1. Hard (4.52 stars, 193 notes)
2. Mitsuneko's Hard (4.51 stars, 170 notes)
3. Normal (3.7 stars, 130 notes)
4. Rainbow's Taiko (4.93 stars, 452 notes)
5. RLC (4.97 stars, 314 notes)
6. Starry's Easy (2.33 stars, 97 notes)

Yu-Izanagi-12 wrote:

Give me and -Gamu- kudos since you used our advice

BeatofIke wrote:

Mod request via IRC Chat (well Starry did, not you XD. Be sure to thank him/her later). By looking at this map, you're definitey a new mapper. Here, let me help you out:

General
* Remove the OSB file from your folder since there is no storyboard on your map.

* I recommend that you disable letter box during breaks, since this map has a video.

* I could probably find a better quality video (if you want me to). Your video is a bit blurry.

* Your tags are useless. Remove "Yosuga no Sora" from your tags since that's your name of your source. Never add tags to the name of the artist, title, beatmap creator (you), difficulty names, or source. Also since starry made a guest difficulty on easy, you need to add "starry" on tags. So your tags should just be "opening" and "starry" for now.

* For your future maps, be sure to rename all of your backgrouds to something more simple (i.e. "BG", "BG2", "BG3", etc) so it's easier for modders/MAT/BAT to read when modding. That also includes your mp3 and your video.

* Add Kiai Time from 1:17:537 to 1:50:508 for all of your difficulties. To add Kiai Time, go to "Timing" and open timing setup. Add a timing section at 1:17:537. At your top-left, open the style tab and enable 'Kiai Mode". To end kiai time, repeat the previous steps. Add a timing section at 1:50:508, but this time disable "Kiai Mode".

Starry's Easy
* You forgot to add "opening" in your tags.

Normal
* Increase the Approach Rate (AR) to 4 or 5 please. AR3 is too low for normal difficulty.
* Increase Overall Difficulty (OD) to 4 or 5 please. OD3 is a bit low for normal difficulty.

Hard
* Your preview time is different from your other difficulties. You must make the preview time the same for ALL difficulties, unless it is unrankable.
* Your HP Drain is way too high for a hard difficulty. Reduce it to 6 for now.


Fix that first, then call me for a recheck. STAR~

BeatofIke wrote:

Question Time XD: Where exactly did you find your video from (maybe send me a link)? The one you have in your map contains no NSFW content. The videos I'm finding contains NSFW content. Yes, I did find a higher quality version of your video, but it contains NSFW content, which is unrankable in osu!

I want to confirm this first before I continue modding your map. Thanks!

BeatofIke wrote:

Okay, Thanks! I Re-encoded the video for better quality. I even made the video size 800x600.
Click the link below to download. Enjoy:

http://puu.sh/twgC

Now for a second mod. I should finish by tomorrow.

Thank you for the help

BeatofIke wrote:

SPOILER

Okay, time for a recheck:

General
->I just noticed one thing on this map. If you enable or disable letterbox during breaks, there is no difference at all (lol). So it wouldn't matter if you enable or disable the letterbox. Either way, letterbox is actually not bad for this map.

Easy:
00:11:367 (5) - Set the hitsound volume to 40% (not 39% lol). Must have been a mistake.
00:37:240 (2) - You seem to copy/paste this slider alot (which is okay), but at least make the slider straight first before copy/paste.
00:44:109 (1) - Not symmetical. Move this slider 1 Grid left (grid Level 4). That should be better.
00:56:473 (4,5) - 1 Grid Left.
01:29:444 (1) - In easy difficulty, it's not recommend to use 1/2 sliders as it can confuse beginners. Although, it does have polarity, so it's not much of a issue. Eventually, they will memorize the pattern anyway.

