1. Lunatic (5 stars, 555 notes)
2. SuzumiyaSama's Hard (4.92 stars, 370 notes)
3. thou's Easy (2.39 stars, 145 notes)
4. Twi's Normal (3.72 stars, 190 notes)

Hello wrote:

第一次给人mod图啊>///<
没经验什么的，凑合看吧


SuzumiyaSama's Hard
00:09:601 变速滑条的话还是new combo一下吧 fixed
00:54:431(4) new combo放在这里比较好吧fixed
01:45:397 这里多放了个note喂！沒有啊0.0


Lunatic
00:27:925 改成4分拍怎么样 fixed
00:32:612 ^
00:43:522 ^
00:52:385 ^ 這幾個地方放3連都不合適啊尤其是上面2个=_=
01:11:476 这里应该是4分拍接2分拍吧=_=? 這裡沒問題啊
01:19:658 加一个note听起来比较舒服 排得太滿了而且那裡是跟vocal的
01:55:198 改成4分拍接拉条style呗？這地方不想放stream啊w
02:00:567 这里来个3连？^
02:11:476 这里也来4分接拉条怎么样？fix♂ed


So happy
rank是要删掉的吧。。我就不mod了

SuzumiyaSama's Insane
坑了快填！ 這個diff已經改成SuzumiyaSama's Hard了噢w 所以可以刪掉了

Hello wrote:

baka星神 你test一下就看出来了 01:45:397(3) 这里拉条头和一个note重叠了喂~

Hello wrote:

01:11:476(4,5,6) 你放50%速度 时间轴上把5,6提前一个4分拍试试？我感觉这样更符合鼓点的节奏呀

1. 00:34:147 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/282348
2. 00:35:510 (1) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot328-2.jpg

1. 00:09:601 (1,3) - 减速很难看出...
2. 01:43:692 (1,1,2,1,2,1) - 这什么..

1. 怎么这么鬼畜
2. 00:05:851 (2) - 拉到边上 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/282337
3. 00:24:601 (1,2) - 这种怎么打0.0
4. 01:00:993 (7,8) - 往右吧这里.. 都往左边不舒服
5. 01:43:181 (5) - new combo
6. 01:43:692 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这什么。。。
7. ..slider jump好多 很难连上啊...

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

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1. 00:34:147 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/282348
2. 00:35:510 (1) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot328-2.jpg
   fixed(其實改這2個有什麽不同嗎T T)

H

1. 00:09:601 (1,3) - 减速很难看出... 這個那麼短就算沒反應過來也斷不了的啦>_>
2. 01:43:692 (1,1,2,1,2,1) - 这什么..

L

1. 怎么这么鬼畜
2. 00:05:851 (2) - 拉到边上 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/282337 fixed
3. 00:24:601 (1,2) - 这种怎么打0.0 不是隨手的嗎0.0
4. 01:00:993 (7,8) - 往右吧这里.. 都往左边不舒服 ok
5. 01:43:181 (5) - new combo fixed
6. 01:43:692 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这什么。。。
7. ..slider jump好多 很难连上啊...

that's all

Good luck~

Strawberry wrote:

[Lunatic]
01:06:448 (4) - 提前1/4拍？
01:17:442 (4) - ^ QAQ 這兩個就不改了 咦 原來我已經改了orz 我的智商...
01:07:556 (5,6) - 好丑
01:31:419 (1,2,3,4) - ^ fixed
01:37:556 (3,4) - 感觉这两个调换一下位置比较好 fixed
01:43:692 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这个大花有点坑 我觉得01:44:033 (2,3,4,5) - 可以摆的在外点 不要和01:45:056 (1,2,3,4) - ds一样比较好？ 這個梗我不想改>///< 抱歉
01:59:885 - add a note 試了下感覺加note有點多餘啊QAQ
02:02:442 (6) - ctrl+r fixed

