ertyukjh010 wrote:

Yo~您好
mod了9個英文終於有個中文QAQ
什么也没写就是说我使用了提议

[Easy]

HP+1 ??
00:16:890 (1) - 搬到00:16:661比較適合喔，EZ也盡量減少1/2
00:18:722 (3) - 明顯沒對稱:3 善用Ctrl+H將它弄成對稱（必要時在中間放第5點來調整）
00:20:325 (1) - 盡量減少1/2
00:23:531 (1) - 在00:23:989結束，節奏上我聽不出需要用1/2嘛 钢琴
00:30:859 (1) - 黏住了前面的Note，不好看
00:36:356 (3) - 比較理想就不要重疊到00:34:524 (1)，Anyway這並不重要
00:52:844 (1) - 明顯沒有對稱，型狀也怪怪的lol 換成筆直的Slider可以了
00:57:424 (2) - 怎麼Clap放在折返點，而不是放在結尾XDD 放音效放到頭昏腦脹了~www 背景鼓点
01:26:508 (2) - 弄成弧形比較好看，一般來說不建議做起角的Slider；尾巴放Clap 还是背景鼓点
01:27:424 (3) - 開頭除去Clap 一样是背景鼓点。。。

[Normal]

AR-1
00:01:547 (1) - 第一眼我就看不到方向了orz 要不要加Sb做提示 slider加大了，可以更好的分辨了
00:39:104 (3,4) - 有點跟00:37:501 (1)重疊，更重要的是Normal不適合做變距 全改shorter了
00:42:768 (4,1) - 同樣Normal不適合做變距 同上
01:03:608 (6) - 用whistle取代Clap?? 背景鼓点

[Moonlight's Hard]
这个给我朋友改吧，他考完试了
OD-1
01:03:379 (6) - 開頭比結尾適合Clap
Clap聲音很亂，嘗試用這個方法下音效：

[attachment=0:73c1b]Clap.png[/attachment:73c1b]

[Insane]

OD-1, 這個OD等於2012 Orz 这个我先hold住，毕竟这个insane比较简单。。。改的话score会悲剧orz
00:05:211 (1) - 前後的部份是連點，這裡突然1個長Slider很奇怪，這種形狀Slider比較適合EZ；建議刪掉 这是我insane里面唯一的骄傲。。。删什么也不能删这个
00:12:539 (1) - ^ 同上，normal里面的star是这个缩小后得来的

That all, Good luck

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Ohhaii~ ;D
Ano Natsu de Matteruu ~ <3
I lovee this song >w<


[General]
- Remove " anime " from the tags. aite
- Combo colors can be better ? i got the combo colour codes directly from the ed video (character theme colour), so i think its ok


[Moonlight's Hard]
- End kiai time at 01:44:027 like the other diffs. k
- Set Audio lead-in at 500 like the other diffs as well. k
00:17:133 - Unsnapped timing point. didnt see it in AI mod...


[Nyquill's Taiko Oni]
- End kiai time at 01:44:027 like the other diffs. k, dunno if its ok that i fix it...
00:29:330 (2) - Unsnapped circle. i believe these are all 1/6 notes, so its ok
00:29:406 (3) - ^
00:30:017 (2) - ^
00:30:093 (3) - ^
00:30:246 (5) - ^
00:30:322 (6) - ^


Well mapped! ^^
Good luck and star~

Starry wrote:

Looks like you put quite the amount of work in this.

[General]

Video starts late or its suppose to be like that? o-o the mp3 is extended, video starts at 16s yes. (hence its not TV Size)

[Easy]

00:48:035 (5) - Add a Whistle. It sounds nice here yep
01:02:921 (5) - ^ yep

[Normal]

00:56:508 (4) - Finish the start. k
01:15:974 (3) - Whistle this. k

[Moonlight's Hard]

01:04:524 (2) - Curve this a bit more. ok
01:10:020 (1) - New Combo here. character theme colour as the background video shows...
01:13:455 (2) - Put this below the next slider. wow plays better!
01:17:348 (5) - Uh remove the clap at the end of the slider? alrite


[Insane]

01:06:356 (8) - New Combo. This combo feels long. character theme colour orz
01:31:776 (4) - http://puu.sh/vHR4 alrite...needed to reposition the squares too

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I must say, Your sliders are beautiful. Thank you!

Good Luck On Rank.

CDFA wrote:

Desu?

