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Linkin Park - Numb

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BounceBabe
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BounceBabe
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Montag, 22. Juli 2013 at 22:43:13

Artist: Linkin Park
Title: Numb
Tags: Meteora
BPM: 110,04
Filesize: 4004kb
Play Time: 02:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,66 stars, 313 notes)
  2. Normal (2,94 stars, 187 notes)
Download: Linkin Park - Numb
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I'm tired of being what you want me to be
Feeling so faithless, lost under the surface
Don't know what you're expecting of me
Put under the pressure of walking in your shoes
(Caught in the undertow, just caught in the undertow)
Every step that I take is another mistake to you
(Caught in the undertow, just caught in the undertow)
I've become so numb, I can't feel you there
Become so tired, so much more aware
I'm becoming this, all I want to do
Is be more like me and be less like you

Enjoy the song and map!

Changelog
- Added Skin
- Added another skin element
- Changed timing
- Changed timing... again

Thanks to dkun for helping me so much and Gabe for checking it once again!
Last edited by BounceBabe , edited 29 times in total.
Melophobia
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Melophobia
(actually this is one of my favorite songs) map itself is solid and nice too. good job :D starred~
BounceBabe
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BounceBabe
Thank you Melophobia! ^-^
Diasios
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Joined August 2008
Diasios
Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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General

  • • Set the same combo colors in both diffs.
    • Try to add some tags.

Normal

  • • 00:12:140 (1/end) - Remove whistle and add a green timing section (normal sampleset, 5% volume)
    • 00:38:719 (1) - Start this spinner 1/4 later.
    • 01:24:380 (1,2) - Try this:
    SPOILER
    • 01:51:368 (2) - End this slider at 01:51:641 and add a repeat.
    • 02:56:248 (x) - Add a circle.

Hard

  • • 00:12:140 (1/end) - Remove whistle and add a green timing section (normal sampleset, 5% volume)
    • 00:51:123 (2) - Move this circle at x:106 y:282...
    • 00:51:668 (4) - ... and this circle at x:8 y:176. (anyway, here 01:44:000 and here 02:20:000 you didn't make any kind of jump so you shouldn't make them here too, but feel free to do as you please)
    • 02:56:248 (x) - Add a circle.

Well, not much to point out, this beatmap is already good. (if I was you I'd make another diff but it's not really necessary :P )
Good job.
BounceBabe
1,626 posts
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BounceBabe
Thanks for the mod! Change everything except from the volume change and the circle adding on the end, since i find this more suitable!
Sieg
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Joined February 2012
Sieg
Hello M4M here

General:
Your BG size is 1200x750 crop it to 4:3 or 16:9 or find another one.

Normal:
00:21:954 (1) - this note is too far away from spinner center, it will be hard for normal players to get there in time.
00:30:132 (1,2) - you can avoid such overlaps for normal and make more blankets, if you want of course :)
00:46:216 (3) - I bet you map and play in fullscreen, please avoid offscreens
00:46:216 (3) - blanket? http://puu.sh/1Yhq0
01:51:368 (2) - parallel to 01:49:732 (1) - ? http://puu.sh/1Yhrb
01:54:094 (2) - blanket? http://puu.sh/1Yhs5
02:12:086 (4,5) - move this to make flow with 02:12:631 (1) - http://puu.sh/1Yhtc
02:47:524 (1,2) - again, I suggest you to avoid this for normal
02:56:248 - note?
Great mapping for normal.

Hard:
00:34:494 (1) - offscreen, I mean not everyone play on full screen http://puu.sh/1Yh59
00:44:035 (4) - same
00:43:217 (3,4) - you can make this much nicer and not offscreen something like - http://puu.sh/1Yh7O
00:59:028 (2) - again
01:54:367 (3) - ^
02:00:637 (3) - ^
02:19:174 (1,2,3) - cool
02:23:944 (1,2) - make this in slider?
from 02:27:897 (1) - till 02:35:530 (4) - I know this is style preference, but I feel here too much straight sliders.
02:44:526 (3) - and again offscreen
02:56:248 - note?
I'm not recommend use blue-white on hards but this is my personal preference and it's sounds nice so... Well made.

