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YTYuyu

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YTYuyu 2012-03-28T21:22:51+00:00

Alright let's see what I can find.

General:
Why is this still in WIP? i'm guessing that now the diffs are done, you should move it to pending.
re-size the 2 BG's to 1024x768 so that there's no black on the BG

Easy:
00:02:313 (3,1) - are you sure that beginners can reach this in time?
00:09:908 (4) - make this a NC because the instrumental changes like the v-shape slider.
00:17:821 (4) - i think beginners might let go because the hitburst gets in the way. I suggest that you move (4) here so that it'd be easier for beginners.
00:19:746 (2,3) - same as 00:12:612
00:21:029 (1) - the hitburst is still covering this note by the time (3) is hit. suggest that you move this note somewhere else so that it'd be fully visible for beginners.
00:42:205 (4) - ^
00:56:965 (1,2) - remove the claps because they sound weird and replace the clap at the end of (1) for a finish as it matches with the vocals IMO
01:02:099 (1) - add a finish at the end? same reason as above.
01:07:233 (1,2) - same as 00:02:313 and for (1) and add finishes at the ends? ^
01:10:441 (3) - same as 00;21:029
01:12:366 (1) - same as 01:02:099
01:20:067 - i feel that something's missing here. add a 1/1 slider to follow the instrumental because beginners might think that (1) is following this part instead of the next part.
01:22:634 - ^
01:25:200 (4,1) - for (4), same as 00:21:029 and for (1), beginners won't know when this slider will end, ik it's following the drums but this seems too hard for them. suggest that you do something easier for them

Easy^2:
00:03:453 - add a circle here to follow the instrumental or replace (1) for a 1/2 slider to make it easier.
00:06:111 (1) - ^
00:09:149 (1) - ^
00:17:500 (5,6) - i feel that going around in circles looks boring. I suggest that you move it here. IMO this looks fun as the pattern changes from a diamond to a triangle.
00:19:104 (3) - I think you forgot to add a finish at the beginning?
00:23:436 (4,1) - uhh i'm guessing that this is a spacing error as the current DS between these notes is at 0.64 and the default DS is at 0.8, and add a whistle or a finish at the beginning of (1) to match the vocals.
00:25:682 (4,5) - remove the claps because it sounds weird and it ruins the consistency.
00:28:569 (5,6) - ^
00:34:505 (1) - add a finish at the beginning to march the vocals?
00:35:147 (2) - same as 00:25:682 but at the end.
00:38:837 (5) - same as 00:25:682
00:39:479 (7) - ^
00:42:848 (5) - to keep the consistency, add a clap at the end
00:44:773 (1) - i think replacing this for a finish here sounds better as your using the whistles at this part. also if you do this, add whistles at every 2nd and 4th downbeat.
00:49:906 (1) - same as 00:34:505 but reduce the volume of the finish. 50% should be fine.
00:56:965 (1,2,3,4) - this is why i mentioned why the claps shouldnt be at the easy diff. this 1 sounds a lot better while the easy diff sounds weird.
01:02:741 (3) - same as 00:34:505
01:07:874 (2) - ^
01:13:009 (3) - ^
01:17:500 - add a 1/1 slider because players might think that (1) is following this instead of the next part.
01:18:142 (1) - ^

Kirino's Easy^3:
I think this diff needs to use the BG on Easy^4 since he/she is doing a guest diff
00:05:731 (1) - replace this for a circle at 00:06:111 because it feels weird if this slider is here.
00:11:807 - is there a reason why a break is here? remove it because the Hp bar doesnt decrease that much.
00:13:971 (1) - I think that this loop can look nicer.
00:15:254 (3) - this 1 looks fine so make (1) like this slider
00:17:821 (4) - replace this for a 1/1 slider to follow the long pause.
00:23:115 (1) - remove the finish at the end because i think that sounds weird.
00:30:976 (1,2,3,4) - add whistles at the 2nd and 4th downbeat like the previous combo to keep that pattern going. the whistles sound nice but idk why you stopped.
00:34:024 (1) - I suggest that you face it the other way like this so that it'd look less confusing.
00:49:906 (1,3) - the finishes at the beginning looks fine but at the end it sounds weird. Suggest that you remove the finishes at the end.
00:52:473 (1,2,3) - IMO it looks like these sliders look different. correct me if i'm wrong if they're the same.
00:57:607 (1) - add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals?
01:02:741 (2) - ^
01:04:666 (3) - I find it odd that this is a wave slider while the other sliders in this combo are curved sliders. so make this a curved slider so that it'd flow properly.
01:12:366 (1) - same as 00:57:607 but at the end.
01:24:238 (5) - ^

Easy^4:
Switch BGs with Kirino's diff. like i said about the GD.
00:03:453 - add a circle here to follow the instrumental? i feel that something's missing here.
00:06:491 - ^
00:39:318 (7) - ooh i think that you can do better than this. IMO this looks ugly.
00:58:088 (4) - remove this note because it's not following anything. if you say the piano, the end of (3) and the beginning of (5) is following the piano
00:59:372 (8) - ^

This is the best I can do. GL

blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2012-03-29T00:16:19+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote:
Alright let's see what I can find.

General:
Why is this still in WIP? i'm guessing that now the diffs are done, you should move it to pending. Gah forgot. Let me fix that.
re-size the 2 BG's to 1024x768 so that there's no black on the BG Since these were screens from the anime, I really want to keep them in their origianl dimensions, esp since the first picture is Fear looking inside a box (the box would get cropped off if I shrunk it).

Easy:
00:02:313 (3,1) - are you sure that beginners can reach this in time? 1 has barely even started to fade into existence when I press 3,
00:09:908 (4) - make this a NC because the instrumental changes like the v-shape slider. My mistake, fixed.
00:17:821 (4) - i think beginners might let go because the hitburst gets in the way. I suggest that you move (4) here so that it'd be easier for beginners. I think it is easy enough, and it looks a lot better in its current position imo.
00:19:746 (2,3) - same as 00:12:612 Variety is good too.....(I think I used a few too many sliders, so a few more circles won;t hurt imo)
00:21:029 (1) - the hitburst is still covering this note by the time (3) is hit. suggest that you move this note somewhere else so that it'd be fully visible for beginners. I think this is okay for beginners.... (I don't really have a reason other than I don't really want to change it, sry)
00:42:205 (4) - ^ This one is fairly easy to read imo and a common pattern later on. As a result, I am going to keep it the way it is.
00:56:965 (1,2) - remove the claps because they sound weird and replace the clap at the end of (1) for a finish as it matches with the vocals IMO I removed 1's claps but not 2's because I want the finish to signify the start of the chorus.
01:02:099 (1) - add a finish at the end? same reason as above. The finish does not fit really well with the current clap pattern imo. Also since it is not a transition, it sounds even weirder.
01:07:233 (1,2) - same as 00:02:313 and for (1) and add finishes at the ends? ^ A little more difficult, but I think it is fine since it is slider to slider, and the response to the finish is same as above.
01:10:441 (3) - same as 00;21:029 It is readable enough imo.
01:12:366 (1) - same as 01:02:099 It is not a repeat and you see the ending before you finish the slider, so it should be fine. If other people complain I will change this though.
01:20:067 - i feel that something's missing here. add a 1/1 slider to follow the instrumental because beginners might think that (1) is following this part instead of the next part. Made to be similar to the beginning, so it is fine imo.
01:22:634 - ^ ^
01:25:200 (4,1) - for (4), same as 00:21:029 and for (1), beginners won't know when this slider will end, ik it's following the drums but this seems too hard for them. suggest that you do something easier for them Even though beginners won't know when the slider ends, do they need to? It is the last slider in the map right before a final spinner. As a result, I don't anyone should have difficulties with this.

