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Yu Lin Xian - Song of Cao Ni Ma

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popner
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年10月25日 at 12:10:13

Artist: Yu Lin Xian
Title: Song of Cao Ni Ma
Source: Vocaloid
Tags: luo tian yi luotianyi tianyi chi huo chihuo caonima Vocaloid China Lan Jing Ling Zhi Ge The Smurfs
BPM: 127.33
Filesize: 2923kb
Play Time: 01:20
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.64 stars, 75 notes)
  2. Hard (4.68 stars, 154 notes)
  3. Insane (4.95 stars, 263 notes)
  4. Normal (4.11 stars, 125 notes)
Download: Yu Lin Xian - Song of Cao Ni Ma
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#11
洛天依 - 草泥马之歌(Song of Grass Mud Horse)
by 雨霖仙
http://www.bilibili.tv/video/av310593/
SB: Done!

Heatherfield wrote:

智商堪忧

Lyric wrote:

我是一只草泥马

请听 草泥马之歌

在那苍茫美丽马勒戈壁有一群草泥马

它们活泼又聪明

它们调皮又灵敏

它们自由自在生活在那草泥马戈壁

它们顽强克服艰苦环境

哦 卧槽的 草泥马 哦 狂槽的 草泥马

它们为了卧草不被吃掉打败了河蟹

河蟹从此消失草泥马戈壁
马勒戈壁上草泥马的故事

在荒茫而美丽的马勒戈壁上。生活着一群顽强的草泥马。（因为草泥马实是主要物种，所以马勒戈壁又叫草泥马戈壁）草泥马们克服了戈壁的艰苦环境，并顽强的生活下来。戈壁上缺少水缺少食物，草泥马能进食的只有一种草——卧草。然而卧草一般生长在人类的聚集点附近。所以草泥马一生都是于人类相依为伴的。
　　
在一个草泥马群居点。笔者认识了朝泥族青年，朝泥两次。他告诉笔者部族里只有成年男性才可以配有一匹草泥马。草泥马分为三个品质。最下等才叫做草泥马。中等的叫做卧槽泥马。而最上等的是狂槽泥马。狂槽泥马是马王，要部族里骑术最好的人才能获得。朝泥两次说自己因为骑术好。还没成年的时候就获得了狂槽泥马。说完他立刻露出的腼腆的笑容。随即笔者来到了朝泥两次的家。他的母亲热情接待了我们。喝了些许马奶，就到了睡着了。醒来后发现朝泥两次的父亲朝泥大爷也回到了家。我便跟朝泥大爷聊了起来。朝泥大爷显现出了忧伤的表情：“日子不好过了，我们家以前是买马匹的。现在改行割皮包了。因为草泥马吃的食物卧草几乎全被一种叫河蟹的动物吃掉了。他说他也不知道河蟹是怎么来的。但是随着食物的减少。草泥马数量也在急剧减少。”说罢流下了痛心的眼泪。
　　
鲜红的晚霞和岩石如同一对轻骑。护送笔者离开马勒戈壁，在缓缓的落日下看着一群一群的草泥马湮没在沙尘之中。或许如果不保护环境。最后倒下的必将是人类。
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Heatherfield
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Heatherfield
智商堪忧

深夜床头柜上键鼠成绩
SPOILER

edit:some hitsound mod on irc
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popner
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popner

Heatherfield wrote:

智商堪忧

深夜床头柜上键鼠成绩
SPOILER

edit:some hitsound mod on irc

好
话说我还没加NC
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
好
Snowy Dream
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Snowy Dream
卧槽这....
Scorpiour
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Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
Timing check~~

BPM:127.25
Offset:105

not very sure about that but i suppose it's better than current~
raririn
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raririn
马勒戈壁这是啥
pw384
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Joined January 2012
pw384
Sell a moe XD

图做得比我强多了._.
话说做这首歌的都是什么心态._.