Normal
->There are lots of spacing issues on this difficulty. On easy and normal difficulties, you should always avoid this. Read the FAQ's often: http://osu.ppy.sh/p/faq#
->Remove "sofian_1" from tags and add "starry" to tags. Never add yourself on tags.
->Add some notes. It feels empty.
->Needs more polarity: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws
->Set Overall Difficulty to 4. That should be better.
00:11:367 (2,1) - Spacing.
00:12:683 (2) - Remove finish at the end of slider.
00:12:970 (1) - It would be better to end this spinner at 00:15:259. Also add finish on this sppinner and remove the whistle.
00:35:179 (3,4) - Spacing.
00:59:678 (4,1) - Spacing.
01:03:113 (1,2) - Spacing.
->I give up on the spacing. It needs a lot work (possibly a re-map).

Hard
->Remove "sofian_1" from tags and add "starry" to tags. Never add yourself on tags.
01:56:003 (2,3,4) - Remove these notes. They don't go to anything with the music.

PLEASE NOTE: There is so much to mod here, but that should be enough for now. Hope this mod helps. Your map has potential, but your Normal difficutly needs a lot of work (especally with spacing). Anyway, good luck with your map. Your map still has a long way before it can get bubbled and ranked.

Sofian_1 wrote:

Done with the spacing mistake (hopefully), recheck the map now.

MaSingerZ wrote:

From mod reqs.
There is my opinion,So you don't need follow!
[General]
BPM:131.00(maybe)
[Starry's Easy]
I feel no problem,but little difficult as Easy.

[Normal]
You should use more Accompaniment,
so you use mach voice.

[Hard]
00:47:772-add circle
01:10:211-^
01:13:645-^
01:53:485-^
01:58:293-add NC
01:58:407-fade out

[ktgstar's Insane]
00:22:014(2)-remove
01:32:077(1)-replacex336,y224
01:56:003-fade out
nice map!

MaSingerZ wrote:

[ktgstar's Insane]
00:22:014(2)-remove - i don't think so
01:32:077(1)-replacex336,y224 - ?
01:56:003-fade out - ?
nice map!

Mitsuneko wrote:

I made a Hard difficulty. It was really fun to map, honestly, and I won't get upset if you don't use it. If you do use it, I can find a BG for it. I want to keep things consistent and I don't want to make you look for another one or use the one that was there unless you want to. Nevertheless, here you go.

SPOILER

http://puu.sh/yFyI
(Just extract the files and you'll find the .osu file in there.)

CDFA wrote:

FINALLY GETTING TO THIS

Insane:
00:25:792 (1) - N-N-Not moe! ;~; - -changed
00:32:203 (7) - Doesn't play well D: - changed
00:36:324 (1) - Remove NC - done
00:56:244 (1) - Not moe! The thing that kills it is the fact that you have a random 3rd sliderpoint in the middle. - changed
01:23:948 (1,2,3) - Probably make this more like this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/334828) so there isn't an ugly overlap~ -changed
01:46:616 (3) - Not moe! It's because the curves aren't notable enough - changed
02:02:414 (7) - Unrankable to do this!~. - replaced with hit circles

whee~.

- [Hard] : opening Sphere Haruka Sora Kasugano Nao Yorihime Akira Amatsume Kazuha Migiwa Motoka Nogisaka Visual Novel Eroge starry Mitsuneko ktgster 
- [ktgster's Insane] : ktgster opening Sphere Haruka Sora Kasugano Nao Yorihime Akira Amatsume Kazuha Migiwa Motoka Nogisaka Visual Novel Eroge starry Mitsuneko ktgster 
- [Mitsuneko's Hard] : opening Sphere Haruka Sora Kasugano Nao Yorihime Akira Amatsume Kazuha Migiwa Motoka Nogisaka Visual Novel Eroge starry Mitsuneko ktgster 
- [Normal] : opening Sphere Haruka Sora Kasugano Nao Yorihime Akira Amatsume Kazuha Migiwa Motoka Nogisaka Visual Novel Eroge starry Mitsuneko ktgster 
- [Starry's Easy] : opening Sphere Haruka Sora Kasugano Nao Yorihime Akira Amatsume Kazuha Migiwa Motoka Nogisaka Visual Novel Eroge starry Mitsuneko ktgster 

Yume wrote:

You should remove the Short Ver >.< because of the new rule~

no kd

Katty Pie wrote:

hi from my mod Q ^.^

Insane

00:11:367(8) - i think better remove this note, it will be better folow the vokal.
00:14:114(4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - better use normal sound 40% without hitsounds, it's sond better
00:25:792(1) make this slider more symmetric http://puu.sh/M8tV
00:31:516(6,7) - stack better
01:20:972(8,1) - It's unrank repeat is hides/ correct it.
01:30:130(1,2) - make more symmetric
01:46:616(3) - here NC bcz you change speed.
02:01:842(6,7) - delete this notes and put spinner start - 02:01:498 , finish - 02:03:330

Hard

00:15:488(1) - better replace on note in white tick.
00:44:567(2,3) - stack better
00:51:664(8) - make more symmetric http://puu.sh/M8y6 looks better
01:09:066(6,7) stack better
01:13:645 - add note here
01:19:369(4,5) - correct spacing
01:24:864(5) - http://puu.sh/M8Ai
01:36:541(7,1) - correct spacing
01:54:630(1,2,3,1) - make identical distance between this notes.
01:55:545 - remove NC
01:58:293 - NC

Mitsuneko's Hard

00:07:245 -add note here, will be sound better
00:37:698 -^
01:09:982(8,1) - make so http://puu.sh/M8DN sounds better
01:12:729(7) - make this slider shorter on red ticks and add slider 1\2 after
01:19:140(5,6) - make so http://puu.sh/M8IF sounds better

Diff should be finished on the same time as other diffs 02:03:330 <--- here

Normal

00:04:040(1,2) - stack better
00:12:054(1,2) - correct spacing
00:31:516(3,4) - stack better
00:38:614(1,2) - make this sliders double and put note 3 00:40:445
00:53:496(3,4) - stack better

Open AI MOD you have 24 problems with spacing.. correct it all

Easy

00:34:034(2,3) - make this lsiders identical http://puu.sh/M8PV
00:57:389 - make this slider more symmetric http://puu.sh/M8QH

All difs should come to an end on same time. Plz correct it

Good luck~

hi from my mod Q ^.^

Insane

00:11:367(8) - i think better remove this note, it will be better folow the vokal. - I don't think it fits
00:14:114(4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - better use normal sound 40% without hitsounds, it's sond better - changed
00:25:792(1) make this slider more symmetric http://puu.sh/M8tV - done
00:31:516(6,7) - stack better - done
01:20:972(8,1) - It's unrank repeat is hides/ correct it. - changed
01:30:130(1,2) - make more symmetric - changed
01:46:616(3) - here NC bcz you change speed. - done
02:01:842(6,7) - delete this notes and put spinner start - 02:01:498 , finish - 02:03:330 - Done

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[Starry's Easy]
* AR +1? Done

01:10:668 (1) - Spacing error, and please no jump in this easy diff please I don't see a jump or a spacing error


[Normal]
00:05:643 (2) - The sliderpath is overlapped by hitbursts. So beginners are unable to see the path (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read) Fixed
01:24:635 (2) - Make a slider like this to make a blanket combo? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/385078
Fixed


[Mitsuneko's Hard]
02:03:330 - Remove this useless timing section Done


[ktgster's Insane]
01:50:508 (1) - Make this slider curve? To make pattern prettier? Done
01:58:293 (1) - New combo, since this note after spinner. You seems forgot it? Fixed


Good luck~

nich95 wrote:

Hi, Sofian_1

My mod from your request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Kiai time of ktgster's Insane is different from other diff. Please fix it.
2. Disable Letterbox during break in Song setup > Storyboarding.

Starry's Easy

1. 00:45:025 - 01:46:387 You should add clap more than this.
2. 01:26:696 (4) - Move to left 2 grids and up 1 grid, and add NC.
3. 01:29:444 (1,2) - Remove NC in (1), but add it in (2) instead.
4. 01:46:845 (1) - Use finish instead of using clap.

