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DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel
啊啊，我今天摘掉耳機聽音效
發現soft-whistle2幾乎聽不到
所以我給它加大2倍音量~
http://puu.sh/KRG1
Yoru-hide
68 posts
Joined April 2011
Yoru-hide
HI! from my mode queue~

[General]

  • There is only 1924 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.
    Please add GiNa to all tags.

    Unsnapped inherited sections at : 01:03:277 and 01:24:527 , please fix this.
[D.N.Angel]

  • Circle Size at 5.

    00:20:777 (1) - move to x:236 , y:324.
    00:33:991 (3) - new combo.
    01:15:062 (4) - move to x:112, y:260
[Hard]

  • Start mapping from 00:05:777 so
    00:00:420 (1) - i think will be better if you delete this note.
    00:51:669 (5,6,1) - oh.. you should definitely change this moment. Try this
    01:14:527 (3) - NC ?
[GiNa's Normal]

  • Circle Size 3. 'cause with 4 too hard for easy/normal diffs. Approach Rate 5 for Normal? lol.

    00:00:420 (1) - delete note, you know why.
    00:07:205 (1) - NC
    00:08:991 (4) - old combo
    00:08:991 (1) - NC
    00:11:134 (1) - ^
    00:14:705 (4) - old combo
    00:10:419 (1) - ^
    00:15:062 (2) - NC

    I can not understand your logic in setting Combo :(
[Easy]

  • 00:00:420 (1) - delete note.

    Fine.
Good luck!
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel

Yoru-SAN wrote:

[D.N.Angel]

  • Circle Size at 5.

    00:20:777 (1) - move to x:236 , y:324.
    00:33:991 (3) - new combo.
    01:15:062 (4) - move to x:112, y:260
Thank for modding ~ :)

http://puu.sh/KZxK
h-728
513 posts
Joined November 2010
h-728

Thank you for request

[General]
  • add creator's name of guest diff to the tags.
    how about add custom slidertick sound? especially for Easy.
[Easy]
  • 00:18:277 (1) ~ 00:40:419 (1) - there is no time to take a rest.
    how about reduce the sounds and make a little break? for example, reduce the time of reversing of 00:27:919 (3).
    00:45:419 (1,2,3,4) - this four circles shouldn't consist square. how about reverse 00:43:277 (5) one more time and remove 00:45:419 (1), then make square with 00:46:134 (2,3,4,5) ? and it will follow the lyric well.
    01:03:277 (1) ~ same as 00:18:277
[GiNa's Normal]
  • 00:13:277 (2) - replace with 2/1 slider? I think the sound of here in the song is continuing.
    00:15:777 (3,1) - it's better to remove this stack, because you often use stacking in 1/2 rhythm.
    to make stacking in some timing may be confusing for newbie players.
    00:18:812 (1,2,3) - to put circles on the red tick continually may be hard for newbie players. how about replace 2 of them with 1/1 slider?
    00:24:527 (1,2) - same as 00:15:777
    00:30:241 (1,2) - replace with 1/1 slider?
    00:34:705 (1) ~ 00:40:062 - why the rhythm become so simple? it isn't bad thing, but just I wondered.
    00:45:419 (1) - be upside down and avoid overlapping with the previous circle.
    00:48:991 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I feel the arrangement of these notes are random.
    you use the red tick so many times, so you should arrange the notes more easy to follow and read rhythm in visual.
    00:53:455 (1) - move to below and it will be connected well.
[Hard]
  • 00:51:669 (5,6,1) - it's a little hard to regard that the stream is consisted by this 3 circles, because the distance between (4) and (5), and between (5) and (6) is not so different. so how about stack these 3 notes? and it becomes easy to find this pair in visual.
    00:56:312 (2,3) - sudden large jump seems a little hard. how about a little more closer them?
    and consider the balance, you make stack in 00:57:562 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) at many times, so how about remove this stacking?
    01:13:634 (1,2) - this jump is alright, but I feel the flow of the cursor is not so good.
    rotate (2) to clockwise and it will be connected well.
[D.N.Angel]
  • 00:05:598 (7,1) - I think this suddenly large jump isn't match with the song. if you use this jump for the sign that the song go fast, but it's too large.
    00:10:955 (2,3) - I don't like this arrangement, because the flow of cursor is curved to the opposite direction.
    00:17:652 (2) - I think there is no sound to emphasize at the head of this slider and hard to understand this rhythm. put 1/2 slider at 00:17:741 is better. or put circles at 00:17:741 and 00:17:919.
    01:00:419 (1) - it's hard to expect this changing of SV. if you change the SV, 0.75x is enough imo.
    01:24:616 - only this diff's Kiai Time ends at here. how about move this green section to 01:24:527 ?
that's all.
AiRI~
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa

Yoru-SAN wrote:

[GiNa's Normal]

  • Circle Size 3. 'cause with 4 too hard for easy/normal diffs. Approach Rate 5 for Normal? lol.　Okay, fixed

    00:00:420 (1) - delete note, you know why.　Sorry, I don't know why D:
    00:07:205 (1) - NC
    00:08:991 (4) - old combo
    00:08:991 (1) - NC
    00:11:134 (1) - ^
    00:14:705 (4) - old combo
    00:10:419 (1) - ^
    00:15:062 (2) - NC
    No change for all these

    I can not understand your logic in setting Combo :( 　I can't understand your logic in this mod either :< My NCs are usually on the long white ticks, if you have my other ranked maps, they are all done in the same way
Thank you anyways.
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

Yoru-SAN wrote:

HI! from my mode queue~

[General]

  • There is only 1924 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms. Fixed
    Please add GiNa to all tags. ^

    Unsnapped inherited sections at : 01:03:277 and 01:24:527 , please fix this.Fixed
[Hard]

  • Start mapping from 00:05:777 so
    00:00:420 (1) - i think will be better if you delete this note. I start mapping from 00:00:420 now.
    00:51:669 (5,6,1) - oh.. you should definitely change this moment. Try this Fixed
    01:14:527 (3) - NC ? x
[Easy]

  • 00:00:420 (1) - delete note. x

    Fine.
Good luck!
Thanks mod :) :)

h-728 wrote:


Thank you for request :)

[General]
  • add creator's name of guest diff to the tags. Fixed
    how about add custom slidertick sound? especially for Easy. Fixed
[Easy]
  • 00:18:277 (1) ~ 00:40:419 (1) - there is no time to take a rest. Fixed
    how about reduce the sounds and make a little break? for example, reduce the time of reversing of 00:27:919 (3).
    00:45:419 (1,2,3,4) - this four circles shouldn't consist square. how about reverse 00:43:277 (5) one more time and remove 00:45:419 (1), then make square with 00:46:134 (2,3,4,5) ? and it will follow the lyric well. x
    01:03:277 (1) ~ same as 00:18:277Fixed
[Hard]
  • 00:51:669 (5,6,1) - it's a little hard to regard that the stream is consisted by this 3 circles, because the distance between (4) and (5), and between (5) and (6) is not so different. so how about stack these 3 notes? and it becomes easy to find this pair in visual.Fixed
    00:56:312 (2,3) - sudden large jump seems a little hard. how about a little more closer them? Fixed
    and consider the balance, you make stack in 00:57:562 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) at many times, so how about remove this stacking? I make stack to doing on purpose~
    01:13:634 (1,2) - this jump is alright, but I feel the flow of the cursor is not so good.
    rotate (2) to clockwise and it will be connected well.x, I think it is ok.


that's all.
AiRI~
Thanks mod & star :) :)
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel

h-728 wrote:

[D.N.Angel]
  • 00:05:598 (7,1) - I think this suddenly large jump isn't match with the song. if you use this jump for the sign that the song go fast, but it's too large.
    00:10:955 (2,3) - I don't like this arrangement, because the flow of cursor is curved to the opposite direction. //I don't think it is a suddenly large jump.it is to emphasize the drums,and the spacing do9esn't that huge.
    00:17:652 (2) - I think there is no sound to emphasize at the head of this slider and hard to understand this rhythm. put 1/2 slider at 00:17:741 is better. or put circles at 00:17:741 and 00:17:919. //no,it should follow the vocals well.
    01:00:419 (1) - it's hard to expect this changing of SV. if you change the SV, 0.75x is enough imo. //SV 0.75 is too fast for me
    01:24:616 - only this diff's Kiai Time ends at here. how about move this green section to 01:24:527 ? ops,fixed
that's all.
AiRI~
Thank for modding ~ :)
http://puu.sh/L9d2
jamxx
501 posts
Joined November 2010
jamxx
Easy
GiNa's Normal
Hard
D.N.Angel
  • nothing...
    dnangel is pro :3
thanks request.
nice map.
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

jamxx wrote:

Easy
  • 00:00:420 (1,1) - remove? x
    00:23:634 (1) - suggestion. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/380644 x, I make it symmetry with 00:20:777 (2)
    00:26:134 (1) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/380647 ok
    00:30:419 (4) - remove whistle at slider end Fixed
    01:07:919 (2,3) - Ctrl+R is better imo ok
    01:17:562 (1) - ^ ok


Hard
thanks request.
nice map.
Thanks for modding :) :)
Nagisawa
264 posts
Joined February 2011
Nagisawa
HI! from my Q

General
~delete .osb file in your folder
~As far as I know, the video should be must be in the format 'AVI'
~Why this unnecessary note in the beginning for easy?How about making offset 4705 or make a different rhythm, a this note, it is not necessary.


Easy
00:15:419 (1) - remove finish
00:39:705 (3) - Such rhythms are difficult for beginners
00:50:241 (1) - remove nc
01:19:705 (3) - difficult for beginners
01:23:277 (1) - remove nc and correct slider

Normal
00:15:955 (1) - drag one tick ahead
00:17:384 (3) - delete note
00:31:134 (3) - drag on the white tick
00:36:134 (4) - remove nc
00:45:241 (3,1) - should not be crossed. fix it
00:47:562 (1) - remove nc
00:53:455 (1) - ^
01:00:419 (1) - delete this note and delete this 01:491 (2) - . add a spinner. 01:00:433 - on 01:02:205 - end
01:15:777 (1) - remove nc

Hard
00:13:277 (1) - remove nc
01:06:134 (1) - remove nc
01:25:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try to do so http://puu.sh/LiDD


~good map. good luck! ;)
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

Nagisawa wrote:

HI! from my Q

General
~delete .osb file in your folder Fixed
~As far as I know, the video should be must be in the format 'AVI' I think .AVI is ok (maybe?)
~Why this unnecessary note in the beginning for easy?How about making offset 4705 or make a different rhythm, a this note, it is not necessary. I think the note is ok...
If I start mapping at 00:00:420 ,I think the rhythm is hard for beginners to play


Easy
00:15:419 (1) - remove finish x
00:39:705 (3) - Such rhythms are difficult for beginners Fixed
00:50:241 (1) - remove ncx
01:19:705 (3) - difficult for beginners Fixed
01:23:277 (1) - remove nc and correct slider^

Hard
00:13:277 (1) - remove nc x
01:06:134 (1) - remove nc^
01:25:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try to do so http://puu.sh/LiDD ^


~good map. good luck! ;)
Thanks for modding and star :) :) :)
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa
h-728's Mod

h-728 wrote:

