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mintong89

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mintong89 2013-08-17T00:09:02+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年11月26日 at 12:17:38

Artist: keeno
Title: wipe
Tags: in_the_rain mtbbsben [Minakami＿Yuki] Hatsune Miku Append Vocaloid mintong89
BPM: 92
Filesize: 4620kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:

Cry (3.45 stars, 110 notes)
Lonely (1.17 stars, 76 notes)
Wipe (4.77 stars, 215 notes)

Download: keeno - wipe
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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「keeno - wipe」
13th Ranked Beatmaps

Cry by [Minakami Yuki]
Storyboard by Azure

Last edited by mintong89 2013-11-26T06:54:33+00:00, edited 46 times in total.

Azure

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Azure 2013-08-17T03:12:18+00:00

wawawawa keeno

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-08-17T04:02:18+00:00

Azure wrote:
wawawawa keeno

wa

Regou

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Regou 2013-08-17T12:34:30+00:00

wa

Meisle

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Meisle 2013-08-19T09:50:50+00:00

O(∩_∩)O~我来占个坑

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-09-06T10:48:19+00:00

wawawawawa

YoshinoSakura

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YoshinoSakura 2013-09-08T14:45:32+00:00

this is my mod

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-09-08T14:47:04+00:00

tag统一下啦

我的id在别的diff里面也要加上lol

edit：射猩猩

Last edited by Koiyuki 2013-09-08T15:06:56+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-09-08T14:55:51+00:00

加了 \o/ pending

YoshinoSakura

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YoshinoSakura 2013-09-08T15:15:26+00:00

来了

General

beautiful skin好评
why no source(don't 嘲笑我不知道==）

lonely
AR-1 要不怪怪的
00:10:104 (3,4,5) - 我柑橘这几个不在一条直线上
01:10:756 (3) - nc，kiai里都是这样的
01:15:973 (3) - nc
其实我觉非kiai用那两种暗点的颜色，kiai用亮点的那两个比较炫酷当我什么都没说
现在还有没有easy的combo不能过5这个规定啊

Cry

老实说我没看懂

~~00:05:212 (4) - why so far~~
00:05:538 (1) - 没叠好
00:57:060 (4,1) -

sad

00:58:691 (2,3,4,5,6) - 连续circle对于normal有点难
01:25:430 (3) - 。。。

Wipe
~~wpcap sv1.8~~这一定是insane
00:23:147 (4) - 没包好，ctrl+g？
01:06:191 (2) - 这个不在重音上，建议往前拖一拍
01:12:712 (5,6) - 换成spinner
01:19:560 (3) - 弄成弯的宝住

fvk puush坏掉了

为什么复制kiai

555又找不出问题
so recieve my star

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-09-08T15:35:32+00:00

615915887 wrote:
Cry

老实说我没看懂
~~00:05:212 (4) - why so far~~
00:05:538 (1) - 没叠好米桶ki☆ra~帮我移到(226,249)吧~
00:57:060 (4,1) -
sad
puush啥看不到，这貌似不是unrank的吧，你要说啥QQ发给我算了
00:58:691 (2,3,4,5,6) - 连续circle对于normal有点难 92的二分拍问题不大吧
01:25:430 (3) - 。。。画的很嘈么;w;

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-09-09T06:54:07+00:00

615915887 wrote:
来了

General
beautiful skin好评
why no source(don't 嘲笑我不知道==）不用, artist已经清楚得告诉了

lonely
AR-1 要不怪怪的嗯
00:10:104 (3,4,5) - 我柑橘这几个不在一条直线上你的感觉罢了
01:10:756 (3) - nc，kiai里都是这样的两拍nc一次后面的我都换了
01:15:973 (3) - nc
其实我觉非kiai用那两种暗点的颜色，kiai用亮点的那两个比较炫酷当我什么都没说
现在还有没有easy的combo不能过5这个规定啊一直都没啊这啥规定

Wipe
~~wpcap sv1.8~~这一定是insane 我找几个人试过了我也自己试过了 ~~炒鸡简单简直不如hard~~
00:23:147 (4) - 没包好，ctrl+g？不, 但我移左一格了
01:06:191 (2) - 这个不在重音上，建议往前拖一拍我不跟重音
01:12:712 (5,6) - 换成spinner 那么你叫我换spinner 你和我开玩笑？不喜欢spinner
01:19:560 (3) - 弄成弯的宝住
fvk puush坏掉了
为什么复制kiai

555又找不出问题
so recieve my star

谢mod啦 :3

Kinomi

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Kinomi 2013-09-14T02:44:17+00:00

先射射米桶

Hanabi

Hanabi 2013-09-14T05:52:32+00:00

Hi~ m4m

[Lonely]
slider tick rate 2
00:39:451 (1) - remove NC
00:40:104 (2) - NC

[Cry]
00:05:538 (1) - distance check this would be better shape

00:07:495 (3,2) - overlap perfectly
00:26:408 (1) - remove NC
00:27:060 (2) - NC
00:30:647 (4) - place here

00:42:712 (3) - bind to cover 00:42:386 (2)
00:47:930 (2,3) - spacing
00:49:560 (5,1,2) - how about this pattern

00:57:060 (4,1) - seperate them

01:07:821 (5,1) - distance
01:25:430 (3) - make a circle and start slider 1/2 later

[wipe]
00:33:419 (6) - reverse arrow doesn't seem well..seperater with circle 5
00:46:625 (5,6,7,8,1) - make perfect round
00:54:125 (6) - NC
01:00:158 (5,6,1) - make it straight
01:05:538 (1,2,3,4) - this will fit well

01:17:767 (6,7,8) - make a slider reverse

Done.