That's all I can suggest. Hope you will use some. Good Luck! :)
Hinsvar
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Hinsvar
Modding for M4M.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>General
  1. The BG's resolution is 1200x750 while the allowed resolution range is 800x600 to 1024x768, which means the width is too large. You should reduce it.
>Normal
  1. 00:27:951 (4) - Won't it be confusing if the repeat is placed near 00:27:134 (2,3)?
  2. 00:30:132 (1) - Shorten this by 1/2 beats? It follows the vocal better than while it's still a 3/2 slider, and it feels far less awkward like that.
  3. 00:35:584 (2) - Split this into a circle and a 1/2 slider, 1/2 beats after the circle? Reason's same as above.
  4. 00:38:583 - Add clap?
  5. 00:42:672 (1) - ^
  6. 00:43:762 - ^
  7. 00:45:398 - I don't think we need a finish on the tick here. The music doesn't support it, IMO.
  8. 00:47:306 - Add clap?
  9. 00:51:395 - ^
  10. 00:56:847 - ^
  11. 01:01:209 - ^
  12. 01:09:387 - Remove the finish and clap here? I don't know why, but with them there, there's a weird clap sound 1/4 beats after this spot...
  13. 01:24:380 (1) - This seriously feels awkward because a new stanza comes on the middle of this slider. What about changing this to a 1/2 slider that repeats once?
  14. 01:23:563 (2) - Finish?
  15. 01:54:094 (2) - Drag the middle and last anchor point 1 grid (at Small size) to the right so the blanket-ish pattern of 01:53:549 (1,2) will look better?
  16. 01:55:730 (1) - Add clap?
  17. 02:17:538 - ^
  18. 02:55:702 (2) - Add clap? (If you follow the hitsound suggestions here, do them on the Hard diff too.)
>Hard
  1. 00:34:494 (1) - This slider is partially out-of-gameplay field. Yes, not just off-grid.
  2. 00:44:035 (4) - ^
  3. 00:59:028 (2) - ^
  4. 01:02:845 (1) - ...Do we even need the red anchor at the end?
  5. 01:20:019 (7) - Same as Normal's 01:24:380 (1).
  6. 01:24:380 (1) - ^
  7. 02:56:248 - Add circle?
k, that's it.

Good luck on the way 8-)
Quilt
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Quilt
Normal
nothing to say~

Hard
00:27:951 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/1YhDI try this rhythm?

00:32:313 - volume 40% is better

01:18:656 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/600723 like this?

01:20:291 - same as 00:32:313

01:24:653 - ^

02:22:990 (5) - move to x175 y119

02:31:713 (5) - move to x401 y176

that's all~

good luck!
BounceBabe
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BounceBabe
Fixed the outscreen sliders, image size and a little more things! Thanks you too

EDIT: changed the finish volume to 60%! Thanks
NewRulerNA
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Joined December 2010
NewRulerNA
hi
found an issue. you must fix it.

[Hard]
  1. some notes had completely overlapping. this is unrankable.
    like 00:22:772 (3,4) - 00:24:953 (7,8) -
    you must change stack leniency to 0.4 or more.
BounceBabe
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BounceBabe
Fixed
Zero__wind
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Zero__wind
Hi~m4m here~
General
the Kiai are not added at the chorus part, didn't understand why

Hard
00:18:683 (3) - maybe move it to (64,208) will looks and plays better
00:25:225 (8) - give it a lower-volumed normal-clap or just change it to normal sampleset
00:29:587 (4) - ^
00:33:949 (8) - ^
00:34:221 (9,1) - make them a blancket
00:37:765 (4,5) - don't think it beautifel, hmm, maybe change 00:37:765 (4) - 's direction opposite to 00:37:220 (2) - , or you may have other good ideas
00:38:856 - add a note with normal-finish here and start the spinner right after it
00:47:579 - ^
01:35:557 - ^
02:40:982 - ^
02:49:705 - ^
00:50:850 - maybe arrange it like this will feel more like a lead-in to the chorus http://puu.sh/1Ylmj
00:53:576 (5) - move the clap on it to 00:54:121 (1) - 's head
02:14:403 (5) - maybe move it to 02:14:539 - to fit vocal, but you may keep it as I know this is your rhythm pattern
02:16:584 (5) - ^
02:56:248 - You really need a note here to finish the map

Normal
00:38:856 - add note as I suggest in Hard diff
00:47:579 - ^
01:35:557 - ^
02:40:982 - ^
02:49:705 - ^
02:19:174 - ^ or just make the former slider repeat
01:07:752 (1,2,3) - make them 1.30x with each other
01:20:291 (1,2,3) - not fond of this pattern, a simple blancket and another note lead to the former object will make better sense imo
01:25:471 (2) - the finish in its body doesn't fit well?
01:26:561 (4) - add finish at it's end
01:55:730 (1) - just don't stack that and make it obey the distance snap
02:08:269 (3,4) - a little awkward imo, if you really want them to be like this, at least make them parallel with 02:07:179 (2) - plz
02:56:248 - same as Hard diff

I think that's it. Hope more English song-mape get ranked
BounceBabe
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Topic Starter
BounceBabe
Changed the spinner thing pattern but wont add a circle on the end, since theres no drum or guitar sound anymore which i mapped to.
The kiai part is not set because i find the first chorus shouldnt be so dramatic
pandaikon
102 posts
Joined February 2011
pandaikon
yo!

mostly suggestions (with a tiny bit of nazi), so let's go!

