12:896 (1) - ^same, but you should put NC at 00:12:331 (4) ^
00:14:594 (4) - NC here ok
00:15:725 (1) - no NC here, but you should put NC at 00:16:857 (2) I put it at 4 actually
00:53:632 (5) - I think this slider is too much in bottom, you should put it somewhere else, more on top moved it

NORMAL:

00:08:795 (3,4,5) - just a suggestion, but I would replace these circles with a single circle at 00:08:936 i think i'll keep it this way
Nothing else wrong here o.o

HARD:

00:54:339 - add a circle here i'll consider or put somewhere else
Again, everything else is good ^^

DragonSparta's INSANE:

First of all, what's with the KIAI time in this difficulty? o.o For example, at 00:36:659 the duration is very very short, you can barely see "KIAI time" in left-top corner. I don't know if this is just for me, but you should put the same KIAI time as the other difficulties
00:04:834 (6) - I would end this slider at 00:05:117
00:36:376 (7) - you should find a better place to put this circle, not the same place as 00:36:093 (6)

That's all Nice song! :] Good luck with your map ^^

No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2014-01-18T03:39:34+00:00

M4M from my queue

[General]
why not add a silent slider body?

[Easy]
00:23:080 (1,2,3,4,1) - make a star?
totally ok

[Normal]
00:09:078 (4,5) - I don't suggest 1/4 in nromal diff
00:45:711 - notes from here become really harder than the previous ones.that's unbalanced
00:55:895 (2,3) - make them a better shape?

[Hard]
00:38:922 (1) - forgot whislte in repeat
it will be nicer if you put some jump.but it's ok if you do nothing

[Insane]
00:01:015 - finishs from here sound really noisy
00:20:817 (1,2,1,1) - why so many NCs here?
00:47:974 (1) - ctrl+g
00:54:764 (1) - ^

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-01-18T18:07:21+00:00

No_Gu wrote:
M4M from my queue

[General]
why not add a silent slider body? they can't really be heard either way. maybe i'll add it

[Easy]
00:23:080 (1,2,3,4,1) - make a star? i'll consider
totally ok

[Normal]
00:09:078 (4,5) - I don't suggest 1/4 in nromal diff changed to slider for easier hit
00:45:711 - notes from here become really harder than the previous ones.that's unbalanced ill fix this
00:55:895 (2,3) - make them a better shape? i think they're fine

[Hard]
00:38:922 (1) - forgot whislte in repeat thanks. somehow missed that
it will be nicer if you put some jump.but it's ok if you do nothing

[Insane]
00:01:015 - finishs from here sound really noisy
00:20:817 (1,2,1,1) - why so many NCs here?
00:47:974 (1) - ctrl+g
00:54:764 (1) - ^

Thanks. i maybe consider adding that silent slider sound

desudesud

118 posts

Joined December 2013

desudesud 2014-01-19T18:16:17+00:00

I didn't get GTA V ;_; I is sad boy. I've never even finished a GTA game, yet I have every single one but GTA V and GTA Chinatown Stories or wutever (the one on the PSP that wasn't that good)

Anyways, mod time!

[General]

A 4th combo color may be helpful.

[Easy]

SPOILER

Difficulty: I feel it's a bit too easy with the low HP Drain and OD, so I'd probably bump those up by 1 to level 4.

00:17:988 (5) - I would change it to this

Link if image doesn't pop up (am I the only one who still uses imgur, not puush?) http://imgur.com/0hsdqRv

00:43:448 (4) - This is too much of a surprise for beginners for when it goes back to the same spot as number 2. I would move it somewhere else more fitting that doesn't surprise the new players when they play this map.

[Normal]

SPOILER

00:04:410 (4) - I would change it to this

Link if image doesn't show: http://imgur.com/IJnfVzN

00:09:078 (4) - I would move it one tick back.

00:29:587 (3) - Would remove this circle and make the NC slider be longer so that it starts where the circle is but still ends at 00:30:435

Good luck on getting ranked!

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-01-19T19:09:22+00:00

xVirtualNinjax wrote:
I didn't get GTA V ;_; I is sad boy. I've never even finished a GTA game, yet I have every single one but GTA V and GTA Chinatown Stories or wutever (the one on the PSP that wasn't that good) D:>

Anyways, mod time!

[General]

A 4th combo color may be helpful. i based the combo colors from the characters personality color. I don't think it would with only being 3 of them :/

[Easy]

SPOILER
Difficulty: I feel it's a bit too easy with the low HP Drain and OD, so I'd probably bump those up by 1 to level 4. i'll consider

00:17:988 (5) - I would change it to this i think its fine

Link if image doesn't pop up (am I the only one who still uses imgur, not puush?) http://imgur.com/0hsdqRv

00:43:448 (4) - This is too much of a surprise for beginners for when it goes back to the same spot as number 2. I would move it somewhere else more fitting that doesn't surprise the new players when they play this map. i think i'll keep it since it does appear for quite a while

[Normal]

SPOILER
00:04:410 (4) - I would change it to this alright

Link if image doesn't show: http://imgur.com/IJnfVzN

00:09:078 (4) - I would move it one tick back. ok

00:29:587 (3) - Would remove this circle and make the NC slider be longer so that it starts where the circle is but still ends at 00:30:435 i think it's fine

Good luck on getting ranked!

Thanks

Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2014-01-26T06:33:37+00:00

Hello

General:
you should remove audio from your video file
you missed tag "five" on Insane diff

DragonSparta's Insane:
OD+1, 6 is way to low for Insane
00:13:037 (5) - unsnapped
00:13:745 - add note here
00:20:817 (1) - screen jumps, please, that is not fun at all, consider to reduce
00:23:080 (1) - no nc here
00:28:172 (3) - and so on... that SV if really frustrating to play. orz, consider to lower this at least to 1.3
00:28:172 (3) - flow, why not make this think like http://puu.sh/6ytkl.jpg
t/86329&start=0 - great flow guide, read it
00:28:738 (5) - ^
00:49:106 (4,6) - ^
nothing more, but you definitely need to adjust SV and fix flow in some parts

Hard:
00:31:850 (3,2) - space them http://puu.sh/6ytCI.jpg
00:38:922 (1) - maybe something like http://puu.sh/6ytUC.jpg
360,320,38922,6,0,B|364:276|332:240|288:240|264:252|264:252|224:236,2,170,2|2|2,0:0|1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
cute diff, number of straight sliders a bit high tho

Normal:
00:55:895 (2,3) - put a red dot on such sliders http://puu.sh/6yu5n.jpg
well made

Easy:
fine

Good Luck!

