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mintong89

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mintong89 2013-08-17T00:09:02+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年11月26日 at 12:17:38

Artist: keeno
Title: wipe
Tags: in_the_rain mtbbsben [Minakami＿Yuki] Hatsune Miku Append Vocaloid mintong89
BPM: 92
Filesize: 4620kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:

Cry (3.45 stars, 110 notes)
Lonely (1.17 stars, 76 notes)
Wipe (4.77 stars, 215 notes)

Download: keeno - wipe
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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「keeno - wipe」
13th Ranked Beatmaps

Cry by [Minakami Yuki]
Storyboard by Azure

Last edited by mintong89 2013-11-26T06:54:33+00:00, edited 46 times in total.

Azure

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Azure 2013-08-17T03:12:18+00:00

wawawawa keeno

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-08-17T04:02:18+00:00

Azure wrote:
wawawawa keeno

wa

Regou

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Regou 2013-08-17T12:34:30+00:00

wa

Meisle

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Meisle 2013-08-19T09:50:50+00:00

O(∩_∩)O~我来占个坑

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-09-06T10:48:19+00:00

wawawawawa

YoshinoSakura

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YoshinoSakura 2013-09-08T14:45:32+00:00

this is my mod

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-09-08T14:47:04+00:00

tag统一下啦

我的id在别的diff里面也要加上lol

edit：射猩猩

Last edited by Koiyuki 2013-09-08T15:06:56+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-09-08T14:55:51+00:00

加了 \o/ pending

YoshinoSakura

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YoshinoSakura 2013-09-08T15:15:26+00:00

来了

General

beautiful skin好评
why no source(don't 嘲笑我不知道==）

lonely
AR-1 要不怪怪的
00:10:104 (3,4,5) - 我柑橘这几个不在一条直线上
01:10:756 (3) - nc，kiai里都是这样的
01:15:973 (3) - nc
其实我觉非kiai用那两种暗点的颜色，kiai用亮点的那两个比较炫酷当我什么都没说
现在还有没有easy的combo不能过5这个规定啊

Cry

老实说我没看懂

~~00:05:212 (4) - why so far~~
00:05:538 (1) - 没叠好
00:57:060 (4,1) -

sad

00:58:691 (2,3,4,5,6) - 连续circle对于normal有点难
01:25:430 (3) - 。。。

Wipe
~~wpcap sv1.8~~这一定是insane
00:23:147 (4) - 没包好，ctrl+g？
01:06:191 (2) - 这个不在重音上，建议往前拖一拍
01:12:712 (5,6) - 换成spinner
01:19:560 (3) - 弄成弯的宝住

fvk puush坏掉了

为什么复制kiai

555又找不出问题
so recieve my star

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-09-08T15:35:32+00:00

615915887 wrote:
Cry

老实说我没看懂
~~00:05:212 (4) - why so far~~
00:05:538 (1) - 没叠好米桶ki☆ra~帮我移到(226,249)吧~
00:57:060 (4,1) -
sad
puush啥看不到，这貌似不是unrank的吧，你要说啥QQ发给我算了
00:58:691 (2,3,4,5,6) - 连续circle对于normal有点难 92的二分拍问题不大吧
01:25:430 (3) - 。。。画的很嘈么;w;

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-09-09T06:54:07+00:00

615915887 wrote:
来了

General
beautiful skin好评
why no source(don't 嘲笑我不知道==）不用, artist已经清楚得告诉了

lonely
AR-1 要不怪怪的嗯
00:10:104 (3,4,5) - 我柑橘这几个不在一条直线上你的感觉罢了
01:10:756 (3) - nc，kiai里都是这样的两拍nc一次后面的我都换了
01:15:973 (3) - nc
其实我觉非kiai用那两种暗点的颜色，kiai用亮点的那两个比较炫酷当我什么都没说
现在还有没有easy的combo不能过5这个规定啊一直都没啊这啥规定