[Insane]
00:02:017 (1) - 这个Slider头貌似没有BGM？从00:02:253开头怎么样._.
01:15:999 (3) - 略鬼畜._.
----------我是分割线----------
00:26:521 - 00:40:657 加一个Kiai怎么样._.
01:06:103 - 01:21:182 同上

gl~笑抽ing..
P o M u T a
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P o M u T a
star~ :D
sherrie__fay
437 posts
Joined October 2010
sherrie__fay
mod from #modreq

再多的风景也从不停靠
只一心寻找我遗失的节操

[General]

  1. 所有的diff都需要一定的finish音
  2. 这尼玛whistle听得我整个人都whistle了……
  3. 00:25:578 -
  4. 00:40:657 -
  5. 00:49:139 -
  6. 01:05:161 -
  7. 01:21:182 -
[Hard]

  1. 00:53:145 - +note
[Insane]

  1. 00:07:790 (1) - 去掉NC
  2. 00:47:373 (1) - ^
[SB]

  1. t-1.png和t-2.png有点偏 再往右一点就河蟹了
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\t-1.png",320,240
 M,0,2253,,252,70
 F,0,2253,2960,0,1
 F,0,2960,8614,1
 F,0,8614,9321,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\t-2.png",320,240
 M,0,5552,,202,120
 F,0,5552,6258,0,1
 F,0,6258,8614,1
 F,0,8614,9321,1,0
Aurele
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Aurele
Hi hi.
In general, I really love the hitsounds you have added. But this is weird http://puu.sh/UX1g .

Easy

Circle emplacement
  1. 00:22:280 (1,2) - This is a bad idea or an easy difficulty. It may confuse alot of begginer players. So I'm suggesting you to do something like this.

Normal
HP +1 or maybe 2.
OD -1

Circle emplacement
  1. 01:03:276 (3,1) - I don't really like this, seriously. The spinner start so quickly. I am suggesting you to delete the reverse arrow of the slider and start the spinner at 01:04:218. So normal players could have a little break between the slider and the spinner.

Hard

Circle emplacement
  1. 00:18:274 (4) - This slider would have sounded better if it started at 00:18:039. Delete the reverse arrow of 00:17:568 (3) - and start the slider at 00:18:039. After that, move the slider, if not, it will be a spacing error.

Insane

Circle emplacement
  1. 00:06:494 (3,4) - Try to keep the distance between these. (~1,43x)

Sorry for the poor mod, this map is kindof ready for ranking. Just get some more mod and than MAT/BAT mods (:
popner
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popner

sherrie__fay wrote:

SPOILER
mod from #modreq

再多的风景也从不停靠
只一心寻找我遗失的节操

[General]

  1. 所有的diff都需要一定的finish音 I'm not sure of the position to add finish so I'll keep it temporarily and wait for someone else's suggestion.
  2. 这尼玛whistle听得我整个人都whistle了…… orz
  3. 00:25:578 -
  4. 00:40:657 -
  5. 00:49:139 -
  6. 01:05:161 -
  7. 01:21:182 -
[Hard]

  1. 00:53:145 - +note nope..it is intentional
[Insane]

  1. 00:07:790 (1) - 去掉NC fixed
  2. 00:47:373 (1) - ^
[SB]

  1. t-1.png和t-2.png有点偏 再往右一点就河蟹了 done, thx for code~
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\t-1.png",320,240
 M,0,2253,,252,70
 F,0,2253,2960,0,1
 F,0,2960,8614,1
 F,0,8614,9321,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\t-2.png",320,240
 M,0,5552,,202,120
 F,0,5552,6258,0,1
 F,0,6258,8614,1
 F,0,8614,9321,1,0


Gabe wrote:

SPOILER
Hi hi.
In general, I really love the hitsounds you have added. But this is weird http://puu.sh/UX1g .

Easy

Circle emplacement
  1. 00:22:280 (1,2) - This is a bad idea or an easy difficulty. It may confuse alot of begginer players. So I'm suggesting you to do something like this. Changed the pattern

Normal
HP +1 or maybe 2. HP+1
OD -1 nope, it's fine imo

Circle emplacement
  1. 01:03:276 (3,1) - I don't really like this, seriously. The spinner start so quickly. I am suggesting you to delete the reverse arrow of the slider and start the spinner at 01:04:218. So normal players could have a little break between the slider and the spinner. fixed

Hard

Circle emplacement
  1. 00:18:274 (4) - This slider would have sounded better if it started at 00:18:039. Delete the reverse arrow of 00:17:568 (3) - and start the slider at 00:18:039. After that, move the slider, if not, it will be a spacing error. sorry no change... I prefer to current state.

