1. Advanced (4.83 stars, 224 notes)
2. Basic (3.04 stars, 102 notes)
3. Delis' Extra (5 stars, 336 notes)
4. Extreme (5 stars, 309 notes)

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M
[General]
Audio-Lead-Inが1996のものと2000のものがあるので2000へ統一　fixed
曲の終わりを01:31:928へ統一　fixed
[Basic]
最低難易度なので、配置するときはDistant Snapを使ってスペーシングを統一しましょう。見た感じリマップが必要なので、配置以外に関してmoddingします
NCの間隔をもう少し速めましょう、Normalで10コンボ近いのはやや多いです　4コンボくらいを中心にfixed
Rhythm
00:28:376 不要な緑線　fixed
00:28:771(1) スピナーの後すぐにnote持ってくるのは難しいです、前のスピナーの終点を00:27:981へ　fixed
00:38:639(5,6)やや打ちにくいと思うのでこんな風に　fixed　

SPOILER

　
Hit Sonud
00:18:902(1) 終点にfinish　fixed
00:23:639(7) ^　fixed
01:06:665(1)始点にfinish　fixed　
[Advanced]
Placement
00:06:271(1,2) NC入れ替え　fixed
00:53:442(1,2)^　fixed
00:18:113(6) ここだけやや狭いです　fixed　
01:00:152(1) HPバーにかかっているので、もう少しdown　fixed
01:30:152(5) スペーシングを揃えて、x:224 y:192　fixed
Rhythm
00:21:073(5)スライダーの中点にあるボーカルを拾いたので、リバーススライダーかnoteに変えたほうが良いです　fixed
00:43:71 ここのドラム音を拾いたいのでこんな感じなど　fixed

SPOILER

　
01:28:968(1)このスライダーは曲もボーカルもフォロー出来ていないので、01:28:771から始めた方がいいです　fixed
Hit Sonud
00:24:823(6) 始点にclap追加　リズム的にはそうだと思うのですが、その前と次のコンボもclapで合わないと感じたのでWhistleにしました
00:25:613(1) finish追加　fixed
01:06:665(1)^　fixed
01:19:297(1)^　fixed
00:26:994(6)始点にfinish追加　fixed
00:47:718(3)^　fixed
[EX]
NCパターンが結構ランダムでわかりにくいので、何か目印を付けて揃えていくといいです。例えば8拍子毎に付けるなど　8拍子を参考に付け直してみました
Placement
00:03:310(8) 形が崩れているのでひし形っぽく配置　fixed　

SPOILER

00:14:955(7,8) スライダーの重なりを綺麗にしてジャンプを設けるといい感じ？ fixed　

SPOILER

00:18:902(1,3)NC入れ替え。finish音からNCを打つと見栄えもよくわかりやすいです　fixed　
00:41:007(1,4)^　fixed　
00:54:334(7,1)^　fixed　
00:39:428(2) 前の(6)スライダーの終点にスタックさせてみては　fixed　
00:45:152(2) Ctrl+Gでジャンプ ジャンプ後の00:45:744 (3) をほんの少しだけ下げてfixed
00:59:560(1,2,3) 少し打ちづらいのでこんな風に移動してみては

SPOILER

　
配置は似たような感じで少し形を変えてfixed　

SPOILER

01:00:349(6) NC　fixed　
01:04:889(5) ブランケットを綺麗に　fixed　
Rhythm
00:29:363(1) 中点のボーカル音を拾いたいのでこんな感じなど　fixed　

SPOILER

01:07:257(5) ここも中点のfinish音を拾うような音取りへ　スライダーを短くしてfixed

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:23:639(8)終点にfinish　fixed　
00:25:613(1) 始点にfinish fixed　
00:26:994(6)^　fixed　
01:19:297(8)^　fixed　
01:06:665(1) finish追加　fixed

1. Clear.

1. 00:09:626 (8) - ここのように前のスライダーと重なっている場合は、こっちも少し曲げてやると見栄え良くなります。
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:16:139 (1) - 始端にfinish
   
3. 00:18:507 (4) - clap入れてカッコよくしましょう
   
4. 00:22:455 (1) - finish
   
5. 00:24:823 (5) - これもclap入れましょう
   
6. 00:27:488 (3) - 前のノートに近すぎます。どうせならこの辺りまで移動したほうが綺麗に見えます。
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:28:771 - ここから２サビ付近まで全くClapが入っていないのは何故でしょう？いくらでも入ると思うので入れてみてください。
   
   
   　　00:28:771 (1) - 終端
   　　00:29:955 (4) - 始端
   　　00:30:744 (7) -
   　　00:31:534 (9) - 始端
   　　00:32:323 (4) - 始端
   　　00:32:915 (5) - 終端
   　　00:33:902 (7) - 始端
   　　00:34:692 (10) - 始端
   
   
   まだありますがこんな感じです。
   
   
   　　
8. 00:33:310 (6) - (5)のスライダーとのスペーシング差が美しくないです。3~4gridくらい上に移動することで修正できます。
   
9. 00:37:455 (1) - NC削除
10. 00:37:652 (2) - ボーカル的にこっちNCしたほうがいいです
    
11. 00:41:402 (1) - スライダーの丸っこい所が歪んでて汚く見えます。こういうスライダー作るときは、例外を除いて中点を真ん中に持ってくるように意識して、常に丸く作るように心がけると良いと思います。
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 00:45:744 (5) - 多分これも始端にfinish入ります。
    
13. 00:57:192 (1) - １サビのとこは裏でシンバル聞こえたんですがこっちは聞こえないのでfinish入れるか微妙なんですが、統一するという形で入れてもいいかもしれません。
    
14. 01:04:889 (5) - (3)に若干かかってて見栄えが悪いので左上に少しだけ移動しましょう。 あとついでに1サビのところでは入ってたので始端にAdd finish
    
15. 01:15:744 (1,2) - NC逆だと思います　2にAdd finish
    
16. 01:17:521 (2) - こっちもfinish
    
17. 01:28:573 (3) - 終端にfinish
    
18. 01:30:349 (1) - 最後はwhistleいらないと思います。
    
    whistleについてですが、この曲のようにピアノが目立つ場合はそれに沿って付けていくと良いと思いました。現状では何に合わせて付けているかイマイチわかりませんでした。

1. 00:16:139 (1) - 裏でシンバル鳴ってるのでデフォのSoft-finish追加
   
2. 00:21:863 (6) - ここのClapは少し浮いてる気がしました。削除しましょう
   
3. 00:26:994 (2) - 音量控えめのFinish入れると曲によく合うと思います。
   
4. 00:28:178 - Do not use 5% volume. スピナー後にすぐnoteが来る場合5%のボリュームだとプレイヤーを混乱させる十分な要素として考えられます。15%くらいにしておくと良いと思います。
   