Wipe
~~wpcap sv1.8~~这一定是insane 我找几个人试过了我也自己试过了 ~~炒鸡简单简直不如hard~~
00:23:147 (4) - 没包好，ctrl+g？不, 但我移左一格了
01:06:191 (2) - 这个不在重音上，建议往前拖一拍我不跟重音
01:12:712 (5,6) - 换成spinner 那么你叫我换spinner 你和我开玩笑？不喜欢spinner
01:19:560 (3) - 弄成弯的宝住
fvk puush坏掉了
为什么复制kiai

555又找不出问题
so recieve my star

谢mod啦 :3

Kinomi

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Kinomi 2013-09-14T02:44:17+00:00

先射射米桶

Hanabi

Hanabi 2013-09-14T05:52:32+00:00

Hi~ m4m

[Lonely]
slider tick rate 2
00:39:451 (1) - remove NC
00:40:104 (2) - NC

[Cry]
00:05:538 (1) - distance check this would be better shape

00:07:495 (3,2) - overlap perfectly
00:26:408 (1) - remove NC
00:27:060 (2) - NC
00:30:647 (4) - place here

00:42:712 (3) - bind to cover 00:42:386 (2)
00:47:930 (2,3) - spacing
00:49:560 (5,1,2) - how about this pattern

00:57:060 (4,1) - seperate them

01:07:821 (5,1) - distance
01:25:430 (3) - make a circle and start slider 1/2 later

[wipe]
00:33:419 (6) - reverse arrow doesn't seem well..seperater with circle 5
00:46:625 (5,6,7,8,1) - make perfect round
00:54:125 (6) - NC
01:00:158 (5,6,1) - make it straight
01:05:538 (1,2,3,4) - this will fit well

01:17:767 (6,7,8) - make a slider reverse

Done.

Good luck~><

Last edited by Hanabi 2013-09-15T01:35:37+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-09-14T06:16:00+00:00

fix some thanks
orz mtbbsben 好人

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-09-14T06:17:14+00:00

mintong89 wrote:
fix some thanks
orz mtbbsben 好人

orz 别发卡

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-09-15T03:07:08+00:00

[ Sana ] wrote:
[Cry]
00:05:538 (1) - distance check this would be better shape
sry no change
00:07:495 (3,2) - overlap perfectly fixed
00:26:408 (1) - remove NC nope. It's on the white line, I perfer to NC on the white line
00:27:060 (2) - NC ^
00:30:647 (4) - place here
ok~
00:42:712 (3) - bind to cover 00:42:386 (2) sry no change
00:47:930 (2,3) - spacing fixed
00:49:560 (5,1,2) - how about this pattern
ok~
00:57:060 (4,1) - seperate them
fixed
01:07:821 (5,1) - distance fixed
01:25:430 (3) - make a circle and start slider 1/2 later
sry no change

thx~

change

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sjoy

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sjoy 2013-09-15T13:34:32+00:00

From M4M

[Lonely]
00:38:799 (5) - clap
01:08:147 (1) - - 感觉可以加默认的FIN
01:18:582 (1) - ^

[Cry]
00:03:908 (2,2) - 头感觉可以加WHIS
00:09:125 (2) -whis
00:30:647 (4) - 好像挡住了放在00:29:669 (3) - 下面如何？
01:00:321 (1) - 尾巴应该是WHIS吧？
01:08:147 (1) fin
01:18:582 (1) ^
[wipe]
00:03:908 (4) - whis
00:06:517 (4) - ^
00:09:125 (4) -
00:11:734 (4) -
00:38:799 (6,7) - 可以跟音乐加CLAP
00:38:636 (4,5,6) - 我没听出8分拍
00:43:854 (2,3,4) - 怀疑我听力有问题

00:54:125 (6) - NC
01:12:712 (5) - 放在01:12:223 (4) - 尾巴如何
01:15:321 (5) - http://puu.sh/4rUxp.jpg你看如何

GOOD LUCK!

hoshisorakiseki

300 posts

Joined January 2012

hoshisorakiseki 2013-09-15T15:26:09+00:00

渣mod一个，找不出什么来
全局
这闪光点太渣，毫无过渡感，差评。做一个扩散渐变的圆圈吧。
难度：Lonely
没有发现
难度：Cry
开了倒数居然没听见倒数，取消这个吧
00:10:756 (1) - 据aimod说这里漏了一个NC
01:25:430 (3) - 想画一个心形？将下面的代码替换掉最后一行（又好像是两行）就行了：