[SuzumiyaSama's Hard]
00:49:147 (2) - →1？
01:44:544 (1,2) - 对调位置
02:04:147 - add a note？
02:23:237 (6,7,8) - / .\
all fixed

[Normal]
如果前面那么长的break的话 不如直接从00:25:965 - 开始 省的每次打还要等那么久
感觉这个normal有点难。。。 中
00:51:573 - 这里break的不太自然
01:15:056 (3,4) - 这样摆感觉很容易让新人误读
01:39:260 (4) - 这里不多出那1/2感觉也没差;D fixed
02:17:783 (3,3,4) - ^ 這個有甚麼問題嗎QAQ

[Easy]
开头的问题和Normal差不多 中
感觉easy的话不要做那么多slider比较好。。(其實我覺得slider不是比circle容易嗎? slider拖完都是300 circle的話...

GOOD LUCK
壮哉我大星神 >///<

Melt wrote:

你好 我来骗kd了

General
fine

Easy
00:29:033(1)这个行么 http://puu.sh/rz7t fixed
00:46:249(2)移到00:46:419 fixed
00:47:783(1)这种快速折返滑条easy里还是少用吧 不知道改甚麼 還是保留好了> <
00:51:703(1)移到00:51:874 fixed
00:54:431(1)同上向后移 fixed

Normal
01:54:090(8)finish fixed
02:09:601(4)finish fixed
02:16:675 多余的绿线（？ 這個是改變slidertick的聲音的啦 你把綠線去了就會發現少了個鼓點

SuzumiyaSama's Hard
00:04:828(1)remove nc fixed
00:05:169(2)nc ..............................-. 怎麼吐槽
01:15:056(6)这个怎么样 http://puu.sh/rzda fixed

Lunatic
01:13:181 多余的绿线（？
01:13:522 ^
01:37:556(3,4,5)前两个距离小点吧
all fixed
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S h i o n wrote:

Hi~

Easy
不细mod了，还OK。
但是，总的来说，感觉节奏断断续续的，是跟着vocal/音乐没错，但对于新手来说一个连贯的节奏大概会比较容易点。

Normal
也还不错，排版上可以更美观些。少些横平竖直~

Guest's Hard
00:05:851 (2) - spacing
00:43:010 (4) - NC?
00:54:431 (1) - RNC. 然后在下一个slider + NC
01:10:283 (5) - NC
01:20:510 (5) - NC

Lunatic
AR9毫无人性... 因为节奏和摆位都不是那么的工整，很多地方还是很random的。太高AR实在反应不过来T.T

00:07:897 (6) - 何不Ctrl+R?
00:57:158 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 在4和6 NC ?
01:32:868 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - 这一小段的音效呢= =
01:44:033 (2) - NC
01:56:647 (3,4,5,6) - 排法有点丑啊~
02:08:748 (2) - spacing

这个diff总体看下来:
1) 有些地方感觉不需要跳那么厉害，在一些重点音有连贯性的jump下就比较好了，不然就会觉得比较没有重点。
比如说，00:47:783 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个是明显的重音。那么跳刚刚好，但是之前的00:46:419 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 却是同样幅度的jump。如果不跳或者小幅度些会不会比较好点~?
01:00:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 同上，重点音在01:01:419 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
2) 有些1/4slider出现的很突然... 个人觉得慎用...

加油吧~

Twice wrote:

AE姥爷碉堡

AngelEyE wrote:

:( 啊抱歉QAQ我来晚了
[General]
每个难度的kiai不是统一的 所有难度kiai部分完全统一是rank所必须的 注意1分钟之内尽量只放1个kiai哦 这也是rank规则

[Easy]><基本都改了 折返slider我再想想
beat snap divisor 改成1/2
00:25:965 (1) - 这种多折返滑条easy尽可能少出现 新手不容易判断折返次数
00:32:101 (2) - 换成这种节奏 00:32:612 - 这个finish要保留 排列不用管

