Frostmourne wrote:

ww so long ago

requested before I'm a MAT

General
fine !

Beginner
fine~

Hyper
00:15:588 (1) - whistle the head ? I think you forgot yes
00:48:115 (3) - balance this spacing with (2) and (4) like this one 00:49:378 (6) - yes
01:20:851 (2) - add note here I think, it feels empty and people might get missed easily because the previous parts, you didn't let the gap that wide like this
and it also follows the keyboard sound very well ! well, i want to keep these consisted. so keep it :3
02:06:325 (2) - ^ same idea ^

Another
01:33:167 (3) - maybe this slider.. I'm not sure what you are following but eh..
move it 1/6 later (01:33:273) will sound much better I think but it may play a bit strangely , anyways hope you change it ! (you have to shorten this slider also)
something like this (bad flow in this pic imo ._.)

SPOILER

yes changed :3
01:37:062 (3) - prefer finish with whistle here , it combos with 01:37:694 (1) - also this one too ! 01:47:167 (4) - yep

let me know when you have fixed !

Crimmi wrote:

That song didn't appear on IIDX 14 GOLD, so why do you have it in the tags? O.o

spboxer3 wrote:

反震沒人性 人家的處女泡就這樣奪走了/...\

1. Err, source should just be beatmania IIDX or [url=http://vjarmy.com/wiki/index.php/IIDXicon]
   beatmania IIDX 12 HAPPY SKY [/url] imo (not 'beatmania IIDX 12th happy sky') - beatmania doesn't use 'th' suffix anymore, and happy sky are all uppercase o.o
2. Beginner : Please move 01:18:746 (2) - ~x:322 y:145 and 02:04:220 (2) to ~x:190 y:145 regardless of the spacing to avoid overlap (it's not hard to catch at all~)
3. Hyper : 00:15:588 (1) - Remove whistle from slider's body
4. Hyper : 01:19:378 (3,1) - This spacing isn't intuitive at all imo due to (3)'s speed, it'll be a lot better if you used normal spacing here then use the slowdown spacing afterwards, straight line like this should work already (:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. Another : 00:05:483 (2) - Should be snapped in 1/6!
6. Another : 00:21:167 (6,7) - Should be moved to ~x:267 y:314 though, to avoid overlap with (4) in play mode due to stacking's nature xD
7. Another : 00:28:115 (2) - The vocals are snapped on 1/4 here actually~
8. Another : 01:00:746 (1,2,3) - Hmm I'm having trouble here actually, I tried 1/4, 1/6, and 1/8 and none lands perfectly on the beat for me (current position is too early), perhaps delete these three? (the next red (1) lands perfectly on beat though)
9. Another : 01:40:220 (1) - Should be a 3/8 repeating slider, not in 1/6

Niva wrote:

(no kudosu)

Just mentioning few things here, I saw Frostmourne modding it yesterday orz~

1. Err, source should just be beatmania IIDX or [url=http://vjarmy.com/wiki/index.php/IIDXicon]
   beatmania IIDX 12 HAPPY SKY [/url] imo (not 'beatmania IIDX 12th happy sky') - beatmania doesn't use 'th' suffix anymore, and happy sky are all uppercase o.o fixed~
2. Beginner : Please move 01:18:746 (2) - ~x:322 y:145 and 02:04:220 (2) to ~x:190 y:145 regardless of the spacing to avoid overlap (it's not hard to catch at all~) done
3. Hyper : 00:15:588 (1) - Remove whistle from slider's body okay
4. Hyper : 01:19:378 (3,1) - This spacing isn't intuitive at all imo due to (3)'s speed, it'll be a lot better if you used normal spacing here then use the slowdown spacing afterwards, straight line like this should work already (: yes :3
   
   SPOILER

   
5. Another : 00:05:483 (2) - Should be snapped in 1/6! fixed..
6. Another : 00:21:167 (6,7) - Should be moved to ~x:267 y:314 though, to avoid overlap with (4) in play mode due to stacking's nature xD yes~
7. Another : 00:28:115 (2) - The vocals are snapped on 1/4 here actually~ fixed :3
8. Another : 01:00:746 (1,2,3) - Hmm I'm having trouble here actually, I tried 1/4, 1/6, and 1/8 and none lands perfectly on the beat for me (current position is too early), perhaps delete these three? (the next red (1) lands perfectly on beat though) i think it's okay now o.o
9. Another : 01:40:220 (1) - Should be a 3/8 repeating slider, not in 1/6

Another thing I would like to mention is that 5% slidertick in Beginner (20% sounds more fitting though :3) yep~

I already talked to Frostmourne and I'd let him to rebubble it again to make sure (I want to instantly rank this actually but not really sure after the snapping errors I found ._.)

fanzhen0019 wrote:

....fixed

Frostmourne wrote:

celebrating Happy Chinese New Year