256,304,84778,2,0,B|0:168|176:8|256:116|256:116|344:4|508:168|256:304|
256:304,1,770

自己调一下位置吧

效果

难度：Wipe
有些时候，将bpm x2（184）比用1/8好

最后，祝早日rank

mintong89

3,698 posts

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Topic Starter

mintong89 2013-09-15T15:29:01+00:00

hoshisorakiseki wrote:
渣mod一个，找不出什么来
全局
这闪光点太渣，毫无过渡感，差评。做一个扩散渐变的圆圈吧。SB渣渣

难度：Lonely
没有发现

难度：Wipe
有些时候，将bpm x2（184）比用1/8好这种被称为 doubled-bpm .是Unrankable的做法

最后，祝早日rank

谢mod啦~

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-09-15T17:06:07+00:00

sjoy wrote:
[Cry]
00:03:908 (2,2) - 头感觉可以加WHIS added
00:09:125 (2) -whis added
00:30:647 (4) - 好像挡住了放在00:29:669 (3) - 下面如何？前面人mod的时候就改了
01:00:321 (1) - 尾巴应该是WHIS吧？ fixed
01:08:147 (1) fin fixed
01:18:582 (1) ^ fixed

hoshisorakiseki wrote:
难度：Cry
开了倒数居然没听见倒数，取消这个吧好
00:10:756 (1) - 据aimod说这里漏了一个NC fixed
01:25:430 (3) - 想画一个心形？将下面的代码替换掉最后一行（又好像是两行）就行了：
256,304,84778,2,0,B|0:168|176:8|256:116|256:116|344:4|508:168|256:304|
256:304,1,770
自己调一下位置吧
效果

sorry我根本就是想画一个缺口了的心形

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DeletedUser_2010275

DeletedUser_2010275 2013-09-17T11:36:53+00:00

Hi ~ :3

[Lonely]

00:46:625 (3) - move to (176,248)
00:47:278 (4) - move to (128,312) for triangle
01:01:625 (2) - a little bent
01:05:538 (1) - straight slider

[Cry]
- I think DS is too close.
  00:21:843 (1,2,3) - blanket
  00:33:582 - add circle
  00:44:669 (1) - straight slider
  00:47:278 (1,2) - i think this rhythm is hard for beginner
  01:05:538 (1,2,3) - ^
  01:25:430 (3) - nice slider ~ i like it >w<
  
  [Wipe]
  - 01:04:071 (3,4,5,6) - please have a far distance.I thought this is a stream
    01:17:604 (6,7,8) - placed farther. it is confusing ;w;
    01:19:071 (2,3) - blanket
    01:28:691 (8,9) - placed farther.

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

mintong89 2013-09-17T11:48:55+00:00

sjoy wrote:
From M4M

[Lonely]
00:38:799 (5) - clap
01:08:147 (1) - - 感觉可以加默认的FIN
01:18:582 (1) - ^

[wipe]
00:03:908 (4) - whis
00:06:517 (4) - ^
00:09:125 (4) -
00:11:734 (4) - no, 怪怪的
00:38:799 (6,7) - 可以跟音乐加CLAP
00:38:636 (4,5,6) - 我没听出8分拍
00:43:854 (2,3,4) - 怀疑我听力有问题怀疑你听力有问题
00:54:125 (6) - NC 我是四拍一个NC
01:12:712 (5) - 放在01:12:223 (4) - 尾巴如何 88888破坏音效
01:15:321 (5) - http://puu.sh/4rUxp.jpg你看如何唔考虑看看

GOOD LUCK!

@-Srui- fix some, i can't quote your thread.