SPOILER

00:35:510 (1) - 换换吧 尽量最多一次折返哦 后面还有很多 不过看自己的想法咯
00:36:874 (1) - 和00:47:783 (1) - 在音乐里是同样的节奏 作为easy diff 下不同的拍子有点太为难新手了
00:53:919 (2) - 换成这样的节奏 排列不用管

SPOILER

00:57:328 (1,2) - 试试看换成这回总节奏又简单又悦耳 不过看你自己咯

SPOILER

其实easy的话这些2折返滑条 3折返滑条 新手都很难在短时间内判断折返次数容易miss 回忆下自己刚玩osu的时候的情形吧= -

[Normal]全改
同样是请把beat snap divisor 调整到1/2
关于1.3X加速 有点不太适合在normal中出现啊对新手来说会很难哦
前后形状差不多的滑条可以用复制的 滑条再统一一点会很好看 不过这个关系不大 举一个例子01:17:783 (4) - 这个就可以用01:11:647 (2) - 复制过去再调整下方向角度位置
然后整体上还不错咯

[SuzumiyaSama's Hard] 全改
这个难度整体上不错喔
00:16:078 (1) - 这个note的clap意义何在呢= -
01:13:351 (8,1) - 把1的finish放到8上 8的clap不要了
01:20:510 (1,2,3) - 这三个字重音都用音量等大的同一种音效会比较带感哦
02:15:056 (6,7) - ^
02:25:965 (1,2) - ^

[Lunatic]
不得不说是神map =A=
00:32:612 (5) - 来个nc打起来顺 ，顺便和00:37:726 (1) - 统一起来w QAQ 沒有改 其他都改了
00:48:635 (5,1) - nc位置交换
01:17:101 (3,4,5) - 我1PC的时候在这里断了 中间那个note放个whistle 强调一下？
这种图风我喜欢哦- -


加油争取rank =v=
渣mod请多包涵=v=

1. 找了一下原曲訊息:
   
   
2. 綜上圖，由於Title的Wo Ai Ni在原文是個奇葩(最後那個字肯定是稱吧…是稱吧!)，可以考慮跟英文：Down in One Hit * Me! (英文也不見得多好啊混蛋!)
3. 補上Tags: Forestpireo T*GIRLS.01 Yukitsuki Alice (這寫分別是: 社團名稱, CD名字和編曲者)
4. 至於Storyboard…首先歌詞的白色太明顯了，其次你確定用這BG+這顏色的字能看的清楚? 建議重制一遍歌詞圖片

SPOILER

[Easy]

00:31:419 (1,2,3) - 雖說挑new combo都是折翼天使, 不過這邊打著讀不清楚你的節奏…(1)刪new combo, (2)new combo
00:33:294 (1) - 延長1/2拍對上vocal
00:34:999 (3) - 這一個Note並沒有踩中任何東西…後移1/2拍 (移動後需修正間距)
00:36:874 (2) - 感覺前幾小節的Finish下的挺勤, 唯獨這邊有明顯的背景音支持下, 卻沒有Finish…?
00:39:431 (2) - 延長1/2拍對上vocal
00:40:794 (2) - 延長1/2拍對上鼓點
00:42:669 (4) - 再度什麼都沒有踩中, 後移1/2拍 (同需修正間距)
00:44:203 (2) - 建議換成一個和00:43:010 (1) - 對應的slider，這裡1拍前的Splash音色明顯蓋過Vocal之下, 依然單獨放一個踩紅線的circle有點不理智

00:48:635 (1) - :\ 換成這樣子, slider結尾補Finish, vocal可以忽略沒有關係


00:56:647 - 不是太理解為什麼這邊要空出1/2拍, 弄成和00:53:919 (2) - 一樣其實挺好的
01:00:056 (1), 01:02:783 (1), 01:05:510 (1) - 看見這三個我震精了…! 三個位置節奏統一吧, 看第一個是1/1折返, 第二是3/4, 第三個1/1 hhhhh
01:06:874 (1) - 流れ落ち…咦沒有てく!? 建議加一個1/1拍slider在中間: (需要修間距)
http://puu.sh/v8DT

01:10:965 (1), 01:13:692 (1), 01:16:419 (1,2) - 同之前那一條
01:17:783 (1,2) - 為什麼這邊反而跟對了!
01:35:340 (1) - 建議前移1/2拍後改成這樣: (需要修間距)


01:36:362 (3,4) - 一起後移1/2拍 (需要修間距)
01:47:953 (4) - 後移1/2

後面1/3部份目測有我之前提過的…交給你自己檢查了!