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-01-26T06:48:07+00:00

Sieg wrote:
Hello

General:
you should remove audio from your video file
you missed tag "five" on Insane diff thanks somehow forgot that

DragonSparta's Insane:
OD+1, 6 is way to low for Insane
00:13:037 (5) - unsnapped
00:13:745 - add note here
00:20:817 (1) - screen jumps, please, that is not fun at all, consider to reduce
00:23:080 (1) - no nc here
00:28:172 (3) - and so on... that SV if really frustrating to play. orz, consider to lower this at least to 1.3
00:28:172 (3) - flow, why not make this think like http://puu.sh/6ytkl.jpg
t/86329&start=0 - great flow guide, read it
00:28:738 (5) - ^
00:49:106 (4,6) - ^
nothing more, but you definitely need to adjust SV and fix flow in some parts

Hard:
00:31:850 (3,2) - space them http://puu.sh/6ytCI.jpg moved a bit
00:38:922 (1) - maybe something like http://puu.sh/6ytUC.jpg nice
360,320,38922,6,0,B|364:276|332:240|288:240|264:252|264:252|224:236,2,170,2|2|2,0:0|1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
cute diff, number of straight sliders a bit high tho

Normal:
00:55:895 (2,3) - put a red dot on such sliders http://puu.sh/6yu5n.jpg alright
well made

Easy:
fine

Good Luck!

Thanks

Rotte

582 posts

Joined October 2011

Rotte 2014-01-26T10:05:05+00:00

[Easy]

~

Rhythm

00:03:278 (3) - Move to 288|188 .

Sound Effect

~

[Normal]

~

Rhythm

00:10:916 (2,4) - I don't hear any beat in this music.
00:11:199 (3,5) - Stack is not well.
00:14:594 (1,2) - Blanket is not well.
00:16:857 (5,6) - Blanket it

Sound Effect

00:17:988 (7) - d-clap
00:18:130 - d-clap
00:18:271 - d-clap
00:18:413 - d-clap
00:45:145 (1) - d-clap
00:45:287 - d-clap
00:45:428 - d-clap
00:45:570 - d-clap
00:45:711 - s-finish

[Hard]

None.

Rhythm

00:32:698 (2) - 376|170
00:31:850 (3,2) - not beautiful
00:45:428 (3,4,1) - DS.

Sound Effect

00:36:376 (4,5,1) - Try to use d-clap to add note 4 and 5 and 1 use s-finish.

No Problem

[Insane]

~

Rhythm

That's ok.

Sound Effect

ok~

--------------------------------------------------------

Good Luck.

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-01-26T20:02:34+00:00

Rotte wrote:
[Easy]

~
Rhythm
00:03:278 (3) - Move to 288|188 . alright

Sound Effect
~

[Normal]

~
Rhythm
00:10:916 (2,4) - I don't hear any beat in this music. removed it
00:11:199 (3,5) - Stack is not well. i think i'll keep it
00:14:594 (1,2) - Blanket is not well. fixed
00:16:857 (5,6) - Blanket it alright

Sound Effect
00:17:988 (7) - d-clap i'll keep the finishes
00:18:130 - d-clap ^
00:18:271 - d-clap ^
00:18:413 - d-clap ^
00:45:145 (1) - d-clap ^
00:45:287 - d-clap ^
00:45:428 - d-clap ^
00:45:570 - d-clap ^
00:45:711 - s-finish

[Hard]

None.
Rhythm
00:32:698 (2) - 376|170 alright
00:31:850 (3,2) - not beautiful
00:45:428 (3,4,1) - DS. fixed

Sound Effect
00:36:376 (4,5,1) - Try to use d-clap to add note 4 and 5 and 1 use s-finish. i'll keep it the way it is

No Problem
[Insane]

~
Rhythm
That's ok.

Sound Effect
ok~

--------------------------------------------------------

Good Luck.

Thanks

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2014-01-28T15:11:20+00:00

Hello~ Here's my mod. c:
Michael: A few weeks ago i was happily sulking by my swimming pool...

Franklin: 401Ks, tax returns and all that?

Trevor: NOBODY TELLS ME WHAT WANT!

Lester: I suppose the group hugs out of the question

AWW YEAH NIGGA. LET'S MOD THIS SHIT!
[Easy]
00:13:462 -Move.

Example

00:28:172 -Clap.
00:30:435 -^
00:32:133 -^
00:33:264 -^
00:34:962 -^
00:37:225 -^
00:39:488 -^

I'm so busy, so I couldn't mod alot, sorry~ >.<''

GL! I <3 your map. c:

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-01-28T15:43:49+00:00

Every little bit helps. I'll add your mod when I get home
Edit:

AWW YEAH NIGGA. LET'S MOD THIS SHIT!
[Easy]
00:13:462 -Move. okay
Example
00:28:172 -Clap.
00:30:435 -^
00:32:133 -^
00:33:264 -^
00:34:962 -^
00:37:225 -^
00:39:488 -^
sorry bit i didn't add any of these i think they sound fine the way they are

I'm so busy, so I couldn't mod alot, sorry~ >.<''

GL! I <3 your map. c:

TAIN

168 posts

Joined January 2012

TAIN 2014-01-30T06:52:04+00:00

Hi !

[Easy]

00:02:147 (2) - Not parallel.

00:17:423 (4,5) - This batch is recommended.
↓

Here

[Normal]

00:13:745 (6) - Clap remove.

00:15:725 (3) - ^

[Hard]

CS - 1

00:09:926 (1,2,3) - this rhythm.
↓

Here

00:13:887 (5) - 00:14:028 - Go here.

[Insane]

CS - 1 , OD+1

Overall, the beat.

GL ~

Silverboxer

670 posts

Joined December 2012

Silverboxer 2014-01-30T08:53:43+00:00

Extra GD

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 27032
Countdown: 0
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Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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Title:Sleepwalking
TitleUnicode:Sleepwalking
Artist:The Chain Gang of 1974
ArtistUnicode:The Chain Gang of 1974
Creator:RatedNC17
Version:Silverboxer's Extra
Source:Grand Theft Auto V
Tags:gta five 5 rockstar games north grand theft auto alternative Daydream Forever DragonSparta
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[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:8
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176,332,55363,2,0,P|248:304|320:316,1,150.000005722046,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,360,55788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,248,55929,6,0,P|456:212|482:186,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
450,38,56212,2,0,P|438:73|412:100,1,75.0000028610231,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,84,56495,5,4,0:0:0:0:
212,152,56636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,140,56778,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,96,56919,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,180,57061,6,0,P|32:256|84:300,1,150.000005722046,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,252,57485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,328,57626,2,0,L|344:312,1,75.0000028610231,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
505,228,57909,2,0,L|432:244,1,75.0000028610231
308,268,58192,6,0,P|281:294|269:329,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,140,58475,2,0,P|358:166|393:178,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,116,58758,2,0,P|230:89|242:54,1,75.0000028610231,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,244,59041,2,0,P|153:217|118:205,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59324,5,4,0:0:0:0:

