1. Easy (2.08 stars, 103 notes)
2. Insane (4.93 stars, 316 notes)
3. Moonlight's Hard (4.73 stars, 244 notes)
4. Normal (4.12 stars, 167 notes)
5. Nyquill's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 539 notes)

KuronumaSawako wrote:

I love this! Can make Easy or hard?

GiNa wrote:

SPOILER

If I didn't leave a comment, that means I followed the suggestion...don't want to type too many "ok" or "got it" lol
Hi, request from my queue!
And, I love this song and anime <3

[General]
-Oops, 256 kbps is unrankable, make it 192 kbps I swear it says 190kbps in my properties...
Apparently this is encoded with a variable bitrate, which may have sections over the bitrate of the rank criteria. From what I heard, this is rankable, or I will ask BAT/MAT for confirmation on this
-"Ano_Natsu_de_Matteru_ED_TV_Size.osb", deletes this file then full submits
-Set lead-in (Song Setup -> Audio -> Lead-in) at least 500 for all diff.
-Consider adding “ending” in the Tags.
-Add a green line at 01:44:142 to stop your kiai time
-Instead of (Short Ver.), maybe use (TV Size) Since the mp3 is a slight extension, I would prefer it to be "short version"

[Easy]
-Keep the speed constant, so it won’t be too hard for beginners that was so much work orz
00:01:547 (1,2) – nice
00:27:195 (4) – NC, try to keep the combo shorter in easier diff
00:34:524 (5) – ^
00:43:684 (4) – ^
00:59:256 (2,3,4,5) – these might confuse beginners, please change either 2, 3 or 4, 5 to a slider. Basically, something like 00:45:058 (6,7,1) is enough already changed placement
01:07:043 (4) – (nazi) overlaps with 01:05:669 (3) a little, consider use different shape for (3)
01:12:997 (1) – hard to read, maybe change this to a spinner ?
01:28:569 (4,5,6,1) - same as 00:59:256 (2,3,4,5) I really want to keep this one...its the only star orz
01:40:478 (1) – I’m not sure about this one, but it’s much readable compared to 01:12:997 (1), so I guess you can keep it as it
01:44:142 (1) – too long, I think stop at 01:47:806 is enough. By the way, either you take my suggestion or not, please silence the end of the spinner (volume: 10% or 5%)

[Normal]
-I would rather suggest you increase slider velocity as the difficulty goes up (or lower Easy’s) lowered velocity on easy
00:01:547 (1), 00:08:875 (1) – hey, nice again
00:27:195 (4) – NC
00:38:188 (2,3,4) – mmm … spacing I would prefer keeping this as it creates a nice patters...its not a very hard space change anyways
00:43:684 (6) – NC
01:12:997 (1) – same as Easy changed to something else
01:24:447 (6) – NC
01:34:753 (4) – ^
01:44:142 (1) – same as Easy

[Moonlight’s Diff] Waiting on my friend for this one
-This diff name is strength, use “Moonlight’s Hard” instead ?
-Spacings are pretty messed up now, recheck all of them and use Distance Snap please (except the jumps you want to keep)
00:25:593 (1) – meaningless NC
00:28:799 (1) – ^, and remove finish
00:31:776 (2) – maybe take out two repeats and add notes, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/249508 (I don’t look at the spacing atm, fix it by yourself)
00:33:379 (3) – NC here
00:36:585 (8) – ^
00:47:349 (7) – ^
01:09:333 (7) – ^
01:24:447 (8) – ^
01:34:982 (5) – ^
01:44:371 (1) – how about ends this at 01:47:806 ?

[Insane]
00:05:211 (1) – wow !
00:39:562 (7) – copy 00:39:104 (6), then Ctrl+H, then Ctrl+J, so it looks constant and better oh snap learned new shortcuts ^_^
01:44:142 (1) – same as Easy
This diff looks nice to me!