節奏方面的意思可能給的比較主觀一些, 但是這個Easy滿地都是紅線起手slider/circle怎麼打
Test的時候至少確定Easy可以全部按準, 不是靠著低OD混過去的
自己都打不動, 新手面對這個Easy時該怎麼辦?

1. 歌曲不豐富的情況下使用了大量連打
2. 不規則+非對應歌曲的jump

1. Easy和Normal前面的空白段太长了点……一般来说建议所有难度用同样的开始/结束点，所以考虑map上空白的部分吧，否则会有故意偷懒的嫌疑。

1. Hitsounds的音量太低了，这个曲子这么欢快建议用100%的volumn否则感觉太软。
2. 00:34:999 (3) - 这种节奏对于Easy来说太难按了
3. 呃。。好吧，我的建议像这种Vocal很乱的曲子Easy就别跟Vocal了，用比较固定的节奏跟着背景旋律会舒服很多。不过说回来，这曲子Map有难度的。像00:48:635 - 之类音乐上有clap你确没有（或者说没法）下节奏的地方之类的很多……
4. 顺着白线试试看用Normal音效做下来？虽然节奏会很无聊但是感觉至少比现在这种左一下右一下的凌乱节奏会好多了……
5. 另外Easy难度的combo长度最好不要超过6个
6. 所以综上所述，这个diff估计得整个重做一下…………

1. 音量建议同Easy，另外Finish用太多了太吵……
2. 00:30:396 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这种真的不好看…………
3. 别的没什么太多要说的，把overuse的finish拿掉，然后大体上节奏和排版。。都建议重做……多参考一下Guest的Hard吧～

1. 00:54:431 (4) - 考虑挪到去和后面(1)的头部叠，并且让下一组NC从这里开始？(同00:57:158 (1) - ）
2. 01:36:874 (6) - 这里用2个1/4的折返感觉比1/2折返好听
3. 01:43:692 (1,1,2,1,2) - 这里太容易造成误导了……建议用stack吧，2个2个一组，毕竟是Hard难度。
4. 01:48:806 (3) - 考虑删掉？
5. 01:59:885 (1) - 同建议删掉
6. 02:17:612 (4) - 这个跳的比较坑人
7. 02:18:465 (6,7) - 节奏没变的情况下突然减速有些意义不明
8. 02:20:340 (4) - 又一个坑人跳，Hard就善良点吧。
9. 02:27:328 - 这个finish就这么放弃了么？加一个note叠在(2)的尾巴上吧。

1. 00:06:959 (2,3,4) - 建议用红线三连
2. 00:10:368 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - 同上，这些都是看不到用白线三连的理由
3. 00:13:692 (1,2) - 这里应该是一个slider而不是两个
4. 00:16:419 (1,2,3) - 很难受的白线三连，后面重复的不说了总是不建议用。
5. 00:24:601 (1,2) - 一个slider就好
6. 00:38:408 (3,4,5) - 因为前面乱用白线三连导致这里节奏错位了……
7. 00:49:147 - 我觉得从这开始应该把速度减下来，毕竟是个变奏段
8. 后面部分建议类似就不再一遍遍来回说了，和E/N相比质量要好的多，但是乱放三连实在不是个好习惯。另外我觉得这个难度有Overmap的感觉，真的这曲子感觉并不适合做这么难。“为了难而故意做难”不是好的mapping态度。

• [Lunatic]
  
