RoxasGrylls94 wrote:

Hi from Riki's and Roxas' queue

[General]

Put normal-sliderslide like soft-sliderslide. I think the default normal-sliderslide stayed better with no-sound.

[Easy]

00:12:040 - Why don't you use slidertick2 in this tick like other sliders ( 00:05:969 (2) - ) ? x
00:54:540 (1) - Last slider point 1~2 grid down Fixed


[GiNa's Normal]

00:54:540 (1) - Move 2nd slider point in x:96 y:108 Fixed

Haven't found ohter errors really good job :3

Frostmourne wrote:

01:14:897 (4) - why you break the flow here !!!! , make slider like this instead so this will follow the vocal and flow very good =w=b

SPOILER

Frostmourne wrote:

Hello \:D/ , from my queue

Easy
00:57:397 (1) - I feel like it should be added finish since this is pre-part and will be kiai part soon. don't you think so ?

Hard
00:11:504 (4,5) - add clap these two notes , it will sound very nice because the song also represent that sound in the first place :3 Fixed
00:15:254 (3) - maybe same as GiNa diff , add 25% normal hit at the start of this slider would be nice ok, but I use soft-clap(custom1) here.
00:38:469 (5) - why don't add whistle at the tail ? since you used this at 00:30:433 ,00:36:147 and vocal are kinda same so Fixed


pretty neat map :3 , star and good luck

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's get started. mod requested on my queue

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.

[General]
the lead in time should be the same for all diffs. set the easy's lead in to 1500 like the other diffs.Fixed
Preview times are inconsistent. remember they must be the same for all diffs.Fixed

[Easy]
consider increasing every setting except for the CS by 1 for a smoother flow to the song. OD+1
00:08:826 (1) - maybe make the slider like this so that it'd somewhat form a blanket for the next slider. i think doing this would flow smoother to the next note durung gameplay. Fixed
00:11:683 (1) - since you have a slidertick file, make that slidertick before the repeat is hit a clap for consistency. x
00:15:254 (1) - idk about this...instrumental is still going and i feel that this is placed at an awkward spot. move this spinner up by 1/1, and ofc reduce the spinner by 1/1. also add notes at that empty spot to follow the instrumental in the song. it makes me feel comfortable on where this note is placed since it flows to the instrumental nicely IMO. I think it's ok... I follow the lyrics
00:30:254 (4) - maybe it's just me, but this 2/1 slider breaks the flow in this combo since (1) is a 1/1 slider and the flow should keep going if this is a 1/1 slider, so reduce this slider by 1/1 and either add a repeat or add a circle to keep the flow doing from the previous pattern. Fixed
00:37:397 (1) - maybe make this a curved slider to blanket the beginning of the next slider? again i think doing this would make a smooth path to the next note during gameplay IMO. Fixed
00:45:969 (2) - i think i heard cymbals on this note, so either add a finish with the whistle, or replace the whistle for a finish to match it.Fixed
00:48:826 (6) - make this a NC. this is where the lyrics change in this note. I follow the lyrics o.o
00:50:076 (1) - remove the NC if you follow the suggestion above. the lyrics are still going from the previous note, and replace the claps for finishes to not only match the vocals, but to match the cymbals in the background music.^
01:00:254 (1) - personally, i don't like where this spinner ends. for me, it ends at an awkward spot in which the vocals continue at the 1/2 tick. i suggest ending this spinner at 01:01:504 because that's where the instrumental starts all over again in the song.I follow the lyrics.. the vocal's end
01:25:076 (1) - this slider should start 1/2 ahead because it looks odd starting that note at "se". it follows "sekai", but if you move it 1/2 up, it'll end at "kai" in which it'll flow to the map and it'll make a nice ending to the song before the spinner. x

[Hard]
00:04:362 (2,3) - add whistles here but not at the sliderbody of (2) to match the piano in the song. Fixed
00:22:040 (2) - i feel that this is unrankable because the repeat arrow is being covered by the hitburst. find a way to make this repeat arrow fully visible for players to see. ..it is ok?(maybe...) - http://puu.sh/Nyb5
00:45:969 (4) - same as normal, but replace the whistle for a finish. Fixed
01:25:076 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think this star's spacing can be bigger because during gameplay, it looks clumped up IMO.
other than that, this is a good diff. I think it's ok~ the spacing is 1.5x o.o

I guess that's it. Star and GL
thanks.. you forget to shoot star to me T.T

Byakugan249 wrote:

oh whoops...sorry . here you go.

Leorda wrote:

Yo


[Easy]
* AR +1?

00:18:112 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu while gameplay. It can be hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read)
00:50:076 (1) - Remove new combo
01:03:469 (2) - Overlapped by hitbursts from s pinner. May hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read)

[Hard]
00:51:147 (4) - Add whistle at head slider?
00:59:719 (3) - Remove 1 repeating slider, so players are able to click the next object with perfect timed

Good luck!!!

Leorda wrote:

[D.N.Angel]
01:15:076 - Add note here? //this stop is good to me.

Byakugan249 wrote:

[D.N.Angel]
00:02:754 (2) - replace this for a 1/2 repeat slider or 3 circles because it'll follow the piano and guitar nicely. it feels odd following this slider when the instrumental changes in this part. //I think the rhythm is fine
00:40:612 - maybe add a circle to follow the drums in this part of the song? //no,I just wanna follow the vocal here.
same comment as hard.