Insane

Circle emplacement
  1. 00:06:494 (3,4) - Try to keep the distance between these. (~1,43x) ok

Sorry for the poor mod, this map is kindof ready for ranking. Just get some more mod and than MAT/BAT mods (:
Thanks for your modding!
Leorda
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Joined June 2009
Leorda
popu-na!


[Easy]
00:29:819 (2) - Add whistle like 00:33:589 (2)? You probably forgot or something?
01:09:402 (2) - ^


[Normal]
* AR +1? Your current appraoch rate is bit slow

00:28:406 (1) - Add whistle at repeating slider?
00:32:175 (1) - ^
01:04:218 (1) - This spinner are too short for beginners and beginners will don't have time to complete this spinner. I suggest you to replace this spinner into slider
01:07:988 (1) - Add whistle at end slider?
01:11:758 (1) - ^


[Hard]
00:26:050 (3) - Shorten to 00:26:285 for better rhythm? Maybe snap at blue tick has a bad rhythm, IMO
00:39:951 (1) - Short spinner is fine, but it's bad while gameplay. Well, it's up to you if you want to change it or not
01:04:336 (1) - ^
01:07:988 (1) - Add whistle at end slider?


[Insane]
00:39:951 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make a pattern like this? Just suggestion, though http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/403620
00:42:778 (7) - Move 1 grid right for making a curve pattern (Nazi)
00:58:447 (2,3) - This spacing are not equal with 00:58:329 (1,2)


Luo Tianyi? Never heard that before....
popner
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popner
Thank you leo~
Snowy Dream
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Snowy Dream
@泡泡 你确定累殴打听不懂歌词？
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
碉堡了
Snowy Dream
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Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
Mod request from PM Req
-------------------------------------------------
[Easy]
00:09:557 (4) - 大重音 不来一发note么
00:22:280 (1) - 建议这里空出一拍 太密了不适合easy


[Normal]
这normal怎么这么难


[Hard]
00:05:787 (2) - 直接删掉 前面的slider加个return
00:39:833 (1) - 前面的蓝线起吧...有点短
00:53:145 (2) - IMO 这里加个note啊=-=
01:06:104 (1) - 左移一
01:11:758 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:02:960 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这样好看多了..

00:07:436 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 求缩小间距..
00:23:576 (5) - 稍微弯了一点不好看..
00:41:364 (1) - 为毛选在这种奇怪的地方开始
01:04:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 哦草救命
01:19:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不好看=-= 后面重新摆..
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Kin
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Kin
From my modding queue

Easy :

00:14:269 (6) - this slider is not really symetric use this slider : http://puu.sh/VVI6
then change this sliders too 00:16:154 (2) - 00:18:039 (2) -


Normal :

Nothing for me ~

Hard :

Nothing too ~

Just some suggestion, you don't need to follow them, but i think it's sound better

Insane :

00:03:078 (4) - remove whistle
00:03:313 (6) - remove whistle
00:04:963 (5) - remove whistle
00:05:198 (7) - remove whistle
00:28:759 (2) - remove whistle
00:29:230 (5) - remove whistle
00:32:529 (2) - remove whistle
00:33:000 (5) - remove whistle
00:33:471 (8) - remove whistle
00:40:068 (2) - remove whistle
00:40:304 (4) - remove whistle
00:40:540 (6) - remove whistle
00:42:661 (6) - remove whistle
00:42:896 (8) - remove whistle
00:44:546 (6) - remove whistle
00:44:781 (8) - remove whistle
01:08:342 (2) - remove whistle
01:08:813 (5) - remove whistle
01:09:285 (8) - remove whistle
01:12:112 (2) - remove whistle
01:12:583 (5) - remove whistle
01:13:054 (8) - remove whistle
Axey
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Joined October 2009
Axey
做的很好 没什么要mod的 送star了 =3=
Nichiyouki
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Joined August 2011
Nichiyouki


Hi, popner

My mod from your request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Fine

Easy

  1. 00:41:600 (1) - I noticed that it doesn't a little parallel. Move 1st point to up 1 grid, and move last point to right 1 grid. Will look better.

Normal

  1. 01:04:218 (1) - Spinner is rather short for a Normal diff. New players may not be able to rotate the spinner in a timely manner. Please fix it.

Hard

  1. 00:05:552 (1,2) - Switch NC, because it's associated with the sound of rhythm in a song.
  2. 00:39:951 (1) - Spinner start at 00:39:833 - (For example in 01:04:336 -.)