  略微打了几批西

1. 00:05:169 (4) - 试试1.5xBPM
2. 01:45:397 (3) - 这个删了后把 01:45:567 (4) - 放到3的位置上如何？
3. 02:05:169 (1) - 这个第一次打我没读清 Distance Spacing 0.3x Ctrl对齐？

• [General]
  Fine.
  Feel that hitsound was so prooooo^^

• [thou's Easy]

1. AR+1

• [Twi's Normal]

1. AR+2
2. 01:37:556 (1) - 改为1/2短Slider
   

• [SuzumiyaSama's Hard]

1. 02:09:175 (4) - 改为单点

• [Lunatic]

1. 01:35:340 (5) - 改成单点打起来会舒服点？
2. 01:42:328 (1,2,3,4) - 改成左右来回的中跳？ 不过现在这样我觉得还不错
   
3. 02:05:339 (2,3,1) - 加上前面那个Slider 这边是个5连的节奏 不开DS开GS往左边移一格或者DS1.2 CTRL横对齐Slider的尾巴 会比较容易让人混出5连 好打也美观
4. 01:59:544 (5,6) - 使用45度角 然后 01:59:885 (1,2,3) - CTRL都斜对齐 我每次打这里都会出100 =w=
5. 02:26:987 (4) - 这个地方可以想办法搞出点花样来 比如:SVx1.5 做一个有特色的1/2长度单向slider 最后的绿线放单点/ 1/8长度的来回Slider到红线加绿线单点

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Modding Queue
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[Easy]
00:35:540 (1) - 结尾与前面的slider略重复已修改
00:38:267 (1,2) - 不觉得中间突的厉害不好看么.-.很难看么？
00:44:745 (2) - ^^
01:21:563 (2) - ^^
02:27:017 (2) - 内容不是对称的 slider也不要直接对称比较好没有修改

SPOILER

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Modding Queue
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[General]
这图重复传了2次
之前有张在坟里 如果不打算重复利用的话可以考虑删掉那个旧的 那張是full ver 雖然巨爛
你确定jpg上面写的不是“我爱cheng”？
另外歌词的话 效果不同没问题 可是副歌部分的歌词太没存在感了...高潮部分都有存在感爆表的发光效果..


[Easy]
00:35:540 (1) - 结尾与前面的slider略重复
00:38:267 (1,2) - 不觉得中间突的厉害不好看么.-.
00:44:745 (2) - ^
01:21:563 (2) - ^
02:27:017 (2) - 内容不是对称的 slider也不要直接对称比较好

SPOILER

[Normal]
00:32:472 (1,2) - 删掉1 把2提到前面的红线 好


[Hard]
00:09:631 (1,2,3) - 这里放慢意义不明啊... lol
00:41:677 (2,3) - 可以放的更外侧点 内侧会被当成slider只有一个来回 好
00:45:427 (1) - jump hard還是人性點
00:59:745 (1) - ^
01:06:563 (4) - 之前有物体半遮挡 改
01:51:052 (1) - ^ 改
02:03:154 (3) - ^ 這個算了/.\
01:08:779 (2) - 加个note 好
01:09:461 (4) - ^ 好
01:49:006 (3) - spacing ?怎么0.7x 改
02:23:267 (6,7,8) - 这里根本不好听嘛=-= /.\這個還行的樣子


[Insane]
00:58:892 (2) - 搞成2个slider？ lol 我喜歡現在這樣
01:02:642 (6) - add a note 太滿了..
01:21:904 (5) - ^ 好
02:07:500 (3) - 换成2个circle 好
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Great Mapset !
嵌了中文歌词好 Good luck

eLtigreXXx wrote:

request from HydeSama & tigreXXx's Loli-nyan modding queue ~ ~

only suggestions

normal

00:38:267 (1) aesthetic http://puu.sh/ykP3 ok
00:39:631 (3) ^ ok
01:00:086 (1) finish ?
01:40:313 (5) new combo ?
01:13:722 (4) ^ ok
01:19:177 (4) ^ ok
00:38:267 (1)

hard
00:49:177 (2) finish ?
HP 6

lunatic
00:16:108 (5) finish ok

Katty Pie wrote:

hi from my mod Q ^.^


Easy

00:04:177 - 00:25:995 - I advise maped this interval too bcz 16.1% from the beginning it is too much

