Xanandra wrote:

Hello, from m4m, sorry for taking so long

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[General]

The was that the mp3 file ends and the map is pretty bad, if you did the cut by yourself, you should consider reediting it more properly, so it wont end so abruptly. actually thats how the song was cut from the artist since the mp3 is used in a trailer.

Also, youre not supposed to be using the "Short Ver." thing in your title anymore because of this: t/89198 And as far as I know, the title doesnt have this name originally. alright then

When you map, you should consider using lvl 4 grid, or just disable grid snap if youre pro enough. This is because it causes some slight DS bug, Ill tell them to you per each diff just to show you, this is more a suggestion for your future maps. noted


[Hard]

00:18:558 - Add circle here, and start spinner 1/4 later? no
00:27:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is an example of what I was telling you about using grid size lvl4, notice hoe (1) and (2) and different DS compared to other objects, so yeah, fix it. ok
00:28:177 (7) - Flip horizontally this slider, so it will look like this: http://puu.sh/5qUdG ok
00:45:150 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same as 00:27:045 (1,2,3,4,5) ok
00:53:636 (3,4) - Slider should start at 00:53:636 and then you should move the circle to 00:54:485 - Fix hitsounds as well, obviously. ok

[Normal]

00:46:281 - Missing hitsound? THX for spotting that
00:49:110 (3,4) - Same suggestion as in the hard diff in 00:53:636 (3,4) ok
00:53:636 (3,4) - Same as above ok
00:54:768 - Take out clap? ok

[Easy]

The whole first part before the break makes no sense at all to me, I suggest you to totally remap it. If you want suggestion as to where to put the beats, just say so, and when I have time, Ill give it to you.

00:56:465 (3) - Missing hitsound? thx for spotting that
00:58:728 - Missing hitsound?thx for spotting that

K4zuya K wrote:

hi :3
here's my first mod so i'm sorry if i make some mistakes ok No problem

Easy

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00:17:993 (3,4) - why don't you make it into one slider? it's too hard for easy ok
00:40:058 (5,1) - try to blanket it properly alright

Normal

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00:10:496 (6,1) - where's DC? (distant snap) fixed
00:18:558 (1) - move the end of spin to 00:23:085 ok
00:36:663 (1) - move this to x:176 y:40

fixed

Hard

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00:33:834 (6) - please make this into curve, it's not good to have this kind of slider alright
00:47:978 (1) - Ctrl + H and blanket properly no
00:52:505 (1) - ^ ok

ok, that's all from me
good luck with your map,hope this will be ranked soon (love the song and vid )

Rakuen wrote:

Hi~

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M4M from your queue!
My map: CLIFF EGDE feat. Nakamura Maiko - Endless Tears

[General]
Ok.
You need a better background pic since your "Source" isn't come from GTA, tho I dont have any suggested BGs that was meant to be in the tags

[Easy]
Overall: Squared, no flow or lesser, could build more flow and increase note density
Suggest to decrease SV for "Easy" diff and increase the DS to 1.0x or something, if you have time i'll keep it
00:06:677 (1) - Use DS (Distance Snap) and remain 0.8x for the whole song if possible ok
00:16:861 (2,3) - ^
00:23:085 (1) - I prefer the first circle after break is around or near center of the screen no
00:23:085 (1,2,3,4) - Could move this set to a little bit right and make 00:24:216 (3) - on the center, that looks better ok
00:27:045 (4) - Bounces doesn't suit Easy diff, becoz it's designed for newbies and they can't guess how many it hits
00:45:150 (4) - ^
00:49:393 (4) - This note is out of beat or anything in the song, suggest to remove and put a circle 00:49:676 -
00:54:768 (1) - Constant DS is important for Easy and Normal mapping standard for now
00:56:465 (3) - ^ Use 0.8x and remain if possible