[GiNa's Normal]
  • 00:13:277 (2) - replace with 2/1 slider? I think the sound of here in the song is continuing.　Fixed
    00:15:777 (3,1) - it's better to remove this stack, because you often use stacking in 1/2 rhythm.　Fixed
    to make stacking in some timing may be confusing for newbie players.
    00:18:812 (1,2,3) - to put circles on the red tick continually may be hard for newbie players. how about replace 2 of them with 1/1 slider?　Fixed
    00:24:527 (1,2) - same as 00:15:777　Fixed
    00:30:241 (1,2) - replace with 1/1 slider?　Fixed
    00:34:705 (1) ~ 00:40:062 - why the rhythm become so simple? it isn't bad thing, but just I wondered.　Idk either LOL
    00:45:419 (1) - be upside down and avoid overlapping with the previous circle.　Fixed
    00:48:991 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I feel the arrangement of these notes are random.
    you use the red tick so many times, so you should arrange the notes more easy to follow and read rhythm in visual.　Changed them a little
    00:53:455 (1) - move to below and it will be connected well.　Fixed
jamxx's Mod

jamxx wrote:

GiNa's Normal
  • 00:00:420 (1,1) - remove?　Nope
    00:24:527 (1,2) - no stack.its too difficult for newbie imo　The previous modder mentioned this, already fixed
    01:02:741 (3) - suggestion.http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/380654　Good idea, changed
Nagisawa's Mod

Nagisawa wrote:

Normal
00:15:955 (1) - drag one tick ahead　No
00:17:384 (3) - delete note　^
00:31:134 (3) - drag on the white tick　^
00:36:134 (4) - remove nc　Fixed
00:45:241 (3,1) - should not be crossed. fix it　Already fixed this because the previous modder mentioned this
00:47:562 (1) - remove nc　Fixed
00:53:455 (1) - ^　^
01:00:419 (1) - delete this note and delete this 01:491 (2) - . add a spinner. 01:00:433 - on 01:02:205 - end　Nope
01:15:777 (1) - remove nc　Fixed
Thank you guys !
http://puu.sh/LjPx
hibarirailwayz
446 posts
Joined June 2011
hibarirailwayz
from modding queues~
There are my opinions, so you need not follow.
[General]
clear

[Easy]
00:50:241 (1) - NC and, this is difficult... suggestion↓
SPOILER
　　　00:48:991 (6) - finish=00:49:527 and return once
01:08:634 (4,1) - change NC

[Normal]
00:05:777 (1) - 3 grid up because of It's easy for beginner to AIM.
00:17:384 (3,1) - change NC because of starting voice.
00:39:348 (1,2,3) - not visual...
00:45:241 (3,1) - change NC. same 00:17:384 (3,1) -
00:51:312 (4,1) - ^
00:54:527 (5,1) - ^

[Hard]
clear

[D.N.Angel]
clear

nice map!!☆～

Good luck!!
Loneight
osu! Alumni
1,332 posts
Joined January 2011
Loneight
咱是路過的渣mod


  • "re" 意思是 "remove"
    黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是要討論的問題
    紅色 是unrankable

[Easy]

  1. 咱絕對要吐槽一下那bookmark的作用何在 (被打

  2. 00:10:419 (2) - 第2個點在x:140 y:232 最後1個點在x:300 y:192 ?感覺比較好看些 (被打
  3. 00:18:634 (2) - 最後1個點在x:240 y:184 ? (若有改記得調一下後面的間距噢~) >w<
  4. 00:38:277 (2) - 第2個點在x:212 y:112 最後1個點在x:324 y:48 ?! 理由差不多一樣了 (被打

[GiNa's Normal]

  1. 這normal感覺有點難?!空檔時間外加各種1/2拍在一起..不過只是咱的個人感覺(被打 . 話說那bookmark....

  2. 00:31:848 (1,2) - 稍微overlap了,調一下 ?! x:384 y:276 似乎不錯 (若有改後面的間距記得調噢~)
  3. 00:36:848 (5) - 尾巴似乎碰到了 QAQ!
  4. 01:17:384 - 總覺得可以加個note

[Hard]

  1. 00:35:419 (4) - 不知道你是不是故意ctrl+R ? 若不是就ctrl+R吧~ 感覺這邊的跳 讓咱有點不舒服 .

[D.N.Angel]

  1. 00:16:669 (2) - 咱絕對要吐槽這slider! 沒有對稱 (被打 . 第2個點在 x:308 y:232 ,第4個點 x:204 y:232 (若是故意的就別改了QAQ)
  2. 00:52:384 (2) - 第4個點 x:148 y:96 看看?!
  3. 01:07:384 (6) - NC ~
  4. 01:13:098 (7) - ^
  5. 01:15:955 (7) - ^ 若有改的話01:17:205 (1,2) - 交換NC
  6. 01:25:241 (1,2,3,4) - (1)在x:200 y:192 (3)在x:164 y:292 然後 (2)跟(4)咱應該不用說了(被打 , 原因是比較像星星?! (被打x2
good map & good song & good luck~
加油!>w<
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel

l1106188 wrote:

[D.N.Angel]

  1. 00:16:669 (2) - 咱絕對要吐槽這slider! 沒有對稱 (被打 . 第2個點在 x:308 y:232 ,第4個點 x:204 y:232 (若是故意的就別改了QAQ)
  2. 00:52:384 (2) - 第4個點 x:148 y:96 看看?!
  3. 01:07:384 (6) - NC ~
  4. 01:13:098 (7) - ^ //這以上都改了
  5. 01:15:955 (7) - ^ 若有改的話01:17:205 (1,2) - 交換NC //我故意的 !! lol 要不然數字變2位數不好看OAQ
  6. 01:25:241 (1,2,3,4) - (1)在x:200 y:192 (3)在x:164 y:292 然後 (2)跟(4)咱應該不用說了(被打 , 原因是比較像星星?! (被打x2
    //其實你換個角度想，「對稱倒五角形不好嗎 ? 」=w=
    到處都星星難道看不膩??
謝謝MOD ~ :)
http://puu.sh/MbDy
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

l1106188 wrote:

咱是路過的渣mod


  • "re" 意思是 "remove"
    黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是要討論的問題
    紅色 是unrankable

[Easy]

  1. 咱絕對要吐槽一下那bookmark的作用何在 (被打沒作用xDD

  2. 00:10:419 (2) - 第2個點在x:140 y:232 最後1個點在x:300 y:192 ?感覺比較好看些 (被打
  3. 00:18:634 (2) - 最後1個點在x:240 y:184 ? (若有改記得調一下後面的間距噢~) >w<
  4. 00:38:277 (2) - 第2個點在x:212 y:112 最後1個點在x:324 y:48 ?! 理由差不多一樣了 (被打
    All Fixed

[Hard]

  1. 00:35:419 (4) - 不知道你是不是故意ctrl+R ? 若不是就ctrl+R吧~ 感覺這邊的跳 讓咱有點不舒服 .ok~Fixed
good map & good song & good luck~
加油!>w<
Thanks mod~ :) :)
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
jonathanlfj
From my birthday queue :)
直接上中文吧

黑色为建议
蓝色推荐修改
红色一定要改

[General]
这个mp3伤不起...换一个从andrea的图拿来的 http://puu.sh/Mlzl
offset可以借鉴 http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55494, bpm不是稳定的 orz
为什么slider velocity都是小数点 （汗-_-!)


mod以旧mp3为准~~
[Easy]
00:14:348 (5) - 中间加finish
00:21:848 (3) - 把红色的node上移一格可以完美对称
00:37:562 (1) - 前面加finish
00:46:134 (2) - 改成finish
01:00:419 (1) - 用whistle好听一些
01:26:312 (1) - 这个应该从 01:26:669 开始
AI mod说有些note间距不对，有时间改一下吧

[GiNa's Normal]
00:11:848 (1) - 做个blanket?
00:43:277 (1) - 前面加finish
00:45:419 (1) - 中间从whistle改成finish
00:51:312 (4) - 这个改成repeat slider应该好一些
00:57:206 (2,3) - 往后半拍好一些
01:11:848 (1) - 去掉clap

[Hard]
00:17:562 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个星星能做的更好看一些（可以用神器polygon tool）
00:43:277 (1) - 前面加finish
00:46:134 (4) - ^
00:48:991 (1) - ^
00:51:669 (5) - 移到00:51:312 (4) 正下方 （连带之后的）
00:57:562 (1) - 改finish
00:58:991 (1) - 前面改finish
01:21:491 (4) - 中间改finish
01:22:919 (1) - 这个slider可以做成这样
SPOILER
01:24:527 (9) - 前面改finish

[D.N.Angel]
00:17:205 (3) - 放到正下方？现在有点偏
00:22:919 (4) - 后面加个finish
00:46:134 (1) - 前面加finish
01:02:652 - 加个note，听着stream像从这里开始
01:20:062 (1) - 后面加finish
01:21:848 (5) - 前面加finish
这diff跳的好销魂~~

非常好的mapset! 祝早日rank ^_^
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel

jonathanlfj wrote:

[D.N.Angel]
00:17:205 (3) - 放到正下方？现在有点偏
00:22:919 (4) - 后面加个finish
00:46:134 (1) - 前面加finish
01:02:652 - 加个note，听着stream像从这里开始 //這邊的話，我感覺從vocal開始連擊節奏會比較好抓一點，所以就保留了~
01:20:062 (1) - 后面加finish
01:21:848 (5) - 前面加finish
这diff跳的好销魂~~

非常好的mapset! 祝早日rank ^_^
其他的都照你的做了
謝謝MOD ~ ^^

http://puu.sh/MmWc

To Pao :
Andrea版本的紅線和mp3讓我疑惑了...
看你要不要找個offset expert來看這首的offset
Andrea那首的是方塊測的，我覺得可以找他看看
Beige
Elite Mapper
2,192 posts
Joined February 2011
Beige
From my queue, I'm late sorry~

GiNa's Normal


01:11:848 (1) - : turn delete clap

01:20:419 (1,3) : How about tick sound?

Hard


00:05:598 (4,1) - : I think these are so far

D.N.Angel


01:15:419 (5) - : NC?

01:15:955 (7) - : How about make symmetry?

That's all

If you hate this mod, ignore this

whatever, good luck :)
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

jonathanlfj wrote:

From my birthday queue :) HBD~~ xD
直接上中文吧

黑色为建议
蓝色推荐修改
红色一定要改

[General]
这个mp3伤不起...换一个从andrea的图拿来的 http://puu.sh/Mlzl
offset可以借鉴 http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55494, bpm不是稳定的 orz
为什么slider velocity都是小数点 （汗-_-!)