HD +1 AR -1Try but no change

1. Looks fine.

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. HP+1 to fit with overall difficulty's setting.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:43:552 (1) - For me, I would perfer to stop the slider at 00:44:063 - with a finish (to fit with instrument) and then put a note at 00:44:404 - . This sounds better to me.
   2. 01:04:177 (2) - The rhythm sounds weird here. The main reason is the reverse of the slider doesn't fit the music very well. Would you make another rhythmic pattern?
   3. 02:20:540 (2) - ^Same.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:33:836 (2,3) - Place a whistle on (2)- and then remove the whistle on the beginning of (3)- to fit with music.
   2. 00:35:199 (4) - Just add a whistle here to fit with music.
   3. 01:36:904 (5) - A clap here?
   4. 01:42:358 (1) - Add a whistle at the beginning of the slider and the end of the slider respectively?
   5. 02:27:017 (2) - Add a whistle at the beginning of the slider.

1. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 00:42:358 (6) - (bad gameplay) Would you change a position of this slider or remake the pattern? Because the comboburst of slider (6)- cover the slider path and slider tick of 00:43:552 (2) - which is not recommended in normal.
      
      Here.

      
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 01:43:722 (1,2,3,4) - I'm afraid that these slider are too difficult for newbie and too difficult compare to the whole difficulty. Would you simplify some of the 1/2 slider?
   2. 01:57:358 (1,2,3) - A bit nazi here but the spacing between 01:57:358 (1,2,3) - are inconsistent. You should use distance snap to snap it again.
   3. 02:06:904 (3,4,1) - ^Same.
   4. 02:09:631 (3) - I strongly recommend to reduce the spacing here. We should consider the ability of newbie. The spacing here seems too huge for them.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:26:677 (2) - Add a clap at the end of the slider to fit with instrunment.
   2. 00:32:642 (1) - A finish at the beginning of slider?
   3. 00:57:358 (1) - Change to SC2 clap at the beginning of the slider?
   4. 01:49:006 (1) - Add a finish at the end of the slider to fit with the finish of the background music.
   5. 02:07:926 (4) - I think you were missing a clap here. In addition, you can add a whistle on this note.

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:09:631 (1,2,3) - I can't find any reason that it needs to change the speed of slider. Additionally, I prefer x0.75 rather than x0.5.It sounds much comfortable if you use x0.75. Anyway.
   2. 00:32:131 (1) - How about adding a new combo here because you reduce the spacing suddenly.So a new combo will help the player to read.
   3. 00:43:552 (3) - (design) I feel that the slider is collapsed when I see that. Would you make it like this, I think this may sounds better.
      
      Suggestion

      

      341,276,43552,2,0,B|335:229|310:201|260:192|214:198|175:226|177:282,1,240,4|8

   4. 01:36:904 (6) - I would add a new combo here becuase a new accent starts from here, so a new combo can fit the music.
   5. 02:23:267 (6,7,8) - Hum...I don't think 1/4 slider fit the music here.I guess simple 1/2 is much better than now. Well, leave this to you.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:04:858 (3,4) - Remove the finish sound on (3)- and then add it on (4)-
   2. 01:36:052 (3) - Remove the finish at the end of the slider? It doesn't fit the music at all.
   3. 01:49:006 (4) - A finish at the end of the slider?

