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Rita - Michi no Saki, Sora no Mukou (Short Ver.) [Osu|Taiko]

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pyransc
44 posts
Joined March 2012
pyransc
New Beatmapper moding new maps
Nice map. Only some sugestions.

[Starry's Easy]
00:53:267 (3) - add whistle to first and secound circle ?
01:05:173 (3) - add whistle to slider ?

[Normal]
00:40:674 (1) - remove clap , add finish ?
00:47:543 (1) - add whistle to first three circles and add finish to quarters circle ?
00:53:496 (3) - move node #2 x:412 , y:240
01:36:999 (1) - add whistle
01:37:457 (3) - ^
01:38:373 (5) - add whistle to first two circles and finish to thrid circle ?

[Mitsuneko's Hard]
00:35:179 - maybe change this http://puu.sh/WecX to this http://puu.sh/Wedt

[htgster's Insane]
00:02:437 (3) - remove whistle on third circle, add clap
00:03:811 (5) - remove whistle, add clap
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
Sorry I am late :(
[Easy]
00:44:109 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Why don't have Hitsound ;_;
01:17:995 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - You can use 2 4 clap

[Normal]
DS.

[Hard]
Fine

[Insane]
Kiai Time must same as another diff

Can I make Taiko Diff?/.\
Miracle Lotus
Topic Starter
Miracle Lotus

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Sorry I am late :(
[Easy]
00:44:109 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Why don't have Hitsound ;_;
01:17:995 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - You can use 2 4 clap

[Normal]
DS.

[Hard]
Fine

[Insane]
Kiai Time must same as another diff

Can I make Taiko Diff?/.\
Thanks for the mod, I don't mind if you make a taiko diff, I can put it back in WIP
And what do you mean by DS?
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
DS:Distance snap
Thx>< I making Taiko diff~
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Miracle Lotus
Topic Starter
Miracle Lotus

Sun Rainbow wrote:

DS:Distance snap
Cheers
ktgster
Elite Mapper
483 posts
Joined November 2008
ktgster

pyransc wrote:

[htgster's Insane]
00:02:437 (3) - remove whistle on third circle, add clap - i don't like how the clap sounds
00:03:811 (5) - remove whistle, add clap- ^

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Sorry I am late :(

[Insane]
Kiai Time must same as another diff- changed
Miracle Lotus
Topic Starter
Miracle Lotus
Update, new skin implemented.
Re-download if you want to see it.
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
the taiko diff is done。
http://puu.sh/Y1Ju
Miracle Lotus
Topic Starter
Miracle Lotus

Sun Rainbow wrote:

the taiko diff is done。
http://puu.sh/Y1Ju
thank you
jogfi2002
189 posts
Joined July 2009
jogfi2002
I'm just a new mapper, may not help much. ^^
But I'll try my best.

Starry's Easy

01:29:444 (1) - This short slider is a bit awful, cause it doesn't fit to the song, I think. Change it to a circle may be better.

Normal

00:38:614 (1,2,3) - Note 1 ends earlier than the long tone. Then this tone is splitted into two parts. Maybe repeating slider 1 until the long tone ends and put 3 circles is better.
01:00:365 (1) - This circle is too near to the last slider, I was confused at the first time play.
01:09:066 (4) - Could be considered to put one 1/4 slider at this point, with one circle after the slider.
01:17:537 (1) - A bit more delay after the spinner may be better for a NORMAL.
01:28:299 (4,5) - These two circles are too close, confusing.

Mitsuneko's Hard

00:40:674 (5) - Remove this circle, let spinner starts here.
00:57:160 (6) - Could try to slow down sliders when Rita sings a long tone.

Hard

00:50:520 (6) - Rotate this slider, align to 5 in one line may be more pretty.
01:38:831 (3) - This slider just not fits to music, but I have no other ideas.

ktgster's Insane

00:25:792 (1,2) - Set the NC at circle 2 may be better.
00:52:580 (5,7,8,1) - Could be change to follow the lyric "na", it seems not fit to using 3-combo here.
01:15:706 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too close to the last stream, not pretty and funny, could be moved to a little farther.

That's all.

I am also mapping a Rita's song, you can see it at t/97081 if you are interested in it.
Miracle Lotus
Topic Starter
Miracle Lotus

jogfi2002 wrote:

I'm just a new mapper, may not help much. ^^
But I'll try my best.

Starry's Easy

01:29:444 (1) - This short slider is a bit awful, cause it doesn't fit to the song, I think. Change it to a circle may be better.

Normal

00:38:614 (1,2,3) - Note 1 ends earlier than the long tone. Then this tone is splitted into two parts. Maybe repeating slider 1 until the long tone ends and put 3 circles is better.
01:00:365 (1) - This circle is too near to the last slider, I was confused at the first time play.
01:09:066 (4) - Could be considered to put one 1/4 slider at this point, with one circle after the slider.
01:17:537 (1) - A bit more delay after the spinner may be better for a NORMAL.
01:28:299 (4,5) - These two circles are too close, confusing.

Mitsuneko's Hard

00:40:674 (5) - Remove this circle, let spinner starts here.
00:57:160 (6) - Could try to slow down sliders when Rita sings a long tone.