[Normal]
Overall: Squared, Ok flow
Use Tiny grid size (by pressing G and change) to arrange the note neatly ok
00:02:151 (1) - Remove NC ok
00:01:020 (1,2,1,2) - I personally suggest these notes change into sliders since Blue Ticks are kinda hard to aim ok
00:05:546 (1,2,1,2) - ^ applies ok
00:14:598 (1,2,1,2) - ^ ok
00:17:851 - You missed a hit and suddenly jumped to drum > 00:17:993 (3) thx for spotting that
00:17:993 (3) - Suggest not to put bounces before spinner i'll keep it
00:27:045 (5) - Maybe change to 1 slider without any reverse i'll keep it
00:29:308 (3) - Do not change your DS suddenly, it makes players hard to read
^ For this kind of style you can use it in Hard / Insane diff for clear notes stacks
00:37:795 (2,3,1) - Suggest to change this pattern if you have anymore idea
00:50:242 (1,2) - Make it slider no
00:53:636 (3,4,5) - Change to 2 sliders no
00:55:899 (2) - Bad flow, try Ctrl+J

[Hard]
00:09:365 (5,6,1,2,3) - This is kinda out of mapping area still fully shows in test play
00:29:874 (1) - Remove slider whistle no
00:34:400 (1) - ^ no
00:27:611 (5) - NC (New combo) ok

That's all, hope it helps.

Thx for the the mod

1. bpm: 106 Offset: 1012 that was what i found
2. a suggestion, you can tilt a bit straight slider like this one
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   to make your map more variation, or a little curve like this
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3. raise volume on kiai time 10%

1. from AiMod, fix that
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2. please use 1/4 beat snap divisior rather than 1/8
3. 00:47:985 (3) - ctrl+h then ctrl+g and then move this coordinate x:136 y:128, looks better don't they
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4. 00:51:945 (3) - ctrl+> then move to x:172 y:72

1. 00:33:834 (2,3) - the distance so close since you have 1.2 DS in this diff
2. 00:47:978 (1) - the shape not looks good, maybe you can copy paste this one 00:49:393 (4) -
3. 00:55:899 (2,3,4) - that one was a jump and prety far for a normal diff, i sugest you not put any jumps in normal diff

1. this diff must have Distance Spacing more than 1.2 (curently 0.8 same as easy diff), because in normal diff your DS is 1.2 so logically in hard diff you should have more than 1.2 or you can lower the DS on normal diff
2. 00:17:851 (3,4,5,6,7) - i think you can spread it out like this one 00:27:045 (1,2,3,4) -
3. 00:31:854 (3,1,2,3,4) - bad overlap imo
4. 00:52:505 (1,2,3) - this flow one looks ok

Jekate wrote:

hello M4M~

[General]

1. bpm: 106 Offset: 1012 that was what i found thx
2. a suggestion, you can tilt a bit straight slider like this one
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   to make your map more variation, or a little curve like this
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3. raise volume on kiai time 10%

ok

[Easy]

1. from AiMod, fix that
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   ok
2. please use 1/4 beat snap divisior rather than 1/8 ok
3. 00:47:985 (3) - ctrl+h then ctrl+g and then move this coordinate x:136 y:128, looks better don't they
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   yep
4. 00:51:945 (3) - ctrl+> then move to x:172 y:72

ok

[Normal]

1. 00:33:834 (2,3) - the distance so close since you have 1.2 DS in this diff ok
2. 00:47:978 (1) - the shape not looks good, maybe you can copy paste this one 00:49:393 (4) - ok
3. 00:55:899 (2,3,4) - that one was a jump and prety far for a normal diff, i sugest you not put any jumps in normal diff

fixed

[Hard]

1. this diff must have Distance Spacing more than 1.2 (curently 0.8 same as easy diff), because in normal diff your DS is 1.2 so logically in hard diff you should have more than 1.2 or you can lower the DS on normal diff
2. 00:17:851 (3,4,5,6,7) - i think you can spread it out like this one 00:27:045 (1,2,3,4) - no
3. 00:31:854 (3,1,2,3,4) - bad overlap imo
4. 00:52:505 (1,2,3) - this flow one looks ok

that's all
be optimistic on your map and keep improving~

my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/134296

thanks

DragonSparta wrote:

M4M4M4M4M4M4M!

Hi~

General
Overall, spacing is probably the problem in the maps~
Just a tweak would do.