Good luck guys :3

1. fine

1. sliders good
2. 01:26:737 (3) - clap at end
3. 01:27:424 (4) - remove clap
4. 01:44:142 (1) - needs a 5% volume green section

1. hmm why is it called "Moonlight's Diff", rename to "Moonlight's Hard"?
2. 00:54:905 (1) - new combo..?
3. 00:55:135 (2) - move to (152,200)

1. 00:05:211 (1) - I think this shape needs to be adjusted a little http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot226-1.jpg
2. 00:26:050 (1,3,4) - whistle here sounds good
3. 00:27:195 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about having some distance,, http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot227-2.jpg
4. 00:30:401 (4,5,6,7) - arrange this stream like this, as to keep the zigzag-stream pattern before, and it fits the song well http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot228-0.jpg
5. 01:04:524 (2,3,4,5,6) - this spacing should be larger imo..
6. 01:44:142 (1) - needs a 5% volume green section

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

SPOILER

If i didn't leave a comment, then i've taken the suggestion
Hi, from my queue


Easy

1. fine

Normal

1. sliders good
2. 01:26:737 (3) - clap at end see below
3. 01:27:424 (4) - remove clap This clap follows the background drum
4. 01:44:142 (1) - needs a 5% volume green section

Moonlight's Diff Moonlight will fix this

1. hmm why is it called "Moonlight's Diff", rename to "Moonlight's Hard"?
2. 00:54:905 (1) - new combo..?
3. 00:55:135 (2) - move to (152,200)

Insane

1. 00:05:211 (1) - I think this shape needs to be adjusted a little http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot226-1.jpg If u rotate this 15 degrees cw, it becomes vertical, and i adjusted accordingly
2. 00:26:050 (1,3,4) - whistle here sounds good
3. 00:27:195 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about having some distance,, http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot227-2.jpg
4. 00:30:401 (4,5,6,7) - arrange this stream like this, as to keep the zigzag-stream pattern before, and it fits the song well http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot228-0.jpg
5. 01:04:524 (2,3,4,5,6) - this spacing should be larger imo..
6. 01:44:142 (1) - needs a 5% volume green section

that's all

Good luck~

GiNa wrote:

[Moonlight’s Diff]
-This diff name is strength, use “Moonlight’s Hard” instead ? will do
-Spacings are pretty messed up now, recheck all of them and use Distance Snap please (except the jumps you want to keep) ok working on it
00:25:593 (1) – meaningless NCfixed
00:28:799 (1) – ^, and remove finish
00:31:776 (2) – maybe take out two repeats and add notes, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/249508 (I don’t look at the spacing atm, fix it by yourself)
00:33:379 (3) – NC here
00:36:585 (8) – ^
00:47:349 (7) – ^
01:09:333 (7) – ^
01:24:447 (8) – ^
01:34:982 (5) – ^^fixed
01:44:371 (1) – how about ends this at 01:47:806 ?ok

GiNa wrote:

hmm why is it called "Moonlight's Diff", rename to "Moonlight's Hard"? ok
00:54:905 (1) - new combo..?ok
00:55:135 (2) - move to (152,200)im plan to change this part a bit, seems a bit too hard.

Easy

[Normal

yongtw123 wrote:

[Moonlights's Hard]
The first 1/3 of the map has no hitsound, but i am sure you can at least use some whistles. Please do so. you are right, it does feels something missing. will add whistle

00:16:204 (1,2,3) - watch out spacing, (2) is too close with (1) fixed.
00:53:990 (4) - new combo fixed
00:55:593 (1) - remove new combo fixed
01:00:859 (1) ~ 01:13:684 (4) - please use some hitsounds! will do

SkyDevil wrote:

Moonlight's Hard
00:49:180 Put slider closer to the last circle I actually intended to separate them a bit.
00:58:340 ^
01:29:485 I think the distance is too big between this circle and the last circle o-o please change it i think jump here is appropriate.
01:40:478 Way too long, maybe make two sliders of it instead of one? c: was trying to fit into the video, and i don't really know where to split them in to two...

its's tv size, not short ver.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Mod time for Moonlight PM - In game ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

[*]Yor mp3 file is 458kbps,This is unrankable,need change 192kbps or following.
[/list]

under windows 7 Pro 64bits, properties.



under foobar2000.


it's just VBR...

[Moonlight's Hard]

1. 00:10:937 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make more better star. <--- I'll consult with star expert jonathan to see what I can do here.
   