Insane

  1. 00:18:864 (2,3) - Move to right 1 grid. Spacing between (1) to (2) is closer than (2) to (3) a little bit.

That's all that I can find them. (If my mod is useless, don't give a kd.)
Nice map, give a star ;)

Good luck~
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
I love cao ni ma!

oh and this map is awesome so have a star
Jayel
846 posts
Joined August 2010
Jayel
Hi, popner!

From my queue.
Well, not really many things to mod from me.

[Hard]
00:05:552 (1,2) - Either lengthen the distance between these notes since it's not visible ...

[Insane]
00:08:261 (5) - Well, these notes are not visible as well.
01:15:882 (2,3) - ^

The other things are fine.

Well, I wonder if it would be called as a modding, but that's all.
You're really a good mapper, good luck!!
mintong89
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Joined July 2011
mintong89
这歌。。我可以做太鼓谱吗？？？？ :D :D :D :D plz :) :) :) :)
mintong89
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Joined July 2011
mintong89
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popner
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popner

mint_ong89 wrote:

这。。。。好了 :oops: :oops:

http://puu.sh/XH1k
基于现在的规则单太鼓是unrankable, 所以不想加太鼓了, sorry :(


Done with all mods and updated. Ty for modding!
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Beren
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Joined September 2009
Beren
你好/


[Easy]
00:51:025 (1,2,3) - 个人觉得不好看


[Normal]
00:39:951 (1) - nc无意义
01:07:988 (1) - N最好不要用那么多来回的
01:11:758 (1) - ^


[Hard]
00:05:552 (1) - 只在红线和白线上放一个note 这里3连了 后面突然节奏那么空有点奇怪
00:16:154 (4) - 换成一个长的slider?
00:17:568 (3) - 少一来回 后面的长slider提前到白线
00:18:746 (5) - 上面改了的话 这里加note
00:21:809 (4) - 换成一个长的slider
00:41:835 (2) - 换成来回的slider
00:43:720 (2) - ^
01:06:104 (1) - 删nc
01:07:988 (1) - 少一来回 01:09:402 (2) - 加note


[Insane]
00:15:683 (4) - Ctrl + R
01:18:356 (5) - 反向跳手感不是很好尝试x:416 y:29左右的位置?


good luck
DakeDekaane
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DakeDekaane
Hi, mod time~ :3

Moe~

All diffs looks fine to me, only this~

[Insane]

You could increase either HP Drain, OD or CS +1, for make it more Insane~ x3

That's all, good luck c:
popner
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Topic Starter
popner
Mostly fixed! Thanks for your mod!
Chewin
osu! Alumni
4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
Chewin
Hi popner, I'm here for your m4m request :3

[General]
I'd remove letterbox during breaks because you are using a SB. It is recommended to remove it :3

[Easy]
00:34:060 (3) - I'd use new combo here for the new vocal
00:38:773 (2) - What about to add a soft finish 40% volume or a bit lower on this slider's end to fit finish you can hear from the music too?
00:51:025 (1,2,3) - Try to make a different pattern here? I think this part breaks the map's flow :\
01:13:643 (3) - If you followed above, use new combo here

[Normal]
00:39:951 (5) - Same of Normal about 00:38:773 (2)

[Hard]
00:39:833 (1) - Same of Normal about the finish
01:13:643 (3) - To make it more flowing together with 01:14:114 (4) I would move the second slider's point at x:220 y:296, it flows really much better imho:


[Insane]
00:40:657 (7) - You already know
01:19:533 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't like this shape D: Using the "Convert slider to stream" I obtained this that is really much better:
SPOILER


108,196,79533,5,2
136,162,79650,1,2
179,155,79768,1,2
219,175,79886,1,2
236,216,80004,1,2
226,259,80122,1,2
191,285,80239,1,2

Clean and flowing mapset as always popner!
Star and good luck with cool rank :3
Sun Rainbow
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Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
尼玛碉堡了
Roxas
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2011
Roxas
Beautiful song :33

[Easy]

00:09:557 - Add break time here

[Normal]

00:16:154 (3) - Move 2nd sliderpoint 1 grid down

[Hard]

01:20:711 (2) - NC like ohter diffs?