[Normal]
00:18:683 (3,4) - stacking like that makes the normal a bit harder
00:30:132 (1,2) - maybe unstack them?
00:34:494 (1,2) - ^
00:44:853 (3,3) - move the note a little bit so it won't touch the slider
01:56:002 (2,2) - overlaps a bit
02:08:269 (3,1) - a small overlap, you can think of stacking them, i guess
02:47:524 (1,2) - maybe also unstack?

[Hard]
the spacing is strange at times, it can go from 1.07x to 1.15x and so
00:16:775 - add a note here
00:34:221 (9,2) - tiny, tiny overlap
00:46:216 (2,3,4) - use the 0.5x spacing for 00:46:625 (3,4) and get them closer to the sllider by 0.5x.
00:54:121 (1,2,3) - not really nice, but it can be left like that if you wish so
01:06:116 (3) - maybe delete 01:06:934 (4) and reverse the slider?
01:08:842 (3,4,5,6,7) - i know it's not a really important issue, but that stream looks hard to read and just ugly. use the 0.5x spacing maybe?
01:22:199 - maybe a note?
02:19:582 (2,3) - really confusing. maybe make 02:19:582 (2) start on 02:19:446 and make it reverse? and 02:20:128 (3) on 02:19:991 with 1 more reverse?
02:20:809 (4,5,6,7,1) - 0.5x spacing
02:38:256 (3,4,5,6) - actually, here it looks pretty ok. if you don't want to change the spacing to 0.5x (implying you did it on other streams) then you can leave it be
02:56:248 - really, maybe a note here? feels empty. you could lower the volume to like 25% or so if you decide to put there a note

ok, so that's all. nice map, and good luck ranking it!
BounceBabe
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BounceBabe
Thank you for the mod, but i dont agree with your suggestions. It doesnt follow what i had in mind rythmwise for the map.

00:44:853 (3,3) - move the note a little bit so it won't touch the slider
Improved this one though!
pw384
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pw384
I support rocks!
Starred! >w<
Akareh
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Joined February 2010
Akareh
Yo, M4M
Everything in here are suggestions, feel free to disagree but tell me why if you do.

  • General

    You should REALLY do an easy diff with less than 3.0 star rating.
    Add "meteora" to source, remove it from tags and add something there, like "english rock"
  • Normal

    00:15:412 (1,2,3,4) - Make these sliders, they are easier to read for newbies.
    00:19:228 (4) - Overlap, avoid this on normals and easys.
    00:31:223 (2) - ^
    00:35:584 (2) - ^
    00:38:856 (4) - ^, though this one is less problematic
    00:42:672 (1,2,1) - overlap, make something different, i dunno maybe make 1 and 2 a slider?
    00:54:121 (1,2,3) - Make it curve like this, ;D http://puu.sh/21Syw
    01:08:842 (4) - No, just, no. This must be changed. No more than 2 repeats on normal, also you're using a blue tick, which is higly not recommended for easy diffs. I would suggest you to make this a long slider that ends at 01:09:387. http://puu.sh/21SBq
    01:26:561 (4) - Avoid blue ticks.
    01:34:467 (2) - ^
    02:48:615 (2) - Overlap
    02:56:248 - Add a circle
  • Hard

    00:47:579 (7) - This isn't bad, but can be pretty confusing to read.
    00:55:212 (3) - Avoid slider overlaps
    01:00:255 (5) - Move this to the red tick (or you can make a stream here adding a note at the red tick)
    01:18:383 (2,4) - It's fine, but can be confusing to read. I would suggest you to change it, you have lots of screen to place notes. This happens more times throughout the song, and I won't repeat myself further, you get the idea.
    01:46:461 (6) - Change to something else, it feels out of place.
    01:48:369 (4) - Move to red tick (or you can make a stream here adding a note at the red tick)
    01:52:595 (5) - ^
    02:47:115 (8) - Sounds bad, move this to the red tick.
    02:56:248 - Add a circle
Good luck with the map
Stefan
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Stefan
osu! needs more Linkin Park!
BounceBabe
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BounceBabe
Akareh

Akareh wrote:

Yo, M4M
Everything in here are suggestions, feel free to disagree but tell me why if you do.