Good luck~><

Last edited by Hanabi 2013-09-15T01:35:37+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-09-14T06:16:00+00:00

fix some thanks
orz mtbbsben 好人

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-09-14T06:17:14+00:00

mintong89 wrote:
fix some thanks
orz mtbbsben 好人

orz 别发卡

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-09-15T03:07:08+00:00

[ Sana ] wrote:
[Cry]
00:05:538 (1) - distance check this would be better shape
sry no change
00:07:495 (3,2) - overlap perfectly fixed
00:26:408 (1) - remove NC nope. It's on the white line, I perfer to NC on the white line
00:27:060 (2) - NC ^
00:30:647 (4) - place here
ok~
00:42:712 (3) - bind to cover 00:42:386 (2) sry no change
00:47:930 (2,3) - spacing fixed
00:49:560 (5,1,2) - how about this pattern
ok~
00:57:060 (4,1) - seperate them
fixed
01:07:821 (5,1) - distance fixed
01:25:430 (3) - make a circle and start slider 1/2 later
sry no change

thx~

change

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sjoy

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sjoy 2013-09-15T13:34:32+00:00

From M4M

[Lonely]
00:38:799 (5) - clap
01:08:147 (1) - - 感觉可以加默认的FIN
01:18:582 (1) - ^

[Cry]
00:03:908 (2,2) - 头感觉可以加WHIS
00:09:125 (2) -whis
00:30:647 (4) - 好像挡住了放在00:29:669 (3) - 下面如何？
01:00:321 (1) - 尾巴应该是WHIS吧？
01:08:147 (1) fin
01:18:582 (1) ^
[wipe]
00:03:908 (4) - whis
00:06:517 (4) - ^
00:09:125 (4) -
00:11:734 (4) -
00:38:799 (6,7) - 可以跟音乐加CLAP
00:38:636 (4,5,6) - 我没听出8分拍
00:43:854 (2,3,4) - 怀疑我听力有问题

00:54:125 (6) - NC
01:12:712 (5) - 放在01:12:223 (4) - 尾巴如何
01:15:321 (5) - http://puu.sh/4rUxp.jpg你看如何

GOOD LUCK!

hoshisorakiseki

300 posts

Joined January 2012

hoshisorakiseki 2013-09-15T15:26:09+00:00

渣mod一个，找不出什么来
全局
这闪光点太渣，毫无过渡感，差评。做一个扩散渐变的圆圈吧。
难度：Lonely
没有发现
难度：Cry
开了倒数居然没听见倒数，取消这个吧
00:10:756 (1) - 据aimod说这里漏了一个NC
01:25:430 (3) - 想画一个心形？将下面的代码替换掉最后一行（又好像是两行）就行了：

256,304,84778,2,0,B|0:168|176:8|256:116|256:116|344:4|508:168|256:304|
256:304,1,770

自己调一下位置吧

效果

难度：Wipe
有些时候，将bpm x2（184）比用1/8好

最后，祝早日rank

mintong89

3,698 posts

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Topic Starter

mintong89 2013-09-15T15:29:01+00:00

hoshisorakiseki wrote:
渣mod一个，找不出什么来
全局
这闪光点太渣，毫无过渡感，差评。做一个扩散渐变的圆圈吧。SB渣渣

难度：Lonely
没有发现

难度：Wipe
有些时候，将bpm x2（184）比用1/8好这种被称为 doubled-bpm .是Unrankable的做法

最后，祝早日rank

谢mod啦~

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-09-15T17:06:07+00:00

sjoy wrote:
[Cry]
00:03:908 (2,2) - 头感觉可以加WHIS added
00:09:125 (2) -whis added
00:30:647 (4) - 好像挡住了放在00:29:669 (3) - 下面如何？前面人mod的时候就改了
01:00:321 (1) - 尾巴应该是WHIS吧？ fixed
01:08:147 (1) fin fixed
01:18:582 (1) ^ fixed

hoshisorakiseki wrote:
难度：Cry
开了倒数居然没听见倒数，取消这个吧好
00:10:756 (1) - 据aimod说这里漏了一个NC fixed
01:25:430 (3) - 想画一个心形？将下面的代码替换掉最后一行（又好像是两行）就行了：
256,304,84778,2,0,B|0:168|176:8|256:116|256:116|344:4|508:168|256:304|
256:304,1,770
自己调一下位置吧
效果

sorry我根本就是想画一个缺口了的心形

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DeletedUser_2010275

DeletedUser_2010275 2013-09-17T11:36:53+00:00

Hi ~ :3

[Lonely]

00:46:625 (3) - move to (176,248)
00:47:278 (4) - move to (128,312) for triangle
01:01:625 (2) - a little bent
01:05:538 (1) - straight slider

[Cry]
- I think DS is too close.
  00:21:843 (1,2,3) - blanket
  00:33:582 - add circle
  00:44:669 (1) - straight slider
  00:47:278 (1,2) - i think this rhythm is hard for beginner
  01:05:538 (1,2,3) - ^
  01:25:430 (3) - nice slider ~ i like it >w<
  
  [Wipe]
  - 01:04:071 (3,4,5,6) - please have a far distance.I thought this is a stream
    01:17:604 (6,7,8) - placed farther. it is confusing ;w;
    01:19:071 (2,3) - blanket
    01:28:691 (8,9) - placed farther.

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

mintong89 2013-09-17T11:48:55+00:00

sjoy wrote:
From M4M

[Lonely]
00:38:799 (5) - clap
01:08:147 (1) - - 感觉可以加默认的FIN
01:18:582 (1) - ^

[wipe]
00:03:908 (4) - whis
00:06:517 (4) - ^
00:09:125 (4) -
00:11:734 (4) - no, 怪怪的
00:38:799 (6,7) - 可以跟音乐加CLAP
00:38:636 (4,5,6) - 我没听出8分拍
00:43:854 (2,3,4) - 怀疑我听力有问题怀疑你听力有问题
00:54:125 (6) - NC 我是四拍一个NC
01:12:712 (5) - 放在01:12:223 (4) - 尾巴如何 88888破坏音效
01:15:321 (5) - http://puu.sh/4rUxp.jpg你看如何唔考虑看看

GOOD LUCK!

@-Srui- fix some, i can't quote your thread.