Easy^2:
00:03:453 - add a circle here to follow the instrumental or replace (1) for a 1/2 slider to make it easier. I want some distinction between this sound the sound in 2,3, so keeping this a circle and 2 a slider without adding another note works for me since it is peaceful and it has disticntion imo.
00:06:111 (1) - ^ ^
00:09:149 (1) - ^ ^
00:17:500 (5,6) - i feel that going around in circles looks boring. I suggest that you move it here. IMO this looks fun as the pattern changes from a diamond to a triangle. Made a pentagon...
00:19:104 (3) - I think you forgot to add a finish at the beginning? Fixed
00:23:436 (4,1) - uhh i'm guessing that this is a spacing error as the current DS between these notes is at 0.64 and the default DS is at 0.8, and add a whistle or a finish at the beginning of (1) to match the vocals. There is a large time lapse here so not following DS is fine, but I did add a finish.
00:25:682 (4,5) - remove the claps because it sounds weird and it ruins the consistency. It sounds better than trying to remove these claps.
00:28:569 (5,6) - ^ ^
00:34:505 (1) - add a finish at the beginning to march the vocals? Done.
00:35:147 (2) - same as 00:25:682 but at the end. As I said before, I rather have a slightly screwed up pattern than no pattern at all.
00:38:837 (5) - same as 00:25:682 ^
00:39:479 (7) - ^ ^
00:42:848 (5) - to keep the consistency, add a clap at the end It feels to add an accent to the end of this slider since it is supposed to be a soft note.
00:44:773 (1) - i think replacing this for a finish here sounds better as your using the whistles at this part. also if you do this, add whistles at every 2nd and 4th downbeat. Done, but kept my whistle pattern the same.
00:49:906 (1) - same as 00:34:505 but reduce the volume of the finish. 50% should be fine. Added a finish here. I think that is what you meant.
00:56:965 (1,2,3,4) - this is why i mentioned why the claps shouldnt be at the easy diff. this 1 sounds a lot better while the easy diff sounds weird.
01:02:741 (3) - same as 00:34:505 Done.
01:07:874 (2) - ^ Done.
01:13:009 (3) - ^ Done.
01:17:500 - add a 1/1 slider because players might think that (1) is following this instead of the next part. Hmmm, I feel this is pushing players a bit just to get to notes after finishing a spinner. I think the small break is nice and I think players will notice the approach circle well enough.
01:18:142 (1) - ^ ^

Kirino's Easy^3:
I think this diff needs to use the BG on Easy^4 since he/she is doing a guest diff If you read the opening I put on the topic, the bg is correct. Besides that, I'll let Kirino take care of the rest.
00:05:731 (1) - replace this for a circle at 00:06:111 because it feels weird if this slider is here.
00:11:807 - is there a reason why a break is here? remove it because the Hp bar doesnt decrease that much.
00:13:971 (1) - I think that this loop can look nicer.
00:15:254 (3) - this 1 looks fine so make (1) like this slider
00:17:821 (4) - replace this for a 1/1 slider to follow the long pause.
00:23:115 (1) - remove the finish at the end because i think that sounds weird.
00:30:976 (1,2,3,4) - add whistles at the 2nd and 4th downbeat like the previous combo to keep that pattern going. the whistles sound nice but idk why you stopped.
00:34:024 (1) - I suggest that you face it the other way like this so that it'd look less confusing.
00:49:906 (1,3) - the finishes at the beginning looks fine but at the end it sounds weird. Suggest that you remove the finishes at the end.
00:52:473 (1,2,3) - IMO it looks like these sliders look different. correct me if i'm wrong if they're the same.
00:57:607 (1) - add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals?
01:02:741 (2) - ^
01:04:666 (3) - I find it odd that this is a wave slider while the other sliders in this combo are curved sliders. so make this a curved slider so that it'd flow properly.
01:12:366 (1) - same as 00:57:607 but at the end.
01:24:238 (5) - ^

Easy^4:
Switch BG's with Kirino's diff. like i said about the GD. If you read the opening I put on the topic, the bg is correct.
00:03:453 - add a circle here to follow the instrumental? i feel that something's missing here. As I said in the previous post, I like keeping the opening peaceful, but I guess if more people ask, I will change it.
00:06:491 - ^ ^
00:39:318 (7) - ooh i think that you can do better than this. IMO this looks ugly. If you are talking about the sharp corner, that is there because you can't see it under the 300 from 6 during gameplay. Besides that, I am okay with the slider.
00:58:088 (4) - remove this note because it's not following anything. if you say the piano, the end of (3) and the beginning of (5) is following the piano I admit this note does not follow anything but the flow while playing would become worse if I remove it, so I think it is an okay sacrifice.
00:59:372 (8) - ^ ^

This is the best I can do. GL

That was a long mod xD. Thanks for spending so much effort in modding my map Byakugan

Kirino Kousaka

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Kirino Kousaka 2012-03-31T10:14:45+00:00

Sorry for the delay sir, I was very busy irl with duties and such, now I have some time to fix. Sorry again.

CDFA wrote:
Hard:
Keep the claps on 2 and 4 more consistent :>.
00:06:491 (2) - Add finish at end of slider (goes with music :>) fixed!~
00:29:692 - Seems like a random place to lower the hitsound volume o-o fixed!~
00:39:799 - ^ (except replace "hitsound volume" with "hitsound style") fixed!~
00:44:291 (1,1) - Remove NC fixed!~
00:56:484 (1,1) - ^ fixed!~ though I'm not so sure because this is a jump, same with^
01:07:233 (1) - Maybe flip this around somewhere so it isn't on top of the sliver :> No change since I'm not so sure on what I should do here
01:14:933 (1,1) - Remove NC fixed!~
01:17:179 - Unneccesary timing section fixed!~

Thanks for modding CDFA!~

Bobo wrote:
[Easy^3]

00:39:799 - Use claps instead of whistles fixed!~
00:54:077 (4) - Really breaks the flow :l Thanks for modding Bobo~

Byakugan249 wrote:
Kirino's Easy^3:
I think this diff needs to use the BG on Easy^4 since he/she is doing a guest diff well I'm planning to submit a different BG for my diff... hmm...
00:05:731 (1) - replace this for a circle at 00:06:111 because it feels weird if this slider is here. fixed!~
00:11:807 - is there a reason why a break is here? remove it because the Hp bar doesnt decrease that much. It wasn't put because I want the HP bar to decrease, It just feels weird to play if there's an empty space without notes. No change.
00:13:971 (1) - I think that this loop can look nicer. fixed!~
00:15:254 (3) - this 1 looks fine so make (1) like this slider fixed!~
00:17:821 (4) - replace this for a 1/1 slider to follow the long pause. what? I don't really know what to do No change.
00:23:115 (1) - remove the finish at the end because i think that sounds weird. fixed!~
00:30:976 (1,2,3,4) - add whistles at the 2nd and 4th downbeat like the previous combo to keep that pattern going. the whistles sound nice but idk why you stopped. fixed!~
00:34:024 (1) - I suggest that you face it the other way like this so that it'd look less confusing. fixed!~
00:49:906 (1,3) - the finishes at the beginning looks fine but at the end it sounds weird. Suggest that you remove the finishes at the end. fixed!~
00:52:473 (1,2,3) - IMO it looks like these sliders look different. correct me if i'm wrong if they're the same. They're all the same :3
00:57:607 (1) - add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals? fixed!~
01:02:741 (2) - ^ fixed!~
01:04:666 (3) - I find it odd that this is a wave slider while the other sliders in this combo are curved sliders. so make this a curved slider so that it'd flow properly.fixed!~
01:12:366 (1) - same as 00:57:607 but at the end. fixed!~
01:24:238 (5) - ^ fixed!~
[notice]Thanks for modding Byakugan249!~

Also made some more changes:
Download: Tamura Yukari - Endless Story (TV Size) (blissfulyoshi) [Kirino's Easy^3].osu
And still open for remaps and such.

DarkDunskin

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DarkDunskin 2012-04-02T19:40:07+00:00

Hi, found your Request in #modreq.
This is mainly a Taiko Mod, so you may ignore my Ideas for the standard diffs, or not, whatever you want.