5. 00:45:744 (5) - 始端にAdd finish
   
   全体的に気になるところは特にありませんでした。

1. 00:16:139 (1) - 始端にfinish
   
2. 00:23:836 (4) - ^
   
3. 00:28:376 (8) - スライダーの流れが逆です。こんな感じの配置にしてみてはどうでしょう？
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:04:889 (4) - add finish
   
5. 01:09:823 (5) - ^
   
6. 01:12:981 (1) - スタックされておらず、かなり中途半端なスペーシングで配置されていたので、こんな感じにしてみては？
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:16:139 (1) - finish
   
8. 01:17:521 (5) - 始端にadd finish
   
9. 01:30:349 (1) - whistle削除
   
   Extremeで書いたいくつかのHitsoundのModとClapのとこは省いてます。

1. 00:00:350 (1,2) - どこの音をとってるかわかりませんでした。物足りない感じはしますが、現状よりはこっちがいいと思います。
   
   
2. 00:04:692 (2) - これも終端の位置の音が気になりました。取れる音が少ないのですごく難しいんですが、自分だったら00:04:692 - から00:06:073 - までスピナーに・・・と思いました。
   
3. 00:35:086 - 難しい位置ですがadd noteしてfinishを入れたいです。
   
4. 00:47:718 (1) - finish
   
5. 01:04:692 (2) - 終端にfinish
   
6. 01:28:968 (5) - これを01:28:771 - こっちに移動
   
7. 01:29:165 - こんな感じにしてみてはどうでしょう？こっちの方が音楽にも合っており、初心者にも優しいと思います。
   
   
8. 01:30:152 (1) - whistle削除

Guy wrote:

[Delis]

1. 00:16:139 (1) - 裏でシンバル鳴ってるのでデフォのSoft-finish追加 keep ;.;
   
2. 00:21:863 (6) - ここのClapは少し浮いてる気がしました。削除しましょう ちょっと変えました！
   
3. 00:26:994 (2) - 音量控えめのFinish入れると曲によく合うと思います。 add ~
   
4. 00:28:178 - Do not use 5% volume. スピナー後にすぐnoteが来る場合5%のボリュームだとプレイヤーを混乱させる十分な要素として考えられます。15%くらいにしておくと良いと思います。 20%に変更~
   
5. 00:45:744 (5) - 始端にAdd finish ok~!
   
   全体的に気になるところは特にありませんでした。

Guy wrote:

Hi! in-game request :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]

1. Clear.

[Extreme]

1. 00:09:626 (8) - ここのように前のスライダーと重なっている場合は、こっちも少し曲げてやると見栄え良くなります。　fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:16:139 (1) - 始端にfinish　fixed
   
3. 00:18:507 (4) - clap入れてカッコよくしましょう　fixed
   
4. 00:22:455 (1) - finish　fixed
   
5. 00:24:823 (5) - これもclap入れましょう　fixed
   
6. 00:27:488 (3) - 前のノートに近すぎます。どうせならこの辺りまで移動したほうが綺麗に見えます。　fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:28:771 - ここから２サビ付近まで全くClapが入っていないのは何故でしょう？いくらでも入ると思うので入れてみてください。
   
   
   　　00:28:771 (1) - 終端
   　　00:29:955 (4) - 始端
   　　00:30:744 (7) -
   　　00:31:534 (9) - 始端
   　　00:32:323 (4) - 始端
   　　00:32:915 (5) - 終端
   　　00:33:902 (7) - 始端
   　　00:34:692 (10) - 始端
   
   
   まだありますがこんな感じです。
   
   盛り上がる部分だけでいいかなと思ってましたがやっぱり全部入れたほうが自然でいい感じでした＞＜　all fixed　
   　　
8. 00:33:310 (6) - (5)のスライダーとのスペーシング差が美しくないです。3~4gridくらい上に移動することで修正できます。よくわからなかったですがとりあえず(6)を少し上に移動させてみました！
   
9. 00:37:455 (1) - NC削除　fixed
10. 00:37:652 (2) - ボーカル的にこっちNCしたほうがいいです　fixed
    
11. 00:41:402 (1) - スライダーの丸っこい所が歪んでて汚く見えます。こういうスライダー作るときは、例外を除いて中点を真ん中に持ってくるように意識して、常に丸く作るように心がけると良いと思います。　fixed
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 00:45:744 (5) - 多分これも始端にfinish入ります。　fixed
    
13. 00:57:192 (1) - １サビのとこは裏でシンバル聞こえたんですがこっちは聞こえないのでfinish入れるか微妙なんですが、統一するという形で入れてもいいかもしれません。　fixed
    
14. 01:04:889 (5) - (3)に若干かかってて見栄えが悪いので左上に少しだけ移動しましょう。 あとついでに1サビのところでは入ってたので始端にAdd finish　fixed
    
15. 01:15:744 (1,2) - NC逆だと思います　2にAdd finish　fixed
    
16. 01:17:521 (2) - こっちもfinish　fixed
    
17. 01:28:573 (3) - 終端にfinish　fixed
    
18. 01:30:349 (1) - 最後はwhistleいらないと思います。　fixed
    
    whistleについてですが、この曲のようにピアノが目立つ場合はそれに沿って付けていくと良いと思いました。現状では何に合わせて付けているかイマイチわかりませんでした。

　whistleは音感がないというセンスがなくて、現状は自分が思うがままに付けてる感じです・・・。もう少し色々試してアドバイスどおりうまく合わせられるようにしてみます；３；



[Advanced]

1. 00:16:139 (1) - 始端にfinish　fixed
   
2. 00:23:836 (4) - ^　fixed
   
3. 00:28:376 (8) - スライダーの流れが逆です。こんな感じの配置にしてみてはどうでしょう？　fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:04:889 (4) - add finish　fixed
   
5. 01:09:823 (5) - ^　fixed
   
6. 01:12:981 (1) - スタックされておらず、かなり中途半端なスペーシングで配置されていたので、こんな感じにしてみては？　fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:16:139 (1) - finish　fixed
   
8. 01:17:521 (5) - 始端にadd finish　fixed
   
9. 01:30:349 (1) - whistle削除　fixed
   
   Extremeで書いたいくつかのHitsoundのModとClapのとこは省いてます。

[Basic]

1. 00:00:350 (1,2) - どこの音をとってるかわかりませんでした。物足りない感じはしますが、現状よりはこっちがいいと思います。　fixed
   
   
2. 00:04:692 (2) - これも終端の位置の音が気になりました。取れる音が少ないのですごく難しいんですが、自分だったら00:04:692 - から00:06:073 - までスピナーに・・・と思いました。 スピナーのあとすぐnoteなのでbasicにしては難しいかもしれませんが一応fixed
   
3. 00:35:086 - 難しい位置ですがadd noteしてfinishを入れたいです。 スライダーで繋いで音を取れるようにfixed
   
4. 00:47:718 (1) - finish fixed
   
5. 01:04:692 (2) - 終端にfinish fixed
   
6. 01:28:968 (5) - これを01:28:771 - こっちに移動　basicにしては難しいかなと思ったので01:28:376 (4) - を短いキックにしてfixed
   
7. 01:29:165 - こんな感じにしてみてはどうでしょう？こっちの方が音楽にも合っており、初心者にも優しいと思います。　　fixed
   　
   
8. 01:30:152 (1) - whistle削除　fixed

後半疲れて手抜きModになってしまった・・
Good Luck!