[Insane]

All ok

Good luck popner! :D
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
Hi there~~~mod for request

[General]
  1. 关掉Countdown
  2. 一般来说vocaloid放在tags里面，source里放的是调教者的名字……
  3. 整体上还有个问题就是音效有些太单调了……不过对此我确实没有什么更好的建议能提……
[Easy]
  1. 00:22:280 - 可可以考虑加个note的地方……
[Normal]
  1. 00:35:003 (3,4) - 从vocal上来听这里用两个1/2的slider比较好
  2. 01:05:632 - 加个note?
[Hard]
  1. STR2建议
  2. 00:06:258 (2,3,4) - 这里做成一组kick slider并且00:07:436 - 加note？
  3. 00:18:864 - 感觉上是少了个note
[Insane]
  1. STR2建议
  2. 00:02:960 (3,4,5,6,7) - (nazi) stream形状不好看，用那个slider->stream的工具调整下试试？
  3. 00:08:025 (3,4,5) - stream里这种折返很坑啊……
  4. 00:11:442 (3,4) - Insane的话这里用两个1/2的slider吧
  5. 00:15:683 (4) - ctrl+r下试试？
  6. 00:22:751 (3,4) - 这里也是两个1/2slider并且删掉00:23:576 (5) - ?
  7. 00:51:967 (5,6) - 我突然在想做成4个note的跳也可以诶
  8. 00:55:266 (4) - ctrl+r?
  9. 01:00:802 - 这里倒是可以考虑加个note？顺便这五边形没做好=v=
  10. 01:06:104 (2,4) - (nazi)做对称了？
Nothing much to say about this solid mapset, good luck with rank :>
popner
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Topic Starter
popner

Chewin wrote:

SPOILER
Hi popner, I'm here for your m4m request :3

[General]
I'd remove letterbox during breaks because you are using a SB. It is recommended to remove it :3 fixed

[Easy]
00:34:060 (3) - I'd use new combo here for the new vocal ok
00:38:773 (2) - What about to add a soft finish 40% volume or a bit lower on this slider's end to fit finish you can hear from the music too? sounds good
00:51:025 (1,2,3) - Try to make a different pattern here? I think this part breaks the map's flow :\ ok, changed
01:13:643 (3) - If you followed above, use new combo here done

[Normal]
00:39:951 (5) - Same of Normal about 00:38:773 (2)

[Hard]
00:39:833 (1) - Same of Normal about the finish
01:13:643 (3) - To make it more flowing together with 01:14:114 (4) I would move the second slider's point at x:220 y:296, it flows really much better imho: done


[Insane]
00:40:657 (7) - You already know
01:19:533 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't like this shape D: Using the "Convert slider to stream" I obtained this that is really much better: It's a spiral and I want to keep this


108,196,79533,5,2
136,162,79650,1,2
179,155,79768,1,2
219,175,79886,1,2
236,216,80004,1,2
226,259,80122,1,2
191,285,80239,1,2

Clean and flowing mapset as always popner!
Star and good luck with cool rank :3 thx!

Scorpiour wrote:

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Hi there~~~mod for request

[General]
  1. 关掉Countdown done
  2. 一般来说vocaloid放在tags里面，source里放的是调教者的名字…… 调教者不知道英文叫啥。。
  3. 整体上还有个问题就是音效有些太单调了……不过对此我确实没有什么更好的建议能提……
[Easy]
  1. 00:22:280 - 可可以考虑加个note的地方…… 空着稍微能歇口气。。
[Normal]
  1. 00:35:003 (3,4) - 从vocal上来听这里用两个1/2的slider比较好 ok
  2. 01:05:632 - 加个note? ok
[Hard]
  1. STR2建议
  2. 00:06:258 (2,3,4) - 这里做成一组kick slider并且00:07:436 - 加note？ 拉远了点距离..
  3. 00:18:864 - 感觉上是少了个note
[Insane]
  1. STR2建议
  2. 00:02:960 (3,4,5,6,7) - (nazi) stream形状不好看，用那个slider->stream的工具调整下试试？
  3. 00:08:025 (3,4,5) - stream里这种折返很坑啊…… 。。
  4. 00:11:442 (3,4) - Insane的话这里用两个1/2的slider吧 略单调。。
  5. 00:15:683 (4) - ctrl+r下试试？ 感觉flow会变差
  6. 00:22:751 (3,4) - 这里也是两个1/2slider并且删掉00:23:576 (5) - ?
  7. 00:51:967 (5,6) - 我突然在想做成4个note的跳也可以诶
  8. 00:55:266 (4) - ctrl+r?
  9. 01:00:802 - 这里倒是可以考虑加个note？顺便这五边形没做好=v= 是六边形。。
  10. 01:06:104 (2,4) - (nazi)做对称了？故意的。。
Nothing much to say about this solid mapset, good luck with rank :>
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
来mod个