  • General

    You should REALLY do an easy diff with less than 3.0 star rating. No because the spread is fine
    Add "meteora" to source, remove it from tags and add something there, like "english rock"
Changed this

  • Normal

    00:15:412 (1,2,3,4) - Make these sliders, they are easier to read for newbies.
    00:19:228 (4) - Overlap, avoid this on normals and easys.
    00:31:223 (2) - ^
    00:35:584 (2) - ^
    00:38:856 (4) - ^, though this one is less problematic
    00:42:672 (1,2,1) - overlap, make something different, i dunno maybe make 1 and 2 a slider?
    00:54:121 (1,2,3) - Make it curve like this, ;D http://puu.sh/21Syw
    01:08:842 (4) - No, just, no. This must be changed. No more than 2 repeats on normal, also you're using a blue tick, which is higly not recommended for easy diffs. I would suggest you to make this a long slider that ends at 01:09:387. http://puu.sh/21SBq
    01:26:561 (4) - Avoid blue ticks.
    01:34:467 (2) - ^
    02:48:615 (2) - Overlap
    02:56:248 - Add a circle
Stacking and blue ticks repeats are fine on Normal, you modded as it was an Easy. No changes sorry ._.

  • Hard

    00:47:579 (7) - This isn't bad, but can be pretty confusing to read.
    00:55:212 (3) - Avoid slider overlaps
    01:00:255 (5) - Move this to the red tick (or you can make a stream here adding a note at the red tick)
    01:18:383 (2,4) - It's fine, but can be confusing to read. I would suggest you to change it, you have lots of screen to place notes. This happens more times throughout the song, and I won't repeat myself further, you get the idea.
    01:46:461 (6) - Change to something else, it feels out of place.
    01:48:369 (4) - Move to red tick (or you can make a stream here adding a note at the red tick)
    01:52:595 (5) - ^
    02:47:115 (8) - Sounds bad, move this to the red tick.
    02:56:248 - Add a circle
Its pretty fine as it is, the rythm about the red ticks which are on blue, they are fine due to it fitting the song and rythm

Good luck with the map

Thank you!
DakeDekaane
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DakeDekaane
Hi there, mod time as requested, sorry for the late >_<

[Normal]
00:13:503 (2) - What about making this kind of sliders straight, curved looks a bit squeezed, if you make it straight, make the flow lead to the next object, maybe like this.
00:22:499 (2) - ^
00:55:212 (3) - Flip this vertically? Flow would be better doing this imo.
01:08:842 (4) - You can make this a 1/2 slider with one repeat, short sliders with many repeats can be a bit confusing, specially being this the lowest diff in the set, newbies would be playing this.
01:25:198 - A circle is missing here, that beat feels so lonely~

Hitsounds suggestions.
Click :3
00:23:590 (4) - Remove the clap in the beginning and put it in the end
00:24:408 (5) - Remove clap
00:27:951 (4) - Remove clap in the beginning
00:33:403 (3) - ^
00:37:493 (3) - ^
00:36:675 (1) - Remove the clap here and put it in 00:37:220 (2)
00:42:672 (1) - Clap here.
00:43:217 (1) - Clap in the end
00:44:035 (2) - Remove clap here.
00:46:216 (3) - Remove clap in the beginning.
01:30:650 (1) - Clap in the begining
01:32:286 (3) - Remove clap in the beginning.
01:39:374 (2) - Clap in the begining
02:00:637 (3) - You forgot a finish in the end of this, I think.
02:02:272 (4) - Remove the clap in the end and put it in the beginning
02:03:635 (3) - Remove clap here and put it in 02:04:453 (4)
02:12:631 (1) - Clap in the end
02:13:449 (2) - Remove clap
02:14:812 (1) - Remove the clap in the beginning and put it in the end (Keep the finish)
02:15:630 (2) - Remove clap
02:16:993 (1) - Remove the clap in the beginning and put it in the end (Keep the finish)
02:17:811 (2) - Remove clap
02:22:445 (2) - You forgot a clap here.
02:23:535 (1) - Remove clap.

