BeatofIke wrote:

[Moonlight's Hard]
-HP Drain (-1)ok, i did noticed that the hp is a bit hard to go backup...
-Overall Difficulty (-1) I think diff is not that bad.
-00:10:937 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe make this a hexagon instead? ok
-00:18:264- Add note. ok
-00:27:196 (1) - Pretty short spinner you got here. deleted spinner and added some notes.
-00:58:111 (6) - Add clap. the hit sound seems ok...
-00:58:341 (1) - Remove clap. ^
-00:59:257 (4) - Remove clap. ^
-01:40:478 (1) - lol lol as in a good thing or bad thing...i cant tell...
-There are some inconsistent blanklets, spacing, and hitsounds. fixed lots of them, others i cant tell... I wonder where are you talking about? a few of them are intentional.

giO- wrote:

Moonlight's Hard

00:21:928 (6) - new combo? ok
00:27:196 (1) - map something instead of spinner, sound weird ok
00:33:379 (1) - fix 2nd point ( http://puu.sh/kJaH ) of this slider on x:56 y:20 http://puu.sh/kJaG nice
00:34:524 (3) - overlap, fix this, 2nd point on x:228 y:204 http://puu.sh/kJaU ok
00:57:653 (4) - delete clap I'll speculate a bit more on this...
00:57:882 (5) - add clap^
00:58:341 (1) - delete clap^
00:58:799 (2) - add clap ^
00:59:257 (4) - delete clap ^
01:11:165 (1) - ugly slider :pwhat do you think on how to change it?
01:13:684 (4) - move on x:332 y:184rankable? ok
01:17:348 (10) - fix slider shape........ok.....
01:40:478 (1) - mmmm ok, maybe change with something else, not all but last partso whats your suggestion on how to change it? and why?
01:44:371 (1) - i think you can delete the finish on this spinner deleted.

Heatherfield wrote:

[Moonlight's Hard]
00:07:043 (4) - o_o I don't understand this.. ok... changed...
00:44:600 (3,4,5) - this jump is quiet big, while other parts of the map is so relaxingok
01:12:997 (1) - maybe new combo here?ok
Also, same last spinner suggestion as Insane.the timing is too insane!
Ending with normal finish might not be a good idea, I don't know.ended with soft whistle

Heatherfield wrote:

If i didnt comment, then i followed the suggestion
aiaiclala fans club presents
Nice song, 黑喂狗.
BTW don't forget my mods are always just suggestions if not specified.
[General]
2 "ending" in tags? I know you mean Anime ending and ending separately but it seems that actually it makes no difference. opps
Remove jonathanlfj from tags just realized that its not necessary...
[Insane]
Nice hitsounds.
Some sliders in this diff is a little bit slow for me, especially in those 0.8 bpm parts. Not a big deal though.
00:05:211 (1) - Would you consider silence sliderslide? May sound better. Also, the end of the slider is a little bit overlapped, it's fine imo though. got it, did it for all other diff too
00:12:539 (1) - ^ and this slider is a little bit ugly because of this part:

SPOILER

but I don't know how to make it better haha enlarged it so the circles overlap less
00:29:371 (6) - add a note here
00:29:943 (3) - replace with a tripple hit made reverse slider instead
01:05:669 (7) - try this? lol just suggestion reverse slider again, and i didnt do the 5 note stream...too sudden imo

SPOILER

01:44:085 (1) - spinner start here?
01:47:692 (1) - and end here?
[Taiko]
Seems fine, needs a taiko BG though.
[Moonlight's Hard]
00:07:043 (4) - o_o I don't understand this..
00:44:600 (3,4,5) - this jump is quiet big, while other parts of the map is so relaxing
01:12:997 (1) - maybe new combo here?
Also, same last spinner suggestion as Insane.
Ending with normal finish might not be a good idea, I don't know.
[Normal]
This diff really needs to silence the sliderslide lol
Circle is too large so that the sliders are pretty stuck together, maybe you should try circlesize 4 looks better, dunno how much difficulty level it will raise though
AR 5 seems better for me got it
[Easy]
Many objects starts from red line in the beginning part, don't know if it's ok for Easy. I think its ok, after all its a slow song lol

