Hi EmPao, mod request from my modding queue >w<
[General]
I suggest you to change this BG because Andrea has already used it for his mapset:
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55494To distinguish this map from the other one, it's better if you change it then.. (:
Add Evergreen to the tags?
[Easy]
00:18:469 (2) - I don't know but this slider doesn't convince me. I mean that beginners would think to find a rhythm like this:
I think it would be better to play for them, especially after a spinner's end
00:48:826 (1) - Instead of whistle here I would use finish on this slider's head, especially because it would sound perfectly together with 00:50:076 (2)'s finishes
00:51:683 (1,2) - You could make them symmetric, I mean:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/402472I have fixed the spacing of the next elements too, then just copy this code:
308,92,51683,6,0,B|452:92,2,144,4|2|8
208,92,53112,2,0,B|64:92,2,144,4|2|8
196,188,54540,6,0,B|256:225|256:317|196:348,2,192,4|2|2
144,268,56326,1,8
92,188,56683,1,0
144,108,57040,1,8
240,108,57397,6,0,B|284:84|332:108,1,96,12|8
408,164,58112,2,0,B|432:212|408:256,1,96,8|8
332,316,58826,2,0,B|284:340|240:316,1,96,8|8
164,256,59540,2,0,B|140:208|164:164,1,96,8|8
01:00:254 (1) - Remove finish, it sounds too loud. Just a finish on 01:03:112 (1) is already perfect imo
01:11:326 (5) - New combo
I don't like this hitsound normal pattern you used during the kiai time D:
Good map btw :3
[GiNa's Normal]
00:18:647 (1) - Useless new combo, remove it
00:20:254 (1) - Finish here also for consistency
00:24:362 (1) - Remove new combo
00:26:147 (1) - To keep consistency with the previous part you should move this circle 1/2 earlier adding a finish on it, the rhythm is much better
00:30:076 (1) - Remove new combo
00:31:683 (1) - Finish on the slider's start
00:37:397 (1) - Finish
00:50:076 (2,3) - I would add finishes on (2) and on the (3)'s end. It would fit the music better especially together with 00:51:683 (1)
00:57:397 (1) - Finish on the head
00:58:826 (1) - ^
01:04:362 (1) - What about to use this rhythm instead that follows the vocal? I would put circle first and the slider after it
01:18:647 (4,1) - Same of 00:50:076 (2,3), these finishes are awesome
Nice, just small suggestions about hitsounds
[Hard]
00:02:219 (2) - Remove whistle?
Fine
[D.N.Angel]
Rename to D.N.Angel's Insane01:00:255 (1) - What about to improve a bit this ugly slider's shape?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/402506256,192,60255,6,0,B|188:220|208:124|260:88|400:156|248:324,1,322,0|4
Just this
That's all, good mapset.
I wish you good luck with rank then ;3 Have my star