2. 00:26:966 - Add a note to here,have vacal to here. <-- ok, it seems both could do.
3. 00:54:906 (1,2,3,4) - Make symmetry. looks symmetric to me... ill get into the small details
4. 01:03:837 - Add finish. ok.
5. 01:07:501 - ^

ok.

BeatofIke wrote:

[Moonlight's Hard]
-HP Drain (-1)ok, i did noticed that the hp is a bit hard to go backup...
-Overall Difficulty (-1) I think diff is not that bad.
-00:10:937 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe make this a hexagon instead? ok
-00:18:264- Add note. ok
-00:27:196 (1) - Pretty short spinner you got here. deleted spinner and added some notes.
-00:58:111 (6) - Add clap. the hit sound seems ok...
-00:58:341 (1) - Remove clap. ^
-00:59:257 (4) - Remove clap. ^
-01:40:478 (1) - lol lol as in a good thing or bad thing...i cant tell...
-There are some inconsistent blanklets, spacing, and hitsounds. fixed lots of them, others i cant tell... I wonder where are you talking about? a few of them are intentional.

giO- wrote:

Moonlight's Hard

00:21:928 (6) - new combo? ok
00:27:196 (1) - map something instead of spinner, sound weird ok
00:33:379 (1) - fix 2nd point ( http://puu.sh/kJaH ) of this slider on x:56 y:20 http://puu.sh/kJaG nice
00:34:524 (3) - overlap, fix this, 2nd point on x:228 y:204 http://puu.sh/kJaU ok
00:57:653 (4) - delete clap I'll speculate a bit more on this...
00:57:882 (5) - add clap^
00:58:341 (1) - delete clap^
00:58:799 (2) - add clap ^
00:59:257 (4) - delete clap ^
01:11:165 (1) - ugly slider :pwhat do you think on how to change it?
01:13:684 (4) - move on x:332 y:184rankable? ok
01:17:348 (10) - fix slider shape........ok.....
01:40:478 (1) - mmmm ok, maybe change with something else, not all but last partso whats your suggestion on how to change it? and why?
01:44:371 (1) - i think you can delete the finish on this spinner deleted.

Heatherfield wrote:

[Moonlight's Hard]
00:07:043 (4) - o_o I don't understand this.. ok... changed...
00:44:600 (3,4,5) - this jump is quiet big, while other parts of the map is so relaxingok
01:12:997 (1) - maybe new combo here?ok
Also, same last spinner suggestion as Insane.the timing is too insane!
Ending with normal finish might not be a good idea, I don't know.ended with soft whistle

Heatherfield wrote:

If i didnt comment, then i followed the suggestion
aiaiclala fans club presents
Nice song, 黑喂狗.
BTW don't forget my mods are always just suggestions if not specified.
[General]
2 "ending" in tags? I know you mean Anime ending and ending separately but it seems that actually it makes no difference. opps
Remove jonathanlfj from tags just realized that its not necessary...
[Insane]
Nice hitsounds.
Some sliders in this diff is a little bit slow for me, especially in those 0.8 bpm parts. Not a big deal though.
00:05:211 (1) - Would you consider silence sliderslide? May sound better. Also, the end of the slider is a little bit overlapped, it's fine imo though. got it, did it for all other diff too
00:12:539 (1) - ^ and this slider is a little bit ugly because of this part:

SPOILER

but I don't know how to make it better haha enlarged it so the circles overlap less
00:29:371 (6) - add a note here
00:29:943 (3) - replace with a tripple hit made reverse slider instead
01:05:669 (7) - try this? lol just suggestion reverse slider again, and i didnt do the 5 note stream...too sudden imo

SPOILER

01:44:085 (1) - spinner start here?
01:47:692 (1) - and end here?
[Taiko]
Seems fine, needs a taiko BG though.
[Moonlight's Hard]
00:07:043 (4) - o_o I don't understand this..
00:44:600 (3,4,5) - this jump is quiet big, while other parts of the map is so relaxing
01:12:997 (1) - maybe new combo here?
Also, same last spinner suggestion as Insane.
Ending with normal finish might not be a good idea, I don't know.
[Normal]
This diff really needs to silence the sliderslide lol
Circle is too large so that the sliders are pretty stuck together, maybe you should try circlesize 4 looks better, dunno how much difficulty level it will raise though
AR 5 seems better for me got it
[Easy]
Many objects starts from red line in the beginning part, don't know if it's ok for Easy. I think its ok, after all its a slow song lol