OK~MP3已換.Offset改255我覺得ok了.

mod以旧mp3为准~~
[Easy]
00:14:348 (5) - 中间加finish Fixed
00:21:848 (3) - 把红色的node上移一格可以完美对称Fixed
00:37:562 (1) - 前面加finishFixed
00:46:134 (2) - 改成finishx
01:00:419 (1) - 用whistle好听一些x
01:26:312 (1) - 这个应该从 01:26:669 开始 x
AI mod说有些note间距不对，有时间改一下吧 Ok=w=

[Hard]
00:17:562 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个星星能做的更好看一些（可以用神器polygon tool）先留著吧,擺正的星星我還能接受
00:43:277 (1) - 前面加finishx
00:46:134 (4) - ^x
00:48:991 (1) - ^x
00:51:669 (5) - 移到00:51:312 (4) 正下方 （连带之后的）Fixed
00:57:562 (1) - 改finish x
00:58:991 (1) - 前面改finishx
01:21:491 (4) - 中间改finish x
01:22:919 (1) - 这个slider可以做成这样 Fixed
SPOILER

01:24:527 (9) - 前面改finishFixed

非常好的mapset! 祝早日rank ^_^
謝謝Mod :) :)


W h i t e wrote:

From my queue, I'm late sorry~

Hard


00:05:598 (4,1) - : I think these are so far

Fixed


That's all

If you hate this mod, ignore this

whatever, good luck :)
Thanks Mod :) :)
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa
hibarirailwayz's Mod

hibarirailwayz wrote:

[Normal]
00:05:777 (1) - 3 grid up because of It's easy for beginner to AIM.　Fixed
00:17:384 (3,1) - change NC because of starting voice.　Nope
00:39:348 (1,2,3) - not visual...　Changed it a little I guess
00:45:241 (3,1) - change NC. same 00:17:384 (3,1) - 　Nope
00:51:312 (4,1) - ^　^
00:54:527 (5,1) - ^　^
l1106188's Mod

l1106188 wrote:

[GiNa's Normal]

  1. 這normal感覺有點難?!空檔時間外加各種1/2拍在一起..不過只是咱的個人感覺(被打 . 話說那bookmark.... 　我是用easy傳承下來的，所以bookmark還在LOL 話說應該不會太難，很多人都能隨手2.3 mods的
  2. 00:31:848 (1,2) - 稍微overlap了,調一下 ?! x:384 y:276 似乎不錯 (若有改後面的間距記得調噢~)　No change
  3. 00:36:848 (5) - 尾巴似乎碰到了 QAQ!　^
  4. 01:17:384 - 總覺得可以加個note　^
jonathanlfj's Mod

jonathanlfj wrote:

[GiNa's Normal]
00:11:848 (1) - 做个blanket?　Fixed
00:43:277 (1) - 前面加finish　Fixed
00:45:419 (1) - 中间从whistle改成finish　Fixed
00:51:312 (4) - 这个改成repeat slider应该好一些　Fixed
00:57:206 (2,3) - 往后半拍好一些　Nope
01:11:848 (1) - 去掉clap　Fixed
W h i t e's Mod

W h i t e wrote:

GiNa's Normal

01:11:848 (1) - : turn delete clap　Fixed
01:20:419 (1,3) : How about tick sound?　Nope
Thank you everyone !
Roxas
osu! Alumni
1,354 posts
Joined August 2011
Roxas
Hi from Riki's and Roxas' queue

[General]

Put normal-sliderslide like soft-sliderslide.

[Easy]

00:12:040 - Why don't you use slidertick2 in this tick like other sliders ( 00:05:969 (2) - ) ?
00:54:540 (1) - Last slider point 1~2 grid down

[GiNa's Normal]

00:54:540 (1) - Move 2nd slider point in x:96 y:108

Haven't found ohter errors really good job :3
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

RoxasGrylls94 wrote:

Hi from Riki's and Roxas' queue

[General]

Put normal-sliderslide like soft-sliderslide. I think the default normal-sliderslide stayed better with no-sound.

[Easy]

00:12:040 - Why don't you use slidertick2 in this tick like other sliders ( 00:05:969 (2) - ) ? x
00:54:540 (1) - Last slider point 1~2 grid down Fixed


[GiNa's Normal]

00:54:540 (1) - Move 2nd slider point in x:96 y:108 Fixed

Haven't found ohter errors really good job :3
Thanks mod~ :)
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
3,735 posts
Joined November 2009
Frostmourne
Hello \:D/ , from my queue

Easy
00:57:397 (1) - I feel like it should be added finish since this is pre-part and will be kiai part soon. don't you think so :P?

GiNa's Normal
00:14:897 (2) - try changing volume and hitsound type to 25% and normal hit, I find it very fit with tom(drum) sound much >w<
00:30:076 (1) - ehh.. why no whistle at the end? since it does fit very well with vocal , end with that empty sound feel lonely ;_;
00:33:826 (2) - same.. whistle here sounds very nice :3 b
01:04:362 (4) - .... use this as slider and end at 01:04:897 (2) - instead? , I feel it kinda forced me while playing and not intuitive much
01:12:576 (2,3) - add finish at these two sliders at the last point of it (finish combine with vocal is better than nothing I think :P)
01:17:397 (2) - if you would like to follow the vocal, I think the slider should be started at red point before 1/2 beat like this ?
and I think that slider will flow better with (3) too
SPOILER

Hard
00:11:504 (4,5) - add clap these two notes :P , it will sound very nice because the song also represent that sound in the first place :3
00:15:254 (3) - maybe same as GiNa diff , add 25% normal hit at the start of this slider would be nice :lol:
00:38:469 (5) - why don't add whistle at the tail ? since you used this at 00:30:433 ,00:36:147 and vocal are kinda same so

D.N. Angel
I am get used to your style :D:D , modded many of your diffs so I guess it may hard to find problem in your diff =_=
00:11:504 (1) - miss a clap here or not but I think it doesn't sound good though ;o
00:16:326 (1) - this note shouldn't be soft hitsound seriously, it will be better with normal clap ? :P , let you consider it
00:19:719 (3) - whistle at the end of this slider here :P , I don't know why it's good, it comes from my feeling though ;D
00:56:683 (3) - whistle at (4) is better ?
01:14:897 (4) - why you break the flow here !!!! , make slider like this instead :D so this will follow the vocal and flow very good =w=b
SPOILER

pretty neat map :3 , star and good luck :D
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel

Frostmourne wrote:

01:14:897 (4) - why you break the flow here !!!! , make slider like this instead :D so this will follow the vocal and flow very good =w=b
SPOILER
evreything fixed except that.
I know your idea is good,but I still wanna keep my pattern cuz I like it >< (btw,I think it doesn't break the flow at all :O)
Thank for modding and star ~ \:D/

http://puu.sh/Na2r
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

Frostmourne wrote:

Hello \:D/ , from my queue

Easy
00:57:397 (1) - I feel like it should be added finish since this is pre-part and will be kiai part soon. don't you think so :P?

Hard
00:11:504 (4,5) - add clap these two notes :P , it will sound very nice because the song also represent that sound in the first place :3 Fixed
00:15:254 (3) - maybe same as GiNa diff , add 25% normal hit at the start of this slider would be nice :lol: ok, but I use soft-clap(custom1) here.
00:38:469 (5) - why don't add whistle at the tail ? since you used this at 00:30:433 ,00:36:147 and vocal are kinda same so Fixed


pretty neat map :3 , star and good luck :D
Thanks mod & star :) :) :)
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,149 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
Alright let's get started. mod requested on my queue :)

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.

[General]
the lead in time should be the same for all diffs. set the easy's lead in to 1500 like the other diffs.
Preview times are inconsistent. remember they must be the same for all diffs.

[Easy]
consider increasing every setting except for the CS by 1 for a smoother flow to the song.
00:08:826 (1) - maybe make the slider like this so that it'd somewhat form a blanket for the next slider. i think doing this would flow smoother to the next note durung gameplay.
00:11:683 (1) - since you have a slidertick file, make that slidertick before the repeat is hit a clap for consistency.
00:15:254 (1) - idk about this...instrumental is still going and i feel that this is placed at an awkward spot. move this spinner up by 1/1, and ofc reduce the spinner by 1/1. also add notes at that empty spot to follow the instrumental in the song. it makes me feel comfortable on where this note is placed since it flows to the instrumental nicely IMO.
00:30:254 (4) - maybe it's just me, but this 2/1 slider breaks the flow in this combo since (1) is a 1/1 slider and the flow should keep going if this is a 1/1 slider, so reduce this slider by 1/1 and either add a repeat or add a circle to keep the flow doing from the previous pattern.
00:37:397 (1) - maybe make this a curved slider to blanket the beginning of the next slider? again i think doing this would make a smooth path to the next note during gameplay IMO.
00:45:969 (2) - i think i heard cymbals on this note, so either add a finish with the whistle, or replace the whistle for a finish to match it.
00:48:826 (6) - make this a NC. this is where the lyrics change in this note.
00:50:076 (1) - remove the NC if you follow the suggestion above. the lyrics are still going from the previous note, and replace the claps for finishes to not only match the vocals, but to match the cymbals in the background music.
01:00:254 (1) - personally, i don't like where this spinner ends. for me, it ends at an awkward spot in which the vocals continue at the 1/2 tick. i suggest ending this spinner at 01:01:504 because that's where the instrumental starts all over again in the song.
01:25:076 (1) - this slider should start 1/2 ahead because it looks odd starting that note at "se". it follows "sekai", but if you move it 1/2 up, it'll end at "kai" in which it'll flow to the map and it'll make a nice ending to the song before the spinner.

[GiNa's Normal]
00:11:683 (1) - *nazi* not a big deal but think you can stack the repeat on (1) perfectly? i think it'd look neater during gameplay.
00:17:219 (3) - maybe you can move this note 1/2 back to follow the piano? i think moving it here might cause players to hit this note too early IMO even though it's following the vocals here.
00:30:790 - maybe add a circle to follow the guitar in this part of the song?
00:41:326 - maybe add a circle to follow the drums in the song?
00:43:647 (2) - remove the finish at the beginning. it sounds unfitting to me and no cymbals are heard in this part.
00:45:254 (1) - replace the whistle for a finish. i feel that the whistle isn't loud enough to match the cymbals in the song.
00:51:147 (4) - add a repeat on this slider to not be consistent with the previous slider, but to follow the vocals accurately during gameplay.
01:11:683 (1) - remove that clap at the repeat arrow. i find it unfitting with this part and it ruins the consistency in the claps.
01:13:290 (3) - maybe add a clap at the repeat for consistency purposes?
nice diff, and i gotta respect your mapping style in this...

[Hard]
00:04:362 (2,3) - add whistles here but not at the sliderbody of (2) to match the piano in the song.
00:22:040 (2) - i feel that this is unrankable because the repeat arrow is being covered by the hitburst. find a way to make this repeat arrow fully visible for players to see.
00:45:969 (4) - same as normal, but replace the whistle for a finish.
01:25:076 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think this star's spacing can be bigger because during gameplay, it looks clumped up IMO.
other than that, this is a good diff.

[D.N.Angel]
00:02:754 (2) - replace this for a 1/2 repeat slider or 3 circles because it'll follow the piano and guitar nicely. it feels odd following this slider when the instrumental changes in this part.
00:40:612 - maybe add a circle to follow the drums in this part of the song?
same comment as hard.

I guess that's it. Star and GL :D
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's get started. mod requested on my queue :)

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.

