1. Another (4.96 stars, 371 notes)
2. Beginner (0.96 stars, 78 notes)
3. Hyper (4.31 stars, 194 notes)

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

-Above all

offset怎么是1683.10526315789？

soft-sliderslide那俩文件不要用0 kb的用44 bytes的

背景图片要是1024x768或800x600的尺寸

难度分部 缺少一个中间难度,介于easy和insane之间的一个难度,这样跨度太大不是很好

-Beginner

我觉得不需要给第三根白线上的slidertick静音，至少kiai部分那几个静音不需要，去掉静音听起来会更好，而且打起来不会感觉奇怪，因为无声造成tick的感觉全无 ok

00:03:893 - 有多余的timing fixed
00:42:314 - ^ ^
01:56:946 - 这线意义不明..或者是说用不上 ^

-Another

00:17:788 - 这里缺一个NC,按之前的放置NC方式来看~ ok
00:25:367 - 这里减小音量是个很好的做法,不过这个slider用30%显的打起来有些空,升到50%就比较好 好
00:27:683 - 有多余的timing 砍掉
00:48:104 - 这个有些坑,comboburst和sliderslide合起来遮挡的有些严重,虽然是Another难度,不过建议这里不要这样去挡 噗我用的透明皮肤.. 再看看别人的意见吧
00:55:367 - 移动到x:264 y:168试试？ nice

Good luck~+star

CDFA wrote:

OK ONE MORE MOD BEFORE I GO TO BED

Overall:
Find a background that is 4:3 aspect ratio. Right now, your BG is 1228x767, which isn't 4:3, causing black bars to appear on the top and bottom of the map~ will be fixed soon
There's 2 .osbs in the folder? deleted..orz
I think new rules state that you can't have an EI diff spread ;~;. You should map a normal/hard or something :>

Insane:
00:05:472 (2) - The curve is so small that it just looks like a mistake. Either make this just regular or make the curve more notable okay
00:12:735 (1) - ^ ^
00:19:367 (1) - This slider looks very cramped and awkward ;~; eh..
00:21:472 (7) - Make this paralell to (6) done
00:32:946 (2) - This curve is really small fixed
00:34:525 (3) - Add whistle on beginning of slider done
00:35:472 (1) - This curve isn't very notable ;~; but playable :3
00:41:472 (1) - This slider is hidden by being overlapped by the previous notes yep,but i need more mod about this..
00:42:104 - Add claps for this section? okay
00:50:630 (4) - Make this symmetrical? keepit :3
01:17:472 (3) - Not moe slider ;~; orz changed
01:38:314 - WELCOME BACK CLAPS x.x
01:40:209 (1,2) - Sounds really awkward noimo
01:45:262 (1) - Don't have this overlapped so much by the previous notes okay

Easy:
00:39:577 (1) - Make this into two sliders? ok
00:47:156 (1) - ^ ^
00:54:735 (3) - Make this symmetrical w
01:52:840 (1) - Make this into two sliders? no
02:09:263 (2) - AIBat says that this is unsnapped, but AIMod says that it isn't o-o. Re-snap it just in case. done

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
这diff spread肯定不行。。Another应该是I吧，两难度的话不能有I。所以中间必须加个难度。 orz
soft-sliderslide.wav和soft-sliderslide2.wav消音的话必须用44B的wav文件。 好
没tags?加个iidx14吧。en

[Beginner]
Fine~

[Another]
00:26:209 (5,1,2,3) - 太难读了，二连的自动stack和anti-jump混在一起 手动stack了
01:11:735 (5) - unsnap应该是不允许的，所以可能要double bpm. 哭实在不想x2 还得改好多东西 so delete
01:46:209 (1) - remove NC? ok
01:49:051 (1) - 01:51:577 (1) - ^ no
02:09:577 (5,7) - 完全叠一起不行，需要手动stack orz

That's all I can find. GL~

Cilvery wrote:

Hi~ <request from my queue>

[Beginner]
Fine

[Another]
00:18:577 - add whistle k

00:31:367 - add finish k

01:10:525 - ^ k

02:10:525 - ^ k

02:15:577 - add whistlek
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good luck~

1. Inconsistency in Tags
   

   [Another] :
   [Beginner] : iidx14

1. AR-1 HP-1

1. 00:42:104 (1,2) - Don't look good for me, try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/345510
2. 01:04:840 (3) - Try this prettehttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/345512

1. HP-1?

1. 02:10:209 (7) - Overlap with 02:09:577 (5) , I can't read them.

1. The distance between the two difficulty a big difference, I suggest to make a "Hyper" diff (If you need you can call me to make )

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[Beginner]
HD-1?随意 hao
00:23:156 - 为毛静音 感觉没理由 :P
00:28:209 - ^ ^
01:02:314 (1) - finish ok
01:06:735 (4) - spacing一点点小 fixed


[Hyper]
01:20:946 (2) - 建议这些都空出距离 因为..感觉是连上的1/4 结果是3/4 很坑啊 改了一下


[Another]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:25:906 - snap to 00:25:893 k
01:56:931 - snap to 01:56:946 k
00:24:419 (1,2,3) - 不来放个正三角？hao
00:42:314 (1) - 这样放0.0 不了

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我总感觉beginner和hyper中间缺少个diff
好图支持顶
Wonderful Mapset
Good Luck

• AR -1? because this is the lowest diff.
  01:02:314 - I think it's better not to change SV in these for-newbie diffs.
  01:52:840 (1) - reduce reverse one time and add circle at 01:54:735?

• AR +1?
  01:02:314 - is this changing of SB necessary?
  01:19:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I want you to reduce stacking, because I feel a little difficult to read rhythm.
  and whistle hitsounds are attached whole of the sliders. is this intention? I think the sliderslide sounds a little noisy.

• HP -1 or -2 we can fail one or two of mistake if drain rate is 8.
  00:26:314 (1,2,3) - more farther? it will be easy to read notes.
  00:42:314 - is this changing of SV necessary? it seems confusing
  00:48:104 (5) - I can't see the start point of this slider well..because it is covered with 1)hit burst of 00:47:472 (3) 2)00:47:788 (4).
  01:00:735 (1,2,3,4,5) - distance looks confusing. I recommend (5) closer to (4).
  00:55:051 (2) - half of start point is covered with previous slider. can you move it to other place?
  01:09:893 (1) - a little more upper?
  01:26:314 (1,2) - hard to read rhythm imo, because the flow is changed here.
  02:11:788 (1,2) - ^