Easy
00:07:804 (2,3,4) - I would recommend :

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ok (pokemon ftw)
00:24:807 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing not equal, feels uncomfortable... (yes, im that kind of guy) fixed
00:28:181 (1,2,3) - Spacing changes fixed
Recommend 1.05x spacing distance

Normal
00:03:983 (2) - Jumps. Not recommended for Normal difficulty fixed
00:39:313 (3,4.1) - Spread these notes abit further
00:52:238 (5) - Two grids up (Level 4)

Hard
0 0:28:181 - end of 1st kiai time - Notes become easier. Recommend a bit of jumps for fun
And other spacing problems derp~ will fix those

I would say its not bad for ur first few beatmaps~
Keep on getting feedback from more people.
These are just recommendations~
Not "I WANT CHA TO CHANGE ALL OF IT" type
The addition sounds make great noises!
Derp

agentdark1706 wrote:

my mod probably no very useful

[general]
hard and normal have unsnaped kiai ... here some images to prove it

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will fix

and that was all ....( as i said useless)every little bit helps

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

Hello~
From M4M

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[General]
some rythem is strange..
I think you have to recheck your offset.

[Easy]
00:04:408 (4,1) - Unity DS
00:25:351 (1) - Delete NC ok
00:43:464 (1) - ^ ok
00:46:861 (2,3) - Unity DS

[Normal]
00:03:276 (1,2) - Too Hard for Normal diff player fixed

[Sleepwalking]
00:04:832 (6) - Try to change Note (Follow the music)
00:21:955 (1) - Delete NC

Good Luck

Thank you

AnthonyEcon wrote:

M4M queue

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Normal
00:15:162 (2) - Move 2 ticks right (to white) no
00:16:153 (2) - Move 2 ticks right (to white) no

Sleepwalking
00:11:766 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Doesn't follow the music very well. I think it would be much better like this:
Before:

After:

Obviously, make sure to rearrange the notes.

Nice job on the map!

Thx for the help

BeatofIke wrote:

Timing Request!

The BPM for this song is 106.05 and the Offset is 450.
Hope this helps and Good luck with your map!

1. Some tag conflict.
2. A maximum volume in Insane is 60, while the other is 40. Consider make it equal.

1. 00:25:343 (5,6,7) - Distant Spacing. Of course I know that it's easy if we're an experienced player. But for beginner player, it's a tough one.
2. 00:33:830 (3) - Vertical flip? (http://puu.sh/6129T.jpg)

1. 00:31:001 (2) - Horizontal flip? (http://puu.sh/612gp.jpg)
2. 00:38:922 (1) - Symmetry. (http://puu.sh/612mt.jpg)

1. HP-1: if you keep it at 8. Then most of player will fail if they don't get all 300.
2. 00:27:041 (1,2,3,4,5) - A 'too-sudden' volume up. It jumps from 25 to 60 too quickly.
3. 00:57:027 (1) - Hilarious! LOL

1. This difficulty has plain patterns. Try to make curve patterns.

1. I think you should redo this difficulty. There's a lot of notes that don't have the same distance. Look at it, analyze thing that you can change.

1. You can improve a little bit more.

sheela901 wrote:

Hi. From mii-KK-sheela Newbie Modding/GD Team :3
Thanks for the mod.

[Easy]
00:01:015 (1,2,3) - This pattern is kind of plain. Move them by following the coordinations down:

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00:01:015 (1) - x:56 y:336 ok
00:02:147 (2) - x:264 y:304 ok
00:03:278 (3) - x:456 y:228 ok

00:06:673 (1) - Move it to x:60 y:260 ok
00:09:502 (3) - It's too close to 00:07:805 (2) . Move it to x:268 y:296, and 00:10:068 (4) to x:360 y:248. i'd rather keep it the way it is
00:16:857 (2) - Make a curve slider by placing the first point to x:256 y:244, second to x:380 y:232, and last to x:388 y:216. and move 00:17:988 (3) to x:312 y:156, to make a blanket combo.
00:13:462 (3) - Make a curve slider by putting the first point (little square) to x:256 y:224, second to x:340 y:200, and last to x:376 y:160.
00:23:080 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make a random pattern. Coordinations are down:

