Yo! :3. Random bubble check (you know, I'll do that in English)[General:]
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You are missing the video file in S o r d a's Hard, fix that and be careful on your next update. It is the second time that make the same mistake in this difficulty• 00:18:152
(Break) - In all difficulties, I suggest you to move the end of this break till this point. It makes sense because in that point the music pitch change.
[Easy:]
• 00:12:340 (1,2) - Actually the 1/1 pattern doesn't sound really good to me, in this case the red tick in 00:12:902 need an emphasize. Would be better if you try a rhythm like this one (Plus, I'd add Claps in the reverse and Slider end):
• 00:34:090 (1) - This is a bit nazi, but I can see an overlap between this Slider and the previous Slider (1), and for me looks bad during the gameplay. Try doing something like this (and have a code with the next (1,2,3) re-arranged spacing):
Screenshoot + Code
444,84,34090,6,0,B|404:40|404:40|356:16,1,110,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
280,60,34840,2,0,L|140:168,2,165,4|4|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
368,76,36340,2,0,B|400:128|372:180|372:180|416:208|412:284,1,220,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
• 00:37:840 (1) - I'd add a Whistle in the Reverse Slider
• 00:55:840 (1,2,3) - This pattern cause a bit of confusion in me, sincerely, I really hoped a Note or some beat in 00:57:340 and other things. Let me re-arrange this for you, the beat changes (I mean red tick and then a white tick) cause confusion in New players, they usually try following a simple 1/1 rhythm in general, and as I said before a Note in the downbeat in 00:57:340 is pretty necessary in my opinion, so try a rhythm like this one:
• 01:10:840 (1,2) - In this case, remove (2) and add a Repetition in (1), will be easier to read for new players. Btw, in my opinion fits better with the vocals too.
• 01:23:590 (1) - This Slider sounds really empty, you can maybe add a Whistle in the Reverse Arrow.
• 01:27:527
(Spin) - Why don't you try a Normal Sampleset Hitsounds in this Spinner? This drum hitsound is inconsistent with the whole of the map, plus the whistle would be consistent with your Normal diff.
[Normal:]
• 00:02:331 (1) - Such a lot of combo spam in this first section of the map, I'd remove this one
• 00:06:331 (1) - (^)
• 00:32:402
(x) - In my personal point of view, sounds better if you add a Note here and...
• 00:33:152 (5) - Remove this instead because follow better the Instrumental
• 01:19:840
(Spin) - Move this Slider 1/2 back? Follow better the Instrumental and long vocal in my opinion. If you do that, don't forget to make this Spinner 1/2 bigger too.
[S o r d a's Hard:]
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*First of all.. Check the General!• 00:05:081 (3) - The Slider end sounds off to me. I think follows better the vocals if you make this Slider smaller in 1/2, if you want, you can add a Note in 00:05:831 . Sounds fine to me as well
• 00:07:081 (2) - A Whistle at the Slider beginning fits properly with the vocals, would be good if you add one in there
• 00:07:831 (3,4) - Sincerely, I didn't understand this manual Stack, in general you used Normal stack, so for consistency if better if you use them instead
• 00:19:840 (1,2) - This flows forced to me, in addition these kind of Sliders under the Slider track of the other looks pretty bad. So, can you make a better thing here?? Feel free to talk with me in-game if you want my personal idea
• 00:23:965 (3) - *Nazi* I'd make this Slider a bit curvy for a better transition with (4,5).
• 01:08:965
(x) - Hmm.. I think a Note is pretty necessary here, the constant 1/2 patterns (and some 1/1 sliders) works better than this kind of random stops
• 01:19:465 (2,3) - Same as 00:05:081
[Insane:]
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Settings:--> OD 8 looks excessive for this difficulty, I'd reduce it by 1 Tick. (OD-1)
• 00:00:331 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - In this section, I'd adjust the
Distance Snap in 1.20x, actually the notes look really close and don't fit too much with this AR8. In addition, I wouldn't use jumps/Spacing increases in this 1st section, the music becomes really slow and these kind of thing don't fit at all.
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(Spin) - Move this Spinner 1/4 back because fits better with the music. Remember to make it bigger in 1/4 after to apply that
• 00:34:840 (1) - It's me or you are missing a Clap at this Slider end? Because It feels necessary
• 00:44:590 (3,1) - Reduce the spacing between these Notes please, it doesn't fit in this slow section of the music
• 00:53:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This kind of pattern, emm.. I don't like it a lot, the flow especially. You have a similar pattern in your 'Suit Up' map and I didn't like either. This is a personal point of view, feel free to ignore that if you feel this pattern works fine to you
• 01:09:340 (2,3,4,5) - Such an empty pattern (talking about the hitsounding), I'd add some hitsound somewhere to make this pattern more enjoyable
• 01:29:965 (8) - A Normal samplset hitsounds sounds better at the Slider end, so I'd replace it the whistle for that. In addition, I'd remove the Drum finish from the slider start
And.. That's all for now 
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Nice difficulties in general, but popped due to the inconsistent video file in Hard diff.
Call me back then (in-game game pls, I need to talk some things with you)