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:15:767 (4) - The flow will be much better if you can add a reverse on slider (4)-. By the way, you don't need to adjust the spacing if you add it.
   2. 01:10:995 (1) - I personally don't like the shape of the slider.Yes, only personally.
   3. 01:59:915 (1,2,3) - I would increace the spacing between (1.2.3) to fit with the spacing between slider 01:59:574 (5,6) - .
   4. 02:05:369 (2,3,1) - ^Same.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:10:995 (1) - I guess you were missing a clap at the end of the slider. Please fix it if yes.
   2. 01:35:881 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Remove all finish please. They don't fit the music at all and there are no accent point, so a finish shouldn't be here imo.
   3. 01:49:517 (2) - A finish would be nice here.

Megurine Luka wrote:

/from PM


[Easy]

00:26:677 (2) - Easy一上来就叠对新手来说太苦手lol，最好还是放在其他地方。已修改
00:30:086 (1) - 尾巴有点overlap前面的slider，可以试试看（369,248）这个位置已修改
00:38:267 (1) - 可以再圆润一点，现在这样有点丑233，
试试看：
img已修改
下一个也是已修改
00:44:745 (2) - 一样~稍微圆润一点比较好，不然感觉怪怪的已修改
00:45:597 (1) - 建议用三点式slider，不然显得歪不歪直不直的...已修改
00:49:177 (1) - 头上可以加个fin已修改
01:00:086 (1) - 不正嗯，是歪的，第二个sliderpoint应该稍微下来一点已修改
01:16:449 (1) - ^已修改
01:19:177 (4) - +NC已修改
01:32:813 (1,2) - 摆成这样试试看，保持1的尾巴和2的头与中间的circle距离一致：
img已修改
01:38:097 (1) - 把头放到和前两个circle形成等腰三角形的地方：
img已修改
01:40:654 (4,5) - 不要因为红线就不敢下啊233，现在这样还不如让这俩跟Vocal压红线，不然太怪了不觉得很奇怪啊
02:05:540 (1) - 和之前一样，调整一下形状已修改
02:13:722 (4) - +NC已修改
02:17:813 (2) - 做一个包围1尾巴的形状：
img已修改
02:24:631 (4,5) - 4和23做等边三角形，5放到2的位置上
img
如果考虑到后面不想动太多位置的话，可以45反一下已修改

kanpakyin wrote:

Request is taken from queue.

[thou's Easy]

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. HP+1 to fit with overall difficulty's setting.Fixed
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:43:552 (1) - For me, I would perfer to stop the slider at 00:44:063 - with a finish (to fit with instrument) and then put a note at 00:44:404 - . This sounds better to me.Fixed
   2. 01:04:177 (2) - The rhythm sounds weird here. The main reason is the reverse of the slider doesn't fit the music very well. Would you make another rhythmic pattern?No change
   3. 02:20:540 (2) - ^Same.No change
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:33:836 (2,3) - Place a whistle on (2)- and then remove the whistle on the beginning of (3)- to fit with music.Fixed
   2. 00:35:199 (4) - Just add a whistle here to fit with music.Fixed
   3. 01:36:904 (5) - A clap here?No change
   4. 01:42:358 (1) - Add a whistle at the beginning of the slider and the end of the slider respectively?No change
   5. 02:27:017 (2) - Add a whistle at the beginning of the slider.Fixed

Megurine Luka wrote:

/from PM

[General]

看了一下应该没有太大问题lol

[Hard]

00:41:677 (2) - 做这样试试看：

00:43:381 (2) - 这个note有点多余的感觉
01:21:563 (4) - NC
01:31:449 (1,2,3,4) - 有点overlap，可以拉开一点没问题
02:03:154 (3) - 移到尾巴和02:02:642 (1) 重叠的地方
02:05:199 (8) - NC

[Lunatic]

00:12:699 (2,3,4) - 其实可以跟hard一样，这几个slider拉开一点o^ob
00:16:108 (5) - NC
00:17:472 (4) - 试试看（200,176）
00:21:478 (x) - 节奏上来说这里可以加一个circle和前面的三连做一个对称，也可以显得更顺畅一点。
00:25:313 (5,6,7,8) - 额...形状有点扭曲，看看菱形？
00:27:358 (1) - 把开口朝2，就像：

