1. Easy (2.4 stars, 99 notes)
2. Easy^2 (4 stars, 133 notes)
3. Easy^4 (4.78 stars, 268 notes)
4. Kirino's Easy^3 (4.43 stars, 164 notes)
5. Megastore's Taiko (4.78 stars, 444 notes)

NewRulerNA wrote:

[Easy^4]

00:34:024 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - DS is unified to a slight degree. I am guessing you wanted to say DS is slightly inconsistent. I changed this one and the 3rd one slightly to make the DS more consistent, but the seond one was close enough that I didn't care too much and I wanted to preserve the shape.
01:07:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:17:500 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

I like interesting arrangement of a slider. Thanks
Please become Ranked.

☆～

kanpakyin wrote:

I'm just pass by =A=
Probably change the source to C3 Shikyubu? I see all of the Ranked beatmap are use this source.

-Chata- wrote:

sorry, I'm bad at English Your English is easy enough to understand, so don't worry.

[Easy^2]
00:55:361 (2,3) - remove clap It sounds better with the claps there.
00:59:211 - add note and add clap Want to follow only the lyrics, so no.
01:09:479 - ^ ^
01:17:179 - sound volume 5%? Fixed with 30%


[Easy^4]
00:13:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wow..remove clap Nah, I like the claps
00:23:596 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^ ^
00:34:024 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^ ^
00:34:024 (5) - add finish the finish felt sort of random here, so no.
00:50:548 (4) - add finish to slider's start Done.
00:58:890 (6) - ^ Done.
01:01:457 (7) - finish the finish felt sort of random here, so no.
01:08:195 - add note and add clap Done.
01:09:479 - ^ Done.
01:17:500 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - remove clap Nah, I like the claps
01:26:484 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ and add normal sound The custom soft set is fine


I'm cannot find another errors.
く(￣△￣)ノガンバレェェェ！！

good luck.

zeroclover wrote:

just ask~
Countdown: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
were needed or not o_o? Not exactly required, but fixed anyway.

easy^2 looked hard with 3,95 diff rate Seems easy enough when I saw the testplays, so it should be fine.
try change this slider into a 1 circle Plus, I like how the current sliders follow the vocals.
00:20:388 (5) -
01:21:992 (5) -
01:24:559 (5) -

ignore my suggestion if u like those sliders

anyway, "Endless stories are endless" < nice

Armin wrote:

[Easy]

00:13:967 (1) - This slider's start is not snapped properly with the second red section... If you fix this don't forget to snap the slider's end too Done. That is a large mistake on my part.
00:11:617 (x) - I'd add a break here anyway; the reason is quite fair, considering that this is the easiest difficulty, in order to prevent empty spaces where the HP Drain Bar would inevitably decrease its value. In addition, it not shows so bad At least... consider to add it only here 00:21:992? I added the 2 small breaks before and after this instrumental section.
01:05:307 (4) - Aww I expect its end always 1/2 bpm early, just because you followed the vocal voice in the chorus >.< Hmm, the voice lands on the white tick from what I hear, and I did not try to follow too many holds in this diff.... Still I sort of see your point. I guess if someone else suggest the same thing I will change it.
01:14:612 (2,3,4) - Where is the clap-pattern that you followed here? 01:09:799 (1,2,3,4,5) - (<- in other words, I'd add a clap on (3)) Fixed.

[Easy^2]

00:21:671 (3) - I'd make it end 1/2 before if I were you... if you agree with me I suggest you to use the command scale of the editor (ctrl+shift+s) Done.
01:26:484 (4) - What if you add a finish here? :3 Done.

[Easy^4]

01:27:045 (1) - A whistle at the end sounds just awful for my ears... consider to remove it please Removed.
01:04:505 (4,5) - What a weird jump o.o this kills the flows by the way, but if you like it in this way... well, I guess it's up to you xD I agree, the flow is weird, rearranged 4 and 5 to try to compensate for it.

Sexy map by the way ;P Thanks!

Anshi wrote:

[Generally]
I found that my style in map is the same with urs, maybe similar ...