Thx All~

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-09-17T13:12:11+00:00

@-Srui-
I can't quote that……

00:21:843 (1,2,3) - blanket ~
00:33:582 - add circle sry no change
00:44:669 (1) - straight slider fixed
00:47:278 (1,2) - i think this rhythm is hard for beginner keep it
01:05:538 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
01:25:430 (3) - nice slider ~ i like it >w< >w<

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Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2013-09-18T12:02:19+00:00

~~米桶我爱你~~

Mod From my queue

怀疑会被全部ignore

SPOILER

[General]
~~其实我觉得BPM用184也可以;w; 毕竟这歌也蛮激昂~~果然92比较好
然后做个鬼畜的insane

[Wipe]
00:16:625 (2) - 感觉上面部分的滑条的弯度可以搞大一点
00:38:636 (4,5,6) - 这个三连直接叠在一起吧..前面跟这个长的差不多不知道会不会误判;w;
01:07:658 补个note？
01:21:191 (1) - 上移一点？感觉这样比较舒服

感觉全都在跟鼓啊;w;
可以适当跟点vocal
kiai的SV可以搞大一点我觉得..然后kiai的间距拉开一点
单点可以放点普通的↗↘↗↘之类的梗..(不知道你看懂没;w;
这样搞得有点像hard- ..

[Cry]
00:44:343 (5) -

SPOILER

DS有点小啊..都挨到一起了建议搞大
00:05:212 (4) - 这个虽然爱摩登没提示不过好像也有点too far
00:07:821 (4) - 咦故意的吗
00:31:625 (1) - 其实我觉得这两个都比原来的好看诶:O 画的不怎么好见谅||

SPOILER

00:54:125 (2) - 这里顺着滑条的轨迹走比较好点吧;w;
01:03:908 (3) - 建议移到x54y29
01:25:430 (3) - 考虑一下？

SPOILER

212,281,86571,2,0,B|345:263|400:103|325:12|223:97|223:97|143:18|72:91|61:171|102:263|226:286,1,770,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Lonely]
00:53:799 (4) - blanket
01:25:756 (2,3,4,5) - 考虑一下？

SPOILER

136,284,85756,1,8,0:0:0:0:
207,320,86408,2,0,P|213:270|195:232,1,80
277,213,87712,2,0,P|245:173|206:159,1,80
141,180,89017,1,4,0:0:0:0:

米桶我爱你
首尾呼应快夸我

GL~

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-09-18T12:14:58+00:00

Awaken wrote:
~~米桶我爱你~~我不爱你

[Cry]
00:44:343 (5) -
SPOILER
aimod是xxxxxxxxxx
DS有点小啊..都挨到一起了建议搞大 normal难度不改了
00:05:212 (4) - 这个虽然爱摩登没提示不过好像也有点too far too close
00:07:821 (4) - 咦故意的吗改成了stack
00:31:625 (1) - 其实我觉得这两个都比原来的好看诶:O 画的不怎么好见谅|| 改了个和下面差不多的
SPOILER
00:54:125 (2) - 这里顺着滑条的轨迹走比较好点吧;w; 拆成两个滑条了
01:03:908 (3) - 建议移到x54y29 keep the same
01:25:430 (3) - 考虑一下？nope 上面说过了
SPOILER
212,281,86571,2,0,B|345:263|400:103|325:12|223:97|223:97|143:18|72:91|61:171|102:263|226:286,1,770,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

change

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Autumn

501 posts

Joined October 2011

Autumn 2013-09-20T09:11:42+00:00

Hi~From M4M
Sorry for late! 中秋节回家没空来看

[Wipe]
00:27:060 (2) - 稍微调整一下形状，包好1

SPOILER

00:44:506 (5) - 这个蓝线可以放远一点，比如ctrl+G一下？
00:54:125 (6) - NC？
01:05:538 (1) - 唔..觉得滑条尾缩一下让finish落在下一个滑条头上比较好：

SPOILER

01:26:245 - 这边最好Add一下..要不然01:26:408 (1) 会被当成四分拍，因为和前面间距上的变化并不明显

[Cry]
00:14:343 (2) - 根据vocal似乎应该从00:14:669 - 开始
00:55:756 (2) - Stack：X=256 Y=332

[Lonely]
Nice

GL~

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-09-20T16:11:40+00:00

Autumn wrote:
[Cry]
00:14:343 (2) - 根据vocal似乎应该从00:14:669 - 开始嗯……想了想不改了
00:55:756 (2) - Stack：X=256 Y=332 米桶~x:256 y:331 帮我stack一下~

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-09-21T16:35:07+00:00

o3o queue req

[Lonely]

OD and HP - 1
01:08:147 (1) - i don't really understand why you ended the slider here : 01:09:125 - because the lyrics finish 01:09:451- here , i suggest you to do a long slider until 01:09:451 - o3o
01:10:756 (3) - same thing with this one finish t 1/2 later
01:18:582 (1) - same here finish it 1/2 later or add something here 01:19:886 -
01:21:191 (3) - same
01:29:017 - i would add a spinner here for having more difference in score

[Cry]

OD and HP -1
00:33:419 - what about to use a rhythm like this here:
00:39:451 (1,2,1,2) - why do you change your spacing randomly? i see no rhythm change and no other reason to do it
00:43:364 (4,5,1,2) - same here ^
00:52:495 (1,2) - this 2 are to close
00:54:778 (4,2) - stack better
01:29:180 - it would be nice after the heart at the end to have a spinner

[Wipe]

00:54:125 (6) - new combo due new lyrics
01:07:169 (4) - new combo
add a spinner at the end like i said in the others diff o3o

nice mapset o3o good luck <3

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

mintong89 2013-09-22T02:46:39+00:00

fix some thanks!!!

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-09-22T14:49:15+00:00

Lally wrote:
[Cry]
OD and HP -1 √
00:33:419 - what about to use a rhythm like this here:
considered about it and nope
00:39:451 (1,2,1,2) - why do you change your spacing randomly? i see no rhythm change and no other reason to do it just want to blanket
00:43:364 (4,5,1,2) - same here ^ ^
00:52:495 (1,2) - this 2 are to close it follows distance spacing
00:54:778 (4,2) - stack better √
01:29:180 - it would be nice after the heart at the end to have a spinner end at the same time

thanks
米桶桑~od hp-1吧

RandF

1,249 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2013-09-24T14:17:16+00:00

From my queue~

[General]

title: "wipe"
Tags suggetion
"hatsune miku Append"

[Lonely]

Good!