00:28:040 (4) - （416,233）...233!
00:31:790 (2) - 最好还是折返slider...明明音阶式向上现在这样有种突然被打断的感觉
00:39:120 (4) - 和35做等腰三角，比如（272,160）
00:42:699 (2) - 同之前
00:45:938 (3) - 放在2的尾巴后面，也就是和45做等腰三角形的位置

00:47:472 (4) - （256,344）
00:52:586 (4,5,6,7) - 这里用斜一点的正方形感觉更好
00:57:358 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这一串的摆法我有点没看懂，不过按照我的想法可以这么摆：
00:57:699 (3) - （408,240）
00:58:381 (7) - （224,128）
00:58:552 (8) - （216,128）
这样o.o，也就是说所有抬几度高音的地方都是跳，所有抬一度音的地方就是左边那个往左延伸的地方。OTL不知道这么说好不好理解。

总之就是这样
01:36:222 (7,8,9) - （392,296）开始
01:45:427 (3,4) - 和12组菱形，现在的spacing梗略坑

01:58:381 (6) - （208,344）
02:01:449 (1,2,3,4,5) - 略丑...组个梯形啥的？
02:14:233 (4,6,8) - 放成这样：

02:20:114 (4) - CTRL+R
02:22:415 (2) - （152,160）

总体来说还不错，就是细节的排列上有些凌乱:3 加油啦！

kanpakyin wrote:

Request is taken from queue.

[General]

1. Looks fine.

[SuzumiyaSama's Hard]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:09:631 (1,2,3) - I can't find any reason that it needs to change the speed of slider. Additionally, I prefer x0.75 rather than x0.5.It sounds much comfortable if you use x0.75. Anyway.
   2. 00:32:131 (1) - How about adding a new combo here because you reduce the spacing suddenly.So a new combo will help the player to read.
   3. 00:43:552 (3) - (design) I feel that the slider is collapsed when I see that. Would you make it like this, I think this may sounds better.
      
      Suggestion

      

      341,276,43552,2,0,B|335:229|310:201|260:192|214:198|175:226|177:282,1,240,4|8

   4. 01:36:904 (6) - I would add a new combo here becuase a new accent starts from here, so a new combo can fit the music.
   5. 02:23:267 (6,7,8) - Hum...I don't think 1/4 slider fit the music here.I guess simple 1/2 is much better than now. Well, leave this to you.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:04:858 (3,4) - Remove the finish sound on (3)- and then add it on (4)-
   2. 01:36:052 (3) - Remove the finish at the end of the slider? It doesn't fit the music at all.
   3. 01:49:006 (4) - A finish at the end of the slider?

Quite good.

[Lunatic]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:15:767 (4) - The flow will be much better if you can add a reverse on slider (4)-. By the way, you don't need to adjust the spacing if you add it.
   2. 01:10:995 (1) - I personally don't like the shape of the slider.Yes, only personally.
   3. 01:59:915 (1,2,3) - I would increace the spacing between (1.2.3) to fit with the spacing between slider 01:59:574 (5,6) - .
   4. 02:05:369 (2,3,1) - ^Same.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:10:995 (1) - I guess you were missing a clap at the end of the slider. Please fix it if yes.
   2. 01:35:881 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Remove all finish please. They don't fit the music at all and there are no accent point, so a finish shouldn't be here imo.
   3. 01:49:517 (2) - A finish would be nice here.

這個diff感覺就是放得不夠大膽和有點亂. 不過整體來看還算可以

Kinzo wrote:

From my mod queue ~
Beginner modder here, i can be wrong

Twi's Normal :

00:43:037 (1,2) - I'm not sure, but i think it's too hard for normal diff, confusion beginner hmm,i'll keep it. lol

Suzumiya's Hard :

00:31:617 (3) - I think clap here sound better miss a clap here, thanks

Lunatic :

I can't find something
Nice one for me ~

Good luck ~