Easy

• 00:01:554 (2) - following the tone, i would make it higher(X 104, Y 80) Want to I played around with making this one higher and flipping the next slider, but I didn't like how the 300s were pointing downward (made it slightly more distracting for later notes)
  00:07:630 (2) - ^ (X256,Y208) Basically the same thing about the 300 being slightly more distracting if you move it up and if I move it up, I have a slight overlap with 4 that I really don't want to mess with.
  00:31:938 (4) - design a new pattern for suiting the tone I edited my slider to have more of an S shape, but I did want to keep the elongated look.
  

  400,216,31938,2,0,B|456:232|376:272|304:288|376:304|392:328|376:312|416:312,1,160

  
  00:51:190 (2) - althought i dont think you would agree with me , i still wanna say that dont cover it .Especially in easy diff. Until I can think of another way to make a nice looking pattern, I want to keep it. Also, the approach circle is perfectly visible, so I don't think it is too much of an issue. Still, I know it is not the easiest arrangement in the world, and will change it if others ask as well.

Easy^2

is fine i think.

Easy^4

• 00:32:420 (6) ~ 00:32:420 - i would use two notes in the two points , rather than a 1/2 slider.The current slider follows the lyrics, so it fits for me.
  
  00:47:981 (3) - i would replace whistle with clap
  00:49:104 (6) - ^
  00:50:388 (3) - add clap
  00:51:029 (6) - ^ I see what you mean by the hitsounds, so I tried redoing the pattern of hitsounds here to include more claps.
  00:56:323 (1,2,3) - add finish ? Doesn't fit as well for me, so no.

uh... would you mind having a look at my map....
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/39729 Sadly I am not accepting mod request right now, but if I do get some free time, I'll look at it... (please don't expect a mod basically)

Aleks719 wrote:

General

take al ook

remove audio from video please~ Woops, let me reencode and I'll resubmit.
also you have sections with custom hitsounds, but.. no custom hitsounds in your folder! Maybe you had forgot to make full submit or something like it Now I know why everyone didn't like these streams. Let me full submit my soft clap.

Easy^4
HP+1? Having it this low is fine.
00:13:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - remove these claps or make them a bit quiet. it sounds like a gun fire. (aaaaaaand to the end of diff)
look : 01:07:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - stream without claps. and sounds good. Maybe you forgot them here, but i prefer this variant. Basically the custom hitsound is the solution to this, and the one without hitosund is already using a normal sampleset.
01:10:441 (3) - huh, make end on white tick (01:10:762) as here : 01:13:008 (3) for consistence. Done.
01:28:730 [T] - make end of spinner more quiet? 10% is better for me Done.

Easy^2
00:39:479 (7) - add clap to the end Done.
00:40:281 (8) - remove clap from the start, add to end. Done.
^ sounds better and softer for me, cuz you use this rhythm (clap every 2nd white tick) at next combo.
01:27:045 (1) - finish at the end? you use it only in this diff. Remove and make spinner end more quiet, imo Done.

Easy
HP 5? Whyyyyy? Why not HP2 for consistence with other stats? Fine. Fine. xD
00:09:908 (4) - imo sounds better Hmmmm...... In some ways I like it better in some ways I don't. Musically both work, but I think I am going keep mine because adding on the other slider will make a stack that doesn't fit that well, an ugly overlap, or some jump that should not be in an easy diff.
Also you said me that i should avoid sliders with more than one reverse in easy diffs Well the current repeat sliders are fine because it is perfectly readable and it is not like a note you would have to rush off to after this note.
01:28:730 [T] - make end of spinner more quiet? 10% is better for me Done.