Baka Mod

Easy:
- 00:06:870 (1) - Finish at Sliderstart? You used it on Easy^4 too.
- 00:19:104 (1) - Add finish.
- 00:19:104 (1) - Finish instead Whistle?
- 00:34:505 (1) - Finish at Sliderstart instead Whistle?
- 00:42:205 (4) - ^
- 00:47:339 (1) - ^
Don't you use Finishs on this difficulty on purpose? Cause I'll get the feeling you do and better stop searching here.
Anyway I believe it would be better to have the Finish notes at the same Places on each of your difficultys.
Rest of the diff is mapped well, nothing to complain about.

Easy^2:
- 00:06:870 (2) - Finish at sliderstart.
- 00:20:388 (5) - Either replace the Slider with a Circle or make it twice as long. Since you do follow the main-melody all along this doesn't fit in so good.
- 00:42:206 (4) - Finish at sliderstart.
- 00:52:473 (1) - ^
- 01:11:725 (4) - Move it one grid down that its on the same height as (1).
- 01:20:388 (2) - Replace clap with finish.
- 01:23:275 (3) - Finish at sliderstart.

Kirino's Easy^3:
- 00:03:453 (2) - This note crosses the scorebar, move it a bit down please.

Megastore's Taiko:

Disclaimer: d = Note + no Hitsound/ k = Note + Whistle/ D = Note + Finish/ K = Note + Finish + Whistle.

- Better rename it to "Megastore's Taiko Oni"?
- Add Audio Lead-In 1,5~2s!
- 00:15:575 - Add Note without hitsound, it feels empty on Taiko mode :/
- 00:18:142 - Add Note + whistle.
- 00:42:206 (121,122,123,124) - You may add Finish's on these, to make it a similar Pattern like 00:30:655 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52).
- 00:46:858 - Add [url=00:46:858 -]d ddk D[/url], infront of the other Notes.
- 01:01:618 - Change this to d d kkk D.
- 01:02:901 - d k notes on the red and white Tick here.
- 01:05:468 - add d kkk here.
- 01:06:751 - add d d k here.
- 01:08:035 - d k notes on the red and white Tick here. (like on 01:02:901).
- 01:09:479 - add k here.
- 01:11:885 - add d kkk here.
- 01:13:329 - add k here.
- 01:18:462 - ^
- 01:19:746 - ^
- 01:22:152 - add d kkk here.
- 01:26:805 - Change 64 to k, delete 65 and change 66 to D.

Main Problem on this diff is that the kiai section feels a bit empty, everything else seems fine.
Here's a Version of your Taiko with my Suggestion's you may take over what you need:
ATTACH[Tamura Yukari - Endless Story (TV Size) (blissfulyoshi) [Megastore's Taiko Mod].osu]

Easy^4:
Can't find any errors with this, good~

Okay this is all, good luck~

Download: Tamura Yukari - Endless Story (TV Size) (blissfulyoshi) [Megastore's Taiko Mod].osu

[deleted user]

[deleted user] 2012-04-03T19:06:33+00:00

Fixed everything, ty :U

Download: Tamura Yukari - Endless Story (TV Size) (blissfulyoshi) [Megastore's Taiko].osu

blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2012-04-03T19:54:45+00:00

DarkDunskin wrote:
Hi, found your Request in #modreq.
This is mainly a Taiko Mod, so you may ignore my Ideas for the standard diffs, or not, whatever you want.

Baka Mod
Easy:
- 00:06:870 (1) - Finish at Sliderstart? You used it on Easy^4 too. Done.
- 00:19:104 (1) - Add finish. Done.
- 00:19:104 (1) - Finish instead Whistle? Which note are you referring to? This is the same note as the previous one.
- 00:34:505 (1) - Finish at Sliderstart instead Whistle? Sounds weird imo.
- 00:42:205 (4) - ^ Sure.
- 00:47:339 (1) - ^ Hmm I don't hear anything to stress here, so I wouldn't add one.
Don't you use Finishs on this difficulty on purpose? Cause I'll get the feeling you do and better stop searching here. I don't remember how I even hitsounded this diff... IU'll just accept mods on finishes and stuff as they come.
Anyway I believe it would be better to have the Finish notes at the same Places on each of your difficultys.
Rest of the diff is mapped well, nothing to complain about.

Easy^2:
- 00:06:870 (2) - Finish at sliderstart. Done.
- 00:20:388 (5) - Either replace the Slider with a Circle or make it twice as long. Since you do follow the main-melody all along this doesn't fit in so good. I get the feeling of a fading sound here, so I think the slider is fine.
- 00:42:206 (4) - Finish at sliderstart. Done.
- 00:52:473 (1) - ^ Done.
- 01:11:725 (4) - Move it one grid down that its on the same height as (1). Done.
- 01:20:388 (2) - Replace clap with finish. I actually like the clap here.
- 01:23:275 (3) - Finish at sliderstart. Done.

Kirino's Easy^3:
- 00:03:453 (2) - This note crosses the scorebar, move it a bit down please.

Megastore's Taiko:

Disclaimer: d = Note + no Hitsound/ k = Note + Whistle/ D = Note + Finish/ K = Note + Finish + Whistle.

- Better rename it to "Megastore's Taiko Oni"?
- Add Audio Lead-In 1,5~2s!
- 00:15:575 - Add Note without hitsound, it feels empty on Taiko mode :/
- 00:18:142 - Add Note + whistle.
- 00:42:206 (121,122,123,124) - You may add Finish's on these, to make it a similar Pattern like 00:30:655 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52).
- 00:46:858 - Add [url=00:46:858 -]d ddk D[/url], infront of the other Notes.
- 01:01:618 - Change this to d d kkk D.
- 01:02:901 - d k notes on the red and white Tick here.
- 01:05:468 - add d kkk here.
- 01:06:751 - add d d k here.
- 01:08:035 - d k notes on the red and white Tick here. (like on 01:02:901).
- 01:09:479 - add k here.
- 01:11:885 - add d kkk here.
- 01:13:329 - add k here.
- 01:18:462 - ^
- 01:19:746 - ^
- 01:22:152 - add d kkk here.
- 01:26:805 - Change 64 to k, delete 65 and change 66 to D.

Main Problem on this diff is that the kiai section feels a bit empty, everything else seems fine.
Here's a Version of your Taiko with my Suggestion's you may take over what you need:
[attachment=0:4dde1]Tamura Yukari - Endless Story (TV Size) (blissfulyoshi) [Megastore's Taiko Mod].osu[/attachment:4dde1]

Easy^4:
Can't find any errors with this, good~ Cool xD

Okay this is all, good luck~

Thanks a lot for the mod DarkDunskin. I applied most of what you said.

Regou

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Regou 2012-04-04T07:18:45+00:00

From #modreq

[Easy^4]
HP drain +1?
00:16:377 - Add a note here?
00:24:880 (3) - 1 grid up
00:25:521 (6) - Delete that clap hitsound, it sounds strange to me.
00:32:901 (8) - 1 grid down
00:39:318 (7) - Could make it better ;__;
00:43:810 (1,1,2,3) - A bit confusing for me. Maybe...?
01:04:666 (5) - Delete the first clap hitsound of this slider
01:07:072 - Add a note here?

[Kirino's Easy^3]
The volume is too loud. At least - 10%?
00:24:238 (1,3) - Quite ugly
00:43:650 - Add 3 1/2 beat circle sounds better for me.
01:00:495 (4,5) - Spacing. Put them close please.

[Easy^2]
Same as Easy^3, volume - 10%
01:26:484 (4,5) - Prevent using 1/4 beat slider in normal diff...

[Easy]
Same as the above two diff,volume - 10%
00:03:832 (1) - Quite ugly.
00:19:746 (2) - Clap.
00:38:356 (3) - rrr 1/2 beat note is too hard for a easy diff. Short sliders aren't necessarily difficult.
00:56:323 (5) - ^, but this one make the beat fit the music...so? Maybe just keep it...
01:26:484 (1) - Same as Easy^2, don't use 1/4 beat slider here! As I stated before, this is the last note of the map before a spinner.

