-Kirito wrote:

I'm here to modingeul

But the problem is not the place...

HUE HUE HUE

00:49:614 (7,8) - Section change? I honestly don't understand what you've tried to say here. o.o
00:55:836 (3,4) - Slider 2? http://puu.sh/MXUK OMG AWESOME

Perfect Map...

I'll give you a star. Rank hope.

Jenny wrote:

So jelly of Keipifship ;_; lol why

Kei wrote:

-Kirito wrote:

I'm here to modingeul

But the problem is not the place...

HUE HUE HUE

00:49:614 (7,8) - Section change? I honestly don't understand what you've tried to say here. o.o
00:55:836 (3,4) - Slider 2? http://puu.sh/MXUK OMG AWESOME

Perfect Map...

I'll give you a star. Rank hope.

Thank you very much. It is just 1 suggestion, but I LOVE that suggestion. Really. That part sounds much better now.

Jenny wrote:

So jelly of Keipifship ;_; lol why

Well here's the update: http://puu.sh/Nee6 <3

...oops I forgot to compress the file as .rar

...

*runs away*

meiikyuu wrote:

hello x)

HUE HUE HUE
00:04:725 (3,4) - try unstacking? o.o jump kind of tripped me, but then again im not awesome at playing lol I really like this pattern, actually, I think that stacks are waaaaaay easier to play than normal notes patterns at this BPM
00:06:392 (2) - ctrl+R might flow better. I don't think that's a good idea because the slider (4) plays to the opposite way and it would look kinda messy and un-intuitive if they are both in the same direction.
00:34:503 (1) - add finish at beginning of slider Yes
00:36:058 (1) - remove NC and NC at next note. The new combos follow the vocals, and this NC is ok because it's where it starts to sing "it's all part of the plan... etc."
00:37:947 (1) - ^ Same, "your carry..."
01:46:836 (7) - make a neater blanket here around 01:47:169 (1) - , use its approach circle as a guide xD: Done!

SPOILER

02:48:392 (4) - stack with 02:47:725 (9) - ? neater appearance Neater appearence on the editor only, on the playfield the first note disappears waaaaay before (9) appears so it doesn't look bad at all.

whew xD, tough map, good luck!!

and nice job kei on sb ^^

Blue Dragon wrote:

MOD ES #1 UEHUEHUEHEUHEUHEU BR?

[HUE HUE HUE]

Big problem here: Because of a recent change in the rules, you cannot have 1-difficulty mapsets anymore. You will need another difficulty in order to get this approved. The difficulty may be a Taiko or anything, but the map cannot be approved with only one difficulty. yes I know this is annoying as fuck :/ My brother is currently doing a guest diff which is easier than this one... I'll push him lololo

As much as this diff is so AEUHAEUHAEU GIBE MONI PLIS, I really doubt you need such tags. Maybe just keeping the 'serious' ones and extremely related to the song would be better. Also, may you explain what is "Champion Rocks" in the source? I don't play LoL so I'd like to know P: It was a contest made by Riot games in which users had to make a song about a champion and post it to youtube. Actually, now that I think about it, the contest was called Songs of the Summoned III, and the videos on youtube needed to have "Champion Rocks" in the title. I think I'll put Songs of the Summoned III instead. Oh and about the tags I'll change them later

00:11:725 (2,3) - Plays extremely confusing, especially at such high BPM. Stacking (2) with the start of the slider, and not the end, would make it better. Hmm I don't really find that part to be THAT confusing, if someone else says that I'll change it
00:12:725 (8,9) - I wouldn't recommend to make such an unexpected jump. Maybe move (8) to 336,272 to make it a bit more playable? Done!
00:28:836 (1) - Remove new combo and add it on 00:29:169 (4). Fits with the pattern and song. This is done on purpose, where it says "pentakill" we wanted to put red combo colours. Also, the lyrics are red there.
00:31:280 (4) - Move it to 188,244 so it stacks correctly with 00:29:614 (6) - ? Okay
00:46:614 (1,2,3,4) - The anti-spacing here seems somewhat confusing. I'd stack everything with the slider so it plays better. Done
00:50:947 (6) - Shouldn't this slider start 1/2 before? The way it is right now doesn't fit with the vocals. Done
01:11:836 (1,2) - I don't think this is quite possible to read correctly, especially in a sightread. I'd remove the repeat in (1) and add a note @ 01:12:169 that stacks with the other slider, like this. Done
01:39:725 (7,8,9) - As much as I like these kinds of jumps, this really doesn't fit with the flow. Also it's incredibly annoying and easy to sliderbreak because of the tick. I'd ctrl+r the slider and make the note stack with the start of the slider. Fixed
02:08:725 (1,2) - Same as ^.. However I can't really tell you a way of fixing this. Not such a problem. This isn't confusing at all since they are both sliders
02:17:058 (6,7) - Same as 00:11:725 (2,3). Same thing that I said before

Very nice map. I'd post my record but I'm not really in the mood to play seriously right now >:

Snepif wrote:

I think it should be "An enemy has been slain"? o.O

Kei wrote:

But this map is all about Mordekaiser.