Pretty good map, good luck.

ikari_kyon wrote:

hello <:

[Easy]

just want to point the unconcistant spacing for this diff, although Im not getting mad with it I fixed all the spacing related issues on easy with an uniform 1.00x spacing, so i wont comment on these pointers in the mod

1. 00:01:547 (1,2) - first at all you are using a spacing of 1,20x for this diff, and I tried to make a heart might pattern, keeping the 1,20x spacing, dont know if you are going to like it, but if you dont, maybe you can think on other pattern for this or a better heart might shape, this is the best I can make
   SPOILER

   

   256,120,1547,54,0,B|160:12|40:104|60:232|168:240|168:240|200:240|244:264|256:316,1,480,4|0
   256,120,5211,2,0,B|352:12|472:104|452:232|344:240|344:240|312:240|268:264|256:316,1,480,4|0

   Fixed this issue by reversing the second slider so there is an overlap
2. 00:08:875 (1) - then the spacing from previous object would be moar easy to fix, space this object correctly please, nice shape by the way
3. 00:16:890 (1) - although this was on the centre of the circled shaped slider this must be spaced correctly
4. 00:17:119 (2) - remove the whistle from slider body, sounds unnecesary, looks like you have a pattern here and on some of the incoming sliders, but Im not sure where are you supporting it, also the whistle of slider body dont sounds so good, especially on this slider 00:27:195 (1) Fixed all slider slide sounds in easy
5. 00:23:531 (1) - next slider comes 1,37x spacing, different from usual 1,20x
6. 00:26:050 (3) - then suddenly the spacing get to 1,40x; remember that this is an [Easy] diff and is supposed to have the same spacing on whole map
7. 00:30:859 (1) - incoming objects get 1,00x spacing O_o please again use an unique and constant spacing
8. 00:34:524 (1,2) - make them a bit less "triangular"? the start and end are touching them and that may be confusing for newbies got it
9. 00:36:356 (3) - no whistle on slider body, also maybe but just maybe exteend this to 00:37:730? where (3) is currently
10. 00:45:516 (1) - back to 1,20x spacing
11. 00:49:180 (1) - less compressed maybe? made a regular slider
12. 01:00:172 (1) - back to 1,00x spacing
13. 01:03:379 (6) - clap and ↓ at this point the background drums change pattern, so the clap pattern also change a bit
14. 01:03:837 (1) - no whistle on start of slider, sounds better if you keep your common pattern changed to finish
15. 01:16:661 (2) - finish on start of slider instead whistle, the previous slider lenght is the same also that gives a nice hitsound symmetry on those 2 sliders, oh 1,40x spacing >: alrite
    wow so nice ;_; but spacing is not ok, feel free to wait for a second opinion about spacing

[Normal]

[Normal] diffs are also supposed to have the same spacing on whole map This map has changing slider speeds, so the spacing changes throughout. I made sure that everything is at 1.20x spacing with their associated slider speeds (AI mod lol), except that triangular slider pattern part

1. 00:23:073 (8) - whistle maybe? aite
2. 00:24:447 (2) - hmm again the whistle on slider bodies, maybe check them on this diff also? Fixed all

[Moonlight's Hard]

Moonlight will handle this

1. 00:22:845 (4) - why you are silencing this slider end? give a solid reason or remove that 5% volume section please
2. 00:27:195 (7) - whistle at start of slider
3. 00:29:944 (5) - finish on end of slider, personal prefference
4. 00:32:692 (5) - no whistle here, only whistles on red ticks sounds nice ovo
5. 00:47:120 (5) - no whistle, is so close from previous clap, also start whistles on 00:48:036 (2), sounds moar concistant and interesting
6. 00:58:112 (6) - no whistle, clap instead the battery that you was following on 00:57:654 (4) is present here not..↓
7. 00:58:341 (1) - no clap on start of slider
8. 00:58:799 (2) - finish or whistle for increase the effect on the song
9. 00:59:256 (4) - for keep the battery clap on end of slider and ↓
10. 00:59:943 (6) - clap here, leave (5) witouth hitsounds sounds nice that way
11. 01:23:302 (5) - I dont like the whistle on this slider body, can you remove it >:?
12. 01:33:837 (3) - no whistle on slider body, the finish on start gives a nice effect on silent body
13. 01:36:814 (1,3) - same dislike about whistle on slider bodies >_<
14. 01:40:478 (1) - a personal suggest, add 3 or 4 sliders instead this only?