Hard

00:50:520 (6) - Rotate this slider, align to 5 in one line may be more pretty.
01:38:831 (3) - This slider just not fits to music, but I have no other ideas.

ktgster's Insane

00:25:792 (1,2) - Set the NC at circle 2 may be better.
00:52:580 (5,7,8,1) - Could be change to follow the lyric "na", it seems not fit to using 3-combo here.
01:15:706 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too close to the last stream, not pretty and funny, could be moved to a little farther.

That's all.

I am also mapping a Rita's song, you can see it at t/97081 if you are interested in it.
Thanks for the mod.
ktgster
Elite Mapper
483 posts
Joined November 2008
ktgster

jogfi2002 wrote:

I'm just a new mapper, may not help much. ^^
But I'll try my best.

ktgster's Insane

00:25:792 (1,2) - Set the NC at circle 2 may be better. - changed
00:52:580 (5,7,8,1) - Could be change to follow the lyric "na", it seems not fit to using 3-combo here. - I prefer to keep it
01:15:706 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too close to the last stream, not pretty and funny, could be moved to a little farther. - changed

That's all.

I am also mapping a Rita's song, you can see it at t/97081 if you are interested in it.
Thanks for modding.
those
3,136 posts
Joined November 2010
those
Just commenting on the Taiko a bit before looking at the other diffs.

[Taiko]
  1. 01:12:271 - Would feel much more complete if you had a note here. For 01:11:355 (267,268,269,270,271,272) - , try kkdkddk.
  2. 01:27:383 (332,333,334) - You're following vocals too closely here. There's an interesting rhythm in the background you're neglecting. You should map to that instead.
  3. 01:33:107 (351) - Great place for those leading 1/4s here since it's actually audible. Try a k at 01:32:992 - .
  4. 01:36:770 (365) - Same as the immediate above.
  5. 01:55:774 (1,1) - These two objects should be swapped. Spinner should last until 02:05:162 - or other appropriate time.
I like the use of your k objects in the beginning very much.
those
3,136 posts
Joined November 2010
those
[General]
  1. Consider a custom sliderpoint10.png and sliderpoint30.png
  2. Consider mapping each difficulty to the same length.
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:909 (6,7,8) - Space to 1.00x, or an even amount on both sides.
  2. 00:50:749 (2) - 1/4 too long. Should end at 00:50:978 - white.
  3. 00:51:893 (3) - Same with this, and 00:53:496 (2) - this, and 01:37:686 (1,5) - these. There's nothing in the music that hints that there is something to be followed at the 1/4 you end on.
  4. 01:22:575 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Not particularly liking the angles formed by these objects, mainly (5,6,1). Also try keeping smaller spacing with (5,6,1), and don't increase it until (1,2). That is, the first jump should be between (1,2) and not (6,1).
  5. 01:59:896 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't turn a good diff into a "watch the approach circle" game. You're better off just starting the spinner earlier.
[Hard]
  1. 00:32:203 (4) - A rounder, more symmetric slider would be more pleasant.
  2. 00:37:240 (3) - I don't feel it's an appropriate place to just copy 00:35:866 (1) - .
  3. 00:47:772 (7) - Space.
  4. 00:57:160 (5) - Slider is an inappropriate length, since kickback is at 00:57:732 - blue.
  5. 01:10:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Lacking hitsounds here. Be creative with the soft-hitwhistle.
  6. 01:33:107 - A sort of emptiness here that can be filled in.
[Mitsuneko]
  1. 01:04:715 (5) - Wave can be made without the anchor in the centre, and it will appear more smoothly; there is an evident turning point here and it doesn't fit with the rest of your sliders.
  2. 01:18:682 (4,5,6) - Rhythm pattern not so good. You can argue for (4) that there's the bass to be followed, but there should be a slider starting on 01:19:369 - , or a circle if you're going to follow with circles.
  3. 01:22:804 (6,7) - Rhythm pattern not so good. You should swap (5,6) or (5,6,7) for a better rhythm pattern.
[Normal]
  1. 00:51:664 (2,3) - Overlap not so good.
  2. Overall the map makes too much use of straight lines. This is because you have chosen to map with a high note density and small spacing. For example, stuff like 00:48:688 (1,2,3,4,5) - shouldn't even appear. You should be making use of longer sliders and, well, breaks (which you do have because of vocals and not for difficulty reasons).
[Easy]
  1. 00:37:240 (2) - You can make this have a longer arc length and start more toward the top right to get a rounder slider. Example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/436509
  2. Try to do the above to your sliders which seem a little too curved or too flat.
ktgster
Elite Mapper
483 posts
Joined November 2008
ktgster

those wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:10:909 (6,7,8) - Space to 1.00x, or an even amount on both sides.
  2. 00:50:749 (2) - 1/4 too long. Should end at 00:50:978 - white.
  3. 00:51:893 (3) - Same with this, and 00:53:496 (2) - this, and 01:37:686 (1,5) - these. There's nothing in the music that hints that there is something to be followed at the 1/4 you end on.
  4. 01:22:575 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Not particularly liking the angles formed by these objects, mainly (5,6,1). Also try keeping smaller spacing with (5,6,1), and don't increase it until (1,2). That is, the first jump should be between (1,2) and not (6,1).
  5. 01:59:896 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't turn a good diff into a "watch the approach circle" game. You're better off just starting the spinner earlier.
All Done.
BeatofIke
4,172 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
I will mod this map later. No Kudosu Please, since it's a recheck :3
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BeatofIke
4,172 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Mod Recheck here I come XD. Prepare for a long mod! Be Proud!