Thx All~

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-09-17T13:12:11+00:00

@-Srui-
I can't quote that……

00:21:843 (1,2,3) - blanket ~
00:33:582 - add circle sry no change
00:44:669 (1) - straight slider fixed
00:47:278 (1,2) - i think this rhythm is hard for beginner keep it
01:05:538 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
01:25:430 (3) - nice slider ~ i like it >w< >w<

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Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2013-09-18T12:02:19+00:00

~~米桶我爱你~~

Mod From my queue

怀疑会被全部ignore

SPOILER

[General]
~~其实我觉得BPM用184也可以;w; 毕竟这歌也蛮激昂~~果然92比较好
然后做个鬼畜的insane

[Wipe]
00:16:625 (2) - 感觉上面部分的滑条的弯度可以搞大一点
00:38:636 (4,5,6) - 这个三连直接叠在一起吧..前面跟这个长的差不多不知道会不会误判;w;
01:07:658 补个note？
01:21:191 (1) - 上移一点？感觉这样比较舒服

感觉全都在跟鼓啊;w;
可以适当跟点vocal
kiai的SV可以搞大一点我觉得..然后kiai的间距拉开一点
单点可以放点普通的↗↘↗↘之类的梗..(不知道你看懂没;w;
这样搞得有点像hard- ..

[Cry]
00:44:343 (5) -

SPOILER

DS有点小啊..都挨到一起了建议搞大
00:05:212 (4) - 这个虽然爱摩登没提示不过好像也有点too far
00:07:821 (4) - 咦故意的吗
00:31:625 (1) - 其实我觉得这两个都比原来的好看诶:O 画的不怎么好见谅||

SPOILER

00:54:125 (2) - 这里顺着滑条的轨迹走比较好点吧;w;
01:03:908 (3) - 建议移到x54y29
01:25:430 (3) - 考虑一下？

SPOILER

212,281,86571,2,0,B|345:263|400:103|325:12|223:97|223:97|143:18|72:91|61:171|102:263|226:286,1,770,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Lonely]
00:53:799 (4) - blanket
01:25:756 (2,3,4,5) - 考虑一下？

SPOILER

136,284,85756,1,8,0:0:0:0:
207,320,86408,2,0,P|213:270|195:232,1,80
277,213,87712,2,0,P|245:173|206:159,1,80
141,180,89017,1,4,0:0:0:0:

米桶我爱你
首尾呼应快夸我

GL~

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-09-18T12:14:58+00:00

Awaken wrote:
~~米桶我爱你~~我不爱你

[Cry]
00:44:343 (5) -
SPOILER
aimod是xxxxxxxxxx
DS有点小啊..都挨到一起了建议搞大 normal难度不改了
00:05:212 (4) - 这个虽然爱摩登没提示不过好像也有点too far too close
00:07:821 (4) - 咦故意的吗改成了stack
00:31:625 (1) - 其实我觉得这两个都比原来的好看诶:O 画的不怎么好见谅|| 改了个和下面差不多的
SPOILER
00:54:125 (2) - 这里顺着滑条的轨迹走比较好点吧;w; 拆成两个滑条了
01:03:908 (3) - 建议移到x54y29 keep the same
01:25:430 (3) - 考虑一下？nope 上面说过了
SPOILER
212,281,86571,2,0,B|345:263|400:103|325:12|223:97|223:97|143:18|72:91|61:171|102:263|226:286,1,770,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

change

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Autumn

501 posts

Joined October 2011

Autumn 2013-09-20T09:11:42+00:00

Hi~From M4M
Sorry for late! 中秋节回家没空来看

[Wipe]
00:27:060 (2) - 稍微调整一下形状，包好1

SPOILER

00:44:506 (5) - 这个蓝线可以放远一点，比如ctrl+G一下？
00:54:125 (6) - NC？
01:05:538 (1) - 唔..觉得滑条尾缩一下让finish落在下一个滑条头上比较好：

SPOILER

01:26:245 - 这边最好Add一下..要不然01:26:408 (1) 会被当成四分拍，因为和前面间距上的变化并不明显

[Cry]
00:14:343 (2) - 根据vocal似乎应该从00:14:669 - 开始
00:55:756 (2) - Stack：X=256 Y=332

[Lonely]
Nice

GL~

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-09-20T16:11:40+00:00

Autumn wrote:
[Cry]
00:14:343 (2) - 根据vocal似乎应该从00:14:669 - 开始嗯……想了想不改了
00:55:756 (2) - Stack：X=256 Y=332 米桶~x:256 y:331 帮我stack一下~