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

DELIS

00:44:363 (5) - Increase the volume for this note, there is no sound at all oops,I was wrong the volume on this part ,volume rose to 30%.

ついでに、一部修正しました!~

1. AI-MODをみるとずれているnoteがあるのでcheckを
2. 00:08:047 (3) - end at 00:08:639
3. 00:16:928 (2) - Ctrl+G 　 一番簡単な難易度なのでカーソル運びに易しい配置が良いと思います
4. 00:35:086 (5) - NC
5. 00:33:507 (3,5) - このoverlapは避けるべき
6. 01:10:218 (1) - start at 01:10:021
7. 01:19:692 (1) - 何かhitsoundがあった方がいいです。個人的にはwhistle
8. 01:22:455 (1,3) - 低難易度でこういうoverlapは避けた方が良いと思います
9. 01:24:034 (3,1) - ^
10. 01:25:613 (1,3) - ^

1. 00:02:718 (5,1) - stack？
2. 00:08:047 (6,9) - このoverlapは避けるべき
3. 00:19:297 (11) - NC　そして00:19:889 (1) - はremove NC
4. 00:29:363 (2,1) - このoverlapもできれば避けた方が良いと思います
5. 00:32:126 (1,2) - これの方が好きです
   
6. 00:42:784 (5) - もう少し反時計回りに角度をつけた方が良いと思います
7. 00:59:363 (7) - 00:58:573 (5) - の対称的なsliderがベター
8. 01:00:744 (3) - stackするなら01:00:547 (2) -
9. 01:12:586 (5) - Ctrl+Gで01:12:981 (1) - があまり隠れないように
10. 01:15:152 (7,8) - 重ならない配置が良いと思います
11. 01:26:205 (2,4) - stackした方がきれい

1. 00:16:139 (1,2) - 対称にした方が私は好きです
2. 00:39:428 (7) -　move to x:386 y:123　 00:38:639 (5) - とのstack にしてはずれすぎて見えたので
3. 00:40:810 (6) - 00:40:021 (2) - とstackしては？
4. 00:41:007 (7,8,9) - 00:39:428 (7) - とstackしては？
5. 01:19:692 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Star-Patternならぜひ正五角形を
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   168,180,79692,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   337,137,79889,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   225,271,80086,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   237,97,80284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   330,245,80481,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   168,180,80679,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   168,180,80876,2,0,P|216:172|264:184,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

1. 01:04:099 (1,2,3) - 01:03:507 (1,2,3) - と同じ配置をずらした方が良いかなと思います

RandomEffect wrote:

[Delis]

1. 01:04:099 (1,2,3) - 01:03:507 (1,2,3) - と同じ配置をずらした方が良いかなと思います

その部分は、わざとずらしてますので変更しないでおきます。
今のほうが、プレイしていてやりやすいので。

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

Hi from M4M


BASIC

00:21:863 (5) - Suggest moving it to 00:21:665, to make the rhythm easier for beginners　fixed

00:22:060 (6) - Add a note here, but only if you follow ^ fixed

00:35:086 (5) - Suggest to NC here, 8 combo might be too long for beginner fixed

01:14:560 (3) - Remove finish/make it quieter i think it need finish sound so no change.it will change if there is same suggestion,

ADVANCED

00:30:152 (1) - Stack this slider with the tail end of 00:29:560 (2) - good! fixed

00:43:771 (1) - Stack this slider with the beginning of 00:42:784 (5) - nice! fixed

01:01:139 (4) - Suggest NC this because its a new pattern　fixed and remove 01:01:731 NC

01:29:757 (3,4,5) - Suggest you make these notes closer, too far apart　changed a little

SPOILER

EXTREME

00:04:099 (2) - Stack this slider with 00:03:310 (8) - good! fixed

01:13:771 (3) - Lower the position of this slider, it overlaps with 01:12:981 (1) - fixed

Good luck

RandomEffect wrote:

Hi~
よろしければM4M please~

[Basic]

1. AI-MODをみるとずれているnoteがあるのでcheckを　fixed
2. 00:08:047 (3) - end at 00:08:639 fixed
3. 00:16:928 (2) - Ctrl+G 　 一番簡単な難易度なのでカーソル運びに易しい配置が良いと思います 流れがよくなりました！fixed
4. 00:35:086 (5) - NC
5. 00:33:507 (3,5) - このoverlapは避けるべき 確かにそうなのですが配置が思いつかないので一旦保留で
6. 01:10:218 (1) - start at 01:10:021 少し変えてfixed
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:19:692 (1) - 何かhitsoundがあった方がいいです。個人的にはwhistle　いいですね！fixed
8. 01:22:455 (1,3) - 低難易度でこういうoverlapは避けた方が良いと思います
9. 01:24:034 (3,1) - ^
10. 01:25:613 (1,3) - ^　3つともできる限り直しました

[Advanced]

1. 00:02:718 (5,1) - stack？nice!fixed
2. 00:08:047 (6,9) - このoverlapは避けるべき　大幅に変えました！
3. 00:19:297 (11) - NC　そして00:19:889 (1) - はremove NC　fixed
4. 00:29:363 (2,1) - このoverlapもできれば避けた方が良いと思いますここは今のままがすきなのでno changeで
5. 00:32:126 (1,2) - これの方が好きです いいですね！fixed
   
6. 00:42:784 (5) - もう少し反時計回りに角度をつけた方が良いと思います　少し拡げてfixed
7. 00:59:363 (7) - 00:58:573 (5) - の対称的なsliderがベター コピペで反転させてみたけど大丈夫かな？fixed
8. 01:00:744 (3) - stackするなら01:00:547 (2) - stackは今のままのほうがいいかなと思ったのでそのあとのnoteをボーカルに合わせてスライダーに変更しました
9. 01:12:586 (5) - Ctrl+Gで01:12:981 (1) - があまり隠れないように スライダーの終点の方向を考えて次が隠れないように少し変えました
10. 01:15:152 (7,8) - 重ならない配置が良いと思います fixed
11. 01:26:205 (2,4) - stackした方がきれい fixed

[Extreme]

1. 00:16:139 (1,2) - 対称にした方が私は好きです fixed
2. 00:39:428 (7) -　move to x:386 y:123　 00:38:639 (5) - とのstack にしてはずれすぎて見えたので ずれてました；－；　fixed
3. 00:40:810 (6) - 00:40:021 (2) - とstackしては？綺麗になりました！fixed
4. 00:41:007 (7,8,9) - 00:39:428 (7) - とstackしては？ fixed!
5. 01:19:692 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Star-Patternならぜひ正五角形を 綺麗ですね！fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   168,180,79692,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   337,137,79889,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   225,271,80086,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   237,97,80284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   330,245,80481,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   168,180,80679,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   168,180,80876,2,0,P|216:172|264:184,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