...

HUEAHEHUEAHUEAHUAE

Snepif wrote:

gibe mone please D:

Snepif wrote:

the little 2 images should be a circle I think and.. not sure if that is the correct font.. Could you do that o.O? Or maybe I can leave it like that but... I want it to be a bit better

Jenny wrote:

I am a lazy fuck and don't even say anything to the whole map but just point out stuff to about 40%, evul me

20:17 Jenny: : 00:04:503 (2) - not symmetric, also, ugly
20:18 Jenny: : better doable with 1-2 sliderpoints
20:18 Snepif: : lets see
20:18 Snepif: : my diff or collab?
20:18 Snepif: : collab.
20:18 Snepif: : let me see
20:18 Snepif: : oh
20:18 Snepif: : do you think so
20:18 Snepif: : uhmmm
20:18 Jenny: : 00:06:392 (2,3) - sounds as if you should switch these as for the music
20:19 Snepif: : now it is symetric
20:19 Jenny: : 00:07:169 (7) - replace with circle + 1/1 slider
20:19 Snepif: : what do you mean?
20:19 Snepif: : ctrl R?
20:19 Jenny: : nowait do not replace
20:19 Jenny: : cough
20:19 Jenny: : what i meant about switching those was, circle-slider instead of slider-circle
20:19 Snepif: : ahhhhhh
20:19 Snepif: : ctrl works then
20:20 Jenny: : 00:07:392 (8) - circles sound more fitting
20:20 Jenny: : 00:07:836 (1) - that is ugly
20:20 Jenny: : 00:08:503 (4) - replace with circles
20:20 Jenny: : 00:12:058 (4) - adjust to 3's approach circle
20:20 Snepif: : uhmmmmmm about replacing with circles
20:20 Jenny: : 00:12:280 (5) - that bow is awkward, move sliderpoint down-left
20:21 Snepif: : what about
20:21 Snepif: : 2 sliders with 2 repeats eahc
20:21 Jenny: : 00:11:836 (3) - sliderpoint more up-right here
20:21 Snepif: : each
20:21 Snepif: : instead of circles
20:21 Jenny: : i do not take any discussion \:D/
20:21 Jenny: : ...i'm just flying over and hitting shit in your face right now
20:21 Jenny: : *coughcough*
20:21 Jenny: : 00:12:725 (8,9) - the slider should start on 8
20:21 Snepif: : i like it
20:21 Snepif: : hahah
20:22 Jenny: : 00:13:503 (2,3) - redtick sliders :/
20:22 Jenny: : replace with circle-slider
20:23 Snepif: : hmmmmm yep
20:23 Jenny: : 00:16:280 (5) - delete 1 reverse arrow (well, shorten would be the better word), add circle
20:23 Jenny: : 00:18:058 (5,6) - slider should start on 5
20:24 Jenny: : 00:18:503 (1) - move first sliderpoint 2 grids left, 1 down
20:24 Jenny: : 00:18:836 (2,3) - a) redtick sliders = meeh, b) meh-ly aligned to 1's end, c) sliders there should start on white tick, red should just have a
20:24 Jenny: : circle
20:25 Jenny: : 00:19:836 (7) - ugly, also, do not find this bow fitting; if want a bow with a circle in "the center of the bow", align to approach circle
20:26 Jenny: : 00:20:503 (2) - replacing with 1/2s sounds better
20:26 Jenny: : 00:21:169 (6) - align better to 5's start
20:26 Jenny: : 00:22:836 (6) - this thing is off.
20:27 Jenny: : do not see where on, feels bad
20:27 Jenny: : also
20:27 Jenny: : 00:23:114 (7) - LOL BLUETICKS
20:27 Snepif: : lol
20:27 Snepif: : i think its not wrong
20:27 Jenny: : 00:23:725 (1) - del clap
20:27 Snepif: : hey keep writing stuff
20:27 Jenny: : dw
20:27 Jenny: : o3o
20:27 Snepif: : i gotta have lunch but when i come back ill post the log to the thread with my answer
20:28 Snepif: : and give u kd
20:28 Snepif: : and mod you
20:28 Jenny: : 00:24:169 (5) - center the red point on the slidertick, change positions of other points after
20:28 Jenny: : 00:24:503 (6) - oh man this bow is ugly
20:28 Snepif: : thanks~~
20:28 Jenny: : align to 5's end
20:28 Jenny: : 00:24:836 (7,8) - redtick sliders; again, a circle on the red one feels better~
20:29 Snepif: : save the log when you finish and post it
20:29 Jenny: : ikr
20:29 Jenny: : 00:25:614 (3) - jenny does not like this shape
20:29 Jenny: : 00:27:058 (1) - start 1/2 later, add circle at current start, then adjust following stuff to it (e.g., replace next slider by circles)
20:30 Jenny: : 00:30:169 (7) - redtick sliders... the reverseslider should start on where 6 ends :/
20:30 Jenny: : 00:30:503 (8) - sounds overdone
20:30 Jenny: : 00:31:725 (6,9) - man those redticks
20:31 Jenny: : 00:33:058 (3) - do not get that one
20:31 Jenny: : 00:37:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - all this belongs together in the song and yet your circles there are boring-monotoneously "low" spaced
20:31 Jenny: : and your sliders (8-9) are widespaced; adjust, speed it more up
20:33 Jenny: : 00:42:503 (5) - new combo, add a slightly faster inherit section, also rotate them a bit (i suggest 1.15x section)
20:33 Jenny: : *+15% volume would fit aswell
20:33 Jenny: : 00:43:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i find this part quite inconsistent :/
20:34 Jenny: : 00:52:503 (5) - add reverse arrow, then delete 6 and add a circle instead
20:34 Jenny: : *also, place the red sliderpoint at 212|268
20:35 Jenny: : 00:53:169 (8) - end kiai here
20:35 Jenny: : *also add new combo
20:35 Jenny: : 00:53:614 (1) - delete new combo
20:35 Jenny: : 00:54:058 (3) - start kiai again, add new combo, also add an SB-effect
20:36 Jenny: : 00:56:169 (4) - this curve is not really alltoo pretty... it looks... so... boring... :/
20:36 Jenny: : 00:59:503 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - add a circle on where your first slider starts, make the redticks sliders become whitetick ones :/
20:37 Jenny: : 01:07:169 (3) - adjust to 2's beginning
20:37 Jenny: : 01:10:614 (4) - that one is harsh to catch because of the angle you go from 1-2-3-4
20:37 Jenny: : 01:14:503 (1) - add circle
20:37 Jenny: : 01:14:947 (5) - add new combo
20:38 Jenny: : 01:15:392 (1) - new combo aswell, make this one louder aswell
20:38 Jenny: : 01:15:503 (1) - make the spinner be 30% volume
20:39 Jenny: : other stuffs is mostly similar/the same
20:39 Jenny: : look for stuff like that in the rest
20:39 Jenny: : also
20:39 Jenny: : 01:55:836 (2,3,4) - these sliderends should be on where the circles were.
20:40 Jenny: : main issues are: redtick sliders, sliderbows which aren't adjusted to what they are meant to be
20:40 Jenny: : and... well, objects that aren't exactly placed on what they were trying to
20:40 Jenny: : *as pointed out, mostly redtick sliders
20:40 Jenny: : **also, your endkiai-patterns should each have a combo for every row they build and also one for the endbeat
20:41 Jenny: : ***make the kiaispinners 30%
20:41 Jenny: : kkthx
20:41 Jenny: : *i am a lazy fuck