Pretty good map, good luck.

ikari_kyon wrote:

hello <:

[Easy]

just want to point the unconcistant spacing for this diff, although Im not getting mad with it I fixed all the spacing related issues on easy with an uniform 1.00x spacing, so i wont comment on these pointers in the mod

1. 00:01:547 (1,2) - first at all you are using a spacing of 1,20x for this diff, and I tried to make a heart might pattern, keeping the 1,20x spacing, dont know if you are going to like it, but if you dont, maybe you can think on other pattern for this or a better heart might shape, this is the best I can make
   SPOILER

   

   256,120,1547,54,0,B|160:12|40:104|60:232|168:240|168:240|200:240|244:264|256:316,1,480,4|0
   256,120,5211,2,0,B|352:12|472:104|452:232|344:240|344:240|312:240|268:264|256:316,1,480,4|0

   Fixed this issue by reversing the second slider so there is an overlap
2. 00:08:875 (1) - then the spacing from previous object would be moar easy to fix, space this object correctly please, nice shape by the way
3. 00:16:890 (1) - although this was on the centre of the circled shaped slider this must be spaced correctly
4. 00:17:119 (2) - remove the whistle from slider body, sounds unnecesary, looks like you have a pattern here and on some of the incoming sliders, but Im not sure where are you supporting it, also the whistle of slider body dont sounds so good, especially on this slider 00:27:195 (1) Fixed all slider slide sounds in easy
5. 00:23:531 (1) - next slider comes 1,37x spacing, different from usual 1,20x
6. 00:26:050 (3) - then suddenly the spacing get to 1,40x; remember that this is an [Easy] diff and is supposed to have the same spacing on whole map
7. 00:30:859 (1) - incoming objects get 1,00x spacing O_o please again use an unique and constant spacing
8. 00:34:524 (1,2) - make them a bit less "triangular"? the start and end are touching them and that may be confusing for newbies got it
9. 00:36:356 (3) - no whistle on slider body, also maybe but just maybe exteend this to 00:37:730? where (3) is currently
10. 00:45:516 (1) - back to 1,20x spacing
11. 00:49:180 (1) - less compressed maybe? made a regular slider
12. 01:00:172 (1) - back to 1,00x spacing
13. 01:03:379 (6) - clap and ↓ at this point the background drums change pattern, so the clap pattern also change a bit
14. 01:03:837 (1) - no whistle on start of slider, sounds better if you keep your common pattern changed to finish
15. 01:16:661 (2) - finish on start of slider instead whistle, the previous slider lenght is the same also that gives a nice hitsound symmetry on those 2 sliders, oh 1,40x spacing >: alrite
    wow so nice ;_; but spacing is not ok, feel free to wait for a second opinion about spacing

[Normal]

[Normal] diffs are also supposed to have the same spacing on whole map This map has changing slider speeds, so the spacing changes throughout. I made sure that everything is at 1.20x spacing with their associated slider speeds (AI mod lol), except that triangular slider pattern part

1. 00:23:073 (8) - whistle maybe? aite
2. 00:24:447 (2) - hmm again the whistle on slider bodies, maybe check them on this diff also? Fixed all

[Moonlight's Hard]

Moonlight will handle this

1. 00:22:845 (4) - why you are silencing this slider end? give a solid reason or remove that 5% volume section please
2. 00:27:195 (7) - whistle at start of slider
3. 00:29:944 (5) - finish on end of slider, personal prefference
4. 00:32:692 (5) - no whistle here, only whistles on red ticks sounds nice ovo
5. 00:47:120 (5) - no whistle, is so close from previous clap, also start whistles on 00:48:036 (2), sounds moar concistant and interesting
6. 00:58:112 (6) - no whistle, clap instead the battery that you was following on 00:57:654 (4) is present here not..↓
7. 00:58:341 (1) - no clap on start of slider
8. 00:58:799 (2) - finish or whistle for increase the effect on the song
9. 00:59:256 (4) - for keep the battery clap on end of slider and ↓
10. 00:59:943 (6) - clap here, leave (5) witouth hitsounds sounds nice that way
11. 01:23:302 (5) - I dont like the whistle on this slider body, can you remove it >:?
12. 01:33:837 (3) - no whistle on slider body, the finish on start gives a nice effect on silent body
13. 01:36:814 (1,3) - same dislike about whistle on slider bodies >_<
14. 01:40:478 (1) - a personal suggest, add 3 or 4 sliders instead this only?