時計の音が素敵ですね～
hitsoundに使いたいくらいです
~Good Luck~

AnreFM wrote:

[Delis]
00:53:244 (1,4) - Make it like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1008857 hmm.. i don't like that ,sorry no change.
01:02:521 (3,4) - Make them parallel? neater　if i accept your suggestion,will be bad flow imo. no change, but that's pretty good to look at.
01:11:205 (1,2,1,2,3) - Star pattern is more neater than this ;_; same as above.the star pattern is so nice.
i tried it,but that was so boring for me. sorry no change

AnreFM wrote:

Hi Pandiar, m4m~
Okay hope this helps

[Basic]
00:06:665 (1) - IThis note is really close to spinner end which is very hard to beginners, try to end the spinner at 00:05:876 -
i think it is too short spinner.but i will change if there is same suggestion
00:09:428 (2) - Avoid the overlap with 00:08:047 (3) - move to x64 y124 to get a nice distance with 00:08:047 (3,1) - don't forget rearrange the distance snap with the notes after it owo nice! fixed
00:09:034 (1) - Remove NC here, NC at 00:10:218 (3) - instead and remove the NC at 00:11:007 - after it. Follows vocal 00:11:007 (1) - straight doesn't fit with vocal, try making it curvy ouo fixed
00:13:771 (2) - ah the overlap with 00:12:586 (3) - doesn't looked good and feels cramped, move it to x268 y228 for better flow and look ovo
move 00:13:771 (2)
00:18:902 (1) - Remove NC here, NC at 00:19:692 (2) - instead it is stack.i think it needs NC so no change
00:20:086 (3,4) - These two doesn't need to be too curved, it breaks the flow and doesn't look really nice, make it less curvy fixed curved a little
00:21:665 (4) - This note feels weird to be stacked, still follows the same rhythm as before. Distance this note normally, but keep the stack on 00:22:060 (5,1) - It fits because of it follows the instrumental ouo　 move to left 00:22:060 (6)
00:32:718 (2) - Make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1008797 looks and plays better fixed
00:39:823 (3) - Make it curvy, fit with the vocal fixed curved a little
00:45:744 (2) - the double repeat might be unexpected to beginners, try arranging the note with circle instead fixed
00:48:902 (2) - repeat +1? fit with vocal fixed
00:50:876 (4) - NC fixed
01:04:692 (2) - blanket 01:03:507 (1) - ? fixed
01:11:205 (5) - Blanket 01:10:021 (4) - better ouo, raise the tail fixed
01:25:613 (1) - move to x288 y132 for better flow little change and fixed
01:14:560 (3) - Make it curvy, plays better fixed

[Advanced]
00:26:994 (6,7) - make them parallel fixed
00:21:073 (6,7) - ^ fixed
00:37:652 (7) - NC here, different rhythm fixed
01:00:547 (2) - NC here instead of 01:00:152 (1) - fixed
01:08:047 (1) - Raise the tail to avoid overlaps with 01:07:455 (6) - fixed a little
01:09:823 (5,6,7,8,9) - Why no star pattern? D: i like this pattern but it will change if there is same suggestion

[Extreme]
00:46:336 (7) - the kick fells weird here, I can't hear anything :v　replace
01:04:889 (5) - Avoid overlap with 01:04:297 (3) - doesn't look nice ):i don't good idea ,reservation

Sorry for the short mod on the higher difficulties, I have point them all in Basic and I hope you get it
Good map overall, Good Luck~

brian5574 wrote:

おはよう～
saw this fromn the modding queue
「日本語なんってうまく言えません、ごめんね～」
since i'm really new to osu and i still not good at it,
i can only give some advices in [Basic]
hope this can help~
btw, if u prefer saying Japanese, I think I can pretty much understand them, so...yep~
here we go~

these are simply advices
these are detailed advices that can vary a lot and u can basicly ignore

um...
the AiMod says kiai time is toggled less than 15sec, so...um... not sure if u have checked that yet.
00:04:297 maybe add a note at sometime and somewhere like this:

just feels like the player missed out something if u miss out this note...


00:06:665 00:09:034 suggest add beats and change to something like this? like...um...just feels better
screen shots after suggestions:


00:07:455 move this note to a position in the screenshot with distance snap (again, just feels better to me)
00:07:652 00:07:849 00:08:047 , suggest add three continuous beats at these tree points, with distance snap, then move the slider after it to 00:08:244 the note on 00:09:034 which is after the slider just mentioned, looks too far now but it actually feels quite fit for me


00:33:310 the sound？　が starts here and i think it might be a little bit awkward to miss out this sound, maybe u can try add a note on it.
00:37:257 again, um...the sound？　て starts here and i think since 感謝して is a whole word, might be strange to leave out a note at this point, suggest add one.
00:39:626 the sound れ in sthsthふれ is also missed out, suggesting adding a note at the exact middle of the note before it and the slider after it.
00:43:968 00:44:165 00:44:363 まもる finally got the word~ i think it is a quite important word in the lyrics and um... i think u can add three notes on these three points to fit the lyrics. It kind of make more sense to me. i.e. like this

from 00:47:718 to 00:53:244 : (PS: I really feel this part empty and I changed it quite a lot, um... i'll post a screen shot on what i've changed in this part)
so um...
i changed this section to something like this:





and the words below is just for reference i.e.not fully changed
00:47:718 ,00:48:902 between these two points, and
00:49:297,00:50:481 between these two points, the song keep going a lot but there is no notes, suggesting adding some notes. i.e. a note at 00:49:692 at the left hand side of the map. OR maybe BETTER, change the slider from 00:48:902 to a two way slider [the one that come back] then add a note little fixed
00:50:284 suggest add a single note, as it is the start the the sentence[in the lyrics]
the slider from 00:50876 is suggested to start from 00:50:678
00:52:060 suggest add a note in the middle of the end of the previous slider and the start of the second. for two benefits: 1.so the two points are not so far away. 2. so the word　つずく can have a note on every beat.
00:55:613 five continuous slider with all the same length are put together, it actually looked pretty good to me now, but when I first played, it's um...kinda boring and looks not so good? just saying...anyways. little fixed
01:04:692 suggest move the slider left-down a little bit, the present one kinda of affecting the fluency of the map[i.e. going far up, then the next note is quite low at the bottom far away.]

oh...um...just saying, i played the [advanced] as well and i find this part kinda of confusing and...um...ya...
the part between 00:42:192 00:43:178 is um...really confusing??? might just might[cauz i can't really play insanes] be disliked by the BATs... um....sorry,reservation
um...ya...

general impression:
I love ur mapping style, which fits the song very well~ not like some other mappers have straight as sliders everywhere...