Insane

  1. 00:26:521 (2) - 应该把slider做成这种形状来体现「卧」的意境 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/420933
  2. 00:30:291 (1) - 同样的这个slider应该加个速
  3. 01:06:104 (2) - ^
  4. 00:45:135 (1,2,3,4,5) - 逐渐增大比较好
Hard

  1. 00:30:291 (1) - 觉得有点不流畅..
  2. 00:54:795 (3) - down 1grid o.o
Normal

  1. 01:01:392 (5) - move left 1 grid
Easy

  1. 00:38:773 (2) - 233 对称
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Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
00:09:793
00:49:464
装上break

insane

00:22:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里有点变得太突然 把vocal突然扔掉然后又捡回来

其他的没啥问题 就是整体感觉是平铺过去的 没有吸引人的细节 有点像两年前的图
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Mod Request. Here's what I've found:

General
-> Add some finishes where needed. The parts where I can hear some finishes on the music, you only added whistles. It would sound more interesting of you can add finishes on those patrs. You can leave the whistles if you prefer.

Easy
-> In general, the slider velocity and the distance spacing is a bit high for an easy. Although, the HP Drain of 1 makes up for it imo.
00:07:672 (3) - It feels a bit empty here. How about insert a reverse arrow on this slider? That way, it feels more full. Also, it will be consistent with 00:47:255 (1).

-> Your other difficulties are fine! Nothing to suggest.

Nice and Simple map. To be honest, I would bubble this map, but I'm no MAT (lol). Anyway, good luck with your map. :D
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
popner
Thanks for mod! :)
EnakoRin
EnakoRin
[General]
  • 感觉SB出来的时间稍晚，批量向前移动一些？
    Source栏一般填歌曲的出处，这里建议用Bilibili Douga。MAD作者可以放进Tag一栏
    原曲是蓝精灵之歌，建议在Tag栏里面加上The Song of Smurfs（或Lan Jing Ling Zhi Ge 窝查了下原曲是国人谱曲填词的作品，用拼音也不错）
    BG不放只羊驼上去吗？（喂
    offset-22？
[Easy]
  • 00:02:960 (2,4) - 4会被2打出的300挡住，移动一下
    01:02:334 (1,3) - 3会被1打出的300挡住，移动一下
    01:20:711 (1) - 尾巴上加个finish？
[Normal]
  • AR要不要-1？目测略快
    个人意见是NM里面不要有这类似的重叠：00:04:609 (3,4) - ；00:16:154 (3,3) - ；00:34:532 (2,3) -。低级图保持一定的可读性比较好
    00:25:578 (3,4) - 和前面的3重叠在一起？看着有点孤单
    00:39:244 (4,5) - 减少4的一个repeat，然后把5提前到00:39:715，结尾不变如何？
    01:20:711 (1) - 尾巴上加个finish？
[Hard]
  • 00:21:809 (4,3) - 会被300挡住，不好看
    00:24:636 (1) - 距离不对，故意跳的嘛？
    01:00:684 (2,5) - 挡住了
    01:06:104 (1) - 去掉new combo
    01:21:182 (3) - 加finish？
[Insane]
  • 00:11:442 (3) - 拆分成短slider？听着不大舒服
    00:34:767 (5,6) - 总觉得这个跳有点莫名其妙的
    01:14:350 (5,6) - 同上
    01:15:528 (1,2,3) - 很难读出来 不过是INSANE也许无所谓
    01:17:884 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 可以做成间距不断增大的排列
    01:21:182 (2) - 加finish？
神曲
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EasyModder 1.4.1
Program By Weiren
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
popner
Thanks for your mod! I'll check it later.
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
建议你问问人
前天pp说所有v+都不要放角色要放本来的作者 然后http://osu.ppy.sh/s/58051shiro把这张图都改名了
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