[General]
the lead in time should be the same for all diffs. set the easy's lead in to 1500 like the other diffs.Fixed
Preview times are inconsistent. remember they must be the same for all diffs.Fixed

[Easy]
consider increasing every setting except for the CS by 1 for a smoother flow to the song. OD+1
00:08:826 (1) - maybe make the slider like this so that it'd somewhat form a blanket for the next slider. i think doing this would flow smoother to the next note durung gameplay. Fixed
00:11:683 (1) - since you have a slidertick file, make that slidertick before the repeat is hit a clap for consistency. x
00:15:254 (1) - idk about this...instrumental is still going and i feel that this is placed at an awkward spot. move this spinner up by 1/1, and ofc reduce the spinner by 1/1. also add notes at that empty spot to follow the instrumental in the song. it makes me feel comfortable on where this note is placed since it flows to the instrumental nicely IMO. I think it's ok... I follow the lyrics
00:30:254 (4) - maybe it's just me, but this 2/1 slider breaks the flow in this combo since (1) is a 1/1 slider and the flow should keep going if this is a 1/1 slider, so reduce this slider by 1/1 and either add a repeat or add a circle to keep the flow doing from the previous pattern. Fixed
00:37:397 (1) - maybe make this a curved slider to blanket the beginning of the next slider? again i think doing this would make a smooth path to the next note during gameplay IMO. Fixed
00:45:969 (2) - i think i heard cymbals on this note, so either add a finish with the whistle, or replace the whistle for a finish to match it.Fixed
00:48:826 (6) - make this a NC. this is where the lyrics change in this note. I follow the lyrics o.o
00:50:076 (1) - remove the NC if you follow the suggestion above. the lyrics are still going from the previous note, and replace the claps for finishes to not only match the vocals, but to match the cymbals in the background music.^
01:00:254 (1) - personally, i don't like where this spinner ends. for me, it ends at an awkward spot in which the vocals continue at the 1/2 tick. i suggest ending this spinner at 01:01:504 because that's where the instrumental starts all over again in the song.I follow the lyrics.. the vocal's end
01:25:076 (1) - this slider should start 1/2 ahead because it looks odd starting that note at "se". it follows "sekai", but if you move it 1/2 up, it'll end at "kai" in which it'll flow to the map and it'll make a nice ending to the song before the spinner. x

[Hard]
00:04:362 (2,3) - add whistles here but not at the sliderbody of (2) to match the piano in the song. Fixed
00:22:040 (2) - i feel that this is unrankable because the repeat arrow is being covered by the hitburst. find a way to make this repeat arrow fully visible for players to see. ..it is ok?(maybe...) - http://puu.sh/Nyb5
00:45:969 (4) - same as normal, but replace the whistle for a finish. Fixed
01:25:076 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think this star's spacing can be bigger because during gameplay, it looks clumped up IMO.
other than that, this is a good diff. I think it's ok~ the spacing is 1.5x o.o

I guess that's it. Star and GL :D
thanks.. you forget to shoot star to me T.T
Thanks mod :) :)
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,149 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
oh whoops...sorry :(. here you go.
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa
Frostmourne's Mod

Frostmourne wrote:

GiNa's Normal
00:14:897 (2) - try changing volume and hitsound type to 25% and normal hit, I find it very fit with tom(drum) sound much >w<　I think 25% is too low, so I use 50%
00:30:076 (1) - ehh.. why no whistle at the end? since it does fit very well with vocal , end with that empty sound feel lonely ;_;　Fixed
00:33:826 (2) - same.. whistle here sounds very nice :3 b　Fixed
01:04:362 (4) - .... use this as slider and end at 01:04:897 (2) - instead? , I feel it kinda forced me while playing and not intuitive much　Nope, but I still moved it a little
01:12:576 (2,3) - add finish at these two sliders at the last point of it (finish combine with vocal is better than nothing I think :P)　Fixed
01:17:397 (2) - if you would like to follow the vocal, I think the slider should be started at red point before 1/2 beat like this ? and I think that slider will flow better with (3) too　Nope, I tried to keep them as 1/1
249's Mod

Byakugan249 wrote:

[GiNa's Normal]
00:11:683 (1) - *nazi* not a big deal but think you can stack the repeat on (1) perfectly? i think it'd look neater during gameplay.　Fixed
00:17:219 (3) - maybe you can move this note 1/2 back to follow the piano? i think moving it here might cause players to hit this note too early IMO even though it's following the vocals here.　Nope
00:30:790 - maybe add a circle to follow the guitar in this part of the song?　k
00:41:326 - maybe add a circle to follow the drums in the song?　Nope
00:43:647 (2) - remove the finish at the beginning. it sounds unfitting to me and no cymbals are heard in this part.　Fixed
00:45:254 (1) - replace the whistle for a finish. i feel that the whistle isn't loud enough to match the cymbals in the song.　Fixed
00:51:147 (4) - add a repeat on this slider to not be consistent with the previous slider, but to follow the vocals accurately during gameplay.　Fixed
01:11:683 (1) - remove that clap at the repeat arrow. i find it unfitting with this part and it ruins the consistency in the claps.　Fixed
01:13:290 (3) - maybe add a clap at the repeat for consistency purposes?　Fixed
nice diff, and i gotta respect your mapping style in this...　Glad to hear that from a experienced modder like you ^-^

Thanks again
http://puu.sh/NJm9
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

Byakugan249 wrote:

oh whoops...sorry :(. here you go.
Thank you xD
-

Updated.~
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Yo


[Easy]
* AR +1?

00:18:112 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu while gameplay. It can be hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read)
00:50:076 (1) - Remove new combo
01:03:469 (2) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner. May hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read)


[GiNa's Normal]
* AR +1?

00:13:826 - Add note here?
00:41:326 - ^
01:02:576 (3) - Add clap at repeating slider?


[Hard]
00:51:147 (4) - Add whistle at head slider?
00:59:719 (3) - Remove 1 repeating slider, so players are able to click the next object with perfect timed


[D.N.Angel]
01:15:076 - Add note here?


Good luck!!!
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

Leorda wrote:

Yo


[Easy]
* AR +1?

00:18:112 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu while gameplay. It can be hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read)
00:50:076 (1) - Remove new combo
01:03:469 (2) - Overlapped by hitbursts from s pinner. May hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read)

[Hard]
00:51:147 (4) - Add whistle at head slider?
00:59:719 (3) - Remove 1 repeating slider, so players are able to click the next object with perfect timed

Good luck!!!
all fixed

thank you~ :) :)
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel

Leorda wrote:

[D.N.Angel]
01:15:076 - Add note here? //this stop is good to me.

Byakugan249 wrote:

[D.N.Angel]
00:02:754 (2) - replace this for a 1/2 repeat slider or 3 circles because it'll follow the piano and guitar nicely. it feels odd following this slider when the instrumental changes in this part. //I think the rhythm is fine
00:40:612 - maybe add a circle to follow the drums in this part of the song? //no,I just wanna follow the vocal here.
same comment as hard.
Thank for modding ~ :)

訂閱功能怪怪的...我沒收到訊息通知的說
JudgeTheDude
595 posts
Joined September 2011
JudgeTheDude
Hi, from my modding queue

Useless mod from an noob modder :P
I didn't find anything to report

Good work, good luck with rankings ^^
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo
Hi ^^ Random m4m xD

Hard

00:01:862 - add note here, it will be better follow the music
00:50:254 - ^
00:37:576 - remove 1 repeat and put this slider on white tick.

Normal

• Distance spacing should be 0.8 on normal diff's

00:44:897 - better add note, it will make a smooth transition
00:54:183 - ^
01:14:183 - ^
01:11:683 - http://puu.sh/Q1go will be sounds better

Easy fine~~

P.S Here multi timing, Open this http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55494 and look

Good luck~~
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi ^^ Random m4m xD

Hard

00:01:862 - add note here, it will be better follow the music Fixed
00:50:254 - ^ x
00:37:576 - remove 1 repeat and put this slider on white tick. ^ , I follow the lyrics

Easy fine~~:)

P.S Here multi timing, Open this http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55494 and look

Good luck~~
thanks mod :) :) :)
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa

Leorda wrote:

[GiNa's Normal]

* AR +1?　No, people complained AR 5 is too fast for a Normal
00:13:826 - Add note here?　No
00:41:326 - ^　Added
01:02:576 (3) - Add clap at repeating slider?　Fixed

Katty Pie wrote:

Normal

• Distance spacing should be 0.8 on normal diff's　??? Is this a rule ???

00:44:897 - better add note, it will make a smooth transition　Nope
00:54:183 - ^　^
01:14:183 - ^　^
01:11:683 - http://puu.sh/Q1go will be sounds better　Fixed
http://puu.sh/Q99u
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya
request from my queue :3

[General]
~~

[Easy]
Slider shape, circle placement
  1. 00:32:754: last point to x264 y168 would be nice~
Rhythms
  1. 00:45:254: move the nc to 00:45:969 ?
  2. 01:08:469: add finish on the slider tail?
[GiNa's Normal]
Rhythms
  1. 01:04:362: remove note?
[Hard]
Rhythms
  1. 00:19:183: add whistle on the slider tail?
  2. 00:19:540: ^
  3. 00:20:076: whistle?
  4. 00:25:254: whistle on the slider tail?
  5. 00:25:612: whistle on the reverse ?
  6. 00:27:754: whistle on the slider tail?
  7. 00:28:112: ^
  8. 00:28:647: whistle?
  9. 00:30:612: whistle on tail?
  10. 00:30:969: whistle on the reverse ?
  11. 00:31:504: whistle?
  12. 00:38:469: remove whistle on the slider end
  13. 01:12:933: finish on the head?
[DN Angel's]
Rhythms
  1. 00:42:219: add note?
  2. 00:45:076: whistle on the head?
  3. 00:45:433: ^
thats all I can find, good luck ^w^
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao
Thanks mod :)
Crok425
262 posts
Joined October 2010
Crok425
Hi, from the modding queue. Sorry for the delay, I'm lazy :P. Sorry if it's short, it seems like the map is looking perfect already.

[Easy]
You're overusing the whistle sound in the first part of the Kiai mode. Try to use less since hearing it over again it's kind of... annoying.
I can't really find anything because it's a well made map.

[GINa's Normal]
00:19:183 Add a circle there.
00:25:254 ^
01:08:112 ^ ... maybe...
01:17:040 ^ I don't like that empty spot. Put a clap sound also.
01:25:076 Add a slider of the same length as the next one. There is a vocal in that part, you should add it.
Done.

[Hard]
Same as easy... although not as overused... still, check it. I kinda think this song doesn't goes well with the whistle... but you can ignore that :).
... And so again... I didn't find anything... damn...

[D.N.Angel]
A... nope, nothing either. Ignore.
__________________

And that's all I can do. Sorry for the shortness, but I hope it's helpful enough and I wish you good lcuk on getting this ranked.
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
2,855 posts
Joined February 2010
-kevincela-
Hi :D

[Easy]

  1. 00:14:183 (5) - Remove the repeat and instead move the slider at 00:14:719 - or 00:14:897 - ? Imho,this would be a better choice here.
  2. 00:45:612 - Add a note here? It follows in a really good way the singer's voice :D
[GiNa's Normal]

  1. 00:50:076 (2) - Put this at x:240 y:176,so that this can countinue the flow with 00:48:826 (1) - in a better way?
  2. 00:56:862 (3) - If you want to make a better blanket with 00:57:397 (1) - ,then I suggest you to move the last waypoint at x:320 y:132
  3. 01:21:326 (2) - Little suggestion here: Move this at x:204 y:225?
[Hard]

  1. 00:36:683 (3) - CTRL+R here?
[D.N.Angel]

  • Really nothing to say,really good work here ^^
That's it. That's rather a short mod,really good map and good luck! ^^
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao
Thanks Crok425's & -kevincela-'s mod :) :)

Fixed & updated
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
pieguyn
hi there, sorry I'm late >_<

Easy: fine

Normal:

01:17:040 - add note?

Hard:

00:15:969 (5) - maybe put finish on repeat instead of whistle? it might match the cymbal in the song better o-o
00:53:112 (1) - remove finish? since there's no finishes in the rest of this part ><

D.N.Angel:

00:20:969 (3) - add whistle?
00:48:647 (4) - add custom soft 1 whistle like before?
01:11:862 (2) - maybe add whistle here?

nice map, good luck =w=
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao
Thanks pieguy1372's mod

All fixed :) :)
Chewin
osu! Alumni
4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
Chewin
Hi EmPao, mod request from my modding queue >w<

[General]
I suggest you to change this BG because Andrea has already used it for his mapset: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55494
To distinguish this map from the other one, it's better if you change it then.. (:
Add Evergreen to the tags?


[Easy]
00:18:469 (2) - I don't know but this slider doesn't convince me. I mean that beginners would think to find a rhythm like this:

I think it would be better to play for them, especially after a spinner's end
00:48:826 (1) - Instead of whistle here I would use finish on this slider's head, especially because it would sound perfectly together with 00:50:076 (2)'s finishes
00:51:683 (1,2) - You could make them symmetric, I mean: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/402472
I have fixed the spacing of the next elements too, then just copy this code:
308,92,51683,6,0,B|452:92,2,144,4|2|8
208,92,53112,2,0,B|64:92,2,144,4|2|8
196,188,54540,6,0,B|256:225|256:317|196:348,2,192,4|2|2
144,268,56326,1,8
92,188,56683,1,0
144,108,57040,1,8
240,108,57397,6,0,B|284:84|332:108,1,96,12|8
408,164,58112,2,0,B|432:212|408:256,1,96,8|8
332,316,58826,2,0,B|284:340|240:316,1,96,8|8
164,256,59540,2,0,B|140:208|164:164,1,96,8|8
01:00:254 (1) - Remove finish, it sounds too loud. Just a finish on 01:03:112 (1) is already perfect imo
01:11:326 (5) - New combo
I don't like this hitsound normal pattern you used during the kiai time D:
Good map btw :3

[GiNa's Normal]
00:18:647 (1) - Useless new combo, remove it
00:20:254 (1) - Finish here also for consistency
00:24:362 (1) - Remove new combo
00:26:147 (1) - To keep consistency with the previous part you should move this circle 1/2 earlier adding a finish on it, the rhythm is much better
00:30:076 (1) - Remove new combo
00:31:683 (1) - Finish on the slider's start
00:37:397 (1) - Finish
00:50:076 (2,3) - I would add finishes on (2) and on the (3)'s end. It would fit the music better especially together with 00:51:683 (1)
00:57:397 (1) - Finish on the head
00:58:826 (1) - ^
01:04:362 (1) - What about to use this rhythm instead that follows the vocal? I would put circle first and the slider after it

01:18:647 (4,1) - Same of 00:50:076 (2,3), these finishes are awesome
Nice, just small suggestions about hitsounds

[Hard]
00:02:219 (2) - Remove whistle?
Fine

[D.N.Angel]

Rename to D.N.Angel's Insane

01:00:255 (1) - What about to improve a bit this ugly slider's shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/402506
256,192,60255,6,0,B|188:220|208:124|260:88|400:156|248:324,1,322,0|4
Just this

That's all, good mapset.
I wish you good luck with rank then ;3 Have my star :)
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

Chewin wrote:

Hi EmPao, mod request from my modding queue >w<

[General]
I suggest you to change this BG because Andrea has already used it for his mapset: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55494
To distinguish this map from the other one, it's better if you change it then.. (: I tried to find it ... But I cant find the other BG orz...
Add Evergreen to the tags?

[Easy]
00:18:469 (2) - I don't know but this slider doesn't convince me. I mean that beginners would think to find a rhythm like this:

I think it would be better to play for them, especially after a spinner's end Fixed
00:48:826 (1) - Instead of whistle here I would use finish on this slider's head, especially because it would sound perfectly together with 00:50:076 (2)'s finishes ^
00:51:683 (1,2) - You could make them symmetric, I mean: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/402472 Okay
I have fixed the spacing of the next elements too, then just copy this code: 
308,92,51683,6,0,B|452:92,2,144,4|2|8
208,92,53112,2,0,B|64:92,2,144,4|2|8
196,188,54540,6,0,B|256:225|256:317|196:348,2,192,4|2|2
144,268,56326,1,8
92,188,56683,1,0
144,108,57040,1,8
240,108,57397,6,0,B|284:84|332:108,1,96,12|8
408,164,58112,2,0,B|432:212|408:256,1,96,8|8
332,316,58826,2,0,B|284:340|240:316,1,96,8|8
164,256,59540,2,0,B|140:208|164:164,1,96,8|8
01:00:254 (1) - Remove finish, it sounds too loud. Just a finish on 01:03:112 (1) is already perfect imo ^
01:11:326 (5) - New combo ^
I don't like this hitsound normal pattern you used during the kiai time D: some people tell me this problem too.. so I decide to changed the hitsound to soft-whistle. (maybe it will be better now...orz)
Good map btw :3
[Hard]
00:02:219 (2) - Remove whistle? Fixed
Fine

That's all, good mapset. thanks mod, your mod is helpful xD
I wish you good luck with rank then ;3 Have my star :)
Thanks mod & star :) :)
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao
waiting for GiNa & DarknessAngel check those mods ...and I will try to find MAT :P
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel
thank for modding,everyone ~ :)

http://puu.sh/W9XJ


To Pao :
這圖的確是時候找MAT了
sry沒能給你mod ><
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao
updated !!

Thanks DarknessAngel xD
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa
Totally in a busy life now T.T
Anyways, here
http://puu.sh/WjjR
I fixed what I think is necessary/make sense
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao
okay~updated !!

Thanks to GiNa

yeah~
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
Easy
加个那么长的BREAK是要偷懒？

NORMAL
^

HARD
00:59:719 (3) - 这全部CLAP会呕的

INSANE不MOD了肯定坑人
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel
@Sun Rainbow :

就算要騙KD也請別用吐嘈語氣好麼...
老實說如果是我我就不會給...


@ Pao :

I forgot to fix this,can you help me ?
這樣就不用傳檔案，我覺得方便點:p

Chewin wrote:

[D.N.Angel]

01:00:255 (1) - What about to improve a bit this ugly slider's shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/402506
256,192,60255,6,0,B|188:220|208:124|260:88|400:156|248:324,1,322,0|4
Just this
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Easy
加个那么长的BREAK是要偷懒？前面的節奏比較複雜,在簡單的diff中我覺得不好做 所以沒做 用一個note帶過>_>

HARD
00:59:719 (3) - 这全部CLAP会呕的 I follow the drum
:)
Thanks mod

DarknessAngel wrote:

@ Pao :

I forgot to fix this,can you help me ?
這樣就不用傳檔案，我覺得方便點:p

Chewin wrote:

[D.N.Angel]

01:00:255 (1) - What about to improve a bit this ugly slider's shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/402506
256,192,60255,6,0,B|188:220|208:124|260:88|400:156|248:324,1,322,0|4
Just this
Okay~

找不到MAT ;_;
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Easy
加个那么长的BREAK是要偷懒？

NORMAL
^
你的語氣聽起來像是來吵架的
reason同Pao，所以無修改

In return, 給個那麼短的MOD是要偷懶？
Btw, I agreed with DA's statement.
Spread Wings_old
67 posts
Joined May 2011
Spread Wings_old


Sorry for delay, I have to share the pc with a selfish sister at home :|

[General]

Clear!

[Easy]

AR+1 plays better in this diff.

  1. 00:08:469 - Add a note here? Feel empty without a one here.
  2. 00:23:112 - ^
  3. 00:28:469 - ^
  4. 01:00:254 (1) - End spinner in 01:01:504 and add a note in 01:02:754.
No spacing issues beacuse spacing is good, but consider "add a note". Feel some parts empty.

[Gina's Normal]

Looks good.

[Hard]

  1. 00:03:826 (1,2) - Try this: http://puu.sh/ZcYh
  2. 00:06:504 - Add a note here? Feel empty without a one here.
  3. 00:49:719 (2) - Finish in End
  4. 00:50:433 (3) - ^
[D.N.Angel]

Good

I'm tired for now, will sleep.
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao
Thanks mod^_^
Lizbeth
osu! Alumni
1,731 posts
Joined August 2008
Lizbeth
hellow

[D.N.Angel]
00:05:612 (1) - Unexpected, threw me off twice.
00:17:219 (1,2) - plays weird since there isnt any sound here: 00:17:487 - in the song 00:17:487 -
that's abotu it, lovely diff

[GiNa's Normal]
00:25:612 (6) - I suggest replace by single note, I think sounds better
00:33:112 (1) - threw me off, maybe delete the slider and add notes at: 00:33:290 - 00:33:469 -

[Easy]
Lovely diff, maybe the notes after slider could enter later thou.

That's all
Good mapset
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao
Thanks mod & star :D
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel

Lizbeth wrote:

[D.N.Angel]
00:05:612 (1) - Unexpected, threw me off twice. //hmm...I think it made a ;) good ffect of emphasis by the jump and NC
I wanna keep it ><
00:17:219 (1,2) - plays weird since there isnt any sound here: 00:17:487 - in the song 00:17:487 - //it seemed that I wanted to follow the vocal a bit,ok fixed
that's abotu it, lovely diff
thank for modding ~ :)




