1. Dream (4,72 stars, 321 notes)
2. Sleep (2,38 stars, 153 notes)

Jayel wrote:

Hi, here's the guest diff you've asked me and sorry for being late.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/jp3zujgks3xhv ... are%5D.osu

sCam wrote:

Hey, long time no talk. Nice song!

Dream
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02:05:751 (6) would go better here, don't yah think? - fixed a bit, not this much though

Jaymare
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I'm liking AR8 on this difficulty more. the way it's mapped with the streams, make it just a bit slower than 9 makes this map more fun, and challenging. Also this song is so peacefull and quiet, 8 would fit a better mood imo. - if Jayel is fine with this, I'll change it

Akashi_S wrote:

From the queue.
Sorry for delay..

My modding is not good, so bear with me XP..

[General]
Clear.

[Sleep] This diff has low star rating however because of the frequent occurrence of blue-white/red tick switch, it is confusing.

02:09:126 (1,2,3) - If possible, 2 stacked at the end of the slider 1 on next combo, and 3 stacked at the slider 1? - sure
02:22:501 (2,3) - This pause might confuse easy players. - added slider, looks too full now... i'll see what i can do later
02:23:251 (3,1,2) - The rhythm here does not sound right to me. - why?
02:27:876 (2,1) - make them look similar to each other?? - of course, i have no clue why they were unsymmetrical

Not modding the hard diffs..


Very ominous song..
Good luck with mapping

Aldwych wrote:

Hello Static Noise Bird!

[General]

I'm pretty sure that using a blank slider sound it's better for your calm music ==> http://www.mediafire.com/?5r2mc282dk7qnv6
I don't know if you had it. - checking out soon, thanks~
02:27:126 to 02:51:126 Kiaï time? - no, unless a mapset has to have at least one kiai time

[Sleep]

Why slider tick rate is 2 and others diff is 1? - ah whatever, fixed

01:28:876 Imo, slider should start at 01:29:126 it's less an overmapping for an easy diff - sure
01:42:626 Use 1/4 for an easy diff, that's a little bad, and you can finish it on the white tick. - ^
01:46:876 ^ - ^
01:50:126 Can you use just you reverse arrow, and add at the end a circle or nothing? - not sure what you mean
01:54:626 same like 01:42:626 - sure
01:57:126 ^ - ^
02:15:126 DS? - what?
02:25:626 1/4 :S Only circle? - sure

[Dream]

When you finished at 1/4, why not add circles at the white/red tick when you can? - not really aiming this diff to be too hard

01:08:126 Why not using the same spacing like previous circles? - sure
02:26:876 Limit touch the HP bar - fixed

[Jaymare]

01:38:126 I'm jalous of the fucking good hitsound placement. Very nice!
01:54:126 Can you make it more curve about the circle and place the circle arround the slider?
02:03:376 ^


Well that's all, nice music (when i listen the music i said : There's only scandinavian people which can map it! x) ). - Jayel is not Scandinavian!

Good luck! - thanks~

02:15:126 DS? - what?

Jayel is not Scandinavian!

Aldwych wrote:

Re

02:15:126 DS? - what?

Ds = Distance spacing, here you took DS = 0,40, for all your map you took x1,00. I think you should fix it.

KonataN wrote:

★ ~ K-A-D Modding Queue ~ ★

Here we go~

[General]
-You should define what "Sleep" etc. diff. should be in the first post. - there's already MAPSET section
-About the mapset: Sleeping won't count as Easy - It's Normal. Dream won't count as Hard - It's Insane. Jaymare is Insane of course. You got Normal - Insane - Insane A mapset like this sucks. sorry. - It's not the star rating, it's how it plays, Dream definitely don't play as insane even though star rating says so.