[Nyquill's Taiko Oni]

Nyquill will fix this
remove the video from this diff, taiko diffs, the video is croped to half size on taiko mode, and the custom bg image is enough

1. 00:16:203 (1) - D?
2. 00:17:119 (1,1,1,2,1) - dkk k d just to follows the piano
3. 00:30:859 (1) - D, follows better the bass effect
4. 01:07:501 (2) - D, I love this pattern ;_; 01:06:814 (2,1,1,2) and Ill love it moar if the last don have a finish ;_;
5. 01:44:142 (2) - D? the previous note is a katsu so..

[Insane]

1. 00:05:211 (1) - O_o a sword? the spaceship in the anime, its true identity has been revealed in the last episode...man in black lol
2. 01:13:913 (9) - you are missing an 1/8 note, add an extra repeat to this slider and make the next slider a bit closer for avoid the combo break got it
3. 01:17:348 (5) - no clap on end of slider? there is no moar double clap patterns incoming this double clap pattern sounds nice to me, so im keeping it
4. 01:32:463 (6) - same as avobe ^
   nice star patterns <: Thanks~~~

that is all >_< cant star due spacing on [Easy] and [Normal] diffs
hope this helps ;_;

1. 00:17:119 (2) - previous object still 1,20x
2. 00:20:783 (2) - ↑ same as avobe
3. 01:24:447 (4) - stack on 01:22:615 (2) start?

ikari_kyon wrote:

xD sorry I haven't see this anime, also getting back to point some stuff on [Easy]

1. 00:17:119 (2) - previous object still 1,20x
2. 00:20:783 (2) - ↑ same as avobe
3. 01:24:447 (4) - stack on 01:22:615 (2) start?

anyway take your star x3

1. Well,you have a inconsistent kiai times here so fix that please
2. 01:44:142 (1) - Considered to extend this spinner to 1/2 in all diffs
3. "Moonlight's Hard" don't have Audio Lead-In,Why?

• - 00:30:630 (5) - Delete this note because is hard to read for newbies players in my opinion
  - 00:45:287 (6) - ^

• -- Looks nice

• -- So you have a unsnapped section here 00:17:133,so resnap this section

• -- Perhaps you should to remove the video in my opinion
  -- And yeah,you have a unsnapped circles here:
  

  00:29:330 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 
  00:29:406 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 
  00:30:017 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 
  00:30:093 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 
  00:30:246 (5) - Unsnapped circle. 
  00:30:322 (6) - Unsnapped circle. 

• -- Ok

vwxcrossover wrote:

suggestion orz

[Normal]
01:36:814 (5) - Add finish ok

[Insane]
The kiai ends at 01:40:478 right ? owo forgot to change lol

its a good map seriously XD

suzutsukikanade wrote:

Ok as you requested in my queue...

[General]
Can't see nothing wrong here.

[Easy]
This diff is fine

[Normal]

Oh, creative sliders here

00:41:165 (1,2,3): Fix spacing here. k

SPOILER

[attachment=0:cd6d5]screenshot009.jpg[/attachment:cd6d5]

00:55:363: add a note? aite...wait why did i delete that anyways lol
01:29:027 (9): NC here? Is a long combo for a Insane. k NC on the white tick

[Hard]
Oh you used many whistles here o.o
And slider sounds annoying here, sorry but your hard is a little annoying for me.
This is guest diff, since the creator is somewhat afk due to exams i will take over the fixes

00:01:547 (1): Remove whistle and add finish.
00:28:111 (8): ^ in repeat.
00:28:798 (1): Remove Finish
00:29:485 (3): ^
00:30:631 (6): Remove whistle
00:44:600 (3,4,5): Remove claps here

Insane is ok

Your map is good, find more mods and this map will be good.

kanpakyin wrote:

Artist: yanaginagi

this is the cover of this single.

ikari_kyon wrote:

not sure about artist, even google says that is yanagi nagi

• Hello~!
  