"Nazi" stuff
Click :3
00:59:573 (4) - For blanket: Move the 2nd node to x:296 y:160 and the last to x:352 y:184
01:06:661 (3) - The red node would look better being in the middle of this.
01:54:094 (2) - For blanket: Move the 2nd node to x:80 y:216 and the last to x:144 y:216
02:14:812 (1) - For blanket: Move the 2nd node to x:432 y:104 and the last to x:384 y:168 (Remember fix spacing if you do this.)
02:17:811 (2) - For blanket: Move the last to x:272 y:280
02:39:891 (2) - For blanket: Move the 2nd node to x:200 y:112 and the last to x:200 y:48

[Hard]
00:12:686 (1) - You can shorten this slider by 1/4 and put a circle in 00:13:231
00:14:049 (3) - I don't think this stack is good, make it like 00:15:412 (2)
01:08:842 (3,4,5,6,7) - You can make this stream shorter, like you did in the other ones after this

Hitsounds suggestions.
Click :3
00:21:954 (1) - Clap here
00:22:227 (2) - Remove clap
00:24:135 (6) - ^
00:24:953 (7) - Remove the clap here and put it in 00:25:225 (8)
00:29:314 (3) - Remove the clap here and put it in 00:29:587 (4)
00:31:223 (3) - Remove the clap here and put it in 00:31:768 (4)
00:35:312 (2) - Remove clap
00:36:675 (1) - Remove the clap here and put it in 00:37:220 (2)
00:42:672 (1) - Clap here.
00:43:217 (3) - Clap in the end
00:44:035 (4) - Remove clap
00:45:398 (1) - Clap in the end
00:46:216 (2) - Remove the clap in the beginning and put it in the end
00:47:306 (6) - Remove clap
00:56:302 (1) - I think this clap shouldn't be here. (Finish would fit more)
01:02:845 (1) - ^
01:05:025 (1) - ^
01:06:934 (4) - ^
01:09:251 (6) - Remove the clap here.
01:20:019 (7) - Remove the clap here and put it in 01:19:746 (6) -
01:21:654 (10) - Remove the clap in the reverse and put in the end
01:22:745 (2) - Remove the clap here and put it in 01:23:017 (3) -
01:23:290 (4) - Remove the clap in the beginning.
01:23:835 (5) - Put clap in the end
01:24:380 (1) - Remove clap
01:25:471 (3) - ^
01:44:280 - 02:06:089 - This part is different, no claps in 4th beat like in the others?
02:06:089 (1) - Finish in the beginning
02:07:179 (3) - ^
02:08:269 (5) - I think finish is enough, remove clap
02:09:087 (7) - Finish in the reverse
02:21:218 (7) - Remove clap
In the last kiai there are some missing claps in 4th beat too, they're put in the downbeat.

That's all from my part, good luck /o/
BounceBabe
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Topic Starter
BounceBabe

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi there, mod time as requested, sorry for the late >_<

[Normal]
00:13:503 (2) - What about making this kind of sliders straight, curved looks a bit squeezed, if you make it straight, make the flow lead to the next object, maybe like this.
00:22:499 (2) - ^ Both done
00:55:212 (3) - Flip this vertically? Flow would be better doing this imo.
01:08:842 (4) - You can make this a 1/2 slider with one repeat, short sliders with many repeats can be a bit confusing, specially being this the lowest diff in the set, newbies would be playing this.
01:25:198 - A circle is missing here, that beat feels so lonely~ Added

Disagreed with others

Hitsounds suggestions.
Click :3
00:23:590 (4) - Remove the clap in the beginning and put it in the end
00:24:408 (5) - Remove clap
00:27:951 (4) - Remove clap in the beginning
00:33:403 (3) - ^
00:37:493 (3) - ^
00:36:675 (1) - Remove the clap here and put it in 00:37:220 (2)
00:42:672 (1) - Clap here.
00:43:217 (1) - Clap in the end
00:44:035 (2) - Remove clap here.
00:46:216 (3) - Remove clap in the beginning.
01:30:650 (1) - Clap in the begining
01:32:286 (3) - Remove clap in the beginning.
01:39:374 (2) - Clap in the begining
02:00:637 (3) - You forgot a finish in the end of this, I think.
02:02:272 (4) - Remove the clap in the end and put it in the beginning
02:03:635 (3) - Remove clap here and put it in 02:04:453 (4)
02:12:631 (1) - Clap in the end
02:13:449 (2) - Remove clap
02:14:812 (1) - Remove the clap in the beginning and put it in the end (Keep the finish)
02:15:630 (2) - Remove clap
02:16:993 (1) - Remove the clap in the beginning and put it in the end (Keep the finish)
02:17:811 (2) - Remove clap
02:22:445 (2) - You forgot a clap here.
02:23:535 (1) - Remove clap.