[Sleep]
01:42:626 (2,3) - wrong spacing, cling the 3 slider beginn to the slider end of 2 - fixed
02:27:876 (2) - here the hitflow gets interruppted. from here on playing is weird. think about not interrupting the flow here - I don't think so

[Dream]
01:23:126 (8) - pls make it more pretty - fixed
01:48:626 (2) - to close to last objects (i know little spacing is used to make good maps too, but here it just kills.) - fixed
02:15:126 (1) - ugly overlap - fixed

lkx_shore wrote:

mod from my queue

General
nice song,maybe you can cut beginning,because it so long - i will do when i'm not so lazy

Dream
why not use more whistle? - whistles are work in progress, only claps and finishes added
01:17:126 (6) - 3hit is better,i fell - fixed
01:19:626 - add note - added
01:39:126 (1) - head add finish - added
02:48:126 (1) - new combo and finish - new combo yes, no finish

Normal
this look like Easy,:? - it's called Sleep anyway, so it doesn't matter yet
OD2→4
AR3→4
HP2→4 - all fixed
02:09:126 (1) - head finish
02:15:126 (1) - ↑
02:20:876 (4) - Tail finish - no hitsounds changed here

Pink Agate wrote:

HI,modding time


Sleep

00:00:000 - ~00:48:126 (1) - beatmap read time is too long,you can add some note - still need to think if I remove this part or map it
01:10:126 - add a circle an stack in 01:10:376 (2) - (just suggest) - nooooo
01:21:126 (1) - too close to 01:20:376 (4) - ，Maybe you can open AiMod to check。- not sure, will leave it like this now, maybe change it later
01:35:126 (3) - too close to 01:34:376 (2) - fixed
01:34:376 (2) - Are you Are you sure this isn't it difficult for easy diff? - not sure, not changing yet
02:11:626 (3) - ^ - ^
02:22:626 (2) - Be in front of the this slider02:20:876 (4) - the cover - fixed
02:24:126 (1,2) - too close to 02:23:376 (4) - fixed
02:39:126 (1) - too close to 02:38:626 (5) - ^
02:43:626 (3) - too close to 02:42:876 (2) - ^


Dream
Is it hard diff?I think you can reduce the difficulty,
just like HP and OD use 4 ,DS use 0.8x - made some changes


OK,nice hitsound，good luck!

wantuole wrote:

[Genera]
difficulty name is very interesting
do more careful in easy difficulty next time
[Sleep]
is all dis snap,but seem a little junmp,maybe close to dis snop is butter - what?
AR-1? - just fixed after previous mod, but thanks~
01:18:126 (1) - move left a little,same like 01:17:626 (4,5) - fixed little bit, but not into straight line
01:21:626 (2) - middle is no sound,not clap - but there is clap alraedy
[Dream]
good job
01:47:376 (9,10) - ctrl+r - no
02:13:126 (5,7) - ^ - uh, fine
[Jaymare]
only for looking,feel so bad for play ，don't know why get this jump in a slow song, use it in exrta song is butter
00:48:126 - cut green line, change red line vol 35% is ok


that all ,good luck

Lally wrote:

M4M ~

[Sleep]
01:11:126 (3) ~ remove some points http://puu.sh/18lE9 - less points, but will be uglier imo ;w;
01:16:376 (3) ~ ^ http://puu.sh/18lF5 - no
01:27:876 (3) ~ ^ http://puu.sh/18lGL - no
01:43:376 (3) ~ ^ http://puu.sh/18lMf - okay
02:12:126 (1) ~ ^ same - it doesn't even fit there, why why what

[Dream]
01:20:126 (9) ~ nc - noooo
01:21:126 (1) ~ remove NC and add it here : 01:21:626 - no
01:41:626 (9) ~ nc / remove it here: 01:42:126 (1) - no
01:44:876 (12) ~ nc/ remove it here: 01:45:126 (1) - no
01:46:376 ~ nc - done
01:57:126 ~ just a little bit shorter the slider http://puu.sh/18Nvj - done
02:23:376 ~ remove some points http://puu.sh/18NwI and new combo / remove it here : 02:24:126 - done
02:26:376 ~ nc - done