[Cry]

00:57:060 (4,1) - this overlap is not good ,imo
01:25:430 (3) - Fine!

[Wipe]

00:23:147 (4) - I prefer to end at 00:23:636 (suit to vocal)
01:05:538 (1,2,3) - it is better to start sliders from finish like this
00:33:256 (5,6,7) - it is difficult to find rhythm. how about avoiding stack or adjusting DS smaller?

I did Japanese Lyrics check, too. it's no problem

~Good Luck~

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-09-25T06:28:43+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
[Cry]
00:57:060 (4,1) - this overlap is not good ,imo but I don't want to change it
01:25:430 (3) - Fine! ~

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-09-25T06:32:42+00:00

almost fixed, thanks!

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-09-25T18:33:21+00:00

米桶我改名了，tag和creater's word改一下（tag里面mtbbsben还是不要去掉了？

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-09-26T09:15:47+00:00

已改啦~ ~~雖然我覺得舊的名比較好~~

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-09-26T09:22:53+00:00

mintong89 wrote:
已改啦~ ~~雖然我覺得舊的名比較好~~

想做一些改变，老id跟我太久了，总有种束缚自己的感觉

ZLOdeuka-

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ZLOdeuka- 2013-09-26T14:31:15+00:00

Hello~ from my modding Queue

[General]

● tick *Display epilepsy warning*
● add Red color for new combo

[Storyboard]

● 01:11:000 - the flashing circles here looks like they're made by accident? make them smoother or may not be as bright
● 01:22:739 (4) - ^
● 01:26:326 (3) - ^

[Lonely]

● 01:08:147 (1,3,1,3,1,3,1) - finish on the next white tick.so it will sound better

[Cry]

● 00:03:908 (2) - it would be more convenient if it is placed so http://puu.sh/4AFq1.jpg
● 00:05:212 (4,1) - can do the same distance as elsewhere at the beginning of your map? because it looks a bit wrong.
● 00:14:017 (1,2) - swap them. 00:14:017 (1) - move here 00:14:995 and 00:14:343 (2) - move here 00:14:017 . it sounds better. and 00:14:995 (2) - place at the end of the slider 00:14:017 (1)
● 00:16:625 (2,3) - ^
● 00:40:430 (2) - move here 00:40:756 (here 00:40:430 add circle and 00:42:060 remove circle)

[Wipe]

Slider Tick Rate +1

● 00:33:419 (6) - new combo

Nice map~ good luck~

mintong89

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Topic Starter

mintong89 2013-09-27T05:16:40+00:00

ZLOdeuka- wrote:
Hello~ from my modding Queue

[General]

● tick *Display epilepsy warning* guess i just delete these dot
● add Red color for new combo Red doesn't fit imo :/

[Storyboard]

● 01:11:000 - the flashing circles here looks like they're made by accident? make them smoother or may not be as bright
● 01:22:739 (4) - ^
● 01:26:326 (3) - ^

[Lonely]

● 01:08:147 (1,3,1,3,1,3,1) - finish on the next white tick.so it will sound better nope

[Wipe]

Slider Tick Rate +1 i don't see any problem need to +1 here

● 00:33:419 (6) - new combo i don't see any problem too

Nice map~ good luck~

thanks for mod!

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-09-27T05:53:40+00:00

ZLOdeuka- wrote:
[Cry]

● 00:03:908 (2) - it would be more convenient if it is placed so http://puu.sh/4AFq1.jpg I changed the place of 00:02:930 (1) -
● 00:05:212 (4,1) - can do the same distance as elsewhere at the beginning of your map? because it looks a bit wrong. nope, 4 is a blanket and 1 is a stack, small distance change is not unrankable.
● 00:14:017 (1,2) - swap them. 00:14:017 (1) - move here 00:14:995 and 00:14:343 (2) - move here 00:14:017 . it sounds better. and 00:14:995 (2) - place at the end of the slider 00:14:017 (1) ok~
● 00:16:625 (2,3) - ^ ^
● 00:40:430 (2) - move here 00:40:756 (here 00:40:430 add circle and 00:42:060 remove circle) good idea

thanks for modding

change

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Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2013-09-27T06:47:50+00:00

Hi. Random mod.

General:

-- Add "SliderBorder : 255,255,255" after colours in .osu file.

Lonely:

00:04:886 (3) - Deleting Whistle will sound better.
00:25:756 (2) - ^
00:33:582 (5) - Maybe add a clap?
01:08:147 (1) - Add Finish at the start.
01:18:582 (1) - ^
01:26:408 (3) - I suggest NC because this is a different rhythm with the previous drums.

Cry:

00:05:212 (4) - Strongly recommend a better distance. Yes it's not unrankable, but it really feels confusing as a normal diff, imo.
00:25:430 (2) - Making this 3 notes will fit the lyric better.
00:36:843 (1) - 1/4 repeat doesn't fits here. There's a beat rather in 00:36:680.
00:40:756 (3) - Missing clap at the reverse.
00:42:712 (2) - (1) seems a reasonable distance for the blanket, but similarly, this is quite hard to read. Maybe make this a 1.2x too.
00:47:278 (1) - This feels quite tricky. Suggest a 1/4 reduction.

Wipe:

00:29:017 (1) - Unlike previous parts, reducing 1/4 will fit the lyric here.
00:33:745 (7) - Consider placing closer to the previous slider. I think this is too hard to approach.
00:39:941 - Add a note

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-09-27T07:21:51+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Cry:

00:05:212 (4) - Strongly recommend a better distance. Yes it's not unrankable, but it really feels confusing as a normal diff, imo. :< ahhh... all of modders said that-.- I changed it...
00:25:430 (2) - Making this 3 notes will fit the lyric better. it doesn't matter =v=
00:36:843 (1) - 1/4 repeat doesn't fits here. There's a beat rather in 00:36:680. sry but no change
00:40:756 (3) - Missing clap at the reverse. My mistake, fixed
00:42:712 (2) - (1) seems a reasonable distance for the blanket, but similarly, this is quite hard to read. Maybe make this a 1.2x too. changed the flow
00:47:278 (1) - This feels quite tricky. Suggest a 1/4 reduction. ok

thx

cry

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mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

mintong89 2013-09-27T07:50:03+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Hi. Random mod.

