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Koiyuki

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-11-16T14:12:24+00:00

thanks irre~ I am checking it now

Edit:
Uh. maybe it's hard to reply but all I have fixed D:
and 01:09:767 (3,4,5,1) - these 4 circles I want to keep it :3

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Wipe.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 66995
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:wipe
TitleUnicode:wipe
Artist:keeno
ArtistUnicode:keeno
Creator:mintong89
Version:Cry
Source:
Tags:in_the_rain mtbbsben [Minakami＿Yuki] Hatsune Miku Append Vocaloid
BeatmapID:299058
BeatmapSetID:111531

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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33408,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
68136,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
78570,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
78571,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
89006,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0


[Colours]
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Combo2 : 75,136,169
Combo3 : 100,94,147
Combo4 : 78,160,160
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

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EnakoRin

EnakoRin 2013-11-16T17:25:25+00:00

先给星星，白天再摸（

EnakoRin

EnakoRin 2013-11-17T06:40:52+00:00

[General]

发现无用的osb文件：keeno - Wipe (mintong89).osb
每个难度的offset在osu文件里均显示为浮点数，如果可以最好用记事本改为整数

[Lonely]

00:57:701 (5,6) - 间距太近
01:13:353 (1) - 间距太远
01:29:006 - 就没了？orz

[Cry]

01:18:570 - 冗余的时间线
01:18:571 - 冗余的时间线
01:08:136 (1) - 柑橘第一个圈要加个clap音效（因为音乐本身有
01:14:984 (3,1) - 重叠部分有点丑
01:23:462 (6) - 最后一个圈加个finish

[Wipe]

00:07:484 (5) - Ctrl+G？

问题不大，祝早日rank
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EasyModder 1.4.2
Program By Weiren

Koiyuki

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Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-11-17T08:32:25+00:00

EnakoRin wrote:
[Cry]
01:18:570 - 冗余的时间线
01:18:571 - 冗余的时间线
01:08:136 (1) - 柑橘第一个圈要加个clap音效（因为音乐本身有
01:14:984 (3,1) - 重叠部分有点丑
01:23:462 (6) - 最后一个圈加个finish

----------
all fixed
谢了~

米桶我已经重下过了，如果是mapset还有什么问题你再自己改下？
http://puu.sh/5kQhY.rar

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

mintong89 2013-11-17T08:36:36+00:00

EnakoRin wrote:
[General]
发现无用的osb文件：keeno - Wipe (mintong89).osb 已刪
每个难度的offset在osu文件里均显示为浮点数，如果可以最好用记事本改为整数感覺不大需要...
[Lonely]
00:57:701 (5,6) - 间距太近
01:13:353 (1) - 间距太远
01:29:006 - 就没了？orz 全fix
[Wipe]
00:07:484 (5) - Ctrl+G？感覺不好
问题不大，祝早日rank
----------
EasyModder 1.4.2
Program By Weiren

謝謝mod

Bungaku Shounen

114 posts

Joined May 2013

Bungaku Shounen 2013-11-17T13:28:06+00:00

From Yuki's request

[Cry]

00:55:093 (1) - 整个图只有这一个1/4折返显得有些突兀如果是我可能会把00:56:397 - 也加上一个1/4折返滑条显得比较呼应
00:59:006 (3) - 稍微往上面一点？有点跟不上1的弧度
01:08:136 (1) - 01:18:571 (1) - 可以去掉whistle
01:20:201 (4) - 前面这样的节奏都是分开的三个note或者1/2折返滑条最好还是改一下

[Storyboard]

关于这点我可能没什么资格说..但是既然有SB为何不加几个BG effect呢？只是单纯的歌词好像不是那么有张力

祝rank

mintong89

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Topic Starter

mintong89 2013-11-17T13:31:02+00:00

-WhiteNEKO- wrote:
From Yuki's request

[Storyboard]
关于这点我可能没什么资格说..但是既然有SB为何不加几个BG effect呢？只是单纯的歌词好像不是那么有张力
祝rank

我SB能力下降了而且也懶惰做所以...=A=

Koiyuki

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Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-11-17T13:42:32+00:00

-WhiteNEKO- wrote:
From Yuki's request

[Cry]
00:55:093 (1) - 整个图只有这一个1/4折返显得有些突兀如果是我可能会把00:56:397 - 也加上一个1/4折返滑条显得比较呼应索性就去掉了
00:59:006 (3) - 稍微往上面一点？有点跟不上1的弧度 ok
01:08:136 (1) - 01:18:571 (1) - 可以去掉whistle ok
01:20:201 (4) - 前面这样的节奏都是分开的三个note或者1/2折返滑条最好还是改一下 fixed

thanks~
http://puu.sh/5l0rx.rar

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-11-17T14:04:31+00:00

米桶查一下tag

Xinchii

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Joined January 2011

Xinchii 2013-11-22T10:58:46+00:00

Hi ~ mint

一個禮拜之前的request了

我東找西找
不過真的找不出什麼東西阿.....