Won't change these hitsounds ><

"Nazi" stuff
Click :3
00:59:573 (4) - For blanket: Move the 2nd node to x:296 y:160 and the last to x:352 y:184
01:06:661 (3) - The red node would look better being in the middle of this.
01:54:094 (2) - For blanket: Move the 2nd node to x:80 y:216 and the last to x:144 y:216
02:14:812 (1) - For blanket: Move the 2nd node to x:432 y:104 and the last to x:384 y:168 (Remember fix spacing if you do this.)
02:17:811 (2) - For blanket: Move the last to x:272 y:280
02:39:891 (2) - For blanket: Move the 2nd node to x:200 y:112 and the last to x:200 y:48

No changes

[Hard]
00:12:686 (1) - You can shorten this slider by 1/4 and put a circle in 00:13:231 Sounds not what i was after
00:14:049 (3) - I don't think this stack is good, make it like 00:15:412 (2) No because i would need to destroy my whole pattern for this, and the 2nd one is on purpose
01:08:842 (3,4,5,6,7) - You can make this stream shorter, like you did in the other ones after this The stream follows the rythm

Hitsounds suggestions.
Click :3
00:21:954 (1) - Clap here
00:22:227 (2) - Remove clap
00:24:135 (6) - ^
00:24:953 (7) - Remove the clap here and put it in 00:25:225 (8)
00:29:314 (3) - Remove the clap here and put it in 00:29:587 (4)
00:31:223 (3) - Remove the clap here and put it in 00:31:768 (4)
00:35:312 (2) - Remove clap
00:36:675 (1) - Remove the clap here and put it in 00:37:220 (2)
00:42:672 (1) - Clap here.
00:43:217 (3) - Clap in the end
00:44:035 (4) - Remove clap
00:45:398 (1) - Clap in the end
00:46:216 (2) - Remove the clap in the beginning and put it in the end
00:47:306 (6) - Remove clap
00:56:302 (1) - I think this clap shouldn't be here. (Finish would fit more)
01:02:845 (1) - ^
01:05:025 (1) - ^
01:06:934 (4) - ^
01:09:251 (6) - Remove the clap here.
01:20:019 (7) - Remove the clap here and put it in 01:19:746 (6) -
01:21:654 (10) - Remove the clap in the reverse and put in the end
01:22:745 (2) - Remove the clap here and put it in 01:23:017 (3) -
01:23:290 (4) - Remove the clap in the beginning.
01:23:835 (5) - Put clap in the end
01:24:380 (1) - Remove clap
01:25:471 (3) - ^
01:44:280 - 02:06:089 - This part is different, no claps in 4th beat like in the others?
02:06:089 (1) - Finish in the beginning
02:07:179 (3) - ^
02:08:269 (5) - I think finish is enough, remove clap
02:09:087 (7) - Finish in the reverse
02:21:218 (7) - Remove clap
In the last kiai there are some missing claps in 4th beat too, they're put in the downbeat.

Like Normal

That's all from my part, good luck /o/
Thank you ♥
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
M4M sorry for the late :C
all are suggestions >//< the map is really very good

[General]

More linkin Park :B!

[Normal]

(*) 00:27:951 (4) - i think this is a bit confusing for new players, the reaction of new players would go to reverse so I think it is confusing
(*) 00:34:494 (1) - your intention to make the perfect blanket is good, but break the snap distance which is bad so I would recommend move elsewhere
(*) 01:55:730 (1) - ^
(*) 00:36:675 (1) - check the setting distance here
(*) 01:42:100 (1,2) - why not try this:
SPOILER
looks much better :)

(*) 02:56:248 - you could add a note here, I think I need, if you do that adds a finish

[Hard]

(*) 01:20:019 (1) - NC
(*) 02:08:269 (1) - ^
(*) 02:56:248 - Same The normal!

that's all, Good map and song More Linkin Park
Good lucky >< Give star :3
BounceBabe
1,626 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
BounceBabe

Gero wrote:

M4M sorry for the late :C
all are suggestions >//< the map is really very good

[General]

More linkin Park :B!