終わり？



btw, i really like ur avatar, which anime is she from?


本当にありがとうございました~
mappingのことがんばって~

Losertic wrote:

Delis

1. choice
   1. 00:14:560 (1) - Remove NC, 00:14:955 (3) - NC?
   2. 00:14:363 (1) - NC, 00:14:560 (2) - Remove NC? there is just a down beat owo
2. 00:22:060 (7) - move (257,248)?... maybe too hard? not hard,but i changed a little.
3. 00:33:310 (1) - Remove NC, 00:34:494 (1) - NC? No. D:
4. 00:50:876 (1) - move (389,294)? because same distance - 00:50:876 (1,2,3) lol,fixed

Losertic wrote:

Hello!

From M4M.

General

1. Pass.

Basic

1. check distance? - 00:35:876 (2) oh,thanks! fixed
2. 00:09:428 (1) - NC, 00:10:218 (2) - Remove NC? fixed
3. 00:12:192 (4) - move (186,201) fixed
4. 00:46:534 (3,4) - change this? - add slider 00:46:534 ~ 00:46:928 . and add 1 reverse. um...i think not fit so no change
   
5. 00:50:086 - add note? nice! fixed
6. 00:57:192 (1) - change roundly slider shape? fixed
7. 00:59:955 (5) - move (476,52)? move 388,192
8. 01:10:021 (4) - NC? fixed
9. 01:18:507 (3) - move slider end at 01:19:099 (use 01:16:139 (1) - this slider), 01:19:297 (1) - move spinner start at 01:19:297 fixed
10. 01:25:613 (1,3) - overlap fixed
11. 01:29:165 (5) - move (432,183) good! fixed

Advanced

1. 00:04:692 (3,6) - overlap. fixed
2. 00:09:626 (6) - remove slider, and 00:09:034 (5) - add 1 reverse? i think it is better now
3. 00:36:665 (5) - move (335,66). or move another way. overlap. remap
4. 01:00:152 (9) - NC, 01:00:547 (1) - Remove NC? reservation
5. 01:07:455 (6,1) - overlap fixed
6. 01:16:336 (2) - move (96,164)? change a little 108,152
   01:18:507 (7,8,2) - overlap.change little

Extreme

1. 00:44:165 (1,2,3) - i think more far away note. i think it is fit no change
2. 00:43:376 (7,2,3,4,5) - perpect square? change little
3. 01:29:363 (5,6,7,8) - ^ change little

S.T.A.R

mintong89 wrote:

hi

Black: Normal suggestion
Red: Unrankable issue / Highly Suggestion

[Extreme]

00:04:099 (2) - i suggest you CTRL+G on this, currently flow is really bad.　Fixed
00:04:692 (3) - if you accept above mod, please CTRL+G this too. i think it is better now
00:07:257 (2,3,4) - i recommend you make a line of this. you can see below picture:

SPOILER

i want to make curve line
00:17:324 (1) - you should unNC here and NC 00:17:521 (2) - . Fixed
00:37:652 (1,3) - stack with 00:37:060 (8) - to look more clean. forgot! thanks.Fixed
01:16:139 (1) - please make far to avoid click wrong. (the player might be read as 1/2 with 01:15:744 (8) - )　change a little

[Delis]

fine

[Advanced]

00:11:797 (7) - make far a bit to no stack with 00:11:402 (6) - ? Fixed
00:56:599 (8) - weird slider.Fixed

Basic is fine too
GL!

Pagno wrote:

Hello, from your queue!

[Basic]
00:03:507 (1) - It's very hard for a beginner to handle spinners like this; I'd recommend placing a slider long 3½ beats instead that is last note(spin) sorry no change

00:08:047 (3) - Move this slider on the timeline so that it starts ½ beat before um..i think fit Vocal sorry no change

00:09:034 (4) - Stack this onto 00:09:428 (1) and make it NewCombo, removing it from the slideri want to avoid stack this diff as much as possible

00:29:560 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'd really suggest to remap this part, keeping in mind that since it's an easy difficulty the notes should start on the white tick only and not on the red tick: try following the drums instead of the vocals, just like you did in the part after　Fixed

[Advanced]
00:19:198 (10) - Since it's an easier difficulty, I think that it would be better to don't put any kind of streams/triplets at all um..it is one point..so no change

00:37:455 (7) - NewCombo here Fixed and remove NC 00:37:652 (2)
00:37:652 (1) - and remove it from here ^

[Extreme]
00:11:402 (1,2) - What about placing a longstream here instead which lasts until 00:12:192 (3)? i like that attern sorry no change

00:36:665 (7) - This one isn't right, make some pattern which got this: sorry no change but change a little


00:44:165 (1,2) - Wouldn't it be better to make them like this?


01:10:613 (3) - Stack this better on 01:09:823 (1)'s end Fixed

Very nice map, I like your style!
Good luck!

-APXH wrote:

M4M

[Extreme]
-Personally, being a primarily an Insane mapper, I think you should call this something that's a synonym of "Hard"
-Is it just me, or is the AR too slow for this one...
00:36:665 (5) - I think 1/2 slider will be fine, not 3/4 Keep
00:44:165 (1,2,3) - Space them out, it's confusing if there is same suggestion,i ll change it
00:47:718 (1) - Idea: Why don't you match this slider's end with the slider end of 00:46:928 (6) it is too near next combo
01:08:047 (7) - Doesn't really look to pleasant to the eye um...keep
01:08:836 (2) - Again, 1/2 slider is fine sry...keep

[Advanced]
00:09:626 (6) - Move away from tail of combo 5
00:42:784 (5) - Place somewhere not as the same place as combo 3
00:43:376 (6) - Move away from tail of combo 5
00:43:771 (1) - Try to actually make this more circular so that it look like a circle is forming with combo 5
01:02:915 (7) - Doesn't look pleasant

All Fixed

[Basic]
01:12:981 (1) - Try making this look more pleasant, the sudden change of direction in the direction doesn't really flow

No mods for Delis (Nothing that I could point out for now). Fixed
Wait, mao is Duca?! Yes !!

