20:17 Jenny: : 00:04:503 (2) - not symmetric, also, ugly
20:18 Jenny: : better doable with 1-2 sliderpoints
20:18 Snepif: : lets see
20:18 Snepif: : my diff or collab?
20:18 Snepif: : collab.
20:18 Snepif: : let me see
20:18 Snepif: : oh
20:18 Snepif: : do you think so
20:18 Snepif: : uhmmm
20:18 Jenny: : 00:06:392 (2,3) - sounds as if you should switch these as for the music
20:19 Snepif: : now it is symetric
20:19 Jenny: : 00:07:169 (7) - replace with circle + 1/1 slider
20:19 Snepif: : what do you mean?
20:19 Snepif: : ctrl R?
20:19 Jenny: : nowait do not replace
20:19 Jenny: : cough
20:19 Jenny: : what i meant about switching those was, circle-slider instead of slider-circle
20:19 Snepif: : ahhhhhh
20:19 Snepif: : ctrl works then
20:20 Jenny: : 00:07:392 (8) - circles sound more fitting
20:20 Jenny: : 00:07:836 (1) - that is ugly
20:20 Jenny: : 00:08:503 (4) - replace with circles
20:20 Jenny: : 00:12:058 (4) - adjust to 3's approach circle
20:20 Snepif: : uhmmmmmm about replacing with circles
20:20 Jenny: : 00:12:280 (5) - that bow is awkward, move sliderpoint down-left
20:21 Snepif: : what about
20:21 Snepif: : 2 sliders with 2 repeats eahc
20:21 Jenny: : 00:11:836 (3) - sliderpoint more up-right here
20:21 Snepif: : each
20:21 Snepif: : instead of circles
20:21 Jenny: : i do not take any discussion \:D/
20:21 Jenny: : ...i'm just flying over and hitting shit in your face right now
20:21 Jenny: : *coughcough*
20:21 Jenny: : 00:12:725 (8,9) - the slider should start on 8
20:21 Snepif: : i like it
20:21 Snepif: : hahah
20:22 Jenny: : 00:13:503 (2,3) - redtick sliders :/
20:22 Jenny: : replace with circle-slider
20:23 Snepif: : hmmmmm yep
20:23 Jenny: : 00:16:280 (5) - delete 1 reverse arrow (well, shorten would be the better word), add circle
20:23 Jenny: : 00:18:058 (5,6) - slider should start on 5
20:24 Jenny: : 00:18:503 (1) - move first sliderpoint 2 grids left, 1 down
20:24 Jenny: : 00:18:836 (2,3) - a) redtick sliders = meeh, b) meh-ly aligned to 1's end, c) sliders there should start on white tick, red should just have a
20:24 Jenny: : circle
20:25 Jenny: : 00:19:836 (7) - ugly, also, do not find this bow fitting; if want a bow with a circle in "the center of the bow", align to approach circle
20:26 Jenny: : 00:20:503 (2) - replacing with 1/2s sounds better
20:26 Jenny: : 00:21:169 (6) - align better to 5's start
20:26 Jenny: : 00:22:836 (6) - this thing is off.
20:27 Jenny: : do not see where on, feels bad
20:27 Jenny: : also
20:27 Jenny: : 00:23:114 (7) - LOL BLUETICKS
20:27 Snepif: : lol
20:27 Snepif: : i think its not wrong
20:27 Jenny: : 00:23:725 (1) - del clap
20:27 Snepif: : hey keep writing stuff
20:27 Jenny: : dw
20:27 Jenny: : o3o
20:27 Snepif: : i gotta have lunch but when i come back ill post the log to the thread with my answer
20:28 Snepif: : and give u kd
20:28 Snepif: : and mod you
20:28 Jenny: : 00:24:169 (5) - center the red point on the slidertick, change positions of other points after
20:28 Jenny: : 00:24:503 (6) - oh man this bow is ugly
20:28 Snepif: : thanks~~
20:28 Jenny: : align to 5's end
20:28 Jenny: : 00:24:836 (7,8) - redtick sliders; again, a circle on the red one feels better~
20:29 Snepif: : save the log when you finish and post it
20:29 Jenny: : ikr
20:29 Jenny: : 00:25:614 (3) - jenny does not like this shape
20:29 Jenny: : 00:27:058 (1) - start 1/2 later, add circle at current start, then adjust following stuff to it (e.g., replace next slider by circles)
20:30 Jenny: : 00:30:169 (7) - redtick sliders... the reverseslider should start on where 6 ends :/
20:30 Jenny: : 00:30:503 (8) - sounds overdone
20:30 Jenny: : 00:31:725 (6,9) - man those redticks
20:31 Jenny: : 00:33:058 (3) - do not get that one
20:31 Jenny: : 00:37:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - all this belongs together in the song and yet your circles there are boring-monotoneously "low" spaced
20:31 Jenny: : and your sliders (8-9) are widespaced; adjust, speed it more up
20:33 Jenny: : 00:42:503 (5) - new combo, add a slightly faster inherit section, also rotate them a bit (i suggest 1.15x section)
20:33 Jenny: : *+15% volume would fit aswell
20:33 Jenny: : 00:43:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i find this part quite inconsistent :/
20:34 Jenny: : 00:52:503 (5) - add reverse arrow, then delete 6 and add a circle instead
20:34 Jenny: : *also, place the red sliderpoint at 212|268
20:35 Jenny: : 00:53:169 (8) - end kiai here
20:35 Jenny: : *also add new combo
20:35 Jenny: : 00:53:614 (1) - delete new combo
20:35 Jenny: : 00:54:058 (3) - start kiai again, add new combo, also add an SB-effect
20:36 Jenny: : 00:56:169 (4) - this curve is not really alltoo pretty... it looks... so... boring... :/
20:36 Jenny: : 00:59:503 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - add a circle on where your first slider starts, make the redticks sliders become whitetick ones :/
20:37 Jenny: : 01:07:169 (3) - adjust to 2's beginning
20:37 Jenny: : 01:10:614 (4) - that one is harsh to catch because of the angle you go from 1-2-3-4
20:37 Jenny: : 01:14:503 (1) - add circle
20:37 Jenny: : 01:14:947 (5) - add new combo
20:38 Jenny: : 01:15:392 (1) - new combo aswell, make this one louder aswell
20:38 Jenny: : 01:15:503 (1) - make the spinner be 30% volume
20:39 Jenny: : other stuffs is mostly similar/the same
20:39 Jenny: : look for stuff like that in the rest
20:39 Jenny: : also
20:39 Jenny: : 01:55:836 (2,3,4) - these sliderends should be on where the circles were.
20:40 Jenny: : main issues are: redtick sliders, sliderbows which aren't adjusted to what they are meant to be
20:40 Jenny: : and... well, objects that aren't exactly placed on what they were trying to
20:40 Jenny: : *as pointed out, mostly redtick sliders
20:40 Jenny: : **also, your endkiai-patterns should each have a combo for every row they build and also one for the endbeat
20:41 Jenny: : ***make the kiaispinners 30%
20:41 Jenny: : kkthx
20:41 Jenny: : *i am a lazy fuck