• 00:48:126 (1,2,3) - I'd prefer if all this was symmetric on the Y-axis
  00:51:126 (1,2) - you can better these blankets around 3 out
  00:57:126 (1,2) - I suggest swapping the new combo since there is a new soundpattern starting at 2 while 1 still follows the previous
  00:58:376 (4) - also add a new combo here because the sound pattern of 2-3 repeats here and it's an in-itself closed one as there is a break inbetween, makes more sense to me
  00:59:126 (6) - the 1/2 there is overdone, just have it be 1/1 or silence the reverse arrow
  01:00:126 (1) - I'd put the slider so it has the reverse arrow on the blue tick, that'd suit the light sound in the song more (blue tick: 01:00:501), then add another slider at 01:01:251 that ends at 01:01:626
  01:03:126 (1) - again this would look better if it was symmetrically placed on the Y-axis
  01:06:126 (1) - same
  01:11:126 (3) - a 1/1 slider with a reverse arrow would do better here, also the overlap with 1 is meeh
  01:16:376 (3) - this should end at 01:16:876 to follow the song better
  01:17:126 - you can add a 1/4 slider here, should be k even for lowest diff
  01:21:626 (2) - I don't see the reason behind this shape, the edgyness that comes from the red points does not suit the song too well either, it just seems to skip part of the song because you had no idea what to do there
  01:24:626 (1) - ^
  01:27:876 (3) - feels better if this ends 1/2 earlier; you can put a circle to where it currently ends
  01:31:876 - add a circle here?
  01:33:126 (1) - stack on previous 2's end
  01:38:126 (3,4,1,2) - that square could be done better; for that, copy 3-4, rotate by 90°, put 0.0x snap and set it onto 4, so you get 1's correct position; do the same for 2
  01:43:376 (3) - this should end 1/1 earlier
  01:46:876 (3) - make this blanket 4 better, gridsnap off
  01:50:126 (3) - this came kinda sudden as you never had more than one reverse arrow before
  01:57:126 (1) - that slider is meeh... change it, it's not smooth enough for the song
  02:00:126 (1) - should end 1/2 later
  02:11:626 (3) - stack that properly on 1's end
  02:15:126 (1) - move the sliderpoints (not counting end and start) more to the right to make the curve look more interesting
  
  
  here

  
  
  02:18:126 (1) - similar, CTRL-J
  02:19:876 (2,3,4) - these sliders starting on red ticks feel awkward to hit and hold, please change this so they either start on whites or use circles
  02:21:376 (1) - put the sliderpoint more to the right (coordinates are 295|40) to generate a better curve
  
  02:42:876 (2) - you can improve this blanket
  02:45:126 (1) - the current shape is kind of creative, though I suggest another one; see below
  
  
  dere

  

• 00:48:126 (1,2) - you can improve these blankets
  00:50:126 (4) - i don't like how the slider pokes out of the playfield and iirc, objects that touch the HP-bar too much are unrankable
  00:51:626 (2,3) - these curves are somewhat weirdo, better just use one sliderpoint each
  
  
  as in here

  
  
  00:54:126 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern comes kinda sudden and the spacing appears to be very wide; I'd suggest 1.3x instead
  00:56:126 (6) - a) new combo, b) move it so it's not as close to previous 1, that feels ugly to me
  00:57:126 (1,2,3) - first you get a straight movement from 1 to 2, then you go edgyly up-left; that transition is not so good; I suggest mirroring 2-3 and placing them so 2's start is on where 4 starts - that gives a better connection and feel
  
  
  here, so you got something to look at

  
  
  00:59:126 (4) - that curve is somewhat unbalanced, move the sliderpoints to 376|215 (2nd), 450|164 (3rd), 443|90 (end) to fix
  01:06:126 (1,2,3,4,5) - well this is kiiiiiiiiinda wide, better use 1.4x or 1.6x imo
  01:11:126 (4) - as in easy/normal diff, use 1/1 reverse slider here
  01:20:126 (9) - that shape is very clunchily compressed which makes it look ugly, just use a little curve
  
  
  as this one

  
  