General
-> Nice skin! It matches well with the music and the video.

Starry's Easy
-> What spacing are you trying to follow? You seem to change spacing back and forth. For easy and normal difficulties on general, your spacing should always be consistent thoughout the music. Now I do understand that there are some exceptions to this rule, but you need to ask yourself why are you changing the spacing instead of just simply changing it because you want to. To double-check for spacing, there are two ways:

1.) Use AIMod/AI BAT!
2.) Use the spacing loacated at the top-right of the editor! You will see something like Prev: 1.05x and Next: 1.30x. This tells you the exact spacing between the previous note and the next note. This method is called manual spacing!


00:01:979 (2,3) - Nazi Mod: Blanklet this a little better. Like this (see code under the photo):
SPOILER
256,272,1979,1,2
208,336,2437,2,2,B|256:360|316:332,1,100,0|2
00:11:596 (1,2) - I prefer replacing these hit circles with a slider here. That way, it will safely transit from white tick to red-tick safely (in other words, it will have good polarity). If fixed, make sure you addd the finishes back!
00:30:371 (2,3) - There's a spacing issue here. Also the blanklet is not perfect (that includes the slider at 00:31:287 (3) that covers it. Try something like this(see code under the photo):
SPOILER
172,116,30371,2,2,B|280:116,1,100,0|2
348,68,31287,2,2,B|376:116|348:164,1,100,0|2
00:32:203 (4) - If fixed above, copy/paste slider and Ctrl+H (also remove the whistle at the end of the slider). Now place this slider at
00:36:782 (1) - Inconsistent Spacing!
00:37:240 (2) - Blanklet this slider better! To fix this, just simply move this slider at x:476 y:148.
00:38:614 (3,4,5) - Fix spacing for these patterns. I'm assuming you are using 1.0x spacing here.
00:48:688 (1,2,3) - Try moving the pattern at x:440 y:452 to give at at that symmetical effect!
00:51:893 (2) - Sloppy wavy slider. Make it cleaner a bit. Also, inconsistent spacing at 00:51:893 (2,3).

I'll stop modding this difficulty from here. There's just too many spacing inconsistencies here. Fix that! Remember to use AIMod to detect those stuff.

Normal
-> Personally, I'm not much of a fan on using low spacing. It just looks strange to me.[/b]

-> 00:00:606 - 00:12:970: Hmm... no hitsounds in this part? It feels a bit empty imo. I recommend adding some soft whistles here (preferably where you can hear the piano chords). It would sound better!
00:11:596 (1) - Kind of continuing from last mod here. Try adding a finish (or both whistle and finish) at the beginning of this slider.
00:12:283 (2,3) - Add finish (or both whistle and finish) here as well.
00:30:371 (1,2,3,4) - 1.3x Spacing would work better for this combo, since the blanklet is more visible and more appealing.
00:33:576 (1) - A whistle here sounds better imo.
00:35:179 (3,4) - Try swtiching the slider and circle around. The notes could match the music better if you make 00:35:179 (3) a 1/1 slider instead and add a circle at 00:35:866 (4) stacking that circle with the slider end. Similar to what you did at 00:30:371 (1,2,3,4).
00:37:240 (6) - Hmm... I would suggest adding a circle here to emphasize the piano chords. If you prefer, you can also try adding a reverse arrow on the slider at 00:36:782 (5) instead.
00:38:614 (1,2,3) - Strange spacing here. Re-arrange the notes a bit.
00:49:833 (5,6) - Spacing.

I'll stop modding this difficulty from here. A few spacing inconsistencies here, but not as bad as the easy difficulty. Also, I don't prefer using 0.8x spacing just saying!

Mitsuneko's Hard
-> For better difficulty spread purposes, I recommend to reduce the Overall Difficulty to 5.[/b]
00:12:283 (1) - A whistle here doesn't sound bad. You can still hear the piano chords here.
00:34:263 (2) - Make this slider straight. A slight curve doesn;t look too nescessary.
00:44:567 (1) - It seems like you added the finish on the whole slider by accident. :P Remove the finish and add it on the slider head.
00:48:230 (1) - Just a suggestion: Try adding a whistle at the slider head to emphasize the piano chords.
00:51:893 (1) - If fix above, add a whistle at this slider head. Also add the whistles to the following slider heads: 00:52:580 (2), 00:53:725 (5), 00:54:412 (1), and 00:55:099 (2).
00:56:244 (5) - Silmliar to above, but add whistle at both the start and the end of this slider. (If fixed above of course)
01:18:911 (5) - Add a clap at the beginning of slider to match the drums.
01:19:827 (7) - Also, add a clap here to match the drums. Or better yet, add both the clap and the whistle since you can hear a high-pitched melody in this part. This helps emphasize this effect.
01:22:575 (5) - Add a clap at the beginning of slider as well, to match the drums.
01:23:490 (7) - Similar to 01:19:827 (7), you can hear a higher pitch here. Try adding both the clap and the whistle at the beginning and the end of this slider, but not at the reverse arrow. Only add whistle for the reverse arrow.
01:24:864 (2) - Adding a whistle at the beginning of slider doesn;t sound too bad as well. It matches with that high pitched melody.
01:29:672 (2) - Add a clap on this circle, since you can hear a drum here.
01:31:046 (6) - You could try adding a finish (leaving the clap) at the slider head. You can hear a finish here.
01:41:350 (5) - Adding a whistle at the slider head doesn't sound too bad.
01:43:181 (1) - If fixed above, add a whistle at the slider head as well. Also add whistle at 01:45:013 (5) at the beginning.