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00:23:080 (1) - x:492 y:184
00:23:645 (2) - x:464 y:88
00:24:211 (3) - x:380 y:40
00:24:777 (4) - x:312 y:116
00:25:343 (5) - x:248 y:192
00:25:909 (6) - x:196 y:108
00:26:474 (7) - x:96 y:120 moved

00:29:304 (3) - Move the second point to x:476 y:200, and last to x:500 y:164. i'd rather keep it
00:31:001 (5) - Move it to x:284 y:344. ok
00:31:567 (6) - Make it less curvy. fixed
00:33:830 (3) - Move the last point to x:400 y:60. ok
00:46:843 (2) - Make a curve slider by placing the first point to x:308 y:188, second to x:244 y:192, and last to x:172 y:168. ok
00:51:935 (3) - Move the second point to x:196 y:60, and last to x:168 y:32. fixed

1. This difficulty has plain patterns. Try to make curve patterns.

[Normal]
00:01:015 (1,2,1) - This pattern isn't acceptable for normal difficulty.
00:03:986 (2,3) - Don't use 1/4 notes in a normal difficulty. ok
00:05:541 (1,2,1) - This pattern isn't acceptable for normal difficulty.
00:13:038 (3,4) - Don't use 1/4 notes in a normal difficulty. ok
00:29:304 (3,4,1) - You use a different distance snap for this. Make all the same distance snap. fixed
00:32:133 (1) - Move the last point to x:216 y:188. i'd rather keep it like that
00:50:520 (2) - It have a different distance snap.fixed
00:52:218 (5) - ^ fixed
00:58:158 (4) - Too close to 00:57:027 (3) . moved 3 and 4

1. I think you should redo this difficulty. There's a lot of notes that don't have the same distance. Look at it, analyze thing that you can change.

[Insane]
i think you meant hard since some of notes timing aren't in insane
00:27:041 (1,2,3,4,5) - Coordinations are down:

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00:27:041 (1) - x:320 y:188
00:27:182 (2) - x:320 y:160
00:27:324 (3) - x:336 y:132
00:27:465 (4) - x:364 y:120 i'd rather keep them the way they are

00:32:981 (3) - Move it to x:288 y:240. moved
00:45:145 (1,2,3,4) - Coordinations are down:

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00:45:145 (1) - x:196 y:248
00:45:287 (2) - x:160 y:276
00:45:428 (3) - x:116 y:288
00:45:570 (4) - x:76 y:276 i'd rather keep them they way they are

1. You can improve a little bit more.

Good Luck on ranking this map.

Winek wrote:

From My modding queue!

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Easy
00:25:343 (5) - Maybe New combo? i'd rather keep it
00:32:698 (1,2) - Just to avoid repetition, why not transform it to slider? alright
00:38:356 (3) - Avoid repetition again; Transform it to 3 stacked up circles alright
00:44:014 (5) - Maybe new combo? i'd rather keep it

Normal
00:07:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - For this part; and other too, you shouldn't be using blue tick; it may be confusing;
00:32:133 (1) - Tiz note is a bit far from the previous, no? distant snap is same
00:48:823 (5) - Prehaps New combo? no

Hard
Suggest you to use 1/4 Beat snap Divisor, since you're not using 1/8.
CS shoulda be 4 i think its fine
From the start to 00:18:554 (1), you could like, connect some notes to form one combo such as, 00:01:015 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4)
00:17:847 (3,4,5,6,7) - Spreading those notes, prehaps? alright
00:58:441 (4,5) - Try to stack these notes, and some other ressembling to it, maybe? i'd rather keep it
Also try to make combo up to 6-9.

Insane
First, where the hell is kiai?
After, you're making combo may too small
00:24:212 (2,3,4,5,6) and 00:27:041 (1,2,3,4,5) Swtich them place, please.
00:52:783 (1,2,3) - Maybe spread?

That's about all, don't forget to ask someone else, i can't be sure of what i said.

Thank You