  01:22:376 (6) - appears a bit too compressed, move 2nd sliderpoint to 362|189 and 3rd to 333|225
  01:23:126 (8) - creative shape; either use a custom slidertick for the tick on this or do a 1/1 reverseslider to suit the rhythm better - i'd prefer the slidertick option
  01:25:376 (3) - at the current state the red point is somewhat useless, make it poke more out
  01:26:126 (4) - to balance this more out, move 2nd sliderpoint to 516|229, 3rd to 512|178, 4th to 480|136 and end to 373|184
  01:29:126 (6,7) - not sure about how much these are overblended by 3's and 4's hitbursts, better move them somewhere else
  01:29:376 (7) - that could blanket next 1 better
  01:32:626 (9) - suggesting to put this to 470|276 to follow the flow better
  01:32:876 (10) - this to 417|366
  01:33:126 (1) - move 2nd sliderpoint to 248|330 for better blanket of 2's start
  01:33:876 (2) - move sliderend to 243|93 to have a better blanket around 1's end
  01:34:626 (3) - improve blanket around 4's start
  01:35:626 (5) - I do not like how this comes so close to 4's end, more distance please; also, make it blanket next 1
  01:38:126 (4) - that should end exactly where 2 ended, right now it's a bit more to the right from what I see
  01:39:126 (1) - trapezoid sliderpointplacement makes this feel bad; more curve please
  01:47:126 (2,3,4,5,1) - these jumps came sudden and also are hard to decipher with the current AR
  01:50:126 (5,6,7,8,1) - such patterns are meeh to play in general; remove some of the sliders or redesign it
  01:51:126 (1,2,3) - this straight dropping movement doesn't feel too flowy to me
  01:52:376 (7) - red point is somewhat badly placed/negated by the white ones around it, make it stand out more or remove it and redesign the slider
  01:53:626 (8) - too close to 7's slidertrack imo
  01:54:126 (1,2,3) - that straight line is not pretty desu
  01:59:376 (6,7) - kinda giantic spacing
  02:00:376 (1) - ninjaspin for such a diff, please do not do this - better use a long slider
  02:01:626 (1,2) - 30% volume for these
  02:02:126 (3,4) - 40% for these
  02:02:626 (5) - slider is very clunchy and thus feels bad
  02:03:126 (1) - start your 55% volume again on this one - also, this slider is clunchy again, don't make it feels so crumply-overlapping
  02:03:876 (2,3) - ginourmeous spacing, do this in your highest diff if you want but not in the middle one
  02:05:126 (4,5,6) - I do not like this after 3 :<
  02:06:876 (3,4,5) - straight line movement is still meeh
  02:08:126 (6,7) - this is a new soundpattern, thus, NC
  02:09:126 (1,2) - swap NC, 1 belongs to the soundpattern of 6,7
  02:11:126 (6) - clunchy
  02:15:126 (1) - rotate this by 35° (selection center), then arrange following objects to it
  02:16:126 (2) - improve this blanket
  02:18:126 (1) - that may partly be overlapped by 4's hitbursts and it's not too pretty in general
  02:23:376 (1) - I do totemo not like this :<
  02:25:626 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - maybe add variety in volume here?
  
  02:28:876 (4,5,6) - i find this transition bad - 4 points downwards but you go upwards with your objects, that does not fit each other
  02:30:126 (1,2) - these could blanket each other's ends a bit better
  02:34:626 (3) - the overlap with 1,2 is ugly and the spacing feels too close, might be misshit as a 1/3 or 1/4
  02:35:126 (4,5,6,7,1) - HUGE spacing o_o (please change, this is not what belongs in a hard diff)
  02:37:126 (3,4,5) - ^
  02:38:126 (6) - new combo; this will be misshit as 1/2 because of the little spacing
  02:38:126 (6,7,8,9) - makes no sense that these are regularely spaced when you have huge jumps at 02:35:126 - that is the same soundpattern
  02:45:126 (1,2,3,4) - these curves are kinda clunchy and compressed, balance them more - also, big big jumps again :v
  02:47:126 (5) - NC because of new soundpattern
  02:48:126 (1) - remove NC, still same soundpattern

hoozimajiget wrote:

Gogogo!! Hinkstep is thouroughly amazing, their release is one of my all time favourite albums.