Frostmourne wrote:

Delis' Extra
00:42:586 (4) - add clap
00:54:428 (2) - remove whistle but don't remove clap, sounds weird :\
01:07:060 (4) - ^
01:08:442 (2) - add whistle
01:13:376 (4) - remove whistle
01:13:771 (6) - add whistle
great!


find some more mods (3-4 mods) and you can ask me for a bubble

Frostmourne wrote:

find some more mods (3-4 mods) and you can ask me for a bubble

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Satellite wrote:

Frostmourne wrote:

find some more mods (3-4 mods) and you can ask me for a bubble

request by Delis ん？

[Delis' Extra]
OD+1 他の人の意見聞いて戻す可能性もあるけどdone
00:07:060 (2) - whistleは頭じゃない？
00:08:639 (2) - 頭にwhistle?
00:09:428 (5) - add whistle
00:10:415 (4) - whistle合わなくない？ 00:10:218 (3) - こっちにいれたほうがいい気がするんだけど このパートのwhistleなんですが、00:07:257 -, 00:08:442 -, 00:09:823 -, 00:10:415 -, 00:11:007 - に裏で音なってるじゃないですか、そこを取ってるのでキープしたいのでございます。
00:12:586 (7) - 00:11:797 (2) - こっちにスタックさせるのはどう？OK
00:18:507 (4) - うーんDS1.2(次の56と同じ)でx120 y52あたりとかどう？以下の画像通りだけど34と53で対称っぽくない？よくわからんけど綺麗になったからOK

SPOILER

00:30:941 (4) - Ncいれる？ここあたりだけNcの間隔長いきがする いいね(facebook)
00:35:086 (1) - 手前の7からのDSが1.00はちょっと狭い気がする 若干おもってたから直した！
00:40:613 (1) - 流れ的にも2を反転させたやつを使うほうが綺麗な気がするんだけど　1をそれにして2の角度ちょっと変えた～

SPOILER

00:45:349 (3,4) - Ctrl+Gしたらでりすさん好きそうだけどどう？ノー ここはおとなしくしたいのであんまりジャンプさせない感じがいいのん！
00:50:876 (1) - Ctrl+Gしたほうが流れは綺麗のはず、次の配置に近くなるからそのあたりは調整して欲しい おｋ
01:03:113 (5) - 3をフォローする感じで曲げたら流れいい気がするけどどう？　違いよくわかんなかったけどOK

SPOILER

01:06:073 (4) - 後ろのclapはずすか、音下げるべき 音取れてるし、現状うるさくないと思うので保留~

頑張って~

<=OD上げ忘れた

Frostmourne wrote:

General
looks fine

Basic
00:03:507 (1,2) - Try this. It's better to understand in music.

SPOILER

00:16:928 (2) - move right 1 grid for better spacing
00:23:639 (2) - move down to x:180 y:268 for correct spacing
01:23:639 (2) - move to x:272 y:260 for correct spacing
01:26:797 (2) - move right 1 grid
01:28:376 (4) - add clap

Advanced
use AR7 and OD6
01:05:481 (5) - new combo
01:09:823 (1,2,3,4) - arrange like this for more clean

SPOILER

01:29:955 (4) - add clap at the start of slider

Extreme
00:03:211 (8) - remove this note and move 00:03:310 (8) - on the 00:03:113 (7) - 's
00:15:349 (9) - remove whistle on the body of this slider
00:16:139 (1) - add finish
00:22:455 (1) - add finish
01:01:534 (4) - move to x:84 y:196 better. Not too far jump and stack on 01:02:323 (1) -
01:28:771 (1) - add finish on the start of this slider

find some more mods (3-4 mods) and you can ask me for a bubble

K4zuya K wrote:

hi, i'm here for m4m
i'm new modder so sorry if i make some mistakes in my modding
let's start then

Basic
00:17:718 (3,4,1) - i think this flow is better

SPOILER

　sry,keep
00:42:981 (3) - 244,116 Fixed!
00:44:560 (1,2) - why don't you try to blanket 2 to 1 ? sry,keep but maybe change
01:01:534 (2,3) - blanket this Fixed!
01:05:481 (3,4) - 128, 232 Fixed!
01:06:665 (1) - 376, 144 Fixed!
01:28:771 (5,1) - blanket 1 to 5 Fixed!

Advanced
00:01:534 (3,4) - move to 216 292 for better flow little up
00:06:271 (7,1) - i think flow like this or like this is better Fixed!
00:35:876 (3) - 432 164 for better flow change a little
01:29:363 (2) - 244 72 ^ ^

Extreme
00:48:507 (3) - 324 220 sry it is stack on 00:47:718 (1)
sorry, not really good modding extreme, insane, etc. my eyes can't catch the the objects

ok, that's all from me, good song,i really like it
hope it will be ranked soon
good luck~

Satellite wrote:

Frostmourne wrote:

find some more mods (3-4 mods) and you can ask me for a bubble

request by Delis

[Extreme]
00:02:323 (5,6) - 両方のsliderの後ろにwhistleをいれてみませんか？
00:03:211 (8) - 最初のスローパートでちょいovermapping気味の3連打に感じたのでremoveしてもいいかも・・・
00:06:271 (8,10) - ここの2つにwhistleいれませんか？
00:08:836 (6) - ここは2.00のジャンプするほど音が大きくもないのでDS通り配置しても良いと思います。
00:09:428 (8) - 頭か後ろ、どちらかにwhistle追加しませんか？　次の(1)のwhistleを考えてとりあえずKeepします＞＜
00:12:192 (6) - Ncいれても面白いかも?
00:13:573 (2) - 後ろにadd whistle
00:16:139 (1) - Finishの入れ忘れかな？
00:16:534 (3) - clapとwhistleの組み合わせは汚く聞こえますが、ここはwhistleを入れても自然にフィットするように思えました。
00:16:928 (5) - add whistle
00:18:902 (6,8) - 前と同じ
00:20:086 (4) - add whistle
00:22:455 (1) - Finishの入れ忘れ？
00:33:310 (6,7,1) - 音に合ってない感じがするなー私なら6がある赤線からslider引きます いい感じ！！

00:41:007 (9,10,11) - 3連打いれるならこっちのほうがフィットしてそう。白線から始まる連打は少し違和感あるかも。こっちのがいい感じ！

00:43:771 (8) - 後ろにwhistleの追加
00:46:731 (4) - ピアノ入ってるしwhistleの追加かな？
00:48:113 (2) - 頭にwhistle追加かな？ この辺はちょっとKeepして考えます;-;
00:48:705 (4) - add whistle~ ^
00:50:284 (5,7) - ^ ^
00:54:626 (2) - 後ろにwhistle追加かな
01:01:139 (3) - 頭にwhistleの追加かな
01:06:271 (4) - 少しだけ手前の3をフォローするようにまげてあげると綺麗かも。
01:07:455 (5) - 音強く入ってるからFinishの追加かな？それかwhistleいれたらいいかも。
01:09:231 (3) - whistleの追加かな~
01:10:613 (3) - Finishかな？ finishだと存在感でかすぎたのでwhistleにしました！
01:11:205 (6) - ^ ^
01:11:402 (7) - add Nc? ちょっと長いきがする
01:11:797 (9) - 音にあってなくない？スライダー置くなら 01:11:994 - ここからじゃないかなあ 提案の音取りで直しました！
01:26:994 (5,6) - どっちかにNcいれておく？
01:28:771 (1) - Finishいれる？それかwhistleか、何もないのは微妙~

[Advanced]
AR+1

頑張って~

1. 00:18:507 (5) - I think if you move this note further from 00:18:310 (4) will more playable for me because the spacing is too low if compare with the spacing from 00:18:113 (3,4)
2. 00:31:533 (9) - what about ctrl+g here?
3. 00:52:257 (4) - what about move it further from 3? its a very strong beat, need to jump imo.
4. 01:19:297 (1,2,3) - I think these note fit the music better, please try.
   