General:

-- Add "SliderBorder : 255,255,255" after colours in .osu file. oops i'm forgot. added!

Lonely:

00:04:886 (3) - Deleting Whistle will sound better.
00:25:756 (2) - ^
00:33:582 (5) - Maybe add a clap?
01:08:147 (1) - Add Finish at the start.
01:18:582 (1) - ^
01:26:408 (3) - I suggest NC because this is a different rhythm with the previous drums. all fixed!

Wipe:

00:29:017 (1) - Unlike previous parts, reducing 1/4 will fit the lyric here. generally i think it's fun here, i will consider it
00:33:745 (7) - Consider placing closer to the previous slider. I think this is too hard to approach. fixed
00:39:941 - Add a note sure

really good mod, thanks!

Hellgert

489 posts

Joined May 2012

Hellgert 2013-09-29T02:00:07+00:00

form queue

a lil check for your map only,cauz anything look fine

[kiai check]
------------------------
01:17:604 stop kiai
0:18:582 kiai

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2013-10-02T02:52:15+00:00

Ello ^^ Random mod!

[Lonely]

AR +1

00:05:538 (4) - NC
00:11:408 (4) - ^
00:57:712 (5) - ^
01:02:930 (3) - ^
01:17:930 (4) - Add finish

[Cry]

AR +1

00:55:104 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:02:278 (2) - Add finish on the tail.
01:05:538 (1) - Add finish on the head.

[Wipe]
Looks perfecto to me

Cute BG ^^
Hope this helps~!

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

mintong89 2013-10-02T05:08:14+00:00

no fixed orz

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-02T12:17:46+00:00

also no fixed orz

Pandiar

391 posts

Joined February 2012

Pandiar 2013-10-04T08:06:46+00:00

hi~ from my queue

[Wipe]
01:07:495 - how about this?

SPOILER

01:10:756 (1) - add finish start point
01:13:364 (1) - ^
01:21:191 (1) - ^
01:23:799 (1) - ^
01:23:799 (1) - ^
01:29:343~01:31:625 add spinner?

[Cry]
hitsound(finish) is same as Wipe diff
01:29:343~01:31:625 add spinner?

[Lonely]
hitsound(finish) is same as Wipe diff
01:29:343~01:31:625 add spinner?

sorry for short mod

nice map and shot star~XD
good luck!

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-04T08:36:02+00:00

Pandiar wrote:
[Cry]
hitsound(finish) is same as Wipe diff
01:29:343~01:31:625 add spinner?

If mintong89 add finish or spinners, then I will add it.

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2013-10-04T08:39:21+00:00

M4M
[General]
Uncheck "Letterbox" since there is no Break Time.
[Lonely]
Placement
00:55:104(1,2,3,4,5) make a perfect star placement on the center.

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Hit Sonud
00:04:886(3) add whistle for pattern
[Cry]
Placement
00:14:995(2) stack at end of slider looks a bit difficult for Normal diff, imo.
00:19:234(1,3) put to be symmetrical like this?

SPOILER

00:38:473(3) to be down the tail, maybe it would be nice flow.

SPOILER

00:54:125(2) spacing looks narrow, 2 grid down.
00:57:712(1) spacing is too far, so move like this?

SPOILER

01:25:430(1) maybe you can make perfect <3 mark, fight.
Rhythm
01:17:604(2) I suppose kick slider sounds better to follow the vocal, so maybe like this?

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
01:02:278(2) add finish at end.
01:05:538(1) add finish at head
[Wipe]
Placement
00:08:799(3,4) I suppose this jump looks a bit weird, if you aim to jump you can put it between (3) and (4). not (2) and (3). it would be nice flow.

SPOILER

00:41:897(7) this flow is a bit ugly for me, so put this note like this?

SPOILER

00:54:125(1) I'm confused since this spacing is narrow,
Rhythm
00:27:060(2,3) to follow the vocal, I suppose it would be better

SPOILER

00:55:593 add a note here to follow the vocal. it would be effctive for next slider.

overall fine I suppose. good luck.

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-04T10:07:48+00:00

kajiyatta wrote:
[Cry]
Placement
00:14:995(2) stack at end of slider looks a bit difficult for Normal diff, imo. changed
00:19:234(1,3) put to be symmetrical like this? ok~
SPOILER
00:38:473(3) to be down the tail, maybe it would be nice flow. fixed
SPOILER
00:54:125(2) spacing looks narrow, 2 grid down. do a little change to the (1)
00:57:712(1) spacing is too far, so move like this? make closer than before
SPOILER
01:25:430(1) maybe you can make perfect <3 mark, fight.
Rhythm
01:17:604(2) I suppose kick slider sounds better to follow the vocal, so maybe like this? good idea~ thanks
SPOILER
Hit Sonud
01:02:278(2) add finish at end.
01:05:538(1) add finish at head all added

Cry

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Ikaros_F

88 posts

Joined December 2012

Ikaros_F 2013-10-09T12:09:25+00:00

hello ,米桶

Wipe
00:13:691 加一个note
00:53:962 加一个音效是clap的note
01:15:973 (1,2) - ctrl+h之后然后往右移一点可能会更漂亮一点._.
01:18:989 加一个note
01:28:772 加一个音效是clap的note

Cry
00:18:582 (1) - 取消nc，然后00:19:234 (2) - 加个nc
00:23:147 (3) - 往下一点吧._.包一下那个圈圈（好吧请无视掉这一条

Lonely
01:29:017 去掉01:29:017 (3) - 加个转圈吧._.

我的mod可能不是很好._.图好人性只能找出这么多了
祝早日rank

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-09T12:14:41+00:00

nochanges

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

mintong89 2013-10-11T07:27:48+00:00

same

Rumia-

2,531 posts

Joined July 2012

Rumia- 2013-11-02T04:21:34+00:00

/me throw star at mint

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

4,315 posts

Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2013-11-11T17:38:24+00:00

mint, if you want me to mod this, get 2 mods first, after you've revived it. I don't want to mod something that is in graveyard! Send me a pm.

