Yes, M4M owo
[General]
Mute the slider slider sound please :<
[Lunatic]
00:11:578 (1,2,3) - Use circle instead of slider?
00:17:924 (1) - Make the slider speed faster here? Using 1.5x feels better for me owo
00:25:040 (2,3,4,5) - Something like
this would be nice. Don't forget to tweek the note after this change.
00:51:963 (1,2) - Why don't you make them parrallel o.o
01:06:001 (1) - Should start at 01:06:193 ?
01:12:924 (3,4) - Make the scale larger would be better...?
01:14:655 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - See, they are not forming a perfect hexagon.
01:17:347 (2,1) - Try
this01:31:770 (1) - Same as 00:17:924 (1)
01:56:193 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too many whistles
Use them on 01:56:193 (1) , 01:56:578 (5) and 01:56:770 (7)
02:13:886 (2) - (Nazi)
Can blanket 02:13:116 (2) better~ 02:14:847 (2,3) - Ctrl+R?
02:16:386 (7) - (Nazi) Last slider point down 1 grid?
02:18:693 (1,2) - 1 grid down
02:24:463 (3) - 2 grid left, 1 grid up
02:26:578 (2) - 1 grid left, 1 grid up
02:33:309 (1) - Same.
and, slow down from here please.
02:45:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Trying something like
this?
03:10:809 (3,4) - Like
this?
03:12:540 (3) -
Blanket 03:12:155 (2) ?03:12:540 (3,1) - mmm...I don't think the flow here's fine.
03:38:886 (5) - Blanket 03:38:886 (5)?
[Hard]
00:18:501 (3,4) - 1 grid right.
00:30:040 (1,2,3) - Place them in the middle please :<
01:14:847 (3,4,5,1) - Make them into flower pattern would be nice~
01:30:232 (3) - 1 grid up
01:52:347 (1,2) - 1 grid left
02:03:501 (1,2,3,4,5) -
Triangle shape?02:11:386 (3) - Ctrl+R?
02:11:963 (1,2) - ^
02:12:155 (2) -Then, 1 grid left+ 1 grid up
02:45:424 (5) - 2 grid left+ 1 grid down
03:11:193 (1) - Blanket 03:10:424 (2) better?
[Normal]
00:20:040 (3) - (Nazi) 2nd slider point 1 grid right
00:45:040 (4) - 1 grid up?
01:04:655 (4) - Last slider point 3 grid left?
Why no whistles on kiai time? Try to add some.
01:50:809 (1) - (Nazi) Last slider point 1 grid down
02:05:040 (3) - Put the red slider point few grids right make the slider looks smoother!
02:10:809 (3) - (Nazi) Last slider point 1 grid down
Overall is nice. Good luck!!!