5. 01:22:455 (1) - hmm why you use 1/1 slider here, I think use the above rhythm is better fit the music because there are similar rhythm.
6. 01:26:402 (3) - move to 192|144 for more symmetry.
7. 01:04:099 (2) - move to 15|134 for perfect stack.
8. 01:09:231 (3) - move to 310|189 for ^
9. 01:16:928 (5) - move to 140|40 for ^

1. 00:23:047 (1,2) - move to 44|296 , 176|180 for more triangle symmetry.
2. I think jump should be at 00:52:257 (1) because the strong beat, not jump on 00:52:060 (5)

1. 00:00:350 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - about the spacing you intend to make it fit with song right?
2. 00:09:626 (6) - add repeat instead of add 7? because the jump be at 00:10:218 (1) fit with music better than jump at 7.
3. 00:11:007 (3) - add whistle and remove whistle on 00:11:402 (5) 's head like you do on extreme.
4. 00:14:757 (5) - move to 132|210 for perfect stack.
5. 00:17:521 (5) - its not a problem but it can better blanket.
6. 00:30:152 (1) - move to 144|62?
7. 01:01:139 - this rhythm fit better.
   
8. 01:21:271 (6,7,8,1) - this pattern looks random for me D:
9. 01:25:218 (9) - move to 414|218
10. 01:25:613 (1) - need to be a jump imo.
11. check some spacing that weird and you not intend :3 its fine for me, I can DT it. but just.. I see the spacing not balance is looks weird for me lol

1. 00:12:586 (5,1) - I think they are to close with (3) so i recommend to move 00:12:192 (4) to 257|127 to be a triangle pattern instead of stack
   
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2. 00:17:718 (3) - unbalance spacing, please fix
3. 00:30:349 (3) - ^
4. 00:35:086 (1) - overlap on easiest is not a good idea imo :X please avoid and make a new pattern.
5. 00:50:086 (4,1) - what about make it blanket.
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:56:402 (4,1,2,3) - make them more blanket for looks good like this
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:00:349 (1) - stack like this can make beginner confuse, well let's see XD

P A N wrote:

Hi from m4m queue, I guess im the last general mod to your map
very nice bg 　why put " "


[Delis]

1. 00:23:047 (1,2) - move to 44|296 , 176|180 for more triangle symmetry. ok~
2. I think jump should be at 00:52:257 (1) because the strong beat, not jump on 00:52:060 (5) sorry I don't want to make a jump here ;;

good luck for rank soon :3 maybe need 1-2 mods before call Frostmourne-san hehe

Delis wrote:

P A N wrote:

Hi from m4m queue, I guess im the last general mod to your map
very nice bg 　why put " "


[Delis]

1. 00:23:047 (1,2) - move to 44|296 , 176|180 for more triangle symmetry. ok~
2. I think jump should be at 00:52:257 (1) because the strong beat, not jump on 00:52:060 (5) sorry I don't want to make a jump here ;;

good luck for rank soon :3 maybe need 1-2 mods before call Frostmourne-san hehe

THANK YOU FOR MOD!

http://puu.sh/604oT.osu

OD8だとDTで結構やり難くなるのと、やっぱり個人的にこのBPMでOD8はあんまり好きじゃないかな、と感じたので戻しました。(HD8にした...言われたら戻すけど)

P A N wrote:

good luck for rank soon :3 maybe need 1-2 mods before call Frostmourne-san hehe

Pandiar wrote:

P A N wrote:

good luck for rank soon :3 maybe need 1-2 mods before call Frostmourne-san hehe

i think so too, lol
but i will leave the house for three days
so i find some mod when come home
and check your nice mod

P A N wrote:

I should say your extreme is fine now, very fine. just basic advance that need a little mod :3

P A N wrote:

Hi from m4m queue, I guess im the last general mod to your map
very nice bg

[Extreme]

1. 00:18:507 (5) - I think if you move this note further from 00:18:310 (4) will more playable for me because the spacing is too low if compare with the spacing from 00:18:113 (3,4)　up up(5)
2. 00:31:533 (9) - what about ctrl+g here? better better flow...but keep
3. 00:52:257 (4) - what about move it further from 3? its a very strong beat, need to jump imo. i agree...but i can't good placement maybe change
4. 01:19:297 (1,2,3) - I think these note fit the music better, please try. Nice!!! Fixed
   
5. 01:22:455 (1) - hmm why you use 1/1 slider here, I think use the above rhythm is better fit the music because there are similar rhythm. Fixed
6. 01:26:402 (3) - move to 192|144 for more symmetry. Fixed
7. 01:04:099 (2) - move to 15|134 for perfect stack. some change
8. 01:09:231 (3) - move to 310|189 for ^ Fixed
9. 01:16:928 (5) - move to 140|40 for ^ some change but try perfect stack

[Advanced]

1. 00:00:350 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - about the spacing you intend to make it fit with song right?
2. 00:09:626 (6) - add repeat instead of add 7? because the jump be at 00:10:218 (1) fit with music better than jump at 7.
3. 00:11:007 (3) - add whistle and remove whistle on 00:11:402 (5) 's head like you do on extreme.
4. 00:14:757 (5) - move to 132|210 for perfect stack.
5. 00:17:521 (5) - its not a problem but it can better blanket.
6. 00:30:152 (1) - move to 144|62?
7. 01:01:139 - this rhythm fit better.
   
8. 01:21:271 (6,7,8,1) - this pattern looks random for me D:
9. 01:25:218 (9) - move to 414|218
10. 01:25:613 (1) - need to be a jump imo.
11. check some spacing that weird and you not intend :3 its fine for me, I can DT it. but just.. I see the spacing not balance is looks weird for me lol
    
    all fixed

[Basic]

1. 00:12:586 (5,1) - I think they are to close with (3) so i recommend to move 00:12:192 (4) to 257|127 to be a triangle pattern instead of stack
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:17:718 (3) - unbalance spacing, please fix
3. 00:30:349 (3) - ^
4. 00:35:086 (1) - overlap on easiest is not a good idea imo :X please avoid and make a new pattern.
5. 00:50:086 (4,1) - what about make it blanket.
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:56:402 (4,1,2,3) - make them more blanket for looks good like this
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:00:349 (1) - stack like this can make beginner confuse, well let's see XD
   
   all fixed

good luck for rank soon :3 maybe need 1-2 mods before call Frostmourne-san hehe

• 
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  (他の譜面に"bemani"のtag付いてたから入れてもいいかも？他の音ゲー詳しくないのでよくわからないです。)

1. 00:00:350 (1,2) - スライダーの形が違いますが意図的でしょうか？個人的には00:01:534 (2) - の形のほうがbestだと思います。
2. 00:33:507 (4) - x96 y204,終尾の点をx232 y204 にして 00:31:928 (1) - に綺麗にブランケットする形はどうでしょう。
   
