1. Easy (2.71 stars, 221 notes)
2. Hard (4.96 stars, 571 notes)
3. Insane (4.88 stars, 792 notes)
4. Normal (4.41 stars, 369 notes)

Sun Rainbow wrote:

哇求DIFF（逃

Ibuki Suika wrote:

http://pan.baidu.com/share/link?shareid=25799&uk=100758988

• 
  "re" 意思是 "remove"
  黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
  藍色 是要討論的問題
  紅色 是unrankable

[general]

1. Enable countdown,不用記得勾掉噢 >w<
2. 話說把letter during brraks勾掉 ?~

[Easy]

1. fine to me~

[Normal]

1. 00:10:738 (3,1) - 總覺得有種突然disdance變大的感覺 ...?
2. 00:11:474 (2,3) - 其實咱不建議這樣堆疊 ;w;
3. 00:45:707 (3,1) - 這個...咱覺得會讓人以為(3)是迴轉2次的那種slider , 尾巴別蓋在(1)身上>~<?!
4. 00:52:701 (2) - 間距~
5. 00:47:180 (3) - 拉開距離,不要重疊 ?~
6. 00:58:959 (4,5) - 咱覺得這會讓新手按快,因為前面(1),(2),(3)是1/2外加1.4x間距,突然來了個1/1重疊 , 咱想到的方法是把(5)拉開
7. 01:04:112 (1,2) - ^
8. 01:12:579 (4) - 讓它重疊在01:12:947 (1) - 身上?
   
   
9. 有種Normal+的感覺 lol!

[Hard]

1. 00:55:094 (1) - 第4個點 x:344 y:96
2. 03:17:732 (6) - 咱覺得03:17:732 (6) - ctrl+R 像02:27:671 (2) - 一樣?~
3. 01:56:382 (3,4) - ctrl+R ?~ 有改的話01:57:119 (1) - 這距離可能要改一下

[Insane]

1. 被咱發現了!! 咱要吐槽那個bookmark (逃
   
   
2. fine ~

wantuole wrote:

from you queue
M4M
[General]
全部没有任何转圈啊 长达3分钟的歌曲 转圈在这图里面纯属碍眼
03:05:769 -03:06:689 这里是难用 完全舍弃又会有点粗糙感 加了以后会很坑爹，舍弃的话更适用，而且这块本来声音就很空没背景音乐加note很多余
我不怎么喜欢坑人
[easy]
01:06:689 (2) - remove clap FIX~
03:01:904 (2) - 03:02:088这里开始 结束没问题
[nor]
好吧 有趣的梗 堆叠1/2的note 推荐圈像结尾的03:28:407 (2,3,4,5) - 2堆叠 音效用denden tata这样leisi的(确实是累死) 不怎么懂你在说啥
00:10:002 (1) - 叠在00:08:898 (4)的结尾 denden tata中在normal这种ar不能高的地方，我不怎么喜欢把note堆到slider尾巴上，因为玩的时候看起来会有点差距而导致不爽感急升
01:36:505 (1,2,3,4) - ^denden tata 蠢梗，当然是分开全图都是在这里只用按不用移动的设计，如果把slider拉开会太远所以不要
01:59:511 (4) - 之前的1,2,3上升力度有点大 这个应该是向下更好 旋转60度，像你03:12:763 (2,3,4,1,2,3)这样的

SPOILER

本身设计就是4包住1
[Hard]
吐槽 旋转力度突然足起来了 但是堆叠的优势没发挥出来 缺点倒是体验了个遍(燃烧吧！鬼畜之魂)
请一定要看完这个难度的mod！
00:00:800 (1,2,3,4) - 不要全部堆叠 透露点后面的走向更好不喜欢这种表现方式
00:09:634 (1,2,3,4) - 这个不需要改动,前面是左边过来到右上 自然向下走可以理解
00:59:327 (5) - 出现在这不科学,附近需要点改动。推荐把4改成回撞式的,这样让人更轻松的接受大跳