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-09-21T16:35:07+00:00

o3o queue req

[Lonely]

OD and HP - 1
01:08:147 (1) - i don't really understand why you ended the slider here : 01:09:125 - because the lyrics finish 01:09:451- here , i suggest you to do a long slider until 01:09:451 - o3o
01:10:756 (3) - same thing with this one finish t 1/2 later
01:18:582 (1) - same here finish it 1/2 later or add something here 01:19:886 -
01:21:191 (3) - same
01:29:017 - i would add a spinner here for having more difference in score

[Cry]

OD and HP -1
00:33:419 - what about to use a rhythm like this here:
00:39:451 (1,2,1,2) - why do you change your spacing randomly? i see no rhythm change and no other reason to do it
00:43:364 (4,5,1,2) - same here ^
00:52:495 (1,2) - this 2 are to close
00:54:778 (4,2) - stack better
01:29:180 - it would be nice after the heart at the end to have a spinner

[Wipe]

00:54:125 (6) - new combo due new lyrics
01:07:169 (4) - new combo
add a spinner at the end like i said in the others diff o3o

nice mapset o3o good luck <3

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

mintong89 2013-09-22T02:46:39+00:00

fix some thanks!!!

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-09-22T14:49:15+00:00

Lally wrote:
[Cry]
OD and HP -1 √
00:33:419 - what about to use a rhythm like this here:
considered about it and nope
00:39:451 (1,2,1,2) - why do you change your spacing randomly? i see no rhythm change and no other reason to do it just want to blanket
00:43:364 (4,5,1,2) - same here ^ ^
00:52:495 (1,2) - this 2 are to close it follows distance spacing
00:54:778 (4,2) - stack better √
01:29:180 - it would be nice after the heart at the end to have a spinner end at the same time

thanks
米桶桑~od hp-1吧

RandF

1,249 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2013-09-24T14:17:16+00:00

From my queue~

[General]

title: "wipe"
Tags suggetion
"hatsune miku Append"

[Lonely]

Good!

[Cry]

00:57:060 (4,1) - this overlap is not good ,imo
01:25:430 (3) - Fine!

[Wipe]

00:23:147 (4) - I prefer to end at 00:23:636 (suit to vocal)
01:05:538 (1,2,3) - it is better to start sliders from finish like this
00:33:256 (5,6,7) - it is difficult to find rhythm. how about avoiding stack or adjusting DS smaller?

I did Japanese Lyrics check, too. it's no problem

~Good Luck~

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-09-25T06:28:43+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
[Cry]
00:57:060 (4,1) - this overlap is not good ,imo but I don't want to change it
01:25:430 (3) - Fine! ~

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-09-25T06:32:42+00:00

almost fixed, thanks!

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-09-25T18:33:21+00:00

米桶我改名了，tag和creater's word改一下（tag里面mtbbsben还是不要去掉了？

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-09-26T09:15:47+00:00

已改啦~ ~~雖然我覺得舊的名比較好~~

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-09-26T09:22:53+00:00

mintong89 wrote:
已改啦~ ~~雖然我覺得舊的名比較好~~

想做一些改变，老id跟我太久了，总有种束缚自己的感觉

ZLOdeuka-

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ZLOdeuka- 2013-09-26T14:31:15+00:00

Hello~ from my modding Queue

[General]

● tick *Display epilepsy warning*
● add Red color for new combo

[Storyboard]

● 01:11:000 - the flashing circles here looks like they're made by accident? make them smoother or may not be as bright
● 01:22:739 (4) - ^
● 01:26:326 (3) - ^

[Lonely]

● 01:08:147 (1,3,1,3,1,3,1) - finish on the next white tick.so it will sound better

[Cry]

● 00:03:908 (2) - it would be more convenient if it is placed so http://puu.sh/4AFq1.jpg
● 00:05:212 (4,1) - can do the same distance as elsewhere at the beginning of your map? because it looks a bit wrong.
● 00:14:017 (1,2) - swap them. 00:14:017 (1) - move here 00:14:995 and 00:14:343 (2) - move here 00:14:017 . it sounds better. and 00:14:995 (2) - place at the end of the slider 00:14:017 (1)
● 00:16:625 (2,3) - ^
● 00:40:430 (2) - move here 00:40:756 (here 00:40:430 add circle and 00:42:060 remove circle)