  Here's my mod
  
  [General]

1. I suggest you remove the kiai in this part 01:25:821 and put a new kiai here 01:29:485
   
   [Easy]
2. 01:02:005 (4) - move this slider by 1 grid down
3. 00:29:485 (2,3,4,1) - try making this pattern? and change the shape of the slider as shown on the pic http://puu.sh/xE3I
4. 00:47:348 (4) - add whistle on the head of this slider
5. 00:49:180 (1) - ^
6. 00:54:676 (4) - ^
7. AP -1?
   
   [Normal]
8. 00:08:875 (1) - Rotate this slider by -5? and after that, fix the spacing
9. 00:18:722 (7) - make the slider shape like at 00:19:867 (1)
   
   [Moonlight's Hard]
10. 01:08:188 (1) - New combo here?
    
    [Insane]
11. Seems fine

Mythol wrote:

Request from Mito~

[Easy]
01:02:692 (5) - Shorten this slider to 01:03:379. This rhythm is too hard for an easy and also this plays a lot better. k

[Normal]
01:11:165 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Spacing is too big, going from x1.2 to x2.0 is a huge change in a normal. Make it smaller~ 0.8x smaller
01:28:569 (7,8) - Switch to a 1/2 slider? I don't think note spams are very fun to play.. got it
01:32:921 (9) - Shouldn't NC be here instead? ?
01:32:692 (8) - NC here instead to stay consistent with the previous NC yeah this one got it

[Hard]
00:16:204 (1) - This slider velocity decrease doesn't fit at all, remove? k
00:37:043 (2) - Use x1.5 spacing, I don't see a reason to change to x1.6 for just this slider. Also maybe Ctrl+R for better flow aite
01:10:707 (9) - Clap here, and change to whistle on 01:10:936 (11)? drum sound in the bg suggest clap at 11
01:13:455 (2) - This jump is too big, I know you want to avoid overlapping, but I think this looks great too. redesigned this place for shorter jump

SPOILER

01:14:600 - Add note here k
01:40:478 (1,1,1) - No need to NC here o.o changed, though i think that makes it look fancier...

[Insane]
OD 7 PLEASE since many people suggested OD 7, i guess i will have to change...
00:59:714 (7,8,9,10,1) - Reduce spacing? D: reduced spacing on all major mini streams
01:40:478 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Looks really nice, but doesn't play very well.. I think you should change, but its up to you~ yeah i know it looks good but doesnt play well, even when i play it myself i screw up. but i reduced it to scale at 0.9x and with an OD of 7, it should be better

Good map

frans_niko wrote:

here we go from my queue!

Easy
01:25:821 add kiai in here aite

Normal
same with easy ^

Moonlight's hard
same with easy ^
CS+1 i prefer bigger circle

Taiko mode by Nyquill same with easy kk
insane too + CS+1 kiai time followed, circle size same as hard

-Sekai- wrote:

the right title is:

Artist: yanaginagi

Title: Vidro Moyou (TV Size)

it's not Short Ver. >.<

Leorda wrote:

Hello there

[Easy]
00:57:424 (2) - Add 1 repeating slider? alrite, though im not sure if two repeats is suitable for easy


[Normal]
* AR +1? kk

01:24:447 (2) - Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at head and tail slider), it's annoying didnt even catch that lol, fixed
01:24:905 (3) - ^ ^
01:25:363 (4) - ^ ^
01:26:508 (2) - Add clap at tail slider done
01:28:569 (7) - Add clap at head slider done