SPOILER

不好意思什么是回撞式不懂4往下走再移上来再从5往下走，因为音乐的音调是这样的
01:04:296 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 很明显不熟练的旋转堆叠,想法是是不错,但是8不需要减少ds,后面的1也堆叠在8就不这么美观了,推荐把8拉到01:06:321 (2)开始的地方堆叠。顺便也能增强下不规则旋转堆叠的ds和方向感

SPOILER

不好意思摆这个并不是为了旋转而是因为音乐在我听来的时候有那么两个跳然后这样玩很顺就这么摆了
01:07:793 (6) - ^依旧不熟练 拥挤而且不跟随方向，推荐6结尾叠在3的结尾，开头不变 略微调整下3~6形状，顺便可以形成6的开头在3的凹槽的观看梗
因为比较麻烦就进行摆设截图了 (偷懒中)
设计是，当时堆到这里了，再怎么走都会觉得很挤所以改成了影响最小的堆叠
01:56:382 (3,4,5) - 三次堆叠,涂涂画画神麻婆再次把握不好了,这个该逆时针转 而且该叠两个 吐槽4就是乱抛

SPOILER

设计是这三个要往上走，因为音调是往上的
02:55:830 (1,2) - 为了堆叠 连旋转力度都抛弃了啊. 就是堆叠才更要注意旋转力度 1的角度明显没转够,转30度 尾部稍微调整下到2的dissnap距离就能fix

SPOILER

设计是2的尾巴能够够到6而且能包住1的头，不好意思我当时并不是因为旋转才摆成这样的
[insane]
02:10:738 (2) - ^ 头尾都堆叠很不错,但是旋转力度小了30度以外误差还是不能接受.最好还是别堆叠,继续旋转30°~90°玩的时候很喜欢这种方式，所以不好意思
02:47:916 (4) - 勉强的三次堆叠。涂涂画画没感觉4结尾→5的dis和之后的5结尾→6和6→7差太多了吗,而且02:47:364 (2,3,4) 走向也不太科学,不带力度的旋转和直着的走法，4的开头不叠跟好.节奏明显，所以456这边坑不到人，还可以把前面那种加速的感觉衍生到这里
02:50:861 (4) - 这蠢梗还用啊, 推荐拿ds,单个加大ds可以用用,例如03:09:082 (9,1) 这里，但后面还有一样的02:51:229 (5,6,1)节奏梗啊不好意思这地方我再怎么蠢也不会用大跳，这节奏TM的不是大跳
03:19:941 (3,4,5) - 意外的这里可以夸奖 玩起来挺带感的 而且也挺好看。关键是保持的ds的距离,但是做那么激情的节奏后不缓冲下吗? 将5逆时针转30度数继续堆叠,衔接到下个1不需要90度那么大的旋转力度 (学习中 mark mark)太挤了

就这样,tutuhaha加油
当然star我喜欢这歌，别忘记M4M

tutuhaha wrote:

同学说真的你是否太注意排列了而忽视了节奏以及前后左右的拥挤问题呢
还有，在你mod的mapper读的懂中文的情况下，少说蠢梗蠢梗蠢梗之类的，这跟外国人对外国人说wtf, only a shit一样让人讨厌
还是感谢你过来mod了
Thanks

你的:172,236,161290,22,0,B|116:192|136:112|208:64|
我的:172,236,161290,22,0,B|116:227|117:107|229:67|

1. Remove letterbox during breaks because the video already has got it
2. Remove countdown in all diffs

1. You are using the same OD of the normal diff, so it'd be better to reduce it by 1
2. 00:41:290 (4) - I'd remove whistle on the slider's tail. It sounds too loud and bad.
3. 01:06:689 (2) - Finish on the slider's head like you did for the previous one. It'd emphasize the clash in the cymbals
4. 01:35:033 (5) - New combo according the new vocal?
5. 01:36:505 (1) - Finish at the beginning to emphasize the cymbals
6. 01:39:450 - Extend the break time till here
7. 02:38:346 (5) - Same of 01:35:033 (5)
8. 02:39:818 (1) - Finish at the beginning to emphasize the cymbals
9. 03:28:407 (5) - Same of 01:35:033 (5)