I hope you like my guest diff! Sorry if you aren't looking for any, I just started mapping this for fun and managed to finish. One thing about your map is that the offset is wrong... my gd uses the correct offset. Good luck getting this ranked

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2014-01-30T20:00:43+00:00

hi o3oo here is your m4m

[General]

about your green combo colour... think about to change it in something like:
```
Combo3 : 0,176,0
```

[Easy]

00:17:423 (4,5) - imo this pattern is to hard for an easy try to use just one slider or a reverse one
00:27:041 (3) - try something like this for this slider:
SPOILER
00:31:001 (5) - try something like:
SPOILER
try to change the shape to this sliders for a better flow like in the other 2 examples,i speak about this sliders: 00:33:830 (4) - ; 00:45:145 (7) -
00:41:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too much circles here add a slider

[Normal]

just one thing: look again all your spacing

[Hard]

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:18:541 - snap to 00:18:554
00:27:032 - snap to 00:27:041
00:45:150 - snap to 00:45:145

[Insane]

00:21:949 (1,1) - no need to nc here
00:59:290 (6) - cmon so borring slider at the end? whyyyy try to use a curved slider imo would be more funny

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-01-31T00:03:03+00:00

sksmwkd125 wrote:
Hi !

[Easy]

00:02:147 (2) - Not parallel. fixed

00:17:423 (4,5) - This batch is recommended. alright
↓
Here

[Normal]

00:13:745 (6) - Clap remove. ok

00:15:725 (3) - ^ i'd rather keep it

[Hard]

CS - 1

00:09:926 (1,2,3) - this rhythm. i'd rather keep it
↓
Here

00:13:887 (5) - 00:14:028 - Go here. alright

[Insane]

CS - 1 , OD+1

Overall, the beat.

GL ~

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-01-31T00:22:16+00:00

Lally wrote:
hi o3oo here is your m4m

[General]
about your green combo colour... think about to change it in something like: ok
Combo3 : 0,176,0
[Easy]
00:17:423 (4,5) - imo this pattern is to hard for an easy try to use just one slider or a reverse one i'd rather keep it
00:27:041 (3) - try something like this for this slider: alright
SPOILER
00:31:001 (5) - try something like: alright
SPOILER
try to change the shape to this sliders for a better flow like in the other 2 examples,i speak about this sliders: 00:33:830 (4) - ; 00:45:145 (7) -
00:41:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too much circles here add a slider i'd rather keep it
[Normal]
just one thing: look again all your spacing
[Hard]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:18:541 - snap to 00:18:554
00:27:032 - snap to 00:27:041
00:45:150 - snap to 00:45:145
fixed
[Insane]
00:21:949 (1,1) - no need to nc here
00:59:290 (6) - cmon so borring slider at the end? whyyyy try to use a curved slider imo would be more funny

Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2014-02-02T03:39:29+00:00

[Easy]

00:17:457 (4,5) - Why do such complicated rhythm for the easiest diff? I'd prefer if you used a slider here anyways. http://puu.sh/6GNUj.jpg
00:23:114 (1,2,3,4) - Try to form a square here, at its current status it really doesn't form any nice pattern and overall can be seen as random placement. try something like this : http://puu.sh/6GO0b.jpg rather than your current placement.
00:25:377 (1) - It would be better if you could place the slider like this : http://puu.sh/6GO4j.jpg as well as the other notes, I feel it flows much better here than what your using right now.
00:33:864 (4,5) - Erm, can you move both notes down? and make sure this note here : 00:34:996 (5) - is at the same place as 00:32:732 (2) - I want to help you improve your arrangement and placement.
00:40:087 (5) - Can you make this blanket better the next note? something like this : http://puu.sh/6GOdJ.jpg would work really great for here.
00:44:048 (5) - You need to move this down more so notes 00:43:482 (4,5,6) - form a perfect straight line here.
00:50:271 (1) - Just make this a straight slider, there's no need for the curved midpoint here.
00:51:969 (3) - Why don't you make this blanket the previous note? like this : http://puu.sh/6GOlE.jpg would work great these three notes 00:50:271 (1,2,3) - should look like this : http://puu.sh/6GOpj.jpg
00:54:798 (1,2,3,4,5) - Okay this whole pattern can be changed to look better : I prefer you do this http://puu.sh/6GOtF.jpg and http://puu.sh/6GOuj.jpg

[Normal]

00:07:839 (1) - Don't make it curve, it's totally not needed here, the straight slider will still get the flow you wanted here.
00:14:628 (1) - You can make this blanket better, to something like this : http://puu.sh/6GOE8.jpg works wonders.
00:37:824 (2,3,1) - I haven't seen these two sliders be used as often lol but okay, looks fine anyway but they are pretty much old-style mapping sliders XD its fine if you want to keep them
00:48:857 (2,3,4,5) - The rhythm here can be simplified into this rhythm and pattern, you'll probably like it but here : http://puu.sh/6GOQq.jpg should try that instead of this more difficult rhythm.
00:53:383 (2,3,4,5) - ^ try this : http://puu.sh/6GOUQ.jpg

[Hard]

Really old style mapping XDD let's see what I find
00:31:318 (2) - This slider would work better if you turned it into 3 circles, it's rather more comfortable to play something difficult after here anyways. like this http://puu.sh/6GQ0y.jpg
00:47:584 - Add a note here owo? it feels like you do triples alot in kiai and I think a triplet here would be good
00:54:373 - ^ Same as above, a note here wouldn't hurt

[Insane]

00:13:921 (8) - Uhhh can you make this note stack with 00:14:062 (9) - ? It feels little unnecessary (meaning to add some spice and so it shouldn't have any movement)
00:28:206 (3,4,5) - These notes don't look perfectly symmetrical maybe try to make them a little bit more like that? you've done really good at keeping everything nice and symmetrical the whole map anyways so why stop here?
00:38:107 (5) - Maybe don't make this slider touch the previous slider? it looks rather messy in your part especially in the placement point of view, that being said can you try to do this? http://puu.sh/6GQxJ.jpg that would be better.