GL with ranking

1. try using normal-hitnormal sound as your costom clap sound

1. 00:52:626 (2) - please keep your distance
2. 00:59:126 (3) - i don't recommend to mute the arrow, use at least 30% please
3. 01:21:126 (1) - don'y overlap like this plz, it's annoying to read
4. 01:32:876 (5) - i don't recommend to stack like this in easiest diff, can you find any other ways?
5. 01:48:626 (2) - raise it a bit to avoid overlapping with 01:48:126 (1) -
6. 01:50:626 - missing clap
7. 02:20:376 - ^
8. 02:31:626 - ^

1. 01:06:126 (1,2,3,4,5) - this jump is too sharp, maybe use 1.6x
2. 01:24:876 (2) - avoid overlapping with 01:23:126 (8) -
3. 01:29:126 (6) - it's really annoying to read for me, can you find other ways
4. 01:32:126 (6) - it feels too lack of sound, 40% would be better imo
5. 01:46:376 (1) - make a neat slider plz
6. 02:25:751 (2) - a bit hard to hit it well, stack it on 02:25:626 (1) - plz
7. 02:37:126 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - too sharp again, reduce its distance plz

All repeat arrows on sliders must be visible. Make sure that hitbursts (100s/300s/etc) from previous notes are not covering the repeat arrows or even the paths/ends of sliders (use the default skin to check if using hitbursts from another skin). This way, all sliders will be easily visible and playable.

1. too less hitsounds.. although song quiet and smooth, there must enough hitsounds here/_\
2. overlaps should be fixed. for example, 02:35:126 (4) - in diff <dream> : it almost covered by 02:33:876 (2) - . you should put it out owo☆

1. 01:18:126 (1) - try add whistle
2. 01:21:126 (1) - ^
3. 01:27:126 (1) - ^
4. 01:30:126 (1) - ^
5. 01:33:126 (1) - start^
6. 01:36:126 (1) - ^
7. 01:48:376 - +note
8. 01:58:876 (5) - move clap to slider end
9. 02:01:876 - +note
10. 02:06:126 (1) - +whistle
11. 02:09:126 (3) - ^
12. 02:12:126 (3) - ^
13. 02:15:126 (3) - start^
14. 02:18:126 (3) - ^
15. 02:21:126 (1) - ^
16. 02:24:626 (5) - ^
17. 02:25:126 (7) - clap at start
18. 02:35:126 (4) - NC for spacing change

1. 01:18:126 (1) - whistle
2. 01:21:126 (1) - ^
3. 01:27:126 (1) - ^
4. 01:30:126 (1) - ^
5. 01:33:126 (1) - start^
6. 01:36:126 (1) - ^
7. 02:39:126 (1) - 1 grid right(grid level 4). put it on y-axis.

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[Sleep]

1. 00:57:126 (4,1) - swap NC ?~

[Dream]

1. 01:35:126 (4) - re clap in the start
2. 01:50:876 (10) - add clap?
3. 01:59:876 (7) - re finish in the end, strange for me
4. 02:20:626 (10) - re clap?
5. 02:48:126 (5) - NC?

l1106188 wrote:

Hi~
Sorry, I am late, I am busy in this month ;w;
M4M from L18's & Crystal's Modding Queue.

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[Sleep]

1. 00:57:126 (4,1) - swap NC ?~ - done

[Dream]

1. 01:35:126 (4) - re clap in the start - done
2. 01:50:876 (10) - add clap? - done
3. 01:59:876 (7) - re finish in the end, strange for me - no
4. 02:20:626 (10) - re clap? - no
5. 02:48:126 (5) - NC? - done

good song & good luck~
sorry for late ;w;
and sorry to my poor English

Regou wrote:

Hi~

[Dream]
00:33:626 (2) - See, it touches 00:30:126 (1).,, it's quite ugly imo - fixed
00:41:626 (5) - (nazi)1 grid left - no
00:49:626 (3,4) - Again. Avoid unnecessary overlapping. - done
00:50:126 (4,5) - Confusing spacing...? - already fixed by the suggestion above
01:03:626 (1) - 2 grid left so that its head can pass through 01:05:126 (3) perfectly - done
01:23:126 (8) - Sorry but I have to say that this one isn't cool - no need to be sorry, but it's fine in my opinion
01:25:376 (3) - I think using this beat will be better... - no