1. 1.4x spacing.. why ._. Reduce it, please. Patterns like these 00:58:407 (1,2,3,4) and 01:03:560 (2,3,4,1) are really hard to play.
2. 00:10:002 (1,2,3) - Considering the slow AR these overlapped circles are hard to read for a Normal diff in the calmer part of the song
3. 00:44:235 (4) - Why 1/2 slider here? Mh, you could simply to use an 1/1 slider instead, it fits the music better IMO
4. 00:45:339 (2,3) - Mh.. Well, I don't think this overlap is suitable for a Normal diff since there should be a circle on 00:45:523 that follows the vocal. Don't overlap them, or better, I'd suggest you to use this easier rhythm instead, considering that you are mapping a Normal diff it'd be more enjoyable to play for beginners:
   
5. 01:25:830 (3,1) - Same thing about the overlap I wrote for 00:45:339 (2,3)
6. 02:40:922 (4) - This 1/2 slider after 3 overlapped circle isn't a good idea IMHO. Don't overlap it
7. Rhythm is good, but the spacing isn't suitable for a normal diff.

1. 01:34:573 (4,5) - Inconsistent spacing, move the (5) closer to (4).
2. 02:35:677 - There should be a circle here to keep consistency
3. 03:04:296 (7,8) - Move the (8) to x:452 y:280 and after that select these 2 circles and CTRL + G them. The spacing is more enjoyable and flowing to play http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/462107

1. 02:08:530 (7,1) - I don't agree about this anti-jump
2. 03:16:628 - This part confused be because there should be a circle on this downbeat

Chewin wrote:

Hi tutuhaha ;3
Here's my mod from my m4m queue.

[General]

1. Remove letterbox during breaks because the video already has got itFIX~
2. Remove countdown in all diffsFIX~

[Easy]

1. You are using the same OD of the normal diff, so it'd be better to reduce it by 1FIX~
2. 00:41:290 (4) - I'd remove whistle on the slider's tail. It sounds too loud and bad.FIX~
3. 01:06:689 (2) - Finish on the slider's head like you did for the previous one. It'd emphasize the clash in the cymbalsFIX~
4. 01:35:033 (5) - New combo according the new vocal?FIX~
5. 01:36:505 (1) - Finish at the beginning to emphasize the cymbalsFIX~
6. 01:39:450 - Extend the break time till hereFIX~
7. 02:38:346 (5) - Same of 01:35:033 (5)FIX~
8. 02:39:818 (1) - Finish at the beginning to emphasize the cymbalsFIX~
9. 03:28:407 (5) - Same of 01:35:033 (5)FIX~

[Normal]

1. 1.4x spacing.. why ._. Reduce it, please. Patterns like these 00:58:407 (1,2,3,4) and 01:03:560 (2,3,4,1) are really hard to play.Maybe this diff need be Normal+, because I dont want to see all note are crowded in this song........but..sv too high is hard play than this Orz........
2. 00:10:002 (1,2,3) - Considering the slow AR these overlapped circles are hard to read for a Normal diff in the calmer part of the songFIX~
3. 00:44:235 (4) - Why 1/2 slider here? Mh, you could simply to use an 1/1 slider instead, it fits the music better IMOFIX~
4. 00:45:339 (2,3) - Mh.. Well, I don't think this overlap is suitable for a Normal diff since there should be a circle on 00:45:523 that follows the vocal. Don't overlap them, or better, I'd suggest you to use this easier rhythm instead, considering that you are mapping a Normal diff it'd be more enjoyable to play for beginners:FIX~
   
5. 01:25:830 (3,1) - Same thing about the overlap I wrote for 00:45:339 (2,3)FIX~
6. 02:40:922 (4) - This 1/2 slider after 3 overlapped circle isn't a good idea IMHO. Don't overlap itFIX~
7. Rhythm is good, but the spacing isn't suitable for a normal diff.