Normal

1. 00:54:412 (4) - Stack it (x:314 y:254)
2. 01:01:281 (3,4) - Spacing is too far
3. 01:27:154 (2,3) - ^
4. 01:28:757 (6,7) - Spacing is too close
5. 01:35:168 (4,5,6) - Spacing is too far

Mitsuneko's Hard

1. 00:44:567 (1) - Add finish in slider begin
2. 00:57:160 (1) - ^
3. 01:13:874 (1) - Add finish here

Hard

1. 00:27:967 - Add spinner here, then end at 00:29:913 instead of using the circle.
2. 01:06:318 (1) - Move to down 1 grid
3. 01:36:999 (1) - Move to right 4 grids

ktgster's Insane

1. 00:14:000 - Hitsound's too loudly. I suggest reducing volume.
2. 01:58:293 (1) - Adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~

nich95 wrote:

Hi, Sofian_1

My mod from your request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

[notice]

General

1. Kiai time of ktgster's Insane is different from other diff. Please fix it. - it does not have to be consistant if it fits and is made by a guest.
   
   [notice]

   ktgster's Insane

   1. 00:14:000 - Hitsound's too loudly. I suggest reducing volume. - changed it to 35%
   2. 01:58:293 (1) - Adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

- done

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~

1. 00:11:367 - 00:12:512 - Ahm..., soft hitsound finish fits very well with the music here, so change please? http://puu.sh/SWsn
2. 00:12:970 (1) - Finish sounds good here
3. 00:40:903 (1) - End this slider 1/1 earlier? (00:42:735)

1. 00:01:979 (1,2) - Try this rhythm? Sounds much better: http://puu.sh/TAYO
2. 00:04:269 (2) - Make this slider like this: http://puu.sh/TEok
3. 00:06:788 (3) - Remove this and add a note in 00:07:016
4. 00:30:371 (1) - Try this? http://puu.sh/TT3c
5. 00:33:576 - Add a note?
6. 00:39:300 (1,2,3) - Make spacing like this? http://puu.sh/UUccso
   Also, remove whistle from these two repeats.
7. 01:06:318 (1) - Move repeat to white tick
8. 01:08:379 - Add a note?
9. 01:10:440 (1) - Try this: http://puu.sh/UUpV
10. 01:13:645 (1) - Star this spinner in 01:13:874 - End in 01:15:706. Add Finish here too.
11. 01:38:373 (5) - Same as 01:06:318

Spread Wings wrote:

Hi! Sorry for delay, sister wouldn't let me use the notebook...

Red: Unrankable stuff
Black: Suggestions only
Blue: Recommend fix this, There is up to you to fix or not.

[General]

Hm...okay...but no sure about the kiai in Insane...it's different from other diff. But the guest will not change this so...clear.

[Starry's Easy]

1. 00:11:367 - 00:12:512 - Ahm..., soft hitsound finish fits very well with the music here, so change please? http://puu.sh/SWsn
2. 00:12:970 (1) - Finish sounds good here
3. 00:40:903 (1) - End this slider 1/1 earlier? (00:42:735)

Recommend adding more claps here, you missed a lot of them.

[Normal]

1. 00:01:979 (1,2) - Try this rhythm? Sounds much better: http://puu.sh/TAYO
2. 00:04:269 (2) - Make this slider like this: http://puu.sh/TEok
3. 00:06:788 (3) - Remove this and add a note in 00:07:016
4. 00:30:371 (1) - Try this? http://puu.sh/TT3c
5. 00:33:576 - Add a note?
6. 00:39:300 (1,2,3) - Make spacing like this? http://puu.sh/UUccso
   Also, remove whistle from these two repeats.
7. 01:06:318 (1) - Move repeat to white tick
8. 01:08:379 - Add a note?
9. 01:10:440 (1) - Try this: http://puu.sh/UUpV
10. 01:13:645 (1) - Star this spinner in 01:13:874 - End in 01:15:706. Add Finish here too.
11. 01:38:373 (5) - Same as 01:06:318

Needs a lot of work in this diff.

[Mitsuneko's Hard]

HP-1, AR+1 & OD+1.

That's all
Lose interest to mod this when i saw Normal Diff...this map really needs more work.

Thanks for requesting my queue! Good Luck