[Extra]

You can make the jumps much more big really.
00:03:312 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to aim for a more difficult pattern, which can be something like this : http://puu.sh/6GQLs.jpg Which seems to be more matching with this difficulty (bigger spacing) but also better pattern here.
00:07:839 (1,2) - Move this down more, it feels way too close to the next note >.> Something like this : http://puu.sh/6GQQR.jpg I recommend you do both in order for consistency.
00:09:677 (1) - More bigger spacing again please, it'll make it feel more like the hardest diff : http://puu.sh/6GQW9.jpg
00:13:355 (3,4,5) - Try this : http://puu.sh/6GQZp.jpg as said before countless times.
00:27:075 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing here is really harsh, I can see a better pattern here with still the same jump and coolness but less harsh, probably like this : http://puu.sh/6GR7G.jpg
00:45:179 (1,2,3,4) - Form a simple square pattern for the same reason as above, it's a little harsh for this diff D: like this : http://puu.sh/6GRcz.jpg
00:47:442 (1,2,3,4) - More stuff like this orz, anyways try this? http://puu.sh/6GRhQ.jpg

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-02-02T07:21:41+00:00

SPOILER

Tari wrote:
[Easy]

00:17:457 (4,5) - Why do such complicated rhythm for the easiest diff? I'd prefer if you used a slider here anyways. http://puu.sh/6GNUj.jpg i don't feel that this slider goes with the music
00:23:114 (1,2,3,4) - Try to form a square here, at its current status it really doesn't form any nice pattern and overall can be seen as random placement. try something like this : http://puu.sh/6GO0b.jpg rather than your current placement. i moved arrangement
00:25:377 (1) - It would be better if you could place the slider like this : http://puu.sh/6GO4j.jpg as well as the other notes, I feel it flows much better here than what your using right now. alright
00:33:864 (4,5) - Erm, can you move both notes down? and make sure this note here : 00:34:996 (5) - is at the same place as 00:32:732 (2) - I want to help you improve your arrangement and placement. i'd rather keep it the way it is
00:40:087 (5) - Can you make this blanket better the next note? something like this : http://puu.sh/6GOdJ.jpg would work really great for here. fixed
00:44:048 (5) - You need to move this down more so notes 00:43:482 (4,5,6) - form a perfect straight line here. moved these
00:50:271 (1) - Just make this a straight slider, there's no need for the curved midpoint here. i'd rather keep it the way it is
00:51:969 (3) - Why don't you make this blanket the previous note? like this : http://puu.sh/6GOlE.jpg would work great these three notes 00:50:271 (1,2,3) - should look like this : http://puu.sh/6GOpj.jpg ^
00:54:798 (1,2,3,4,5) - Okay this whole pattern can be changed to look better : I prefer you do this http://puu.sh/6GOtF.jpg and http://puu.sh/6GOuj.jpg looks nice
[Normal]

00:07:839 (1) - Don't make it curve, it's totally not needed here, the straight slider will still get the flow you wanted here. alright
00:14:628 (1) - You can make this blanket better, to something like this : http://puu.sh/6GOE8.jpg works wonders. yep
00:37:824 (2,3,1) - I haven't seen these two sliders be used as often lol but okay, looks fine anyway but they are pretty much old-style mapping sliders XD its fine if you want to keep them
00:48:857 (2,3,4,5) - The rhythm here can be simplified into this rhythm and pattern, you'll probably like it but here : http://puu.sh/6GOQq.jpg should try that instead of this more difficult rhythm. sorry but this pattern sort of bothers me
00:53:383 (2,3,4,5) - ^ try this : http://puu.sh/6GOUQ.jpg ^
[Hard]

Really old style mapping XDD let's see what I find
00:31:318 (2) - This slider would work better if you turned it into 3 circles, it's rather more comfortable to play something difficult after here anyways. like this http://puu.sh/6GQ0y.jpg alright
00:47:584 - Add a note here owo? it feels like you do triples alot in kiai and I think a triplet here would be good alright
00:54:373 - ^ Same as above, a note here wouldn't hurt actually added a note at 00:54:656 instead
[Insane]

00:13:921 (8) - Uhhh can you make this note stack with 00:14:062 (9) - ? It feels little unnecessary (meaning to add some spice and so it shouldn't have any movement)
00:28:206 (3,4,5) - These notes don't look perfectly symmetrical maybe try to make them a little bit more like that? you've done really good at keeping everything nice and symmetrical the whole map anyways so why stop here?
00:38:107 (5) - Maybe don't make this slider touch the previous slider? it looks rather messy in your part especially in the placement point of view, that being said can you try to do this? http://puu.sh/6GQxJ.jpg that would be better.
[Extra]

You can make the jumps much more big really.
00:03:312 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to aim for a more difficult pattern, which can be something like this : http://puu.sh/6GQLs.jpg Which seems to be more matching with this difficulty (bigger spacing) but also better pattern here.
00:07:839 (1,2) - Move this down more, it feels way too close to the next note >.> Something like this : http://puu.sh/6GQQR.jpg I recommend you do both in order for consistency.
00:09:677 (1) - More bigger spacing again please, it'll make it feel more like the hardest diff : http://puu.sh/6GQW9.jpg
00:13:355 (3,4,5) - Try this : http://puu.sh/6GQZp.jpg as said before countless times.
00:27:075 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing here is really harsh, I can see a better pattern here with still the same jump and coolness but less harsh, probably like this : http://puu.sh/6GR7G.jpg
00:45:179 (1,2,3,4) - Form a simple square pattern for the same reason as above, it's a little harsh for this diff D: like this : http://puu.sh/6GRcz.jpg
00:47:442 (1,2,3,4) - More stuff like this orz, anyways try this? http://puu.sh/6GRhQ.jpg

Silverboxer

670 posts

Joined December 2012

Silverboxer 2014-02-02T23:56:41+00:00

Tari wrote:
[Extra]

You can make the jumps much more big really.
00:03:312 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to aim for a more difficult pattern, which can be something like this : http://puu.sh/6GQLs.jpg Which seems to be more matching with this difficulty (bigger spacing) but also better pattern here. This section is so calm, doesn't need bigger jumps.
00:07:839 (1,2) - Move this down more, it feels way too close to the next note >.> Something like this : http://puu.sh/6GQQR.jpg I recommend you do both in order for consistency. same
00:09:677 (1) - More bigger spacing again please, it'll make it feel more like the hardest diff : http://puu.sh/6GQW9.jpg same
00:13:355 (3,4,5) - Try this : http://puu.sh/6GQZp.jpg as said before countless times. same
00:27:075 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing here is really harsh, I can see a better pattern here with still the same jump and coolness but less harsh, probably like this : http://puu.sh/6GR7G.jpg Even symmetry is ugly and not natural to me, the jumps are fine since it's the craziest part of the song and Extra diff
00:45:179 (1,2,3,4) - Form a simple square pattern for the same reason as above, it's a little harsh for this diff D: like this : http://puu.sh/6GRcz.jpg Perfect square jump doesn't flow with this map
00:47:442 (1,2,3,4) - More stuff like this orz, anyways try this? http://puu.sh/6GRhQ.jpg this jump is fine too I think.

Thanks for the mod but I'm not changing anything yet. No jumps in calm section is fine, big jumps in the kiai section is fine to me.