Actually I think all diff should use the same hitsound (I prefer the hitsound in insane diff)
Btw, good luck with this map!

Kirino Kousaka

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Kirino Kousaka 2012-04-04T14:20:00+00:00

Finally back from holiday vacation~ XD

DarkDunskin wrote:
Kirino's Easy^3:
- 00:03:453 (2) - This note crosses the scorebar, move it a bit down please. fixed~

Thanks for the mod DarkDunskin

Regou wrote:
[Kirino's Easy^3]
The volume is too loud. At least - 10%? good idea. Fixed~
00:24:238 (1,3) - Quite ugly ikr? Even I find it ugly. I just made some random design cause I can't think of something to put here. Made changes~
00:43:650 - Add 3 1/2 beat circle sounds better for me. good idea. Fixed~
01:00:495 (4,5) - Spacing. Put them close please. This is a jump and I find it quite normal to play. No change~

Thanks for modding Regou~
Download: Tamura Yukari - Endless Story (TV Size) (blissfulyoshi) [Kirino's Easy^3].osu
Also with some additional changes.

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blissfulyoshi 2012-04-04T19:33:55+00:00

Regou wrote:
From #modreq

[Easy^4]
HP drain +1? No need imo.
00:16:377 - Add a note here? Hmmm, if I were to add a note there, it would be making 7 into a slider. Whatever, changed.
00:24:880 (3) - 1 grid up Done.
00:25:521 (6) - Delete that clap hitsound, it sounds strange to me. I sort of agree, changed to a whistle.
00:32:901 (8) - 1 grid down Done.
00:39:318 (7) - Could make it better ;__; Hmmm, not sure how I would change it xD
00:43:810 (1,1,2,3) - A bit confusing for me. Maybe...? That was what the new combo was for... Oh well, raised up the second combo a bit to make the distance seem less of an antijump.
01:04:666 (5) - Delete the first clap hitsound of this slider Why did I do that..... fixed.
01:07:072 - Add a note here? As I stated before, I felt the short break really helped make the transition to the next section fit better, so not adding a note.

[Kirino's Easy^3]
The volume is too loud. At least - 10%?
00:24:238 (1,3) - Quite ugly
00:43:650 - Add 3 1/2 beat circle sounds better for me.
01:00:495 (4,5) - Spacing. Put them close please.

[Easy^2]
Same as Easy^3, volume - 10% Done for most sections.
01:26:484 (4,5) - Prevent using 1/4 beat slider in normal diff... It is a single repeat that catches the feeling of the drums, so it is fine imo.

[Easy]
Same as the above two diff,volume - 10% Dropped 10% for most sections.
00:03:832 (1) - Quite ugly. I wanted to keep the same V shape, and it is not like linear sliders are ugly.
00:19:746 (2) - Clap. Done.
00:38:356 (3) - rrr 1/2 beat note is too hard for a easy diff. Short sliders aren't necessarily difficult. Note density is usually what creates difficulty, and there is a white tick difference between the previous note and 3 and a white tick difference between 3 and 4. As a reuslt, I think it is fine.
00:56:323 (5) - ^, but this one make the beat fit the music...so? Maybe just keep it... Same response as the previous one, plus I like how this sounds.
01:26:484 (1) - Same as Easy^2, don't use 1/4 beat slider here! As I stated before, this is the last note of the map before a spinner. The problem with repeat sliders is that people don't know when they stop repeating especially when the map mixes up the number of time they repeat. Since it is the last note though, you can just hold it till you get a 300 and then spin, which should be fine imo.

Actually I think all diff should use the same hitsound (I prefer the hitsound in insane diff) Astom hitsounded insane for me, so it is a lot better than my other diffs.
Btw, good luck with this map!

Thanks for modding Regou. (Lol accidentally edited your post)

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NoHitter 2012-04-05T04:37:46+00:00

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[General]
Change the source to C3 Shikyubu. All other ranked maps have that as the source.

[Easy]
I'm worried about the various 1/2's in this map. The 1/2's may be confusing for newer players.
00:52:473 (1,2,3) - ^ This part may be especially confusing.
00:57:607 -> 01:15:254 - The constant claps here should have started at 00:57:928. And add some finishes.
01:15:575 (1) - IMO it sounds better as a Pre-Spinner note instead.

[Easy-2]
This is a Normal, right?
00:36:591 (4) - Add clap for consistency? Although it's odd having claps in an offbeat.
01:01:457 (4) - Add finish.
01:05:307 (5) - Same as above.
01:26:484 (4,5) - I suggest you just make this into just one 1/4 repeat slider instead of two. Less confusing and plays better.

[Kirino's Easy-3]
00:12:187 () - Might as well remove the break? The break is just short, and HP drain isn't that high.
00:34:024 (1,2) - IMO, don't overlap the slidertracks of the sliders. Maybe move it like this?
00:25:200 (2) - Add clap.
00:26:484 (4) - Same as above.
00:27:767 (2) - Same as above.
00:42:206 (4) - Add finish.
00:44:130 (1,1,1) - IMO remove the new combos. It's fine without the NC's.
00:55:040 (1) - Remove the finish here. It kind of clashes with the hitsounds of the next notes.
00:56:323 (1,1,1) - Same with 00:44:130 (1,1,1).
01:07:233 (1,2) - IMO, don't overlap the slidertracks of the sliders.
01:14:612 (1,1,1) - Same with 00:44:130 (1,1,1).

[Easy-4]
The hitsounds here as so much better than the other diffs! Why don't you change the other diffs hitsounds to make it similar to this one?
00:32:741 (7,8,1) - IMO the Accelerated Spacing doesn't quite fit.

Edit: Looks like the [ ] tags for the diff names, doesn't accept "^"

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blissfulyoshi 2012-04-05T07:48:47+00:00

NoHitter wrote:
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[General]
Change the source to C3 Shikyubu. All other ranked maps have that as the source.

[Easy]
I'm worried about the various 1/2's in this map. The 1/2's may be confusing for newer players.
00:52:473 (1,2,3) - ^ This part may be especially confusing.
00:57:607 -> 01:15:254 - The constant claps here should have started at 00:57:928. And add some finishes.
01:15:575 (1) - IMO it sounds better as a Pre-Spinner note instead.

[Easy-2]
This is a Normal, right?
00:36:591 (4) - Add clap for consistency? Although it's odd having claps in an offbeat.
01:01:457 (4) - Add finish.
01:05:307 (5) - Same as above.
01:26:484 (4,5) - I suggest you just make this into just one 1/4 repeat slider instead of two. Less confusing and plays better.

[Kirino's Easy-3]
00:12:187 () - Might as well remove the break? The break is just short, and HP drain isn't that high.
00:34:024 (1,2) - IMO, don't overlap the slidertracks of the sliders. Maybe move it like this?
00:25:200 (2) - Add clap.
00:26:484 (4) - Same as above.
00:27:767 (2) - Same as above.
00:42:206 (4) - Add finish.
00:44:130 (1,1,1) - IMO remove the new combos. It's fine without the NC's.
00:55:040 (1) - Remove the finish here. It kind of clashes with the hitsounds of the next notes.
00:56:323 (1,1,1) - Same with 00:44:130 (1,1,1).
01:07:233 (1,2) - IMO, don't overlap the slidertracks of the sliders.
01:14:612 (1,1,1) - Same with 00:44:130 (1,1,1).

[Easy-4]
The hitsounds here as so much better than the other diffs! Why don't you change the other diffs hitsounds to make it similar to this one?
00:32:741 (7,8,1) - IMO the Accelerated Spacing doesn't quite fit.

Edit: Looks like the [ ] tags for the diff names, doesn't accept "^"

Gah accidentally deleted my reply to your post, but basically I only made changes in Easy and Normal. As for the source name, I really don't want to change it unless I have to because the theme of my map relies on the current setup and as you stated ^ does not work in tags.