-> Pretty nice difficulty overall. Just a few minor parts here and there.

Hard
00:02:437 (4) - Try adding a whistle at the beginning of this slider.
00:03:124 (5) - Add whistle.
00:05:414 (2) - Remove this whistle. Instead, try putting the whistle at 00:05:643 (3) at the slider head.
00:07:245 (1) - Try adding this whistle at the slider end.
00:08:161 (1) - ^
00:09:535 (3) - ^
00:11:596 (1) - Add a finish or a whistle here.
00:12:054 (2) - ^ but at the end if this slider XD.
00:30:371 (1,2) - Make these sliders symmertical.
00:34:950 (4) - Make this slider blamklet with slider 3.
00:37:011 (2) - Move this circle at x:144 y:176, so it can follow the spacing.
00:38:614 (1,2) - Move these notes at x:500 y:308. Your spacing is off.
00:44:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Fix the spacing!
00:48:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

I'll stop modding this difficulty from here. A few spacing inconsistencies here, but not as bad as the easy difficulty. Also, I don't prefer using 0.8x spacing just saying!

ktgster's Insane
-> This difficulty is already good! (I'm serious) No need to mod this difficulty. I do recommend Overall Difficulty 7 though. Then again, with the slow streams and all, maybe it's better to just leave it as it is.

I could mod longer, but I would flood this thread XD. Anyways, that should be it for now! Good Luck!
those
3,136 posts
Joined November 2010
those
Have the above mods been addressed?
BeatofIke
4,172 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Miracle Lotus is banned!

Welcome back Lotus! :D
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Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow

BeatofIke wrote:

Miracle Lotus is banned!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!1 :(
Miracle Lotus
Topic Starter
Miracle Lotus
Time to revive this map :3

Edit: BeatofIke's mods are applied.
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
:3 TAG is :Sun Rainbow Sun_Rainbow Don't only Rainbow plz
RLC
Elite Mapper
1,006 posts
Joined August 2011
RLC
ircstuff
23:57 RLC: okkkk
23:57 *RLC is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/153116 Rita - Michi no Saki, Sora no Mukou (Short Ver.) [Normal]]
23:57 Miracle Lotus: yay
23:57 RLC: 00:36:782 (5) - this slider end is unsnapped lol
23:57 RLC: it may be best to just make it 1/2
23:58 RLC: even if the vocal lasts a tiny bit longer
23:58 Miracle Lotus:  Done
23:59 RLC: 01:04:944 (4) - 
23:59 RLC: i know you're following the vocal here, but this slider is really weird to hit
00:00 RLC: consider moving it back by 1/2 so that it starts with the measure
00:00 RLC: you won't be following the vocals exactly if you do that
00:00 RLC: but it's more intuitive
00:00 Miracle Lotus: alright
00:01 Miracle Lotus: But then I'd have to fix up the spacing
00:01 Miracle Lotus: again
00:01 RLC: hm yeah
00:01 RLC: ;;
00:01 RLC: 01:17:308 - here the player only has 1/1 to readjust their aim after the spinner, which may be pretty harsh in a Normal
00:02 Miracle Lotus: the distance snap
00:02 Miracle Lotus: just makes the note stick
00:02 Miracle Lotus: for some reason
00:02 RLC: which note?
00:02 Miracle Lotus: http://puu.sh/24Xc1
00:03 Miracle Lotus: Is it normal that it stick like that
00:03 RLC: no idea
00:03 RLC: what do you mean by stick
00:03 Miracle Lotus: stickin onto another note
00:03 Miracle Lotus: sticking*
00:03 RLC: oh overlapping?
00:03 RLC: overlapping should be fine
00:04 Miracle Lotus: you could say that
00:04 RLC: 01:17:537 - as for this spinner here
00:04 RLC: you could try doing what starry did in Easy
00:04 RLC: it gives the player 2/1 to readjust aim
00:05 RLC: that's really all i can say for the Normal since i can't map Normals well myself ;;
00:05 *RLC is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/152940 Rita - Michi no Saki, Sora no Mukou (Short Ver.) [Hard]]
00:05 RLC: on to your hard
00:06 RLC: 00:03:124 (5,6,7,8,9) - this is pretty hard for such a relaxed intro
00:06 RLC: use a few sliders instead
00:07 RLC: nazi: 00:38:842 (2,3,4) - isn't perfectly spaced
00:07 RLC: (gap between 2 and 3 is larger than between 3 and 4)
00:07 RLC: 00:40:903 (1) - end this spinner 1/1 earlier? (on the measure)
00:08 RLC: it sounds better
00:08 RLC: or, 1/2 later
00:08 RLC: (so, 00:42:735 -  or 00:43:422 - is what i'm suggesting)
00:10 RLC: right now, for the slider 00:57:160 (5) - , you have a strange rhythm that requires you to silence the repeat
00:10 RLC: what if you tried:
00:10 RLC: http://puu.sh/24Xlm (repositioning nearby notes as necessary)
00:10 RLC: this no longer requires you to silence the repeat, as it falls on something in the music
00:12 RLC: ok that's all i can find in your diffs
00:18 Miracle Lotus: So I'll update the map
00:18 Miracle Lotus: Tell me what you think
00:18 Miracle Lotus: If you really want to that is
00:18 RLC: o ok
00:18 RLC: did you update
00:18 Miracle Lotus: updating now
00:19 RLC: ok
00:19 Miracle Lotus: updated
00:19 RLC: alright
00:19 RLC: oh also
00:19 RLC: 00:33:576 (1) - is this one note NC really necessary lol
00:20 Miracle Lotus: what diff
00:20 RLC: normal
00:20 Miracle Lotus: lol
00:21 RLC: in Hard
00:21 RLC: 00:57:846 - you can remove these two green lines here lol
00:21 RLC: they're not necessary anymore
BounceBabe
1,626 posts
Joined October 2010
BounceBabe
Hi, from the Queue!