The jumps are not even that hard http://puu.sh/6HWgu.jpg

Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2014-02-03T00:25:45+00:00

I'm just trying to balance the difficulty out owo.

but good luck with your map anyway

jossieP

1,875 posts

Joined May 2010

jossieP 2014-02-12T03:47:03+00:00

#Queue

Hello

[Easy]

00:06:707 (2,3) - Maybe make some softer placement? Just me
SPOILER
00:11:233 (4) - I highly recomend to not make any kind of overlaps on an [Easy] diff, though new skin doesn't make the overlap so bad looking, it still beign difficult to read for newbies
00:12:930 (1,2) - Though BPM is low this may be a bit unfitting for newbies, maybe make a long 1/1 bouncing slider will feel softer and still fit to the "vocals"
SPOILER
00:17:457 (4,5) - Same here, short sliders just look weird on easiest diffs for me, maybe add a repeat on (4) and delete (5)? And it seems to be pointed by previous modder, so please considerate this
00:25:377 (5) - Drum Finish on tail?
00:43:482 (4) - Overlaps again
00:58:192 (5) - Please do never do this, a jump on [Easy] is just wrong, the distance must be the same all the time, place it on regular 0.80x

[Normal]

00:02:181 (2) - Same here, use same distance snap, no jumps on easiest diffs please
00:03:312 (1,2,3) - Complex rhythm and hard for newbies, I recomend to delete (2,3) and add a repeat to (1)
00:05:575 (1,2) - since its copy/paste, look first suggest
00:07:839 (1,2,3) - ^~
00:12:930 (5) - Complex placement, it gets hidden by 00:11:233 (3) - while hitting 00:12:648 (4) - it is not a hard rhythm, it just looks weird, maybe place 00:12:648 (4) - outside 00:09:536 (1,3) - so it does not overlap with (2) and you have more playfield to place (5,6)
00:15:476 (2,4) - No overlaps please and btw bad stack
00:18:022 (7) - The finishes here sounds really loud, remove and you will have a softer sound here
00:27:075 (1) - ^
00:45:179 (1) - heh, at least make the last finish sound with normal addition

[Hard]

No big problems here, the extremely squared patterns remember me to old osu maps. I just have a doubt about the slowdowns, specially the one on 00:41:219 (1) - the previous stream make it very unespected

[Dragon]

AR 9 on 106 BPM song? Please make it 8 at least...
Nice kirby style clone

[Silver]

Just the same about AR, BPM just does not fit

00:18:588 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Try this, make the first pair of sliders near and increase the distance on the next 2 and on last 2 make a ridicously long jump, with slowdown it would feel cool
00:45:462 (3,4) - maybe ctrl+g this, so the square will be easier to follow, and the distance that you will get with 00:45:745 (1) - will make the speed up of the song even nicer

Cool jumps bro

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-02-12T04:12:58+00:00

SPOILER

ikari_kyon wrote:
#Queue

Hello

[Easy]
00:06:707 (2,3) - Maybe make some softer placement? Just me hmmmm... okay
00:11:233 (4) - I highly recomend to not make any kind of overlaps on an [Easy] diff, though new skin doesn't make the overlap so bad looking, it still beign difficult to read for newbies i'll consider changing this though i think it's not too hard to read
00:12:930 (1,2) - Though BPM is low this may be a bit unfitting for newbies, maybe make a long 1/1 bouncing slider will feel softer and still fit to the "vocals" alright
00:17:457 (4,5) - Same here, short sliders just look weird on easiest diffs for me, maybe add a repeat on (4) and delete (5)? And it seems to be pointed by previous modder, so please considerate this alright
00:25:377 (5) - Drum Finish on tail? thanks somehow missed that
00:43:482 (4) - Overlaps again
00:58:192 (5) - Please do never do this, a jump on [Easy] is just wrong, the distance must be the same all the time, place it on regular 0.80x i could have sworn i made it 0.80x must have missed that

[Normal]
00:02:181 (2) - Same here, use same distance snap, no jumps on easiest diffs please alright

00:03:312 (1,2,3) - Complex rhythm and hard for newbies, I recomend to delete (2,3) and add a repeat to (1) sorry but this doesn't go with music so no
00:05:575 (1,2) - since its copy/paste, look first suggest alright
00:07:839 (1,2,3) - ^~ ^
00:12:930 (5) - Complex placement, it gets hidden by 00:11:233 (3) - while hitting 00:12:648 (4) - it is not a hard rhythm, it just looks weird, maybe place 00:12:648 (4) - outside 00:09:536 (1,3) - so it does not overlap with (2) and you have more playfield to place (5,6) i'll consider this and maybe add this soon
00:15:476 (2,4) - No overlaps please and btw bad stack
00:18:022 (7) - The finishes here sounds really loud, remove and you will have a softer sound here alright
00:27:075 (1) - ^ ^
00:45:179 (1) - heh, at least make the last finish sound with normal addition alright

[Hard]
No big problems here, the extremely squared patterns remember me to old osu maps. I just have a doubt about the slowdowns, specially the one on 00:41:219 (1) - the previous stream make it very unespected

[Dragon]
AR 9 on 106 BPM song? Please make it 8 at least...
Nice kirby style clone

[Silver]
Just the same about AR, BPM just does not fit
00:18:588 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Try this, make the first pair of sliders near and increase the distance on the next 2 and on last 2 make a ridicously long jump, with slowdown it would feel cool
00:45:462 (3,4) - maybe ctrl+g this, so the square will be easier to follow, and the distance that you will get with 00:45:745 (1) - will make the speed up of the song even nicer
Cool jumps bro

Thanks

Kirin

267 posts

Joined August 2012

Kirin 2014-02-14T12:13:10+00:00

Mod from my queue

[Easy]
00:01:049 (1) CTRL+SHIFT+R and rotate it by 1
00:06:707 (2) ^
00:07:839 (3) CTRL+SHIFT+R and rotate it by 2

Perfect for FlashLight

[Normal]
Nothing to say here

[Hard]
CS:4
00:28:772 (3) CTRL+SHIFT+R and rotate it by 3

[DragonSparta's Insane]
CS:4
00:31:601 (9) Make it straight

[Silverboxer's Extra]
Nothing to say here

Pretty good song :> i will give you 1 kds
Good luck

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-02-14T22:33:25+00:00

SPOILER

MasterKirin wrote:
Mod from my queue

[Easy]
00:01:049 (1) CTRL+SHIFT+R and rotate it by 1 okay
00:06:707 (2) ^ okay
00:07:839 (3) CTRL+SHIFT+R and rotate it by 2 okay

Perfect for FlashLight

[Normal]
Nothing to say here

[Hard]
CS:4
00:28:772 (3) CTRL+SHIFT+R and rotate it by 3 okay

[DragonSparta's Insane]
CS:4
00:31:601 (9) Make it straight

[Silverboxer's Extra]
Nothing to say here

Pretty good song :> i will give you 1 kds wow thanks!
Good luck

Thanks for the mod and star!