[Normal]

(*) 00:27:951 (4) - i think this is a bit confusing for new players, the reaction of new players would go to reverse so I think it is confusing
(*) 00:34:494 (1) - your intention to make the perfect blanket is good, but break the snap distance which is bad so I would recommend move elsewhere The tiny distance change doesnt matter because overall you can see any difference when playing
(*) 01:55:730 (1) - ^ Same
(*) 00:36:675 (1) - check the setting distance here
(*) 01:42:100 (1,2) - why not try this:
SPOILER
looks much better :)

(*) 02:56:248 - you could add a note here, I think I need, if you do that adds a finish

[Hard]

(*) 01:20:019 (1) - NC Done
(*) 02:08:269 (1) - ^ Done
(*) 02:56:248 - Same The normal!

that's all, Good map and song More Linkin Park
Good lucky >< Give star :3
Thank you!
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
Hello~ :3

As always, I'm glad to mod good maps. :3

[General]
  1. I think you should move Meteora to tags. This is an album name, not a source. o3o
  2. Enable letterbox during breaks? It will not hurt your bg + it's more common for long maps without SB.
[Normal]

  • note: Normal is the EASIEST diff here. It's important part in my mod.
  1. 00:21:954 (1) - as long as this diff is the easiest, you should make it beginner-friendly. Overlap with spinner hitburst makes 00:21:954 (1) - invisible for beginners. Please move (1) somewhere else!
  2. 00:42:672 (1,2,1) - ULTRA-NAZI - first of all, it's too far from spinner-centre it's some kind of stress for beginners. secondly, there's stack which will confuse players a lot.
  3. 01:06:661 (3) - I'd use here slider and circle instead (or 1/2 slider with reverse) to follow vocals closer. example see, it's following vocals better \o3o/
  4. 01:08:842 (4) - this slider is too short + 1/4 objects in easiest diff is too hard! reverse-arrow will appear/disappear too quickly. It will stress players a lot. :< (same for 01:26:561 (5) - (01:34:467 (2) - this one feels TOO fast and off rhythm, btw) - )
  5. 02:07:179 (2) - try to end this slider at 02:07:724 - to follow vocals. I feel like they end exactly at this point. (02:08:013 - and add circle here to recover missed beat)
  6. 02:56:248 - if you have a fountain here, it's quite reasonable to have circle here as well, right?
[Hard]
  1. Sometimes you use low spacing for streams, sometimes you don't. 02:01:182 (4,5,6,7,1) - /02:20:809 (4,5,6,7) /01:43:735 (3,4,5,6,1) - - and sometimes you stack them. try to keep them consistent? (same sound = similar pattern \o3o/)
  2. OD and HP Drain +1 it will fit with your hythm and patterns, also it makes map more interesting to play.
  3. 01:48:369 - I feel like circle here will fit really good, think about it, please! It will follow rhythm of the map and song
  4. 01:51:913 (3) - nazi - ctrl+g (reverse) this slider, so you will have consistent jumpy pattern that fits here! ;3/
~~~~~~~~~~~
Awesome map!

Star! ~
BounceBabe
1,626 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
BounceBabe
-Bakari-

-Bakari- wrote:

Hello~ :3

As always, I'm glad to mod good maps. :3 ^-^

[General]
  1. I think you should move Meteora to tags. This is an album name, not a source. o3o Will discuss this with jericho once i meet him o3o
  2. Enable letterbox during breaks? It will not hurt your bg + it's more common for long maps without SB. Ok
[Normal]

  • note: Normal is the EASIEST diff here. It's important part in my mod.
  1. 00:21:954 (1) - as long as this diff is the easiest, you should make it beginner-friendly. Overlap with spinner hitburst makes 00:21:954 (1) - invisible for beginners. Please move (1) somewhere else! Will add a skin once im home to fix this
  2. 00:42:672 (1,2,1) - ULTRA-NAZI - first of all, it's too far from spinner-centre it's some kind of stress for beginners. secondly, there's stack which will confuse players a lot.
  3. 01:06:661 (3) - I'd use here slider and circle instead (or 1/2 slider with reverse) to follow vocals closer. example see, it's following vocals better \o3o/
  4. 01:08:842 (4) - this slider is too short + 1/4 objects in easiest diff is too hard! reverse-arrow will appear/disappear too quickly. It will stress players a lot. :< (same for 01:26:561 (5) - (01:34:467 (2) - this one feels TOO fast and off rhythm, btw) - ) The rythm and slider repeat is fine since you only have to click and hold and theres nothing after
  5. 02:07:179 (2) - try to end this slider at 02:07:724 - to follow vocals. I feel like they end exactly at this point. (02:08:013 - and add circle here to recover missed beat)
  6. 02:56:248 - if you have a fountain here, it's quite reasonable to have circle here as well, right? Deleted fountain
[Hard]
  1. Sometimes you use low spacing for streams, sometimes you don't. 02:01:182 (4,5,6,7,1) - /02:20:809 (4,5,6,7) /01:43:735 (3,4,5,6,1) - - and sometimes you stack them. try to keep them consistent? (same sound = similar pattern \o3o/)
  2. OD and HP Drain +1 it will fit with your hythm and patterns, also it makes map more interesting to play. Made HP higher
  3. 01:48:369 - I feel like circle here will fit really good, think about it, please! It will follow rhythm of the map and song
  4. 01:51:913 (3) - nazi - ctrl+g (reverse) this slider, so you will have consistent jumpy pattern that fits here! ;3/
~~~~~~~~~~~
Awesome map!