General

Picture "216001.jpg" should also have size 800x600 like the others.

Easy

00:11:596 (1) - Remove unnecessary NC
00:30:371 (2,3) - , 00:35:866 (4,1) - , 00:47:314 (5,1) - , 00:50:520 (3,1) - , 00:51:893 (2,3) - , 00:53:267 (3,1) - , 00:56:015 (3,4,5) - , 01:09:295 (5,1) - , 01:23:948 (1,2) - , 01:32:191 (1,2) - , Spacing change, make spacing consistent
00:53:267 (3,1) - Broken spacing
00:56:015 (3,4) - , 00:56:473 (4,5) - ^
00:58:762 (1,2) - Reverse NC to match the beat at white tick
01:23:948 (1,2) - Reverse NC to match vocal

Normal

00:04:269 (6,1) - Reverse NC to match vocal
00:12:741 - Add circle for better transition and vocal
00:45:025 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is all in one area, move some stuff a little away
00:50:291 (6,1) - Spacing
01:06:318 (1,2) - ^
01:18:911 (1,2) - Spacing compared to 01:19:598 (3,4) - is similar, the first one 1 - 2 is broken
01:23:261 (3,4) - Spacing
01:24:177 (1,2) - Remove NC, not needed
01:26:696 (2,3,4) - Compare spacing, fix this
01:35:854 (6,1) - Reverse NC to match vocal
01:50:508 - Extend spinner to match the ending kiai time

Guest Hard

00:06:788 (4,5,6) - Spacing
00:30:600 (2,3) - ^, you should keep it consistent, the jump doesnt fit and the song is quiet
01:22:002 - Add circle, would fit
01:32:992 - ^

Hard

Spacing is really broken, go through the whole map with one distance spacing and fix spacing

00:04:040 (6) - Not stacked properly
00:10:222 (4,5) - Not symmetric
00:22:128 (1,2,3,4) - Broken spacing
00:30:829 (1) - Remove NC, combo spam
00:35:866 (1,3) - Reverse NC, still part of pattern and to match vocal
00:38:614 (1) - Remove NC
00:44:109 (1,2) - Spacing
00:51:435 (7,1) - Reverse NC
00:58:762 (1,2,3) - Spacing
01:01:510 (3,4) - ^
01:08:150 (4,5) - ^
01:11:355 (3,4,5) - ^
01:18:911 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:21:201 (9,1) - Reverse NC
01:22:346 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing
01:26:238 (2,3) - ^
01:34:023 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:35:854 (6,1) - Reverse NC
01:38:831 (3,1) - Spacing
01:41:121 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - ^

01:50:508 - Map has to end at the same point as the previous once

https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria "Your difficulties should all end at the same spot."

Insane

00:32:203 (5,1) - Spacing
01:13:874 (1) - Remove NC
01:30:130 (1,1,1,1) - Combo spam, remove the last 3, or give me a good reason to keep it and not just "It fits"

01:50:508 - Map has to end at the same point as the previous once

https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria "Your difficulties should all end at the same spot."

Either you map the other diffs done or you delete some parts on Hard and Insane.

GL
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let's mod :3

[Easy]

00:34:034 (2) - spacing, i suggest you something like this http://puu.sh/28V3Y
00:48:688 (1) - spacing
00:51:435 (1) - again, spacing
00:57:389 (5) - fixed slider placement:
352,184,57389,2,0,B|416:184|428:248|416:312|348:312,1,200,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:00:136 (3) - 1 grid right
01:26:238 (3,4,5,6) - please keep symmetry, like this: http://puu.sh/28VtK
01:29:444 (1) - ...and still spacing

else is okay

[Normal]

01:10:440 (1) - last square of this slider: 1 grid down

else is okay

[Mitsuneko's Hard]

OD 5

00:30:600 (2) - why this random jump? i suggest you to move this note here: http://puu.sh/28VPF, it keeps consistency imho

else is okay

[Hard]