[Insane]
* AR -1? I think ar8 is good for this map

01:07:157 (11) - New combo for 0,5x slider hmm i dont have a 0.5x slider here...and the combo is trying to match with video color so im keeping this unchanged
01:13:913 (9) - Remove 1 repeating slider so players can click the next notes with perfect timed fixed (yeah i never got a 300 here while testing)
01:34:524 (6) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar moved down a bit


[Nyquill's Taiko Oni]
* This diff has 6 unsnapped notes. You better snap it wow now i understand why so many people pointed out this issue...its not snapped on the 1/6 ticks orz...k fixed


Once you done, forum PM me

-Sekai- wrote:

the right title is:

Artist: yanaginagi

Title: Vidro Moyou (TV Size)

it's not Short Ver. >.<

ztrot wrote:

To all MAT and BAT start popping bubbles that use any variant of Short Full Cut Ver unless it is in the title of the song. Amended

There is no need to use any of these types unless they are part of the real song's title

Yu-Izanagi-12 wrote:

Hi from my queue
this is going to be short and sweet because i didn't find much wrong with the map

Moonlight's Hard
HP+1 alrite
OD+1 that makes it same with insane, which is a bit hard

Insane
CS+1 i personally dont like small circles, plus the map has enough jumps so keeping it the same

Garven wrote:

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best alrite changed to 2...but the sliders look scary now -_-
Considering all of your slider art, I kind of wish you used a more space-centric background image. tried finding a more "space-centric" bg (more characters lol), if its not good then i will try to find another one

[Easy]
00:43:684 (1) - The normal sliderslide sounds awful here. fixed with a new normal-slidertick.wav
00:59:256 (4,5) - Please not in an Easy changed to one repeat slider
01:12:997 (1) - Why so quiet? its for the feel (the sudden disappearance of heavy drums), but yeah increased to 40% volume
01:28:340 (4,5) - Please not in an Easy changed to one repeat slider
01:31:317 (3,4) - Going from this to 01:33:150 (1,2) - can be pretty confusing. I really recommend you change 01:33:150 (1,2) - to something more simplistic. remapped this part (with some change in positioning later), please see if it is appropriate

[Normal]
00:43:684 (1) - The normal sliderslide sounds awful here. fixed with new wav

[Hard]
will let moonlight fix this
00:36:585 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not really understanding these decrescendos.
00:40:020 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:44:142 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:12:997 (1,2,3) - ^
etc. I appreciate the effort, but in a modern song like this, there are no dynamic changes. having your hitsounds using such a technique doesn't make much sense when run in parallel with the song.

[Oni]
will let nyquill fix this
01:12:997 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Using a drumroll here makes more sense. Have it extend to 01:13:913 - , start the spinner at 01:14:027 - and end at 01:14:714 - then add a D at 01:14:829 - to start the next phrase
01:43:798 (1) - delete
01:43:913 (1) - D or K
01:44:142 (2) - delete

[Insane]
00:43:684 (1,2) - The normal sliderslide sounds awful here. fixed with new wav

Nice set!

Garven wrote:

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best
Considering all of your slider art, I kind of wish you used a more space-centric background image.


[Hard]
00:36:585 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not really understanding these decrescendos.
00:40:020 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:44:142 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:12:997 (1,2,3) - ^
etc. I appreciate the effort, but in a modern song like this, there are no dynamic changes. having your hitsounds using such a technique doesn't make much sense when run in parallel with the song.

Garven wrote:

[Oni]
01:44:142 (2) - delete there is a cymbal that starts here, not at a half beat before.

Garven wrote:

Open up the taiko .osu

Go to this line:

364,352,72997,2,0,B|276:364|256:292|256:292|236:364|136:348,1,280

Change the 280 at the end to 281

Save.

Slider should look like this. Test this first, please. sorry i didnt really notice it because it looked fine in the editor...im guessing its for that extra tick before the spinner? dont know how taiko maps work lol



Upload.

Let me know.