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Kirino Kousaka 2012-04-08T03:07:02+00:00

NoHitter wrote:
[Kirino's Easy-3]
00:12:187 () - Might as well remove the break? The break is just short, and HP drain isn't that high. ok fixed!~
00:34:024 (1,2) - IMO, don't overlap the slidertracks of the sliders. Maybe move it like this? already did that with previous mod~
00:25:200 (2) - Add clap. fixed!~
00:26:484 (4) - Same as above. fixed!~
00:27:767 (2) - Same as above. fixed!~
00:42:206 (4) - Add finish. fixed!~
00:44:130 (1,1,1) - IMO remove the new combos. It's fine without the NC's. already did that with previous mod~
00:55:040 (1) - Remove the finish here. It kind of clashes with the hitsounds of the next notes. fixed!~
00:56:323 (1,1,1) - Same with 00:44:130 (1,1,1). already did that with previous mod~
01:07:233 (1,2) - IMO, don't overlap the slidertracks of the sliders. already did that with previous mod~
01:14:612 (1,1,1) - Same with 00:44:130 (1,1,1). there's something wrong, but I get what you mean and I got rid of those "1,1,1".

Thanks for the mod NoHItter

Sir blissfulyoshi wasn't able to update my diff so the one that you modded was outdated. There are still parts that were changed so that's awesome

Download: Tamura Yukari - Endless Story (TV Size) (blissfulyoshi) [Kirino's Easy^3].osu

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[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2012-04-08T03:37:17+00:00

Taiko: diff name how about Megastore's Taiko Kantan^4

no kd

confeito14

confeito14 2012-04-08T07:12:34+00:00

hi~ from #modreqs

[General]
Two BGs are 1024x576...1024x768 is better

[Source]
"C^3" is not useful to search for others beatmaps
You use "^" for diff name, but change it to "C3 Shikyubu" pls...

[Kirino's Easy^3]
00:23:115 (1) - why is this soft? I think Normal is better
00:21:671 (3-) - clap is too laud. turn 10% the volume down
00:34:024 (1-) - also loud, vol 65~75%?
00:43:650 (2-1) - I think, it is too bad spacing.i missed 3 times. How about THIS?
00:57:607 (1-) - loud TAT
01:01:136 (6) - move to x:24:y200
01:01:778 (x) - add note on x:336y:200
I suggest, mainly normal hitsound vol. is 65~75%. and KIAI time' is 80~85%

[Easy^2]
00:15:575 (x) - I want sound at this point D:
00:38:356 (4) - circle x2? I dislike this too short slider :/
00:53:757 (x) - add circle on top of slider(2)
00:59:211 (x) - I want sound at this point D:
01:15:655 (1) - spinner starts at 01:15:735.too close for Normal diff
01:26:484 (4) - move to x:144y:152?
Normal clap were also loud for me D;

[Easy^4]
00:25:521 (6) - change shape of slider a little. 2nd cheak point? 2grids up. I think,THIS follows song well :3
00:26:966 (1) - recheck grid snap,then stack on the tail of slider(7)?
Sorry, to mod sliders map is diificult for me. xD

This song has many ranked maps. Endless Story is coming to an end...?
But GL~

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blissfulyoshi 2012-04-08T08:04:28+00:00

confeito14 wrote:
hi~ from #modreqs

[General]
Two BGs are 1024x576...1024x768 is better They are scenes from the anime, so the resolution is staying the way it is. Plus if I cropped the image, it would remove the box in the first image, destroying my theme.

[Source]
"C^3" is not useful to search for others beatmaps
You use "^" for diff name, but change it to "C3 Shikyubu" pls... I really don't want to do this, since my theme basically relies on the fact that people can see the relationship. I guess I will give in after 1 or 2 more ppl complain though.

[Kirino's Easy^3]
00:23:115 (1) - why is this soft? I think Normal is better
00:21:671 (3-) - clap is too laud. turn 10% the volume down
00:34:024 (1-) - also loud, vol 65~75%?
00:43:650 (2-1) - I think, it is too bad spacing.i missed 3 times. How about THIS?
00:57:607 (1-) - loud TAT
01:01:136 (6) - move to x:24:y200
01:01:778 (x) - add note on x:336y:200
I suggest, mainly normal hitsound vol. is 65~75%. and KIAI time' is 80~85%

[Easy^2]
00:15:575 (x) - I want sound at this point D: Done through slider.
00:38:356 (4) - circle x2? I dislike this too short slider :/ Done.
00:53:757 (x) - add circle on top of slider(2) It makes a lot more sense to follow the piano, so added a note a half note back.
00:59:211 (x) - I want sound at this point D: To keep with my constant use of breaks in the chorus, I won't add anything here.
01:15:655 (1) - spinner starts at 01:15:735.too close for Normal diff This is fine because spinning does not require you to immediately move, so it is not demanding even for a normal diff. Plus it sounds a bit better this way.
01:26:484 (4) - move to x:144y:152? Made it look like a better curve.
Normal clap were also loud for me D; I think the volume is okay, I might adjust it again later though.

[Easy^4]
00:25:521 (6) - change shape of slider a little. 2nd cheak point? 2grids up. I think,THIS follows song well :3 The second point is reached a half note in which follows the song find, plus the point of the positioning is to cover the sharp edge.
00:26:966 (1) - recheck grid snap,then stack on the tail of slider(7)? It is placed like that to avoid stacking
Sorry, to mod sliders map is diificult for me. xD That is fine xD

This song has many ranked maps. Endless Story is coming to an end...?
But GL~ Endless Story is endless xD

Thanks a lot for modding confeito. I am probably going to be stubborn about the source for as long as possible just because dimensions are the theme of my map and I want to stick to it.

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Kirino Kousaka 2012-04-09T15:32:59+00:00

confeito14 wrote:
[Kirino's Easy^3]
00:23:115 (1) - why is this soft? I think Normal is better No change, it looks good as it is to me :3
00:21:671 (3-) - clap is too laud. turn 10% the volume down fixed!~
00:34:024 (1-) - also loud, vol 65~75%? fixed!~
00:43:650 (2-1) - I think, it is too bad spacing.i missed 3 times. How about THIS? fixed!~
00:57:607 (1-) - loud TAT fixed!~
01:01:136 (6) - move to x:24:y200 fixed!~
01:01:778 (x) - add note on x:336y:200 fixed!~
I suggest, mainly normal hitsound vol. is 65~75%. and KIAI time' is 80~85% okay!~

Thanks for the mod confeito14!~
Download: Tamura Yukari - Endless Story (TV Size) (blissfulyoshi) [Kirino's Easy^3].osu
and for my mod, I'll post it soon :3

Kirino Kousaka

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Kirino Kousaka 2012-04-10T14:24:43+00:00

Hello~ Here's my mod as requested :3 (a request from my queue)

[General]

Delete the .osb file since it is not used. :3

[Easy]
00:21:671 (3) - Move this 1 grid to the left? (pointed below)

[Easy^2]
00:17:821 (6) - Put a "finish". Sound better imo :3
01:18:142 (1) - Put "finish" on start :3
01:20:708 (3) - ^

[Easy^4]
00:23:596 (3) - Add NC?
00:34:024 (5) - ^
01:07:874 (9) - ^
01:08:516 (1) - Remove NC
01:26:965 (9) - Add "finish"?

That's all I can do sir, I hope it helps :3

blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2012-04-11T19:23:34+00:00

Kirino Kousaka wrote:
Hello~ Here's my mod as requested :3 (a request from my queue)

[General]
Delete the .osb file since it is not used. :3 Yes yes. (Note: ppy said not to care about this anymore)

[Easy]
00:21:671 (3) - Move this 1 grid to the left? (pointed below) I actually rather have the the 2 sides be parallel, so I actually moved 1 grid to the right xD.

