hello <:
that is all >_< cant star due spacing on [Easy] and [Normal] diffs
hope this helps ;_;
[Easy]
just want to point the unconcistant spacing for this diff, although Im not getting mad with it- 00:01:547 (1,2) - first at all you are using a spacing of 1,20x for this diff, and I tried to make a heart might pattern, keeping the 1,20x spacing, dont know if you are going to like it, but if you dont, maybe you can think on other pattern for this or a better heart might shape, this is the best I can makeSPOILER
256,120,1547,54,0,B|160:12|40:104|60:232|168:240|168:240|200:240|244:264|256:316,1,480,4|0
256,120,5211,2,0,B|352:12|472:104|452:232|344:240|344:240|312:240|268:264|256:316,1,480,4|0 - 00:08:875 (1) - then the spacing from previous object would be moar easy to fix, space this object correctly please, nice shape by the way
- 00:16:890 (1) - although this was on the centre of the circled shaped slider this must be spaced correctly
- 00:17:119 (2) - remove the whistle from slider body, sounds unnecesary, looks like you have a pattern here and on some of the incoming sliders, but Im not sure where are you supporting it, also the whistle of slider body dont sounds so good, especially on this slider 00:27:195 (1)
- 00:23:531 (1) - next slider comes 1,37x spacing, different from usual 1,20x
- 00:26:050 (3) - then suddenly the spacing get to 1,40x; remember that this is an [Easy] diff and is supposed to have the same spacing on whole map
- 00:30:859 (1) - incoming objects get 1,00x spacing O_o please again use an unique and constant spacing
- 00:34:524 (1,2) - make them a bit less "triangular"? the start and end are touching them and that may be confusing for newbies
- 00:36:356 (3) - no whistle on slider body, also maybe but just maybe exteend this to 00:37:730? where (3) is currently
- 00:45:516 (1) - back to 1,20x spacing
- 00:49:180 (1) - less compressed maybe?
- 01:00:172 (1) - back to 1,00x spacing
- 01:03:379 (6) - clap and ↓
- 01:03:837 (1) - no whistle on start of slider, sounds better if you keep your common pattern
- 01:16:661 (2) - finish on start of slider instead whistle, the previous slider lenght is the same also that gives a nice hitsound symmetry on those 2 sliders, oh 1,40x spacing >:
wow so nice ;_; but spacing is not ok, feel free to wait for a second opinion about spacing
[Normal]
[Normal] diffs are also supposed to have the same spacing on whole map- 00:23:073 (8) - whistle maybe?
- 00:24:447 (2) - hmm again the whistle on slider bodies, maybe check them on this diff also?
[Moonlight's Hard]
- 00:22:845 (4) - why you are silencing this slider end? give a solid reason or remove that 5% volume section please
- 00:27:195 (7) - whistle at start of slider
- 00:29:944 (5) - finish on end of slider, personal prefference
- 00:32:692 (5) - no whistle here, only whistles on red ticks sounds nice ovo
- 00:47:120 (5) - no whistle, is so close from previous clap, also start whistles on 00:48:036 (2), sounds moar concistant and interesting
- 00:58:112 (6) - no whistle, clap instead the battery that you was following on 00:57:654 (4) is present here not..↓
- 00:58:341 (1) - no clap on start of slider
- 00:58:799 (2) - finish or whistle for increase the effect on the song
- 00:59:256 (4) - for keep the battery clap on end of slider and ↓
- 00:59:943 (6) - clap here, leave (5) witouth hitsounds sounds nice that way
- 01:23:302 (5) - I dont like the whistle on this slider body, can you remove it >:?
- 01:33:837 (3) - no whistle on slider body, the finish on start gives a nice effect on silent body
- 01:36:814 (1,3) - same dislike about whistle on slider bodies >_<
- 01:40:478 (1) - a personal suggest, add 3 or 4 sliders instead this only?
[Nyquill's Taiko Oni]
remove the video from this diff, taiko diffs, the video is croped to half size on taiko mode, and the custom bg image is enough- 00:16:203 (1) - D?
- 00:17:119 (1,1,1,2,1) - dkk k d just to follows the piano
- 00:30:859 (1) - D, follows better the bass effect
- 01:07:501 (2) - D, I love this pattern ;_; 01:06:814 (2,1,1,2) and Ill love it moar if the last don have a finish ;_;
- 01:44:142 (2) - D? the previous note is a katsu so..
[Insane]
- 00:05:211 (1) - O_o a sword?
- 01:13:913 (9) - you are missing an 1/8 note, add an extra repeat to this slider and make the next slider a bit closer for avoid the combo break
- 01:17:348 (5) - no clap on end of slider? there is no moar double clap patterns incoming
- 01:32:463 (6) - same as avobe
nice star patterns <:
hope this helps ;_;