   
3. 00:35:876 (2) - x428 y148
4. 00:37:060 (3) - DS使いshift押しながら00:35:876 (2) - の真下に配置してはどうでしょう
5. 01:14:560 (3) - finish削除

1. 00:07:849 (1) - NC削除
2. 00:43:771 (7) - ^
3. 00:44:560 (3) - NC
4. 00:49:297 (1) - NC削除

1. 01:03:902 (3) - clap
2. 01:04:692 (1) - ^
3. 01:11:205 (1) - NC削除
4. 01:16:139 (1,2,3) - この3連が少し違和感を感じました。入れるなら01:15:942 - からどうでしょう。(個人的にこっちの方がやりやすかっただけですごめんなさい)
5. 01:19:297 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:25:613 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - のように2個単位でNCでもいいと思います
6. 01:22:455 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
7. 01:25:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

1. 00:18:902 (6) - clap
2. 00:19:099 (8) - ^

keeeeeeko wrote:

hi~
M4M

[Delis' Extra]

1. 01:03:902 (3) - clap
2. 01:04:692 (1) - ^　ここは故意に置いてないのでkeepで！
3. 01:11:205 (1) - NC削除 消す理由もありませんので・・
4. 01:16:139 (1,2,3) - この3連が少し違和感を感じました。入れるなら01:15:942 - からどうでしょう。(個人的にこっちの方がやりやすかっただけですごめんなさい) 裏の音をフォローしてるのでkeepで、私だけかも知れませんがそう聞こえるので。
5. 01:19:297 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:25:613 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - のように2個単位でNCでもいいと思います　
6. 01:22:455 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
7. 01:25:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ok~

keeeeeeko wrote:

hi~
M4M

[General]

• 
  Clear
  (他の譜面に"bemani"のtag付いてたから入れてもいいかも？他の音ゲー詳しくないのでよくわからないです。)

俺も詳しくないのでよくわからないですが入れておきます！

[Basic]

1. 00:00:350 (1,2) - スライダーの形が違いますが意図的でしょうか？個人的には00:01:534 (2) - の形のほうがbestだと思います。
2. 00:33:507 (4) - x96 y204,終尾の点をx232 y204 にして 00:31:928 (1) - に綺麗にブランケットする形はどうでしょう。
   
   
3. 00:35:876 (2) - x428 y148
4. 00:37:060 (3) - DS使いshift押しながら00:35:876 (2) - の真下に配置してはどうでしょう
5. 01:14:560 (3) - finish削除

[Advanced]

1. 00:07:849 (1) - NC削除
2. 00:43:771 (7) - ^
3. 00:44:560 (3) - NC
4. 00:49:297 (1) - NC削除

[Extreme]

1. 00:18:902 (6) - clap
2. 00:19:099 (8) - ^

exの2つはストリームなのであえてwhistleにしてます

nice map!
Good Luck～

Mei wrote:

hi for m4m
ヾ(´･ω･｀)ﾉ

[Extreme]

* 00:26:205 (3,4) - how about copy 00:25:613 (1,2) - and then stack 00:26:599 (4) - with 00:26:994 (2) - this slider's tail
um...sry keep
* 00:44:165 (1,2) - how about move 1 to x300 y168, 2 to x488 y240
nice mod...but it is an intent pattern
* 00:53:244 (6) - in fact remove this note plays better for me(just ignore this.....this is just my personal feeling
catch a drum sound
* 01:23:047 (3,4) - use same partern of this 01:22:455 (1,2) -
i'll change if i can think good placement


[advanced]

* 00:23:639 (3,4) - move3 to x496 y112, move 4 to x420 y52
some change with reference to this mod
* 00:34:099 (6,7,8) - make it same distance?
Fixed
* 00:58:573 (5,6,7) - how about this

Picture

some change

no much problems in basic
really nice map so (ノ＞▽＜)ノ☆
good luck and happy new year :3

Frostmourne wrote:

recheck by request~~~

I still think the diff spread is strange.. you have normal and then ->> very hard,Insane, Insane (if you don't understand, see this picture)

So what I am suggesting here is ! removing some notes in Advanced to make it less insane.
I will point out notes where you can remove and doesn't make the map wrong.

Advanced
00:05:284 (4) - move up 1 grid
00:07:257 (2) - you can remove this note
00:13:573 (2) - you can remove this note
00:19:889 (2) - you can remove this note and make 00:20:086 (2) - looks like this (for spacing change)

SPOILER

00:25:218 (7) - change this to slider, the spacing will look less similar

SPOILER

00:33:310 (4,5) - ctrl+g these 2 notes like this will play more natural with music (don't forget changing hitsound)

SPOILER

00:41:994 (2) - you can remove this note
00:43:376 (5) - move this to x:408 y:144 so the spacing will look less confusing
relocate with DS1.3

feel free to call me back

1. please unify kiai time of your diff. you don't have to change guest diff. then, i agree Delis's kiai time :3 haha, i recommend you to use delis's to all diffs.

1. 00:53:244 (3) - Same as Extreme diff.

1. 00:20:086 (2) - unsnapped slider.
2. 00:52:849 (5) - add a clap to the head of the slider here to follow the background music.
3. 00:53:244 (6) - Same as Extreme diff.

1. HP Drain rate -1. feels too high for this BPM .
2. 00:14:757 (2) - i feel kinda empty here. so why don't you put whistle sound 1/1 rhythm for playing ? also i can hear sound of a bass drum here.
3. 00:31:534 (5) - I have a sense of discomfort with that kind of normal sound. it is better to use green section for volume control imo.
4. 00:34:692 (6) - Same.
5. 00:52:849 (4) - missing a clap
6. 01:11:599 (1) - whistle, again

1. 00:06:271 (8,9,10,11,1) - Design suggestion : how about making a curve stream ? it looks better to me. like this
   
   img

   
2. 00:10:613 - i recommend you to follow the background music for your pattern. so you should consider remaking this part. for example, put a 1/2 slider ...
3. 00:17:225 (7,1) - hmm... this part looks bad to me. please make up 3 hits :3 like this
   
4. 00:20:481 (1,2) - i feel this part looks crowded. so you should consider putting more spacing.
5. 00:26:599 (4) - remove a whistle since it follows nothing. clap sound or nothing would fit well with this kind of music.
6. 00:43:376 (7) - a bit nazi mod, make the spacing of this part. so i recommend you to use ctrl + G command. would flow more naturally
7. 00:53:244 (6) - i feel this sudden decrement of this drum sound could confuse players. please use this clap sound same as your previous part.00:52:849 -

alacat wrote:

Rechecked Basic diff via IRC.

Ranked!

congrats for your 1st ranked

wring wrote:

おめでとー！

iyasine wrote:

pandiarさん1st Rankedおめでとう