OD and HD 5

00:17:091 (1) - 1st square of the slider: 1 grid right
00:18:923 (4) - same but left
01:21:201 (9) - entire slider: 1 grid left, right square: 1 grid down

else is okay

[RLC]

just low the general volume, it cover the music


がんばって！
Miracle Lotus
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Miracle Lotus
Applied most fixes, thank you!
those
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those
[General]
  1. Easy, Normal, and Hard have lots of places were spacing is very, very broken. Run through the diffs and select an ideal spacing(s) for each, and reposition the objects please.
  2. T_BG.jpg is now unnecessary, please remove it. Also up to you if you want to remove video from Taiko, but I recommend it.
[RLC]
  1. Great to see you're using 3/4 sliders correctly. However, 01:41:808 (2,3) - breaks consistency with the rest of the map, the rhythm should be like the rest.
Miracle Lotus
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Miracle Lotus

those wrote:

[General]
  1. Easy, Normal, and Hard have lots of places were spacing is very, very broken. Run through the diffs and select an ideal spacing(s) for each, and reposition the objects please.
  2. T_BG.jpg is now unnecessary, please remove it. Also up to you if you want to remove video from Taiko, but I recommend it.
[RLC]
  1. Great to see you're using 3/4 sliders correctly. However, 01:41:808 (2,3) - breaks consistency with the rest of the map, the rhythm should be like the rest.
Hard is untouched, I find the spacing appropriate.
Everything in Easy and Normal should be resolved.
RLC
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hi http://puu.sh/29s3Y changed
also removed retarded slowslider at end because it was screwing with everybody on DT
Faust
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Easy & Normal are fine.

Mitsuneko's Hard:

- 00:06:788 (4,5,6) - Looks awkward at a glance, since you're conforming to distance snapping which unfortunately happens to put some obscuring over (5).

Try this:
SPOILER

- 00:11:138 (6) - Remake this slider, perhaps ? Here are the points:
SPOILER

- 00:33:462 - From here onwards, I have a remapping suggestion you could consider keeping.

SPOILER

- 00:35:294 - As for this:
SPOILER

Timeline:
SPOILER

- 00:37:927 (5) - Seems weird to me why you'd just choose to use a rather linear slider all of a sudden.

- 00:53:725 (5) - x:276 y:296, don't mind the minor spacing increase after that, since it's not an issue.

Overall, I can see the effort put into the presentation in map structure. Not everything goes in a plain single direction like it's spoon-feeding the player.

Anyway, from here on it's just looking and touching up on parts that don't seem to convey a clear alignment to the song, such as at:

- 01:21:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - Advised to remake the slider and tweak the positioning.

Here's what I have in mind:
SPOILER

Hope I'm not putting any unwanted pressure on you here, but mapping is a progressive thing and sometimes things are not apparent now, but will be in the future when you've gained more experience.

Hard:

Don't have any problem with this.
I think even if you're relatively new to mapping and there isn't so much of 'unique' mapping elements/techniques in this, the current flow reflects quite well on the light-heartedness of the song.

It's rather basic, but has the right components and the rhythm is on good foundation.
I think plenty of people will enjoy it as it is.

- 01:38:831 (3) - Here's a suggestion:
SPOILER

On the playfield, it looks something like this:
SPOILER

Sounds pretty good if you ask me, since it 'bumps' nicely to the song.

RLC:

Has the mark of an experienced mapper all over it.
Can very well read your intention.

Get back to me and we can discuss further on anything else that any one of you might have to add.
Miracle Lotus
Topic Starter
Miracle Lotus

Faust wrote:

Easy & Normal are fine.

Mitsuneko's Hard:

- 00:06:788 (4,5,6) - Looks awkward at a glance, since you're conforming to distance snapping which unfortunately happens to put some obscuring over (5).

Try this:
SPOILER

- 00:11:138 (6) - Remake this slider, perhaps ? Here are the points:
SPOILER

- 00:33:462 - From here onwards, I have a remapping suggestion you could consider keeping.

SPOILER

- 00:35:294 - As for this:
SPOILER

Timeline:
SPOILER

- 00:37:927 (5) - Seems weird to me why you'd just choose to use a rather linear slider all of a sudden.

- 00:53:725 (5) - x:276 y:296, don't mind the minor spacing increase after that, since it's not an issue.

Overall, I can see the effort put into the presentation in map structure. Not everything goes in a plain single direction like it's spoon-feeding the player.

Anyway, from here on it's just looking and touching up on parts that don't seem to convey a clear alignment to the song, such as at:

- 01:21:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - Advised to remake the slider and tweak the positioning.

Here's what I have in mind:
SPOILER

Hope I'm not putting any unwanted pressure on you here, but mapping is a progressive thing and sometimes things are not apparent now, but will be in the future when you've gained more experience.

Hard:

Don't have any problem with this.
I think even if you're relatively new to mapping and there isn't so much of 'unique' mapping elements/techniques in this, the current flow reflects quite well on the light-heartedness of the song.

It's rather basic, but has the right components and the rhythm is on good foundation.
I think plenty of people will enjoy it as it is.

- 01:38:831 (3) - Here's a suggestion:
SPOILER

On the playfield, it looks something like this:
SPOILER

Sounds pretty good if you ask me, since it 'bumps' nicely to the song.

RLC:

Has the mark of an experienced mapper all over it.
Can very well read your intention.

Get back to me and we can discuss further on anything else that any one of you might have to add.
Most of it is taken care of.
Thank you.
Faust
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Alright.
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Sweet! :D
Miracle Lotus
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hurrah
Strawberry
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-Title should be 道の先、空の向こう wiki



-After discussing with other staffs and as those said, the taiko background is unnecessary and unrankable now. plz fix it to normal BG.