Overall:
01:44:027 (1) - Add whistle k

Insane:
k

Hard:
00:03:379 (4) - Nope.avi. This might be unrankable, actually, since there's no signification that this is a slider speed-up alrite, didnt know that lol
00:07:043 (4) - ^ yep

Normal:
k

Easy:
k

MMzz wrote:

Sorry this took a few days, I was lazy xD.

• Insane:
  
  00:25:363 (5,1) - start new combo on 5, remove new combo from 1. k
  00:29:027 (5) - new combo and remove new combo on 00:29:485 (1). k
  00:36:585 (8) - shorten this down to 1 repeat instead of 2, it fits the music and helps ease into that jump better. yes cutting score down
  00:40:249 (6) - ^ same as before yeah
  00:47:348 (6,1) - new combo on 6, remove new combo on 1. k
  00:49:180 (4,1) - new combo on 4, remove new combo on 1. k
  00:52:157 (1,3) - maybe move these two to where 00:51:470 (6) was, for a similar stack. aw gosh made so many changes to this section so the stack make sense orz
  00:52:844 (4) - new combo here. k
  01:05:669 (7) - ^ for char theme colour consistency (im matching combo with background colour), no new combos
  01:09:333 (6) - ^ same as above
  01:27:653 (6) - new combo, and remove new combo from 01:28:340 (1) - . aite

• Moonlight's Hard:
  
  i just did everything mentioned unless otherwise specified...not really my diff but im now responsible for it
  00:18:264 (5) - new combo? You put a new combo here for every spot like this ahead.
  00:35:898 (5) - replace this slider with a few notes instead? Issue one is that you are breaking your next combo by ending the slider on the downbeat, issue two it that this is very boreing. If you add new notes make sure to new combo where the slider would have ended and remove new combo from: 00:36:585 (1) aww dont want to change this...i think its ok
  00:40:020 (4) - new combo
  00:56:509 (1) - finisher on start?
  01:05:669 (5,6,7,8) - I don't like these, I can hear what you are mapping to but it is very suttle and some players might not catch it. Consider a slider instead? If not, new combo on: 01:05:669 (5).
  01:09:333 (7) - new combo
  01:10:707 (9,10) - How about you make a triplet stack to match the drums in the back? Dele 10 then make the stack under 9, then move it over about 3 grid points for a nice even jump. http://puu.sh/wCnj
  01:33:837 (3) - fix this slider up, it's not perfectly symmetrical, just a little off.
  01:34:982 (1,2,3,4) - I think these jumps might be to far for a Hard diff, make them just a little bit smaller?
  01:44:256 (1) - start this spinner on the white tick before it?(01:44:142) Sounds like it starts there. i unified this with all other diffs
  
  Your combos in the kiai are very off, you should stick to the down beat like you did before! Feel free to message me on IRC and I can help you fix them, I didn't want to make a super long post about new combo here and remove combo there.

• Normal:
  
  again did everything metioned
  HP Drain -1!
  01:07:043 (5) - remove this slider and make it two notes instead. Ending the slider on the downbeat is messing up your next combo, and it doesn't sound very great! Make sure to add a new combo on the 2nd note (where the slider would have ended) and remove new combo from 01:07:959 (1) - .
  01:08:188 (2) - Point this slider to the right more? So it doesn't go over the previous note's placment. http://puu.sh/wCxY
  01:23:531 (5) - same issue as before with ending the slider on the downbeat, please fix it.
  01:32:921 (1,2) - remove new combo from 1 and add new combo on 2.
  01:34:753 (3) - remove new combo if you did above.^
  01:36:814 (7) - new combo
  01:37:959 (1) - remove combo
  01:42:310 (5) - add combo.
  
  I think this normal is a little to hard, consider making your future normals more straight forward and less complex! http://osu.ppy.sh/b/41140&m=0 this is the first normal i played on osu!, and ever since then normal traumatizes me orz

• Easy:
  
  01:12:997 (1) - end this spinner earlier, will take time for new players to recover from spinning and you arn't leaving them a very good time frame to recover. moved it to the red tick, but kinda sound awkward...