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

kamisamaaa 2013-11-14T07:18:09+00:00

我来凑数顺便骗KD~

膜拜神图
音效好赞！！
[lonely]
01:08:147 (1) - 感觉结束到白线比较好后面几个也是一样的感觉
[cry]
哦艹做的好棒！然后最后我看到那个心真的没有笑真的
[wipe]
00:33:256 (5,6,7) - 明明很人性的图可是这一坨真的好难读
01:08:636 (2,3,4) - 感觉这三个和音乐不是很切合后面那几个也是这感觉不过不是啥大问题额

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

mintong89 2013-11-14T08:07:50+00:00

kamisamaaa wrote:
我来凑数顺便骗KD~ 膜拜神图
音效好赞！！
[lonely]
01:08:147 (1) - 感觉结束到白线比较好后面几个也是一样的感觉
[cry]
哦艹做的好棒！然后最后我看到那个心真的没有笑真的
[wipe]
00:33:256 (5,6,7) - 明明很人性的图可是这一坨真的好难读
01:08:636 (2,3,4) - 感觉这三个和音乐不是很切合后面那几个也是这感觉不过不是啥大问题额我不會告訴你我是故意坑人的

yeah, thanks!

sammy711

207 posts

Joined November 2012

sammy711 2013-11-15T12:24:11+00:00

Lonely

00:38:799 (5) - add clap

Wipe
01:05:212 (8,9) - 这里的flow和01:04:071 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这个弧度的flow不是太搭
建议把9往下移一点，这样既能照应前面的flow，还能和01:05:538 (1) - 的弧度有一点相配的趋势

SPOILER

这样的趋势

仔细听一下背景音乐就能听出来
01:17:930 (8) -这个音的强度是比01:17:930 (1) -要弱的，而且音色也不是很一样
用同样的音效同样的音量处理会让人觉得8把1的finish+clap的冲击感淡化了
不如将8的音量降低5%~10% ，按照背景音乐合适安排音量

00:58:364 (2) - 这个采用00:57:712 (1) - 一样的弯曲幅度怎么样
打到这的时候我就觉得这里特别不得劲，原来是因为滑条弧度的不一致导致美观性特别受影响

01:15:321 (5,1) - 这里的flow虽然不好，不过对我来说acceptable>.<

00:49:560 (8) - 推荐滑条指向左侧

SPOILER

目的是顺接接下来的00:49:886 (1) - flow
如果放在原来的位置的话会造成一个向左的移动趋势然后再向上，bad flow

01:00:158 (5,6,1) - 说实话我第一次打都没看出来这是八分音符
既然是八分音符就把距离再稍微拉开一小点嘛。。。。真的很confusing的QAQ
别的八分音符都是0.7左右的DS，到了这里就变成了0.9 简直就是坑人

01:21:028 (8) - 这个再稍微下移到(220,304)
原来的位置在串里有一种锯齿感很不好看
尽量平滑一点保持美观性

Cry
01:00:321 (1) - 滑条尾+whistle如何
01:00:321 (1) - 红描点再往左下挪一小点吧，感觉从6到滑条头的角度到滑条转弯的角度变得有点快，flow不太好

OK that's all
new modder but hope my mod helps you><

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-11-15T16:01:41+00:00

sammy711 wrote:
Cry
01:00:321 (1) - 滑条尾+whistle如何好，米桶帮忙加下吧
01:00:321 (1) - 红描点再往左下挪一小点吧，感觉从6到滑条头的角度到滑条转弯的角度变得有点快，flow不太好再往下可能要出去了，算了

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

mintong89 2013-11-16T00:21:31+00:00

大多都fix了神mod謝謝!

Meisle

158 posts

Joined June 2012

Meisle 2013-11-16T02:57:33+00:00

[Wipe]
01:07:903 (10) - 我觉的放个note组成stream不错啊. .
01:18:093 (9) - 其实有个很轻的鼓音，不知道放note好不好
我的map水平也就只能找到这么点QAQ

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

4,315 posts

Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2013-11-16T13:33:19+00:00

Hi there mintong

You requested a mod~

New timing provided by Kokatsu (thanks!)

IRC mod for Lonely + Wipe:

IRC mod

13:48 Irreversible: 00:48:582 (5,6,1) - make the whole thing a bit more curvy? it'll flow better
13:49 Irreversible: 01:18:582 - add another kiai flash here?
13:50 Irreversible: i would increase OD + HP by 1, in lonely
13:50 Irreversible: otherwise it's really boring
13:50 mintong89: ok
13:50 mintong89: ~
13:51 mintong89: hmm sure
13:51 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/290047 keeno - wipe [Wipe]]
13:51 Irreversible: 00:15:647 (4) - this is a rather bad flow, and it doesn't really look good imo. http://puu.sh/5jVPv.jpg try this?
13:52 mintong89: oh
13:52 mintong89: ok
13:53 Irreversible: 00:23:147 (4) - just a rhythm suggestion how it would work differently, the current one sounds a bit odd imo: http://puu.sh/5jVTY.jpg
13:55 Irreversible: 00:33:256 - please delete. This is WAY too confusing, and causes unnecessary combo break
13:57 mintong89: since too many people complain this, ok orz
13:58 Irreversible: trying to get a new timing atm
13:58 Irreversible: it seems a bit off
13:59 mintong89: oh really? :O
13:59 Irreversible: Yes a bit
14:00 Irreversible: can you tell me the offset you have?
14:00 mintong89: you mean 2,930?
14:00 Irreversible: thx
14:01 Irreversible: hmm
14:03 Irreversible: one sec

14:04 mintong89:

14:04 Irreversible: 00:38:626 (4,5,6) - i'm a bit meh about those one..
14:04 mintong89: k
14:04 Irreversible: they play not so good :s
14:04 Irreversible: 00:44:007 (4,5) - and this spacing is rather confusing o.o what do you think about ctrl + G 00:44:496 (5) - onthis? maybe it's clearer then
14:05 Irreversible: 00:46:615 (5,6,7,8) - try to make a nicer curve?
14:06 Irreversible: 00:52:322 (5) - move to 8 116 to provide a better flow
14:06 Irreversible: New, confirmed offset: 2919, please resnap everything after you've applied it
14:07 mintong89: ok :O thanks
14:08 Irreversible: tell me when you've fixed (or not) my suggestions, and the timing then i'll go on
14:10 mintong89: 00:38:626 (4,5,6) - no fixed this, i will give it a try?
14:10 mintong89: otherwise, fixed
14:11 Irreversible: let me testplay again i can tell you then xD
14:11 mintong89: lol k
14:12 Irreversible: did you fix all offset in every diff?
14:13 mintong89: ah
14:13 mintong89: let me update it

What we've fixed:

- minor rhythm stuff
- improved flow in some places
- took out confusing stuff

[Cry]

Well, I have to say, this diff is really untidy, and it's really hard from time to time, what I mean is the rhythm gets unpredictable at some point, and the spacing increases without a real need. I'll point out the most important points for you, to help you.