[Wipe]

Slider Tick Rate +1

● 00:33:419 (6) - new combo

Nice map~ good luck~

mintong89

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Topic Starter

mintong89 2013-09-27T05:16:40+00:00

ZLOdeuka- wrote:
Hello~ from my modding Queue

[General]

● tick *Display epilepsy warning* guess i just delete these dot
● add Red color for new combo Red doesn't fit imo :/

[Storyboard]

● 01:11:000 - the flashing circles here looks like they're made by accident? make them smoother or may not be as bright
● 01:22:739 (4) - ^
● 01:26:326 (3) - ^

[Lonely]

● 01:08:147 (1,3,1,3,1,3,1) - finish on the next white tick.so it will sound better nope

[Wipe]

Slider Tick Rate +1 i don't see any problem need to +1 here

● 00:33:419 (6) - new combo i don't see any problem too

Nice map~ good luck~

thanks for mod!

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-09-27T05:53:40+00:00

ZLOdeuka- wrote:
[Cry]

● 00:03:908 (2) - it would be more convenient if it is placed so http://puu.sh/4AFq1.jpg I changed the place of 00:02:930 (1) -
● 00:05:212 (4,1) - can do the same distance as elsewhere at the beginning of your map? because it looks a bit wrong. nope, 4 is a blanket and 1 is a stack, small distance change is not unrankable.
● 00:14:017 (1,2) - swap them. 00:14:017 (1) - move here 00:14:995 and 00:14:343 (2) - move here 00:14:017 . it sounds better. and 00:14:995 (2) - place at the end of the slider 00:14:017 (1) ok~
● 00:16:625 (2,3) - ^ ^
● 00:40:430 (2) - move here 00:40:756 (here 00:40:430 add circle and 00:42:060 remove circle) good idea

thanks for modding

change

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Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2013-09-27T06:47:50+00:00

Hi. Random mod.

General:

-- Add "SliderBorder : 255,255,255" after colours in .osu file.

Lonely:

00:04:886 (3) - Deleting Whistle will sound better.
00:25:756 (2) - ^
00:33:582 (5) - Maybe add a clap?
01:08:147 (1) - Add Finish at the start.
01:18:582 (1) - ^
01:26:408 (3) - I suggest NC because this is a different rhythm with the previous drums.

Cry:

00:05:212 (4) - Strongly recommend a better distance. Yes it's not unrankable, but it really feels confusing as a normal diff, imo.
00:25:430 (2) - Making this 3 notes will fit the lyric better.
00:36:843 (1) - 1/4 repeat doesn't fits here. There's a beat rather in 00:36:680.
00:40:756 (3) - Missing clap at the reverse.
00:42:712 (2) - (1) seems a reasonable distance for the blanket, but similarly, this is quite hard to read. Maybe make this a 1.2x too.
00:47:278 (1) - This feels quite tricky. Suggest a 1/4 reduction.

Wipe:

00:29:017 (1) - Unlike previous parts, reducing 1/4 will fit the lyric here.
00:33:745 (7) - Consider placing closer to the previous slider. I think this is too hard to approach.
00:39:941 - Add a note

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-09-27T07:21:51+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Cry:

00:05:212 (4) - Strongly recommend a better distance. Yes it's not unrankable, but it really feels confusing as a normal diff, imo. :< ahhh... all of modders said that-.- I changed it...
00:25:430 (2) - Making this 3 notes will fit the lyric better. it doesn't matter =v=
00:36:843 (1) - 1/4 repeat doesn't fits here. There's a beat rather in 00:36:680. sry but no change
00:40:756 (3) - Missing clap at the reverse. My mistake, fixed
00:42:712 (2) - (1) seems a reasonable distance for the blanket, but similarly, this is quite hard to read. Maybe make this a 1.2x too. changed the flow
00:47:278 (1) - This feels quite tricky. Suggest a 1/4 reduction. ok

thx

cry

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mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

mintong89 2013-09-27T07:50:03+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Hi. Random mod.