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi ^^ Random m4m xD

Hard

00:01:862 - add note here, it will be better follow the music Fixed
00:50:254 - ^ x
00:37:576 - remove 1 repeat and put this slider on white tick. ^ , I follow the lyrics

Easy fine~~:)

P.S Here multi timing, Open this http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55494 and look

Good luck~~

Leorda wrote:

[GiNa's Normal]

* AR +1?　No, people complained AR 5 is too fast for a Normal
00:13:826 - Add note here?　No
00:41:326 - ^　Added
01:02:576 (3) - Add clap at repeating slider?　Fixed

Katty Pie wrote:

Normal

• Distance spacing should be 0.8 on normal diff's　??? Is this a rule ???

00:44:897 - better add note, it will make a smooth transition　Nope
00:54:183 - ^　^
01:14:183 - ^　^
01:11:683 - http://puu.sh/Q1go will be sounds better　Fixed

1. 00:14:183 (5) - Remove the repeat and instead move the slider at 00:14:719 - or 00:14:897 - ? Imho,this would be a better choice here.
2. 00:45:612 - Add a note here? It follows in a really good way the singer's voice

1. 00:50:076 (2) - Put this at x:240 y:176,so that this can countinue the flow with 00:48:826 (1) - in a better way?
2. 00:56:862 (3) - If you want to make a better blanket with 00:57:397 (1) - ,then I suggest you to move the last waypoint at x:320 y:132
3. 01:21:326 (2) - Little suggestion here: Move this at x:204 y:225?

1. 00:36:683 (3) - CTRL+R here?

• Really nothing to say,really good work here ^^

308,92,51683,6,0,B|452:92,2,144,4|2|8
208,92,53112,2,0,B|64:92,2,144,4|2|8
196,188,54540,6,0,B|256:225|256:317|196:348,2,192,4|2|2
144,268,56326,1,8
92,188,56683,1,0
144,108,57040,1,8
240,108,57397,6,0,B|284:84|332:108,1,96,12|8
408,164,58112,2,0,B|432:212|408:256,1,96,8|8
332,316,58826,2,0,B|284:340|240:316,1,96,8|8
164,256,59540,2,0,B|140:208|164:164,1,96,8|8

256,192,60255,6,0,B|188:220|208:124|260:88|400:156|248:324,1,322,0|4

Chewin wrote:

Hi EmPao, mod request from my modding queue >w<

[General]
I suggest you to change this BG because Andrea has already used it for his mapset: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55494
To distinguish this map from the other one, it's better if you change it then.. (: I tried to find it ... But I cant find the other BG orz...
Add Evergreen to the tags?

[Easy]
00:18:469 (2) - I don't know but this slider doesn't convince me. I mean that beginners would think to find a rhythm like this:

I think it would be better to play for them, especially after a spinner's end Fixed
00:48:826 (1) - Instead of whistle here I would use finish on this slider's head, especially because it would sound perfectly together with 00:50:076 (2)'s finishes ^
00:51:683 (1,2) - You could make them symmetric, I mean: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/402472 Okay
I have fixed the spacing of the next elements too, then just copy this code:

308,92,51683,6,0,B|452:92,2,144,4|2|8
208,92,53112,2,0,B|64:92,2,144,4|2|8
196,188,54540,6,0,B|256:225|256:317|196:348,2,192,4|2|2
144,268,56326,1,8
92,188,56683,1,0
144,108,57040,1,8
240,108,57397,6,0,B|284:84|332:108,1,96,12|8
408,164,58112,2,0,B|432:212|408:256,1,96,8|8
332,316,58826,2,0,B|284:340|240:316,1,96,8|8
164,256,59540,2,0,B|140:208|164:164,1,96,8|8

01:00:254 (1) - Remove finish, it sounds too loud. Just a finish on 01:03:112 (1) is already perfect imo ^
01:11:326 (5) - New combo ^
I don't like this hitsound normal pattern you used during the kiai time D: some people tell me this problem too.. so I decide to changed the hitsound to soft-whistle. (maybe it will be better now...orz)
Good map btw :3
[Hard]
00:02:219 (2) - Remove whistle? Fixed
Fine

That's all, good mapset. thanks mod, your mod is helpful xD
I wish you good luck with rank then ;3 Have my star

Chewin wrote:

[D.N.Angel]

01:00:255 (1) - What about to improve a bit this ugly slider's shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/402506

256,192,60255,6,0,B|188:220|208:124|260:88|400:156|248:324,1,322,0|4

Just this

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Easy
加个那么长的BREAK是要偷懒？前面的節奏比較複雜,在簡單的diff中我覺得不好做 所以沒做 用一個note帶過>_>

HARD
00:59:719 (3) - 这全部CLAP会呕的 I follow the drum

DarknessAngel wrote:

@ Pao :

I forgot to fix this,can you help me ?
這樣就不用傳檔案，我覺得方便點:p

Chewin wrote:

[D.N.Angel]

01:00:255 (1) - What about to improve a bit this ugly slider's shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/402506

256,192,60255,6,0,B|188:220|208:124|260:88|400:156|248:324,1,322,0|4

Just this

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Easy
加个那么长的BREAK是要偷懒？

NORMAL
^

1. 00:08:469 - Add a note here? Feel empty without a one here.
2. 00:23:112 - ^
3. 00:28:469 - ^
4. 01:00:254 (1) - End spinner in 01:01:504 and add a note in 01:02:754.

1. 00:03:826 (1,2) - Try this: http://puu.sh/ZcYh
2. 00:06:504 - Add a note here? Feel empty without a one here.
3. 00:49:719 (2) - Finish in End
4. 00:50:433 (3) - ^