Silverboxer

670 posts

Joined December 2012

Silverboxer 2014-02-15T00:21:12+00:00

ikari_kyon wrote:
[Silver]
Just the same about AR, BPM just does not fit plays like a 212 bpm map and it's extra diff, ar9 is fine I think.
00:18:588 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Try this, make the first pair of sliders near and increase the distance on the next 2 and on last 2 make a ridicously long jump, with slowdown it would feel cool dont want to move the first sets of sliders for this.
00:45:462 (3,4) - maybe ctrl+g this, so the square will be easier to follow, and the distance that you will get with 00:45:745 (1) - will make the speed up of the song even nicer ok changed this up a bit
Cool jumps bro

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Sleepwalking  - The Chain Gang of 1974 for Grand Theft Auto V Trailer.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 27032
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 994,18541,22504,27045,27540,31601,41260,45150,45715,59294
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Sleepwalking
TitleUnicode:Sleepwalking
Artist:The Chain Gang of 1974
ArtistUnicode:The Chain Gang of 1974
Creator:RatedNC17
Version:Silverboxer's Extra
Source:Grand Theft Auto V
Tags:gta five 5 rockstar games north grand theft auto alternative Daydream Forever DragonSparta Silverboxer
BeatmapID:363200
BeatmapSetID:124332

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"gta-5-three-guys-and-a-burning-van.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Combo2 : 0,128,192
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RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-02-15T19:43:50+00:00

Updated

DeletedUser_3044645

DeletedUser_3044645 2014-02-16T05:45:45+00:00

Hi~ mod from modding Q

[Easy]
HP-1 OD-1

[Normal]
I highly suggest you reduce distance snap and rearrange them. (0.8 seems fine to me)
A normal diff usually looks like this

SPOILER

00:11:233 (3,5) - Don't hide notes behind arrows, it's hard to play and looks bad

[Hard]
CS-1
00:08:829 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - Very confusing for hard diff

SPOILER

00:15:759 (1,2,3) - really hard to tell with your spacing

SPOILER

00:23:114 (1,2,3) - this is too hard for hard diff (especially with cs 5, if you aren't going to change)
00:32:450 (1,2,3,4,5) - this seems a bit lame, use sliders!
00:35:278 (2,3) - you can definitely blanket
00:41:219 (1,2,3) - again, very hard jump
00:48:008 (1,2) - blanket?

[DragonSparta's Insane]
Spacing is really high, which leads too bad difficulty spread.
It is really well made, though. You just need to have something easier than 'this' and harder than 'Hard'
00:04:868 (6,1) - really hard jump

Hope my mod helped!

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-02-16T07:27:55+00:00

No Dap wrote:
Hi~ mod from modding Q

[Easy]
HP-1 OD-1 i think they're low enough

[Normal]
I highly suggest you reduce distance snap and rearrange them. (0.8 seems fine to me)
A normal diff usually looks like this
SPOILER
00:11:233 (3,5) - Don't hide notes behind arrows, it's hard to play and looks bad

[Hard]
CS-1 i like the way it is
00:08:829 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - Very confusing for hard diff i'll keep for difficulty reasons
SPOILER
00:15:759 (1,2,3) - really hard to tell with your spacing i moved them a bit
SPOILER
00:23:114 (1,2,3) - this is too hard for hard diff same as the first suggestion (especially with cs 5, if you aren't going to change)
00:32:450 (1,2,3,4,5) - this seems a bit lame, use sliders! mmmm... probably eon't consider since when i added sliders it made that whole section play awkwardly
00:35:278 (2,3) - you can definitely blanket blanketed
00:41:219 (1,2,3) - again, very hard jump same as first suggestion
00:48:008 (1,2) - blanket? alright

[DragonSparta's Insane]
Spacing is really high, which leads too bad difficulty spread.
It is really well made, though. You just need to have something easier than 'this' and harder than 'Hard'
00:04:868 (6,1) - really hard jump

Hope my mod helped! yep

Thanks for the mod.

Bara-

11,978 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2014-02-16T11:53:28+00:00

Hello, good map, and good song
A few things, PLEASE lower the CS on Hard/Insane, CS 5 is way too high, I had to use EZ to even get a chance a clearing it.
But, here are the testplays

Please, CS 3-4

Please, CS 4

Good map, but those jumps are so freaking hard/impossible

If you want the .osr files, PM me, Mediafire is acting weird

Oh, on a side note, I recently beat your score in This map, NND - U.N. Owen wa Kanojo nanoka? (Nico Mega Mix)

Good map, and Good Lcuk!

Boncho

91 posts

Joined October 2011

Boncho 2014-02-16T12:55:34+00:00

Hi! M4M from my Queue~
~~srry for late mod ;w;~~
[Easy]

00:16:891 (3,4) - blanket it better
00:24:246 (3,4,5,6,7) - you have to use a constant distance snap on easy
00:40:087 (5,1) - blanket it better

[Normal]

00:02:181 (2,1) - they are overlapping, fix this
00:03:312 (1,2,3) - seems to complicated for normal so do something like this :

00:45:179 (1,1) - place 00:46:311 (1) on 112 y176 up and make it more curvy kinda like this:

00:50:271 (1,2) - I would delete those 2 and add a slider that goes from 00:50:271-00:50:554

[Hard]

00:14:062 (6) - why this note? it doesnt follow the song so I would delete this
00:18:588 - time section is not snapped
00:41:219 - ^
00:45:179 - ^
00:45:745 - ^

[DragonSparta's Insane]

00:04:585 (5) - delete this note and place 00:04:868 (6) on 00:04:585 and shorten the slider till 00:04:868
00:28:206 (3) - It would look better if the head and the trail had the same height
00:28:772 (5) - ^
00:57:061 (1) - this V doesnt looks perfectly shaped

[Silverboxer's Extra]

really good diff!

Hope this helps!

GOOD LUCK!

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-02-16T18:50:54+00:00

SPOILER

Bonch0 wrote:
Hi! M4M from my Queue~
~~srry for late mod ;w;~~
[Easy]

00:16:891 (3,4) - blanket it better alright
00:24:246 (3,4,5,6,7) - you have to use a constant distance snap on easy i do
00:40:087 (5,1) - blanket it better alright

[Normal]

00:02:181 (2,1) - they are overlapping, fix this i don't think it's too much of a problem
00:03:312 (1,2,3) - seems to complicated for normal so do something like this : this doesn't really fit the music

00:45:179 (1,1) - place 00:46:311 (1) on 112 y176 up and make it more curvy kinda like this: alright

00:50:271 (1,2) - I would delete those 2 and add a slider that goes from 00:50:271-00:50:554 i think it's fine the way it is

[Hard]

00:14:062 (6) - why this note? it doesnt follow the song so I would delete this alright
00:18:588 - time section is not snapped
00:41:219 - ^
00:45:179 - ^
00:45:745 - ^
all fixed

[DragonSparta's Insane]

00:04:585 (5) - delete this note and place 00:04:868 (6) on 00:04:585 and shorten the slider till 00:04:868
00:28:206 (3) - It would look better if the head and the trail had the same height
00:28:772 (5) - ^
00:57:061 (1) - this V doesnt looks perfectly shaped

[Silverboxer's Extra]

really good diff!

Hope this helps!

GOOD LUCK!

Thanks so much

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-02-18T15:00:58+00:00

baraatje123 wrote:
Hello, good map, and good song
A few things, PLEASE lower the CS on Hard/Insane, CS 5 is way too high, I had to use EZ to even get a chance a clearing it. i'll ask a BAT about this before changing since a few have suggested but for now no change
But, here are the testplays
Easy
Normal
Hard
Please, CS 3-4
Insane
Please, CS 4
Extra
Good map, but those jumps are so freaking hard/impossible
If you want the .osr files, PM me, Mediafire is acting weird

Oh, on a side note, I recently beat your score in This map, NND - U.N. Owen wa Kanojo nanoka? (Nico Mega Mix)
Good map, and Good Lcuk!

sammy711

207 posts

Joined November 2012

sammy711 2014-02-19T04:51:37+00:00

[Easy]
00:07:839 (3) - Distance to the next one diminish to 0.73, You should not make the distance changing too much...Keeping 0.75~0.85 will be better
[Normal]
This diff is tooo hard for beginners on both rhythm and pattern
00:08:829 (3,4) - overlapping like this are extremely hard to read for beginners
You can try changing this way of overlapping to the overlapping of 00:04:302 (3,4)
00:13:779 (6) - distance dimish to 1.12, trying making it between 1.15~1.25
00:41:785 (2) - ^ this time it is 1.04
and some distance problem should be fixed, also
[Hard]
00:31:601 (4) -Add clap
00:33:864 (6) - this one is not so beautiful
try changing another one
00:48:008 (1,2) - making a perfect blanket(nazi
[Dragon]
00:23:114 (1) - Remove NC I don't think NC is needed here 0 0
00:58:616 (3) - Add clap
00:46:311 (3) - This slider is out of screen

this diff may need some work on spacing
some patterns are hard to read
[Silverbox]
00:54:515 (4) - This slider touch the life bar

That's all, pretty good diff i think

hope it helps

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-02-19T05:20:09+00:00

SPOILER

sammy711 wrote:
[Easy]
00:07:839 (3) - Distance to the next one diminish to 0.73, You should not make the distance changing too much...Keeping 0.75~0.85 will be better alright
[Normal]
This diff is tooo hard for beginners on both rhythm and pattern
00:08:829 (3,4) - overlapping like this are extremely hard to read for beginners
You can try changing this way of overlapping to the overlapping of 00:04:302 (3,4) made them stack if thats what you meant
00:13:779 (6) - distance dimish to 1.12, trying making it between 1.15~1.25
00:41:785 (2) - ^ this time it is 1.04
and some distance problem should be fixed, also distance is the same...
[Hard]
00:31:601 (4) -Add clap i don't use normal hitsound for placement of clap but i know what you meant
00:33:864 (6) - this one is not so beautiful fixing
try changing another one
00:48:008 (1,2) - making a perfect blanket(nazi blanketed
[Dragon]
00:23:114 (1) - Remove NC I don't think NC is needed here 0 0
00:58:616 (3) - Add clap
00:46:311 (3) - This slider is out of screen

this diff may need some work on spacing
some patterns are hard to read
[Silverbox]
00:54:515 (4) - This slider touch the life bar

That's all, pretty good diff i think

hope it helps

Thanks for the help

Snaggletooth

491 posts

Joined November 2012

Snaggletooth 2014-02-26T21:19:25+00:00

First off:

I am very sorry for delay. I've had trouble with an annoying lag problem that seemed to be a bug. I have now resolved this issue and hope that this
mod will still help you.

AI Mod from Hard:

SPOILER

Fix these issues, snap KIAI on all diffs and check your settings.

Extra is perfectly fine ~

General

I am at this point compairing to the difficulty of the Extra, and I know that there wont be a consistency on guest diffs, but insane shouldnt be harder than an extra regardless if it was mapped by two people, or the same person.

Placement

00:23:114 (1) - Remove NC
00:30:469 (5,6) - This blanket isn't really as good-looking as it could be. Simply by tweeking a little bit
it would look much better.
Example
00:32:732 (2,3) - Just for the cosmetic: copy (2) and hit ctrl+h and ctrl+j and replace (3).
00:34:996 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I really love the hitsounds here (:

General

Concider CS 4

Placement

Cant help you here buddy, the blankets dont seem to be very creative as they repeat themselfs over and over again. Maybe its just me..
Rythmwise there is nothing I can throw against this diff.

General

You really got the wrong modder for low-BPM-Songs. I am really not quite sure if you are 'allowed' to place 1/4 beats and sliders
on such a low BPM. I will ignore these issues as I might not even know what I am talking about but I will suggest you this:
Try to remap the beginning from 00:01:049 to 00:09:536. The part after that was mapped quite good, why not do the same
in the beginning?
The Velocity was surprisingly high. I'd love to see it being lowered but I understand that this
would mean for you to remap a lot of it. Feel free to decide however you like.

Placement

00:18:022 (7) - You should avoid multiple reverse on Normal BUT as this is a very short slider
I think there should be no bigger problem here. Just wanted to put this out there.

General

How about OD and HP -1? Would be more reasonable for an Easy IMO

Placement

00:09:536 (1,4) - I am not quite sure about this overlap. It's an Easy so I would suggest you try to place this diffrently.
00:42:351 (2,4) - ^

I hope this mod helped you in any way, again, I am very sorry for the delay!

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-02-26T21:50:18+00:00

Thanks can't apply your mod since i'm on mobile and school bad student well definitely check later

edit: alright

Snaggletooth wrote:

First off:

I am very sorry for delay. I've had trouble with an annoying lag problem that seemed to be a bug. I have now resolved this issue and hope that this
mod will still help you.

AI Mod from Hard:
SPOILER

Fix these issues, snap KIAI on all diffs and check your settings.

Extra is perfectly fine ~

General
I am at this point compairing to the difficulty of the Extra, and I know that there wont be a consistency on guest diffs, but insane shouldnt be harder than an extra regardless if it was mapped by two people, or the same person.
Placement
00:23:114 (1) - Remove NC
00:30:469 (5,6) - This blanket isn't really as good-looking as it could be. Simply by tweeking a little bit
it would look much better.
Example
00:32:732 (2,3) - Just for the cosmetic: copy (2) and hit ctrl+h and ctrl+j and replace (3).
00:34:996 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I really love the hitsounds here (:

General
Concider CS 4 still on edge about changing this because it puts notes close to each other which requires me to re-map. and besides i'l/ probably keep (unless a BAT suggests this) for difficulty reasons
Placement

Cant help you here buddy, the blankets dont seem to be very creative as they repeat themselfs over and over again. Maybe its just me..
Rythmwise there is nothing I can throw against this diff.

General
You really got the wrong modder for low-BPM-Songs.sorry I am really not quite sure if you are 'allowed' to place 1/4 beats and sliders i believe it completely alright
on such a low BPM. I will ignore these issues as I might not even know what I am talking about but I will suggest you this:
Try to remap the beginning from 00:01:049 to 00:09:536. The part after that was mapped quite good, why not do the same
in the beginning?
The Velocity was surprisingly high. I'd love to see it being lowered but I understand that this
would mean for you to remap a lot of it. Feel free to decide however you like. won't change. i've seen maps with higher velocitys being ranked today
Placement
00:18:022 (7) - You should avoid multiple reverse on Normal BUT as this is a very short slider
I think there should be no bigger problem here. Just wanted to put this out there. i think it's fine

General
How about OD and HP -1? Would be more reasonable for an Easy IMO i'll maybe consider this but i'll wait for a BAT
Placement
00:09:536 (1,4) - I am not quite sure about this overlap. It's an Easy so I would suggest you try to place this diffrently. will also consider but i think 4 appears for a while for even new players to notice it
00:42:351 (2,4) - ^ ^

I hope this mod helped you in any way, again, I am very sorry for the delay!

Thanks for the help

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Vhy 2014-02-28T13:35:31+00:00

aoooo ~
from my queue
sorry for the delay orz

[General]
remove "grand theft auto" from tags since it's already on source

[Easy]
HP and OD -1?
00:18:730 (1) - it's better to move this spinner at 00:19:154. since this is easy, a beginner sure not ready for this spinner. at least make a space for beginner to catch this spinner from start
00:32:167 (1,2) - i see you placed most of every notes allign each other. so y not make 00:32:167 (1) allign to previous note and move 00:32:732 (2) to x:172 y:172? it looks neater imo
00:42:916 (3) - move up by 1 grid to make it symmetrical with 00:41:785 (1)
00:50:271 (1) - make this curve opposite flows better?

[Normal]
00:18:022 (7) - isn't it too hard or normal diff? even the bpm is low but.. too much reverse on it :3
00:27:075 (1) - same here
00:45:179 (1) - ^

i like this normal diff <3

[Hard]
omg the circle size. reduce the CS by 1 pls
00:38:673 (6,1) - nice blanket there

old mapping style awww

[DragonSparta's Insane]
same as hard. reduce the CD by 1
00:05:575 (1) - even it is insane, but the DS is just too high
00:04:939 - at least make it volume to 15% please. 5% is just too low and there is no reason to lower the sound till 5% tho
00:14:133 - same here
00:31:601 (9) - make this slider straight to the left by moving up it's tail 1 grid

[Silverboxer's Extra]
cool diff~
just one thing
00:53:666 (1,2) - why not C&P the sliders from 00:52:534 (1,2) and then ctrl+< it?

hope this helps

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2014-03-01T15:32:10+00:00

from the queue

[Easy]

00:11:233 (4)- : add nc here
00:12:930 - : if you do so then remove nc here
00:14:628 - : also swap nc here
00:57:626 (5)- : how about re-arrange like this to make better flow?

[Normal]

00:13:496 (5)- : add clap here

[Hard]

00:49:564 - : add circle here, it'll follow vocal better

[DragonSparta's Insane]

00:18:682 (1)- : move this to 00:18:588
00:59:889 - : remove this green line

[SilverBoxer's Extra]

nice diff

nice mapset. though your diff is good but the flow is a bit weird for me
but good job for catching the rhythm for a newbie mapper

good luck(:

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-03-01T16:28:48+00:00

Vhy wrote:
aoooo ~
from my queue
sorry for the delay orz

[General]
remove "grand theft auto" from tags since it's already on source alright

[Easy]
HP and OD -1?
00:18:730 (1) - it's better to move this spinner at 00:19:154. since this is easy, a beginner sure not ready for this spinner. at least make a space for beginner to catch this spinner from start i'll keep it the way it is since thats where the vocalist holds the note and there is enough time for beginners to spin
00:32:167 (1,2) - i see you placed most of every notes allign each other. so y not make 00:32:167 (1) allign to previous note and move 00:32:732 (2) to x:172 y:172? it looks neater imo [/color]
00:42:916 (3) - move up by 1 grid to make it symmetrical with 00:41:785 (1) moved it nice catch
00:50:271 (1) - make this curve opposite flows better? alright

[Normal]
00:18:022 (7) - isn't it too hard or normal diff? even the bpm is low but.. too much reverse on it :3 i'm sure it's not too hard. i think they can catch the 3 reverse
00:27:075 (1) - same here ^
00:45:179 (1) - ^ ^

i like this normal diff <3

[Hard]
omg the circle size. reduce the CS by 1 pls i guess i'll do it now and just increase spacing to make it look appealing :/
00:38:673 (6,1) - nice blanket there thanks

old mapping style awww

[DragonSparta's Insane]
same as hard. reduce the CD by 1
00:05:575 (1) - even it is insane, but the DS is just too high
00:04:939 - at least make it volume to 15% please. 5% is just too low and there is no reason to lower the sound till 5% tho
00:14:133 - same here
00:31:601 (9) - make this slider straight to the left by moving up it's tail 1 grid

[Silverboxer's Extra]
cool diff~
just one thing
00:53:666 (1,2) - why not C&P the sliders from 00:52:534 (1,2) and then ctrl+< it?

hope this helps

Thanks for the help

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

RatedNC17 2014-03-01T16:35:29+00:00

10nya wrote:
from the queue

[Easy]
00:11:233 (4)- : add nc here actually did the nc's my way to fit with vocals and instrumentals
00:12:930 - : if you do so then remove nc here
00:14:628 - : also swap nc here
00:57:626 (5)- : how about re-arrange like this to make better flow? nice
[Normal]
00:13:496 (5)- : add clap here alright

[Hard]
00:49:564 - : add circle here, it'll follow vocal better alright
[DragonSparta's Insane]
00:18:682 (1)- : move this to 00:18:588
00:59:889 - : remove this green line
[SilverBoxer's Extra]
nice diff
nice mapset. though your diff is good but the flow is a bit weird for me
but good job for catching the rhythm for a newbie mapper

good luck(:

Thanks 10nya

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