• Nyquill's Taiko Oni:
  
  Really good Taiko Nyquill! <3
  One thing concerns me, in the begining you are useing a very long stretch pattern with lots of 1/4th beats. You should calm it down a little bit, it's the intro to the song and it's very calm and you should give players time to ease into the more complicated beats if understand what I;m talking about xD. But notewise it's pretty much perfect. <3

Philippines wrote:

• Easy

1. 00:18:722 (3) - This blanket could still be improved. Fix it. aite
   
   
2. 00:49:867 (2) - This one too. k
   
   
3. Bump your Overall Difficulty +1. ok

• Normal

1. 00:08:875 (1) - Move 6th point three grids left. moved 2
   
   
2. Bump HP Drain +1. k

• Hard

1. 00:35:898 (5,1) - Would be better if you try to avoid this overlap. repositioned the sliders,its fine now
   
   
2. Reduce OD by 1 then bump HP +1. kk

• Insane

1. 00:27:653 (2,4) - I suggest you switch the position of these notes. yayy star formation
   
   
2. 01:44:027 (1) - Make this spinner end on 01:47:806. its the same as all the other diffs, its where the audio tunes down
   
   
3. Reduce Overall Difficulty -1. nah i think its fine as it is, its a pretty easy insane already

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Modding Queue
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[Easy]
00:17:119 (2) - spam whistle is not good :< took one off
00:20:783 (2) - ^ took one off
00:22:386 (3) - a bit strange when click it ?? i think its fine
01:12:997 (1) - such a short spinner for easy? changed to slider


[Normal]
Nice

[Moonlight's Hard]
Nice

[Insane]
00:03:150 (1) - delete newcombo k
00:04:180 (5) - newcombo k
00:30:401 (5,6,7,8,1) - should be such as this got it, doesnt look exactly the same but something like it

00:55:134 (2) - move away from 00:53:989 (4)? the notes are pretty far timed...i think its fine
01:05:669 (7) - newcombo character theme colour, dont want to change it
01:17:348 (5) - ctrl+r dont see the point of reversing it...
01:44:027 (1) - why whistle?0.0 ...aite changed back to non-whistle, so did for all other diffs
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Great Mapset
and yanaginagi ww
Good Luck

Genkishi wrote:

• Hello~!
  
  Here's my mod
  
  [General]

1. I suggest you remove the kiai in this part 01:25:821 and put a new kiai here 01:29:485 aite
   
   [Easy]
2. 01:02:005 (4) - move this slider by 1 grid down kk
3. 00:29:485 (2,3,4,1) - try making this pattern? and change the shape of the slider as shown on the pic http://puu.sh/xE3I got it
4. 00:47:348 (4) - add whistle on the head of this slider did it
5. 00:49:180 (1) - ^ added finish i think
6. 00:54:676 (4) - ^ k
7. AP -1? alrite
   
   [Normal]
8. 00:08:875 (1) - Rotate this slider by -5? and after that, fix the spacing did +14 so the slider seems to get blanket by the other slider
9. 00:18:722 (7) - make the slider shape like at 00:19:867 (1) k symmetry
   
   [Moonlight's Hard]
10. 01:08:188 (1) - New combo here? theme colour consistancy, wont change this
    
    [Insane]
11. Seems fine

That's all

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

From BakaHuang & TTTTTTTTTTTT's modding queue

[Easy]

整体很好,尤其拉的slider很用心,很美观的

00:58:798 (1) - 这个结尾处用一个soft的finish吧 用了normal finish

关于NC的建议

00:40:936 (4) - 加个NC ok
00:41:852 (1) - 去掉NC ^
00:43:684 (3) - 加个NC ^

[Normal]

00:58:798 (2) - soft finish? normal finish

[Moonlight's Hard]

00:10:936 - add a NC here 好
00:14:600 - ^ ^
00:45:287 - add a circle? stack with next (1) ok
00:17:133 - useless green timing 删了
01:25:249 - ^ 这个和下面的重新排了一下
01:25:821 - ^
01:29:485 - ^

[Insane]

00:51:012 (4) - 左移一格 下移一格 下移了一格
00:51:699 (7) - ^ ^
01:13:913 - 多余的绿线 修复了volume transition

很好的insane~

[Nyquill's Taiko Oni]

00:29:330 (2) - Unsnapped circle 我相信这些是1/6拍
00:29:406 (3) - ^
00:30:017 (2) - ^
00:30:093 (3) - ^
00:30:246 (5) - ^
00:30:322 (6) - ^

Good luck!

Amyrina wrote:

Hello.
[Easy]
00:01:547 (1) - nice idea! ty
00:05:211 (2) - XD ~~
00:57:424 (2) - Turn have much ? reduced by 1
01:28:569 (4) - Beginning spot is late? made two sliders instead to cover the beat ahead
->01:28:340 (4) - and turn ramp up it. what is ramp?
AR+1? aite

[Normal]
AR+1? i think the ar is ok on this one
01:34:753 (5) -
->01:34:524 (5) - and turn ramp up it? i dunno what ramp is orz

I think the difficulty of good balance and the other.
Have fun playing in a unique map.
good luck XD