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once these changed, call me back. :3
Miracle Lotus
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Miracle Lotus

Strawberry wrote:

-Title should be 道の先、空の向こう wiki



-After discussing with other staffs and as those said, the taiko background is unnecessary and unrankable now. plz fix it to normal BG.

------------------------------------------------------
once these changed, call me back. :3
Done.
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Re-bubbled.
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[Starry's Easy]
- 00:25:933 () - IMO the break here is unneeded. It's a Short Ver. anyway. Map this part?
- 00:45:025 -> 00:59:220 - Add claps on the second and fourth white ticks here. (The first bar line being the downbeat - long white line) The lack of claps make it sound empty.
- 01:17:537 -> 01:50:508 - Same as above.
-01:21:659 (2,3,4) - I recommend you avoid using "straight" patterns like this next time you map. They don't look as good as if you make them curve a bit like this.
- 01:55:647 () - Why don't you map to the end of the mp3 as well like [Hard] and [RLC]?

[Normal]
- 00:25:933 () - Same comment as in Easy. IMO the break here is unneeded. It's a Short Ver. anyway. Map this part?
- 00:47:543 (1) - I recommend you placing this somewhere else where it doesn't overlap with the previous combo. It looks messy atm.
- 00:51:664 (2,3) - The blanketing here could have been done better. Try redoing it with the new slider algorithm.
- 00:54:412 (4) - Not properly stacked.
- 00:56:244 (4) - Same as above.
- 01:23:261 (3,4,5,6) - The pattern here looks really messy in play. I suggest changing it to something like this.You may have to rework your next combos to fix the spacing. Code: http://puu.sh/2wb3m
- 00:45:025 -> 00:59:220 - Add claps on the second and fourth white ticks here. (The first bar line being the downbeat - long white line) The lack of claps make it sound empty.
- 01:17:537 -> 01:50:508 - Same as above.
- 01:55:647 () - Why don't you map to the end of the mp3 as well like [Hard] and [RLC]?

[Mitsuneko's Hard]
- 00:25:933 () - Same comment as Normal. IMO the break here is unneeded. It's a Short Ver. anyway. Map this part?
- 01:18:911 (5) - Add clap at the start of slider for hitsound consistency.
- 01:33:107 (4) - Add clap. ^
- 01:55:647 () - Why don't you map to the end of the mp3 as well like [Hard] and [RLC]?

[Hard]
- The difficulty seems to be lacking hitsounds. I recommend adding more. A crude way of hitsounding is adding claps every second and fourth white bar line (The first bar line being the downbeat - long white line) and whistles every third. Or you can copy how RLC hitsounded his difficulty.
- 00:03:124 (5) - This could be blanketed to look better aesthetically like this. You have to adjust the next combos though. Code: http://puu.sh/2wawz
- 00:20:983 (4) - Spacing here is a bit too wide from the rest of the combo.
- 00:22:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The spacing in this combo suddenly went narrower. Make it the same as the previous combos?
- 00:27:623 (3) - Looks unbalanced. I suggest your delete and remake it. The new slider algorithm will make it look balanced.
- 00:30:371 (1,2,3,4) - (4) looks odd IMO. (1) and (2) aren't centered as well. May I suggest using this pattern? Code: http://puu.sh/2waBV
- 00:37:240 (8) - New combo here to be consistent with your combo patterning.
- 00:38:614 (1) - Remove combo here. ^
- 01:11:813 (4) - The spacing sudden lowers here. I suggest you space it out similarly with the rest of the notes in this combo.
- 01:22:346 (1,2) - The overlap between these two don't look that good. I suggest moving them farther apart likethis.
- 01:38:831 (3,1) - The anti-jump here is confusing IMO. Please move (1) further from (3).

[Rainbow's Taiko]
- I highly recommend getting more Taiko mods. One (two if you count this one) isn't enough.
- Please go to the .osu file and set the bg under [Events] to 0,0,"pause-overlay.jpg",0,70. This will move the bg in Taiko so that it won't look odd.
- I suggest you emove the video in this difficulty.
- Can I also recommend using Normal sampleset here? The d soft hitsound sounds very loud.
- 00:31:974 (114,115,116) - kkk here instead. So you can give emphasis to the vocals.
- 00:37:469 (130,131,132,133,134,135) - I would avoid using two triples here since the music is still calm here. Use 1/2's instead until 00:43:651.
- 01:07:921 (252,253,254,255,256) - kkdkd fits the music better here IMO.
- 01:15:591 ()- Add a d here to match with the music.

[RLC]
- Great diff!
- 01:58:293 (1) - The kiai fountain here is unnecessary IMO, but it's up to you if you want to keep it.
Miracle Lotus
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Done.

Fixed what I felt necessary.
NoHitter
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Can you post what changes you made?
Miracle Lotus
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Miracle Lotus

NoHitter wrote:

[Starry's Easy] Mapper inactive, modding for him.
- 00:25:933 () - IMO the break here is unneeded. It's a Short Ver. anyway. Map this part? Unneeded.
- 00:45:025 -> 00:59:220 - Add claps on the second and fourth white ticks here. (The first bar line being the downbeat - long white line) The lack of claps make it sound empty. Don't know what you meant.
- 01:17:537 -> 01:50:508 - Same as above. Don't know what you meant.
-01:21:659 (2,3,4) - I recommend you avoid using "straight" patterns like this next time you map. They don't look as good as if you make them curve a bit like this. Done
- 01:55:647 () - Why don't you map to the end of the mp3 as well like [Hard] and [RLC]? Doesn't have to end in the same point, don't need more mapping beyond this point.