[Easy^2] All done.
00:17:821 (6) - Put a "finish". Sound better imo :3
01:18:142 (1) - Put "finish" on start :3
01:20:708 (3) - ^

Why did you mod your own diff xD

[Easy^4]
00:23:596 (3) - Add NC? No need imo. Don't really like adding new combos for streams unless they make sense to me.
00:34:024 (5) - ^ ^
01:07:874 (9) - ^ ^ (pretty much the same reasoning
01:08:516 (1) - Remove NC This combo follows the lyrics.
01:26:965 (9) - Add "finish"? Sure.
That's all I can do sir, I hope it helps :3

Thanks for taking up the mod request Kirino.

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Kirino Kousaka 2012-04-12T02:49:17+00:00

blissfulyoshi wrote:
Thanks for taking up the mod request Rika. <--

XD

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blissfulyoshi 2012-04-12T02:53:40+00:00

Kirino Kousaka wrote:
blissfulyoshi wrote:
Thanks for taking up the mod request Rika. <--
XD

Fixed, sry I have been talking to Rika a bit too much xD.

blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2012-06-03T09:31:26+00:00

Sorry for double post, but it is finally time to revive this map.

To celebrate its revival, the source and tags were changed to be modder friendly, and the video was changed to an even better video!!!! (The new video is creditless and should have less noise than the previous version)

That is all.

Star Stream

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Star Stream 2012-06-07T09:13:17+00:00

I want to make an Insane diff but T^T
plz take my stars instead :3

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-06-08T13:20:09+00:00

Ohai bliss chan ~

let me mod this map ~ long waitting ><

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

I really hope you change other BG,and this size looks weird,try this BG :3
SPOILER
Add 'opening fear kirika konoha haruaki' in tags.
01:18:142 - I think kiai time should end to here.

[Easy^4]

00:06:870 - I think this finish noisy here,so remove pls.
00:43:008 - Add clap,sound much better.
01:02:420 (2) - Try Ctrl+R this slider,flow much better.

01:05:949 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Try use my code move to center,really looks better.

96,40,65949,2,0,B|149:89|166:130|133:189,1,100,8|0
256,104,66270,1,2
416,40,66430,2,0,B|363:89|346:130|379:189,1,100,4|0
256,352,66912,1,2
400,320,67233,5,0
384,272,67313,1,0
352,232,67393,1,0
304,208,67473,1,0
256,200,67553,1,0
208,208,67634,1,0
160,232,67714,1,0
128,272,67794,1,0
112,320,67874,2,0,B|61:355|10:316,1,100,4|2
72,200,68195,2,0,B|72:80,1,100,2|0

01:08:837 (2,3) - Move 1 grid right,stack on 01:07:393 (3).
01:16:377 - Remove clap,sound weird.
01:21:511 - ^
01:16:698 - Remove whistle and Add clap.
01:22:954 - ^
01:26:725 (6,8) - Remove clap,sound much better.

[Megastore's Taiko]

Remove video,because you are used custom taiko BG.

[Kirino's Easy^3]

00:06:870 - Remove finish and Add whistle.
00:09:908 - ^
00:34:505 - Add finish.
01:15:575 (1) - I think you should need mute this spinner.

[Easy^2]

HP,OD-1 much better imo.
00:06:870 - Remove finish and Add whistle.
00:35:147 (2,3,4) - Sound really weird,should change 1/2 here.
01:16:858 - Change soft 5% here.
01:26:965 - Add finish.

[Easy]

You are missing change source for 'C3 Shikyubu'and inconsistency tags in this diff.
CZ-1 more easy playble.
00:06:870 (1) - 00:06:870 - Remove finish and Add whistle.
00:42:206 - Remove finish.
01:09:799 (1,2,3) - This parttern a bit confused with beginner,make no stack imo.
01:16:858 - Change soft 5% here.
01:26:965 - Add finish.

That's all i guess ~ Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2012-06-08T22:31:01+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
Ohai bliss chan ~

let me mod this map ~ long waitting ><

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

I really hope you change other BG,and this size looks weird,try this BG :3 Let me think a bit about the bg xD
SPOILER
Add 'opening fear kirika konoha haruaki' in tags. I'll add opening and fear to the tags, but I don't think having tags for all the unimportant characters is useful. I think it makes more of a less that way.
01:18:142 - I think kiai time should end to here. I personally think moving it that late does not fit because the music sounds completely different at that point. If I were to end it later, I would end it at 01:17:179. Oh well, we can talk about this
[Easy^4]
00:06:870 - I think this finish noisy here,so remove pls. Done.
00:43:008 - Add clap,sound much better. Done.
01:02:420 (2) - Try Ctrl+R this slider,flow much better. Done.
01:05:949 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Try use my code move to center,really looks better. Done.
96,40,65949,2,0,B|149:89|166:130|133:189,1,100,8|0
256,104,66270,1,2
416,40,66430,2,0,B|363:89|346:130|379:189,1,100,4|0
256,352,66912,1,2
400,320,67233,5,0
384,272,67313,1,0
352,232,67393,1,0
304,208,67473,1,0
256,200,67553,1,0
208,208,67634,1,0
160,232,67714,1,0
128,272,67794,1,0
112,320,67874,2,0,B|61:355|10:316,1,100,4|2
72,200,68195,2,0,B|72:80,1,100,2|0
01:08:837 (2,3) - Move 1 grid right,stack on 01:07:393 (3). Done.
01:16:377 - Remove clap,sound weird. Done.
01:21:511 - ^ Done. Done.
01:16:698 - Remove whistle and Add clap. Done.
01:22:954 - ^ Done.
01:26:725 (6,8) - Remove clap,sound much better. Done.
[Megastore's Taiko]

Remove video,because you are used custom taiko BG.Done.

[Kirino's Easy^3]
I'll let Kirino take care of these.

00:06:870 - Remove finish and Add whistle.
00:09:908 - ^
00:34:505 - Add finish.
01:15:575 (1) - I think you should need mute this spinner.

[Easy^2]

HP,OD-1 much better imo. Done.
00:06:870 - Remove finish and Add whistle. Done.
00:35:147 (2,3,4) - Sound really weird,should change 1/2 here.
01:16:858 - Change soft 5% here. Done.
01:26:965 - Add finish. Done.

[Easy]

You are missing change source for 'C3 Shikyubu'and inconsistency tags in this diff. Done.
CZ-1 more easy playble. It looks messy like this, and I think it easy enough right now...
00:06:870 (1) - 00:06:870 - Remove finish and Add whistle. Done.
00:42:206 - Remove finish. Done.
01:09:799 (1,2,3) - This parttern a bit confused with beginner,make no stack imo. Done.
01:16:858 - Change soft 5% here. Done.
01:26:965 - Add finish.Done.

That's all i guess ~ Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Wow so many things xD. Thanks for all the help Rika. I'll contact you as soon as Kirino gets her changes in.

Kirino Kousaka

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Kirino Kousaka 2012-07-04T03:20:13+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
[Kirino's Easy^3]

00:06:870 - Remove finish and Add whistle. Fixed!~
00:09:908 - ^ Fixed!~
00:34:505 - Add finish. Fixed!~
01:15:575 (1) - I think you should need mute this spinner. Spinner muted, but the end isn't. :3

Sorry sir, I have caused a huge delay for your map, I mean - Huge. I'm so sorry

I don't know now what should I do

And lol, what happened to Attachments? I'm not really updated these days, lots of things happening while I'm gone O.O

Here's the code anyway: (not so sure what to copy, so I copied all >.<)

SPOILER

osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: c3_op^2.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 56979
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Endless Story (TV Size)
Artist:Tamura Yukari
Creator:blissfulyoshi
Version:Kirino's Easy^3
Source:C3 Shikyubu
Tags:cube cursed curious cubexcursedxcurious c^3 Kirino Kousaka Megastore opening fear

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Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2010

Kawayi Rika 2012-07-05T17:28:38+00:00

Recheck ~

BG still looks weird,You should change 4:3 proportion.