林杯筆電沒puush所以sor請你辛苦點:p
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276,256,18647,2,0,B|308:240|332:212,1,68.9999979436398,0|2
164,120,19004,6,0,B|128:108|92:112,2,68.9999979436398,0|2|2
124,192,19540,1,0
96,272,19719,2,0,B|128:276|164:264,1,68.9999979436398,0|2
124,192,20076,1,0
124,192,20254,2,0,B|56:192,1,68.9999979436398,2|0
232,320,20612,5,2
208,176,20790,1,0
148,336,20969,1,0
264,240,21147,1,0
96,272,21326,6,0,B|60:284|36:308,1,68.9999979436398,2|0
416,272,21862,2,0,B|452:284|476:308,1,68.9999979436398,0|2
256,84,22397,1,2
256,84,22754,2,0,B|256:220,1,137.99999588728,0|6
320,304,23290,6,0,B|352:288|384:260,1,68.9999979436398,0|2
176,192,23647,2,0,B|152:168|140:133,1,68.9999979436398
336,192,24004,2,0,B|360:168|371:133,1,68.9999979436398,2|0
192,304,24362,2,0,B|160:288|128:260,1,68.9999979436398,0|2
76,180,24719,2,0,B|48:204|32:240,1,68.9999979436398,0|2
256,236,25076,5,2
300,168,25254,1,0
212,168,25433,1,0
336,240,25612,2,0,B|368:216|380:176,1,68.9999979436398,2|0
176,240,25969,2,0,B|144:216|132:176,1,68.9999979436398,2|0
256,92,26326,5,2
256,236,26504,1,0
344,84,26683,2,0,B|332:48|308:24,1,68.9999979436398
168,84,27040,2,0,B|180:48|204:24,1,68.9999979436398,2|0
256,92,27397,2,0,B|256:160,1,68.9999979436398
332,196,27754,1,2
256,236,27933,1,0
180,196,28112,1,2
340,112,28290,5,0
180,196,28469,1,0
84,232,28647,6,0,B|112:272|152:296,1,92,0|4
180,196,29004,2,0,B|152:156|112:132,1,92,0|0
236,276,29362,1,0
212,120,29540,1,2
84,232,29719,1,2
272,192,29897,2,0,B|316:176|364:180,1,92,0|0
460,154,30254,6,0,B|439:113|399:85,1,92,2|0
361,179,30612,2,0,B|369:223|400:261,1,92
151,179,30969,2,0,B|142:223|111:261,1,92,2|2
52,154,31326,2,0,B|73:113|113:85,1,92
212,104,31683,1,2
52,154,31862,5,0
192,272,32040,1,0
212,104,32219,2,0,B|172:80|124:88,1,92,0|2
256,192,32576,1,2
152,180,32754,1,0
300,104,32933,6,0,B|388:72|488:80,1,184
396,192,33469,1,0
396,192,33826,1,2
496,184,34004,1,2
452,276,34183,2,0,B|380:332|280:340,1,184,0|4
72,272,34719,6,0,B|96:320|132:344,1,92
92,180,35076,2,0,B|44:168|-4:180,1,92,0|2
164,248,35433,1,2
0,178,35612,1,0
120,88,35790,2,0,B|156:60|200:40,1,92,0|2
392,88,36147,2,0,B|356:60|312:40,1,92
200,136,36505,5,0
352,216,36683,2,0,B|372:260|372:312,1,92,2|2
160,216,37040,2,0,B|140:260|140:312,1,92
312,136,37397,5,2
160,216,37576,1,0
352,216,37755,1,0
200,136,37933,1,0
400,140,38112,2,0,B|420:100|412:48,1,92,2|2
256,72,38469,1,0
99,50,38647,2,0,B|92:100|112:140,1,92,0|2
302,204,39005,5,0
302,204,39094,1,2
302,204,39183,2,0,B|254:188|211:206,1,92
360,284,39540,2,0,B|388:244|396:200,1,92,8|0
116,200,39897,2,0,B|124:244|152:284,1,92,8|0
256,328,40255,5,4
256,56,40790,1,0
256,56,40969,2,0,B|256:152,1,92,2|8
360,248,41683,6,0,B|404:224|448:220,1,92,2|0
152,248,42397,2,0,B|108:224|64:220,1,92,2|0
12,144,42933,1,8
76,80,43112,6,0,B|120:56|164:52,1,92,2|0
256,56,43647,2,0,B|240:100|252:148,1,92,2|0
408,312,44362,1,8
408,312,44540,2,0,B|424:268|412:220,1,92,2|0
380,80,45076,6,0,B|404:68|428:64,1,46,2|2
328,168,45433,2,0,B|304:180|280:184,1,46,2|2
168,112,45790,1,0
168,112,45969,6,0,B|128:88|80:88,1,92,6|0
80,296,46683,2,0,B|128:296|168:272,1,92,2|2
256,192,47219,5,8
344,272,47397,2,0,B|384:296|432:296,1,92,2|0
432,88,48112,2,0,B|384:88|344:112,1,92,2|0
256,192,48647,1,2
168,112,48826,6,0,B|128:88|80:88,1,92,2|8
84,180,49362,2,0,B|84:232|68:276,1,92,0|0
172,340,49897,1,0
300,288,50076,6,0,B|364:264|436:272,1,137.99999588728,4|0
340,176,50612,1,2
216,116,50790,2,0,B|152:92|80:100,1,137.99999588728,4|0
188,228,51326,5,0
232,240,51415,1,8
276,232,51505,1,0
316,212,51594,1,2
340,176,51683,6,0,B|380:204|392:248|380:300|328:328,1,184,4|0
188,228,52219,2,0,B|148:200|136:156|148:96|200:76,1,184,2|0
260,156,52755,1,0
336,88,52933,6,0,B|304:48|264:32,1,92,0|2
264,284,53290,2,0,B|304:268|336:228,1,92,0|0
260,156,53647,1,0
164,120,53826,1,2
180,220,54005,1,2
260,156,54183,1,0
100,44,54362,5,0
240,56,54540,1,2
84,180,54719,1,0
260,156,54897,2,0,B|308:144|336:104,1,92
164,120,55255,2,0,B|156:168|180:208,1,92,2|2
368,324,55612,1,0
368,324,55790,6,0,B|428:256|412:148,1,184,2|0
408,52,56326,2,0,B|452:60|492:88,1,92
320,160,56683,1,0
228,116,56862,1,2
136,72,57040,6,0,B|92:56|44:60,1,92
116,192,57397,2,0,B|208:192,1,92,4|0
136,312,57755,2,0,B|92:328|44:324,1,92
116,192,58112,5,0
116,192,58290,1,0
256,300,58469,1,0
256,300,58647,1,0
256,84,58826,1,0
256,84,59005,1,0
396,192,59183,2,0,B|488:192,2,92
256,192,59719,5,0
256,192,59808,1,8
256,192,59897,1,0
256,192,59987,1,0
256,192,60076,1,0
256,192,60165,1,8
256,192,60255,6,0,B|188:220|208:124|260:88|400:156|248:324,1,322,0|4
128,92,61862,6,0,B|156:52|200:36,1,92,0|2
384,92,62219,2,0,B|356:52|312:36,1,92,0|2
256,120,62576,5,0
248,156,62665,1,0
252,192,62755,1,0
264,228,62844,1,0
288,256,62933,1,0
320,272,63022,1,0
356,276,63112,6,0,B|400:260|432:220,1,92,4|0
156,276,63469,2,0,B|112:260|80:220,1,92,10|0
80,128,63826,2,0,B|32:136|0:172,1,92,8|2
172,180,64183,1,8
172,180,64362,2,0,B|204:212|252:228|300:212|340:180,1,184,2|0
512,172,64897,2,0,B|480:136|432:128,1,92,10|0
429,222,65255,2,0,B|400:260|356:276,2,92,8|2|10
256,92,65790,5,0
136,64,65969,2,0,B|140:108|172:148,1,92,0|2
376,64,66326,2,0,B|372:108|340:148,1,92,8|2
200,272,66683,1,8
312,272,66862,2,0,B|296:224|260:196,1,92,2|8
108,240,67219,6,0,B|96:285|120:329,1,92,2|0
312,272,67576,1,0
200,272,67755,1,10
391,329,67933,2,0,B|415:285|404:240,1,92,2|8
252,196,68290,2,0,B|216:224|200:272,1,92,0|8
440,48,68826,6,0,B|256:48,1,184,4|8
72,120,69362,2,0,B|256:120,1,184,2|0
356,144,69897,1,8
428,216,70076,2,0,B|452:176|456:128,1,92,2|0
356,144,70433,1,2
328,240,70612,2,0,B|332:288|360:328,2,92,8|2|8
240,192,71147,2,0,B|140:192,1,92,2|10
68,252,71505,6,0,B|104:284|156:296,1,92,0|2
148,89,71862,1,2
148,89,71951,1,0
148,89,72040,2,0,B|104:100|68:132,1,92,8|2
436,248,72576,1,8
436,248,72755,1,8
380,332,72933,6,0,B|340:304|324:256|332:208|372:172,1,184,2|2
416,80,73469,2,0,B|456:108|472:156,1,92,8|2
303,63,73826,2,0,B|255:51|211:63,1,92,0|2
96,80,74183,1,8
96,80,74362,5,0
96,80,74451,1,8
96,80,74540,2,0,B|56:108|40:156,1,92,4|0
256,156,74897,1,8
256,156,75255,2,0,B|256:248,1,92,8|2
340,88,75612,1,8
340,88,75790,2,0,B|300:56|252:40|204:56|172:92,1,184,2|2
348,184,76326,2,0,B|392:168|428:136,1,92,10|0
164,184,76683,2,0,B|120:168|84:136,1,92,8|2
256,156,77040,5,10
256,256,77219,1,0
168,308,77397,2,0,B|128:332|76:336,1,92,0|2
344,308,77755,2,0,B|384:332|436:336,1,92,8|2
456,192,78112,1,8
468,80,78290,2,0,B|416:83|370:104|346:149|347:197,1,184,2|2
56,192,79005,1,8
56,192,79183,1,8
44,80,79362,2,0,B|95:83|141:104|165:149|164:197,1,184,2|0
128,288,79897,6,0,B|88:312|36:308,2,92,10|2|4
456,192,80612,1,8
468,80,80790,2,0,B|416:83|370:104|346:149|347:197,1,184,2|2
384,288,81326,2,0,B|424:312|476:308,1,92,8|2
256,192,81683,2,0,B|212:184|164:192,1,92,6|0
48,292,82040,1,8
48,292,82219,2,0,B|136:328|228:316,1,184,2|0
228,315,82755,1,8
176,100,83112,6,0,B|140:188,1,92,2|0
336,100,83469,2,0,B|372:188,1,92,2|0
144,92,83826,2,0,B|92:168,1,92,2|0
368,92,84183,2,0,B|420:168,1,92,2|4
192,192,85076,5,0
348,284,85255,1,0
164,284,85433,1,0
320,192,85612,1,2
256,352,85790,2,0,B|256:260,1,92,8|4
256,192,86058,12,0,88112
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao
Okay ~updated :3

Edit :

Lizbeth wrote:

hellow hi :3

[GiNa's Normal]
00:25:612 (6) - I suggest replace by single note, I think sounds better
00:33:112 (1) - threw me off, maybe delete the slider and add notes at: 00:33:290 - 00:33:469 -

all fixed

[Easy]
Lovely diff, maybe the notes after slider could enter later thou. thanks

That's all
Good mapset
Thanks >w<

To GiNa :
我先照著Lizbeth的mod改了,如果哪裡有要再改的再告訴我一下 >_<
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa

EmPao wrote:

To GiNa :
我先照著Lizbeth的mod改了,如果哪裡有要再改的再告訴我一下 >_<
隨便，我沒什麼意見
Lizbeth的mod我挺喜歡的，現在這Normal的style有一半也是因為她以前的mod給我的idea
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3

※ 注意

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改
藍色的是需要討論的問題
黑色就只是建議

general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. 首先 你這圖因為之前有Ranked版本 所以我知道這BPM一定是有問題的 請參考Andrea的 AiRI - Dreamer (TV Size)

Easy


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 00:00:612 - 感覺Break並不適合擺在這 感覺有些少了東西的感覺
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:40:254 - 60%的volume太高了 40%~50%會比較適合 從背景音樂聽來這邊應該要小聲些會比較能融合音樂
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:27:754 (3) - 節奏延長到00:28:469 - 感覺會比較適合 你可以稍微比較一下 因為00:28:112 - 這個音與00:28:469 - 相比 音會比較輕

  2. 00:30:254 (4,5,6) - 這我會給這樣的建議: 因為你的(4)是有弧度的 而後頭的(5,6)擺成直線相對來說會比較死板 建議你擺成符合(4)的曲線排法 例如:

  3. 00:40:254 (1,2,3,4) - 建議一下 若是能讓這個正方形的pattern擺成有點歪的 會感覺比較不會那麼死板... 但是這並不表示你原先排的就不好 只是個人觀感上的問題

  4. 00:45:254 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

  5. 00:57:397 (1,2,3,4) - 移到x248,y72? 讓00:57:040 (4,1) - 看起來比較符合曲線

Normal


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 00:00:612 - 同Easy所說, Break 感覺並不適合這邊 感覺有少了東西的感覺...
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:40:612 - 50%應該從這開始會比較適當 因為你這段的00:40:254 - 為了用finish 而且要夠大聲才用60%的 但是第2個音就沒必要了

  2. 00:48:826 - 63%? 額...你這地方不能懶阿...用60% 而且不該是60%的都必須種草放回50%
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:17:040 (3) - 加個note吧 如果note直接單獨放在1/2節奏上(就是前面沒東西 但是接下來以note開始 而且放在紅線上) 會很容易confuse ((00:45:076 (3,1) - ,00:54:362 (4,1) - 這個是因為音樂很明確就放在1/2上 所以我就不挑了

  2. 00:42:397 (4,5,1) - 作成一條直線吧 說實話我不是很喜歡這樣的折點法 感覺彆扭... 就是說一個弧形的slider後面接著反向的note+note(note+slider) 打起來手感不好:/

  3. 01:00:254 (1) - 對稱於00:57:397 (1) - slider尾?