[Hard]

1. 01:34:573 (4,5) - Inconsistent spacing, move the (5) closer to (4).FIX~
2. 02:35:677 - There should be a circle here to keep consistencyFIX~
3. 03:04:296 (7,8) - Move the (8) to x:452 y:280 and after that select these 2 circles and CTRL + G them. The spacing is more enjoyable and flowing to play http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/462107

FIX~

[Insane]

1. 02:08:530 (7,1) - I don't agree about this anti-jumpI think it need have a stress
2. 03:16:628 - This part confused be because there should be a circle on this downbeat FIX~

That's it
Good luck tutuhaha

wcx19911123 wrote:

here's your ticket

[General]
video size is larger than 800x600, need to find a small one

[Normal]
00:58:591 (2,3) - better to change to slider, or here's kinda hard to play
01:03:744 (3,4) - ^
02:07:425 (1,2) - ^
02:07:793 (3,1) - stack better

[Hard]
00:46:260 (1) - this slider can blanket better
01:24:726 (1) - end this slider at 01:25:002 - ? fit the song better imo
02:16:260 (3) - ^
02:28:039 (1) - ^
03:01:352 (4,5,6) - ctrl+g? flow better
03:18:100 (1) - same here

[Insane]
02:02:088 (3,4,5) - better not to put this circles under other circles, it's hard to read
02:08:530 (7,1,2) - I don't know why anti-jump here, stack or put away from other ones is better
02:12:763 (6,7) - ctrl+g? flow better
03:00:063 (6,7,1) - I highly suggest reduce spaicng here, kinda hard to play

let me know when this is done
感觉没以前做的好啊0.0
不能偷懒啊0.0

Garven wrote:

SG ninja'd my modding your other map, so I'll take this one then~

[General]
Add Oshiire-P to tags (fan-nick name) FIX
00:12:579 - If you would like, I can make the artist/title appear here. Let me know what colors you want if you want this changed.
That first break is really... really long, heh.ok sure why not <3

[All difficulties]
Please add a spinner so that there are variances in the scoreboard.FIX
Tick rate 2 fits this song best, but if you apply it, artificially silence every other tick during the slower sections.FIX in Insane

[Easy]
Decent map. Just need to move some combos around here.
00:09:634 (5) - New combo
00:10:370 (1) - Remove
00:45:339 (4) - New combo
00:45:707 (1) - Remove
01:02:640 (4) - New
01:04:112 (1) - remove
01:35:033 (1) - ^
02:38:346 (1) - ^
03:28:407 (1) - ^
FIX
[Normal]
00:05:585 (1,2,3,1) - Considering the spacing you used here, you might want to use similar spacing at 00:10:738 (3,1) -
00:46:260 (1,2) - Kind of the same weird spacing change here. I don't recommend doing stuff like this in a Normal.
FIX
00:45:155 (5) - New combo
00:50:309 (6) - ^
00:50:677 (1) - remove
00:52:149 (1) - ^
01:07:793 (1) - ^
01:08:346 (2) - New (since new combos in stacks is ugly)
01:09:818 (1) - remove
01:20:125 (5) - Either new combo here to keep your 1 combo a measure or change the kiai section to one combo every two measuresI dont want to change this so sorry
01:51:229 (1) - You kind of switched to shorter combos here now. Keep it consistent with what you used earlier in the map. I won't list all of them. You should have a good idea of what to look out for, I think.
FIX
[Hard]
00:06:321 (3,4,1) - That's some really big spacing for the soft intro to a Hard diff...
Anyway, keep an eye on your new combos here too. They're not as bad, but see what you can spot going through with regards to the Easy/Normal.
FIX
[Insane]
OD +1
FIX
Now that I saw the later difficulties, maybe not as many combo changes in the Easy/Normal for your color set changes, but in general it should be consistent beyond your emphasis changes. <3

1. 02:20:677 (1,2,3) - make them stay more like group?

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
00:36:137 (1) - Kind of soon after a spinner. At least have the slider closer to the center to aid in recovery.

Colin Hou wrote:

quick check.



the bg is twisted by wrongly edit i'd say, you don't really need to force it to 4:3. make sure it's less than 1024x768 though.

[normal]

1. 02:20:677 (1,2,3) - make them stay more like group?

No_Gu wrote:

rank这么多自重