Also in Easy diff 01:26:484 (1) - 1/4 slider really hard for begiiner..so i suggestion make a simple slider.

You should get SP12 and I can bubble ~ call me a form PM

blissfulyoshi

osu! Alumni

4,755 posts

Joined July 2008

Topic Starter

blissfulyoshi 2012-07-06T02:48:39+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
Recheck ~

BG still looks weird,You should change 4:3 proportion. Done.

Also in Easy diff 01:26:484 (1) - 1/4 slider really hard for begiiner..so i suggestion make a simple slider. Since it is the last note and aall they need to do is hold it, the note should be fine.

You should get SP12 and I can bubble ~ call me a form PM Boosted myself to 12sp, yay!!!

Thanks a lot for the quick remod Rika <3!!!

blissfulyoshi

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Joined July 2008

Topic Starter

blissfulyoshi 2012-07-06T02:55:37+00:00

HAI Rika-chan,

If added stars and fixed the bg, so when you have time could you please recheck.
Thanks in advance.

Best Regards,
blissfulyoshi

Kawayi Rika

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3,635 posts

Joined December 2010

Kawayi Rika 2012-07-06T16:05:05+00:00

OK ~ Time to check out ~

Good luck with rank ~

Kirino Kousaka

655 posts

Joined November 2010

Kirino Kousaka 2012-07-07T01:57:48+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
OK ~ Time to check out ~

Good luck with rank ~

Wow! Yay! \>w</

Axey

1,216 posts

Joined October 2009

Axey 2012-07-10T14:26:04+00:00

\lol/

Garven

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5,857 posts

Joined January 2010

Garven 2012-08-06T07:51:59+00:00

[Kirino]
00:32:901 (4,1) - This overlap was kinda eh after seeing everything before it
00:43:168 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - The flow for this pattern is really odd feeling. There's a lot of zig zagging that doesn't feel very natural with the context of your map.

[Megastore]
The taiko feels... really empty during the kiai section. Try filling in rhythms that would help push this section forward. The kiai section is supposed to be the big explosion of awesome, not a dwindling of mediocrity.

Did IRC modding on bliss' diffs.

SPOILER

01:12 Garven: : Would you consider AR +1 on the easy? Feels a little low for the SV once it picks up
01:12 Garven: : The hitsounds feel kind of loud too
01:12 blissfulyoshi: : oaky let me test
01:12 Garven: : at least the normal set does
01:12 blissfulyoshi: : lol, everyone dislikes the normal set
01:12 blissfulyoshi: : xD
01:13 Garven: : q:
01:13 blissfulyoshi: : AR+1 done
01:14 blissfulyoshi: : okay, quick uplaod to fix both of those 2 things
01:14 blissfulyoshi: : you can update easy now
01:17 Garven: : 01:05:307 (4) - If you made this symmetrical it would probably get rid of that bump in the lower left side of the center crease
01:18 Garven: : 01:15:575 (1) - Why not end this at 01:16:698 - and make it audible to go with the percussion?
01:18 Garven: : It's already really short anyawy

01:19 blissfulyoshi: : about the slider, it was meant to follwo the other slider
01:19 blissfulyoshi: : I think it was 1
01:19 blissfulyoshi: : and you want to make a spinner shorter on an easy diff
01:19 blissfulyoshi: : whaty
01:19 Garven: : Because it feels wrong right now
01:19 blissfulyoshi: : okay.....
01:19 blissfulyoshi: : don't blame me if ppl complain it is too ahrd xD
01:20 Garven: : It's just kind of a poor spot for a spinner, hehe
01:20 blissfulyoshi: : yeah
01:20 Garven: : I see why you used it, but there's not much time for it in this level of difficulty
01:20 Garven: : Yo ucould try starting it at 01:15:414 - so the length would stay the same
01:21 blissfulyoshi: : sure
01:21 Garven: : Normal
01:21 Garven: : 00:24:238 (1,2) - These are really really close together, haha
01:22 Garven: : When I was first playing ti looked like they were overlapping
01:22 Garven: : Normal sound set is loooud still q:
01:22 Garven: : 00:26:003 (5) - The clap on the end of this sounds weird
01:23 blissfulyoshi: : lol
01:23 blissfulyoshi: : gah
01:24 blissfulyoshi: : should I remvoe the hitsound completely
01:24 blissfulyoshi: : or replace it
01:24 Garven: : 00:51:190 (3) - maybe have this curve to the left so that the flow transitions to that huge gap better?
01:26 Garven: : 01:15:655 (1) - End this spinner like the change in Easy, I guess
01:26 Garven: : though
01:27 Garven: : I'd almost rather have 01:15:575 (4) - at 01:15:414 - and the spinner start where 4 is
01:27 Garven: : 01:28:730 - make this a soft set so the normal doesn't do that lovely 'pop' noise at low volume levels
01:28 blissfulyoshi: : well I like ths ound the 4 makes
01:28 blissfulyoshi: : kk
01:28 Garven: : It just felt like you were following the vocals more with those rhythms followed by the spinner
01:28 Garven: : but oh well
01:28 blissfulyoshi: : they were
01:28 blissfulyoshi: : but whatever.....
01:30 Garven: : Kirino:
01:30 Garven: : 00:32:901 (4,1) - This overlap was kinda eh after seeing everything before it
01:31 blissfulyoshi: : and kirino is not on.....
01:31 Garven: : I guess I'll just post these then
01:31 blissfulyoshi: : okay
01:32 blissfulyoshi: : guess I still have time to fix the vid then xD
01:32 blissfulyoshi: : but thx for doign this
01:32 Garven: : Hehe, no prob
01:41 Garven: : Insane
01:41 Garven: : 00:16:858 (2,3,4,5) - bleeeeh
01:41 Garven: : Sudden really low spacing
01:42 Garven: : The 1.2x ds felt about right
01:42 Garven: : at 00:21:029 (1,2) -
01:43 Garven: : 00:26:966 (1) - This stack felt like it killed your momentum from such a long slider
01:43 blissfulyoshi: : hmm wanted to kill the momentum
01:44 Garven: : Didn't feel natural to me
01:44 Garven: : mm00:39:479 -
01:44 blissfulyoshi: : hmm okay
01:44 Garven: : Kind of want a hit object there, hehe
01:45 Garven: : 00:43:810 (1) - Such a lonely combo
01:45 blissfulyoshi: : well it is sort of a speical note
01:45 blissfulyoshi: : and there are a bunch of jumps/antijumps there
01:46 Garven: : 01:17:500 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream's shape is kinda eh
01:46 Garven: : Might benefit from the slider -> stream tool now

01:46 blissfulyoshi: : kk
01:48 Garven: : That's it
01:48 Garven: : beyond the usual normal sound set complaint q:
01:48 blissfulyoshi: : lol

Kirino Kousaka

655 posts

Joined November 2010

Kirino Kousaka 2012-08-09T09:51:44+00:00

Garven wrote:
[Kirino]
00:32:901 (4,1) - This overlap was kinda eh after seeing everything before it
00:43:168 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - The flow for this pattern is really odd feeling. There's a lot of zig zagging that doesn't feel very natural with the context of your map.