01:46:376 (1) - ^ - no
02:35:126 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - It this just a hard diff, less jump please??O__o - slow song and only 2,00x jumps, no need to fix I assume

[Sleep]
00:33:126 - add a break here? - done
00:50:626 (3) - Not perfectly blanketed by 00:51:126 (1) - , fix it - done
01:06:126 (1) - This don't look good
01:32:876 (5) - Remove this note? This may confuse the newbies... - no, but edited
01:52:376 (2) - Why not symmetrical with 01:53:126 (3) - - but it is!
02:03:126 (1) - More creative art slider can be applied here - done

I really hope that you can get a custom clap. It fits the music more.
Okay, that's all! Good luck.

1. I suggest to try and keep the slider ticks consistent. Setting it to 2 on Dream would be best, man.

1. 02:03:126 (1)-I'm pretty sure you forgot to add a finish on the beginning.
2. 02:15:126 (1)-Was this spacing left out intentionally? If it wasn't, I suggest fixing it with the distance snap.
3. 02:24:797 (5)-^?

1. 01:00:126 (1)-A spacing error? If it is, fix it using the distance snap.
2. 02:23:126 (x)-Perhaps its a good idea to add a note here?

Von_Fegel_Snape wrote:

General:
Maybe use 35%~40% hitvolume instead of 50%? I feel the hitsounds overpower the music at some points. - have tried it before, but it's not good IMO

Sleep:
01:57:126 (1) - If you add the above, whistle here as well - nah, doesn't really go well here

UnderminE wrote:

AHHH DO WANT THIS RANKED

UnderminE wrote:

SHOOTING STARZ

1. 00:27:126 (3) - By looking on what you've did at 00:39:126, you could add a new combo here. But to be honest, it also looks good without the New combo. If you want to add a new combo, you can do it since it will also fit. I am just letting this suggestion here if in case, you want to add one.
2. 00:48:126 (1) - This slider is, unfortunately, unsymmetrical. I guess you should fix it. Here's the code:
   

   88,184,48126,6,0,B|160:128|228:140|248:156|256:160|256:160|264:156|284:140|352:128|424:184,1,360,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 00:52:626 (2) - Actually, it would look more cool and symmetric if you keep doing the blanket with the circle 3 as you did with the slider 1. To make it blanketed, move it to x:148 y:120. Here's what/how I found it. Make sure to rearrange your next objects since it will have a highly difference.
4. 00:59:126 (4) - The end of this slider seems to be a bit awkward. You should try to improve it by moving the last node one grid up and some grid at the left.
5. 01:24:626 (1,2,3) - There's two possibility here, first, you may have forgot to add claps to keep the consistency or it was intentional. If it was intentional, what's the main reason? I don't think you should skip these claps. Add claps at the end of the slider 1 and at the circle 3. By doing this, the claps before it will be consistent instead of getting it cut'd off.
6. 01:38:626 (4) - You should be adding a clap here since this circle and the previous circle has no hitsounds, so it makes it a bit.. empty? Try to think about it. To be honest, it will fit with the previous clap at the end of the slider 2 and it will fit with the bass, I guess?
7. 02:18:126 (1) - You could make a better blanket here with the previous circle by moving the third node a bit.
8. 02:33:126 (1) - At this part, it sounds really more louder than a simple non-hitsounded object. You should add a finish here to emphasize it! Also, without it, it makes it object way more empty than the sound in the song. You should do the same with 02:39:126 and 02:45:126