[Lonely]

00:48:571(5,6,1,2) - maybe like this ? :
SPOILER
flow更好看一些
然後這個diff的間距感覺好拘束

就這樣了
史上最弱mod.....

射一顆星 , kd也不用了

加油,快Rank掉吧 !!

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

4,315 posts

Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2013-11-24T13:08:50+00:00

[Cry]

01:10:745 (1,2) - Click on those two once and CTRL + G it, to get another rhythm. It's just that I find the slider more fitting there, along with the vocals. 01:11:723 (3) - Combined with this, it's really cool
01:11:723 (3,4,5,6) - Is there a way to improve this flow? http://puu.sh/5rOCC.jpg :O
01:22:158 (3,4,5,6) - Give this a slight curve too? Flows cool :3
01:25:419 (3) - NC to emphasize this super cute heart :3

Wow, there was a really big improvement on this map. Good job!!

[Wipe]

01:05:201 (8,9,1) - This has a rather bad transition. http://puu.sh/5rOJD.jpg Try to get something like this :3
01:15:962 (1) - The distance between 01:15:310 (5,1) - is really small, and I think people will miss because they don't see that there is a gap. I suggest making the DS between them a bit higher

Call me back <3

Koiyuki

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Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-11-24T13:19:20+00:00

all fixed
thx irre~

http://puu.sh/5rPaw.rar

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

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Irreversible 2013-11-24T13:37:49+00:00

Alright, really nice songchoice you have there

The map is also fun!

Bubbled :3

mintong89

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Topic Starter

mintong89 2013-11-24T13:41:17+00:00

yay really thanks >.<

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-11-24T14:03:55+00:00

恭喜rank

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2013-11-26T03:12:29+00:00

[Wipe]

00:15:962 (1) - I would suggest moving this up a little bit as the spacing between 00:14:984 (3,4) - isn't equivalent to 00:15:636 (4,1) - . Ballancing the spacing is the best way to make the map looks more tidy.
00:40:582 - I think you could add a note here or even add a note at 00:40:663 -
00:44:495 (5) - Probably make a jump here as there is a staccato on the music.
00:50:364 - I would add a note here if I were you since the drum sound presents there.
01:17:430 (4,5,6,7,8) - I think it would be better if you could enlarge the spacing here, just like what you did on the slider (01:15:962 (1,2,3) - )

[Cry]

00:19:223 (1,2,3) - How about rearranging the layout like this?
suggestion
01:05:527 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing might be a bit confusing. As the spacing you used in 1/4 was similar to 1/2. Some beginners might not distinguish it correctly.
01:25:419 (1) - Seriously - - this slider looks not that good...
....貪吃蛇排版

Koiyuki

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Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-11-26T03:32:11+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
[Cry]
00:19:223 (1,2,3) - How about rearranging the layout like this? ok
suggestion
01:05:527 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing might be a bit confusing. As the spacing you used in 1/4 was similar to 1/2. Some beginners might not distinguish it correctly. making 2,3 in one slider
01:25:419 (1) - Seriously - - this slider looks not that good... 画工拙计
....貪吃蛇排版 ....毕竟只是normal，必须要ds....

thx for modding
http://puu.sh/5tvzC.rar

mintong89

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Topic Starter

mintong89 2013-11-26T04:17:07+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
[Wipe]
00:15:962 (1) - I would suggest moving this up a little bit as the spacing between 00:14:984 (3,4) - isn't equivalent to 00:15:636 (4,1) - . Ballancing the spacing is the best way to make the map looks more tidy. sure
00:40:582 - I think you could add a note here or even add a note at 00:40:663 - sure and nope on 00:40:663 - , i don't like to see too more 1/8 at these part
00:44:495 (5) - Probably make a jump here as there is a staccato on the music. well i CTRL+G it, it feel better
00:50:364 - I would add a note here if I were you since the drum sound presents there. ok
01:17:430 (4,5,6,7,8) - I think it would be better if you could enlarge the spacing here, just like what you did on the slider (01:15:962 (1,2,3) - ) nope, i will like to keep here

thanks for mod

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2013-11-26T06:43:49+00:00

Ranked!

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