[Normal]
- 00:25:933 () - Same comment as in Easy. IMO the break here is unneeded. It's a Short Ver. anyway. Map this part? Unneeded.
- 00:47:543 (1) - I recommend you placing this somewhere else where it doesn't overlap with the previous combo. It looks messy atm. Fixed.
- 00:51:664 (2,3) - The blanketing here could have been done better. Try redoing it with the new slider algorithm. Fixed.
- 00:54:412 (4) - Not properly stacked. Fixed.
- 00:56:244 (4) - Same as above. Fixed.
- 01:23:261 (3,4,5,6) - The pattern here looks really messy in play. I suggest changing it to something like this.You may have to rework your next combos to fix the spacing. Code: http://puu.sh/2wb3m Fixed.
- 00:45:025 -> 00:59:220 - Add claps on the second and fourth white ticks here. (The first bar line being the downbeat - long white line) The lack of claps make it sound empty. Don't know what you meant.
- 01:17:537 -> 01:50:508 - Same as above. Don't know what you meant.
- 01:55:647 () - Why don't you map to the end of the mp3 as well like [Hard] and [RLC]? Doesn't have to end in the same point, don't need more mapping beyond this point.

[Mitsuneko's Hard] Mapper inactive, modding for him.
- 00:25:933 () - Same comment as Normal. IMO the break here is unneeded. It's a Short Ver. anyway. Map this part? Unneeded.
- 01:18:911 (5) - Add clap at the start of slider for hitsound consistency. Done.
- 01:33:107 (4) - Add clap. ^ Done.
- 01:55:647 () - Why don't you map to the end of the mp3 as well like [Hard] and [RLC]? Unneeded.

[Hard]
- The difficulty seems to be lacking hitsounds. I recommend adding more. A crude way of hitsounding is adding claps every second and fourth white bar line (The first bar line being the downbeat - long white line) and whistles every third. Or you can copy how RLC hitsounded his difficulty. Don't know what you meant.
- 00:03:124 (5) - This could be blanketed to look better aesthetically like this. You have to adjust the next combos though. Code: http://puu.sh/2wawz Unchanged. Gives a better feel.
- 00:20:983 (4) - Spacing here is a bit too wide from the rest of the combo. Unchanged.
- 00:22:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The spacing in this combo suddenly went narrower. Make it the same as the previous combos? Unchanged.
- 00:27:623 (3) - Looks unbalanced. I suggest your delete and remake it. The new slider algorithm will make it look balanced. Fixed.
- 00:30:371 (1,2,3,4) - (4) looks odd IMO. (1) and (2) aren't centered as well. May I suggest using this pattern? Code: http://puu.sh/2waBV Fixed.
- 00:37:240 (8) - New combo here to be consistent with your combo patterning. Fixed.
- 00:38:614 (1) - Remove combo here. ^ Fixed.
- 01:11:813 (4) - The spacing sudden lowers here. I suggest you space it out similarly with the rest of the notes in this combo. Unchanged.
- 01:22:346 (1,2) - The overlap between these two don't look that good. I suggest moving them farther apart likethis. Fixed.
- 01:38:831 (3,1) - The anti-jump here is confusing IMO. Please move (1) further from (3). Changed.
NoHitter
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Sorry if I was a bit unclear about my explanation on those hitsounds.
What I meant was this:


Adding a clap on the 2nd and 4th white lines and USUALLY a whistle on the 3rd is a crude way of hitsounding.
Miracle Lotus
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Done.
RLC
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http://puu.sh/2xFJL removed unnecessary kiai fountain (and fixed a few weird-ish hitsounds) :3
NoHitter
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You removed the Taiko?
Not that I can force you to keep it, but please consider the guest mapper who put effort into mapping it.
If you REALLY want to proceed without the difficulty though, then PM me for a recheck.
NoHitter
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Rainbow's Taiko doesn't have the Japanese title.
RLC has the Japanese title messed up.



Fix and I'll rebubble.

Edit: Rebubbled!
Last edited by NoHitter , edited 1 time in total.
Miracle Lotus
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Done.
spboxer3
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※for nextBAT(or MAT) and mapper:
since I have midterm (4/25~5/1) I don't have much time to recheck this map, that's why I'm just notice it not popped ;w;

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
 Black is just suggestion.

general

  1. tags: ktgster(should be removed) RLC(should be added) in Rainbow's Taiko?
  2. video: umm, why "RLC" doesn't have video offset?

Normal

  1. 01:23:719 (4,5,6) - a kinda confuse for player (spacing issue), btw... 01:24:635 (6,1,2,3) - It's a bit mess for your pattern. for: 01:23:261 (3,4) - you used spacing x0.8 here, 01:24:177 (5,6) - x0.67, 01:26:009 (1,2) - x3.34 o.O?

Rainbow's Taiko

  1. disable letterbox in Taiko diff
GL~
Miracle Lotus
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Done.
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again? >_>
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hao to get this ranked
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