  4. 01:10:254 - 感覺這個節奏多於了 若是能把音下在01:10:076 - 就會好很多

  5. 01:14:183 (5) - 同00:17:040 (3) - 的問題

  6. 01:20:254 (1) - slider結尾就直接在01:20:790 - 了吧 放2/1拍感覺真的彆扭

  7. 01:21:683 (3) - ^

Hard



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

  1. 01:24:719 - slider節尾不可靜音... 使用30% 試著把聲音與背景融合吧...
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)前段節奏很奇怪 感覺並不適合音樂 例如說:00:01:683 - 應該是空音 但是你下了 試試看這樣的節奏吧:
總體來說沒什麼太大問題 就是個人風格/習慣了~我比較不喜歡有note直線擺成正的(意思是90∘或180∘這樣) 感覺比較不好 有如我在Easy所說的 有些slider弧型作的不錯 但是後頭的note卻只是與slider結尾成一直線而不是成弧形 感覺真的可惜了...


  1. 00:40:076 - 感覺加個note會比較好(音效 S:C1 clap )

  2. 01:03:112 (1,2,3) - 被spinner text擋住了 會造成player 難以讀懂後頭的物件↓

D.N.Angel



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 前頭音效有點混亂阿 在打的時候感覺有點confuse 00:17:754 - 和00:18:290 - 的音效聽起來有些奇怪 因為你4個slider開始都是在1/2節奏上 但是你這兩個分別下在1/1和1/2上 而且又是在同ㄧ個pattern裡 打起來的感覺就不會這麼合諧... 建議改掉
  2. 00:23:469 - 與00:24:004 - 同上
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:07:397 (4,1) - 這樣的排法挺拗手的 你可以看到(4)往右邊劃出slider 可是(1)卻幾乎和(4)的尾端平行劃出像左下的slider 而且是個大跳. 於是我建議你想辦法作出類似繞園或是不要這麼跳的pattern 感覺打起來會比較舒服

  2. 00:11:147 (3,4) - reverse 作出流線型flow會比現在好打很多

  3. 00:23:290 (1) - reverse and 00:24:004 (3) - 分次reverse 作出flow ((喔草 這段你居然做了對稱

  4. 00:54:362 (1,2,3) - reverse會更好些 你可以用test看看 打起來的手感比較不會有順時針pattern 突然呈現逆時針的感覺

  5. 01:00:255 (1) - ⑨ baka 你的slider拉沒拉好 這個可以拉的更好些的...你懂>_>

  6. 01:08:112 - 我反到覺得這個音不應該出現 你可以聽聽看 如果不加這個音和加這個音哪個比較適合音樂
Please used 2 color to reply it
Blue: you accept my mod item
Red: you deny my mod item and please reply the reason.
and you can used 中文 or English to reply for me :)

嗯... 說實話還有些地方還沒準備好到可以bubble 所以你還需要再找一些modder再找我回來 還有BPM的問題一定要改 而且在找我之前最好再找個timing modder來看過一次
Good luck
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel

spboxer3 wrote:

D.N.Angel



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 前頭音效有點混亂阿 在打的時候感覺有點confuse 00:17:754 - 和00:18:290 - 的音效聽起來有些奇怪 因為你4個slider開始都是在1/2節奏上 但是你這兩個分別下在1/1和1/2上 而且又是在同ㄧ個pattern裡 打起來的感覺就不會這麼合諧... 建議改掉
    //這邊我都跟著voice下的，我覺得完全沒問題
  2. 00:23:469 - 與00:24:004 - 同上
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:07:397 (4,1) - 這樣的排法挺拗手的 你可以看到(4)往右邊劃出slider 可是(1)卻幾乎和(4)的尾端平行劃出像左下的slider 而且是個大跳. 於是我建議你想辦法作出類似繞園或是不要這麼跳的pattern 感覺打起來會比較舒服...我只能說，你不懂lol，rejected

  2. 00:11:147 (3,4) - reverse 作出流線型flow會比現在好打很多

  3. 00:23:290 (1) - reverse and 00:24:004 (3) - 分次reverse 作出flow ((喔草 這段你居然做了對稱 //以我而言這flow頗無聊lol，話說對稱有啥問題0.0?

  4. 00:54:362 (1,2,3) - reverse會更好些 你可以用test看看 打起來的手感比較不會有順時針pattern 突然呈現逆時針的感覺 //我個人很喜歡這個，而且僅此這次我想也不要緊
    我在此做個說明，這是雙式交叉三角形的flow，我認為只要間距控制好很多人會喜歡的

  5. 01:00:255 (1) - ⑨ baka 你的slider拉沒拉好 這個可以拉的更好些的...你懂>_> //遺憾的是這是Chewin給的code，而且還拉得比我好看，我看不出問題...OAO

  6. 01:08:112 - 我反到覺得這個音不應該出現 你可以聽聽看 如果不加這個音和加這個音哪個比較適合音樂 //好，已移除
Please used 2 color to reply it
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嗯... 說實話還有些地方還沒準備好到可以bubble 所以你還需要再找一些modder再找我回來 還有BPM的問題一定要改 而且在找我之前最好再找個timing modder來看過一次
Good luck
雖說你說還不到泡的標準但怎麼都nazi ... 0.0
嘛，謝謝MOD ~ :)

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Title:Dreamer (TV Size)
Artist:AiRI
Creator:EmPao
Version:D.N.Angel
Source:TARI TARI
Tags:opening Takagaki Ayahi Seto Asami Hayami Saori gina darknessangel

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376,64,66326,2,0,B|372:108|340:148,1,92,8|2
200,272,66683,1,8
312,272,66862,2,0,B|296:224|260:196,1,92,2|8
108,240,67219,6,0,B|96:285|120:329,1,92,2|0
312,272,67576,1,0
200,272,67755,1,10
391,329,67933,2,0,B|415:285|404:240,1,92
252,196,68290,2,0,B|216:224|200:272,1,92,0|8
440,48,68826,6,0,B|256:48,1,184,4|8
72,120,69362,2,0,B|256:120,1,184,2|0
356,144,69897,1,8
428,216,70076,2,0,B|452:176|456:128,1,92,2|0
356,144,70433,1,2
328,240,70612,2,0,B|332:288|360:328,2,92,8|2|8
240,192,71147,2,0,B|140:192,1,92,2|10
68,252,71505,6,0,B|104:284|156:296,1,92,0|2
148,89,71862,1,2
148,89,71951,1,0
148,89,72040,2,0,B|104:100|68:132,1,92,8|2
436,248,72576,1,8
436,248,72755,1,8
380,332,72933,6,0,B|340:304|324:256|332:208|372:172,1,184,2|2
416,80,73469,2,0,B|456:108|472:156,1,92,8|2
303,63,73826,2,0,B|255:51|211:63,1,92,0|2
96,80,74183,1,8
96,80,74362,5,0
96,80,74451,1,8
96,80,74540,2,0,B|56:108|40:156,1,92,4|0
256,156,74897,1,8
256,156,75255,2,0,B|256:248,1,92,8|2
340,88,75612,1,8
340,88,75790,2,0,B|300:56|252:40|204:56|172:92,1,184,2|2
348,184,76326,2,0,B|392:168|428:136,1,92,10|0
164,184,76683,2,0,B|120:168|84:136,1,92,8|2
256,156,77040,5,10
256,256,77219,1,0
168,308,77397,2,0,B|128:332|76:336,1,92,0|2
344,308,77755,2,0,B|384:332|436:336,1,92,8|2
456,192,78112,1,8
468,80,78290,2,0,B|416:83|370:104|346:149|347:197,1,184,2|2
56,192,79005,1,8
56,192,79183,1,8
44,80,79362,2,0,B|95:83|141:104|165:149|164:197,1,184,2|0
128,288,79897,6,0,B|88:312|36:308,2,92,10|2|4
456,192,80612,1,8
468,80,80790,2,0,B|416:83|370:104|346:149|347:197,1,184,2|2
384,288,81326,2,0,B|424:312|476:308,1,92,8|2
256,192,81683,2,0,B|212:184|164:192,1,92,6|0
48,292,82040,1,8
48,292,82219,2,0,B|136:328|228:316,1,184,2|0
228,315,82755,1,8
176,100,83112,6,0,B|140:188,1,92,2|0
336,100,83469,2,0,B|372:188,1,92,2|0
144,92,83826,2,0,B|92:168,1,92,2|0
368,92,84183,2,0,B|420:168,1,92,2|4
192,192,85076,5,0
348,284,85255,1,0
164,284,85433,1,0
320,192,85612,1,2
256,352,85790,2,0,B|256:260,1,92,8|4
256,192,86058,12,0,88112
GiNa
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GiNa
http://puu.sh/14fUe
8-)
spboxer3
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spboxer3

DarknessAngel wrote:

雖說你說還不到泡的標準但怎麼都nazi ... 0.0
嘛，謝謝MOD ~ :)

最重要的一點 BPM沒有準確你說我怎麼泡 ((stress
而且圖當然是質量越好越保險 你知道的 很多泡圖都會被戳 即使是一些小事. 我必須保證圖的質量才不會讓mapper的泡被戳

Edit: 還有我說的是再找一些mod之後再找我回來 並不是不recheck
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GiNa
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Joined September 2010
GiNa

spboxer3 wrote:

Normal


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 00:00:612 - 同Easy所說, Break 感覺並不適合這邊 感覺有少了東西的感覺...　我相信你是明理的人，前面節奏並不固定，所以我覺得不適合map，自創節奏對於Easy/Normal來說又太難了
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:40:612 - 50%應該從這開始會比較適當 因為你這段的00:40:254 - 為了用finish 而且要夠大聲才用60%的 但是第2個音就沒必要了　Fixed
  2. 00:48:826 - 63%? 額...你這地方不能懶阿...用60% 而且不該是60%的都必須種草放回50%　Fixed
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:17:040 (3) - 加個note吧 如果note直接單獨放在1/2節奏上(就是前面沒東西 但是接下來以note開始 而且放在紅線上) 會很容易confuse ((00:45:076 (3,1) - ,00:54:362 (4,1) - 這個是因為音樂很明確就放在1/2上 所以我就不挑了　I followed vocal
  2. 00:42:397 (4,5,1) - 作成一條直線吧 說實話我不是很喜歡這樣的折點法 感覺彆扭... 就是說一個弧形的slider後面接著反向的note+note(note+slider) 打起來手感不好:/　Sorry, I hate straight line patterns
  3. 01:00:254 (1) - 對稱於00:57:397 (1) - slider尾?　Fixed
  4. 01:10:254 - 感覺這個節奏多於了 若是能把音下在01:10:076 - 就會好很多　I don't get what the hell you're talking about -_-
  5. 01:14:183 (5) - 同00:17:040 (3) - 的問題　Same as 00:17:040 (3)
  6. 01:20:254 (1) - slider結尾就直接在01:20:790 - 了吧 放2/1拍感覺真的彆扭　Fixed
  7. 01:21:683 (3) - ^　Fixed
檔案連結在上面，忘記按Edit了lol
As of timing ... I don't know what to say about it
It seems/plays fine to me
EmPao
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Topic Starter
EmPao

spboxer3 wrote:

※ 注意

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改
藍色的是需要討論的問題
黑色就只是建議

general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. 首先 你這圖因為之前有Ranked版本 所以我知道這BPM一定是有問題的 請參考Andrea的 AiRI - Dreamer (TV Size)
    我覺得現在的timing打起來還可以... 而且Andrea版本的紅線好多條...orz, 我會再請人來check timing的

Easy


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 00:00:612 - 感覺Break並不適合擺在這 感覺有些少了東西的感覺
    同GiNa,Easy diff不太好下...(也有考慮說把這個note拿掉 ,從後面開始做)
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:40:254 - 60%的volume太高了 40%~50%會比較適合 從背景音樂聽來這邊應該要小聲些會比較能融合音樂
    Fixed，改成50%
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:27:754 (3) - 節奏延長到00:28:469 - 感覺會比較適合 你可以稍微比較一下 因為00:28:112 - 這個音與00:28:469 - 相比 音會比較輕
    Fixed