(why did you change the mp3?) i changed the name of it cause the old name didnt make sense (which is why many people told me to use TV Size when its not) sorry for the confusion

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

First off, we aren't labeling versions anymore, so remove (Short Ver.) from the song title please. im guessing this is the new rule...the original name did say short size though. I will remove it (trying not to get duplicate orz)

[Easy]
00:57:424 (2) - it might be better to put the clap on the last hit of this to match the drum in the music acctually i believe the drum is hit at 00:57:653 which is where i put the clap...there seems to be a few places where the drum appears on a red tick

[Normal]
00:01:547 (1) - tbh I think this would look better without the last turn at the end, something more like this: http://puu.sh/14rH1 done
00:08:875 (1) - ^ done
00:18:493 - feels like there should be a note here im trying to follow the piano here, which does not appear in this section, a note would sound awkward imo
00:22:157 - ^ same as above
00:40:936 - ^ done

[Insane]
I love how you have the combo colors synced to the background :3 thanks~~
01:42:310 (1,2) - this is...not as effective at demonstrating the star shape. Maybe if you broke it into 3 sliders instead of 2 somehow. i tweaked it around a bit...3 sliders do not seem to work properly so i added a note at 01:43:226 and pumped up the slider velocity so the 2 slider heads/tails act like notes. If you select all you will see a complete star~~

Have a nice day and good luck!

1. Shouldn't the title be "yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou (TV size)"? Why you use "Short Ver."?

1. I've got a offset : 1541 (-6), if you agree with this, please change to this and resnap all notes, timing sections, do this after check my mod since my mod is based on your timing

1. 01:47:692 - idk why you end all spinners here, ends it at 01:47:806 or other white tick sounds better imo :/

1. 01:27:424 (3) - Remove clap on the slider head, add clap to 01:27:195 (2) slider end seems better, you can try use normal hitsound for 01:27:424 (3) slider head

1. 01:03:608 (8) - Remove clap and use normal hitsound for this note, add clap to 01:03:379 (7), that sounds nice

1. 01:12:997 (2) - This slider end isn't snapped right

Garven wrote:

Alright: let's do this!

Note to next modder: Yes, there's a slider with an unsnapped end in the taiko. It's meant to be there to fix the tick.

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. Shouldn't the title be "yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou (TV size)"? Why you use "Short Ver."?

about the title, the original title of this version can be found here http://www.geneonuniversal.jp/rondorobe ... 00000.html
since saturos-fangirl told me to remove the (Short Ver.) due to the recent change in naming criteria, i will wait for some further feedback on that


[Timing]

1. I've got a offset : 1541 (-6), if you agree with this, please change to this and resnap all notes, timing sections, do this after check my mod since my mod is based on your timing

after talking to a few ppl, your timing seems better so changed ^_^

[All difficulties]

1. 01:47:692 - idk why you end all spinners here, ends it at 01:47:806 or other white tick sounds better imo :/

fixed all

[Easy]

1. 01:27:424 (3) - Remove clap on the slider head, add clap to 01:27:195 (2) slider end seems better, you can try use normal hitsound for 01:27:424 (3) slider head

done

[Insane]

1. 01:03:608 (8) - Remove clap and use normal hitsound for this note, add clap to 01:03:379 (7), that sounds nice

done...though i feel that the first clap sound awkward, the normal hitsound seems cool

[Taiko]

1. 01:12:997 (2) - This slider end isn't snapped right

as Garven said lol

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Taiko]
00:06:356 (1,1,2,1) - this rhythm doesn't really fit the music very well at this point in the music I'd have to agree, but the circumstances pretty much decree that some form of deviation is required from the previous measures so that it doesn't become d kkd k d kkd k d all the way through the song...
00:29:256 (1,2,3,4) - this 1/6 rhythm is unnecessary and out of place How does everyone feel about me changing these to 1/8s? I mean, the music actually do suggest 1/8s pretty solidly here. I do feel 1/4s are really out of place.
00:29:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:00:859 - add a note? yesssssss totally messed up on this one.
!