General:

-- Add "SliderBorder : 255,255,255" after colours in .osu file. oops i'm forgot. added!

Lonely:

00:04:886 (3) - Deleting Whistle will sound better.
00:25:756 (2) - ^
00:33:582 (5) - Maybe add a clap?
01:08:147 (1) - Add Finish at the start.
01:18:582 (1) - ^
01:26:408 (3) - I suggest NC because this is a different rhythm with the previous drums. all fixed!

Wipe:

00:29:017 (1) - Unlike previous parts, reducing 1/4 will fit the lyric here. generally i think it's fun here, i will consider it
00:33:745 (7) - Consider placing closer to the previous slider. I think this is too hard to approach. fixed
00:39:941 - Add a note sure

really good mod, thanks!

Hellgert

489 posts

Joined May 2012

Hellgert 2013-09-29T02:00:07+00:00

form queue

a lil check for your map only,cauz anything look fine

[kiai check]
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01:17:604 stop kiai
0:18:582 kiai

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2013-10-02T02:52:15+00:00

Ello ^^ Random mod!

[Lonely]

AR +1

00:05:538 (4) - NC
00:11:408 (4) - ^
00:57:712 (5) - ^
01:02:930 (3) - ^
01:17:930 (4) - Add finish

[Cry]

AR +1

00:55:104 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:02:278 (2) - Add finish on the tail.
01:05:538 (1) - Add finish on the head.

[Wipe]
Looks perfecto to me

Cute BG ^^
Hope this helps~!

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

mintong89 2013-10-02T05:08:14+00:00

no fixed orz

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-02T12:17:46+00:00

also no fixed orz

Pandiar

391 posts

Joined February 2012

Pandiar 2013-10-04T08:06:46+00:00

hi~ from my queue

[Wipe]
01:07:495 - how about this?

SPOILER

01:10:756 (1) - add finish start point
01:13:364 (1) - ^
01:21:191 (1) - ^
01:23:799 (1) - ^
01:23:799 (1) - ^
01:29:343~01:31:625 add spinner?

[Cry]
hitsound(finish) is same as Wipe diff
01:29:343~01:31:625 add spinner?

[Lonely]
hitsound(finish) is same as Wipe diff
01:29:343~01:31:625 add spinner?

sorry for short mod

nice map and shot star~XD
good luck!

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-04T08:36:02+00:00

Pandiar wrote:
[Cry]
hitsound(finish) is same as Wipe diff
01:29:343~01:31:625 add spinner?

If mintong89 add finish or spinners, then I will add it.

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2013-10-04T08:39:21+00:00

M4M
[General]
Uncheck "Letterbox" since there is no Break Time.
[Lonely]
Placement
00:55:104(1,2,3,4,5) make a perfect star placement on the center.

320,304,55104,5,6,3:2:0:0:
256,352,55756,1,8,3:2:0:0:
192,304,56408,1,2,3:2:0:0:
216,228,57060,1,8,3:2:0:0:
296,228,57712,2,0,P|308:184|300:140,1,80,2|8,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:

Hit Sonud
00:04:886(3) add whistle for pattern
[Cry]
Placement
00:14:995(2) stack at end of slider looks a bit difficult for Normal diff, imo.
00:19:234(1,3) put to be symmetrical like this?

SPOILER

00:38:473(3) to be down the tail, maybe it would be nice flow.

SPOILER

00:54:125(2) spacing looks narrow, 2 grid down.
00:57:712(1) spacing is too far, so move like this?

SPOILER

01:25:430(1) maybe you can make perfect <3 mark, fight.
Rhythm
01:17:604(2) I suppose kick slider sounds better to follow the vocal, so maybe like this?

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
01:02:278(2) add finish at end.
01:05:538(1) add finish at head
[Wipe]
Placement
00:08:799(3,4) I suppose this jump looks a bit weird, if you aim to jump you can put it between (3) and (4). not (2) and (3). it would be nice flow.

SPOILER