Good luck, yea

Megastore wrote:

Looove that song <3
Can i do a taiko diff ? D:

blissfulyoshi wrote:

@Kirino, get ready for more remaps.
00:13:326 (1,2,3,4,5) - I tried playing this pattern and asking friends, but we agree this pattern is not very playable. Just remove it.
00:22:313 (5,1) - overlap
00:23:596 (3,4,5,6,1) - same pattern as before
00:28:730 (1,2) - the placement of these notes look a little messy with the previous 3,4,5 and their hitbursts
00:30:976 (1,3) - overlap
00:37:714 (3,4) - ^
00:39:799 (2,3,5,6) - overlap from hitbursts and just overlap of notes with notes please rearrange
I think you can fix the rest of the overlaps and patterns by yourself, but I guess I will start moving on to the next issue. Your style is not very consistent creating a strange flow. 00:25:200 (3,5,7) - these random linear slider combos look really strange among all the curved sliders. In addition there is almost no reason for you to change style, making it even weirder.

It really seems like you aren't playtesting your map much. You should play it and ask yourself is this fun and fcable for someone of my teh target skill level? Would I get angry trying to fc this? Sadly my current answer to both of these is no.
If you are willing to take the next step, you can start trying to implement more artful patterns to make the map look nicer (slider art, and blanketing sliders would be nice) (I would wait a bit to see if you can make the map enjoyable for yourself first)

Yes sir!~ :3 Currently fixing things...

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Megastore, you can make a taiko diff as long as you can get some taiko mods (more than one and please have at least one with some renown to avoid doubt from other mods) to look at it first before submitting it to me. I don't want to deal too much with finding taiko mods xD.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

@Kirino Kousaka: Sorry, sorry. I will get to modding your map very soon. (Wow that is not a promising way to say things.
Edit: Sorry again for taking such a long time to get back to this map. Let's start modding. (Going to be a bit more aggressive this time, so change what you feel is necessary)
00:07:630 (3,4) - since everything else in the beginning stays away form the top edges, I would probably lower these a bit ( just felt a bit weird imo) Fixed. :3
00:13:971 (1) - make this slider go out further so that it is not overlapped by the previous stream I slightly moved the slider upward :3
00:21:029 (1,2,3,4) - even though this looks nice in the editor, 3 and 4 come out look a little messy with the hitbursts covering the end of 4, so I advise you rearrange this I moved 1 and 2 to a new place, pulled 3,4,5,6 a bit downwards :3
00:25:040 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I found this combo a little boring with sliders not following that well between notes, maybe try having 3 follow 1's curve (be blanketed by 1) or at least have 3 point more directly at for and have 7 point more directly at 6 I don't really get what I have to do here but made some changes
00:26:965 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - It feels a little weird transitioning from something with pure halfnote intervals to something with whole note intervals mixes in when they sound very similar (not to mention the change in hitcircle:slider ratio) remmaped :3
00:39:960 (3,5) - overlap (and the hitsounds sound a little weird around this area, but I am not in the expert in the field of hitsounds) Fixed. :3
00:43:168 (7,8) - center these 2 notes around the y-axis to form a symmetrical pattern Not so sure if fixed, but made some changes :3
00:50:869 (2) - hp bar overlap Fixed. :3
00:52:473 (1,2,3) - please increase the spacing here so the sliders don't touch (if you have a cool formation here, that will be a nice bonus) Fixed. :3
01:04:024 (1,2,3) - These repeat sliders don't really fit the music and really kill the fast moving flow oyu had before Fixed. :3
Repeat the things I asked for the in the beginning to the end. Yes sir!~ :3

Tried to see if you can map in a more artful style, so lets see how this goes. Thanks for all your time and effort Kirino
no prob sir
I just really love to map this song and hopefully have another accepted guest diff >w<

blissfulyoshi wrote:

@Kirino: Okay lets go through this again (I might need to find someone to check the flow of your map since I am horrible at checking flow)
Also remember there are many ranked endless story maps if you need inspiration

Easy^3:
00:13:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - Finally figured out why I don't like this section xD. The slider overlaps a lot of the hitbursts from the previous streams, and even if you rearrange the slider shape a bit, it doesn't seem like the stream and slider fits each other that well.
Here is an idea I had to make it better: (a little rushed but I think it looks better, feel free to suggest something better) Yes sir I changed it into a loop :3