About the circle density first. You use really a lot of circles, which is possible, but not really recommended, if you ask me ; a normal player doesn't have too much stamina, and I guess it can be a hard time for him.
I'll point you the ones out, I'm talking about: 00:14:984 (2,3,4,1) - 00:17:593 (3,4,5,1) - 00:58:680 (2,3,4,5,6) - . Those have too many circles, and I guess you can also try to follow the rhythm a bit better here.

Now I wanna mention how tidy your diff is, in my opinion the point you can improve most here. 00:04:875 (3,4,1) - Stacks like those just doesn't look really polished here, and there's not a real need for it imo.. It would flow better if you just place them with normal DS, going with one flow.
00:07:484 (3,4) - . Then there's something other, your slider just don't compliment each other: 00:27:049 (2,3) - for example this one. It goes just in a tight angle, and this doesn't flow well at all. http://puu.sh/5jX3w.jpg ? Of course, the next placing would be a problem, but you can leave some beats out, to gain some extra space.

The rhythm is sometimes a bit weird too. 00:31:614 (1) - You wanna follow the long vocal here, but it actually starts here : 00:31:288 -

00:35:853 (3) - Something like this would flow better if it was here: http://puu.sh/5jX5L.jpg

00:40:419 (2) - DS should be equal everywhere; so please take care of it.

00:42:375 (1,2) - And again, something like this just doesn't compliment each other. http://puu.sh/5jX7o.jpg Something like this might be better, I'm sure you can think of something even better!

00:48:897 (3,4,5) - I see what you want here, but if you make a tidy curve it'll make everything even moer polished. Small things, which actually mean alot, imo.

And please stick to the same DS in the whole diff, this means you shouldn't increase it in the kiai .. That's pretty not normal, for a normal.

Well, after that many suggestions, I hope you can improve your diff! If you have questions, don't hesitate asking me~ and if you need more suggestions, like screen shots, i'm here~

Good luck, dropping the star icon for now, because Wipe + Lonely are really good so far, don't give up!

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-11-16T14:12:24+00:00

thanks irre~ I am checking it now

Edit:
Uh. maybe it's hard to reply but all I have fixed D:
and 01:09:767 (3,4,5,1) - these 4 circles I want to keep it :3

SPOILER

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TitleUnicode:wipe
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ArtistUnicode:keeno
Creator:mintong89
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171,367,72375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,343,72701,1,8,0:0:0:0:
305,337,73027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,319,73353,6,0,B|442:287|450:210,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
458,141,74332,2,0,P|453:107|435:73,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,27,74984,2,0,P|348:11|301:17,2,70,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,81,75962,6,0,P|256:134|172:81,1,210,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,220,77593,2,0,P|162:270|130:292,2,70,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,204,78571,5,6,0:0:0:0:
314,220,78897,2,0,P|330:270|362:292,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,300,79549,2,0,P|455:287|480:259,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,207,80201,2,0,P|493:133|453:79,1,140
388,58,81180,5,2,0:0:0:0:
321,79,81506,2,0,P|279:84|240:73,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,103,82158,2,0,P|144:98|105:109,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
79,163,82810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
74,232,83136,1,8,0:0:0:0:
68,301,83462,2,0,L|63:342,2,35,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,310,84114,6,0,P|166:335|202:353,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,373,84767,2,0,P|288:354|303:323,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,284,85419,2,0,B|123:219|72:124|69:2|202:-35|248:59|248:59|292:-35|425:2|422:124|323:198,1,770,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

EnakoRin

EnakoRin 2013-11-16T17:25:25+00:00

先给星星，白天再摸（

EnakoRin

EnakoRin 2013-11-17T06:40:52+00:00

[General]

发现无用的osb文件：keeno - Wipe (mintong89).osb
每个难度的offset在osu文件里均显示为浮点数，如果可以最好用记事本改为整数

[Lonely]

00:57:701 (5,6) - 间距太近
01:13:353 (1) - 间距太远
01:29:006 - 就没了？orz

[Cry]

01:18:570 - 冗余的时间线
01:18:571 - 冗余的时间线
01:08:136 (1) - 柑橘第一个圈要加个clap音效（因为音乐本身有
01:14:984 (3,1) - 重叠部分有点丑
01:23:462 (6) - 最后一个圈加个finish

[Wipe]

00:07:484 (5) - Ctrl+G？

问题不大，祝早日rank
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EasyModder 1.4.2
Program By Weiren

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-11-17T08:32:25+00:00

EnakoRin wrote:
[Cry]
01:18:570 - 冗余的时间线
01:18:571 - 冗余的时间线
01:08:136 (1) - 柑橘第一个圈要加个clap音效（因为音乐本身有
01:14:984 (3,1) - 重叠部分有点丑
01:23:462 (6) - 最后一个圈加个finish

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all fixed
谢了~

米桶我已经重下过了，如果是mapset还有什么问题你再自己改下？
http://puu.sh/5kQhY.rar

mintong89

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Topic Starter

mintong89 2013-11-17T08:36:36+00:00

EnakoRin wrote:
[General]
发现无用的osb文件：keeno - Wipe (mintong89).osb 已刪
每个难度的offset在osu文件里均显示为浮点数，如果可以最好用记事本改为整数感覺不大需要...
[Lonely]
00:57:701 (5,6) - 间距太近
01:13:353 (1) - 间距太远
01:29:006 - 就没了？orz 全fix
[Wipe]
00:07:484 (5) - Ctrl+G？感覺不好
问题不大，祝早日rank
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EasyModder 1.4.2
Program By Weiren