[Nyquill's Taiko Oni]

Nyquill will fix this
remove the video from this diff, taiko diffs, the video is croped to half size on taiko mode, and the custom bg image is enough

1. 00:16:203 (1) - D?
2. 00:17:119 (1,1,1,2,1) - dkk k d just to follows the piano
3. 00:30:859 (1) - D, follows better the bass effect
4. 01:07:501 (2) - D, I love this pattern ;_; 01:06:814 (2,1,1,2) and Ill love it moar if the last don have a finish ;_;
5. 01:44:142 (2) - D? the previous note is a katsu so..

[Insane]

1. 00:05:211 (1) - O_o a sword? the spaceship in the anime, its true identity has been revealed in the last episode...man in black lol
2. 01:13:913 (9) - you are missing an 1/8 note, add an extra repeat to this slider and make the next slider a bit closer for avoid the combo break got it
3. 01:17:348 (5) - no clap on end of slider? there is no moar double clap patterns incoming this double clap pattern sounds nice to me, so im keeping it
4. 01:32:463 (6) - same as avobe ^
   nice star patterns <: Thanks~~~

that is all >_< cant star due spacing on [Easy] and [Normal] diffs
hope this helps ;_;

1. 00:17:119 (2) - previous object still 1,20x
2. 00:20:783 (2) - ↑ same as avobe
3. 01:24:447 (4) - stack on 01:22:615 (2) start?

ikari_kyon wrote:

xD sorry I haven't see this anime, also getting back to point some stuff on [Easy]

1. 00:17:119 (2) - previous object still 1,20x
2. 00:20:783 (2) - ↑ same as avobe
3. 01:24:447 (4) - stack on 01:22:615 (2) start?

anyway take your star x3

1. Well,you have a inconsistent kiai times here so fix that please
2. 01:44:142 (1) - Considered to extend this spinner to 1/2 in all diffs
3. "Moonlight's Hard" don't have Audio Lead-In,Why?

• - 00:30:630 (5) - Delete this note because is hard to read for newbies players in my opinion
  - 00:45:287 (6) - ^

• -- Looks nice

• -- So you have a unsnapped section here 00:17:133,so resnap this section

• -- Perhaps you should to remove the video in my opinion
  -- And yeah,you have a unsnapped circles here:
  

  00:29:330 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 
  00:29:406 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 
  00:30:017 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 
  00:30:093 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 
  00:30:246 (5) - Unsnapped circle. 
  00:30:322 (6) - Unsnapped circle. 

• -- Ok

vwxcrossover wrote:

suggestion orz

[Normal]
01:36:814 (5) - Add finish ok

[Insane]
The kiai ends at 01:40:478 right ? owo forgot to change lol

its a good map seriously XD

suzutsukikanade wrote:

Ok as you requested in my queue...

[General]
Can't see nothing wrong here.

[Easy]
This diff is fine

[Normal]

Oh, creative sliders here

00:41:165 (1,2,3): Fix spacing here. k

SPOILER

[attachment=0:cd6d5]screenshot009.jpg[/attachment:cd6d5]

00:55:363: add a note? aite...wait why did i delete that anyways lol
01:29:027 (9): NC here? Is a long combo for a Insane. k NC on the white tick

[Hard]
Oh you used many whistles here o.o
And slider sounds annoying here, sorry but your hard is a little annoying for me.
This is guest diff, since the creator is somewhat afk due to exams i will take over the fixes

00:01:547 (1): Remove whistle and add finish.
00:28:111 (8): ^ in repeat.
00:28:798 (1): Remove Finish
00:29:485 (3): ^
00:30:631 (6): Remove whistle
00:44:600 (3,4,5): Remove claps here

Insane is ok

Your map is good, find more mods and this map will be good.

kanpakyin wrote:

Artist: yanaginagi

this is the cover of this single.

ikari_kyon wrote:

not sure about artist, even google says that is yanagi nagi