SPOILER

00:24:238 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 2 problems here, first I don't really understand the flow of this section. It feels a little awkward while playing. The other things i that the sliders don't look that great with each other. It seems like you made some very poor blankets or just being completely random. Yes sir fixed!~ :3 ( I just thought of this for a second http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/221265 but I just removed it cause I think it's not that good XD)
00:44:451 (1,2) - since I just don't like hitbursts overlapping sliders without a good reason
Here is an idea I tried: (will probably require a lot of rearranging)

SPOILER

00:54:077 - it seems like a note belongs here(helps the flow imo)
01:02:741 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - as much as I like these sliders 12 in a row is excessive and doesn't fit that well imo. Try to add some variation. Yes sir fixed!~ :3
01:27:126 - Add a spinner to the end to tell players that the song is ending? added. :3

You are getting better, but there are still some things to work on. Slider art and slider flow seem to be things that constantly come to my attention while playing the map. I advise playing more ranked maps and maybe reading viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194 to get a better idea on how to make nice sliders. Beyond that, the map seems to have an awkward flow when I play it, but I am not an expert on it. As a result, I'll see if I can get someone else to mod for that, but see if you can get one of your friends to look over the map and get their opinion. Thanks a lot sir~ also for that link, cause I got some cool sliders out of it :3

Garven wrote:

Doing a quick spot check on the ^3

00:03:073 (3,4,5) - I don't like how the flow goes up and down for a fairly smooth line of music. You might want to try going in a smooth arc all the way across, though I like how the 3 is set up with 4 and 5. Maybe try arcing 00:01:554 (2) - a lot lower so that you can fit the 3 lower on the field to slead smoothly into the 3 slider. I'm not so sure about how to do it, but made some changes ><
00:09:149 (1,2,3,4) - Going to such a small spacing after such huge spacing is a little disorienting. yes sir~ made some changes :3
00:13:326 - That giant stream here? If you're going for a Hard difficulty, this is going waaay beyond it. Just go with the strings here. oh lol I don't know what to do here now >< at first, there were 2 sliders with many repeats instead of that giant stream, sir blissfulyoshi said that it looks ugly to have sliders like that in a drumroll. Second,I changed it into a slider with massive repeats, and he said that I should get rid of that slider and I can put some streams if I want. And now I have these streams that I don't know how to get rid of orz. Anyways made some sew arrangements with the stream. Please suggest anything that you have thought of that might make this part better sir, thanks~ :3
00:14:933 - You should add a note here. Having such a dull start to the up-tempo part of the song sets the player up for lower expectations. I see :3 Fixed~
00:19:104 (3,4) - In your quest for mirror images, you leave some undesirable spacing behind. Please be sure that your patterns work well flow-wise as well through rigorous testing. Yes sir!~ :3
00:24:238 (1,2,3) - Honestly, I find this rhythm really awkward to play. It's a nice long slider with the ticks filling in the rhythm, but it feels weird. I'm not even sure what you're trying to follow in the music. I guess it's the piano. Which is hardly a feature instrument at this point in the song. Following the lesser instrumentals is fine if you have a repeated portion, but the prominent piece of the music (usually melody or percussion) really should be followed initially so that the player has an established sense of the song. Coooool >w< Yes Sir made changes!~ :3
00:29:211 (1) - This rhythm is... awkward to say the least. yes sir!~ fixed that one :3
00:29:853 (2,3,4) - These weird switches to soft sound set are really jarring compared to the volume level of the Normal set. It's probably best to either stick with normal throughout and use these sections at lower volume, or try to apply your hitsounds differently. changes made =w=
00:36:430 (5,1,2,3) - You change your distance snap on every single one of these notes, and there's not really any musical cue to help justify them. Another reason being paying attention to your patterns and play testing. I don't know what to do here now sir

Anyway, just a glimpse at a few things for you to keep an eye out for while you're going over your map (and future maps). See if you can spot similar problems in your patterns and flow and see what you can do to make the map a blast to play.Yes sir!~ =w=

Done doing the changes sir!~
Download: Tamura Yukari - Endless Story (TV Size) (blissfulyoshi) [Kirino's Easy^3].osu
Ready for more remapping sir :3