Star! ~

Thank you ♥
Makyu
424 posts
Joined April 2012
Makyu
[Normal]
00:12:686 (1,2,3) - You may try this -> http://puu.sh/25Exf
00:21:954 (1) - I think this note can't be here.
00:31:223 (2) - I know staks are not problems for newbies, but I think slider staks are.
00:35:584 (2) - same here
00:38:992 (1) - I think you may finish the spinner here 00:41:582 -
00:42:672 (1) - move this note, with only one stack in this part is ok
00:45:262 - down the volumen of this not a bit, it sounds wreid
00:51:395 (2) - remove this slider and add only a single circle, I think it sounds amazings that
01:05:025 (1) - this slider sounds wreid, but I have no Idea what to do here :c
01:08:842 (4) - I think yoy may remove this and add a circle in that pont and here 01:09:387 -
01:09:932 - start the breake here, is nice -> http://puu.sh/25GEs
01:26:561 (5) - I think this may confuse the newbies, maybe start the spinner here?
01:34:467 (2) - This may confuse too :s
01:44:280 - why short Kiai here? use it on the whole chorus D:
01:52:186 (3) - You were following the lyrics the whole time, this note may confuse the newbies, be careful
02:06:089 (1,2) - I think you can make a better slider here, like this http://puu.sh/25GQb
Here is the code if you are interested -> 
124,180,126089,6,0,B|144:244|144:244|140:308|196:360,1,195,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,357,127179,2,0,B|372:308|368:244|368:244|388:180,1,195,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:08:269 (3) - if you do that, remember to fix this note.
02:11:541 (3) - I think is not a good idea to put this note here, put it upside
02:13:449 (2) - This clap sounds wreid, maybe remove it?
02:15:630 (2) - same here
02:17:811 (2) - same here
02:22:445 (2) - I was expecting a clap here
02:25:171 - remove this clap an add in the tail
02:27:352 - same here
02:29:533 - same here
02:48:615 (2) - same as 00:31:223 (2)
02:56:248 - add a note?

[Hard]
00:14:594 (5) - Remove this note
00:15:412 (2) - Stack it wit the tail, or do this http://puu.sh/25H6i
00:27:951 (1) - I don't really like this kind of sliders, sorry.
00:37:220 (2) - Same as 00:15:412 (2)
00:46:625 (3,4) - same here
00:47:579 (7) - maybe put it here? x364 y248
00:51:395 (3,4) - this jump can confuse people, maybe move (3) to x24 y188
00:52:486 (2) - same as 00:15:412 (2)
00:56:847 (2) - same here
01:06:116 (3) - maybe put this slider like this? -> http://puu.sh/25HdW
01:06:934 (4) - if you do that, remember to fix this note
01:09:932 - this break, same as Normal
01:46:461 (6) - Maybe you should do this slider like this? http://puu.sh/25HhT
Here is the code if you are interested
48,192,106461,2,0,B|48:240|64:264|64:264|48:256|48:256|72:296|72:352,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:51:232 - Maybe add a note here, or move the next slider here. Like this part, without repetitions 02:13:176 (2) -
02:20:400 - remove this clap
02:20:809 (4) - and this
02:20:946 (5) - and this
02:38:256 (3,4) - and those
02:38:665 (6) - this one too
02:39:891 (3) - I don't like this clap at the tail
02:49:433 (4) - Move this note here and remove the clap 02:49:296 -
02:56:248 - add a note here

Sorry if my mod is useful, I'm noot at this, if it's please ignore my request.
One extra thing, I suggest you something in the normal abaut the kiai, In the hard too.
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