謝謝mod

Bungaku Shounen

114 posts

Joined May 2013

Bungaku Shounen 2013-11-17T13:28:06+00:00

From Yuki's request

[Cry]

00:55:093 (1) - 整个图只有这一个1/4折返显得有些突兀如果是我可能会把00:56:397 - 也加上一个1/4折返滑条显得比较呼应
00:59:006 (3) - 稍微往上面一点？有点跟不上1的弧度
01:08:136 (1) - 01:18:571 (1) - 可以去掉whistle
01:20:201 (4) - 前面这样的节奏都是分开的三个note或者1/2折返滑条最好还是改一下

[Storyboard]

关于这点我可能没什么资格说..但是既然有SB为何不加几个BG effect呢？只是单纯的歌词好像不是那么有张力

祝rank

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-11-17T13:31:02+00:00

-WhiteNEKO- wrote:
From Yuki's request

[Storyboard]
关于这点我可能没什么资格说..但是既然有SB为何不加几个BG effect呢？只是单纯的歌词好像不是那么有张力
祝rank

我SB能力下降了而且也懶惰做所以...=A=

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-11-17T13:42:32+00:00

-WhiteNEKO- wrote:
From Yuki's request

[Cry]
00:55:093 (1) - 整个图只有这一个1/4折返显得有些突兀如果是我可能会把00:56:397 - 也加上一个1/4折返滑条显得比较呼应索性就去掉了
00:59:006 (3) - 稍微往上面一点？有点跟不上1的弧度 ok
01:08:136 (1) - 01:18:571 (1) - 可以去掉whistle ok
01:20:201 (4) - 前面这样的节奏都是分开的三个note或者1/2折返滑条最好还是改一下 fixed

thanks~
http://puu.sh/5l0rx.rar

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-11-17T14:04:31+00:00

米桶查一下tag

Xinchii

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Xinchii 2013-11-22T10:58:46+00:00

Hi ~ mint

一個禮拜之前的request了

我東找西找
不過真的找不出什麼東西阿.....

[Lonely]

00:48:571(5,6,1,2) - maybe like this ? :
SPOILER
flow更好看一些
然後這個diff的間距感覺好拘束

就這樣了
史上最弱mod.....

射一顆星 , kd也不用了

加油,快Rank掉吧 !!

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-11-24T13:08:50+00:00

[Cry]

01:10:745 (1,2) - Click on those two once and CTRL + G it, to get another rhythm. It's just that I find the slider more fitting there, along with the vocals. 01:11:723 (3) - Combined with this, it's really cool
01:11:723 (3,4,5,6) - Is there a way to improve this flow? http://puu.sh/5rOCC.jpg :O
01:22:158 (3,4,5,6) - Give this a slight curve too? Flows cool :3
01:25:419 (3) - NC to emphasize this super cute heart :3

Wow, there was a really big improvement on this map. Good job!!

[Wipe]

01:05:201 (8,9,1) - This has a rather bad transition. http://puu.sh/5rOJD.jpg Try to get something like this :3
01:15:962 (1) - The distance between 01:15:310 (5,1) - is really small, and I think people will miss because they don't see that there is a gap. I suggest making the DS between them a bit higher

Call me back <3

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-11-24T13:19:20+00:00

all fixed
thx irre~

http://puu.sh/5rPaw.rar

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-11-24T13:37:49+00:00

Alright, really nice songchoice you have there

The map is also fun!

Bubbled :3

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-11-24T13:41:17+00:00

yay really thanks >.<

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-11-24T14:03:55+00:00

恭喜rank

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2013-11-26T03:12:29+00:00

[Wipe]

00:15:962 (1) - I would suggest moving this up a little bit as the spacing between 00:14:984 (3,4) - isn't equivalent to 00:15:636 (4,1) - . Ballancing the spacing is the best way to make the map looks more tidy.
00:40:582 - I think you could add a note here or even add a note at 00:40:663 -
00:44:495 (5) - Probably make a jump here as there is a staccato on the music.
00:50:364 - I would add a note here if I were you since the drum sound presents there.
01:17:430 (4,5,6,7,8) - I think it would be better if you could enlarge the spacing here, just like what you did on the slider (01:15:962 (1,2,3) - )

[Cry]

00:19:223 (1,2,3) - How about rearranging the layout like this?
suggestion
01:05:527 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing might be a bit confusing. As the spacing you used in 1/4 was similar to 1/2. Some beginners might not distinguish it correctly.
01:25:419 (1) - Seriously - - this slider looks not that good...
....貪吃蛇排版

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-11-26T03:32:11+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
[Cry]
00:19:223 (1,2,3) - How about rearranging the layout like this? ok
suggestion
01:05:527 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing might be a bit confusing. As the spacing you used in 1/4 was similar to 1/2. Some beginners might not distinguish it correctly. making 2,3 in one slider
01:25:419 (1) - Seriously - - this slider looks not that good... 画工拙计
....貪吃蛇排版 ....毕竟只是normal，必须要ds....

thx for modding
http://puu.sh/5tvzC.rar

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-11-26T04:17:07+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
[Wipe]
00:15:962 (1) - I would suggest moving this up a little bit as the spacing between 00:14:984 (3,4) - isn't equivalent to 00:15:636 (4,1) - . Ballancing the spacing is the best way to make the map looks more tidy. sure
00:40:582 - I think you could add a note here or even add a note at 00:40:663 - sure and nope on 00:40:663 - , i don't like to see too more 1/8 at these part
00:44:495 (5) - Probably make a jump here as there is a staccato on the music. well i CTRL+G it, it feel better
00:50:364 - I would add a note here if I were you since the drum sound presents there. ok
01:17:430 (4,5,6,7,8) - I think it would be better if you could enlarge the spacing here, just like what you did on the slider (01:15:962 (1,2,3) - ) nope, i will like to keep here

thanks for mod

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2013-11-26T06:43:49+00:00

Ranked!

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