  2. 00:30:254 (4,5,6) - 這我會給這樣的建議: 因為你的(4)是有弧度的 而後頭的(5,6)擺成直線相對來說會比較死板 建議你擺成符合(4)的曲線排法 例如:

    這個我保留了,最簡單的diff我比較喜歡擺直的QQ
  3. 00:40:254 (1,2,3,4) - 建議一下 若是能讓這個正方形的pattern擺成有點歪的 會感覺比較不會那麼死板... 但是這並不表示你原先排的就不好 只是個人觀感上的問題
    同上
  4. 00:45:254 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
    ^
  5. 00:57:397 (1,2,3,4) - 移到x248,y72? 讓00:57:040 (4,1) - 看起來比較符合曲線
Fixed

Hard



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

  1. 01:24:719 - slider節尾不可靜音... 使用30% 試著把聲音與背景融合吧...
    Fixed
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)前段節奏很奇怪 感覺並不適合音樂 例如說:00:01:683 - 應該是空音 但是你下了 試試看這樣的節奏吧:
Fixed
總體來說沒什麼太大問題 就是個人風格/習慣了~我比較不喜歡有note直線擺成正的(意思是90∘或180∘這樣) 感覺比較不好 有如我在Easy所說的 有些slider弧型作的不錯 但是後頭的note卻只是與slider結尾成一直線而不是成弧形 感覺真的可惜了...>_<


  1. 00:40:076 - 感覺加個note會比較好(音效 S:C1 clap )
    我這留一個空 一是這裡mp3好像就沒有聲音，二是接下來的part 速度是x0.8，我想在這做一個停頓

  2. 01:03:112 (1,2,3) - 被spinner text擋住了 會造成player 難以讀懂後頭的物件↓
    Ok.我重擺了

Please used 2 color to reply it
Blue: you accept my mod item
Red: you deny my mod item and please reply the reason.
and you can used 中文 or English to reply for me :)

嗯... 說實話還有些地方還沒準備好到可以bubble 所以你還需要再找一些modder再找我回來 還有BPM的問題一定要改 而且在找我之前最好再找個timing modder來看過一次
Good luck

Okay.我想先找人來check timing先
謝謝Mod :D :D :D
Lami
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Joined June 2011
Lami
hi~

[GiNa's Normal]
01:05:254 (3) -
01:14:362 (5) - remove note(?)

[Hard]

00:33:469 (5) - remove NC
00:33:826 (1) - add NC
00:59:719 (3) - missed beat, correct beat > <
01:04:897 (5) - remove NC
01:23:112 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - it's so hard.... really...
(01:23:469 (4,5) - decreasing space each other?)

[D.N.Angel]

00:17:933 (3,4,5) - how about decrease space each other?
imo, this part don't need jump
00:25:076 (1,3) - ctrl+R(?) (decreasing space)
00:52:933 (1,2) -
01:12:397 - add something(?) feel empty..
01:14:897 (4) -
Laurier
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Joined February 2011
Laurier
hi

Easy
00:00:344 - boring break . I think you can put some notes.
00:09:183 - add clap. please keep rhythm
00:12:040 - ^
00:58:826 (3) - add clap on head?

Normal
00:00:433 - ^ same as easy
SPOILER
00:07:397 (1) - remove nc
00:08:826 (3) - add nc
00:10:254 (1) - remove nc
00:32:933 (3,1) - try this? http://puu.sh/17hIK follow vocal is better
00:56:862 (3) - add 1 repeat and follow vocal

Hard
00:51:683 (1) -make more straight ? http://puu.sh/17iuJ
01:15:790 (1) - like this http://puu.sh/17ivG
00:53:112 (1) - make same pattern as 00:51:683 (1,2,3,4) http://puu.sh/17iyL

D.N.Angel
01:15:790 (7) - bit strange for me. please 2nd waypoint 1grid up and 3rd 1grid right http://puu.sh/17iDn
Lizellota
467 posts
Joined October 2011
Lizellota
Hello ;3 From my queue~ Sorry for the delay TAT

[D.N.A]

00:01:326 (3) - Delete 1 repeat and add whistle to the end of the slider
00:11:504 (1,2) - remove claps? sounds weird ><
00:23:112 - remove whistle
00:24:004 - ^
00:24:183 - add whistle
00:25:076 (1) - remove whistle
00:25:254 (2) - add whistle
00:45:612 - missed clap(i mean S:C1)
00:48:647 (4) - clap instead of 00:49:183
01:25:612 - move that timing section to 01:25:433

[Hard]

00:01:504 - whistle
00:11:504 (4,5) - remove claps? TAT
00:25:969 - add finish?
00:28:737 - add a note?
01:10:969 (2) -
how about this?
01:11:683 - change whistle to finish
01:16:326 (2) -
~
01:21:683 - change whistle to finish

Other diffs fine for me~~
Good luck :)
EmPao
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Topic Starter
EmPao
Fixed~
Thanks mod :3

Edit:

To GiNa:

normal diff我自己先改過了

00:00:344 這個note我刪掉了

其他有改不好的地方再跟我說下
DarknessAngel
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DarknessAngel
thanks for mod ! :)
http://puu.sh/191vN
EmPao
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Topic Starter
EmPao
決定這個週末來Fixed timing
;_;

Edit :

Easy/Normal/Hard diff的 timing改好了

所有diff的timing都改好了._.
BeatofIke
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Hello there. Request from modding queue! TARI TARI!

General
-> Good, but I'm feel a bit iffy about the red timing sections.

Easy
-> Increase HP Drain Rate +1? 1 is almost unfailable XD.
00:10:249 (2) - Nazi Mod: Try to move the red anchor point at x:196 y:208? It looks awesome if the anchor point was at the same postion as the slider tick. Also, make sure to readjust the slider a bit so it still blanklets perfectly and follows the spacing.
00:38:119 (2) - Nazi Mod: Similar to what I suggested at 00:10:249 (2). Move the red anchor point so it's at the same postion as the slider tick.
00:39:552 (3) - Reverse selection? That way, it can follow the spacing better.

GiNa's Normal
-> Looks alright, but the map looks kinda messy.

Hard
-> Good!

D.N.Angel
-> Good!
EmPao
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Topic Starter
EmPao

BeatofIke wrote:

Hello there. Request from modding queue! TARI TARI! <3
General
-> Good, but I'm feel a bit iffy about the red timing sections. I use Andrea'sTiming (http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55494)

Easy
-> Increase HP Drain Rate +1? 1 is almost unfailable XD. I think 1 is ok since it is the easiest diff :P
00:10:249 (2) - Nazi Mod: Try to move the red anchor point at x:196 y:208? It looks awesome if the anchor point was at the same postion as the slider tick. Also, make sure to readjust the slider a bit so it still blanklets perfectly and follows the spacing.Fixed
00:38:119 (2) - Nazi Mod: Similar to what I suggested at 00:10:249 (2). Move the red anchor point so it's at the same postion as the slider tick. Fixed
00:39:552 (3) - Reverse selection? That way, it can follow the spacing better. x, I think short slider with reverse is too hard for newbie player to play.
Thanks your mod :3
spboxer3
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spboxer3
recheck 別給KD
[general]
Easy的kiai需對準節奏線上 (( 01:14:476 -> 01:14:464
Hard的紅線 00:50:278 ->00:50:258 這才是正確的

[Easy]
00:15:249 (1) - 結尾對準00:17:398 - 需要改代碼 如果不會的話就複製下面那個吧(覆蓋掉HitObjects下的"256,192,15249,12,4,17392")
256,192,15249,12,4,17398

01:00:254 (1) - 同理 
256,192,60254,12,0,62377

slider穿過紅色timing會有誤差的部分我問過BAT 他說AIMOD如果沒說那就OK

[Hard]
00:50:432 (3,4,5,6) - 沒有snap好 把這些改到正確的位置上吧

[D.N.Angel]
00:05:627 (1) - 算是nazi 沒有對準第一條紅線 (1ms的變化 雖然沒什麼差但是有人會挑...)
00:25:969 (5,3,4) - 沒有snap的slider end 把這個改好吧
00:51:683 - 這條綠線是多餘的 因為BPM x1.0沒有變化 所以你要改音量直接改紅線即可

改完找我~
EmPao
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Topic Starter
EmPao

spboxer3 wrote:

recheck 別給KD
[general]
Easy的kiai需對準節奏線上 (( 01:14:476 -> 01:14:464
Hard的紅線 00:50:278 ->00:50:258 這才是正確的

[Easy]
00:15:249 (1) - 結尾對準00:17:398 - 需要改代碼 如果不會的話就複製下面那個吧(覆蓋掉HitObjects下的"256,192,15249,12,4,17392")
256,192,15249,12,4,17398

01:00:254 (1) - 同理 
256,192,60254,12,0,62377

slider穿過紅色timing會有誤差的部分我問過BAT 他說AIMOD如果沒說那就OK

[Hard]
00:50:432 (3,4,5,6) - 沒有snap好 把這些改到正確的位置上吧

[D.N.Angel]
00:05:627 (1) - 算是nazi 沒有對準第一條紅線 (1ms的變化 雖然沒什麼差但是有人會挑...)
00:25:969 (5,3,4) - 沒有snap的slider end 把這個改好吧
00:51:683 - 這條綠線是多餘的 因為BPM x1.0沒有變化 所以你要改音量直接改紅線即可

改完找我~
Okay ~All Fixed
spboxer3
Global Moderator
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spboxer3

Change log

BPM/offset setting
Unsnap object.
Video -> mute
Unused green line (duplicated timeline)

ok~
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Easy]

00:38:119 (2) - Slider end is unsnapped.
00:50:082 (2) - ^

[D.N.Angel]

00:28:671 (1) - Slider end is unsnapped.
00:50:082 (1) - ^

And yeah, that's it :3
EmPao
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Topic Starter
EmPao

Andrea wrote:

[Easy]

00:38:119 (2) - Slider end is unsnapped.
00:50:082 (2) - ^

[D.N.Angel]

00:28:671 (1) - Slider end is unsnapped.
00:50:082 (1) - ^

And yeah, that's it :3
All Fixed ~

Thanks Andrea :3
GiNa
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GiNa
:) 衝啊！！！！！
我來亂的
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Easy]

00:38:476 (3) - Still unsnapped.

[D.N.Angel]

00:28:851 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
EmPao
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Topic Starter
EmPao

Andrea wrote:

[Easy]

00:38:476 (3) - Still unsnapped.

[D.N.Angel]

00:28:851 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
All Fixed :P
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
Everything is finally good now (:

Ranked~
Hyacine
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Hyacine
Gratz :3
Aurele
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Aurele
Congratulation :3
No_Gu
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No_Gu
TARI TARI!
spboxer3
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spboxer3
恭喜了~^^
Loneight
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Loneight
恭喜 :3
Fumika
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Fumika
Congratz !!
Tari Tari FTW <3
GiNa
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GiNa
恭喜你囉xD
要復活墓地裡的那張了嗎 ? wwww
EmPao
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EmPao
Thanks everyone :) :) :)


GiNa wrote:

恭喜你囉xD
要復活墓地裡的那張了嗎 ? wwww
應該是寒假找一點時間做吧..

學校那邊太忙了>_<
GiNa
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GiNa

EmPao wrote:

應該是寒假找一點時間做吧..

學校那邊太忙了>_<
太好了，我也是12月後才有空xD
miss_master_old
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TARI TARI<3
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