I don't really know if the changes I made work well, since I can't test it. .__. (My pc and tablet are not with me, and I'm using a laptop)

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32,192,13326,6,0,B|136:192,1,75,4|0
112,120,13646,2,0,B|208:120,1,75
248,80,13971,6,0,B|352:144|408:24|336:-8|272:24|320:144|448:80,1,300,0|0
368,224,14933,1,0
256,328,15254,2,0,B|152:392|96:272|168:240|232:272|184:392|56:328,1,300,0|0
32,192,16216,5,0
184,184,16537,2,0,B|208:120|160:96|192:16,1,150,0|0
336,40,17179,2,0,B|310:99|358:123|334:187,1,150
256,56,17821,1,4
32,248,18462,5,0
120,136,18783,1,0
216,248,19104,2,0,B|200:328|104:360,1,150,4|0
296,248,19746,2,0,B|312:328|408:360,1,150,0|0
392,136,20388,1,4
24,232,21029,5,0
168,280,21350,1,0
24,232,21671,2,0,B|0:200|0:152,1,75
72,176,21992,2,0,B|68:137|92:95,1,75,8|0
144,152,22313,2,0,B|160:116|202:92,1,75
216,168,22634,2,0,B|248:144|296:144,1,75,8|4
432,120,23115,6,0,B|464:160|440:216,2,75,0|2|0
376,176,23596,2,0,B|280:216,1,75
320,280,23917,2,0,B|232:344,1,75
184,328,24238,6,0,B|112:328|112:240|192:240|192:192|192:192|120:192|120:120,1,300
256,96,25200,1,8
392,120,25521,2,0,B|392:192|320:192|320:192|320:240|400:240|400:328|328:328,1,300
240,208,26484,1,8
88,200,26805,6,0,B|96:160|96:160|120:96|192:88|192:88|280:112|304:32,1,300
320,184,27767,1,8
384,40,28088,2,0,B|440:72|440:120|504:160,1,150,0|8
504,296,28730,2,0,B|448:264|448:216|384:176,1,150,0|8
256,40,29372,5,0
200,104,29532,2,0,B|157:123|145:170,1,75,0|2
168,240,29853,2,0,B|210:220|224:176,1,75,0|0
312,104,30174,2,0,B|354:123|366:170,1,75,0|2
344,240,30495,2,0,B|301:220|289:173,1,75,0|0
216,296,30976,6,0,B|176:368|80:352,1,150,2|0
296,296,31618,2,0,B|336:368|432:352,1,150,2|0
448,208,32259,2,0,B|488:192|512:160,2,75,2|0|0
360,80,32901,1,2
360,80,33061,6,0,B|336:56|304:56,1,56.2499983236194,0|0
296,168,33382,2,0,B|320:192|352:192,1,56.2499983236194,0|2
192,128,33703,2,0,B|164:108|132:114,1,56.2499983236194,0|0
144,192,34024,6,0,B|176:224,5,37.5
144,192,34505,2,0,B|80:200|48:240|40:320,1,150,4|8
192,296,35147,2,0,B|128:352,2,75,0|0|8
320,368,35789,2,0,B|384:360|416:320|424:240,1,150,0|8
368,144,36430,2,0,B|440:80,2,75,0|0|8
256,248,37072,5,0
256,96,37393,1,8
176,224,37714,2,0,B|104:272,2,75,0|0|8
328,224,38356,2,0,B|336:264|360:304|400:304|448:296,1,150,0|8
456,152,38997,1,0
416,88,39157,1,0
352,48,39318,1,8
248,152,39639,5,0
208,88,39799,1,0
144,56,39960,1,8
80,96,40120,2,0,B|32:160,1,75,0|0
32,232,40441,2,0,B|112:208,1,75,0|8
144,144,40762,2,0,B|192:208,1,75,0|0
320,336,41243,5,0
448,264,41564,1,0
376,128,41885,1,0
256,40,42206,1,4
136,128,42527,1,0
64,264,42848,1,0
192,336,43168,1,0
192,336,43329,1,0
256,88,44131,5,0
256,184,44291,1,0
256,288,44452,1,0
392,344,44773,5,4
368,224,45093,2,0,B|312:256|296:336,1,112.499996647239,0|2
120,344,45735,1,0
144,224,46055,2,0,B|200:256|216:336,1,112.499996647239,4|0
256,208,46698,1,2
256,208,47019,2,0,B|256:72,1,112.499996647239,0|4
368,48,47660,5,0
360,160,47981,1,2
480,184,48302,2,0,B|468:246|416:280,1,112.499996647239,0|4
320,352,48944,1,0
200,352,49265,1,2
104,280,49585,1,0
24,192,49906,6,0,B|40:120|112:96,2,112.499996647239,4|0|2
144,192,50869,1,0
264,192,51190,2,0,B|248:264|184:288,2,112.499996647239,4|0|2
8,32,52473,6,0,B|19:31|19:31|20:42|20:42|31:41|31:41|32:52|32:52|43:51|43:51|44:62|44:62|56:61|56:61|57:73|57:73|68:72|68:72|69:83|69:83|80:82|80:82|81:93|81:93|92:92|92:92|93:103,1,150,4|0
152,144,52954,2,0,B|160:136|160:136|168:144|168:144|175:135|175:135|184:144|184:144|191:136|191:136|200:144|200:144|208:135|208:135|216:144|216:144|224:136|224:136|232:144|232:144|240:136|240:136|248:144|248:144|256:136|256:136|264:144,1,150,4|0
320,96,53436,2,0,B|320:93|320:93|331:94|331:94|332:82|332:82|343:83|343:83|344:72|344:72|356:73|356:73|357:62|357:62|368:63|368:63|369:51|369:51|380:52|380:52|381:41|381:41|392:42|392:42|393:31|393:31|405:32,1,150,4|0
408,144,54077,2,0,B|368:200|304:224,2,112.499996647239,2|0|2
256,192,55040,12,0,56003
152,192,56323,5,4
256,112,56484,1,4
368,192,56644,1,4
40,48,57607,6,0,B|120:40|192:80,1,150,4|8
80,184,58249,2,0,B|56:264,2,75,0|0|8
192,280,58890,2,0,B|232:328|280:328|320:280,1,150,0|8
384,144,59532,6,0,B|368:96|416:56,1,75,0|0
432,200,59853,2,0,B|480:184|520:232,1,75,8|0
384,256,60174,2,0,B|400:304|352:344,1,75,0|0
336,200,60495,2,0,B|288:216|248:168,1,75,8|0
168,112,60815,1,0
24,200,61136,1,8
168,272,61457,1,4
336,200,61778,1,8
464,296,62099,6,0,B|504:200|456:128,1,150,0|8
344,72,62741,2,0,B|304:168|352:240,1,150,4|8
48,296,63382,6,0,B|8:200|56:128,1,150,0|8
168,72,64024,2,0,B|208:168|160:240,1,150,0|8
256,344,64666,6,0,B|288:312|384:304|400:272,1,150,0|8
240,264,65307,2,0,B|208:296|112:304|96:336,2,150,0|8|0
184,120,66270,2,0,B|232:128|264:176,2,75,8|0|0
40,88,66912,1,8
40,88,67233,6,0,B|88:120,7,37.5
40,88,67874,2,0,B|96:32|208:40,1,150,4|8
328,40,68516,2,0,B|409:32|465:88,1,150,0|8
448,240,69158,1,4
400,296,69318,1,0
328,312,69479,1,8
176,304,69799,2,0,B|96:296|48:232,1,150,0|8
192,192,70441,5,4
64,56,70762,1,8
248,184,71083,1,0
312,32,71404,1,8
288,224,71725,1,4
424,272,72045,1,8
424,272,72366,6,0,B|364:332|292:340,2,150,0|8|4
328,160,73329,2,0,B|387:99|459:91,2,150,8|0|8
176,160,74291,2,0,B|116:99|44:91,2,150,0|8|0
80,272,75254,1,8
256,192,75575,12,4,76698
405,192,77500,6,0,B|480:192,1,75,4|0
400,120,77820,2,0,B|304:120,1,75
264,80,78141,6,0,B|160:144|104:24|176:-8|240:24|192:144|64:80,1,300,4|0
144,224,79104,1,0
256,328,79425,2,0,B|360:392|416:272|344:240|280:272|328:392|456:328,1,300,4|0
480,192,80388,5,0
328,184,80708,2,0,B|304:120|352:96|320:16,1,150,4|0
176,40,81350,2,0,B|202:99|154:123|178:187,1,150
256,56,81992,1,4
480,248,82634,5,0
360,344,82954,1,0
232,264,83275,1,4
32,40,83917,1,0
480,40,84559,1,4
256,240,85200,5,0
256,88,85521,1,0
256,192,85842,12,0,88730