ww so long ago
requested before I'm a MAT
Generalfine !
Beginnerfine~
Hyper00:15:588 (1) - whistle the head ? I think you forgot
00:48:115 (3) - balance this spacing with (2) and (4) like this one 00:49:378 (6) -
01:20:851 (2) - add note here I think, it feels empty and people might get missed easily because the previous parts, you didn't let the gap that wide like this
and it also follows the keyboard sound very well !
02:06:325 (2) - ^ same idea
Another01:33:167 (3) - maybe this slider.. I'm not sure what you are following but eh..
move it 1/6 later (01:33:273) will sound much better I think but it may play a bit strangely , anyways hope you change it ! (you have to shorten this slider also)
something like this (bad flow in this pic imo ._.)
01:37:062 (3) - prefer finish with whistle here , it combos with 01:37:694 (1) - also this one too ! 01:47:167 (4) -
let me know when you have fixed !