1. 00:56:126 (6) - I think it would be better if you isolate the star pattern together on the same combo without adding any objects after it. I would suggest you to add a new combo here.
2. 01:22:876 (7) - I really like what you've did with your hitsounds but... this clap seems to be very late! You should maybe add it at the end of the previous slider? Since it's on a upbeat, it should be alright. But also, it sounds less late and better c:
3. 01:38:626 (5) - With the slider 3 and 4, it makes a pretty good flow, but at this one, you've copy/pasted the slider 4 and it doesn't make it pretty good, mostly that there's a jump. I'm suggesting you to keep the jump, but reversing the slider, just like this. lol, peppy.
4. 01:43:376 (1) - Do you really need a new combo here? You haven't added one to 01:40:376 (6) - which has the same tonality. You have two possibility: Delete the new combo or add a New Combo to the circle 6 of the previous combo to make it consistent to this one.
5. 02:17:126 (1,3) - Ewww, overlaps! You should maybe move the slider 3, so it won't be overlapping the previous slider, 1.
6. 02:33:126 - Look at the previous difficulty, I've mentioned it. (Same thing with 2:39:126 and 02:45:126
7. 02:35:126 (1) - This note is not in a pretty good place since it's overlapping the slider that isn't completely fade-out! Try to maybe, highlight the star pattern and go on "Edit">"Rotate by...", so you could move it a bit.

Gabe wrote:

Ewww, this map has 69 replies. - B-Baka!!!

Dream
01:22:876 (7) - I really like what you've did with your hitsounds but... this clap seems to be very late! You should maybe add it at the end of the previous slider? Since it's on a upbeat, it should be alright. But also, it sounds less late and better c: - I followed the snare on song, not the common musical sense

1. 00:48:126 (1) - This slider sounds kinda.. empty without hitsound. I think a whistle at the start of this slider fits perfectly with the melody imo.
2. 00:54:126 (1) - ^
3. 01:00:126 (1) - ^
4. 01:06:126 (1) - ^
5. 01:26:626 (4) - o.o This quite impressed me. Your patterns were all clean and pretty and suddenly this. I suggest you to move this slider over here with a curved shape to make a blanket with the previous slider (I'm suggesting this because where you placed it, it gets covered by hitbursts and doesn't flow well at all imo):
   
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6. 01:31:876 (3,4,5) - ^ again o.o this looks very messy. (5) gets all covered up by those two sliders. I personally think it doesn't flow well at all. How about trying another spacing to make this part easier to read for beginners and more pretty? I think that something like this would work:
   
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7. 01:39:126 (1) - From this point to 01:59:876 (6) the difficulty suddenly increases a lot. You placed a lot of consecutive notes :< and made some weird patterns. I'll talk about that below.
8. 01:48:626 (2) - (^ this is related with that) -> this slidershape looks too odd. How about trying something else with it.. perhaps a more "regular" shape like this one?:
   
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9. 01:52:376 (2,3) - Minor detail: I suggest you to move this slider a couple of grids to the left to make some symmetry with them. I think it looks more pretty.
10. 01:55:376 (2) - This wavy slider doesn't look good with the previous stright slider imo. They're too different and look odd together. I personally prefer this way:
    
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11. 02:06:626 (1) - I think this nc is very unnecesary. I suggest you to remove it since the melody doesn't change in anything imo.
12. 02:19:876 (2) - I recommend you to remove this note to make this part more easier and suitable for beginners since this is your easier diff. :3 I know you're trying to keep following the melody but i think it is better if you leave some empty spaces, like, little pauses for the player.
13. 02:32:126 (2,3,1) - This pattern flows odd imo, and I personally dislike how these notes get a bit covered with each other. I think it flows and looks better in this way:
    
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14. 02:36:376 (2) - Same thing about 02:19:876 (2). In this case, to decrease the difficulty I suggest you to remove this slider and then add a circle at 02:36:626.
15. 02:38:126 (4,5,1) - Same thing about 02:32:126 (2,3,1). I think it looks and flows better this way, so I suggest you to try it out:
    
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16. 02:39:876 (2) - Another odd shape imo In this case I suggest you to move the red node a tad up like this, but it's up to you!:
    
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17. 02:45:126 (1) - o.o wow this slider is really impressive. I think it doesn't fit with the music at all. I would rather try something more pretty and artistic. I tried some shapes and this is the one I like most:
    
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    344,284,165126,6,0,B|281:301|243:267|243:267|251:225|125:288|180:154|130:175|130:175|88:150|88:91,2,360,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

    
    I really like the hitsounds, I just don't agree that this is the easier diff of the mapset but I guess it will be okay to leave it like this. :3

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  *I suggest you to increase OD by +1. OD6 is too slow and makes some patterns a bit more harder to read.

1. 00:48:126 (1) - Here's missing a whistle at the start of this slider (imo. i think). :3 It sounds too monotonous and empty without a whistle to keep following the melody.
2. 00:54:126 (1) - ^
3. 00:56:126 (1) - Ughh.. this slider looks perfect due to the new slider tool but I personally think that the way in which the start and end of it get overlapped by themselves look bad. Perhaps avoid this making it a bit more like this?:
   
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4. 01:00:126 (1) - Same thing about 00:48:126 (1).
5. 01:06:126 (1) - ^
6. 01:11:126 (3) - Uhmm I suggest you to add a whistle at the end of this slider since the sound that the whistle at the repeat is following is repeated once again, i mean, it can also be heard at the end of this slider. I'm not sure if i explained it clearly :<
7. 01:23:126 (8) - This slider looks a bit odd. You didn't place the red node correctly at all. I suggest you to place it more like this to make this shape look more pretty:
   
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8. 01:26:126 (4) - Uhmmm this slider looks a bit randomly placed. I suggest you to rotate it a bit to make it look better with the previous slider's shape:
   
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9. 01:42:626 (3) - Veeeeeeeery minimal nazi detail lol. I suggest you to move this note to x:356 y:48 (approximately). I think it flows better like that.
10. 01:40:626 (7) - The melody changes here so a nc would be a nice idea imo. Also this combo is too long so adding this nc would shorten it.
11. 01:43:376 (7) - ^
12. 01:49:626 (4) - ^
13. 01:52:376 (7) - ^
14. 01:55:376 (1) - o.o this is in fact this nc isnt even consistent with your previous so if you dont follow all of the above ^ try removing this combo. If you are following my suggestions then remove nc here and then add it to 01:55:626 (2).
15. 01:58:376 (4) - ^ (same as 01:40:626 (7))
16. 01:59:876 (4) - This part is calm rather than emphasized, loud or whatever you want to call it. A hitifinish here sounds too loud and exaggerated. I suggest you to remove it and replace it with another hitsound, perhaps a whistle.
17. 02:01:126 (2) - Hmmm this curve makes the flow a bit odd. I think it feels better to play if you change the curve like this:
    
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18. 02:04:876 (4) - This note flows oddly. I would rather place it at x:280 y:288 to make this part feel better (imo).
19. 02:08:126 (1,2,3) - ^ Another pattern that flows kinda bad. (3) Feels like forced to be there just to make a visually pretty pattern. I think it flows much better if you ctrl+g (1) and (2).
20. 02:25:626 (1,2) - Make the map flow more naturally~ I think that if you place these two notes at x:460 y:276 approximately it will improve the flow.
21. 02:29:626 (6) - Uhmmm this slider shape looks kinda out of place. I suggest you to copy the shape of 02:28:876 (4) and use it here, like this but it's up to you!:
    
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22. 02:34:626 (3) - What's with this antijump o.o? it doesn't fit here wth the music imo so consider placing this note correctly with distance snap.
23. 02:35:126 (1,2,3,4,1) - Uhh no whistles here like you did before at 01:00:126 (1,2,3,4,5) and such? Please add whistles here too to make your hitsounds consistent and to make this part sound less monotonous.
24. 02:38:126 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
25. 02:43:876 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^ that sound can be heard in this part and so on so you should keep adding whistles like that imo.
26. 02:47:126 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
    
    What a relaxing song and difficulty. I really like it. I just don't like how sometimes you change the flow, making it worst just to make a visually better pattern. Flow is more important! but regarding the mapset, I really like it.

Sekai-nyan wrote:

if you'll bubble this you can give me another map to mod ></

1. AR-1, OD-1 for Sleep
   AR+1, OD+2 for Dream
   (really, you have same OD for both difficulties, it's not a taiko with set-all-stats-at-five)
2. And couple of words about tickrate. Since track goes to 3/4 rhythm sometimes tickrate 2 on long sliders sounds strange for me. I think tickrate 1 fits better. Won't force you to change it, just leave it as recommendation.

Jenny wrote:

Jenny had been here.

Should I recheck? (Rank won't take long)