Kite wrote:

[General]
be more serious about the tags, most of them are redundant and just there for fun factors Oh, they are just for fun... okay removed..
if you want to include them, do so in the map description

[Snep's HUE]
00:13:947 (5) - having these set of sliders start at the red tick feels kind of weird while playing. Okie fixed
00:14:392 (7) - jump to next object is big and number of repeats is confusing. Deleted 1 repeat, jump is fine now.
02:26:503 - would be awesome if you fully mapped this section but a bit easier than in the collab diff. Hmmm nah, I wanted to give it another feeling as it's another diff, didn't want it to be the same but easier

[Collab]
00:09:280 (8,9,10) - not so sure about single beat jumps with such spacing, same for this 00:38:503 (4,5,6,7) - .
00:51:280 (7,8) - jump is too big for the speed imo. It is okay, the map has harder stuff
01:37:392 (4) - ctrl + r. Okay
01:37:614 (5) - ^ ^
02:10:503 (1) - ^ Done both
02:10:836 (2) - ^
02:11:836 (7,8,9) - maybe you will like this more ctrl+r and stack 02:12:169 (10) - on 8 Nah, I want it tricky like this
02:17:169 (7) - ctrl + r ^
02:19:058 (5,6,7,8) - ctrl+ h and make it go left http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/415423. That doesn't look quite good :/ also ^that
02:37:280 (2) - this slider and the next feel weird to start on red tick, remove 02:37:169 (1) - and start the sliders on big white tick instead its better for navigation while playing and doesnt start on offbeats. Fixed

Kite wrote:

you can always include the former tags in the map description as said D: